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Sex games

Alexis and her teacher

Author: John_8

Date: 22 March 2004

BDSM, Fiction, Cum Swallowing, Domination/submission

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Alexis is a gorgeous beauty, that any guy would love to have. Her hair was a sexy shoulder length dirty blonde and had brown eyes, was about 5'7 and weighed 105lbs. She was 18 years old and for her birthday present, she received a trip to Mexico from her parents. She flew into Cancun International airport that afternoon and was so excited to finally be in Mexico all by herself. She took a taxi to the hotel, and checked in immediately. She changed into her bikini and quickly went down to the beach where she was watched by many men. Her bikini barely covered her nice sized tits and even skimpier covered ass. The wind was blowing slightly, when she felt a shadow over her and she opened her eyes to see who was there. The man introduced himself as Robert and that he was from New York City. She said "Hi Robert my names Alexis" and he relpied, "woud you like to go out with me tonight?" he asked very nervously. She turned her head to the side and said "sorry i already have plans, but maybe some other time ok." he immediately screamed back at her "am I not good enough for you cause I know you've got no plans going on tonight you're just an bitch. I'll teach you a lesson you'll never forget and then you'll know where your place on this planet is." She was very frightened by him know and after he left she thought nothing about it and just caught 30 more minutes of sun, before going up to her room. She got to her room and showered for a good 30 minutes shaving her legs and her pussy. She then dried herself off and got out of the shower. She put on a sexy mini skirt she just bought in the states, and a gorgeous very revealing top she had bought in the hotel when she was going up to her room. Her top was low cut and barely covered her erect nipples. She loved the way she looked then did her makeup and put some lipstick on her and she was off to the night clubs. She took a txi to a very nice club that was called Senor Pajaro's and she went to the bar and ordered a drink, then went onto the dance floor, where a couple of men eagerly shoved there way towards Alexis to try and dance with her. She was having a blast teasing all of the men and at around 5:27 A.M. in the morning she left the club and was walking back to the hotel, when a van zoomed towards her and stopped rght in front of her. She was pulled into the truck and it immediately sped off with her in it. Once the truck was moving she couldn't see anything because they had placed a black hood over her head and then they gave her a shot to make her go to sleep. She fell asleep and the van continued onward into the Mexican night in the countryide far away from civilization and the police. Finally the van stopped adn the door opened and the men carried Alexis out and into a shack that did not look very big on the outside, but on the inside it was huge. This place had a huge hidden floor below ground. They brought her into their house and carried her underground. Alexis finally awoke to find herself inwhat appeared to her to look like a jail cell and she got up slowly to walk to te door, but was stopped by a chain that was connected to her collar around her neck. There was nothing in her cell not even a bed. There was just 1 buckets one with water. Immediately one of the kidnappers walked in and said to her "you can drink from that bucket and piss and shit on the floor". She immediately shot back "wait i'm not going to piss and shit on the floor are you crazy and i'm hungry I want food." The kidnapper walked back in her cell and came infront of her and slapped her face then said "never talk talk back to me or any other man slave you do as you are told forever slave!" She started crying and was in shock. She wanted to go home, but now she was trpped forever it seemed. She cried herself to sleep and when she woke up she wento over to the bucket and drank some water. She then had to take a piss really bad and shit. She couldn't hold it back anymore so she hiked up her skirt and shitted then she pissed on the floor where she had just slept. All of a sudden a tray was slid under her door that had some remains of meatloaf and vegetables along with some water. She immediately ate it all even though it tasted like crap, she was starving. After she was done eating she lay in her excrement on the floor and finally the door opened and one of her kidnappers walked in. She asked "where am I? and what are you going to do to me?" The kidnapper did not say anything he just went to unhook her chain and then pull her out of her cell and into the dungeon. She was shocked at what she saw. There were girls here just like here all over the room


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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.03.2004 20:46
    That was terrible! WOW, Oh my god. What a waste of time.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2004 20:34
    OH MY GOD, I NEVER KNEW THAT THERE WAS A STORY SO BAD, IT SUCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.04.2004 22:18
    what a fucking bad story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.04.2004 17:52
    You fuckin' idiot what kind of dumb shit is this

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2004 21:14
    I agree, totally lame........

