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Sweet Revenge

Author: Amaranthus

Date: 18 May 2004

Incest, Fiction, Non-consensual sex, Teen

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Tommy's my name and I believe I'm a typical, sexually frustrated fifteen year old. I live at home with my parents and older sister, Jennifer. I get along fine with my parents but, until very recently, not so well with Jennifer. She's three years older than I and a freshman at a two year college close to our home. She has plans to go away to an out of state university next year which suits me just fine.

Jennifer walks with a very superior 'older sister' attitude and rarely speaks to me. When she does it's in tones that are harsh or demeaning.

She has many friends, male and female, which infers that she is a pleasant, friendly, outward going person. Her stunning breasts, beautifully tanned Baywatch babe figure, long, silken blonde hair, all demand and receive attention.

I don't know when we adopted a 'bad vibes' attitude to one another.

She recently found my hidden hoard of Playboy magazines, showing them to my shocked parents who yelled sexually repressive things at me. They grounded me for a whole week.

Once more the power she had, to 'tell on me', was used to great effect and again it got me into trouble. I don't know which she enjoys most, knowing she has this power or using it at every opportunity.

My parents finally went out by the swimming pool. She walked past the kitchen on her way to her room, sniggering. "What's wrong, Tommy? Can't jerk off anymore? Are you the only male virgin in High School? Got any hot dates this weekend?"

Her bitter sarcasm cut deep and she knew it. She knew I'd been unsuccessful all year trying to get a date with a girl. Any girl. For some reason I always told my sister what was going on in my life. I couldn't understand why I did this. I knew I would never receive a sympathetic ear, yet I continued to tell her my innermost secrets. Strange.

Giggling, she walked upstairs as I sat at the kitchen table, more and more depressed at my situation.

I thought I had average good looks. I stood about five feet seven inches and weighed one hundred and forty five pounds. My build wasn't impressive, it was average. I'd begun to work out in our garage, with a range of dad's weights, in a vain attempt to attract the girls. The one thing I knew I had in my favour was my personality. I was great. Except when I was around girls, then I just couldn't speak more than a few words to them. I grew more depressed.

"Mister Average meet Mister Shy," I said, out loud to myself.

My day dreaming was interrupted by two of Jennifer's girlfriends ringing the front doorbell. I let them in, telling them where she was and they hurried upstairs to see her. My cock stiffened as I watched them ascend the stairs. Their scent and lithe figures in short mini skirts always made me horny. My cock ached for something besides my right hand.

Jennifer came down with her friends and went out the back door, all three of them giggling incessantly. I guessed Jennifer had told them about the 'Playboy episode.' They got into Jennifer's car and sped away to one of her sorority parties.

Yes, I thought, Jennifer had it all, a nice car, a great social life and a good job.

She worked at a men's clothing store at the mall, earning wages plus commission. With her great looks and high self esteem, she easily sold clothes to most middle aged men who walked into the store. She also enjoyed the company of her rich boyfriend, Dan, who was twenty two and who also treated me like a little boy.

"It's not fair," I thought to myself.

I drifted outside trying to shake off my blues and think of something else. Passing Dad's car I saw his camcorder lying on the back seat. I opened the car door and took it out. It was one of those new small, lightweight variety that can be held in just one hand. I had used it a couple of times before to film Jennifer and her friends laying out to get a tan, beside the pool.

I got on my bike and rode around filming my nieghbourhood.

I came to Jennifer's college, passing close to her sorority house. Curious as to what she may be up to, I got off my bike and hid behind the tall hedge that surrounded the house on three sides. Loud rock music came from the back entrance and I made my way silently towards it. A group of a dozen or so teenage girls were outside the back door drinking beer, laughing and joking. I recognised my sister as one of the girls.

Jennifer held a beer in her hand.

"Roll film," I thought to myself. Now I could exact some revenge for what she had done to me. When I showed this tape to my parents they'd yell at her for hours about the evils of teenage alcohol. They might even take away her car keys.

I zoomed in for an even closer angle as she tilted her head back, turned up the beer bottle and drank thirstily. I continued to film for about ten minutes when she turned, left the group and walked over towards her car with another full can of beer in her hand.

The car leapt into life. She cranked up the music volume from the CD player and took off by herself, shaking her golden tresses in time to the beat.

"Drinking AND driving," I thought to myself, filming until she disappeared from sight.

