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Southern Girl

Author: Zeppelin_1

Date: 6 August 2004

Blowjob, Fiction, Masturbation, Teen

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Картинка к рассказу

***********************************************INTRO**************************************************************

The sun beat down hard on my neck. I looked over the endless feilds filled with wheat yet to be baled. My shirt was off, as per usual, and my tan was getting even deeper. Sweat rolled down my body like rain. It was the end of July, 1942. Wilson Pickett and I were the only farmhands left on the place. Jack had up and left with a girl and Bill was missing.

And so it was, Wilson and me, Jake, were the only ones out in the feilds. Bending over to pick up my gloves, I began to speculate. Since my seventeenth birthday in June, my dad had rented me out to Greg Rutton, rich owner of this farm. I got some of my pay, but most went to my pa. In return I lived with Wilson in the carraige house. It was a pretty sweet deal.

I stood up and and saw the sweetest part of the deal walking towards me. Wilson was on the baler, so I was the only one to see Lucy Rutton striding through the cut wheat, carrying a larger earthenware jug. She came up to me and I could see her slim body outlined undereath her cotton dress. Her blonde hair was long and straight; golden strands that hung down past her well-shaped ass. Her face was pale and beautiful, without a blemish, and large pert breasts stood proudly on her chest.

I smiled at her and she smiled back.

"Hello miss Rutton." I said politely. She handed me the jug, which was full of water.

"Hello to you too, Jake. And I told you, call me Lucy." She answered.

"Okay miss Rutton." I said, teasing her. She made a mock-angry face and punched me in the shoulder.

Ever since I'd got here, Lucy had always been freindly to me. She was a beautiful girl with a very noticeable personality. I found her irresistable. But. . . . . .the boss's daughter, and all that.

"Thanks for the drink." I said when I was finished.

"You're very welcome, Jake Mathews." She answered with a smile that nearly un-did me. My stomache seemed to do a strange flip inside me.

*****************************************************Chapter One************************************************

I sat up in my bunk, back throbbing from the day's work, mind racing.

"Will, what do you think of Miss Lucy?" I asked quietly.

Wilson, who was half asleep in his bed, answered, "She's a pretty one. That's for sure."

"Yeah, but. . . . . . .nevermind." I said. He soon began to snore.

I was dead tired, but couldn't sleep. I slowly, not even realizing it, slid off my bunk and dropped to the wood floorboards. I pulled on a pair of jeans and walked out, barefoot, into the moonlit Louisiana night. Not a hundred feet away, stood the stately Rutton home. I looked at its shadowy brick mass and knew that somewhere inside, was Lucy Rutton.


"Hello Jake." Came a whispery voice to my right. The tall locust trees shrouded the grounds surrounding the carraige house and the Rutton home, but I could still make her out. Lucy Rutton stood there in a dress that clung to her body. I remembered my shirtless appearance and wondered how dead I'd be if Greg Rutton found us like this. I coughed quietly.

"What are you doin out here, Miss Rutton?" I asked. She walked forward into a patch of moonlight.

"I fancied a walk on the grounds. Is that alright with you, Jake Mathews?" She stated in an imperious tone.

"That's fine, fine. I fancied a walk myself. But, I guess I'll be goin'. . . . . . . ." I turned to leave, but Lucy darted forward and blocked my way.

"Why are you so scared of me Jake? I aint never hurt. I never would." She said quietly, looking me directly in the face. Her body was deliciously encased in the tight sheer dress. Her breasts rose and fell with every breath. I swallowed.

"I know, it's just. . . . . .I feel for you things I shouldn't feel. I think of things that aint right Miss Lucy." I said.

She sighed in an aggravated way. "I feel for you too Jake. Why do you think I'm always flirtin' with you and bringin' you water?" She stepped in close until we were almost touching. "And if you don't mind, Mister Mathews, I'm gonna kiss you."

Our lips met with a fiery spark. Lucy's mouth was wet and open, tongue slipping (with presicion as if she were well practiced at the art) against my own stunned lips. I revived myself and responded, having never kissed anyone before. This was new territory. I looped one arm behind her and pulled her tight against me. My dick was already hard, a bulge in my worn jeans. She arched sinuously against my body, turning me on even more.

