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  1. Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 1 – 6th Year Begins
  2. Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 2 - Cho's Jealousy
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 2 - Cho's Jealousy

Author: lad91

Date: 13 April 2011

Blowjob, Fantasy, Consensual Sex, Cum Swallowing

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This story does not reflect the attitudes or characters in the Harry Potter series, or have any affiliation with the author.

Chapter 2

A fortnight had passed since Harry and Hermione’s session and Harry had thought of nothing else since. With the pressure of losing his virginity lifted, Harry felt a lot more confident around the girls and a lot happier then he’d ever been. Both Harry and Hermione were desperate for an opportunity for round 2 to happen but with the immense work-load that was piled on the 6th years, both were too busy to hook up again. Harry’s cock was aching for some more action and little did he know he was soon to get his wish.

Little did Harry and Hermione know, but the common room was not empty that day of their sex session. Sat in the corner in the shadows, too shocked to move or speak, sat little Dennis Creevey, too mesmerised by watching his hero Harry fuck the brains out of the gorgeous Hermione. Rumours slowly spread through the school of their love-making until finally they reached the ears of a certain Cho Chang.

‘Apparently Harry Potter shagged Hermione Granger in the Gryffindor Common Room a few weeks back,’ said Padma Patil casually in the Ravenclaw toilets one morning, whilst doing her make-up in the mirror.
‘What!?’ quizzed a stunned Cho, who was stood besides her also doing her make-up for the day.
‘Yea, well it’s just a rumour,’ continued Padma, ‘lucky Hermione I say. I’d do anything to get Harry in the sack.’ A few of the other girls in the vicinity murmured in agreement.
‘You’ve kissed him haven’t you Cho?’ questioned one of the other Ravenclaw girls.
‘Yea I have, it was nothing really, just a quick kiss,’ commented Cho.
‘Lucky bitch!’ Padma said with a giggle.
Cho just smiled weakly then continued with her own make-up. Since last year now that He Who Must Not Be Named was confirmed to have returned, Harry had become somewhat of an idol, especially to the girls of Hogwarts. Every girl dreamed of fucking Harry, and Cho mightily regretted choosing Cedric over Harry only 18 months ago. She felt a burning sense of jealousy towards Hermione build up inside her.
‘What does Hermione have what I haven’t’ Cho thought to herself. She stared at herself in the mirror. She had beautifully tanned skin and a round face, with large, beautiful brown eyes. Her hair was jet black and contained a few curls, which flowed down her back and across her face. She possessed a toned, athlete’s body from all them years of Quidditch and had lovely, C sized tits with tiny pert nipples. Cho’s main asset though was her ass. It was large, pert and moon shaped and looked perfectly juicy. Every guy in school would do double takes at her ass as she walked past them around the school which filled Cho with a sexual confidence.
‘Harry Potter,’ she thought to herself, ‘get ready for a fucking of a lifetime.’
*
It was lunch time and Harry, Ron and Hermione made their way towards the Great Hall. They sat down and Harry and Ron immediately pulled the nearest platters of food towards them and started wolfing it down.

‘Pftt...boys,’ muttered Hermione.
‘Sowee ‘Ermione,’ spluttered Harry between mouthfuls. He swallowed, ‘but I have to eat fast, I’ve got to go and see Professor Flitwick about the Charms homework he set, all the way on the 6th floor!’ Harry groaned.
Cho, sat just a few chairs along on the Ravenclaw table next to the Gryffindor table heard this. ‘This is my chance,’ thought Cho and she finished eating and left the table, hurrying up the marble staircase towards the 6th floor.
‘Right,’ said Harry standing up, ‘I’m off, see you in next class.’ Ron barely acknowledged Harry’s farewell, too focused as ever on his food. ‘See ya Harry,’ Hermione said with a cheeky wink. Harry smiled then went off to see Flitwick.

The 6th floor corridor was deserted when Harry arrived. It always was usually, especially since everyone was having lunch. Suddenly, Cho Chang turned around the corner on the opposite of the corridor and began walking towards Harry.
‘Hi Harry!’ Cho said cheerily as they both slowly approached each other.
‘Hey Cho,’ Harry said confidently. Harry and Cho briefly had a thing for each other a few years back but nothing came of it. As she approached him, Harry couldn’t help notice how hot Cho was looking. She was wearing tight, light blue joggers, which hugged her amazing ass and her hair was glistening. She was also wearing a small sports bra, which showed off her toned, naked stomach and accentuated her full, pert breasts. She looked like she had just finished Quidditch practice but what would she be doing up here on the 6th floor thought Harry.
Cho’s eyes locked onto Harry’s with a quiet determination. Harry was looking really hot. He had grown a few inches since last year and now stood at around 5 foot 10. His body had also filled out slightly and thought still slim, had defiantly toned up. Along with his messy, jet black hair and soft lips, Cho was looking forward in anticipation to what she was about to do. Just as they passed each other, Cho grabbed Harry quickly by the arm and pushed him into the girl’s toilet that was opposite them.
‘Cho!’ Harry exclaimed, ‘what’s happeni...’ but Cho pushed him further in, until they were both in the far toilet cubicle. Cho locked the door behind them.
She turned around; Harry was sat back on the toilet seat looking confusingly at her.

‘Harry,’ she said softly and seductively, putting her finger to his lips, ‘don’t say anything, I’ve heard you and Hermione have been rather naughty together,’ Cho said with a wink.
Harry’s eyes widened in shock, how could she know?
‘Ssshhh,’ whispered Cho who judging by Harry’s reaction figured it to be true, ‘it’s ok, I won’t tell anyone. But why should the famous, handsome Harry Potter be only limited to one woman? Harry, I want you to fuck me, I want you to fuck me silly like you did Hermione.’

Harry’s breathing started to become strained; he felt his cock rising underneath his robes. Cho turned around slowly so her back was towards Harry and slowly lowered herself down, so she could see Harry’s face between her legs. Slowly, she started lowering her joggers, to Harry’s astonishment, she was wearing no knickers. Harry could not believe his luck. 5 minutes ago, he was sat eating lunch, moaning about a stupid meeting with Flitwick. Now he had the gorgeous Cho Chang’s fine ass only 10 inches from his face. Harry stood up, and walked over to Cho, her firm, round ass wiggling invitingly at him. He placed a hand on it, admiring it’s pertness with his fingertips. He quickly gave it 3 hard slaps which left a faint red mark on her gorgeous, tanned cheeks. Cho moaned with each slap. Harry’s hand lowered, so now he was feeling her tight cunt. He slipped one finger in and was surprised to find Cho was already sopping wet. Cho moaned even louder as he began to slip his finger in and out with a steady rhythm. Harry removed his finger and licked it clean, savouring the sweet taste of her pussy juice.

Cho turned to face Harry and gave him a long, passionate kiss, feeling the residue of her juices still on his soft lips. Cho could feel Harry’s hot rod poking out at her from under his robes.
‘Mmmmm,’ Cho purred, ‘want me to help cool that down with my mouth,’ she said teasingly as she removed her sports bra, releasing her tits which bounced three times before settling.

‘O God yes,’ panted Harry, as he took her left breast in his mouth and suckled on her tiny nipple. As Harry continued fondling and sucking her breasts, Cho removed Harry’s robes, revealing just his tight boxers and a small, plain white t-shirt. She removed his t-shirt, revealing Harry’s small but powerful body as Cho began to stroke up and down between his bare chest. Cho lowered herself to the ground, showering Harry’s body with small kisses until finally her face was directly in line with his boxers. Cho could see the outline of Harry’s 7 inch cock through the thin cloth and felt excitement creeping up inside her. She suddenly bit lightly at his cock through his boxers, which encouraged a low moan from Harry.

Slowly, she removed his boxers, until his cock sprung free in front of Cho. Cho was amazed. It looked so big and juicy, she quickly licked the pre-cum off the tip, then grabbed Harry’s bum with both hands as she lowered her head onto his cock. The feeling of Cho’s small, wet mouth on his cock felt amazing along with her hands which were placed firmly on his bum, pulling his hips further towards her. Cho kept sucking for a good 10 minutes, alternating between long, slow sucks and then short, faster ones focusing on his head. Harry could feel his climax looming so pulled out of Cho’s mouth with a small pop before he cummed, wanting to tap some of Cho’s fine ass.

‘Bend over,’ Harry demanded of Cho. Cho obliged as she bent over, so Harry’s hard cock was directly in line with her juicy pussy. Harry took hold of Cho’s firm ass with one hand and with the other, guided his shaft straight into Cho’s pussy.
‘Uhhhhhhh,’ moaned both Cho and Harry as his cock went into Cho. Cho was tighter then Hermione due to her only ever having sex a few times with Cedric which was so long ago. Her pussy was so warm and wet, and it constricted around Harry’s cock, which sent him wild.
‘I’m gonna pound you good Cho,’ grunted Harry and with that, he took her firm ass with both hands and rode her pussy faster and faster.
‘Urghhh....urghhhh......URGhhhhh,’ Harry panted as the combination of Cho’s saliva and pussy juices around his cock helped him ram her pussy harder and harder. He slapped her ass hard, and then grabbed her tits roughly as he continued to fuck her. Cho was in heaven. Harry’s cock was at least 2 inches bigger then Cedric’s ever was, and even though this was only ever his 2nd time, he was riding her like a pro. His cock felt so good in her pussy and his hands on her bare ass felt so good as they continued to slap and feel it.

Harry took hold of Cho around the waist and guided her, to the toilet. He lowered the seat so she could sit on it and then spread her legs, and continued with her relentless pounding. Her breasts bounced up and down so Harry grabbed them, feeling the soft mounds between his fingers. He then lowered his hand to her pussy and began rubbing her clit, to which Cho moaned loudly.

‘ahhh...AHHH....Harry, I’m cumming,’ shrieked Cho, as she felt an unstoppable warm, electric tingling spread through her body.
‘Me too Cho,’ panted Harry, he could feel Cho’s pussy tighten even more around his cock as she began to climax.
‘O MY GOD.....UHHhhhhhh,’ panted Cho, her now sweaty body seized up in Harry’s hands as her pussy juices gushed all over Harry’s rod.
This sent Harry over the edge and he pulled out, wanting to cum all over Cho’s face. Cho quickly lowered herself to Harry cock as he continued to pump his shaft with his hand. She flitted her tongue all over the head in encouragement, and massaged his balls. She felt them tighten in her hand as suddenly, his pearly white juices started to spray out of his cock.

‘URGHHHH.........URGHHHHHHHH...........UUHhhhhh.........uhhhhh......mmmm,’ Harry grunted, as 6, thick strands of cum flew out of his cock, coating Cho’s face with his seed. Cho smiled and quickly scooped the cum off her face, gathered it in her hand and then guzzled it down greedily.
‘Ohh Cho,’ Harry said, whilst they both quickly re-dressed, ‘that was incredible, even better then Hermione was.’
Cho smiled widely, honoured that she was the one who gave the famous Harry Potter the time of his life.
‘Thanks Harry, you weren’t bad yourself,’ she giggled. With that she gave his bum a quick slap and went to leave the toilets, ‘anytime you like,’ she said as the door swung and she left.

