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The Popular Girl

Author: Bigboy40

Date: 21 December 2010

Blowjob, Fiction, Consensual Sex, School

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(This is my first ever story so it probably won’t be great but let me know what you think; good or bad and if everyone likes it, I’ll write a sequel.)

“Fuck”, thought Amber. She had just gotten her math test back and failed, again, big time. She knew she was gonna be in deep shit when she got home and showed her parents….or maybe they didn’t have to know. If she didn’t bring it up then how would they know?

“Amber, stay after class please” said Mr. Hubble.

“Goddamnit, this can’t be good” mumbled Amber.

Class passed very slowly after that. Amber didn’t even focus on the lesson (she usually didn’t but today she didn’t even hear a word) she could only think about what that douchebag of a teacher was gonna say to her after school. If he called her parents she was dead.

Eventually the bell rang and Amber packed up her things and tried to sneak out of the door.
“Not so fast Ms. Harper” yelled Mr. Hubble. “I asked you to stay late, remember?”

“Sorry I forgot” said Amber sheepishly.

“Amber, what are we going to do about your grades? If you continue at this rate then you’re going to fail this class and not graduate”

“I know sir, I know”

“Well we have to fix this and I have a plan as to how”

“And that would be….?” Said Amber, getting a little creeped out.

“I’m going to have to set you up with a tutor”

“Oh”, responded Amber, clearly not what she was thinking. “Well who is it”

“I think Jordan will be a suitable tutor”

“Jordan? Is he that kid that never talks to anyone?”

“I guess. All I know is he has a 97 and can help you”

“Ughh. Fine. Can I go?”

“Yes you may”

Amber didn’t get much sleep that night. Out of all the nerds in her class who could’ve just done her work for her, no, she gets Mr. Doesn’t-Speak. How was this going to work? But then she got an idea. She could persuade him to just do it for her. Sure, she was head cheerleader, blonde, athletic, about 5’4, 120 lbs. 36C tits and the cutest ass in the school. Amber had been using her sexy influence to get things from boys since middle school; she’d just have to do it again.

She found Jordan on Facebook and immediately added him as a friend. She sent a message saying “Hubble wants you to be my tutor.” He responded with “I know”. Great she thought, this guy couldn’t be less interested. She pressed on “When can we start the lessons?” To which Jordan answered “Whenever”. Starting to get frustrated, she abruptly did the thinking for him “Alright fine. Tomorrow after school my house” His answer was “Fine”.

“Oh my fucking god” she thought. “This guy has to be the most boring person in the world, and to make things worse, he seems not to give a shit about who I am.” “There are guys who would give up a leg to come to my house”.

Still a little pissed off about Jordan not respecting her social standing, she began to get ready for tomorrow. If she was to impress this guy, she needed to pull out the big guns. She quickly showered and shaved her legs, did her nails and did a check for any skin blemishes. Then she had to pick out a wardrobe. Usually leaving her top button undone and showing off some cleavage was enough to get any guy to follow her around like a drooling fool. But she knew that this guy would take more. She stood in the mirror and admired her stunning, 17 year old body. “What guy wouldn’t want this?” she said out loud. She ran her hands over her smooth, flat stomach and down towards her shaved pussy except for the small heart right above her clit. Then she ran them all the way back up and played with her beautiful, supple tits. Her nipples got hard and she started to get horny but she quickly shook it out of her mind. There was work to do. She went to her closet and examined all of her clothes. Her daddy owned a bank so she always had the name brand stuff. Gucci, Prada, Guess etc. She walked inside her closet and went to her underwear section. She decided on a pink thong with black lace around the top and a matching bra. She was a 36C but always bought bras a size too small, just for that extra pop of cleavage. She set those aside and began working on the rest of her outfit. She looked at some black yoga pants that hugged her ass in a way she really liked but when she saw her daisy duke cut offs she knew those were the ones. They would really show off her ass and would make sure there was as much skin showing as possible. She then decided on a pink tank top that would show off her nice tits and clung to them no matter how she moved. Satisfied with her choices she laid them out and went off to bed.

