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  1. MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 1 THE RIDE
  2. MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT CHAPTER 12 TRUTH OR DARE
MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 1 THE RIDE

Author: TAMPERER

Date: 21 July 2011

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MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 1 THE RIDE
The names have been changed to protect the “not so innocent”.
At the age of fourteen, I (Jake) was just coming into my own (My own hand that is). I was good looking I guess. A swimmer, I was long and muscular, and had that blond/straw hair that comes from spending endless hours in the pool. Having received height from my mother, and broad shoulders from my father, at 6’1” 185pounds, and 3.5%body fat, I was larger than most fully grown men but my experience was limited. I had messed around some, but I’d never seen a girl naked, or done much more than get all worked up, only to have to finish myself off later.
My sister Rachel (16 at the time) was very different. She seemed to have gotten my father’s height, and my mother’s build. At 5’2”, she barely came up to my shoulder. She was muscular, but petite (she couldn’t have weighed more than 85-90 pounds)and tan, albeit a fake tan, large green eyes that I always thought made her look elfish, and dirty blond hair about shoulder length although she always had it in a ponytail in one of those scrunchies so I’m mostly guessing on the length.
Although we were two years apart, our birthdays fell in a way that made me one of the youngest in my class, and Rachel one of the oldest in her class. This meant we were only one grade apart in school.
My parents had signed up to host an exchange student, and since they pair up exchange students with families that have children of the same age and sex, I was hoping for a guy I could get along with. I guess I hadn’t considered how much better it could be until we got the info packet from the exchange people. It included, among other things, a picture, and a short bio. It was a girl, and oh my god, she was crazy hot. She (Lidia) was from Italy; 5’9”, black long hair, and crystal blue eyes that made me need to sit down. It also contained an e-mail address, which my sister took to get acquainted with the girl that would be her room-mate for the year.
Our house was located in the suburban sprawl of Atlanta GA. A two story house, Rach and my bedrooms, and a bathroom made up the second floor; giving us privacy. Our parent’s bedroom, an office for our father, living room, and kitchen were on the first floor, and a large family room was in the basement. The front door to our house entered the living room. The back door, in the kitchen, opened onto a patio, and led to the garage in the back yard.
After a few days of finding myself creating fantasy scenarios in my head of ways I could take advantage of the opportunities of having this stunning girl living in my house, I came up with my master plan. We had 3 computers in our house; One in the family room for my parents to use, and a laptop in both my sister’s and my room. With that in mind I snuck in to my sister’s room and loaded a remote accessing program onto her computer, I loaded one on the family computer too. This let me control the other computers in the house from my computer. It worked perfectly. Assuming the computers were on, I could use the other computers just like I was sitting in front of them. I tested the web-cam on Rachel’s computer and vwala, my sister’s bedroom on my computer screen. I went back into her room to see if her computer would show what I was doing. All that gave me away was a tiny icon next to the clock, and a LED light next to the cam along the top edge of the monitor. I took a key and busted the light, praying that Rach would think it had broken in her backpack, turned her computer back off, and went back to my room to begin the 14 day long wait for Lidia to arrive.
After a week of heavy masturbation thinking of Lidia, I began to get worried. Would my plan work? What if Rach left her computer off? What if she turned it away from the good views? What if she noticed the little icon, or the broken LED light, and uncovered my devious plan? ALL THIS ANTICIPATION COULD BE FOR NOTHING!!! It would be like waking up Christmas day, only to realize I’m Jewish. I needed a real test. I decided to try it out and see what I could see.
The next morning while Rach was in the shower, I turned on my remote program and took control of her computer. My worst fears were realized. Her laptop was closed, the screen mostly black, although I could make out a small glow at the top of the screen where light was leaking in from the edge. I was about to chalk it up as a failure to launch when I heard Rach’s door close through the webcam. I hadn’t even thought of sound, so that was a plus, but it hardly made up for being blind. I listened for a minute, and heard her hair drier turn on. It was loud. I quickly turned off my speakers and put on my headset so as not to give away my little spy. Just as I put on my headset the screen came to life. There was my sister, very close. I could see the top of the towel she had wrapped around herself, her shoulders, and neck, and her jaw and lips for brief seconds. She was standing up and moving around a bit, drying her hair I guessed.
I hadn’t ever thought of my sister as a girl before, but weather because I couldn’t see her face so I could forget she was my sis, or because of the voyeur in me, I was instantly hard the way only a 14 year old guy can be. I watched her tan shoulders and graceful neck mesmerized. Several minutes passed, or maybe several seconds, or possibly a month, then the hair dryer turned off and she walked straight away from the computer. The towel she wore wrapped around her was short, just long enough to hide her butt, but short enough to show every inch of her lean, muscular, tan legs. She bounced a little as she walked which just teased me as I watched the towel rise almost high enough to see her ass. I realized she was walking to her closet and knew what I was about to see. The towel dropped. There she was, hair already in a ponytail, tan all the way from the back of her neck, down to…holy shit her ass was perfect (for me anyway); tan, and well defined, with little dimples on the sides where her muscles flexed every time she bounced lightly on the balls of her feet…cute little tan feet. I saw she had ear buds in and realized she was listening to music (which explained the bouncing). She was taking down some clothes to wear.
She turned clothes in hand, and I saw my first real live boobs. They were amazing to me. Round, and perky, they stood proud with no crease underneath, and little dark pink nipples the size of an eraser. Her stomach was flat with a trace of muscle definition, and a tiny bellybutton. And there is my first pussy. Tan of course, with a small triangle of light blond hair. It was much lighter than her ponytail, so I guess she bleached it, but I had no way of knowing if that was normal or not, and I didn’t care. It was perfect.
Now I talk about this as if it lasted forever, it seemed way to short a time for me. I hadn’t even gotten to get my dick out of my boxers before she walked out of the cam’s view. It must have been only a few minutes before she came back into view, fully dressed. I cursed the shortness of it all, turned off my computer, and went to pull on some jeans, tucked my dick into the waistband (a trick I had come up with to hide my anytime hard dick). Something was wrong though, usually this worked fine but either these jeans were low or my dick was bigger than it had ever been, because when I tried to do up my jeans, the entire head was free and clear. Even though it was Saturday, I had swim practice in 25 minutes, so I didn’t have time to pound one out. I had to just put on a long baggy shirt, and hope my dick would go down soon.
I went down to the kitchen to grab some orange juice and a granola bar to eat in the car. My mom was there franticly organizing papers for a house she was showing (she’s a relator). Rachel was there too. Was it me or did she look different somehow. She had on short jean shorts and a shirt that rose up above her bellybutton as she reached up to get a box of cereal from the cupboard. She was on her tippy-toes, and her legs and butt were not making my dick head exposure problem any better. I forced myself to look away, and directed my attention to my mom. ”I’m ready when you are” I said a bit unevenly, boy my sister had me worked up. “Oh my gosh” my mom sputtered as she looked up at me from the table. My momentary panic subsided as I looked down to see I was concealed, and my mom continued “honey, I totally forgot you had practice”.
Now here was something to take my mind off “other things” and hopefully banish the monster in my jeans. The swim team I was on was not a “summer club” fun team. We practiced year round, we practiced 3-4 hours a day, and you had to maintain high attendance or you were not allowed to go to nationals, and, as this was the first year my times would be good enough to qualify, I was not about to miss practice. My brief panic was replaced by a shock, and a renewed buzzing in my head as Rachel popped up between us (I say “popped up” because she is so short and petite that she would continually surprise me by appearing from a seeming nowhere), “I can take him” she said in a sing-song voice.
Brothers and sisters have all kind of relationships, and I suppose ours was normal. We were friendly; more friendly than neighbors who say “hi” as they get the mail, less friendly than best buds who hang out together. We would on occasion give each other a friendly shove. A hip-check when passing in the hall, or a little nudge when the other one is writing, just fun razzing really. So what happened next could easily be explained away, and, would have been no big deal, except for the big deal in my pants. She did a move that I would describe as a hip-check if it had been side on, but this was her butt to my front. Ostensibly to move me out of the way, she banged her ass into me and landed perfectly on either side of my still raging hard-on. There was just no way she could have not felt it. But she acted as if nothing was amiss, so I pretended to smile, and quickly exited the room.
I got in Rach’s jeep (a 16th b-day present) and tried to arrange myself. Now I’m just telling it like it is; my dick as of a week before was 7 ½ inches (I know, because...yes I measured) and very thick (my hands were just big enough to palm a basketball, yet I could just touch my thumb and finger when masturbating), so when my belt tucking wasn’t an option (you can’t really do that sitting down, especially when your cock head is popping out, or you’d decapitate yourself), I put my right leg up on the door-les doorframe and adjusted myself so my dick was smashed to my right leg. I checked it out, and found that barring close scrutiny, it was a good camouflage. I was just starting to wonder what was taking Rach so long, when bouncing out the door she came. She had changed out of her jean shorts. She was now wearing sun-dress style skirt, very loose and very light ending just above her knees. “Sorry” she said as she climbed into the driver’s side, “those shorts were too tight, I had to change”. “It’s O.K.” I managed, as she started up the car and backed out of the drive.
The ride started of uneventfully; the neighborhood streets were deserted this early on a Saturday, although I thought I saw Rach look at my right leg once. The problems started when we hit the first real street. Apparently, while the skirt’s own weight was sufficient to keep it down while going 25mph in our neighborhood, going 45mph in an open jeep was too much for it. Rachel barely caught it in time before it blew up and exposed what I already knew to be a fabulous sight. “Shit” she said as she struggled to hold it down and pull off the street at the same time.
My dick had gone completely beyond my control at that point, and I was surprised to hear my own voice, through the haze of horny and adrenalin that clouded my head, say in a slightly panicked tone “I can’t be late Rach”. She sat silent for a moment as though she were thinking.
“We have 3 choices” she said in her rarely used, older sister tone;”1. We can go back to the house so I can change”. “No way, I’ll be so late, Coach won’t let it count for attendance” I answered immediately. Rachel, again in that tone she used when she was in charge, said “2. I can take us on side streets so we don’t have to drive so fast.” “That’s still gona make me late” I said in a tone I hoped conveyed that I was worried about practice, not trying to get her skirt up. “Well I need both hands to drive” she said, indicating with a point, the manual transmission gear shift. “So the only other option is for you to hold down my skirt” she said in such a calm manner that I was actually embarrassed at my stuttering “what?”
“If you knew how to drive a stick” she said (did she just glance at my right leg again?) “You could shift for me.” “You know I don’t know how yet” I said in such a whine I’m surprised she didn’t make fun of me for it.
“Well I don’t see any other option” she said matter-o-factly. “O.K.” I said, and reached over with my left hand to the edge of her skirt where it met the near edge of her seat. “Are you trying to get a look at me naked” she said, a small grin on her face “you have to hold it down here” she imitated holding the edge of her skirt down to the seat between her legs. “And you have to use your other hand, or I won’t have room to shift”.
It was probably the combination of the panic of not wanting to be late, combined with Rach’s kidding accusation of wanting to see her naked, coupled with a level of hornyness I had never experienced, but, before I knew it I was sitting side-saddle, my left leg between the front two seats so that my left foot was on the floor behind Rach’s seat, my right leg in front of the stick, my right foot inches below her beautiful, outstretched right calf, my left hand on the side of the back of her seat for balance, my right hand as far from her crotch as I could get it, holding her skirt down to the front edge of her seat.
It wasn’t until I was already in position that I realized my problem. Not only was my, at this point ridiculously hard, cock’s bulge in full view, up close and personal, but as she shifted, she would be within inches of it with her right hand. This, of course, did nothing but “enflame” my problem even more. Trying my best to seem casual, and not in danger of my head exploding, I said “let’s go”. We took off like a bat out of hell. The reason seemed plain; I was going to be late, and my good older sister was trying to get me there as fast as possible. I say it “seemed” plain because I couldn’t help but notice the ferocity of her driving had several other effects. One of these was that when she gunned it from a stop, I was thrown back just as she shifted to second, which was forward and right. In other words she was basically punching my dick. The other effect was that she slid around in her seat a lot, causing my hand to continually brush the insides of her legs, and on three separate occasions she slid forward so far, she actually used my hand on her crotch to stop herself.
By the time I got to practice, I wasn’t sure I could stand, let alone work-out for 3 hours. “Thanks for the ride” I said as I shakily got out of the car. “Make sure somebody’s picking me up at 10:30” I said over my shoulder as I turned toward the natatorium (that’s a pool building). “I’ll just wait for ya” she said as she pulled away to find a parking spot.
To say I was in a weird head-space would be an understatement of epic proportions. I was as horny as it was possible to be. I had just seen my first beautiful naked girl. That beautiful naked girl was my sister. And to top it all off, she was…well I didn’t know what, but there were suspicions forming in the back of my mind that I refused to address.
I somehow managed to get into the locker room, which was both thankfully, and ominously empty, rushed to a stall, and let my horn flagpole fly free. It was the fastest, and strongest cum of my young life. Standing there, I cranked hard 3 or 4 times and it hit me. I had to hold on to the toilet paper dispensers to keep from falling, as rope after blessed rope of cum flew across the stall and streaked the back wall. When I finally finished, I had to sit down or risk passing out. After a good 5 minutes of blissful relief, I looked down. I was still hard, not as rocky solid as before but it would be unmistakable in a competitive swimsuit. I went to my locker, and looked through my suits. I picked the tightest one I had, which was my racing suit (oh well), and over it I put on my baggiest drag suit. It did a pretty good job, but then I was expecting to return to normal shortly after starting practice.
I was making my way out on deck, prepared to grovel at my coach until he relented…”what the hell” escaped my lips as I look over only to see my sister talking to Coach. I quickly approached them hoping to end the embarrassment as soon as possible…”It’s O.K.” my coach said, turning to me, “your sister explained”. I glanced at her, and she smiled her sweetest, most innocent smile, and for a moment I stood stricken. She really is breathtaking I thought…”GET YOUR WARM-UP STARTED” Coach yelped “You’ve missed half of it already”. I quickly got down to business. Warm-up was mind-numbingly boring, which is to say, its warm-up. All freestyle, which for you non swimmers means all flip turns. I mention this because it wasn’t until I finished warm-up that I realized Rach was still there. She had found a spot behind Coach directly in line with my lane two rows up on the bleachers at the end of the pool. She looked up from her book, waved a cute little wave…smiled a cute little smile and looked back down to her book. As she did so I noticed her knees were parted, not enough to see anything…maybe 4 or 5 inches, but I wondered at that just long enough to get yelled at for not paying attention, and to see Rach look up and smile again and…yes, she moved her knees a little farther apart. I still couldn’t see much, but she saw me look, I’m sure of it. I looked back up at her face and she was still smiling…little miss innocent.
Luckily our main set was a distance set, which is to say, relatively short swims punctuated by very short rests. This was lucky because I was enough faster than the others to get my own lane, so whatever I saw, no one else would see. As the set progressed, I found it more and more difficult to concentrate. In my short 10-15 second rests, I could see Rach was gradually, casually, spreading her knees wider and wider. By the time we got to the halfway break, her knees were a good 8 to 10 inches apart, and then the sun broke through a cloud, and the angels sang. The sun lit her hair like honey, and as I looked down between her legs, I saw the sun had turned a dark teasing blur into that pussy I had glimpsed for a moment just 2 hours ago. No panties…I…I don’t know how, even now, to describe the feeling when I looked up a little to see my sister Rachel smiling, seemingly oblivious to the show she was giving.
I went on to finish my set, my head swimming more than I was. Could this be all me; coincidences coupled with my new found preoccupation with Rach’s beautiful body? Or was she purposely teasing me? My lack of experience made it impossible for me to figure it out.
I finally narrowed it down to three possibilities, all of which were, frankly, terrifying. Either I was inexcusably ogling my own sister, while she innocently carried on, oblivious to the desires she was raising in me; which made me feel guilty and ashamed. Or she was trying to get me worked up to have fun at my expense; which again made me feel guilty, but also angry. Or, dare I dream it, she was enjoying turning me on; which was easily the most terrifying.
I got help deciding at the end of the set. I was resting at the wall, waiting for the other lanes to finish so we could start the last set together, willing myself to not even look in Rach’s general direction, when I heard her close to me. “Jack” she almost whispered. I turned, and my internal dialog was burned away in an instant. Rach was sitting on her heels, no more than 3 feet from me, her knees apart, her pussy gleaming in the reflected sunlight from the water. After a glance, too long to pass off as anything but what it was, I looked up to see Rach smiling. “I’ll wait for you in the car k?” she said smiling all the while.
“O.K.” I sputtered. “We’ll be done soon.” With that she bounced away, leaving me in no doubt. She wanted me to see. There was just no way any girl would sit like that in a skirt with no panties and not expect to be seen. So that let me throw out the “innocent sister” option. That left me with teasing; either at my expense, or for both of our enjoyment. I thought through my options as I finished practice. What could I do to figure out what was happening? I had a startling revelation. The best course of action would be to give it back as good as I got it. That would be perfect, either way. If she was just teasing me as a joke, the joke could work both ways. If she liked turning me on, I’d show her just how turned on I was.
My cock was concealable with a strategically placed towel, as I headed for the locker-room. I skipped the shower for obvious reasons and went straight to my locker. I could have gone back to the stall and jacked off again to maybe reduce the size of my cock, for a while anyway, but a big cock is just what I needed for my newly formed plan. Luckily I was alone in my isle of the locker-room. I looked through my locker and found an old pair of supper baggy shorts I’d used for a drag suit last summer. They were pretty short, but very loose. I quickly took off my suits and sighed with relief as my painfully hard cock sprang free. I put on the baggy shorts without boxers, and had to laugh a little at the spectacle. I might as well have camped in there. I was tenting a good 4-5 inches away from my body. I decided against wearing a shirt. My shoulders, chest, and stomach were tanned and muscular, and I could use any bit of help I could get to even the odds at the game I was starting. So with only tented baggy short shorts, and flip-flops, and a towel over my shoulder to temporarily hide my raging hard on, I exited the natatorium to find my sister Rach waiting at the drop-off loop in the passenger’s seat of her jeep.
“I thought I’d help you learn how to use a stick” she said innocently smiling up at me as I approached. ‘That’d be great Rach!” I replied enthusiastically as I ran around to the driver’s side, and, throwing my towel in the back, hopped in, my dick bouncing nicely. I was pleased to see Rach had noticed, and that innocent smile she had so coolly worn, faltered as she stared at my swaying cock for a moment, before looking back up to me, regaining her composure, and her seemingly oblivious smile. It seemed more forced now, and I knew I had thrown her off her game.
“What do I do first” I said, pretending not to notice her momentary loss of composure. Back on her game in a flash, she jumped up on the seat, tuned towards me on her knees, sat on her heals and said “The most important thing is the clutch. You need to push it with your left foot whenever you want to shift.” I pushed it all the way down and waited for her to go on. “Good!“ she said “now grab the stick” and she took my hand and placed it on the gear-shift knob, her hand over mine. Even though I had seen her naked, the warmth of her soft hand on mine sent a thrill through my body, and my dick bounced in response. She tried to hide that she noticed, but I saw it in her face. There was excitement in her eyes she couldn’t quite hide. “Um...O.K…here’s first” she said as she shifted, through my hand. “Now let out the clutch slowly, and give it a little gas.” I did as she instructed, and the car jerked a little, and stalled. “Shit, sorry” I muttered as I let go of the wheel, a little deflated. “That’s O.K.” she beamed, “It’s hard.”; a double meaning if ever there was one, and she glanced at my cock again for the briefest instant.
“I’ve got an idea.” She said, reaching down under my seat. Her shirt hung away from her body as she leaned over, and I saw those amazing boobs hanging away from her chest; perfect half spheres. The driver’s seat slammed to the back as she pulled the seat release, putting me as far from the steering wheel as I could get. With that, she stood up on the passenger’s seat, stepped over to the small part of the driver’s seat between my legs, turned her but into my face, bent over, grabbed the wheel, and hopped/swung herself down onto the set in front of me. This had an unfortunate result. The baggy shorts I had so masterfully chosen to accentuate my “attributes”, were grabbed by her but as she slid into place, pulling my throbbing cock free of confinement, where it bobbed happily between us.
Stunned into paralysis, I sat there as she made herself comfortable, and restarted the jeep. “O.K.” she said, completely back in control of the situation. “Put your feet back on the pedals” she instructed, and grabbing my hand once again “and your hand back on the stick.” Then she slid off her sandals, and put her pretty little feet on top of mine. “Now I’ll drive, and you just feel it O.K.?” I muttered “uhu” as she curled her little toes into the top of my left foot, pushed down, giggled a little, threw it in gear, and let up on my foot, and away we went.
At first she had sat on the very edge of the seat, but every time we shifted, she slid a little closer. My legs were spread wide, and the head of my dick was coming close to the 3 inch gap of flesh between her shirt and skirt. With my hands occupied, there was nothing I could do but watch in horror/anticipation, as she inched closer and closer. We came to a stop. “O.K. I’m going to show you how to pop the clutch” she said, clearly excited. “Push up hard on this foot” she caressed my left foot with her’s, my dick pulsing in response, “when I let up.” The caress turned into a stomp. She threw the stick (and my hand) into first, pushed down hard on my right foot (the gas), giggled, wiggled her toes on my left foot, and as the engine roared, she said “Now!” and both of our left feet came up in unison. I guess I didn’t really know what “popping the clutch” meant, because I was not prepared. As the tires screeched, Rach was thrown back into me with force, my dick slammed between us like a big pipe between to flat boards. I know she felt it. She even wiggled a bit. “Again!” she said as she smashed her feet onto mine, threw the stick into second, wiggled her toes on my left foot again, and “Now!” And again she was thrown against my cock. “Again!”…and we repeated this to fourth gear, my cock threatening to explode. “Hold on to me!” she shouted over the wind and engine. “I took my left arm from the wheel, which wasn’t doing anything there anyway, and looped it around her waist. “Tighter!” she yelled with glee, and I squeezed her into me, my dick throbbing into her back. “Breaks she yelled, and we moved our right feet in unison, and she stomped on my foot with more force than I thought possible. The tires bit into the street, and it was my turn to be thrown into her. With my hand no longer on the wheel, I could do little to stop my forward momentum. It was during the 10 seconds or so that it took us to stop, that I started to cum. My hips thrusting involuntarily, I humped my sister’s back. The car had stopped, but I had not. I couldn’t stop it once it started. I just kept grinding my dick into the top of her butt crack; I must have cum for 30 seconds strait, holding Rachel to me, shooting load after load all over her back, and my chest and stomach.
When I finally started to come down, the reality hit me like a sledge hammer. Teasing each other was one thing, but I had crossed the line. Would Rach yell? Would she cry? Would she tell our parents?
“That was fun Hu?” She said as if nothing had happened. “I…uh…I’m sorry Rach. I don’t” I started to say, she cut me off “No prob, BIG BRO” she said, leaning forward a bit and wiggling her ass up against the base of my now soaking cock. “Took you long enough though” she cooed looking over her shoulder at me, the innocent look gone from her, her smile was wicked.
She climbed off of me, and flopped back into the passenger seat. “I think you can do it now” she said, back to cute innocent Rach in an instant. “I’ll help you with the stick O.K.?” and she put her hand back on mine. I was amazed, but I had actually learned how to drive a stick despite the distraction. I managed to drive to our neighborhood without any problem, and it was nice having Rach’s hand on mine. It was like we were holding hands. Her hand was soft and light, and she moved it slowly as I drove, her fingers sliding up and down mine. We stopped a couple of blocks from the house so I wouldn’t get caught driving, and she drove the last bit, smiling and innocent, like nothing had happened.
When we pulled in to the drive, she turned off the car, got out, and started walking to the house. A sudden fear took me. I didn’t want this new Rach to disappear. What if she went back to the old Rachel? I would be lost. I yelled out to her in a desperate grasp to hold on to something we had shared. “Thanks...” meaning to thank her for teaching me how to drive, but shut myself up when I realized I could be heard inside, and would get both of us in trouble. She turned as she reached the door, “My pleasure Big Bro” she said with a cute wink, and she was gone. I laid back in the jeep, the sun on my shoulders and a contented smile on my face. I didn’t know what would happen next, but one thing was for sure, Rach was not going to disappear, and I would find a way to take control, to win the game. This strange game she had started, would not end now.
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  • crackedjaguar
    21.07.2011 20:22
    Next time round amigo space out your paragraphs...