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.04.2004 00:31
    wow... that was the biggest piece of shit ever. Dont ever write another story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.04.2004 20:10
    Its a pity the lowest score you can give is 1/10! I sometimes wonder whether some writers are serious although getting the lowest score ever must be some sort of acheivement. Might have a go myself one day and see if I can write worse garbage than this!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.04.2004 23:37
    Kidding? thats it? who wrote this, a boring loser?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2004 12:15
    Such a bad story suggestion never write again

    YOU SUCK ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    second worse story ive ever read

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2004 13:18
    Wow, that sucked..

    If you write another story, I'll put you in a cell and make you sleep in your shit..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2004 04:31
    A guy eats out a girl.........

    That is a better story than yours

    BOOOOOO!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2004 16:29
    DUDE did U get this from A Fucking NERD???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2004 16:33
    I would give this shit a negative number that doesn't end this is the lamest thing that I have ever read in my whole damn life biatch!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2004 16:34
    I would give this shit a negative number that doesn't end this is the lamest thing that I have ever read in my whole damn life biatch!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2004 17:59
    thats the worst... jeez try harder ppl

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.04.2004 19:39
    ok this wasnt even about sex.. horrible horrible horrible

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.04.2004 04:02
    Fuckin what iz this SHIT?!
    this is horrid, it's not even a whole story, let alone that its's not even got SEX mentioned ANYWHERE!!! SHiTTTy!!

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    READER 500
    17.04.2004 17:02
    u suck that was the worst story ever bitch

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.04.2004 21:30
    Don't ever write a fucking story.What kind of piece of shit was that?! That sucked fucking ass my little cousin whos 3 could write a better sex story.Idon't even think that was a fucking sex story .Do us all a favor and never fucking write stories ever in your life okay?!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.04.2004 19:15
    Dude that fucking sucked. Dont ever write another story..ever.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.04.2004 18:28
    FUCK THIS SHIT

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2004 00:14
    that sukt maybe u should save that kind of writing for like horror stories pretty interesting but it didnt come close to makin me wet just made me want to throw up!......

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    READER 500
    23.04.2004 10:48
    I loved the story....I read it to my children at night so they can drift off to sleep.......lmao.....(joke) I agree with the rest of the comments.......writing isn't your strong point.....maybe you should reread your own story.....

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    READER 500
    23.04.2004 10:51
    Alexis and her teacher>>>>>>>>>ISN'T THIS THE TITLE OF YOUR STORY?????? DID I LOSE SOMETHING????? WHERE'S THE TEACHER??????

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    READER 500
    23.04.2004 18:15
    I dunno wat the fuk that was that wasn't even about sex and that story isnt even finished fukin helll man stop writing such bullshit and get some ritin lessons or sumin u no it dint even make sense i mean it was sik aswell wat the fuk is rong with your head???

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    READER 500
    24.04.2004 00:05
    i hope you rot in hell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.04.2004 23:54
    Dude I see you went to mexico and got shot down but DAMN! you could have wrote a better revenge story like this.
    I went to mexico met a girl she told me no I then waited and kidnapped her then took her to a underground dungon and fucked her wet pussy until is swole 3 times normal sze.
    there ya go Dude take notes.

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    READER 500
    25.04.2004 14:13
    I'm only 9 okay, I wrote this story and its good.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2004 22:32
    THIS SUCKED ASS!!! UTTER SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.04.2004 09:23
    I feel like killing myself after reading 1/4 of this story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.04.2004 01:04
    wtf. You owe me 2 minutes of my life. Never ever attempt writting again.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.04.2004 18:53
    That made me cum all over my golden retrever. he is white now. Hey! do any of you silverbacks have any dogs I can fuck up the ass?