‘Wow,’ Harry thought, as he left the toilets and continued onto Flitwick’s office with a spring in his step. ‘Could this year get any better,’ Harry thought with glee.....


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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2011 13:27
    Good Really good but get one of the girls like luna pregnant would add a twist.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2011 13:27
    Good Really good but get one of the girls like luna pregnant would add a twist.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2011 15:49
    Can tell you've definitely been reading Avatrek's stories, you use alot of the same phrases he does. Not bad though.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2011 17:42
    This is stupid. Hermione isn't with Harry, she is with Ron. Watch the fucking movies or read the fucking books.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2011 20:56
    to the person who wrote"This is stupid. Hermione isn't with Harry, she is with Ron. Watch the fucking movies or read the fucking books." read the top, asshole. it clearly says "
    This story does not reflect the attitudes or characters in the Harry Potter series, or have any affiliation with the author."

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2011 21:01
    to the person who wrote"This is stupid. Hermione isn't with Harry, she is with Ron. Watch the fucking movies or read the fucking books." read the top, asshole. it clearly says "
    This story does not reflect the attitudes or characters in the Harry Potter series, or have any affiliation with the author."

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2011 08:13
    Quite good putting in a threesome would make it better

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2011 09:36
    yep! just like avatrek's

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2011 09:54
    nice but.....in the lake???come on

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2011 10:40
    Fucking Amazing!! I hope he rapes Hermione next time :P

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  • demck23
    14.04.2011 14:03
    All I say it if you can't say anything nice don't say anything at all if you don't put your name to it. As for me & realy enjoyed it & want to read more . would love to see harry doing a group of ladies who wanted to be banged bye him with him knocking them all up. it should inclued both cho & hermy . allways said that Harry should have got her not Ron . Thats what alot of my daughters friend felt about it. I took her & 12 of her friends to the last movie part 1. they all have read the books allway though. they all didn't like how she did it to setting up Ron with Hermy.
    Just hope you keep it going

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2011 14:17
    Why did he cum in the lake?

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  • demck23
    14.04.2011 14:24
    This one I liked that it was Ron to get Luna but wished he had cream pied her deeply. the next for him should be lavener Brown who he was shonging in the books. have him rapeing her too. then having him be found out with him marrying them both as he's a pure blood & so is Luna but not Lav. but having him with them both

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2011 16:24
    u r Gr8 Man! I love yo storries keep em cumming :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2011 16:25
    u r Gr8 Man! I love yo storries keep em cumming :D

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  • lad91
    14.04.2011 16:52
    thank for the kind feeback guys :)
    im still pretty new to the story writing so still finding my voice if you know what i mean
    and thanks for the suggestions, definately taking your ideas on board and maybe will take them further into the series :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 00:19
    Oh great. Another Ron hater.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 01:29
    Umm, grate storie! i am blind, so i takes me a lot toto imajin ron fucking luna. keep on riting, because if you don't, i will beet you to deth with my cane!
    :P
    about ron cumming in the lake, maby the squid wanted to tast it? lol. or the mermades? or better yet the grindolos? lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 01:32
    wow i thought i was the only blind person on this sight! do you use jaws for windows?

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 01:33
    no, i use sistem access.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 01:36
    ok, by because this comenting thisn is not to talk about blind skreen readers. well, plee with him/her to keep on riting this storie because i live on harry potter fan fiction! lol not realy.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 01:37
    wow your spelling is bad! My name is torry, by the way.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 01:39
    what the fuck? you are that girl that i... you know last week at that rops corse thing in that maze?

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 01:41
    what the fucking? your the one that did giggiddi thing all the time? wow text me! you got my number! text me, so we can stop this conversation on this coment bord! by, love you!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 01:42
    love you to. i willl texxt you. byy hav a grte mornig

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 18:42
    awesome!! keep up the dirty work!! lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2011 22:09
    Why write Harry Potter fan fiction if it is going to be so out of character. Wouldn't it be better to try and write some original fan fiction?

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  • demck23
    16.04.2011 09:50
    Great work can't wait until the next part keep it going.to those who don't like it just don't say anything. I like this Harry better then how he was in the books. Dave

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2011 13:50
    Class! Waiting for next installment! Hurry!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2011 15:42
    I always thought Harry was adorable:) now I get horny because of him<3

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2011 20:15
    Brilliant, keep writing first comment :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2011 21:07
    Please do a Ron and Hermione scene. Hopefully maybe Harry doesn't have sex with Hermione again, that is if you write it that way. It's just really weird to read Harry having sex with Hermione, but it's your story. Maybe only Ron and Hermione only, maybe a three some with Luna or Lavendar. Other than that, awesome story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2011 04:34
    This is a great story... i dont know why people keep on about FanFiction on this site, if you want proper fanfiction go to a fanfiction site, this is sex stories and Rowling never showed that side of it in the series so it obviously all going to be out of character... Keep up the dirty work and dont let people put you down :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2011 08:10
    that would be a four some dumbass

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2011 08:16
    I think you should avoid the whole Ron Hermione thing. Just my opinion. Maybe let them get close but Harry keeps interrupting.

    And remember from one of your earlier stories Harry and Hermione need to spend more time together.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2011 08:22
    Dont do a hermoine ron mate.. its too cliche..

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2011 14:43
    Don't listen to those guys about doing a Ron and Hermione scene. The way you are portraying Ron in sex, I would definitely like seeing Ron dominating Hermione in every way that Harry wouldn't do. Make him fuck her hard in every hole: mouth, pussy, and anal. Ron is definitely the dominating type. He can make Hermione his slave. That would be awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2011 16:01
    keep going with harry interrupting ron and hermione, and let hermione have sex only with harry... but make ron get ginny instead...

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  • lad91
    17.04.2011 16:07
    thanks for all the suggestion guys :)
    i'm just starting to get new ideas of where to take this series. got some thoughts for stories which hopefully you'll all enjoy, as well as some major plot twists and turns

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2011 16:18
    I agree with that guy about Ron making Hermione as his slave.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2011 18:15
    I don't think a Ron and Hermione story is too cliche. As for that person talking about Hermione as a slave for Ron, that actually sounds very interesting. Every Harry Potter story I see here, it's always Harry and Hermione. Maybe, if you wanted, you should change that and have it with Ron/Hermione. Just an idea...

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2011 20:22
    That was really hot! I can't wait for you to do a Ron and Hermione scene. This site does way too many Harry/Hermione scenes. It's time for a change.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.04.2011 00:27
    hay! its one of the blind people. well, keep riting!!!!!!! if you don't, i will avaddacadabrra you!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.04.2011 07:47
    Please no more Harry and Hermione. Please more Hermione and Ron. Maybe have Ron tie Hermione up and have his way with her any way as he pleases. Just an thought... I agree with that person about how there is too many Harry/Hermione stories on this site. There are way too many and it's becoming really cliche'd.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.04.2011 09:15
    great story!
    i think it's good that Ron didn't cum in the lake;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.04.2011 20:57
    hey suggestion? Do malfoy next k? God. Have to admit you have used every character (kinda) except for the blond hotty.

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  • lad91
    19.04.2011 15:04
    Hey guys, this should be titled Chapter 4 part 3 of 3, not chapter 5. sorry for the confusion. hope you enjoy the story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.04.2011 17:39
    It was really good, but I can tell that you may do a Draco/Hermione scene. I gotta tell you, other than Harry, that is probably the most cliche'd pairing in all of Harry Potter fanfiction. Harry with Hermione or Draco with Hermione is really getting old on this site. But a Draco and Ginny scene actually sounds really interesting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2011 00:12
    It's avada kedavra dip shit if your going to say it say it right

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2011 02:50
    Don't let Ron fuck hermionie please!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2011 11:57
    very good enjoyed it just wish that he had got saw doing it to her. think he should be doing Susan Bones next as her aunt is head of the ministry law dept. to get back at her for his dad. would have love to see ron fucking her too after drako had left

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2011 15:50
    I liked the other ones better. Could you include more anal? And, please, use the minor charcters, so it stays original.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2011 16:31
    noce.... go ahead with draco ginny. but no draco hermione... keep it just harry hermione.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2011 17:43
    Nah, no Harry and Hermione or Draco and Hermione. Maybe have Draco fuck Susan Bones, Luna or Ginny. I wonder what it would be like if you had Ron make Hermione his slave.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2011 01:36
    the blind person: Just as you don't make hermione a slave ... you are cool! Let panzy fuck Harry! i think that should be interesting!

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2011 01:43
    You skipped chapter 4 part 3 lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2011 21:26
    We need Luna Lovegood. And some anal.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2011 04:48
    good one.. and some more group sex with harry fucking hermione and cho,

    while ron and draco fucking ginny

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2011 05:40
    Whatever you do just don't write as anyone else fucking hermione(any boy/male except harry).. threesome with other girl will be fun tho :) keep writing :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2011 05:59
    These are amazing. Maybe get someone pregnant?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2011 06:28
    Maybe you should have Ron fuck Hermione and some other girls at the same time. I know Hermione had sex with Harry, but I really think you should do a Ron/Hermione scene because I know that they are more wilder than Harry's.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2011 07:17
    boi .. u can do a ron harry and hermoine threesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2011 12:17
    I think that you should have Luna finding out shes PG & that Ron is the Dad. then have him do a three some with luna & two others girls at the same time harrys doing a train with al the girls he's done so far & that he knocks them all up. this would make for great intress. but have Draco bang afew of the other girls getting cot at the same time as RON & Harry.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2011 14:58
    Ron Harry ginny and experimenting...
    Great stuff so far :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2011 19:18
    ya should bring some new twist in ur writing.same approach evrytime's boring.try 2 takeit to extreme or difrent othr typ of sex..

