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JENNY'S VIRGINITY

Author: salmaklak

Date: 1 May 2009

Boy, Fiction, Consensual Sex, First Time

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JENNY’S VIRGINITY

Jenny is my sister’s daughter. She is now 17 years old and is turning into a very lovely young lady. Being 18 years younger than Sis, I have been her favourite little brother and have grown up along her own kid as a brother. I am now twenty years old and have been fairly close to Jenny all my life, having spent almost more time at Sis’s place than at my own parents’ place. However, it still came to me as a big surprise:
A few months ago, on the night before Jenny’s seventeenth birthday, I went over to hear what was planned for the next day. My folks had gone to some game lodge for the weekend and I was alone at home. Upon arriving there, I gathered that Sis and her husband were going out for the night and Jenny will be home alone. So, it was decided that Jenny would come over to our house and sleep over. Then I would take her back the next day and join in the birthday dinner. We stopped for some take aways and then went on to my folks’ place.

At home, we settled in the living room and decided to watch a movie. Jenny scanned through the TV guide and suggested a specific movie. I was surprised, as the movie she suggested, was rated 18 because of explicit sex and violence. That was not really the type of movie she usually watched. She, however, insisted that she wanted to watch this movie and so we did.

It was not a very good movie, but the scenes were really explicit. During one scene, I became very aroused and I glanced over to Jenny to see how she was experiencing this. She was still very naive as far as sex was concerned and I was convinced that my little Sis was still a virgin. She was watching intensely and I realized that she was aroused as well, because through her thin blouse, her nipples were standing up very clearly. Eventually, the movie finished.


“Not really good,” I said.

“No, not really” Jenny replied, “but there was a reason why I wanted to watch it.”

“Yes?” I replied inquiringly.


“Well, I want to ask you something big.”

“Oh yes?” I said, “and what can that be?”

“Well, hmm, I’m still a virgin, you know.” Jenny said.

“Well, I’d hope so,” I replied.

“Well, you see, I made a decision some while ago. I decided that I want to change the situation. I want to know what sex is like. The trouble is: I don’t have a boyfriend, as you well know, and I don’t want to have sex with anyone. I thought a lot about it and I came to the conclusion that, if I have sex, it must be with someone that I can trust and that will be able to teach me the basics about sex.”

“Hmmm” I said, somewhat perplexed.

She continued: “Well, as I say I thought long and hard about it. I think you are the best person to do that.”

“Hmmm” was all that I could say once more. I was rather bewildered by all this and needed some time to think.

“It’s OK, if you don’t want to do it. But the thing is, I know I can trust you. You won’t try to take advantage of me and you will be good to me, I know that. I know we are closely related and it shouldn’t really be done, but I don’t want a prolonged sexual relationship, I want you to show me and teach me once, then not again.”

“Well, this is a bit quick on me,” I said.

I looked at her. She was blushing profusely and seemed very embarrassed. I wondered what it would be like to hold her naked body in my arms and I was rather surprised to feel the warmth of arousal spreading through my groin and slightly stiffening my dick.

I got up and went over to my dad’s wine cabinet. I took out a bottle of champagne and proceeded to open it.

“Well,” I said, “tomorrow is your birthday and a celebration is definitely called for. I think the champagne would relax us a bit and then we can further consider your proposal.”

I poured two glasses and handed her one. I sat down next to her on the couch and” after we cheersed” we slowly sipped the delicious champagne. I thought to myself that I have a bit of a problem with our close family relation, but apart from that, I would not mind to have sex with this lovely young girl sitting next to me.

I topped up our glasses and tuned the radio set to some nice music. I looked at Jenny and immediately she blushed again and gave a little giggle.

“You are making me feel shy,” she said.

“Why?”

“I don’t know. Its because ... Ah, well, maybe I shouldn’t have said what I did.”

“About what?”

“About having sex with you.”

“Oh, well, I was just on the verge of agreeing to it.”

“You were?” She looked at me, her eyes wide.

