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Sex games

How it should be, but isn't always - Editors Cut

Author: Kestrel

Date: 15 May 2005

Blowjob, Fiction, Boy, Oral Sex

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Note to readers: This is a romantic story. If you don't like reading about such things, or you like quick stories with little meaning read something else.

This story, like any story worth telling, is about a girl. But not just any girl, this one was special. Well to me anyway. It all started at secondary school in the 3rd year, the girls were half way through puberty and the boys had just started, noticing the girls as well. Like most 14 year olds, I'd seen the pictures, but I could only imagine what it would be like, I'd never had a girlfriend before and I wasn't too sure about how to to get one, but one thing I did know if anything was who.
Kacy was...well perfect, she had blue eyes, long brown shiny hair and legs that seemed to attract the eyes of anyone who walked by, even the girls sometimes stared. She had lived next to me for about 3 years, and I'd lusted over her for almost as long. Although I'd seen her around at school, I'd never actually spoken to her, even though I'd masturbated whilst thinking about her several times. My big chance came when I was 'forced' to sit next to her in science lessons, for a while we just sort of ignored each other and concentrated on working, but eventually after a few lessons she asked me to help her with one of the questions we had to do for a project. She was wearing one of those black elastic jumpers, the ones girls sometimes where over shirts and as I started to explain the question she leaned over my book trying to understand, and just for a second i caught a glimpse of the top of her breast, nuzzled into a white cotton bra. After I'd finished she smiled, and went back to work and that was how it went for a few weeks, me helping her understand some of the more tricky questions whilst staring at her beautiful round breasts.
After a few weeks into the year, we were set some coursework to do, in pairs and to save arguments, who we were sat next to. I was excited it was like a godsend. So I got to spend more time with her, and we became friends, talking about people and life in general and discussing our feelings towards different stuff. It was during one of these conversations that she was struggling with a particular calculation on the coursework, it was particularly nasty and as it was getting near to the end of the day, I suggested that we take it home and finished it there over some food. As I looked at her I could see her deep blue eyes consider it for a second, and then she nodded her head willingly it was decided. At that point I hadn't intentionally thought about what 'could' possible happen with her at my house, in fact it wasn't until we were walking down our road and I noticed my parents car wasn't there that I really thought about it. remembering that they had gone to a concert for the evening. I started to plan. Snapping back to reality I heard her calling my name, she giggled and asked me where the hell I'd been. Flirting, she pushing me away she called back 'be over in a minute' as she walked up to her door and went inside. I followed suit and went into my own house, the tension building in my whole body.
*Diiiiing* I'd been miles away again, just starring as my mind ticked away. I stumbled over to the door, opened it and there she was. She'd changed, now wearing a pair of tight fitting jeans, the zip not done up, and a white shirt covered in little pink flowers. This along with the rucksack strap pulling one of her neat breasts upwards and the sun on her back is one of the moments I will never forget. She was more beautiful that I could imagine, and here she was at my door. 'Your urmm flys undone' I muttered, averting my eyes. She giggled, and quickly turned around, zipping it to the top, I did get changed in a bit of a hurry. It was decided all the signals where there.
We'd been working and slowly flirting for about 2 hours at it was almost 5 o 'clock and I decided to implement my plan. Jokingly I started into the conversation about a new DVD I'd just gotten, she sounded interested, so I continued. By this time we were bored of the work and I offered to fetch it from my room, she was hesitant at first. But after a minute or two of explaining how good it was she soon relented. I quickly ran upstairs and swapped into a clean pair of jeans, sprayed some deodorant and grabbed the DVD.
