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Raped a goth girl

Author: Argo 63

Date: 21 March 2010

Bestiality, Dark Fantasy, Gothic, Young

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One day I was watching the local high school and I saw this goth girl, no older than 15 wearing the smallest skirt I ever saw that didn't reveal anything. She wasn't the hottest girl there but she was close. She had black hair shoulder length, brown eyes, about 5'2 and nice tits. I saw her walking home from school and I never waste an oportonity. I park one street up and wait for my soon to be toy. Right when's she gets next to my van I throw the door open, grab her and take off. She starts screaming so I just grabbed her hair and slammed her head into the dash board. I continued driving, staring at her petite body every chance I got. I couldn't wait to get home so I pulled into the nearest alley and parked. 

I layer her down in the back and started to stare at her. I start to run my fingers along her body. I then grab her shirt and start ripping it off. After her shirt was off I was about to take off her skirt when I decided not to because she would look sexier with it on. I reached up her skirt and discovered she didn't even wear panties to school. I thought to myself 'what a slut' I rubbed her pussy and she stared to wake up. I quickly grab my sock and shove it in her mouth. I then grabbed hand cuffs that I bought for an occasion like this and cuffed her hands behind her back. She tried very hard to get out but she was to weak. I then got a knife and told her to stop moving. She looked at the knife and had a petrified look. I then said "if you even try to escape I'll kill you with out hesitation. She nodded in agreement and I smiled. I took out the sock, half expecting her to scream but she stayed quiet. I said " hello my name is brad and you are...." she gave me a puzzled look and said "my name is marrisa" I told her to stay where she is while I drive home. While I was driving home i was thinking to myself how much fun I was gonna have with her. I pull into my garage and close the door so no one would see my treasure. I tell her to follow me and she does. We walk into my house and my German shepard starts barking. "down boy you will have your turn soon" He walks back into his corner and lays on his bed. I take her down to the basement, I point to a 8x8 cell I made.  "this will be your room, you will be fed when I feed you and you will wear the clothes I tell you too. I uncuff her and put on a collar and a 6 foot leash. I close the cell door and walk across the room to my storage room. I pull out a chair and my pipe and place it in front of her cell. I pack some weed in and start to smoke. I look at her and said " what are you waiting for I wanna see a show" she says " what do you mean" I stopped got up opened the door and slapped her. "you better know what I mean bitch or I swear I will hit you harder than that." I walk out and close the cell and sit back down, I resume my smoking. She lays on the floor and nervously starts to rub herself. My cock twitched and I took a hit and blew the hit right into her face. I then pulled my shorts down revealing my 8 inch dick and started to rub it. She stops and started to stare. I got up and she started again but it was to late. I opened the cell and slapped her again. She started to cry. I then shoved my dick in her mouth and I push it to the back of her throat and she gagged. I face fucked her for about 5 min and then pulled out. She curled in a ball and cried. I look at her and spread her legs and saw her tiny pink clean shaven pussy and tried to put my dick in her.  She tried pushing me away but I kept her down and started to penetrate her. She was so tight I barley got the head in. I used more force and I got the head in. I started to go deeper when I hit her hymen. I was surprised, I thought 'this tease is still a virgin' with out thinking I shoved my dick all the way in and I popped her. She screamed, bleeding and crying I pumped my dick in her thrusting back and forth. My balls were wanting to explode. I squeezed her tits and pinched her nipples. I fucked her for about 10 minutes. I was nearing my climax and I pushed my dick as far in it would go and cummed deep inside her. I got up closed the cell door and put away my chair and pipe and I said " go to sleep, you have a long day ahead of you" I left went to my room and went to bed a happy man.

I woke up walked in the living and my dog jumped up hungrily. I fed him and rubbed his ears. I make some oatmeal and put it in a bowl and head down stairs. I see her laying down and I give her the bowl. "I need a spoon" she says. "eat it like the dog you are" I said. She listened and ate. I went into the cell, I didn't notice it yesterday but she had cuts on her arm. They weren't fresh but they were big. I let her finish her meal then I grab her. She jumpped, surprised and I pulled out my dick and started to fuck her again. She cries again but as I fuck her I hear her moan a little. "your starting to like this huh you little slut" I said. I pull her hair as I fuck her. I then slow down and pull out. She relaxes, expecting it to be over, I shove it into her tight virgin ass. She screams as loud as I ever heard. My balls start swelling up. Near my climax she starts moaning as she starts to orgasam. She tightens her ass which puts ne over the edge and I cum deep in her tight ass. I get up and grab her leash and lead her up stairs. I call my dog buddy and I tell her to get on all fours. She hessitates and I hit her and she falls. Buddy comes over and starts sniffing her. She pushes him away and he growls and her and she stops. He starts to lick her pussy and my cum that is running out of her ass. He then mounts her and starts to try and fuck her but he keeps missing the hole. To my surprise she helps him out and guides him in. As he starts to fuck her I get hard again and I put my dick in her mouth and she greedily sucks me off. As I am watching buddy fuck her I see his knot getting bigger and closer to her sweet pussy. He pushes it in and she is surprised and accedently bit my dick. As buddy cums I hit her for bitting me. I start choking her and I see her struggling to breath. I keep my grip and I see her life fading away. I stop and check her pulse, nothing. I shrug and said " well that's another one gone. " 


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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.03.2010 04:04
    last sentence ruined it for me

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.03.2010 04:05
    last sentence ruined it for me

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  • Officer+Friendly
    24.03.2010 06:16
    Not only did you skip most of your English classes but you're a sick fuck.