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.07.2011 23:52
    that was good for your first story. Keep it up not many are this good this fast I know I wasn't keep up the good work
    ~shadowmancer13666~

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2011 00:30
    A GREAT START I LIKE IT SO MUCH HURRY UP WITH PART 2 ;; JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2011 02:51
    unbelievable. crazy hot

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2011 03:22
    Good story man, but you got to use spacing next time. It is hard to read without them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2011 10:39
    Very good story with a lot of promise... Might want to consider having someone proof read and edit the story for you though. I like how the story is going.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2011 12:06
    Great story. Definitely write more it is refreshing to have a new twist to the brother/sister stories. Just keep doing what you're doing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2011 18:55
    this is a good story you just need some proof reading and it should be in the papers =) i always read these brother/sister stories and wonder if they are real =)

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  • crackedjaguar
    22.07.2011 21:48
    formatting is better... now work on proof reading ...

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2011 23:24
    OH WHY ARE YOU TORTURING ME! TEASING ME LIKE THAT

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 01:21
    More! More! More! This is an awesome story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 02:01
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
    quickly!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 02:02
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
    quickly!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 04:42
    Enjoyed it just like the first one! Just a few word errors, but great work.

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  • Bobbyqc
    23.07.2011 08:10
    Very nicley done, looking forward to reading more, I like stories with a tease , at the table that was just the right choice.
    I can remember my teaseasing sister it was fun while it lasted .

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 08:54
    Fantastic story, keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 08:58
    Truly an awesome story so far. Keep going like this and you can start a new religion :P

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 11:41
    Amazing! I haven't read a series this good in a long time. Keep at it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 12:01
    that was so hott imstill hard from reading it,keep it going...

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 12:12
    was ther supozed to be a exchange student here? loved it, it was funnyly awsome

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 12:37
    first comment . loved the humor and all around story cant wait for part 4!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 13:39
    keep it going this is getting so hott,i wish my sister would do that for me..

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 14:01
    Liking the build up, but they really need to get around to fucking at some point. I be its gonna be hot too.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 16:24
    Really hot !! Keep up the gud work.... Eager to read part 4....

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 16:26
    This is awesome. Don't get at the point too fast :P Keep the brother-sister team and the teasing. They are the best elements. You might as wel introduce some/a temporary side role(s) which can be teased. Did I already say it's awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 16:34
    Super! One of the best I read. Hope this one will last. I'm all ear, I mean eye.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 22:38
    can't wait for part 4!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 22:56
    ANOTHER GOOD PART NOW FOR PART 3 ;;JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2011 23:10
    EACH PART IS GETTING BETTER BUT WHEN WILL YOU GET TO FUCK HER SOON I HOPE 9/10 ;;;JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2011 00:07
    Nice I wish I had a sister

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2011 00:37
    good... whats this about an exchange student?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2011 00:53
    keep up the tease :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2011 02:37
    Great story, Paragraphs please! It is too hard to read.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2011 02:48
    Nicely done story line, very hot. Stillagod1

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2011 06:20
    shit that story was hot had beat off reading it reminded me of my sis

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2011 16:51
    Great story keep doing what youre doing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2011 19:06
    Very good story can not wait for part 4

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 03:20
    LOL this story is amazing, but I find it funny that there has been only one mention of the Exchange student :P

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 12:10
    i love this story and i cant wait to read more of it please be quick with the next chapter keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 13:38
    Thhis is amazing keep going

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  • senorlongo
    25.07.2011 14:48
    The story line is excellent but you have so many typos, misspellings, wrong words--like weather when you meant whether and breaks when you meant brakes. Proofreading would have helped and spacing as mentioned by the others. I'm looking forward to the other parts.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 15:10
    great cant wait for more please

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 16:03
    I enjoyed the series but your misuse of words is disturbing and distracting

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 16:39
    Continue continue I can't keep my fingers out of my pussy love ur stories continue quickly

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 18:51
    well done keep it cumimg next one please!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 19:23
    Woah this is just getting better. There is a certain element of randomness and fun that I miss in othet stories. Also, you keep the emotions of the persons more or less realistic, which is a very good thing. And third you give enough description to let the reader form an image but without getting too descriptive. A fine balance. I am eagerly waiting for the next part. You've got my vote.
    PS: Found a little mistake. Crtl+F for "moved my knees". The 'my' should be 'her'.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 19:24
    Woah this is just getting better. There is a certain element of randomness and fun that I miss in othet stories. Also, you keep the emotions of the persons more or less realistic, which is a very good thing. And third you give enough description to let the reader form an image but without getting too descriptive. A fine balance. I am eagerly waiting for the next part. You've got my vote.
    PS: Found a little mistake. Crtl+F for "moved my knees". The 'my' should be 'her'.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 21:12
    Excellent STORY ARCH. Keek it going.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2011 22:40
    I love it, plz more, plzzz

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  • GrafMan
    26.07.2011 12:08
    greaa storryy :D loved it. the whole series has been great, keep up the good work and hurry up with the next part :D

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  • Lolitalover46
    26.07.2011 17:51
    A very nice start for a series. Brotherf sister sex is great. Keep writing don't put to much stock in what grammer police are saying. Likeemyoung!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2011 19:18
    still waiting for an exchange student here

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2011 22:12
    alpha.n.omega.xyz: excited (no pun intended) and waiting for the next :3

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2011 00:06
    Great story, but in this part, you left out the end of a sentence or made an error editing when they are climbing the fence, and it pretty much ruins that part. Here it is:

    Small, and the Then, licking her cum off my chin, she cheerfully said “Let’s go.”

