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SHAKE IT UP

Author: fireup1

Date: 16 August 2011

Black, Fiction, Blowjob, Cum Swallowing

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(Authors note) from me to you your welcome

Hermaphrodite: male or female with both sex organs

Shemale: a female or male with the appearance of the other sex(guy looks like girl. girl looks like guy)

All right people I know all of my other stories I created and copied off of erotica.com were complete and total crap. I am not the best writer and this is where that will change. This is my try hard story if it is bad sorry the only thing you will see abused in grammar is a lot of run on sentences, but I will try to do better with this story to prove that I can do it so here it goes.

Oh and p.s at least I was the first person to fucking do those stories if any of you are decent writers at all just one up me and give it to me in the comments no homo.

SHAKE IT UP (intro)

It was a hazy day in Chicago 6:15 in the afternoon Rocky and Cece two dancers both fifteen around Cece five foot five with a to b cup breast’s white skin, red hair, and the more rebellious of the two, and Rocky just a little bit taller and with b cup breast’s with dark skin, and brown hair. The two girls on the most popular dance show in Chicago called “Shake it up Chicago”. They were coming home from a long afternoons practice and after a full seven-hour school day. After they did all that, they had to do they decided to relax and rent a movie from the movie store down the street and watch it at Cece’s house. The movie they chose was a chick flick full of the usual crap that only a guy would go to see to get in her girls pants. And a girl see because of the fantasy that romance and finding the true love would come down off his pedestal just to get with you because of a sudden desire only seen in the movies. After the three-hour movie, the man got the girl bla, bla, love mush crap. They decided to talk about their day rumors and normal girl chat. Then the phone rang and the caller I.D. flashed and it was Rocky’s mother on the phone and they answer the phone very fast Rocky answered. It was a short and Rocky dropped the phone out of shock and tells that Cece that “OH MY GOD MY BROTHER JUST WAS JUST HIT BY A CAR WE NEED TO GO TO THE HOSPITAL NOW!!” Rocky said on the verge of tears after rocky was crying they ran to the hospital twelve blocks away. They got there and was met by both their mothers and found out that He just died five minutes ago everybody cried that day

SHAKE IT UP (Shocking days after the funeral)

