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Sex games

a vapiric succubus part 1

Author: tempie101

Date: 11 July 2011

Fantastic, Dark Fantasy, Body modification, Cruelty

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This story is fictional and my first so i hope you like it
im always open for suggestion.

Nancy just turned eighteen when she was lying in bed, she had a perfect body.
She was a brunette with green eyes and a really cute face, full lips and c-cup firm breasts.

At that night she couldn't sleep and she started to play with herself,
one hand moved to her left breast while the other hand moved over her naked body.
slowly going lower and lower till it reached her clit and really wet dripping pussy.

She was really enjoying herself that she didn't notice something sliding under the sheeds
towards her naked body. Suddenly Nancy felt a stinging pain in her feet as the thing
injected toxins in her feet, it was to late for Nancy.

Within seconds the toxins started to work, paralyzing her body and working as a aphrodisiac
turning her on. her pussy became wetter and wetter while she felt something sliding up
towards her. she wanted to scream but she coudn't.

She was completely helpless as the thing reached her soaking pussy. while she couldn't
move she could feel everything. the tip of the thing found her pussy and started to slid
inside. she felt it enter her wet pussy. slowly it buried into her tight pussy.
she wanted to scream while the thing almost ripped her wet tight pussy in two.
she felt it completely enter her pussy and it started vibrating. real slowly it started
going deeper and deeper. it started giving nancy more toxins and she felt her womb
opening up a little. when the ting reached her womb the tip could enter. it buried
deeper and deeper. slow but surely entering her womb, tearing it apart while it
buried even deeper. Poor Nancy felt everything while her naked body lied paralyzed.
it stopped vibrating and moving. Nancy hoped that the worst was over.


How wrong could she be....

Small needles started to come out of the thing and pierced her womb,
No force on earth could take it out of the poor girls pussy now.
The needle thing started to secree a solvent to dissolve her womb, so the thing could take
it's place in her hot naked body. She never ever felt so much pain in her life.
She felt it burning as it ate her womb she know she would never have children.

slowly the needles grew longer and longer through her helpless naked body.
she felt the tentacles grow. They grew throughout her entire body,
She felt them everywhere. in her wet pussy, breast and nipples, her fingers and toes.
Some even entered her brain. and started mapping her brain functions. when it was done
it started changing her. destroying empathy and conscience and increasing lust, survival
and feeding needs. it even started to change her body, making it really strong and making
it possible to change the structure. in essence Nancy wasn't human anymore, she even started
producing a toxin in her breasts what she could ejaculate through her nipples.
she wasn herself anymore but an alien creature that only wanted to feed and fuck
and cared for nothing else.

and she was hungry...

even in her sister.

She slowly entered Michelle's room and walked to her sleeping sister.
she crawled in her bed and Say'd she had a nightmare. Michelle smiled and she say'd
it was OK. Michelle was a petite girl with brown eyes and hair and she had small
firm breasts. She was a perfect victim for Nancy's first prey.

Nancy's took the bed sheeds and rolled on her little sister, before she could react
she took her and rolled again and again. They were bound by the bedsheets and Michelle
was bound by it.
She looked in fear while her big sister ripped her clothes off her body.
leaving only her beautiful naked body

"W-W-What are you doing??"
she asked just before she felt something wet at her breast.
Nancy let some toxins drip on her sister through her nipples. It slowly got absorbed by her
firm breasts and entered her bloodstream. She felt it burn as it quickly spread through
her body. she couldn't move anymore and she lay'd on the bed with her sister on top.

Nancy ripped the sheeds of them and she looked at her sisters helpless body. she saw the
fear in her brown eyes and it really turned her on. She started to kiss her neck and bit her.
She tasted her blood and she almost came from the taste of it alone. She wanted her more
than anything in the world, and she would have her no matter what.

