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My Brother's Wife

Author: Otis

Date: 6 November 2004

Anal, Diary, Consensual Sex, Incest

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My Brother's Wife
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It's funny that anyone should think me a hero, especially my brother and his wife just because I fucked her a week after the two of them started dating.

Mona is not a moaner. She's more of a screamer, and never the least bit hesitant to let the whole block know it when she's having a climax. The next door neighbors know exactly how many orgasms she's had the night before. Some of the women don't like it. Some do because it seems to make their own husbands more interested. Of course they're mostly interested in Mona. But since they can't have her they take out their lust on their happy wives.

Sal is my twin brother. Most girls find him attractive, even now that he's married. He's six foot tall, dark, handsome and twenty-eight. He's fourty minutes older than me. But we're not identical twins. I'm much better looking. And Mona is such a knockout you wonder what she'd see in either of us. Then again, there's probably not a man in the world that could match up to her looks. And by the way, did I tell you she's also unbelievably sexy?

You wonder why such a sex goddess would let herself be tied down to one man. And perhaps the wrong man at that, since we all know she fell in love with me first. But I have this allergy to the word marriage. I don't ever intend to let myself be tied down to one woman, even the most beautiful Helen the world had ever seen. Anyway, Sal was madly in love with her so why should I break my promise to myself and make life miserable for all three of us? Actually, maybe I'll get married in my fourties, to some georgeous twenty year old. We'll wait and see on that one.

Some men get married because they get fucked more regularly. Some get married because they're actually in love. Sal had both reasons. He knows, of course, that Mona had many lovers before him, including his baby brother. And he knows that she often strays maybe just to see if the equipment still functions as well in different environments. But she remains faithful in the ways that matter to him. Like me Mona has too much love inside her to confine it to just one person of the opposite sex. With Sal she's found the perfect situation, a man she can be happily married to while still having all the sex on the side she wants. And she keeps Sal's pecker so happy that I don't think he even wants to look at other women. God. When I'm within a hundred miles of her I can't think about other women either. Which is why I've stayed away for two years since their marriage. If I lived in Brazil, we'd collapse into a three way marriage, with Mona perhaps dropping one of her extra lovers to make time for me. Or maybe not. She seems to be able to satisfy some large undetermined number of male erections completely.

If I stayed in Brazil I'd just become her second husband instead of remaining the "Playboy of Europe". OK, maybe I'm not rich enough to rate "Playboy", the kind they write about in the papers. But at twenty-eight I'm probably a lot more of a stud then the rich old farts. Girls hang around me because they want my prick, not my money. Fortunately I do have enough money so that I don't have to waste my life making it. Which leaves me 24/7 for making love. It was hard leaving my little self supporting Harem in France to come to Brazil. The girls even promised to stay together, keep house and not fly off to their respective countries of orgin as long as I didn't stay away too long. Anyway, most of them had carreer jobs which kept them happy and out of my hair during much of the day.

Seven is really too much for any man, even me. I hadn't wanted that many full time lovers. But one thing led to another as it usually does. In most cases, the last four in particular, a girl friend from back home wanted to visit one of my girls, and naturally needed a place to stay. The house has plenty of space. Sometimes they go home after a while. But they always want to sample the resident stud first. Four of them never left. Three was managable, seven isn't. I encourage them to get jobs not because we need money but because it lets them do something with their excess time. I'm not a possessive man. I have more than I can handle. But I do have this rule that any girl who wants to live with me doesn't fuck guys outside of my house. They can fuck each other or friends I bring home. I'm concerned about health issues. But it makes the girls pretty horny and puts this demand on my time.

After two years I finally gave in to Mona and Sal's repeated invitations, with a definite return date set. I'd even bought a round trip ticket. I knew how easy it would be to fall into Mona's spell and I wanted my exit strategy planned before letting my dick come anywhere near the minx. So with everything set, I got on the plane dreaming about the nicest pussy on seven continents. I normally satisfy seven girls. Yet Mona could more than satisfy me, probably seven of me. I'm not exaggering when I say she's sexy.

I could write a lot about this visit. Sal and I fucked the shit out of her several times a day. She likes DP. Loves it I think. I don't know who was in her ass more but mostly we switch places frequently. You can't say things about Mona like "she loves anal" because she loves everything with more ethusiasm than other women like anything. Mostly it seems like she loves whatever you love. But the minute you start getting repetitive she comes up with a suggestion that blows your socks off. And suddenly you discover some new thing you love! Every day, usually twice a day, she'd leave Sal and I wiped out, and go see some of her other lovers. I don't know if she really needs that much sex or just feels compassion for all these men who can't live without her. Four years earlier she was probably just as sexy. But I don't think she had this well established a pool of available erections she felt she had to service. I think married life has proved very good for her sex life! Anyway, it was that time four years ago that I want to talk about, not this icredible sex vacation I had last month.

Four years ago I was twenty-four, just getting the feel of Europe. Sal was still living in the states actually trying to earn money instead of just enjoying it. With the money dad had left us, this was sort of a hobby with him. So he meets this girl a few years younger, who'd moved from Italy to try her hand, or I should say pussy, in the porn movie industry. Porn is of better quality in France and England, but there's a lot of cheap stuff coming out of California and almost nothing happening in Italy. To get in front of the cameras the easiest place to do it is West Coast USA. You won't get paid much and probably won't become a star, even in porn. But if getting naked in front of some cameras and a lot of people, then spreading your thighs so this specimen of a cock can abuse your orifices, then your best chance to fulfill your dream is in Hollywood. Or nearby since the low budget outfits usually move further out where they can rent an empty house a lot cheaper than a real sound stage. The furniture you see is usually cheap or rented or both.

Mona tells us she always had the right attitude. But about a year in the business and hanging around with these people refined her knowledge and flexibility. After a while it got boring so she decided to find a rich husband. She decided Sal was a good compromise, rich enough and much younger than she'd expected. Mona hadn't told him she'd been a porn star. She would have been lying anyway. She'd gotten fucked plenty of times by plenty of big studs. But she'd never even rated the title starlet. I think the problem was that she was just too good looking. She looks like the type of female you want to worship. It's hard to imagine the goddess would actual consent to have sex with you. Maybe I'm not being objective. After having my dick inside her I know how wonderful that feels. But the male's pleasure isn't that obvious or interesting to the audience. The other reason Mona probably didn't make it big was, I think, because she was having too much fun. Rather than fight for better billings she was content to just accept the sex she was getting. The producers know that many of the girls can be had for almost nothing as long as you let them get fucked good. So why should they offer these girls any more?

She'd been East for several months living off modest savings, establishing new ties independent of the porn industry, making herself look like an Italian debutante which she sort of was if you ignore that year in LA. She met Sal through a friend of a friend, a very respectable introduction. It was lust at first sight for both of them, and for Sal, love about a minute later. Her good girl act was not only unnecessary but also much too successful. Sal wanted her in the worst way and was more than willing to make it official first if that's what it was going to take to get her into his bed. Mona couldn't believe a man wouldn't fuck her the minute she indicated it would be less than rape. She was wondering if this man who seemed so infatuated with her wasn't also gay. Maybe he just wanted an attractive wife, not a sex partner. Maybe she should go check out some of the less attractive, older men who were obviously horny.

And then yours truely, the hero, stepped into the picture.

I'd showed up about a week after he started courting Mona. What a silly, old fashioned term. Sal was about the only man in the 21st century "courting" anyone, and Mona was getting tired of it. I didn't care about their relationship. For me it was lust at first sight and second and forever. I suppose I also love Mona. She's a nice person and easy to love. But what gets my dick going is her incredible body and matching attitude. Of course her attitude was being hidden, at least from Sal. Moan was starting to let it show a bit, intentionally, but he'd already been blinded by first impressions.

The truth is I didn't know they hadn't had sex yet. I couldn't have even imagined my horny brother not fucking her the minute she said ok, which her body language obviously did. It was almost enough to make me change my marriage status. But I was safe there. There is only one Mona and my brother had her. Oh so I thought. I never dreamed she was about to leave off this hopeless non-affair. When I walked in the TV room there was no light on other than the screen. I could see her beautiful features in the blue light. Without thought I stood behind her looking down at her beauty. She kept watching the TV and I mistakenly assumed that a man's presence was of little importance to her. She must assume I'm Sal because she wasn't turning around. I moved foward against her so that the back of her head pressed against my stomach. I put my hands on her shoulder, then slid them down the front of her blouse, cupping her breasts. Her bra was so sheer that I could feel her nipples through both layers. She closed her eyes in pleasure waiting for me to do whatever else I wanted. Obviously she and Sal were intimate as one would expect.

Her closed eyes gave me an inspiration. I leaned over her, reached the remote, and turned off the TV, instantly plunging the room into complete darkness. I pressed the vision of loveliness, now invisible, down on the couch indicating that I wanted her in a horizontal position. It took me a few seconds to make my way around the back of the couch, loosing some of my clothes in the process. When I got into position by feel I reached down trying to find her and encountered a hip, naked. With this orientation I knew where to find her tits. They too were naked. Holy shit! She'd removed every stitch of clothing in the time I undid my belt. This was too good to be true. I knew my voice sounded much like Sal's and I was only a few inches taller. I decided I'd talk as little as possible and try to keep up the masquerade as long as possible, getting as far as possible into this devine and very sexy goddess. Now that I knew she was already naked, I quickly took off the rest of my clothes.