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2011 04:27
    ...... Harry got Hermoine pregnant..... Id love to see Rons reaction

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2011 02:57
    draco should die for hurting pansy

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2011 06:00
    Ron/Hermione please!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2011 21:23
    I know it's your story, but Draco/Hermione or Harry/Hermione is really old and gets boring. Do a Ron and Hermione and I saw some comments, that guy that had the idea to make Hermione Ron's slave actually sounds great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2011 21:46
    You should do something with voldemort.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.04.2011 01:26
    If u do a actual search, there are atleast 15 times as many hermione ron stories than hermione harry... hermione harry sounds better to me, and less boring.,.. making hermione, harry's slave is a good idea i had say... and set ron up with ginny

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.04.2011 11:24
    This story takes the prize as the WORST. Sorry. Print it out and mail it to us so we can wipe our ass with it. No amount of re-working will help. Give it up. Pitiful. At least I'll sign my comment. So, if you want some help, PM me and let's talk about it. Wantsomefun

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.04.2011 18:05
    There are more Ron and Hermione stories than Harry/Hermione? Really? On this site, I've only seen like 2 Ron/Hermione stories and the rest are like Harry/Hermione and Draco/Hermione.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.04.2011 07:23
    I have only seen 1 Ron and Hermione story on this site and there are many Harry/Hermione and Draco/Hermione stories. Those two are getting really boring and unnecessary. I want more Ron/Hermione scenes instead.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.04.2011 23:30
    Please do a Ron/Hermione scene soon. Don't do a Draco and Hermione or a Harry and Hermione scene. Those two are pointless shippings nowadays.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.05.2011 00:27
    If not on this site, in general fanfics, even i agree with that guy down there that there are far too many ron hermiones than harry hermiones. Go harry hermione.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2011 04:53
    write your stories faster man... can wait for the next

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2011 21:26
    Very nice. I really liked it. I also see that you are going in the right direction with Hermione. I really do want to see Ron own Hermione. That would be just fucking awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2011 21:41
    You need to either correct your French or take it out. As someone who speaks French it was very distracting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2011 22:45
    was it supposed to be french or english with an accent?

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2011 22:49
    Good read you just need to continue it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2011 22:49
    Good read you just need to continue it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.05.2011 13:32
    good story just need to make it longer

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  • demck23
    05.05.2011 14:03
    Don't want to see Ron with hermy at all think that fucked up the whole harry potter books. That what my brothers daughter said & her friend all felt the same way. I say make Ron a bi guy but have him keel Lav as his lady. would love to see harry breed hermy & Fleurs sister

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.05.2011 17:20
    pretty good, keep it going

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.05.2011 21:25
    Dude, Ron with Hermione didn't fuck up the book. That made the book better because instead of doing what most books always do, pairing the girl with the hero. That gets boring, so the books had her go for the side-kick instead and that made the book a lot better. Have Hermione struggle to have sex with Ron, but she eventually gets to see what Ron is like in bed, a very rough Ron.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.05.2011 09:50
    Harry makes hermione his slave, and then lends her to ron on regular basis.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.05.2011 09:50
    make molly weasly fuck bill and charlie or ron

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.05.2011 17:18
    Guy at 2011-05-06 9:50:15, having Harry make Hermione his slave makes no sense. Harry is a brooder and he is definitely going to be boring as the Slavemaster. Ron is more with a temper and that makes him more rougher than Harry. He is def. more passionate, so having Ron make Hermione his slave would be more interesting because Ron would be rough on Hermione. That is exactly what should happen.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2011 01:45
    the blind person: you need to update mor oftin. oh, yah make Harry fuck Flers sister!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2011 00:29
    Yes I agree with the slave part to

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2011 17:29
    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2011 17:26
    Sorry, but you just lost a fan. I was really hoping you wouldn't do the same thing everyone else does by pairing Draco/Slytherins with Hermione. I know you didn't pair her with Harry either but I can tell you will soon anyways. Harry and Draco are the 2 most ships for Hermione anywhere. Ron is one of the least one even though it was in the book. I didn't even finish the second half of this story, I only read half-way and I couldn't read anymore. Well, good luck on the rest of your story, I'm just not going to read it anymore.

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  • lad91
    12.05.2011 17:42
    well im afraid you couldnt be further from the truth with how you believe this series will develop, and i believe that you will miss out on a great story from now on. thanks for the comment but I cant sit here and take criticism for things I havent done and wont do

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  • Yourmathteacher
    12.05.2011 21:01
    I've read every piece of this series so far. There's definitely been an improvement from Chapter 1 to now, and I genuinely enjoy the series. My one complaint is the abundance of rape in the stories: I'm just not a huge fan of it. But, I figure, whatever floats your boat. You're the writer, not me, and as I said, I do enjoy your work.

    That being said, I'd like to see Luna Lovegood make another appearance in the series. I've always been attracted to her character, and would like to see her have a more willing encounter with one of the main characters in the story. Hell, it might be good for a lesbian scene, or a scene with Harry. Just a thought, I look forward to seeing more of your material.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.05.2011 11:02
    the story was good but just didn't like that it wa hermy & ginny getting done by the Draco gang.
    Would have loved to see Ron getting used by dracos gang with luna or Cho too. but keep the story going want to read more of it dave

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.05.2011 15:46
    very good story enjoyed it . keep it going like that Harrys getting her wouls add susan to the mix with luna & harry. make Ron have it very bad & make him suffer over what he did. turn Darco an make him become a friend to harry some way good twist dave

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.05.2011 17:44
    very very gud.little short.but thts ok.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.05.2011 19:34
    I really hope you do a Ron/Hermione

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.05.2011 23:49
    the story was good keep the siries going

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.05.2011 12:25
    thee below comment isnt from wantsomefun. If it was he would have signed in. He just wants people to dislike wantsomefun im guessing

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.05.2011 12:33
    more harry and hermione please

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.05.2011 12:36
    I would love these:

    more ginny and harry
    a malfoy and ginny
    Luna and Harry

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  • demck23
    18.05.2011 12:59
    Just make him suffer for it & don't do a Ron & Hermy. maybe do a Ron & Patsy as Draco dosn't want her. but do more of Harry & Luna with afew others that you haven't used. Would love to see Harry doing all of the black sisters and getting them PG by Harry. would make a very good story line in that Draco would want more revenge because of it Dave

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.05.2011 16:15
    parvati cant be in ravenclaw dorm.....she's a griffindor..... :-) jst kiddin.....nice story....liked it.... :-)

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2011 07:11
    you are just going RANDOM with pairings

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2011 07:46
    I'll half agree the the other comment, but its more that your story is just running off in more directions then it can handle, choose your story line and stick to it, otherwise good fic, well written, loving the cock sucking

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  • demck23
    23.05.2011 09:47
    very good story keep it going. But lets make Ron suffer for what he did to Luna . Like what you did with Draco & Cho . Just keep it going & lets try getting Harry & Draco talking to each other . W ould make a very good twist in the story if they became very good friends. as Hermy hated Draco in the storylines. Dave

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2011 16:58
    I agree with the others for the story line Nice story keep up

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2011 16:59
    I agree with the others for the story line Nice story keep up

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2011 23:39
    Great story keep going!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2011 16:10
    it is nice stories.

    i agree with the others; try to give story a twist!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2011 23:28
    Look if you don't like they story then don't read if dumbass
    And then dont be a dick and go posting so shity comment about how bad it is without any constructive criticism at all

    Ps. Love the story keep it up
    Try including a teacher or maybe parents

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  • lad91
    29.05.2011 07:15
    thankyou to whoever left the below comment :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.05.2011 18:05
    love these, keep writing but dont get too crazy ith the matches.

    On a personal opinion, I like these matches:
    Harry + Ginny
    Harry + Cho
    Harry + hermione
    Ron+ hermione
    Harry + Luna
    Ron + ginny (i know)

    not much of a malfoy fan though this one was good

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2011 14:12
    Now, the direction you are making Ron go in, I actually do like it now. For the first time ever, I actually do want you to do a scene between Hermione and Ron. I don't know why, but now I want that. Death Eater Ron raping Hermione Granger. Hmm...

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2011 17:54
    want more very soon!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2011 23:20
    these story are great keep making more cant wait for the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2011 01:43
    Two things 1-the kids can only go in their own dorm. Its the rules. 2-how come everytime they suck or fvck it always goes 4'?. Otherwise great story man

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2011 07:10
    why didnt you make harry fuck hermione too!!!

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  • demck23
    31.05.2011 14:28
    this was very good but Harry should have done hermy & put a baby in them both. liked how you made Ron fall but would have liked to see him fall more in that what he did to Luna be found out & that he has to pay big time for that.! Would like to see hary doing more ladys inclueding Susan & Luna & Tonks & both of the black sisters as well as Ginny & hermy having him get boded to all. that would drive Draco & Ron to want vengence more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2011 16:02
    Good story. Didn't deserve the bad ratings it got on here but oh well. The people who are rating you bad just hate on this story because it actually has a plot. Write more soon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2011 17:25
    Ron raping Hermione?! Can't wait for that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2011 19:33
    Hmm...Ron betrays Harry, kidnaps Hermione and Draco kidnaps Ginny. Draco fucks Ginny while Ron fucks Hermione in both holes, pussy and anal.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.06.2011 22:35
    Write more soon. Great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2011 06:10
    i love how you made ron evil and harry a player
    continue with this story it is better than most on the site

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2011 09:48
    great story keep it going like how you made Ron evil & a true to his real feelings. Loved the Part of Harry with Patsy Doing it in the great hall. would love to see Harry doing her lots more Dave

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2011 17:20
    Ron kidnaps Hermione and gives her the rough sex she needs.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.06.2011 17:05
    pretty good story line. :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.06.2011 23:17
    You should make like a stars war theme where ron actually came back alive but in something to keep him alive.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 01:35
    Great stories, nice writing technic, but i think you should countinue to where harry tries to save ginny from voldemort, or someething like that

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 03:52
    Please make more theyre so good my favourite stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 05:29
    awesome stories keep them coming
    its funnny how ron and hermione do it when there is a battle

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 07:40
    plzz..dont stop..plz

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 13:13
    I liked this story. I wonder if you are going to do a sequel or not. For some reason, I really want Harry to look for Ginny and Hermione to be alone and then Ron returns out of no where. Some kind of dark magic and Hermione doesn't care what Ron did and wants him again. I don't know why I want that, but I like the idea of a Death Eater Ron Weasley shacking up with the bookworm, Hermione Granger.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 15:38
    keep it going there 2 chapters left in it one with Harrygoing after Ginny & the last battle with voldermort. but bring Ron back as a deatheater & have him turning hermy to his side.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 16:33
    Have Harry go after Ginny. Also, have Ron return as if he used some kind of magic or whatever to survive. That anonymous comment about Ron as a Death Eater shacking with bookworm, Hermione. I like that idea, even though I would rather have Harry with Hermione. Death Eater Ron and HErmione, maybe the Dark Lord wins and offers rewards. Ron asks to "own" Hermione Granger and gets her? I don't know, just an idea.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 21:43
    Just like the end of star wars III. Write more

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 22:45
    If you do a sequel here, you actually have a chance to do something that has never been done on this site. Ron Weasley as a Death Eater and returning from his so-called Death and getting Hermione to turn over to him, to submit to him.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 22:45
    Ron should come back and he acepts what he's done and try's to fix it wich makes hermy want him again so they hook up and harry finds ginny but its a trap but ron tells him and instead takes voldys curse and dies and out of dispair hermy kills herself then harry kills voldy then him and ginny hook up
    P:S i love your stories you should keep going

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2011 22:50
    in your next series you should have more draco and cho scenes weridly enough they make a good couple
    P.S I LOOOOOVE YOUR STORIES THEY ARE AUSOME

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2011 00:12
    I am a HUGE Harry Potter nerd. And I have to say, you have the characters down. IT's almost as though you've read the books as many timesas I have,... Teehee

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2011 00:18
    One problem. Ron is not supposed to be muscular. Ron is taller and slender,even more so than Harry.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2011 00:27
    Too bad Ron isn't secretly in the closet. I always felt a little bit of ROn's lust for Harry while reading the book. I could totally see ROn raping HArrry.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2011 11:16
    they aren't in adorm. They snuck into the Room of Requirement.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2011 11:16
    they aren't in adorm. They snuck into the Room of Requirement.