Amber over slept and woke up in a hurry. She quickly tossed on her outfit, brushed her teeth and hair and ran down stairs. Her parents opened there mouth to protest but she came down so quickly, kissed them both on the cheek and was out the door that they never had a chance to say anything.
Amber pulled up to the school in her cute little Porsche her dad had bought her and parked it in her usual space. As soon as she stepped out of the car, the stares started. Even for California, she was showing a lot of skin at school but she loved the attention, fully knowing all the boys that stared didn’t have a shot in hell at her.

She sat in her first two classes with every male (including her teacher) stealing glances at her. She of course noticed but didn’t say anything, simply enjoying the attention. After 2nd period she found Jordan in the hallway at his locker. She made sure her thong and bra were visible before advancing towards him. “Hey Jordan” she said in her sweetest voice. He grunted back at her and walked past her. Not skipping a beat she caught up and struck up a conversation.

“So were still good for tonight?”
“If we weren’t I probably would have told you”
“Oh…right….Well I can give you a ride if you need one”
“I’m good”
“Oh ok…well I’ll write my address down for you”
“I know where you live”
“Oh you do? How’d you find that out?” she said thinking he had finally realized she was the most popular girl in school.
“Got it from a friend”
“Oh…” she couldn’t think of a mutual friend they had. “Well do you need directions?”
“Nope, I’ll find it”
“Your just gonna drive around till you find it?”
“Google Maps”
“Oh…ok well see you then” She left feeling awkward and stupid. He grunted again.

Well that had been a total cluster-fuck. Not only had he not showed any interest in her outfit, he barely noticed her. The chances of him doing her work for her seemed to be getting smaller and smaller. She needed to make an impact when he got their tonight.

She quickly drove home after school and called her parents. She said she needed the house for cheer practice and asked if they could just go out for dinner or something. They agreed and Amber began to get ready. She ran upstairs and put on her dress from junior prom. It was a stunning blue, strapless dress that was a little snug because she had grown in all the right places over the past year. She went downstairs and ordered her chef to start cooking a dinner for two. If dressing like a slut wasn’t gonna get him under her spell then maybe a classy girl with tonnes of money would.

Around 4:30 she heard her butler call her down. “Miss Amber, there is a Master Jordan here for you.” Showtime she thought. She quickly descended the stairs and saw Jordan standing there in a plain black tee in jeans. She hadn’t noticed before but he was kind of good-looking. Probably around 6’2 and looked to be rather chiselled under that tee. He had short brown hair and green eyes that were currently fixed on Amber. But it wasn’t the normal look she got from guys who wanted to fuck her. It was different, kind of like he was looking through her. She got to the bottom of the stairs and for once he started the conversation.

“Nice house” he said looking around the massive foyer.
“Oh why thank you” she said smiling. “Shall we get started”?
“Whatever”.

As Amber led the way towards the den where they would study, Jordan found something rather odd.
“You normally wear a dress around the house?”
“Oh no, only in front of special company” she said trying to score some early points.
“Riiiight” responded Jordan, rolling his eyes.

Once in the den they got down to studying. For the first half an hour Amber tried everything to try and get this guy interested in her. She leaned over the table so he got a nice cleavage shot, she grabbed his arm (which shocked her with how big and defined it was) she even dropped her pencil on purpose sop she would have to bend over to get it and still nothing!
She was getting really fed up with this guy. What was he gay or something? How could he not want her? The worst part about it was that she was now kind of attracted to him. Not being able to attract a math loser was bad enough but not being able to attract one and then becoming attracted to him was unbearable. She had to get him.

As much as she hated to admit it, this tutor thing was working. Within the first two hours she learned more then she had all semester. All of a sudden he got up and said he had to leave.

“Oh come on. You helped me for two hours. I think I owe you dinner”
“I don’t know…”
“What am I gonna bite you or something?”
“Fine”
“Good” she said beaming. “Follow me”

Things had not gone to plan so far. She thought the outfit at school would do it but it failed. The classy girl with servants had failed. Now her only chance was this dinner. If this didn’t get him to fall for her then she would probably be doing her own math work for the rest of the year. But it had become more than that. She wanted him because at the time, she seemed like the only guy she couldn’t have. Like the child who neglects its toys until they are taken away, then they will do anything to get that toy.

