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The Summer of 16

Author: twistmynipples

Date: 10 August 2010

Blowjob, Fiction, Consensual Sex, Cum Swallowing

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I had just finished playing my first game of the new baseball season. I was 16 years and 3 weeks old to the day. I played second base on my AAA team. We won the game and I went 3/4 with a double and a triple. Each inning as I ran back to the dugout from second I kept catching this cute girl checking me out.

After the game the coach was giving us the usual post-game pep talk. I had pretty much tuned him out because this girl was now behind our dugout looking at me. When the coach was done I collected my gear and approached the girl.

"Nice game." she said.

“Thank you.”

I couldn’t think of what to say or do next.

“You can really hit the ball.”

“Thanks.”

We stood there looking at each other for a few moments.

“I haven’t seen you before. Are you from around here?” I asked.

“We just moved here. My Dad’s in the Marines and we move lots.”

“That must be tough.”

“I get by. We’ve been here three days and you’re the first person I’ve talked to.”

I felt a warm glow erupt inside me. I was her first contact in a foreign land. This MUST mean something. Now I had some composure and I felt confident.

“My name’s Rick.”

“Hi. I’m Shelley.”

“You wanna get a slurpee, Shelley? My treat.” I asked.

She smiled. Damn! What a smile.

“Sure. I’d like that.”

It was about a 5 block walk to 7-11. Along the way I would occasionally slip a step or two behind her – totally by accident of course. I couldn’t believe my eyes. She was about 5’3” (I was 5’10”) and shoulder length brunette hair. She was wearing a white halter top and a pair of pretty tight shorts (not quite Daisy Dukes, but pretty damn tight). Her ass filled them perfectly; it was like 2 perfect half moons that wiggled just right as she walked.

When we arrived at our destination I, being the ever-perfect gentleman, moved ahead and opened the door. As she passed I got the full view of the rest of her body. I was NOT disappointed. Her breasts were shaped just right - not huge, but big enough compared to the rest of her that they really stood out. As she passed her eyes connected with mine and light up with a sparkle that I can’t even BEGIN to describe. I felt my knees giving way, but was able to remain standing. I’m very glad I was wearing my jock-strap because my hard-on would have been obvious to the WHOLE WORLD in my tight baseball pants.

I bought us a pair of coke slurpees and we went to the benches in the nearby park. We sat and talked for what seemed like eternity; talking about everything that came to mind. It turned out her Dad was actually in special ops in the Marines and he bounced from base to base. I also learned that she only lived about a block and a half away from me.

I glanced at my watch and realized we had been sitting there for almost two hours. Shelley said she needed to be getting back home so we made plans to meet at the benches again tomorrow afternoon and I walked her home. When we got to her place I didn't know what to do.

‘Should I kiss her or not?’ I asked myself. I weighed the options and then decided the best thing to do was to ask her.

“I can’t tell you how much fun I had meeting you and talking, Shelley.”

“I had fun too, Rick”

“Would you mind if I gave you a kiss?”

Shelley looked at her door and back at me a few times.

“I don’t think you should. If my Dad saw I don’t even want to THINK about what he might do.”

“Oh yeah. He’s trained to KILL people, right?” And with that I offered her a handshake.

Shelley giggled and gave me a very quick peck on the cheek

“See you tomorrow, Rick.”

“Okay.”

I floated home and when I got there my cock was STILL rock hard so I went up to my room, took off my uniform, got out my supply of magazines (I started collecting porn magazines when I was 13) and jerked myself off in about 5 seconds. That night I had great difficulty sleeping and the following morning seemed as if in took 2 years to pass. Finally 2:00 came and I went to meet Shelley.

We met at the benches by 7-11 and she was there wearing a similar outfit as the previous day. Damn I love summer! Again we talked for hours and when it came time I walked her home.

Just as we were walking up her front walk around the corner of her house came her Dad. I nearly shit myself. He was about 6'6", 250 and HUGE. He had a crew cut and LOOKED like special ops. Rambo was nothing compared to this guy.

“Dad, this is Rick. I met him yesterday and we spent hours talking the last few days.”

I felt like adding “JUST TALKING, SIR”, but felt it best to remain mute.

He extended his hand to me.