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    READER 500
    29.04.2004 09:33
    that was fucking sad! even i could write a story better then that! if u r really 9 u shouldn't b on here anyway! don't post no more stories u bitch! I just wasted my time reading that!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.04.2004 19:49
    John son, you obviously missed the 'porn' bit of porn story. You are a fucked up dickhead & you owe me an erection you fuckwit!

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    READER 500
    30.04.2004 22:37
    i don't know wear to start when tellig someone how bad that story was.

    1. you missed the entire point of a slavery story

    2. it sucked.

    p.s. you owe me a boner, 10 minutes, and a better story you wasted my f***ing time

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    READER 500
    02.05.2004 15:03
    I am going to fucking kill you for being such a retard and ahitting all over the wall! I hate underage bastards who think they actually have talent to awrite this stuff. HARRRRRRRR!

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    READER 500
    04.05.2004 03:15
    left me cold & dry

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.05.2004 03:23
    Terrible, unfinished garbage

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.05.2004 12:43
    I won't bother reading cus these other ppl seem to have told me wat I can expect, and I can only assume ure a total fuckwit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.05.2004 10:30
    BORING!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.05.2004 00:39
    WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT SHIT

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.05.2004 13:41
    THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.05.2004 21:31
    my god i agree with these guyz, there wasnt even a sex scene, even if itd be rape itd still be something, you owe all of us an erection lol, lame as fuck. hell to be honest if i had a slave id make her fuck me until shes raw, i mean seriously you really gotta take a long hard look at ur life, realize u havent accomplished shit, and then go hang yourself, cuz you wont get anywhere as a writter

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    READER 500
    21.05.2004 17:24
    what the fuck was that?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.05.2004 17:49
    John: Thanks for writting something. I know others are critizing you..., but take it in stride.
    Best Wishes!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.05.2004 21:33
    Yeah take it easy! ;-)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.05.2004 20:37
    what the hell was that that was shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.05.2004 16:16
    What the fuck is this no sex no masturbation nothing who the fuck wrote this shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.05.2004 17:32
    You need to finish the story. Good beginning but nothing else to go on.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.05.2004 19:38
    What the hell? That was one of, if not the worst sorry I've read....FINISH the damn thing and then submit it....just b/c you got your rocks off on a chick shitting and pissing on the floor doesn't mean that we're going to. Get a life you sickfuk

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.05.2004 21:03
    Well , I think this story needs to be finished, it does have potential, but no sex ??! C'mon please !!
    I'm looking for a NEW MASTER.

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    READER 500
    28.05.2004 13:37
    What happened to the enema? What happened to th bdsm? What happened to the prostitution? It probably isn't even fiction? Ur dumb ass is probably laying in ur own excrement right now. U should b taken outside, tarred and feathered, and then shot thru each nipple. Omg, what a loser.

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    READER 500
    31.05.2004 07:15
    Hey this story just crack me up!!! Lots of gramma error!!! Blood fucked up story!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.06.2004 17:58
    Why didn't you finish the story? It was getting good 'til you stopped.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.06.2004 20:59
    i didnt even read the story. All of you are critisizing these stories. Look, notice you people are takign time to make fun of people on a porn site. You people have no lives. Do you people haven othing better to do than to read pornographic stories and rate them? Get jobs. This kind of stuff is what ruins society today

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    READER 500
    06.06.2004 09:56
    Wow, that was great! I'm bookmarking this so I can get it hard and fuck some cats later! But right now, I'm gonna jack-off in front of a mirror! Come here and lookey at what I'm doing, mommy! Der~ka~der!

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    READER 500
    22.06.2004 04:47
    HOLY SHIT!!! WTF was that? there is some really horribly done shit on this site, but honestly man...holy shit.