“Yes. I thought about it this last 15 minutes or so and I think that, after all, it is not such a bad idea that I teach you a bit. So often it happens that the guy with whom the girl has her first sexual experience is not considerate enough and then the girl has a bad experience and thinks sex is not nice. I’ve heard that quite a few times. I also did some research on the matter.”

“You did research?”

“Yes. I did some reading up on how best to go about the first time with a virgin.”

“Now what is different with a virgin?”

“Well, there are quite a few things that the guy can do to make it less painful and nicer for the girl.”

“Well, then you really are the right person” Jenny said smiling naughtily at me.

She looked so cute and sexy that I could not resist it any longer. I reach out and pulled her into my arms. She turned her face up towards me and I kissed her. Her lips were parted and her mouth hungrily accepted my searching tongue. I could feel her heart thumping rapidly against my chest and she was breathing quite quickly. One thing was sure: this girl was turned on, very much turned on.

After a few minutes of passionate kissing, I slowly lifted my lips from hers and smiled at her. Her eyes were still closed and her lips parted.

“Let’s got to my bedroom” I said, “its easier on a bed.”

I got up and pulled her to her feet. While walking I could feel how my hard-on was straining against the cloth of my underpants. I looked down and saw that there was a huge bulge at the front of my pants. I pointed to it and said: “Just look what you are doing to me!”

She blushed again and giggled again. In the room, I took her in my arms again and, standing upright, we kissed again. Our bodies were thrust firmly against each other. I let my hands roam over her back caressing and stroking her. My Left hand slid down to her cute round bottom and I pulled it hard, thrusting the swollen knob at the front of my pants into the softness between her legs. She groaned and returned the thrusting, pushing her hips forward and holding my bum with her one hand. For quite a while we stood like that, kissing and rubbing our sex organs against one another’s.

Then I slowly turned sideways, still keeping the kiss in tact, but allowing some room between us. While firmly rubbing her buttocks with my left hand, my right hand slowly moved over her shoulder and proceeded to caress her throat and then went down to her left tit. I fondled the lovely tittie in my hand, completely enfolding it. Then I took the nipple, which was already completely erect, between my thumb and forefinger and gently rolled it. Jenny moaned loudly. She brought her left leg round and gently lifted her knee, pushing it between my legs. I continued to play with her small firm tits, concentrating on the nipples, but also rubbing them and squeezing the full tit.

Then I pulled her square against me, once more. Immediately our hips started thrusting one another again, but this time both my hands slid down to her bum. I got hold of the fabric of her skirt and pulled it up. My hands closed round her firm buttocks only separated from them my a bit of cotton. I pushed my hands into the back of her panties and firmly grabbed hole of her buttocks, my fingers pushing deep into the crack between them. I pulled her against my groin, at the same time arching my hips forward. She pulled her mouth from mine and gasped. “My God, you making me wild” she said, still gasping.

“I’m going to make you much wilder still” I said, releasing the pressure and reaching forward. I slowly pulled her panties down to her knees. Then I reached up and pulled her skirt down. She worked the skirt and panties down and stepped out of them. I moved away a few inches and looked down at her crotch. The darkness between her legs was emphasizing the triangle of light auburn hair disappearing in that secretive darkness.

I looked up at her face. She was smiling. “Do you like what you see?” she asked.

“Absolutely, but I want to see it all” I said, beginning to unbutton her blouse. She, in turn, began to pull my t-shirt out of my pants and lifted it over my head. I pushed her blouse back and she moved her arms down, letting the blouse drop behind her. I reached round her and fumbled with the hooks of the little flesh coloured bra. She lifted her one hand behind her and quickly did it. The bra slid down, revealing those beautiful small tits. I stared at them for a few seconds, completely spell-bound. Then my hands were drawn to them, as if a pair of invisible hands took hold of them and pulled them there. She gasped as both her nipples were simultaneously gripped between my fingers. She reached down and unbuttoned my pants, blushing as she did so. I closed my eyes and pretended not to notice her embarrassment. I felt my pants come loose and she pushed them down as far as she could reach. I continued to massage her lovely titties, while she hesitated for a long time. Then I felt her fingers hooking into the top of my jockey alongside each of my hips. Then she slowly pulled them down. When the jockey was pulled down far enough, my dick, which was aching with strain, jumped up like a jack in the box. Jenny giggled and said: “Gosh, its huge!”

