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ben 10 and gwen

Author: jatinder95

Date: 18 September 2008

Fantastic, Dark Fantasy, Blowjob, BDSM

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The story begins when Ben, Gwen and Grandpa Max were on the trip to country side.

They have to stop to take some break.evrything was fine until

"Dr. Animo escaped. Calling for backup to stop him.” the message was broadcasted on the radio of Grandpa Max's RV. It took not even a second for Ben to ask Grandpa Max to catch Dr. Animo.

Grandpa Max switched to the turbo mode .The RV went half way when it broke down.

“You can transform to XLR8 Ben and catch-up Dr. Animo”, said the grandpa.

With a pass of a second Ben transformed into XLR8. As he was about to leave Gwen called him from behind and insisted to take her with him also as she could help him by her magic. Grandpa Max nodded his head in approval.

“Ok doofus . Hold me tight as this journey is going to be very fast. “Ben said

Gwen climbed on the back of Ben and held her tight. Ben lowered his metal sheet on his face and started the journey.

Faster with the speed of wind Ben moved towards doctor animo. In the way Gwen held Ben so tightly that her tights were squeezed due the pressure between Ben’s back and her.
This feeling made Ben a bit excited and Gwen a bit shameful but both were more concerned about catching doctor animo. In short time Ben reached to the hide out of doctor animo.

“You Tennyson this time I will not leave you. I will now take revenge of my last defeat “the voice of animo filled whole of the surrounding but he was no where to be seen. Gwen took a glance at the surrounding and observed C.C.T cameras in the place through which their each and every action was visible to doctor animo.

“Hey Ben listen, we are being watched by doc. Animo every time through the cameras “Gwen said

“Huh!” Ben responded in XLR8 voice.
“Very good you little kinky girl. You impressed me. You have a sharp eye and a sharp mind but you both are now trapped in my trap.

“Huh! What the hell he meant that we are trapped” Ben asked.

Before both of them could understand an object having lights glowing was shot from a machine by doc. Animo. The substance was nothing else but a helmet, a mind control helmet which landed on the top of their heads.

“Now you both are my slaves for rest of your life” doc animo laughed from his control centre from where he was observing both of them. Since he was observing both from C.C.T cameras he noticed a bulge between the legs of Ben. This bulge was due the excitement he faced during the way to animo.

“Ha.ha.ha. it seems someone is horny out here. You both will now entertain me. I being your master order you to start a fuck session.” doctor animo’s voice again filled the atmosphere.

“What are you nuts we are just of ten years and moreover she is my cousin” Ben said angrily.
“Yeah he is right. And how could you think that we will obey your orders. “Gwen said supporting Ben.”Hhhhhhhhhh ………….. You idiot dufus what are you doing” Gwen shouted to Ben as she felt the hands of XLR8 pressing his tits.
The red light flashed and Ben transformed back into human child from an alien adult.

“I don’t know what is happening to me. I can’t control my body. It seems this due to this
Weird helmet” en exclaimed to Gwen.

“Heyyy…….. What’s happening to me?” Gwen shouted as she herself started squeeze her tits.

“Now you both know that you are under my control” doc. Animo said” you better entertain me yourself or I have to use other methods”

“I wouldn’t obey your orders” Ben shouted but he felt that something was growing in his pants. It was growing due to the excitement caused by squeezing Gwen’s tits. This site was not be hidden from Gwen. A moment later they felt a bit odd. Doc. Animo has sent a lust wave to their body through their helmet. Both Ben and Gwen were now under lust.


Now Gwen took the first step she lowered the pants of Ben and was amazed to see an 8 inch piece of flesh which was standing like an iron rod. As she used to spend her most of the time on the internet so she has seen a large number of adult movies but had never gathered enough courage to practice it. She took the iron monster in her hand and started playing with it. Ben moaned in pleasure, “oh yeah Gwen, take it in your mouth.”

It seems that Gwen was just waiting to hear this that she put the mouth of the prick/cock on her lips started to lick her. Now Ben moaned even more louder due to high wave of pleasure which was now traveling in her body” you know sis that from how much time I have been thinking of you like this but never got enough courage to speak it to you”

Same here Ben, Gwen said while sucking the Ben’s cock. While Gwen was sucking Ben’s cock, Ben started rubbing her pussy through her light blue coloured jeans. Now the whole atmosphere was filled with the moaning made by Ben and Gwen.

Now Ben lifted the Gwen up and slowly removed her top. Since Gwen was of 10 only so she didn’t wore any bra and gradually removed her jeans and then her panty/boxer shorts
While Ben was busy removing clothes from Gwen, Gwen removed the clothes of Ben.

Now they both were nude in front of each other same as they have seen each other in their dreams. Due to high excitement both of them can’t stop themselves. Both started kissing each other. They gave each other a French kiss, German kiss and many more. While both were kissing each other Ben played with the tits and pussy of Gwen and Gwen
Played with the cock of Gwen.
This whole scene was being watched by doc. Animo who was an impudent as he has shot his load of cum thrice only by this scene.