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    READER 500
    22.06.2004 12:31
    Where is the Cum Swallowing, Domination/submission, Prostitution, BDSM or Enema. Put these things in the story and resubmit it, you might get a better rating, as for this piece of fucking shit i will give it a 0/10. If there were negative numbers i would use them. This was a waste of my fucking tiime that i could have used to read a good story and jack off.

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    READER 500
    23.06.2004 02:48
    WOW.... This is such fuking shit its unbelievable.... It sucks and doesnt have anything to do with sex. u suck ass. dont write again, just get a gunand kill urself

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    READER 500
    24.06.2004 11:59
    What the fuck.

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    READER 500
    29.06.2004 09:17
    Dude, you suck pig tits. I wouldn't be suprised if you chew chode. Do us all a favor and drown in diahrrea. Also, what the fuck is up with that scary monkey guy? Look 5 posts down (counting mine)

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    READER 500
    30.06.2004 03:05
    IVE HEARD BETTER JACKING OFF MATERIAL ON SHAMPOO BOTTLES AND BARNEYBOOKS WAT A LITTLE FUCK HAHAHA HO DONT QUIT UR DAYJOB BLOWIN DICKS

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    READER 500
    01.07.2004 07:41
    You're kidding me. This is it? Here's some advice: Make sure that when you submit a story that 1) it actually has the things you catagorized it as 2) it is finished 3) it has less than 20 grammatical and spelling errors and 4) it has some kind of sexual encounter moreso than shitting and pissing on the floor.

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    READER 500
    01.07.2004 13:04
    good god!!!!!!!!! they kidnaped you to be thir slaves forever that is just sick and wrong if you are r truly the one writing this you have my deepest sympathys.as for the story go's you reelly know how to teas somone

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    READER 500
    01.07.2004 13:19
    okay bobby lesher you faggot ass butt munch lets here your side of the story if you hate us so much why where u on this site then huh

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2004 18:54
    You Are





    ROYALY FUCKED IN THE HEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    06.07.2004 07:31
    ok......it was getting good at first....then for some reason it sucked really fuckin bad, i mean what the shit was with that ending, either u are retarded and think ur a good writer or u just wanted to piss people off which you did pretty fuckin good!

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    READER 500
    09.07.2004 21:03
    Hmm - I see a budding literary genius in the making here. C'mon guys - have you no taste? No decency? No tingling of the spine as a new Jackie Collins enters the arena etc.etc.etc. blah../.blah ...blah .. blurghhhh. OK - it was utter crap! I admit it!. But I'll give him 10 (it was a him, I'm sure!)

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    READER 500
    09.07.2004 21:13
    sorry - I'd like to comment, but i need the john urgently. mustbe sometin I ate...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.07.2004 00:07
    I can't understand why John didn't post another story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.07.2004 01:40
    Umm was she in a van or a truck dude make up your mind.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.07.2004 00:29
    You are sick man. you have a problem, a real one. You have been very much rejected, haven't you? The girls don't even consider you, right? this was the worse story I have ever read.

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    READER 500
    26.07.2004 06:35
    You have the most screwed mind i have ever come across, yr story is twisted like u. no-one else likes stories of girls sleeping in their own shit.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.07.2004 04:05
    you are the worst writer i have ever seen. if you write another story noone is going to read it so get off this site and go somewhere else

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    READER 500
    03.08.2004 19:51
    where the fuck is the "cum swallowing, enema, domination, teacher"? goddamn that b.s. sucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.08.2004 04:02
    why don't you try another hobby, like suicide!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.08.2004 16:14
    one of the worst stories ive ever read!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    12.08.2004 11:19
    Crap ! Crap ! CRAP!, you call this writing ? take a hundred lines, "I must not write crap and if I do I should at least finish the sodding story !

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    READER 500
    13.08.2004 23:34
    where the hell was the domination and the teacher and the fucking for that matter the story was shit please for the sake of the rest of us don't ever right another story again thankyou for nothing!