I jumped on my bike taking a short cut home. I couldn't wait to show this to my parents and get Jennifer, 'The Queen' into some serious trouble.

As I rounded the dry lake, near home, I heard the music then I heard the car and saw Jennifer, speeding towards me. I quickly hid behind some shrubery and filmed. She was flying. This was a residential suburb and she was doing between at least fifty miles an hour.

I raised the camera and filmed.

"Man, is she gonna be in big trouble."

Then I heard another noise, a small child ran out into the street chasing a puppy dog. I watched in horror as my half drunk sister slammed on her brakes just a little too late, screeching to a stop. She missed the puppy but hit the child a glancing blow that threw him away from the car.

She, immediately realised what she'd done, panicked and sped away, turning a corner she was gone. It all occured in seconds. Meanwhile the small boy on the ground was crying and holding his leg. Then a man yelled out and ran over to where the child lay and knelt over him. I recognized him as Mr Henderson, a lawyer who lived across from the dry lake. That's when I realised the boy was Jason Henderson, his son. A wailing siren in the distance indicated the arrival of an ambulance that soon took Jason to hospital. I quickly went home, unseen by anyone with the whole graphic episode on film.

I went straight to my room and lay on my bed. The afternoons incredible events rushing around in my head. I tried to put everything into perspective. My sister had committed a felony. A hit and run, whilst under the influence of alcohol and I had the evidence on video tape. I had the power to send her to prison for a long time. It would serve her right, I thought. I played the tape, made some copies, then went to bed.

******

The next day, news of the hit and run was all over town. It seemed no one had seen the accident except Jason, who was in the hospital with a broken leg and severe bruising. All he could remember was a black car. That was all. He couldn't describe the car or the driver. The police were investigating but it didn't look good unless some new evidence came to light.

Once I got home from school, I knew Jennifer had washed and waxed her car, it was spotless. There wasn't a mark on the front rubber bumper that had hit Jason.

"So, she's covered up the evidence," I thought,"Well, little does she know."

I went to my room, knowing Jennifer was alone in her bedroom.

"Jennifer could you please come here a moment," I called out.

She came in looking depressed and asked what I wanted. I shut the door behind her, turned on the VCR and played the tape. Immediately after the car accident Jennifer jumped up and switched off the VCR, demanding to know where I had got the tape. I explained the whole story and also how I had made several other copies, secretly hidden away. I told her she could have that tape. Silently, she sat on the edge of my bed, grim faced. My face beamed - revenge can be so sweet.

"I'm about to go to the mall, will you please clean my room and since you're such a smart college girl, do my homework for me as well," I said handing her my homework list and pointing to the textbooks on the desk.

"Oh, by the way," I said, "can you loan me twenty five dollars?"

Dazed, she delved into her jeans pocket, eventually pulling out some notes and handed me a twenty and a ten.

"That'll do," I said, ecstatically and left.

I was half way down the stairs when I heard her shout after me.

"If you think I'm gonna be your damn maid the rest of my life and give you my money all the time, think again, buddy."

I just laughed and walked out of the house, got on my bike and whistled all the way to the mall. Life wasn't so bad after all.

I walked around the mall, occassionally giggling uncontrollably at my achievements.

I knew she'd be searching everywhere for the other tapes but she'd never find them. All were very well hidden.

I noticed Sally Benson walking nearby. Feeling very confident I walked up to her and we started chatting. She's a nice girl in my school grade and whether it was due to my new found power over my sister that gave me added confidence, I don't know but she responded well to my presence. So, I asked her to go with me to see a movie. To my delight she agreed and we walked hand in hand through the mall to the movie theater.

Halfway through the movie she snuggled in closer to me. I had my left arm around her shoulders and allowed my hand to loosely, drop down onto her left breast. I cupped her well rounded breast. It felt wonderfully warm under the light cotten blouse she wore. I gently caressed its shape as her nipple sprang to life. My finger and thumb delicately tweaked her aroused nipple. Her bra felt tight and lacey against her flesh. My heart thumped loudly in my chest, then she twisted in her seat and her left hand slapped my face, stinging my ego more than the pain from her slap. She got up and without a word left the theater, leaving me to think about what might have been. I could not leave without showing my huge erection that managed to stay with me for some considerable time.

'Damn, damn, damn,' I thought, watching the movie to its conclusion and in the dark I went straight home. After the usual evening pleasantries with my parents I went upstairs to bed. I opened the door to my room expecting the usual mess.

It was immaculate.

