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Sex games

1derful tease ch. 04

Author: autoerotism

Date: 4 May 2004

Incest, Fiction

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The hum of the little car shut down. with out saying a word dad looked over one last time and then proceeded to get out. I opened the door trying hard to get out with out falling, and quickly adjusted my skirt. Turning back I offered a hand to Erica pulling her up.

She looked at me, her face said so much. It was obvious she was in a wanting state as she just smiled at me to cover her emotions. I smiled back as we fixed our selves behind the cover of the midget door. Then making our way to the line to catch up with my dad.

We passed some young jerks on the side and they were giving off whistles and cute remarks. I turned and gave them a disgusted grow up look and that seemed to prompt them more. Saying, “Come here little girl I will give you something to lick!”

Erica turned stopped and said, “Fuck you! I guess your town is full of scum!” chucking the bird.

Two of them got up off the cement wall they were sitting on, and quickly got in our way. It was not easy trying to walk in heels on the gravel to begin with. I said, “get out of the way dirt ball!”

The one on the left kicked a dusty layer of sand and shit over our feet. Now I was pissed and started to yell out, “You fucking losers!” I didn’t know what else to do. They were younger but certainly bigger, and it wasn’t like we were dressed to scuffle with these real jerks. We didn’t really know them, but I knew of them, just as I suppose they knew where we were from.

I looked up from looking at my shoes all covered in dirt. I smiled at the jerk. He had no clue as to why. My dad stood right behind them placing his hands around both of their necks at once. Erica laughed as he picked them off the ground. I could see he was not fooling around he gets that look when he is really angry.

The one on the right wet himself out of fear. Erica said, “Oh my god he just pissed him self!” holding her hands to her face laughing, as we walked around them.



Three other adults came over quickly one looked like the coach or something. The other two looked to be just parents. One of the parents bursted out, “What the hell are you doing!” he knew exactly what had transpired.

Dad flung the two toward the three men as they both skidded on the ground. His head just turned toward us as a shrewd look came across his face. Then he turned back to the men saying, “Fat boy, is that your poor excuse for a child? Maybe I should help you install some manners on how to treat a female?”

I could see the muscles flex under dad’s shirt in his chest and arms. His neck muscles grew tight as they also swelled with his anger. I looked at his bum. It looked tight in the fine dress pants as he walked closer to them. He might have only have been a few inches taller than them, but there was no doubt in my mind he was going to knock the shit out of them, if they gave him any reason.

The man looked at my dad it was obvious my dad was not backing down. There grew a crowed of on lookers and it was fairly quiet. The other two men just looked on as pretending to be some sort of back up. The guy fumbling to answer said, “I am sure we can settle this in an adult manner?”

Dad slowly nodded his head in silence. He was right in the man’s face looking for an answer. The two jerks were now standing slightly behind. The crowed seemed to close in.

My hands were sweaty as they shook a little. I was not scared, but concerned there were a lot of people now paying attention to what was going on.

I didn’t realize that my dad knew him until he said, “I want a letter from each of these ___” looking about, “Nine boys’ parents explaining, why their son is a jack-ass.” He was as calm as could be.

The man spoke, “That’s absurd!” making a face like as if to say go to hell. Then being cocky said taking a look around, “I think there is a few to many witness for you to do anything, tuff guy?”

Dad backed up a step pointing his finger toward the team shirt name (Briggs & Son Lumber Supply). With a look of all seriousness he said, “I know you, you think you’re somebody around here. Let me assure you I will cripple you not physically, but financially!” the look of confidence on his face showed he was not bluffing.

The man took one look at the little sports car parked only several feet away. It shined with such a gloss and prestige in the setting sun light, even with a film of dust from the parking lot. All the louvers and contours almost make it look like a spaceship. I’ve been told it is one of only 400 in the entire world. Suddenly I think the man realized who my dad was, as he called out, “Fine! Fine we will do it your way!”

My dad turned toward us, and started walking he placed each of us in his arms as we moved toward the order window. He said out loud, “First thing Monday morning! You better get busy!” never turning back.

The man gave a wicked dirty look to the young jerks, and walked off, pissed. The crowd dispersed as soon as the excitement came to a close.

He was sweaty under his arms but I didn’t care as I held him. I could tell Erica was just happy to be holding him so close, as she stole a look at me every so often with a big grin. Being all happy and kind of a sappy way Erica said holding him tight, “My hero!”

Dad just laughed giving us both a gentle squeeze. We ordered, took our time ate, and made our way back into the car. It was getting darker now as we arranged our selves in the seat. As agreed Erica sat on my lap. The car had not even started yet as I pulled the skirt she was wearing up a little. Erica turned her head fast, laughed as she knew exactly now it was pay back time. I think in all the excitement she had forgotten.