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  • lad91
    06.06.2011 15:52
    thanks for the nice comments guys and that you liked my ending. I've decided I will do a sequel, focusing on the Deathly Hallows book, but obviously with twists here and there. |'ll let you all know when I start writing it :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2011 22:27
    wats the order of merlin first class??

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.06.2011 14:16
    That was excellent... i was hooked... I just practically skipped the sexual parts to read on :) Superb

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2011 00:16
    Kudos to you! I hadn't thuoght of that!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2011 00:56
    gee wiz (ard gidit) how many times have you read the series is almost like you've read them as many times as i have and i've reread them at least 9 times and this is my 4th time rereading your series i wanted to make sure you were real about it cuz it was really good because you were real enough to make the charecters realistic enough to make pepole think that they were reading somting miss rowling would have made and anyone who disagrees is wrong because their is this one stupid series thats hp to but it sucks horribly somthing hp and the ring of salizar slythren or somthing like that he has this obbession about pepole eating sh!t but realy i personally think he sould eat his own sh!t because i am obbssed with hp and your hp series its almost like your miss rowling wrighting from a different perspective (her naughty side at that) [giggle giggle hee hee ha ha ha ho shhhh] but yours was spot on now i'm trying to find a good pj series but you sould keep writing your good at it looks

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2011 01:04
    [sorry i did not get to finish my comment here is the rest of it]

    your realy good at it looks like your biult for it

    with lots of encouragement a freind
    (sorry if i misspelled anything or if like half a sen is gone my computer is acting funny plus to add to that fact my keyboard is broken livley )
    ttyl
    chech ya later dude /dazed and confused love that movie

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2011 14:03
    Loved the Ron/Hermione sex.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2011 06:16
    gay, horrible bullshit. completly out of character and a pathetic ending to a sexualy twisted H.P. story. only good parts was the sex. please dont attempt to continue this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2011 09:04
    At least you wrote a Ron-Hermione sex scene. That was good. The rest of the story, not so much.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2011 22:21
    dude the ending made them sound gay

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2011 12:09
    Two comments under me if u are going to be a asshole then get the fuck out of here u fucking dip shit(sorry I get a little mad)

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2011 20:09
    Nothing make sense. Everyone is WAY OOC!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2011 21:59
    To the person below me learn how to spell awesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2011 01:42
    loved the story!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2011 00:22
    Why do people who insist on writing Harry Potter fanfiction refuse to learn the facts first. Ginny has brown eyes. Lily has green eyes. So, Harry essential just fucked his mother according to your description. Also, Demelza Robins would only have been 13 or 14 during HBP so it is very unlikely she'd have D's as her breast size.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 01:46
    Ha! I loved the ending! Just priceless. Wish I coulda see their faces =]

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2011 18:08
    can't wait for the next chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2011 18:54
    brillian =P cnt wait for thdm next one...

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2011 22:34
    a bit short but gppd.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2011 03:49
    Hell yeah, I've been waiting and hoping for this and you sure delivered!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2011 10:13
    Not what I was expecting from an author of your status, but should be fun to read all the same.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2011 12:40
    I hope you don't pair Harry with Hermione again. I enjoyed your scene of Ron and Hermione. It should be that way.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2011 21:52
    i agree with the 6-06 and 7-5 dudes

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 04:45
    Awesome! harry tonks i <3 it! :) also make it harry and lots of characters! make ron bella, and also draco fuck narcissa

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 06:35
    Not Ron!
    Ah well, keep writing!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 07:03
    Incredible story!
    The Ron/Hermionie relationship felt so much like Star Wars, i bet thats where you got your inspiration!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 00:06
    Dont stop here continue the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 18:59
    I agree with that comment about not comparing Hermione with Harry again. I think you can get a really interesting or a really, really good story here if you have a good story with Harry just fucking and trying to save the world.

    As for Ron and Hermione, you can have a really good story here with them. Something like Ron kidnaps Hermione and tortures her by himself, but sexually perhaps and maybe he begins remembering stuff or something. Either way, it's your story and I hope this 2nd part is really good!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.08.2011 22:22
    reddfoxx

    i have been waiting all summer for this it was great you are great the sex world is great [alot more than great but just trying to make a funny point] i love your stories great imagination (just like me) so i congradulate you for your victory dont listen to the haters they despise harry-tonks stuff and they dont like harry-hermione stuff because they read other pepoles
    sh!t they def hadnt read your harmione stuff you are good at it
    with lots of love and fun
    reddfoxx

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2011 10:14
    Some Harry/Tonks "adventures" would be awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2011 18:31
    Really good so far. I would like to see Harry fuck Tonks and etc..., not Hermione. I would like to see Ron fuck a few people, not rape, and eventually meet Hermione again. As for Hermione, a couple solo scenes before meeting Ron again would be great!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2011 22:14
    i love ur storiesss.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2011 23:14
    I need a hardcore man to cum and satisfy my sexual needs. Please call me any time let's have some fun 2056817437

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2011 00:29
    That's awesome, you have brought sex-fanfiction to the next level by having a great plot and story line that can make you sad while still bringing great sex scenes to the table, not just hard-core fucking either, loving sex like the one you just told.

    Keep going, im still really sad about Ron. I can see the Star Wars twist in this - Star Wars and Harry Potter is just a great mix!

    Keep writing!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2011 22:22
    Keep going please. No criticism just keep I up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2011 08:05
    great story keep it going love how you added gaby to it wish thry would have been cot by her mom now mrs weasley

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2011 10:58
    I was sixteen and my sister was thirteen when I found her frenziedly frigging her cunt while watching the porn chanel on the internet. she didn't see me so I didn't interrupt. She went on for ages, alternately licking her fingers and pushing them in her cunt and later rubbing them like a madwoman up and down her slit very roughly. Eventually she stopped and started to cry. I made myself known and she told me she felt empty and although the soreness was nice she didn't think it was enough. It took me over three weeks to get her to masturbate to orgasm but when she eventually came off it was most spectacular and she produced much more juicy slime than I ever do and it tasted much nicer too. We mutually masturbate now and she is lovely. We sometimes fuck with men i bring home and we both like that especially the feeling of someone cumming into us but best of all is fingering each others cunts, licking each other out and tribbing until we are really sore.

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  • THC+PHENOM
    25.08.2011 04:49
    Great stories can't wait to read more

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  • THC+PHENOM
    25.08.2011 05:17
    Keep up the great work

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2011 08:34
    Nice, please hurry with chapter 3!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2011 16:03
    I love all 12 chapters. Maybe the first was the worst, but from then the story becama great! The sex was great and I loved the romance between Ron/Hermione. I hope in the sequel Hermione will find a way to bring him back to her.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 15:38
    Why are you trying to make Ron a bad guy? This story had potentials but I see that it's only a Ron-wannabe DeathEater because I'm jealous of Harry who fucked my Hermione and that way I'm going to kill him- Weasley, Harry- I'm a sexgod who fucks every female he wants- Potter, and Hermione-I' in love with Ron but I fucked Harry because he's irresistable and then I'll fuck Draco because he's a badboy and then I'll fack Snape because I have a daddy fetish, but in the end I still love Ron-Granger.
    Too bad really...

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 23:41
    Nice I enjoyed that. I'm glad you didn't do a Harry and Hermione scene. I know it's your story, but I am actually really glad you didn't. That whole scene was hot, although it was pretty awkward between Ron and Draco. I don't know if you are doing a gay Draco and Ron scene in this story or not, but I kind of hope not.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 00:22
    That was great keep up the great work

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  • hentaipie
    28.08.2011 01:31
    I really enjoyed that - I love the way your descriptions and writing style are similar to the books, but with all the sex! I would like if you did a gay Ron/Draco thing, but only do it once, like they realise gay isn't for them. Can't wait to hear the rest!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 07:02
    Please don't use gay Ron. Draco I don't care, but not Ron. That was good, but I always hated threesomes so...

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  • CelticMichaela
    28.08.2011 10:22
    I happen to think an encounter between Draco and Ron would be kind of hott. If you had already thought about doing a little Draco/Ron scenario, please leave it in. It's your story. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 11:10
    I love reading all kinds of HP sex stories, but not when the sex is forced. Great writing though. Looking forward for more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 11:15
    That was a great ending! I'm so sad for Ron/Hermione. They love each other but they can't be together anymore. I like that this story wasn't only about sex. The only chapter I didn't like was the Luna rape from Ron. That was very wrong.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 14:51
    I saw all the talk about Ron/Draco, but if you are going to go for a gay couple, I think it should be Harry/Draco. Harry has already had sex with Hermione, Cho, Luna, Tonks, Ginny and I don't remember if there was another girl. It seems like he is after sex because he hasn't found someone to love. Maybe this could be Draco. We all know that in the JKR's book there was always an underline sexual tension between Harry/Draco so it could work in this story. Please consider that. I would love to read a Harry/Draco sex scene and maybe some romance between them. It's your story of course. It's just a wishful thinking. I think it fits in your story. What do you think? Harry/Draco and a secondary couple of Hermione/Ron. Maybe adding some weird couples, like Neville/Bellatrix, Ginny/Fleur(That's so hot), etc.

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  • lad91
    28.08.2011 16:03
    To the commenter below, I take your comments on board and will consider the ideas you have put forward. I am flirting with the idea of certain characters (won't say which!) either having a full on sex scene or just to experiment but I'm not sure yet. To me, it would be a big step to put it in to the stories and at the moment, I feel I would only do it if people wanted it. What do other people think?

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  • upmyassgirls
    28.08.2011 18:03
    love the harrypotter stories of u maybe shemale wizards could be fun

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 19:44
    Oh, yes please go for Harry/Draco. I'm a crazy drarry shipper! I read so many stories about them. Please bring them together. Even for one time! Pleaseeeeeeeeee

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2011 01:54
    I'm glad to see a update! Im always on the watch out for more updates from you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2011 13:55
    Happy to see i'm not the only one who thought that Harry should have been with Draco in the books. I know HP are children books and they couldn't write a gay couple, but whenever these two shared a heated moment you could feel the sexual tension between them. And Draco would be much better than Ginny! God, what JKR was thinking?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2011 16:57
    Lad91, do whatever YOU want. If you have a great plot, fine - but please, don't screw it because somebody is calling for a special couple.

    Tonks/Harry would be fine, there are so many possibilities for them :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 11:04
    Agree! Do whatever you want, but I would love to see a lesbian orgy with Hermione,Ginny,Fleur,Luna. and maybe Molly watching them in secret and playing with herself.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 11:11
    Great Harry/Tonks action. Could you do a Harry/Molly too?