Everywhere was neat and tidy. My homework textbooks were on the desk in a neat pile, all completed. This was great. I tip toed to Jennifer's room to say my thanks. I entered her room and shut the door.

Moonlight lit up the room; her room that always remained in a constant state of neatness and order, like a mirror to her life. She lay on her bed, sound asleep. I stared at her for a while. Asleep, she was beautiful. Perfect. Her breasts, so full, round but firm. I'd always noticed her breasts. I always notice any girls breasts but hers were always outstanding. I sat on the bed next to her and put my hand on her arm that lay on the top sheet. Her smooth skin, so soft, so cool in the evening air. Her light, delicate blonde, down tickled my fingers.

I gingerly eased back the top sheet, feeling a warm rush go through me, my cock stirred. I circled her breast with my index finger. A lump entered my throat as I became aroused at what I was doing. Leaning forward I kissed her once on the cheek, then full on the lips. I let my tongue run over her soft, full lips. As I enjoyed the sweet, saltiness of her lips, she stirred. Her dark blue eyes, flew open.

"Tommy, what the hell are you doing in here?" She hissed, sitting bolt upright.

I told her I just wanted to thank her for cleaning the room and doing my homework. For some unknown reason I related the events that evening with Sally at the movie theater. She laughed at my misfortune.

"Shut-up," I said, angrily, "all I wanted was to feel her breasts."

I gazed longingly at the swell of her breasts in the moonlight.

"Tommy, go to bed," she said, her voice quivering. Mesmerised, frustrated, I kept staring at those glorious, heaving mounds covered only by a thin, silk nightgown. With a mind of its own my hand suddenly reached forward to touch one, she caught my hand. A sneer washed over my face.

"Remember... Jennifer," I said, forcefully. Two words spoken by me, yet, heard from a great distance, as though someone else had spoken them.

In the moonlight I heard a frustrated sigh, she released her grip. I tentatively placed one hand on her left breast, caressing its silken structure. First my palm, then the back of my hand moved across and underneath the warm, sensual, unresisting orb. Oh, the warm ecstasy of those breasts. I climbed onto the bed and straddled her legs. She sat back, resting up against the pillows. She gasped as I tore her nightgown, ripping it, pulling it away from her lightly tanned flesh. Panic tightened her chest, uplifting her charms.

At last, before me lay the two most lucious, juicy, firm tits anyone could lust after. They looked as good or better than any portrayed in 'Playboy.' I tore my gaze from their beauty and looked at her. Her pleading eyes, begging me to stop, were tinged with fear and anxiety.

If I had wanted too I could not stopped.

I massaged and rubbed her breasts for a very long time. My mouth sucking, my tongue worrying her deliciously long, hard nipples. My fingers and teeth flexed them to full rigidity. Her areola ridged, splayed wide, then fashioned like a spiders web, clung around her wet nipples. Her breath rasped in her throat.

"Stop. Tommy. Stop it, now. Please... Oh god... Yes... Tommy. Noooo..." She moaned incessantly.

My hard cock was throbbing.

Reaching over I picked up an open jar of hand lotion from her night stand.

Gruffly I said, "Get naked sis." She appeared to hesitate, slightly, then surprisingly she did as I instructed.

Did I detect a glint in her eyes. Her torn night shift slid to the floor, her white, delicate, cotton thong followed. She was naked.

She sat, arms by her sides with her back to the cold headboard. Waiting. Wondering. The rise and fall of her bare chest accentuating her apprehension.

Standing, I rapidly pulled off my t-shirt, shorts and briefs and poured some of the cool lotion into my hand. I replaced the bottle, then rubbed my hands together. I moved onto the bed, straddling her legs, my fingers once more began massaging her aroused, ultra sensitive nipples. Shutting her eyes she arched her head back and moaned low in her throat.

I continued to caress those aching nipples for what seemed an eternity then my hands moved down onto her flat stomach, down to circle her hairless pussy lips. I dipped my fingers once more into the cool lotion. With one finger I began gently caressing her outer labia moving across them, slowly, inexorably towards her clitoris. It bloomed from beneath its silken hood. I touched it. She gasped. Arching her tense back and hips up to meet my touch. I moved my finger down her lips and suddenly thrust two fingers into her pink hole.

"Aghhh! Tommy, nooo, Tommy, nooo," she murmured halfheartedly, reaching out to hold my slippery wrist.

"Shut up," I whispered, harshly, "or the whole town will know the truth."