Shit, Sal must be getting the best fucking a man ever got!

She moved under me and into me like the godess of sex she was. Mona's vagina was unimaginably sweet feeling. We didn't do any foreplay there in the dark. I just suddenly felt this inviting depression feeling around for my erection and suddenly it had me, and almost immediately had me well inside her, fully inside her. Like a goddess, Mona can be any woman. She can accomodate any size man. A tiny man will find her hole small and exciting. A large man like me will find it barely adaquate and exciting. The largest man in the world will find it twice as big and deep and still barely adaquate and very exciting. Somehow her throat and anus work the same way. It's not possible. It's just magic. One time Sal and I double fucked her vagina. A few minutes later, my next time alone in there in that place that's heaven on earth, she felt just as tight. In other words, barely big enough and very exciting.

"Oh god you feel good. I've wanted so much to feel you inside me."

Christ? She must know it's me and not Sal! Yet she wants me anyhow. What a hot chick! I've always wanted a girl who could be loyal without having to be monogomous. After all, you can't DP your girlfriend if she won't do it with another guy. Sal had apparently found a dream girl in spirt as well as looks.

"I've wanted you all week!"

Holy shit! She still thinks I'm Sal. I only met her an hour ago. But that means my stupid brother doesn't know what he's missing. Well, at least one boy in the family was going to take full advantage of what this girl was offering. I began fucking her as hard as I could, not trying to pretend I was Sal or me. Not trying to pretend anything. This was real, the best fuck since they invented bisexual species!

I was wrong, of course. No man could take full advantage of what Mona has to offer in one session. Sal's been fucking her almost continuously for about four years and can only guess how much more she has to offer. The surprises are still coming in.

Mona doesn't have to lose control to become the wanton slut that most women never quite become even for a few seconds during orgasm. But when sex gets this good I'm over the hill. I felt myself hammering away inside her. I would have been fucking the goddamn pillow I was so excited, just smelling her. But Mona always made sure she got the benifit of my efforts. What a way to fuck. Mona's first orgasm hurt my eardrums. I'd never had a girl scream at the top of her lungs right next to my head. Not that I wanted her to stop. Some pains are pure pleasure. But it did let everyone in the house know that some female was getting screwed and really, really liking it. The catering people who were cleaning up, probably acted like there was nothing happening. The remaining guests allowed some snickering, and Sal decided he should investigate, since it was his house. He quickly realized that Mona and I were the two not accounted for. So bro waited outside patiently, letting me have my climax and Mona about three more, before entering and turning on the lights.

"Oh!" she said calmly acknowledging that she now realized the cume in her pussy wasn't Sal's. Mona leaned up into an almost sitting position, turned toward the door to see who had entered, and smiled at Sal. My dick was still stuck inside her giving her the last of my seed. Mona seemed in no hurry to let me extract myself, nor did I want to, even with Sal standing there. I felt her cunt give me several playful and very erotic tweaks. I now knew there actually was a woman who could do this.

And then she said to him:

"If you're anywhere near as good at this as your brother I hope you hurry up and propose to me. I can hardly wait. But do we have to wait until we're married?"


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    09.11.2004 20:56
    When I read "I'm much better looking" I stopped reading.

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    30.01.2005 18:39
    hot sex but too.... i dont know.... needs more detail, yes detail

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    30.01.2005 22:59
    the onily problem with your story is a dog onily comes after he has formed a knot and then when it is reducing in size

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    READER 500
    31.01.2005 03:54
    great

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    31.01.2005 06:53
    good story need #2

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    31.01.2005 12:14
    you shouldnt be writing anymore stories.. what are you? a nine year old schoolgirl... learn to spell... and obviously u dont know anything about sex either....

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    READER 500
    01.02.2005 01:59
    he's anywhere from 18-20 one could guess. Shes a senior and he's supposed to be a year older

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    READER 500
    01.02.2005 16:03
    NO kid has a nine inch cock when it is unerected , lots of spelling mistakes but your gettin the right idea just need to practice 5/10

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    READER 500
    01.02.2005 18:04
    MAYBE MOM OR DAD COULD CATCH HER WITH HER BROTHER & TED. MAYBE THE FOLK COULD JOIN IN.

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    READER 500
    02.02.2005 07:38
    ok sum idoits dont know how to read hes not 11 thats when he started to like her . but for the storie it was preety god but as others commented it needs a lil more detial

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    READER 500
    03.02.2005 23:10
    great story u need 2 write another 1 8/10

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    07.02.2005 03:46
    That was a good story, What do they expect, its a first, Try your hand at number two, don't worry to much about some of those remarks, Doubt they could do better ??, But the spelling remarks yeah for sure take good notice, re-read many times before you submit it !! Otherwise, yeah very good.

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    15.02.2005 06:15
    it's the education level. hearing a stroy told by someone less educated than me is annoying.When is the last time you asked a homeless person for directions? sorry katie, but for anyone over 16, you don't know the way

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    16.02.2005 21:57
    Hey Jack.. i have to agree tho i got a bit father then you, i my self am a wirtter and i dont like bashing other writters but damn sir your a bit too cocky for your own good

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    18.02.2005 01:50
    not worth a comment.

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    17.03.2005 12:56
    Good for your first story Katie. I enjoyed it. Made me horny too.

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    20.03.2005 06:06
    Esoteric is right, but I see the potential.i say 7/10, after giving it a 10/10 :-) i want to see sequal

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    04.04.2005 12:15
    what the hell? come on you can write better than this. 5/10

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    10.04.2005 07:16
    OK...what about describing in painful detail the humiliation she felt sticking her mouth her dog's legs and sucking his dick until he spurted his sticky dog cum in her mouth. Her skin must have crawled with embarassment when she realized she had sucked a dog's dick...LOL! How about the shame from fucking her brother just to keep him quiet? How about some of her perverse fantasies about being whipped in front of a group of horny boys or made to suck off the swimming team?

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    20.04.2005 13:58
    it is very good but need more of it , yes make a sequel or several

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    25.04.2005 04:47
    Great story Katie keep writting don't worry about those who give you negitive reply's

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    10.05.2005 09:53
    Good story, write more

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    14.05.2005 03:07
    good, but cut back on the noises.

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    READER 500
    17.05.2005 05:13
    it was good and all.. but you know.. when u lose ur virginity no matter how small the guys dick is.. unless its a kid. it will hurt.. so when you lose ur virginity and realize this then you may write another. until then i suggest you think about this one and improving it. just for your own self satisfaction. and like said before.. not as many sounds. keep it to the feelings that they are having inside more then moaning every few seconds outside. but it was a good story in terms of story line/plot.

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    22.05.2005 21:17
    yo man u made me masterbed make a video out of it ask ur brro to help u to make a video

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    28.05.2005 15:55
    write more

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    READER 500
    30.05.2005 20:31
    your spelling sucks and you don't know a
    bloody thing about a woman having sex with
    a dog, but it were'nt all that bad!!!

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    READER 500
    05.06.2005 17:01
    it was good, but have the dad catch kristy and her brother next time

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    06.06.2005 00:09
    iteresting....10/10

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    23.06.2005 07:15
    YOU SUCK AT WRITING!!! you should be burned to death

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    30.06.2005 13:54
    i liked the story dont worry about negitive comments i agree with rabbyboy keep writeing but try to make it longer and more detailed and cute down on the sounds

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    12.07.2005 17:41
    its prety good(dont like the dog part) but its beter thn lots iv read lol cant wate till part 2

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    15.07.2005 04:32
    spell checker?

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    READER 500
    21.08.2005 23:44
    Listen.. first off... have you ever even fucked a bloody dog before???! jesus! Uu didnt even talk about how the dogs dont have balls havent you u ever heard of nutering?? dumbassz!! you are obviously an inexperienced zoophile, and either dont know what youre talking about or are trying too hard to please. try to make youur noises more realistic.
    heres some personal advice: consider this: ted, in a jelousuus dog rage comes through the doors, bites the brother, and after shaking hands (paw), proceeds to double team the sister, who shits on the dog. Im also thinking, ted gets pink, phil gets stink. but...when will ted get the stink? sequel? yes!
    if you (or anyone wants to discuuss this topic more) please contact: 6165661022 and ask for Tony. Im in the US

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    07.09.2005 13:52
    filthy bastard youve got 2 get yr head checked u dirty dog

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    10.09.2005 04:37
    corpse!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    23.09.2005 18:03
    Dlo research before you write. Doge get hung up in the female. You did not mention this little fact.

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    23.10.2005 23:31
    Good story, I enjoyed it. Beastiality really gets me turned on heh 17/10

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    30.10.2005 18:01
    GREAT STORY--KEEP THEM CUMING

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    12.11.2005 01:58
    11-year-olds just shouldn't write erotica..didn't you learn any spelling or grammar in 3rd grade, or were you too busy jacking off to Sparky?

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    22.11.2005 04:43
    Hey midnight angel....fuck-you!!!!

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    READER 500
    16.12.2005 09:17
    erm. its obvious you're like 9. shit story, shit plot...