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2011 07:25
    You must use some Molly with either Hermione or Harry. Nothing incest please. That would ruin it. Great writing :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2011 15:35
    To the two comments below, just the thought of Molly playing with herself or with the others actually makes me feel sick. Maybe it's because I've read the books and have an idea of her in my head that makes the sex with her sound very unnatural.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2011 20:21
    To the comment bellow: Yeah, but she has 7 kids! Sex is like her second nature!
    The woman playing her in the movies is actually a lot older than what she should. Molly is at her early 40's but the actress is at her 50's.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 17:50
    first dont make any caracthers gay i hope u have sticked with story line for the rest like the fact harry didnt put the felix in rons drink and ron gets with lavender !!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 18:12
    ginny was with dean tht yer so wouldnt have fucked harry and u messed up ron and lavender gettin togher

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 18:23
    it says chapter 4 part 3 dumb fuck and anythink with ginny is vommo

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 18:52
    harry and ron are in the slyerin dorm in book 2 and harrys in the ravinclaw one in book 7 so they can be just against the rules

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  • lad91
    03.09.2011 18:53
    to the below commenter, i quite clearly a comment saying that I got the title wrong and it was a mistake which I quickly rectified. As for your other comments on my other stories, it's called artistic licence dear, if I stuck completly to the story word for word then I may as well of not bothered writing these. If you want to read stories that are 100% to the novels then read the NOVELS.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 19:03
    lookin at each others cocks and sayin not bad ? GAY

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.09.2011 06:03
    u made harry sound so gay and u didnt do enough battle

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.09.2011 01:01
    Wow....... Wasn't expecting that, but well done overall. Loved the first stories, ur doing a great job 10 out of 10. Keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.09.2011 04:13
    Please whatever you do don't write a gay scene that would officially ruin hp for me

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.09.2011 14:09
    'this is all part of the plan right?' lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.09.2011 18:47
    lolfest ending!!! great story, btw

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2011 06:22
    I agree to the comments previously. Harry / Hermione / Molly orgy would be brilliant. Also Harry / Fleur and harry remembers the last time he fucked her with Ron. Also Bellatrix gets frustrated at ill treatment by Voldemort and switches to the good side. Harry / Bellatrix / Nevielle orgy would be good too.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2011 06:23
    And please write much more often. I have been waiting for the next one since long!

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  • lad91
    08.09.2011 13:31
    sorry to the commenter below, it does take me a while to create and write a story, and obviously, i do other things in my life so i write where and when I can.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2011 00:59
    THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING MEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! Hurry up and do the next one already!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.09.2011 15:09
    not bad follows the story line pretty well i wish u had explained and drawn out the sex a little more though

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.09.2011 16:03
    I liked the story, but I did skip Hermione having sex with Dean. i can't stand reading Hermione with anyone else. So, i skipped that part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.09.2011 16:35
    u took ages in writin it its good just be quicker

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.09.2011 19:34
    It was good, but definitely it wasn't your best chapter. Especially Hr/Dean came out of nowhere with no really sex between them. The scene was too short. Also isn't Hermione still heartbroken over Ron's death? I understand to want affection and sex, but her behaviour in the whole scene and after was really ooc for your story's Hermione. She was way too slut, comparing to the girl you've been writing about for the last 16 chapters. Also D size cup breasts are not very flattering for a teenage girl.
    I loved the Harry/Angelina though. Maybe an orgy with the 4 of them would be better, but I liked it that way too. Can't wait for the next chapter xD

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.09.2011 15:22
    No quseiton this is the place to get this info, thanks y'all.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.09.2011 11:15
    Do you know how large D size breast? Are way too big for a young girl.
    I wouldn't mind a foursome.

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  • lad91
    18.09.2011 11:44
    yes I do know how big D sized tits are. I've had the pleasure of sucking the titties of a girl who had D sized breasts. Hermione was born in September so is 18 in this story, so it isnt too hard to believe she would have big tits.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.09.2011 13:57
    loved it hope he got her in the family way but would have liked to see them bonded by magic as husband & wife it would serve them right & have it put in the daily profit & at the wiz bank. lets have the next part very soon. like how it's going

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.09.2011 22:46
    Great story don't be long with the next part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.09.2011 23:24
    This sounds like star wars ep.3 at the duel between obi-wan and anakin
    Just saying

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 15:31
    You should do a narcissa/Ron or get one of the characters pregnant

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 19:58
    I love that Harry got rejected! Hot chapter. Positive vote.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 17:45
    AWESOME STORY!!! :-) :-) :-) ;-) ;-) ;-) I'm a major HP fan and nerd have read all the books but u sir have made them AWESOME in ur own way great job. If u hate HP u hatrers y would u even read this if there is any for I haven't seen all the comments

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 17:45
    Great story. Keep going but make the next one longer.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 21:51
    No more man on man please

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 22:44
    dude that was ASEWOME!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 22:58
    Skipped the gay scene, but that was amazing

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 23:17
    Skipped the Gay scene

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 04:28
    NO MORE GAYNESS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 04:30
    The writing style is very similar to J.K Rowling's, great job! (Exept the gay scene)

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 08:01
    Nice to see that you didn't sacrifice story for readership. The gay scene fit well within the story, but your readership, myself included, do not necessarily enjoy that sort of content.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 08:52
    @ Anonymous reader 2011-09-03 18:12:51 IT'S A EFFING FICTION STORY AND HE CAN MAKE IT HOW HE WANTS NOT UR STORY, HIS SO SHUT THE F*** UP AND I'VE READ THE STORIES BTW GINNY ONLY DATES DEAN TO MAKE HARRY JEALOUS THEN KISSES HIM IN ROR THEY DATE THEN SEE AND RON AND LAVENDER DATE BUT BREAK UP WHEN RINS IN HW AFTER POISON INCIDDENT HERMIONES THERE LAVANDER COMES IN YELLS WHAT'S SHE DOING HERE AND WHY AND HERMIONE SNAPS BACK IM HIS FRIEND THEN LAV AND RON BREAK UP

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  • hentaipie
    26.09.2011 09:17
    I loved it. And I love every part of your story so far! I'm really glad you added the gay bit, but you didn't make it overly gay, which is really good. You are doing really well - keep up the good work!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 15:48
    great story lets have the next part very soon and make it longer. No more fag parts to the story as it is a big turn off.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 15:55
    Please NO FUCKING GAYSHIT!. And let hermione be pure, and harry's... not a violated open-for-all pussy for anybody to fuck!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 22:40
    a positive vote (as usual) and a great story might i add i am never a critic when t comes to one of your stories but i have one question ( sorry but i cant take anymore so going back for more to see what happened will not be an option) what happened to ginny i cant remember >:•( i am fustrated can someone remind me please

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 23:08
    okay just one not bad! i promise it is more of a question but
    Why is it Harry is so OOC he is more of a pimp in theese stories hmm
    but the story was brilliant!!!!

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  • hentaipie
    26.09.2011 23:15
    Oh, by the way, good for you if you skipped the gay scene. Or if you don't want anymore gay scenes. Because some people actually enjoy them. He's done it in a way that you are not missing out on anything if you skip it, and he's still got the straight bit in the beginning, so really there's nothing to whine about.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.09.2011 01:45
    I liked the gay scene. Very hot!

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  • lad91
    27.09.2011 02:21
    Hey to the commenter below. Firstly, thanks for the positive vote, and secondly, Ginny was captured by the Death Eaters on Ron's orders during the battle of Hogwarts at the end of the last series

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  • lad91
    27.09.2011 02:24
    Thanks for commenting everybody. I knew the gay scene wouldn't be everybodies cup of tea but I thought it was neccessary in the story and linked in well with the last chapter especially (Harry getting washed by Hermione was like her washing away his innocence in preparation for this.) Also I felt it was neccessary to show Harry doesnt always get it his own way and isnt just this sort of sex God which he comes across as in other peoples HP stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.09.2011 21:12
    Have no worries dude. I don't lke gay stuff either, but the scene really fits in your story. It was a forced action by someone evil. I think your story is one of the best in the site, and there is nothing wrong to write all kind of sex. Why would people have problem with a gay scene but they don't have with a lesbian scene or a incest scene? It doesn't make sense.
    Really your story is awesome and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 16:30
    Keep it going. End this part and than start your idea with harry as an adult and his children

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 17:20
    WTF harrys the hero it seems soo wrong for him to be raped...

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 17:53
    I caught the doctor who reference

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 18:26
    yeah start the next adventure after this one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 18:42
    Keep going....Start a new one with harry as adult and make draco malfoy as the new villian in place of voldemort...

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 21:38
    I have noticed a constant theme of Ron bashing in your stories. I really wish you would stop doing it because you seem angry that Ron was the one that Hermione was attracted to and loved and not Harry and as a result you try to make Ron look like a horrible person to try and justify why he doesn't deserve to be with Hermione.

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  • lad91
    28.09.2011 22:11
    To the below commenter, where exactly does Ron get 'bashed' in this story? I'm not angry that Hermione didnt get with Harry at all (if you actually read my stories, you'll notice that Harry and Hermione have only got together once, which was in my very first story and Hermione actually rejected Harry a few chapters back.) The way JKR wrote Harry Potter leaves scope for Ron to be a bad character as many times he and Harry fell out and Ron for all his good points does have a sinister side. I decided to make Ron a bad character as I thought it would be interesting to see what it would be like if he was bad as he is such an interesting character. I haven't made him bad because I hate him, quite the opposite, I love Ron's character and love writing his chapters. I made him bad because he is such a great character and thought it would be a twist on the norm. Obviously if you want read stories that are true to the books, you could always try reading.... the REAL BOOKS. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 22:36
    I just don't like the idea of Harry and Hermione being attracted to one another in your stories as it was established many times that Harry and Hermione are not the least bit attracted to one another. I don't expect or even want canon but i do like reading stories where Harry, Ron and Hermione are acting like the characters within the books only with a lot more sex and more outlandish plot lines.

    Even with stories with more sex Harry's main focus of his attraction would be a Cho, Ginny and probably Fleur, Ron's main attraction would be Hermione, Lavender and maybe that bar maid he oogled. Adding sex into a Harry Potter story doesn't suddenly mean Hermione will develop a sexual attraction to Harry or that Ron and Harry will turn into man sluts.

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  • lad91
    28.09.2011 22:43
    Well you say Harry's main attraction should be Cho, Ginny and Fleur. In my stories they have been his main attraction. And you say Ron's main attraction should be Hermione, Lavender and 'that barmain' (madam rosmerta) and yet again, they have been his main attraction. If you don't like my stories, then please don't read and comment on them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 23:00
    I am just trying to give honest feedback as i do think as a writer you are certainly more talented than majority of people on this site.

