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Sex games

The Way I Dreamed It Part 1 Chapter 1

Author: darkcloud75

Date: 22 September 2009

First Time, Fiction, Teen

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Just so you people know I do NOT own Naruto [sobbing] I wish I did.
a NaruxHina story, plz RnR
Part 1 sum: Hinata finds it in her self to finally come out of her shell, but it will take something deep to make her break out.
“Normal speak”
‘Thoughts’
Written by Dragon of the Underworld
Revised by Evildart17/Darkcloud75
Now the story
Not All Chapters will have sex scenes in them
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The Way I Dreamed It
Part 1
Chapter 1
It was night with the moon shinning down on the village; Hinata was walking through a trail in the woods that lead to the top of a mountain that overlooked the village.
Hinata had a sad face and walked slowly as she neared the top.
To Hinata today was a special night that did not go the way she had planned.
Today was her seventeenth birthday and today she had planned to confess to the one she loved her true feelings at her party, Hinata was ecstatic and could not wait, however the night went by so slow mainly because the person that she just couldn’t wait to see was not there at any point of the party.
Hinata had mustered up every ounce of confidence she had and had her mind made up that she was going to tell him today she had even dressed up, she wore a very beautiful lavender kimono that showed the curves she usually hides, but it didn’t happened and now she didn’t know if she’d be able to do it again.
‘What if he doesn’t even like me as a friend . . . . . I mean he didn’t come to the party’ thought Hinata as her eyes began to get watery just thinking that Naruto didn’t like her in any kind of way.
Hinata began to shed tears as her thoughts continued to stir ‘Why? Why me? Why don’t I ever get what I wa--- ’ Hinata’s thoughts were cut short as she reached the top only to notice a single figure by the edge sitting down and looking at the village, it was a boy.
As she got closer she could see that he had been crying, he’s cheeks were drenched with tears. Hinata kept getting closer till she finally noticed who it was “Naruto-kun” she whispered to herself.
Hinata stood there for a moment not knowing what to do, she wanted to see what was wrong, why was he crying, but he was up here for a reason, to be alone.
Hinata decided to go up to him.
“Naruto-kun”
Naruto was startled and turned around to see who it was “Hinata?” he quickly turned back around and wiped away all his tears. Naruto blushed at how beautiful she looked but then he remembered that he’s cheeks were covered in tears so he turned to wipe them of then turn around again.
“Hinata . . .why are you here?”
“I-I I just came f-for a walk”
“Oh . . . you can have the place. I was just about to leave anyway,” he said as he got up and began to walk away.
“Wait” said Hinata as her hand shoot up and gripped one of Naruto’s wrists keeping him form leaving.
“What’s wrong?” asked Naruto.
“Exactly” she said.
Naruto knew what she meant by that, she wanted to know what was up with him.
“Naruto-kun what’s wrong? Why are you crying,” she said in a sweet concern tone that Naruto couldn’t help but want to cry on her shoulder as he began to cry again.
“Hinata I [sob]” he didn’t finish as he fell to his knees.
Hinata kneeled down to try and comfort him “Nothing [sob] nothings ever going to [sob] to change”
“What do you mean?”
“I . . .I-I don’t want to be lonely [sob] for the rest of my life”
“You wont I’m sure you’ll find someone”
“I’m [sob] I’m [sob] a MONSTER [sob] and no ones ever goanna want me” he said as he continued to cry.
“Naruto-kun what are you talking about your not a monster” as she herself began to shed tears herself just listening to him.
Naruto looked up at Hinata as he told her about the kyuubi and how it was sealed inside of him, and all the cruel things that the village did to him when he was small.
“That’s why . . . That’s why no one is ever going to give a chance”
“Naruto-kun [sob] your NOT A MONSTER” Hinata was now crying as much as Naruto after listening everything he went through when he was young.
Hinata embraced Naruto as she held his head on her shoulder while he kept crying.
“Naruto-kun you’re a HERO, you have many friends and one day you’ll find someone that will see you as the hero that you are. Those that think differently only think that way because they don’t know you, if they knew the Naruto that I know then they would think the same as I.”
“Hinata . . . arigato, arigato”
“It’s okay Naruto-kun”
Naruto blushed as he couldn’t help be intoxicated by an aroma radiating from Hinata.
“Naruto-kun” it’s seemed like a terrible time to bring it up, but she just had to know.
“Uhm” he said as he looked at her noticing the sad look on her face.
“Why . . .why didn’t y-you come?” asked Hinata, Naruto looked at her with a confused look.
“Why didn’t you come to my birthday party?”
“Was it today?”
“Uhm. . .did . . .did you f-for get?”
“No . . .Yes . . .I mean kind of “ he noticed that Hinata’s face didn’t changed.
“Hinata I was lost, I’ve had so much in my mind lately, I can’t seemed to think straight, all this week my mind has been elsewhere and I just lost track of what day it was, that’s why I didn’t know today was your birthday party, but I didn’t forget about your birthday, I got you a present I have it at home. Hinata I’m so sorry I wanted to be there believe me I really did.” Sobbing, angry with himself that her forgot her party.
“I believe you”
Naruto stood up “I really wanted to be there” he said again.
Hinata stood up as well “I know” she said knowing he was being sincere just by the look of his eyes.
“Hinata . . . . . you look very pretty” Hinata could only look away as she blushed, Naruto then reached for one of Hinata’s hands “Come” he said as he began to walk away.
“Where we going”
“To my apartment”
“Why?”
“I want to give you my present silly”
“Oh”
As they ran to Naruto’s apartment, Naruto couldn’t help but think about something that Hinata had just said to him.
“Naruto-kun are you alright?” she asked noticing that something might be wrong.
“It’s just that I . . .I hope I don’t disappoint you with my present”
“Naruto-kun I’m a simple girl what ever you got me I’m sure I’ll love it, it the thought that counts”
‘Right’ he thought as they continued to run to his apartment, as he continued to think about what Hinata had said to him earlier.
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A/N Their you have it the first chapter I hope you guys liked it, and I KNOW you guys are ganna love the next chapter. Now that you’ve ready it please tell me what you think.