While we kissed she ran her hand between our bodies, up my leg, until she made contact with my rock-hard penis. She pressed on it and kissed me with even more ferocity.

My mind reeled. So much for the Upper-class manners. This girl was shameless. Half the rich boys in the state were after Lucy Rutton, and here she was groping a farm-hand? I dismissed the thoughts and moved my own hand around to her breasts.

They were soft and full, filling my hands with weighted silk, stabbing my palms with tight budding nipples. The men I'd been around had told me about all of this. They had underestimated it greatly. My mind was on fire.

She rubbed my pulsing dick through my pants as I squeezed her breast firmly. She let out a high moan as I did it, and arched against my hand.

We finally stopped the mutual groping and I stared at her tousled blonde hairand flushed face.

"Am I the first guy you've kissed?" I asked. She laughed quietly and put her hands on my chest, pushing me so I'd walk backwards. I was pressed against the tree now, in complete darkness. I couldn't see Lucy. I heard rustling cloth and nothing more. I was about say something when I felt a tugging on my jeans. My button was being un-done. And the slide of the zipper was audible in the night. I felt cool fingers slip in either side of the waistband on my breifs and then a quick sharp pull brought them down around my ankles. I was naked! My dick was rock hard and waved in the warm night air. Suddenly I felt Lucy wrap her hand around it. Pulsing with need, I asked again,

"Am I the first guy you've kissed?"

She laughed again, somewhere below me, "What do you think?"

I couldn't think, I couldn't move. Not after I felt half the length of my rigid dick slip inside a wet hot cavern. Her mouth was slick, so slick, and her caressing tongue slid over the underside of my shaft where it was most sensitive. My hips bucked reflexively and she began to move her mouth up and down my dick, sucking and licking. I was gasping for air, my hands buried in her silky blonde hair. She then wrapped her small hand around my shaft, squeezing hard. It followed her mouth, up and down, in and out. Fast and faster, I felt the slick friction of her tongue, the sweet pressure of her hand, the gliding kiss of her lips. Faster and faster until-

"Oh, God!" I half-shouted, half-whispered. I began to come, shockwaves of pleasure rocketing from my balls to my head. Sperm shot hard into her mouth. She stopped moving and I felt a curious sensation. I then realized she was trying to suck sperm out of me, so she could swallow it. This sent me even further over the edge, and I kept coming, jetting a bigger load of cum everytime until I was just spasming on empty. There in the darkness, Lucy Rutton gave me my first blow-job. In the shadows, I felt her move up my body.

She kissed me on the cheek and whispered, "Meet me here, same time tomorrow night." She gave my softening dick a squeeze. "And I might let you put your thing somewhere else." Giggling, she printed away, dashing through shadows and moonlight like some wicked fairy.

*********************************************************************************************************************

Lucy Rutton lay on her bed, twisting and turning. She was naked, her pale skin illuminated by moonlight. Sprawled on her back, she had two fingers furiously burying themselves inside her pussy, desperate to cum. She realized she couldn't. Not like this. She stopped and looked around, fevered with lust and desperate to orgasm. She soon spotted a candle on the vanity, about two and a half inches across, rougly eight inches long. She dashed naked to the vanity and grasped it. She took the butt end and examined it in the silvery light floating through the window. It was an unused candle, so the length was smooth. Her pussy creamed even more as she didn't even bother to go back to bed. Instead she put one foot up on the vanity table and reached behind her full ass with the candle. From behind, the candle pressed inside her dripping pussy. It was hard and unforgiving, but she wanted it so bad.

She pressed it in hard until abouth six inches filled her. Lucy was definitely no virgin. She moved the candle around, working every part of her wet cunt until she was feverish again. She began to fuck herslef with it, pounding in and out, moaning in her throat. She pictured Jack behind her, ramming his wet penis inside her dripping slit.

"Jack, oh God. . . . . . ..OH!" Her voice was a whisper, but the moans were almost to loud. Uncontrollably, knowing she was such a bad girl, she thought of her father, big and strong. She imagined him behind her, rocking his big dick inside her. This was her favorite fantasy. She'd never actually touch him, but. . . . . . . . .

