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Sex games

Finding bliss with my sister

Author: ratemypicsa10

Date: 6 July 2009

Female solo, True Story, Incest, Teen

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After reading many stories on this site I finally decided to take a shot a posting my own stories. All of my stories are based in true events from my life (like the one you’re about to read), my darkest fantasies or a combination of both. If you feel the need to leave negative comments then post them in a manner that will help me improve in the future because my desire is to provide quality stories that excite a broad range of people.

In the early 90’s my parents were almost non-existent in the lives of my siblings and I. Being the oldest of 6 kids at the time I found myself in charge of them constantly with little to no supervision. At the age of 13 I was constantly feeling the urges of a teenage boy. I often fantasized of my sisters, mainly my oldest sister Mary who was 11. I knew in the back of my mind it was wrong of me to think of her in this way but it continued until it finally got to the point to where I could no longer control it. The following is the true account of how I experienced the pleasures of my first orgasm.

We were currently out of school for the summer and our parents were both at work at the time, the rest of our brothers and sisters were staying with family, and we were busy with our chores, playing and pretty much harassing one another. As the day progressed I found myself alone with my oldest sister Mary in the house, we had finished everything we needed to do and I had finally come to the decision that today was the day I was going to see if I could get her to help me explore the wonderful world of sex. My plan of attack was to show her a club magazine I stole from my Uncle’s house and see if she would be willing to try any of the stuff she seen in there.

“Tiffany, are you in here?”

“Yeah, in the back room. What do you need?”

“I just wanted to see if we could hang out for a little while or something.”

“What do you have in mind?”

“Well, when I was at Uncle Ray’s last week I found a magazine with some interesting pictures and I wanted to see if you knew anything about what they are doing in them.”

“I don’t know let me see.”

As she flipped through the pages of the club magazine I could see her face flush and her breathing change to shallow, labored breaths it seemed. I saw her hand that she had placed on her chest slide to her small, under developed breast. I knew then that my plan would work if I played my cards right.

“Have you ever seen anything like this Mary?”

“I’ve never seen any of this before but I think they are having sex, I just didn’t know there was so many different things to do when people have sex. Look at this picture here, that man has his thing in the girls mouth!”

“I know, I didn’t know you could do that either. Every time I look at it though my thing gets hard as a rock and sticks out like that guys does.”

“Really! Let me see it.”

“I can’t show it to you, you’re my sister. Besides if I show it to you what do I get in return?”

“I don’t know but I really want to see what one looks like in real life, I’ve never seen a real one before.”

“I tell you what then, I’ll show you one but I’ve never seen a girls thing before either so how about we both just take off all of our clothes and then we will both be happy.”

“I don’t know. What if someone comes in and catches us, mom would beat us half to death.”

“I locked the door when I came in the bedroom, mom and dad will still be at work for another 3 or 4 hours and besides if anyone pulls in the driveway then Damien will start barking and we’ll hear him so what do you say? Want to try it out?”

“I guess we can try a little but I don’t want to do anything other than look at each other though.”

“Okay, that’s fine with me. I’ll take my clothes off first so you know I’m not going to trick you and then you can take yours off.”

As I was telling her this I started unbuttoning my shirt. As I slid my shirt off exposing my naked torso to her I had a fleeting moment of embarrassment because I was a terribly skinny kid and I didn’t think I would have anything to impress her with, especially once she saw my skinny little 6 inch cock. As I slid my pants down though I noticed her eyes were drawn to the bulge in the my underwear and she looked to be holding her breath in anticipation.

Finally once my underwear was completely off and I turned directly facing her I heard her gasp in surprise at seeing me. Without saying anything she reached out and with the tips of her fingers gently touched my cock. As soon as I felt her soft skin on my cock, the first person to ever touch it besides myself, I gasped in surprise and pleasure. When I gasped she jerked her hand away and asked if I was ok, if she had hurt me.

“No, it just surprised me, and it felt really good, that’s why I jerked. Now I want to see you though.”

“Ok, just give me a second because I’m nervous.”

With this she slowly started to pull the little summer dress she was wearing over head. As soon as the dress cleared her chest and I saw her little buds that were soon to be her breasts I immediately got harder. I stood there staring at her standing in only her small little underwear. I could clearly see the little gap in the crotch of her panties were I knew her small little pussy was. I was somewhat curious as to why she didn’t have that crease that I later learned was a camel toe like the ladies in the magazine had but I figured I would find out soon enough.

As soon as her unsteady hands began to slide down her panties I could feel myself tensing with anticipation. I wanted to do nothing more than just grab her and have my way with her but I knew that would kill any chance I ever had of getting her to play with me again and on top of that other than seeing pictures in a book I really had no idea what to do. As her panties hit the floor and she stood in front of me totally nude I knew then that I no longer cared if she was my sister or not, I had to have her.
Her small little hips did nothing more than increase my desire for her, something I think that causes me to still have an extreme attraction to women that seem to have small frames like she did then. As I let my eyes go lower, below her navel and down to her crotch I noticed not a flowering pussy like the women in the magazine had but a small little slit that seemed like it was only a couple of inches long at most and sealed shut tightly.

“Why is you pussy just a little line like that, the girls in the magazine have ones with big lips that stick out and are opened up?”

“I don’t think we all have the same type and besides when I do things like squat down mine opens up to, here I’ll show you.”

As she said this I saw her squat right there in the floor and reach down and try to open her small little undeveloped pussy lips for me to see.

