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Sex games

An incest birthday

Author: nivek_88

Date: 13 November 2014

Consensual Sex, Fiction, Incest, Teen

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Ever since i can remember, me and my twin sister were like best friends. We've done everything together since we were kids, go to the movies, play basketball, go to the mall, anything fun we did it. We tell each other everything, theres nothing we dont know about each other, at least, thats what we thought...

Let me start by describing us. My sister Rita is 5'6, blue eyes, blonde hair, a gorgeous smile, and a figure to die for. She has a wonderful body, 115 pounds, size 32B bust, and a perfect ass. As for me, my names Randy, im 6'1, 185 pounds, blue eyes, and sandy brown hair. Were both 17, but im older by an hour. I always thought by sister was pretty, but i never saw her in a sexual way, that is until two days before our 16th birthday when an "incident" happened that would change our lives forever.

It was a typical saturday, we were eating breakfast together as usual...

"Hey Randy, wanna try out the new super mario bros. i just got? I heard its pretty good", she said.

Now my sis was good at video games, but compared to me, she was am amateur. "Sure", i said, " but dont think for a second im gonna go easy on you".

"Oh whatever!" she said with a competetive look, " you cant beat me if your life depended on it". With that, we finished our breakfast and went to her room ( her room has the wii, mine the xbox 360) to play the game.

We were playing the game for well over 15 minutes, and im surprised to say she was beating me pretty badly, but then she got a little too cocky and started losing. After a while, i finally beat her, and i wasnt gonna let her hear the end of it...

"Haha, you lose!" i screamed, "once again i beat you! How does it feel to be second best?"

That must have been the last straw. Rita may be little, but she is almost as strong as me, if not stronger. As i stood up to leave, she picked me up and threw me one her bed and started tickling me. I am extremely ticklish, and she knows that, its the only time she has power over me, and she always used it.

"Stop it, stop it!", i yelled laughing histerically, but to no avail. " Whos second best now?" she said tickling me like crazy, " I am I am, you win i surrender!" She would not stop. So i took matters into my own hands. The only way to get her off is to overpower her, so thats what I did, and thats when "it" happened. Since she was on top of me on her bed tickling me, i shifted all my weight to one side and we both fell off the bed onto the floor, me on top of her. We were laughing then it just grew silent, I looked in her eyes and she looked in mine. Then all of a sudden i leaned down and kissed her full on the lips. I dont know why i did it, but im kinda glad i did, her lips were so soft. I was expecting her to push me off her and slap me, but she kissed me back . Then all of a sudden she pushed me off of her...

We looked at each other awkwardly, then i bolted out of her room like i was on fire. I couldnt believe what just happened. I kissed my sister! Did i just ruin the relationship we had? What would she think of me? Would she tell mom and dad? I had so many questions and was quickly regretting what i did. How could i look her in the eye again? I stayed in my room the rest of day, not even coming out to eat and use the bathroom. I did have a great masturbating session before i went to sleep though, i came 3 times at the thought of her.

The next day was even more awkward. At breakfast i kept my head down and said nothing. I could tell she was a little mad, but still i said nothing. Our parents immediately knew something was up since they didnt hear us laughing or playing with each other. I told them everything was fine (which was a HUGE lie) and they thought nothing of it. I finally worked up the courage to confront Rita of our " encounter".

Me: Rita can i please talk to you

Rita: i guess so, but keep your distance

Me: fair enough, Rita im so sorry i kissed you

Rita: why did you do it?

Me: i dont know, i looked in you eyes and something told me to kiss you

Rita: i wanna be mad at you, but...

Me: does that mean you liked the kiss?

Rita: THAT DOESNT MATTER DUMMY! were brother and sister! thats incest

Me: i know, and i dont care. I love you

Rita: i love you too, but im not sure if i love you like "that"

Me: as pretty as you are you can have anyone you want, but u choose to spend all your time with me, doesnt that mean something?

Rita: what it means is tha... you think im pretty?

Me: i think you are beautiful, thats why i cant stop thinking about that kiss, it was amazing

Rita: its still wrong Randy! we cant do it again

(it felt like a weight fell on top of me when she said that)
Me: please Rita, think about it, how wonderful would it be to lose your virginity to the person you love most?

