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Sex games

Lovely Intruder part 2

Author: Slavegirl777

Date: 6 July 2011

Authoritarian, Dark Fantasy, BDSM, Consensual Sex

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If you haven't read the first part of this story then please go and read it!

I found no reason why I should object to his demand, even though I frantically searched for one inside my head. I reluctantly laid myself on my back and hung my head off the side of the bed. I had never given head in this position before and I was scared to try something new with this powerful stranger. As if sensing my nervousness, he said to me, "Don't be scared, little one. I'll go slow." Was this man a mind reader or was my anxiety that obvious upon my expression? Who knew?

He stepped forward with his semi hard cock pointed toward my face and softly told me to open my mouth. My shaky jaw seemed to open on command, without me even thinking about it. He grasped his cock and slowly directed it into my willing mouth. I had to stretch my jaw to let his cock even enter between my teeth. I had never sucked off a man as big as him. His cock smelled good; having the scent of my bathroom soap on it. The aroma calmed me and made my mouth and throat relax more as his cock began to push its way into my open mouth.

I adjusted my head, tilting it down more, so his cock could go into my mouth. This wasn't so bad. It was actually quite exhilarating; having my head hanging off the side made me already get a little woozy. He pushed even further until three inches of his cock was within my warm, wet mouth. I felt his cock head start to stretch my throat and I tried to relax so he could push even further. For some odd reason, I wanted to please him, and I wanted to please him well. He pulled out slowly as I began to suck and flick his cock with my tongue. He moaned as I practically sucked it back inside my throat; pushing myself off the bed slightly so his cock could once again enter my mouth.

He pushed deeper this time, and his cock head was guiding the rest of his cock down the now almost level curve of my throat. I gagged around him and tried to pull myself away, but he had his hands on my shoulders, keeping me in place. Still, I managed to expel myself from his grasp, but he pulled me back towards him before I could even let my throat relax for a second. He pushed my chin down so that my head was off the bed and told me to open my mouth once more. I once again automatically complied and he wasted no time in pushing his cock into my mouth yet again.

I sucked on his cock as it gained slow entrance into the depths of my mouth and the beginnings of my throat, which urged him on further. He kept pushing this time, and made sure he had a strong, firm grasp on me this time so I couldn't pull away again. I lifted my arms to try to push him away, but he snapped a quick and loud "Don't!" at me and my arms fell back next to my sides. I tried to suck in a breath, which made me gag on his cock harder, but this made him give out a very distinct moan in response. "Relax. Stop panicking," I heard him say to me, and I tried so very hard to comply. He just kept pushing. Further and further his cock went into my throat, which now burned from the stretching. A tear started to well up in my eye when I felt his balls tap my nose. He was finally all the way in.

It wouldn't have been that horrible had he not stayed in that position. "I'm going to count to 25 and then I'm going to pull out," he said to me. He began slowly, ever so slowly, counting. I felt like I was going to pass out and with all the blood rushed to my head, the feeling hurt. My head throbbed and I tried to unsuccessfully get away somehow, but he kept counting and kept me still. When he reached 24, I said a silent 'thank you' to an unknown source, and when he reached 25, he leaned down over me very quickly, spread my pussy lips with his fingers, and flicked my clit with his hot tongue just once. I jumped and it made my throat gag around his cock yet again; by the time he had reached 25, I had gotten used to it being in my throat and was no longer in a panic. He slowly pulled his cock out and I leaned my head up and coughed and grasped my throat with my hands. It felt like I had been underwater for several minutes, and then felt an electric shock before I was lifted up to the surface that was unreachable to me before. "No. Back down," he said to me, and he pulled my head back down. "I'm doing it again," he added. I didn't want him to do that again; it burned my throat and made my head pound. But somehow when he pushed my head down, my mouth opened again, willing to accept the intrusion a second time.

I took a deep breath as he pushed his cock into my throat again. It didn't take nearly as long to get it all the way into my throat as it had before, but still took a reasonable amount of time, considering I was holding my breath. When he was all the way in, I heard him say almost effortlessly, "I'm counting to 50 this time." I panicked again and tried desperately to pull away, but it seemed to use up more of my energy that way, and made the time go by even slower. When I finally relaxed, he was already past 20, and making his way to 30. When he reached 40, he leaned down over me again (which made his cock press even further into my throat) and parted my pussy lips again. He licked up and down my pussy and flicked my clit exactly five times, each time making me shudder and gag on his cock again. "48...49...50," he said. On 50, he bit down on my clit, very hard, and I arched my back up into his mouth.