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    READER 500
    06.01.2006 22:00
    while not very realistic, ive read much worse stories... ill read the sequal if u write 1.. 8/10

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    11.01.2006 21:38
    good girl dont mind what others say ive been down that road ,its great go go baby loves dog sex god blessyou

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    19.01.2006 11:50
    hinky dinky; Poor story,dogs do like to fuck.I know all about it.I'm 15,My dog has been fucking me damn near every day.The first time he damn near killed me when he got his knot in.Now he gets it in me every time,I love it.why don't you try it and see for your self

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    READER 500
    12.02.2006 01:30
    i kinda liked it 7/10

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    23.02.2006 00:27
    i give it a 10/10

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    05.03.2006 15:36

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    21.04.2006 19:35
    how old are you? learn some writing skills.

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    READER 500
    11.05.2006 23:01
    1o/1o i think it was realy good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.05.2006 23:50
    Who names their dog Ted? Honestly.

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    30.05.2006 14:12
    This story wa fucking gay....how old are you....like 7? I was turned on about the dogs but when Philip came in....well he totlayy turned me of!

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    READER 500
    06.06.2006 12:28
    buat apa puke

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    06.07.2006 23:59
    what kinda krap was that way to much oooohhh yeah ted and ohhh krisy,

    i mean omg that was like vevery line of it

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    READER 500
    18.08.2006 08:02
    ...It was so-so

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    READER 500
    21.08.2006 22:15
    Sucked

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  • READER
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    28.08.2006 21:12
    well Katie, where are the new stories? With a little work you could have a good series here.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.09.2006 02:51
    not too bad but focus more on the dog

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.09.2006 00:40
    sick fuck

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    01.11.2006 23:25
    this story screams "amateur" im usally turned on, but this was bland an over dramatic. 4/10

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    08.11.2006 17:06
    what tha ....
    holy crap what a shit...

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    21.12.2006 00:36
    Get someone to edit your stories do you know how to spell?

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    READER 500
    16.02.2007 23:32
    gay

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    READER 500
    18.02.2007 06:10
    good shit

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    READER 500
    13.03.2007 21:03
    i HAVE TO GET ME A BIG DOG AND TRY IT IT SOUNDS LIKE FUN I'V SEEN MY FRIENDS DOGS COK HARD AND ITS B I G AT LEAST 10 INCHES GOD I WOULD LIKE A COCK LIKE THAT IN ME

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2007 08:00
    Learn how to spell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2007 12:33
    what a bad shitty story ... you had better learn spelling punctuatin grammar and do not through up shit everywhere...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2007 15:17
    can't you fucking spell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2007 19:39
    k you need to learn to spell and check your work..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2007 21:59
    dont make your stories written in bold it just makes it harder to read

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2007 02:52
    shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.03.2007 02:15
    The part before the neighbour was good- the last one was crap! - also please check your spelling

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2007 07:56
    Piss poor, please give up now, you won't ever get better.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2007 09:06
    wtf????????????????????????...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2007 09:13
    This sounds almost exactly like what happened to me last week. How real!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.04.2007 06:18
    i must be stupid because i did not understand this shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2007 22:16
    Spell check please!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.04.2007 22:37
    *runs away like a lil milk bitch* xD

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.05.2007 23:36
    this really is the greatest shit anyboby ever wrote, boring, unrealistic and drunk......

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.06.2007 18:25
    Spelling the shits story also

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2007 16:50
    haha this is the most erratic, senseless, repetitive and insane story i've ever read. i love it!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.07.2007 19:15
    this is so fucking stupid....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.07.2007 22:53
    lisn faggits i didnt post this and wen i fing out who the fak did this he or she is dead

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.08.2007 14:16
    dumb

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.08.2007 23:14
    wtf no sex? u suck

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.10.2007 00:08
    im not trying to be mean but try to spell it better, make it a little longer, and focuse more on the brother than the dog, i give it a 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.11.2007 08:40
    (9 comments)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.12.2007 22:36
    This could have been a good story but it is evident Katie has never been fucked by a dog. She didn't mention his knot that would have swelled up inside her pussy. Also a dog fucks like a rabbit until the knot swells and the stops and just shoots his load.
    I know because I let my dogs fuck my hungry pussy all the time. A 5 that could have been a 9

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.01.2008 15:58
    that is shit she got fucked by a dog that just made me stop being horny

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.04.2008 21:02
    The spelling could have been better . And what happened to the anal.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.04.2008 08:13
    that was the best storryevs u got me so horny not funny

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  • i+found+a+pen
    22.08.2008 23:47
    it was good i liked the dog part i want a dog cock in my ass so bad

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  • camjoeone
    05.09.2008 15:13
    makes me wish i had a sister

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2008 02:48
    Ok, ur story needs a lot of work. the plot is a little scattered. the spelling errors are too many to count, and your grammar and sentence structure needs fixing. I dont know if english is ur first language. that would be the only thing that would explain how poorly this is written. It also would help if u didn't repeat yourself. Add more detail too.

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  • NYCPunkSlut
    28.11.2008 19:07
    How disappointing.

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  • sexjitsu
    17.12.2008 20:22
    hot but please use spell check half the time I didn't know what you were saying from the spelling.

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  • Girl+Reader
    24.01.2009 07:29
    The story was good, but next time, please use spell check before posting. Seriously distracting.

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  • reader
    reader 500
    25.02.2009 18:36
    i is swwwwwwwwwwwwwwinging from the trees

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2009 16:54
    very good story 7/10 more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2009 21:33
    lucky guy, lucky uncle, lucky firefighters.

    Keep 'em cumming.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2009 23:03
    Delightful

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2009 06:53
    Yvonne here ... I love it !!! Soooo sexy and arousing. Even moreso now knowing others are reading and sharing in our fantasy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.10.2009 00:51
    can i be your wife

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  • Cindy
    Cindy 24
    11.03.2010 22:52
    I liked it but would have bitch slaped ya...lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.03.2010 03:40
    Very nice. I hope you write the second part soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2010 15:50
    This is the first time I've ever posted on a story. Write more...so much more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2010 10:25
    I want more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.03.2010 11:25
    First comment for me as well. A pt 2 is definitely in order, 10/10

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  • WnatsAGoodFuck
    10.04.2010 22:19
    this was a great story it felt sooooo good comeing to it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2010 06:23
    Starts rather good, but gets slightly choppy near when they go to the movies. Sex scene is rushed and could use work. Also, I'd suggest going over things w/ spell check. You've got a good start though, keep trying! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2010 04:30
    that ended way too abruptly. it feels like it's not finished. idk why u decided to post it with an ending like that, and as the other comment said the whole ending felt rushed. from the beginning tho it seems like u have potential, so i'll look forward to a sequel.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2010 10:19
    I had a guy friend who I had some sex with way back in the late 60's although I'm basically hetero.....maybe I'm 'bi' but haven't had 'same gender sex' in decades. This brought back a memory but the story needs a LOT of development...I had to rate it a negative.....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.04.2010 19:24
    there will be more stories posted. im working on the second. the program i used did not have spell check, the new one does. I kinda rushed through this one. I have no idea why, I'm reworking on it. The sex scene was bad because of the fact i was running out of room and needed to add at least one sex scene the story. I figured a story with no sex scene would get a lot of bad reviews. I'm currently rewriting this story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.04.2010 21:29
    Yeah, definitely has the looks of a good story. Just needs to be finished. Keep at it.

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  • skipper02451
    28.04.2010 14:35
    very poorly written, one thing that was correct was English spelling of Abbie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2010 22:33
    It was written fantastically although what's with married at 14

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2010 01:12
    fun story, loved it. maby get something more with the daughter, and later have the mom a bit drunk and him by mistake go into her room , nit the sister, fuck her, and the mom gets pregnet :).
    wellthink about it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2010 01:12
    fun story, loved it. maby get something more with the daughter, and later have the mom a bit drunk and him by mistake go into her room , nit the sister, fuck her, and the mom gets pregnet :).
    wellthink about it

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  • John
    Мужчина John 68
    09.05.2010 05:14
    Liked it, would definitely like to see the mom.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2010 12:44
    set part 2 a couple of months later when she is visibly pregnant and then have anal sex in the shower since they make her so horny

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2010 20:06
    LOL... when exactly do u wake up?

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  • RICKY+RAIDER
    02.06.2010 00:12
    I LOVED IT

    I HAVE READ A MILLION STORIES ON THIS SITE YOURS IS THE 1ST ONE I COMMENTED ON THAT IS HOW MUCH I LOVED IT

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2010 10:39
    Too predictible, especially the ending.....dumb....weak....didn't excite me at all....
    3 out of 10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2010 22:03
    Fuck that one guy.. Wasn't predictable... Please continue

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2010 05:32
    One word: MASTERPIECE!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2010 12:08
    Continue , s'il vous plait.

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  • WantSumCandyLittleGirl
    06.06.2010 14:51
    The first installment was great, but this sequel was too rushed, too contrived, too predictable. You should have taken as much time with this "chapter" as you did with the prelude. It was obvious from the first portion that the Aunt would want some of the nephew, and it was predictable that she would show up during the cousin scene. Sorry, not quite as good as the first segment. Good writing, though.