Rita: (after thinking for a minute) its still incest Randy, it cant happen

I looked at her with hurt in my eyes and left. I didnt get her but at least i got the kiss from her, its something to masturbate to at least. And that i did, 4 times before i went to sleep.

That night i woke up around 2:00 because I couldnt sleep so i decided to get something to drink. As i walked past my sisters room i could hear faint noises, so i decided to check it out. She had left her door cracked a little bit so it was easy to look in without attracting attention. What i saw amazed me. My sister was masturbating herself to a pair of my boxers, i couldnt believe it! She was completley naked laying on her bed with my boxers in one hand and was sucking her nipple with the other hand. I pulled my cock out and started stroking it slowly, not wanting to cum yet. Her titties were perky and her nipples were hard as a rock. She had two fingers in her pussy and pulled them out to suck off the juices, i almost came right there, but i held off, barely. I heard her say " oh Randy that feels so good, fuck me with your cock, oh god that feels so good". When she said that i let out a little moan, and she heard me and jumped up. I was caught, and i didnt care, i wanted her, so i went to get her.

"How long have you been there?" she said trying to cover up. " Long enough to know you feel the same way i do". With that i walked over to her, dropping my clothes in the process and kissed her. At first she resisted, then she gave in and kissd back. I knew i had her. I layed her down and said "relax, this is gonna be special for both of us". I started to suck on her left nipple while i massaged her right. " oh Randy that feels so good," she said as i then switched to sucking on her right nipple and massaging her left. I kissed my way down her chest and over her stomach until i came face to face with her pussy, and it was a beautiful camel toe with nice full lips. I thought id tease her a bit so i kissed around her pussy for a few minutes, then i felt a hand forcefully grab my head. " Since you got lost, i thought id give you a hand" she said seductively. Then she shoved my face right in her pussy, and i started eating her out like there was no tomorrow.

"Oh my god, Randy, eat my pussy, stick your tongue in it, oh fuck! that feels so good!"

"SHH!" i said, we dont wanna wake mom and dad!

"u shouldnt make me feel so good then" she said breathing heavily.

I opened her lips and licked her clit, her body started to spasm out of control as i flicked my tongue across it. I knew she was close to her orgasm as she pushed up off the bed and grinded her pussy on my face.

"Oh god im cumming! im cumming! im cummmmming! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

She drowned me in her pussy juice, and i lapped it all up just as fast as she squirted it out.

"You taste so good Rita" i said licking all the juice off of her i can.

"Ive never cum so much in my life! Now its my turn to make you feel good" she said as she layed me down.

She grabbed ahold of my 7 inch cock and started stroking it, first slow, then picking up speed. Then she pushed me back on the bed and took my cock in her mouth. First she sucked the tip of my cock doing a swirling motion with her tongue which felt so good, then she took my whole shaft in her mouth and started sucking up and down at a fast pace.

"Oh shit Rita that feels so good! suck it, make me cum"

After a while i couldnt hold it in anymore and said "Im gonna cum! She just kept right on sucking and picked up speed until i blew my load in her mouth. I must have cum a gallon in her mouth, but she didnt spill a drop. She looked up at me with the most seductive look and instantly i was hard again.

"I want you to fuck me now" she said as she climbed up and mounted me. "Show me how much you love me".

She grabbed my cock in her hand, rubbed it over her pussy lips, then sat down on it full force shattering her hymen. I quickly brought her down and put her face in the pillow to muffle her screaming. After a couple minutes she sat up with a look ive never seen on her. "Fuck the shit outta me Randy! Fuck me like you'll never get to fuck me again!" she said. Ive never been so turned on in my life. I grabbed her hips and started driving my cock in her with force.

"Oh fuck yes! fuck me, Randy, fuck me! Harder! Harder! yes! oh god yes!

She got up and got on her hands and knees in front of me. I wasted no time and slid my cock back into her hot pussy. Her ass was bouncing off me from being fucked so hard. "You like fucking your sister from behind dont you? Sliding your cock in and out of my pussy. Fuck me, fuck me!" she screamed. At this point i didnt care if our parents heard us, and neither did she.

"I love fucking you, sis" i said. "I love eating your pussy, i love when you suck my cock, i love when you squirt in my face, and im gonna love cumming inside you".