“I’m very glad that Shelley has met someone. I think it’s tough for her moving from place to place and I’m always happy when she makes friends in the new city.”

“I saw him play baseball yesterday; Dad and you should have seen him. He plays second base and he was the best player out there. He got 2 big hits.”

“I’m impressed. I played second when I was young, too. Your stock just went up a point or two, Rick. You’re okay.”

Finally I began to breathe again and he went into the backyard. We sat on the barco lounger and after a few minutes Shelley gave me a big kiss on my mouth. This was my first kiss ever but still I pulled back in fear.

“Wait! Your Dad. He’ll kill me.”

"It's fine. He said you're okay. Okay with him is good."

We sat and talked for about an hour. We had 3 more kisses and every time I was careful to be sure no one saw us. Shelley said it was okay, but I was taking NO chances. Shelley kissed well. As I left, we made plans to go to a movie then following night.

I picked her up at 6:30 and we went to see the new James Bond flick, ‘Octopussy’. Throughout the movie we held hands and Shelley snuggled into my chest. When the movie ended Shelley looked up at me and we kissed as the credits rolled. People were exiting the theatre and as they walked down the aisle I’m sure they were looking at us but we didn’t care. These kissed were very different that the ones we had shared in her back yard. I wasn’t worried about being killed. We were kissing passionately. Our tongues were involved today. This was right. Unfortunately the credits eventually ended and so did our kiss.

“Whatcha want to do now?’ asked Shelley.

“What do I WANT to do or what do I HAVE to do?”

Shelley smiled. “Let’s hear the want first.”

“I WANT the credits to start again.” I said laughing with a sly grin.

“Now let’s hear the HAVE to.”

“My parents went out for the night and they made me promise to be home my 10:00 and it’s already 9:35. I’d love to go sit on the bench and talk for a while but it’d be almost 10 by the time we got there.”

We were outside the theatre and walking toward the bus stop, holding hands and gazing into each others eyes from time to time. We got to the bus stop and sat down to wait. Shelley looked into my eyes and we stared at each other. Eventually she spoke.

“I don’t have to be home until 11. Could I come over?”

I’d thought of this option but didn’t want to ask for fear that it might scare Shelley.

“I’d love it if you came over. Are you sure you’re okay with that?”

“I trust you, Rick. I feel very safe with you. There’s nothing I’d rather do more.”

We got back to my place at about 9:55 and when I opened the door we were greeted by Roxie, my pet Schnauzer. We played with Roxie a bit and then went up to the family room to settle down and watch some TV. When we were snuggled together on the couch we began to kiss. Shelley was a great kisser. Her lips were soft and luscious and what she did with her tongue sent shivers up my spine. Sitting here with Shelley was the best thing I had ever done. But it got better.

As we kissed, my hands began to roam. I stroked and caressed her back and ass. Her ass felt even better than it looked. From there my hand traveled up her torso and settled on her chest. Breasts felt better than I had ever imagined. I squeezed and kneaded her breasts until she pulled away from me.

“I’m sorry, Shell…” I began but was silenced by her index finger on my lips.

Shelley took hold of her t-shirt and pulled it over her head. I was dumbfounded. I wanted to reach out and grab them but was unable to move. Then Shelley reached behind her back and unclasped her bra. It fell to the floor and I sat there looking at her like a deer caught in headlights.

Shelley snuggled back up to me and kissed my awe-struck mouth. After I arrived back on planet Earth my hands ventured back to her breasts. If I thought they felt good before it was NOTHING compared to now. Her nipples were hard as rocks and felt incredible when my palm would slide over them. Still we kissed.

I wanted to feel my chest on hers so I pulled off my t-shirt as well. When her skin touched mine it almost burned. We were so into each other. My mouth ventured down and began to kiss and suck Shelley’s rock hard nipples. She moaned. I think I did, too. As I sucked her nipples Shelley would run her hands through my hair. I loved it. When we’d had enough I moved back up and we kissed some more.

Then I felt Shelley’s hand on my pants. She was rubbing my leg, edging higher. I had never even DREAMED of anything like this before. Soon she was rubbing my cock through my pants.

“I’ve never done this before,” she panted.

“Me neither.”

“I mean I’ve kissed a boy before, but I’ve never done THIS.”

