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Jennifer, the Neighbor's Daughter

Author: jl317

Date: 18 November 2014

Blowjob, Fiction, Cum Swallowing, Male / Female

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Wednesday afternoon. Hump day was finally coming to a close. What a crappy day. What a crappy week. Only two more days until the weekend, but there was nothing to look forward to. Our separation had officially happened last Friday. Truth be told, it happened long before that, but Friday made it official. She’d taken our three year-old daughter, Abby, and moved in with her parents. I sighed as I checked my office planner one last time before leaving the office. Hmm…I’d forgotten to call the babysitter to cancel for this coming Friday night. Might as well delete her number from my phone list. With Abby gone, I’d never need to line up a babysitter again. I locked up my office and drove home to my empty house.

The week continued to creep by. Finally, Friday came and ended. Sitting in the afternoon traffic, I reflected on the past few years, and what had gone wrong. My wife had never been a wildcat in bed to begin with, but after Abby was born, her sex drive had gone from tolerant, to begrudging, to non-existent. She retreated into a shell of depression. Several times I had tried to find out why, and each time I was met with disdain and rejection. Soon after, I had just resigned myself to a life without sexual contact. Up to now, I’d never had an affair, and the idea of a soliciting a prostitute didn’t excite me all that much. I actually missed the romance more than the sex. Jack, I thought to myself, how did everything get so screwed up?

I continued, lost in thought, until I pulled into the driveway. I found a note on the counter, saying that my soon-to-be ex-wife had been there, taking some more of her things, but that she left some of Abby’s toys for when I would have her on the weekends. I felt sad that I wouldn’t be seeing Abby every day, but she would never benefit from her parents staying together under these circumstances.

I decided that maybe some activity might take my mind off things. It wasn’t helping things to sit around and mope all weekend. I made a decision that she wasn’t going to steal anything else away from me. I was twenty-seven, in decent shape, had been told by my buddy that a few of the girls at the office thought I was hot. I was going out tonight. I was going out, have some fun, damn it! I glanced at the clock: 5:45. I picked up the phone and made a reservation for my favorite restaurant down by the coast. I figured that I’d have a good meal, hit the bars, and see how lucky I might get. Hell, I grinned to myself, I might even get laid! With that decided, I went upstairs to get ready. I laid out some nice clothes, and jumped in the shower.

The hot water was a tonic for me, as I envisioned washing off the remains of a bad relationship. I lathered up my head with shampoo, and the massage from my fingers coupled with the steam did wonders for me. I began to fantasize what might happen later in the evening, and my cock began to harden. I hadn’t had sex for a long time. Standing there fondling my erection, I thought about jacking off, but decided to save my energy just in case I met someone. I turned off the water, pulled open the curtain, and reached for a towel.

“Oh, SHIT! I’m…I’m so sorry, Mr. J!”

My head swung around quickly. Our neighbors’ sixteen year-old daughter Jennifer was standing in the doorway, her hand over her mouth, eyes the size of saucers. I quickly covered myself, but realized too late that she had already seen everything.

“I…I rang the doorbell three times, but no one came,” she stammered. “I went around and knocked on the back door, but no one answered that either.” I noticed her cheeks flushing from embarrassment. “You had asked Jessica to sit for Abby at 6:00, but she wanted to go to the lake with mom and dad. I told her I’d cover for her tonight.”

She kept on, nervously trying to explain away the awkward moment. “The back door was unlocked, so I let myself in. I called out, but I only heard the water running. I thought something might be wrong, so I…but I never meant to…I’m so…so sorry!”

I wrapped the towel around me and cut her off gently. “Don’t worry, it’s all my fault, Jennifer. I totally forgot to call Jessica to tell her we didn’t need a sitter tonight. The dinner party got cancelled, and…well, some other stuff happened this week, and like I said…I just plain forgot”

“Oh,” was all she said, her eyes still fixed on the area jutting out behind my towel. I suddenly took notice of my sixteen-year old neighbor. She had long, brown hair that had been highlighted nicely by the summer sun. Deep green eyes were enhanced by a minimal amount of makeup. She had also filled out quite nicely in the past couple of years. Her breasts had blossomed into softball-size globes that were barely contained by the tight fitting t-shirt she wore. Her cutoff jeans were very short, showing off her long, tanned legs to perfection. She had passed “cute” long ago and went straight to “knockout”.

After a moment, I realized that she was still standing in the doorway, and I was still dripping wet, sporting the remains of an erection, with only a towel wrapped around me. I broke the awkward silence.

“Uh…Jennifer, could you excuse me while I get some clothes on?” That broke her spell, and her eyes jerked back up to meet mine.

“Oh, yeah…sure, Mr. J. I’m really sorry…” She gave me an embarrassed grin, and pulled the door closed. I heard her footsteps quickly retreating down the stairs. I finished toweling off, shaved, put on my clothes and went downstairs. I was surprised to see her still there, sitting at the kitchen counter. She looked up and blushed as I walked in.

“I hope you don’t mind…that is…that I’m still here…I just wanted to say again…I mean, I’m so sorry and all…”

I grinned and held up my hand. “Look, no harm done, and like I said, it was all my fault anyway. Let’s just forget it, ok?”

She looked me over and said, “Looks like you’re going out. Do you still need me to baby-sit?”

I took a deep breath and stared out the back window. I saw Abby’s little swing set, and a few of her toys in the yard. In a shaky voice, I whispered, “No, thanks anyway. Maybe some other time.” She must have sensed something in my voice, because she pressed the matter further.

“Hey, is anything wrong? You look really depressed or something.” I just shrugged, and shook my head, avoiding her gaze.

“You can tell me, if you want. Look, I know I’m just a teenager, but I really am a good listener.” My shoulders sagged a little, but I really DID need to talk to SOMEONE. Another deep sigh, then I relented and told her the whole story.

“Oh, I had no idea…I’m so sorry!” She put her hand on my shoulder. “Is there anything I can do for you? You look like you could really use a friend.”

“Thanks, Jennifer. That’s really sweet of you. Actually, it’s the nicest thing anyone has said to me in quite a while.” Suddenly, I found myself venting, confessing, and bearing my soul to this teenaged girl. I poured out my heart, and Jennifer just listened. I finished, and we sat there in silence.

A few moments later, she spoke. “If you don’t mind my asking, where were you going tonight?”

“Oh, just out. I need a change of scenery, you know, to get out of this place.” I left out the part about trying to get laid. Another few moments of silence went passed.

“Were you…meeting anyone, or just going out alone?” she inquired quietly.

“Just by myself. I’ve been out of the dating scene for a while. My address book isn’t quite up to date.” I joked. She smiled, and looked like she wanted to say something, but decided not to. I could see a conflict on her face, then it appeared to resolve itself somehow. She looked up at me with a face full of innocent charm.