I whispered in her ear, “It’s your turn.” As I pulled the hem up a bit more.

Dad looked back several times before backing up. Each time he would glance down, and then glance at me. I licked my lips slowly to tease him behind Erica’s view. He pretended not to see me. I slid her skirt up higher. Though it was dusk I knew he now had a good view of her pussy.

His eyes kept looking down as he cautiously waited to pull out on the busy road. As we finally pulled out Erica said, “Thank you for the wonderful evening.”

Dad replied, “Your welcome.” His eyes darted from the road to her face to the little display between her legs.

They carried on a small conversation as I continued to raise her skirt higher. I was getting so wet watching my dad eagerly looking at my friend in such a way. Erica just played along like nothing was happening. She had no clue. She thought I was playing with her alone, but in reality I was playing along with both of them. Dad knew I was teasing him by exposing her.

If Erica only knew. I wanted to tell her in some ways, but also felt it was best I kept quiet. As they talked I traced lines up her outer leg with my fingers. My mind was racing. I could feel the wetness between my own legs, and just knew Erica must be going wild right at the moment. The thought of her being aroused in some strange way made me feel like I wanted to please her even more.

My mind was whirling with emotions as my stomach tingled with butterflies. This was the queerest moment I was getting aroused by my friends arousal, and teasing my dad. It was overwhelming just from the thoughts of what dad and I had done. Now thoughts of making him and Erica do something was like it was his biggest untold fantasy. And I wanted to make him happy in any way I could.

Soon we dropped Erica off at her house and back in the car I took hold of his hand. I placed it on my exceptionally aroused pussy. My hands were trembling as I held onto his hand. Dad allowed me to comfortably place his hand over my burning desire. He did not say a word only looked at me briefly, as his fingers fiddled slowly into the slippery area. My eyes closed as I was tormented with desires.

Suddenly I heard and felt the car stop. We were home and it was quiet for a brief moment. Dad removed his hand and took it to his mouth. I watched as he licked my wetness honey from his fingers. I almost couldn’t believe the vivid reality right in front of me. There was no doubt in my mind what had just taken place. My ass cheeks squeezed as I tried to calm the quivering drip from my pussy with useless cause.

Upon exiting the car we made way into the house. It was darkened in the kitchen, as I felt his hand playfully on my shoulder. We turned and kissed, my neck stretched while on tippy toes, and he leaned down toward me. I felt his awesome warm hands holding my lower back pulling me into him.

We came to a gentle break in the kiss, and in the dim light dad looked at me and passed his hand through my hair. Then in a low soft voice he said, “Kay, we have a little problem. I know what we discussed earlier, but I can’t help it. You know I love you. I just can’t stop thinking about holding you. I love you in so many ways now I don’t know if I can stop.”

I was too horny to want to talk love. I wanted to hear him say it a thousand times. Just right now I needed to fuck, and fuck hard. I looked up at him and with a simple move dropped my skirt to the floor. I then removed my blouse carefully, while I shook my hair to make it flow strait down my back. My answer was silent, yet loud and clear.

I am not sure if it was the vibrations of the car, the excitement of the confrontation, or the intrigue of the want in dads eyes with two young females, neither of which he was suppose to desire. I licked my lips as he stood silent watching me. Finally I spoke up from no where, “You do want me don’t you?” Looking up trying to be as cute as could be, making him feel like he was my protector. I always loved that feeling of how powerful he was and when I am with him, how secure I can feel.

Dad’s hands rested on my small chest tweaking at my stiffened nipples. He lowered his mouth with out a word to completely envelop my left breast. With his mouth firmly sucking hard on my breast his tongue darted about over the nipple. While his hands slowly traced my skin coming to rest as they squeezed my ass cheeks.



Taking hold of his hands with mine I smiled at him as I backed away from his mouth, and led him toward his bed. I Only let go of my hand hold once we were in the room to get on the bed. I lay on my back, my head propped up on the pillows. I spread my legs as I watched him climb between them.

Dad placed his mouth over my pussy and I felt his tongue part the tender opening. The warm wet feeling had me closing my eyes as it felt so good. His tongue lapped and licked as one hand slid between my legs massaging my ass, and pussy opening. The other reached up and tweaked my nipples. He continued his deeply desired lust to make me cum.

I was bellowing out a loud scream as he hit just the right spots. I was not in control of my body as it ripped through me. Wave after wave of pure bliss took over and wrung every muscle in my body.

