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  1. Timestop - Days 1 and 2
  2. Timestop - Day 3
Timestop - Day 3

Author: StoryGal96

Date: 9 August 2009

Anal, Fantasy, Blowjob, Exhibitionism

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This story is about a guy who has the ability to stop time. If you don't like the concept, don't read it.

I suggest you read prior parts before reading this. For those of you that read and enjoy this, I'm not sure where the story is going. If you have ideas about where the story should go or things that should happen, send me a message (I read comments, but I don't take them too seriously, I find PMs to be a better form of communication).


Day 3 – Friday

Warren was fucking Ms. Burkhart. It was in her empty classroom, her hands were on the board, he was thrusting into her from behind, both were moaning in pleasure.

Then it all disappeared as Warren's alarm went off. Warren slammed his fist into the side of his bed, pissed that his dream had been cut off mid-fuck. But only a moment after that, Warren smiled, thinking about how he could make that dream actually happen in a couple hours.

Still smiling, he sat up, turned off his alarm and headed for the shower. He was just walking into the bathroom when his sister leaned out of her room and started to yell at him.

“Don't jerk–”

Julie cut herself off as Warren turned to look at her. He watched as she flushed a dark red. She was only there for a moment though, as she quickly turned back into her room, yelling behind her, “Just hurry up!”

Warren stood in the doorway of the bathroom for a bit smiling. He wasn't positive what had just gone through his sister's mind to cut her off, but he was pretty sure it had something to do with the 'dream' he had given her the night before. He had only intended the dream as revenge, but if it had the effect of getting her unable to look at him, he wasn't going to complain.

Getting into the shower, Warren's hand out of habit went straight to his hard dick. He stroked it a few times, remembering his dream about Ms. Burkhart. However, as he started remembering his dream, he also remembered he could actually make this a reality. He decided to hold off on jerking off for the day, instead saving up for when he saw Ms. Burkhart.

Though he didn't rush through the rest of his shower, Warren still finished much earlier than he usually did. In fact, it was the first time in ages he could remember walking out of the bathroom without having his sister outside waiting to come in. He wondered is his shower really was that much quicker, or if his sister just didn't want to see him, but he didn't wait around to find out.

After getting dressed, Warren went down to the kitchen. His mom was sitting at the edge of the kitchen table just finishing her breakfast. She gave him her normal smile as she walked in the room. Apparently she had gotten over whatever she thought happened the night before.

“How are you this morning, Warren?”

“Fine,” he responded simply enough. He gave her a brief smile, but kept walking by to grab a bowl of cereal.

“You work everything out with your sister last night?”

Warren couldn't help but laugh, but he tried to cut it off responding, “Yeah, we figured it out.”

Apparently his mom took the laugh as a good sign. “You see, your sister's not that bad of a person.”

Warren had turned towards her just as she said this, and he cringed in anger at the thought, and felt a sharp pain in his forehead. Things didn't get figured out because of Julie, she hadn't helped out in anyway. In fact, she was the one that had caused the problem in the first place by complaining about Warren's friends.

Warren looked up to see his mother, finished eating, staring at him, not moving. Angry at her for again defending his sister, he decided to shut her up the same we he had the night before. He quickly stripped off his clothes, hid them behind the counter, and restarted time, then quickly stopped it again. He then put his clothes back on and started time up again.

“I don't know, she seems to go out of her way to cause trouble for me,” he said, responding to the statement his mom made before he froze time.

He watched as his mom stared at him for a couple moments, her eyes again going wide as she quickly looked up and down his now clothed body. In a voice that was barely there, she replied, “Maybe you're right.”

She sat in the chair for several seconds just looking at Warren. Then she suddenly jerked her head away. Getting up from her seat, she said, “I've got to get to work early today, do you mind doing my dishes for me?”

Warren chuckled to himself as he replied, “Yeah, no problem mom.”

His mother simply said, “Thanks,” and left the room. He heard the door open and close soon after. Warren then enjoyed his breakfast, knowing now he could shut his mother up whenever he wanted simply by making her think she was envisioning her son naked.

Getting on the bus later that morning, a leg darted out into the aisle to trip Warren. Having thought this out waiting for the bus, Warren purposefully tripped over the leg, freezing time as he did so. After freezing time, he backed up a bit, and then kicked the leg in the aisle as hard as he could. The leg actually got pushed back quite a bit, and Warren had to pull it back to where it had been, then he got back in the position to trip over it. Then he started up time again.

“Fucking shit!” The leg shot back into the seat as the guy that had stuck it out pulled it into his body and rubbed it. At the same time, Warren fell forward a couple steps as if he had tripped but caught his footing.

“Hey, watch the language!” The guy in the seat ignored the bus driver, rubbing his leg, his face clearly in pain.

Warren walked back to the guy. “Sorry,” he began sincerely, “I didn't see your leg there.” He stood there for a second looking at the guy whose leg he had just kicked. It was a rather large eleventh grader. He was probably about six foot two and also big due to a combination of fat and muscle. And yet here he was in pain rubbing his leg because of Warren, who tried to keep his laughter in his head.

The guy just glared back at Warren, who turned around, smiling, and went looking for a seat. Finding none empty, he again sat down next to Margaret.

Margaret turned to him, and in her lispy voice whispered, “Don't feel bad, that guy tries to trip me every morning too.”

Normally, Warren didn't respond to Margaret, as he didn't really care for her, he just liked having somewhere to sit. But being in a good mood, he responded, “Yeah, well, I got him pretty hard today, we'll see if he sticks his leg out again.”

Through her dental gear, Margaret gave him a smile that was a cross between happiness and surprise. “You mean you did that on purpose?”

A look of confusion went over Warren's face as he responded, “Yeah.” The confusion was because as Margaret had turned to him, in her excitement, she had pulled the books on her lap into her. But it actually looked like she pulled them unnaturally deep into her stomach.

Seeing, and misinterpreting, the look on Warren's face, Margaret frowned a bit and turned her body back to face the seat, turning her head to look out the window. While looking away, Margaret replied, “That's so cool.”

Warren continued looking at Margaret for a bit, then turned to sit normally. His mind kept replaying Margaret pulling her books seemingly into her stomach.

After a couple minutes, he couldn't take it anymore and simply stopped time.

Warren stood up and looked over towards Margaret. But the view out the window caught his eye. The bus had probably been going at least 55 mph when he had stopped time, and being on a highway, there were several other cars that were probably going even faster. Only now they were all stopped. There was a car just a little behind him out his window that looked like it was parked on the highway, but the driver still looked like he was driving, as he obviously just had been.

Interested, Warren walked to the back of the bus and looked out. As far as he could see on the highway, there were cars, simply stopped on the highway. It didn't look like a traffic jam, as the cars weren't as close as they would be in that situation. It simply looked like a bunch of cars had parked on the road.

“Cool,” Warren said aloud, enjoying the view. But after wandering around and looking out some more windows, Warren went back to his seat to return to the original reason he had stopped time.

Looking at Margaret, he picked up her books on her lap and placed them where he had been sitting. He then took a long hard look at Margaret's body. She was wearing her usual white button-down shirt and plaid skirt. As usual, he could see the outline of her bra through her shirt, with her boobs seemingly overflowing her cups. Below her chest, her shirt pulled in an inch or two and went down to her lap. He had always assumed that her shirt and been pretty much pressed against her stomach, just a little loose, which made her look overweight. But when he had seen her shirt bend in as she had pulled her books into her, the first time he had ever seen her do that, they pulled her shirt in much farther.

Warren reached his hand out and pressed a couple fingers into Margaret's stomach. Sure enough, his fingers sunk in about three inches past where her shirt hung before actually touching her stomach. As he did this, Warren mumbled to himself, “What the fuck?”

His curiosity getting the better of him, Warren unbuttoned Margaret's entire shirt and pulled the sides apart. “Holy shit,” he exclaimed, as he pulled her shirt open.

Margaret was not overweight. She had a wide frame, that was definitely true. But her stomach was almost flat. He could even make out the bottom of her ribcage beneath her bra.

What shocked Warren the most about the girl's stomach though, was that with it being so flat it made her chest look even larger. Her chest extended at least four inches out from the rest of her body, and that was with a bra that was obviously too small as her boobs were indeed overflowing the top of her very generic-looking white bra. Unable to resist, he put his hands over her boobs, quickly discovering that each boob was well more than a handful.

Once again, Warren's curiosity drove him further. Carefully, he pulled Margaret's body forward so he could reach behind her. Pulling her shirt out so he could look down inside of it, he tried to find the tag on Margaret's bra. After some effort, he found it, but couldn't read it from where he was. So he tried to unhook her bra. This took some time, as it was the first bra he had ever unhooked. Even with Sandy the day before, he had just pulled her bra up, not unhooked it.

After a lot of effort, he finally got it. He pulled the side with the tag up her back. 40DD! 40DD and it still wasn't big enough for her! Carefully, Warren pushed Margaret's upper body back against the bus seat and pulled the front of her bra up over her chest.

Then he just stared.

Margaret's face may have not been much too look at – her big frizzy blond hair unable to hide her big ears, the freckles covering her face unable to hide her crooked nose, and oversized braces or some other kind of dental gear Warren didn't know about that covered the insides of the girl's mouth.

But going down her body, it got a lot better. Her freckles went down her neck, faded over her shoulders, and finally disappeared down the top of her enormous boobs. Her boobs were still held up in the air as if in a bra still, the line where the bra cup cut into her boobs where they began to overflow clearly visible. Reaching forward, Warren gently pressed her boobs down, trying to see what they would like like if they were hanging naturally. He found he could get them to hang down nearly to the bottom of her rib cage. He also discovered that her boobs were very full and soft. He was also impressed with the large areola covering her boobs. They were very light in color, just slightly darker than Margaret's very white skin, but were easily two and a half inches in diameter. In the center of each was just the slightest hint of her nipples, barely sticking out. He wondered what they would like like hard, but also knew he couldn't make that happen while time was stopped.

After spending some time staring at her chest, Warren let his eyes drop to her nearly hidden flat stomach, and continued tracing his eyes down to her crotch through her skirt. 'What the hell' he thought, reaching down to her skirt and pulling it up. Quickly, Warren saw two signs that the girl did not take care of herself downstairs. First, there was hair coming out the sides of Margaret's generic, slightly loose fitting white panties. Second, even with the slight looseness of her panties, the crotch area was visibly pushed out by a sizable mound of hair.

Normally, this would have been a turn off to Warren, he hated hairy pussies in porn. But the hair sticking out the sides of Margaret's panties was a dirty blond color, only slightly darker than her hair. Warren had never seen a blond pussy before, except for obviously bleached ones in porn. Reaching down, he hooked a finger in the side of her panties and pulled it as far as he could to the side, revealing a huge blond bush. Due to the light color of the hair, he could also just barely see through it, seeing a long slit, bigger than any he'd seen the day before, and large puffy pussy lips.

Staring at her pussy, Warren reached a finger down towards it. As his finger touched the blond hair, he felt his dick jump.

And then he stopped.

Warren stood for a few moments thinking, but quickly decided he wanted to save up for Ms. Burkhart. He could play with Margaret another day. He moved her panties back into place the best he could and then pushed her skirt down on her legs. He pulled her bra back down over her boobs, then leaned her forward to hook her bra together, which actually took more time than unhooking it. When that was done, he pushed her body back against the seat again and buttoned up her shirt. He then put her books back in her lap, placed her arms as best he could remember where they were, and sat back down where he had been sitting.

Then he started time.

He felt the seat shake as Margaret jumped next to him. She didn't say anything, but the jump had knocked her books on the floor. She looked around slightly confused for a moment, then reached down to get her books. Warren reached down to help.

After handing Margaret her books, she looked at Warren, said, “Thanks,” then turned to look out the window. He thought she might have been lightly blushing, but it was hard to tell through her freckles. But he didn't worry about it, and simply smiled, enjoying the rest of the trip to school.

It seemed to take forever to get to school, and then even longer for the first period bell to ring. The second he had sat down in Ms. Burkhart's class, Warren started paying sharp attention. He planned to wait for her to write something on the board, so that her arms would be against the board like in his dream, then stop time, strip her, and fuck her.

But the class wasn't going as he had hoped. She had been sitting at her desk until the bell rang with some other students hanging around talking to her, then she stood up and taught the class while either standing or walking back and forth in the front of the room. She never went to the board.

Warren slowly got more annoyed as the class period went by. All he wanted to do was stop time and fuck Ms. Burkhart, but she wouldn't get in a position to do it. He'd had a boner since the beginning of the class and it was starting to hurt in anticipation.

About ten minutes from the end of the class, she wanted to open up a group discussion, having the students talk to each other and debate the points she had just brought up. As she called on the first student, she backed up to the front of her desk, jumped up and sat on it.

Warren wasted no time, cringing and setting off the sting in his forehead as soon as Ms. Burkhart had sat on her desk.

For a moment, Warren just stared, smiling, at Ms. Burkhart on her desk. She had just hopped up on it, she was leaning forward slightly, her head cocked a bit to the side, her mouth open as she had just been talking, her shoulders were slightly hunched forward, her hands resting on the edge of the desk, her knees spread a little more than shoulder width apart. It wasn't the position from his dream, but Warren thought it might be even better.

After admiring his handiwork for a bit, Warren got up and headed towards Ms. Burkhart to do what he had wanted to do since he woke up that morning.

The first thing Warren did was untuck and unbutton her shirt. Then, pulling her straight arms off the table and into the air, he pulled the shirt up and off. This was followed by her bra, which he got off slightly faster than he had with Margaret earlier. Warren was surprised to find that she wore a padded bra, which made her boobs seem bigger than they actually were, given he thought Ms. Burkhart usually tried to hide her figure to make herself seem more professional. But after pulling it off, he thought he might understand why, as her nipples, albeit small, were rock hard and sticking out half an inch. He figured if her nipples got hard a lot she might wear padded bras to hide them.

While his initial approach had been to get Ms. Burkhart completely naked before doing anything, he could not help but spend some time kissing, licking, and sucking on her nipples before moving on.

When he was ready to move on, Warren unbuckled and pulled off Ms. Burkhart's belt. He then unbuttoned and unzipped her pants. Then, after pushing her legs closer together, he carefully lifted her up and pulled her pants down to her ankles. He was surprised to find Ms. Burkhart unnaturally light – lifting her was as simple as lifting a cup, which led him to believe that anything weighed less while time was stopped. He didn't think about that for long though as he continued pulling her pants down her smooth legs. Before pulling her pants off, he pulled off her shoes, followed by her socks, followed by her pants. He then lifted Ms. Burkhart up again and pulled her panties down and off. Finally, Warren spread her legs apart again, then stood back and admired his naked teacher.

Ms. Burkhart was frozen on her desk, her arms straight above her head, her legs spread, totally naked. Well, not totally. Warren noticed she still had a watch and a necklace on, and proceeded to take those off just for good measure. Looking at her again afterwards, he figured Ms. Burkhart could not weigh more than 110, 115 pounds at most. She was short, at five foot four, had a small frame, and was on the skinny side at that. Her relatively small boobs, barely B-cups, certainly didn't add any extra weight to her. He would've guessed she weighed even less, but he noticed she had well-toned abs and legs, and guessed that muscle must weigh something. And, as he had guessed the day before when he had touched her through her panties, Ms. Burkhart was in fact completely hairless. Not just around her pussy, but her legs must have been shaved just that morning, which he noticed pulling down her pants and panties and had touched her incredibly smooth legs. Ms. Burkhart's outer pussy lips were tiny, with her inner folds easily sticking out from within, especially with her legs spread as they were, which exposed everything she had. He noticed that Ms. Burkhart's clit was significantly bigger than Sandy's was, his only real basis for comparison, but it didn't look too big. When watching porn, Warren preferred pussies with big outer lips that hid the inner folds, but he was too turned on to care right now.

