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Oh Daddy

Author: Lil-Brandi

Date: 21 September 2009

Blowjob, Fiction, Cum Swallowing, Erotica

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A shiver ran through me as I slowly proceeded. Soon I was in all the way and lavished the feeling that the cool water brought to my summer-heated body.

I swam through the tranquility gracefully, taking in the silence of the night, basking in the secrecy of my midnight swim. So many long days have ended just as this one was about to. After knowing my parents have retired to their room for the night, I quickly leave my bedroom to partake in my sweet addiction. Swimming under the stars naked is just something that allows me to feel truly free, at least for the moment. This night was no exception; it was a truly beautiful experience.

(A week later)

After a night of being quite spoiled; dinner, movie, and a romantic walk along the beach, I arrived home quite late. The house was silent as I quietly went up to my room. As I disrobed, I thought of the wonderful moment I had just shared with my beau on the shores of the Atlantic. As the white-capped waves pounded to the white sands, my lips slowly slid up and down his beautiful erection. It was the slowest blowjob I had ever given. I was in no hurry at all. As the ocean breeze gently blew, so did I.

Holding the thick shaft in my tiny hand, I swirled my tongue all around the silky smooth head. I licked and savored the taste of pre-cum that slowly seeped from the tip. I always love the whole idea behind pre-cum; the human hint that much more of a treat is soon to follow.

That treat certainly did follow. After about twenty minutes of exquisite cock sucking, I felt that oh-so-famous feeling of the head swell much bigger, the shaft grow much longer, and then the delicious gushing warmth of semen fill my entire mouth and shoot continuously into the back of my throat. I swallowed vigorously to keep up with the tremendous load of cum that my mouth had caused. After the final throb, I licked up every drop and succeeded in sucking that cock dry. It was a pleasant end to a fabulous evening.

Reliving the moment, only caused me to get wet and feel that tingling sensation of the preliminaries of horniness” begin. I tried to change my thought pattern quickly, but I soon realized my mind had traveled too far. I wrapped a towel around my excited body and headed out the door to my deck. Only 20 steps and 50 feet would place me at the entrance to my relaxed water world. I thought to myself a dip in the pool, would certainly cool down my raging hormones.” As I began the descent down the stairs, a sound suddenly echoed through the otherwise silent night. I stopped and listened curiously. Splashing, it was the definite sound of splashing,” I realized. So much for my relaxing middle of the night skinny-dipping session, I was so looking forward to.

I walked a little bit further until I could see my parents in the pool. On one hand I was disappointed that they were there, but on the other, I was thrilled to see them so happy. My parents married as kids and had me before they were 18. To be an only child and have such young, very successful parents has afforded me the luxury of an incredible life. Just as I was about to turn and go back up to my room, my mom climbed out of the pool.

Oh my God,” I thought to myself, as I looked at my naked Mom, she is skinny dipping”.

Still in her 30's, her tanned body is in incredible shape, looking like that of a 20-year-old. Unlike my brunette locks, her hair is just as long and wavy, but blonde. Though I didn't get her hair color, I did get her gorgeous breasts, flat tummy, tiny ass and perfect shapely legs. I have actually had guys over that have commented about how beautiful my mom is!

My dad, also in his 30's, is a very successful executive at a large corporation. He is absolutely a hottie. I know what you're thinking, but I have had girlfriends damn near hit on him. He is very good looking and doesn't look his age at all. Both are quite strict, but at the same time so cool and down to earth. My dad soon followed my mother out of the pool and I couldn't help but notice his nicely toned body and, even more noticeable, his rather large cock dangling between his legs.

I watched, intrigued, as my mom lay back on a lounge chair and my dad stood with a leg on either side of it, then placed his flaccid member up to my mom's mouth. She immediately began sucking his cock. I watched, amazed, as my dad begin thrusting his ass back and forth, driving his now erect cock in and out of my mom's sweet mouth. I was frozen there watching the unbelievable scene unfold before my eyes. Dad's cock was now completely hard, and what a cock it was. Much bigger than any of the boys I had dated. I watched it slowly slide in and out of my mom's hungry lips and saw it glisten with saliva on each withdrawal. His balls hung down heavy and bounced on her chin with each thrust. I strained my tired eyes to see every detail in the dimly lit pool area. I was wishing they had turned more lights on.