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    READER 500
    16.08.2004 09:08
    what the frack was that?? that is just sick and pathetic!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2004 09:19
    try writting a story not a joke.

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    READER 500
    25.08.2004 23:09
    SHE SHITTED??? GOD I THOUGHT I WAS A BAD WRITER. AROUND 5:27 a.m.?? meatloaf and vegetables along with some water??? are you talking about the water bucket or did they slide more under the door?? Please delete that crap!!!

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    READER 500
    25.08.2004 23:42
    I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WERE ONLY 9. IF I COULD DELETE MY COMMENT I WOULD. SOMETIMES ADULTS CAN BE VERY MEAN. I'M SORRY.

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    READER 500
    26.08.2004 15:47
    Spanking should be banned world-wide, just like rape. It's sick and humiliating. Often causes the victim to believe that physical violence solves problems...sometimes leads to frustrated depression and suicied. It's banned in most of Europe (Banned by Canadan law in 2004). Don't hit your kids!

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    READER 500
    28.08.2004 04:21
    ok this story sucks but "upsetting" dude... what the fuck are you going on bout... this is a sight which has thoses stories on em... some ppl like receiving spankings yeesh strange man

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    READER 500
    04.09.2004 18:37
    I've seen worst..Give the person who wrote it a broke..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.09.2004 17:30
    giv the guy a brake.. he is 9... he shouldnt be here lmfao

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.09.2004 18:36
    Dude. That, like, sucked. Where's the ACTION?

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    READER 500
    12.09.2004 01:29
    dude...your 9 and frankly...that blows. dont care about your age. grow up, learn to write, then make a real story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.09.2004 15:10
    WHY?

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    READER 500
    18.09.2004 03:18
    LMAO you little bugger, made me laugh thats what ya did. only story to make me just burst out in furious laughter at the phrase "slept in her excrement". good job asshole. fuck your story. out the window with zat. thats it. Piss off!

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    READER 500
    26.09.2004 17:36
    yo let me tell you who ever wrote this story needs to get sum fuckin of thier own and kearn to write wat the hell did i just read

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    READER 500
    27.09.2004 01:14
    hey hells_eyes the rap goes

    fuck fuck fuck fuck motha motha fuck fuck motha motha fuck fuck motha fuck motha fuck noinch noinch noinch 1 2 1 2 3 4 noinch noinch noinch smokin weed smokin wiz drinkin cokes drikin beers drinkin beers beers beers rollin fattie smokin blunts who smokes the blunts we smoke the blunt rollin blunts and smokin blunts......hey let me get a nickel bag......15 bucks little man put that shit in my hand if that money doesnt show then you owe me owe me owe my jungle love yeah owee owee owe i thnk i want to kno ya kno ya-jays rap-jay and silent bob strkie back

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    READER 500
    01.10.2004 16:21
    this was the gayest story ever. make it longer and more descriptive if you want higher than a 1/10 from me..

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    READER 500
    09.10.2004 16:28
    the best part of this story are the comments below it

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    READER 500
    21.10.2004 06:56
    this story was a fuckin shit of piece i was expecting some sex and it came out to being a pissing shit of crap

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    READER 500
    23.10.2004 20:00
    you suck that was the worst story i have ever read

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.10.2004 23:41
    that was retarded

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.10.2004 03:49
    fuck u asshole,all da oder fuken story here iv read r all fuken way better dan urs dikflop i gace it a 1/10

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    READER 500
    08.11.2004 22:33
    idiot story i ever read... better show it to ..the DUSTBIN