When the feeling calmed dad took the opportunity to slowly climb up my body. I opened my eyes and looked right into his. I kissed him, and could taste my self on his lips. I then looked at him and asked, “Can you do that every time?”

Dad just smiled back as he said, “For that taste I will do it all the time.”

Chills ran through my body as I shook for a second. I could feel his hardened cock pressing at the entrance that his fingers and tongue had just made so sensitive. My legs were spread wide as if I had just ridden a horse. My fingers reached into the fuzzy hair of his chest. I played with his nipples as he waited patiently for me to ask him to enter. Looking more at his chest than his face above me, I asked, “So did you get a good look tonight?”

Dad eyebrows flinched with uncertainty to my question.

“Did you like seeing what you saw in the car?” I asked with a determination.

Dad grinned, “I saw quite a bit, and yes it was all nice looking.”

I thought for a bit as he hungrily started to press his throbbing member into me. Calmly I asked, “Would you want have sex with Erica?”

There was a pause as it was silent. Then he said, “I am with you. I don’t know, not really on my mind at the moment. Is that what you want?”

I nodded my head as I spoke, “I think I want to watch as you make her feel as good as you do me.” I traced a line with my finger from his chest to his face stopping over his lips. “Would you do it for me?”

Dad let out a “Hum” then a slight groan of thoughtful thinking. He looked at me and said, “I really don’t know if that is a good idea. What if you become jealous?”

I could see his point, while replying, “Well you’re going to still have sex with Mom. And I am going to still have sex with James. You wanted to know if I would have sex with others. So here is my thought. I will let you pick a partner for me only if I can pick one for you.

Dad rolled his eyes, “Do we need to go into details right now.” His lips were but tickling mine they were so close.

I smirked under him in a devious thought. I said, “You want to fuck me?” He nodded slightly. “Then call me Erica, I know how bad you want her. I saw you watching her pussy in the car. I saw you the other day too at the pool. I think you like the idea of a young female wanting you. So if you want to fuck me tonight you will have to pretend I am Erica.

Dad’s face contorted, in an unusual way. He looked at me and said, “Fine if that’s what you want. Can I fuck you now, __ Erica?”

I let out a little, “MmHmm,” with a big grin as I felt his stiff thick cock press past the opening. My legs went rigid. God it felt incredible to be stretched so tight. I lifted my hips a little to meet his slow penetration. I looked into his eyes and said, “Your going to fuck my friend aren’t you?”

He said, “Why, but Erica you are so tight. Do you know how long I have wanted to fuck you?” As he kissed my lips and his tongue played with mine.

My toes curled with excitement. He was playing my game, I wanted him to release and tell me all that was in his mind. I just knew he had been horny for us. Now I wanted him to admit it.

Some time passed when he stopped withdrew and just looked at me. He was haunched up, poised with an intimate stare.

I asked, “What is wrong?”

He rolled his eyes up and replied, “I want to fuck you from behind.”

“Who do you want to?” I remarked.

“I want to fuck Erica from behind, and feel her tight little ass as I fuck her hard.” He said all stern and to the point as he sat back on his knees.

I sat up, and gazing at his cock I could see it was still hard as can be. The shine from my wetness gave it a particular nice purplish tint. I stroked my hand up and down his shaft a few times. It was so slick and hard to the touch. I was like, so into his cock right at the moment I almost forgot his request. I looked up at him watching me, enthralled with his erection. I said, “You got a big cock.” My hand was still slipping around his shaft. With a slight hesitation my eyes returned to take in the sight of my small fingers dancing over the soft head.

I remained with my legs spread around him and leaned way over, folded in half. I kissed the top of the head, and then licked it. Holding it firm I sank the head of his cock into my mouth. I could taste myself upon his tender skin. The moment was so arousing, all I wanted to do was prove to dad I was in love with this thick warm cock.

Slowly I swept my legs under so I was on my knees, without letting the head out of my mouth. My hand slid under his balls gently lifting them. Instinctively I began to suck, and fuck his cock with my mouth.

I felt him lean over me with a moan of gratitude his hands slid down my back. One hand parted my ass cheeks, and was reaching for my pussy. While the other rested on my butt cheek grabbing it fully kneading it firm. Soon the wet fingers from within me rubbed over my anus. I was not sure what he was up to but allowed him to feel me openly. It really felt nice as it sent tingles through my crotch.

Continuing to suck I let my fingers mimic his I passed them across his rectum. It was so warm to the touch and arousing to think where my fingers were. Now I could taste a little pre-cum as his cock throbbed to my touch.

Dad made little circles with his finger then pressed it slowly into my ass. I became frozen for a moment as it entered. He pushed it a little further, and then stopped.