She relaxed her hold on my wrist.

My fingers came out hot and wet, extremely wet. I realised I didn't need the hand lotion anymore.

I thrust them back inside her hot, wet pussy. She writhed again as my slick thumb brushed her clit. Her eyes clenched tightly shut as she continued to writhe and moan deep in her throat.

It was then it struck me. My power over her had changed. This was a different power, a sexual power. All it had taken to reach out and wield this new power was a kind of... passion? Perhaps it was love. A buried love that had surfaced at last? Or was it lust?

I tried a different approach. I lay on my tummy with my face pressed against her pussy and thrust my long, rigid tongue into her wet pussy while massaging her clit with my sticky fingers, wet from her juices. Her body bucked upward and open mouthed she moaned, loudly.

"Shhh, sis, you'll wake the neighbours," I said, stopping what I was doing, my mouth and tongue tinged with her sweet, young nectar.

God, she tasted wonderful.

"Don't stop, Tommy please don't stop now... I'm on the edge," she rasped.

I buried my face in her crotch, licking frenzedly at her engorged nub, plunging two fingers up inside her slick cunt, in and out, in and out furiously building a steady rhythm.

"Agh... Agh... Agh... Aghhhhhh," she squealed in delight," yes... yes... yes, I'm coming... oh, God, I'm coming."

She writhed on my face. Her warm juices payment for my control I had over her young body. I was in seventh heaven. I realised I was the one who had given her an orgasm. Me. Inexperienced me. But no more. I had at last become experienced, it boosted my ego and gave me the confidence to continue.

Once her orgasm subsided I gave her no respite but told her to kneel on the floor facing the bed. I sat on the edge facing her. My throbbing cock, inches from her face.

"Suck it sis. Make a good job of it. If you don't do a good job you'll be sorry, now suck it hard," I commanded.

She didn't need any second bidding but took all of my swollen cock into her hot, tight, wet mouth furiously bobbing her head up and down. Her breasts erotically slapping against my legs. Reaching down I grazed the palm of my hand on the hard bullets that were her nipples. My cock felt the vibration of her throat as she moaned long and deep.

She worked my hard cock with her tongue, cupping her hand around my swollen lubricated shaft she jacked it then pushed it back into the embrace of her warm mouth, grasping the base of my cock with one hand ever spiralling up towards her mouth. With her other hand she gently fondled my balls. Oh, it felt electrifyingly good. She was good. Too good. I felt myself about to explode I stopped her and told her to get back on the bed.

She lay with her long legs open, waiting for me. I got on top of her, my cock nudging against her pussy lips. She smiled warmly, reaching down she parted her slick pussy lips and pushed her young body upwards to meet my downward thrust. She was giving herself to me, willingly, knowing the consequences but allowing my body to become part of her. I loved her for that and rode her slowly, tantalizing her flesh. To my surprise she arched up her breasts for me to suck greedily, nibbling endearingly on her long teats. Whilst one breast was in my mouth she caressed, tweaked and twisted the other nipple.

She rose up to meet my thrusts as my urgency sped towards a huge climax.

"Fuck me, Tommy, Fuck me hard, Tommy. Harder. Harder... Yessss," she whispered into the moonlight.

I came in one big rush that spurted deep within her, it went on and on, until I lay, exhausted, beside her lightly sheened body. I looked into her eyes and saw a different girl. She held me close as we drifted into a deep, contented sleep, both realising that we now, truly, belonged to each other.

It was how mom found us the following morning.


Continued???


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    READER 500
    18.05.2004 18:39
    that was great.... please continue! :)

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    READER 500
    19.05.2004 01:44
    please continue if the rest of this is as good as the first part is then i know it will be an awesome story 10/10

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    READER 500
    19.05.2004 03:14
    Great bit of writing. I do like the lack of descriptiveness with the apt bit of curiousity left to the mind. The content was wonderful too.. Please continue it
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    READER 500
    19.05.2004 12:26
    Yes, certainly continue!!!

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    READER 500
    19.05.2004 17:10
    Great!!!!! Please continue

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    READER 500
    19.05.2004 17:27
    I need part two

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    READER 500
    19.05.2004 22:01
    excellent story but need part 2
    i give it 9/10

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    READER 500
    20.05.2004 00:11
    I hope there is more to cum...

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    READER 500
    23.05.2004 01:09
    I'd love to be on the receiving end. Nice story. Thanks.