I opened my eyes and smiled at her. “Yes,” I said “I’m lucky to have a size well over the average.”

She looked a little shocked and blurted out the next moment: “Wouldn’t it be too big to …… hmm, you know, hmm, to go in there?”

I gave a little laugh and then said as reassuringly as possible: “No, no. You know a baby can come out of there, then surely, this guy can fit in there.”

She tentatively put out her hand and touched my throbbing dick. She stroked it gingerly, clearly not knowing what exactly to do. I showed her how to grip it in her palm and jerk it back and forth. She giggled again as she pulled the skin back to reveal the purple head glistening with pre-cum. “Its wet!” she said.

“Yip” I replied, “It should be. That is to lubricate itself when has to go inside you. I’m sure you are also getting wet?” With that, I slid my right hand down to her crotch. She opened her legs, but I decided not to touch her pussy straight away. Rather, caress the pubic hairs and then slid my hand down to the inner part of her right thigh, slowly moving it and closer to her pussy lips. She parted her legs wider and leant against me. I moved my hand to her left thigh and I spread my fingers wide pushing against both her groins. She opened her legs ever wider, bending her knees. Very gently I touched the hairs covering her pussy. She breathed deep and quick. Then, suddenly, I grabbed her whole pussy with my full hand. She gave a little shriek and then followed it with a long, deep moan. She moved her hips rubbing her pussy on my hand. Indeed, her pussy was quite wet, especially when I pushed my fingers into the slit between the lips. She let out another shriek when my fingers found her clit. Gently, I caressed her clittie, causing her breathing and moaning to become ever louder and louder.

Then I remembered the caution from the book I read on the way to treat a virgin: “all the preparations should be done before the female is brought close to orgasm.” That is to prevent the situation where too much time elapses without stimulation, causing the female to lose her peak and making it difficult to bring her back there again. So, I let go of Jenny’s body and said: “I better put on a condom now.”

“You don’t HAVE to,” she said, “I’m using the pill.”

“Okay,” I replied a little surprised. “It is nicer without it.” She later told me that she had the pill prescribed because of a skin problem, which was hormone, related. I took a thick, firm pillow and put it in the middle of the bed. Then I turned to Jenny and picked her up in my arms. Kissing her passionately once more, I gently laid her down on the bed with her bottom resting on the pillow that I had arranged. In this way, her hips were raised much higher than the rest of her body. This was also recommended by the book. This position enables the male to push his penis into the vagina pressing it from below up against the front of the vagina. This, apparently, is the method causing the least discomfort. I knelt down on the bed next to her and slid my right hand in between her legs. She opened them wide and I gently placed my hand on her warm, wet pussy. She moaned again. I moved my mouth from hers, gently nibbling at her chin, then her throat and slowly working my way down towards her tits. She was gasping and moaning loudly and when my lips closed on the nipple of her right tit, she shrieked again. Now I quickly moved my mouth from one tit to the other, sucking and softly nibbling at her nipples. My right hand was rubbing her clit in a circular motion. She put out her right hand and closed it firmly round my throbbing organ. Thus we continued for a few minutes, until I thought she was quite close to an orgasm.

I quickly got into position between her widely spread legs. Momentarily, I stared at the fantastic view: this beautiful girl, lying there, naked as a new-borne babe, her nipples hard and wet, her pussy glistening pink like a ripe fruit. I leaned forward, supporting myself on my left hand and with my right hand I guided the tip of my member into the opening of Jenny’s vagina. I lowered my hips and began to push forward and upward, slowly and smoothly penetrating her, until my pubic bone pushed against hers. The feeling was almost indescribable: her pussy was so hot and so wet and quite tight round my thick dick. I moaned and then looked down at Jenny’s face. Her eyes were closed and she was smiling.

“You are not a virgin anymore,” I said. She didn’t answer, but the smile broadened.

