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  1. Feeling My Daughter: Part One
  2. Feeling My Daughter: Part Two
Feeling My Daughter: Part Two

Author: Drella

Date: 30 September 2011

Anal, Fiction, Incest, Male / Female

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Molly stood in the same spot as I walked around to let her back face me. I looked at her round firm pale skinned ass where my finger had lingered. I saw where the beads of sweat pooled in the crease of my sixteen year old daughter’s back just above her round posterior. Slowly, I touched her bare shoulders, flipping her hair out of my way in order to feel her hot moist skin. Even though Molly’s skin was moist with perspiring stimulation, it was still soft. The curve of her shoulders fit perfectly in my hands.

I blew gently on the back of her neck and I felt her body quiver in ripples. I could tell my warm breath, that tickled her nape, sent feelings through her she never felt. This was all new to Molly. This was another of her teenage experiments. What better way to learn?

Slowly, I ran a finger down between her shoulder blades, tracing all the way to the top of her round rump. As I did, Molly arched her body, making the crease of her back conform to my finger as it caressed her hot soft skin. Again, I blew gently on her neck and reached around with both hands to feel the softness of her tight stomach. I circled her little navel with my fingertip as my other hand drifted upward along her softness. My daughter was so warm to the touch and so sensually erotic than she realized.

“Oh daddy, your hands feel so good all over me. It feels like my body is on a roller coaster ride as your hands travel over my curves.”

“Molls, you are so soft and smooth. So hot and curvaceous. Just enjoy the ride,” I said as I continued to feel her warmth.

“I am daddy. Believe me, I am,” Molly answered and leaned her head into my shoulder.

My right hand rested over her stomach, feeling the dimple of her navel under its palm. My left hand continued upward until I could feel the underside of her small mound that corresponded with my exactness. I took my finger and traced along the bottom arch that formed there connecting her small breast to her upper torso. I felt my daughter’s body shiver as I tickled such a tender area on her. Then Molly moaned.

That moan told me I could do what I wanted, so I moved my hand upward and cupped her small breast. My hand fit perfectly over it, covering its tiny firmness. Molly let out a long sigh as my hand began to massage her petite handful. My fingers pressed slightly on the silkiness of her smooth skin and I could feel the puffiness of her aureola expand, as well as her tiny nipple lengthening against my palm. I could feel the heat in Molly’s nipple as it grew firm and rigid and the soft puff of her tiny aureola mound rub against my cupping palm.

“Mmm, daddy, that feels so good to have your hand on my breast! Don’t you want to feel the other one too? Don’t you want to make both of my nipples hard?”

“Oh, Moll’s, I don’t have too. Your other nipple already is!” I said and reached up with my free hand and tweaked its firmness.

Molly sighed loudly at the surprise that her right nipple was just as hard as the left one under my palm. I was sure she did not feel it grow because of the stimulation I was giving to her left breast with my hand.

Slowly, I cupped her right one to match the left one already covered and began to equally feel both of them in the same fashion. I squeezed their small supple roundness with matching smooth strokes. Molly’s skin was so soft and smooth as I massaged in circles over her small mounds. Even the skin of her hard nipples on pink puffs was just as delicate. My daughter, with her pale skin, looked and felt like a marshmallow.

Molly covered my hands with hers as I felt her small protuberances that made her a young woman. Her gentle hands felt wonderful on my strong ones that caressed only a part of her sexuality. I could tell that she felt comfortable in my arms by the way she caressed my hands covering her tiny mounds. My virgin daughter was taking everything in so she would know what to do her first time. I knew that I was only the teacher at this point.

Molly’s body was getting hot and her breasts had gotten as firm as they possibly could under my stimulation. I could tell that she was ready for more. I knew that I could finally dare to take my hand lower and feel the hot partition between her legs. It would be no surprise to her though, not like when my finger found her tight little butt hole. Molly would know exactly where my hand was going.

Slowly, I slid my right hand down from her breast and across the hot soft skin of her side. Molly continued to feel her own breast as my hand slunk down to her hip. I massaged the bone there that stuck out slightly. It felt good and Molly’s skin was still just as soft. My finger then found the crease of her leg that led to her sweet spot, but I trailed my finger on the inner side of her thigh. As I moved my finger down, I could actually feel the heat from her tight lips that formed the perfect verticalness between her thin legs. There was more than just heat escaping. There was also moisture.

Molly’s body trembled as my finger tickled her inner thigh then ran slowly back up to the crease of her leg, oh so close to her sensitivity. Again, Molly shook from anticipation of what was going to happen.

I moved my hand over to the mound that was right above the formidable fold that represented Molly’s whole feminine being. Her skin there was soft, silky, and oh so smooth; no stubble from being shaved was there at all. I could tell that she had just recently shaved it smooth, probably last night in the shower. Reminded me of her mother's shaved smoothness. I guess, like mother, like daughter!

I circled over Molly’s mound and she moaned gently as I did. My other hand now rested on her hip for support. The softness of her mound was so delightfully smooth and so warm to the touch. My finger felt good there as it traced over her luscious mound of love. The contour of it led to just where I wanted my finger to be. I circled a finger tip over the top, still over the mound, but right at the beginning of Molly’s perfect fold. I heard her gasp as my finger whisked slowly in circles.