I suddenly came to the realization that I was not only spying on my parents' sexual encounter, but also, placing a hand to my dripping wet pussy, loving it. I watched as they both stopped and then shifted positions. Mom got on all fours and Dad stood behind her. He took his thick shaft in his hand and guided the head to her wet opening. I heard her squeal out as I watched dad sink every inch of his wonderful penis into her depths. Slowly at first, he slid the bulbous head and long shaft in and out of her. Her full breasts swung freely as he rocked her gently back and forth with nice long strokes. I was in a trance as I watched the heated action.

After about ten minutes of seeing my father fuck my mom with comparable energy and stamina of a teenager, I actually had the feeling of envy race through my veins. I couldn't help but wonder how he would feel deep inside me. I wondered how he would like to sink that fat cock in my extremely tight lil' pussy.

I was brought back from my fantasy just as mom reached a tremendous orgasm. I watched her entire body tremble and shake and her head flail from side to side. She screamed out that she was coming and dad, hearing her words, increased his pace. His cock was literally pounding in and out of her now. I thought the major piston action would cause the lounge chair to collapse. My pussy was screaming to be fucked just like that. I heard him say something to mom and watched her turn around, sit up, and take his penis in her mouth again.

By his groans and moans he was apparently filling her mouth with his exploding cum. I watched as she took every inch of his cock into her throat. Her hands and nails gripped his nice firm ass as he emptied his huge load. I giggled to myself at the thought, first daughter, now mother, have had their stomachs pumped full of sperm tonight”. My young, curious mind again wondered what does he taste like” and how much cum did he shoot out of those big balls” Such bad thoughts I was having.

I watched quietly as mom slowly licked dad's cock clean. He then sat down next to her on the lounge chair. I decided I had seen more than enough of this and turned and headed up the stairs. I was so unbelievably horny at this point; I could hardly stand it.

I lay in bed that night, not able to fall asleep. In my mind all I saw was daddy's big beautiful cock; so long, so fat, and so hard. I thought of his gorgeous firm ass, in such perfect shape still, as it pounded back and forth driving his dick forcefully in and out of my mom's well-stretched pussy. I wondered what was wrong with me. With the visions of mom's lips being wrapped around that big fat pole of hard flesh, I finally dozed off.

I was on top of the covers when I opened my eyes and stretched as the warmth of the morning sun caressed my naked body. Not wanting to waste any of this gorgeous summer day, I hopped in the shower quickly, shaved and rinsed off. Dreamily, I thought about the wonderful day of tanning, swimming and shopping that lay ahead. Before putting on one of the tiniest swimsuits I own I doused my body with tanning oil. I then carefully dressed in a hot pink thong that left nothing to the imagination but invited the sun to roam freely. I felt so damn sexy. I headed downstairs to have a quick bite and some juice.

Mom was leaving to go to a brunch with the neighbor, Suzanne; I hugged and kissed her. On her way out, teasingly I said, You are all smiles this morning mom, a good night huh” She just looked at me, rolled her eyes, and giggled. Dad then came in and gave her a kiss goodbye, me a good morning kiss, commented about the clothes I didn't have on, and poured himself some orange juice. That was the first time, I noticed, I was looking at my daddy differently. I could not stop wondering about his cock, knowing what beauty was under his bathrobe. As I strutted around the kitchen scantily clothed, I wondered if, as he watched me, his cock was growing erect.

As I finished nibbling on some fruit, I watched him as he sat at the table scanning over the newspaper. I went over to him, threw my arm around his neck, and sat down on his leg. His warmth, I immediately felt against my naked ass cheeks. He looked at me and smiled. I kissed his cheek and told him I loved him. He looked at me and asked sarcastically, What do you want” Nothing,” I replied, I just love you”.

I fed him a strawberry from my bowl of fruit. He put the paper down and shifted his whole body suddenly. I moved to better sit in his lap. I instantly felt, through his robe, the bulge of his cock against my ass. We spoke briefly about the day's events, but my mind was drifting to the events from the night before. As I felt my pussy tingle from the hot thoughts, I began to squirm restlessly. I gave him another strawberry and watched intensely as his teeth bit into it and his lips caught and sucked the escaping juices. I envisioned my pussy being that strawberry, which caused my breathing to deepen. He placed his hand on the small of my back as we shared the fruit.