“Does it hurt?” I asked.

“Its just stinging a little,” she said, “but it is okay.” I immediately began pushing my crotch against hers, moving my hips in a circular motion. I did not pump in and out of her like I usually did when fucking. This was also an instruction from the famous book. It suggested that the male uses this method to prevent too much friction on the broken virgin. In this way, the pubic bone of the male rubs against the female’s clit, enabling him to bring her to a climax. She was moaning softly and I turned my head and reached for her left nipple with my mouth. Because of the low posture of my body my head was below hers, but I still had to pull her tit towards my mouth with my right hand. She moaned loud and open-mouthed as my teeth gently nibbled at her nipple. I kept up the rotating movement, pressing firmly down and forward. I yearned to resort to the normal pumping motion, because it felt like my dick was teased, not getting the level of stimulation it was expecting, but I restrained myself and just kept on working my hips around and around. Jenny was definitely approaching an orgasm. I could tell that from the intensity of her moaning. She was rolling her head slowly from side to side, her mouth wide open, uttering low throatal moans. Then she grabbed my shoulders with both hands, the nails digging into my skin. She was moving under me. Suddenly, her whole body tensed. She pushed her hips upward and gripped me very tightly. Then she began to shake and at the same moment she let out a loud, primitive scream, her head bend over backwards, her mouth wide and her tongue halfway stuck out. For several long moments she kept on shaking and I ground my pubic bone hard into her pussy. Then slowly, she began to relax, sagging back on the bed. She was panting and then she said”

“Oh my God, oh my God!”

“What is wrong?” I asked.

“It is SO good, so good, I can’t believe it,” she said. “I have never felt anything like this.”

I kissed her gently on the lips, then on each cheek, then on the lips again. My dick and balls were aching with the desire to orgasm. I thrust my hips against her firmly. “I want to come inside you,” I said, “but if it hurts, you must tell me.”

“Okay,” she said softly, smiling at me. I kissed her and began to rotate myself on her, once again. Gradually, Jenny got excited again. First, her breathing became deep and raspy, and then she began to produce low moans once more. However, my climax was coming on and I decided not to hold it back. Suddenly, I felt the orgasm gripping my body. My balls contracted and my liquid blasted out deep inside Jenny’s pussy. I let out a loud groan. Several shots fired inside her, diminishing in strength every time, until it subsided. I sagged down on her, my body becoming limp.

“I could feel it inside me,” Jenny said, “its weird.”

“That’s the baby-making juice,” I said. She gave a little giggle. I lifted myself back on my supporting hands and kissed her softly. “I’m going to make you cum again,” I said, moving backwards and pulling my dick, still hard, out of Jenny’s pussy. I moved right back and then leant forward, lowering my face on her open pussy. As I placed my mouth on her pussy, pushing my tongue between the lips, she said somewhat shocked:

“You can’t kiss me there!”

I briefly lifted my lips off her wet pussy and asked: “Why not?” immediately resuming the pussy kiss.

“Its not clean!” she said.

Again, I briefly lifted my head and said: “It smells and tastes like honey to me.” I reached up and took her nipples between thumb and forefinger. She resigned herself to my attentions and soon she was moaning with enjoyment. My tongue circled and massaged her clit, flicking rapidly over it. Occasionally, I sucked her clit into my mouth. This seemed to give her extreme pleasure, because she moaned loudly and moved her body every time I did that. My fingers worked her nipples ever faster. It did not take long before Jenny’s body went into an orgasmic spasm once more. Again she screamed like a wild animal. When she finally relaxed, I moved over to her side and drew her into my arms. She snuggled against me. For a long time we lay like that, just holding each other.

We spent that night naked together, talking, sleeping and playing with each other. We did not have more penetration, as Jenny’s vagina was too sensitive, but we played a lot. I taught her how to give a good blowjob and I muffed her to several wild climaxes.