I didn’t know what she meant by THIS.

“What do you mean?”

Shelley looked at me hesitantly.

“I want to make love, Rick. Don’t you?”

My heart skipped a beat or 10.

“Make love? Oh god,” was all I could muster and I kissed her harder than I ever had before.

Shelley unzipped my pants and stuck her hand inside. When her hand touched my cock I was in heaven.

“Ooooooh yeah,” I moaned. Shelley smiled as she squeezed my cock. She finished undoing my pants and pulled my dick out.

“I’ve never seen one before. It’s beautiful,” she cooed.

Shelley continued to squeeze and stroke it while kissing me. Her kisses ran down my chest to my mid-section. She lifted her head and just stared at my rigid cock. I could feel her breath as she panted on my dick.

“It’s amazing. The way it moves and twitches. When you breathe in it moves up a bit.”

Then IT happened. Shelley opened her mouth and descended upon my waiting cock. As she closed her lips around it she let out a low moan. She moved her head up and down on my excited friend and it was a great many seconds before I moaned and shot my load into her mouth. Shelley swallowed it without missing a drop. After her snack she snuggled her face into my heaving chest. Now I stroked HER hair. We lay like that until I could talk again.

“That was your FIRST time doing that?” I asked.

“Yeah. Was it good?”

“You could go pro,” I chuckled. “How’d you get so good?”

Shelley looked at me for a minute or so before answering.

“My Dad subscribes to Penthouse and I like to sneak it when he’s not home and read it. There’s this column called Penthouse Forum and it’s got stories in it. I love reading it and I guess I’ve learned that way.”

Now it was MY turn to stare. Finally I spoke.

“My Dad subscribes, too. I LOVE Forum. Reading that’s my favorite pass-time.”

We laughed and kissed some more.

“Did you read the one from last month called ‘My First 69’?” Shelley asked.

I looked up at her and recited the entire first paragraph to her verbatim. We laughed and I moved in to kiss her again when she let out a shriek so loud and high-pitched that I envisioned every dog within a 5 block radius was running to my house.

“What’s wrong?” I asked.

“It’s 11:25! My Dad’s going to KILL me!”

“Oh fuck! Your Dad!” I exclaimed thinking we had ruined a good thing just as it was getting started.

We were dressed within seconds and out the door in full sprint. We were running so fast, Olympic officials would have tested us for banned substances for sure. When we got to her house the place was dark except for the living room light. Sitting, looking out the window I could see her Dad.

“You go back home, Rick. I’ll handle my Dad. No reason for BOTH of us to die,” Shelley said with a small smirk

“No. I can’t do that. I’m here for you. We’ll face the music together or firing squad as the case may be.”

As soon as we opened the door her Dad was there. He stood directly in front of me looking down into my eyes. I accepted the stony glare and opened my mouth to offer my apologies, but before I could formulate a word the barrage was upon us.

“Where have you been? I told you to be home at 11:00 and here it is after 11:30.”

Shelley and I looked at each other unsure of what to say. We had not rehearsed anything.

“Dad, we were in the park talking and lost track of time.”

Before she was finished the sentence I could see a look of disbelief of her father’s face.

“Sir, it’s my fault. I invited Shelley back to my house after the movie. My parents are out for the evening and Shelley told me she had to be home by 11:00. I promised her that I’d watch the time and I didn’t. It’s all my fault.”

He looked at me with an icy look.

"And what were you two doing alone at your house."

I froze. There was no way out of this.

“You don't want me to answer that, sir."

Shelley couldn't believe what was coming out of my mouth. She was silent in shock.

"You're right. I don't want to know." he answered. "Shelley, go up to your room."

It was just her Dad and me - no witnesses. I was scared SHITLESS. He motioned for me to sit on the couch. I did but he remained on his feet.

"You've got SOME guts to tell me that straight up."

‘Well,’ I thought, ‘there could be worse sentences for one to hear at the end of one's life.’

"I don't like to think about what you were doing but I DO respect you for your guts. Did you use protection?"

Even my OWN father wouldn't have asked me this.

"Uh... uh… we didn't do THAT, sir. We only..."