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  • tomtom48
    05.07.2010 02:39
    that was great more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2010 23:25
    Practice makes perfect. Definitely keep writing about these guys and their new adventures.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2010 23:06
    please write more.I would truly love to be married to a whore like that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.09.2010 15:31
    I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. My late wife and I enjoyed the same things. More people should do the same and enjoy life. Do you have more to tell?????????????/

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.09.2010 07:06
    not even worth a good wank.. seriously, read it before you post please!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.09.2010 11:29
    I bet you will not write another story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2010 02:07
    Judging by the exceptional spelling and grammar you must be a product of the US education system. (US is apparently an abbreviation for useless)

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2010 11:56
    did u mean length as in long? cuz it took me 30 seconds to read i thot it was gona b long and with detail

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  • 1labelho
    20.09.2010 02:24
    Start over and take your time with more details...good attempt for 1st time...being Anal is a good thing...PRACTICE

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2010 10:53
    to the fucker that talks about the US you would not be able to have school if it was not for the US .and i will kick your ass if you dont like it.......................................

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2010 23:21
    To the fucker that talks about the fucker that talks about the US ..... can you explain why I wouldn't be able to have school if it weren't for the US ? (no I guessed you couldn't) So ..... ass kicking time is it? Ok - I'm waiting. But I dont have an ass, sorry. I have a donkey if your'e ok with that

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  • nivek_88
    28.01.2011 00:53
    i liked it, that girl was pretty innocent, "my 'here' is strange." nice romance bro/sis story. youre getting better at this : )

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  • Saya91
    28.01.2011 01:15
    Thank you nivek. But I am disappointed this has been read 1224 time but only 4 ratings & 1 comment. :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2011 01:38
    that story makes me want to cry! I love how they cared so much about each other. I absolutely loved it 10/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2011 03:34
    I felt sad that the girl was blind, but still loved the story. Nice job using their feelings for each other to draw us in, great writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2011 04:21
    You obviously watch anime lol this is one of my favorites

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2011 04:26
    You obviously watch anime lol this is one of my favorites

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2011 04:27
    U could have at least changed their names...

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  • klaxx
    28.01.2011 15:03
    French names, sci-fi/fantasy theme, and the use of onii-sama? Gotta be Anime or Manga! Is this a video-to-print adaptation? If so, great job!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2011 23:42
    for an anime I thought it was pretty good, good detail and everything, nice work

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2011 01:51
    The names are cheesy.I like how you used their feelings to draw in the reader too.Its as if it the relationship is socially acceptable because she's blind and unable to take care of herself.I think its nice that she had such a loving and kind brother who didn't want to take advantage of her weakness and rape her.Good writing.Keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2011 17:05
    Sorry, Just didn't work for me.

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  • Depravity_as_a_Wayuv_Life
    11.03.2011 00:24
    Delicate & distanced. Strange & moving.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2011 13:40
    The Shadows approve of Sisters writing.

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  • storywritier
    11.03.2011 20:31
    PLZ FEEL FREE TO LEAVE COMMENTS
    IM WORKING ON THE 2ND PT NOW THANKS

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  • storywritier
    11.03.2011 20:42
    also let me know what u think i need to add to my furture storys

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2011 20:48
    that was the longest sentence i have EVER seen!

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  • storywritier
    11.03.2011 20:51
    lol i kno i forget to put the periods and etc in when im writing

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  • storywritier
    11.03.2011 20:55
    i gonna be doing another story after this one
    so anybody have any ideas

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2011 23:18
    Location: u dont need to kno


    First off learn English and stop texting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2011 23:23
    this story made me a little hot

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  • lovesyoungpussy
    11.03.2011 23:39
    How about using a period once in a while. I was out of breath by the time I finished reading this. Poor, poor grammar. Just because its porn does not mean you don't have to check spelling and grammar.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2011 07:34
    Keep your day job. The story has no imagination and like it has already been said stories should have paragraphs, periods, commas. I would go to school 1st and learn about english before you kill another story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2011 16:52
    You have inproved a lot in your 3rd Story.

    This could have been a good story but you did not care how you wrote spelled, edited.

    We are pron, Writers and Readers and not English Majors however you must try, just to make your story understandable.

    Youe 3rd Story is much better.

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  • storywritier
    12.03.2011 16:55
    did u like the 3rd story

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.03.2011 01:14
    i love how they care so much for each other, very good. 10/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2011 01:52
    total fucking crap. You expect us to believe that she fucked that many guys WITHOUT condoms and there was ZERO STD'S? Seriously? Or that noone noticed her tricks? Or that she would allow herself to be blackmailed and then simply get a divorce after going through all that? Are fucking stupid or were you dropped on your head as a child?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2011 12:24
    That was the most fukn useless story I have ever read, honestly...

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2011 22:25
    umm to the the other commenter stfu. it was actually a story. regardless of what you say its not pointless.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2011 00:00
    WTF was that sucked please never write again

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2011 03:05
    aww this story was hexka sweat. these lazy ass people just don't want any complicated stories but the more depth you put the better it gets. keep writing :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2011 06:55
    no ones forcing you to read the story guys, you sound pathetic :')

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  • nivek_88
    08.04.2011 02:42
    If you dont like this story then you need to go read a "sex only" story. I dont usually read this type of story but it was good, a actual story. Rating does not match the story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2011 00:38
    i agree with nivek_88, dont usually read gay stories, but this one was actually kinda good

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2011 01:27
    ok you got me to cry, I loved it!

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  • usedworm
    16.04.2011 20:42
    You just have to love sluts that know what their pussy is really for. great job.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2011 15:56
    tht was da worst story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2011 21:38
    IÂ’m not wrohty to be in the same forum. ROTFL

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  • scotsmitch2001
    26.05.2011 04:24
    Different from what I usually read and I am glad I have.
    Thoughful romance between a bro/sis. The story drags you in and makes you care for the characters
    well done saya.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2011 18:44
    my wife would like to suck a young guy off while I watch Her

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  • Belthasar
    07.06.2011 23:53
    I read this story in a doujin before...

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.07.2011 02:36
    it was okay at the beginning but then turned to dinoshit. neg rate for u

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2011 01:32
    This story had such horrid grammar I didn't read past the first paragraph. Also this is an sick story and not very erotic at all. No sexual detail at all.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2011 22:03
    your a fucken bitch your grammer is horrid you are so gay no sex detale you fucken suck

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 01:28
    absolutly stunning, Dark_brother your my favorite author (;

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 02:32
    Shouldn't this be CH 3?

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 04:37
    One of my favorite authors, but I don't like the last status report on this one, well if it means a new guys in the sister stripper series, but other than that great work

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  • Dark_Brother
    27.08.2011 07:47
    This was supposed to be Chapter three, but I screwed up, and mis-typed, & didn't catch it till after it was published. Sorry all. It should be fixed soon enough.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 07:54
    loved it cant wait for the next chapter thanks for making 2 of them just need to renumber them I almost missed this one.. but cant wait for the teachers reaction is he going to have 3 or 4 girlfriends?

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 17:22
    ok somebody pls explain this drug/pheromone/substance/aphrodisiac because i'm COMPLETLY LOST.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 19:00
    Pheremones are chemicals in the body that control attraction essentially, its released by the body naturally and each person may release different quantities of it

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 20:53
    This Is By Far The best Story I Have Ever Read,Rather It Be A Porn Story Or Not The Plot Intertwining Beetween This Story And "I Found My Sister Stripping" (a great one by the way ^-^) Is Absolutley GENIUS...you sir...Are A God Of Literature

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 02:22
    but what are we going to do with all of the baby mice running around?
    get snakes?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2011 17:16
    It always cheers me up seeing that you published a new chapter ! I just love your style of writing ;) But I'm not happy about the accident thing :D A friend of his fakes the accident well that was a bit toooo much ;D nevertheless great story great series great writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2011 18:58
    I love all your stories I can't wait for the next part to all of them please write more thank you

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  • bigmix
    29.08.2011 20:11
    God I can't wait to read what happens when they all find out that he been sleeping with each of them. Specially when mom finds out that he got his sister and her roommate pregnant. that is going to be a great story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2011 21:02
    In the second status report it says that jason, carols son. Jason is diane's son. Adam is carol's son.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2011 22:34
    I stopped reading when I found out they got pregnant, too many people think that's attractive, it's a letdown. Ruined the story for me.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 01:07
    Anonymous 2011-08-29 22:34:49:

    I doubt anyone really cares, honestly. If it's a turn-off for you, then... Oh well. That's all you, buddy. My advice? Find a new series to read. There's plenty of 'em around the site.
    But for the rest of us that happen to enjoy certain aspects to stories (i.e. getting the women pregnant), then this is just what we're looking for.

    I'm really not trying to be a prick or anything, it just irks me when someone goes, "Oh, I didnt like 'so-and-so' about the story," then have the audacity to sit and post about it. If you don't like it, then don't read it. That simple.
    We shouldn't have to listen to your whining, honestly.

    Close the tab, move on to another story. Done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 01:09
    at:
    Anonymous reader
    2011-08-29 22:34:49
    you dont like seeing women pregnant and not think there attractive? well, the story is still good even if they weren't pregnant right? would you still say its a letdown if they weren't?

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 01:14
    Just read the story, I think it is great.
    The way it is written the story seem to be just starting.
    Looking for new chapters
    thank, ~ ~ frank

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 09:15
    oh no, fucking a girl got them pregnant. thats not realistic is it Anonymous reader
    2011-08-29 22:34:49?