"Oh Daddy, fuck me. . . . . .oh Daddy! Oh Jack!" she moaned to herself, the naughty language and even naughtier subject sent her over the edge. She slammed the candle deeper and began to rotate it as she came, clenching down on it in the throws of climax. Leaving her pussy dripping, she went back to bed. Under the covers, she began to rub her tired cunt. Tomorrow, there'd be no more waiting. She'd get what she wanted.


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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.08.2004 12:41
    It certainly wasn't one of your best. The whole last scene with the Daddy bullshit was dumb. Overall I guess I'd give yah a 3, but then again all of your other stories never seize to please me.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2004 16:33
    my stories seize you? oh well. decent opinion. Where's the rest? Come on people! Am I gonna have to go back to summer fun stories?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.09.2004 03:53
    half decent. Definitely not your best. Should work on something more detailed. Nice try.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.09.2004 08:20
    Zeppelin you stud

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.09.2004 11:52
    I thought that had some very good detail, keep 'em commin zeppelin.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.09.2004 17:30
    did jack sprat just die or something? where is the old fucker? he's the one i wanted to read sex with sister and all that malarky. he gives the literary advice and all that. oh well. i'm a stud. . . . .? not the first time i've heard that. . . .

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.09.2004 07:35
    Great blow job
    give us some more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2005 20:26
    more more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.05.2005 01:36
    I LOVED IT!
    I WACKED OFF AND CUMMED ALL OVER THE PLACE!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.09.2006 15:42
    Right on !!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.09.2006 21:45
    I loved it. Thanks for the idea on how to tell my wife.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.09.2006 01:12
    Great Story..I loved the ending!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.10.2006 15:50
    good story like the ending

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.11.2006 21:31
    twist or what

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.12.2006 07:06
    Sweet fucking payback man, fucking awesome!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.01.2007 14:00
    That was great! Best way to end it too!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.01.2007 22:42
    haha Awesome show that fucking cunt whose boss

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2007 17:50
    that's kinda sad i think

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2007 16:35
    Fucking-A!!!! Now that is standing up to the bitch...and fucking her partner in the ass? Nice! Great Story!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2007 05:41
    what the...???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2007 00:57
    WTF? KIND OF OUT THERE BUT A GREAT END

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.07.2007 23:12
    Great story.. pay back is a bitch...BITCH...

    hahaha

    1...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.08.2007 18:44
    fuckin awesome story!!!!!!!!

    i loved the ending!!

    i was never into rape and slavery kinda stories cuz that kinda stuff happens all the time and the thought of som one wanting to do it is sick.



    but for payback to the same bicth tht caused it thts acceptable.

    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.01.2008 11:36
    I just bookmarked this story. This story is awesome. It reminds me of what happened with me and my ex. 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.05.2008 18:26
    Well I like what you did to that bich and I
    Salute you for your revenge I wish I could of done that to my EX ,so good work*

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.05.2008 17:36
    Great

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  • unknown
    unknown 766
    19.06.2008 22:25
    this is a really stupid story...unbelievable

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.01.2009 18:54
    wasn't there a longer version of this story somewhere? I can't find it....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2009 23:31
    continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2009 02:18
    Continue please, I want to see what has occured between Lareesa and Matt over the month.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.04.2009 04:20
    Fuck yea i fucken loved dat story dnt stop writting u made me and my man hot and horny damn dat was bomb

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  • Maui+Fan
    16.07.2009 15:29
    Heartwarming. Don't stop!

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  • Reader
    Reader 500
    07.08.2009 17:33
    Please continue. I want moooore!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2010 20:41
    I wanna fuck ur balls!

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  • Frogthedog
    28.11.2010 17:04
    Awsome kept me cuming

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2011 09:51
    What a grate stories i hoper you writer a lotter more

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.05.2011 15:03
    yes please.. do the honours......

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 20:22
    omg let me guess 1 month later, preggers

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.02.2012 14:38
    Why didn't he cum inside? Too much like your typical guy who watches too many porn flix.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.02.2012 22:10
    Since when do guys wear black crotchless panties and pantyhose

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.02.2012 22:11
    pretty hard to read. the spacing and spellng are awful. i see you've posted alot of stories on oneday. you should slow down. remember quality over quanity.