“Like I said, my parents decided to go up to the lake house for the weekend. They won’t be back until tomorrow night. So I’m by myself tonight as well. Look if you don’t want to, I’ll understand…but if you just need…you know…someone to…talk to…” Her voice trailed off. I grinned and looked down at her abruptly.

I grinned slightly. “Jennifer, are you asking me to have dinner with you tonight? Look, I’ve got a reservation down the coast a really nice place, and well, if you want to…”

She grabbed my arm with both hands, her green eyes dancing. “I’d love to, Mr. J! I’ve got a new dress that I’ve been dying to…look, give me fifteen minutes to go home and change and I’ll be right back!”

I laughed at her eagerness, but held up my hand. “Whoa, now. What will the neighbors think when they see you running over to my house in your fancy new dress? Better let me drive you over. We don’t want anyone getting the wrong idea.”

She looked embarrassed again. “No problem, Mr. J. I’ve got our garage door opener in my purse. We could pull your car in and that would be a little more…”

“Discreet.” I finished the thought for her.

She flashed me a bashful grin. “Yeah…discreet.”

I finished getting ready, and we went into the garage to get into my car. As I got in, I stole a glance over at her long legs before catching myself. What was I thinking? I was so starved for female companionship; here I was ogling a sixteen year-old girl! We made the short drive to her house, and pulled into the garage. She invited me in, and I sat on the sofa while she went to change. I watched her perfect ass, barely confined by her short-shorts, swaying side to side as she ascended the stairs and disappeared.

After about twenty minutes, I heard her bedroom door open, and footsteps on the stairs. Then first thing I saw were two black satin pumps, followed by the curve of two tanned bare calves. I didn’t see the hemline of the black dress come into view until several inches above her knees were visible. The dress clung tightly to her hips, and then I saw the rest of her body come into view. The dress had a fairly low neckline, not too severe, but enough to compliment her firm breasts to the fullest. Two thin spaghetti-straps held the entire ensemble up, and around her neck was a string of pearls that had probably been robbed from her mother’s jewelry box. She suddenly looked much older than sixteen.

“Wow!” was all I could muster.

She stopped on the stairs and flashed me a dazzling smile. I got up off the sofa, and came to the foot of the steps.

“Jennifer...you look beautiful.”

Blushing again, she led me out the back door, into the garage. I walked around to her side and opened her door for her. Her legs parted as she got in the car. She did her best to keep the dress from riding up her thighs, but it was in vain. Despite my feeble attempt to avert my gaze, I caught a wisp of black lace between her legs. She looked up at me shyly, and it took all my will power to look her in the eyes and smile.

The drive down the coast would be about forty-five minutes. I worried that someone might see us, but I told myself that we were unlikely to run into anyone I knew. We chatted as we drove, talking about my work, her school, new movies, favorite music, and basically everything but my marital troubles. I could tell that she was doing her best to keep my mind off that subject by her upbeat and enthusiastic banter. What was really keeping my mind occupied was the ever-creeping hemline of her dress. It had worked its way almost six inches above her knees, and every time she would turn and face me, I could almost catch a glimpse of her crotch. If she noticed, she didn’t let on, and just kept on talking.

We pulled into the driveway of the restaurant. Again, I moved around to open her door, extended my hand to her, and again was rewarded with a flash of black lace. The valet approached us from behind, and as I turned to hand him the keys, I caught a sly glance from him. I gave him an embarrassed smile. Once again, Jennifer seemed oblivious, and we walked to the entrance. We were seated in one of the darker corner booths. We sat opposite each other, separated by a lone candle burning in the middle of the table. Jennifer looked around in wonderment.

“Wow! This place is so NICE! I feel just like Julia Roberts in ‘Pretty Woman’. Thanks again for asking me to dinner.”

“Well, I’m no Richard Gere, but I still appreciate you going with me. It’s been…well, really good…just to be able to talk to someone.”

“Yeah, I guess things have been really hard for you lately.”

I cracked a wry grin. “No, not lately,”

Blushing, she stammered “Oh, shit…I’m sorry! I didn’t mean it to sound like that…I meant…”

I laughed, and held up my hand. “I knew what you meant, and I really shouldn’t have said that to you. It wasn’t something…appropriate…to say to a young lady.”

She grinned. “That’s ok, Mr. J. It was nice to see you smile. It’s a nice one”

“Look, since we ARE having dinner together, I think you should drop the ‘Mr. J’, and just call me Jack, ok? That’s what my friends call me.”

“Okay…Jack…all my friends call me Jen. And you DO have a great smile.”

“Well, Jen, it seems the longer I hang out with you, the more I smile,” I said, breaking into another grin.

“In that case, stick with me and by morning, I’ll have you laughing uncontrollably…” and then she stopped suddenly. The implication, if there was one, hung in the air between us. She flushed slightly, and quickly out the window. I couldn’t read her face to see if she had just made an offhand joke, or…

The waiter appeared and broke the spell. He took our orders, and Jen allowed me to order for her. I chose a nice Napa Valley wine I liked, and he clicked his pen approvingly and moved on. It wasn’t until then that it hit me that she was underage, although it occurred to me that the waiter hadn’t even asked Jen for ID. I looked across at her apologetically.

“Jen, I’m really sorry. I didn’t even think about you being sixteen. I’ll get him back and order you something else…”

She quickly interrupted. “Don’t be silly! Do you think I’ve never had a drink before?” I flashed her a disapproving look, and she responded with an impish grin.

“I’ve raided the bar a time or two when mom and dad have been gone.” Then giggling, she said, “I just think it’s so cool that he didn’t even card me…”

“Well, it probably didn’t cross his mind that he needed to. Speaking strictly as a man, I would have never believed you were only sixteen.” I saw that the compliment struck home, and she beamed a dazzling smile in my direction.

Dinner came, and conversation was light. The food was delicious, as it always was here. The young waiter made several return trips to check on us, although I don’t know if it was to refill our glasses or just to steal glances at Jen. If possible, she looked even more radiant. I was surprised to see her maturely impose a two-glass limit on herself, as did I. We continued chatting, and I was surprised to find how easy it was to talk to her, and how intently she listened. A couple of times I caught myself just gazing at her while she ate. In no time at all, we found that we were finishing dessert.

“Did you have other plans for tonight?” Jen asked tentatively. “You can take me back home if you want. I don’t want to spoil the rest of your evening.”

I dismissed that thought with a wave of my hand. “Forget it,” I chuckled. “I was just going to have dinner here, and maybe hit a club afterwards, but I really don’t feel like that much noise tonight. Actually, if you aren’t in a hurry, I’d…I’d rather just drive around.”