So far we'd just been working on the coffee table in the lounge and sitting on the floor, but while I was away she'd sat down at one of the couch, her legs facing the middle, pulling her jeans even tighter around her perfectly formed buttocks. I walked in, slipped in the DVD and hit play. Sitting down next to her legs, as close as i could comfortably be without being too suspicious and settled into watching the film. About 10 minutes in, I couldn't wait any longer, I started playing with her socks, just playfully pulling at the tops down and up, mimicking moves that would later become clear. Giggling she reached over, and grabbed at the sides of my stomach, tickling me into hysterics. After a few seconds of this I'd fallen backwards with her laying between my legs and her hands gripping my now shaking shoulders. I looked into her eyes, and she looked into mine. For what seemed like an eternity we stayed like that locked together, just for a few seconds. But it was too late to stop, the look she had given me told all my senses she wanted it, whatever 'it' was to be, just as badly as me.
She relaxed her shoulders and lowered her face into mine. She was so close I could smell her perfume, and the scent on her lips. We kissed, gently and softly holding it for just a second then releasing, as if testing out our lips for the first time. After another second of eye gazing we plunged into a string a deep passionate kissing that seemed to entice her hand the bottom of my stomach, slowly pushing up my shirt. Seconds later, as a team we removed my shirt, and had begun on her flowery top. Sitting up slightly to do this, we'd soon removed it which left her cute breasts swinging in a small laced bra. Grabbing my hands she pulled me onto her as she fell backwards, simultaneously opening her legs, just as I closed mine. Kissing gently again I let passion consume me, tracing her next with short kisses, and gently brushing her breasts with my fingertips. They quivered to my touch, hard but so soft I could have fallen asleep in their warmth.
A few minutes later, I got up. turning off the TV before grabbing her hand and pulling her up, motioning that we should go upstairs, she followed without hesitation her cute breasts bouncing around now that there was no shirt to restrict them. I led her to my room which I had prepared while she had been getting changed next door. Sitting down on the bed I pulled her towards me, gasping at her elegant, tight buttocks. Hands roamed over my hair and down my back stirring a warmth inside my cock.
Pushing her away slightly I gentle took the front of her jeans and undid the button holding the two sides together, releasing it with a slightly clicking noise. Surprisingly we hadn't said a word to each other, since the DVD had started, but as I looked up he eyes motioned that I should continue so I did. Grabbing both sides with my fingers, I slid the jeans down her shapely legs, exposing a pair of cotton white panties, which were tight to her skin, so tight in fact a small, damp patch was starting to grow. Causing them to stick even tighter. Without warning she pulled herself closer to me, pushing her crotch into my face, giving me a strong scent of her juices. Knowing that she was ready I slowly pulled down her panties, a side at a time, slowly but purposely. Level with her crotch they exposed a small clump of pubic hair, a small tuft of brown hair which was neatly trimmed. Without stopping I continued until with a final pull they unstuck from her pussy lips and fell down to her ankles. I sat there for a moment in utter wonder, smelling and looking at my first every pussy. Her plump lips gazing at me, her pubic mound pointing the way. Consumed in my own world I pulled her towards me, falling backwards so she was forced to spread her legs. Grabbing her hands I pulled her slowly down causing her lips to make contact with mine, she let out a small gasp, and then relaxed, as I moved my hands to stretch her lips apart. Very slowly and carefully I did so, then with a single movement stroked inside with my tongue from top to bottom. The taste was amazingly bland, but not unlike a very faint fishy sea sort of taste.
She let out a moan as I continued to lick, and then plunged my tongue into her small pussy as far as it would got, stretching her ring to accommodate. Withdrawing I licked up her cunt again, causing more small gasps and then wrapped my lips around hers and sucked ever so gently. He hands playing with my neck and face I moved around licking every part that I could reach, as she slowly began to grind her pussy lower onto my face. After a couple more minutes of moans and a few small shakes, she relinquished her grip of my face, and turned round, so she was facing my legs. As I continued to lick at her pussy, she slowly undid my jeans letting them slide to the floor, and undid the buttons of my boxers, letting my 6" cock out from hibernation. Gently and without hesitation she slid it into her mouth, causing me stir slightly which in a chain reaction forced my tongue deeper into her tight cunt. Sucking on it slowly she grabbed the rest of the shaft with her hand and began to pump it into her face. I was in heaven, I'd made it with a girl, but the girl I had dreams about for almost 4 years.
