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Melody of the Mountains

Author: Twatter

Date: 8 March 2009

Erotica, Poem, First Time, Hardcore

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O, i dream her bosoms lush,
sway to and fro with ev'ry thrust;
our tongues entwined, yet still we blush,
I hope thee tight with sweaty lust.

Thy lively nipples swell and harden,
fingers frolick through thy garden;
I venture deep, what treasures found,
deep within thy fleshy mound!

I lift thee up with manly might,
O readily she doth excite!
I stroke her calves so smoooth and white
wet slipp'ry heat, her tunnel tight,
her lust replete, she shivers slight
joyous squeals of carnal delight!

sweet ecstacy! be quick, make haste!
so longingly unsheathe they waist
spurting gushing, phallus fountain,
its truly i, king of fuck mountain.


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    14.03.2009 23:41
    Read the book "The Yin-Yang Butterfly" --- it has similar erotic poetry. Don't knock your talent; there are lots of women who would give their eye-teeth for a man who could write or appreciate poetry. It is beautiful.

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  • JackassTales
    18.03.2009 11:53
    I loved your poem!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2009 01:38
    omg lololololololololololololololoololololol
    na fucking awesome mate

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  • lovesicklesbian
    06.04.2009 06:58
    awsome poem mate keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.04.2009 01:40
    It's pretty good, but you don't need to use out dated language like that. It's self conscious and contrived. Other than that I liked it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.04.2009 07:48
    it was good, made me lol though, sounds like a monty python song rofl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.04.2009 14:52
    omg! tht was awesome!!! i really lovd it and it does sound like a monty python song...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.04.2009 21:52
    Dumb!!! Something original excites everyone. Try it!!!

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  • Twatter
    08.05.2009 22:50
    Good god, thanks guys! Thats actually some good advice here, thought ill just get hardcore flamed or something =]

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  • Twatter
    08.05.2009 22:51
    and g, i will definately check out that book =D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2009 04:29
    Be wary of overused phrases... other than that, nice flow. I likes.

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  • panicker4123
    13.06.2009 09:14
    Fukin rotten poem...arsehole you cud make it lil more wacky!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2009 18:24
    Pretty good g man

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  • smcaaphd
    25.07.2009 07:10
    Well done!! Really good poem - I love reading 'olde english' verse and it's even better when it's written so lustfully!!

    You get a plus vote from moi!!

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  • hippiepoet69
    18.11.2009 18:17
    good flow but the rhyme pattern changes. keep writing and reading well written poems. I don't get past the first few lines on most poems. Main thing is to enjoy

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2011 13:44
    This info is the catÂ’s pjaaams!

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