That is how my little “sis” lost her virginity. Thinking back about that night, I sometimes feel a little guilt, but then I atone myself with the knowledge that it really had done her well: She met a nice guy a few weeks ago and they have been going out ever since. Just yesterday she told me that they had had their first intercourse the night before and that it had been absolutely wonderful. She gave me a big brotherly hug and said that she would always remember that night and that she would be forever thankful for the way I had gently introduced her to the wonderful world of sex.

THE END


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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 09:56
    I read your other stories and this is by far the best yet. Keep writing

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  • nasir0677
    05.05.2009 10:08
    no

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 11:22
    well, shall we call it soft porn? still very erotic, thanx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 15:22
    WAIT! the dude fucked his niece? that's messed up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 15:30
    that was a very good story. I did enjoy it very much. I hope that you write more too. The elegance in your tone when speaking and your mindset through out made it great.

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  • anonymously+lol
    05.05.2009 15:57
    extremely gripping story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 16:00
    Reader 5/5/09 15:22:49: So, you're able to read enough to figure out it was his niece, but not enough to read the story tags? Good story, salmaklak.

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  • Chuck
    05.05.2009 16:02
    Man shoot a huge load in that sweet pussie and keep oa fucking your horny sister.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 16:03
    beautiful style. one of the most sincere stories I have read on here in many months

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 17:36
    good story, good language control, and no bloody mistakes!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 17:40
    That's fucked up man. You have to be a pedo to fuck your little
    Sister. You are so fucked up in the head. You should go see a doctor but
    Don't fuck her.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 17:51
    i think it's one of the better stories on this perverted site!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 18:13
    overall, not a bad story. need to fix some grammar.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 18:44
    WHY THE FUCK ARE U GONNA DO YOUR SISTER

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 22:01
    for all the faggots who say it is fucked up and stuff, DONT READ THE STORY IF YOU DONT LIKE THAT KIND OF STUFF!! It clearly says on the tag: INCEST!

    Overall dude, nice job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 22:20
    Not that it probably matters, but to the lame commenters who read the story (and probably enjoyed it) but decried him screwing his own sister... it's his niece. And it clearly describes that there is incest in the story so if you don't like it go find the horse fuckers section or whatever gets ya'll off, instead of moaning over a good story that clearly labels what it contains.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2009 23:10
    A pedo? WTF it's only 3 years

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2009 02:10
    Wow this is an awsome story keep up the good work 10/10

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  • Larry
    06.05.2009 04:16
    As a usually steadfast rule, I am not a lover of stories that contain incest. However, this was a rare exception. It had the grand effect that porn stories should have, and I managed to ignore the fact that incest was taking place. This story had enough heat and descriptive passages to make it a lot more than merely good---it is great!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2009 04:54
    Absolutely brilliant. The build up, the sensativity, the emotions, its just awesome. If we could have more such stories, the site would excel.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2009 09:21
    oh, how I whish I had somebody like this guy when I was a virgin! would have been so fantastic. just imagine that
    Eneth

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2009 13:33
    very nice story.

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  • magoo8686horny
    06.05.2009 16:58
    great story man. i wish i had a sister to teach about sex. keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2009 15:16
    you fucked your cousin??wtf is wrong with you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2009 22:37
    real hood story even though its incet.
    Keep writing

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  • IRAH
    08.05.2009 14:12
    In certain religion marrying sister's daughter is not incest. The story is close to reality and I shall not hesitate to give a10/10 -

    IRAH

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  • LUCKYMAN
    08.05.2009 14:32
    I am surprised to note religion (?) allows marriage wtith sister's daughter. Can someone give more info on this ?

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  • wantsomefun
    08.05.2009 18:32
    Why is it that people feel the need to complain about story content? The author clearly stated that there is incest. He tagged the story as "young," which means that one partner is underage, although, depending on where you live, 16 is old enough for consent. As several readers have suggested, folks, read the tags and avoid stories that may offend you.

    For crying out loud, this is a porn site! If you want to read stories about religion, politics, or economics, or whatever floats your boat, go somewhere else!

    This is a well-written, sensitive, erotic story. The male in the story seems like a considerate, thoughtful, caring guy. The story is very much a love story, in that his thoughts about the girl show that he cares for her feelings, and not just her body.