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 18:58
    truth is don't like it go away no one cares about your opinion

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 02:04
    Love the stories; the suspense is great, the story line is uncanny, but just from one writer to another when you are describing the kissing or other actions you may want to use different words to describe it than the ones you have used countless times before. Ex.- passionate

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 15:54
    I really don't care about some of the errors that people are talking about!!!!! THIS SERIES IS FRICKING HOT!!!! I can't wait for the next installment

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 16:19
    I stopped reading when I found out they got pregnant, too many people think that's attractive, it's a letdown. Ruined the story for me.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2011 06:28
    its not a turn off finding our they were pregnant if anything it shot the story through the roof - the thought of fucking a loose pregnant pussy was overwhelming.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2011 06:29
    its not a turn off finding our they were pregnant if anything it shot the story through the roof - the thought of fucking a loose pregnant pussy was overwhelming.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2011 04:02
    Harold seems to be such a prick, it kind of makes it unbelievable for him to have so many connections unless he's doing his talking towards women with his substance. But we have to thank Harold for the greatest situations he gave John, Jason, and Adam. I still think he's a prick though for getting a person to hit Jason with a car and I bet when this is over, Harold gets cocked smacked all three of them and dies of a fractured skull that penetrated the brain.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2011 10:57
    Woooh! April and minnie's pics are so damn hot. April is very lovely. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2011 14:28
    i love how u made them pregnent, im not a fan of pregnent sex but i think the baby will add to the story. as long as they are fucking sexy whores!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.09.2011 17:35
    I love the story. Fuck my pussy!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.09.2011 17:36
    I'm cumming all over the place

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.09.2011 20:04
    Carol should prove that she came up with the results by using the security camras the place already has probaly oh and get Harold fired by this and shelly and his mom should have a threesome by miss shelly asking for a Parent conference at his house

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.09.2011 04:16
    hey start working on i found my sister stripping

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  • pervy+pete
    05.09.2011 08:37
    Awesome story. Good job

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.09.2011 23:55
    awsome I am in lovee with your stories.(I have read every single one of your series)And I would love to be his mom or sister•

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.09.2011 22:55
    WOULD LOVE TO TRADE IN MY BOYFRIEND FOR ADAM!!!!!!!!!!!™© ※「」♪♭°•∴®∞

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2011 14:15
    Amazing story please write more I cumming all over the place

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2011 13:07
    As always very well written and it's getting more and more exciting how the puzzle will solve

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2011 14:33
    Love the story line keep up the good work. I've read all your stories and loved them all u are truly talented. Im drained 

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2011 15:02
    great story your next one should get harold caught and fired and even jailtime.. I think that carol should make it sound like here say when he tells on her and keep things under control and with the money from the formula she creates that her family can live off of and not worry about money and all the women move into a huge house to raise the 3 babies and maybe even make the mom get knocked up lmao..

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2011 15:07
    fuckin awsome........plz try to get them out faster

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2011 15:29
    This Howard needs taught a lesson. Hormonal, change him into a woman for being such a jerk.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2011 01:58
    Good follow up srory, but you still haen't gotten mom pregnant by son's cock.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2011 04:10
    something must happen to the asshole ive been following your stories but dont hurt any of his girls or thier kids then it would fuck up all your stories other than that your one of the best writers on here

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2011 04:12
    something must happen to the asshole ive been following your stories but dont hurt any of his girls or thier kids then it would fuck up all your stories other than that your one of the best writers on here

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2011 11:48
    great story telling your honestly the only writer I get on here for. Keep cranking em out

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2011 12:50
    you should kill of howard cos hes such a prick

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.09.2011 13:39
    what should happen is, Carol should make a new batch using April's pheromones, leave it lying around in the lab, and then swap the CEO for a boy CEO who likes raping people

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.09.2011 17:09
    I love this series, but I fucking hate Harold. He's like the downer asshole at everyparty I go to, and I beat them to the ground. Please tell me Harold will get what's coming to him!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.09.2011 15:23
    @ auther: great work. i find my self just getting on to read the stories in stead of getting off. keep up the good work.

    @anonymous 2011-09-15:29:29
    if he becomes a women.... that leads to stories i dont want to even think about.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.09.2011 00:57
    Bump off Harold but do not hurt any of the girls or the kids.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.09.2011 15:40
    Brilliant work keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.09.2011 02:21
    eww... prego teacher. have no prob with pregnent sex, but keep thinking of old teachers, even though teacher is not old. im imagining more or less a prego old lady...gross. this was a great and well writen story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.09.2011 06:52
    for christs sake, get rid of 'harold'. Soooo annoying and distracting. Otherwise still lovin it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 01:52
    I was gonna say, what happens with the other two stories?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 02:06
    What a great series. You should definitly do what you are obviously planning and create a spin-off with Shelly and her daughter (I think it would be a better story if it was a daughter).

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 05:09
    Down vote for Shelly not ending with Adam. >_>

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 05:09
    I think Harold got off a little too easy, but good job.

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  • pervy+pete
    19.09.2011 07:32
    Excellent series, thanks again

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 07:59
    wait? shellys baby didnt get the antidote. Awesome story though

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 08:15
    i dont like the way you ended with shelly............kinda fucked up.........but a great series tho ;p

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 09:38
    not sure if this was a great end for the story but it tied the whole thing together nicely, was like :0 when Carol mentioned babies, cute. Can't wait to see what else you write, not only for the other stories you say that your are yet to finish but also anything new.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 09:39
    Great story! The chapter was very good at all, though since of some part it rushed a lot...
    Btw: Are you going to con. the other two series?(if only one, i'd preffer Found my sister stripping).?

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 11:32
    Really good story. You could make another series staring Shelly's baby, that's just a thought. Keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 16:33
    This series was so fucking awesome, I read them all and they were all extremely hot. Congradulations to you! Keep up the very fine work, as I will continue to read your stories now, as long as you write them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 16:42
    Stop writing your personal notes in between sentences.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 18:11
    they r not his notes. they provide insite to the research that carol and harold r doin

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 20:14
    ؤيي

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 21:33
    Good job Dark_Brother man you write the sex stories ever

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 21:51
    harold's end was hilarious and well deserved

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 22:33
    GREAT STORY! made me soo wet. i was cumming a ton while reading the foursome part. sooo hot. thanks for writing this series. i really loved it! you should continue "I found my sister striping." i kinda miss that series . its really good. :) ;) :) :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 23:05
    VERY NICE. don't know if you took my thought on Harolds pheromones attracting men or if you already had that in mind, but i LOVED that in the ending. Serves him right! very nice story, permanently attracts sex instantly, permanently impotent, BRILLIANT

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.09.2011 00:18
    Any and all of your future stories, I definitely will read, Dark Brother.
    You are very good at what you do best I'm sure.Keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.09.2011 09:21
    FINALLY!!!
    you really should write these faster

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.09.2011 16:46
    hhghjujjgnvcxcfghjklþi,

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2011 18:14
    I really dont like these reports for the rest i love it
    And all ur other stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2011 18:58
    Why not make these parts in one e-book and start selling love all ur stories

    Grtz from belgium

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.09.2011 07:17
    Gggkfadfjd ifhjdghdk jd djfhjdf dkjfhdkjghdskjghslkghsjgh

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.09.2011 10:19
    Harold got it "in the end"! Awesome!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 07:12
    I love fucking my mother's pussy. Mom's cunt is mature, juicy & very clean. She can take violent pounding any time I need to relieve my horniness. Most of the time I take out my frustration on her soft pussy. Momther's cunt is very therapeutic. I love mom.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 03:44
    Dude, may I humbly suggest that you stop wasting your time writing sex stories and start attacking the mainstream???? Whatever you're doing for a crust now you're wasting a God Given Talent (see your "unheralded" top rating on an OPEN forum (ergo the Whole Fucking Planet(tm)... and how exactly do you think came to be, Mr Fred Nile?) of what, a quarter million posting now) on beer, peanuts and cheap (free in fact) thrills... and as satisfactory as those thrills may be, please allow me to direct your attention to "erotic fiction". Google it... just beware of cheap imitations ;-) The Mammoth Hunters is a good place to start... set "way" back ... before a pack of incipient, mindless, soulless, self-denying, frustrated, four-eyed, black-tied, monkey-fucks took Greece by the backdoor and led her nowhere. If this is off the cuff then I'd most definitely pay to read something you wrote with menace aforethought!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 10:39
    You Sir, are a God.

    Awesome stories, keep it up. Don't worry about loads of stories really fast, just keep them good quality.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.09.2011 01:23
    He is the lord of sex stories. Then it is Rebelman then someone else. My opinion though.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.09.2011 13:19
    hjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhkjhhhhhhhhhj

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 14:08
    Jesse and James. Straight up Pokemon reference.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2011 13:35
    Great story can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.10.2011 13:43
    Gotta catch em' alll pokemon

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.10.2011 01:27
    truly a gifted writer, found my self coming back to just read the plot

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.10.2011 16:08
    AT THE CORNER OF HIS EYE. IN MANY WORLDS AT THE SAME TIME.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.11.2011 00:50
    This Is Some Pretty Intense shit and I love it but I need a little Extra help with my prick ;D #9562433096 (Pussy Only!!)