Both Ben and Gwen now laid on the ground in the 69 position. Ben was licking the delicious pussy of Gwen was Gwen was giving a blow job to the flesh monster Ben had.
Both were feeling as if they were in heaven. In short duration only Gwen became completely wet. She asked Ben to kindly fuck her. Ben without any negative statement readily accepted to fuck her. Ben asked her to lie on the ground and lifted her legs apart.
He found that there was no public hair on Gwen’s pussy. As he brought his dick closer to Gwen, she asked him to go slow as she was a virgin yet. Ben admitted. Now he touched the head of his erect prick on the mouth of wet pussy of Gwen. He pushed at first and the cock’s head went inside Gwen’s pussy and in result Gwen moaned loudly then Ben again applied force but something prevented him to completely insert his dick


This was nothing else but the hemyx of Gwen.
“This can hurt you a little sis” Ben said to Gwen.
“I doesn’t matter” Gwen responded
With a great force he broke the hemyx of Gwen and Gwen shouted as loudly as there is a roar of a lion in a jungle. Ben kissed her and stopped her from shouting and asked for sorry. Gwen said that it was ok. Now seeing the pain of Gwen Ben didn’t move further.
After 5 min. Gwen asked Ben to carry on this time Ben with his complete fore inserted the dick in Gwen’s bleeding pussy and in one blow his more than half dick was in. in another jerk it went completely in. now Gwen was ok and was enjoying.

For first five minutes Ben fucked Gwen at slow speed and side by side he sucks her nipples which by now have become rock hard. After 5 minutes he gradually increased his speed.
He continued to fuck Gwen and Gwen encouraged her by asking him to fuck hard and by making sexy sounds. After 30 minutes Ben felt that he was not now able to control his load anymore so he asked Gwen if he should take it out but Gwen denied and asked him that she wanted it deep inside her pussy. Now with complete force Ben exploded his hot load of cum deep into his cousin’s pussy. Both were exhausted and Ben laid on top of Gwen. They have seen that dick size decreases after releasing sperm but it didn’t happened to Ben. His dick size remained same.
“Why my dick is not getting shorter? “Ben asked Gwen

“Your dick will not grow shorter without my permission so you better go on fucking”doc.
Animo said from his room via speakers.

Both Ben and Gwen were amazed but they didn’t have any other option rather than to fuck due to the cast of lust. But be4 beginning he asked how many orgasms you had to which Gwen replied 12 . Ben was shocked.

They went for another four fucking sessions in various positions and each one longer than before. Now both were extremely tired and Gwen thought that this could be her end. After the 4 sessions, Animo had under gone 120 loads of cum out of which one fall on his mind control machine and it got broke down. Now Ben and Gwen felt like normal. They knew that they are now free from Animo’s control. Gathering some energy he transformed into ghost freak as it can pass through the walls which would help a lot in catching Animo. Soon he found animo and defeated him. Later grandpa max also got there with police force and arrested Animo. Till that time both Ben and Gwen had worn their clothes and Gwen has cleaned cum and blood from her body. Grandpa asked Ben as if everything was all right to which he said yes but grandpa made out that something wrong had happened. He asked Ben and Gwen to sit in RV. Before leaving the place he saw the recording of CCT cameras was still on he reversed it and got whole story what happened but remained quite.


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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2008 21:30
    ok story but a lot of grammar errors. i didn't see any bondage and alien is a stretch. comic or cartoon.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2008 01:00
    The worst rip-off of the ben-10 series that anyone could think of. I think you are in need of your medication and maybe even in need of another trip to your doctor for some stronger meds. Don't bother trying again.

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  • reader
    reader 500
    22.09.2008 14:18
    All in all, the story line is a good one so good enough job there.
    The problem is poorly written, my grammar is better by far, and it didn`t help that it`s short. After a rewrite this could be a pretty good story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2008 01:31
    wow um...bad spelling

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2008 05:16
    the story was good from what I read, but you need to work on the spelling.

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  • sam
    Мужчина sam 116
    05.10.2008 21:09
    dude !!!!!! thats was awesome..... where you get the idea huh??? i watch ben 10 every episods, i never miss it... not once. but im just reading, but i felt like watching...... bytheway, your stories was GOOD!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2008 12:08
    I also excited

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.02.2009 23:47
    wow ben and gwen having sex but u should delete this some people watch xxx videos if keep making more ok just be sure kids do not have sex if your only 10-14 u will have it when your 20 or like 18 if ur mom doesnt know theres a girl in the house and girls sucking a cock really sucks because it may taste funny and boys never make ur preasure in to max

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.04.2009 01:39
    ENGLISH MOTHERFUCKER!! LEARN SOME!! Holy fuck that was bad.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.04.2009 03:15
    very good u should make it into a video

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2009 07:03
    Very good story, but many spelling errors. Keep writing.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.05.2009 23:44
    Bad bad bad spelling. But seriosly, MAKE A GOD DAM VIDEO. THE MORE PEOPLE WATCHING A BEN 10 PORN, THE BETTER. Based on your story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2009 13:43
    they r cousins moron not bro an sis try to watch ben 10 before writing this crap