Before doing anything with her, Warren wanted to see what she looked like from the back. He walked behind the desk, and saw the tops of Ms. Burkhart's ass cheeks sticking out the tiniest bit from her back. The rest of her ass was flushed flat against the desk. There was a tiny cave created between her ass cheeks against the desk. Entranced, Warren felt the need to push his finger in it. Not far in, her felt her asshole against the top of his finger. He twisted his hand around so his finger could rub around the ring of her asshole. While he greatly enjoyed this, Warren realized he had better things he could be doing.

He walked around to the front of Ms. Burkhart's desk and stripped off all his clothes. His dick was harder than he ever remembered it being, a combination of lust for Ms. Burkhart, having seen Margaret's near-naked body, and having not jerked off that morning. He approached the desk, pulled Ms. Burkhart right to the edge, lowered her arms onto his shoulders, then lined his dick up with her cunt.

Warren moaned in extreme pleasure as he thrust his dick into her. After the first thrust, he paused, holding himself inside her and enjoying the feeling of her pussy surrounding his dick. When he was ready for more, he began repeatedly thrusting into his teacher, starting slow but quickly getting into a rapid pace. He soon was thrusting so hard that he was physically pushing Ms. Burkhart backwards onto the desk – he had to hold her hips to keep her on the edge so he could keep fucking her. When that got old, he lifted her up, bouncing her on his dick as he stood still. On one hand, he wished that he could start time and see her small breasts bounce as he fucked her, rather than just stay in the position they were when he froze time. On the other, there was something incredibly sexy about seeing his teacher keep a normal face, as if nothing was going on, while he fucked her brains out.

It wasn't long before Warren was regretting his decision to not rub one off in his morning shower. After what seemed like just a few short minutes, he was ready to cum in her, and he couldn't hold himself back. He put Ms. Burkhart back on the desk, holding her hips steady, and began thrusting as fast as he could into her.

A scream escaped Warren's lips as his first shot went off into Ms. Burkhart. Lesser screams continued as with each following thrust, he shot more and more into her. Finally, he thrust one last time, letting the last of his cum escape into the insides of his teacher as he dropped his head onto her shoulder, suddenly completely spent.

He stayed like this for awhile, resting on his teacher, his dick deflating inside her, trying to regain his strength and energy, having spent all he had on fucking his frozen teacher.

When he felt strong enough to move again, Warren pulled out. Remembering what had happened to Sandy, he squatted down so his face was level with Ms. Burkhart's cunt. And just like with Sandy, after he pulled out, Ms. Burkhart's cunt muscles stayed spread in the shape of his dick. He could see into his teacher, much farther than he could with Sandy as she was in a better position. Three to four inches inside of her was easily visible before it faded to black. He could see some of his cum stuck in her at the deepest part he could see. Seeing that, Warren felt his dick jerk up. For a little bit, he contemplated whether to wait to get hard again, or whether to stop for now and save his next load for someone else.

He decided upon the latter, grabbing his clothes and getting dressed again. Then he got to work redressing Ms. Burkhart, which proved far more complicated than undressing her. He started with her watch and necklace, followed by her panties and bra, none of which was too challenging, though it did take Warren some time to get her bra hooked, but he felt he was starting to get the hang of it. He then put her arms back over her head and pulled her shirt down over her, which took some work, then buttoned it up. The most complicated part was her pants. He had to work them up inch by inch, having a lot of trouble getting them around her knees and then finally around her ass. Tucking her shirt into her pants also proved to be a challenge, but eventually he felt he had it as good as he could get it and buttoned and zipped up her pants. Lastly, he pulled her belt through the loops in her pants, which he discovered was unnecessarily challenging. He wondered why he had pulled her belt off her pants in the first place, instead of leaving it through the loops after unbuckling it. He made a mental note never to make that mistake again.

Finished, Warren stepped back and looked at Ms. Burkhart. He realized he hadn't put her arms back down, so he did that, placing her hands on the edge of the desk. He also brought her legs a little closer together and pushed her back a little way from the edge of the desk, trying to remember exactly how she had been when he stopped time. Having her fully lined up, he stepped back again to check on her.

She looked as close to she had been as he thought he was going to get. He went back to his seat. He took a deep breath, wondering how Ms. Burkhart was going to react. Then he set off the sting inside his forehead.

A guy in the middle of the class started talking. Most of the students were looking at him. Warren didn't remember the guy talking when he stopped time, but it was possible he wasn't paying enough attention, or that he stopped time right after Ms. Burkhart called on him.

Ms. Burkhart, impressively, didn't make a sound. Her mouth had shut quickly, whether that was because she had finished speaking or something else, he wasn't sure. He saw her head tilt down slightly as her eyes went to her crotch, clearly looking at or for something, though he wasn't sure what. Then she looked back up at the class, definitely more red, but nothing noticeably wrong besides that. The rest of the class seemingly didn't notice anything wrong with her.

However, for the remaining ten minutes or so of class, Ms. Burkhart did not get off the desk, though she did wiggle around on it a bit every now and then. At the end of class, she again waved students out of the room that tried to stop and talk to her. Warren purposefully took his time and was the last student to leave. Just outside the door, he heard Ms. Burkhart finally hop off her desk. He looked behind him and saw her looking confusedly at her desk, then clearly adjusted her bra through her shirt, then her panties through her pants. Apparently he had not done too good a job getting them back on. She then brushed the crotch of her pants with both hands, as if straightening her pants or something, and then did the same with the ass of her pants. However, when she did the ass of her pants, she turned her head to look at it as she did. But as she turned her head, Warren thought he saw Ms. Burkhart catch him staring at her, so he quickly turned at left, hoping she thought he was just walking by.

The next couple classes went smoothly. Feeling more confident than the day before, Warren would stop time occasionally and not only flip up a skirt, but pull the panties aside so he could look at the girl's pussy. He always put the panties back in place and the skirt back down before starting time again though. He must have seen twenty or so pussies over the course of his next two classes, along with the time spent in the hallway in between.

It was during his fourth period class that Warren found something more interesting to do.

The girl sitting next to him was apparently falling asleep. The teacher was known for not caring if students put their heads down, he would go on teaching even if the whole class was asleep. The girl, Diane, had her arms on her desk, her head sideways on her arms facing Warren, her eyes closed, and had started to yawn.

It was the sound of the yawn that got Warren to look over. He hadn't been thinking of doing anything when he turned his head, but as he saw Diane stretch her mouth open sideways with her tongue pressing against the bottom or her mouth, a perverse thought crossed his mind.

Warren immediately stopped time.

He felt his dick jump in his pants as he looked at Diane, eyes closed, mouth as wide open as it could possibly be. However, while his dick jumped, it was not close to hard. That didn't stop him though. Standing up, Warren moved to stand directly next to Diane, pulling his mostly limp dick out of his fly. He had to bend his knees slightly to get his dick level with Diane's mouth, but as soon as he did, he aimed his dick into her mouth, pressing it against her tongue.

Once it was in her mouth, Warren's dick quickly hardened, and he began thrusting into Diane's mouth. At first, he just pushed until he felt the back of her mouth. But he soon found that this wasn't very satisfying. Her mouth was actually open too much, so her lips weren't rubbing against his dick. All he was doing was rubbing his dick along her tongue.

So Warren pushed farther.

He moaned as he felt Diane's throat muscles stretch as much as they could to allow his dick to go down her throat. Warren continued pushing until his pants were flushed against Diane's face, not letting him go any farther. He waited for some time after he got his dick as far as he could, both in pleasure and in shock. He was in shock for two reasons. First, he easily had the last two inches of his dick down her throat, and couldn't believe that fit into this girl. Second, those two inches that were in her throat were incredibly tight. Apparently, he thought, throat muscles don't stretch as much as cunt muscles do.

Warren brought his hands down to the back of Diane's head as he began small thrusts into her mouth. He didn't pull all the way out of her mouth, or even close. He only pulled back the two inches or so until his dick popped out of her throat, and then pushed back as far as he could. Even though the strokes were small though, they were far more intense than anything Warren had experienced before, as it was the tightest thing he had ever fucked. His thrusts quickly gained in speed and he felt his balls begin to tighten.

As he felt his orgasm come, Warren pushed his dick into Diane's mouth as hard as he could, pushing down just slightly farther than he had been before. And he stayed there, screaming profanities and moaning, his dick compressed in the tightest hole it had ever been in, shooting cum straight down the frozen girl's yawning throat, his hands holding her head as deep on his dick as it would go.

Warren opened his eyes and looked down as his orgasm subsided. He couldn't see any shred of his dick, just his pants pressed against, and what looked likely slightly into Diane's open mouth. He was still shocked it had all gone in there, and he wished he had thought of looking down earlier, watching his dick disappear into his classmate's mouth and throat.

While looking down, he felt his dick slowly deflating. Though he never moved, his dick popped out of Diane's throat and into her mouth as it continued to get limp. After his dick popped out of her throat, Warren pulled it out the rest of the way, tucking it back in his pants. He squatted down and looked into Diane's still yawning mouth. He could see the back of her mouth, opening into her throat. But unlike when he looked into Sandy's and Ms. Burkhart's pussies after he fucked them, he saw no trace of his cum. He suddenly wondered how far down her throat it went, and then what was going to happen when he started up time.

'Might as well find out,' he thought to himself with a smile.

Settling back into his seat, Warren wasted no time setting off the sting inside his forehead.

A series of loud coughs and gags came from next to him. Diane quickly sat up and covered her mouth with her hand as she continued coughing and gagging.

“Do you need to get some water?”

Diane simply nodded to the teacher as she got up. While she did, Warren briefly saw the inside of the hand she had been coughing into. While there was some phlegm in it, he clearly saw his own cum mixed with it. As Diane continued to cough while walking out of the room, Warren wondered if she would recognize that it was cum she was coughing up, and if she did, how she would justify it.

Nearly five minutes later, Diane finally came back. She looked perfectly normal. After sitting down, the girl on the other side of her asked if she was okay and what happened.

“I must have just swallowed my spit while yawning,” was Diane's response.

Warren just smiled as the class continued.

Nothing else exciting happened until just before lunch.

Warren was putting his book bag away as usual when Sarah, Val, and Tammy walked by. Warren laughed out loud at the fact that they were all wearing pants after the fiasco the day before. He even felt so confident as to wolf-whistle at them again. The three girls glared at him as a few other whistles shot off down the hall. Nothing compared to the day before, but still something. The girls just continued to walk by.

Soon after they walked by, Warren felt a hand slap his back as he heard Jake say, “Man, where are their skirts today?”

Warren laughed as the two started up a conversation on the way to lunch. During the conversation, Jake said Warren could bring any of his friends and he would get them all laid, laughing. Warren laughed too, not knowing whether Jake was serious or not. Just before they went their separate ways, Warren got directions to Jake's house.

Bob immediately asked if Warren had asked Jake if they were invited to the party too. Warren relayed what he had just been told, leaving out the part about Jake getting them all laid, not wanting to get their hopes up. While Bob was excited, him and Warren had to talk both Frank and Pat into coming too. They finally said they would, while they clearly weren't too excited about it.

Shortly after their conversation had turned back to video games, someone tripped over the back of Bob's chair which had been stuck out a bit. Bob's chair was kicked hard enough to spin him halfway around. All the guys at the table turned as they saw Alasia, a black girl from their grade, turning around after catching her feet.

“Sor–,” Bob started, but was interrupted before he got any farther.

“Pull your chair in you fat nerd!”

Before he knew what he was doing, Warren cringed in anger, feeling the sting inside his forehead. He didn't realize what he had done until he looked up and saw no one moving and heard the suddenly deafening silence compared to the usual cafeteria racket.

While he had obviously stopped time accidentally, Warren was beginning to wonder whether it was just his angry cringe that set it off, or if his subconscious reaction when someone makes him mad is to immediately stop time. He brushed that thought off though as he tried to figure out what to do to Alasia for picking on Bob.

As thoughts ran through his mind, he realized there wasn't much he could do. Maybe move her feet a little so she fell over on her own and he could then blame her for not watching where she was going. But as she was still standing facing Bob's chair that was turned slightly towards her, that wouldn't really work.

Thinking of ways to shut the girl up, Warren remembered how he shut his mom up. Alasia wasn't looking at him, so he couldn't make himself naked and make her think she thought it, but she was staring right at Bob...

Warren sat for awhile, trying to decide whether he was willing to strip his friend to shut up the girl that had just yelled at him. He didn't really want to strip his friend, but he did want to see Alasia's response, so he decided to do it.

Getting up, Warren walked over to Bob. He pulled his shirt up, revealing Bob's gut. He wasn't a very fat guy, but he definitely was overweight, and there was no denying the flab on his gut. Seeing it, Warren decided maybe he didn't need to pull Bob's shirt off. He stood up and took a deep breath before deciding to follow through with the next part. Finally, he bent down and unhooked Bob's belt, and unbuttoned and unzipped his jeans.

That made it time for the hard part – both mentally and physically.

Warren wasn't looking forward to lifting his friend up to get his pants down, and he also wasn't looking forward to seeing his friend's junk. Deciding to do it though, he leaned forward to pull his friend up. However, he was surprised to find Bob much lighter than he had expected, just like with Ms. Burkhart that morning. People really did weigh less with no time, though he wasn't sure why. Having done that, Warren turned his head away and pulled Bob's pants and boxers to his ankles and sat him back down.

As he stood up, Warren's eyes couldn't help but catch Bob's dick. And then, continuing to look, he laughed. Bob was huge! His limp dick was at least five inches long, and nearly as thick as Warren's dick was hard. Deciding to change his tactic a little, Warren pulled Bob's shirt back down to just above his dick. Then he moved to Alasia and twisted her head down until it was staring right at Bob's dick.

Then he went back to his seat and started time only for a moment before stopping it again. Warren quickly pulled his friend's pants back up, buckling, buttoning, and zipping them, then went back to his seat and started time again.

“I'm so sorry,” Bob said, apparently not noticing what had happened to him, or if he did, just not showing anything.

Alasia said nothing. She stood there, clearly trying to look at his face, but Warren could see her eyes continuously darting back to Bob's now-covered dick.

“Good,” she finally said in a bitchy tone, before turning and heading back to her table.

As Bob turned back to the table, Frank and Pat were laughing. Frank jokingly said, “Smooth!”

Bob simply muttered out, “Damn she's hot.”

This took Warren by surprise a bit. He didn't think she was that hot, but apparently Bob did. Then again, Bob obviously has different tastes. Yes, Alasia had a big chest. Not as big as Margaret, but big. But she also had a big butt which Warren didn't find very attractive. It stuck out easily two inches from her legs and back. She probably had a little more weight than most, but was by no means fat, so that wasn't an issue. But she also had a rather large nose and dreadlocks, neither of which particularly turned Warren on.

After the few seconds it took for these thoughts to run through Warren's head, he finally responded to Bob's comment, saying, “It looked to me like she couldn't keep her eyes off your crotch. Maybe she wonders what you're packing down there!”

Frank started cracking up. “Yeah,” he began, “She totally wants your fat nerd dick!”

Everyone stated laughing at that comment, which essentially ended that conversation. However, throughout the remainder of lunch, Warren noticed that not only did Bob keep looking over his shoulder at Alasia, but she seemed to be taking occasional glances over at him.