The funeral is going to be in North Carolina because he always wanted to live there. Only his friends and family went to the funeral. Then after the funeral was over Rocky and Cece allowed to stay for two weeks by themselves in a very nice hotel to get over the passing of Rocky’s brother. The hotel was a small home like one more like a bed and breakfast than a hotel with people working all over the clock. Especially cute farm boys working off the land with no shirts on and sweating all over there six pack abs, which they both check out each day. Both Cece and Rocky had separate rooms to sleep in and at night, the only thing Cece heard at night was Rocky crying because of the loss, but one night around 12 am Cece heard moans through the wall he being very curious. She put her ear against the wall and heard something that made her wet and incredibly horny. “OHH…… OHH YESSSSSS OOOOHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEESSSS CECE LICK ME LICK MY FUCKING CUNT YOU DIRTY WHORE OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS I’M CUMMING OHHHHHHHHHHHH GAAAAWWWWWDDDDD.” That made Cece very curious she opened her door and walked next door to see the events unfold. Moreover she saw something that she would never would forget. Rocky was on her bed naked with her small nipples and fine shapely ass and she was masturbating but not only with her pussy but she had a hand on her her DICK. Cece guessed it was around a monstrous 12 inch’s and it was pretty wide like a pole and Cece realized that Rocky was a hermaphrodite, and watching this turned her on so much she started to rub herself through the pajama pants she had on. Finding that she was extremely wet while watching Rocky fingered herself and jacking off her very big cock. Cece knew she was close to orgasm and just as she came, she saw Rocky’s cock shot 5 long thick strands of cum at the same time as her cunt gushed out a lot of cum also. Which sent Cece over the edge and let out a long orgasmic moan which any one could have heard including Rocky, and she did and Cece stood there like a deer caught in the headlights. Rocky looks at Cece with a very deep scowl and Rocky said “WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING YOU SLUT!!!”, and Cece looked scared more then she has ever been as watching her best friend coming closer with her cute little eraser nipples that were light brown and her monstrous dick which was still hard and her hairless cunt. Now Cece on the floor looking at Rocky with fear in her eyes as Rocky towered over her. “NOW IT IS NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE” Cece says in a panicked state “OH REALLY IT LOOKS LIKE YOU WERE GETTING YOURSELF OFF ON ME MASTERBAITING,” Rocky said angrily. Cece admitted to it and said, “What are you going to do to me?” “Well I am going to show you what sluts like you deserve come here!” Rocky said as she grabbed Cece by the hair and pulled her into her room. Cece screaming as this was happening because she was afraid and she was hurting from her hair being pulled. When they got to the bed she threw Cece against it and she said “you filthy fucking whore you wanna watch a girl fucking masturbate fine sit there and watch” she said. Then she started playing with her pussy lips then putting one finger in her snatch then two then three moaning loudly until she finally came. Cece just sat there and watched her masturbate then Rocky did something unexpected she grabbed Cece’s head and shoved her cock down her mouth, and put it in slowly only able to get about four and a half inches until she heard her gagging on her cock but she didn’t care she was lost in the pleasure. She had to have more so she shoved Cece down on her pole another 3 inches she was still chocking and gagging now saliva coming out of her mouth and making the brutal oral assault much easier and Rocky got another 2 inches in now most of her enormous cock. Rocky was getting fed up of this and pushed her head against the wall and brutally started to face fuck her humping her face like a jackhammer. Then for some reason she kicked it up a notch and went into over time, she felt like every time Rocky thrusts into her mouth that she was chocking and being punched at the same time as she started crying while gagging on the monstrous cock was forced down her throat. Then Rocky stopped all of a sudden and she started moaning. “OH MY MOTHER FUCKING GOD I AM CUMMING DOWN YOUR THROAT BITCH AND YOU BETTER SWALLOW IT!”, and she did just that and Cece felt liquid coming down her throat and it felt a little salty yet sweet it didn’t taste so bad but she swallowed it all just in case Rocky was real on her threat. When Rocky was finished Cumming she said, “Now get the fuck out come back tomorrow morning and here this is my sign from now on your mine” as she planted a hickey to the point to where she started bleeding, and then she was told to leave. Just as she did that Rocky smacked her on her nice ass then Cece was out of her room and into her own.

3 hrs later

After all this happened Cece was still awake thinking about the events that only happed hours ago, and the strangest thing was she wasn’t mad, sad, or scared she was EXCITED and she couldn’t wait for what was about to happen tomorrow so she passed out and fell into the darkness of sleep. Waiting for the events to start tomorrow. (To be continued hopefully)

Well guys that is the end hope you enjoyed if you enjoyed it please comment it if this works out I will make another if not I will stop making stories and just add favorites okay thanks for reading.

Greatly FIREUP1


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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 01:49
    its good realy realy good 9/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 01:55
    Hmm good story so you finaly came out of your closet to show your best friend
    What you can do since your a half boy and half girl? But how did you hide your half.
    From your other girlfriends. And friends. So now you have a little slave to fuck her.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2011 11:53
    pretty decent good job

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  • fireup1
    16.08.2011 14:53
    guys thank you for the good reviews but i need criticism also because i need to do better. yes this is my best story yet but i need my next one to be better thanks for reading and please give more comments bye

    greatly fireup1

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 08:59
    It's a wall of text, which is a real problem. If you space it out some more and use a double space before and after dialogue it's much easier to read. Great plot though

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  • fireup1
    17.08.2011 10:11
    I just noticed it i am sorry for the wall of text i will revise it and do a better job sorry guys thanks for the comment

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2011 22:45
    More now!.........please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2011 22:59
    sorry not logged in tell me what u want in the next story and i'll try to put it in

    greatly FIREUP1

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  • always+hard+on
    21.08.2011 12:04
    i didnt know there was another shake it up story but now there is one for shemale and regular people

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2011 01:28
    dude the grammar needs to be improved otherwise my cock will remain soft other than that greart content