I gazed into his dreamy blue eyes deeply as they watched my lips passionately suck on a wedge of orange. I was pleased to feel the unmistakable twitch of his cock becoming excited. As I nonchalantly but purposely, ate the fruit more seductively and with exaggerated moves, wiggled my ass more, I felt his cock stir and then begin to grow. Daddy, becoming quite embarrassed, shifted in his chair uncomfortably as his cock began to stiffen beneath me. I slightly wiggled my ass down onto his new erection, grinding against it playfully. Daddy suddenly spoke out, saying he had to get up. He was very obviously uncomfortable and feeling guilty that he had a huge boner poking up under his young daughter's ass. I just giggled and told him, but the fruit is not finished”. I giggled as I listened to him stammer and stutter, making absolutely no sense at all, but trying to escape the situation.

I spun my whole body around to face him. Straddling his lap now, my legs were on either side of the chair, and my ass rested on his bare thighs. As I moved into this position, daddy's' robe gapped open. Suddenly, shocking both of us equally, his raging cock bust free and stood up firmly in between us. I instantly looked down at the huge purple head that pointed directly toward his belly button. Looking up, I met his absolutely horrified eyes. He began to speak, Honey, I am so sorr…” I immediately leaned forward and planted a passionate kiss right on my daddy's lips. I forced my tongue into his mouth and sought his out. At first he didn't respond, but then something happened. Temptation and lust simply overpowered his morals.

Knowing I wanted him and had obviously teased him to the point of no return, he suddenly picked me up and lay me back on the table. He grabbed my bikini bottoms and with one tug ripped them right off my body, throwing them aside. He groaned his approval as he gazed upon his daughter's clean-shaven pussy. Taking in his hand, the orange slices from the bowl of fruit, he squeezed them strongly, pouring the juice all over my crotch. At the same time he began lapping up the orange juice, and mine. I trembled and moaned, ooooohhh yessssss daddy”, as his tongue lapped at my labia seeking out my clit. The puffy, excited lips of my pussy were now soaked from his talented tongue-lashing. I thrust my ass up off the table, pushing my cunt up to meet his mouth.

He stood up, kicked his chair out of the way, and kneeled before me. Placing both his hands under my ass cheeks, his thumbs inward towards my ass crack, he again began his oral assault on my bare quim.

Ohhh my godddddd” I screamed.

I could feel the mixture of orange juice and my womanly secretions trickling down to my ass. As his lips began sucking on my swollen clit, a thumb sought out my tiny puckered virgin hole and rubbed it playfully.

Yessssssss, ooohhhhh yessss oh daddddyyy don't stopppp,” I screamed at the pleasure he was causing, he penetrated me in synch with his thumb and his tongue.

I thought I would ecstatically pass out. I had never had anything in my ass before and his thumb felt huge, but incredible. He had used my own juices to lubricate his thumb as he thrust it in to the first knuckle. As his thumb invaded my virgin ass, he thrust his tongue all the way into my tight pussy. His lips were locked around my whole crotch as his tongue wiggled around deep inside me.

Oohhh pppleeeease don't stopppp…daddddyyyy pleeeeease”.

I realized at that moment at how lucky my mom really was. Not only did she receive one hell of a fucking from a big beautiful cock, but also knew this tongue had spoiled her coochie many times. I screamed out again as daddy began rhythmically sliding his tongue back and forth in my vagina and began fucking his thumb in and out of my anus. With each thrust of his thumb he buried it deeper, causing me to wince with the pain, it caused. The tongue fucking me however, evened out the pain with immense pleasure. This went on for who knows how long; I lost track of all time. I just never wanted it to end. No man had ever worked over my pussy so well before. No man had ever touched my anus and certainly had never penetrated it. For daddy to take his little girls ass first, would make him so happy.

As I felt my huge orgasm building inside, so did daddy. He could sense it was close and just sucked on me that much more intensely. As my legs, draping over his shoulders, tightened, he took that as his cue. He stood abruptly and just as my pussy exploded he thrust his manhood deep into me in one full thrust. Aaarrrrghhhhhhh mmmyyyyy goddddd,” I screamed. Ooohhhh yesssss, yessssss OHHHHH DADDYYYY your cock is so big, its soooooo fat, toooooo fat.” My verbal screams fueled his sexual machine, as he became more excited, he penetrated me deeper than I had ever been penetrated. He knew his fat cock was stretching my pussy lips more than they ever had before. He knew the tip of his cock was thrusting up where no man had been before. It only made him feel that much more passion. My orgasm exploded inside me powerfully but collided with the head of his hugely plunging cock.