“Doesn’t my mound feel so good, daddy? Don't you like how smooth it feels since I shaved it last night?"

“I do, Moll’s. It's so much like your mother's. So soft and smooth and hot!” I said and slid my finger down right on top of her perfect verticalness to feel her knob hiding behind the delicate flesh.

“DADDY!” Molly exclaimed as my finger massaged what hid, “That’s my. . . oh God. . . that feels so good. . . so much better than when I feel it myself!”

I imagined my sixteen year old daughter masturbating after that statement. I pictured it, seeing her delicate body on her bed with her own hands running over her teenage sensuality. To tell the truth, I was glad she felt herself. I did not have to worry about anything as long as she did.

“Oh daddy, I’ve never felt my clit react like this before. Your finger is drawing it out even more than when I feel it. God, daddy, keep going!” I suddenly heard and was pulled back into reality. I began to circle over her sensitivity even more. I felt it getting harder and more attentive as I did.

In quicker circles of my finger, I massaged over her clitoral hood, feeling Molly’s pink button behind it. Molly was right, I could feel her clit poking out even farther, lengthening more and more under my stimulation. I also felt the warm wetness form around it as my finger pulled the fleshy skin up and over it to expose it slightly.

“Mmm, daddy, that feels so amazing. More!” Molly begged.

I definitely gave her more. I circled over her hot pink clit a couple times and then slowly let my finger drift between the crease that hid all of her other goodness. As my finger slid between the tender partition of my daughter‘s smooth teenage slit, I felt the hot moisture of it coat my finger.

I only let my finger drift through the sensual division of my sixteen year old daughter, being careful not to let it sink any deeper into her hot wet chamber. I only wanted Molly to feel the shape of my finger trace a trail of intimacy through it. However, as I felt my finger glide over the spot that gave her so much wondrous pleasure, it was hard to hold back from sinking into the hot juicy depth of her fleshy pink chasm. I held back for the moment and slowly brought my finger back up through it.

“Oh my! Oh daddy! I can feel the shape of your finger slide through my pussy. It feels so. . . so. . . so dangerous! You are making not only my pussy tingle, but also my whole body!” Molly said through heavy breaths.

I moaned into her ear as my finger found her clit again, now more attentive and erotic. I circled it slightly then took my finger and circled her silky mound, leaving her sticky residue on her soft skin. As my finger swiftly traced over it, Molly reacted by spreading her legs slightly, just enough for her engorged inner lips to jut out. It was now time for the coup d’etat.

Inch by slow methodical inch, I again ran my finger down through my daughter’s tender pink pliable inner lips that had swollen to stimulated perfection. I parted them slightly as I went and when I was at the entrance to her vagina, my finger toyed there, tickling its wet opening. The warmth of her hot hole felt good on my finger and as I circled just inside Molly’s notch, she moaned long and softly.

Slowly, I let the tip of my finger slip inside her tightness and I felt Molly’s body flinch and heard the gulp of air she took in surprise.

“Daddy, are you going to. . .” Molly said through hot heavy breaths that I interrupted since I knew what she was going to say to slowly insert my finger into her tight pinkness.

“UUUUNNNNNHHHH, DADDY!” Molly shrieked as my finger penetrated her hot constricting virginal vagina. “I’ve never felt anything like that inside me! Not even my own fingers. God, it feels. . . feels. . . oh my!”

Molly’s virgin pussy felt so good wrapping around my finger slowly sinking deeper inside her. As I moved my finger in and out of her tightness, it felt like my finger was pressing into a damp sponge slowly filling with hot desire. I moved my finger in and out at a very slow pace at first so Molly’s virgin pussy could get used to a hard object inside it.

I listened to my daughter’s tone and paid close attention to her breathing. I used that as a sign to know when to go faster with my finger. Her tone and breathing were quickening, so I fastened the pace.

“Daddy, oh daddy, that feels so amazing! You are giving me feelings I've never felt! I never even please myself like this!”

“That’s the purpose, Molls.” I said as I continued to insert my finger deep inside her.

“This is all so new to me. I’ve never been so wet. And I thought I made myself wet all the time. God, the tingles! They feel so prickly over my whole body. It’s like. . . like. . . something is building up inside of me that wants out!” Molly said, moaning syllables of pure delight.

“That’s your orgasm, Molls.”

“Orgasm? Really? I never make myself orgasm like this daddy. It never is this intense!”

“Do you want me to stop, Molls?" I asked, still burying my finger deep inside her getting wetter pussy.

“No, please don’t stop daddy, keep going. I want to know what it feels like to have one brought on by somebody else other than myself.” Molly answered as her pussy began to quiver in pulsing desire.

I kept stabbing into my daughter’s still tight, but extremely wet sixteen year old pussy at the same pace to where I had quickened. It seemed to satisfy her, so I did not want to stray from the rhythm I had found. Molly’s moans and breathing began to quicken even more and become a little more labored. Suddenly, I felt her wet insides change. I was able to sink my finger into her pussy a little deeper. I could even feel her pink lining grip my finger even harder. I was about to make my sixteen year old daughter cum.