I flipped her over missionary and began plowing her harder than i did doggystyle.

"Oh big brother you fuck me so good" she said short on breath. "I want your cum in me, i want you to fill me with all yout hot jizz, i wanna feel it pouring inside me" she panted.

Hearing her talk like that i knew i wouldnt last much longer, so i mustered up the last of my strength and began one final assault on her worn out pussy.

"Oh yes youre fucking me so hard! yes! i love you, Randy! I love you! I love you!" she screamed.

After a few minutes a felt the familiar tingle in my balls and screamed "im gonna cum!" I pushed in her as far as i could go and exploded all of my seed into her. After what seemed like a minute of filling her up i we both collapsed on her bed exhausted.

We both lay there and held each other. I looked at her clock and it read 4:37. After a while she looked at me and smiled. I kissed her on the lips and caressed her.

"So does this make us boyfriend and girlfriend now?" she said with a smirk on her face

"Yes and so much more" i said

Before we could say anything else we both saw a light hit the hallway, which meant our parents had cut their bedroom light on, since i never really shut the door when i came in Ritas room, so i grabbed my stuff to leave before we got caught.

Before i got out the door, i heard Rita call me. "Randy" my sister called out, "yea" i said

"happy birthday" she said as she winked at me. I smiled as i went to bed happy, awaiting what the rest of the day has in store for me.


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  • Fudgeguy
    13.04.2010 17:56
    Fair play to you, bloody brilliant story, im impressed.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.04.2010 17:58
    this is a great first attempt you should write a second

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.04.2010 18:25
    that was great i got so horny just reading it

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  • tmac6696
    13.04.2010 23:31
    well wrote i look forward to reading more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2010 04:09
    i think for ur first story it was great u should write a second for this one

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  • GetSmart
    14.04.2010 04:42
    amaizing story! no comment

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  • rondevous69
    14.04.2010 09:48
    such a sweet story well w ritten

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2010 18:34
    hey that was great, had me going, really going now lets continue with the story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.04.2010 19:59
    Please learn to spell or at least proofread.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2010 20:32
    iiiiiih
    ILOVE SXE OOOOO

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2010 20:52
    There was spelling errors? Who cares?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2010 21:32
    Oh god, that got me so hard. please write more with these two.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2010 21:40
    definitely write more with these 2

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  • funnyfarm299
    14.04.2010 22:20
    This had potential to be good, but as a Grammar Nazi I have to point a few irritating things out. First, learn to capitalize. I hate when people can't take the time to just replace "i" with "I". Second, check your use of apostrophes. Next, show, don't tell us about the characters. Now, for my biggest peeve; your dialogue was written in play format. This is a story, not a play. Fix these in your next story and it will be a lot better.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2010 22:51
    Sorry, but you need to learn how to use proper writing format. Your story was good, but. I had a hard time reading it because you switched between story format and play format. Please capitalize!!!

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  • college+chic
    14.04.2010 23:15
    whoever has a problem with this story is an idiot. there were no spelling errors. hes not writing a college paper so who gives a shit if its not spic and span! the "play" section was to signal direct intimate contact, it fit in nicely. this story was very well written, looking forward to a second. 10 out of 10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 02:46
    What are you a college prefessor? Who reads these stories and even notices tiny tiny mistakes like those. Dude just sit back and relax. I mean don't you honestly read these to satisfy you? Read the story and be happy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 02:50
    ok, this thing gets me every time. you say that the kid is 5'5'' and almost 16... about 80% of my eighth grade classmates (boys) were over 5'5'', and it was probably more than that. little things like that really get to me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 06:32
    very good mor please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 07:30
    Sorry this was terrible, bad description and overall a bad plot. I feel sorry that a site with so many great stories has this crap on it

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  • lucky
    15.04.2010 09:36
    i must be lucky, when i read storys, i can turn my self off of the spelling mistakes, so i dont bitch about them... ffs dudes, if everyones first story was as good as this, the world would be magnificent

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    15.04.2010 10:57
    AAAAAAK! Your use of lower case i for drove me crazy!! I totally concur with 'funnyfarm299' and his assessment of your poor writing habits. The story was degraded terribly because these obvious distractions. Come on man, if you are going to take the time to write a story take the time to do it correctly.