I guessed this was the first cock she had ever sucked, as soon i felt my cock tingle and i quickly pushed her leg away allowing me to slide free. Kneeling in front of her, still saying nothing I motioned my hand up and down my cock, focusing on the top. Grabbing a pillow I laid her gently on her back, and knelt over her face, she instinctively grabbed my hack cock and began doing what I had done just seconds before. This time it was better, causing my to occasionally shake with anticipation and pleasure. Soon the pressure was building and a moved forward, so she would take my cock to her lips, still pumping it with her hand. I came then and there, with half my cock in her mouth. A first she was shocked and started to gag, but she soon worked out what was happening and started to swallow my cum. Licking my cock clean, causing me even more pleasure I lifted my leg allowing her to sit up, only for her to lie back down pulling my hand to her tits.
Kissing her deeply once more i slowly reached behind her beautifully hard breasts and wondered on how to remove her bra. Eventually after a few seconds I pushed to two straps together causing the clasp to become slack the bra to fall off. Reeling back to admire her tits, I saw in front of me the most beautiful pair of them I had ever seen. The ones in magazines or on the net weren't even in her league, they were small, firm hard with perfect form. Her two small nipples winked at me at the center of each breast. With no more encouragement that looking at me I bent down and slowly sucked at her breast, then moving over onto her wonderfully hard tit, making circles around it with my tongue. After a few moments I switched nuzzling onto the second one, watching with my eyes as she reeled in pleasure. I continued for what seemed like hours, watching her eyes with mine, until the signal changed.
Unsure of what she wanted, I moved my hand over her pussy lips. Gentle pushing back the folds of her beautifully full cunt. Finally getting the idea, and I pushed in with my middle finger, causing a small shudder as I felt the ring around her entrance open slightly more to accommodate the inquisitive finger. Driving deeper and I got more daring, and a second finger entered causing her to sit up and move backwards so her back was against the wall. Moving forwards my hand still embedded in her tight crotch, I started to pump in and out slowly. Causing a small moan to pass her lips with every thrust. Pushing in three fingers took about a minute, because I didn't want to hurt her, along with the moans of pleasure I sensed a few moans of pain as my fingers stretched her pussy wider than it had ever been before. With every push she opened her legs a little wider, allowing me to push deeper until I found her cherry, and pondered on what to do. Looking into her eyes, which were unfocused, and wet with sweat, I knew what to do.
Knelt between her spread legs, I grabbed my once again hard cock and brought it up facing her lips. Wrapping my arms around hers, feeling her breasts against my hairless chest, I pushed upwards into her, slowly and gently. Feeling my head slide into her wet pussy I got a sudden rush of pleasure, and I felt my legs go weak. Pushing further I felt her pussy opening to accommodate my now full cock. Gasping for breath, she slid down forcing more and more of my cock inside her until I felt her cherry on the head of my cock. With one final thrust it tore causing her to squeeze my whole body against hers. Becoming less and less of a virgin every second, I began to slowly pump my penis in and out, watching her lips pull out then release with every push. Soon my thrusts were matched with hers, and steadily out speed increased. Gradually I got deeper and deeper, until I was entering fully with each long stroke. Every time I entered, I felt her legs stretch out, and a small noise escaped her lips, like she was trying to gasp in pleasure.
I couldn't keep it up for long, because by now my legs had gone, but with a final long push inside of her, matched with her own movement we came together causing out juices to meet and mix inside of her. Withdrawing my semi-hard cock from her now soaked pussy, I collapsed next to her holding her hand, my eyes blurry. I watched as she slowly climbed on to me, laying with her legs between mine, her body against my body, her head resting at the top of my chest. I reached for the covers and pulled them over us, without a care in the world we fell asleep. Content and Happy.