    Personally, I think the rating this story has gotten so far is low.

    I write stories myself, and have posted a number of them on this site. I would be proud if I had been the one to write this one.

    Congratulatio

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2009 04:46
    AWWWW
    Such a nice story ;)

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  • mrtoy
    10.05.2009 17:55
    great story but next time keep it right ,first it was his niece then turned into his little sis, woule like to see more about him and his niece or even his sister I give it a 8out of 10 on the names and a 10 on the story itself

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2009 17:05
    did he mean 18 years younger than his sister meaning he is 20 and she is 22 .....meaning that the sister was 3 when she had her kid or something

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  • jkjkjk
    11.05.2009 21:19
    SEXY !

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  • 1234
    13.05.2009 03:00
    uhh no you guys are retards.. Its his niece but she is like a sister to him

    pay attention

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  • Precious1
    13.05.2009 10:39
    I gave a positive rating. I loved the sweetness of the story line. I just wished they had been best friends because I'm not into incest.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2009 14:11
    sexxy really nice and romantic in a away!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2009 18:00
    Great story, but nobody speaks like this.

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  • sunbored
    14.05.2009 18:23
    nice sweet story, too bad first time sex is not usually like that. 8/10

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  • serena%26lt%3B3
    17.05.2009 11:21
    thats so fucking hot..but like thats so weired!!!!
    having sex with your brother??
    wow
    lol..
    but sexy ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2009 20:27
    THATS FUCKING SICK MAN!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2009 22:49
    Stupid...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2009 01:25
    hot hot hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2009 01:55
    Nice, well-written and most sensitive story with enough sex to make it very hot. Well done bro, keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2009 08:11
    at least a story with some story line, and very sexy. wish I had a guy like that when I lost my virginity. makes me wish I can do it all over again

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2009 11:27
    Jenny might her Virginity but through the BEST situation.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2009 04:38
    good story, enough sex to make it hot.

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  • WillyBHungwell
    22.05.2009 00:16
    Very good story! Keep up the good writing.

    And to all of the ass wipes who said it was sick, What size was that gun that was held to your head and forced you to read it?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2009 00:31
    "So often it happens that the guy with whom the girl has her first sexual experience is not considerate enough"

    I like you're writting, great idea and fluid work, but tone the IQ of the spoken bits a little bit. The use of some of the words actually made it hard to read.

    Again, good storyline and idea, just make the verbal bits a little easier to read, that's all

    - Anon

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  • Nice+story
    22.05.2009 01:06
    Nice story who ever thinks that this is not a good if not great story should have their balls and dick cut off and be shoved up his ass OR if its a girl she should get raped by 10 elephants at a time and then put in the IRON MAIDEN

    Who ever posted on the bottom of the first page is a stupid motherfucker cock sucking bastard fuckhead dumbass

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2009 09:12
    ur a stupid mother fuckin bastard that story was horribly written and WHO THE HELL reads a book on sex WAT A TOOL!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2009 11:27
    some people just have no idea of what life is all about!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2009 12:39
    very sexy story. some sort of a follow up?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2009 14:40
    it's a very good story. people with there absolute gross insults should go fuck themselves.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2009 10:12
    I don't like incest in general, but this story is so good that I would make an exception and give it a positive.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2009 17:48
    Story tags are more or less accurate, though a littl overdone. Story line is well-developed, gradual with an increased build-up. The descriptions are very good, sensitive and well thought out.
    The dialogue might have been a little bit more natural, but not far off.. The final approach and climax are really worth it.

    This story should deserve a much higher rating, 90+, but lately the ratings round here seems to be not corrolating to the worth of the stories.