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2011 04:29
    I enjoyed it immensely, but you lacked any part about the oral that he gave her before they went over the fence other than "licking her cum off my chin...". Whats up with that? It kind of ruins the rest of the story cause you referred back to it a couple of times, so it would be nice to see a revision with that part added. Anyways hope to see more of this series from you!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2011 14:20
    Fantastic Story!! You are an excellent writer. I actually felt sorry for Sharon not getting in on the action. This story has so many possibilities and I hope you continue writing for 'Several' more chapters.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2011 20:21
    surely your mom would pick up on all the word play

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2011 20:21
    surely your mom would pick up on all the word play. She cant be the dumb

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 02:48
    ANOTHER EXCELLENT PART NOW YOU HAVE TO FUCK BOTH GIRLS IN THE NEXT P-ART ;;JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 03:11
    Good missing chapter , now that you have taken you with that weres part five

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 04:00
    Truly great stories! Some of the best ive read

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 10:42
    Hurry up with part 5

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 14:26
    Major disappointment

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 14:48
    I can't wait for the rest. Excellent series.

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  • alpha.n.omega.xyz
    28.07.2011 15:13
    lol hahaha i'm glad you fixed that part. i didn't even notice

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 16:19
    Keep hem coming very interesting and fun to read...

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 16:19
    omg - first thought.
    Hope they get more... well you know. Lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 16:51
    brilliant series, will be back on monday to read a few in a row ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 17:36
    Looking foward to next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 17:49
    Amazing...I cum every time

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 21:05
    What computer program did she use if this is a true story?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 21:29
    Great story. I love how you aren't rushing sex. Makes the time it comes that much better!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 21:30
    Best series ever!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2011 23:20
    Hurry Up With The Next Part!! =D I Love It

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2011 00:55
    i could care less about the exchange student, love the building anticipation. keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2011 00:56
    i could care less about the exchange student, love the building anticipation. keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2011 06:17
    very exciting part... hope to see more soon ;-)

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2011 10:11
    Are you sure this story is "True" your profile says you are 34 years old, and your story says you are 14 when this happend, therefore it would have been 20 years ago (1991) BUT the first victorias secret never opened untill 1993...

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2011 11:23
    the best i have ever read. hope you can manage to keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2011 14:32
    fantastic can't wait for more

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2011 15:33
    Its completely fake but gd to read

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2011 17:54
    You guys are really, really stupid. It says he's 34, but he could easily be under the age of 18, and this really happened, but he doesn't want to say his real age.

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  • Mbos14
    30.07.2011 09:24
    maybe its isnt his own true storie but he heard it from some one

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.07.2011 21:16
    Sounds true to me. You can tell fake ones. Little facts remembered make it seem true and the emotions. However the victoria secret factoid is a bit of a problem...
    Ah but its not a problem...1991?? Whered you get that!? VS opened in 1978. Wiki it.

    So this is true. I deduce true/false for a living. This is true.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 01:43
    it was al rite but i realy like kissing and lesbians

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 03:48
    Why did you put Exchanged Student in the title if after 5 stories only the first mentions her.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 10:00
    i hope there are more comming

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 11:19
    In The first story it said he was 14 and she's 16. Why is jake referred to as Big Bro? did I miss something?

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 12:34
    Wikipedia is so unreliable, anybody can edit it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 16:54
    Hurry Up With The Next Part! ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 17:52
    What computer program let's you run the other persons webcam and see it on a diff computer?

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 17:52
    What computer program let's you run the other persons webcam and see it on a diff computer?

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 19:27
    hurraaaaaah u made my weekend ,,, hope many more parts too cum ;-))

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 19:29
    I can't believe I'm being so fussy about what has to be one of the best series I've ever read, but the way you spelt "weather" means rain or sun. You meant "whether". Sorry about that. The important thing is that what was already a wonderful piece of porn is turning into a really beautiful love story as well. I want more and I want it now!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 19:54
    hot, can't wait for more to cum. would have liked a kittle more detail in the sex parts cause it has been building up to them for ages

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 19:54
    hot, can't wait for more to cum. would have liked a little more detail in the sex parts cause it has been building up to them for ages

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 19:55
    hot, can't wait for more to cum. would have liked a little more detail in the sex parts cause it has been building up to them for ages

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 21:20
    I hope the exchange student shows up soon. He won't have anything left for her if she doesn't.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2011 21:41
    Please get Rach on the pill so Jake can fill her full of his hot cummmm

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 02:21
    awesome story mate, but i think u should get to a threesome with sharon... thatd be hot

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 04:13
    where is the student?

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  • catmanD10
    01.08.2011 04:21
    Not bad, not bad, I like the way u r taking your time, drawing it out, the build up is excellent. Great story, keep up the good work!

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  • catmanD10
    01.08.2011 04:22
    Not bad, not bad, I like the way u r taking your time, drawing it out, the build up is excellent. Great story, keep up the good work!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 08:44
    Lovin' this series MAJOR

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 12:55
    great part again... i like how you take your time... Keep writting like that i love

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 13:12
    What was that computer program you used to view her webcam?

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 14:38
    I dont get why Jake is referd as "Big Bro" if he is 14 and Rachel is 16. And he calls her "lil Sis"

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 16:18
    Great Story, but where is the exchange student?

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  • NKage
    01.08.2011 19:14
    Awesome story.Can't wait for the next part.Seriously,when is the next part coming out?

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 19:19
    Duh, the big bro thing is kinda a fetish/naughty thing. When I was 17 I had a 20 year old calling me Daddy O.o

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2011 20:26
    The "Big Bro" is probably in reference to the size of his penis.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 02:11
    Lil pussy
    Big dick
    How hard is that to understand. Y'all are fucking retarded.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 03:11
    oh my thats amazing

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  • alpha.n.omega.xyz
    02.08.2011 11:57
    lol. yeah i have to admit that your mother is pretty naive

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 12:24
    The format was terrible and you r dragging this toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 12:25
    this sucks just stop fucking writing

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  • retrod
    02.08.2011 13:25
    Pay no attention to these idiots. Keep it up, man. Good series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 13:31
    The last too comments Are Horribly wrong. They need to shut the fuck up. The are jealous because they probably wright like shit. But to be fair the format was bad plz revert to the old one but the story line is great DO NOT for any reason quit writing this becasue some Bitches dont know how to write

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 13:35
    Err ignore the two readers, the format was great and easy to read and your story is awesome, I love character developement.

    Please go on and continue this just like you've done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 13:35
    Err ignore the two readers, the format was great and easy to read and your story is awesome, I love character developement.

    Please go on and continue this just like you've done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 14:48
    i love all your story keep them comming please

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 14:48
    i love all your story keep them comming please

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 15:12
    This is an awsome series bro. i read your stories everyday. and i show my friends them dont listen to any of those rude comments. you got talent bro. and is Rach for sale ;) ? jk. but it sas your 34 now. i want to know how you and Rach's relationship is now ? plz add that in some time? good luck.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 15:29
    This has litraly became my favorite series iv ever read, I come on here just looking for the next story in the series. Very good work, looking forward to the rest. Keep it up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 17:00
    I.dont usually comment..but well done on your series please type faster!! Lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 17:55
    Great story so far, and great intro!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 18:51
    Great story so far, and great intro!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 18:53
    Great story so far, and great intro!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 22:47
    Lol suck my left nut roflcopter

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  • Mrpleasure
    02.08.2011 23:43
    Awesome live the story's

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.08.2011 23:57
    ANOTHER GREAT PART THIS ONE OF THE BEST SERIES ON HERE WAITING FOR PART 7;;JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 00:15
    I DONT WANT THE LEFT NUT DAMMIT lulz...

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  • nispe5x
    03.08.2011 00:25
    i'll take a peanut instead :) i like peanuts. great story :) can't wait for the next installment

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 00:30
    Amazing...keep them coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 01:12
    I noticed there was no mention of the "slave hours" in this story. I'm just curious as to whether you'll be bring that up later? I've been reading this series as you wrote. I love it! It has all the elements of a great saga and I'm always excited for the next installment!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 01:30
    Rach, if only all sisters were as wonderful as her, what a great world we would have! My friend keep up the great story, I for one am enjoying it, I only wonder why all these anonymous readers have to ashamed of who or what they are ? Oh well write on dude!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 02:22
    ANOTHER GOOD PART I HOPE YOU FINISH UP FUCK BOTH
    THE OTHER 2 GIRLS ;; JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 10:29
    I like the series very much and look forward to reading more. I think your style of writing flows very well, and your character description is also excellent (in my opinion). Thanks for the entertainment.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 11:06
    i love how you take the storie in a nice pace. manny of the writhers on this site can learn alot from you. sry for my bad spelling

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 15:42
    This is goin to be a whole porn novel when you finish!! Keep it going!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 16:21
    its a pun, refering to a part of his anatomy thats big

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 17:52
    best story I've read!

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  • Shadowknightoftime
    03.08.2011 23:34
    Now this is great, i have read some like this on others sites that turned out ... horrid but this makes them look like shit

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2011 23:53
    Lol I love your intro It was hilarious but omgggg Italians!! I wish I was this guy lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2011 00:05
    ha ha ha mom's can be dumb sometimes but there not stuipd, unless they are/were on drugs then ahwell anyway great 2nd piece

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2011 00:18
    Cum hard everytime!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2011 01:37
    you have a great talent. playboy publishes books. you should look for a way to have this publishes. i know i would love to have this to read whenever i could.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2011 04:54
    At the begining you call yourself Jake but near the middle before "Jake" is done swimming the sister calls him Jack. Just thought i'd let you know :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2011 10:05
    great story I give the whole series 100/10 as it is just that good.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2011 13:01
    so ... whens 8 mate J/K lol its coming soon lol nice work

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2011 00:49
    i like the story but dont like how its in church, thats just sacreligious.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2011 14:07
    Yeah man, you need to work out your spacing. Also, a few words that I found misspelled, weather should have been whether, and you spelled vwala verey well fo a phonetic speller, but it's not an English word. Oh well, it's spelled 'voila' for future reference.
    I only wrote this much because I care. I really enjoyed this story and you should keep up the good work!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2011 20:08
    Hurry te f*ck up with the next 1

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.08.2011 00:43
    hurry the fuck up with the next one!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.08.2011 16:22
    Dude, when is 8 coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2011 13:06
    To the poster six down, talking about PlayBoy publishing, that won't happen. for one big reason:

    INCEST

    This is a big no-no in today's society, getting it published would be a near-impossibility. While these are great stories, the government would have a field day if this hit the streets.

    Also waiting patiently..(im) for the next installment. I LOVE IT.

    NGSalem

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2011 14:13
    i just read all 7 in 1 go... I need number 8!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2011 15:20
    Come onnnn last one was 5 days agooo

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2011 15:30
    Hey Bro, great story. Have you ever thought about "yellow showers"? They are fun to and fun to write about. I think that would be a great addition to all the stuff the 3 - 4 are doing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2011 15:37
    love the series so far

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2011 17:27
    The next one better be extremely long and amazing because of the wait that we have had to put up with! (That's what she said)

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  • TAMPERER
    08.08.2011 00:39
    Sorry for tne long wait. My computer died a horrid death. I'm just putting the final touch to chapter 8. I should be posting it tomorow.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 04:48
    It's. Spelled whether not weather

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 08:44
    Sorry for tne long wait. My computer died a horrid death. I'm just putting the final touch to chapter 8. I should be posting it tomorow.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 08:44
    Great stories and some good comments as well. I am Susan and a lesbian. Here is a suggestion that might fit right into the story. I suggest that you make the visitor a few years older than Rach. Once she is part of the circle and they are all at it, mother surprises them. Major problem but she overcomes it and joins the group as well, since she actually has watched them in action on HER OWN computer. She was waiting for a chance to surprise them and to join them. Then go into some real nice lesbian action.

    Keep it CUMing :) Susan

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 11:21
    Keep writing luv the story!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 12:48
    Im 14 and my sisters 16 and im getting ideas nice story

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 14:12
    Hey Temperer, I just love your stuff and being a lesbian I nearly cum when I read these sections. I am Noreen and have read the "golden shower" suggestion and would love to read about it. Also the idea with the mother is turning me on. Let's see you have now Sharon, Rach, hopefully Lidia and the mother and poor "BRO". I can only envision what a piss party could happen if they all would do it in the tub. Have them drink a m inimum of 16 oz. water, tee, coffee or other liquid an hour before. They can only pee in the tub even if no one is in it. Start collecting the piss for the wet party later when they pee on each other, drink it and wash all over. Maybe have a drinking contest with water, beer, soda or even pee. Winner will be used as a toilet where every body pisses on her. Include "BRO" or leave him out.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 16:13
    It's tomorrow. Where is the story that you promised us?

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 16:14
    It's tomorrow. Where is the story that you promised us?

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 16:14
    It's tomorrow. Where is the story that you promised us?

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 16:41
    next part soon done? its HARD waiting

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2011 20:21
    Cmon i just came like 3x but i need the next 1 hurry :)

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  • witch
    09.08.2011 07:03
    pretty damn good man keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2011 11:40
    fyi when he said post it tomorrow he posted it but it takes 2-3 days for it to show up on here though so it should be later today or tomorrow when its up

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2011 21:20
    what up with all the?marks

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2011 21:20
    what up with all the?marks

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2011 21:48
    Wtf where is next posy

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 00:37
    I am alittle too horny to wait for this next story cause tomorrow was yesterday

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 18:54
    best story on the site, hurry upp with the next part, cant wait!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 20:51
    Well worth the wait. Great pacing as always and a spectacular climax. Hopefully your computer can handle another installment without crashing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 20:56
    Fucking awesome story you are a freaking poet

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 21:27
    One more excellent chapter! Keep up the good work!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 21:29
    wow it is getting better and better each episode! hurry with the next one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 21:32
    Do I even need to read the story to give it a positive review??? I think not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • JohnLocke
    10.08.2011 22:43
    To the Author: Don't copy and paste your own work as you see it in the edit page to make corrections. Authors always see quotation marks as ?'s, but when displayed the ?'s don't show up so copy and paste the published article not your copy.

    Otherwise good job!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 22:50
    Ow Ow, too hard!! Should not have read this on the bus :~S

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 23:17
    excellent work, cannot wait for the next chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2011 23:17
    excellent work, cannot wait for the next chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 00:49
    your computer had to take a breakk to "relieve" itself

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 04:14
    fucking awesome cant wait for the next chapter to come.. or should i say cum lmao

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 04:56
    Do I even need to read the story to give it a positive review??? I think not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 05:12
    Do I even need to read the story to give it a positive review??? I think not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 06:03
    :0 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAARRRRHHHH!!!!! Amazingly epic with awesomeness.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 06:29
    best story on the site, hurry upp with the next part, cant wait!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 07:20
    Yessss! Please hurry up for chap9!!! Thank youuuuu!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 07:39
    Do I even need to read the story to give it a positive review??? I think not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 08:13
    ANOTHER EXCELLENT PART GETTING BETTER WITH EACH PART ;;; JJ

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  • MR.kool
    11.08.2011 10:05
    You should check out the pictures of the characters....they help you visulaize better!