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  • nightwatcher
    08.02.2012 04:00
    what a load of badly written crap

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 00:50
    Yeah I tell my niece that jack off to her picture all the time. The shittiest story I have read in a long time.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 02:29
    sux. didnt even bother to read as it is unreadable formatting!

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  • liz+22+nd
    09.02.2012 22:00
    mmm lots of wifes like to watch their hubbys with guys.. loved every word..

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 15:06
    سكس

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 15:07
    سكس

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 15:08
    سكس

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 23:15
    My cock is so fucking hard I'm bout to blow !

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.02.2012 11:08
    Mmmmm the thought of you having your cock sucked by the husband turns me right on. Please write some more xx

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  • tarheel65
    10.03.2012 19:16
    In this format it's really hard to read, repost in a better format please.

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  • tarheel65
    10.03.2012 19:17
    In this format it's really hard to read, repost in a better format please.

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  • iownu1988
    29.05.2012 23:18
    Thats a change in direction, I never saw coming, was good

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  • Luvagobfull
    29.05.2012 23:22
    Love the oral scene, its plastered inside my head, love this story developement :)

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  • thesilent1
    30.05.2012 00:32
    twistedsister, I loved that you took Jesinta's focus away from the biker gang and the v.p. for a minute. I see that you had Jesinta introduced us to a new character in the school. The oral scene with Jesinta and Jimmy was awesome as well. I am liking the direction that this series has taken so far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2012 01:21
    altho I'm not into white women and black men together it was a good story

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  • iownu1988
    04.06.2012 00:38
    Need more of Jimmy's friends to pay Jesinta a visit I think..Well donw :)

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  • Crazy69er
    04.06.2012 00:44
    i love how each post is developing into something else, u could almost write a TV series on this if it was on a porn network lol

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  • Crazy69er
    04.06.2012 07:16
    Mmm looks like she needs to decide between Jimmy or VP

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  • sub4u1988
    04.06.2012 18:03
    May Jimmy and VP, do Jes at one time. Has Jes or will Jes be DPd?

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  • Corkmyass
    09.06.2012 21:03
    Story get more intreging ..pos from me

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  • Limloom
    20.06.2012 22:00
    Very good story. She has two surrogate daddys now.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2012 00:53
    Not bad let's see how far it goes.
    AC

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2012 01:47
    Definitely its good

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.06.2012 19:48
    Poor spelling, poor grammar. Didn't even bother tyo do a spell check.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.07.2012 04:12
    fucking pig bitch got just what she deserved for cheating on her husband with the fucking nigger........... she certainly didn't show any respect for her husband and apparently has no self respect
    for herself either............ whar he sould have done is beat the ficking shit out of here then cut off the niggers cock and make her eat it then thrown her ass out on the street

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2012 14:51
    Looking for a white girl to freak with

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2012 14:43
    to the reviewer below me. HOW CAN YOU COMPLAIN ABOUT HIS SPELLING WHEN YOU SPELLED 'TO' WRONG! more please

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2012 02:10
    i liked it very much dont pay attention to the guys bitching about grammar they are just being douches my advice is too stay with the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.07.2012 23:37
    pretty good, ill have to keep an eye out for the next.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 19:43
    Please always say 'I' and not 'i'. It is imperative.

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  • BLKPOET
    29.08.2012 22:06
    Waiting on part 3..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2012 11:39
    Lol 13, 190pounds, no. Just stop

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2012 17:21
    Fuck yes dude, keep writing your random perverted stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2012 23:23
    Yes waiting on part 3

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.10.2012 23:20
    yes part 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2012 16:23
    You shouldn't put a tab that says this has anal if it doesn't. Im not disappointed though, cause it was still a good story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.11.2012 02:07
    Hey you fucking retards he said it was mostly muscle

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.03.2013 12:36
    please do another i love it so much

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2013 23:22
    Good story , but you should have stayed longer got fucked in the ass a few times! Today's pitcher is tomorrow's catcher , as the saying goes

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2013 09:53
    Man what a cliff hanger ,a good start to a great story so don't stop now!