When the bell rang for the end of lunch, Alasia's table had gotten up quickly and were walking towards the exit, which took them right past Warren's table. Warren, Frank, Pat, and Bob took their time getting up. As Bob got up to push his chair in, he turned around as Alasia was just a few feet from him. Warren quickly stopped time, pulled Bob's pants down just below his crotch, and again twisted Alasia's head to look down at it. He then quickly got back to where he had been, started time, stopped time, pulled Bob's pants back up, went back to his spot, and started time again.

Bob continued pushing his chair in like nothing happened, but Alasia stopped short, causing the girl behind her to walk right into her and ask, “What the fuck Alasia?”

Alasia shook her head and started walking again, and without turning her head told the girl behind her, “Sorry, thought I saw something.”

They continued talking after that, but were too far away to hear.

The rest of the day went normally, with Warren stopping time only occasionally to flip up a skirt and pull aside panties to peak at a pussy.

At the end of the day, Warren felt horny again. He decided to try and pull the same stunt he had the day before. After the last bell, he went to his locker, then to an empty stall in the guys' bathroom and froze time.

He walked over to the girls' bathroom in hopes of finding someone he could fuck. Again, there were several girls by the mirrors, one of which he noticed was Alasia, and a friend of hers whose name he didn't know standing next to her. He didn't find any of the girls by the mirrors very interesting so he went to check the stalls.

The first stall was empty. In the second stall was Nina again, her hand behind her and down below her ass, her head turned back and looking towards where her hand was, though there was no way she could see it. Warren could only guess that Nina was wiping her ass, and that she took a shit after school every day in the second stall. The third stall was empty, which led Warren to wonder if Nina's shits smelt really bad since no one got the stalls next to her, though he wouldn't be able to tell as all smells disappeared while time was stopped. The fourth stall had a girl with her pants and panties around her ankles, leaned forward as much as she could, apparently peeing with fury. The fifth stall had another girl peeing, this one with her legs slightly spread so he could see her frozen piss stream. The sixth stall was empty. The seventh stall had a girl Warren recognized as another black friend of Alasia's that had a hand between her legs and apparently was wiping herself.

Warren was about to leave disappointed, but as he was opening the door, the image of the girl in the last stall hit him again. Something about it didn't seem right. He walked back and peaked over again. The girl's head was twisted up a bit and had a look of relief on her face. That in itself wasn't unusual, he had seen similar looks on the other girls that were peeing, and he could relate. When you gotta pee bad, it feels great to let it go. But she had that look on her face while she was wiping herself. That seemed unusual, since she was already done peeing.

Curious, Warren went to the stall next door and climbed over. He got in front of the girl and looked at her. This definitely didn't seem right to him. So Warren slowly pushed the girl's legs apart.

Warren laughed in shock. The girl wasn't wiping! Her fingers were in her pussy – she was masturbating!

Warren felt his dick jump, having caught a girl masturbating in a school bathroom while other people were going to the bathroom.

After Warren recovered from his laughing, he decided to explore further, as this was actually the first black pussy he had seen. Carefully, he pulled the girl's fingers out of her vagina, and then pulled her arm up and out of the way. Then he just took in the image for awhile. The girl was totally shaved, and he found it interesting how the girl's skin got darker, from a brown almost to a solid black, as it got closer to her slit. And then, sticking out between the slit, the girl's inner lips were almost as dark as the girl's outer lips. But between the inner lips, where the girl's fingers had just been, Warren saw the brightest pink color he had ever seen in a pussy, at least it seemed that way compared to the darker skin around it.

Suddenly, Warren knew he wanted to fuck this girl. He stood up and pulled his pants and boxers down and off, along with his shoes, though not his socks. He brought a hand down to rub his dick as he looked at the girl, trying to figure out how to fuck her. He couldn't fuck her straight on between the legs like he did with Ms. Burkhart as the toilet was too low. He'd have to be on his knees, and not only did he not want to do it like that, he wasn't sure it would even work. He couldn't bend her over like he did with Sandy the day before, as this girl wasn't in a position like that. She was just sitting straight up on a toilet.

Then he knew how to do it. Slipping behind the girl, Warren carefully lifted her up off the toilet seat, then he sat down on the toilet seat and pulled her down on his lap. He couldn't fuck straight up into her, but he found that leaning back a bit, he could slide the girl diagonally onto his dick. From there it was effortless. He switched between humping up into her and pulling her up and down on his dick. Both felt equally good, the humping seeming more natural but pulling her taking less effort and a bit more erotic.

Warren didn't even realize he was close until he was shooting deep up into the girl. He thrust his hips up and pulled her down as far as he could onto him. Once he finished, Warren didn't waste time. He pulled out of her, got out from beneath her, got his shoes, boxers and pants back on, and finally put the girl's arm back down, putting her fingers back in her cunt.

Smiling, Warren climbed over into the adjacent stall and headed back to the stall he had been in in the guys' room.

As soon as he started time, there was a loud thud against the wall. He wasn't sure if he hadn't sat the girl up right and she fell against the wall between the two bathrooms or if she had just thrown an arm out and hit it. He went out to wait and see.

A few minutes later, the girl came out along with Alasia and her other friend. They were all talking and laughing, so he guessed nothing bad had happened, but still wondered what had caused the thud in the bathroom. He also wondered if Alasia and her other friend knew that the girl he had just fucked had just masturbated. There was no way for him to ever know. So he just headed out to catch his bus.

Upon arriving home, Warren went to his living room and turned on the TV. After browsing through the channels and finding nothing, Warren just left it on VH1 and let music videos play as he laid down on the couch.

Warren woke up to the sound of the front door closing. He saw his mom walk by, and seconds later heard the fridge open. The sound suddenly reminded him how hungry he was. Getting up, he headed into the kitchen.

“How was work, mom?”

She turned to him, looking a little surprised, “Not bad, it was a pretty easy day.” She continued looking at him for a little bit before adding, “I'd ask how your day was, but it obviously must've been pretty good judging by your mood.”

Warren laughed. “Yeah, it's been pretty good recently.”

He could see his mom's curiosity as she asked, “Any particular reason?”

“No,” Warren said quickly, “just seems like there's less shit to deal with.”

He could see the answer didn't satisfy his mother, but she didn't persist. Instead, she said, “Remember that I'm going out tonight. Try to get along with your sister.”

Warren stopped time. He wasn't sure why. It's not like his mom had really defended Julie or spoke down to him, but the comment just annoyed him. So he stripped off his clothes, jerked off until he had a hard on, started time, stopped time, put his clothes back on, and stopped time again.

Responding to his mom's statement, Warren replied, “Don't worry mom, we'll be fine.” He said this laughing inside, knowing he would have a fun night. While he was talking, his mom blinked a couple times, glancing down towards Warren's crotch, then shook her head. It was a less dramatic reaction than prior instances, but it still had the same effect

“Alright then. Thanks. I'm going to go get ready.” She then turned and left, heading up to her bedroom.

Warren laughed to himself, still glad he could end a conversation with her whenever he wanted to. He then poured himself a glass of milk, grabbed a handful of cookies, and went back to the living room.

About half an hour later, Julie arrived home. She came in, went up to her room, then came back down to the living room and sat down in the recliner and joined in watching TV.

Warren immediately knew something was up, but didn't know what. Julie and him were never in the same room without arguing, even watching TV, she would normally argue until she got to watch what she wanted to watch, which was probably not music videos. But she sat there and watched music videos, not saying a word.

Some time later their mom came down stairs. She went to the kitchen then stood in the doorway to the living room in a dress with her jacket and purse ready to go.

“Alright, I left money on the counter so you two can order pizza. If you need me, you both have my cell number. I'll be back tomorrow morning.”

Both Julie and Warren said goodbye.

Just before walking out the doorway, their mom added, “Please don't tear the place apart.”

“We won't,” Warren and his sister said almost simultaneously. Their eyes briefly met as they looked at each other, but both quickly looked away.

Less than a minute later, the front door closed as their mom left.

Upon hearing the door close, Julie sat up and leaned forward.

“So I have a guy coming over tonight. Please, please don't be a dick to him.” She put extra emphasis on the second please.

Warren couldn't help but laugh in response. “I knew something was up the way you were acting.”

“Come on, I really like this guy,” Julie pleaded.

“So let me understand this,” Warren responded smiling, “You don't want me having my friends over, but you want me to be nice to some guy you're bringing over?”

Julie didn't respond, she simply slammed her hand into the coffee table and got up to leave.

“Whoa, whoa, chill,” Warren began, “I didn't say I wouldn't do it. Just remember that this time you owe me.”

Julie simply smiled. “Thanks,” she said, in what came out as an obnoxious voice. And then she left.

Warren sat and thought about what had just happened. He hadn't expected anyone to be over tonight, he thought it would just be him and his sister and he would be able to find ways to piss her off by stopping time. He was guessing that was going to be a lot harder with someone else here. 'Oh well,' he thought, shrugging his shoulders. He'd still no doubt be able to do something.

Getting over that, he was kind of pissed off at how Julie had approached this thing. She could have a guy over, but she didn't want Warren to have any friends over? Plus, she pretended to be nice, but she got her way in the end. And it was clear she expected to the way she said, “Thanks.” This all worked out the way she wanted. So far.

Warren's thoughts were interrupted by the sound of the shower going on upstairs. He smiled, seeing his first opportunity to mess with his sister. He set off the sting inside his forehead and went upstairs.

Warren walked into the bathroom and pulled aside the shower curtain.

“What in the fuck?”

Warren just stared in confusion after his comment.

The shower was going, although the water was currently frozen in place in the air. Julie was standing on the far end of the shower, still totally dry save her feet. She had her knees bent out slightly, and one hand was holding her pussy lips apart as a stream of bright yellow pee came out.

This didn't so much bother Warren. He had pissed in the shower many times, just as he had whacked off in there too. No, what had Warren totally confused was that her other hand had two fingers sticking out and into her stream of pee.

Warren could see no reason for this. He had no idea what she was doing, or even what she possibly could be doing. His curiosity was overwhelming.

Staying on the far end of the shower, Warren pulled the shower curtain closed, but held his face just inside looking at his sister's naked back. Then he started time again.

The water from the shower started hitting the bathtub and the stream of pee continued to come out of Julie's cunt. But as he watched, she took the fingers she peed on and held them up to her face.

Warren thought he knew what she was doing, but he had to be sure. He stopped time again. He pulled open the shower curtain. And sure enough, his sister was sucking the fingers she had just pissed on. Beyond that, she was sucking her fingers while her other hand still held her pussy open and she still peed.

What caught Warren the most about this was Julie's face. It was blank. Emotionless. She didn't seem to enjoy the taste of her pee. She didn't seem disgusted by it. She just looked normal. Like peeing on one's fingers and then sucking them was completely normal.

Still curious, Warren resumed his position at the end of the tub, pulling the shower curtain closed with his face just peeking through, and he started time again.

Julie finished sucking her fingers, she probably had done it for no more than five seconds. But she brought her hand back down into her stream of pee. Only this time she bent forward a little and cupped her hand. Catching a few handfuls, she splashed the pee up and onto her dry body a few times. As she finished peeing, Julie took a step forward into the shower and started to turn around.

Not wanting to get caught, Warren quickly stopped time again. He stood back, allowing the shower curtain to fully close.

Warren had fully planned on messing with her somehow, maybe putting conditioner in her hand when she meant to use shampoo or making the soap constantly pop out of her hand so she had to keep picking it up. Anything he came up with really. Yet having seen his sister just taste her own pee and then splash some onto herself, he couldn't think of anything. So slowly he turned around and walked out of the bathroom, closing the door behind him. When he got downstairs, he sat down and started time again.

For the next half hour or so, Warren kept trying to figure out what his sister had been doing. Sure he'd played with his pee before – when he was like eight! Not now that he is in ninth grade, and certainly not when he's a senior in high school! Was that what his sister was really like? Was she really a weirdo who pretended to be a normal – albeit bitchy – girl? Warren just sat staring at the TV, not really watching it, trying to figure out his sister.

About forty minutes later, Julie came back downstairs. She sat back down in the living room with Warren, smiling, but not saying anything. Warren didn't say anything to her. About five minutes later, the doorbell rang.

Julie got up to get it and soon came back into the living room with a senior Warren recognized from the football team. He was a big guy, maybe six foot two, and buff too, if not a little on the round side.

“Joe, this is my brother Warren. Warren, this is Joe.”

Warren stood up and shook the guy's hand. “Nice to meet you, Joe.”

“You too, Warren.” He cocked his head at Warren for a second. “Haven't I seen you talking with Jake recently?”

Warren's eyes opened a little wider. He was surprised that a senior football player recognized him, and wasn't sure whether that was a good or bad thing. “Yeah, just the past couple days.”

Joe smiled. “Thought so. How'd you end up hanging with Jake?”

Warren laughed, deciding to give him a brief retelling of the story. “We both happened to be around when a few girls' skirts flipped up in the hallway and we got a show. We started talking about that, and then just kept talking.”

Joe slapped Warren on the shoulder. Sounding excited, he said, “Yeah man, I heard about that. You saw that?”

Suddenly Julie slapped Joe's arm. He looked over to see her giving him a smirk. Warren had practically forgotten she was there. Joe laughed and quickly apologized, “Oh, sorry about that. They got nothing on you.”

Julie gave him another playful slap and then turned to Warren. “Warren, why don't you order pizza while we pick out a movie?”

Warren could tell by the way she was looking at him and talking that she was trying to be bitchy, but he just couldn't take it seriously, not after Joe talked to him like a friend, and not after he'd seen her weird shower. “Sure, sis,” he replied laughing, “I'll get right on that.”

Joe gave Warren another slap on the shoulder as Warren walked out towards the kitchen. He ordered the pizza and a cold bottle of soda, yelling into the living room to figure out what they wanted. Even after finishing ordering, Warren waited for a few minutes. Normally, in a situation like this, Warren would avoid his sister entirely and go play games while she hung out with her friends or her boyfriend (not that he was sure Joe was her boyfriend or just a date, he had no idea what was going on in his sister's life). But he didn't really feel like doing that. So he went back to the living room.

Joe's arm was around Julie, her head on his shoulder. Warren announced, “Pizza will be here in twenty.”

Joe turned towards him. “Hey, good to hear. And you're just in time – movie's just starting.”

Over the course of the next two hours, Warren watched some ridiculous street racing movie with Julie and Joe. Julie obviously didn't care for the film, and Warren didn't really either, not knowing anything about cars. Joe, however, seemed to love the movie and kept pointing out which cars were “fucking ridiculous” and which ones were “bullshit.” Julie just ignored the comments, but Warren would nod his head or verbally agree, even though he had no idea what he was talking about.

When the movie ended, Julie almost immediately grabbed Joe and dragged him out and upstairs. Before leaving the room though, Joe put his hand up towards Warren and said, “See ya around man.”

Warren just said, “Yup.” And as he heard them going up the stairs, he started laughing. He probably pissed his sister off more by becoming friendly with Joe than by anything he could do by stopping time. Not that that was going to stop him from messing with her.

As he heard the two reach the top of the stairs, Warren stopped time.

He walked up the stairs. At the top, he saw Joe walking behind his sister, grabbing her ass cheeks through her pants. Warren laughed, not caring about his sister but glad Joe was enjoying himself. He laughed even harder as he walked by them and saw the look on his sister's face, which Joe couldn't see from behind her. It was a clear look of annoyance. Apparently, she didn't like what he was doing with her ass!

Warren continued to walk past them and into his sister's room, where he hid in her closet like he had the night before, leaving the closet door open just enough for him to see through. Then he started up time again.