As he withdrew on each thrust, my orgasm almost squirted out between his shaft and my taut lips. I screamed until my throat was sore. Yesssssssss ooohhh yessssssss daddy, don't stopppp, yessss fuck me with that huge cock of yours, ooohhhhh,” I hissed through clenched teeth. My orgasm just seemed to keep going and going as my father's luscious dick fucked in and out of my tiny love tunnel furiously. Ooohh Brandi honey, you're sweet little pussy is soooo tight, so incredibly tight. You are squeezing daddy's shaft so powerfully.” He groaned loudly and grunted with each thrust. I feel the walls of your cunt pulsating and milking my cock like nothing I have ever felt before,” he continued. I could feel every single centimeter of his penis, every vein, the ridge, and the tip. I felt the plum like head push up inside me; way up inside me it thrust, plowing through the birth canal. I felt his heavy cum-filled sac slapping up against my wet ass. With each thrust, the sound penetrated my ears as deep as his member penetrated my vagina.

My orgasm suddenly peaked when he reached down and playfully squeezed my clit with his thumb as he continued fucking me hard. My mind and body felt like jelly. Juices were now just pouring out of me as the squishy wet sounds of raw sex filled the room. Our moans, screams of pleasure, and animalistic grunts were the only sound to drown it out. To announce his quickly arriving orgasm, Daddy began punching his cock into my cunt, with a power I had never experienced before. Aaaarrrgggghhh daddddddy …ooohhhhhhh nooooooooo, pppleassssseeeeee”, I screamed. It actually hurt like hell to feel that huge head saw in and out of me sharply. But I knew it was only temporarily as his sperm explosion approached. Yesssss daddy give me your cum, pppleeeeeaseee give meeeee your hot jism”.

My cunt was now burning as his thick shaft rubbed me raw from the unrelentless pumping action. His hips were a blur as he pounded into me. I have never ever been fucked like this”, I thought. Daddy or not, what an unbelievable lover this man was”.

Then it stopped. Daddy pulled out his engorged dick just as the tip blasted. Ohhh my gooodddddd honey, here it comes….ooohhh yessssss Lil B….”.

His sperm erupted out with the force of cannon shot. It spurted powerfully, reaching my face, my bikini top and covering my stomach. My belly button filled up with daddy's hot cum and I felt it dribble down my sides with a tickle. I heard my daddy pant as his orgasm subsided and his spent cock rested against my pelvis, cum seeping from the tip. I reached down and grasped his jewel of a cock in my hand, rubbing the thick slippery shaft. Feeling it throb uncontrollably, it was drenched with my juices and his cum.

I felt the semen pour out of my belly button as I rubbed it around my skin. It was still so warm. Not yet having the opportunity to fulfill my taste curiosity, I brought my sperm covered hand to my lips and licked the coated fingers. The salty yet sweet taste of my daddy immediately aroused my taste buds. I licked my fingers clean and reached down for more. Starving now for more of him, I sat up and begged him to let me suck his cock.

Pleeease daddy,” I purred, let me suck your cock, pleeeease”. He took one look into my eyes and glanced down to my luscious full pouting lips and didn't hesitate in fulfilling my request. Daddy or not, any guy could look at my lips and just know their cock is going to be spoiled. They are not fat, but full. It didn't take asking him more than once. He quickly sat up on the table and I stood between his spread thighs. He lay back as I examined his gorgeous soft penis, which even flaccid was still fairly large. His balls hung so loosely now down between his powerful thighs, emptied of all their cum. I grasped them gently, much more than my tiny hand could hold, and squeezed them softly. He groaned his approval.

As I continued to caress his gorgeous balls, my other hand grasped the shaft of his cock and brought the head to my lips. I softly kissed the tip and licked the tiny peehole. I then ran my wet hot tongue all over the entire smooth glands until they glistened with my saliva. I gently ran my tongue down the center underside of his entire length, tracing the main vein from the base, back up to the ridge between the head and the shaft. This caused his prick to throb back to life. I continued my tantalizing tongue teasing of daddy's cock until it throbbed fully erect within my small hand. His moans of approval echoed throughout the room.

I gently nibbled up and down the solid flesh pole and sucked on the sides of the shaft all over. I then sucked on one ball at a time, gently taking each into my mouth and swirling my tongue around them. His cock throbbed powerfully when I did this and I could feel the blood streaming into the caverns within the solid shaft. Finally, I licked my way up the length of his bone and reaching the tip, I wrapped my luscious lips around the engorged head. Daddy moaned out loudly followed by, ahhhhhhh yess baby…oh God my sweet Lil-B, your lips feel exquisite. Suck daddy's cock, ooohhh don't stop.” I didn't stop and had no intentions of stopping until I swallowed his sweet Brandi-making-sperm.