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    READER 500
    23.05.2004 03:45
    holy shit that was good 10/10

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    READER 500
    23.05.2004 11:03
    I hope the second part will not fail to come soon !

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    READER 500
    23.05.2004 14:40
    reminds me of taboo the porn flick

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    READER 500
    24.05.2004 01:02
    wow that was a great story i really like it i could picture it all in my head

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    READER 500
    24.05.2004 01:56
    very delicious...in a delicious way

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    READER 500
    24.05.2004 10:59
    part 2 soon please

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    READER 500
    25.05.2004 06:05
    o.o

    Why did you stop writing?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.05.2004 03:50
    Great writing the curiousity left wanting more.I need part 2.

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    READER 500
    27.05.2004 07:40
    Fucking Great. Please write another part..... Wish my sister would do that

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    READER 500
    27.05.2004 12:12
    a good story, i remember my sister as a very young
    girl, seen the first time a poussy and suddendly my
    errection just like that.......

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    READER 500
    27.05.2004 17:19
    That was awesome it was relly graphic and sensual. Write the next part soon, dont leave us in suspense.

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    READER 500
    30.05.2004 15:00
    Me too hope 4 second part including how Mom takes their explanation and whether she then decides to take Tommy --
    and daddy could take Jennifer?

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    READER 500
    30.05.2004 15:56
    the made my pussy so wet plz write the next one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.05.2004 03:28
    Very, VERY well written! I would love to see a second story.

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    READER 500
    01.06.2004 01:11
    way too good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.06.2004 18:47
    disgusting but hot
    it made me so hooot I had my brother lick my pussy

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    READER 500
    02.06.2004 22:15
    kinda fucked up but the writing wasnt bad and let me guess the girl had it all on tape am i right?

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    READER 500
    04.06.2004 16:44
    ANY HOT PUSSIES OUT THERE WOULD LIKE TO BE SUCKED LIKE THIS GIVE ME A NOTE..

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    READER 500
    07.06.2004 01:40
    niiice

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    READER 500
    07.06.2004 14:28
    i think it was a great story. continuation...?
    :)

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    READER 500
    07.06.2004 18:46
    Man great story i read it with my girlfriend and i had the bust fuck with her

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    READER 500
    08.06.2004 11:05
    damn good 1! plz continue your story... i would like to know what happens next =)

    cool style and good explanation xD

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    READER 500
    08.06.2004 20:39
    OMG continue!!! this story is the fucking best, and as for the ending the same thing happened between me and my sis when i was 14 and she was 15, only it was my brother who found us the next morning, but still continue please!!!!!

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    READER 500
    09.06.2004 09:24
    this sory made me riverdance into wanktown usa. i really enjoy incest! breasts are my favourite though! i think ewan house will agree with the grenadier

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    READER 500
    09.06.2004 11:29
    good story continue ASAP!!!

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    READER 500
    09.06.2004 13:14
    Nice story, incest rocks......continue asap

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    READER 500
    09.06.2004 17:17
    great man its a great story.interesting

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    READER 500
    10.06.2004 01:06
    I think this is a very great story ,and the use of words is great,what makes the reader visualise it in aright way like the writer needed,also the writer was succesful in exciting the readers to the continuation of the story ,as well as hitting all of the hot spots in the acting of sex,and also the story dealt with a very delicate frodian issu wich is the sexual attraction betwen a brother and a sister,but i think that most of us inspite of how horny or lusting for sex we could be wont resolve to the same ending ,be i think your a very talented writer and i will wait for the continuing of the storie.and i hope if the writer sees this i to replay on on my e-mail .

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    READER 500
    10.06.2004 03:06
    bloody good story thank youcan we have some more please?

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    READER 500
    10.06.2004 12:50
    Great story with a deep story line. Hurry with part two

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    READER 500
    12.06.2004 19:04
    ok Tommy! from a man with the same name remember this (tommy*means twin) ... but real quick... dude you did your sister!

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    READER 500
    12.06.2004 22:37
    the beginning is to slow, hurry up and get to the important part and then spend more time discribing that

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    READER 500
    13.06.2004 18:21
    That story was epic... im still hard off that shit

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    READER 500
    13.06.2004 22:26
    Holy hell, that was beyond Epic. That story is a legend itself! It was just the right descriptions, not too much and just enough to care about. I loved it! Don't hurry yourself with the second if it's not going to live up to our expectations. Take your time because these rock!