Once in the dining room it was time to pull out all the stops. She needed this guy to fall for her…now. Soon the butler brought them their food. New York strip with baked potato and saut? mushrooms.
“Bon appetite” smiled Amber
“Thanks” he responded.
They ate in silence for a while. Amber needed to be direct if this was gonna work. No more flirting bullshit.
“So explain something to me”
“What?”
“How is someone like you so good at math?”
“Someone like me?”
“You know, you’re good looking, you seem to be in good shape yet you still work hard in school. Why?”
“I’m just good at math”
“Bullshit. There’s something to you and I want to know what it is. Why not just use what you got and be popular. Play sports; get girls, party all that shit”
“I just believe in working hard I guess, like my parents”
“Oh you’re poor!” exclaimed Amber, before slapping her hand to her mouth. That had just blurted out.

He just laughed. That was it. Amber was hooked. This was the first time she had heard any real emotion from him and she craved more. Fuck doing math for her, she just wanted him. She was genuinely interested in another person for the first time ever.
He then continued. “I’m not poor. In fact I’m far from it. My dad is a stockbroker in New York. My Mom’s family owns 70% of Cadillac”
“Holy Shit” responded Amber.
“Yeah, I don’t work hard because I need to. I do it because my parents built themselves up from nothing. Sitting on their money would be an insult to everything they did to give me this situation”
Now it was Amber’s turn to be speechless. She had never thought of it that way. She always just sponged off her Dad because she could.

“One other question.”
“Shoot”
“Why are you not attracted to me?”
“How do you know I’m not?”
“Well I threw on my best slut impersonation today in school and got nothing, and I flirted with you for nearly two hours and got nothing. Why? Do you think I’m ugly?”
“Hardly”
“Then what is it?”
“I knew you wanted me to do your work for you.”
“You did?”
“Yeah. Let me guess, every guy who has ever tried to help you ends up falling for your body in the first 30 seconds and does it for you. And then you pass the class but learn nothing. I knew I could’ve done the same thing and been out of here an hour and a half ago but I wanted to get past your body. I wanted to see if you really were intelligent.”

Again, Amber was speechless. This guy had her figured out. And even though he looked like every guy she had ever dated, he acted completely different. He saw through her. It was those eyes, there was something in them. She got so lost in his eyes she hadn’t noticed their faces were now inches from each other while he talked. Without thinking she reached out and grabbed his head and kissed him. This wasn’t the normal do-my-homework-for-me kiss or a buy-me-that-purse kiss. It was an I-want-you-right-fucking-now.
She got up from the table and led him upstairs by the hand. Neither said a word until they were both in her room. She closed the door behind them and immediately jumped on him. Wrapping her legs around his waist while still kissing him. He carried her to the bed and laid her down on it. Amber knew what was happening and knew she wanted it bad.

She had had sex a few times before but it was usually sloppy and drunk. This was for real. He took off his tee shirt and revealed a perfectly ripped chest and abs. She felt her pussy getting wet and quickly unzipped her dress. He pulled it off her as she wiggled out of it. She laid there in her soaked pink and black lacy thong and bra while he stared at her and muttered one word “Fuck”.
“Bout time you noticed me” she laughed before pulling him towards her.

They made out with each other for a while feeling their tongues inter-twine with each other and exploring each other’s mouths. After a while Jordan moved down her neck kissing every inch or so before stopping at her breasts. He reached underneath her back and with one hand undid her bra. Her pert, teenage tits were exposed and she loved it. He instantly went to work on them sucking each one and playing with the unoccupied one with his hands. “Ohhhh myyyy” moaned Amber slightly. She had never gotten this hot from just her tits being worked on. She felt the moisture on her pussy and soon was pushing Jordan’s head down towards her pussy. “Eat me baby, eat my fucking cunt please I need it” Like usual he said nothing, but he expertly worked down her stomach and towards her hot, young pussy. He slid off her thong and tossed it aside. He could feel how wet she was. He traced the outline of her cunt with his tongue while using his thumb to tease her clit. “Holy fuck baby stop teasing me. Eat me! Eat my tight fucking pussy!” He obliged and dove at her cunt with his face. He used his tongue to expertly hit her all the right ways. She began to squirm and thrust her pelvis towards his face, trying to get him to drive his tongue in further. Soon she felt an orgasm coming and she arched her back as numbness took over. She felt her orgasm hit like a fucking train. Using just his tongue, he had made her have the best orgasm of her life.
She lay there for a while and tried to regain her breath while he laid there next to her
.
“Baby that was incredible”
“Why thank you” he said smiling.
She fucking loved his smile.
“You need to ditch those pants and boxers cause I’m about to rock your world”

He smiled again and obliged. Amber got her first look at his cock and her jaw opened. It had to be about 8 inches long and 2 inches around. She didn’t even wait for him to get settled before her mouth had fully engulfed his cock. Amber considered herself a pretty good fuck but she had to step her game up for this guy. She began to deep throat him instantly. Only stopping to put his balls in her mouth. She’d suck his dick and fondle his balls then switch and jack him off with his balls in her mouth. She would look up at him and give him the “Am I bad little slut?” look. She knew she was doing well because his eyes were closed
and his back was slightly arched.