"Stop! I heard the only words I wanted to hear,” he said and then paused. I sat there in my own sweat. “If you tell my daughter you'll be responsible, you remember in the future – DO IT. You can go home. Thank you for your honesty.”

When I shut the door I felt like a man on death row who just got the call from the governor.

I don't remember walking home, but I DO remember opening the door. MY Dad stood there with smoke coming out of his ears.

"I told you to be home by 10:00. We get home at 11:50, you're not here and the front door is unlocked. Care to explain?"

‘Oh shit,’ I thought. ‘Here we go again.’

"Dad I WAS home at 10:00. Shelley came home with me and..."

"Who's Shelley?"

"She's a girl I met a few days ago. I went to the movie with her. She came back here and we talked for a while.” Technically not a lie - we DID talk some. “And then she saw that it was well after 11:00. She had to be home at 11:00 and her Dad is pretty strict. He's a Marine. We ran to her house and I had to face her Dad. We left the door unlocked because we were in such a rush."

My Dad looked at me for a minute or so.

"Okay. I apologize for jumping to conclusions. Good night son."

I checked my butt to see if there were any horseshoes stuck in it. Nope.

I had trouble going to sleep after I finally got up to bed. There was just too much Shelley going through my mind. It certainly was an understatement to say that we had a full evening of activity.

I slept until 10:00 the next morning and when I went downstairs for breakfast there was a not from my Mom on the counter.

‘Shelley called three times this morning. There’s pancake batter in the fridge.’

I needed some time to think. Did she get in huge trouble from her Dad? Can she still see me? I didn’t know and part of me didn’t WANT to know. I decided to eat and call her after.

When I was done I was still scared so I showered and brushed my teeth. Finally I got up the nerve and called her. Thankfully she answered the phone. I don’t know if I could face her Dad again.

“Hello?’ she said.

“Hi, Shell. It’s me.”

“Rick. We HAVE to talk. Can you meet me at the benches in half an hour?”

“Sure.”

I finished getting ready and started the walk to the benched in the park by 7-11. I was sure it was over. When I arrived Shelley was already there, sitting on the bench holding 2 slurpees. When she saw me she put down the slurpees, jumped up, ran over to me and threw her arms around me.

"I don't know what you said to my Dad but he loves you. His exact words this morning were 'that Brad is a good man'. He wasn't even angry at me. What did you say?"

I told her and she couldn't believe that I had the guts to stand up to a man like her Dad.

"I've been thinking of nothing but you since last night. When I was lying in bed - I went to bed naked last night - the feeling of your cock in my mouth WOULD NOT go away. Then when I found out that you smoothed things over with my Dad I wanted you so bad. And now when I hear exactly what you said to him I want you even more. Can we go somewhere?"

I was dumbfounded. Part of me wanted to (Well okay – MOST of me), but part was still scared of her dad. I thought for a second and found my way out.

“We can't. I don't have any protection and it would be stupid to..."

She held up a 3-pack of Trojans.

"I want you. Don't you want me?"

“Are you kidding me? I couldn’t go to sleep last night because I was thinking of you. I’ve never wanted anything so bad in all my life but your DAD.”

"The way he was talking about you this morning I think we could do it and then you go to my house and say 'I just fucked your daughter.' and I think he'd be okay with it."

We looked into each others’ eyes and saw nothing but a wanton desire in each of us.

“Okay. There’s some rose bushes in that park by the school and there’s this place in behind them where it's really open and very secluded."

We walked (okay - we ran) to the park and crawled behind the rose bushes. We each had on pants that morning and when we took them off we put them on the ground to protect against any stray rose thorns. Within a minute we were both kneeling on the ground, nude looking at each other. I took her face in my hands and kissed her softly. She kissed back. Our lips began to move and her tongue entered my mouth. We kissed and fondled each other for what seemed like forever. Time really did stand still for us.

"What's your very favorite number?"

She grinned and jumped on top of me. Within seconds her mouth was full of my cock and I was sucking on her pussy. While her head bobbed up and down on my cock I drew lines up and down her pussy lips with my tongue. She had very hot looking pussy lips. They stuck out a bit and were really fun to suck on. She LOVED that. Shelley began to writhe and moan. I was sucking on her clit now; flicking my tongue back and forth across it. She began bucking her hips up and down on my face. Soon she let out this low moan followed by some higher gasps. She ground her wet pussy into my face until her orgasm passed and then turned herself around and kissed me deeply.