My mind was erased for the moment as I just took in the feeling of his violation. I could feel the trickle of womanly silky-smooth oils run down my inner thigh. My body remained still as if in a state of shock. I wanted to stop him because it felt so unusual, for the moment. I felt so exposed it actually made me more aroused if that was possible.

His finger rotated slightly, and then proceeded to move in and out ever so slightly.

I knew he was watching my puckered anus, as his finger played. This sent a quiver through my body which caused me to clench down on his finger tight. I tried to relax, but as soon as I felt his finger move again I involuntarily tensed up. I thought to my self, “Wholly crap! My dad has his finger in my ass, and is playing with it as well as watching.” I never dreamed of letting a guy play with my ass in this way never mind my own father.

I breathed hot and heavily on his cock which was rubbing on my face. My pussy was like a flowing stream sending me out of my mind. I called out, “Oh please! I need you to fuck me!”

Dad removed his finger as he turned me around. I was laid on the bed with my face firmly planted on the comforter and my ass exposed to him. His hands rubbed my cheeks, and every third stroke over my ass he teased my anus with a slight probe.

I asked without lifting my head, “Do you want to fuck my girly ass?”

Dad Spread my ass cheeks, and pressed his tongue into my anus. Only for a brief moment, and then placed the head of his shaft up to my anus. Holding his cock firm pushed it tightly and directly at the small opening.

I could feel the warm soft head press against the small opening. I relaxed as much as I possibly could. The thought was incredible, “My dad wants to fuck my tight little teeny ass.” I wanted to give him at that moment the world.

Dad rubbed the tip of his cock a few more times then retreated. With a strong desire he placed his cock up to my pussy, sinking it deeply into me. With one hand he brushed my hair back from my neck. Leaning in he kissed the nape tenderly. Then whispered in my ear, “You’re not ready for my cock to be in your ass.” His hips where gyrating fast as he fucked me hard. “Don’t you worry I have been wanting to fuck you too long to not do it right.” He said with a kiss.

Upon hearing his words I began to orgasm hard. I let out some loud moans, and girly screams of delight. He fucked harder his balls were stinging my clit sending me through another roll of pleasure.

Finally he held my shoulders as he planted his cock deep within, and let it grind on my pussy. Growling he shot his load. It tickled almost like he was taking a pee inside me. He held his firm grip. Only retracting his cock to slam it hard again shoving my body held tight by his grip. Again he grunted as he stiffened his erection as deep as it could go.

My pussy pulsed around his member I let out another cry as my head lifted and the sweat dripped over my nose. My fingers dug into the bed as his cock seemed to swell to epic proportions. Then it hit me hard his sperm made a last attempt to completely fill me. I could feel the pressure escaping from the tight fit between his cock, and my pussy.

That is when I swore I was wetting the bed. I couldn’t hold it back I just let it go. I am not sure if I even blacked out for a moment of time. I was coming so intensely I didn’t care if I was pissing or not.

Dad was ending his climax, as he held me tight holding onto my tiny chest with his hands wrapped under me. He kissed my neck as I just continued to cum on his cock still buried in me. Every once in a while he would give a little push with his hips. Making me feel just how wet I was. These made me give out a mini moan with delight; just that little after glow grind on my sensitive pussy gave me a thrill.

A few minutes passed and he slid off to the side. Dad was rubbing my pussy, and smearing his and my cum all over, and around my ass. I just lay content and overly stimulated. I could feel the wet comforter penetrating under my legs and belly.

I turned my head toward him with a smile, letting out a gasp of approval like moan. I smiled at him for a while before I said, “Now don’t you think if you were really fucking Erica you should have pulled out?”

Dad didn’t respond but for a slight groan. He remained fixed on still playing with my open pussy.

I then thought about what he said,”He had wanted to fuck me for too long to not do it right.” I let out a, “Hmm” as I kept my silent thoughts, “I bet he has.” I thought to my self.

Dad kissed me on the cheek as he waited, then said, “Ok!”

My eyes told him I had no clue as to what was Ok.

He kissed me again, “Ok, I will play your game. I will do your little friend if you let some one of my choosing have sex with you.”

I was already so wet I knew he couldn’t tell I was dripping over the thought. I played coy then asked, “Who?”

He answered, “I am not sure yet, you are kind of young for most of my friends. I am sure they would all gladly ride you, with out a doubt. The thing is finding one who is really horny for you, and can keep his mouth shut. Ya know?”

I nodded my head before I asked, “And what are you going to do?”

He just smiled as he leaned in close to my ear. Then whispered, “Where going to take turns making you cum.”