I sucked his thickness into my hungry mouth. Locking my lips around his girth I bobbed downward on his cock until the fat head hit the back of my throat. For the first time I tasted the mixture of his cum and my pussy. I did this over and over, slowly, consuming his flesh. Then, I shocked my daddy with my cock-sucking expertise.

As it is something I have always loved to do, instead of having my dates fuck me, I would please them by going down on them. I definitely know how to suck a cock.

I took my daddy's penis deep into my throat and did not stop until his pubic hair tickled my nose. He screamed out Ooohhh fuckkkkk..yessssss…I have never had anyone deep-throat me before.” I smiled at the thought that this was a first for him. As I felt the head of his cock open my throat and stretch it, I swirled my tongue all over the fat shaft.

As I continued deep-throating his huge phallus, I massaged his balls with more aggression now. After about ten minutes of the best blowjob, I know, he has ever had, he started bucking his hips up and down. I met his thrusts head on, allowing his cock to fuck in and out of my mouth with power. Soon he was fucking my face with long smooth strokes. I took it out every so often and gave him a speedy hand job, pumping his dick with a firm hand, before sinking my wet mouth back down on him. He could take it no more.
He screamed out that he was going to explode. I took his dick out of my mouth and aimed it at my face. My hand was a blur as I quickly jerked his cock off. I opened my mouth just as his penis swelled up and burst its baby-making seed toward my face. With this being his second orgasm in a row, it wasn't as big as the first drenching one, but there was plenty. It squirted my lips, my eyes, and my cheeks and dripped down off my chin. I swallowed the globs of cum that I took in my mouth.

Just as I took the head of his cock back into my cum-soaked lips, I suddenly heard my mom's voice. Brandi, Brandi…” Oh shit”, I thought, I am busted big time. Busted with my daddy's, her husbands cock in my mouth. Busted with my daddy's cum dripping down my face and my body. I then heard it again, louder, Brandi..."

I suddenly woke up. I was lying naked on top of my bed. My mom was next to me shaking my shoulders. Brandi hon, you were having a dream sweetie. I came in to let you know your dad and I are going shopping and would be back a little bit later. You were squirming all over the bed and moaning.” With a wink and a grin she added, I won't even ask what you were dreaming about”.

Looking into my mom's pretty eyes, I thought suddenly, Oh God no, you wouldn't want to know.”

She kissed my sweating forehead and turned to leave, closing my bedroom door behind her. I smiled with the thoughts, I had my daddy completely; his mouth, his fingers, his cock. I touched him, felt him, and tasted him. I lived a day of absolute sin, of incestuous lovemaking with my father and loved every second of it. Now knowing it was all a dream, I live with the absolute pleasure of the uninhibited taboo sex we shared and the ultimate pleasure of feeling no guilt.

I hope you enjoyed this. Comments are welcomed! Hugs and Kisses, Brandi XOXOX


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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 22:40
    AMAZING

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  • divination
    23.09.2009 23:31
    I love how it was a dream. that was a great twist

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 23:38
    good writing,exciying

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 00:14
    A lot of the time the 'dream' twist comes out as really predictable and annoying. But not this time lol. Great writing.

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  • panda31523
    24.09.2009 01:34
    very good I would like to see a pic of you so I could dream....

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  • w1drng
    24.09.2009 03:34
    Incredible. No one can honestly find fault with this story. Well done.

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  • ovid58
    24.09.2009 05:12
    Since it's only a dream, I really appreciate it - good writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 08:59
    the best i've read

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  • lil-brandi
    24.09.2009 10:06
    I thank you all for enjoying my story and taking the time to write comments...it's people like y'all that make it all worth while!!!
    big huggles,
    Brandi

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 10:29
    Great Job! I've been reading these for years. My first comment ever this one deserved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 10:32
    hey superb story..couldnt stop without masturbating!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 11:32
    see you on the next dream

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 11:43
    I liked this one too...Nice job again Brandi...you know how to write good sex stories!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 14:55
    What splendid talent you have. I felt as though I were reading an excerpt from a novel. If you haven't a career in writing, maybe it is time you pursue one.This is by far one of the best, if not the best, stories I have ever read on here. Please give us more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2009 21:16
    yum