“Amber I’m gonna cum!!!” he finally screamed
She didn’t miss a beat. She just kept bobbing up and down on his huge shaft and swallowed every bit of his load. She had never allowed a guy to cum in her mouth but she loved it.

Now it was Jordan’s turn to catch his breath. They lay in each other’s arms for a while before Amber spoke.
“It’s 8. My parents will be home in an hour….what can we do in an hour?” she said with a devilish grin.
He laughed again. “Got a condom?” he asked.
She whispered into his ear “I’m on the pill” then climbed on top of him.

She squatted over his huge dick and carefully placed the tip on her cunt then quickly and suddenly impaled herself on his throbbing dick. It was perfect; it felt so right inside of her. She slowly worked up a rhythm of slowly bouncing on his cock, getting used to the size. Then she sped up. Her hair started to go all over the place and her tits bounced along with her. Jordan reached around her and grabbed her bubble butt. He helped her by lifting her up and then pounding her onto his huge dick.

“OHHH FUCK” yelled Amber
“Yeah that’s it baby split me open with that fucking cock, it feels so big and hard inside of my tight little cunt”
“You like my cock Amber?”
“Oh sweetie I fucking love it, I need it. I’m your pretty little cock whore”
This drove Jordan nuts and he started to thrust up every time she came down. She kept riding him and he looked up and saw her blonde hair every wear, her tits going up and down and her head was thrown back in pure ecstasy.
“Oh Jordan baby fuck me like the slut I am, make me cum baby please!!!”

This sent Jordan over the edge.

“I’m gonna cum baby”
“Me too, let’s cum together. I wanna feel your hot seed in my pretty little pussy.”
“Ok..ready…NOW”

With one final thrust they both released and cum spurt up into Amber’s waiting pussy. And her juices splashed all over his throbbing dick.

They laid together for what seemed like an eternity before getting dressed and Amber walked him out to his Escalade.

“Thanks baby, you were great” said Amber as she kissed him good-bye.
“Oh no thank you”
“Same time tomorrow? I think I’m gonna need more help in math.”
“Ok, but you have to wear what you wore to school today, so I can really enjoy it”
“You got it babe”
With that she kissed him again, slipped her soaked thong into his back pocket and watched him get in his car and drive off.
“Fuck I love math”, she thought to herself.

(Well that’s my first ever story. Any tips are appreciated. I hope you enjoyed it. If I get good reviews I’ll write a sequel.)


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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2010 06:07
    good story, it definitely is well written. my only suggestion would be space it out more with such small print its hard to read with long single spaced paragraphs.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2010 08:06
    Loved it keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2010 09:14
    This was the best story with this type of theme I have read on here in a long time.
    Keep up the work(:

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 02:03
    Reminds me of me and my boyfriend

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 02:03
    Reminds me of me and my boyfriend

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 04:12
    its already been done, cheerleader blues

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 05:04
    Best story I've ever read please write another

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:01
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:02
    Ohmygod. No bullshit, this was fucking amazing, just elaborate on the sex scenes some more if your gonna post it on a sex story site. Otherwise, perfect plot, smooth dialogue, a twist, realistic characters and speech. Plain. fucking. good. You're talented bro. Write some more, xoxo Maria

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 06:11
    very talented u got a very good story for ur first time and write a sequel for this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 07:55
    Damn! That is some really good writing. Keep up the good work and write a sequel!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 07:55
    Damn! That is some really good writing. Keep up the good work and write a sequel!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 07:56
    Damn! That is some really good writing. Keep up the good work and write a sequel!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 08:12
    brilliant story!!! hope the sluts in my class need help with their work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 12:16
    Best story in this site!