I closed my eyes and took in a deep breath as I visualized the moment. Upon opening my eyes I said, “You’re really going to do that?”

He nodded his head back, “Just say the word. I will make it happen, and a lot more.”

I pondered the thought. Taking my hand I slipped it down to his cock. He was already erect again. I said, “You really want to see if I will do it?” I bit my lower lip for a second. “I don’t care if that is what you want. I’ll do it in exchange for a night with Erica and me.”

Dad rolled back on top of me and placed his erection back into me. I let my hands stray far above my head. I just laid there as he made his way with me for a long while.

He sat up right with his hands on my small ass. He was wasting no time as he drove into me with vigor. His finger soon found my anus, pushing it in deep making me quiver.

I wanted to know what thoughts were going through his mind. I just knew he was being upsettingly perverted as he fucked me hard. My own mind danced around the thought of the two men wanting me as their sex toy for the night. Then thoughts of Erica and me naked in the same bed with dad drove me over the edge once more. I began to orgasm and shake. My own mind was betraying me with such wicked thoughts.

Dad slapped my ass as he with drew his finger, and thrusted hard. He leaned down quick as he sucked the back of my ear.

I could feel him let loose as he then bit down on my neck. I arched up and took all he was giving. My whole body felt intensely good like a morning stretch.

His fingers quickly took a perked nipple in each hand and tweaked. I screamed out, “Fuck! Fuck me!” as I again felt the warm rush of blood rise through my entire body. We were both pausing while the moment gently began to fade.

Releasing my neck with his mouth he said, “Oops!” Then kissed the painful spot he had been sucking on. With his weight he pulled me to the side leaving us in a spooning position. He made no attempt to pull out, just held me tight in his arms.

I rubbed my neck and said, “It better not, be or I’ll Oops, ya!”

He nuzzled his nose into my hair and said, “Quiet, or you can have the wet spot to sleep in tonight.”

I let out a quick frowning disappointed breath, and then placed my arms onto his. And then said, “Good night.” As I lifted one of his hand to kiss it tenderly.

He kissed my bare shoulder and said, “Good night Hun, I love you.”

I smiled and replied, “I love you too.” I knew it wouldn’t be long before he slipped out of me. For the moment I was feeling so fulfilled. I would do anything for dad at this point.


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    05.05.2004 16:30
    Excellent - the best chapter so far... they're will be more I assume?

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    06.05.2004 09:23
    fucking great. I had to wank half way thru this. Hope we hear about the double fucking in the next part.

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    i am very much in the liking on how this story is progressing

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    I am totally loving this story! I hope to see more soon.

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    09.05.2004 20:13
    awesome

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    10.05.2004 14:36
    These chapters have been magnificent. Your writing and descriptions are great. Please, keep this story going, and make some more stories.

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    11.05.2004 06:16
    What a series!! THIS is what I've been looking for in a story. Romance, trust, tease, danger... This story series has it all. A+ action! Thank you and keep them coming, please!!!!!!!!

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    12.05.2004 00:49
    this i love o do
    wanna see more of such stories

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    12.05.2004 01:41
    I've been glued to my computer while readin the first 4 chaps. now im wait on the 5th...keep em cumming exactly like that!!!

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    13.05.2004 02:05
    Mmmm, great series...gets me off everytime! Cant wait for the threesome action to begin!! Bring it on!

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    14.05.2004 17:00
    Awsome story man. It'd be bogus if you wrote another part!

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    14.05.2004 18:16
    Thank god you're gonna run one with both girls. *grin* I was hoping you would do that. KEEP IT CUMMING, MAN!

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    15.05.2004 03:52
    It some good sh*t stories there I need to practice on my role palying with my girlfriend and keep it up that turn my bi*ch on...

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    15.05.2004 17:23
    i can't wait til you write another story i loved them they made me so horny ahh

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    16.05.2004 10:52
    yay lesbians

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    18.05.2004 09:20
    this incest crap is pure shit, no onder all you god damn yanks are fucked up!
    aren't there any decent american girls left who'd prefer a guy other than there dad!!!!!

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    18.05.2004 22:20
    what the fuck, man this is fuken wrong! with her dad!!!! fukin hell man. ur fuked in the head!

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    19.05.2004 17:00
    i dont get it, what the fuck is goin on...

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    20.05.2004 20:35
    waat the fuk is this

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    21.05.2004 19:57
    damn these stories are so hott...i wish i could have incest...mmm,,,that girls sounds fucking hot

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    21.05.2004 20:14
    Good shit ! I'm off to sodomise my daughter immediately ! She loves it.