    As for Harry i think my main issue is that in the books Harry is actually not hugely interested in many girls. He was often being asked out because he is famous but he never took those girls up on those offers, he had a girl wanting to slip him a love potion but while some guys would like the idea of some girl having their way with them Harry's reaction was negative. Harry didn't like his fame and he certainly never used it to get girls instead chosing to stay single and wait for the right girl to come along.

    Ron dated Lavender because he needed to prove to himself that girls find him attractive but Harry never seemed to have the need to date anyone unless he felt that he had genuine feelings for them. He certainly wasn't the type to have sex with a woman just because he could.

    I hope you are not offended by my comments as that is not my inte

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 00:50
    This is one of the most accurate HP fabrics I have ever read, and one of the hottest! Keep going!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 00:57
    Pleaseeeeee have Harry and Hermione end up together

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 02:08
    Please continue with the series I throughly enjoy it! Keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 05:09
    Would love to see you continue the story line

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 05:53
    I loved it! Harry/Ginny is my favourite couple! More than Ron/Hermione if you believe it. There is something really sweet in the way that Harry noticed Ginny only when she stopped paying attention to him. And when they were together you could see the good side of Harry. The fun side of him. I find it really special that Ginny was the only one who took his mind away from Voldemort.
    I want to read as many of you as you can write. So if that means another part of the series then go for it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 10:09
    Please make the other series with Harry's kids! Make Harry and Ginny have incest with them! Haha thanks for this great story man.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 10:14
    To be honest, write both endings. Then both groups will be happy. Also write your story with Harry as adult (and please, add some Tonks/Harry stuff to this plot :D)

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 10:35
    Make a new series about him as an adult while closing out this series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 11:51
    i really liked this and it would be great if harry and ron doublefucked molly and arthur weasley caught them and then started a foursome but this only makes it better
    you can also try creating a weasley tradditional family orgy since there are so many of them. you can also add to that orgy some special guests like remus with a monstrous 15 inch werewolf cock and tonks and fleur(but shes already part of the family)
    you can also add that harry and ron team up to rape bellatrix lestrange and draco's mother with draco and lucius forced to watch... and after that draco would come back for revenge and rape molly and ginny
    you can also add a reward that McGonagall gives harry a blowjob and some pussy fuck for killing voldemort right there in the great hall with could start an orgy with all the hogwarts students and staff joining
    luna could be fucked by her own dad
    also add a lesbian fuck fest with bellatrix narcissa(dracos mom) ginny molly hermione....

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 12:03
    yes definitely a new series i love your fan-fiction definitely go for him as an adult cheers. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 03:22
    i loved every single story of yours and i cant wait for the 4 more to come... you can also add the adult series and one in the past.... how harry was born :) i think that would be a great idea

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 07:24
    Make the third series with him as an adult!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 04:25
    Keep them comming. I have followed these stories for a while, and you are one of, if not the best writers on here.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 04:25
    Keep them comming. I have followed these stories for a while, and you are one of, if not the best writers on here.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 04:37
    I want to know what happens after. Like with lupins son and everyone else

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 07:15
    I really love your stories. Please keep writing them

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 14:16
    Make an extra series please

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 14:18
    Make an extra series please please please
    I love your stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 16:48
    Please, please,PLEASE! GIVE HARRY A REST! If this is all you can think of writing about then maybe you should just give up. What a dreary life you must have fi you cannot invent charcters of your own.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 20:17
    Def story about the kids at hogwarts.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 21:37
    Ignore that comment. That guy's an asshole. Good story! Want more

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 22:01
    More more more, i love you're writng

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 22:22
    Definitelly continue another series but tell us what it will be called in the last part so we can keep an eye out for it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 00:53
    The first commenter, if you don't want to read about this kind of story, then don't read and comment on his story. Keep up the good work lad91

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 01:33
    i think you should continue on after this. i just wonder if hugo and rose will be there also

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 02:47
    Fan fiction isn't about adding your own character, you moron. Ignore that person. This is amazing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 12:26
    CONTINUE. I will hunt you down and kick your ass if you do not.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 13:56
    Loved them all your an epic writer keep continuing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 13:56
    More more more. I want MORE.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 15:44
    awesome story! Keep em' comming!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.10.2011 03:34
    absolutley AMAZING!! im actually begging you write and post the next series PLEASE!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2011 22:25
    Do another series with Rose and Scorpius! :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 00:35
    My ex at 13 had dds soo it's very possible

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 00:35
    A doctorus charm. I take it you're a Whovian.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 02:40
    It's amazing. I find myself compulsively checking if you added a chapter. Keep up the great work!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 06:05
    sex scenes are good but i feel you should have a fleur/harry in there some where.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 06:05
    sex scenes are good but i feel you should have a fleur/harry in there some where.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 09:47
    similarly to below I am always checking for the next update, you do a great job with your story keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 10:27
    I love you, please keep writing!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 13:58
    keep them coming this is a good series

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 14:33
    Harry Ginny is getting borring! too much of it! Try harry + fleur or harry + hermione. or some one else with harry. seriously dude, too much of the same thing is bad.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 18:27
    I can see that you don't really like hermione!that's why her scenes are so small!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 18:49
    Great job keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 22:45
    I think that Ginny and Dean should totally be in it!! And Fluer and Ginny... Like, they see eachother in the shower. Itd be so fucking awesome!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 10:28
    Ignore that comment about pairing Harry with Hermione again. If you did that, that would only break the flow of this story. I mean, Hermione obviously wants Ron again, so having Hermione have sex with someone else would break the flow of the story since this still is going perfectly. You can pair Harry with anyone since he is pretty much a man-whore in this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 16:23
    I'm glad Hermione wants Ron this actually is giving a bit more depth in the romance for this story, it would be great if u could keep them exclusive to each other but if u cant try to make that they at least don't go behind their partners back. :) update soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 22:52
    ron never betrayed harry and hermione and he never joined voldemort and ordered ginny's capture

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2011 09:32
    I loved that! I Keep up the great work!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2011 16:00
    Hermione gives up on Ron, and fucks harry. Just then ron returns.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2011 20:28
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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2011 20:31
    A doctorus charm. I take it you're a Whovian!!!!!!!!!¡!¡!§¡!¡§€/•€= bnnnn n

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.10.2011 14:40
    Love this do more on Draco and pansy please

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.10.2011 20:26
    I love that you're trying to keep the original pairs from the books and only use other pairs as distraction. For example, Harry fucking Angelina or trying to fuck Hermione is not a big deal when he does these things because he feels that he lost Ginny. And Hermione fucking Dean because she missed Ron and thought he was dead was actually very nice. Most writers are writing Harry Potter stories that some of them are hot, but they don't make a lot of sense. Yours has a lot of faith in the books (not the sex, but the feelings) and I like that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 01:28
    Everything in the story flows well, good job with sex scenes, mix it up a little bit. Throw in some other characters, maybe Neville, seamus, Gabrielle, just some suggestions. U really need to do a fleur/Ginny scene. That would be great. U can really use just about anyone. Maybe bring back some other people like Katie bell, angrelina Johnson, Alicia spinnet even. Just please add some new faces

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 15:41
    It's called an undetectable expansion charm you moron

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.10.2011 04:26
    exibitionism with hermione ginny mcgonagall n molly would be awesum

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.10.2011 21:23
    OMG DO DUMBLEDORE AND MCGONNAGLE

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.10.2011 21:51
    Cho is dead
    no way
    yes way
    Harry: WHOOHOO

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.10.2011 22:01
    To the fuckhead below:

    Maybe actually reading the story and finding out about what the fuck a damn plot to a fan fiction is, you'll know that in these stories that DID happen.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.10.2011 22:40
    I agree so well with the guy below me. You should Plz Plz Plz make more stories and um you really should concider a carrier in writing. Um send me a message by posting: @blackheart anyways send me a message on the comments if ya want??? Lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2011 06:31
    First of all Cho can't be Better than Hermione!It's a fact!and also Harry is boring!make other couples!nice story though!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2011 08:01
    Keep the Hermione pairing!Stop with Harry!he's boring!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2011 19:11
    Great story. Don't wait too long with the next one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2011 19:27
    Great story can't wait for the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2011 17:30
    Anybody that likes HP fan fiction not always involving harry I recommend a book caller harry potter and the spellbook of desires Ron gets plenty along with the twins neville and Malfoy :S search the title on google well worth it :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2011 17:40
    Write more about Luna please she's my fab character :D BUT NO MORE RAPE!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2011 18:38
    Keep it going it will be so good please do it

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2011 19:45
    That was AMAZING!!! Please don't take so long to update this time

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2011 16:39
    I agree with the author btw please write more about Luna she is the best but don't make her be raped again please :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2011 20:31
    Guys.. It's his story, Let him write it how he wants. I think its AMAZING. I cant be asked to sign in by the way. Crazed|Desire.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2011 21:31
    Guy who said the mum thing dude wtf ?

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 04:31
    You relaly saved my skin with this information. Thanks!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 15:50
    Going to put this arcilte to good use now.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 06:45
    These topics are so confusing but this hleepd me get the job done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 14:55
    That first part, I thought it would be Star Wars "What of Hermione, is she safe? Is she alright? It appears that in your anger... you killed her NOOOOOO!!!!"

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 19:37
    There's a good opportunity for a lesbian scene wit luna who. Now starting to explore sex and maybe her freind Ginny ? Please write this at some point say waffles if you agree:D

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 19:39
    Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaafles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think that is a great idea please write that

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 19:51
    Lunalunalunalunalunalunalunalunalunaluna

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 17:49
    3 person to read this one amazin story without the sex it was still good u could become a author not sex

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 19:18
    Great story i loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 21:01
    With all these silly websites, such a great page keeps my itenernt hope alive.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 23:45
    Great a series I hope the next one is just as good.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 00:34
    This was bad I don't know what the other people where talking about

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 00:35
    Yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 16:57
    thanks. Just wish the print was larger when printed out. I take alot of stuff printed out from here into the mountains with me so I have something to read if I get snowed in.
    Thanks again like the Harry-hermione.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 17:26
    JUST WISH THE CHAPTERS WERE LONGER.
    HEY LET THE GUY WRITE HIS STORY THE WAY HE WANTS IT TO GO. IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT THEN WRITE YOUR OWN.
    GEORGE IN MONTANA

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 20:12
    That was a GREAT ending! You are my favourite author on this site :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 22:49
    AHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAHHHH-MAZING!!!
    I can't wait for the next chapter!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 19:05
    What exactly happened to the last horcrux? :S

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 23:42
    Soooooooo dark......LOVED IT!!!!! make the new Harry potter children storiis.... That part that creePs me out is how the juices Re still flowing from her pussy and ass..... Dam dude

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.11.2011 07:22
    GREAT! If you are going to write more HP stories maybe you should add some lesbian moments.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.11.2011 14:42
    Not bad but they sound so gay fell asleep beside each other naked and satisfied thats just wrong

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 00:37
    Great story, add some lesbian moments, since u had gay in there as well. You have done a fucking amazing job with thus series. (no pun intended). Great job, hope u write more soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.11.2011 22:15
    There should be a lesbian scene.........................WAFFLES

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.11.2011 22:21
    I like the story, but honestly not ron becoming the bad guy.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 01:57
    this is bullshit man harry gets raped ron his a evil freak i am done with these series

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 21:50
    WOOOHOOO YOUR DONE i hate Draco.... and who was Bellatrix`s baby`s father?