    Keep writing! Defineitly.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 12:17
    This is a story i would read when not on a porn site. Very well written, a little more sexual detail and you're there.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 14:55
    That was really amazing story it made me cum 4 times in a row writing a sequel would be really appreciated

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 16:08
    Definitly write a sequel

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 16:39
    This was great! Need a sequel

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 17:09
    great story, sequel is needed. make them become bf/gf at school and have a fight between the jocks and jordan and have him kick their asses and then make sweet love to his princess.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 17:09
    great story, sequel is needed. make them become bf/gf at school and have a fight between the jocks and jordan and have him kick their asses and then make sweet love to his princess.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 17:45
    definatley needs a sequel writing!! it was sucha turn on already!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 21:04
    i will say that this was good for ur 1st time, but its not "omg this is making me sooo horny i cantcontrol myself" material. i would recommend a LOT more foreplay and slower pace. thats wat IM saying for ur nxt sequal. lookin forward to it ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 22:45
    A really good story and told in good style with appropriate grammar and punctuation-something many stories on this site lack. Only one criticism--I think you meant to write that Jordan's cock was 2 inches in diameter, not 2 inches around. That would make it about the size of a Nathan's hot dog. Just do the math. A really good first effort, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2010 23:10
    you really need to write a sequel!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 00:18
    write a sequel this story is great!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 00:46
    that was really good more please

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 00:46
    that was really good more please

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 03:34
    More more more more please

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 03:34
    More more more more please

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 03:59
    definitely calls for a sequel...do they have a relationship at school now?

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 05:05
    That is a REALLY good story!! And for a first timmer?!? bad ass!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 05:53
    best story on here. and i've read a lot. they both sounded realistic and fucking attractive. elaborate on the smex scenes though.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 07:04
    keep going with this one

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  • mack_daddy
    30.12.2010 07:09
    well done man! great story. defnintely need to keep the story line going.

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  • mack_daddy
    30.12.2010 07:10
    well done man! great story. defnintely need to keep the story line going.

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  • mack_daddy
    30.12.2010 07:11
    well done man! great story. defnintely need to keep the story line going.

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  • mack_daddy
    30.12.2010 07:15
    great story man. you definitely need to keep the story line going. MORE!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 11:15
    Flesh out the sex abit more. Was still a good read.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 14:05
    WOW......made me feel like i was back in calculus

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 14:41
    If I were signed in, this would be my #2 favorite. AWESOME!!! I want to see another!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 16:35
    good job. looking foward to the sequeal

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 16:35
    good job. looking foward to the sequeal

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 16:49
    this story is A LOT like cheerleader blues, but it was still fun to read

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 16:56
    more more more!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 16:56
    more more more!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 17:57
    Sequel please! I wish there was someone like that in my maths class. . .

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 21:33
    this was good, perfect for my mood

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2010 21:34
    this was good, perfect for my mood

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  • Bigboy40
    30.12.2010 23:26
    Wow, thanks guys. I really wasn't expecting this kind of reaction right away. Anyway, a sequel is in the design stage and If you have anything you want it to include either PM me or leave a comment here. Thanks :)

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  • Bigboy40
    30.12.2010 23:27
    Wow, thanks guys. I really wasn't expecting this kind of reaction right away. Anyway, a sequel is in the design stage and If you have anything you want it to include either PM me or leave a comment here. Thanks :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 00:06
    Great Story, and Great writing. Keep it up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 00:08
    YES YESYES write a sequel!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 03:06
    Less white talk comments in ur stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 04:44
    a EXCELLENT STORY ARE YOU SURE THIS IS FIRST STORY IT BETTER THAN MOST WRITER NOW FOR PART 2 PLEASE 10/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 06:12
    I'm lovin this story baby. Should have named it "I love math". <3 <3 please write more

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 06:12
    I'm lovin this story baby. Should have named it "I love math". <3 <3 please write more

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  • Mucker
    31.12.2010 09:01
    Good story. Thanks for sharing it here. And sorry to be nitpicking but owning any part of Cadillac would not be possible. For the next installment, maybe you can find a way for Jordan to improve his social skills. Just a suggestion.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 10:52
    Awesome, 9.5/10.

    A bit more detail. Like how her tits bounced up and down, or how her pussy felt.
    Also just a few grammatical errors such as wear instead of where.

    Other than that great story and I hope for many more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 10:52
    Awesome, 9.5/10.