    Pietbliksem

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  • horny+virgin
    24.05.2009 01:13
    Hey that was a good story and guidance for all you girls to have your virginity taken it was the right way,slowly for them to enjoy it so it was beautyfull to do this story l like it very much, I wish some one would of teach me like he did,it was well detail for openers to show how is done

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  • reader2501
    27.05.2009 02:12
    it a good story well written

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2009 09:10
    ummmmmmmm nice story but i did negative cous woith brother nasty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2009 22:42
    Neat₩£¡¿¥ vęrÿ šêxÿ į ëñjøÿėd ït

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2009 22:42
    Neat₩£¡¿¥ vęrÿ šêxÿ į ëñjøÿėd ït

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  • whoseurdaddy%3F
    31.05.2009 21:14
    i thought this story was VERY well written i enjoyed reading it and id have to say keep up the good work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2009 17:27
    This is the most retarded story I've ever had the displeasure of reading. The conversation is forced, the event is choppy, it doesn't flow too well... it just seemed as though a young teen had written it just to get himself off. It almost seemed as if it was translated at certain parts because of the word choice. '"What is wrong?" I asked inquiringly.' Nobody talks like that. It came across very unnatural and fake. Too awkward to keep me interested, I literally went flacid reading this.

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  • anon
    01.06.2009 19:08
    i feel like this is fake and has been thought up by some retardted pervert, really not very good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2009 06:59
    Just a quick note to say thanks. Indeed i think you may have been a little caught up in the fantasy to think about the overall flow of the story. However, that said it was still a very pleasurable read, keep working on it, perhaps write then leave it and come back a week or two later to add some more detail and flesh it out... Good work ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2009 14:17
    I really enjoyed the story. To reader "2009-06-01 17:27:16" who said
    'nobody talks like that'

    All I can say is: you indeed, are nobody, cause many, many people would talk like that.
    Keep up the good work and keep writing. Don't let idiots like this put you off.

    Sandra

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2009 02:39
    really, really good story. got me all wet and wishing I was 15 and a virgin again. mor such stuff please!

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  • PussyPounder
    03.06.2009 05:17
    I dunno why my comment came out completely blank, but let me try again:

    excellent story, sensitive and with a nice build up, also had my rather horny and most of the stuff is so lame, it just doesn't do it.

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  • horny4girls
    03.06.2009 07:23
    hot and sexy, a lot of details, nice. more?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2009 02:37
    beautiful story, nice work

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  • HotWoman
    04.06.2009 03:02
    hot story. thanks and send more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2009 16:46
    fucking dude, write mor of this fucking stuf, and go fuck those wankers that don't understand a godd written story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2009 17:16
    how can i not agree with the previous comment, goooooddddd story! you fucking jealous basturds go fuck youself if you cannot appreciate a damn well written story. Hey Salmaklak, I really enjoyed this. Curious though, where does the name originate?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2009 20:04
    I thought this story was one of the best I've read, would be good to get another story maybe about you taking someones elses virginity or another story involving jenny

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2009 12:26
    I agree with previous reader , maybe Jenny's next time well described, it was a hot hot story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2009 14:41
    AMAZING STORY> DUNNO WHY I hadn't come across it sooner. thanks, dude, 'twas real spif. best of all I'm Jenny, too! lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.07.2009 11:22
    i ran out of bread,....so my day is ruined...but a good story i guess

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2009 14:35
    jenny must be the "nickname "for usin' his hand

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 02:51
    Wow! what a nice story. I just can't wait to masturbate after reading this story. Jenny today i will be imagining about you during masturbation

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.04.2010 23:43
    I don't like this story. Why? Because he is doing everything out of a book not from what he feels like the right thing to do

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  • cherry+poper
    29.04.2010 12:18
    i think the story could have gone into more detail and i like getting to know the people in the story better and the begining was so fast to get to sex i like it better when the girl drops a few hints on him b4 they get down to biz other than that it was worth my time (:

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2010 17:43
    what a story! it got me so hot, hot, hot!
    just the right build up an continuity! give me more to keep my hand occupied!
    bobbejaan

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2010 20:32
    for a young person only reading up on his stuff, I just loved the story and wonder where I can find mor on the first tim training stuff, I am durious, but reluctant.
    where does the name Salmaklak comes from?
    Sjanine

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  • secretpandajes%40yahoo.com
    19.05.2010 19:16
    FUCK ME RUNNING ! awesome,fabulous,100%grrreat !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2010 02:31
    Where can I find one of diz books!! I am a Girl who hasn't had her first time yet!!! Bt I cnt wait!!!! I am too kind of afraId of who da first guy is goin to b!!!! When I read diz stories I get really wet!!! Diz r such good stories!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2010 23:55
    this is a great story my first time was kind of like this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2010 06:09
    Very mediocre story... What few descriptions there were were way too stiff and stilted.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2010 16:12
    Lovely story, wish I had a tutor like that when I lost my virginity! what about another story about Jenny, a second time?