    Prison will be a good home for you and, after the fourth or fifth time that Bubba starts putting it to you, you're gonna realize that you're in love.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.03.2010 12:57
    to fast no build up and no feeling.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.03.2010 18:33
    Last sentence ruined for me to

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2010 00:20
    Last part killed it.. Rewrite with her living

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2010 15:10
    Begnning was good middle was horny mid end horny end horny...last sentnce huge turn off

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2010 17:33
    Absolute rubbish.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2010 07:55
    last sentence ruined it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2010 15:07
    last sentence killed it for me

    no pun intended

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2010 22:58
    your a good writer i liked the story but ur still a goof lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2010 16:31
    Suckish

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2010 16:58
    The story seemed to be well thought out at least the first part and the middle, towards the end it seems to have gotten fairly rushed – Kinda like you made the story while masturbating, just the well thought out first images the lead up and then sudden and rushed ending as well as the more taboo “killing off a character”. My advice is to do away with the killing, split it up into parts and it could make for a good read.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.04.2010 17:16
    great until you killed her

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  • Bane
    07.04.2010 10:20
    that was kinda good, except the hitting and killing, a girl that dress's like that should be willing not forced

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.04.2010 15:03
    There's something hot about your simplistic, uneducated style of writing... as if we might be reading the journal of a real rapist, barely literate and unable to think of more descriptive words. Other than that yes, you definitely rushed the end, it was a terrible let-down. If you can only write up to the point that it gets you off, leave off there and like the previous commentor said do a part 2.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.05.2010 12:54
    total shit story u suck

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  • silhouette
    10.07.2010 02:56
    dude your story was kinda ok then at the end you just got lazy...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2010 08:19
    fuck u You asshole why u killed her

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  • wickedkittenxxx
    20.07.2010 11:04
    I couldn't even get wet because your writing style was so pathetic, I admit the first story I posted on this site wasn't the best as far as organization goes. But everything was spelled correctly, and it wasn't a total crap plot either. You're pathetic.

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  • anon
    anon 209
    27.07.2010 17:30
    maybe it wasnt the greatest story, and i might be the only one here but i loved the unexpected kill in the end.

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  • kim09
    30.07.2010 17:19
    BITCH STOP tying TO RIGHT STORES cUZZZ YOU FUCKING SUCK ASSS I HAVE TO TELL IT LIKE IT IS YOU KNOW EAT MA PUSSY )

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2010 02:27
    Dude, what the fuck. that barely rated as decent. Simplistic, rushed with no thought. I don't know about the other people that frequent this site, but the kill at the end killed my erection. Oh, by the way, next time, use paragraphs. They help.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.09.2010 18:24
    Try using paragraphs next time, and you rushed into it way too fast.
    Better luck next time.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.11.2010 00:26
    Learn english, you pathetic excuse for a man.

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  • Badd+Jackal%7EN%7ESikk+Frosty
    30.06.2011 04:04
    Lol. The comment below ours is funny, harsh, but funny. It was pretty good. But, yeah, rushed. It seemed as if you were didn't care 'nd were just being lazy. 'Nd the kill was good, but it could've happened a bit more... entertaining, you know? You should rewrite it. In our opinion, any ways.
    ~JandF~

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.09.2011 17:46
    narcissistic . . . dark . . . empty . . . tragic

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2012 13:33
    if your going to kill them put it in the tags i dont want to read that stuff

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.05.2012 06:23
    i dont like stories were ppl get killed off p.s. your story sucked dont ever write another story and oh yeah THIS STORY SUCKED

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2012 19:39
    The end sucked I would like her live and enjoy the domination the dog part was stupid love the simple van creap goth chick story I would took a happy ending ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.10.2012 17:11
    I'll make you a list of what you suck in,

    Grammar, spelling, plot development, writing a story, punctuation, rushed, boring, simple.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2013 23:13
    Wow this suck so much was it writen by a 12 yearold?

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2013 23:26
    I wish a guy would do that to me, but not kill me - this short story made me really wet.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.07.2013 09:06
    This story is retarded

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2013 01:53
    This story was bad ill admit it was too rushed and killing her off totally turned me off over all rating? 2 out of 10

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2013 16:37
    i loved it, 10 STARS

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2013 16:10
    Looool it was real dumb but the comments r funny

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.12.2013 20:41
    U R A SICK TWISTED FUCK

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.01.2015 05:55
    I like how realistic this is.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2015 09:02
    I didn't think the story was to bad until I got to the last line. At that point I was laughing so hard I almost fell out of my chair. Good finishing line LMFAO

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2016 21:20
    What d fucking shit case was THAT!!! Dude u realy need help lik srzly go c a therapists or not ur case is special just kill ur slf

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2016 21:23
    Same person that said u should kill ur self here. Ummm to d guy that thought it was funny I also tink u should die buh fuck a dog first den we'll c huz laughing den(I will)

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