    A bit more detail. Like how her tits bounced up and down, or how her pussy felt.
    Also just a few grammatical errors such as wear instead of where.

    Other than that great story and I hope for many more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 10:52
    Awesome, 9.5/10.

    A bit more detail. Like how her tits bounced up and down, or how her pussy felt.
    Also just a few grammatical errors such as wear instead of where.

    Other than that great story and I hope for many more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 10:53
    Awesome, 9.5/10.

    A bit more detail. Like how her tits bounced up and down, or how her pussy felt.
    Also just a few grammatical errors such as wear instead of where.

    Other than that great story and I hope for many more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 10:53
    Great Story. Funny thing is most 18 year olds have not yet learned to write. You are the exception

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 12:40
    Good story but I wish you had gone into more detail... Still very good:)

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 16:23
    This is probably the first story that the narrative and dialogue sounds real

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 16:23
    This is probably the first story that the narrative and dialogue sounds real

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 17:52
    HOLY FUCK THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. AND I HAVE READ A LOT OF STORIES ON HERE. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL. I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 17:52
    HOLY FUCK THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. AND I HAVE READ A LOT OF STORIES ON HERE. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL. I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 17:52
    HOLY FUCK THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. AND I HAVE READ A LOT OF STORIES ON HERE. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL. I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 17:52
    HOLY FUCK THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. AND I HAVE READ A LOT OF STORIES ON HERE. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL. I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 17:53
    HOLY FUCK THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. AND I HAVE READ A LOT OF STORIES ON HERE. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL. I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 17:54
    I'm begging you PLEASE write a sequel. That was the best story I ever read. 10/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 18:18
    AMAZING STORY WRITE A SEQUEL NOW!!!!!!! WRITE 10 IF YOU CAN

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 18:18
    AMAZING STORY WRITE A SEQUEL NOW!!!!!!! WRITE 10 IF YOU CAN

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 18:53
    You must write a sequel. I need to hear more, I absolutely love this story. Great story line and great writing style. MORE PLEASE!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2010 18:54
    You must write a sequel. I need to hear more, I absolutely love this story. Great story line and great writing style. MORE PLEASE!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2011 00:39
    Definitely write a sequel. That story was fucking hot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2011 00:39
    Definitely write a sequel. That story was fucking hot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2011 04:06
    This story was well written but I have one problem with it. Your characters are the biggest Mary Sues ever. I'm not sure why you made them so perfect. It detracts from your narrative and it's kind of annoying. Other than that I think it's great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2011 07:32
    The characters arn't really believable but good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2011 09:32
    fucking awesome man best story ever write more

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2011 21:48
    Best fucking story i've read on here.
    You're talented.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2011 06:05
    Your story was amazing I appreciate the great diction. I do think you should make the character more realistic no one is perfect. You should make a sequel.

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  • fallensoul5442
    03.01.2011 22:15
    ummm prep meets prep then they fuck like shit, wow you need to work on it maybe add some after math or a part 2 it does need to be a little more realistic 8/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2011 02:38
    Great piece of writing.Keep it up man

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2011 02:38
    Great piece of writing.Keep it up man

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2011 23:22
    I'm usually a hard cridict to please even some of the stories that are voted 100% couldn't do it for me... But this... This is a great piece of writing. Hope you continue to do what you did in this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2011 23:22
    I'm usually a hard cridict to please even some of the stories that are voted 100% couldn't do it for me... But this... This is a great piece of writing. Hope you continue to do what you did in this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2011 11:36
    Did anyone else cum on 'now'?

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.01.2011 02:27
    Make a sequel. Please

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2011 14:34
    Good, almost ruined it with the sex. :>)

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2011 01:59
    Ad some romance in the fuckin

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2011 22:27
    This was awsome and it was realistic and i like how it played out

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2011 22:28
    This was awsome and it was realistic and i like how it played out

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2011 02:07
    Fuck ya right another one thats just my opinion though and anyone who doesnt is gay

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2011 02:43
    Hey when you gonna right another one unless your already making another one wich would be awsome the story fuckin rocked

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2011 02:45
    Sorry wright im tired

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2011 16:53
    Great story u should make more

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2011 03:50
    No pointers it was great just write a sequal

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2011 00:48
    that was great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2011 05:37
    wow!!!!! pls write more