She beamed a smile at me, and then her smile sobered just a little. “Listen…Jack…I really do appreciate the way you’ve treated me tonight. You’re the first grownup to ever talk to me like I’m grownup too, rather than just a kid.”

“Jen, please take this as the compliment it’s meant to be, but it’s really hard for me to remember that you ARE only sixteen. I haven’t enjoyed talking to a woman like this in…well, for a very long time. It’s been very therapeutic for me.”

“Well, in that case, Dr. Jen says she’s full, and we can leave anytime you are ready!” With that, we stood to leave. She excused herself for a trip to the ladies room while I settled the bill. As I finished, she reappeared, and we walked to the door. Snaking her arm around mine, she leaned in and whispered, “Thank you for dinner. It was lovely.”

The valet brought the car around, and I opened the door for her. Again her skirt hiked up, but in the dim light and shadows of the restaurant entrance, I couldn’t quite get another glimpse of black lace. She seemed oblivious to my stare, however, and I closed the door and walked around to the driver’s side. We drove back along the coast towards the main road. Looking down from the highway, we could see the beach and the ocean waves illuminated by the full moon. It was a gorgeous view, made all the more so by the profile of Jen’s face against the moonlight. She stared out the window for several minutes.

“Oh, isn’t the view just LOVELY?” she gushed.

“It sure is,” although I knew that we were talking about two different views.

Jen broke my reverie. “Can we stop? I mean…can we go down there? I’d love to take a moonlight walk on the beach.”

“Sure thing.” I pulled over at the next beach access, and drove down the winding road toward the ocean. We found a small parking area and pulled in. I was surprised to see that there weren’t very many cars, as it was a perfect night for an ocean-side stroll. I parked the car, and glanced over as Jen was removing her heels. I removed my socks and shoes, and rolled my cuffs up a little. We got out of the car, and walked towards the path that wound through the trees and down to the sand. We were about halfway down when our hands brushed against each other. She looked over at me shyly, and again reached out hers for mine. I took it, and we resumed walking. I hadn’t felt a moment this magic in a long time. We walked along the surf, warm water lapping at our bare feet. No words were said; none were needed. I suppose we were both enjoying the moment. I have no idea how far we had walked, but eventually Jen spoke up.

“Do you think we should maybe turn back?” I could have walked all night, but I realized that she must be getting tired. We turned and started back, walking even slower, as if prolonging the moment. About halfway back, Jen broke the silence again.

“How long has it been for you?”

I frowned thoughtfully. “Oh, officially it was Sunday, but she’s been living at her mom’s for about…”

Jen stopped and turned to me. She gazed up at me, eyes shining in the moonlight. She took my hand in both of hers. “That’s not what I meant, Jack. I meant, how long has it been since you were…with someone?”

That startled me. “I…that is…I haven’t…I mean, other than my wife…” I stuttered. “Jen, I really don’t think I should be talking about things like that with you…”

She reached a soft hand to my cheek. “You are SO sweet. I know it’s none of my business, but you are such a nice guy. It doesn’t seem fair that she treated you that way.” She turned, and we started to walk again. After a while, she spoke again.

“I’m sorry if I’m so nosy. I just think you are too good a man to sit around and mope. I don’t think…well…I mean…you shouldn’t have any problem finding a girlfriend.”

Without thinking, I found the words escaping my lips. “I doubt that I would find one that I could talk to as easily as you.”

“Oh, Jack…”

She moved to embrace me, pressing her body against me. I tilted her head up gently, and kissed her. Lightly at first, then with mounting intensity, our lips danced together. Her tongue parted my lips, and began to snake its way around mine. Water washed around our ankles, and a soft breeze blew through our hair. She pressed her hips against me a little harder, and my cock began to swell against her belly. I wondered for a moment if she could feel it, and as if to answer my question, she reached behind me and grabbed my ass, pulling me harder against her.

After a few minutes, we broke the kiss, totally out of breath. Jen looked around, and seeing no one in sight, took my hand and led me to the tree line. Once there, she turned back to me. Looking up into my eyes, she began to unbuckle my belt. I knew this was wrong, but made no attempt to stop her. I simply ran my hands along her cheek and through her long hair. Once the belt was taken care of, she unbuttoned my pants, and pulled the zipper down. My dick strained against my briefs for release. She placed her fingers on the outside of my shorts, slowly tracing the outline of my manhood. Her eyes never left mine.

“Wow. It’s really hard,” as she continued to stroke me. She hooked her fingers into the waistband of my briefs, and pulled them down. My cock caught on the waistband, and popped back up like a diving board once it cleared. That elicited a giggle from Jen. The moonlight fully illuminated my erection, and she moved her hand to touch it. My breathing became ragged as her cool fingertips brushed the hot flesh of my dick. I had never been so hard in my life. She seemed fascinated by the sight, and closing her hand around it, began to stroke me. My head lolled back as I enjoyed the sensation. A drop of precum oozed out, lubricating her hand all the more. I gasped a little, and she grinned at me. She stood, turned away from me, and pulled her dress up over her thighs. She bent over, leaning out to grab a tree in front of her for support. She reached back between her legs and grasped my cock, pulling me gently toward her. There was just enough moonlight to tell that she was no longer wearing panties.

“When did you…uhh…I mean, where did you…?” I stuttered.

“Back at the restaurant, when I went to the ladies room…while you were paying.” She grinned back at me over her shoulder, and opened her legs a little wider.

“You mean you were EXPECTING me to try to…”

She cut me off with her sweet look. “No, Jack...not expecting, more like…hoping.” She wiggled her hips at me. “Fuck me, Jack. I know you need to, I know you want to. It’s ok…I’m not a virgin, you know. I want you to…I really do. I promise I won’t tell anyone. Nobody will ever know…”

I moved forward, grasped her hips with my hands, as she guided my swollen knob between the moist lips of her teenage pussy. Slowly, I impaled myself inside of her, her tight cunt gripping my throbbing member like a moistened vice.

“Oh...oh my…mmm...that’s really nice…” she cooed, and began to slowly hump my dick. I let her set the pace, but soon I began to piston in and out of her. She let out a series of soft moans, and I looked around to make sure we were still alone. I could just make out someone walking on the beach about 50 yards away, but the noise of the waves, coupled with our position in the tree line, made it unlikely that we would be heard or spotted. I picked up the pace of my thrusts, and judging by her noises, she wouldn’t last long. Jen began to pant, slowly at first, then gaining in intensity. My own orgasm began to build, but before I reached the point of no return, she stiffened suddenly, and then her body was racked with shudders. Her pussy spasmed around my cock, and I heard her straining to hold back a cry. She finally went limp in my hands with a strangled moan. I continued a slow attack on her twitching cunt, and was rewarded with a few more small shudders.