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  • lilsweetbaby
    27.09.2009 22:06
    good start true to the characters cant wait for hiniate to come out of her shell for real

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2009 18:01
    this is silly crap. Grow up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.09.2009 10:59
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    1 outa 10.....

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  • chaotic+light
    30.09.2009 13:39
    good plot. needs more tho and id advise u to read naruto atleast once heres a free manga site onemanga.com but over all good for some one who doesnt kno naruto that well :D keep up the good work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2009 22:24
    u suck nigger balls

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2009 01:12
    ignore those ppl that are putting down the stories ur just revising the story u didnt write it keep them commin tho i like them

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2009 16:33
    i agree with the person below me / your story is very well thought out especially with all the details and everything, good spell checking too :) i like the naruto series myself and i am glad someone is taking the time and effort to put the story to terms with the series im also glad that your story is a story indeed instead of 10 paragraphs of just sex i look forward to the next installment of your stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2009 16:33
    i agree with the person below me / your story is very well thought out especially with all the details and everything, good spell checking too :) i like the naruto series myself and i am glad someone is taking the time and effort to put the story to terms with the series im also glad that your story is a story indeed instead of 10 paragraphs of just sex i look forward to the next installment of your stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2009 18:32
    Continue the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.10.2009 00:02
    DO MORE!!!!!!! DO MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.10.2009 00:49
    more plzzzzzz:D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2009 19:04
    Great work dude keep em commin!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2009 01:10
    So far so good man dont screw it up with freaky shit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2009 19:12
    AWESOME

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  • fuck+bro
    28.10.2009 22:22
    it's interesting how Hinata seems stronger than Naruto in the anime it's the other way. Good start.

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  • fuck+bro
    28.10.2009 22:26
    This one seems to jump around quickly, but will continue to read on seems like a good story.

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  • fuck+bro
    28.10.2009 22:36
    So far so good.

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  • fuck+bro
    28.10.2009 22:43
    In the anime Naruto discovers who his father is when he fights pain.