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2004 02:09
    Fuck all these people who say that shit wasnt any good. I got the biggest hard on of my life reading this shit. I couldnt help but to stoke my shit while reading. All of you dumb mother fuckers can go to hell for all i car cause i thought that that was a kick ass story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.11.2004 22:16
    Oh my god, this was the lamest fuckin story i have ever read 1/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.11.2004 07:29
    der der derrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.11.2004 10:54
    d,
    Yeah, it was awesome
    JK
    0/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2004 00:30
    I almost died choking to this story, so gay, stupid and not even sex related? God, get older, learn how to write or just commit suicide, dumb John, sucked my damn cat's dick.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.12.2004 16:03
    WHOEVER WROTE THESE STORY IS A RETARDED SON OF A BITCH WAT THE FUCK WERE U THINKIN ASSHOLE I BET U HE IS GAY 2 WANNA SUCK HIS DOGS DICK FUCKING JACKASS

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.12.2004 19:44
    SUCKED
    ok, that was llike so dumb it wasn't even funny

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.12.2004 18:01
    what.the.fuck.


    I type better stories with my penis.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.12.2004 23:58
    holy shit that was bad i couldnt even get through it please dont pollute this site by writing anymore of those terrible storys, blah (i c many others agree and the 2 outta 10 rating speaks for itself)

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    READER 500
    10.12.2004 20:57
    holy. fucking. shit. that was with out doubt the STUPIDEST thing i have ever laid eyes on. whoever wrote this story should be tied up and sodomized with a wooden spoon until his asshole bleeds. this, children, is what happens when you do crack

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.12.2004 11:56
    pretty poor!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.12.2004 12:19
    You deserve to be shot

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.12.2004 12:17
    Here, let me write a better story:

    A dude and a chick got together. He fucked her. The end!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.12.2004 04:46
    this story fucked why did evenprint it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.12.2004 12:32
    weres the damn sex

    suked serious black balls

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.12.2004 11:47
    I got a better story listen to this I fucked your mom last nignt

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.12.2004 16:25
    Heres a better story
    This story was a pile fo shit!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.12.2004 22:56
    U DUMB FUCKIN PIECE OF WHORE PISS THE FUCK OF U DUMB WANKER THIS STORY WAS SHIT NO IT WAS FUCKIN SHIT YA LOW LIFE WHORE DID U EVEN KNOW WHAT U WERE WRITING YA IDIOT

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.12.2004 09:44
    wow thats the worst thing I have ever read.Cum Swallowing BSDM? Where??? Never write again you worthless shit. Really worst story ever stupid writing crappy details etc U suck man.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.12.2004 22:35
    While I find what all you freaks said very funny (laughed my ass off in fact) I have to ask; did any of you ever think this might be the beginning of his story? I hope none of you assholes write stories. I myself thought it was a great beginning and hope that the author intends it to be just that, a great beginning. If not, John start writing more. Kisess to all...

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    READER 500
    28.12.2004 00:31
    I hope you die you disguiting peice of shit. That was amazingly disturbing and nasty and you deserve to have your head beaten in you pile of monkey shit. You will burn in hell.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.01.2005 13:57
    That was the worst story I've ever read,you deserve to be shot you stupid tosser.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.01.2005 22:58
    Q) Where is the cum-swallowing,prostitution... the enema?
    A) It is not here, thats for sure.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.01.2005 18:35
    I read this to see why it was rated so low. No wonder. Dear John, read more and learn. You wrote this like a police report: "She did this... blah blah, she ate that blah blah... She blah blah blah..." And oh, it couldn't hurt for you to expand your vocab as well.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.01.2005 20:33
    how r you'll talking about his story i dont see yall writing anything

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.01.2005 17:40
    good god that fricken sucked SOOOOOOOOOOo bad!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.01.2005 14:42
    where the fuck is the sex
    where is the pussy
    this fuckin sucks

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.01.2005 19:56
    wow u fuckin suck

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.01.2005 02:02
    fuck the author and make sure that he never writes anymore

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.02.2005 04:21
    shove your dickin a car exhaust you moron

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.02.2005 08:49
    boring no sex you tosser