“Mmmmmmmm…that was SO good! I’ve never had a…I mean, it’s not my first time, but I never had a boy make me cum…”

I pumped a few more times, and felt my balls tighten, signaling that my orgasm was near. My breathing became ragged. Suddenly, it occurred to me what was about to happen.

“Uhh, Jen…I’m almost there. I didn’t bring a…that is…I don’t have any…”

She moved forward, allowing my cock to slide out of her cunt. Turning around to face me, she sank to her knees. She took my stiff, wet dick in her hand and smiled up at me.

“Don’t worry, Dr. Jen’s gonna take good care of you…”

I looked down, saw her lips part, and she moved forward slightly and engulfed my cock with her mouth. My head swam with the sensation, as her velvety tongue traced patterns on the underside of my dick, while her soft lips sucked me slowly. Her head bobbed slowly up and down my manhood, pausing to lick the tip before plunging back down the shaft with wet sucking noises. I knew that I couldn’t last long; I’d gone too long without sex. I felt the pressure building in my balls, as they ached for release.

“Jen, I can’t hold it much longer…” I gasped.

“Mmm…” was her only reply, but she continued her oral assault.

I felt the sperm racing up my shaft, felt my shaft begin to swell. My chest heaved, and I began to see stars.

“Jen, honey, I mean it…if you don’t stop, I’ll cum in your mouth!”

“Mmm hmm…” she countered, but continued sucking.

At that point, I lost it. My cock twitched, then began to explode in her mouth. My dick sent rope after rope of semen into her warm mouth. I heard a guttural squeal from Jen as the first squirt hit her throat, but her lips never lost their lock on my manhood, nor did her tongue ever stop its erotic dance around my cockhead. I lost count of how many times my dick convulsed, sending wave after wave of sexual pleasure through my body, and spurt after spurt of my semen into her mouth. I came like I had never cum before. I felt my legs grow weak, as my orgasm slowly subsided. Jen continued to slowly fuck my cock with her mouth, until the pleasure was too much for me. I put my hands on her head to stop her. She stopped her motion, but continued to hold my cock head in her mouth, tickling the underside of my glans with her tongue. After a few moments, she looked up at me sweetly. I heard her swallow, and my dick slipped wetly from her lips.

“Oh, god Jen, I shouldn’t have…I mean we…”

She put a finger to my lips, then bent down and carefully pulled my briefs back up. Next she returned my trousers to their original position, albeit with a little sand trapped in them here and there. She took my hand and we started for the car. I opened the door for her again, and she got in. However, this time when her skirt rode up, she paused for a moment, her legs spread for my eyes only. I drank in the sight of her exposed pussy as she reached under the seat for her handbag. Opening it, she reached in and handed me the tiny wisp of black lace.

Jen winked slyly. “I saw you admiring them earlier, so I thought you might like to keep them.”

She moved her other leg into the car, and I closed her door. We drove back home, most of the way in silence. Jen leaned over and put her head on my shoulder. Her hand found its way to my thigh, and she began to trace ever-broadening circular patterns with her fingers. I began to get hard again. She noticed the lump growing in my trousers, and grinned over at me.

“Wow, looks like somebody is ready for more action!”

I smiled sheepishly at her. “Jen, I’m sorry. I can’t help it. It’s been so long for me…”

“I know,” she grinned sweetly. “Really, I don’t mind a bit…I wanted it as bad as you did.”

Suddenly, we were home. I pulled into her driveway, and Jen opened the garage door remotely. I pulled the car in quickly, just in case anyone was out walking and might take notice of us. She closed the garage door behind us, and we just sat in the car, neither wanting the night to be over. She glanced sideways at me in the darkness, a sly smile on her face. “Look, I don’t really want to be here all alone tonight…”

I sighed. “Jen, I’d like nothing better. But you know you can’t stay over at my place. What if your parents called to check on you, but you’re not here to answer the phone? You’d be in BIG trouble…”

She placed her hand on my throbbing erection, and leaned over towards me.

“I wasn’t talking about YOUR place, silly.”

She grabbed the keys from the ignition, and jumped out of the car. She giggled as she walked toward the door. I just sat there in the dark, with a bemused grin on my face. Opening the door to the house, she paused and looked over her shoulder at me, dangling the keys in a taunting fashion. When she saw that I had still not exited the car, she threw the keys into the house and turned to face me with a mock pout on her face. Slipping the thin spaghetti straps of her dress off her shoulders, she let her dress flutter to the floor. She stood there in the doorway totally nude; her pearls and heels the only surviving articles of clothing. She ran her hands over her breasts, down her flat stomach, and over her pussy. She looked at me demurely.

She giggled again. “Do you think you’ll get in too much trouble if YOUR parents call YOUR house and YOU aren’t there? I mean…I don’t want to get you grounded or anything…” Her eyes danced with mirth. “…but if you want your keys back, you’ll have to come look for them.” She spread her legs slightly and slipped her middle finger into her pussy, grinning at me lustfully.

“If I were you, a good place to start looking for them would probably be upstairs…in my bedroom.” She turned and walked inside, leaving the door wide open. I sat there for a moment, looking at my reflection in the rear-view mirror. Then, with a deep sigh, I got out of the car and followed her inside.

The End


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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 10:04
    great story!

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  • SSB
    SSB
    07.03.2009 10:11
    Very well done... though I'd have extended it to include the description of the first time he came in her before they fell asleep in each other's arms... both of them knowing that this night was only the beginning.

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  • reader62668883
    07.03.2009 10:13
    WOW

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 10:36
    Sweet, hot, and beautifully written. But please, there HAS to be more. Don't let us hanging (or actually, standing striaght up). We need to learn about the rest of the night. Sympathy sex is great, but they're past that now. Time for some good old teenie-bopper fucking!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 11:06
    Excellent story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 11:53
    Sweet, hot, and beautifully written. But please, there HAS to be more. Don't let us hanging (or actually, standing striaght up). We need to learn about the rest of the night. Sympathy sex is great, but they're past that now. Time for some good old teenie-bopper fucking!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 12:10
    Sweet, hot, and beautifully written. But please, there HAS to be more. Don't let us hanging (or actually, standing striaght up). We need to learn about the rest of the night. Sympathy sex is great, but they're past that now. Time for some good old teenie-bopper fucking!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 12:26
    perfect time to end it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 13:24
    Very nicely done

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  • donb9033
    07.03.2009 14:01
    Another home run. Treat story, but it left me wanting to read more about Jack and Jen.

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  • tricky
    07.03.2009 15:09
    very Good!!! Can't wait to read more of the adventures of Jack and his teenage minx Jen!!! A hot little woman to handle for him I think when is part 2????