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  • In+Love+Again.
    25.09.2009 01:46
    We have read your wonderfull story with the thoughts that it deserves. We both are now extreemly horny and feel that it is no fault of our own. We look forward to your next story with anticipation! Thank you Brandi.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2009 02:28
    good lord that was the best story i ever read. i cant remember the last time i came so hard like tonight

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2009 02:45
    GIVE ME A BLOWJOB!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2009 08:40
    hot hot hot

    now I need to jack off again

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2009 09:59
    14:55:09- hahaha look the author's leaving herself comments again. The story isn't bad, but in no way does it indicate a great talent. It's just literate. Yay, another author who can actually read; that I can applaud.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2009 12:55
    i wish i was ur daddy xx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2009 13:17
    IT WAS GOOD
    will there by a 2nd part

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  • Lil-Brandi
    25.09.2009 15:25
    Thank you to everyone that has taken the time and commented on my stories. I am glad that you enjoy them. It is a pleasure to build them in my mind and exciting to write them out, even more so to know people are also excited by them. To Reader at 09:59:34, please...As much as I LOVE and appreciate the great comments, i'm not here for them, I'm here to simply share a little bit of erotica and fantasy. Do you really believe I need to comment on my own stories? OMG, the final laugh is on you if you really think so. I have zero need for that or quite frankly the time to do so. I write out of the passion for writing and the pleasure of erotica, and the ability to share at sights such as this. If you enjoy my stories that's wonderful, if not, that is fine too, and the constructive criticism only assists in me becoming a better writer, therefore I welcome it. But the blatently mean comments and silly accusations are really unnecessary and very amateurish and elementary, don't you think?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2009 16:46
    *yawn*for someone who doesn't "have time" to post positive comments to herself, you sure spend alot of time writing out paragraphs defending yourself. I read everything you have posted today, leaving this for last since I knew what it was going to say anyway. I was right; the only thing I didn't expect was that it was a dream. *shrugs* there are plenty of other writers on this site at least as good as this, and plenty better. But this site is pretty much for pedos and incest freaks anyway so of course this was well received, It's ok, nothing special; if you want some real criticism, try writing about something other than the most overused topics, and we'll see if people other than the pedos and daddy-fuckers rave. Yes, I saw your other stories, and the scores are markedly lower... which pretty much proves my point. If you were truly some kind of great writer, all your stories would be well recieved, not just the incestuous ones.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 02:17
    lol 16:46:13, just shut up and stop trying to act like a tough guy and pick fights. just SHUT UP

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2009 05:38
    *****Twstd&Dmntd4Lfe*****........................ now on this story..........
    i'll just word it this way @@@ """you might as well.... just stop
    completely.... right there""" @ whyyyyyyy.... you ask.... very simple
    (((there is,nooooooooooo,fucking way,in hell.... any sequels.... can
    be better / will be better.... than this one))) @ it was only dream {or}
    was it.......................... hahahahahahaha................................. [[p.s.]]
    didn't actually read @ the whole story yet

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  • Virtual_Tourist
    27.09.2009 06:52
    Make it happen for real.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2009 08:44
    *****Twstd&Dmntd4Lfe*****..................... bck on,ths story......... wellllll
    @ i've read more (still not all)..... i've looked over @ all comments.....
    hahahahaha @ not one person,has said,anything at all,remotely
    close to,what i've,previously said ""it was , only dream [or] was it ,
    only dream"" \\ not even,the two comments @ after my,first comment
    ,this story @ said anything,remotely close to,my stuff........hahahaha

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2009 11:14
    this is very good i liked it ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2009 12:57
    Great story, I enjoyed this tremendously :-)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2009 21:14
    Brandi - nice hot story. Good job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2009 10:02
    Great story, Lil-B

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2009 17:52
    Amazing. So descriptive, loved the ending.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 04:50
    Good story, very descriptive, but the "it was all a dream" ending is just as much a buzz kill as ever.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 05:34
    You have quite a way with words. Eloquence itself is a turn-on.

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  • djohmari
    29.09.2009 08:28
    Really good. Got off on it even though I'm a guy! Great to read things from a womans point of view. Keep writing ;-)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 18:52
    Looking to read that it really happens!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 22:17
    "As the ocean breeze blew, so did I." xD You're great! And you write so well! And you're a great cock sucker...

    Marry me. x)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 22:21
    "As the ocean breeze gently blew, so did I." xD ahh, that was great! As was the story. Very good writing, which is extremely important to a sex story.

    Also, if I knew you, I'd marry your ass xD

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 22:21
    "As the ocean breeze gently blew, so did I." xD ahh, that was great! As was the story. Very good writing, which is extremely important to a sex story.