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.11.2011 13:09
    That was the worst I have ever read

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2011 05:47
    Great story man. But what's the deal with you and spelling god "gawd"

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.11.2011 07:39
    Write a story about Shelly and her son doing it!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 01:23
    Jesse? James? Mewoth now thats a name!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2011 06:22
    way way way too short

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.11.2011 21:47
    Extremely good composition, but yeah it's not complete... Starts in medias res and ends in medias res

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 18:21
    Very ironic punishment for Harold

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 21:37
    AS I SAID AFTER"BAIT AND SWITCH" YOUR STORY MAKES ME WET AND HORNY, KIND OF LIKE YOUR STORIES, PUBLISH IT, PUBLISH ANYTHING, YOUR A GREAT WRITER!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 22:44
    I HOPE THERES MORE, ITS SUCH A GOOD STORY, AND I'M REAL WET AGAIN!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.11.2011 19:38
    i am so horny, but jesse and james was a civil war southern soldier who went on to become famous robbing banks, which is what he did to northern banks during the war.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.11.2011 22:14
    Smffffff I loved. It Hun yur an amazing. Writer well. I loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2011 11:29
    Harold should die, would put a nice twist to it

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  • prvrt247
    09.12.2011 12:46
    I love how your series are tying together. I can't tell you that hours at work that I've spent reading all of your stories. I'm still not quite done - obviously.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 09:56
    HAVING SEX WITH UR FAMILY IS SICK AND CAN RUIN UR RELATIONSHIP REGRATING REST OF UR LIFE OUT OF UR FAMILY HOUSE FAMILY MEMBERS DESERT U BAD NAME FOR U AROUND THE COMMUNITY

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 21:52
    My cock is raw this was the best read ive ever had keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 21:52
    My cock is raw this was the best read ive ever had keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 19:46
    the plot was good except for the spelling and you need better describing, for example the dog should stay tied or knotted for about 10 minutes and would pull out, other than that it was a great story, 7/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2012 20:51
    i luv this story i wish you wud put some more up for us 2 read

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  • xtremejump
    25.01.2012 10:14
    Can't stop reading your stories!

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  • xtremejump
    25.01.2012 16:49
    I love it. Glad the shit didn't work good on Harold. And those who can't stand incest read the list of what's in it.

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  • xtremejump
    25.01.2012 18:28
    This story is great. You by far are the best writer on this site.

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  • xtremejump
    25.01.2012 20:51
    Great story! Will there be a sequel with Adam's and Shelly's child? Way to get rid of limp dick Harold.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.01.2012 18:39
    it worked for me, good story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.02.2012 06:38
    not sure I like this story, if her husband or boyfriend treats her l;ike shit why dose she stay and not live with this other guy who treats with such tendernes and respect

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  • bubba53tn
    10.02.2012 11:16
    as with all of your stories i have read they are awesome but if i had to pick my fav one it would have to be the Found my Sister stripping OR the MY SISTER AND THE EXCHANGE STUDENT would love to see you reopen those two and again thanks for the stories

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  • bubba53tn
    10.02.2012 11:27
    to make another comment i think it funny as hell when i read all the bad comments that these people want to say but if every one will notice they are all anonymous reader lol and i have to agree with the one who is writing these GREAT stories if you dont like them then why the hell are you reading them i guess its because you have nothing better to do than bitch and moan about what some one else is doing {my thought to those who want to bitch and moan need to get a life to run on there own and stop trying to run every one elses life } LIKE I SAID I LOVE THE STORIES THE MAN IS WRITING AND VERRY MUCH HOPE TO SEE MORE OF THE SAME

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.02.2012 00:12
    C05X7c Good day! I do not see the conditions of using the information. May I copy the text from here on my site if you leave a link to this page?!...

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  • TRINITYBLUE
    20.02.2012 23:09
    OH MY! I ABSOLUTELY AM IN LOVE WITH YOU! YOU ARE A FABULOUS WRITER AND I HOPE YOU NEVER STOP! I LOVED THIS SERIES!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 10:34
    I liked it. It made me remember the first time an older man taught me to suck

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 07:42
    Anonymous, I almost know what you are sinayg here. I have struggled with my weight for years and nearly every health issue (major and minor) I have had has been attributed to extra weight. I felt resentful of that attitude, until I did lose weight and guess what? Those health issues disappeared. So turns out that it was a good defensive attitude that helped me justify why my weight wasn't the problem. Nice defense to hang on to, when I didn't want to make a tough change in lifestyle! And where exactly did I say that smoking caused her cancer? I am well aware that many nonsmokers get lung cancer, as anyone can see if they read the stats.But the fact is that my mother has smoked a pack a day, every day for almost 50 years. You want to tell me that has nothing to do with lung cancer and the various breathing related problems she has had over the years?Sorry for the rant. I have given your anonymous, defensive comment more than enough time and energy.Lou, Thanks so much for the channeled

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 00:03
    I have school in 6 hours but I cant stop reading ur stories. Btw the chemical is called an aphrodesiac

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 14:39
    I have school in 6 hours but I cant stop reading ur stories. Btw the chemical is called an aphrodesiac

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 14:39
    I have school in 6 hours but I cant stop reading ur stories. Btw the chemical is called an aphrodesiac

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 10:53
    I've ready through this series and I just have to say it is one of the best stories on here. You are a very talented writer and I look forward to your other stories. And please if you do bring them back I'd like to see harold again and see that the antidote has an unforseen side effect for other abilities in the children. Thatd be pretty cool.but great job and keep it coming :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2012 16:49
    Hahaha Harold got erectal disfunction!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.07.2012 00:01
    harold didnt get erectile disfunction think about it he took in femle genes females dont have a penis so how would it become erect he got hot and interpreted it as a pain in his genital area he got worse than limp dick he is now at least partialy a girl muhuhahahahaaha serves him right

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.07.2012 14:59
    fuck them do a part two

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2012 03:45
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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2012 22:08
    I f**king hate Harold!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2012 00:36
    Shelly's child was never given the shot. A perfect way to set up a spin off

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.12.2012 19:38
    i feel like mom........its soooo wet down there

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.12.2012 01:04
    kind of a silly story, they do everything but fuck........... if she is so concernedc about cheating on her shitty boyfriend why deos she come to him at all unlesds all she wants is for him to clean her after the boyfriend abuses her............ this guy is definatly a strange one dor putting up with her

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 18:27
    You really saved my skin with this informaiotn. Thanks!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2013 18:11
    I've been a loyal customer of Forever 21 since I was 20. Despite what's dlaeisypd on their advert campaigns, they have continued to grow their looks and collections as part of their customer base has grown-up as evidenced by Love 21, which originally was the name of their contemporary (i.e. more mature) line. The line regularly features older (by tween standards a 24 year old is ancient) models wearing clothes with a more polished look. Last week I noticed several people my age (late 20 s, early 30 s), who were shopping there while on their lunch break. The woman who rang me up was the manager. She was also my age and expecting. If I was expecting, I'd shop at their maternity label because they have brand equity with me.To my mind, the fact that Forever 21 is opening Love 21 stores in three of the 10 states with the highest teen pregnancy rates doesn't necessarily mean that they are honing in on the teen pregnancy market (though as a marketer, I'm sure they consider it an added busi

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2013 13:28
    Not bad. Better then the second. But I'd have liked it if there were more chapters

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2013 12:13
    I didn't understood .. who was the lady .. who is lelouch .. who is rolo .. what is grease .. can you tell the story in english please .. I dont understand uther languages pretty much.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2013 11:01
    The Story was great my only complaint is the end with shelly like wtf man why did u make it were she a single mom and shit. Why not happy ending or something like she find some one else at least

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2013 23:43
    I don't believe this is true for every story and think you're defindeng a No True Scotsman in trying to say that it applies to every good story. My qualm is that it's possible to make a story interesting in the matter in which the person taking in the story becomes aware of what they already knew, where each aspect of the story was cleverly hinted beforehand. This isn't a very large set of possibilities, but it's one that I think keeps your ideas of suspense and surprise from being universal, surprise in particular.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.04.2013 22:02
    FUCKIN LOVE THESE STORIES.

    IM A REDNECK!!!! WOOOOHHOOOOOOO!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.05.2013 02:14
    I have given a "possitive" rating to all the chapters of this series, but unfortunately, I had to give a "Negative" one to this last chapter.
    the end of the "Herald's" character, is actually maybe the best part of the chapter. Another matter is the decission you took of making his mom to decide by herself giving the children the "Cure" to what she sees as a Curse".
    Well, at least, you have left it open for his genes to carry on through the baby in Shelly's pregnacy!
    It was a great series, right up to this end you decided to give it, think you should give it a complete different one. Like acceptqnce of their nature of her son's and aughter's different nature and unless you are thinking in a sequel of the series, making Shelly's character coming back and accepting her place as another of his women.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.07.2013 17:10
    Very very clever writing style. Your points have surprising counterpoints with a lot of humor. I greatly loved it. Of course, I would have loved it better if the hero would have done some dookie dining.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2013 01:40
    Fuck I need a pussy..... Zambia

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2013 20:17
    dude.... I dont ever write comments on these things but by far one perfect masterpiece. when you get someone to cum and cry simultainously (typo) you will go far