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  • fuck+bro
    28.10.2009 22:49
    Instead of a pen it's normally by blood when they sign such things, but it's still a good story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.10.2009 22:13
    awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.04.2010 11:48
    i read this on fanfiction....mmm....amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2010 04:59
    dude wouldn't hinata faint when naruto said he liked her????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2010 23:55
    I have to say their are some problems such as wrong poor grammar and spelling. using the wrong word at the wrong time or the wrong tense but the story over all is interesting though I find the naruto Anime and comics senseless teen drivel this mixes it into something more adult yet still childish at the same time. ah but I ramble It's good but not eyegasmic.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2010 00:47
    Still irked by the missuse of words but still intrigued to the story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2010 23:15
    fill it in somemore and it will be a damn good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2010 12:03
    fill it in somemore and it will be a damn good story and keep going

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2010 12:29
    Great work dude keep em commin!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2010 01:23
    Onemanga doesn't have naruto any more

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2010 02:57
    Fuck bro is right but dark cloud used plot no jutsu

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2010 02:57
    Fuck bro is right but dark cloud used plot no jutsu

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2010 03:11
    As usual fuck bro is right

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2010 16:07
    this is good i like this story so far

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.09.2010 02:06
    Is this the anime or the manga? No. Its a different story just using the characters and their mannerisms. I've read a lot of books and stories over the years and this one has a good story to it. A little short and could use some filling in, but hey nobody is expecting a freaking novel. Its still a good story. Thanks for the time to come up with it all.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.09.2010 02:12
    ITS NOT THE ANIME OR THE MANGA!!! If you want to read those go to narutocentral.com.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2010 21:15
    Man these suck they actually have a good plot not just sex that's retarded

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2010 22:04
    It's spelled née-san

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2010 19:39
    I must say that Anonymous reader 2009-09-30 10:59:08 and Anonymous reader 2009-09-29 18:01:02 are idiots, its actually quite good, however it could be a bit easier to read. just put it into proper paragraphs and have a blank line between each paragraph and then it will be better in that its easier to read. other than that, I like it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2010 19:39
    I must say that Anonymous reader 2009-09-30 10:59:08 and Anonymous reader 2009-09-29 18:01:02 are idiots, its actually quite good, however it could be a bit easier to read. just put it into proper paragraphs and have a blank line between each paragraph and then it will be better in that its easier to read. other than that, I like it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.12.2010 20:56
    woot naru-hina stories!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.12.2010 20:56
    woot naru-hina stories!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.03.2011 23:51
    eh dude who said nigger fuck you and all the people in hell with your ass bitch yeah!!! represent

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.03.2011 00:03
    who ever talks bad about these stories you are fucking sycotic bitch so if you do fuck you asshole

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.03.2011 00:27
    yeah fuck bro i read your story it was awsome

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.12.2011 14:43
    WTF what nurse does a pregnacy test on a fainted teen?

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 11:22
    r0iXoo Excellent! Got a real pleasure..!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2012 20:33
    Damn it, i come to fap and i can just tell ill be reading this whole story now....................... god damn it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2012 20:31
    i really like this story keep it up

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  • cebures
    18.07.2012 15:14
    love this story. cant wait for more. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2012 00:20
    HOLY SHIT!!! THATS A REALLY BIG TWIST!!!Cudos on th suprise factor to hinata! i love this so far

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.10.2012 22:43
    its like naruto planned all this

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.10.2012 04:32
    Great story line and creative thinking a work of a true artist
    ~TR

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.10.2012 04:39
    One of a kind its a master piece
    ~TR

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.10.2012 04:54
    Jiraiya is still perverted you've got to love him ^_^
    ~TR

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2015 19:42
    you are such a tease i love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2015 19:59
    i almost forgot sex makes babies

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2015 20:06
    the chapters are kinda short, sharp shooting though papi

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2015 20:11
    my eyes are in loove

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2015 20:23
    reading this in fragments is killing me

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2015 20:29
    love that shock therapy. mmmhhh

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2016 16:59
    Dude the real hinata would faint if Naruto said he loved her and also TRY AND GET THE CORRECT SPELLINGS its hard to know the difference where you need too you put to

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2016 17:05
    What the? you can't do pregnancy test on someone who faints

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2016 17:12
    U suck dude

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2016 17:20
    Hiashi does love them you asshole fuck you, son of a whore, slut,dick, and he his not a bad asshole as you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2016 17:43
    Good but no justu come on add actions

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