He leaned up and said, "Very good. Once more, pet." It was as if he was training me for something. I relaxed my throat and told myself as he begun to push inside me that I was just going to not let it get to me. I knew he was going to count over 50 and I knew that I could handle it if I would just remain calm. When he was finally inside me, I expected the number to increase significantly, but it only went up a small amount. "I'm counting to 60, but I'm doing something different this time," he said. Something different? What could he possibly mean? I soon found out.

He counted to ten without change. He just stood there and stared down at me as he had before. After ten, he started to lean forward. I thought, 'Oh, he's just going to lick my pussy like before. Okay.' but I realized that I wasn't correct. He leaned forward enough to reach his hand comfortably forward and rub my clit with his fingers. I felt his cock start to move however; it moved out slightly. Then I noticed it push in again all the way. He pulled out again, just ever so slightly, and then pushed in. He began a steady rhythm; only going about half an inch out of my throat each time. He increased his speed and pulled out a little bit more than before after he reached 20. After every multiple of ten he reached, he increased his speed and the length he took out of my throat as well. His fingers started to rub my clit faster and faster; increasing speed with the rhythm of his cock. By the time he had gotten to 60 he had faded away in his verbal counting and I had forgotten he was still supposed to be counting.

Not after too long though, he pulled out all the way to get a breath, and let go of my throbbing clit. He entered his cock into my mouth again after he saw me take a quick breath, and begun to pound me as fast as he had before. He didn't stop to give me another breath for a long time after that, and by the time he had, I was squirming and writhing beneath him. I tried to focus on sucking on his cock; as I knew that was the whole reason for this anyway.

Harder and harder he pounded into my throat, now not even resisting his huge his cock. I managed to gain a quick few breaths once every minute or so, but that was all. He was standing straight above me, pinching my nipples with his palms as he kept thrusting deeper and deeper it seemed into my open throat. I squirmed under him more, but this time out of pleasure. The friction in and burning in my throat along with the pinching of my nipples and all the blood rushing to my head sent me into another place I had never been before. I didn't even notice that I had started to push myself off the bed slightly to meet his thrusts.

"Suck harder, little one," he said. "Make me cum baby." I sucked his cock harder as he pushed deeper and deeper into my throat. "Mmm, just a little longer," he said. I brought my hand up above my head and grasped the base of his cock. I moved my hand up and down on his hard shaft and pulsed my grip around it as it slid easily in and out of my hand. Still fucking my mouth hard and fast with his cock, I began to feel his orgasm surface. He groaned as I felt the cum go through his shaft and shoot into my throat. He mumbled something under his breath as he slowly pulled his cock out of my mouth, sticky with his cum and my saliva. I swallowed all I could and sat up to swallow the rest.

"That's it baby, sit up. Now that I've gotten you warmed up, I want you to prepare yourself for a surprise. I'll be right back. Do not turn around."

I heard him leave my bedroom and then I heard some soft talking outside my closed door. Before I could figure out why he was talking to himself, I heard the door open. I resisted the urge to turn around.

"Now, stand up, love. Close your eyes." I stood up, with my eyes closed and turned to face his voice. I felt a pair of hands on my breasts and felt lips close over mine. I drowned into the kiss and was lost within the lust that was rushing through my body when suddenly I felt a hand slap my ass. I pulled from the kiss and backed into another person. It turned out that the man I was kissing was a new man that I hadn't seen before, and I had fallen into the arms of my previous midnight stranger.

"I'd like you to meet my friend, Will. He decided he wanted to join us in our escapade." I opened my mouth to argue; I had never been in a threesome before. I felt the new man's lips close over mine again. His hands dropped from my breasts and rose up to wrap around my neck. I tried to back out of the kiss, but was pushed back into it by Sir. "No, little one. You're to treat him with as much respect as you have me. But I must warn you, he is not as gentle as I. You might as well enjoy it," he said, in a matter-of-fact tone. Will had let go of my neck and had broken the kiss to move down to my neck. He sucked on my neck and bit on my earlobe as Sir reached under me to find my asshole. I felt Will lower his hand also, searching for my pussy. "Spread your legs," I heard Will tell me. I felt like I had no choice but to comply.

I felt Will and Sir reach their different destinations almost at the same time. I felt Sir dip a finger down into my pussy before retreating back to my asshole, still sore from earlier. He slowly inserted his finger into my asshole, but just a little, before he pulled it out again. Just as Sir began to tease and play with my asshole, Will found my clit and began rubbing on it fiercely. I felt the two men masturbating me and it felt so wonderful. I couldn't imagine why I had never tried this out before.