“Mary, I can’t see anything like that. Why don’t you get up here on the edge of the bed and I’ll kneel in the floor so I can see it better.”

“OK.”

As she maneuvered herself on the bed I caught a quick glimpse from behind and she was on her hands and knees crawling farther on the bed and I thought this would be a position I wanted to remember for later. Once she got on the edge of the bed and her little legs spread open I was amazed. Her knees were drawn up towards her chest and they were flayed out giving me a total, unhindered view of her small preteen pussy.

I leaned closer to her to get a better look and soon as I did I caught the first smell of a woman’s pussy and I was immediately hooked for life.

“Can I touch it?”

“I don’t know, I don’t think we’re supposed to do stuff like that since I’m your sister.”

“I just want to see what it feels like. Besides in the pictures it looks like they women really like it when the men are touching them.”

“I guess you can but you have to promise if I tell you to stop that you’ll quit.”

“OK, I promise.”

With that I leaned forward and slowly spread her lips apart a little more. I was so close to her now my nose was almost touching her pussy, the smell was intoxicating. I knew this was wrong in so many ways but at this point I really didn’t care.

I remembered seeing something in the pictures and wanted to try it so I slowly extended my tongue and swiped it from the base of her pussy to the top. As soon as I done this Mary jerked but instead of telling me to stop she asked me to do it again. As I began to slowly run my tongue up and down her slit I saw her little bud begin to appear. Not sure what it was or what to do with it I decided to lick it to. As soon as my tongue made contact with her little clit she snapped her legs shut on my head so tight I couldn’t move if I wanted to, pulled my face down tighter into her pussy and begged me to keep going.

I tongued her little pussy for what seemed like 15 minutes before she told me she was feeling funny down there and then stiffened up like every muscle in her body had contracted. In my current position I had no choice but to keep my face buried in her little box. While this was happening I realized her little pussy was leaking fluids so I drove my tongue as far in her little hole as possible and began trying to get as much of it out and into my mouth as possible loving the taste. After what seemed like forever she relaxed and pushed my face away from her pussy.

“Stop, Stop, please. I don’t know what happened but I can’t take any more of it.”
“How did you like it?”

“It was great, I felt like I was going to explode in the middle of my tummy and then it just let go. It was the best feeling I’ve ever had before!”

“Do you want to keep going with other things from the magazine? I mean if that felt as good as it did then I’m sure some of the other stuff in there feels good to.”

“Right now I want to just lay here for a second but in a minute I want to see if I can do something like to you.”

“OK, that’s fine with me but right now I want to lay next to you and try kissing like they do in the pictures if you don’t care.”

“I guess we can”

As I crawled on the bed next to my sister and felt our bodies touch I knew that I wanted to be her first and for her to be mine. I looked at her face which was mixed with fear and excitement and slowly lowered my mouth to hers. At first we only touched lips for lack of not knowing any better but as our legs began to intertwine we let ourselves go. As we kissed I felt her mouth open slightly while trying to take a breath so I slipped my tongue across her lips. When she felt this she opened her mouth a little more and let her tongue slip out rubbing it against mine. As our tongues began a game of dueling with one another we dug our bodies as close together as possible and began running our hands over one another.

I let my hands wander down to her small ass and cupped her cheeks in my hand. As I got more excited with our kissing and caressing I slid my hand further onto to her ass and into her small crack seeking out the bottom of her little pussy. As soon as my fingers made contact with her wet gash she exhaled sharply and pushed herself towards my exploring fingers. I began to rub her little slit with the tips of my fingers and by accident found her opening as my finger tip slid in a little. This sent her over the edge again and she began to try to drive my finger in her deeper while at the same time reaching down and fondling my incredibly hard cock.

As her small little fingers closed around my cock and began to stroke it I immediately felt like I was going to explode. I wasn’t real sure what was happening but I knew I didn’t want it to happen like this so I tore myself away from her.

“Mary, why don’t you try to do me like those girls are in the book?”

“I don’t know how but I can try”

I watched her look through the pages of the magazine again at the pictures of the women giving blowjobs to the men for a minute or two before she had me roll over flat on my back. Once I was there she straddled my legs and lowered her head down while pulling my cock up towards her face.

“If I do this wrong don’t get mad me ok.”

“Ok, I just want to see what it’s like.”

With that she opened her mouth and started to slowly explore the head of my cock with her lips and tongue. She kept glancing at the pictures in the magazine that was lying on the bed and trying to mimic what they were doing. After a few minutes she had a pretty good rhythm going, she was bobbing her head up and down on my cock taking about half of it in her mouth while letting her tongue slide along the sensitive underside of my member. During all this I was in total ecstasy. I felt like my cock was in a warm, wet, paradise and that feeling I had before was quickly coming back again.

I knew in the magazines the men squirted their cum out so I wasn’t totally dumb to the fact that I knew what was coming. I was having a mental battle about telling her I was getting ready to shoot my stiff out. I didn’t want her to get mad at me because she didn’t like it but at the same time I felt so good that I didn’t want it to stop. Being a typical male teenager I decided to not tell her.