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  • GhostWriter
    15.04.2010 11:14
    Damn man, haven't you ever used a grammar checker or spell checker? The story was just so-so but the horrible composition made it really suck. Next time proof your writing before you post it.

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    15.04.2010 11:18
    AAAAAAK! Your use of lower case i for drove me crazy!! I totally concur with 'funnyfarm299' and his assessment of your poor writing habits. The story was degraded terribly because these obvious distractions. Come on man, if you are going to take the time to write a story take the time to do it correctly.

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  • barbosa
    15.04.2010 14:33
    why are so many douchebags(ghost writer, funnyfarn299, etc.) complaining about grammar? its his first dam story! obviously he just wante feedback about the story! you people really piss me off! the story was excellent man you should write a sequel

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 20:31
    you wanted my oppinion, not realistic or something id fap to. wasnt detailled, itwas......... sloppy. and im sorry to say it needed more... incestuous to it....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2010 23:05
    why should grammer matter if your slapping off to it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.04.2010 06:13
    Great story keep this style up, but as many have in a less than pelsent way you do need to work on you writing mechanics.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.04.2010 16:01
    Liked the story, especially for a first timer! Hope to see a part 2 or something similar soon!

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  • nivek_88
    16.04.2010 17:21
    i know the story was a little sloppy with grammar and stuff, i just wanted to get feedback on if the story was good or not. im in the process of writing part 2, if i get a positive enough rating ill post it, and ill clean up the little mistakes

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  • amy
    amy
    16.04.2010 17:51
    anyone who comments on grammar is retarded. do you speak properly when you fuck someone? i dont think you do! i know i dont. great story, waiting for the part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.04.2010 17:55
    Except for the few grammatics, it flowed which is what it should do.. I was hard for it all

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.04.2010 18:47
    the second story could be about the mother seeing them through the crack in the door and going back to her room to fuck thier dad. And they hear them. The door would be cracked and the kids watch them as the mother knows that they are in the hallway watching.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.04.2010 08:05
    Lead me to want to fuck my brother for real!

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  • cassandra789
    17.04.2010 11:11
    im a mother of twins and i hope they grow up as close freinds, but never that close!! lol

    as for ur story, i loved it and look forward to more chapters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.04.2010 12:16
    this shit sucked..

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  • ninjacop
    17.04.2010 12:40
    very nice!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.04.2010 14:09
    wasnt bad just hope your sister is on the pill or do you want a baby together bring your part two in if you do

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.04.2010 16:16
    loved it
    i hope theres a part 2 it could,and hopefully will, be about unexpected pregnancy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.04.2010 23:33
    I may rape my sister

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2010 12:04
    Not very good constructed. Of you are now
    22 then at 16 there was no Wii or Xbox 360

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2010 13:07
    Really stop making comments on grammatical errors!! Anyone who made those comments shut the fuck up.
    Great story. I want to read the 2nd one!! Maybe throw in a guy friend walking in on them and some boy on boy on girl action :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2010 18:04
    Not enough description of her pussy. I hope it wasn't shaved, that is gross. At 15, it should have a nice, soft fluffy bush, the hair being long enough to run your figures through, bury your nose in and inhale the sweet scents.

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  • Marriott
    18.04.2010 18:58
    It was a bit tame but in time author should get better.I do not have a sister but the thought made me hard and was worth a stroke or two.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2010 20:53
    very good, keep the story going, i love it! ad more caracters or keep it between em. whatever you want

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2010 23:52
    I've seen this story structure before. Bro and sis do some fun things, something awkward happens, escalates, yadda yadda, happy time. It seems too overused these days.

    Try to make an original story please, kthx.

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  • suzie
    19.04.2010 00:08
    whoever wrote this comment under mine must be on this site all day if he/she makes an observation like that! yea the general idea has been used but he went in another direction with it. great job man, keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2010 00:10
    great first story! whens the second coming?

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  • nivek_88
    19.04.2010 02:10
    Thanks everyone for your feedback, good and bad. This is my first time ever trying anything like this and was a little nervous of what you would think. I didnt expect so many people to like the story! I have a second part, if I continue to get good feedback, ill keep it going.