    Also, if I knew you, I'd marry your ass xD

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  • anom13
    30.09.2009 17:54
    A shame it was just a dream!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.09.2009 22:52
    Story good, told very good , the ending fabulous - thank you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2009 09:19
    gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2009 09:20
    incest BITCH

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  • onenite
    01.10.2009 15:50
    Great story,with a a great "twist" at the end

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2009 22:01
    It's a pleasure to read something that isn't a jumble of misspelled and inappropriate words combined with 3rd grade punctuation. You get an A- and I'm going to take a shower.

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  • R.E.
    02.10.2009 17:41
    That was an amazing story, this if the first comment i've ever left but i had to leave one for this story, great job

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  • cadet31
    03.10.2009 15:23
    ok 2009-09-25 16:46:13 just shut the hell up; its stil la good story

    btw iu came three times readin this; did not expect the dream tho

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2009 22:52
    i have cum so much.you go girl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2009 15:40
    Simply amazing, very talented writer. Thank you for your post.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2009 23:37
    Very well written! Great job!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2009 13:30
    good job

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  • LovingOne
    06.10.2009 00:29
    very well writen. You are really talented =)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2009 13:12
    Very good story, enjoyed it very much, though i also was caught off guard by it being a dream, very nice, do keep writing

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  • cullen
    06.10.2009 16:53
    great story lil-Brandi, loved how well you describe everything.thank you and i look forward to reading more of your stories x

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  • cullen
    06.10.2009 16:55
    great story lil-Brandi, loved how well you describe everything.thank you and i look forward to reading more of your stories x

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  • cullen
    06.10.2009 16:57
    great story lil-Brandi, loved how well you describe everything.thank you and i look forward to reading more of your stories x

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  • cullen
    06.10.2009 17:06
    great story lil-Brandi, loved how well you describe everything.thank you and i look forward to reading more of your stories x

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2009 21:21
    loved how you did the ending.....great job.....great description

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2009 09:17
    i wish i had such a sluty daughter great story how old is the author mayde it is a true story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2009 11:04
    i wish i had such a sluty daughter great story how old is the author mayde it is a true story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.10.2009 05:27
    Awesome story- please write more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.10.2009 12:25
    great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.10.2009 20:16
    can't get enough of this story, read it twice so far, makes me leak cum in my pants each time. write more!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2009 09:23
    you're such a awesome writer, everything is so well descripted and really hot. The ending was faboulous!
    Keepy up the work!

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  • sundownerboatfish
    10.10.2009 12:06
    That was a great story - you had me believeing it was real - I have a beautiful daughter that I have had those thoughts but never would act on

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  • His_wife90
    10.10.2009 14:00
    Watch how they build their very strong networks in our countries in a very peaceful and constructive way. ,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2009 15:10
    WTF I jst came with this damnnnnn i'm now a sweaty mess and my pussy is still wettt too

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  • reader
    reader 500
    10.10.2009 15:59
    fantastic story, i was unable to take my eyes away from the screen one of the best fantasy storys ive ever read, wish she was me daughter!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2009 17:07
    Lil-Brandi: This was a great story. I am sitting with a big boner as I write this note and wish I could put it in your twat! Ignore the haters; if they don't like your story they can fuck off and go outside and scoop dog turd up in the neighborhood. You rock! Keep writing, and learn to develop a thicker skin. You can't let idiots discourage you from your gift. Look at how many pages of comments you generated. That's how people really feel about your story. Write about brother-sister incest, especially if the girl is young, like nine, ten or eleven. Their first time impressions of sex are delicious. You go girl!

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  • anonymous5
    11.10.2009 20:29
    brilliant I must say

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  • just_a_reader
    12.10.2009 00:21
    amazing. so satisfying!

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  • anon
    12.10.2009 16:45
    Quite a story quite an ending you do tell an interesting incestuous one and OHHH Dddddddadddy wish I was yours

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2009 22:39
    thats a fantastic story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2009 01:37
    great story

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  • Maxx37
    13.10.2009 03:14
    Hispanics, or Danes by comparison with Swedes. ,

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  • Digger241
    13.10.2009 08:32
    Wow. Well done. I'll go clean up now. Thanks.