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  • MR.kool
    11.08.2011 10:06
    OH SHIT!....wrong story...I was talking about Dark Brother's story...lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 17:13
    Fuckin amazing man. keep up the good worl

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 18:48
    That was the fuckin' best story i've read on this website

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2011 19:56
    Who cares if it was fake? This was awesome!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2011 02:13
    that was bloody brilliant please keep writing i give it 10/10, 100% It made me cum all over my chair!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2011 08:54
    Stop givin shit to ppl on how they miss spell things. u write a very long stori and try to make no mistakes

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  • techmonkey
    12.08.2011 13:11
    Definitely the best series I've ever read on here, Please Please keep it up :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2011 15:32
    Great series especially if Lydia is not on birth control

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2011 23:17
    Awsome.... Keep them coming.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.08.2011 13:51
    Awsome.... Keep them coming.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.08.2011 19:17
    Good story i need more with your sister and lydia any chance your mum could join in and you watch though your web cam ??

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.08.2011 20:20
    Dude where is the next part :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2011 02:24
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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2011 08:23
    THis is fucking good stuff... you should be a professional!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2011 17:55
    You guys are all FAGS. Stop arguing about shit that doesn't matter and enjoy the damn story. A lot of people on this site are under 18, so what? Remember when you used to read all those playboys and watch those porno when you were under 18? If you have complaints about it report it if you feel necessary but don't troll on the guys story.

    And good job man! Keep writing I love em! (Pay no mind to these ridiculous criticisms)

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2011 21:13
    where is the next part :(

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  • KrazyKortney
    14.08.2011 21:29
    omg this story is my fave on this site I loveeeee it! It makes me sooooo Wetttt! ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2011 01:08
    i wish you'd involve the neighbor a lot more :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2011 10:20
    You guys keep on giving suggestions of things for him to write about. But this is a true story so...

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2011 22:12
    Fuckin bitch ass motherfucker where is the next part!!! Hurry the fuck up asshole. You fucking bitch stop sucking dick and do the next part

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  • widegarth2112
    16.08.2011 10:28
    Amazing series. Thank you for your hard work on this. I'll keep reading! Congratulations!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 21:08
    This story gets better and better each episode, Can't wait till the next one. this one of the best ones on this site.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 21:43
    So the computer is still on, and Lydia is going to wake up and see Rachel and her "Big bro" all cuddled up naked in his bed! I can hardly wait to see how you handle that!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 21:43
    Excellent story keep writing can't wait for chapter 10

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 23:16
    DAMN this story keeps getting better and better cant wait for the next chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 23:48
    Excellent story!! I can't wait for more!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 01:36
    imageine you had a 3some with Rach Lidia and your nierbor? -J.B

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 01:52
    Great Job. Looking forward to the next chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 03:13
    @J.B Rach Lidia and the neighbour would be a foursome

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 03:57
    Woops. yes a 4 some. lol.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 03:57
    I WANT MORE!!!!
    This story is so great!!!

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  • KingIcefyre
    17.08.2011 08:25
    Everytime I get to the end of one of your stories all I want to do is kill you because I have to wait for the next part. Keep writing don't stop and the time you take to write each one makes them even better

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 09:45
    TAMPERER, youre the man!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 11:24
    everytime I read this It makes me want to throw up...lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 11:25
    so glad this shit has ended...finally couple of weeks time beofre you write another one

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 13:48
    dude the story is great but there are few defects
    first u have spred the story too much it will b difficult to close it
    sec some time i cant understand ur scene discriptions
    and third plz bring some thing new in the story i mean except form the conventional sex

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 17:56
    My nickname is "Coach," and I have introduced myself elsewhere in comments. Not knowing how this site treats uploaded material it is difficult to tell whether you have learned to overcome the transition problem or your writing has improved tremendously during the production of these nine parts of an excellent story. Were I teaching you in a course on creative writing, I would have scored you about 6/10 on Part One and 9.5/10 on Part Nine.

    The Coach's Three Rules of creative writing, elsewhere mentioned, are:

    * Write about what you know.

    *Properly use wording, grammar, punctuation, and language.

    *It's not what you put in, but what you can take out.

    I assume you do your own editing. My only suggestion is that you take a look at the prepositional phrases ending your sentences. Question every word. Is this word important to the telling of the story, or can the same, or improved, story be conveyed without it?

    What would Hemingway do?

    Thanks, Coach

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 20:00
    Thank you for misspelling a couple of words and misplacing a comma. This spares me the embarrassment of rating this story 11/10.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 20:39
    Dude I fuckin love ur stories please keep up da great work son

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 02:53
    You are an awsome writer man. Do not stop! i have one question though, and i put this question up before on a different part of your amazeing series! okay now to the question, please please please put this in one of your inrtos in one of your parts some time! i want to know if you and Rach still do this,or just explain how you guys relationship is now? please! -J.B

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 02:54
    You are an awsome writer man. Do not stop! i have one question though, and i put this question up before on a different part of your amazeing series! okay now to the question, please please please put this in one of your inrtos in one of your parts some time! i want to know if you and Rach still do this,or just explain how you guys relationship is now? please! -J.B

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  • Mrpleasure
    18.08.2011 02:55
    I knew you got the message and it's funny that you won't say Wichita is true or not all I know is that the story's are great and I got to c what lidia and rach look like

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 05:28
    Great story man! I am looking forward to the next ones. Oh and Coach, fuck off.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 05:30
    whats the program your sister used

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 05:33
    Hey great story, just one thing what is the program you used to gain access?

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 21:21
    @Mrpleasure how did you get to see what Rach and Lidia look like? J.B

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 22:13
    Can you get another 9 chapters? Maybe more!!! Hope yu'll tell which parts are real sometime!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 22:26
    Anon reader who told coach to fuck off? I disagree with you and think he is very right. The author's grammar and spelling have gotten much better. Although I think that the stories have been so far excellent, I do think that because of the spelling / grammar in the first story, it did make it slightly less enjoyable to read. Though only slightly.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2011 08:22
    plz bring d next asap v waitin.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2011 12:06
    This is a really interesting and hot story. Only one criticism--straight, not strait which is a narrow body of water. Positive vote

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2011 17:40
    what is the difference between this and the original?

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2011 20:19
    very well done sir. words cant explain how well you have done with these stories. i like your style of writing. insta faved

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2011 22:37
    Maybe referring to a part of his anatomy that is big or is it his general six foot three inches and 185lbs? She's also quite small remember.

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  • Mrpleasure
    21.08.2011 17:37
    I didn't mean to say I got to see what they look like I meant to say I want to see

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2011 19:00
    can't wait for part 10

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2011 23:00
    keep em cumming. these are great stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2011 00:50
    So you're 34 and you had laptops and webcams 20 years ago?

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2011 08:57
    Your an actual fucking legend, keep up the work dude XD

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2011 17:08
    HURRY UP!! I have read this story 7 times lmao great series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2011 20:11
    Dude get part 10 doneeee

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2011 21:17
    You take forever I mean forever to write these amazing stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2011 21:18
    You take forever I mean forever to write these amazing stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2011 04:39
    Wanderful series, unlike many other stories here the characters have realistic interactions. I guess that is because it comes from a real story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2011 11:44
    How long is it gonna take u to finish part 10

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2011 13:59
    You know what would make your series better............ If you wrote faster fantastic job with this series I enjoyed every mintue of reading it just won't enjoy every mintue waiting for the next

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2011 20:13
    Ur story is so fuckin hot,just wish Rach wud allow u to stick ur dick in lidia's pussy

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2011 21:23
    hurry up you slow bitch.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2011 21:26
    are you almost done?

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  • nispe5x
    25.08.2011 00:22
    ahh we're dieing for the next installment!!! Please hurry :3

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2011 01:11
    its been over eight days.....just saying

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2011 04:15
    hurry up with next part please

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2011 09:33
    Soooo... wheres that exchange student at? xD
    Well anyway, good story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2011 21:28
    come on man.. nxt part

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  • Elitemohawkrob
    25.08.2011 22:52
    Come on now man if you don't hurry I'm gonna start writing them for ya lol jk not really but for real your good but ya got to keep the flow

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  • Elitemohawkrob
    25.08.2011 22:56
    FYI if you love this series the all 3 series in progress by darkbrother are great to help fill the gaps between chapter releases they read as follows:I found my sister stripping,Broken bliss, and the newest subject zero all 3 connect and are still in progress and really good

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2011 23:13
    nine days and counting

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  • Longjohn4690
    26.08.2011 00:05
    I concur to the below post darkbrother is a very talented writer and all three of his stories in progress are amazing and he is pretty quick with adding stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2011 03:24
    I love this series, and agree the the dark brother series are excellent as well, but plz put out the next part

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2011 21:17
    ten days and counting

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 00:59
    Unless you have died, there is no excuse for such a long lapse between your stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 02:38
    please hurry with the next chapter!!!!!!! I CANNOT WAIT!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 07:56
    Still waiting on the next chapter please hurry with it this and another series are the only two I care to read.. sorry getting impatient :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 16:16
    can you give us an idea when its going to be out

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 17:49
    Hutry up with the next story. You've got the other ones out pretty quick, so why's this one taking so long. It better be worth the wait.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2011 18:29
    This is by far the best series I've seen on this site. Please continue

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 00:18
    please hurry these stories are great

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 00:18
    11 days and counting

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2011 03:48
    Stories are awesome man keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2011 21:42
    his computer must have "died a slow and painful death."

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 01:17
    So amazing I had to comment (something I NEVER do) to say SO AMAZING!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 12:21
    It's been 2weeks, I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED the next one!!!!!!!!!!! PlzzzZzzz hurry up!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 13:49
    SO waiting for an update on this one!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 15:15
    Please hurry with the next chapter!!! Your series is amazing!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2011 19:10
    thirteen days since the last post

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 02:52
    What the hell? It's been 14 days since your last post. It's unacceptable. You cannot leave so many people hanging like this, I have been waiting very patiently for 2 weeks exactly now, and I understand that you may be busy, but this is ridiculous. It's unfair on us readers and you need to lift your game.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 02:52
    What the hell? It's been 14 days since your last post. It's unacceptable. You cannot leave so many people hanging like this, I have been waiting very patiently for 2 weeks exactly now, and I understand that you may be busy, but this is ridiculous. It's unfair on us readers and you need to lift your game.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 05:03
    whats up with u write write write bro come on love your writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 16:10
    can you at least tell us if your not gonna write another one so i don't have to keep coming back and checking

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 17:14
    Dude u can atleast notify us

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 20:18
    can you at least tell us if your not gonna write another one so i don't have to keep coming back and checking

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 22:29
    WTF mate you have demands you gotta keep the flow you can't leave cliff hangers mate just pisses people off

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 22:29
    Calm down guys, maybe he's kept without internet or busy with RL? Give him time, he will probably give us another chapter soon enough.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.08.2011 23:39
    maybe he got killed in hurricane irene

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2011 04:16
    that's a bit insensitive, what if he lost someone to the hurricane

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  • Sal0009
    01.09.2011 08:48
    15 days come on plz post annother chapter or atleast tell us when you are so we don't have to keep coming back and some people will just stop reading!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2011 17:09
    The only excuses I will except from him if we don't get the next part in less than a week are: he died, someone he knew has died. Seriously, these stories are great, we want more!! I hope I speak for a lot of other people.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2011 22:22
    behn ke lode ma na chudwa
    agla part post kr

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2011 02:21
    OMG what a story. I cant wait for the next one. All your stories are juicier than the last one. I hope the next one out does them all.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2011 06:31
    dude wheres the next bit we want it soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2011 21:31
    i'm officially not coming back to this story for anymore updates, the guys obviously dead, or if he's indeed 16 grounded or some stupid shit, so i'm done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 02:34
    These are fucking awesome, but you people need to calm your tits. Seriously, the dude's probably just busy with work or school or other issues and whatnot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 15:27
    He was having computer issues, I believe. Besides he probably does have a life outside of writing these.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 16:09
    I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 16:22
    Love the series. Took me a week to get to read it all, but well worth it. I am so hard now thinking of starting at the beginning.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 16:30
    yea even if he is busy he could take 30 seconds to tell us when it will be ready

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 22:47
    DEAR GOD I NEED MORE

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2011 23:06
    also remember parts of these stories are true so he just may need more writing material before he continues

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.09.2011 11:46
    Please write more. Don't stop in the middle of the series like so many of writers.

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  • inferis
    06.09.2011 18:37
    Loving this series. Can't wait for the next installment.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2011 10:57
    Come on already three weeks is enough let's see the next chapter.

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  • PureSnow
    08.09.2011 20:43
    i get that it takes time to write sometimes if u have block but can u at least post a message saying something so we know u havn't just dissappeared from tne site.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2011 21:57
    plz make the next one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2011 23:32
    You know we really would never know of he died or not so I'm acutually gonna assume the worst and say he was caught in the hurricane or wild fires or flooding.... RIP TAMPERER you were a great writer and I loved your series

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.09.2011 00:30
    Damn... On hell of a series. Can't wait for more! Would love to find out more you have written... Full books and such if there are any. If not... Consider it! I know I would buy them... DAMN! ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2011 04:07
    Anon that wrote about Tamperer dying:
    You made me horribly depressed. Stop that. This is a fap site, not a be depressed and make my BONRE die.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2011 19:34
    Anyone who says or even THINKS that these stories are rubbish should be SHOT!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2011 23:55
    this series is officially dead

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2011 02:29
    Where is pt ten?!!!! I love the first 9 parts and Iv been in audience for too long please finish the story!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2011 03:07
    awsome storrrrryyyyyyyy wright more plz

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2011 16:11
    Great story please post another soon. It's already been almost 4 weeks!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2011 21:42
    Agreed the story is geting good

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2011 01:24
    I don't think he could have carried it further. On the one hand, readers would enjoy seeing Lidia or Sharon directly involved in their activities somehow, but on the other hand, he might feel that it would detract from whatever him and his sister shared. Only so much the imagination can balance.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.09.2011 19:45
    cum on man please post the next chapter soon, one of the best series of all time

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.09.2011 12:28
    maybe the title: 'Teasing' is meant for us?
    But PLEASE STOP TEASING!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.09.2011 16:42
    Dude it's been a month..

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.09.2011 16:28
    Gee whiz, and I tohguht this would be hard to find out.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 09:18
    when is this fucking exchange student going to show up 7 chapters nothing to show???????

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2011 19:00
    RIP My sister and the Exchange student, this was a truly epic series, shame it died -.-

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.09.2011 14:27
    Fuck It

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  • TAMPERER
    21.09.2011 12:04
    ***Hey readers sorry about the long wait. without going into too much detail let's just say I've been having job issues.
    I'm writing the next installment now. I'll post it in the next day or 2 I promise.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2011 17:43
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!! A NEW ONE SOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2011 18:46
    yayyayaayayayayayyaayya New one coming anytime now!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2011 23:26
    Thank you so much for the update on this series, this has become one of my favorite series and you dropped off the face of the Earth with it, just as it was getting really good.

    Best of luck to you with your job, can't wait til next part is here!