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    READER 500
    21.11.2004 19:42
    That was hhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooootttttt... good writing, but you need to look to your spelling, ectacy, for one, But very hot, I gave U a nine.

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    READER 500
    21.11.2004 21:08
    Good first story. Just watch the spelling

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    READER 500
    22.11.2004 11:20
    good story 10

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    READER 500
    22.11.2004 14:40
    Great, best story I read all month. 10/10.

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    READER 500
    22.11.2004 16:32
    great story
    watch the spelling but i really enjoyed it looking forward to more

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    READER 500
    30.11.2004 09:20
    Very Hot LOVE it. Gave it a 10. Read your story over before you sent it. I have the same problem.
    Keep them coming good work.

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    READER 500
    05.12.2004 19:27
    10/10 fucking awesome + write more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.12.2004 04:23
    I like romance, and I like your writing.
    I to gave you nine

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.12.2004 21:59
    Wow, honestly brilliant. Almost a universal story line.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.12.2004 22:24
    Yo...freakin awesome dude. Good shit buddy

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    READER 500
    10.12.2004 02:07
    This is almost identical to the way I lost my virginity... Brought back memories, very hot story, good job... Just instead of he, write her please.

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    READER 500
    10.12.2004 12:16
    Awesome. Too many stories are just about fucking, and not enuf romance or emotion involved with it.. I gave it a 10.

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    READER 500
    11.12.2004 02:28
    Very Good story. I loved it, far to many stories are all about sex- and though i cannot claim to not be a pervert at times, i love this story.

    9/10- watch your spelling

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    READER 500
    11.12.2004 03:32
    hey man ..... nice story ........... u just need to watch the spelling thats all ...8 / 10

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    READER 500
    11.12.2004 06:19
    hey man great story loved it but u got the same problem as me spelling but all together very good story 10/10

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    READER 500
    11.12.2004 10:13
    good one,, more!!

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    READER 500
    11.12.2004 11:02
    I'm a romantic too. I liked you'r story and you'r style.
    One thing I miss is "lay-out", the posebillety to, by grapich means, write the story the way you whished it to be read.
    But by "this" WP it's imp.. To bad.
    Regards

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    READER 500
    11.12.2004 15:54
    Good story man, Well written, very well paced out throughout the story, YOu have a knack my friend. Now just work on your spelling, and keep the inspiritation going.

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    READER 500
    11.12.2004 19:58
    definately 10! awesome!

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    READER 500
    11.12.2004 20:34
    You fucking bastard- That was my sister. You got her pregnat that night.

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    READER 500
    11.12.2004 23:06
    Good story . Well written.

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    READER 500
    12.12.2004 00:17
    nice story

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    READER 500
    12.12.2004 08:04
    OK most of the people reading obviously cant see your flaws! It was a well written story but u had some definite grammar as well as spelling errors. You had good detail but sometimes I got lost when you were trying to describe something. Also when you got to the actual "sex" part it was too short, you just had to drag it out longer dude. 6/10

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    READER 500
    12.12.2004 09:06
    6/10 man you did some spelling wrong, not enough hardcore and for god sakes make you tow get in bed and do it until you both become exausted!

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    READER 500
    12.12.2004 09:23
    kool bt watch da spellin dude but otha wise its awesome

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    READER 500
    12.12.2004 23:03
    yea, poop i did not read all of crap.

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    READER 500
    13.12.2004 04:03
    poo

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    READER 500
    13.12.2004 15:43
    I can never satisfy everyone, so this story was wrritten based on what i would want to read. I will also assume that anyone who doesn't bother to read the entire thing, doesn't deserve to have an opinion as they are making a biast judgement on a few lines.
    -------------------... follow:

    Title: Undecided
    Main Contents: True-Story, Consensual Sex, Male / Female Teens, Romance, Young
    Progress: 60%

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    READER 500
    15.12.2004 16:44
    the best yet! ^_^

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    READER 500
    15.12.2004 18:26
    not a bad try, but the actual sx bit was to short, bit of an early finisher. still not quite 7/10 i reckon about 6.5

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    READER 500
    16.12.2004 20:24
    Good story for your first try better than most I've read in here

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    READER 500
    18.12.2004 19:00
    this is boring yall sick ass horny bitches and you white maybe so idoubt if you had a big di$%

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    READER 500
    25.12.2004 23:27
    i like to think thats how my first time will be...but that probably won't happen. I liked it I GIVE IT 8/10 partly cause im a girl-we love romance no matter what anyone says, and partly because i don't know many guess that like romance(and will admit it. BRAVO it was a great read!

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    READER 500
    08.01.2005 03:16
    I hope my first time is similar but i hope it lasts a lil longer. Good Story

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    READER 500
    28.01.2005 07:41
    awesome, great i love stories that have young (to me meaning under 18) couples "doing it" because that is erotic (people unless you like my opinion now I don't care if it like your'e a perve or whatevery belive what you want and shutup). 10/10 great.