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2009 15:55
    come on the spelling is bad and the others are rite they are cousions but it was an okay story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2009 19:55
    BAD SPELLING YOU MOTHERFUCKING WHORE!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2009 20:39
    great story, who gives a fuck about the dam spelling, u gotta be an idiot if u couldnt understand it and that is the main thing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2009 02:14
    good story but bad spelling but you can understand it and u should definitly make a video

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2009 22:57
    make a video

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  • srexxxxxxxx
    08.07.2009 06:35
    nice dude

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 09:25
    dude i wish that was in a movie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.09.2009 23:37
    good story idea, but improve the spelling, the detail and..... the words.
    =/

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2009 07:55
    good story dude realy good make a fucking movie... ill quite happily plan ben in this.... lol

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  • anonymously
    15.09.2009 11:50
    This is not Gwen.
    Wrong.

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  • Miley%2FHannah+fan+11
    03.10.2009 06:05
    Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee make a that video!!!!!! your story is sooooo cool!!! I like it!!!!!!!

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  • Cooool+girl
    04.10.2009 10:33
    MAKE A VIDEO, STORY IS VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY NICEEEEEEEEE AND FUNNNNNYY xD
    MAKE A VIDEO DUDE

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  • Miley%2FHannah+fan
    05.10.2009 04:56
    dude, your story is cool, I read it EVERY DAY pleaseee make a video

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  • Preetam
    30.10.2009 13:03
    Really good,i wanna fuck guen..

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  • Preetam%28kjr%29
    30.10.2009 13:07
    I wants this story video,i wants guen little pussy for fuck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.12.2009 00:16
    marry 1000000000000000 and sex them 1000000000000000

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2010 08:53
    ya i also wan fuck the gwen ass hole !!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2010 13:48
    Gwen is Ben's cousin not sister moron.

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  • legendmcneal
    18.05.2010 20:33
    i want to fuck gwen so bad her pussy is great fuck on ben!

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  • legendmcneal
    18.05.2010 20:36
    who you callin asshole bastard

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  • legendmcneal
    18.05.2010 20:37
    reader is a asshole

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.09.2010 01:41
    lot of spelling mistakes, get an education

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2010 21:38
    Does anybody wanna have sex?

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 03:05
    alittle odd butt it is sexy and horney

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2011 00:20
    Mixed him and her around. made story bad.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.03.2011 02:22
    lot of misspelling and grandpa max should have joined in should have talked more about the boobs

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2011 17:00
    i love this fucking story

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.04.2011 18:48
    this fucking story should be every wear!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.06.2011 11:12
    i want to see gwen pussy hair

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.07.2011 12:13
    What a total load of utter shit! The spelling was atrocious and the story was written badly with no sense of structure.To Improve get an education

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 00:42
    i normally don't complain about the spelling but had to stop everyother word to read this story and you also mixed him and her up alot i could barely understand it and like the other people said they are cousins not brother and sister.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2011 06:28
    damn i wannnt more

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2011 11:50
    LIKE I SAID IN THE OTHE STORY YOU SUCK BITCH QUIT

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.11.2011 02:40
    whats wrong with the the the guy on the top he typed bgfchjhbd junk ass hoooooooole

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 22:52
    That was bullshit on a plate with more bullshit around it and more bullshit on top of the bullshit

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.01.2012 17:39
    dude go get your self and egaeamacation

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.05.2012 08:41
    JA JEBEM BEZ KONDOMA.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2012 23:41
    Fuck is fun...I want to cum inside gwen

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    20.08.2012 23:44
    If u want to fuck me txt I want to fuck u to 9738701355

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2012 13:27
    Yea... it was nothing as i fucked more than thrice

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2012 13:29
    Yea... it was nothing as i fucked more than thrice

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    11.10.2012 14:38
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  • anonymous+reader
    24.12.2012 12:55
    Fuck that was awesome my dick is rock hard to fuck gwens little pussy

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.03.2013 17:36
    If gwen was my cousin i will fuck her and the story was good and fun to read!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.06.2013 07:44
    not bad, bat you have to Practice more

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    31.08.2013 08:39
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    31.08.2013 08:46
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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2013 05:27
    hymen you idiot hymen and what's with all the run on sentances,mispelled words,un-character like vocabulary havn't you heard anything worth doing is worth doing right!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2013 02:00
    hey anonymous reader your a mother fucker who came out of a sucker. you freaking spelled "sentences" wrong.

    p.s.(CHEF DON'T JUDGE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.01.2014 06:57
    -_- sucks dude -._.-

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2014 13:54
    Really, really shit dood try going back to school and start at year one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.02.2014 03:23
    Dude the story's a piece of shit there's to many run on sentence and to many grammar errors plus it doesn't make senses half the time try rereading it will help lot

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2014 22:48
    Ben 10 And Gwen Were Good Fucks And That Was A Good Story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.10.2014 13:24
    the story was amazing and make me so exicted .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.02.2016 07:22
    kind of sucks because grammatical errors but other than that really good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2016 01:28
    It was kinda suckish but it got me a little wet so it wasn't COMPLETELY terrible

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2016 09:13
    this story is correctly written with grammar mistake

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