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  • reader
    reader 500
    07.03.2009 15:17
    can u continue the boy and the babsitter one please?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 15:24
    Wonderful!!! Please, write a part 2!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 17:52
    Simply amazing...you have a gift for writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 18:17
    that was great! i cant wait for part 2. man, jack is so lucky!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 19:05
    Boring. Predictable, and predictably unrealistic. Girls don't just give up their virginity on a whim. And, a virgin isn't as sexually confident/bold as "Jen.". And, where's his concern for her pleasure -- she's a VIRGIN and should have a good 1st time. if you wanted this to be a "comfort Jack, and she's nothing more than a receptacle" story, which tho crap is your right, then you should've made the girl a little older and somewhat experienced.

    Totally unbelievable that she'd cum on her 1st time from just penetration (oh you men who think you're such incredibly cocksmen -- really, grow up and get a clue).

    Also, there's no point in pulling out before he cums -- if pregnancy is the concern, he shouldn't have gone in without a condom. Precum contains sperm, and a girl/woman can get pregnat from precum inside her. That's the worst element of your story -- the spreading of irresponsible info that will make some teen male think he doesn't need to wear a condom. In short, stop being a j

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 19:13
    crap crap crap

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 19:17
    very nicely written, i hope part 2 is on the way

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 19:37
    reader 2009-3-7 19:05:07

    Read closer DumbAzz, she said "I'm not a virgin"

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 20:20
    dumbasses shes NOT a virgin

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 22:06
    all I can say is WOW, will there b a follow-up story?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2009 23:32
    Well Done!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 00:17
    well it does give you a hard on but is rather predictable.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 01:12
    if we were going to go down this bad road, lets make it real fun and have her get pregnat from him and see what happens- could be fun

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  • 713
    713
    08.03.2009 01:13
    That story was amazing!!!! dont listen to these fools who are replying with negative comments!! this is by far the best story on this site, and thats no exaggeration. its also the first story ive commented on. keep up the good work and please make a part 2!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 01:51
    whoa dude i could feel the love coming out of this thing..great story..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 03:59
    Hey dumbass if you actually READ the story she says "It’s ok…I’m not a virgin, you know. I want you to…I really do. I promise I won’t tell anyone. Nobody will ever know…”

    so next time before you become the world's greatest critic man hater check the storyline

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.03.2009 06:09
    This was pretty good but i would prefer a Rachel II

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 08:15
    One of the best stories I have read in a very long time. Extremely well written. Think of going pro??

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 10:14
    *****Twstd&Dmntd4Lfe*****.....................here again..........awesome
    dude........simply awesome............phenomonally written..............it will
    be -> one the,best ever.............hurry the,hell up -> with part2.............
    dawggggggg

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 12:00
    Seems like your masturbation session to this Boring. Predictable, and predictably unrealistic story stopped you from reading it properly. Read it again and maybe you will see she isn't a virgin. And that she didn't cum on penetration it was a few minutes at least.

    Cheers.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 14:07
    rachel II please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 14:51
    crap. not erotic.

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  • READER+II
    08.03.2009 15:19
    As you know you write exceedingly well. Your pace, flow, connections and tone are well suited to this genre; however, there will always be a few who just "don't get it".

    Yes, Rachel II would be much appreciated, but until then keep it up, so to speak.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 16:27
    Amost beautifull story what a fortunate guy in the meantime I have a throbbing nine iincher.

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  • naser.yahia
    08.03.2009 16:53
    naser

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 17:07
    My god I love this story!!! I usually have at least one negative thing to say, but this is perfectly formed.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 19:11
    pretty good part 2???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.03.2009 20:33
    Another masterpiece. Your are a gifted writer. Can't wait for your next story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 20:49
    Amazing! You are a gifted writer. I can't wait for your next.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 20:49
    Amazing! You are a gifted writer. I can't wait for your next.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.03.2009 20:52
    Another masterpiece. Your are a gifted writer. Can't wait for your next story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2009 23:00
    You are arguably one of the best writers on this site. Truly fantastic

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  • sunbored
    08.03.2009 23:01
    fuckin aye 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 00:10
    Awesome. 10/10. One of the best stories I've read on this site in a long time. Keep writing...for all of us...please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 00:53
    amazing really 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 00:56
    great story keep up the good work man seriously... 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 01:37
    FUCK yeah!! 9/10 Woulda been a 10 if he filled her cunt up with his spooge.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 02:01
    Your readers are total fucktards

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 05:36
    I`m not into most romance but I really got into this one. F*cking wonderful! Please, give us more- F/USA

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 06:32
    Excellent fnrm and progressiom. Very believable,erotic to the enth,degree. IM ENVIOOUS ,ha ha

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 08:38
    All I can say is What an AWESOME Story, So believable.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 10:20
    wow.just wow

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 10:30
    great story 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 10:31
    dude good story 9.5/10 had my pussy dripping wet i couldn't get enough pleez write more i can't wait for part 2

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  • reader+123
    09.03.2009 12:18
    wow 10/10 it was spectacular

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  • pdxcpl
    09.03.2009 12:37
    Wow that was wonderful please write part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 13:34
    Wow, great story. Look forward to part 2

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  • nstyice
    09.03.2009 15:15
    fuckin awesome

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  • pinolou
    09.03.2009 18:12
    thank you. a very nice story, very sexy and well written

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 20:07
    Man, you are by far the best erotic novelist on the internet! I've read all your stories, and they are all amazing. The romantic elements are the best. You should seriously think about writing a whole book and getting it published!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 20:29
    great story, best i've seen in a good while!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.03.2009 23:38
    I am a fan of your stories. they actually have some content instead of just sex. I hope this one has a Sequel.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 00:54
    jesus man! You are definitly the best erotic writer out there, because damn! These stories are just great! I mean, Amy was amazing and this one was great too!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 01:05
    part 2 soon plz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 14:48
    After all this romantic soap, I expected a bit more foreplay at the beach.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 18:49
    Hotter than hot.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 19:36
    this was great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 20:18
    Do aa ttwwoo brehh

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 20:45
    good overall elements, but really didnt do the beach justice... also maybe get a little more creative with the metaphors and descriptive phrases.. 9/10 overall :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 23:01
    good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2009 23:50
    you are great ive read everything you have posted and I am very impressed

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  • Larry
    11.03.2009 02:17
    This proved to be a truly erotic story that made it easy to forget that the female was a kid of 16. Made good, hot reading almost from the very beginning and ended up even hotter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2009 04:04
    My god! simply amazing. I do hope you continue this. If you don't I will be truly dissapointed. But either way thank you for such a wonderful story.