    NGSalem

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.09.2011 19:23
    thank you for letting us know good luck with your job

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 16:22
    that was an unbeliveble part.(egyptian tall man)

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 16:22
    that was an unbeliveble part.(egyptian tall man)

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 16:22
    that was an unbeliveble part.(egyptian tall man)

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2011 18:37
    Thanks got letting us know. I think i speak for everyone saying that we've been impatient for more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2011 09:13
    No sorry i've been patient for more:P

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 12:20
    :D.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 12:20

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 16:41
    So much for a day or two lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2011 18:43
    If he posted it a day or two after he sed, it should turn up tomorrow or the day after cuz it has to be checked an stuff

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 00:38
    Where's the next part. I've been waiting for sooooo long. This is the best series on the sight. Your a teuly talented wroter

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 16:28
    I'm sure you mean writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.09.2011 21:45
    i knew it was to good to be true

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.09.2011 12:11
    When?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

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  • mnguy2044
    27.09.2011 16:00
    like the stories man!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.09.2011 21:24
    when r u cumming with part 10

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 06:10
    My sister and I are 19 year old twins and have very differing sexual preferences. I love masturbating myself or any other like minded girl and to spend time rubbing my cunt on another one is my idea of heaven. I orgasm very freely and enjoy the taste and smell of my cunt more than those of other girls.

    My sister likes to be whipped and caned and I do this for her, partly because she doesn't want anyone else to know about it and partly because it is erotic and makes me cum. Sometimes I have caned her until she has been black and blue and we have orgasmed so much the insides of our thighs have been slimy with the juice that has run out of us. My sisters favourite thing is for her to spread her legs, pull her cunt wide open and have me thrash her whole slit, clitoris and all, with a very hot facecloth. Sometimes after this she hasn't been able to close her legs properly because her cunt has become so swollen and sore but she is always ready for me to do it again within days.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 06:11
    did it say it was a true story about him?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 15:36
    its been a week since he said two days

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.09.2011 20:08
    when will you be posting it?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 08:52
    When's the next part due??

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 09:42
    Waiting waiting waiting need to read next installment

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 15:09
    Waiting waiting waiting need to read next installment

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 16:36
    I need another!!!!! Hurry

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 19:50
    has it been a month?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2011 23:17
    I've been waiting on this next part for sooooo long. This is the best series on the site, please post part 10 already

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 01:41
    Your last story is on page fucking four! What the hell man? Pull it together!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 05:29
    I think his job problem got a bit bigger then he thought:S

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 20:48
    i don't think part 10 is ever coming out

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 17:20
    Does anyone else check to see if part 10 is out every single day since the last one came out or is that just me -_-

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 18:03
    It's not just you, that's for sure. I just wonder how many of us do that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 19:01
    At least three that I know of.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 19:36
    Better make that four

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 20:11
    Five if you guys count me

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 21:27
    six lol more than once a day

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 22:56
    Make it 7. I check in the morning when I wake up and when I'm about to go to bed.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 00:00
    Eight. I do the same thing lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 00:33
    9 I do the same thing.
    It actually saddens me it's not out.
    These are the best stories on the site

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 02:39
    Make it 10, I check once a day

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 06:37
    Make the 11 I check 3/4 times a day

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 06:38
    Make the 11 I check 3/4 times a day

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 07:44
    12...I check like 2-3 times a day

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 09:40
    I not only check the updates page several times a day, I have bookmarked this story just to see if Tamperer has posted any news. If you ARE reading this, mate, we all love your stuff, so PLEASE take a sick day or two, quit, punch your boss in the face and get sacked or do whatever else you need to do to get some time off, and give us part 10.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 12:14
    I've bookmarked it too. That's 14

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 15:35
    15... Guess I will check later

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 16:08
    16, bookmarked and check it 4/5 times a day

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 20:18
    make that 17... great freaking story... each one makes me cum several times.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 23:06
    I'd u count me that's 18. It's is the best series but I'm starting to hate it for how long it has been

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 01:07
    make that 19!! please give us more!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 02:34
    That's now 20 I check twice a day

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 09:15
    Bookmarked this. Favorite story on this entire site or any other. Amazing!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 16:02
    Hi it's me, the guy who asked how many of us were there. Thats 21 so far. Anymore?

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 17:10
    Ya there's 39,189 more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 18:08
    looks like you have lots of fans TAMPERER. So fuck you for the inconsiderate bullshit of a wait we've had.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 21:15
    Dude fuck it's taking long but theres no need to say fuck you to him...you don't know what's going on in his life man

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 22:45
    i dont care its 22 that check EVERY DAY he needs to post the next chapter already

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 22:53
    Fuck this I'm not reading this guys shit anymore. I checked like twice acday for over a month

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.10.2011 05:51
    Then just F**k of we don't need you, the rest of us will wait, won't be seeing you again.
    So TAMPERER take all the time you need

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.10.2011 07:55
    ive been waiting ages but ill still wait its such a cuttee storyy<3

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.10.2011 19:03
    I'd rather not have him take as long as he wants, but I'm not gonna stop checking

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.10.2011 22:40
    Fuuuuuuuuuuuucccccccckkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!still nothing....

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.10.2011 22:48
    this is why some people hate the internet. it has given inconsiderate people the right to post w/e they want and they do because it is anonymous. I dare any of you negative people to say what you are "typing" to TAMPERER in person

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.10.2011 05:53
    kool story bro :)lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.10.2011 11:50
    I am starting to give up hope :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.10.2011 05:34
    Waiting need to know what's going to happen next. I have my ideas but need to find out please post up soon we are all waiting to find out

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2011 00:05
    Suck a big juicy dick TAMPERER!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2011 08:23
    Please finish, I'm still waiting. It has been excellent so far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2011 23:03
    It's finally up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 00:15
    uhhh. no it's not.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 00:16
    uhhh. no it's not.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 00:16
    uhhh. no it's not.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 18:08
    Whoever said its up... It's not. Go fuck yourself.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 22:02
    Fuck you guy it is up on a different website

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 22:28
    Wow......still. I havn't checked in over a month. I can't believe he still hasn't posted the next chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 22:36
    what website is it on?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 07:55
    If it's up on a different site tell the rest of us which one if you don't we know you are lying

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 07:57
    If it's up on a different site tell the rest of us which one if you don't we know you are lying

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 15:26
    xxxstories.net/68963

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 17:09
    Can someone post a link or at least a full website address? Honestly I don't think it is up anywhere else. Why post it somewhere else but not here where all his fans are?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 20:35
    i'm about to give up all hope

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 22:35
    It's cause he didn't actually write it...he just copied it from this website...google it if you want bro

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 23:10
    i googled it couldnt find it... if it exists someone pleassse put up a working link

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2011 18:30
    Googled it and nothing if it is up and this is just a copy job what's the real name of this story???

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2011 18:38
    Working link, or you're lieing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.10.2011 23:29
    I was lying...it's my way of dealing with the dissapointment of no part 10

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.10.2011 02:24
    Son of a bitch! Getting my hopes up like that!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.10.2011 04:57
    A bit funny though, but now back to waiting:S

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.10.2011 21:59
    very romantic incest tale,,,i like it a lot,,,,more please!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.10.2011 22:54
    well written,,very imaginative!! like it a lot!! and its a fun read!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.10.2011 23:31
    wow, this is a really fun read!! very, very imaginative,,,real words and a good vocabulary,,,i truly thank you for that!! looking forward to more!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.10.2011 01:06
    whens the next one cummin?

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.10.2011 10:22
    God knows... and TAMPERER

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 11:06
    Tamperer telling us it was going up was September 21st...it's not going up

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 21:14
    I think the reason she calls him big bro because he is tall and bigger than her hence the big bro nickname

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 23:13
    This is so annoying....

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 23:14
    Did this guy like die or something?

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 23:14
    This is so annoying....

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.10.2011 14:26
    43035 people waiting!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.10.2011 19:09
    Like ages ago he said that it would be up in a few days. Hmmmm, no sign of it. TAMPERER, GET A BLOODY MOVE ON.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.10.2011 21:20
    This is BS bro it takes like an hour to write a chapter of this mind blowing "book"!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.10.2011 09:16
    hurry up man its been like 4 months

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.10.2011 13:40
    Idiot below...it's been 2 months...part 9 was posted in August...it's october

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.10.2011 17:35
    bobby wants next chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2011 01:01
    I Check this at least once a week

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2011 02:14
    You have an amazing gift to bring people to life. Your writing is beautiful.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2011 09:56
    I dont believe that it's a true story but that doesn't change the fact that it's fucking awesome :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2011 00:23
    Completely amazing. Character development is superb, you don't find writing like this just anywhere, do something with this gift tamperer.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2011 05:50
    superb series... fucking awesome... cal that a best-reader

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  • nispe5x
    27.10.2011 17:40
    yay your alive!!! alot of ppl were saying you died or something... haven't read the story but just wanted to comment and thanky's for posting :) :)

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  • nispe5x
    27.10.2011 17:49
    it's definitely shorter than your others and with some grammar mistakes... but i'm glad you're still writing....

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 18:02
    Thanks for finally posting. I checked, saw it there and was like HO. LY. SHIT.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 18:03
    Next ones out. !!! Check his page. Finally!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 18:17
    Good to have you back. Great story keep going.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 19:59
    Thanks for writing bro :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 22:19
    The prodigal son returns!!! We have missed you and your amazing work don't do it to us again!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 22:40
    Great story thanks for posting!

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  • 120489
    27.10.2011 22:51
    I'm glad that your back and can't wait till the next story

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 23:03
    Finally!!!!I was starting to get worried. Thanks for posting!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.10.2011 23:38
    Glad to see the story continues. This is the first series I actually tried to follow here and thought that Ch. 9 was gonna be it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 02:02
    fuck yeah who's excited this guy's excited cause I've been waitin on dis 4 so long tamper u da fuckin man I've been waitin 4 dis part 4 fuckin ever thank u 4 finally postin this I nearly shit my self when I saw it was up

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 05:05
    Prolly the 15th time I've read it, it's still just as good as the first time

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 08:16
    Great story thanks for posting!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 09:47
    Yo good story, how long still next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 11:47
    Good story all the way from the off well done :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 12:06
    Straight out of Playboy--not strait. Otherwise I love this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 21:25
    amazing love it, live for it, can't wait till chapter 11

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  • Bobbyqc
    29.10.2011 08:56
    Always nice to a continued story well put together
    good stuff takes time, there is no need to excuse yourself for a delay between i am sure we the readers will wait patiently

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 14:03
    Out of curiosity how retarded can you people be? Read the first chapter please, hes tall, shes short, hence the names, now thats solved, move on please

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 00:58
    I swear if it takes you forever to write another story i may cry. Great story keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 02:58
    Great as always, totally worth the wait :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 09:37
    could you plzz post a link ???

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 14:28
    Everyone prepare for a six month wait...

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 15:03
    Click on his name at the top of this page to go to his page.

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  • NGSalem
    30.10.2011 23:25
    So glad to see the next chapter, wanted to give my thanks before I even got to the story. Even logged in this time instead of just signing my name at the end like usual (Like it matters).

    I'm sure there was a good explanation you left us hanging, real world dominates over this any day, but it still was quite the suspense.

    Anxiously await the next part, hopefully one that takes less than two and a half months to make!

    NGSalem

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 14:49
    Amazing as always!

    Let's just hope that "right away" isn't another 2-3 months!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 11:58
    Ok four things

    1.Your a dick
    2.Your story is AWOSME
    3.Thank you for coming back
    4. there are minor spelling and grammer mistakes you might want to get somene to proof read it for you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 21:22
    Woo. I waited forever on this part. It was completely great as always and only keeps getting better. Thank you for the story. But, dont make your fans wait man. Haha

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 10:03
    Can't wait for the next part hurry up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 17:48
    they should make a movie out of this!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 22:31
    I'm glad you decided to continue! I thought you were done for good after 9! Every single chapter is a great story on its own! Keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 23:24
    Hes back for good!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 23:36
    Now I will be looking forward to Wednesday

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 23:42
    Another great chapter but whats with the spacing? I also liked the every Wednesday idea, keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 04:01
    بدنا قصص مترجمه بالعربية

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 04:56
    I'll be waiting every wednesday:P

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 05:54
    Its really great! Greetings from Poland!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 05:59
    Its really great! Greetings from Poland!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 10:34
    bring the parents back in to the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 11:23
    Whats up with the spacing? I thought this was revised? Still love the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 11:49
    people kept asking for the spacings i don't like the spacing, just separate the paragraphs thats all you really need to do, and as for the story still amazing, loving the build up with lidia its greats adding some suspense to the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 14:36
    why complain about spacing it is a good story so just read it and be quiet or write your own stories eh....

    Great job on this story loving how it is progressing.. i was thinking on the next one you were going to have Lidia get more bold on another run or something but like how it is turning out now

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 17:22
    Woo! Just made Wednesday my new favorite day of the week!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 17:24
    Also, I enjoy the sweet, demi-innocent lidia. Adds more depth to the story rather than Rach's full throttle attutude (don't get me wrong, I enjoy the raw sex, but lidia seems /that/ much better because of it).

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 17:45
    When is Jake going to shag Lidia?

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 17:59
    Thank you tamperer. Just... Thank you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 22:12
    great stories i like the spacing for me its much easier to read.... i wonder how many parts there will be in total...20?

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 22:38
    Is it Wednesday yet? T.T

    Great story, being deprived of this series for nearly three months has me edgy, anxious to read more!

    NGSalem

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.11.2011 00:19
    I hope there are at least 30 of these, and you never know, lydia may have a little sister

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.11.2011 01:41
    Glad the story is back. It is one of my favorites.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.11.2011 01:42
    Glad the story is back. It is one of my favorites.

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  • andreas2
    05.11.2011 09:12
    I was hoping for his cock to slide into while driving! Nevertheless, very good story. +1 rating and added to favourites!

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  • andreas2
    05.11.2011 09:14
    I was hoping for his cock to slide into her while driving! Nevertheless, very good story. +1 rating and added to favourites!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.11.2011 10:17
    go to 100 ... every Wednesday and after Lidia change the adventure there is good inspiration on this site that has been done crap or gross that your writing style can really give justice.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.11.2011 10:20
    maybe a holiday for jake
    >><<

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.11.2011 16:31
    Let's get some more jake licking rachs asshole, bring back the slave hours and make them kinky. If doing any anal, make it realistic, a cock that big doesn't just go in balls deep like it does rachs pussy. Great stories, truly talented and fan oriented. Thank you for the enjoyment

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.11.2011 19:38
    Awsome. Absolutely love it just one Q though, whats the difference between chapter 11 revised and the origional chapter 11?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.11.2011 07:49
    Great effort man, loving the series :)))

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.11.2011 07:50
    More spanking... Hard

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2011 02:10
    dude.. try posting it thrice a week..!! awsum stories buddy.. cant wait..

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2011 04:41
    Great stuff as always.

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  • inferis
    08.11.2011 10:26
    This is hands down my favorite series on this site. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2011 18:05
    You guys trying to tell him what to do, remember this is labeled true story. Not sure how much is true, but you saying that stuff won't make any difference. P.S love the series TAMPERER.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 08:45
    Love it. Good work. Cant wait for the next part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 09:51
    It's Wednesday can't wait much more

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 14:14
    Good Story, loving it mate!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 16:57
    It's Wednesday....checked 4 times today so far

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 17:23
    So much for posting every Wednesday then.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 17:50
    Thursday please post but strangely worth waiting
    Gage

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 17:54
    its fun to know u got fans but don't make us wait too long this weeks episode should not be too bad.

    Gage

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 19:06
    Jesus give em a break it might be a day late just relax

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 19:22
    There are still several hours untill Wednesday is over. At least for me. Time zones and all that. And so what if it's late? Deal with it.