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  • chronicbear
    19.04.2010 04:46
    i say good job really i hardly found any errors in the parts i read (i never read the full storys)

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  • anonymous
    19.04.2010 05:32
    great simply great story! i want the next part too.........i figured out the author has to be an indian descendent!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.04.2010 08:42
    Please do not ever use script style dialogue. It breaks up the flow terribly. The formula was simple and predictable, but still fairly well written, especially for a first effort. I'll look forward to more of your work.

    =dreamer=

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  • JackassTales
    20.04.2010 13:39
    VERY, VERY NICE first story. Your spelling mistakes should be nothing a good spellcheck shouldn't catch. It may be a little formulamatic, but so what, just about every other writer's first story is, too! Welcome

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  • naze
    20.04.2010 14:48
    Yes it is a great story that i jerked and had a thick cum.i shall always say that a love between a brother and a sister,(if this love ia mutual)is the best of love.we shall not have to seek for other boys or girls.Unfortunately,my sister admitted that she also gets horny about me,but never could never passed the barrier and left the town because she knew that at any time we would have made love.This happened 10yrs ago.we have met only thrice since she left.Each time i saw her,I was in heaven.we are both married but she will be always be my first true love.u are a lucky boy.plse write for more about your relationship.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.04.2010 00:45
    I shot my load all over the place reading this story! I wish i had a sister to fuck when i was sixteen. Excellent story. More please..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.04.2010 10:41
    that was great. i came right as the story ended. it was perfect

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  • Fister
    23.04.2010 23:49
    I see your second part in the index, but I want to grade this one for what it is. It is almost what I experienced with my twin cousin. We call ourselves twins, as we were both born the same day but about 250 miles apart. I was born almost 2 hrs. before her. On our 15th birthdays, we had a joint party at my folks farm. It had 21 acres and about 8 of it was wooded. In the back corner, the hillside collapsed and a spring created a small fall there. I told her about how good it felt after bailing hay all day. She looked at me kind of sideways, then started undressing. I had less on, so I finished before she did and grabbed her arm and pulled her over the falls, with her panties still on. They didn't stay on too long though....As her panties dried on a branch, we did it again......We new what we were doing, but we didn't care. We are both happily married now and we just smile when we see each other. Never wanting to ruin the memory. Other enguagements took place there but not ours.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.04.2010 20:34
    excellent first story man! please you have to keep it going!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.04.2010 01:43
    What totally unrealistic drivel! The so-called 'story' was bad enough but trying to stomach the lousy grammar along with it was too much. After three or four minutes, I'd had enough. Go back to school and, this time, PAY ATTENTION.

    As for sexual experience, it's obvious that you have little or, more probably, none at all. How this sad excuse for a story has the rating that it has is a sad testement to the poor qualification of this sites readership to make an intelligent judgement.

    I shall sign off, now, as I must go rinse your literary diarrhea out of my eyes ---- and probably puke, too.

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  • Nobodyjones
    25.04.2010 09:58
    WTF is your problem?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.04.2010 23:58
    After reading some of the reader comments, I went back and read the entire story.... both installments.... and it wasn't nearly as bad as it first appeared to be. I guess I was turned off by the unrealistic way you had a virgin attacking him and then indicating no pain, no nervousness and no 'real life' concern about possibly being caught by their parents. The initial story set-up scenario was so unrealistic that my input sensors closed down.

    Advice for future submissions.... make your stories have reasonable plausibility because there were other segments of this one that lacked it, too.

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  • big+fan
    28.04.2010 14:35
    dude, this story is awesome!!!
    ýou schouldn't mind those tramps who critisize you for being retarded.
    i think your story is great, please keep writing.
    and to those who critisize this guy: you wouldn't recodnise talent even as yout sat on it!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.04.2010 00:44
    If u guys are looking for something out of an english book then go find a freakin english book! Were not literacy teachers were writers. Noone is forcing u to read it! If u have that much of a problem with it then read a different story! Its really not even that complicated!
    By the way i loved it. U r a fantastic writer. I loved the different possitions! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.04.2010 17:36
    hei sexy jeg liker sexye ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2010 18:24
    Not bad. A few grammar errors but hey, it's not much. Keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.05.2010 00:36
    pretty good 7/10
    a little smutty for my taste, and I'm tired of teenagers with 7" dick... I mean, come on... but overall I liked it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.05.2010 18:43
    Pretty sexy! I always wanted to fuck my sis; but never made the move on her. She was enough of a slut @ 16, too. As for the asshole comments buried in the preceding nine pages, well, they posted anonymously. I'd bet they didn't pull a 90+ first time out, if they actually wrote anything. LoL....that's damned funny...and they can eat shit ! Have fun writing!