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 06:20
    loved the joke at the end
    V: draco what were you doing??
    D: pansy
    tehe

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 16:36
    it was RON!!!!!!!!!!! :D this is the beginning of the greatest harry potter stories not made by JK herself... :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 19:23
    :o some you killed Cho! YOU BASTARD!!! lmao jk that was great never expected Cho to die since she lives in the movies and book but that was great and i know its your story but PLEASE don't do a gay scene ty

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 19:24
    That was supposed to say omg sorry

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  • cajuncashew
    16.11.2011 04:56
    Why not to both. Just because you close one story. That does need to mean another one can not start. But keep writing! This has been a great run on the Harry Potter stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2011 02:18
    you guys are all fucking retarded if you honestly think that the story had a romance that anyone cared about. It's a sex story. If you want romance, watch the movie Romancing the Stone or Casablanca or some shit like that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2011 05:58
    Pretty good series dude . Even though the gay rape scene disgusted me i enjoyed the chapter as that was necessary . Hats of to this fanfic

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2011 21:42
    i very much liked the star wars parody at the beginning

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.11.2011 14:47
    u guys shut tha fuk up read tha stry nd beat ur meat god 4 all u no Hermione used a spell nd grown her tits anothr size so shut tha fuk up nd stop criticising

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 20:08
    droberts2323@aim.com
    love to talk with girls ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 20:09
    droberts2323@aim.com
    love to talk with girls ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.11.2011 09:51
    please keep the series going man its very nice i love these stories :D
    thanks

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.11.2011 09:52

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 16:58
    it would be cool to see the sweet side of malfoy more often i would really appreciate that!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2011 18:14
    i give you lots of applause becouse you actually made a (good) sex story not just a story of sex
    P.S. im a huge fan of your work

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2011 18:38
    wow i cannot utter any more words all of the chapters were beautifull

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.12.2011 16:41
    your storyys have given me faith again in internet porn sites and porn storys

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2011 17:52
    ok so i love your work and i was reading this while i was bored and like i got to the part when it was like star wars so i put on star wars fight music from the movie and was cracking up how it was so much alike XD

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2011 09:54
    To think, I was counfsed a minute ago.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2011 16:51
    You really found a way to make this whole prceoss easier.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2011 10:35
    7 in. is big? that seems small to me

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.12.2011 18:26
    great,im soooo glad i found ur stories.iv been trying to find a descent set of stories 4 so long now. one problem though... after fingering myself my panties have got all wet... i have to find new ones now

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 17:20
    amazing i loved it and my pussy is now so wet and needs to be fucked good job

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.12.2011 18:57
    even though im a lesbian, after reading this it makes me want to have a guy finger me whilst i make out with my girlfriend...maybe ill ask her...

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2011 01:22
    i hope u do the next series,
    i enjoyed this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.12.2011 00:20
    Great stories but the accent was a bit annoying

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.12.2011 16:18
    maybe becouse this second season will not follow the traditional harry potter maybe you can add some new characters please???

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 02:26
    I think you should add the professors and adult death eaters into the story later on if you haven't already like Lastrange & Malfoy but I've liked all of your stories so far as well as your style & methods, keep it up :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 12:17
    Idk wht all these people r bitchen about! I love the rape! hell i have been fingering myself to all if your stories and i came every time! All thes people who say they dont like the rape, y r u reading this then??

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 15:16
    its christmas / new year time already! waiting for ur new series. Go ahead, and write one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 18:44
    sky will be defeated by james. easy

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 19:46
    Awesome, man.
    i wouldn't have any complain even if there wasn't any sex in it

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 05:06
    i love your whole HP collection. all stories seem to be very thorough. i look forward to reading this collection. Im curious though, if Harry suspected that sky could be the subject of the prophecy, couldnt he have used the ministry's resources to find out who his mother is.

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  • demck23
    31.12.2011 11:12
    great story lets have the next part very soon. Hoped he gets them PG it would make it even better

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 04:03
    Sky = belotrix/rons son

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 08:37
    James is son of Malfoy's ginny rape. And Sky son of harry.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 08:38
    Harry and ron should swap wives for fun

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 08:39
    Harry and ron should swap wives for fun

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  • SoCaliGuy
    02.01.2012 07:48
    The potter boys should fuck each other

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 16:17
    maybe they should all fuck the writer and get rid of this Harry Potter obsession of his. he told everyone at the end of the last series he would be moving on to something else but he seems to believe he is god's gift to literature and literature consists of nothing but HP.
    fucking dead-brain cunt.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 05:45
    Fantastic keep up thegood work

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 05:46
    Jaw droppingly good 5*****

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 16:20
    fuck man i cummed twice and my dick is still hard keep writing!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 18:36
    I like the wife swap

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 11:15

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 19:14
    every time iread one of his stories i get like a flash back from star wars. its like when mace windu was like thinking in his mind "id like this boy anakin",,,,,,,,15+ years later anakin chops off his arm....o. o

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  • JunkyD
    11.01.2012 14:00
    Can't wait for the next.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 17:26
    The father of Bellatrix's baby was Ron and I love your stories man

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2012 07:05
    Bit confusing in some stories Harrys bum is soft and peachy and in others it's tight but other than that brilliant story keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.01.2012 20:24
    Next one, please, fast!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2012 08:43
    The battle of Hogwart's what? No apostrophe please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 05:50
    What happened to you?

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.01.2012 00:47
    get real lad91 hermione barely has B size tits... if you're gonna write stories like these, get the facts straight...

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2012 11:51
    Dude, what happened to your awesome update rate?

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2012 12:54
    I love it! It's true that your stories aren't exactly like the books, but that's what is so great about it... Kind of like "how the story could of been". Keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2012 13:26
    I would love to do some roleplaying with you! I'm going to make an account and PM you. I LOVE your writing!! (I'm a girl btw)

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  • Americangirl91
    30.01.2012 14:06
    Rougher! I loved it!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 17:11
    1 of feb where the fuck is part 2

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 17:05
    Hk4i7s Good day! I do not see the conditions of using the information. May I copy the text from here on my site if you leave a link to this page?!....

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 01:09
    Dude, what happened to ur update rate? It used to be amazing! Plz, hurry up and post the next installment

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 09:10
    Hooray! the one who wrote is a cool guy..!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 09:32
    Sorry for the off-topic, could you tell where I can get such a nice pattern for my blog ?!....

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 09:54
    Pleased to read intelligent thoughts in Russian. I`ve been living in England for already 5 years!....

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 10:16
    Interesting. We are waiting for new messages on the same topic!!....

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2012 10:39
    I do`t see a feedback or the other coordinates from the blog administration!....

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 01:02
    why is everyone complaining? dont i remember people complaining about to much harry? and the thing with the rape, Ron was desperate! he lost control, overtaken by lust!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 01:30
    Ha ha nice comeback lad91. if you want more drama, harry tries to seduce girl, she repeatedly rejects him. he loses it and rapes her.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 01:43
    @ 1:43:01 one hash mark(') means foot. two hash marks(") meana inches. i dont think any of them have 4 foot dicks

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 02:07
    all of you are aware that draco is a rapist too. his forced sex makes ron's look gentle! harry and draco should nevef be friends!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 18:55
    Where's the next at?

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 10:08
    I love this chapter, for all the rnaeoss you posted.Its a combination of excitement and fear and humour, and oh God, its just fun reading about. I absolutely adore the part where they're like "we totes know about the p-stone, k? Where's Dumbly?" McGonagall is thrown in such a loop, and you're right, its hilarious when compared to later books. (I'm also reminded of the sixth movie where she's just like "Why is it always you three") My favourite of the challenges was always the riddle puzzle. I loved the idea of using brains, not power, to solve it, and the concept of the two fires. When I was little I was so sad that it didn't get in the movie, but now I'm older I understand why it wouldn't have worked in that medium. Still, Hermione being badass and word puzzles? I wouldn't mind it too much. And yes, the reveal is brilliant. "It wasn't Snape. It wasn't even Voldemort." THEN WHO THE FUCK IS IT? You were never prepared.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 15:00
    common
    i beleive we all are waiting for the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 12:06
    these stories are fatastic, may i suggest you put all these chapters in on e books vie copy and paste. then you could send it to like amazon and stuff to sell your book. this is epic btw

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2012 07:01
    hello my mom is a monkey and so am I

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.03.2012 18:54
    fuuunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnici kfuck ewoifuck you

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 00:49
    removed his cock from out of her?

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2012 20:01
    PORN IS DEATH STORIES ARE LIFE
    me

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2012 23:21
    that was awesome and i agree about the fiction comment

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.04.2012 16:26
    Great story. I hope more come out soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2012 20:03
    Really good story dont change a thing :) might be a good idea to incorporate some surnames from the novels to keep it Harry Potter-ish :) For example(for future reference),you never alluded to Oksana's second name,only that she is Russian? An idea might be to use Oksana Krum,and claim she is related to the Bulgarian Viktor Krum :) lad91(and fellow readers)if you think I want you to change your format/plan for this series,Im not,Im just trying to help :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2012 23:49
    7 inch isnt big i dont think...
    and the the post titled "to the fuckhead below" thank u for that post it was really entertaining!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2012 21:54
    was there a story nefore and if there was wat is it???

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2012 02:50
    Can I say "finally"? :P

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  • JunkyD
    15.04.2012 02:51
    Can I say "finally"? :P

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2012 18:50
    Finnlly now hurry up and post the next haha

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2012 17:06
    Haha beginning is star wars

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 18:51
    please no more gay parts

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2012 17:48
    you kept it similar to the book but gave it that little bit extra and you included feelings as well as sex plus everything links together smoothly

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.04.2012 15:31
    That was a great touch, having Ron go into exile for a year, try to make reparations.
    Great story!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2012 00:03
    Well fleurs sister wasn't in any real danger....lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2012 01:02
    May have fucked almost every main character LOL

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2012 23:58
    I wanna see hermione fuck someone as Harry. POLYJUICE POTION MADNESS!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.05.2012 00:13
    next time: threesome with cho and luna

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  • JunkyD
    12.05.2012 03:38
    So what happened that changed your update rate when you began this story?

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.05.2012 23:31
    damn, wish that rimjob turned into anal.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.05.2012 18:30
    pretty gawd damn awesome - though am surprised at ron's character change

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.05.2012 11:14
    dude what the fuck happened to you r speed of story updates
    anyway great story bro awseome

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2012 18:22
    Pretty decent story but if I'm honest the fighting scenes were pretty sack... I mean there was no drama. The battle between Harry and voldemort lasted 2 lines but apart from that it was ace

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2012 23:46
    i can halp but think you shoulda put this line in when ron and hermione came.