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.02.2005 21:24
    if you make a sequal,OK,if not,SCREW YOU TO THE DEEPEST DEEPTHS OF HELL!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 12:07
    this story was fucking bullshit. dont ever write again. And the word "and" is spelled a-n-d, not adn. dumbass.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.03.2005 02:51
    what d fuk was that . that was simply amazing. felt like ramming a coconut tree in your ass.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.03.2005 16:31
    if i remember correctly, this was called "sex" stories....which implies some sex takes place

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.04.2005 08:50
    my dick fell off, you?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.04.2005 06:42
    fucking sux man you have no dick someone must have bought an expensive merchette and cut yours off. 1/10 that is a disgrace you shithead never write the fuck again and I hope you die.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.04.2005 05:19
    be a little nicer, would u all? anyone can post anything they'd like...you dont hafta read it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.04.2005 20:25
    THAT the worst fuckin shit evr

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.05.2005 14:37
    OMG! i read this, so i would be horny, but this SHIT turned me way OFF. you mutha fucka, never write a story again.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2005 09:58
    pls fuck a girl by girl any girl is here for do this

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.06.2005 21:22
    What the... That's it why didn't you write more and what you wrote was gross. how the hell you gonna sleep in shit. you didn't even finish the last sentence. come on now its sucks if u don't finish it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.06.2005 23:47
    hmm... Fiction, Cum Swallowing, Domination/submission, Prostitution, BDSM, Enema ... thats what ur stories supposed to be about... pretty much none of that happened... did you start masturbating while u were writing it and forgot about it or what?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.06.2005 01:46
    this story sucked....nothing. it was a good plot, but u fucked it up when u didnt even finish it. i swear if i read another story like this one....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.07.2005 20:42
    dude.. wtf, you can't even spell right and you kept missing out words. What a shit story,,, grow some balls you bitch

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.08.2005 19:02
    WOW........I scrolled down before I read this and saw that you had 148 comments and was very impressed. Since it seemed you had so many comments I decided to read your story plus I knew it was short so it wouldnt take very long. I read it and I have to say hun, you CANNOT WRITE WORTH SHIT!!!! I know I am not a writer but babe--at least I dont post stories like that just to piss people off. I thought Gaylord's comment was HILARIOUS and I had a better time reading most of your comments than I did your story. IF YOU ARE LIKE ME AND LOOK AT COMMENTS READ SOME OF THESE THEY ARE VERY FUNNY!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.08.2005 13:52
    no wonder its on the most read list..it's so popular that you got so many comments...AHAHAHA...the beach incident was already lame....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2005 06:06
    you motherfudking whore,asshole,u cant even write a story you dumb fuck.go kill yourself u fag.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.08.2005 02:32
    I DON EVEN WANT TO GIVE HIM A POINT!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.08.2005 08:12
    I FUKKIN LOVED THIS STORY!!1!!!!!!11111@!@!1@12... 10/10 10/10 10/10!!!!

    just kidding, this shit tanked ass...stop writing please, while i clean up this pile of vomit left from your story.

    (honestly id rather read the vomit.)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.08.2005 21:18
    man you did do a shit story but if you did a sequel and did a longerone with lesss spelling errors it would be good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.08.2005 20:10
    hey enough already, he has heard all about his mistakes, give him a chance to redo this story or do another one, it is his first story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.09.2005 18:51
    umm writing isnt your strong point honey. You should just stick with pissing and shitting. But i wont give you a number becasue it sucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.09.2005 04:28
    There are some things in life that people are good at, writing isn't one of them for you. You fucking sick person, your story was like masturbating with a cheese grater, slightly amusing, but fucking painful.
    I hope you improve, don't let us dumb fucks ruin your writing dreams

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.09.2005 00:24
    your story sucked and you can't even write. go to hell or just go and kill yourself now to get it over with.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.10.2005 18:28
    u pansy ass smacktard you suck at writing dont even try

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.10.2005 12:18
    Okay, how is this considered porn? Seriously..I saw nothing sexual there. And the shitting in pissing, WHAT THE FUCK.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.10.2005 01:07
    that sucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.11.2005 11:59
    wtf was that? 1/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.11.2005 10:02
    this sucks mother fucker