Julie practically ripped off Joe's clothes after she shut the door upon entering the room. Joe wasn't far behind on getting her clothes off. Then the two got on the bed naked. Julie started by sucking Joe's dick, then he rolled her over and started pounding into her.

Warren tried not to watch most of it, uncomfortable with not only watching his sister, but also not really wanting to see Joe naked. Instead, he just listened, taking occasional glances, hoping for a point where he could stop time and mess with them, or preferably just his sister, as he kind of liked Joe.

As he waited, Joe and Julie seemed to go on for ages. Both sounded like they were enjoying it, but neither sounded like they were getting exceptionally pleased by the other. Finally, Warren heard Julie gasp out, “Let's do doggy.”

Warren turned his head as Joe lifted up and his sister got on all fours. He saw Joe reach down and presumably line up his cock with her cunt, though he couldn't see Joe's dick from his angle.

And then Warren got an idea.

He set off the sting in his forehead, and watched as Joe and his sister froze where they were. Opening the closet door, Warren walked over to them, hoping he wasn't too late. As Warren walked to the side, he bent over laughing.

On the plus side he wasn't too late. He wanted to catch Joe before he entered his sister, and his dick head was just barely lined up with her cunt, ready to thrust in.

But that wasn't why he was laughing. Warren was laughing because Joe had a very small dick. He was this giant guy, tall, muscular, a bit overweight, and he had a very skinny dick that maybe – just maybe – was 5 1/2 inches long. It looked even shorter than that, just barely sticking out of the massive bush around his dick. The good thing about that though, was it was probably good for what Warren wanted to do.

Warren walked closer and looked at his sister. On all four the way she was, her cunt was clearly exposed, but so was her little asshole, just as Warren had expected. Now he just had to go through with the disgusting part.

Warren stared at Joe's small dick for a little bit working up the courage to make his next move. Then he was ready. Quickly reaching forward and grabbing Joe's dick, he pulled it out and up a little until it was aimed at his sister's asshole. He pushed it forward a little to make sure it would go in, and then let go, shaking his hand afterwards like that would cancel out the fact that he had just grabbed a guy's dick. Warren walked back to the closet still shaking his hand. With his other hand, he closed the closet door enough so he could just barely see out of it.

Then he started up time.

Immediately Joe thrust forward.

“Fuck!”

The scream from Warren's sister echoed throughout the room. Her upper body fell forward, her head landing in her hands as she screamed. The scream stopped Joe in his tracks, stopping with his dick fully inside Julie's ass.

“You asshole, I can't believe you did that!”

“Wha–,” Joe started as he looked down. He saw the problem as soon as he glanced down and pulled out. Apologetically, he started saying, “I'm sorry, I didn't mean to. I don't know how that happened. I swear I thought I was putting it in your pussy!”

Joe continued apologizing while Julie stayed in the position she was in head in her hands. Her body had started shaking at one point, possibly from sobs, but that soon passed. Tilting her head up, but not looking behind her, she screamed out, “How could you do that?”

Joe replied in monotone, “I don't know, it was an accident.”

“An accident?” Julie was screaming at him again. “You can't tell my ass from my pussy?”

“No,” Joe began, continuing, “I don't know.” As he said that, Warren saw Joe's arm begin to move. He immediately recognized the motion – Joe was slowly jerking off.

Julie didn't respond after her last comment. She just dropped her head to her hands again. Why she didn't move from the position she was in, Warren didn't know.

After a short time, Joe started talking again. “Look, let's forget that happened, finish here, and go to sleep.”

Warren saw Joe push forward, but didn't know which hole he was pushing into. Julie answered that quickly though. She must've felt Joe pushing against her as she rapidly leaned forward and whipped her head back towards him and yelled, “You are not putting that in my pussy! It was just in my ass! That's disgusting!”

Joe still sounding calm said, “I gotta get off, I ain't having blue balls all night.”

Julie finally started to roll out of her position and snapped back at him, “Then jerk yourself off!”

Joe caught Julie and didn't let her roll away. “I'm not going to jerk off when I've got you right here.”

Julie looked back at him. When she turned her head, she looked angry, but it faded to what looked like indifference as she looked at Joe's face, which Warren couldn't see. “Fine, then I'll jerk you off.”

“No man,” Joe said, a touch of impatience showing in his voice, “That's just like me jerking myself off.”

“Well,” Julie said, still looking at him, but not appearing angry, “You aren't putting that in my pussy after it was in my ass, that's disgusting.”

Joe was silent for a bit. “Then give me a blowjob.”

A look of disgust crossed Julie's face at the mere suggestion. Sounding somewhat angry she nearly screamed back at him, “Fuck no, that's even more disgusting!”

Joe, starting to sound like he was losing his patience, replied, “Well, I need to get off, so it's your mouth or your pussy. Pick one.”

Julie shook her head and looked away. She was quiet for awhile, then dropped her head into her hands. Through her hands, she mumbled, “Just put it back in my ass. But be quick about it.”

Warren couldn't believe his ears. His sister was going to let Joe get off in her ass!

Joe apparently couldn't believe his ears either. His tone changing to that of a child on Christmas morning, he exclaimed, “What? Really? You sure?”

Through her hands again, Julie mumbled, “Yeah, now do it quick before I change my mind.”

Within seconds, Joe was thrusting repeatedly into her ass, saying things like, “Fuck yeah, baby,” “Your ass is so tight,” and “I can't believe you're letting me do this!”

The show didn't last for long though, as Joe started showing signs of his oncoming orgasm. It wasn't long before he threw his head back and screamed – practically roared – as he shot his load in Julie's ass.

Joe stayed as he was for nearly a minute after he shot his load. Then he pulled back and collapsed on the bed next to Julie, whispering to her how incredible she was for a few seconds before very clearly falling asleep.

Warren waited for his sister to move, but for several minutes after Joe passed out she stayed with her head in her hands and her ass in the air. Finally, she started to stretch her legs out beneath her. She only moved them a few inches before jerking them back to where they had been. Then she tried a new approach, and slowly leaned over on her side, inched her way away from Joe so as not to roll on him, and then rolled onto her back, her knees in the air. Warren heard her say, “Fuck.” She didn't scream it, she didn't sound angry. She just said it.

Unable to hear her emotion, Warren stopped time. He walked up to his sister to look at her face. She was staring emotionlessly at the ceiling. She didn't look like she had been crying. She didn't look like she was in pain. She just looked... bored.

The look actually kind of pissed Warren off. He had started to feel bad, started to think he might have gone too far, that he had done something to seriously mess with her. But here she was looking fine, meaning she made him worry about her for nothing.

Warren left and headed to his room, stopping to wash his hands on the way. Sitting on his bed, he started up time, laid back and went to sleep.

At two in the morning, Warren woke up to his cell phone alarm. He grabbed his cell phone and shut it off, then confused looked at the settings for the alarm. He slammed the phone into the bed as he realized he had set his phone the night before to go off daily, instead of just once. He laid there for a few minutes, pissed off at being awake.

Unable to get to sleep within the next few minutes, Warren announced to his room, “Fuck it.”

Sitting up, he pulled off his boxers and then stopped time. He got up and walked to his sister's room. Julie was still in the position he had seen her when she left, on her back with her knees up. But being asleep now, her knees had fallen apart somewhat, exposing her shaved pussy. Joe, meanwhile, was asleep on his side facing Julie, but a little less than a couple feet away, his top arm stretched out and holding Julie's breast that was closest to him. Both were sleeping above the covers.

Warren had to chuckle looking at Joe. Asleep and on his side, his dick had gone limp and was hanging down, maybe two and a half inches long, three tops. It looked like a little boy's penis on a man's body, and it was nearly hidden in his vast pubic hair.

Carefully, Warren lifted Joe's arm off his sister and placed it next to him. Then Warren smacked Julie's foot. He briefly started and stopped time again for her to wake up. Finally, he started jerking off, getting ready to cum on her again. Trying to speed things up, he ran his spare hand over his sister's body, for the first time appreciating her ample breasts, her dark nipples, long and hard from the cold night air in her room, her toned stomach, her shaved hot pussy – the outer lips big enough to hide all her inner folds, but when spread exposing her pink hole...

Warren pulled his hand back from his sister's pussy and stopped jerking off, suddenly realizing he nearly came to soon. Climbing onto the bed, Warren got on his knees, one leg on either side of his sister, careful not to hit her or Joe in any way. Above, he aimed his dick at her face and started jerking off. As he felt himself about to cum, he started up time.

He heard Julie gasp beneath him and he watched her face turn red as his first shot hit her in the nostril. Julie didn't even react as his next shot left a trail from her cheek, over her eye onto her forehead. Warren aimed lower and the next shot hit beneath her chin, and the following one left a trail from her chin across her open mouth to just above her upper lip. Julie continued to simply stare at her brother's dick as the next couple shots hit her cheek, and then the remainder dribbled onto her neck.

Since Julie didn't react this time, Warren kept jerking off til he felt empty, not stopping time again until he felt every last drop of cum was out of him. Then he went to the bathroom and got tissues to clean off his cum on his sister. He wiped it all off, though he did rub a little into her tongue, threw the tissues out in his room, and then went into her closet again as he started time.

Julie simply stared at the ceiling for about a minute or so and muttered, “Not again.”

She then brought her hands up to her face and rubbed her face then looked at her hands, finding nothing. She then made noises with her mouth like she had the night before. When she stopped, she just shook her head up at the ceiling, whispering, “What the fuck is wrong with me?”

Then Julie started to push her legs down flat. She had barely moved them when she made a sudden whining noise and jerked them back up. She turned her head towards Joe, looked at him for a few seconds, then shook her head. She rolled in the opposite direction of Joe, keeping her knees bent but now facing the side, and pulled a pillow over her head.

Warren stopped time and headed back to his room. He laid down and was back asleep in seconds.


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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2009 22:49
    this is one of the best stories ever keep em cuming im loving them, it has an actual interesting story that isn't just in the background while the character's have sex.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2009 23:27
    Almost as good as the first, it was just lacking some humor that was more present in the first. For part three, Warren should go to a mall and do stuff there and a part four should be at Jake's Party.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2009 23:35
    this is one of the best stories ever keep em cuming im loving them, it has an actual interesting story that isn't just in the background while the character's have sex.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 01:02
    This is un-fucking-beleivable keepem comin

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 02:07
    Add an antagonist and create a conflict and you'll have a novel. Nice job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 03:39
    Love this Story plese continue

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 03:50
    keep them comming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 06:29
    Great story. Keep on.

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  • uid
    uid
    13.08.2009 10:17
    I can definitely see some of this moving into real time. Very nicely written, I have enjoyed reading so far.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 14:05
    Very good story,keep writing eager to read what happens next

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  • %26lt%3B%26gt%3B%26lt%3B
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    13.08.2009 14:26
    Het, I dont know why this story just doesnt tunr me on :/ this could have had some great potential but you made the guy with this power a total nerd, And really? that part on the bus with marg(whatever her name is) made me want to puke. If you like it keep writing but im definetly done reading

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 16:41
    Great story. I can't wait to see what direction you go next. Family Fun? Pigmaleon - get him and Margaret together and she becomes hot? Meeting someone like him during his fun time? Keep it some what random? A little of everything? or something else?

    Whatever you do keep up the good work and have fun with this...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 17:32
    That was fucking great. Hurry up with the next one.

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  • 2big4u
    13.08.2009 17:41
    You could have write that Warren and his sister were together on party.His sister was dogy style fucking a drunk guy that passed out during sex.Warren watches them and when drunk guy passes out he quickly switches and fucks his sister while he's not in timestop...Something like that.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 19:54
    16:41:29 me to i think there should bee someone else like him (a girl maybe) a hot one at that

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 20:02
    Warren should find a girl with the same powers as him

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2009 22:29
    great story m8 , hope you come up with a full week worth of these storys, you should have him get some one pregnant aswell, carry on the good work (Y)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2009 00:44
    he needs to go into the girls lockeroom!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2009 06:51
    great story please make more maybe one where the main guy meets someone else who has the power but uses it in darker ways or add a girl who has the power to stop time too

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2009 23:08
    more more more please!! great story. i love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2009 17:09
    Otherwise ok, but what's up with the sex scenes? They last for two rows and are very boring. Make them longer and more describing to make this story an erotic one, and not just one about a guy who can stop time.

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  • wambam
    16.08.2009 17:35
    very nice give us more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2009 22:40
    What if when he is touching another person and stops time, they go with him? and he could take another guy along with him and they have a threesome on either side of a frozen girl?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2009 00:59
    this series is great. I love them. You should make him have sex with marget in real time though, when time isnt stopped but make her lose the dental gear and when she does she should be really hot. Everything else in the story is great, keep up the good work. GIVE US MORE!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2009 05:54
    i loved it just like the previous one. in the next episode, you should make warren have sex with ms. burkhart in real time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2009 16:58
    Please write more soon.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2009 14:46
    Keep it up!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2009 14:57
    I really enjoy this story. thank you. I hope you will see my comment and maybe next time when you post your story you will not write it this way (not the story) . I am a visually handicapped person and I usually have to enlarge the text or use my window eyes software to read. The way you posted this part of the story means I can't see everything in one screen and I will have to scroll the screen to see the other part. Its really hard to read that way.

    Hope you will paste your story like how you did for day 1 and 2. thanks.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.08.2009 12:25
    I couldn't even read it all please remember the people on iPhones it's so hard to read with long sentences like that.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.08.2009 20:24
    Excellent storyline, I would probably read even without the sex. Keep up the great work and give us more. Maybe a little something with the sister in the future? The "nightmares" she thinks she's having sparked a moment with them?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.08.2009 21:31
    More

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.08.2009 22:34
    Amazing story and great sex. Keep it up!

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  • KentonVK
    20.08.2009 03:25
    I'm liking this a lot so far, Keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.08.2009 16:02
    really good story. I actually like the idea of him stopping time just to fuck with people. Great idea. Maybe you could put in a little bit of incest with Warren and Julie, when time isn't stopped. I know you don't take these comments to seriously, but it is a thought. Great story, keep up the good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2009 10:03
    <---- is waiting somewhat impatiently for the next chapter and

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2009 10:03
    is waiting somewhat impatiently for the next chapter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2009 23:48
    keep writing,very good story,he needs to have a threesome in family

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 00:18
    cool, nice plot, but make a story where he pops a girls cherry with time stopped, like in the middle of class

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 00:56
    I can't wait for Day 5!!!

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  • bbanks69
    22.08.2009 01:56
    Don't make me wait, when will five come out, this is one of the best series that I have read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 02:24
    would love for him to fuck the Margaret girl from the Bus.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 02:24
    Ah great stories! ive been waiting for a good detailed story that is worth reading to and not just something to jack off to. i love the plot too. i have thoughts of how things might end up so im waiting with great excitment for the next chapter. please hurry and post it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 02:46
    sooooo good need part 5

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 04:14
    Oh meh gawd
    This is so gewd.
    ... :O
    OH MEH GAWD

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 04:14
    Oh meh gawd
    This is so gewd.
    ... :O
    OH MEH GAWD

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 05:07
    Awesome story, one of the best cums I've ever had - saved it for the very end too :p

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 08:22
    Very good story, I like the idea of being able to stop time and do what you please to whomever you please, plus this is a great series, good job, keep on writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 14:22
    very well done, please continue...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 14:47
    thanks this part is easier to read compared to the previous one. please continue. I really enjoyed it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2009 17:10
    excellent story............ i can see a romance blooming......... proceed with it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 00:54
    Great story!!! keep going on with it !!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 01:54
    can't wait for Day 5

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 05:40
    Hope his school grades don't start slipping... though being able to stop time would give him plenty of study time.
    Well done. I wasn't that excited about the mother and daughter part but you're writing something for everyone.