    H: that felt good.
    R: not good brilliant!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2012 17:39
    the quidditch cup is in the spring and this is before christmas. ur time is off. otherwise great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2012 18:13
    Seriously where's the next?

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.06.2012 23:10
    bcghxsweuoc2QULSH<”/∞”ÈÁóÖfeÈÀÓôÖÚÊ€ÁÑ

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.06.2012 23:13
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  • anonymous+reader
    08.06.2012 00:44
    Hey give him a break. People do have lives that sometimes get complicated. I do hope you're able to write the next installment in the near future. Love your story so far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.06.2012 23:30
    the part where harry and ron fought was alot like star wars

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.06.2012 19:28
    To the people complaining about the slower speed of writing, that was always going to happen, rather than changing already existing stories to contain sex scenes, he is now writing entirely new stories, give him a break!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.06.2012 20:47
    is moi the only français worrd you knuw?

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 20:56
    I agree with the guy below me. I get off better reading these stories than watching actual porn.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 23:50
    I agree with the guy below me. I get off better reading these stories than watching actual porn.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 18:03
    I agree with the guy below me. I get off better reading these stories than watching actual porn.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.07.2012 00:07
    You need to write a book about Harry and Ron fucking various whores, that would make it FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2012 19:33
    You killed cho???? WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!!
    Other than that, great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2012 01:11
    I like how people are critcising you for naming a charm wrong... It's called creative liscence ass holes....

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2012 21:24
    I'm 14 and want a master to fuck me hard any idea how how to get one?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2012 14:43
    Albums needs a scene

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2012 02:34
    cant wait for the next one love the stories I can read these even without the sex parts. I always wanted the series to continue and see what type of shenanigans James would get into at Hogwarts

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.07.2012 00:48
    i have read it i love it please please keep writing its been a great story it like goes between the lines of the actual story which in my opinion makes it even better so please keep writeing man!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2012 16:25
    I can't wait for the finale. It will be bitetr-sweet as my family has grown up with Harry Potter. Both our sons, learning to read the first books and growing taller to attend Dragoncon. It's become a family gathering!Glad for their well deserved popular recognition in the award nominees.ciao G. D. Dent

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2012 22:57
    Seriously one of the best stories I've read in a while even without the sex stories (which are great) I've thouroghly enjoyed the series you should really consider writing for a living if you haven't already. I enjoyed the series from start to finish and only have one problem with it, Ron already knew Harry and dumbledore were hunting horcruxes when he went bad yet he doesn't seem to have ever told voldemort about it. It seems logical that he would've done that I think it would have made the horcrux hunt far more difficult for them. Aside from that minor plothole you've done a grest job reinventing the series I can't wait to read more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2012 03:35
    Make Ron fuck hermione, harry fuck ginny, malfoy fuck pansy, bill fuck fleur, yea.....!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2012 10:54
    SADAZDEJZAOIEHYAZUIEEEEEEZADAZOJHDUZAIDGZA11111111111111111111111111111111112222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.08.2012 10:54
    Please write the next chapter soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2012 13:34
    I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILLED OFF CHO, WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU. Of all the girls u could of snuffed, u had to kill her WHY. That does it I want ron dead and his head put on a spike for this

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2012 03:15
    No mate, that rape ruined the chapter no more rape

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.09.2012 20:17
    Plz hurry up been waiting for so long

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2012 18:52
    Plz hurry up been waiting for so long

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.09.2012 23:40
    thanks a bunch lad way to ruin a perfectly good series i notice you don't kill any other girl in the rest of the series

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2012 11:16
    Hehe,Fleur sure has a sweet voice but she moans like a pirate, "Arghhh''.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2012 19:30
    This was a badass story, keep up the great work, my friend.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.10.2012 09:59
    dont care about the french, great story, and at the end of thevstory, why did u make ron and harry gay?

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2012 11:50
    how many star wars refferences can be put in one series? not complaining mind, just found it amusing

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2012 23:52
    I like you, man. It's very nice to see that you chose to continue with the storyline of Harry Potter rather than rehashing old entries in the series. Keep them coming, if you might.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2012 00:01
    Yeah... I'd have to say that even though Ron could be kind of a twat in canon, he was essentially a good guy. He wouldn't rape someone.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2012 00:03
    I agree with the guy below me. I get off better reading these stories than watching actual porn.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2012 00:06
    Bloody fuck, "Anonymous reader," If you're going to be like that, Ron never left the party in the story, so he shouldn't have had sex with Lavender.

    Great story, bro!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.11.2012 10:12
    dint like the ending ron dead jus doesnt feel right

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.11.2012 00:25
    Love your stories! Hoping you will continue with more from James!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2012 14:51
    Please keep writing! Love your stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.12.2012 01:44
    Are you going to finish. I hope so

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 22:56
    Harry is eating Chinese!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2013 21:03
    Can't believe you have only just introduced Neville :( he is my second fav character !!

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  • smokenhothyde
    25.01.2013 02:17
    probably came in the lake so no one can trace dna? lol. even though hes a wizard and they dont have that technology...hahaha

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.01.2013 06:50
    quidditch cup is acutally in the summer...lol.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.01.2013 07:05
    they saved gabrielle 2yrs ago...not "last year" :) lol

    other than that i loved it.

    oh, and they arent gay. just cuz they are best friends and banged the same chick and passed out...

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.01.2013 07:33
    harry is such a good guy...wish i had someone like that to help me when i was raped :/

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2013 03:05
    It's a pleasure to find such rationality in an aneswr. Welcome to the debate.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2013 18:57
    Keep it going this is a great series

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2013 14:44
    Hermione says i love u 2 ron ?! But she said so tu harry . Whats going on here . Harry , hermione is a fucking hot couple . Plz write about it

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2013 14:05
    Its stupid ! They thinj that ron is dead but they had the wedding !! And harry knows that ginny is captured but he fuckes every body . :D
    Im a fan of ur stories . Some more hermione sexes please , not with ron ...

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2013 01:56
    It would be so awesome if you kept writing these stories!!

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  • Luna+lovesitgood
    05.03.2013 01:54
    It is nice to see you writing again man!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2013 00:09
    Doesn't matter if he was a good guy and wouldn't have raped somebody, fact is he would be too stupid to get away with it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2013 00:55
    lad, you ar an artist.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.03.2013 13:11
    Please keep updating this story!

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  • Kittencat3
    22.03.2013 04:08
    How did this lame POS get 93% rating? You want REAL HP smut, go to fanfiction.net. This one wouldn't arouse a lifer in prison. For the love of God, do us all a favor and NEVER WRITE AGAIN.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.03.2013 09:31
    Thanks for your work. Very erotic.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2013 16:22
    Would be "ma" not moi

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2013 19:55
    What kind of stupid name is Oksana?

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.04.2013 15:47
    pleeeeeaaaaaaassseeee update more of this cause it`s great

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2013 00:04
    RAPE RAPE RAPE!!!!! LOTS OF FUCKING RAPE!!!!, :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.05.2013 01:34
    I love this story please update!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2013 01:59
    Hey update soon. Love your stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2013 01:59
    Hey update soon. Love your stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.06.2013 08:26
    I promise me reading sex stories isn't going to make me have sex with underage girls but 14 and over is the age kids are having sex. But if a guy is being rough it don't matter what age if it's your first time you'll get hurt. 13 and younger no you don't touch a girl for fear of hurting her. But 14 there was a time when that was the age you could bare children so it depends on beging gentle. But I'll stick with girls my own age thank you nothing will make me go after any girl under 18. Remember kids be safe and be ready don't do for the hell of it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2013 16:10
    3 words I LOVED IT please make more

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2013 09:14
    to the other fuckhead below:

    its not rons wedding. harry is only male and males arent the brightest in love.

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  • Kittencat3
    16.07.2013 07:39
    There's nothing wrong with this fetid heap of suck that couldn't be solved by NEVER WRITING AGAIN

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2013 11:28
    Hogwarts quidditch cup happens over the school year. The quidditch World Cup is I. Summer between third and fourth years.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2013 01:52
    How about bella getting pregs from ron. Also, since when does does ron have a silver hand? I always thought it was WoRmTaiL who got it straight after the rebirth of LoRd VoLdEmOrT because he used his own hand in the ritiul.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2013 10:33
    Is Harry stupid that he forgives ron of rapping Luna that's just crazy

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2013 22:48
    Update this story!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2013 13:59
    Doctorus charm... Who else got the reference?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 00:50
    ErJUya Hey, thanks for the blog article.Much thanks again.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2013 00:40
    i love <3 this series........

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2013 23:02
    GiHFv3 I am so grateful for your blog article.Really thank you! Cool.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2013 17:11
    PLEASE MAKE HARRY AND H ERMIONE GET TOGETHER FOREVER!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.03.2014 06:19
    YOU FUCKING KILLED CHO?!!YOU HAVE PROBLEMS!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.03.2014 06:37
    remember when Ron fell off Hogwarts he lost part of his chest and his arm so Voldemort gave him a new one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.03.2014 21:32
    I have d sized tits and there probably the same size as Hermione so until you have D cups... shut the fuck up!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.03.2014 20:49
    I have d sized tits and there probably the same size as Hermione so until you have D cups... shut the fuck up!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2014 09:58
    Why the fuck did you kill Cho for what made her so special that she was the only girl to die. Dammit Lad I was loving this story. Thanks a bunch you've made me want to kill Ron

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.04.2014 05:05
    Awesome fuck story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2014 03:51
    It was cool, make more. Please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2014 03:52
    It was cool, make more. Please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2014 21:48
    Post an update please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2015 17:50
    this beginning is total star wars ripoff

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2015 22:04
    so, Dean was in the Malfoy mansion, but where did Angelina go? was she killed?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2015 22:59
    update maybe?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.04.2015 18:50
    to kirrencat3 just stfu if you think it is lame why would you read until the end. just go away then. i think it is a awesome story btw

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.04.2015 03:18
    Harrypotter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2015 12:46
    Your stories are awesome. Don't stop writing as i love your stories. Good job bro.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2016 23:47
    Just saying Ron has a sister. He would know what tits were

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2016 06:09
    Crucio cant be deflected with protego, you fool!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2016 20:43
    DISGUSTING ENDING
    SERIES IS GREAT BUT THAT 1 SCENE MADE IT BAD

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.08.2016 03:26
    More, more, more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.08.2016 12:31
    That was such a cliffhanger. Please write more on thistory

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.11.2016 09:33
    Loved Harry getting raped by Draco, should have forced ginny to lick it out after

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  • EdTheBeast
    25.12.2018 03:40
    Hi! I'm trying to find part 3. Can you repost it please.

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  • m3n4sk3r
    03.09.2019 01:26
    well, that's a perfect gift

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  • troggy
    18.08.2020 20:43
    ditto to EdTheBeast

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  • troggy
    18.08.2020 20:46
    what happened to Ch 4 Pt 3?

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