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    22.05.2004 13:44
    mmm i loved it, it made me sooo horny, i cant wait for the next story. i wish i could've been that girl with her dad *grins*. hehe

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    READER 500
    23.05.2004 11:40
    i found this story quite fucken nice

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    READER 500
    26.05.2004 01:06
    my go you're sick. what the fuck are you thinking? you're own kid? damn i hope you end up in jail.

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    READER 500
    28.05.2004 12:57
    it is one of the best stories i have read i hope you will not be long writing some more thank you very much

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    READER 500
    29.05.2004 18:07
    he is the step father of this girl you moron read the earlier parts before making any stupid commends.

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    READER 500
    30.05.2004 20:44
    come on, get the 5th chapter out already...plllzzzzzz

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    READER 500
    01.06.2004 10:24
    Best sequence of stories ever, hurry up with cpt 5!!!

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    READER 500
    01.06.2004 18:09
    i'm cumming hard

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    READER 500
    02.06.2004 11:45
    oh my god, im so wet i want someone to fuck me in the ass right now....and finger it hard

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    READER 500
    02.06.2004 18:27
    What the fuck..? You're all going to hell.

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    READER 500
    07.06.2004 22:58
    oh god, im cumming so hard!!!!

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    READER 500
    08.06.2004 08:54
    Im gonna go fudge sumbody rite now, yall beter look out

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    READER 500
    11.06.2004 13:42
    ok, all you morons complaining about the incest in this story need to read the little words next to the title that says whats in the story...If incest bothers you..DONT CLICK THE STORY...how fucking slow do you have to be to not figure this out...

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    READER 500
    12.06.2004 04:17
    soooooo fuckin` good ,hurry up where the 5th , 6th .......
    to who doesn`t like incest ,,,,,so what the hell do u like incest is the best

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    READER 500
    13.06.2004 13:03
    I though the second one was the best, but this one is a close second. I would love to read a fifth and a sixth!

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    READER 500
    15.06.2004 02:05
    nice!!! i think erica and kay and dad should all fuck... and the dad should have whooped some ass at ice cream place

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    READER 500
    15.06.2004 23:13
    Ur All Pervs...read the other parts if u dont understand, and as for the rest of you...who are dissing on the incest...its your own fault for reading it...and it was well written, even if the person did make some stupid mistakes "where" instead of "we're"...but oh well...its still a damn good story

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    READER 500
    17.06.2004 09:12
    Incest doesn't really turn my dials, but this story was arousal, if only because it was written with proper English. Good Job.

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    READER 500
    19.06.2004 18:00
    Can i just say to all the people complaining about incest DON'T FUCKING READ IT!! these stories really get my panties soaked and give me something great to frig myself to!

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    READER 500
    20.06.2004 17:39
    So when is #5?

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    READER 500
    24.06.2004 16:20
    that was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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    READER 500
    30.06.2004 05:36
    I can not wait for the other stories to follow. You write very well. This is the best story I have ever read on Xnxx. Thanks

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    READER 500
    01.07.2004 16:14
    omg dude you have to make more and more stories like this, it'd be interesting if you could do a few more where erica gets in on the action and sooner or later it ends up with quite a few in the bedroom... apart from that great fucking story!! whoever complains cos its incest should've read the fucking description before they reaf it!!

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    READER 500
    02.07.2004 06:48
    So how does it feel gettin all these great comments ;-). GREAT WORK HONEY!!! I had to stay up and read all four chapters at one time.

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    READER 500
    05.07.2004 22:36
    wow, this really got my pussy pumping. I've always wanted to be involved with incest, or sex with an older guy. I thought the beginning was a little long but the wait was worth it. thanks!

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    READER 500
    10.07.2004 02:20
    that was great i dont give a shit about the grammar or spelling jsut as long as its a good story.
    and how come the author isnt in on the comments, if your reading this we all want number 5 and u should try to get this published

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    READER 500
    16.07.2004 13:39
    I'll go out on a limb here and say ... don't do a #5. Or do it only if you can keep the same spirit. If it's predictable, ie Dad and Erica, then daughter and dad's friend, it won't be worth it. The genius here is the relation b/w dad and daughter, and what's goind on in her mind. It's ... almost ... realistic. Beautiful!

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    READER 500
    23.07.2004 22:11
    you have to do a number 5 after that and include erica in it and kath, dad and dads friend please do it. i need help and u have given it me

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    READER 500
    24.07.2004 03:53
    this was great! can't wait till 5 though yeah it should be less predictable then erica, kath and dand, and dad dad friend and kath..dunno try MOM! lol just an idea...