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  • Old+man+4
    08.06.2010 09:33
    Great story. I do agree with Cherry Poper. He could have taken her through more steps before fucking her. Let her touch it and pump the prick first. Then the blowjob. After that, she is ready for the fucking. We readers must remember that she was the one in control at first. After they were both naked, then he was in control.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2010 02:03
    it sounds like u wrote this story after just reading the book.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2010 12:33
    I personally liked this one. Guys...take notice of how to please your partner and not just use her as a cum bucket! Share the whole experience and you'll get more and better sex in the future.....
    7 out of 10 from me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2010 06:56
    personally i like this story, im 15 lost my virginity and have been with him for 7months, he cares about how i feel when we're having sex and not just about himself. its a good thing to think about boys!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2010 19:07
    your disgusting... you fucked a family member

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2010 21:02
    A FAMILY MEMBER? REALLY? IS THAT SO HARD TO COMPREHEND? COME NOW SHE WAS ONLY a COUSin? come of it man?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2010 14:30
    by god, what a nice once.
    I notice it has been written quite some time ago: what about a follow up or something similar?

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  • h1llsbabe
    05.07.2010 23:29
    i like this story i hope my first time is like this bt not really with a family member

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.05.2011 08:00
    I was very young when I lost my virginity and the man who took it was over forty. He was very handsome and funny and I was aware that he and my mum slept together and sometimes I had had a sneaky watch at them fucking together. I was just thirteen and mum asked me if I was still a virgin, I said yes but admitted that I used her dildo and her vibrator and really liked that. She asked if I would ike to try the real thing and I said yes. The whole thing lasted over about two weeks with me first sleeping with them both and him being in the middle, them fucking and sucking each other and my seeing his cock going into mums hole. All three of us touching, sucking and fingering and a lot of gentle biting and kissing. Then at last he fucked me with my mum showing me how to open myself to take his very thick and long cock. One of the nicest parts was when he had cum in me and it was running down my legs when I stood up. I really felt like a woman then. I still love to be fucked and I'm sixty now

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2011 12:17
    My first time is gonna be with with jb

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.07.2011 21:15
    orid an omarisa aljins

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  • M%60ster123
    23.08.2011 03:15
    haha! idiot! jb, seriously? dream on. great awesome story by the way. and why is it so sick 2 fuck a family member? it said incest on the tags yaknow.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2011 10:44
    I went on holiday with a family who's daughter was fourteen but very attractive. She told me on the plane that she was a virgin and I could be the first to fuck her if I wanted. Two days in and she and I were in my room in the afternoon and completely naked. She had nice tits and a nicely shaved cunt with just a strip of black hair. She kept telling me that I had to be gentle with her and I promised I would. We went in the shower together and I got one and then two fingers into her, I noticed at this time how very nice her cunt tasted and got her on the bed with her thighs apart as soon as seemed decent. I licked her tasty cunt until she was squirming and then pushed my cock into her. She was tight at first and then loosened up until her hole was bigger than her mums which I'd fucked many times. She was very sexy though and fucked with me throughout the holiday and for some time after. She later told me that her first fuck had been when she was 11 and she'd had plenty of cock since the

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 12:53
    Loved it but hoped that the experience was so satisfying that she wanted him to continue forever! 8 out of 10 though....Nice!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 17:16
    Looks like a manual!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.02.2016 00:50
    I'm still a v-vagina , and boys always looks at my t-tities because I'm a C cup. *blushes*

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.12.2016 00:01
    It did read like a manual. Good story but manuals put me to sleep. Guess what this did.

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