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  • Horny+BITCH
    04.05.2010 22:47
    i fucking loved it lol so did u get her pregnent lol<3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2010 01:49
    fucking awesome nuf said

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2010 17:09
    WOW! All I can think about is when I ate my sister's pussy and then fucked her and fucked her until i blew a huge load all over her chest and chin... Most amazing time ever!!! GREAT STORY, thanks for the memories...

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  • Barack
    07.05.2010 07:33
    I would have stabbed her after I fucked her.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2010 19:33
    a great story, i came before it was over, had my sister too, she loved me, still does.

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  • reader
    reader 500
    08.05.2010 17:06
    Enough w ith the grammar coaching! Do you discuss grammar with your wife while love making?????!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2010 12:38
    Your grammar sucks dick, and stop exaggerating for once.. As if telling people on the internet that your dick is 3 inches larger than it actually is would help your self esteem.

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  • Anonymous
    09.05.2010 15:44
    Eh, I think you missed a couple of English lessions, and the story is way to exaggerated. If you are having sexual intercourse with your sister, and your parents are sleeping in the same house, then you do not neither scream nor moan. Moreover, I seriously doubt that your sister would want you to ram her harder if it was her first time.

    Conclusion, this was not a very good story, but keep on trying, maybe you will succeed next time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2010 00:45
    I ate my sister out while she was sleeping

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2010 09:22
    bad fucking people u willbe in the hill

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  • Susan38GG
    11.05.2010 15:09
    I had to have in me for the first time. I always loved my brother I so much wanted him to have me for my first time. I was five foot tall and he was almost seven foot. I had impressive breasts that were GG and I was close to my fertile time. I was by our swimming pool and had untied the strings of my swim suit to get a perfect tan. I saw him getting out of the pool as I turned over onto my back and spread my legs. I had shaved my cunt and had been thinking of this moment for some time. I had cum and my cunt lips glisten in the sun as he dropped his trunks and slipped his cock into me. I wrapped my legs around him and he started fucking me. Mother and her brother were in the kitchen watching us with his cock deep in her fertile cunt. My father had his cock in his fertile sister and they were at the bedroom window watching us also. I am not sure but I do believe with all of the screaming that we all came together. We all missed our next periods.

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  • sexme1416
    12.05.2010 22:32
    my oldest daughter belongs to my older brother and everyone thinks she is from my bf at the time. great story we loved it

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  • trucker95425
    13.05.2010 18:28
    I don't care what the other say but that was a hot story. I wish I had a sister that was as cool as her. I grew up with all brothers, that really sucked.

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  • jerkoff
    31.05.2010 12:49
    it's wrong, but i fuckin love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2010 00:27
    white power wite pride world wide

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2010 19:00
    @Anonymous
    2010-05-09 15:44:48
    dude were does it say true story its fictional and "better look next time" have you read the other parts of this people love them this series is like the best one on here
    p.s i cant spell series or how ever you spell it lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2010 04:12
    Hm, nno offense but in my opinion it was much to quick. Others seemed to love it so its probably good work. I'm just stingy hahaha

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2010 23:43
    It was a good idea but you need to work on punctuation. I haven't read the others to know if you've improved but we'll see.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2010 23:43
    It was a good idea but you need to work on punctuation. I haven't read the others to know if you've improved but we'll see.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.02.2011 13:03
    a writer named JOHNJOHN24 stole your story and posted it as ME AND MY TWIN SISTER file a complaint against him with the usless webmasters and have him arrested by the FBI for felony plagerism

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2011 12:05
    damn boyfriend and girlfriend? that part was a little fucked up but i loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2011 12:05
    damn boyfriend and girlfriend? that part was a little fucked up but i loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.05.2011 18:22
    pretty damn hot 8/10. only way it could have been better is if they were fucking in water