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    READER 500
    14.06.2004 20:39
    Madrock2 is very strange!

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    READER 500
    15.06.2004 05:42
    I agree with outcast..

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    READER 500
    16.06.2004 04:54
    THIS STORY WAS GOOD. I HOPE YOU CAN HURRY UP WITH THE SECOUND PART OF IT.AND MAKE IT MORE INTERRESTING. AND ALSO DONT TAKE TO LONG IN THE BEGINNING LIKE YOU DID IN THIS ONE BECAUSE THAT WAS LIKE SO BORING WATING TO GET TO THE GOOD PARTS IN THIS STORY. YOU HAD A FREAT CHOICE OF WORDS YOUR STORY COMPLETELY ROCKED IT WAS EXCITING . I REALLY LIKED IT AND REALLY I HOPE YOU HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT PART TO IT.

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    READER 500
    16.06.2004 15:32
    The I liked this out of the other stories is because it had a storyline. Most stories get straight to the sex, that's why they suck. The point of the story to make it a good one is always a story line and I don't care if i have to wait for the good parts.

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    READER 500
    17.06.2004 05:17
    OMG! if you don't keep going with that there will be blood! that is the sexiest iincest thing i've ever read. I don't care if it's the same ppl, don't go into anal, (not my thing) Do one where the older sis takes andvantage of the younger brother. That's always hot!

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    READER 500
    28.06.2004 23:31
    I agree that this is one of the few stories that has some meat and plot to it. Keep up the good work and make the stories a little more interesting instead of jumping right into the sex part of it. We need more blackmail stories in particular

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.07.2004 23:45
    that was pretty good when do we get the next part

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.07.2004 06:33
    Continued??? what do you men?
    If it is to be Continued dont wait too long till the test fed away

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.07.2004 01:01
    when will this be contrinued? By the way it was gd.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.09.2004 21:44
    my younger sister really loved this story and jerked me off twice while reading it with me.

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    READER 500
    10.09.2004 00:23
    TO Skater-Bum & Outcast, sexual stories are not there just to read and cum while reading, I consider it to be an art writing just like romance stories and novels any sex story should have a plot and elements of excitement, and a sexual stories must have a point and discuses an issue. From all of the writers on the site that ive read there stories Amaranthus the only one that offers that and more to the reader, that’s why when I wrote my opinion I was very touched by Amaranthus style. So there’s nothing strange and looking to the other comments I see that most of the readers agree..... And for all of the readers that are waiting for a sequel I don’t think there will be one...
    and did you know that sex stories where originally writen to litiurate people in the sexual life ?

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    READER 500
    26.09.2004 18:30
    FUCKING PERV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    30.09.2004 19:44
    continue it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.10.2004 02:32
    That was an excellent story, your grammar, punctuation, and spelling helped create the sense of becoming one with the story. As much as I yearn for Part Two, might I suggest a hiatus from the pornographic reality, in which that time, you can create something many shall read, and being light to the world, and fortune to your pockets.

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    READER 500
    13.10.2004 02:39
    Apologies for a mistake in my earlier post. For in which I meant to say. Your literary genius can bring a light, a refreshing burst of new breath, into a slowly staleing realm of sentence and verse.

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    READER 500
    15.10.2004 21:48
    this is my 7th time i read the story , its just great your the best writer on the site, hope the writer would add info about him self and his mail.and
    thanks

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.02.2005 10:51
    Great story. Well written and good choice of words. 10/10.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.02.2005 21:32
    GOOD JOB!!!!! CONTINUE

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.02.2005 04:12
    9/10 me all wet

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.02.2005 22:21
    great story i really hope u make more but next time might i suggest a story not about incest i find that kind of wrong but not enough so that i can hate the way u write.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.02.2005 19:14
    very good i loved it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.02.2005 19:20
    Bravo.... I just have 1 thing to say 2 u, continue on with this beautiful, heart-warming story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.02.2005 01:53
    dats da 2nd time ive read it..its still gr888

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.02.2005 19:15
    Fantasic story, keep it cummming..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.02.2005 18:23
    I fucked my sister once. God she was screaming and coming all over the place. Good thing my parents were'nt home then.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.02.2005 16:28
    I once fucked my sister also, she came onto me though. Best night of my life.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.02.2005 23:41
    i am all wet 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.02.2005 00:30
    Holy shit that was amasing compleat perfection I can't diserbe it ECT holy shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.02.2005 15:23
    very nice write more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2005 02:33
    good story, but you need more detail in the actual sex scene.. but beside that it was superb.. 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2005 21:19
    leave out the accident,not even good fiction