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2013 17:44
    Your story sucked faggot!!! Tag your fucking stories you retarded fudgepacking rump roasters!!!! Straight people do not want to be exposed to deviant behavior. You're like the fourth fairy in as many days who has been cornholed so many times its affected the way their brain works and they can't do something as simple as tagging a fucking story. Don't submit anymore if you don't know how to do anything besides take a cock in your ass!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2013 18:45
    Y'know you can always stop reading the story instead of posting hate in the comments. Don't read untagged stories if you don't want to be surprised by the outcome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2013 21:09
    The story is tagged, as "Fantasy" asshole!!!! That in no way implies gay!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2013 21:38
    Y'know you can always stop reading the story instead of posting hate in the comments. Don't read untagged stories if you don't want to be surprised by the outcome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2013 23:27
    I wholeheartedly agree with Anon1 it's a pain in the ass (pun intended) to start a story only to discover it contains such abominations. I quit reading once I came to the offensive material but by then it's already to late. He also has a point that there have been many mistakes about tagging "Gay" stories as of late. It's disgusting to this heterosexual not to mention inexcusable and disrespectful! Really it shouldn't be asking to much that you consider the feelings of others when you post. Think about it would you like to start a story and find out its about beastiality(considering that's something you have an aversion to?). A few key strokes or mouse clicks is all it takes to show a modicum of respect to your fellow users of this site!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2013 23:32
    Fuck you mr the one who said stop posting hate, we can post it if we want to and this fag had it coming for not marking his gay ass story. So again FUCK YOU ur probably a fag to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2013 23:34
    In fact the two of you assfucking cocksucking fags should get together so u don't have time to write garbage likes this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.09.2013 07:32
    Great Writing...Love your series ever thought of submitting them to a exotic book company...you are good enough to make money as a writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.09.2013 17:01
    Great Writing...Love your series ever thought of submitting them to a exotic book company...you are good enough to make money as a writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2013 12:59
    Great Writing...Love your series ever thought of submitting them to a exotic book company...you are good enough to make money as a writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2013 12:29
    I love how Carol's Daughter has grown. I remember way back when she was only loacted in NY. Now she is in every store, on HSN, and is a full global brand. I need to try her facial products, too.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 01:50
    P9JRZ5 Really appreciate you sharing this article.Thanks Again. Want more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2013 09:58
    ZxAF8m Very informative post.Really looking forward to read more. Will read on...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.02.2014 19:14
    @anonymous reader
    2013-08-24 23:27:02
    When ppl have sex for the first time their parts are suppose to be torn u retard this is a sex story site if that does'nt ring a bell in your so called brain it is supposed to contain stories of all sorts.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2014 12:44
    A02dEK Thanks so much for the article.Thanks Again. Really Great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2014 06:50
    I thought this was a very hot story,i loved it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2014 06:50
    I thought this was a very hot story,i loved it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2014 06:50
    I thought this was a very hot story,i loved it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.09.2014 07:27
    you should make a continuation of subjects0

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.11.2014 20:11
    Great set of stories but just one issue. Chapters 2 and 3 (edited) are the same so there is no Chap 2 and Chapter 6 is missing and I don't want to read Chap 7 in case I miss something which I surely will as these stories are so well written.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.11.2014 06:07
    Ugh I'm so wet and horny. I wish we could still post chat app user names so I could find a like minded soul

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  • Dillan1
    21.03.2015 23:13
    Two words..."loved it"

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2015 05:44
    Learn to write before you post anything. That was terrible

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2015 14:18
    Good setup jus need to proofread before u post looking forward to more of ur work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2015 16:00
    POORLY WRITTEN. Terrible formatting. Needs to be proof-read and edited BEFORE posting.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2015 10:02
    The plot was good, but you need someone who actually speaks English to proofread it for you it's behind not be-hide, that's not English and it's know not no

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.06.2015 11:32
    Woow just had a strong orgasm am stil holding to my 12inches (no pun intended) and guess what? Am a fr*kn Nigerian

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2015 23:46
    great job. very sexy storyline

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  • djb8247
    14.07.2015 22:57
    sorry DB, but this story has gone from the sublime to the bloody ridiculous, definitely NOT up to your normal standard.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2015 05:06
    I love your story's. Thanks for posting.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2015 06:35
    Go write books so I can buy them!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2015 04:09
    it was a decent start; wish you'd kept writing. Yes; there were some errors but enjoyable anyway

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2015 06:13
    Blowjob

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.09.2015 10:55
    The story might be good, but the style it is written in is insanely confusing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.09.2015 23:55
    Can't read it. I can tell English is not your first language, so find a native speaker to proof read it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2015 11:46
    Fucking horny plz tell more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.09.2015 20:29
    wow more plzzzzz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2015 11:10
    Written incredibly poorly, no use of adjectives gets on my nerves. Please use an English speaker to help you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2015 21:25
    Short but sweet sexy1998 and your young pussy will be sore and stretched but happy after your womb is filled with a black mans thick baby batter.

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  • sexy1998
    22.09.2015 14:22
    i don't belive that because this story became true yesterday and we feel great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2015 10:31
    Mother's pussy is the best. I always cum twice more semen in my mom's cunt than in my girlfriend Amanda's. I don't know why, since mom's pussy is not as tight as Mandi's. I guess it must be the motherly love I have toward her. Don't take me wrong...I love both pussies the same.

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  • hornykip50
    25.09.2015 17:54
    Proof read next time. The story will sound as lackluster to you as it did to me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2015 00:03
    Too confusing to follow.

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  • Cockerspanial
    22.10.2015 11:39
    to person below person below me:
    there is two chap.2's and on D.B's page there is ch3 edit which is the same as chap2 below it. the chap2 below that one is the real chap2. andyes there is a chap 6

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  • Cockerspanial
    22.10.2015 12:59
    make more. publish some. i wanna get. will u make more if i donate???????????? also, if you have some others (even if they dont have sex in them i would love them.) i will PM u with my email cuz I WANT MORE

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  • Catmandue53
    19.11.2015 05:12
    Are you seriously kidding me?

    Learn, at least, when to start a new paragraph. Your story looks like you typed it in as one very long paragraph, then went back and inserted breaks every two or three lines. Wow!

    I was not able to finish this story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2016 20:31
    I wish shelly could have stayed and Adam tell the girls about her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.04.2016 13:53
    While this is a great story you still left some major gaps in your story lines. The main one I see is why Carol was going around to all these different test subjects and doing what she was doing. You also left out the reason for the transfer of ownership on the strip culb.

    Dam I wish you where still writing so we could get the rest of these stories.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2016 05:20
    It Was Amazing And Dont Listen To This Lossers Who Give Bad Comment They Think They Are Godes And Can Judge Anyone They Can Eat My Dick And Shut The Fuck Up If They Didnt Like The Story Why They Keep Reading Loosers Just Want To Comment.Dont worry Keep Writing<3.Alex

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2016 17:52
    hey..what happened about your pics of characters?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2016 16:16
    Well written. Had everything a story should. Looking forward to this, hard to find good stories like yours these days. Keep up the great work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2016 19:43
    This story left me very horny

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  • ndesires
    06.05.2016 21:29
    She started to make circles on her clit, pressing hard and fast. Strong pulsations overwhelmed her body. Her wetness poured slowly to her thighs, her pussy was trembling in pleasure, her clit was as on fire. Every time she moved her fingers she felt now shocks of pleasure.

    Read the full story here ---> untold-desires .blogspot dot com Read it now! It's very hot! :)

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  • hoss27560
    06.05.2016 23:23
    very hot, made me so hard

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2016 16:48
    Make this an extremely long series, this and the first one were two of the best stories Ive read on here.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2016 17:24
    So, I never comment on stuff on here, but this story was quite wonderful! I mean, besides the erotic element to it, I found myself simply enjoying the relationship dynamic here. Please don't fuck it up by... fucking it up haha. You're doing great so far, I very much look forward to the next chapter!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2016 21:16
    Hope there are more to this story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.05.2016 02:19
    Well written. Had everything a story should. Looking forward to this, hard to find good stories like yours these days. Keep up the great work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.05.2016 17:00
    Nice story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.05.2016 19:19
    Very nice story can't wait for the next part.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.05.2016 22:02
    jax will fuck you with his lamp post

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2016 21:50
    Keep going this is amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2016 19:20
    This is a great story, please continue, I want to read the rest!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2016 21:47
    This is a great story, please continue, I want to read the rest!

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  • Sayian_God_Goku
    11.05.2016 00:17
    Great Story... Excited to read next Chapter soon...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2016 00:30
    I hope that you continue on with this story and I hope honestly that it never ends

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  • 1bagman
    12.05.2016 18:39
    mom not that good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2016 19:42
    Post your Numbers for sexchat

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.05.2016 23:43
    I loved the way that you had him struggling with the idea of incest. Sex is not interesting when no thought is put into it and everyone has reasons for having and sometimes not having sex. You've found his. That was exciting when he finally let go; well done!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2016 01:29
    OK? Loved? It it was amazing perfect when does the next one come out

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2016 18:32
    I loved the way that you had him struggling with the idea of incest. Sex is not interesting when no thought is put into it and everyone has reasons for having and sometimes not having sex. You've found his. That was exciting when he finally let go; well done!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2016 21:45
    Part 3 plz this was great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2016 07:08
    I never comment on these but it's got me really excited any hit me up on sc please mine it "troydolby"

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2016 02:38
    Holy shit nice story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2016 04:12
    Great story, looking forward to reading the next part

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2016 06:42
    Would like to see Ben join maybe a little blackmail

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2016 18:35
    gr8 story! lov t...pliz finish t...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.05.2016 18:41
    dnt take sm orher pples ideaz...I want ur ideas n this story!ur fantastic & I lov e way ur writing..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2016 02:38
    could u make part 3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2016 04:04
    Wonderful story! Keep it cumming!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2016 06:40
    it's very awesome Støry :) :*

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2016 00:27
    Not to bad. The conflict lasted longer than most other stories of this nature. I found that a good change. I realize it might be just the "one up" concept but a blow job compared to a foot rub? Dinner nearly 9pm? Just a weird time is all at least to me. There didn't seem to be a reason behind it. Also he was in his room the entire day and no one person looked in to check? Doubtful that the step mother wouldnt have noticed & worried a little.