As I felt myself on the brink of coming in my 11 year old sister’s mouth, experiencing the first orgasm of my life, I reach down and put my hand on the back of her head. As I did this she cut her eyes up at me and at that moment looking my sister directly in the eyes with my cock buried half way in her mouth I knew it was too late to stop if I wanted to. I tried to hold it back as long as I could to in order to feel a few more seconds of her wonderful mouth on my cock but I couldn’t. Just seeing her little lips wrapped around my shaft, the spit glistening off the skin of my cock as she began sliding back up on me, the feeling of her tongue on my tool was too much to handle and I let loose. As soon as I started to come my body stiffened just like hers had, my eyes rolled back in their sockets, and I lay there feeling the bliss of release. I felt the first rope of cum rocket in to her as she had me buried in the back of her mouth. As soon as my first spurt hit her she gagged a little and pulled back on my cock but kept her lips sealed around the head. My second, third and fourth spurt shot directly in to her mouth and I could feel her trying to swallow it all.

As my cum finally slowed to a trickle I was able to look down at her for the first time since I began my orgasm and what I saw almost made me cum again. She had her lips wrapped tightly around my shaft, her eyes closed and some of my cum was leaking out at the corners of her mouth. As my body gave the final tense jerks of my orgasm she slowly lifted her head up and I saw her throat move as she swallowed the last remnant of my seed.

“Did I do good?”

“That was unbelievable! I’m sorry I didn’t tell you I was about to go but I couldn’t get myself to talk, it felt way to good.”

“I know! Mine was the same way when you were doing it to me. Besides I didn’t mind, you kept licking me the whole time I was getting off so I figured I should do the same for you. Plus I think I kind of liked the way it tasted, the first blast went way in the back of my throat and made me gag so I had to move but after that it all landed right on the middle of my tongue and I liked it. I can still taste it in my mouth some.”

“I know we weren’t supposed to do that but I want to try it again sometime Mary.”

“Me to, do you think we have time to do it again before mom and dad get home? Does this book tell us how long it will take for you to get your thing hard again?”

“I’m not sure but right now I think we need to get dressed and go let the dog out. I do want to do this again but we need to be real careful so we don’t get caught.”

“Ok, but I want to play again tonight when mom and dad go to the Fletcher’s house.”

“We will. Tonight I want to try some of the other stuff they are doing in the magazine though.”

“OK, I’m going to go to the bathroom now, you go let Damien out.”

If you guys like this and want more let me know. There’s plenty more stories to come with me and my sisters. In the next one we go all the way and give our virginities to one another. In the chapters to come we do everything from anal sex, sex with our younger sister, to sex with our dog and at one point our mother even gets involved so let me know if I need to keep going or stop while I’m ahead.


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  • launch
    11.07.2009 18:42
    You're good and the story was exciting, but the dialog was so stiff it detracted a lot. Also, the first time you called to Mary you called her Tiffany. Mistakes like that really break the mood a lot.

    I hope you'll write more but leave out the animals and the mom.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2009 18:44
    That would be great! continue...... i hope the next story is as good as this one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2009 18:50
    niice story! Brings back old times

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  • Baldy
    11.07.2009 20:30
    yes this was an amasing stories and continue you are oin a good job
    thanks it made me feel good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2009 20:32
    i agree, no animals and no mom, keep it all young and interesting

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2009 21:07
    You used the word "little" way too many times. It became a distraction. Otherwise you did a great job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2009 21:48
    Very NICE

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.07.2009 22:43
    dude great story bring all u can think of and if people dont like the animals and the mom joining in warn them in the begining that its gonna be in the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2009 23:28
    Enjoyed the story! Looking forward to the rest of it! I was nice and hard while reading this...If this really is true stuff, that's quite amazing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2009 23:43
    keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 00:03
    Please continue

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 00:47
    Keep going do some more maybe anal

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 00:51
    Keep writing man! Great stuff, although make sure you use the same name through out, you called her Tiffany once at the beginning. So proof read a little closer, but otherwise that was a great story.

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  • johnny
    johnny 245
    12.07.2009 01:37
    a great start i love it please follow up with part 2 soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 01:46
    Incredible job. A lot of people skimp on the description of the senses which, as you know, is a big part of things. Make sure to keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 01:51
    damn man it was awesome.Keep some more coming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 02:11
    totally awesome whens then next one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 02:40
    dude u need to keep writeing. hope it true that shit is hot lol I want to read about the mom to. so man hurry up and finish them man its hot shit lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 02:46
    Good start. As others have noted, you have to pay a bit more attention to details, but so far, so good. Mom, Dad, the dog, all the siblings...lets have it all!

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  • mitch
    12.07.2009 02:52
    keep your mother out of the story - she doesn't need to be involved, needle dick

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  • NONYMUS
    12.07.2009 03:11
    fuck ur story is great . . . it gets my pole go hard. wats d next one? hope u fuck ur sister a lot. . . if ur sister needs a new ride call me . .

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  • Navajo87
    12.07.2009 03:11
    Dude you need to keep on writing these stories. I'd love to see when mom joins the picture. Kep it up man, u got potential.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 04:29
    Well you're very discriptive and clean and neat. So there no problem reading it but it was a tad bit short. Definetly good for a first time. It will be interesting how all this turned out so I say go for it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 04:49
    keep on telling the stories i think they are great!

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  • pappa+smurf
    12.07.2009 05:19
    you need to keep writing but why bring the dog and mom in, forbiden sex with siblings is great reading.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 05:22
    Good story keep goin

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 06:37
    nice story man.... loved it.. keep going

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  • Always+Drunk+Monkey
    12.07.2009 07:16
    More PLEASE that was great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 07:30
    Love it! get them fucking?