Then she pulled out a condom, fumbled with it a bit and after a few failed attempts got it over my rigid cock. She looked me deeply.

"Now I want you to fuck me."

I rolled her over and slowly slid my hard member into her slippery canal. She moaned. I groaned. I began to thrust back and forth inside her. While I made love to her our eyes never left each other. It made everything seem hotter to see the lust in Shelley’s eyes. I don't know how long it went on for, but I do remember that she came 3 more times before I shot my load inside the condom. We rested for a while and then she started sucking me again. Soon I was back to being rock hard and she put another condom on me. I was about to roll her over again when she pushed me down.

"My turn," she purred.

She climbed on top of me and sat down on my waiting cock. She really got into riding me and bounced up and down for a long time. While she was riding me I played with her nipples and she came a few more times. I began thrusting up into her soaking pussy and soon blew my second load of the day. Shelley collapsed on me and we lay like that holding each other and kissing. We started to hear voices nearing the rose bushes so we got dressed and left our love sanctuary.

Our lives went on like this for about 11 months. We fucked every chance we got; usually at least once per day. Then one day she came to me in tears.

“My Dad’s getting transferred again. We leave in a week.”

We cried for the week and I remember when she drove away like it was yesterday. She was in tears looking out her back window and I was in tears waving to her.

I never saw Shelley again.


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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2010 20:11
    THE end was so Sad. THE story was awesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2010 22:04
    good but cmon you would remain in ANY contact. cell phone? computer? kind of a flaw in the end. but i likied the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2010 06:34
    one of thee best short stories ive ever read

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2010 10:09
    Wonderful piece of work!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2010 14:46
    @anonymous reader

    Contact would seems a bit hard in 1983, since they went to see the new movie Octopussy. So no computers or cell phones back then.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2010 21:43
    you said you haven't seen her since then...go find her idiot! that happened to me when I was 17 and I never saw him again until one day when I was 26 he came up to me and kissed me, and I slapped him, then he introduced himself, and I pulled him back. we're married now with a daughter. it's never too late

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2010 21:44
    you said you haven't seen her since then...go find her idiot! that happened to me when I was 17 and I never saw him again until one day when I was 26 he came up to me and kissed me, and I slapped him, then he introduced himself, and I pulled him back. we're married now with a daughter. it's never too late

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2010 23:47
    haha i did that at my high school in west ville ghs

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.09.2010 03:21
    there has never been a 6'6 2nd baseman 2nd is for the little quick guys if you change it to 1st base it would be much miore believeable

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.09.2010 08:57
    Great story!
    Btw the guy who comments about how he is a horny bastard is fuckin retarded, just sayin

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  • IHaveaHart
    24.09.2010 04:09
    I love this. My all time favorite. Excellent EXCELLENT job my friend. =D

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.09.2010 17:40
    Great Story! Almost sounds like it could have been a true story. Brought back memories of when I was 14 and something similar happened except her dad wasn't a Marine but a Cop. He was always working and didn't seem to care what she did. She was my first and we made love when ever we could for over a year. He got a job in another city and they moved away also, but we did see each other on and off for over a year after that. Even though it has been many, many years and I have been with many women since I still occasionally think of her and and miss the love and the passion that we shared when we were young and reckless. No other woman has ever matched her intensity and sexual appetite. Thanks for writing this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2010 10:06
    Good story, many people can relate to this happening in high school. It too happen to me, only the girl and her family moved to my hometown because her mom left her dad and wanted to make a new start in life. It was an amazing three years, this girl was 13 y/o when she moved in next door. We became great friends and loves before she had to move again. She was 13 and once I started to rub and touch, she became a wild fire and could not get it enough. Thanks for writting your story it brought back memories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2010 14:33
    I hope you wrte another story of being a horny teen?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2010 15:02
    just fukin lik 2 read more

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2011 23:40
    Good story with a sad ending

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2011 22:59
    that was a good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2011 22:59
    that was a good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2011 22:59
    that was a good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2011 23:05
    that was a good story but how old was the girl?