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.11.2005 20:36
    im gonna drink from a bucket and piss and shit in your mouth fag

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.11.2005 09:01
    10/10 10/10 a bucket of cum keeps the doctor away.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.11.2005 21:05
    ......AND.........???
    JOHN u SUX

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.11.2005 00:53
    That was the worst story that i have ever read, my suggestion is to never ever write a story again b/c you suck ass at writing stories. They are called sex stories for a reason, they involve sex not taking a shit and piss

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.11.2005 12:15
    Awful. Bad, Weak.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.11.2005 21:49
    THAT WAS THE DUMBEST SHIT IVE EVER HEARD

    YOUR A FUCKING MORON

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.12.2005 13:46
    that story was kinda a dissapointment

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.01.2006 17:41
    um okay. what happened next? i don't get it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.05.2006 01:26
    That was horrible! Please learn to write

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.06.2006 07:33
    . . . . . . . and?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.06.2006 03:11
    THIS IS ONE OF THE CRAPPIEST STORIES I'VE READ, AND I DIDN'T EVEN FINISH READING THE WHOLE THING, KEEP YOUR DAY JOB IF YOU HAVE ONE, AND I HOPE IT DOESN'T INVOLVE WRTITING

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.07.2006 10:19
    fuck who ever wrote this

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.10.2006 13:51
    shite0/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.10.2006 17:31
    after i read this story i regret i wasted my time on it. if there is a worst story i hope i never see it!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.11.2006 23:55
    LAME

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.01.2007 18:06
    Why would over 200,000 people read this crap?
    John, the author, must have a lot of friends. All of them morons like him, I guess

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.01.2007 15:38
    u mother fucker wasited my time by reading all this useless story? was taht yor sister they kidnaped u son of a bitch write complet stories.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.01.2007 23:41
    that story suckes

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.02.2007 05:04
    oh mine... you are a sicko fucked up, weird stupid mother fucker... dont u ever write stories prick

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.05.2007 20:56
    that was fucking retatrded!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.05.2007 19:48
    I was about to read this story, that is untill I read the comments. Im glad I read the comments 1st, to save myself the aggravation of reading a crappy story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.06.2007 16:04
    uioeçrçpn,xc;n ncb

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.07.2007 08:49
    um... no fucking in here! Whats going on?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.08.2007 21:37
    umm ... maybe you'll do better next time?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.09.2007 13:38
    I'd give it a minus 35/10 'cause i'm in a very good mood today. you scrambled the alphabets and came out with that, didn't you? you can tell me, I won't tell.

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    READER 500
    19.11.2007 01:15
    " when a van zoomed towards her and stopped rght in front of her. She was pulled into the truck and it immediately sped off with her in it. Once the truck was moving she couldn't see anything because they had placed a black hood over her head and then they gave her a shot to make her go to sleep. She fell asleep and the van continued onward into the Mexican night in the countryide far away from civilization and the police."
    How the fuck did it go from a van to a truck to a van again you idiot finish school before you decide to write again, i refuse to rate this piece of dhit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2008 20:34
    this author is a full blown idiot. if you want a hobby take up a course in relevant writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2008 01:27
    you're kidding right? are you stupid? do you know what spellcheck is? can you read? because none of the tags were actually in there. what a let down

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  • shelley+belgard
    05.09.2008 23:51
    please next chapter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.11.2008 18:15
    the author is an idiot, plus being a fucking retard.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.08.2009 01:59
    Maybe you should use Microsoft Word for your spelling and stuff, and then you have to write about some sex because this is a sex site. Try again with those suggestions.

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  • Ali-Khemeh
    28.10.2009 12:02
    hahahahahahhaha

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  • Tracie
    21.12.2010 13:36
    Where is the rest of it!!

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  • Sweet+honey
    02.05.2017 17:35
    Fucking stupid story! And gross.

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