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  • reader
    reader 500
    12.07.2009 09:18
    it was a good story you only mad one mistake and it is a simple one you put "Tiffany, are you in here?” instead of Mary. overall it was awsome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 09:25
    Very much enjoyed it

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  • kink-eeee
    12.07.2009 10:25
    Excellent story ... very well written too. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep 'em cumming !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 10:40
    very good can smell that young pussy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 11:27
    too young
    need to be older

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 12:06
    keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 12:40
    very good, more pleze

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 13:01
    Very hot.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 13:14
    keep writing my cock was so hard, now I want to read it again and shoot off ahs he does.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 13:24
    nice story liked it alot keep going

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  • khoral7
    12.07.2009 13:40
    good stuff can't wait for part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 13:42
    great story write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 13:54
    One of those bull shitting basturds who votes repeatedly for himself.. If you look at averages overall, he must have voted for himself about 200 time. Who in life has the time to do that, I can't think, but he must be a wretched little prick with no self confidence of any sort to do that.

    And don't give me that bull shit that one cannot repeatedly vote for the same story! If you know a little trick or two, you can do it with ease.
    Computer Guru

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 13:56
    keep on with this story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 14:01
    you where 13 you side 6 inch as if mate

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 14:19
    You should definetly write more!!!! Good job:)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 14:27
    right more but without the little [] in it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 15:26
    write more and who's tiffany? :) you missed the name towards the beginning of dialogue.

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  • dw750sx
    12.07.2009 16:50
    great story, you need to do more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 17:10
    Good story! Waiting for part two.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 18:18
    very good story. got me very hard.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 18:47
    500 positive votes in just one day ???????????????????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 18:54
    this is a great keep writing this. i love it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 19:28
    Great stuff. Erotica is the best foreplay, and I'm particularly fond of this one, considering some of my childhood experiences. Keep going and I'll keep reading.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 19:34
    While the parents are away the kids will play. More please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 19:36
    Did your sister's name change after she took a look at the magazine?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 20:52
    good stuff. made my cock hard.

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  • sex
    sex
    12.07.2009 20:53
    ugh that was an amazing story. i wish you wouldve went on.

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  • livestrong_eagle
    12.07.2009 21:20
    Immaculate. You my friend, are going to go along ways.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 21:22
    A great story, looking forward to more

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  • smoky2003usa
    12.07.2009 21:35
    Very awesome story. Brings back many memories with my own sister and her friends when we were very young. My sister and I still play even though we both are married with kids. We never want to give up a good thing.
    Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next one.

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  • Betty18
    12.07.2009 21:47
    It sure is nice and handy when U have a bro or sis to help teach U all about sex. I have a bro 2 yrs older than I. He loves me and takes care of me. We have a great relationship. I wish U all have great experiences.

    Love & Kisses,

    Betty

    Be Naughty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 22:42
    Yes,please

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.07.2009 23:30
    You can continue as long as you want. I'll be there to read them all. I know, you are that good.Just a little proof reading is all you need.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2009 23:35
    That was ausome, if only there was a vid! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 02:43
    love it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 03:03
    Huh? Couldn't you remember your sister's name? Was it Tiffany or Mary?

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  • magno
    13.07.2009 03:32
    hey i love it please tell us the the rest

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 03:53
    ya bro u should keep writeing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 03:56
    Please continue the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 05:23
    continuing this story would be better

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 05:59
    love it

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  • Virtual_Tourist
    13.07.2009 07:25
    Loved it.
    Please post the next part soon.

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  • livestrong_eagle
    13.07.2009 09:12
    Immaculate. You my friend, are going to go along ways.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 10:08
    if i knew who u r i would kill u bitch

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 10:42
    #2 please!

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  • k
    k
    13.07.2009 10:46
    nice story

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  • fudgeguy
    13.07.2009 11:36
    im somewhat a regular reader, and this is one of the best stories ive ever read!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 13:15
    nice story. keep writing

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  • DAMOMEWD
    13.07.2009 13:33
    keep going PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111

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  • marclind38
    13.07.2009 14:57
    Excellent first story. Got me hard and very excited. Hope to read many more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 15:26
    good story - but small and little mean almost the same thing - don't use them together.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 16:07
    The story itself is written very well. But if it were really based on true events ,like you claim, you would know the name of your own sister. But sometimes you call her Mary, and some time you call her Tiffany, so I doubt this is a true story. Also, its unrealistic that a 13 yo boy who has access to porn and is frequently fantasizing about his sister, only knows he will shoot when he cums from seeing it in a magazine. It is much more realistic that he would have jerked off several times by that point in time. Pay a little more attention to the details and you will go far because you are a good writer. Or better yet, don't claim that fantasy stories are based on true events. Because if the story is fantasy and not true, then you would be granted a lot more leeway on reality.