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.09.2011 07:09
    How old are you? God, this is crap!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 23:46
    i think u should make ur next 1 bout thundercats and if u ask me maybe try to make a few pics or bit more interets.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 23:55
    have fun with it and try to think about if you was them and dont just have b cup tits. never give up on yourself and have fun and push yourself past your limits till u cant go any further. and tits means breasts boobs whatever u wanna call it either way it would be fine and nice. dont make your next one about them masturbating plz k. ;) make it count and believen yourself and you'll never go wrong. follow your heart and you will always be right. it has a nice plot thats very true but i think it needs a little something more a little more power or umph!!!!!!!! don't keep skeletons in your closet.or make your next one about star wars or wizards of waverly place or tarzan or furrious5 or wizard101 or just of dogs or cats or horses or goats the possiblilities are endless???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lood luck and look up the song called blackou

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 16:31
    terrible story though I almost came.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2012 23:43
    Boooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 19:01
    awsome story you shouldnt care what these meat heads and baby dicks say there just full of shit

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 13:39
    I just cumed all over

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2012 16:14
    I honestly didn't like how Rockys brother died D: wtf man??? I've watched the how before and I can tell you that rocky would never call cece a slut even if she was masturbating to her

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.05.2012 17:46
    didnt like the part of ty dieing i would be good without it

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.06.2012 17:33
    Shit in every way grammar,story and spelling
    Shit

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2012 20:20
    great it was just awesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2012 23:52
    Making actual paragraphs would be a huge improvement.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2012 06:33
    The Guy or Girl in The 5th Post do you even hear The words coming out of your mouth

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2012 13:01
    dy678f7f45ygt5uivfvj

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2012 17:54
    make another allreddy

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2012 04:24
    Me: You little bitch!
    Rocky: Yeah! Why the fuck would u make us do this shit!?
    CeCe: What,the,FUCKING HELL!? THIS IS FUCKING CRAP! GRAHH THIS IS SHIT!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2012 05:42
    im a kid and iv herd a lot about u i hate shake it up now fuck u biches and insted of being gay go do somthing with your life. like getting a job or being a techer.come to my hous and dont tell my mom i sead all this but i am seres now u know what i think!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2012 04:05
    Im on the show and you call me a slut? FUCK YOU us peps should get respect not fucking nude fakes and porn stories next story any of you make im having disney company sue you motherfuckers BellA out

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2012 04:22
    U fucking whore wat is wrong with u dickhead

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2012 04:24
    U fucking whore wat is wrong with u dickhead

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2012 04:24
    U fucking whore wat is wrong with u dickhead

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2012 22:28
    Really good, hope to see a series come out of this. Maybe it could take place at their school or something.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2012 20:16
    I came twice this is awesome please make more

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2012 14:06
    Will there be another one?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2012 06:30
    Good, but why do i see death in a lot of porn fics about real shows

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2012 21:22
    I like it make another one

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.11.2012 23:26
    um i like tthe store but i dont think rocky would do that to cece mabey tinka but not rocky

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2012 19:56
    omg god u r so fucking messed u assholes you suck dick and need to get a life u fucking bitch asshole

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.11.2012 02:40
    i WOULD LIKE TO HAVE IT.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.12.2012 23:15
    that was strange get a life u asswipe u r werid as fuck man u whore/slut (sorry im not really mean but its true u pissed me off

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2013 00:46
    all of you who said that are fucking whoes and slut at least they tried dumbasses

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.02.2013 21:31
    I want to fuck zendaya so fucking bad. She's so fucking sexy and I want to marry her and destroy her little cunt every night.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2013 14:25
    u know this good but to people that tell others to get a life they read as well so their the dickheads

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 20:39
    I like how most of you don't make sense when you comment. Seriously, you need to learn proper grammar. I liked the story please make a sequel to this one for the next morning.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2013 00:09
    REALLY?!?!?!?! You bastards sit at home and read this CRAPPY SHIT! You dream about fucking little girls.You are obviously all PERVERTS!!! This is what is wrong with the United States!!!!!!!!!!!! :o

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2013 23:25
    soppose im 15 ehh to make shor e

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.11.2013 16:53
    eww its nasty and dumb no one will read this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2014 15:13
    This is probably the worst written story I've read on thus site

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2014 02:08
    More I love it😋

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2014 02:50
    More I love it😋

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 21:41
    What is this is only read this to have a wank and I ain't wanking over a girl with a dick

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