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2011 18:24
    Yeah not bad, I enjoyed it very much and hoPe to read a lot more of y

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2011 01:57
    It's a porn story an yur bitchin about fuckin punctuatio?! You must be a gay fuck haha

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2011 01:57
    This is fuxkin hot! I wish I could get wit my sister ha

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 07:56
    Seriously people? Quit bein' grammar nazis and appreciate the story. Who cares if he misspelled a couple of things?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2011 16:32
    Story goes by too fast, feels rushed.... feels like a porno... BULLSHIT!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2011 16:32
    Story goes by too fast, feels rushed.... feels like a porno... BULLSHIT!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 04:14
    This is a good example to why ive always wanted a brother...

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 00:41
    Now I want a brother to fuck me

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 01:19
    Now I want a brother to fuck me

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 00:30
    God damn I wish I was as lucky cause I have a sexy younger sister who would never even think about that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.11.2011 18:03
    I don't care about the grammatical mistakes but it is a story that happens too quickly. Next time,pace yourself.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 17:37
    Wish my twin sis was like this

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 14:50
    I hav read it many times.. Still love to read over n over again.. Its just awesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 14:50
    I hav read it many times.. Still love to read over n over again.. Its just awesome

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  • littlesisterkenya112
    28.03.2012 22:12
    I enjoyed this. For this to have been your first story you did amazing. Good
    job.

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  • digikitty1
    22.04.2012 23:17
    Wow this made me so wet! I wish my brother would do this to me!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2012 20:06
    I WISH THESE IDIOT WRITERS WOULD SHOW SOME PRIDE IN THEIR WORK AND USE EDITORS OR AT THE VERY LEAST MAKE SURE IT IS DONE PROPERLY. EITHER DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL AND THIS WAS FAR FROM RIGHT. THE READER SHOULD NOT HAVE TO STOP TO FIGURE OUT WHAT THE WRITER IS TRYING TO SAY.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2013 23:10
    oh my god!it was so good. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2013 21:25
    Completely pure epicness, my fine sir, you have made quite an eloquent story

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2013 01:12
    Rushed into it too fast, good build up with a varied middle and mediocre end.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.06.2013 13:48
    This was awesome!! But what really made it awesome was it was actually posted on my birthday :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.06.2013 06:25
    nugfv xxnx
    xxx
    ji

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.06.2013 06:25
    nugfv xxnx
    xxx
    ji

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.06.2013 06:25
    nugfv xxnx
    xxx
    ji

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.07.2013 15:21
    Has anybody fuck their sister before.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2013 03:46
    …And then the parents came in,Mom with a cleaning product bottle,And dad with his SHOTGUN...Happy-birthday.-Davidson.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.07.2013 11:00
    No because I ain't got a sister.. but I wouldn't mind doing my cousin..

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2013 19:17
    I am honestly not sure what some people are talking about. It wasn't written badly, yes a little rushed at the beginning but it's not that big a deal, the grammar is as good as can be expected from 90% of Americans, the story in general isn't bad, all in all I'd rate it a 7.3/10 come on guys why so harsh really?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2013 10:03
    that was a really awesome story. but I think to make it better, you should have had the parents catch them fucking.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 05:37
    gn7G3Y Great blog article.Really thank you! Want more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2013 11:39
    FbdUTu Im thankful for the post.Really thank you!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2013 01:30
    I love this story everytime I read it all every chapter's plz do another story like this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2014 16:10
    ZPCkaf Thanks so much for the blog post.Really thank you! Much obliged.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2014 10:44
    Need to get his sister pregnant

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2014 06:26
    This is not an original story. It has been posted before a few years ago.