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2005 22:28
    indy is a moron i loved it encore encore

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.03.2005 09:55
    Hmmmmmmmm! Guess I better stop teasing my little brother lol.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.03.2005 18:30
    bloody well written. sex scene needs to be longer and more detailed, but otherwise excellent 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.03.2005 23:26
    that was good... i rate 10.. write the part2.. i want to fuck my sister..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.03.2005 18:42
    9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.03.2005 22:56
    amazing!!!!!!!!! that was asome please write part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 21:04
    9/10 describe the character's more...I wanted to know the color of her nipples and aereolos..how her pussy looked..EVERYTHING!

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    READER 500
    17.03.2005 16:49
    good story. indy is right though- the accident is a little messed up. make a sequel

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 19:19
    make a part 2 did u get caught???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 05:43
    Wonderful story.I would rate it as 9.5/10

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 21:57
    write sequel.. 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2005 21:55
    busted...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.04.2005 10:51
    nice cliff hanger! really enhanced the story with a twist at the end.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2005 23:14
    that was very gud dude... my only complaint was the length of the story compared to the length of the intro... too much setting not enough (insert cheezy porn sex music here)

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    READER 500
    20.04.2005 00:26
    continue

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.04.2005 18:58
    part 2 pls

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.04.2005 08:46
    Very good, Nice twist at the end....mom needs to b eat some ass and keep watch whilst they sneak off and fuck in the tool shed or something =D

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.04.2005 21:09
    man i think it was awesome right on make a part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.04.2005 02:45
    nice..part2..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.04.2005 23:19
    nicee

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.05.2005 07:57
    Good family story keep writting in tis line

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    READER 500
    05.05.2005 03:18
    Awesome, can't wait for part two...can i ask just one thing though? Please...please...please don't include the mother in the next one. too many ppl on this site are doing the mom thing...it's old and very very over used. that's all i ask...don't include mom. thx

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    READER 500
    10.05.2005 01:03
    goof job...you get a cookie now

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.05.2005 07:57
    very good! slow down some on the sex but keep up the good work! Don't include Mom

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.05.2005 21:12
    Great Job PLease continue thew story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.05.2005 18:38
    Nice, very well written and easy to follow. I look forward to part two.

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    READER 500
    01.06.2005 13:20
    Pretty good! Definately awaiting part two

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.06.2005 16:44
    Hope mon likes to suck cock and fuck young cock too,

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.07.2005 00:34
    awesome job.. now where is part 2??

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.07.2005 21:26
    I just love this story. I've read it three times. I'm looking forward to Part 2 !!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    28.07.2005 21:48
    Yes, and another thing I forgot to say : please please dont include Mom, as some have suggested. The parents are, as you wrote, the sexually repressive force here, arent they ? ;-)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.07.2005 23:14
    darn good and yeah plz dont put anything about the mom

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.08.2005 22:31
    you should include mom, she must be hot if her daughter is

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.08.2005 04:21
    am I the only one here that thought that it was completely crap???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.08.2005 03:08
    Great job man, long intro, short action, but other than that good goin. 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.10.2005 17:29
    this sucked bals

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.12.2005 01:48
    Duderino, the answer is yes!!

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 16:03
    Great story. Wish more women would read them so that we can get a woman's point of view on the stories. I enjoy stories that can possibly be true--This is one of the best.

    Gave it a 9/10.

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    READER 500
    14.12.2005 02:20
    Hay Dude...........FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.02.2006 01:26
    Great story. No complaints here.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.02.2006 23:22
    i thoughtr it was ok

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.04.2006 19:10
    Personally I'd have done the bitch in.

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    READER 500
    09.05.2006 12:34
    absolutely loved it :D keep it up!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.10.2006 13:43
    Great story 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.05.2007 17:49
    great wat to make thar bitch pay.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.06.2007 11:10
    sick little pervert.....great story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.07.2007 13:35
    awsome we are all pervs

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.09.2007 23:12
    awesomely hot.... keep it cumming

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.10.2007 19:40
    I loved this story.
    Os it true?
    Isthere a part 2?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.12.2007 14:38
    you are just a bunch of pervs like me

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2008 06:58
    You guys are sick pathetict perverts

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2009 07:19
    please continue this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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