    A bit more proof reading, though. Not many and nothing serious but a few errors. Definitely fewer than most. . . . Good, detailed and imaginative work.

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  • Woody+B.+Hungwell
    23.08.2009 12:37
    I'm in agreement with the other posters, Great Story! Keep up the good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 12:55
    Please continue these stories get me off like none other

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 13:46
    Wow indeed way longer then the previous chapters but that isn't a bad thing XD

    Really like where you seem to be going with the sister although I wonder how long a guy could feeel guilty over something like that when there is almost no chance of being caught.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 13:59
    Great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 20:03
    This just keeps getting better and better.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 21:25
    extremely well written and surprisingly imaginative.

    i was pleased to find that at no point was i bored and the story invites the reader to contemplate about what will happen next.

    i am looking forward to the next part and this is the first story that makes me want to. well done.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 23:30
    Very good story so far. Keep posting.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 23:31
    Keep em coming, story is great. What happens next

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2009 23:57
    nice, can't wait for day 5!

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  • Sharkie
    24.08.2009 01:07
    Interesting concept. I'm anxious to see where you're going with this. Well written with few grammatical and spelling errors. Held my interest even with the excessive length. I admire your imagination.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2009 01:13
    great read, looking forward to more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2009 02:50
    yes, very nice series. cant wait for the next episode!

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  • lord
    24.08.2009 12:58
    the only thing why it isnt perfect is the mother daughter thing but i will look over it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2009 19:13
    This is great... hope to see something happen between him and Sarah!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2009 21:45
    My favourite so far :D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.08.2009 20:35
    There has to be more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2009 18:01
    great story, cant wait for more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 03:32
    Awesome. I love the slow and manipulative build up that gets the mother and daughter to mess around. Well done.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 12:34
    Simply Amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 13:45
    a great series of stories, always been a fantasy of mine to stop time and mess with things like thing.. makes me horny as hell

    look forward to the next installment :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 14:05
    thanks I really loved it. will definitely pm you my thoughts.

    I'm so tired now I can't finish reading this part will come back again tomorrow to read.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 14:29
    One of the best I have ever read, please continue.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 15:30
    Again great story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 17:15
    Brilliant. Hope Julie doesn't kill herself though.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 17:36
    *starts a slow clapping*

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 18:35
    Excellent story and great writing. Keep em coming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 19:53
    i think you need to make the sister try to suduce her brother it would make things more interesting knowing she is willingly doing things to him rather than her just thinking it's all her imagination plus it will make things more interesting for warren

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 20:15
    i think you need to make the sister try to suduce her brother it would make things more interesting knowing she is willingly doing things to him rather than her just thinking it's all her imagination plus it will make things more interesting for warren

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  • JJharuka
    30.08.2009 21:26
    i love it :P:P

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  • wowee
    30.08.2009 22:17
    in day 6 the sister has to seduce him!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 22:21
    I normally don't comment on stories but so far this has been one of the best stories I have read on here. Keep up the good work. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 23:48
    Clap clap ... Great story dude make alotttttt more and make them fast these are great!! And add More pissing stuff with his sister

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2009 23:50
    The others were better do more school stuff

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  • RWSharkie
    31.08.2009 00:07
    I expect both the sister and the mother will eventually get fucked by Warren in real time, not while time is stopped. Keep up the good work, great story. Can't wait for the next episode.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 00:27
    I like sandy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 00:35
    I dont know who or what gave you the idea for these stories, but I seriously thank you for writing it. It is the best stories/series I have ever read. Please continue with more chapters.

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  • PaddyWagon
    31.08.2009 01:06
    This is actually a very interesting story to read even if you don't get sexually aroused by it. Please write more. Maybe incorporate some real time sex with his mother or sister. It sounds as if they both want it.

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  • tallyho
    31.08.2009 01:08
    building well, I like how he is finding out how much better it is in real time. And it nice to see how he feels some guilt, makes it better.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 02:52
    only problem i have with it so far is how he just messes around with his sister, im sure theirs more girls he can be fcking thruought the day besides putting his dick inf ront of his sisters face all day long and freezing /unfreezing time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 03:50
    In a way, it'd be neat to have both Julie and her mother simply discover that they're pregnant but I like, better, the idea of them willingly opening their legs for him, fucking him back and then fiercely orgasming as they sense full loads of his cum being pumped into their ovary ducts.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 05:21
    One of the more high quality stories on here, I wish all writers could master the arts of anticipation and character development as you have in this story.

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  • pwagro
    31.08.2009 06:04
    I disagree with 'Reader's need for only getting down & dirty.
    The main character, Warren is just becoming more introspective as he learns about the complexities of human behavior. He only just lost his sexual virginity & is only now becoming aware of real world sexuality in himself & others. This is a sex oriented story in which the writer has Warren learning at an accelerated pace, the scope of public & private sexual behaviors of both the young & mature.
    Although I have had some concerns of the limited scope of imagination & storyline that the writer has allowed Warren in the previous chapters, this latest one shows a broader view. However, I was disappointed that Warren show no conscience whatsoever in stealing money, even justifying it because the victim ‘could afford it’? I am just more traditional thinking re my non-sexual morals! Overall, the story keeps the reader hooked into the storyline & intrigued its possibilities if we were in Warren’s enviable position.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 08:46
    Good story line. Could do without the taking of the money! That greatly devalues the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 11:19
    Keep up the good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 11:33
    @pwagro
    Isn't his lack of conscience part of his character and his development of the course of the story has been to slowly become a more moral person. Initial we see him as angry and violent, hating his life and then ironically, as he gain and uses his supernatural powers he becomes more humanised. I think this story is true to its character, uncomprimising in telling a fully fleshed out, well bodied story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 13:11
    found time to complete reading this part. looking forward to more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 16:46
    great story... cant wait for Day 6

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  • freerdr
    31.08.2009 16:55
    Very cleverly written, especially the earlier stories. I like the considered consequences or time being stopped tor everyone else but not Warren. Embarrassing the bullies is also fun.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 17:37
    great story. warren should find out sandy has the same powers. that would make the story interesting!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.08.2009 20:52
    When is he gunna fuck julie all the way?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 21:23
    more freeze sex plz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2009 23:39
    great story. i think that you should have Warren make Julie "hallucinate" that Warren is fucking her. Maybe have him make it look like an erotic dream. like he comes in all suave and shit and then he fucks her, real gently and nice. i think, assuming Warren would be like me if I had those powers and a bitch siser, that it would be more tortuous for Julie that way.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2009 03:59
    Great story so far, although i really hope that Warren stays the only one with this powers and doesnt tell anyone ( he would be an idiot if he did ) I also really like how he handles his Sister and how he slowly gets into incest lol, what i DO find strange is that he doesnt mind seeing his mom and Sister do it together but he finds himself disgusted when thinking of his mom that way, bit of a double standard isnt it?

    Its also funny how both women in his family have gotten used to seeing him naked that they dont even blink or get upset about it.

    Hmm i really hope he does that girl that he sits next to on the bus, im quite interested in seeing that, i really hope that Warren doesnt suddenly feel like that he's cheating on his girlfriend when he's doing that stuff, that would be pretty disappointing lol.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2009 04:21
    The sister should seduce warren in real time and have a proper fuck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2009 20:43
    verry good but not so long next time. Great read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2009 06:49
    He should go on a crime spree! Freeze time, rob a fricking bank, no one knows, lol-tastic

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2009 20:05
    Awesome story, here's an idea you could use........ice. Have warren literally freeze a couple places to see how people would react.....keep up the good work, next story please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2009 23:25
    great storys please contin

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2009 12:31
    sucked

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  • fudgeguy
    03.09.2009 18:05
    you have a fantastic skill. you can write a properly erotic story, and yet still write a fantastic fantsy story. your plot is a read in itself, and i would probably read this story without the porn. with it, it counts in my book as bloody brilliant.
    P.S it also takes great skill to finish a porno story and keep the audience begging for more without the use of erotica, yet you pull this of perfectly 10/10

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  • fudgeguy
    03.09.2009 18:40
    you have a fantastic skill. you can write a properly erotic story, and yet still write a fantastic fantsy story. your plot is a read in itself, and i would probably read this story without the porn. with it, it counts in my book as bloody brilliant.
    P.S it also takes great skill to finish a porno story and keep the audience begging for more without the use of erotica, yet you pull this of perfectly 10/10

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  • ayanami
    03.09.2009 20:09
    great story cant wait till the next part comes out. also to the guy that said it sucked, just because you cant write dont put other peoples work down.

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  • Woody+B.+Hungwell
    05.09.2009 03:20
    I'm like Warren, looking forward to a Monday for the first time in a long time!
    Great story, keep up the good work and thank you for all that you do!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 09:40
    Loving this series of stories so far! Please keep them coming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 09:44
    Great story,one of the best in this series.Hope you'll continue.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 09:52
    You accidentally called Warren "Jake" and Sandy "Julie" once each, and in my opinion Warren is taking more risks with his power than anyone with half a brain would actually do, but I continue to enjoy this series and look forward to the next chapter.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 13:01
    I love all of your work, you're the best writer on this site. Your descriptive skills are outstanding, keep up the AMAZING work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 14:33
    Great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 14:46
    The rest of the class passed mostly smoothly after **Jake** got back to his seat.

    **Julie** couldn't finish her thought.

    Wrong names - easy mistake though, your one of the best writers on here and i've been following your stories as soon as they come out! Keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 15:30
    Seriously, best thing I've ever read in my entire life!
    I come home from work hoping that you've posted the next story in the series everyday!

    Keep going for atleast another 20 episodes of timestop

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  • ss5034
    06.09.2009 15:48
    once again another amazing story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 19:11
    Another amazing chapter to this story, I hope you continue. I look forward to their postings and check daily. It's nice to see a well thought out story. Most of the stuff on this site approaches the subject of sex with the subtlety of a child smashing dolls together.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 19:32
    keep it coming they are amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 20:10
    Great story. I liked that he finally fucked his sister, maybe he could fuck his mom next. I like the risk he's taking with his powers.

    Great story. I look forward to reading the rest of the series. I'm actually checking the website everyday to see if you've posted the next chapter. Honestly, after you're done. Try getting this shit published into a full blown book. Great stuff. Absolutely great.

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  • tallyho2
    06.09.2009 20:18
    great stories, love teh way they are going.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 20:57
    what i would do with the ability 2 stop time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 20:59
    As i was reading the part where he was about to cum in his sistser, in my head i kept repeating to myself "dont cum in her dont cum in her!!"

    Haha! Really looking forward to all the future stories of this series.

    Favorited your profile for easy access ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2009 21:54
    great story, more please is all i say to it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 00:13
    GREAT STORY!! i love all the stories you post. please post more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 00:19
    Really diggin this story line man, since Day 1.



    Keep cranking em out please :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 00:45
    Another great addition to an amazing series.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 02:11
    make the mom come into his room and jack him off in the middle of the night

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 02:39
    Beautiful

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 02:45
    Wow. This is turning into a thriller :P

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 02:45
    Wow. this is turning into a thriller!

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  • km4xX
    07.09.2009 02:52
    Another phenomenal story, from an even better author! Well done, StoryGal96, and keep up the good work. =]

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    07.09.2009 05:30
    this is one freakin amazing read, the previous 4 stories were amazing as well (days 1 and 2 being counted as 1). Love all your work story gal, keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 09:24
    I like it.... a never ending supply of fuck partners. I can't wait till his mother seduces him into fucking her and takes his cum into her belly. Julie will never get preferrential treatment, again.... but then, she's already getting an attitude adjustment. I don't think it'll be long before she just accepts what she's been 'dreaming' as fate and asks him to fuck her.
    I wonder how long it'll be before one or more of the girls has to explain to her parents that she's experienced a 'miraculous conception'. It'd be funny if it turned out that his sister wasn't taking birth control and, when he pumped his cum into her, she'd gotten inseminated.
    You'll have to explain why she's preventing herself from having an orgasm and make her involuntarily have one, anyway, the next time she's 'dreaming' that her brother is cumming in her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 09:47
    I sort of expected his sister to get kinky with him when he pissed on her foot, since she has a, so far unexplained, 'thing' about piss.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 10:22
    How about 'time stopping' the teacher and having her repeatedly see and feel his hard on sliding between the lips of her cunt? Let it build up in her until she 'needs' to find out what it'd be like to have him shove his cock inside of her and fuck her.

    Also, I seem to recall that he already fucked her, once, so she could miss her next period and discover that she's pregnant.

    He could discover his huge cocked buddy having a hardon in the bathroom... stop time... bring him to her empty classroom, strip them both, lay her across her desk and bury his cock in her and 'fuck her' with it for a while and then start time for two or three seconds before restoring each to how and where they were. They'd both have the vivid mental picture and the physical sensation experience, which could build into them doing it on their own, in real time. Of course, if it was me, I'd make it build into her wanting me to fuck her.... just like he's doing with his sister and mother.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 10:26
    I sort of expected his sister to get kinky with him when he pissed on her foot, since she has a, so far unexplained, 'thing' about piss.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 12:30
    REALLY amazing... perfect sofar...but PLEASE don't let him fuck his own mother... i would prefer anyone else but not her.. that would be really disgusding

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 12:32
    he also could "borrow" some money from the bank and buy ...i dont know.. amazing things...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 15:01
    i love your stories you should really keep writing more there brilliant

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  • ovid58
    07.09.2009 15:02
    Well, I've managed to read it all - I cannot say I enjoy it, since it messes up with the family members. What the fuck?!? I don't have brothers and sisters, but, if I did, I surely would have respected them.
    And - fucking your own mother - this seems to me really gross.
    Anyway, there are, probably, people who enjoy this story, so I'll just NOT vote, either way...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 15:29
    The best stories I have ever read please keep writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 20:32
    Warren is not a nice person. Very selfish and mean. Those who have been abused so easily become abusers when the tables turn. His treatment of his sister is terrible. Not wanting her to have any sexual fulfilment... What an asshole!

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  • Reader1001
    07.09.2009 21:25
    make her finally just accept it and one night while hes in his bed she runs in pounces on him and they fuck like crazy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 21:30
    I've been following since you posted day 4. Waiting for the next stories is like waiting for Christmas. It's so disappointing having to wait for the next stories to be written. It would be nice if you, yourself, could stop time and just write all of them at once so we don't have to wait :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 22:36
    If he did a major crime he'd get caught like most do freezing time does not change forensics.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 22:39
    First of all nice job. Second you are one of my favorite authors on this site. It is hard to find an author who actually puts thought into their work. Third, I don't know if ur planning this but the mom and warren should have real time consensual sex and maybe even a realtime titty fuck. Those are just suggestions by the way, if you think they will hinder ur work, disregard them by all means.
    Keep 'em cumming :) 8======D ~~~~ ( . Y . )

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2009 23:19
    Dude that was fucking amazing have him fuck his mother she sounds bangin!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.09.2009 01:07
    you need to have the mom and sister try to seduce him!!!!!