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    READER 500
    30.01.2005 12:47
    aww very good...i wanna hear more sweets

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    READER 500
    09.02.2005 10:53
    your male lead was better than i . this is how we all wish our first time could have been . very good work keep it up.

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    READER 500
    16.02.2005 12:50
    good story, but work on your he/hers u interchange them quite often, a few other grammar mistakes take waway from the over all quality of the story, however the story line is very enticing.

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    READER 500
    27.02.2005 21:23
    How sweet!! That touched me, it actually did..I really hope mine is like that...I already know who it's gonna be with too..^_^ Wish me luck guys, although i'm still gonna be waiting for a while.

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    READER 500
    12.03.2005 01:54
    hey dude,
    it was a sexy story for a first time.
    keep it up.
    the chick reminded me of one in my school who i had a crush on. man i want to fuck her so badly but had a fight and lost al my chances... now i have to go back to cumming...
    keep it up.. redarmy, best of luck... fuck him till he goes mad..

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    READER 500
    25.03.2005 16:42
    Well for 1 thing, i can tell "L" isnt black, otherwise he wouldnt of said he was. 9/10, if this is ur first thats awesome, make many more.

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    READER 500
    31.03.2005 05:58
    Hey dude not bad at all. Try to pay more attention to the spelling and the him/her.

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    READER 500
    03.04.2005 12:18
    All error in the medium aside, the message was great. This story is awesome, sex is always much better when it has a strong romantic background. This story reminds me of some good ol' days.. keep it up 10/10

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    READER 500
    12.05.2005 03:12
    good story but too many error 8/10

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    READER 500
    12.05.2005 04:18
    Good story, well written; especially for a first try. The story is well thought out, and follows easily. You could try using your word processing pkg to find errors in spelling and grammer before submitting the next story and make it even better. Keep up the work--you have real potential

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    READER 500
    16.05.2005 22:49
    AWESOME! 10 OUT OF FUCKING 10

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    READER 500
    01.06.2005 18:58
    good story write a part 2

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    READER 500
    02.06.2005 04:49
    I am not impressed.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.06.2005 16:31
    That was an awesome story! I'm give it a 10!

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    READER 500
    06.06.2005 00:44
    Good job on a first story. It was really sweet and soft, which is nice for a change. None of this "fuck my nasty asshole daddy" garbage. (Although that can be nice, too)

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    READER 500
    07.06.2005 20:42
    Well done, but work on all the word choice and the conventions on it. way to lead up to the climax . the main reason it was a winner is because of the romance, it wasnt to heavy or just distastefully light.

    overall good job, keep writing just use Microsoft Word

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    READER 500
    13.06.2005 09:26
    Hey good story. The romance in it really helped. It was a little hard to read with some of the errors but other than that it was real good. Keep up the good work.

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    READER 500
    17.06.2005 16:43
    great story, keep up the good work 10/10

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    READER 500
    20.06.2005 09:45
    Great story just a little misspelling.

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    READER 500
    27.06.2005 02:32
    Out of all the storys I have read on here this one is the best. Its the best because it has meaning behind it.... I give it a 100. Your a talented writer. GREAT JOB!

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    READER 500
    07.07.2005 00:06
    Though not perfect, very good writing.

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    READER 500
    07.07.2005 02:14
    keep up the good work u sick fuck(10/10)

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    READER 500
    07.07.2005 02:19
    That was the shit i wish i fuck them hell yeah i would fuck them untill they are dead
    based on a true story bitch

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    READER 500
    07.07.2005 02:19
    that story was so good i had to read it again.....10/10, keep up the good work u little whimpa snapa!!!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    07.07.2005 02:22
    i did it with the before i came up with that idea i should get the criedt a wat are you doing ummmmmmmmmm don't stop i am giong to aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh to be continued

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    READER 500
    07.07.2005 02:22
    IM BACK BITCHES!!!!!!!!!!im tellin u this story is to good to be on this site. this time i give it 20/20!!! its a celebration bitch

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    READER 500
    07.07.2005 02:27
    i be all up in dis story yo. im goin' get me some head right now dawg im out bitches...o i gave this story a 19/10 bitch!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    12.07.2005 18:57
    Dude, That was the best sex story ever. Why in the hell did you put a great story like that along with all this other crap?