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  • mishkabear2009%40yahoo.com
    11.03.2009 06:43
    This story had me sweating, I really look forward to more from you.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2009 12:44
    Its a good story. I enjoyed how the first part of the story was mostly about this guy and his neighbor who practically fell into a date, (even if she was only 16). You could've expanded more on the beach part and described it into detail to give the romantic evening visual on the beach. When you did get to the sex though, you could've elaborated the whole "she's only 16" theme to help make it naughtier or more fun. I did enjoy this story though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2009 14:45
    i loved it.... i was expecting for some "action" at one of their homes but it was good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2009 15:53
    fuckin good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2009 17:42
    Hot. Make more. Now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2009 20:01
    fuckingBIGAAAAAA

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2009 20:15
    Lovely story. Romantic and just graphic enough to be hot without being vulgar.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2009 01:56
    you my friend should write a book. Truly romantic and mindblowing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2009 15:22
    WELL DONE

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  • IAmLurker
    12.03.2009 15:37
    great story, keep them coming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2009 19:22
    Excellent story. You've got some real talent. Put it to use.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2009 22:06
    pt 2!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.03.2009 07:30
    great story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.03.2009 10:27
    nice.......story

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  • Meena_waz
    13.03.2009 13:18
    very sweet!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2009 10:08
    i agree with everyone before me. including the one about you writing a book. id buy it. keep writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2009 16:12
    Awesome, Make a prt 2. I would pay for stuff like this dude

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2009 18:09
    Everybody gets what they deserve.........................

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2009 23:35
    def needs a pt 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2009 00:06
    Fantastic story, when is Part 2 coming?! Please keep up the excellent work as it's utterly fantastic stuff. You deserve an award! :)

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  • reader
    reader 500
    15.03.2009 01:21
    the best ive read so far

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2009 02:59
    part 2! part 2! part 2!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2009 09:17
    Please write part 2,3,4 and more. Jen made my cock so hard I had to jack off twice.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2009 13:35
    keep up the good work...it was grt!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2009 15:19
    Great story! It would be cool if there were more fucking, but still, awesome story :P

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.03.2009 10:17
    great story man !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    9.5/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.03.2009 21:58
    Predictable and boring. Crap.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.03.2009 22:18
    wow that was en excellent story probably the easiest for me to sperm all over my laptop

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  • Vixen_Oxy
    16.03.2009 22:56
    Loved it! hope to read more like this. So damn hot.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2009 10:22
    i hope if there were more actions...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2009 16:07
    oh..my..god... i wish my girlfriend was like jen... if you dont write more i will have to hunt you down.. so for your own sake, and the sake of my now-insatiable penis.. write more dammit!!

    9.5/10

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  • This+story+fuckin+rox
    17.03.2009 23:06
    AWESOME omg was that good

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  • xmanner
    17.03.2009 23:53
    Gooooooood writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2009 01:07
    Excellent writing!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2009 02:41
    amazing

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  • walker
    18.03.2009 08:43
    WOW!!!

    just loved the story. nicely put n love to know more what happened in the top floor.

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  • Black69ta
    18.03.2009 09:22
    Wow! Great story! Now in impression of Oliver Twist, "May I have another (chapter, or story), sir!"

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2009 18:36
    great story u should make a part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2009 20:04
    I agree with the reader at the top of page 5. Nicely written from the "grown up"restaraunt to rhe very romantic and sexually exciting walk on the beach. Perhaps some more detail of the sex act would make it more exciting. Keep up the good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.03.2009 09:50
    This was incredibly written

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.03.2009 21:02
    GREAT story, little more detail in the sex though for the second part i just KNOW you're gonna write for me ;)

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  • guddiya
    20.03.2009 00:52
    great story

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  • guddiya
    20.03.2009 01:04
    great story

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  • WoW
    WoW
    20.03.2009 03:48
    Very well written... good story, good sex, very erotic... amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.03.2009 07:43
    very good story write a part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.03.2009 12:37
    soopa

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  • Gus
    Gus
    21.03.2009 16:40
    Wonderfully written; nice theme, romantic and sexy at the same time. It's nice to see a story written by someone who cares about grammar and style. Looking forward to more of the same.

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  • melka00
    21.03.2009 19:44
    you rape a gitl you pedophil

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.03.2009 19:59
    Very, very well written. You easily taunted me into the story and I was sold at an instant. ^^ Yes, write a part 2, damnit!

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  • Rusty+Shackleford
    22.03.2009 06:39
    Good work, man. Keep writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2009 10:22
    Great story thatis begging fora part two!

    As for:
    "melka00
    2009-03-21 19:44:10
    you rape a gitl you pedophil"

    You read it, you pervert!
    And its not "pedophil" it's pedophile. Invest in a spellchecker!

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  • GoodMourning
    22.03.2009 10:39
    agree wuth gus very romantic and sexxual at the same time very nice id love to read more from u

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  • anonymous
    22.03.2009 22:29
    what is her address? I'm horny also

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2009 01:23
    wow... cant wait for more... it was a great story... a little weird i will admit... she was just 16 but still a good story... you need a sequel to this one... get to it yo!! i also liked how well described it is and how grammar is properly used... ps srry about any misspelling... im using my phone and its a bitch to type with....

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  • Anon
    23.03.2009 02:15
    Pretty shit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2009 04:21
    Did nothing for me either! sorry

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2009 17:45
    The actual definition of pedophile is one who is attracted to children between the ages of about 2-11ish. There's even a seperate word for people acttracted to babies. However, except in the case of teen boy/ man relationships there is no term for men attracted to teen girls.Many teen girls are attractive. It's only when you act on your fantasy that it becomes wrong. It was just a fantasy and a good one. If it offends you, you shouldn't read it. I think Jack should become a little less inhibited in part II.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2009 22:17
    Ephebophilia: the attraction to mid to late adolescents. And yes, I'd like to see Jen push Jack a little farther.
    btw, in 31 of the United States, and D.C., the legal age of consent is 16. Feel weird about it if you want, but recognize that most of the world, and most of the US, doesn't have issues with it.

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  • SockMan
    24.03.2009 12:41
    Totally agree with the comment below. 16 is not a weird age. In Australia the legal sexual consent age is 16 (although if you sleep with someone who is under the age of 18 but over 16 and you are more than 5 years older thats a crime).

    As to the story.....

    It was fantastic. Excellent grammar, punctuation and a fine use of paragraphs (which most people seem to neglect these days). The character development was especially good, the plot was also very well done. I thought the romance was a nice touch even if it was a little bit cliche`.

    Would like to see a bit more original creativity in any sequel, but otherwise I'd rate it a 8.5/10

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  • Lustdemon
    24.03.2009 15:38
    This was a good story, prabably too good since I prefer my sex stories to be a bit more shallow.