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  • Lunalupo
    13.07.2009 17:13
    "If you guys like this and want more let me know" - I am sure there are a lot of gals out there who would like this story - erotic prose has appeal to both sexes. And yes, I did like the story and would love for you to continue. Just watch your story lines for reality.
    Lunalupo

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 17:31
    Very good, keep posting. Only problem is the few, minor spelling errors, but all around a very good, and erotic story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 17:34
    write more!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 17:40
    WOW

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 18:51
    sorry but i actually caught it when u said ' hey tiffany ' isnt the person meant to be mary ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 19:05
    keep em coming its great however becareful with reality cause at 13 i was pretty much blastin em out every other day so the feeling of u about to cum well you would what it is very good though well done

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 20:36
    YOu fuckin wierd fuck.. i hope u go 3 hell fag

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  • sbtwolf
    13.07.2009 21:08
    What a great story! It kinda reminded me of something that happened with my stepsister when we were a little bit older. Keep those stories coming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2009 23:49
    great story, i would like another, just dnt listen to the guys who try to insult u bt can't type the insults right lol overal 9/10...sorry, bt nobody's perfect :) keep'em coming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 00:17
    You fucking weirdow! Go fuck yourself i hope u go to hell

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 00:40
    VERY, VERY WELL WRITTEN!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 01:04
    Nice. Appreciated the story a lot. It's stupid when pepul tipe lyke dis and can't give proper criticism. They didn't have to read it, and something about the title drew them in, so yeah. They're stupid. =]

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  • daddy_bare
    14.07.2009 01:35
    Lovely ... keep writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 02:47
    nice man great story ;]

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 02:59
    You need to work on your grammar but not bad. Proof read SLOWLY before you post. That way you'll catch more of your errors and there'll be less for us to find.
    The story has a lot of promise so get to it and tell us all of it. Ignore the comments of the shit for brains juveniles among us. They're part of the price you pay for being a writer.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 03:29
    Moremore more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 04:19
    @ READER 2009-07-14 00:17:53 if you believe in hell i assume you beleive in adam and eve and unless you're an idiot that heard the story once and went along with it then you have to know incest had to happen in that whole scenario.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 05:41
    that was great. keep writing.

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  • L
    L
    14.07.2009 05:56
    Just so you know... your first line of dialouge has a mistake... you said tiffany rather then mary. Also, you sorta switch between come and cum. And finally, near the end she says "Besides I didn’t mind, you kept licking me the whole time I was getting off so I figured I should do the same for you" how would a little girl know the words "to get off" Other then that not bad, maybe a little longer though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 07:27
    keep going man, i luved it

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  • Sam
    Мужчина Sam 116
    14.07.2009 07:42
    next part please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 08:22
    leave out the dogs and the mother

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 11:14
    keep going love to here the mom and dog one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 11:42
    keep out the dog and keep the mom

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 12:29
    Please leave the dog out...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 12:32
    Please leave the dog out...

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  • magoo8686horny
    14.07.2009 12:38
    Keep going man. I want to hear the rest even the sex with your younger sisters as well. It got me hard a few times as well. God how i wish i had a younger sister like that to have fun with right now tho.

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  • smoothtalker
    14.07.2009 13:00
    No dog please. bestiality is harder to accept than incest. Very good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 14:05
    oh yeah and who is Tiffany? Dont you mean Mary

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  • Readerz
    14.07.2009 14:36
    good story, no dog xD

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 14:39
    more

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  • duckcrvrBob
    14.07.2009 14:40
    It realy shows that you have been reading the stories on this sight, you seem to have a good instinct for how much detail to put in your stories. And incest stories are ver popular on here, tey not to exagerate too much if this was a true story it maybe be your best bet, to just keep going with the true action you have experienced, good story, try proof reading it one more time, but it is a great start, keep it up.

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  • duckcrvrBob
    14.07.2009 14:40
    It realy shows that you have been reading the stories on this sight, you seem to have a good instinct for how much detail to put in your stories. And incest stories are ver popular on here, tey not to exagerate too much if this was a true story it maybe be your best bet, to just keep going with the true action you have experienced, good story, try proof reading it one more time, but it is a great start, keep it up.

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  • blink
    14.07.2009 14:42
    asome kant wait for prt 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 16:10
    good story
    you need more build up
    give the reader more knowledge about the characters
    at the beginning of the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 16:35
    great,your story got my cock so big, I'll have to go jack off now

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2009 16:54
    Well, you have plenty of input on how to improve your story telling skills. See what I meant about errors? We easily pick them up and so should you..... BEFORE we ever see them.
    There's an old saying that goes,
    "A MISTAKE IS NOT A MISTAKE UNLESS YOU FAIL TO CORRECT IT".

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  • anonymously
    15.07.2009 02:38
    dude great story it had me saluting all the way till the end. plz post up more stuff

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 08:47
    keep going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 14:43
    defo keep going m8

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 18:23
    Super super hot, need to hear about the anal sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 18:44
    I liked this story. However it does not seem real at all. You should know your own sisters name, and by 13 most boys (especially if they have porn and are fantasizing about girls) have had an orgasm. The dialog just doesn't seem natural either- especially for kids.

    Don't involve the mother, not if you want to maintain the illusion that this is a true story. Because most mothers are not going to be okay with this sort of thing going on, let alone join in!
    And the dog...if you are going to go there, at least make it seem realistic. It is unlikely a dog would mount and penetrate an 11 yo girl without causing injury. I'd leave that out too, and keep it just human children. No adults. No dogs. Just my opinion.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 21:07
    Out-fucking-standing please wright more

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  • jojo
    15.07.2009 22:53
    great keep em cumming :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 23:43
    the first time I ever done it to my sister was in her bedroom, mom was working and we were alone for several hours. It was great, but the next weekend was better. She knew what to do then and so did I . After almost a year, we invited our neighbor friends, a boy and his sister to join us and we done it with them for over three years, until they moved away. My sister and I still do it when we get the chance although we are both married now. She still has the smallest and best pussy I have ever had or seen. it is almost like it was when she was ten years old.
    Her husband has no Idea that she likes oral sex because she won't do it with him. she only does that with me and loves for me to come in her mouth when no one is around.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2009 23:44
    i have to agree with that.. it seems pretty realistic, but, you could make it even more so. And also, I like your idea of involving mom. My favourite stories start off like this, and then get the mom involved.....