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    READER 500
    06.08.2004 23:41
    THIS IS GREAT WRITING U SHOULD WRITTE A SCRENPLAY/SCRIPT and make a movie or write your own book and publish it this is unblelvible

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    READER 500
    11.08.2004 14:56
    GREAT stuff. I was having a fun time jerking off, and will make sure my girlfriend reads your stories, might give her some ideas for our own playing.

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    READER 500
    16.08.2004 15:55
    i dont usualy make coments but my girl friend sent me this these stories.... this was very well written...and it truned me on....me and my girlfriend has a little bit of fun reading this...thanx.

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    READER 500
    22.08.2004 12:37
    Having read these chapters...all I can say is More...more...MORE please

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    READER 500
    02.09.2004 18:03
    That gave me an orgasm like you wouldn't believe.. me and my boyfriend like to RP.. so it was fun..

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    READER 500
    13.09.2004 00:15
    I have never left a note for anyone before this moment. That story was fucking awesome. All four chapters were completely fucking amazing! I agree with everyone here, although I would love to see how you would approach dad, Kay, Erica or dad, "other guy", Kay. I think the two chicks would be hot, if you kept the same idea and realism going. I love it though no matter what you do with the next chapter...

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    READER 500
    13.09.2004 15:20
    well i havent read it yet but i think from comments that it will worth reading

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    READER 500
    14.09.2004 18:20
    well done i creamed my pants hard

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    READER 500
    16.09.2004 15:30
    hey this is sooo awesome you always get me ready to play! you should really think about becumming a novelist. the discription and the creativity is intellectually stimmulating as well as physically. keep it up!. i can't wait to read more, i look forward to it... FUCK ME BABY!

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    READER 500
    22.09.2004 23:35
    ooooooooooooo damn this is a great story i got off many a time keep up the wonderfull work this was great ... did i mention this was GREAT!!! good shit i will recomend it to every one i know

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    READER 500
    26.09.2004 14:30
    a very good story, extremly arrousing

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    READER 500
    07.10.2004 04:04
    is there a 5 comming up?

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    READER 500
    11.10.2004 00:59
    it was a good story make more

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    READER 500
    11.10.2004 10:09
    continue we need part 5, don't stop your a good writer

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    READER 500
    15.10.2004 23:42
    read all for and they are pretty good, cant wait for 5 so get workin on it

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    READER 500
    16.10.2004 06:12
    god... i see endless permutations for future chapters including dad/erica/kay and dad/dad's friend/kay and any number of others that could stem from those as just speculation to so wrong that i'm hard for the fifty-fifth time tonight. i'm good at non-euclidian permutations... have at it man. this is a story that will just get better and better the longer it ages and if you finally get to the last chapter it'll be to soon.
    if you want any reader inspired ideas than email me at the above address. oh and it may take me a while to answer cause i check my email once every month

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    READER 500
    19.10.2004 21:02
    that was beyond amazing!

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    READER 500
    15.11.2004 05:52
    This is goood! Proo.
    Yes! Keep writing
    And you.., you must be a girl
    Love to you

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    READER 500
    05.12.2004 00:46
    keep it up this is the best story here!!! cant wait for #5

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    READER 500
    07.12.2004 18:54
    when are you doing part five i want more

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    READER 500
    19.12.2004 15:50
    make a 5th story these are all good

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    READER 500
    20.12.2004 01:42
    my daughter and her friend both want me to have sex with them these two have with the father

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    READER 500
    22.12.2004 16:28
    OMG how gud is this fuckin story,it got me sooo wet dat i cummed without help! i need chapter 5,rite a god damn book! xx

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    READER 500
    26.12.2004 10:05
    Cant wait until Erica get her share.

    Perhaps the mother could be woven into the next chapter? can't wait until the girls seduce the mother. Just an idea!!!!!

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    READER 500
    12.01.2005 20:23
    YOU HAD ME SO HOT i WANTED TO FUCK MY DAD. BUT HE WOULD NEVER DO THAT AND i WANT TO FUCK HIM SO BAD i KNOW HE KNOWS i WANT TO FUCK HIM i'M A VIRGIN AND i KNOW HE WOULD LEAD ME THRU EVERYTHING SO PERFECT ANY ONE GOT AN IDEA WHAT i CAN DO TO GET MY DAD TO FUCK ME

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    READER 500
    12.01.2005 23:56
    this story is so good ..please write more i giv you a ten

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 14:15
    That's the best! What a story.

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    READER 500
    06.04.2005 10:07
    Great story10/10. More please.
    Message to Melanie. Wear your shortest stuff and show daddy how good you look, he will soon get the idea. Failing that, wait until he is in bed and suck him while he is asleep.