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  • SourD3
    13.10.2009 20:41
    OMFG THAT WAS AMAZING!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2009 23:55
    omg i came so hard with this story.
    strange, incest is so wrong yet daddy daughter sex stories turn me on so much.
    your story is deffinately going in my favorites, where i'm sure i will cum to it often.
    u're terrific btw

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2009 18:57
    Good reading

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2009 22:28
    Daughter, dearest. You're too sweet to be true!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2009 16:09
    damm, i cummed,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.10.2009 02:52
    i find it funny that to all those who leave negative comments or say shit like "thats perverted" why did you even read in the first place? it has fucking tags on it for a reason... duh besides its a dream anyway im can bet most guys and us girls have had perverted dreams at somepoint or another. btw i liked this one... alot

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.10.2009 10:26
    عربي

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.10.2009 14:30
    That was quite wonderful. I like your writing technique. Def a favorite

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.10.2009 16:27
    Brandi you can visit me anytime and I'll do my best to give you the same treatment.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.10.2009 20:20
    ok good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.10.2009 09:01
    The opening confused me.... the ending disappointed me. However it was a good read. A keeper!

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  • Baddog_WOOF
    20.10.2009 21:42
    Brandi,
    What a HOT story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.10.2009 10:18
    That was an excellent, well written story. I can't wait to read more from you.

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  • Maxx44
    22.10.2009 14:03
    As usual, if a variable is not given in a math problem, you can assume two things: whatever the actual value, it does not affect the solution, and to help solve the problem, you can just use any value you like. ,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.10.2009 13:39
    Fantastic story

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  • bee
    bee
    01.11.2009 01:34
    pretty decent story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.11.2009 20:08
    that was an awesome story! Thanks for the boner. i wish i was daddy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2009 15:31
    for a dream it was pretty goodlol!

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  • hillbilleee
    09.11.2009 22:29
    good stuff there, lil.' write more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.11.2009 09:59
    nyc story ... why dont u try my cock .. i bet it larger and fatter than your fatjers cocck ;)

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  • Babyangel
    13.11.2009 21:44
    Loved it, lil-B.

    -baby, A.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2009 03:45
    I can beleive this as I lived through it too. My beautifull daughter had the cramiest, smoothest honey co0lored thighs which I was addicted too, she loved when I licked them and ate her pussy. I always remember how she loved to swallow my cum slowly, savaring every drip.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.11.2009 01:32
    I wish my daddy would fuck me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.11.2009 11:27
    im a homemaker, horny at home alone..... absolutely loved reading this story while rubbing my pussy and squeezing my nipples. cant wait for my husband to get home for a real dick inside me. ...mmmmmmm.....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.11.2009 14:31
    Very good

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  • sheemer
    27.11.2009 16:06
    mm fuck yeah. i jacked my hard dick as i read this story and i came right at the end , i want a daughter to fuck. wonderful story

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  • alan472
    29.11.2009 06:10
    seams that all loved it i certanely did

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  • dreamer6955
    29.11.2009 19:29
    Great story, surprising ending.

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  • gregminor
    02.12.2009 02:12
    this story got me so hard and hot.. any girls want a daddy to chat with, i sure love talking about it...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2009 13:45
    Hello, I loved the beginning and all but to be honest, the ending made me feel a bit cheated. I don't want to sound mean but, what's the point of reading it if the sex was just a dream? Well, congrats on it being an interesting read, just please don't do the dream angle again.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2009 14:21
    Reader UK
    03/12/09
    I had the same dream about my mother who was a very beautiful lady but like your story it only turned out to be a dream and I had a lot of growing-up to do unfortunately!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.12.2009 18:47
    very good, but i didnt like that it was just a dream.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.12.2009 16:10
    Great story!

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  • kevman2066
    06.12.2009 22:39
    great i wish i was the dad

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    11.03.2010 19:14
    freak

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.04.2010 00:33
    this story got me wet and horny. too bad it was just a dream, but it was a very hot dream!

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    Fan
    25.05.2010 08:47
    Brandi i will sure like to fuck u up hard, i wish i could harcore Believe me you will find me an excellent sex partner

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2010 01:01
    Great story! I love that it was a dream. Dreams, as we all know, are things which we hope to have fulfilled in the real world. Thanks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2010 20:27
    hi brandi i enjoyed this story so much. u have a gift

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    He held my head and made me swallow all
    his cock cream..ugghh. I never did that again
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    19.08.2010 14:27
    Awesome story, very well written. The plot and execution was simply one of the best I have read on this site ever. And the ending, never saw it coming. Thanks so much.

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    15.05.2011 06:48
    Good story. Get her and mom together with dad, please.

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