    ...in any case. I like your style. No matter what, you should 100% go on and write another one =]

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2009 01:06
    this is a really good story dude, and i hope you keep it going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2009 05:25
    oh keep writing
    i hate cliff hangers

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2009 11:32
    Forget the dog.

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  • NCK
    NCK
    16.07.2009 11:56
    PLS GIVE THE NEST PART SOON

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2009 13:22
    Uh.. the title is "Finding bliss with my sister" if you come here thinking that you won't find incest.. then you didn't read the title and was just clickin' shit.

    Good story dude.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2009 15:19
    no dog shit dude

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2009 16:56
    u gotta do more!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2009 22:57
    I wish there were more writers like you. I want more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 01:27
    awsome, very good. you have to do more!!! i love the idea of you two doing the dog. damn good stuff

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 10:23
    more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 10:24
    more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 12:00
    You have talent. The vivid details were very interesting.

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  • geeva
    17.07.2009 13:53
    Is it the big fat w?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 14:49
    i loved your story hope you make more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 15:47
    hot

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 16:21
    loved your story i cant wait for more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 17:02
    more please

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  • magoo8686horny
    17.07.2009 18:24
    Keep going man. I want to hear the rest even the sex with your younger sisters as well. It got me hard a few times as well. God how i wish i had a younger sister like that to have fun with right now tho.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.07.2009 18:24
    That was awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 20:48
    i liked it it was gud

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 21:26
    that was awsome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2009 23:23
    my wife and i love to play like a child , would love to read more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 05:40
    6 inch at 13?? Actually spraying at 13?? I dont thinm so

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 08:14
    nice
    and it soulnd like all sorta good stuff is coming
    dont stop now

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 09:53
    dont make us wait to long for the next chapter this was dam good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 09:58
    why did her name change from mary?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 11:58
    oh my god that is one of the greatest stories ive ever read here.. please do more!!!! im confused about mary being called tiffany there, but oh well.. i can't wait! XD hope youll get more good ratings!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 11:59
    oh my god that is one of the greatest stories ive ever read here.. please do more!!!! im confused about mary being called tiffany there, but oh well.. i can't wait! XD hope youll get more good ratings!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 12:00
    yeah you can have a 6 inch at 13 ive seen a few and ive seen them cum. maybe southern boys are just gifted like that

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 16:24
    please ! write some more !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 17:02
    Hey hurry up and write the next part i cant wait to read it.. I loved it..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 17:18
    that is s0 nasty y xtd u d0 that with y0 sister didnt u have 0ther people 2 d0 it with i wud d0 it with my cuzn thin my sister

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  • eiggah
    18.07.2009 17:23
    good made me horney!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 18:16
    my last name is fletcher............................................................................................................................................................................................................................ huh.... well anyways.. good story. u should keep writing. everyone is anxious to read ur next story. srry for me not spelling rite. im kinda.. (moves hand up and down) ya....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 18:51
    When I was 13 I was 6 and could ejaculate. It's not impossible. I did it alot.

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  • sunbored
    18.07.2009 20:59
    nothing to bitch about, this is a pretty good dude

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 22:11
    fdhgfuu

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  • tuytruy
    18.07.2009 22:12
    tujytuyru

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2009 22:57
    that was a great story, i'd love to hear the rest

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  • The+Girl
    18.07.2009 23:28
    Enjoyed your story. Made me have a funny feeling in my cunny.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.07.2009 01:07
    i wish i had a sister i coud do that stuff with. great story got me hard as a rock

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 03:26
    Don't have sex with the dog please this story and the rest of the ideas are good but please no dog I beg of you!! lol thanks for the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 03:52
    make a a more stories for the love of god and porn!!!!! really good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 04:51
    So at the beginning of the story was your sister named tiffany or mary. I was confused.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 06:15
    its good. But no dog!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 06:24
    this story got me hard, but the only problem was i was imagining me at that age, and my bestfriends sister. if i was 13, she wouldve been 10. and to me, it was child porn in my mind. which was gross for me. so if you have any stories like this in the future, please lie about the age.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 13:41
    Very good =]

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  • tazitwas
    19.07.2009 14:45
    More please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 15:21
    more. that was amazing. more plz!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 21:22
    u fucked ur dog lol dats really wierd and illegal but the story was good but u should of sed u wer 14 or 15 or somtin 11s kinda nasty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 21:22
    u fucked ur dog lol dats really wierd and illegal but the story was good but u should of sed u wer 14 or 15 or somtin 11s kinda nasty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2009 21:22
    u fucked ur dog lol dats really wierd and illegal but the story was good but u should of sed u wer 14 or 15 or somtin 11s kinda nasty

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  • Larry
    20.07.2009 02:39
    This story received a barely favorable rating from me. It was loaded with too many grammatical errors and spelling errors such as "too" being spelled "To", etc. Plus was the sister twins?
    She had two names, MARY and TIFFANY.in this story. AAA-1 descriptions of the pleasuring received by both saved this tale from earning an unfavorable score. Do me a favor though, when yyou write stories including the dog and/or the mother, please warn me in advance so that I can skip reading them. Incest with a sister is bad enough, but with a mother is really terrible. Sex with the dog is simply enough to make on vomit!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2009 03:37
    Dude, make more. That was really good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2009 11:52
    that was amazing
    more please

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  • Kristen
    20.07.2009 14:10
    That was good, I liked it.