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    READER 500
    11.04.2005 15:25
    Sorry guys... Chapter 5 isn't coming.

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    READER 500
    12.04.2005 17:32
    It worked! I'm my daddy's bitch now!

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    READER 500
    27.04.2005 01:38
    STILL WAITING FOR CH.5,...I LOVE UR STORIES...

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    READER 500
    13.05.2005 19:55
    Sadly... I can't write chapter five.

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    READER 500
    19.05.2005 21:55
    that was tooo hot words please write chapter5 10/10

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    READER 500
    22.05.2005 14:25
    OK... Get this through your fuckig skulls. I'm not writing a Chapter 5. Chapter 4 is the end! An end with a cliff hanger.

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    READER 500
    26.05.2005 23:48
    CONGRATULATIONS TO MELANIE FOR GETTING HER DAD TO FUCK HER. I HOPE YOU'RE SOMEWHERE BETWEEN 8 AND 12. WE WANT DAD TO GET LOTS OF GOOD PUSSY, ASS AND BLOW JOBS. I LOVED THE DESCRIPTION OF KAY GETTING HER PUSSY LIPS SPREAD AROUND HER DAD'S LARGE COCK. AND THEM HAVING NICE TALKS WHILE HE IS FUCKING HER AND SHE IS CUMING ON HIS COCK. I WILL JUST HAVE TO IMAGINE WHAT THEY THINK WHILE THEY ARE WATCHING EACH OTHER GET FUCKED AND HOW THEY FEEL ABOUT BEING WATCHED WHILE THEY ARE FUCKING OTHER PEOPLE. ALSO HOW KAY LOVES GETTING FUCKED UP THE ASS BY HER DAD'S HUGE COCK AND HAVING CUM FLOWING OUT OF HER ASSHOLE.

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    READER 500
    31.05.2005 13:26
    My favorite stories, although I see you don't plan to continue. You should, but I think you are on the edge with the father coercing his daughter to have sex with another man. Leave it with him, the daughter and the friend and it will not leave a bad taste in anyone's mouth. Thanks much.

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    READER 500
    19.07.2005 10:31
    very very good better than part 1 or 2 and 3 makes it all come together. please write more more more!!!!! Definitely a 10/10

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    READER 500
    08.08.2005 18:28
    That was so good. I am going to really miss not having an end to the story but it left so much to the imangaion. Great work.

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    READER 500
    23.11.2005 17:00
    u fucking suck, this was the best story i ever read and ur just gonna end it like that? fuck u, still 10/10 good story even if i are a tard

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    READER 500
    02.12.2005 18:54
    Great, well written story with a wonderful slow teasing buildup to a very well described climax. Unlike many other stories that concentrate too much on the "mechanics" of the sex scene (ie what goes where and how often) you were able to intertwine the feeling and emotion into the sceen. Excellent work and I am sorry you will not be continuing with the series.

    Can I ask why you won't continue though? You say "Sadly I can't write chapter five"... why not? You have a good writing talent.

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    READER 500
    20.02.2006 14:28
    Wonderful story and really hot. Gave me a hard boner. Had to jack off I got so turned on. What about chapter 5. Dad should fuck Erica then Kay. How about dad's friends joining in on a fuckfast and sucking.

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    READER 500
    24.02.2006 16:04
    Absolutely marvelous ! Great story and, in my opinion, a wise decision not to write part 5 so it leaves the rest to the imagination. Thank you for this story !

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    READER 500
    23.05.2006 01:04
    for not writing a 5th story i will give this one and all the rest a 1 for leaveing me hanging......

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    READER 500
    24.11.2006 10:46
    dat waz awesome
    it really made me cum
    but wer's da 5th part?im dyin to read da 5th part
    GIMME CH-5 SOON

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    READER 500
    05.12.2006 14:37
    ch5 please

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    READER 500
    11.11.2007 17:28
    I did it agin I jancked off. giv me story about you and Erica fucikng you and and your Daughter,

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  • amy+sue
    17.01.2009 19:24
    i hope you keep on telling the story. you have already teased us with at least 2 or 3 more pages. you have a day with Erica, a day with another man with the daughter and you could get caught by mom who would want to share in a threesome. Go for it. you write well.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2009 14:11
    U R A FANTASTIC WRITER. CONTINUE DOING IT. LOVE THE STORY BY THE WAY.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 10:13
    Wow, your post makes mine look fbeele. More power to you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.12.2013 19:59
    You're a great writer and besides a few grammar mistakes it was excellant. Keep it up xp.

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