Nancy climbed on top of Michelle and sucked some more blood from her neck. slowly Nancy
gave in to her lust and started to suck on her firm breasts, Michelle saw how a huge
tentacle came out of her sister's pussy and she knew that that would really hurt if it
took her.
She felt the tip of the tentacle probing her pussy and touching her clit and then she felt a
sharp pain as it entered her tight little cunt. it hurt as the big rod entered her.
She wanted to scream but she couldn't. Nancy felt her sister's tight virgin pussy around
the tentacle.

Michelle's pussy started to bleed as the tentacle forced it's way into her. and the tentacle
absorbed her pussy fluids and her blood. Nancy started to rape her little sister violently
and with every thrust the tentacle entered her pussy a little deeper each time. Causing
Michelle more pain and making her bleed more and more. The more she bled the more nancy
liked it.

Suddenly Nancy felt herself cum as the tentacle moved violently in her sisters pussy
tearing it apart from the inside. Nancy's teeth penetrated Michelle's skin. she felt
her sisters teeth sink deep into her firm breast. she felt her sister suck the blood
out of her breast, as the tentacle in her pussy started to grow. she felt it at the
edge of her womb. she slowly felt the thing being pulled out of her while her sister
sucked the blood out of her breast. Michelle felt her sister's teeth sunk into her other
breast, and felt the blood being sucked out.

Nancy pushed the tentacle back into her tight little sisters pussy, Deeper and deeper.
Michelle felt it reach her womb.
She looked in fear while tentacle ripped its way through her womb.

Nancy came again and again while the tentacle ripped through her sisters body, feeding
on her blood and life. draining it both away of her little sister.
The Last thing Michelle felt was her sister teeth slowly piercing her neck and a warm feeling
of blood drippen out of het tight raped pussy.


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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2011 02:48
    you sick sick fuck!!! this totally sucks

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2011 10:38
    KingCrazy here and i have to disagree with the other person who left a post on this it is a very good story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2011 16:48
    Nasty. And good. There were some grammar issues, but otherwise very, very good. I like when sexy evil wins and cums... :-P Keep up a good work, mate!

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  • Danejarous
    12.07.2011 20:58
    You have a pretty fucking crazy imagination my friend. The most important part of a story is the title (disagree if you want). The title is what makes the reader choose your particular story over another. That explained, I must say that I clicked on your story because I saw the word Succubus (a female dream-demon). I was a little curious about how someone wrote a story concerning a Succubus; so I proceeded to read this story.

    Explanations, explained, I have to critique your story. For starters, this was obviously not my forte, but I read the whole story anyways. One elementary tip I can give you is to PROOFREAD (countless careless mistakes). Also, try to avoid using words like "thing", a proper description would suffice.

    The sheer amount of imagination that went into this story could have been enough to make this story great. Alas, I feel like you rushed your ideas, and the overall story suffered. This story obviously will attract others, but throw other people off. Neutral vote.

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  • BlackRonin
    13.07.2011 02:13
    I think you should engage someone as a proofreader and get a firmer grasp of basic spelling and grammar. I know I sound tiresome and dull when I say that, but it really is the single most important thing about getting people to take your writing seriously. Congratulations on taking the first step toward expressing yourself, and for being fearless with your subject matter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2011 12:07
    i gave the story a positive on the imaginative plot.....but it was rushed.....one of the biggest turn-ons to being controlled or transformed is the seduction aspect of it.you have talent.....control your impulse to rush through it and enjoy yourself.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2011 12:07
    i gave the story a positive on the imaginative plot.....but it was rushed.....one of the biggest turn-ons to being controlled or transformed is the seduction aspect of it.you have talent.....control your impulse to rush through it and enjoy yourself.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2012 01:05
    the charecter is not a sucuubi (the singular form of sucuubus) nor does she act remotley like one. a sucuubi is a demonic seductress who seduces men in their dreams then slowly kills them from the inside.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2012 01:05
    the charecter is not a sucuubi (the singular form of sucuubus) nor does she act remotley like one. a sucuubi is a demonic seductress who seduces men in their dreams then slowly kills them from the inside.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2016 04:41
    I loved the story. It was just my " thing". The only thing I would say, and a lot of others would as well Is check spelling grammar and just other basic things. It doesn't sound like much but it goes a long way !

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