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  • Elarabe
    08.09.2009 02:18
    Best story I have read in a very long time. Keep up the good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.09.2009 06:57
    Great story. You have created a totally despicable character proving the old addage that power corrupts.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2009 01:03
    This has got to be one of the best out of your other Timestop stories,please continue. :)

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  • BearFeet
    09.09.2009 04:43
    When he freezes time, everyone else stops, but he keeps moving. So isnt he still aging while everyone else isnt? At the rate that he freezes things, wouldnt he be shaving dozens of years off of his lifespan?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2009 20:40
    this is a VERY detailed story, almost a "novel". i think it is a great story and have read it all, although i found it rather difficult to get off to. since it took me like 2 hrs to read, thats a long time to be roughing it haha. very the story had me interested the whole time, love the new concept

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.09.2009 11:37
    "Timestop" ??? Why not call it what it is?
    NECROPHILIA in mufti.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.09.2009 11:43
    ilove your storys , his sister should get pregnant (by him fucking her) carry on with the storys loving every chapter :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.09.2009 15:31
    noo lay off the incest and have more sex in school. maybe put people in "embaressing" situations

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.09.2009 16:27
    I'm after reading all the Timestops and i have a suggestion, Warren should find out that Sandy has the same powers as him!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.09.2009 21:07
    I just read all your time stop stories... couldn't stop... the best i've read... please, please, please continue the story!!!

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  • Dave
    Мужчина Dave 300
    10.09.2009 22:46
    great series, keep it up...

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  • adude
    11.09.2009 14:43
    Yeah the incest is a bit much, I hate having to skip half of this well-written story to get past it, but replacing that with the ability to stop time WITH Sandy so the two of them can fuck with people would be very cool

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2009 00:44
    i love this story! because i saw that there were 6 right off i saved one for each day. and now im waiting for tuesday to come... maybe its a reach but heres an idea.. not saying you have to use it but just saying... what if his sister had an ablity? something to even the odds if you would..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2009 11:07
    Fantastic, Please don't change where this story is going with his family, You have built it so well with his family that it would mess the story up if you just cut them out the picture. I love the fact that since day 1 with his sister and mom treating him like shit, to him now 'In control' of them. Please keep up the good work with the family and those out side the family. Pissing storys seem to be your strong point, not a big fan of it but the way you write it makes me open to it.

    Seeing as your a female writer you have a great way of describing the body is such a way that you can tell you are who you are and not some 14yr kid.

    top marks and really cant wait to read the next day.

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  • james
    Мужчина james 24
    12.09.2009 21:19
    THE COMMENTER AFTER FUDGEGUY REALLY GUY, U NEED TO STOP READING THESE it seems to me u read them for yer own nasty sexualities dude jus admire the true value of the story and story gal 6 u rock :]

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2009 21:53
    Hey,we are waiting on the next chapter! This really a great story,keep them coming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2009 22:07
    plz right more on this serious is is soooo damn good!!!!! hurry!!

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  • af19
    12.09.2009 23:01
    love the story hopeing for day 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2009 01:07
    very nice.. looking forward to a part 7 and many more..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2009 02:52
    I eagerly await the next chapter. your character development is quite impressive. you've a good imagination. Also I like the fact that you really push the envelope of sensual experience.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2009 03:43
    I really like your stories I feel that you have done very well in displaying the characters stress in the beggining of the story and then him going to mild extremes to really piss off his sister.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2009 11:23
    six days later and he still hasn't done the one thing i think would be first for a high school boy gone into the lockerroom

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2009 19:16
    Amazing. Very good work. I await the next day.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2009 20:41
    great story. Deff more pissing parts with him and his sister. Many some pee drinking or more pissing on her or him . Can't wait for more!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2009 21:44
    need to have a part with a dog, either on his sister or mother, or both

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2009 22:01
    I can't wait for Day 7!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2009 02:38
    i have to say that many a time have i wished i could stop time and do whats being done in this story unfortunatly i cant but o well i love the detail while time stopped how things stay still but me personaly id be a little more perverted more sex and let his sister find out whats going on and have them start fucking on a regular

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2009 21:11
    Can't keep us waiting for this long. It feels like its been years since the last chapter. Awesome story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2009 00:42
    dude seriously...i see your point but its a story...the authors own world, so who cares? i like the story very much by the way.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.09.2009 07:47
    When will number 7 come out? I've read them all faithfully and just LOVE them. I wonder if we'll find out why his sister likes to drink and play with her own pee.
    I've also read your other stories, and love the one you re-wrote about the band room piano kid.
    You do AWESOME work. Please don't keep us waiting much longer.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2009 14:18
    bad story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2009 19:31
    Best day yet. All that needs to be said.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.09.2009 08:04
    personaly i love ur stories cant wait for more would like consensual with mom and the pee was a lil perverted but i wouldnt let it get outa hand please release 7 soon oh and mabe make his gf bi

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    16.09.2009 09:14
    I think you should include rape in story description, since it clearly is. Quite frankly Warren is a really disgusting character who walks around, rapes and sexually assaults girls and tries to drive his sister into suicide.

    Clearly he tries to justify that because all girls except for Sandy and had it coming but the work doesn't work that way. No one deserved that and it is pretty ridiculous that we are supposed to believe that he is the victim by making behave nice to his girlfriend and saying all other guys act like pigs.

    Maybe I am unfair to hold this to the standard of a real story but seeing how much effort you put into this rather then the average story on this site I think it is justified.

    In the end, there is no difference whether he rapes a girl and erases her memory or does what he does here.

    But you have a great writing style and I didn't really find any grammar mistakes.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.09.2009 10:21
    Dont listen to that MF, people will try to drag your story down BUT THIS IS A PORN SITE.

    Believe me, this has been one of my child fantasies since I was.. 10? Thank god some one did it.

    PLEASE WRITE MORE!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.09.2009 10:21
    Oh and turn the sex into something consentual

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.09.2009 14:35
    Ok... you need 2 post the next day sooon!!! =D I got a bad case of the abstinence

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.09.2009 18:27
    I really enjoyed this series. I like your writing style, I find that I enjoy most of your stories. As most of your readers I also look forward to number seven as I only come to this site to read. I can't believe your imagination. WOW! excellent!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.09.2009 21:13
    Lolz a thow he likes to fuck with people good stuff.

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  • RandyRadish
    16.09.2009 23:47
    I have to say I absolutely love how you write. It's much less of the "My huge cock had sex with this virgin girl and she totally came and said she loved me and I swear I'm not lonely in real life" and more of a less egoistical writing style.

    Or something. Eagerly awaiting 7th installment. -thumbs up-

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  • Lothos
    17.09.2009 06:28
    You know, if you don't want to read it, don't. Quit being so high and mighty. If you weren't on this site, which has incest, rape, murder, and bunches of other socially unacceptable subjects, you would not be exposed to it. Cut out the holier than thou bullshit, ok?

    That being said, StoryGal96, excellent work. Keep it up, no matter what the hypocrites say.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.09.2009 08:34
    man......awsome writing style. simply one of the best among the rest i think. --thumbs up-- simply eagerly waiting for the next installment. the genre is awsome tho.....time stopper....wow....this plus an awsome story line and characters and ur super way of writing......deeply respect u!! please post the next batch soon......i think no one can wait for it!!! Thanx a lot for publishin it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2009 13:10
    Hey,when are you goung to write the next chapter.We are waiting!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2009 15:07
    When is day seven coming out

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2009 17:22
    hey storygal96 you might consider breaking down the days into two parts that way there isnt so much of a break between days. other than the waiting in between awosme stories i read one the day it comes out then i cant wait for the next one keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2009 22:33
    You need to make a new one! I can't wait!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2009 06:47
    that ws great keep the stories coming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2009 08:00
    WHERES DAY 7....its been a week already, CMon m8... Keep em Cummin.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2009 19:16
    Cmon bring up day 7, we're lall craving to see were this is going... Plus you've done a story every 10 days about this topic when is the next one coming??????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.09.2009 08:14
    there may be riots if 7 doesn't come out soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.09.2009 11:38
    This is the only story that kept me coming back everyday to check on updates. Don't let your fans down!

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  • TimeStopEr
    19.09.2009 17:13
    Can't wait for the next update, hopin for it soon. This is the only reason I keep commin back to XNXX at all anymore. Just for this story!! Its amazing!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2009 04:27
    we are all like addicts craveing our next fix! gotta gotta gotta have it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2009 13:57
    please, for all of our sanity.. write day 7. We readers badly needs to see how it continues!!!! fantastic imagination! highly commendable.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2009 18:48
    It's been close to two weeks, pleeeeease come out with day 7. Quit torturing us.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2009 20:43
    Quite possibly the greatest story ever made on this site

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2009 20:59
    Quite possibly the greatest story ever made on this site

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  • anonymously
    20.09.2009 21:41
    Damn...he totally screwed up his sister...literally too...

    And him having a girlfriend is a kinda nice idea too...though Barbara confused me a bit - where are you goin' with her?

    Anyway it would be...quite nice if you would write and update Day 7, this story definitely rocks...

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  • Critical+D.
    20.09.2009 22:24
    Great work! If you don't already, you could and should make a living doing this. You should profusely thank whoever gave you this premise. It just so happens this ability has always been a fantasy of mine and probably many others'. Makes for a super set-up for erotica. Keep 'em coming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2009 02:18
    Dude please write more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2009 02:33
    please write day 7 please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2009 02:38
    That's it. Let's start a riot people.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2009 06:20
    DUDE!!!!!!
    awesome stories!!!!!!!! really. keep writing man. your doing a awesome job

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2009 15:30
    Ok enough waiting riot !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2009 16:42
    Omg.....................day seven pleeeeeeeeeease.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2009 20:10
    plz continue, this is so fucking good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2009 20:22
    Great story

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  • officialburr
    21.09.2009 21:33
    Wow, i love this series. You're a great author. Keep it up :]

    (funny how people think you're a guy lol)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2009 23:13
    Holy crap just write day 7. Ive been checking in like everyday for two weeks and i get nothing. Hurry up!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 00:01
    RIOT!!!!!!COME ON!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 00:51
    Write another!

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  • nck25
    22.09.2009 05:52
    hiiiiiiiiiiiii awsome dude, love ur writing. keep up the good stuff


    still waiting for...
    Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 11:00
    lol its pretty good i find it funny how ppl are like freaking out over it cuz you havint written day 7 yet lol its funny i think you have created a new addiction :P good story tho keep up the good work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 15:17
    Your stories are awesome. could you write a story about a kid who controls the size of his dick and fun he has with that

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 15:58
    I have to agree, please continue writing and add further days.

    I also like the ideal and suggestion from "2009-09-22 15:17:46". I even thought about Warren going into a girls lockerroom or some thing of gym class or at a mall or even of doing some thing with his mom (,but not necessary in stopping time; if you choose to do so) or any thing else beyond the school life and home life.

    There where parts that I was laughing so hard that it was hard to read it, but keep it up. I loved it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 16:52
    C'mon, did anyone ask for detox ??? Igot so addicted to this story I'm dying to see what'll happen next. Please write/post Day 7...
    And by the way great writing style, its also true in your other stories (had to do something while waiting for the next chapter hee hee hee)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 18:19
    wouldnt it suck if shes abandoned us? got us on this horrible timestop addiction and then left >.>?

    P.S., to the person below me some of fbailey's stories arent that bad

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 18:43
    Where's part 7?
    please release it soon, we're dyin' here

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 20:23
    DAY 7!!! I LOVE YOUR STORIES. THEY ARE AMAZING!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 22:12
    hahaha i lmfao it was hilarious im not even reading it to get off anymore. you should make a it more of like a normal story instead of only sexual like maybe him getting money or idk finding his father and beating the crap out of him while time is stopped

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  • Rooney86
    22.09.2009 22:53
    DUDE HURRY IT UP... ITS BEEN OVER A WEEK... WHERES DAY 7!!!!.... ur stories are great... u best be writing like a whole book.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2009 23:33
    1-6 came out not far from the last but whats taking 7 it better be realy realy great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 01:17
    You can't abandon us like this!! Either post day 7 or tell us what the hold up is!! Plz!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 14:13
    wheres day 7 please hurry

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 14:23
    get rid of the mum stuff more sis stuff also you might wanna add some bondage something like while his sister or someone else is sleeping take them to a public place and tie her up nude maybe do her or something

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 14:48
    Make Warren and Julie get into a romantic relationship

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 14:57
    why have you abanded us? noooooooooooo!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 16:17
    love ur stories :P but plz hurry up with day 7 been looking for it now for a while. Keep the good work up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 17:47
    @ 2009-09-23 14:23:25
    That'd sorta break character, Julie doesn't know its really her brother, and if it was in a public place with bondage...pretty sure someone would tell her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 17:48
    hope she comes out with like day 7-12 all at once...thatd b great. each as long as day 6 was though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 19:44
    RAR, that is the noise a disgruntled reader makes (or a compressed file) I like your story and would love to see what happens next, hopefully you bring in this kids father as ANOTHER TIME STOPPER! Oh, the antics that would ensue. Just a thought.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 23:43
    Great story! Can't wait for day 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 13:22
    Please have more mom stuff!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 18:26
    @2009-09-07 20:32:46 I think it's acceptable to torture someone who has tortured you it's like killing someone who murdered your mother, understandable.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 20:04
    love the storie day 7 please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 20:59
    Great story. Keep it up!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 23:26
    You, my dear author, can be described as simply the best writer of adult fiction i have ever encountered. The way you graphically detail your scenes and select the most well suited words to weave this story into existance is truely amazing. I have read all of them, this is my first time commenting, and i hope dearly to see the next installment appear soon. Well done!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2009 03:44
    Good shit, went in and out of third person though. Who's telling the story? Warren?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 00:39
    My GOD, you are one of the most pathetic writers on this site. You really hate women! No wonder you're writing crappy porn -- no flesh-and-blood woman would let you near her. Looks like a lifetime of handjobs for you unless you get some therapy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 01:58
    to the reader below me:

    i think you would find, if you payed more attention, that this particular author is in fact a woman, as her name is storygal. Just thought i should point it out. i hope you feel rediculously stupid now. oh, and she's a fucking excellent author.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 04:36
    day 7 pleeeeeassseeeee

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 11:56
    day 7 please!!!!!!!!!! this is so amazing... and it's completely original!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 16:25
    I wanna add to the poster at 1:58:34 that I agree, plus that if you dont like it, dont read t, itd as simple as that. Kudos to StoryGal96, awsome stoey and I cant wait for day 7 =) I to wait for day 7 with much antisipatation

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 22:00
    so what's taking 7 so long?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2009 01:11
    Great story! I am eagerly awaiting day 7!

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  • zetanian75
    27.09.2009 11:06
    i wish this story will not end! it's super interesting it really blow my mind to the fullest......

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  • Random
    27.09.2009 11:31
    I come to this website everyday just to check if Day 7 is up!! PLEASE put it up soon hopefully before October!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2009 13:19
    Please hurry with part 7!!!! I have been waiting very patiently for it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2009 17:41
    I won't give up my hope this is such a good series, I hope u didn't die or anything

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  • fig450
    28.09.2009 01:11
    whats takin day 7 so long? its been three weeks since day 6

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2009 15:42
    I really like it, great work!
    Funny thing, as a boy I had this fantasy of stopping time, too. All forgot about it until I read this. Cool :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2009 16:58
    Has anyone thought to PM her?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2009 17:33
    I pmd her but she didnt reply. hope nothing bad happend to her!

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  • me
    me
    28.09.2009 21:23
    what if there is no day 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 00:54
    Might be on holiday

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  • Larry
    29.09.2009 04:11
    This story was so overly long that it lost much of its impact about one third of the way in. The best and juiciest part was when Warren penetrated his girl friend and they had fabulous sex, but that portion unfortunately was too short. The scenes with his sister were totally out of whack with no interest at all, ditto for the port9ons where he made time stand still to merely play with the girls' breasts, etc. No heat whatsoever there. It would have been much better if he had intercourse with his girl several times and forgot about stopping time or fooling around with his sister!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 11:10
    Good stories but I am not really into the whole "pissing" deal. Although some other people might be that's my only beef with the story.

    You're a great writer and I will continue to read any more additions to this fabulous story.