    Nobody should complain about the age of Jen since you were comp-letely clear in your categorisation.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.03.2009 22:52
    great story.complete in all respects...love,lust and passion!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.03.2009 23:50
    Most enticing story I've read yet! I love this story, you should continue with this story and tell more if yo've got 'em!

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  • jboy95
    25.03.2009 00:37
    thats pretty lucky
    16!!!
    damn!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.03.2009 06:09
    10/10 Definitely my favorite story on here. Part II please :D

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  • jack+daniels
    25.03.2009 06:35
    i enjoyed reading a story where the people care for each other as people not objects

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  • Gauntletoffaith
    25.03.2009 06:51
    That was awesome! Very descriptive and enticing. Very few stories i have read on this site are on par with this story. And i've been reading from this site for years now. 9.9999/10. The only tiny bad thing was that you could have had her done something a little more sexy at the end.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2009 09:21
    really awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2009 20:28
    damn that shit kicked ass!!!!!!!!!!

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  • indianajustin
    26.03.2009 23:25
    Hey you really should do a part two to this story. It was very interesting. My fiancee loved the detail.

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  • hornygirl
    27.03.2009 00:54
    great story .. more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2009 06:49
    a this story was the truth wish i was at that beach i wouldd of asked too join them

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  • hard
    27.03.2009 07:40
    great I had to take my hard cock in hand but it was over to quick

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2009 07:44
    please make a 2nd part please i real want more! 10/10

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  • sexyjo
    27.03.2009 07:54
    it made me horny , great,.,,,more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2009 19:34
    beastly story, great story line, good action, keeping the suspense to a maximum.... goodjob, i give it a 10/10.... you really should write another gut wrenching erection causing story such as the one you have written. sincerely,
    proud reader.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2009 22:12
    My fiancee' noticed. Join in with the big cock

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2009 22:42
    great story made me have 3 orgasms..i need a new dildo!!!

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  • twistedmadd
    28.03.2009 02:27
    dude................that was just........................beautiful..................jk, but it still was one of the best ive read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2009 03:04
    Excellent! One of the best!

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  • Bulksfpmuks
    28.03.2009 14:36
    Pretty plausible, if one posits a pre-existing attraction for the guy. And that's not much of a stretch. A 16 y.o. girl might easily have a crush on a neighbor guy who isn't sporting a lot of grey in his beard.

    The development of the episode is credible, in that light. The dialogue is not bad, and the romance is more important than the lusty mambo we're all waiting for. And there, the choreography (while a bit sophisticated for a 16 y.o. to initiate) is well-handled.

    I concur with the general judgment. This is a good story. Whether it should be developed further, into a series remains to be considered.

    Bulksfpmuks

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  • The+Wanderer
    29.03.2009 13:00
    That was excellent 10/10!!!

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  • Michael+Cep
    30.03.2009 01:46
    That was an amazing story. Due to recent inspiration I've found myself writing short erotic stories. I want to submit them, but I've been really nervous. Reading your story, however, I think I'm going to give it a try. I think I'm inspired to perfect my craft.
    Any chance of you writing more?

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  • Code
    31.03.2009 20:29
    WOW. Great story.

    7325680326576/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2009 20:44
    dude, dat was like the most amazing erotic story i read!! it was erotic, short, sweet, cute and soooOo loving!!! good job man!

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  • TB
    TB
    01.04.2009 21:46
    This is a very well written story. This writer takes his chance with the reader to build up interest. His sex is also so civilized he deserves a pulitzer prize for pornographic writing.

    TB

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.04.2009 23:27
    that was fantastic

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  • krystal%26lt%3B3
    02.04.2009 01:44
    great story, got me heaps wet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2009 02:50
    that was wonderful! i wish all stories were written this well!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2009 07:48
    That was a fuckin' beautiful story. My cock was so hard at the end of the story, just a squeeze on my cock make a huge load of spunk erupt nto my cupped hand and I then lapped up my delicious cum.

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    02.04.2009 12:55
    Fantastic Story!! There has to be a followup. Perhaps including some of her female school mates. It would be great if you included a little more detail in describing her nudity. Other than that I look forwarded to reading what happens next. Keep up the great work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2009 11:43
    amazing story...got me hella wet...you have to do a follow up to it. bring in some of her friends or something like that.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2009 13:29
    it was so good... its so romantic...good work!!! mwah

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.04.2009 06:04
    make a continuation to the story... But make it hotter, please?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.04.2009 16:46
    great story plz make part 2

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  • Grim+Reaper
    11.04.2009 02:17
    great work your a fantastic writer

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  • fod210
    11.04.2009 23:40
    Very well written. It held my attention while I held something else.

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  • Jamie90
    21.04.2009 10:44
    you´re really good

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  • thechef
    07.06.2009 15:56
    Yet another well written piece of erotic fiction.
    Well done again

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2009 07:09
    your stories are just amazing...its so cool and romantic...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2009 14:27
    dude what the fuck. you're awesome with this shit. write a book asshole. i'd buy it.

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  • spud+u+like
    01.07.2009 17:35
    fab story,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2009 19:31
    Did Rachel & Jennifer just disappear? I do not think so. Please tell us the next chapter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2009 15:27
    A perfect piece of perfection

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.07.2009 05:06
    another chapter please

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  • A+huge+fan
    30.07.2009 00:40
    I have read all of your stories and I really like how there all not vulger and imature it's all well writen and well thought out. Huge fan of your writing style. Write a book! It would sell like steak In etheopia

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.07.2009 03:27
    You are certainly the best sex story writer on this site!I just wanted to give you props.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2009 02:15
    Best story writer here, all of your stories are perfect, you have the writers touch keep going, write a book go far with your gift

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  • WOW
    WOW
    17.08.2009 11:37
    AMAZING, just Amazing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2009 11:10
    Great story you are one of the top two or three writers on this site
    but start doing some sequels to your stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2009 13:54
    Great story write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 06:17
    When is part two?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2009 01:44
    wow...amazeing story :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2009 14:39
    whre's the rest -- good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.10.2009 01:58
    AMAZING!!! please do some sequels!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.11.2009 19:41
    Boy, your stuff is really good. I've read the first four of your stories today. I'm on my way to the last one. Great job.
    Thanks

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  • psychotic+pessimist
    23.11.2009 21:26
    The writer mentioned in other story's if not this one he does not write sequels on command. So stop begging him for "more". The stories are great, More would of course be widely welcomed but completely unnecessary to make THIS story, a good story.
    -Ji317 continue to write single storys and the best of luck to you

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  • jl317
    02.12.2009 16:41
    Thank you, psychotic pessimist for your understanding. I also appreciate everyone's enjoyment of my stories and wanting more, but I realize that I am just that...a story writer. I have no designs on being a novelist. I really enjoy writing about sexual discovery and first time experiences. No offense, but there are tons of stories on here about sex. I just enjoy writing short stories that capture a moment of discovery or awakening. After that...it's just sex, and I'll leave those stories to the many great writers on here. Thank you for your kind comments and appreciation! - jl317

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2010 14:10
    i jacked off to this amazing storym:)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2010 04:40
    after readin this I have no dought in my mind that you are one hell of a writter keep it goin kid best of luck

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  • Phoenix
    Phoenix 1654
    03.06.2010 04:29
    Almost everything about this wonderful work of lit. scream out to me as if it were a wonderful movie playing out in my mind. You do a wonderful job with the discription of setting on all accounts here, I could imagine camera angles so well in my mind and with no effort, quite spectacular!