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    READER 500
    14.07.2005 14:30
    this was a very good story. you should consider writing a longer, more detailed story and possibly publishing it. i give this story a 10/10. great job.

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    READER 500
    16.07.2005 01:24
    It wasnt a great storty......but.....better than most......i'll give it a 7/10.......try and make a sequl....but longer.....

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    READER 500
    21.07.2005 00:00
    That was the SHITTTTTT!!!!! Dude PLEASE keep writing...

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    READER 500
    31.07.2005 04:11
    goos job man way to go

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    READER 500
    04.08.2005 09:04
    that was the best story ever i hope to read more of them

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    READER 500
    06.08.2005 07:29
    this was the shit please write another one but you need to make it longer and you also need to check your spelling it was alot of mistakes.

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    READER 500
    08.08.2005 00:21
    your story is the best story i have ever read, actually i wish that my first time with my boyfriend be like it. Actually i am concidering mailing it to him. good luck in writer more of these :)

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    READER 500
    08.08.2005 01:34
    that was real sweet next one make it longer : )

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.08.2005 11:32
    Uh Why is this labelled 'romance'? Didn't see anything like that.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.08.2005 14:41
    That was sooo good. You should write another one...A SEQUEL! i absolutly loved the romance.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.08.2005 12:02
    you and I share the same dream, my friend - I wish my first time had been like that....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.08.2005 22:55
    it was okay but you kept on saying he insted of her which made it a little strange but it was still good. just fix spelling and it will be great

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.09.2005 16:38
    Dude, that was awsome. write more stories, fix your spelling mistakes, and make them longer. you got a future ahead of you you lucky bastard.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.09.2005 00:40
    you lucky bastard, is this real??? you should do this kind of work professionally

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.09.2005 22:15
    that was a great story, a few mistakes but we all make them. good job

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.10.2005 19:22
    fuckin best story ever

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.10.2005 14:45
    im 6 and 1/2 inches

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    READER 500
    30.10.2005 18:46
    best
    10

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    READER 500
    08.11.2005 22:47
    im 6 3/4

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    READER 500
    14.11.2005 00:13
    Very nice. As stated, work on your length and spelling, and it would be perfect. It reminds me of my first time... Ahhh the good ol' days.

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    READER 500
    12.12.2005 19:21
    i like guys

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.12.2005 17:05
    it was ok but seriously the "cherry" isn't in the vagina it's the hymen a piece of skin at the opening that gets torn when having sex for the first time.

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    READER 500
    28.12.2005 09:25
    this is a really good story i love it

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    READER 500
    05.01.2006 19:01
    that was really sweet, remided me of the time i first made love to my girlfriend. Content and happy

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    READER 500
    18.01.2006 22:14
    Wonderful story but you cut it off too soon. I think you could have been more descriptive of your orgasm anc culimination at the end. Its lacking a couple of short paragraphs right there and its excellent.. Well done.

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    READER 500
    13.02.2006 19:35
    8=======>

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    READER 500
    24.03.2006 00:56
    nice story, could use some more detail and flavor to it though... really nice though

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.04.2006 23:02
    man this is still my favorite story on this whole damn site, and i have read quite a few....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.06.2006 22:20
    good but no mention of condoms or protection and that almost definately should be a care in the world lol

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    READER 500
    20.06.2006 14:57
    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.06.2006 12:49
    10/10... but no mention to the parents....does this kid live alone

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.06.2006 02:35
    great. Far better than the other crap on this site

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.07.2006 11:50
    UU======>

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.04.2007 20:03
    This was one of the first stories I read on this site.

    Still gives me chills.

    10/10

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    READER 500
    11.06.2007 16:30
    Pretty good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.09.2008 01:35
    very good story. Kinda short but sweet. The sentimentality sounds very heartfelt.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.03.2015 22:13
    Needs work. Proofread or have somebody else do it to clean up the errors. Things like "she put my dick in my mouth" don' t quite work.

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