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Lovers

Author: Bisexual19

Date: 1 June 2004

Erotica, Poem, Lesbian

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As you slowly undress me,
my pulse rate quickens until it's hard for me to breathe.
First I feel your lips, then your soft caress.
next you're sucking strong, on a round taut breast.
as your journey continues south
i'm biting my tongue and trying not to shout.
By now i'm moist...
nope negative, not moist but wet.
I feel your tongue going up and down my thighs.
You look up at me and i tell you its time.
for you to take me there, even if you don't get yours
please let me get mine.
Without hesitation your tongue and my southern lips intertwine.
You wrap your tongue around that little bud I call my clit.
swift little licks and a series of well orchestrated sucks
i'm arching my pelvis and literally fucking your face
your tongue has entered my tunnel, and its sliding in and out of me
i'm basically on the brink, lost, totally engulfed by passion.
I explode, you stick your tongue deeper trying to get all my cum and suck it out of me.
As the last wave of my orgasm subsides, you great me with a passionate kiss.
I lick all my jism off your glistening face.
I roll you onto your back, and pinch your nipples.
Your smiling deeply because you know what comes next.
I repeat the trail of kisses down your body, as I approach your triangle,
I'm at the junction that makes you a woman, I relish being with you on more time.
Giving you one last look, my head is buried deep within your pussy.
You moan and I prceed to take you where you just recently took me.........


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    READER 500
    08.06.2004 23:47
    Line 1-7 starts well but then line 8 needs work. The variable line lengths and especially the lengthening of lines kills the beat. Tempo is vital for a poem of this nature. You need to build up to the climax. There is nothing wrong with short lines.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.09.2004 09:59
    The feeling are there and the basic idea and I agree with Jack Sprat. When I first started reading it I thought it was a poem.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.12.2004 19:20
    Write a STORY using this poem. That would be better

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2008 04:09
    damn that was HAWT

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.01.2009 09:58
    In poetry nothing is right or wrong. It is an expression of someone.

    This goes for al poems, not just this one.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.03.2009 06:09
    are ya hot ?

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