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  • NGSalem
    09.11.2011 20:27
    I don't have a problem with him being late, per se.

    I only have an issue with him continuing to make deadlines he can not meet. The whole issue with Part 10 coming out for instance. The previous 9 parts had all come out within two weeks of each other at the most. About four weeks in, he PROMISED it would be out in the next few days, another month and a half went by before it came out.

    And now the same thing with this, he's telling us he's going to post a new one every Wednesday, here it is with just a few hours left on Wednesday, and still nothing.

    I don't mind waiting several months for the next installment, at least he's honest about it.

    Nobody likes being deceived, especially with such a high-strung story such as this, which is probably the most popular series on this website. We at least deserve honesty, not unstable deadlines.

    Just be honest with us, if you have to take a month off for work, that's fine. But don't lie to us and make us extremely disappointed, please

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 20:46
    if you people don't know either when a story is posted it takes anywhere from 36-72hrs to get posted up so people can read it, so if he posts it on wed, we won't see it till friday or saturday people, stop you god damn bitching, it isn't like we are paying for this, its free

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 22:16
    can't wait for part 12, this is probably my fav storie on this site

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2011 23:04
    Its a story people jesus christ. Is your life gonna stop if you don't get it?

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.11.2011 06:15
    if you read his story please rate up as it will make it easier to see when he has a new one...
    Gage

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.11.2011 17:49
    You know a story is good when you don't even masturbate to it

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.11.2011 20:35
    "You know a story is good when you don't even masturbate to it".... I second that my friend

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.11.2011 21:28
    "You know a story is good when you don't even masturbate to it".... I second that my friend

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.11.2011 22:02
    Just shut the fuck up and quit bitching. He can right the damn story when he wants to, he doesn't have to take orders from anyone.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.11.2011 12:36
    I'm not bitching that it's late...but don't give a wednesday deadline if it's not going to be posted on Wednesday

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.11.2011 12:37
    I'm not bitching that it's late...but don't give a wednesday deadline if it's not going to be posted on Wednesday

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2011 08:55
    Fuuuuck it's happening again!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2011 15:50
    seems there may be some issues about it being true (ages etc), I am finding the building anticipation exciting and am loving the story. While some people are knocking your story about wether its true due to time line with ages, they still seem to be reading it, what does that tell you, lol.
    Any way I'm off to read part 6

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2011 17:23
    yes and like the last time; we'll wait again

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2011 17:25
    read the first line people, he didn't say he would do it every wed, he said he would try though

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2011 19:52
    This is bullshit hurry up with the story its not like each chapter is a novel it can't take that long

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2011 21:22
    This is bullshit hurry up with the story its not like each chapter is a novel it can't take that long

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2011 21:25
    Gonna be honest this story was amazing up to this point but these ridiculous waits in between chapters is ruining it for me. You lost me as a reader and I feel like I wont be the only one

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 08:14
    I hope you are having success with the next chapter. would love to see it.

    Gage

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 08:17
    I hate waiting but if you keep hounding him you will give him writers block. and i would hate to see a piece of work be destroyed by a comment.

    Gage

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 15:01
    Jessie Christ guys give him a f*cking break have you ever written anything? NO so shut up and cut the guy some slack there are so many things that could be going wrong with this so again stop pestering him. I'm as irritated as the rest of you but why not read an other f*cking story and to Tamperer good job putting up with these people and with the story also :D yours faithfully Sedgie666

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 20:27
    i would rather him not say when he is gonna post it, ii always leads to disappointment,

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 23:28
    The guy below me has the right idea.

    You always get me pepped up and happy to expect another one on Wednesday, but instead I'm disappointed.

    I'd rather you NOT give us a time frame if you're not gonna be sure you can make it.

    Anxiously awaiting next one.. with baited breath.

    NGSalem

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 21:13
    hurry the **** up, will ya.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 23:11
    Not a fan of this story any more because the writer has no respect for a deadline That he himself made. Your ruining your fanbase dude.

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  • darkcloud75
    16.11.2011 17:27
    for god sakes people stop your bitching already, he said he would try and post on wednesdays, thats a try, not a guarantee that it would be posted, and when you submit a story it takes 36-72 hrs to get posted on this website, if u have ever wrote a damn story on here u would know that. stop giving him a hard time he is only human, and other things come before this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 17:30
    Fuck u dude it's been Extra week

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 18:10
    Another Wednesday almost over. Still nothing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 22:08
    good story got myy pusssy wet who wants to fuck plz let me know

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 22:11
    this is so good my gf was fuckin my pussy hard after it

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 22:41
    Wednesday number 2 and still no story, will we see a number 3?

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 00:33
    It's Wednesday. Where's your story?

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 12:00
    Do not listen to the people who just want another story to fap to. I like this story for it's content and the story line. Books in a store can be a year apart sometimes and this one easily is one I will wait for along with many of the other readers. Keep it up and post it when YOU first are happy with it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 17:30
    yea but each one isn't a book they are chapters

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.11.2011 22:21
    Fuuuuuuucccccckkkkkk

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 00:10
    I love the stories but don't fuckin lie about the days you'll put it on just say I'll try to get one out every couple of weeks or somethin

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 01:58
    Imagine a cat who raped a dog

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 02:30
    Imagine a Dog that raped a cat

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 13:26
    Its a sex story..not a novel..but thats not the point..dont make promises you cant keep.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2011 20:31
    didn't know trying was a promise???? when did this change

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  • NGSalem
    18.11.2011 20:34
    @ Anon 2011-11-17 12:00:19

    No shit that book sequels often take 1 year + to come out, there's a shit ton of writing. Each of his Parts is about the length of one or two chapters in a proper novel. I wouldn't mind waiting a year for the rest of the story, as long as you have 30 + parts to give me. His first parts came out approximately every two weeks, I'd be fine waiting two weeks for a part, just as long as he keeps his word.

    He gets everybody all hyped up for the stories then stymies our relief for an unknown amount of time.

    Just take 30 seconds and write a comment on this story or SOMEWHERE saying "sorry guys busy with work, will get next part out asap".

    At least let us know you haven't forgotten us or your deadline. This staving off almost seems intentional to increase the hype of this series.

    You're starting to piss us off though, this is probably my favorite series on the site, and it annoys everybody here that you can't stick to a schedule.

    NGSalem

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2011 03:22
    I agree but pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaase try to get next part out soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2011 21:07
    Mother fucker
    My Harry Potter xxx series took me only 2 weeks
    Hurry your ass up please.
    Just like Klue.

    -Jai127

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2011 23:39
    post the next part!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2011 17:29
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH POST THE NEXT PART GODDAM IT!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2011 20:21
    Come on guys chill out if u read his earlier comments u would of know that he has had computer and job problems just chill guys
    -Elitemohawkrob

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 17:29
    hurry up i cant wait. There great stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 23:45
    if part 12 isn't out by tomorrow im gona, im gona have to fucking wait because your stories are actually worth waiting for. and please dont make lidia let him in super easy,, keep her a tease because its so much hotter

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.11.2011 01:09
    I agree I like lidia shouldnt let him in easy. And I can't wait to the trio at sharron's house

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.11.2011 17:45
    Plzzzzzzzzzzzz post soon, tired of waiting!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.11.2011 20:43
    Hoping for a nice TGE suprise... But I guess not =

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.11.2011 21:10
    yet another week. and still no story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.11.2011 02:01
    I found these last 3 weeks hilarious

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.11.2011 04:26
    I think it is official. He died. R.I.P. Tamperer, Lidia, Sharron, Rachel, and Jake. R.I.P

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.11.2011 23:06
    Excuse me, Mr. Author? It's been a week :( Lovvveeee the story :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.11.2011 01:20
    Dude, love your stories!! But please, hurry up!!! lol :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.11.2011 04:51
    Another week of pointless waiting

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.11.2011 14:25
    3 weeks and still no story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.11.2011 00:34
    is this really a true storie? or just a phase to get more people to read. eather way, you better make a whole chapter book or i wont be happy

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.11.2011 03:12
    Wooaahh!! Deja vu...I swear I've seen this happen before

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.11.2011 04:00
    The author probably fuckin died this was a waste of time to wait for

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.11.2011 19:34
    Please hurry with the next chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.11.2011 18:53
    I hope this is not a repeate of last time. I swear if that happens again, I am not reading another of TAMPERER's stories, even if they are brilliant.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.11.2011 17:43
    MY GOD! Post the next story!

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  • Rinoscope
    29.11.2011 13:39
    You guys are such horrible c**ts. You can't wait, you need everything now, to forget it after you're done with it. Stories don't write themselves, you have to think to deliver the quality of Tamperer's plot. Please calmly wait for him to bring us another good moment. He didn't disapoint in the past and came back, you have no idea about his personal life. Be patient, re-read the story while you wait.

    Amicalement.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.11.2011 16:51
    To the last poster... fuck you. We've been waiting for weeks and it wouldnt be that bad if he didn't say every Wednesday

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.11.2011 23:37
    Go shove a cock down your throat rhinoscope

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 00:45
    I'm fine with waiting for the next story. Just let us know when it's not going to be updated on time, and maybe a general estimate on when the next one is coming.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 05:57
    Fuck you rinoscope you've never written a story yourself so what the fuck do you know about plot quality and story writing

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  • Rinoscope
    30.11.2011 13:45
    Oh because you come back and complain because you don't like his writing? You're even more stupid than I thought. Stop acting like everything has to be handled to you, he has a life, he is the writer of the story and write when the fuck he pleases. And go vent your stupid anger somewhere else. Damn, aren't kids getting anger management classes these days?

    Plus what if he said next wednesday and he didn't ? You think inspiration grows on trees? He might think his readers deserve more than what he had in mind and is refining his work. Or just reading the comments and laughing at you whimpering like puppies.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 15:22
    Then is it so hard to type a simple message saying that he is still working on it? Is it? No, it isn't. And stop acting like a high-and-mighty idiot. I've been plenty patient, but you are annoying. And so is the waiting. So if we want the next chapter, we wait. And we will. At least, I will. And I will keep checking every day because it's a good story. And that's why people are frustrated. Keep that in mind.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 16:24
    I agree, but whining like morons isn't likely to get him post faster. I'm just fed up with people thinking they're the center of the world, that only their person matter and fuck the others. If they'd try to grow up just a little it'd do everyone good.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 16:38
    I actually agree with rinoscope so you people can shove the cock down your own throats (if your into that :D)

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 16:41
    Also I know a little about writing so yeah I support the writer .....but in future please try to upload On time or message us if you can't k :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 17:13
    These comments are starting to get more interesting than the story :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 18:03
    Rinoscope
    2011-11-29 13:39:27
    You guys are such horrible c**ts. You can't wait, you need everything now, to forget it after you're done with it. Stories don't write themselves, you have to think to deliver the quality of Tamperer's plot. Please calmly wait for him to bring us another good moment. He didn't disapoint in the past and came back, you have no idea about his personal life. Be patient, re-read the story while you wait.

    Amicalement.

    this is a great comment people give it time, stories take time to write and just coming up with it is only half of it you gotta do a rough draft check it and rewrite it and make changes then when you submit a story people if u know how this website works, it takes 48-72hrs to be posted on this site after it is submitted, and for those who are coming here pissed off that the next one isn't up and giving this story a negative vote stop it, it won't make it come faster i have seen this story go from a 93% to a 87.5% just cause of people pissed

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 18:04
    also i have written stories myself and they do take a while to write and if you want proof go look them up on here my user name is darkcloud75, im just a lazy fuck who doesn't wanna log in post this

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 18:47
    This is stupid. His first 8 stories came out about a week apart every time and they were great so the 12th wont be any more spectacular so you can keep telling yourselves that he's just "drafting his next great story" but ill tell it how it is. He said Wednesdays but just stopped completely cuz he lost interest. He's a douche about it and you are all idiots.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 18:48
    haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 19:45
    and if you don't remember in chapter 9 comments he posted one saying he was sorry for the delay because he is have job issues. to me i place my job a lot fucking higher then this website. we all have personal lives outside this site. he will post it when he can and has a chance too

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 23:01
    Rinoscope, you must be the biggest fuckhead on the planet

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 23:17
    Rinohead your a fucking dumbass piece of shit it's been 4 weeks since his last one so don't say shit about it takes 48-72 hours to post

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  • Rinoscope
    01.12.2011 11:10
    Quote please? I never said anything like that. As someone said before, he may have job issues, or RL issues, and think it is of more importance to get it sorted than working on the story. Hopefully this will settle down and he will come back with another great chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 13:10
    Wow, seems others are as addicted to the storyline as I am. Looking forward to the next chapter, really want to read about Lidia getting fucked.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 13:11
    Wow, seems others are as addicted to the storyline as I am. Looking forward to the next chapter, really want to read about Lidia getting fucked.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 16:24
    Wtf how much longer? I guess until i stop checking it everyday

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 17:19
    Wtf how much longer? I guess until i stop checking it everyday

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 18:43
    This is one of the greatest I've ever read, please hurry with the next one!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 18:52
    GUYS!!!! Calm the fuck down k? This has descended into total anarchy of two factions one is at least being nice to the author who is trying to give us this story as entertainment using up his free time and the other call the other group s "fuckface piece of shit" i mean seriously wtf dudes its only a sodding story!!!!!! (admittedly a sodding good one) but get a little prospective !!!! Let's just settle on the fact that yes he is late posting he's probably busy and that it's a good story...... I don't see why this has to become a bloody flame war over a story . I'm a writer (on this site)and I know how hard it can be to hold your personal life and your story's in balance. Yes we are dissapointed but that doesn't mean we have to be dicks to one annother !!!!! P.s sorry about the essay but this had to be put to rest :D. Sedgie666 post soon :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 20:40
    This is stupid. His first 8 stories came out about a week apart every time and they were great so the 12th wont be any more spectacular so you can keep telling yourselves that he's just "drafting his next great story" but ill tell it how it is. He said Wednesdays but just stopped completely cuz he lost interest. He's a douche about it and you are all idiots.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 22:21
    I feel like if I check everyday then the story won't be posted.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.12.2011 22:26
    Just post the bloody story already?

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2011 02:43
    Over 35000 people waiting

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2011 09:02
    Loving the series being a while since you last posted, Keep up the work and ignore the impatient cunts

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2011 14:56
    Don't insult the author man wth is that about?!???!??? Don't call Us idiots when your just being a dick biscuit!!!! Sedgie666

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2011 18:00
    Guy bellow "wth" haha fail

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2011 20:42
    If he has abandoned the story, he should at least have the balls to tell us about it, either update your profile or post a comment, don't leave us in the fucking dark. That's just a dick move that NOBODY appreciates.