Sir pushed his finger further into my asshole as two of Will's fingers found entrance into my pussy. He shoved them into my hole violently, and I realized what Sir meant by he was not as gentle. He was not near as gentle. They began an alternating rhythm, and instead of going the same speed, Will went almost exactly twice as fast as Sir did with his fingers. Sir reached his other hand around to play with my nipple, and Will rested his other hand on my other nipple. I could tell they had done this before. I was approaching orgasm faster than I ever had before. I had four different rhythms going on all over my body and couldn't focus on just one.

"Ah, oh my god! Harder!" I found myself screaming at the two men as I remembered that they were originally here to violate my body; but I didn't care. I was too lost in my current passion to care. I took sharp intakes of breath as they pounded my ass and my pussy faster and pinched and twisted my nipples harder. It wasn't another ten seconds before I came violently on their hands. Sir caught me when I fell back into his arms and whispered into my ear, "Okay baby, now let's see how you handle two cocks." My eyes went wide, even though I was still trying to catch my breath from my powerful orgasm.

"N-n-no! I've never been with two guys at once. I won't do it!" I found myself objecting. Why I was objecting, I didn't know, because I wanted it so badly. But I guess my common sense came rushing back to me once my passion had for the most part subsided. Still, I found myself being pulled towards the bed and thrown on top of it. I looked up at the two men before me, cocks hard as rocks, and lust in their eyes. There was no way I could handle two men at once, but I was going to be forced to anyway. I saw Sir pick up the ropes from the floor and I tried to scramble off the bed, in hopes to maybe get free. I didn't want to be fucked by two men and I most certainly didn't want to be tied up while doing so either.

"No! Please! Don't tie me up again!" I screamed at Sir, tears gathering in my eyes.

"Do as we say and I won't," he said. I nodded my head in agreement and heard Will say, "Okay then, get back onto the bed. I haven't had a turn to use you yet..."

To be continued...


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  • luminescencethesadist
    06.07.2011 22:00
    love this keep up the good work ;)

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  • luminescencethesadist
    06.07.2011 22:01
    love this keep up the good work ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.10.2011 22:02
    fuckin beautiful < 3

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  • maryjanneexx
    23.11.2011 23:45
    Mmmm.. made me cum so hard

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2012 17:47
    Mmmmmmm it's coming. I love a good clit rub topped with a G spot rub oh my god! Nipple sucking and playful bites n nibbles OH GOD I M A- cumming!!! Keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 09:58
    liked both stories this one a little short though

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 10:17
    Good writing ability. Be sure and have someone proof-read your stories before submission. I caught only one grammatical error. You wrote "...Dad had abandon us for..." should have been "abandoned".

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 10:33
    i am not an expert, but I do like reading good stories and I liked this one thanks

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 12:01
    Great story. Can't wait for more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 14:28
    These cliffhangers are killing me man. Other than that this is great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 14:41
    Well you should make the story longer in each chapter other than that its a good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 16:19
    fab story can't wait fir next installment...

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 17:44
    Well I have read many stories, and this one seams to be very promising.
    Keep up the good work :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 17:44
    Well I have read many stories, and this one seams to be very promising.
    Keep up the good work :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 23:48
    hey I think your stories have been very good.

    Please write more parts.
    Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 01:50
    LMS, this continues your very good writing skills. Your ability to tie the loose ends all together to make the story more interesting. The suspense of the sex parts are almoast forgotten, and given over to the suspense of the actual story and it's content. WOW!!

    Art

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 21:49
    LMS, I have read most of your stories and I love them. I always rate them positively and comment. I just dont have an account but for the time being call me Echo. That is a penname I use every now and then.

    Anyway, your writing skills are extremely good, to the point you make a sex story look like beautiful art and make me horny at the same time. I really hope you update the next part soon because I cant wait to read about their first time.

    Excellent job and hopefully see you soo.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2012 15:00
    The 3rd and final chapter is posted. I left this message there...


    Okay Guys... That's it for me. Someone on here doesn't want my stories to be read. He is voting neg repeatedly and in less than 2 minutes. Since I can't get any help from the rest of you, I'll simply say... So Long......

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2012 23:32
    I imagine it can be very frustrating to do all this work and not receive feedback either way. The story is interesting and plays out well. Couple of small suggestions. First, develop the characters and their relationship with each other and other people to show how they are close and why as well as showing how they relate to others while in this relationship. Second, watch your grammar/spelling, when you run into missing or incorrect words, it can stop the flow of the story, I really do enjoy the writing though. Thanks!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2012 11:18
    You shaved her pussy. Negative grade.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2012 15:35
    Awesome really interestimg

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2012 23:06
    Don't worry about these negative ratings and comments from jealous assholes. You write very well and I have learned to just skip over any spelling etc. errors (on all writers, not just you as you don't have many mistakes). I try to give you a positive rating and there have been too many for today so I can't get in. This is my second favorite type of incest story, of course mom/son is the favorite then brother/sister comes second. Please keep writing, most of us like your work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2012 10:11
    I hate how u have to wait until the third chapter to read the fuck! And then u trying to get everyone to like ur writing? If ur story's are shit how u expect ppl to like them?