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2011 01:41
    Realalistic! I loved it! Coulda been a sequel of you left out the "and I never saw Shelley again" part... Oh well! Write more you gt talent!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2011 01:41
    Realalistic! I loved it! Coulda been a sequel of you left out the "and I never saw Shelley again" part... Oh well! Write more you gt talent!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2011 01:41
    Realalistic! I loved it! Coulda been a sequel of you left out the "and I never saw Shelley again" part... Oh well! Write more you gt talent!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2011 00:55
    That was a great story sad ending tho. Keep it up :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2011 00:45
    She died that day.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2011 04:33
    Good story, shame about the ending, killed the chance of a sequel. Or did it?

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2011 01:10
    I liked it but random words to describe her lower parts but Kept me entertained threw the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2011 01:11
    I liked it but random words to describe her lower parts but Kept me entertained threw the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2011 01:11
    I liked it but random words to describe her lower parts but Kept me entertained threw the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2011 21:32
    Great story sad ending

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2011 21:32
    Great story sad ending

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2011 21:46
    that was a great story but it ended bad....it needs a sequel and fast ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2011 21:47
    that was a great story but it ended bad....it needs a sequel and fast ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2011 00:51
    It's called a phone. This is 2011 isn't it?

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2011 18:50
    that was absolutly unbelivable

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2011 01:44
    Maybe they don't have phones, they move alot so maybe they have to chAnge policies or something, but yeah, love it!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2011 15:02
    toooooooooo good
    i needed something this romantic......i had lost track of my life these days.......but feeling pretty much better

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2011 21:35
    oh my gosh i loved it:( it made me want to cry at the end

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.05.2011 13:40
    My first sexual experience was when I was only 12 and Mum and I were on holiday in Vienna. I knew that when we went off together she liked to fuck with as many men as possible and this left me on my own most nights and evenings. The owners daughter at the hotel we were at and I had become friends at school in England so we spent much time together. She was 13 and showed me how to use a vibrator and dildo and to finger myself and her and to lick her cunt. She also told me that from the age of 9 she had fucked with her father and suggested I might like to do the same. I said I'd like to try. He was very nice to me and told me he'd fucked my mum many times and how nice and sexy she was. He spent ages kissing me, nibbling my nipples and fingering my slit and then he pushed his cock into my hole, My cunt was very tight and it made him cum quickly but he fucked me again later. I told mum in the morning and she said it was okay if I had enjoyed it. I really had and always do now.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.05.2011 00:05
    very depressing end to a very very good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.06.2011 08:08
    A great story of love and kindness and RESPECT .

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.06.2011 00:48
    reminds me of my childhood. of course there wasnt any sex in it, but still. excellent story

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2011 00:46
    Good story, Shitty ending keep it up though

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 22:31
    tough life !! fuck man ! i miss my ex

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 21:35
    I normally don't comment on none of the stories I read here, but this one just amazed me. Everything about this story astonished me except for the ending. It kind of reminds me of my ex girlfriend that had to move because of her dad. Great story though, keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2015 18:05
    Ok, back then there was no easy way to find someone, you should write a sequel where he looks her up online and they rekindle their passion as grown ups. Just a thought.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2016 00:42
    I liked the ending! I wanted to cry, too.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.04.2016 13:06
    I lived that life, we moved on average of every ten months. I did very well on my own , job wise $$$$$. Folks were both alcoholics, and I dropped out of school.......no support from anyone. Never had a best friend, to this day, I'm now 63. Girls were something you fucked and never made a commitment, kept everyone out of my bubble. Military really screws up the whole family, sad.

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  • timeey
    25.05.2018 17:16
    so horny

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  • freshkiss
    01.01.2019 04:13
    i met a girl who was 14 and we went out for three years, I was nineteen by then and was drafted. I thought I would never see her again, we also had great sex. but I got lucky, when I got out of vietnam and the army I was home one saturday evening and she came by looking for my sister, they were friends and she didnt know I was her brother. we got back together that night and I proposed, she accepted and we got married in january 1973.

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  • oldnerd
    14.06.2019 20:30
    Great writing.
    Looks like you have the same kind of luck as I do, love then lost.....

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  • Cypriano
    31.12.2019 08:19
    No 16 year old plays AAA. A talented 18-19 year old would be playing rookie/A ball.

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