    NGSalem

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2011 18:00
    Guy below the guy below wth means what the hell so nyaaaahaha!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2011 18:02
    And also he probably hadn't abandoned the story why would he when it gets such good reviews except for the delays :S but I think you should thank him anyway for what he has given us in the past even if he has left the story from
    Sedgie666

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  • sedgie666
    03.12.2011 18:10
    Also to any1 who spell corrects me I meant hasn't not hadn't

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 02:24
    Third guy down, that guy meant to put wth he is talking about the guy bellow him

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 13:50
    The names Sedgie666 and I'm epic ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:54
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:54
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:54
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:55
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:55
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:55
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:55
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:55
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:55
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:56
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:56
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:56
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:56
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:56
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:56
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:57
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:57
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:57
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:57
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:58
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:58
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:58
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:58
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2011 21:58
    Post the story already!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2011 05:01
    That was awesum...I really luv d way u write(just lik I wuld), very horny nd funny stuff;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2011 05:46
    Maybe he took an arrow in the knee

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2011 06:37
    Ya know, spamming is more annoying and pathetic than fussing about the story. And also, HAHAHAHAHA!!!.... I thought that was funny.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2011 12:05
    I think tamperer's computer has taken a arrow to the knee

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2011 16:36
    Maybe he got sniped by a camper in sudden death

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2011 21:29
    u son ofa bitch..... POST!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2011 21:30
    u son ofa bitch..... POST!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2011 20:30
    He's got guard duty now

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2011 22:09
    He used to be a writer once, then he took an arrow in the knee

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2011 02:11
    He used to be a writer once, then he took an arrow in the knee

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2011 13:11
    People used to post comments about people taking arrows to the knee then I shot them with arrows in the knee because they were FUCKING ANNOYING!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2011 16:54
    People used to post comments about people taking arrows to the knee then I shot them with arrows in the knee because they were FUCKING ANNOYING!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2011 22:25
    Back in nam I took an arrow to the knee

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2011 23:31
    back in the day i used to double post... and c'mon man, at least tell us you're either going to take a break or it will not be finished... like u have the entire story in like 3 weeks, then u have the last two chapters in a month... now its another two months... going on three

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2011 01:40
    anybody else come to this story now just to read the comments?

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2011 02:14
    To the person who finds people "Fucking Annoying" Deal with it, it is a meme, if you don't like it wtf are you on the internet for?

    To the person who asked about people coming on here just to read the comments: Yes, Yes i did

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2011 11:03
    36666 people waiting

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.12.2011 00:07
    Listen everyone, TAMPERER HAS DIED. He was walking down the street when he saw a sign that said. "Free cock meat sandwiches." So he went over to suck on Big Bob's dick. He proceeded to suck it until Big Bob got real excited and jammed his dick down his throat. Tamperer suffocated and died from it.

    Nah, but he did get hit by a bus jay walking like a fool.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.12.2011 00:08
    Listen everyone, TAMPERER HAS DIED. He was walking down the street when he saw a sign that said. "Free cock meat sandwiches." So he went over to suck on Big Bob's dick. He proceeded to suck it until Big Bob got real excited and jammed his dick down his throat. Tamperer suffocated and died from it.

    Nah, but he did get hit by a bus jay walking like a fool.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2011 01:18
    Haha I forgot I come here for the story. I only come to read the comments

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2011 04:04
    NEWS ALERT: Tamperer the well known sex story author of this site has died fucking a sheep in the ass. Why he committed this act? No one knows for sure, but he contracted a rare form of sheep aids which mutated to be passed onto humans. Luckily for mankind, the aids died with its new host. Tamperer... The dead sheep fucker.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2011 04:08
    BREAKING NEWS: Tamperer was revived by some kind of voodoo experiment. Tamperer then proceeded to masturbate furiously to the dead sheep at his side. All while screaming "I loved Big Bob's dick and that warm sheep ass. NEARRGHHHH!!!!" Unfortunately Tamperer was then grabbed, groped and raped from behind by a Sasquatch. The anal penetrating rape was too much for him to handle and he died from his anal beat down.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2011 23:01
    Hahahhhhahahaha I bet it's true too.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2011 00:10
    Definitely came to this story just to read the comments :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2011 03:01
    THIS JUST IN: Tamperer's body has been discovered one day after the brutal anal mauling by the Sasquatch. It was found with several foreign new holes each with gratuitous amounts of semen leaking from them. The body of Tamperer was further desicrated by a cult known as the High Tales of Noon. No one knows exactly where they came from but it is said that the cult performed ritualistic demonic summoning practices upon the body. After which they each proceeded to rape the decaying corpse. We will be back with any further update on the once living sex story writer, Tamperer.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2011 09:07
    Enough with the smartass comments, but please do let us know if you have given up on the story so I don't have to keep checking every night or if it is true that you have died by all means send us a signal

    Ps hope all is well
    Sincerely: Your Stalker

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2011 21:08
    NEW STORY: The Anonymous reader below was seen at the scene of this horrific event raping the body of Tamperer with extreme power. The Anon was then caught from behind by the Sasquatch while he took advantage of the decaying corpse, and was inturn raped by the Sasquatch. A large spider then proceeded to lay eggs in his freshly raped ass, which will come to hatch and eat his body. Further news will follow as it comes.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 00:20
    I just bet one of the anons on here is actually him and he is being a giant troll lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 02:19
    He used to be a writer once, then he took an arrow in the knee

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 09:04
    Tamperer ignore these fuckers, get the story as quick as you can out so I can continue reading your awesome stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 20:27
    INCOMING STORY: The Anon below was seen at the scene of this horrific tragedy having sexual intercourse with the rapist murdering Sasquatch. It has now been revealed that the Anon was indeed involved romantically and sexually with said Sasquatch and performed these horrible acts of atrocity against Tamperer and the other Anon. Police then pursued the Sasquatch and Anon suspect and when met with their hard ons aimed at raping them, they opened fire and killed both the Sasquatch and the Anon. It has been a truly emotional and bizarre experience revolving around Tamperer, and if any more comes our way we will be sure to share it with you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 21:58
    Great story man cant wait to see the next chapter and please hurry its been awhile since you wont the last one

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 23:16
    Nice, Still waiting for your next story, know when its gonna be out ? :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 23:59
    Hhhahahahahahha those comments are hilarious!!!! I don't even come to check for story, I come to read the Sasquatch story in these comments.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.12.2011 00:30
    NEWS FLASH: The Anon directly below was awarded a medal of merit for helping in the elimination of the Sasquatch and rapist Anon. For his actions and continued support of this news network he is awarded two thumbs up. We have great viewers. Unfortunately the Sasquatch was much tougher than we thought. The rapist beast has since pulled its bullet ridden self up off the bloody pavement and has brutally raped and killed off all it's assailants and nearby citizens. The beast has since escaped and is at large, leaving behind an almost endless trail of raped victims, mostly living except for those who choose to fight back. It is a truly horrific sight.

    It has just been revealed to us that the Sasquatch, with this deep attachment to Tamperer has the body in its custody and we can only imagine the sexual onslaught which will occur. We as always will keep you posted. Thank you viewers.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2011 16:29
    these a good stories but im tired of waiting for the knew ones to come out so when will the next one be finised?

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 02:48
    He used to be a writer once, then he took an arrow in the knee

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 07:34
    I used to be a comenter but then I took an arrow to the knee

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 15:34
    Maybe he's waiting to do a Christmas special (please be waiting to do a christmas special)

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.12.2011 14:37
    Christmas special !!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2011 00:14
    6 weeks? He must have taken an arrow to the knee or somethin

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2011 00:41
    is there gonna be a part 12??

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2011 11:47
    omg these comments are funny as hell

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2011 16:18
    I'm not sure but I'm thinking he could be dead... or he's just an asshole who got lazy and hasn't finished yet.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2011 11:31
    Hey guys, it's TAMPERER...my account has been frozen for some reason. I will be making a new profile in the next few days and posting it here. I am extremely sorry for the wait. I will have the newest story up by Friday. It will not be a Christmas special as some of you have been hinting at. I will do my best for you guys. TAMPERER

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2011 16:21
    Not sure if the post bellow is a troll.....

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2011 18:49
    That's a tricky one. We can't be sure it isn't, and whoever posted that can't prove they ARE actually TAMPERER. If they say they're gona make a new account, and start posting stories, we might be tricked into reading material that isn't TAMPERER's whilst believing it is. On the other hand, it may actually be him. It's a tricky one. I say, check out the new profile / stories and see if it's TAMPERER's style.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2011 18:50
    But keep this profile bookmarked, in case it does turn out to be a frustrated fan trying to gt the story going again. Thank you for reading me long speech.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.12.2011 02:33
    DEVELOPING STORY: A mysterious Anon has came out of the blue just to make the claim that they are infact the Tamperer. This wild claim has no fact or proof to support these claims. If you have been following our previous stories you would know that Tamperer was brutally raped by a Sasquatch and a now dead Anon. Who is this mysterious man? What is left of Tamperer's raped carcuss, is in the hands of the seriously wounded and fleeing Sasquatch who is continuing its raping rampage. We will have more news and details of this new story soon. Thanks, and keep watching.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2011 03:09
    Ok so it's Friday......

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2011 12:28
    To Mr anon who talks about "Developing story". That's a bit far fetched even for the type of person who comes on this site.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2011 18:43
    if he posted the story like he said he would today then it will be out by late saturday or sunday

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.12.2011 01:14
    Just wait till Friday and find out if it's real

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.12.2011 01:34
    NEWS FLASH: The another Anon has been brutally raped by the Sasquatch on the run! The victim count is well into the hundreds. Unfortunately this Anon was killed in the process of the rape. His struggles were met with harder and deep thrusts into their unprepared ass. We mourn the loss of Anon -2011-12-23 12:28:28....

    His last words were. "To Mr anon who talks about "Developing story". That's a bit far fetched even for the type of person who comes on this site. "

    Unfortunately he did not believe the events which have come to our nation, and suffered terribly. Good people, I ask take heed of this and do not make the same mistakes this Anon did. As always, stay tuned for new updates regarding the Sasquatch.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 11:30
    NEWS FLASH: I fucking killed the Sasquatch and fucked his dead corpse slowly and with much force. Then I rescued TAMPERER and he will be posting a story as soon as his asshole is healed

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 13:32
    HEADLINE: Unfortunately the rival news station Anon below had fabricated their story and the Sasquatch is still very much at large. Unfortunately the Sasquatch caught wind of this station and brutally raped them with extreme prejudice. There were no survivors.... We send our condolences to the life less gaping messes' families and friends. Rest in Peace, Anon below. Hopefully your tale will serve as a reminder to our good listeners of the true dangers of this beast. As always, stay tuned for more information on this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 05:21
    Hey, new news flash. I'm still alive, retard.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 19:32
    NEWS FLASH: You're gay

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 01:20
    NEWS FLASH: Shut the fuck up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 01:59
    NEWS FLASH: I just ran out of weed.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 16:44
    NEWS FLASH: let's move on before I do something violent.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 01:59
    NEWS FLASH: My cock itches.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2011 22:41
    What is the new account does anyone now

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2012 15:31
    Well the Anon does have the characteristics of Darkbrother. Ex: saying something and making us wait weeks if not months, for it to happen.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 09:42
    Idiot below actually means TAMPERER

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  • tai_baby
    03.01.2012 14:40
    lmfao he was serious about his story lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 18:05
    Hahaha darkbrother...... Wrong story bro!!!! but yes the Anon is like Tamperer in that way.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 23:18
    I think it's safe to say that TAMPERER either took an arrow to the knee and died or he just hates us and wants to see us suffer.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 11:19
    YOU CANT INHALE FOOD

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 16:43
    what is wrong with you tamperer? get the next story out

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2012 02:25
    DUDE YOUR OFFICIALLY DEAD TO ME. I EXPECT A POST IN THE NEXT WEEK OR I'LL FIND YOU

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2012 22:42
    I'm with this guy under me, let's torch his house

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 03:38
    Ow if you two find him, please ask his autograph for me

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 04:20
    Ow if you two find him, please ask his autograph for me

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 10:39
    If you attack him there will be Devine intervention to save him and you will burn in hell forever !!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 14:37
    hey man love the story dude ive been waiting a month and you still havent posted another one please do hurry looking for a good story to masterbate to

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2012 16:51
    I used to masturbate to TAMPERER but then I took an arrow to the cock :'(

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 18:25
    As the great and mighty Totalbiscuit replied when someone posted an insult about his YouTube videos on his Facebook wall, "I used to like your posts, until you made any"

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 18:26
    Ah wonderful. Quote marks don't show up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 22:46
    Bo comments in two days......awkward.....

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 22:48
    I meant "no" comments.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 22:49
    And quotes not there.......

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 02:29
    Will we ever get another story?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 00:03
    i really didnt want it to come to this but can someone that thinks they have the mental capacity to continue this story for the time being do it, just name it something different that way if it sucks we can all pretend like its not even from the same story and that chpter 11 is the end. I miss TAMPERER

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  • johnjcboy
    11.01.2012 03:17
    This series is dead, won't be coming back to check up on this anymore

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 15:40
    Tamperer this is such a good series please dont let it die :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2012 22:22
    :,(

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 19:10
    I an,sorry to anouce tamperer my brother has died in a car crash on the freeway diving to LA.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 22:36
    Hi guys, this is TAMPERER. I will not be writing anymore stories because somebody hacked my account and changed the password. Sorry guys.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 07:51
    Faggot below isn't TAMPERER

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2012 03:10
    I NEED CHAPTER 12!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2012 17:23
    tamperer is a right gobshite

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2012 11:12
    Please please please do another chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2012 22:39
    U guys have no lives it's not even funny. Obviously he isn't writing anymore and stop waisting your time being loyal to this idiot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.01.2012 20:42
    kinda devastated due to the fact that there won't be published following chapters. like a novel, with lots of funny, lecherous and adventurous coitus...

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 17:33
    Are you ever gonna write another chap

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 22:13
    same..
    it's why i still keep checking this, hoping that he might return to finish this little pearl

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2012 05:44
    lol if the authors account got hacked and he gave up on writting just cuz of that hes a douche who doesnt like writing vuz he could just as easily make a new account and repost his stories or go to a different website and tell us about it

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2012 13:51
    Awkward. Nothing for 2 days. Anyone know if he's started again with another account, or has someone else picked up the battle standard and is carrying it forward?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2012 19:41
    I'll pick it up.....
    They all fuck and end up dying from cumming too hard

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.01.2012 22:47
    What takeing so fucken long hurry the hell up

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.01.2012 23:51
    mylazysundays has chapter 12

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.01.2012 13:43
    Mylazysundays doesn't even exist as an author on this site, stop bullshitting or post a link to prove me wrong

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.01.2012 04:25
    If your looking for a good alternative until he releases the next chapter (if he ever does) My 3 Evil Sisters is pretty good it's still in the early chapters so it's not overwhelming to get into and it has good dialogue and there are three sisters what more do I have to say

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.01.2012 23:39
    hey man please continue this is not cool stopping it like this

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 23:36
    Thank you guy who gave the evil sisters option. Great alternative.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.02.2012 19:09
    No i have been waiting on this story for over 3 months and he hasnt posted a single thing and i cant find anything on this so called new account people keep talking about so I want to hear from the auther about what the fuck is going on

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 06:53
    Thos story is dead just leave it alone people move on, there are plenty pf pther great stories and writers out there if you are willing to give them a chance. My evil sisters is a great story along with allison and the primdales and my sister ashley, just to mention a few.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2012 23:08
    Agreed with guy below me. My evil sisters is the best alternative to this. This stories gone

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.02.2012 17:09
    It's called three evil sisters, and it's fucking awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.02.2012 04:24
    I forgot to mention dark brother as another author that you MUST check out if you havent yet, he no longer writes but all of his stories are superb.