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2012 05:33
    Please keep going. This was another great story. People are too lazy to register and leave a comment. Thank you for your creativity and your time

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2012 02:42
    you are most definitely my favorite writer please dont quit

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  • winddancer
    18.06.2013 23:07
    I like where you are taking this story. The relationship between brother and sister could be expanded a bit but it is still a good story. Thanks for the hard work and for sharing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2013 12:58
    I love your story please continue.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.01.2014 21:17
    USE PARAGRAPHS ASSHOLE AS IS IT IS WAY TO HARD TO TRY AND READ THIS SHIT. EITHER DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL, AND THIS IS FAR FROM RIGHT.

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    28.02.2014 13:15
    1gpgPj Say, you got a nice blog. Really Great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2014 03:59
    Great story man loved it -- the juggla

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2014 22:41
    Liked it a lot keep up great work! Please make stories longer though.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.01.2015 18:11
    Very nice maby her friend with long blonde hair will give her a handjob too

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.01.2015 18:11
    Give him not her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.03.2015 00:17
    I have read every one of your stories and you are by far the best writer on here, keep writing :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2015 11:25
    I love it

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  • Chaso4469
    11.05.2015 16:58
    Keep on with this story, and maybe "K" will join in at a later date, after you and "C" have completed your introduction to the ways of pleasing a women. Then you can use them on "K"!!!! 8/10

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  • tlc0369
    11.05.2015 23:09
    Please continue! I have you save as a favorite and will check back often!

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  • naenaegirl
    12.05.2015 15:11
    please keep the story going I can see me as c in 20 years

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  • luvsumcameltoe
    12.05.2015 16:29
    Thanks for the comments - I'll post more shortly

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  • luvsumcameltoe
    13.05.2015 01:55
    Parts 3 and 4 just posted. Enjoy!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2015 04:06
    Vivid and exciting, but far too short. Your earlier stories were longer with better character development which adds greatly to how convincing they are. Don't worry about receiving encouragement. Write because you want to write (or have to write) and don't hold back. I'd love to read more of your stuff. I watch for your pen name and read everything you publish on this site. I'd read anything you took the time to write. You're far better than you know. Pierre isn't a G.D. painter--Pierre is an artiste!

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  • zl00pedragl0ver
    13.07.2015 14:54
    I have a similar fantasy involving my fetish .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.12.2015 17:19
    Here would be my two cents, first off if I come off as "that guy" I apologize in advance, I don't mean to in the least! I do write honestly though so take this as caring criticism from someone just looking to help you in your hobby. No down to the info you want. The first part of this story was good, well actually pretty damn good, good plot, good length, good development. This story had problems with length it was about 10 minuet read, the other was a good 15-20, perfect for a good sized chapter. Also I would love to see more of the characters personality come into play, really round them out in your writing in a part 2, part 1 s to hook the reader, part to is the meat of the story and part 3 to wrap it up and send the reader off with a great memory or lesson or in this case orgasm. Your writing is good and I'd love to see this story have a sequel! Maybe they become parents or somthing, think of all the plot lines you could go with! Thank you for your work and don't stop writing! -B-

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.01.2016 16:00
    I love this too short story. I want my daddy to be my first though. I'm n






    t

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  • Frgnut
    08.02.2016 22:21
    Way to keep us coming back.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.02.2016 01:23
    You write incredibly well! Even as short as your stories are, you build visions that are real and palpable. I know you have kept writing because I look for your work first! Do not stop now, please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2016 18:02
    good story, keep going.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2016 22:03
    Great story hope you can muster up the next chapter this is one of the best stories I have read thus far and I hope to write ones like this in the future.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2016 18:15
    Great writing Love it Keep going Would love to have a sister to play with

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2016 04:05
    Well done. Very sexy. Being an only child I only wish I were able to have experienced these things myself

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.10.2016 12:12
    I'm boiling

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2016 02:29
    You have talent for writing stories. This is a great one. Keep writing. It makes me wish I was younger and a sister I could love.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2017 03:47
    "now fuck me", can't wait for the next installment

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  • Worm+Crudd
    15.09.2019 19:28
    One of the better writers on this site. Full marks.

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  • Doozy+woof+Hunter
    13.12.2020 17:53
    This is great writing!!

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  • jack+simpson
    05.04.2022 10:56
    Great story and writing! Cannot wait to read the remaining stories. Thank You!

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