    So the questions are: 1. was he gay to this point? 2. how is he going to choose who first? 3. why is he so worried about the foot fetish? its not so uncommon (I don't understand it, but to each their own) 4. If Jax is so in love, why does it feel that she kept a distance, where Katie was more of the active role. Cant be the age thing. A year is a lot in some respect, but not much.

    Only suggestion I have, now, is that if you end the series, so it so you can come back to it if you think of something new for it. just fade out with potential :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2016 12:59
    When is there going to be a part three?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2016 16:32
    So what about the third part?? You promised it is to be continued...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.05.2016 04:03
    I just want to say I'm soooooooooo glad that someone is writing decent foot fetish sex stories. I read a few others on here but yours are the best! Both your stories are great and I can't wait for the next additions. I am hoping for a stockings scene at some point, in either one, but if that's not your thing it's cool. Also, your writing is terrific as far as this site is concerned.

    Looking forward for more great scenes!

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  • mrcasual
    24.05.2016 00:48
    look forward to seeing more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.05.2016 08:00
    Part 3??

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2016 13:16
    It should have ended like Adam found Shelly and all 5 of them living happly ever after.it was kinda bad that Shelly had to deal alone with adam's kid and leave alone."But hey" that's just how I would want to end it.Anyway awesome story....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 11:01
    good story...keep it up....post the nxt part nd put some sex in it..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 11:57
    post more...this is a nyc story mate...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 15:05
    Ohh.....good story hoping u write more.waiting impatiently!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 15:17
    Keep going with story please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 23:02
    Maybe for his last wish he can control people

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 23:03
    It would be nice if he fucked ally and Bella maybe a threesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2016 23:13
    I want join please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2016 03:09
    Last wish should be money. I know it's typical but it would be cool to see him spoil bella, maybe move to a giant house

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2016 13:06
    BUT THIS ISNT PART 4 TO MY LIVING STEP SISTERS

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2016 23:05
    Nah keep the series going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2016 03:47
    I really hope you continue this series. The narrator is someone who resembles me a lot, band kid forced into band with a foot fetish, and he makes me smile on days when smiles are hard to come by. This story is hot and fun, and pushes all the right buttons to get me off while also telling the tale of someone I can relate to. If you decide to stop this and Continue with your other stories, I hope they keep the foot fetish and humor up. I already am into all three of them. Whatever you choose I know I'll enjoy!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2016 04:18
    Definitely keep the series going I'm not super into foot fetish but even I have to admit this story knows how get me going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2016 08:23
    post more of the wish

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2016 21:47
    this is a fantastic series that im sad to see end but I hope that you carry on with "my loving step sisters"

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2016 05:09
    We want more mY loving step sisters lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2016 09:32
    plz...post the nxt part

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2016 09:06
    yes definitely more please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.08.2016 20:37
    whens the next coming?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2016 23:11
    Finish the wish series

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.08.2016 18:02
    more stories of the wish series..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2016 17:46
    Next part?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2016 01:18
    Nice story. I suggest writing an incest-free story.
    Positive rating

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.09.2016 04:37
    i've been waiting for part 3 for foreverrrr...at least tell us if its ever coming or not

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2016 05:42
    More feet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2016 23:13
    Next part plz been way too long and no more feet than already implemented

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2016 12:33
    FINALLY

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2016 15:37
    you are very good at writing I enjoy reading your stories .... how long to the wish part 3 is done?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2016 19:46
    I really enjoy your writing style, keep up the good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2016 20:04
    Oops. Methinks mama ain't gonna be too happy with what she's found. Can you make it such that Ben is on good terms with them soon?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.10.2016 23:39
    Make him end up with katie plz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2016 03:50
    What a twist

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2016 16:50
    Love this can't wait till part 5

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2016 02:43
    Ben a little on the side is fine, but leave him out of the love story side of it. Also get back to the love story side of it too!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2016 05:07
    Story is great. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2016 23:55
    More God dammit! I say more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2016 23:59
    Best story yet. Keep on

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2016 00:58
    More squares

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.10.2016 21:34
    Great little series. I love it. Can't wait unlit part 5. Keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.10.2016 18:52
    Another great series would love to see more of all of them plz. Great work and story line

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2016 02:33
    I love all your stories. Keep up the good work man

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  • mrcasual
    31.10.2016 17:44
    More is good, but don't forget your other stories.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.11.2016 03:23
    Still waiting on part 3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.11.2016 03:24
    Part 3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.11.2016 03:25
    What happened to part 3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.11.2016 03:25
    Please make a part 3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.11.2016 02:17
    part 3??????? plz plx man write more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.11.2016 20:48
    I'm in love with this series...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2016 08:10
    Would love more foot stuff! and foot teasing. :p

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.12.2016 07:24
    That is pretty good.

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  • Xyl47
    02.12.2016 08:24
    Great story!

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  • Harley95
    05.12.2016 15:50
    More plz need it soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2016 02:29
    Still fucking waiting for part 3

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  • Clover+Ernest
    13.12.2016 05:42
    You know what, djb8247, FUCK OFF!! Is that the only thing you can think of to criticize with, "not up to normal standards" BLAH BLAH FUCKING BLAH . He wrote it how HE wanted to, not giving a shit about how jackasses like YOU thought HE should write HIS stories. DB may be deceased, but give the man some redirect, and save whatever microscopic shred of dignity you have left. Noone takes you seriously here, you fucking troll. The dinner you get that through your thick, fucking retarded ass

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  • Clover+Ernest
    13.12.2016 05:43
    The sooner you get that through your thick, fucking retarded ass, skull, the better.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.12.2016 04:24
    Pretty good fam, liking the actual story rather rhan mindless sex. 9.5/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.12.2016 08:10
    Can't wait for a part three. Patience is a virtue, but I'm very eager to see where you take this. Your stories are my very fsvorites on this website, so I hope you're back to it soon. I wish you the best in going forward witb these and whatever else you may be dealing with in life and hope you'll be back soon.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.12.2016 07:40
    Woah! Man calm down.....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.12.2016 17:19
    Please continue this series, I want to know what happens next!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2017 18:28
    plz olz olz plz plz plz continue

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.01.2017 05:43
    Hey man! I'm just here to say I love your foot scenes and am avidly looking forward to your next update, be it this one or any of your other stories! I hope you are doing well and haven't forgotten your fans! I have heavy hopes for your future works!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.01.2017 13:23
    Every Cumming was 10 minutes apart....meh.

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  • FAD777
    13.01.2017 20:30
    Hey, everyone. It's the author here. Sorry, I've been super busy over the last few months, and I'm finally going to have some free time soon. After midterms next week, I'll start working on a part three for this, or maybe another part for my Resurrection story. Sorry for the huge wait, I'm glad to see you all like my stories this much!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 07:02
    Pokemon reference with the kids, Jessie and James from Team Rocket

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.02.2017 20:30
    look at all the keyboard warriors in this section of the comment's

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  • Robert+C.
    28.05.2019 19:29
    See also, my other RE- posted story submissions -
    "Ben-Wa Girl" at: www.sexstories.com/story/90170/
    and "Meer Kass" at: www.sexstories.com/story/87903/

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  • Robert+C.
    28.05.2019 19:29
    See also, my other RE- posted story submissions -
    "Ben-Wa Girl" at: www.sexstories.com/story/90170/
    and "Meer Kass" at: www.sexstories.com/story/87903/

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  • Robert+C.
    28.05.2019 19:29
    See also, my other RE- posted story submissions -
    "Ben-Wa Girl" at: www.sexstories.com/story/90170/
    and "Meer Kass" at: www.sexstories.com/story/87903/

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  • Robert+C.
    28.05.2019 19:29
    See also, my other RE- posted story submissions -
    "Ben-Wa Girl" at: www.sexstories.com/story/90170/
    and "Meer Kass" at: www.sexstories.com/story/87903/

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  • Robert+C.
    28.05.2019 19:29
    See also, my other RE- posted story submissions -
    "Ben-Wa Girl" at: www.sexstories.com/story/90170/
    and "Meer Kass" at: www.sexstories.com/story/87903/

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  • Robert+C.
    28.05.2019 19:29
    See also, my other RE- posted story submissions -
    "Ben-Wa Girl" at: www.sexstories.com/story/90170/
    and "Meer Kass" at: www.sexstories.com/story/87903/

    Answer 0

  • Robert+C.
    28.05.2019 19:29
    See also, my other RE- posted story submissions -
    "Ben-Wa Girl" at: www.sexstories.com/story/90170/
    and "Meer Kass" at: www.sexstories.com/story/87903/

    Answer 0

  • Robert+C.
    28.05.2019 19:29
    See also, my other RE- posted story submissions -
    "Ben-Wa Girl" at: www.sexstories.com/story/90170/
    and "Meer Kass" at: www.sexstories.com/story/87903/

    Answer 0

  • achimvw
    18.12.2019 12:42
    A great story but you need to proof read it before posting.

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  • achimvw
    18.12.2019 12:42
    A great story but you need to proof read it before posting.

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