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  • Phoenix
    Phoenix 1654
    04.06.2010 02:48
    Almost everything about this wonderful work of lit. scream out to me as if it were a wonderful movie playing out in my mind. You do a wonderful job with the discription of setting on all accounts here, I could imagine camera angles so well in my mind and with no effort, quite spectacular!

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  • wirepaladin
    23.06.2010 11:43
    Well written and sensual. It was a pleasure to read this story.

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  • maintman02
    20.07.2010 02:32
    I agree with your comment about there being a possibility of just sex, but this story has the greatest potential of being a really fantastic love story. all sex aside, I would love to see where their relationship goes from here. Maybe keeping the relationship discreet until she turns 18, then having them get married and having a child of their own. Something along those lines.
    Thank You for this great love story.

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  • SEN
    SEN
    23.07.2010 20:16
    That was the best story I've ever read on this site....well written, well paced, and felt so real, so possible. Well done!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2010 15:43
    Wow Wow Wow. Oh my is all I can say!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.11.2010 14:14
    DAMN! that was a good story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.11.2010 21:54
    Very, very good. 10/10

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  • storyteller68
    08.12.2010 05:57
    Excellent story, very well written.

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  • storyteller68
    08.12.2010 05:57
    Excellent story, very well written.

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  • storyteller68
    08.12.2010 05:58
    Excellent story, well written.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2011 09:52
    VERY amazing, i really hope u make some more.

    P.S: your other stories are epic aswell

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.05.2011 02:23
    Damnit now my dick hurts stroked too damn fast and hard

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2011 02:13
    8====>~~~~~~ OH MY GOD JIZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I JUST BUSTED A NUT

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2011 00:39
    Very good story and very believable. Wish I had neighbors like that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 14:16
    O.M.G after reading it i had sex wif my boy friend nd i still want more

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2012 15:39
    holy shizballs ive never cummed so hard in my entire life well done

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2012 23:59
    fucking amazing.... i fucking jizzed three times and i thank you for the amazing story :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 09:52
    If I am Jack ... Would have put my toung n taste jen's pussy while in the beach and made her enjoy the same.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2012 19:48
    سكس

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 14:37
    Just a great story. Please continue.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2012 12:14
    I enjoyed the story very much. It was well written.
    W1drng

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  • jl317
    30.07.2012 15:05
    Thanks for the comments guys!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2012 08:37
    wow is all i can say that was good

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 21:05
    Excellent story. Believable and hot! How about a follow on.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2012 02:20
    I read all of your stories, and they are great! So, please, continue with them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.10.2013 17:04
    Write a part 2 please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2014 11:51
    I really enjoy your stories your a great writer you shouldstart making them longer though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2014 16:56
    All of your stories are great. The romance is there, but it's not too much to discourage further lustful reading. This story is realistic, and honest. You are an excellent short story writer. I have just one question. Have you ever thought about writing chapters and progressing from short stories to full length novels so to speak?

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  • jl317
    01.12.2014 14:14
    thank you for all the kind comments. No, I have no desire or time to write novels. Short stories are my preference.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2015 07:53
    Please right a part 2.love your storys. Rachel the babysitter is my favorite

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2015 04:01
    love this story!!!!!!!11

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.03.2015 01:38
    12/10 ign rating

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.03.2015 18:54
    12/10 ign rating

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2015 08:25
    Great story. Gave my my neighbor the address of where to find your story.
    A few days later he asked me over to baby sit, even tho his kids have left home. We walked on the beach and ended up at his house.
    Never knew a 40yr old man cud cum so much and so often.
    Youve changed my life, thankyou so much ÷)a

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.02.2016 17:44
    Please repost your stories. They're all amazing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.02.2016 21:59
    I go by COACH, and this is the first of your stories I've read. Based on what I see here, you are very close to commercial level. Get a proof reader (though this example is close to clean), and an editor (to help with structure and that sort), and you could be on your way. COACH

    As I read on this site it is amazing that:

    } The young ladies are almost never virgins;
    } If they are virgins, they always have a strong orgasm in spite of the pain of losing their cherry;
    } All the cocks are way above the five and one half inch average;
    } All the girls love the huge cocks, even the virgins;
    } The Mothers and Wives never find their young are sexually active:
    } And if the do discover, the adults eventually join the young people.

    You have done a good job here, without using most, if not all, of these cliches, and for that I honor you. Step up a level. Improve your craft, and get paid for it.

    COACH

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2016 19:12
    PLEASE please please repost your stories. Few stories are as good as yours and it's sad that they're not available anymore. Whenever you can...please repost!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2016 23:08
    where is the rest

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2016 19:30
    Jealous enjoyed this story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2016 19:31
    Really enjoyed this story.

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  • Penisalotta
    29.07.2017 02:43
    Great story

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  • Big+Bob+D
    16.01.2018 22:46
    One of the absolute best stories I've read on here in a long time.
    Thanks!

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  • Benjamin2017
    27.11.2018 19:05
    Pammie and I walked along the beach, hand in hand. It was dark with no moon. She stopped me, stepped in front of me, and planted her warm lips against mine. We kissed and kissed and then began to run our hands over each other's body. I reached up under her skirt to caress her moist pussy through her panties. Pammie reached into my sweats and stroked my cock. My stepdaughter broke the kiss to pull me over into the dunes. She slipped her panties off and lay back on the sand. I slid my sweats off and knelt between her legs. She placed my cock at the entrance to her preteen pussy and then I was in her like a hundred times before. Pammie pulled me down and whispered for me to fuck her hard. I swung my cock in and out of her precious slit and kissed her again. She pulled her shirt up so I could suck on her buds as I screwed her deeply and forcefully. After several minutes my darling girl moaned that she was cumming. I sped up my thrusts and showered her cunt. I love you, Pammie!

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  • sicktwistedwolf
    22.03.2021 23:08
    Enjoyed this romance story. You should write more.

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