    Keep up the good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 13:10
    this story is legendary lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 23:39
    it would suck if she got hit by a car or died and the story just ends

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.09.2009 12:22
    Did 8:25:49 just leave a blank comment? wth?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.09.2009 13:12
    Yeah, 23:39:00, that would suck for us. But do you know who that would suck more for? Her.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.09.2009 15:55
    Im starting to get pissed off. Hurry up its not funny. Im serious. I will find you. And it wont be good. So hurry.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.09.2009 21:49
    We could vote for someone else to write the rest

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  • marq123
    01.10.2009 00:10
    Yeah, but if someone else wrote it, it wouldn't be written quite as well as it is now. Also, I like where she's taking it. I would hate to see her vision ruined

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2009 12:30
    Must... know..rest of story!!! Sort of like waiting for the next volume of a book to come out.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2009 17:45
    i personally think that its over or shes just to busy ive seen alot of stories end at chapter7 or 9 so im not expecting much more than this because it is hard to write past that for some reason.......its real dissapointing, i thought it was going some where

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2009 19:51
    It's kind of funny how we All are want to read this next chapter! SOO PLEASE Write another one don't leave it off there.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2009 21:56
    this was fucking terrible. i cant believe you like incest. people like you should be raped and killed like the niggers in the south.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2009 06:16
    Lol if i was her i wouldn't post a day 7 seeing how much you guys are obsessing over it >.<

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  • zilla
    02.10.2009 06:34
    can't wait for the next chapter. so many angles you can explore. also i must say i love your writing , all your stories flow so well !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2009 08:28
    Well, I hope you aren't her because thats a dick move.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2009 18:15
    Please Please PLEASE!!!! Write chapter seven soon. I love this story and want to hear more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2009 18:18
    Please Please PLEASE!!!! Write chapter seven soon. I love this story and want to hear more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2009 23:26
    Great story. Will wait for day seven. Some time soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2009 23:53
    i think shes waiting for it to hit 100000 views

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2009 04:23
    Don't listen to the idiot who commented before me. This was pretty amazing, and you're such a good writer in general; the story flows pretty well and there are no grammar or spelling errors that I could find. Do you write non-pornographic stories as well? I'd be interested in reading some.

    Great job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2009 04:35
    we want more!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2009 04:48
    Don't listen to the idiot who commented before me. This was pretty amazing, and you're such a good writer in general; the story flows pretty well and there are no grammar or spelling errors that I could find. Do you write non-pornographic stories as well? I'd be interested in reading some.

    Great job.

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  • Durbin
    03.10.2009 16:56
    Bar far the best series I have ever read!!! Please keep them coming. Don't be like everyone else and stop half way through. Atleast finish the series.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2009 19:33
    Come on. it's been over 3 weeks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2009 22:53
    Author is being a Douche to her own bag

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2009 15:49
    Hurry the fuck up. I check everyday and i just get more pissed off everyday

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  • Anonymously
    04.10.2009 16:11
    So far, still good. Find it amusing that the sister drinks her piss and dramatic about anal or bored with the shrimp-dick Joe has. Positive rating so far, a 8.5/10.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2009 17:26
    all you people commenting, give it positive votes, raise the rating on iy. maybe that will work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2009 19:44
    so i think the story is done since its been a while

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2009 19:57
    come on. i'v been checking every day and its getting annoying >:(

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  • Durbin
    04.10.2009 22:06
    Ok its startin to get old!!! I asked for u not to be like everyone else? Guess u don't care huh?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2009 07:46
    You might want to expand on his abilities. The sex is good and so is the story line but warren needs to exand his abilities or find a new interesting way to use them.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2009 13:26
    Hey have some respect, I cant imagine that writing ths stuff is easyand dome over night. If she needs time, we wait.

    Thanx for the great story Storygal, and with the remark above in mind I wanna say that the first thing I do when I get home is to check for day 7 =)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2009 18:22
    hey guys and ladies i think we just have to accept that its over. a to be continued that never will be

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2009 01:47
    @2009-09-24 18:26:26 agreed!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2009 02:22
    nah she musta quit it was an alright story tho but not the best

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2009 15:59
    i really like the story so far. Don't quit! ignore the peanut gallery!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2009 03:47
    i think its really good. I was fucking laughing through most of it. Lol still am, and its pretty erotic. I think you should do more. <3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2009 05:02
    Something happened to her obviously.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2009 13:23
    PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2009 15:52
    we need a day 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.10.2009 14:05
    totally entertaining stories! as several others have said: Keep writing! :D

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  • Blood+Sugar+Sex+Magik
    08.10.2009 19:55
    I've read all 6, and this one continues the series very well. It's great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2009 19:52
    Are you some kind of feminazi and you did this on purpose?

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  • WHAT
    09.10.2009 23:41
    if u want day 7 so bad find some to wright it for you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2009 22:24
    i hope she didnt die....

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  • zetanian75
    12.10.2009 03:35
    i`m eager to know the day 7 and other day`S to come pls.,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2009 04:09
    i think ill write day 7 for u i hope its not copywrite

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2009 05:29
    i have waited far too long for part 7 since your stories are the only reason i come here i just wont come here any more thanks alot for making me wait

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2009 08:51
    (24 hour period) 7 please oh please oh pleeeeeease

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2009 19:51
    the party was so funny awesome series i want a day 7!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2009 03:51
    u have 99927 views when im writing this, if u do not post day 7 after 100k....i will be sad :(

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  • km4xX
    13.10.2009 16:18
    C'mon man, when will we get the next installment in this fantastic series? You shan't keep us waiting forever.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2009 10:08
    hey, will there be timestop 7? cause its been ages since you posted this, and everyone is just curious

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2009 20:54
    omg i love this story plz plz plz write more plz plz....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.10.2009 18:34
    I really hope for a Day 7. I check everyday and everyday a little part of me dies

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.10.2009 22:51
    Hey! Great story! You should tottally produce another!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.10.2009 12:34
    PLEAAASSSEEEEE! just one more day!

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  • sad+face
    17.10.2009 14:17
    If I die, I blame you for not posting day 7.... PLEASEEEEEE, you're an AMAZING writer!! You're killing all of us! :D

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  • sad+face
    17.10.2009 14:18
    If I die, I blame you for not posting day 7.... PLEASEEEEEE, you're an AMAZING writer!! You're killing all of us! :D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.10.2009 05:39
    It would be greatly appreciated by me, and your thousands of readers if you continued. Hopefully, all you need is a little encouragement. We all love your work here I hope you know that. <3

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  • sex_story+lover
    18.10.2009 21:13
    MORE MAN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.10.2009 05:57
    ppl alreadey start giving up but who can blame em its bin like 1 motnh

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.10.2009 23:46
    Come on post some more there really great I get off more then once everytime I read your stories and me and evry on else want some new material to go to. Ur really good please continue soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2009 02:23
    you are an excellent story teller.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2009 16:40
    Write another please?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.10.2009 11:45
    Incredible writing skill! I've found myself absorbed in the storyline, it no longer seems like reading a sex story, more like reading a really good book. More PLEASE !!!

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  • hunt201
    24.10.2009 03:12
    MORE!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2009 12:49
    WHAT DO WE WANT?! DAY 7!!! WHEN DO WE WANT IT?! WITHIN THE NEXT FEW DAYS!!!!

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  • The+white+obama
    25.10.2009 09:01
    U CAN DO IT!!!! YES WE CAN!!!! YES WE CAN!!! (quote is not sponsored by obama and hence does not necessairly depict his view, but it might, so u could become senator!!) Ho^pe u post day 7 soon!!!

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  • gbux512
    25.10.2009 16:14
    I love everyone of these stories, please don't stop, I can't wait for time stop 7! Get him to start time while he's in his sisters, or a girl at schools ass.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2009 16:27
    We have to get some other Great author on this site to Post the next chapter :( I hate to say it. But it's Been almost 2 months

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.10.2009 03:35
    plz post the next CH.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.10.2009 23:57
    This one of the best series i have read in a very very long time, do keep up the good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.10.2009 05:39
    An amazing series and im getting blue balls for number 7, stop holding out and give it to us please. These stories are awesome and we need more , we desperately need more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.10.2009 10:42
    great story can't wait for more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.10.2009 18:42
    where's day7??

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.10.2009 21:47
    come on chapter 7! or atleast tell us if you died. JEEZ! so rude.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.10.2009 23:46
    nothing will ever beat these series i home ur making a day 7 and thing about 89 10 11 ece.

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  • meagain
    31.10.2009 06:45
    hi I hope you are well and have not broken anthing?
    I have enjoy all of your stories so far
    I hope that you will keep writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.10.2009 09:29
    i love this story so much!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.10.2009 12:56
    i hope ur making a day 7 and thing about an 8 9 10 11 ece.

    p.s. 15 get offs keep it cumming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.10.2009 15:10
    where is the next chapter............?????, it's been quite awhile since this chapter, we are waiting........

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.11.2009 23:02
    This was on of the best erotic stories I have read on this site. Very well writen, good detail, kept me wanting to keep reading. Bravo

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.11.2009 00:19
    If you do not write chapter 7 within a month, you will die.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.11.2009 17:57
    This was just amazing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.11.2009 22:37
    Please do a day 7.

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  • CanZ
    04.11.2009 02:34
    wow just wow

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.11.2009 14:46
    I would definitely like to read a Day 7. Hope the long wait between posts means that it will be that much better.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.11.2009 16:24
    dud where is day 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.11.2009 19:52
    Tottally do another!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.11.2009 00:49
    i want to give you my babies

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.11.2009 15:41
    Write the next chapter, I'm waiting now for soo long!!! Please!!

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  • Bakeman2
    07.11.2009 01:13
    I just came from looking at the title.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.11.2009 04:36
    these stories have been like the best I've ever read on here in a long time please do a day 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.11.2009 09:32
    more story please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2009 00:33
    CANT WAIT FOR NUMBER 7 PLZ HURRY... BEEN WAITING TO LONG ALREADY

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2009 04:43
    there needs to be another scene between julie and her mother but a longer one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2009 21:55
    yur mean

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  • SleepyWriter
    09.11.2009 22:22
    love every single one of your writings for this series, please, please post another we are all begging!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.11.2009 17:26
    maybe if we say please :D. ok, but serouisly please make day 7. i'v been waiting since you posted day 6...... PLEASE!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.11.2009 19:27
    this is the best series ever were all begging the suspence is killing us :(

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  • imapussylvr4
    10.11.2009 19:52
    how about a day 7...say yesterday

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.11.2009 01:55
    when is day 7 coming out please post it everyone is waiting

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.11.2009 16:53
    When are we gonna get to read day 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.11.2009 17:44
    come on!!!!

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  • Anon
    11.11.2009 20:48
    please!! day 7!! DX

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.11.2009 00:17
    a d a a

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.11.2009 16:01
    AHHH we want day 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2009 03:57
    Excellent story, one of my favorites. Can't wait for the next chapters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2009 03:58
    Excellent story, one of my favorites. Can't wait for the next chapters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2009 07:42
    Day 7! Day 7! pleeeeaaase! Really though. You should write a day 7 sometime, even if it's a short one just to end the serie or whatever. The suspense is crazy D: You write great, by the way.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.11.2009 17:01
    PLEASE

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  • Xviewer
    17.11.2009 09:07
    Consider fucking the hot Mom...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.11.2009 19:11
    please write day 7 and more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.11.2009 19:11
    we need day 7 asap

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.11.2009 20:40
    Day 7 now please love these stories been waitin forblike two months LOL hurri or I'll die!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.11.2009 14:06
    That was cool! Write some more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.11.2009 11:22
    come on with day 7
    I want to fuck the sister in real with a bit of romance
    that the sister has real feelings for her brother and maybe have a threesome with the mom

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  • zilla
    23.11.2009 03:13
    come on girl waiting far to long for day 7 ! pleeeeeease hury up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.11.2009 20:04
    dito, must have day 7 and its time for mom to get snagged

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.11.2009 19:01
    Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7! Day 7!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.11.2009 21:17
    cmon gal its been over 2 1/2 months since this post please make a day 7 and more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.11.2009 19:01
    your keeping us waiting too long, at least post and give us an update!!!!!!!!

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    25.11.2009 23:15
    DAY 7!!!!!! PLZ!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.11.2009 02:18
    yes plz at least give us an update its been Way too long im starting to lose interest

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.11.2009 08:35
    more sandy sex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.11.2009 13:43
    I hope nothing bad happened to you.

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  • Anon
    29.11.2009 20:52
    Love the stories, keep writing more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.11.2009 00:36
    AHHH we miss your stories plz post day 7

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2009 03:54
    I miss your writing so much it's verydetailed with a plot where you get in to Warens head and you feel like you can relate. I'm sorry but it would be really nice of you to add a day seven for your loyal readers please.

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  • Storygal96
    02.12.2009 14:51
    I'll post a day seven when Davidhog posts a Raping my daughter 3.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2009 16:58
    come on storygal96. we have been all waiting for 3 or more months (correct me if im wrong on the date plz). and why didnt you at least update us within that time. sorry if im being mean but come on!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2009 16:58
    come on storygal96. we have been all waiting for 3 or more months (correct me if im wrong on the date plz). and why didnt you at least update us within that time. sorry if im being mean but come on!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2009 16:58
    come on storygal96. we have been all waiting for 3 or more months (correct me if im wrong on the date plz). and why didnt you at least update us within that time. sorry if im being mean but come on!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2009 16:58
    come on storygal96. we have been all waiting for 3 or more months (correct me if im wrong on the date plz). and why didnt you at least update us within that time. sorry if im being mean but come on!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2009 16:58
    come on storygal96. we have been all waiting for 3 or more months (correct me if im wrong on the date plz). and why didnt you at least update us within that time. sorry if im being mean but come on!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2009 12:35
    who the hell cares about this Davidhog? we've been reading YOUR series, now please continue it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2009 18:08
    Is the Storygal96 really the author or was that a joke? Because if it was a joke damn you to hell.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2009 20:24
    I read davidhog's story shes got a point.

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  • km4xX
    03.12.2009 22:26
    notice the difference in capitalization in the two names, the author was StoryGal96, the commenter was Storygal96, two different people.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.12.2009 14:15
    Dude its been months. I loved the storyline please get back to it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2009 21:43
    where's day 7???? it's been forever!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.12.2009 20:28
    day 7 please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2009 07:01
    I agree please do more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.12.2009 02:27
    I thought it was weird that he could wash his hands while time was stopped. Just something to watch out for as u write more chapters. All in all a very nice story, 8/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.03.2010 15:33
    Its a great story! Do more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2010 01:08
    my dear, why u have stoped writing? i m eagerly waiting for ^DAY 7^. plzzzzzzzz write it.plzzzzzzzz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2010 06:41
    come on if you dont do day 7 ill write it my self

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  • bayyarr123
    04.04.2010 21:01
    i like nice round ass nice with firm cheeks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.04.2010 04:41
    great story. but send the next one's, its been too long already.

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  • anonymously
    05.04.2010 16:24
    ITS AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!1 MORE PLEASE

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  • anonymously
    05.04.2010 16:25
    MORE PLEASE NOT ONE MORE LOADS MORE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.04.2010 00:19
    MOAR COWBELL!!1!!!one!!!!