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2011 22:36
    It made me come in 5 minsk

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2011 20:25
    oh my god that made me sooo... wet i need that cock in me NOW! x

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2011 06:11
    more stories? yes please, more! :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2011 22:11
    omg i need that guys fucking cock in my pussy now!! →()

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.03.2011 21:58
    Agh uh uhum uh. I want him NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2011 10:03
    Wow That Was Great, I Just Shot A Huge Load, Really Really Good For A First ! :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2011 15:15
    that was amazing man keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2011 17:49
    hahahah 8 inches long but 2 around haha thats like a sharpie thickness

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.04.2011 15:29
    FUCK U BITCH WRITE BETTER U FUCKIN COCKSLUT

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2011 18:08
    Awesome I absolutely loved it...it made my pussy so wet just thinking of jordans thick hot rod....please write more

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2011 23:08
    I loved it. Few mistakes but, it was perfect.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2011 17:28
    That was great keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.04.2011 21:43
    Fuck u retard bitch faggot

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.04.2011 21:44
    How big ur dick no homo

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.05.2011 04:25
    gr8t story
    to anyone with negative comments: unless your blind why would you not read the note at the beginning; this is his FIRST story. He even put a note saying it probably wouldn't be good (but its exellent anyway)

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.06.2011 00:13
    it was pretty good but kinda unbelievable

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.07.2011 22:03
    heaps good story - loved it :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 04:11
    very solid, could use a bit more detail during the sex scene but other than that it was awesome, part 2!

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.09.2011 07:20
    hey 2011-04-30 21:43:56, what the fuck are u talking about!? YOURE the retard bitch faggot PLUS a dickhead shit fucker douchebag with a big fat excuse for a faggot dick! why dont you shut the fucking shit up and go eat a piece of shit!!!!!!!! by the wat who the hell are you talking to!?

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.09.2011 07:23
    hey 2011-04-30 21:43:56, what the fuck are u talking about!? YOURE the retard bitch faggot PLUS a dickhead shit fucker douchebag with a big fat excuse for a faggot dick! why dont you shut the fucking shit up and go eat a piece of shit!!!!!!!! by the wat who the hell are you talking to!?

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.09.2011 07:23
    hey 2011-04-30 21:43:56, what the fuck are u talking about!? YOURE the retard bitch faggot PLUS a dickhead shit fucker douchebag with a big fat excuse for a faggot dick! why dont you shut the fucking shit up and go eat a piece of shit!!!!!!!! by the wat who the hell are you talking to!?

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 04:36
    Two inches around isnt very thick. Its kinda a needle dick. Unless you meant two inches thick. Needed more detail in the sex but definitely a good story. Strangely enough you could build a story around it to make it a short novel.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 04:43
    In which case the amount of sexual detail would be adequate and needs more of a back story. This could be about the 3rd or 4th chapter of a story about a secret relationship later on judged by peers. A bit cleche, but you could use the same title. I would enjoy reading it. If its good enough maybe publishing it. Keep posting sequels.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.10.2011 11:23
    make more stories just like that

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 10:43
    that was fuckingly awesome, write some more stories like this

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.05.2012 07:02
    Please write more stories that made me hot!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.05.2012 02:14
    Cmon man write some more

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.05.2012 02:15
    Yeah dude tht made me cum

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2012 00:44
    This made me cum like 36 ways........ Basedgod #TYBG

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2012 00:44
    This made me cum like 36 ways........ Basedgod #TYBG

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2012 00:46
    Whoop whoop swag all you bitches cant fuck with based god.... he fucked your bitch hahahahhahaha fucking bitches

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.06.2013 18:02
    EWW this is bad storie i am only 7 why can you write this eww omg

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.07.2013 05:50
    That was actually a really good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.02.2014 01:40
    Your descriptions of wealth and the "rich" are laughable. As for his family owning 70% of Cadillac- it is disturbing that you do not know why that's impossible. I'm not looking for financial engineering, but basic realism would be nice.
    If a girl met you in a prom dress for tutoring who wouldnt laugh at her- maybe to yourself of she was hot, but you would still laugh at her.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.03.2014 03:00
    Ladies 18 hung stud for u

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    19.06.2014 04:54
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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.04.2016 19:29
    I enjoyed it good story continue it

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    05.04.2016 19:30
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