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  • darthel0101
    01.09.2014 17:29
    To the person making the claim that this story has been posted prior, I request that you back that claim with references.
    I came here after reading the most recent chapter and enjoying what I read.
    Thank you for deciding to share your ability with us.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2014 17:48
    As a real life sister and brother couple, who has lived together now for many years as hubby and wife, I must say our story started close to this. I came home from school one afternoon and caught my brother jacking off. I asked if I could watch, he was reluctant but said OK! With in 20 mins. I was suckin' that beautiful dick of his and I've been doing it every since. Having a fear of getting pregnant I wouldn't let him fuck my pussy until after I turned 18 and could get on birth control. Since then we've fucked at least once a day ever since then. We do not have any children. Cause when I turned 21 I got my tubes tied. To make sure, he got a vasectomy too. Our life together has been wonderful. His favorite thing to do is fuck me while I'm trying to type in the comment section. Because I make a lot of mistakes and have to back space a lot to correct them. Nice story, but yeah, the grammer. I hope it improves over the next 25 chapters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2014 15:50
    To the person who said the story isn't original because it was posted a few years ago... Check the date this was posted, waterhead.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.10.2014 21:51
    I wish I had a sexy brother

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.10.2014 21:53
    Wow holy shit that was a god damn terrible story
    You need to put more action in it or details

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.11.2014 19:23
    My guess is you're the "waterhead" considering the comments go back to 2010. I first read this story back in 2011 and am still hopelessly in love with it!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2014 00:34
    Story hopefully gets better, but unfortunately reads like it was written with little to no actual sexual experience.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.12.2014 03:52
    suck my ass

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2015 22:08
    This is copied

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2015 22:09
    There are like 10 part's of this story on a different user

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.01.2015 19:13
    I love fucking my brother and love it most when he fucks me while I'm sleeping and I also fucking love his cum!!! I love reading stories like this people don't know what their missing

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  • Dillan1
    27.01.2015 01:06
    Great start. Can't wait to read the rest

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.05.2015 10:57
    very good story. I think you can write even better. I am going to read the others !

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  • MasterTtrianglelord
    07.06.2015 13:07
    Great story. I have read the entire series once, and all are saved on my favorites. I am waiting, not so patiently, for the next chapter. Please write Chapter 32 soon!

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  • love-ali-forever
    11.06.2015 02:48
    Love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2015 03:22
    This stury was stolen

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2015 06:01
    That story was grate I hot naked and started playing with my pussyu2764

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.01.2016 06:44
    What are you... 7? Learn how to proof read... I's are supposed to be capitalized and u is not a word...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.02.2016 15:51
    I've read lots of worse incest stories so this gets a thumbs up from me.
    Perhaps a 6 out of 10 but stories come down a few notches when the author has to mention 7 inches....That's so old....Zzzzzzz......

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.03.2016 09:21
    i was the 3400 th voter



    lol !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.03.2016 13:29
    Rita totally has 3 hands. She was holding underwear with one, tit with the other, and fingers of the third buried in her cunt where randy could see.. Good start, I look forward to the rest, but that was funny

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2016 06:56
    I let my dog eat my bloody pussy while reading this. Cummed so many times

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.05.2016 05:33
    i have read shit better than this shit. spelling sucked dick like your "sister"

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  • vhguy669
    07.03.2017 05:11
    How about you ANONYMOUS READERS register, before you berate the authors of any stories. Like the one who "CUMMED" so many times. I do believe you should have said you "CAME", not sure but I think it sounds better. Meaning it's easy to be part of a mob, like bullies....but 95% of the time or more your just scared to do anything by yourself.

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  • Stadlen
    17.09.2017 05:32
    Good story but a few things you need to work on. 1, you need to cut the text talk such as u instead of you. 2, Check your capitalization. 3, Contractions need an apostrophe. 4, Check punctuation and make sure you always close your quotation marks. Other than that great story.

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  • Dudley+Dowrong
    29.07.2018 15:02
    There were a few obvious errors, but the scenario is great. Most of Ur deions were in great detail (good), Spacing paragraphs & dialogue made the story flow & reading much more delightful. Here, U show much promise of good authorship. Just think more as U proofread to clear up errors.Looking forward to future parts!

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  • Beast1961ca
    20.01.2021 00:43
    Nice opening! :)

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  • James_Gina
    12.02.2021 20:57
    So for those about to start this Story, the first thing you should know is that Kevin (nivek_88) never finished the last chapter, and hasn't been on any sight since 2017. Second, his writing is rudimentary at best. That being said, I loved his characters, and the story itself. So, I have started on a labor of love for this story to fix it and repost it with an ending that does it justice. To understand the scope of that,Grammarly found over 8,000 basic error in punctuation, spelling, and word usage. It's going to take a while, for edits and rewrites. I will not post until the complete story is complete. Please see my current works under James_Gina.

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