    For the next one I mean, this one is excellent. You should also, you know.... release the next one.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2010 15:33
    PLEASE MORE! I LOVE IT!
    Also, talk about the girl's asses more please. Asses are a very important part of a girls body for me, and they are not really discussed at all in your stories. But regardless, I am loving these.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2010 22:31
    Nice job. The main premise remeinds me of the novel "The gold watch, the girl, and everything" by John McDonald or MacDonald. His version of stopped (really slowed) "red time" (with an inherited gold watch) was more extreme than yours. Things that his characters moved in stopped time jumped to their new location when time was restarted and therefore accelerated to very high speeds. This allowed them to break locks and "shoot" holes in things by just moving small stones along the appropriate trajectories. Also, if the character stopped time in a moving vehicle, the vehicle would stop and the character would continue at the same rate. (ouch) His characters would also have to move around naked since their clothes stopped along with the rest of the world.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 00:57
    6 months guys. lets face it, there will be no more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 19:56
    You should of said how big Warren's friends dicks were, when they were with Tammy...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2010 01:14
    Hey very good storys. I just finished reading 1-6 of the stop time episodes. I think they are really good and I am hoping for more. Plzzzzz more lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2010 03:55
    great story. but send the next one's, its been too long already.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.04.2010 01:20
    if you dont send anymore i will continue them

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  • StoryGal96
    20.04.2010 18:08
    I'll post Day 7 when DavidHog posts Raping My Daughter 3

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  • Vorilla
    20.04.2010 18:09
    Really if so everyone contact DavidHog!!

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  • desertbilly
    25.04.2010 03:01
    more please . by far the best story ever.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.04.2010 23:20
    Why would someone else's story matter when you have probably one of the biggst fan bases I've ever seen.

    But oh well, on to telling Davidhog to get his ass in gear

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.04.2010 06:39
    omg ur by far the best story maker ever!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.04.2010 18:46
    If you already have day 7 please post it! I love this story. Oh and I'm going to get on the other guy to make him finish too.

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  • Crimson
    27.04.2010 18:51
    How do we know if that really was StoryGal96 ?

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  • StoryGal96
    29.04.2010 19:59
    Because I obviously am

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2010 06:26
    The Guy that said you should be raped and shot is a fucking ass. Its called fantasy not reality you fucktard.

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  • StoryGal96
    11.05.2010 17:52
    kinda of hard to trust that cause it pretty easy to fake that ur her

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  • StoryGal96
    11.05.2010 21:37
    Somebody just write day 7 already

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2010 03:22
    This story is amazing! I absolutely love it! (and not for obvious reasons, as I didn't have to (wanna) do what all people do when reading these kinds of stories in order to read it and have a hard time stopping) I've gotta say, you really know how to bring a connection between the reader and the main character, even though my life is no where close to being that horrible or great (in ways), all while it helps feeling a similar social status compared to warrens. With that said, I will want to murder someone if the next chapter(s) aren't released anytime soon. (and you can COUNT on a murder if you weren't releasing any more chapters for some odd reason!)

    sincerely, your fanatic the3rdshinigami.

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  • StoryGal96
    12.05.2010 15:08
    its realy easy to imitate storygal i just done it and if the real storgal posts a comment you can click her name and it will take you to her profile were the fakes dont like this

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  • Russian+Doodle
    15.05.2010 16:23
    @storygal96- the one saying that someone else wrote day 7. Who?!!?!?

    I have been dieing to read it for the past 6 months!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2010 18:08
    Now that his getting pussy for real why would he continue to fuck with his sister?

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  • aaa
    aaa
    23.05.2010 00:00
    were did u get the description for the nerdy chick on the bus? cus i know a chick that looks pretty much what u said

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2010 14:29
    PLEASE update the timestop story!!!! it's really good and i want it continued, and ending and preferbly some sort of follow-up XD just keep working on it cause itäs really good and i bet there's plenty more who loves it just as much as i do... xoxox

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.05.2010 01:30
    to the guy before me
    he's trying to fuck with her mind

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.05.2010 13:05
    where is day 7? come on

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2010 19:06
    This is an awsome story, im kinda new to the site and just wonderin if anyone can suggest stories like this one. That would be really cool!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2010 21:59
    This is an awsome story, im kinda new to the site and just wonderin if anyone can suggest stories like this one. That would be really cool!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2010 03:12
    This an excellent series. How come it stalled midstream? Mom has almost completed the mental process of preparing herself to get his cock inside of her. Since it'll be her inititive that makes it happen, she'll willingly fuck him until she makes him cum and know that she's taking his full load of sperm rich, teenaged boy's cum. After all that his sister has been 'imagining', won't she be jealous, when she walks in on them and finds out that mommy's getting it, instead?

    *** The only thing that I can figure is that something has happened to STORYGAL because there's no way that she'd have just stopped writing and leave everyone hanging, when the series was going so well.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2010 10:01
    whyd you stop on day 6?
    amazing story tho

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.06.2010 01:32
    Come on with day 7!!! I love this series!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.06.2010 09:52
    Come Up with Day 7 plzzzzzzzzzz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2010 20:54
    guys its coming up to the point where we`ve been waiting almost a year if this is all were gonna get from her then this is it. Sure it sucks but now we can continue the series in our heads with our own details or remake them with other people.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2010 17:48
    day 7 come on.............................plzzz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2010 21:08
    man, when are you going to write a new one? this here is nice. yes.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2010 01:57
    you are a genuis, even if it wasnt focused on sex the way you beutifully word it makes it truly fantastic

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2010 03:44
    she stoped cause its basicly over, him and his friends lost their virginity, he got his girl, conviced his sister that shes crazy, and hes popular

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2010 13:33
    This is the best story I have ever read on here!!!!!!!! PLEASE write day 7.

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  • Skye+Silverwing
    02.07.2010 03:43
    So far, this kid has succeeded in nearly every sexual endeavor that a High School student can have, some with, and some without the aide of his new-found powers. He has done it with the popular slut, a teacher, a virgin, and his elder sister. He has gained a girlfriend, and convinced his mother and sister to be sexually attracted to him. Only a few events need to happen. First, he needs to screw the nurse. Second, he needs to screw Sarah. Third, his Mother and his sister both need to give in to the urges he has been instilling in them, and they need to do so willingly. Fourth, the origin of the powers needs to be revealed. Fifth, something has to go wrong: Another person with this power shows up; his mother knows because his father had it; his sister finds out; he accidentally kills someone by bringing them into it with him and failing to pull them out; etc. Finally, he learns how serious having a power like this can be and either stops using it or turns it to more noble ends.

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  • %7C
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    05.07.2010 13:36
    *cough* *cough* (queer) *cough*

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2010 09:29
    omfg please write day 7. best storie on here. you need to write it, finish it, make some bad happen keep it burning with the passion it sends out.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2010 12:32
    holy shit. i read all 6 days in one sitting, im still amazed by the quality of writing on these sites.

    keep up the awesome writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2010 12:32
    holy shit. i read all 6 days in one sitting, im still amazed by the quality of writing on these sites.

    keep up the awesome writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2010 21:53
    plz write the neext day

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.08.2010 00:41
    First off wonderful series we need more though second one thing bugging me is how is he able to breath time is stoped so air pressure is as well i know its not that big of deal its a sex story but it bugs me...

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2010 01:24
    OK, just to be clear. I read this story when it first came out. It was so fucking amazing it took me over 4 hours to navigate this poor search engine on this site to find it and the fact that I took that long attests to how well written this story is. Keep on writing girl :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2010 19:10
    I've read the sci-fi C.A.M.P. much like this story. young boy - "magic powers" - selfsame powers used for se - etc. this series was interesting at first but it now seems to be devolving or regressing. At the point of this segment's end, I have no idea what new sex can be presented. whatever. If you choose to continue this series, I will probably read it , but I think, only IMHO of course, that a good idea went bad quickly. And I do like porn with sci-fi aspects to it. Many items in your writing makes it appear that you received some training in writing per se. SO I just don't know. later Fellow Traveller

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2010 01:44
    This is simply amazing,you should make this series into a book.
    When all the words are added up, its nearly 90,000 words.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2010 22:17
    please write another. i check back every week to continued disappointed

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2010 16:00
    please continue this amazing series!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2010 04:06
    please continue! I love this story.

    I'd love to see more of him playing around with his powers, especially at school; this thing with the sister is hot, but is getting pretty repetitive.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2010 21:11
    Its been months and WE AND DAY 7 PEOPLE LIKE ME NEEEEEED TO JACK-OFF NOOOOOOOW

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2011 05:03
    Just love this series. Hope there is a lot more to come. What I'd really like top see happen are the following:
    1 - Warren's mum asks him to make up with Julie so he can sort out her sexual and mental problems. They start sleeping together and he gats Julie pregnant. He obviously has the hots for her or he wouldn't get an erection every time he looks at her.
    2 - He takes his revenge on Sarah by exchanging her contraceptive pills for aspirins and gets her pregnant as well.
    3 - Ms Burkhart finds out she has a little bun in the oven.

    With all the fucking he has been doing someone has to end up pregnant!

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  • Wiccan_Lord
    30.01.2011 23:04
    Please man, keep writting this series. Huge fan, read each one like 3 times or something. Please keep writting.

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  • Wiccan_Lord
    30.01.2011 23:09
    Please man, keep writting this series. Huge fan, read each one like 3 times or something. Please keep writting.

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  • Wiccan_Lord
    30.01.2011 23:10
    Please man, keep writting this series. Huge fan, read each one like 3 times or something. Please keep writting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.02.2011 22:54
    best series i have read yet continue plese

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.02.2011 22:56
    best series ive read yet plese continue

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2011 08:32
    StoryGal96 r u dead?
    If not keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2011 03:43
    i love how his sister thinks she going crazy

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.02.2011 22:38
    PLEASE WRITE MORE, favorite series, I want to see more of Warren and Sandy

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.02.2011 07:33
    keep writing please! these series are soo coool! can't wait for another one

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.02.2011 16:36
    hmm i think she got hit by a bus or something...

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2011 23:38
    As far as sci fi stories goes... this story was tops... I'm just sorry you have abandoned your story line. I hope that some day I can come to this page and find that you've decided to continue this really great story. There was a tv movie out long ago called THE GIRL, THE GOLD WATCH, AND EVERYTHING. I think Pam Dawber was in it. This story reminded me of it so much. Please come back and continue this story?

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.03.2011 16:07
    Some parts of the story were hilarious as helll...
    "the hand returned"
    "i pushed it away"

    "returned"
    Pushed it
    LOLOLOLOL
    I fucken love you

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2011 11:50
    I live in the south you fucking racist bastard

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2011 23:08
    The party was so hot!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2011 10:51
    awesome story.......please waiting for continution

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2011 00:20
    why is everyone commenting she doesnt read comments. PM her dur de dur dum

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2011 03:36
    anyone pm her and see if she is coming out with more?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2011 23:57
    Why can't there be more?;(

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.07.2011 14:10
    i first read this when it first was posted 2 yrs ago no one has heard hide nor hair from storygal96 since then it is an awesome story if story gal cant be found then i hope some one can finish it
    thank u
    CINDY

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 09:47
    shiva,k.shiva
    t.venktas
    gansh

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  • cassius1678
    02.08.2011 18:43
    Well Folks i tried to send her a message but it says her limit has been reached and she cant recive anymore well i hope she comes back just to check it at the least lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2011 12:35
    Pls at least write one more chapter and finish it by the theme- he is lossing his powers and he is getting well with his life.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2011 23:13
    Are you planning on continuing this?

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 20:30
    Well, it looks like she's not coming back. A shame, because she was a good writer and this was a DAMN good story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.11.2011 22:51
    maybe shes dead, in jail, or in the witness protection program?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.11.2011 06:34
    i like it when he fucks with his sis

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.01.2012 02:15
    i also loved this story line, along with her satrday night escapdes....miss reading those story updates.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 01:28
    Hmm, seems like there's no chance of StoryGal coming back and finishing this. Anyone know of a decent author with a similar style that would be willing to provide some closure to what was a fantastic story? I think of this story at least a couple times a month and would love to be able to just say, "Ahh, that's how it ended, cool."

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.02.2012 02:20
    Should put this up on Chyoo and see what happens, seen a few dead stories get up and running again

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 20:52
    f2NCT6 Yeah, it is clear now !... From the very beginning I did not understand where was the connection with the title !!....

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2012 20:40
    we demand more
    we demand more

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 22:04
    where is the rest more we want more

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.06.2012 11:44
    Wow, this is a really great and funny story, please write some more!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.07.2012 00:09
    Julie is a bitch and Warren is a bastard. The most likable character is Sandy and she really does not know that she has fallen for an asshole.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2012 02:11
    dude gotta make more...its starting to get funny...by the way love the length of the chapters. heres a twist....... for the last one have him lose his power. think about it

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2012 01:50
    please write more ive read through this 3 times and have been waiting a long time for more, you should have him accidentally unstop time while having sex but the girl (who ever you want to make it) goes with it

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.07.2012 20:46
    Finally he fucked his sister.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2012 11:56
    Hurry up and make the next story

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.10.2012 15:42
    wtf? I've been waiting for this story for almost a fuckin year... write the next PAST!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.10.2012 15:42
    wtf? I've been waiting for this story for almost a fuckin year... write the next PART!!**

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2013 16:43
    He wrote this in 09 its 13 he's not going to write another one or he wrote it on a different site

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.02.2013 20:16
    epic nice story keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2013 20:50
    I really wish that you'd make another! It is just overall a really well written and interesting story. I would like to see the progression of his sister into madness ending with her fucking him while he slept and him pretending to be asleep. And his mother pressing her flirtatious nature around warren and of course warrens decisions at other unforeseen situations.

    Overall fantastic series. Easily one of my favorites. I also really liked how you remembered each time in regard to the physics while within the time stopped state. Very well done. Thank you!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.05.2013 23:06
    he used hand sanatizer lol to wash will time was stopped ;)

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  • pravus18
    09.05.2013 16:57
    can someone just continue it like this one guy did for three evil sisters please i really like this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2013 07:55
    @2013-01-14 16:43:36 I love how the authors name is "StoryGal96," yet is still a "he." :p

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.06.2013 03:36
    southerners somtimes piss me off but what that guy said was absoulutly outragous and he should be ashamed. you got my support

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.11.2013 23:33
    So I see my comment from 2012 is still unanswered. Someone plz continue this series.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.12.2013 11:21
    He fell asleep with time stopped

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.01.2014 11:40
    It's bloody sad that all the good authors here write something and then disappear without a trace.

    At least he fucked Sandy though

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2014 02:01
    If anyone knows of any good timestop or mind control incest themed stories like this I'd appreciate any suggestions! I really like this story and can't seem to find anything similar that's good. Please help!

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  • CorsicianHothead
    30.03.2014 15:57
    It has been six years since the author last posted this ( or any other ) story. Although the writer's style is inimitable, someone should complete the series and give this story the closure it needs. Btw, if anyone does have any idea what on earth happened to the author,please share the info with me and other readers. Thnx in advance. -C.H

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  • Chapter666
    27.03.2015 19:28
    Just read trough this again, damn I love it. If you ever see this StoryGal, thanks man, one of the best series I ever read, even if it breaks my heart just little that its not finnished.

    Much live enad thanks again!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2015 06:47
    Ya the story was fantastic author! But pls pls it needs to be completed

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 03:07
    nowhere near as good as the last story of yours that I read, no plot, just ridiculous sex

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  • Big+Bob+D
    04.04.2016 18:39
    Great writing. Thanks.
    Forget about the haters. It takes alot to be this creative and most of us appreciate it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2016 13:05
    Please finish

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.09.2016 16:23
    This was actually a really nice series please do finish

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.12.2016 01:54
    Fucking awesome make another Part with fisting

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2017 12:34
    Please StoryGal96, continue the story.

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  • Doozy+woof+Hunter
    25.08.2020 17:24
    would love some more chapters please? Great series!

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