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  • Brother+Prophet
    20.07.2009 15:36
    Very good story. A few minor errors in wording or lack of a few words, but nothing that really took away from the story. Overall a very good story and look forward to reading more. Especially of you and your sisters adventures.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2009 23:28
    That was reli good. It even gave me an orgasm without me touching myself! Continue please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2009 02:13
    Great man just great

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  • DarkeningSky
    21.07.2009 02:52
    your an inspiration to us all, with writing stories and pursuing your dream lol ;)

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  • Incest+Lover
    21.07.2009 04:01
    Keep going! this was a great story

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  • Incest+Lover
    21.07.2009 04:02
    Keep going! this was a great story

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    21.07.2009 05:13
    this was a great story!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2009 06:32
    keep going for sure

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2009 13:03
    dude keep it going this got me some good luck. i got my sister to read it with me and well things happened and it was great. hoping for more keep it up.

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  • curtsim
    21.07.2009 18:41
    sexy as all get out and nicely written as well. keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2009 19:15
    i wish i could do stuff like this, it would be awesome to have somene in your own home to get a load off with.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2009 05:28
    gimme more!

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  • anon.
    23.07.2009 01:33
    gr8 more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.07.2009 12:37
    this is amazing!! normally when i read things a second time, i cant make my self come. but this is freakin amazing!!
    post more :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2009 05:40
    very very good plz post more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2009 10:56
    I swear this is excellent and i rate it 100

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2009 13:01
    stuppid , BASTUD,SON OF A BICH FOLLOING ARE MALAYALAM;PODA NAYINTE MONE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2009 03:12
    please write a chapter 2. i like this story and want 2 see where it goes

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2009 16:37
    Pretty nice. 7/10 Try to tone down the smuttiness, though. And lose the bullshit like 13-yr-old w/a 6" dick.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2009 22:56
    damn. anyone have a cock i can borrow?? good story btw. more plz.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2009 21:06
    wow very nice!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2009 22:44
    more man! i rate 101.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.07.2009 01:49
    amazing storyy. give us moreeeeeeee<3 omg im soooo horrnnyyyy!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.07.2009 16:57
    This was great! I would like to see a continuation.

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  • tina
    29.07.2009 22:06
    sexy story. i saw my brother jacking off a few times. i have had many sex dreams about him. i guess i could do things with him if he wanted to.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 09:15
    that was good but don't write a chapter about sex with a dog please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 11:48
    this was great look forward to reading more of your stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 13:39
    Please continue with everything, even your mom and dog.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 14:56
    Please keep it coming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 21:34
    PLEASE PLEASE keep this coming I want more I'm dying over here

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2009 22:01
    omg that was so god damn good

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  • balls11
    31.07.2009 01:11
    soo hot. please write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.07.2009 01:40
    more please
    9/10

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  • roy
    roy
    31.07.2009 06:09
    not bad for a 1st story

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  • lizzy
    31.07.2009 10:08
    FUCKING PERVERT!! Bet you'd let Michelle Obama stick a strap-on up your ass!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2009 09:36
    keep it going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • jerryburgess
    01.08.2009 15:45
    It was very hot so keep on doing every thing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2009 20:21
    Class keep it goin 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2009 00:36
    hey lizzy just 2 throw this out there nobody reads a story they r disgusted with or that they dont like so get over urself trying 2 b the misfit of the group...it wz a great story and the author most deff. needs 2 keep it coming 10/10 for sure!

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  • The+Greek
    02.08.2009 10:17
    Please do a second part, I definitely want to see what happens next.

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  • anon
    02.08.2009 12:42
    wonderful ,well written and very credible. tastes like more!!!!

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  • nishkigoi
    02.08.2009 19:22
    Great story, descriptive and well formed, I look forward to more of your work :)

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  • ff
    ff
    03.08.2009 04:24
    this was sick. keep it going tho

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2009 05:03
    bring the mother

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2009 10:46
    i just gave a negitive coment by accident--- the truth is - i loved it
    more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2009 20:01
    Wonderful story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2009 06:06
    right another one that was brilliant

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2009 07:58
    u sick

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2009 18:11
    wow that was amazing and it got me all horny

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  • redoct
    09.08.2009 16:00
    For a first offering this was very good. You need to work on spelling, and the different ways to spell words that sound the same; for example wear &where, there and their.
    I would definately like to read more of your work.

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  • xyz
    xyz 42
    10.08.2009 08:03
    Do you write sex stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2009 03:00
    I love this story, and I'd definitely love to read more -- especially about sex with the younger sister and sex with the dog!