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  • Flight+White
    08.02.2012 20:21
    I'm glad you all liked my alternative (Im the guy who suggested 3 evil sisters just made an account) and I agree with the guy below me Dark Brother does have excellent stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.02.2012 22:22
    Why I am tempted to check this story I have no Idea.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 01:26
    I check for a mew post every week. Tamperer. You're a dissapointment. Please delete ypur account!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 17:00
    CjLURi It`s really useful! Looking through the Internet you can mostly observe watered down information, something like bla bla bla, but not here to my deep surprise. It makes me happy..!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.02.2012 21:25
    It means eating fast dummy

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.02.2012 23:27
    Jesus get the next chapter out already it's been idk how many fucking months I've been checking u disappointment if you say urgonna come out every wednessday DO IT!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 12:39
    Why aren't you writing anything?! This series was really starting to go somewhere and now you've left us all hanging for months! Please hurry up, this is one of my favorites!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 12:40
    Why aren't you writing anything?! This series was really starting to go somewhere and now you've left us all hanging for months! Please hurry up, this is one of my favorites!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.02.2012 01:14
    After two months I've lost all interest in this series. It was great while it last tho.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.02.2012 10:03
    Give up on this story because TAMPERER gave up on us readers. No point in checking for a new story, this series is dead and leave it alone.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 10:15
    Hey great story please post more soon.

    Cya later :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2012 16:25
    There is another story guys may like it is Swinging in th neighborhood. It is a great story as well becaus I have to agree this one is dead. Which is to baf

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2012 18:16
    great stories love howu said more to CUM instead of come

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2012 23:07
    ... Rather dissapointed that you haven't been posting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 00:54
    i checked every day for a month during the wait between chapter 8 and 9 and every day between the close to two month wait between 9 and 10. When chapter 11 came out soon after, I thought he might actually post more often again, maybe even live up to posting every wedness day. This is the first time I've checked in neay three monthe and still nothing. what's the deal?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2012 00:56
    sorry, it's been almost 4 months, not three

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 03:09
    Please a part 12 it's ben bout 4 or 5 months hurry pls

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 02:04
    What the hell come out with 12 already I've been waiting forever I WAS one of those people who told others to back off but now fuck u man

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 02:08
    Give up it's dead don't you see completely DEAD no reason to ce back to this story IT'S FUCKING DEAD. Tamperer I sign off of your stories good bye it was good while it lasted old friend. Good bye jack or whatever his name was

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 02:11
    I'm sorry that ce is actually come my bad

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 02:12
    The writer is dead R.I.P.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 08:52
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  • anonymous+reader
    12.04.2012 00:08
    I NEED MORE AWESOME STORY SO FAR KEEP up the GOOD work

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2012 09:57
    Someone continue this

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.04.2012 06:39
    fuckkk I want to fuck herr ass

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.04.2012 00:05
    Honestly I haven't given up yet but I don't check in on it as often. Sorry tamperer I giveish ip

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.04.2012 00:06
    If u try to make one every wednessday y isn't there a new one

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.04.2012 00:07
    Yea keep it promices

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.05.2012 17:28
    call me. im a slut. 850-375-3516

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2012 08:21
    Why the fuck would you want to know when Victoria secret was built

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2012 13:57
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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2012 07:17
    I think he died or went to jail!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.06.2012 20:42
    prepare for another half year wait everyone. tamperer, wtf, make promises you can keep.

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  • toblu2btru
    23.06.2012 09:11
    This is a great series!!! Cant wait to read more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2012 03:47
    Yay....a good story that won't be finished. :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2012 14:34
    يمتنكين يولد

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2012 20:20
    Great story! I love your writing and style and your grammar is the best I've seen out of any erotica, nice job!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2012 01:51
    aftr readin me and my gf fuckd all nite. Ur sister reminds me of my gf except were not related and were lesbian

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.07.2012 08:34
    i wont to kiss or lick my sister feet or foot but i can`t i need your help

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2012 18:48
    Wow that was just wow I have read each and every story you have posted... well only 11 but they were all very good can't wait to see what you come out with next. Peace B out.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 21:30
    Laughed my ASS of to: IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE STORY, AND HAVE NO CONSTRUCTIVE CRITS, SUCK MY LEFT NUT, AND READ SOMTHIN ELSE. XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD !

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  • %5BNMS%5DPKed
    07.08.2012 02:05
    Im srry TAMERER its been about a year and a half i cant keep checking back good bye

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2012 05:16
    I read this storie over a year ago and still no new one I am now married and have a son it has been to long sorry but i cant keep checking every wednesday

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2012 05:17
    I read this storie over a year ago and still no new one I am now married and have a son it has been to long sorry but i cant keep checking every wednesday

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2012 20:48
    Where's the rest come this is great stuff

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2012 16:51
    NEWS FLASH: Sasquatch has returned and killed my entire news crew. He was originally looking for Tamperer when he came a cross an impostor and killed him. Since then he has been on the run virtually killing everyone he's come across. We have reason to believe that the real Tamperer was one of the Sasquatch's victims. But the main point is Sasquatch is at large and extremely dangerous use the utmost caution if you see the beast stay home stay safe and enjoy what might be your last summer

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2012 16:52
    hey dirty chat at youronlychance@aol.com

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.09.2012 15:07
    :.C im so sad... i read this series forever ago when the last one was #9. I just finished reading 10 and 11, but there doesnt seem like there will be a 12 cause its taking so long. Like someone said, its been months.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.09.2012 03:01
    WTF ITS BIN OVER A YEAR!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2012 22:05
    Hey guys it's TAMPERER. I know it's been a long time since the last chapter but, I'm sorry to say do to work issues I'm not allowed to post what they call overly pornographic stories. Again I apologize.

    Sincerely,
    Mr. Why the hell did you read this imma troll BITCH!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2012 22:05
    Hey guys it's TAMPERER. I know it's been a long time since the last chapter but, I'm sorry to say do to work issues I'm not allowed to post what they call overly pornographic stories. Again I apologize.

    Sincerely,
    Mr. Why the hell did you read this imma troll BITCH!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.09.2012 02:14
    Hey guys its the real tamperer, you see wat happen was you guys are too gay why dont you make your own story happen you bunch of queers

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2012 05:55
    11 chapters later & still no lidia? Worst series ever. Bt-fucking-w u should quit writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2012 05:56
    11 chapters later & still no lidia? Worst series ever. Bt-fucking-w u should quit writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2012 06:11
    Such a shame, this was once such a promising series, oh well, I guess we should be happy for this much, still a great read

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2012 02:04
    Well I just want to say that all of you bitches need to stop complianing. I agree that tamperer is being a bitch and not working on it. I was one of those ragers but now I see how sad People's lode are. Get off your fucking ass and go get a job (if you don't have one) but I'm just saying that if u say a promise u keep it. I'm high on respect and I expect that u would keep you promise but I was sadly mistaken. I mean I would at least try. We know you haven't tried because this story was posted a year and a half ago. It is October u made this on February 2011 and it's 2012 now so yea. Well I think I typed it all out now

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2012 02:07
    Just some spelling fixes instead of lodes I meant life's and Instead of you It's your

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2012 02:08
    Just some spelling fixes instead of lodes I meant life's and Instead of you It's your

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2012 02:08
    Sorry for the spamm my comp glitched

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.10.2012 14:59
    You can inhale. Food .

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2012 22:14
    Please post more it was my favorite story to get off on

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2012 11:49
    Would you please post another episode?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.11.2012 02:25
    Wow I love your stories I'm still waiting for u to post another seems like its been forever please post again

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.12.2012 15:47
    True story, you're profile says you're 34, in the story you are 14. so 20 years ago your sister had a laptop with a webcam! :P

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2012 02:48
    عير أسود سكس

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2012 03:54
    I think that this series is absolutely amazing. Please, please, please, continue!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2012 19:09
    These peiecs really set a standard in the industry.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2012 12:42
    you grabbed a "loose shit"?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2012 02:20
    you keep writing"defiantly".

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2012 02:51
    incomplete masterpice. sigh....

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2013 22:02
    Awesum butt cant be tru

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 19:00
    At last, smoeone who comes to the heart of it all

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2013 01:16
    This was the best till it got ruined

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.03.2013 17:07
    Don't b an ass hole... The webcam was inveted 1991 (21years ago)

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2013 14:06
    You did so well on the spacing for part two.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.03.2013 13:30
    Ayo tamperer... You should just create another account and re-post your stories bro... I think I might die if you don't make more of these chapters... :'( we miss you TAMPERER where ever you are...

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2013 01:52
    This has been a great story. Please keep on writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2013 23:01
    I want to see the rest of it. Please post some more. Don't leave us hanging.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2013 00:55
    C'mon man I'm waiting for two years now and we are still coming back with hope that there is a new chapter12 but we keep getting disappointment please if you are too busy just finish it in one story although it won't please most it will be something

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2013 00:56
    Every wednessday my ass

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.05.2013 11:23
    Okay, maybe the webcam existed in 1991. However, they weren't common. They weren't built-in, they were external. The first commercially available ones came out in 1994.
    Home networks were extremely uncommon. Let alone how few portable computers had any ability to network at all. Plus the mention of the icon next to the clock, a feature not found in operating systems of the day. Windows 3.x, OS/2 and Mac OSx 6 didn't do that. Amiga didn't have a portable model.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.05.2013 11:32
    Web browsers and search engines in 1991, you say?

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2013 18:28
    What happened to EVERY Wednesday? It had been almost 2 years.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.06.2013 09:31
    you people just kill me.. I know some of you are trying to help other people but some of you think you are so good all you do is look for little mistakes. Maybe you need to go check your own shit.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.06.2013 09:41
    lol, who gives a shit when the webcam existed, it is part of a plot for a fiction story, Damn man, Flash Gordon flew to other planets in 1949 and Superman could fly at the same time. Good story TAMPERER.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.06.2013 10:05
    Who gives a shit about when the webcam was made? All I care about is how teasing that story was my pussy is soo wet and really need a guy to fuck me senceless

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2013 00:02
    Thank you so much for paragraphs. I liked your first chapter but the look of it was painful, this is much better and still just as good!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2013 15:59
    come out with part 12 already man like fuck

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2013 07:41
    Other than that stupid scenario in the Jeep on the way home, I thought this was an awesome use of your imagination. So much of the things that excited you as a kid do the same for me. I will read all of these stories hoping for the same results. A wicked hard-on. Memories of cookouts with young neighbors, pool parties with daughters girlfriends, family gatherings with young cousins. Oh the list goes on and you bring it all back. Keep on keeping on.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.07.2013 10:15
    I like your story but I'm didn't get y they fucke in a open jeep like wht the hell and how the other boys at the swim meet didn't see her pussy??

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.07.2013 11:17
    Will there be a 12th instalment, the antishapation is killing me!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.09.2013 19:37
    hQNKv7 Hey, thanks for the blog article.Really thank you! Keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2013 17:33
    b8y0FQ Wow, great blog post.Much thanks again. Want more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2013 10:06
    JDuHdC Enjoyed every bit of your blog article.Much thanks again. Much obliged.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.10.2013 07:33
    OUtxJY Very neat blog article.Much thanks again. Keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 18:46
    jFG7l2 Say, you got a nice article post.Thanks Again. Awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 20:03
    gO2wci A big thank you for your article. Much obliged.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 20:25
    oYnZmu I cannot thank you enough for the article post.Much thanks again. Much obliged.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 07:07
    vJi0vF I really liked your article post.Really thank you! Fantastic.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 09:04
    iq2BaA Awesome blog.Really looking forward to read more. Cool.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 13:32
    bYwRP8 Im obliged for the article. Fantastic.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 18:38
    FqE152 Im obliged for the post.Really looking forward to read more. Keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2013 02:54
    15HIog I loved your article post. Fantastic.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2013 16:07
    3txFNB Looking forward to reading more. Great article. Really Great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2013 18:16
    cFHE5T Im thankful for the article post.Much thanks again. Great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2013 00:50
    great stories but you need to post more often.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.12.2013 10:56
    you know he never said the year and you can lie about age on the internet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2014 07:34
    You blew the story when your 14 yo dick is 7 1/2 inches. Do you really expect anyone to believe that bullshit?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.01.2014 21:30
    P0lmVY Im obliged for the article.Thanks Again. Much obliged.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.02.2014 07:55
    Are you ever going to finish this story? This one is great but its been over almost 3 years

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2014 18:58
    FcVzTz Very neat article post.Thanks Again. Much obliged.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2014 21:06
    trkVxT Really informative article.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2014 02:02
    Dude wheres the rest of the story ???????????????????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.04.2014 12:38
    Really enjoying these

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.04.2014 21:02
    eBcjDe Hey, thanks for the blog post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.04.2014 03:08
    aijSCO Wow, great blog. Awesome.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.04.2014 11:37
    Awesome... Its been a good read so far. Keep em coming.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2014 02:42
    ياقلبي
    Wwwxxffjjkk

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2014 14:59
    great series are u making more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2014 15:40
    I like the stories. Where'd you get that cum joke lol.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2014 02:25
    Amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2014 15:13
    I've read this story a few times and it never fails to get me horny and wet, love your work Tamp why don't you still post here, we miss you. Thanks though. Luvsalik xx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2014 09:36
    wow, thats turning me on alot, I cant stop reading it over and over again ;) your a good writer, love you handsome ;) love from Min <3 <3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2014 19:22
    Janice Gindel - Carol, you must be on Cloud 9!!! Your grandchildren are soolooo precious, the pics are outstanding!! Love the one of Baby Jack smiling while his Dad is holding him & Casey kissing Jack!! Love them all, sending lots of love & congrats to you & Jr., and Phil & Meg!! Dave & I are so happy for you, God bless!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.11.2014 03:03
    Hiya rach, id love to give you my load of cum either in your mouth or fanny, come to think of id id even enjoy uladnoing over those lush tits lol If you even want your back doors smashed in come to brum and ill make you scream for hours lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2014 07:08
    Loved this series. Been waiting for the next chapter since 2011. Starting to think it'll never come now... :(

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.03.2015 15:54
    It was like just a stort not a sex story.AB.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2015 07:17
    I want more ;) what else is there to say. Love what and how you write.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.04.2015 16:42
    Ass adolecentes caderonas

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2015 19:16
    Desperate fools hope flirting attempt number 46: see previous comment

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2015 07:32
    Very good writing style and the tempo is just right for me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2015 09:01
    Schade, daß die Geschichte nie vollendet wurde. Eine wilde Sexorgie mit allen vier bleibst Du uns schuldig! Auf jeden Fall einer der best geschriebenen Geschichten auf dieser Plattform. Danke!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.02.2016 19:57
    have to wonder....what happens to all the dirty sheets..??..2/3 times a day?...rob.au

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.02.2016 20:21
    you jacked off onto a new visitor less than an hour after she had arrived ??..tell us another one..bullshit

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2016 04:21
    its been five years, i do not think they are making more. *sigh*

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2017 00:28
    Chapters 12, 13 and 14 are at the very bottom of the list.

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  • PeteyBoy1
    11.02.2021 03:36
    I love this story and Rach & Jake, but I am waiting for the inevitable trouble

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