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  • flipper972
    08.05.2013 21:55
    Please do not stop there. Keep adding to it

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.05.2013 00:29
    great story. Please keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.05.2013 10:59
    :;:;m;:ùmùù*ù*
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  • anonymous+reader
    09.05.2013 15:08
    carry on with this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2013 06:35
    great story a little short part 2 please

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2013 23:54
    How is this not meant for "a quick jackoff"? It's a 3 minute read...

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2013 00:50
    Too quick if u ask me. Still yet well developed, and if true story as you say it should continue... a bit more physical description adds volume and paints pictures for the us, the readers.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.06.2013 17:39
    nice story, part 2 might get real fun if we find out she if fertal, and she gets pregnat -mmmmmmmmmmmm think about it

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2013 23:05
    Wow i was lovin it and gettin into then it was ruined by her moaning for her daddy while fucking herself with a candle and my boner went down faster then a japanese kamakasi

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  • Norton5
    25.07.2013 23:16
    Twistedsister's stories are sharp. Watch out! You could cut yourself when reading them. This one cut me good. Tex's use and abuse of Kimmy made me question certain aspects of sexual immorality in myself. You know you've read a good story when it leaves you with insight you never had and makes you think hard, piercing thoughts. This is more than just a good story.

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  • Norton5
    25.07.2013 23:18
    Anybody want to learn how to write a sex story? Dial 555-001-JESINTA-IS-A-SEX-GODDESS-349 or dial 555-288-KIMMY-ROCKS-COCK-599. The secretary will put you in touch with Twistedsister.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2013 06:05
    i want to meet u two

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 12:37
    I WOULD LOVE TO MEET YOU IN YOUR WIFE FOR A THREESOME OR WHATEVER I LIKE TO DRESS UP IN JUST LINGIER ,PANTYHOSE OR WHATEVER I LOVE TO STAY IN AND HAVE A GOODTIME

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  • sanctobosco
    15.07.2014 22:11
    Amazing!! But I thought this site had taken down stories of underage sexual activity. (They took down my true story of the 12 year old me)
    Happily they have missed yours "Beloved"
    S.B.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.07.2014 21:18
    I would love to go to that place dressed up in high heels and pritty dress and see how many times i could get fucked

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2014 10:51
    Wicked story, very well written.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.11.2014 21:50
    Me gusta las piliculas de sex

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  • sexwriter1957
    20.11.2014 20:01
    Great story keep them coming.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.11.2014 15:01
    Hmmmm....Wonder what the scent was in the theater after that?
    Hot read but a slower build up would have been sexier...at least to me...
    I voted positive though....

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  • Young_True_Heart
    29.11.2014 20:18
    ^ Thanks for the tip!
    I'm working on the sequel right now, and the sequel to Shower Surprise so comments and tips are greatly appreciated =)

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  • Young_True_Heart
    29.11.2014 20:21
    ^and about the scent... we got out of there right away so I couldn't tell you hehe

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.11.2014 23:16
    this is amazin love how u didnt care who was watching loll

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.11.2014 03:19
    Not bad at all, that was a real treat! I will read the sequels for sure! The writing style was interesting, but good. :) ps hit me up on kick only girls please, Punkbonerboy is my name and I'm also a writer on here! Check out my stories! This story is awesome! Loved it!

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  • Young_True_Heart
    30.11.2014 03:28
    Thanks for the comments guys!
    I was playing with a new writing style...
    I always write in first person but do you guys prefer addressing the lady in second or third person?
    ie. using "your hand" vs "her hand" ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.11.2014 05:13
    This story sucks. "Interesting" writing style is pathetic. Try to grow up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2014 18:10
    An interesting style of writing that reminded me of quite a few classics, sort of a dreamy type of feel. Great job. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.02.2016 08:14
    make a big series of it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2016 16:10
    Not bad but I was hoping for a bit more. Fresh piss goes great with with warm shit sausages and a heavy flow of blood from a woman during her cycle makes a great bloody mary mixed with vodka.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.02.2017 07:05
    yes do part 2 3 4 5 thru 20 or 50

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