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  • Chris
    20.08.2009 15:14
    Redoct you spelled definitely wrong you retarded correcting son of a bitch.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 00:43
    AMAZING, please right more your stories are really good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 01:21
    wow thats is an amazing story hope to read more soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.08.2009 23:46
    awsome write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 15:57
    no more you sick bastard

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  • Swinger
    12.09.2009 21:07
    Keep fucking your sister and if the dog needs it then maybe your sister would like that too. If so then please watch and tell us all about it. Lucky man.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 17:04
    POST AS MANY STORIES AS U CAN......I REMEMBER WEN I WAZ YUNG ME AND MY SISTR TRIED ADYTHG WE CAN THINK OF.....WE LATER HAD SEX ON A REGULAR BASISUNTIL WE WERE 15

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  • LOVE+TO+WATCH
    29.09.2009 15:26
    Hot Exciting story !, Loved it and hell yes keep going...ALL THE WAY ! ! and to liz...Wow, wish i was your brother ! ! Yea, this story needs to go as far as it can and keep us pumping our shaft's !
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  • RISKTAKER
    15.10.2009 09:49
    UMM WELL I REALY DID LIKE IT BUT IDK I FELL WIRED REDIN IT LOL YA STILL NOT USED TO IT BUT GOOD JOB

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  • Sentry4C%40yahoo.com
    16.10.2009 11:31
    Hey, you brainless idiots! I see that most of you have the IQ of a brick and no balls. Otherwise you would be reading and writing about sex with adults instead of children.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2009 15:19
    Good story, nice fantasy appeal...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.11.2009 19:28
    Hey , this was an amazing story ! Keep going ;)

    i was kind of sad when i saw the part two was not there yet

    so get to ur keyboard and write : D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.03.2010 00:57
    keep it coming

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  • BadBill
    30.03.2010 18:51
    You should have taught her to give blowjobs when she was 4. Good story. Write more about the younger sister.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.04.2010 10:47
    good but this writer is another one shot wonder that promises more to come but just fades away instead leaving us hanging would have been better if you never posted to begin with

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  • the+old+fart
    17.06.2010 15:53
    Good job. A few typos but the story flowed well. I enjoyed it.

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  • Mekhyl.
    23.06.2010 11:09
    Gud job. It ws devine mind touching stuff. Kip doin those nudist thing n kip writing. Oops... I mean i wnt 2 read more.

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  • Jasper
    30.06.2010 14:23
    A good story, realistic enough. I had sex with 3 brothers and 2 sisters (I'm a guy). Our parents never noticed, or just ignored what we were doing. The best part about incest is it's always available. It didn't last after we all got married, and that's too bad.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2010 09:58
    Very good. Where did the name Tiffany come from though? Her name is Mary, right?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.07.2010 19:57
    fucking your sister is great!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2010 16:10
    Wow..that was good. I had a sister named Cindy when I was young. I was i think about 14, and she was just 8 years old.
    I taught her how to suck me off, and I would finger her cunt.
    She also would sometimes like to play with my big cock, and then jerk me off...so I would cum, all up her stomach..ha.

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  • tk
    tk 5
    07.07.2010 16:29
    more please; muchmore

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  • quigley
    08.07.2010 21:22
    Well done. Brought back some special memories for me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2010 11:01
    my 12 yr old brother used to feel my sex when i was 8 i could come at 13 i had full sex at 15 with him our mother foud out and sent me to live with my aunt 160 miles away i was 17 i next had sex with him when i was 23 it all stopped when iwas 27 and got married i loved him

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2010 17:27
    good as far as it went but as is typical on these sites the writers can't finish what they start show some pride in your work and respect for the readers and finish what you start and always use a good editor before posting way to many wrong words.missing words,miss spelled words and extra words over all it was good you just failed to finish it

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.08.2010 01:30
    nice story.......well written, i wish you'd write more

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  • HankWilliams1956
    30.08.2010 00:08
    i want to read more of this story so please finish

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2011 18:16
    keep going please this is great

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2011 06:12
    I have two younger sisters. I fuck them both. We fuck after school, one watches out for our parents, while I fuck the other one..on our sofa. I love fucking Natalie the best..she is just 8 years old. She has a really tight cunt. Melissa is 11, I fuck her too. I am now 15. They let me shoot into them. They love it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.11.2011 19:29
    what a loser this writer is in the first paragraph she is mary in the third she is tiffany . if you care so little about the story that you can't take the time to keep it straight and proofread it why should we want to read it? delete this now and do a rewite using a good editor.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2012 19:12
    good story man i liked it dont worry about all these losers

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.06.2012 17:56
    I wish I could fuck my sis. She's adopted and has most amazing ass and tits. But she's in college and im just a teen. So all I do is peep when she's in the shower

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.07.2012 16:13
    Finish! My little cousin is living with me now because her parents were VERY abusive. She's ten and she's malnourished not where you can see her bones under her skin but to where she didn't grow a lot and she's small. I fuck her little cunt all the time, now I know why her Dad did it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2012 05:49
    wow amazing story id like to hear about wen u fuck her sensless please rite mor

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.05.2014 18:31
    Great writings. Please continue. I'm 50yo and it's turning me on, big time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2014 14:38
    id stay away from the dog and mom, but to the rest i say go ahead!

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  • Rissky
    10.04.2016 01:50
    Definitely more, excited for the dog story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2016 18:58
    his real sister is probably named tiffany and saw this and killed him either that or he is just a typical hack that can't finish what he starts

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  • m1990
    12.09.2016 15:52
    Awesome, good job very good read

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  • Doozy+woof+Hunter
    16.01.2021 00:08
    Was fun!

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  • Dirty+Samone
    26.09.2021 19:00
    YOur doing great. I love it. I love to read about ass fuckin and you say that is coming. Please do. I came twice reading this story. Please give us some more.

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