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Sex games

willing as a

Author: skateparkzone61

Date: 24 June 2004

Blowjob, Fiction, First Time, Rape

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It was saturday The last day of june when about to slip into bed surprisingly noticing that my window was open

i slowly walked over to the lattice and closed the window i climbed into my soft bed drifting away to sleep

the next morning i woke up with two girls, asking myself if i was dreaming and to my surprise my zipper was down and my cock was out.

i got out of bed imeditatly asking what the fuck was going on the girl's laughed and gigled and broke of a wisper we want you i thouht about trying to escape from the mysterious two but then thought to myself i was going to get laid now or never.

i then quickly asked the girls what did they want from me,their response, you we want you.

one of the girls took my soft cock,lifted it and putting it in her mouth then slowly sliding her tounge up and down until my soft cock was erect and rock hard.

i then turned the tables by geting up saying to the other girl take of yyour shirt with a viloent voice and the girl not refusing took off her shirt but did not give me a chance to do anything she pushed me on the brd and began to ssit ontop of me slowly pulling down her black leather panties and meassaging my face with the lips of her pussy then yelling in erotica lick ,lick!! But instead of lick i blew lightly into her cunt until the sligtest sign of pleasure from the women then sticking my tounge in and out and up and down until felt her legs shake and then bite into it as if it were a raw meat of chicken, the girls now handed me an envelope and got dressed then quickly opened my window and jump out giving me no idea of who they were and then leaving, as they drifted away into the mist of dawn dissapeariing i opened the envelope it contained 5 words

School ,Monday,Gym after lunch
(end of part 1)


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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.06.2004 10:54
    good start. bring the other parts

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.06.2004 12:39
    umm, you cant yell in erotica. besides that, your story still sucks big fat aids filled donkey cock.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2004 10:23
    where's the rest? it doesn't need to be in fourteen parts. work on your grammar too.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.07.2004 21:36
    this story..sounds very made up and fake..all at the same time..and i have to say.it really sucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.07.2004 04:35
    yep big donkey cock. but keep trying :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.07.2004 10:27
    Ha please.HELP.GOD 14 parts.Erotica.grr you annoy me!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.07.2004 16:07
    BOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.07.2004 18:51
    If you value your sanity don't read anything written by Skateparkzone61.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.07.2004 20:59
    sorry but it is really bad

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.07.2004 03:48
    wtf boooo 14 parts give to me all at once

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.08.2004 09:05
    silly boy. is this a fairy tale.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.08.2004 01:47
    god that was pitiful. i guarentee this dude is a virgin. No fucking way he'd ever get laid with that imagination

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.08.2004 05:34
    this was worse then watching little house on the parie..if you want to read a great story check out the one by "Acking Balls"

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.09.2004 19:50
    okay for 1) learn how 2 write a longer storie and get into MUCH more detail. put urself into the charecter u r writing about.. and like everyone on this page has sed.. THIS FUCKIN STORIE SUCKED BALLS!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.09.2004 14:29
    heh tooo funny

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.09.2004 04:09
    fuckin blew arse ya little priss. at least put some quotations in that blowarse piece of jackdroppings. since when have girls come crawling through your window, shit? if its unlocked like that id expect several dogs to come in and have their way with you. this happened while u were 11? it shows. blew in her fuckin vagina after 2 seconds, shows how much of a man ya are. oh boy! 14 of these shitbits! and lucky you, i get to rate them all fuckface! thats it. Piss off!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.09.2004 12:30
    Don't bother with the other 13 parts unless you are going to have something longer, more believable and more erotic.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.10.2004 22:31
    i agree with all other comments, this is shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.11.2004 13:54
    it was good but quiet impossible.it doesnt sem to be truth.so add some reality:)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.11.2004 18:12
    You should cut your dick off and suck it you mother fucker. Your fucking grammer sucks, even at the age of 11. I know little boys and girls at the age of 8 years old that can write better shit then this you little fuck face, fucking fuck your own fucked up grandpa, you fucker. Well I am sorry, just write better stories you fucking fucked up son of a fucking fucked up bitch. Fucker!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.11.2004 00:58
    That was the shittiest, and weakest fucking story I ever had the displeasure to read. Were you fucking high when you wrote this piece of shit? Are you fucking retarded? I damn near threw up it sucked so bad. Fuck! I dont know whether to try and get you help, or laugh. I think i'll laugh at this piece of fucking shit.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2004 02:28
    Don't write part 2. Part 1 was all that we wanted to read from you. Please. Don't wrtie.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2004 02:28
    Don't write part 2. Part 1 was all that we wanted to read from you. Please. Don't wrtie.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.12.2004 04:02
    I won't be too hard on you, because i now have a good hardon to take of, Wish you would senfd me one of these intruders to help me take care of this problem.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.12.2004 02:50
    At least you had good spacing. This helps the reader. Too bad the content was so minimal. How about some review work before you do this again: Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.12.2004 07:49
    yo......man....i gotta say it was up the shit but hey ya get that work on it n u may produce sumfin that may even get sum1's attention next time ...dun quit just cause these fucks said so peace

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.12.2004 23:19
    why waste the time?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.12.2004 22:43
    This was the shitest thing ive ever read in my life it was too unrealistic, it was so fucking shit i had 2 wait ages to get another errection you dumb fucking idiot please dont write again u useless mother fucking shit eating cunt arse son of a bitch.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.12.2004 18:23
    The less said about that, the better

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.12.2004 00:38
    that was so fuckin pathetic. who really wakes up with 2 chicks . u r a fuckin liar

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.12.2004 06:22
    wut the fuck was that... theres no way two chicks would do this, were the fuck are they hiding wile u sleep, and how do they get the window open, ur fucking liein u dumfuck

    P.S go kill urself

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.01.2005 01:28
    WOW! THAT WAS THE WORST STORY I HAVE EVER HEARD IN MY LIFE. YOU SOULD JUST GO SUCK A BIG COCK BECAUSE YOU WILL NEVER GET A 2 GIRLS AT YOUR BEDROOM HOMO

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.01.2005 21:01
    um... o... kay... then... what should i say about this? except for "wha????" i didnt understand any of it... but keep at it.. and maybe u'll get better

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.01.2005 02:09
    alright I could have something here but you stoped short of reaching it try harder next time.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.01.2005 09:44
    fuck u

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.07.2005 02:23
    ymmm iv did storys wen i was a 10 (im not now) but still it was ok fore a yung age

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.02.2006 09:02
    LMFAO that was SHIT!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.03.2006 22:47
    dam for ur first time u did freakin great!! *cought* not *cought* wtf man?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2007 16:25
    1. He nvr said it was real. 2. His FIRST storie and 3. He's only 11 when he wrote it! but all-in-all it sucked lol

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2007 23:21
    Er..that sucked..big time lol..sorry.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.07.2007 07:30
    Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense.

    And erm (01-03-05). FFS dont try encouraging the twat.

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    READER 500
    08.04.2008 00:07
    Um. wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. Don't but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.

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  • Kiba+Snowpaw
    10.03.2019 10:27
    I'm terrible at writing stories, but I'm pretty sure I could do a better job than this. And also the spelling and Grammar errors are horrible.

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