“Uh, uh, uh, daddy. It feels like. . . like. . . oh God!” Molly said and before she could finish, I felt a gush over my finger.

“You are cumming Molls! You are cumming! Let it go, Molls. Let your daddy make you cum!” I said as I wiggled my finger inside her now sopping wet dripping pussy.

“Oh. . . oh. . . oh. . . DADDY! It feels like I am. . . I am. . . I am peeing! Oh God, I am sorry!”

“Molls, honey, you are not peeing,” I said, as I slowly exited my finger from her cum drenched notch, “That’s your cum. You had a wet orgasm.”

Molly turned around and faced me. Her face was flushed and the expression on it was pure surprise, but also pure delight. “Daddy, you made me cum like never before. I can't even make myself cum like that!” My daughter smiled and said and hugged me in a very tight hold and continued, “God, it felt so good! I wish every orgasm would feel like?”

I wrapped my arms around my naked daughter’s body and said, “Molls, I won’t lie. None of them will always feel the same. They will all be different. And this one was because I. . .”

“Because you used your finger?” Molly interrupted.

“In this exactness, yes, Molls. It will definitely be different when you actually experience the real thing.” I answered my daughter as I looked into her glowing face and swept a finger over her cheek.

Molly pulled away from me and I could see the wheel turning in her head. She looked at me with that sly puppy dog sixteen year old girlie smile and asked, “Then daddy, would you teach me the real thing?”

I was taken aback by my sixteen year old daughter’s statement. That thought never entered my mind. However, it did now, especially since it had an effect on me. It was amazing, the whole time I was feeling Molly’s ass and pussy, never once did my cock react. Until now.

Maybe it was time to teach Molly the real thing. After all, I had already felt her little ass and fingered her tight pussy. It was obvious she was ready for more. As I looked at my naked sixteen year old daughter still standing in front of me, it was clear that Molly wanted to know what real sex felt like.

And I was the one she was asking to take her virginity away. I was sure it was going to be worth it.


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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 01:45
    Sexy Id love to read more ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 01:46
    Sexy Id love to read more ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 01:52
    Definately a good story, in my opinion some of the dialogue would have worked better as a shocked voice in her head. And its kinda late to change it but i feel your way of description would work better with a female character. It is possible for a man to think like this but its rather odd hearing since probally and handful of men think this way.
    Regardless a good story from a yound and aspiring person

    -Svlenta

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 06:12
    my only criticism would be that the description of feelings are presented in the same vernacular, but it is trying to describe the feelings of 1, a sixteen year old girl and 2, an adult male. i understand the problem as you are an 18 year old female trying to explain the feelings of an adult male. i am not complaining, i think the story is very good and i do understand the writers frustrations. your solution will come with experience and the ability to just write as you feel and not worry about what others may say. personally, i love the story and i would love to be in daddy's shoes as i know that Molls would get quite an education. if only there was a way of contacting you. h.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 08:38
    omg this made me soo horney

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 08:45
    I enjoyed it and yes I also agree that the tone used for daughter should be different from dads

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 18:07
    try writing chapter three just from the daughters perspective, the dad can have a few comments, but try not mix the dialog in the same vernacular. dad can join the conversation, but leave the primary description from the thoughts and desires of molly. try a short test text for your self and evaluate it and see how it goes. h.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.10.2011 18:50
    loved it mate keep them coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2011 04:44
    i am from alabama and you know what they say about the south and incest well its not true but your story is really good

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  • tiredoldman56
    02.10.2011 08:17
    I am so glaD YOU WEROTE Part 2, please continue with part 3, you are doing a GREAT job of writing, kep up the good work, Drella

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2011 09:32
    Love your writing - it has a clear style, though still developing, a wealth of description, and yet the action continues to move. Well done. I'm really horney right now. Well done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 01:18
    ignore the rude comments, i love this story, also an 18 year old female

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 06:40
    to:also an 18 yo female! if you are able to mature, you might learn the difference between being rude and offering constructive critism, but somehow, i doubt it will ever happen. it must be in the genes.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 19:23
    I don't care what anybody says, this is an awesome story, You have a nack for telling things and it is so smooth and moving. I'm a 68 year old man and I can tell you this, your story made parts of me move that haven't moved in a long time. Keeping an eye out for part 3, so Please write a part 3, but for god sake, don't have the dad fuck her and get her pregnant, sorry, thats just my opinion

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.10.2011 20:40
    IMHO this story is very good. I got a boner over it. your richness i detail of the seduction is rarely found in pron. (porn)

    attention to detail without going too much into detail is always indicative of a good author. there is a perfect balance between the two extremes and you seem to have found it. read then re-read your two stories then try to model all future writing on what you did with the two stories.

    good luck on your future endeavors. I'll be sure to look up all & any future ones you do.

    I give you ***** with no hesitation whatsoever.

    ciao

    Fellow Traveller

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.10.2011 04:27
    its really a great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.10.2011 00:41
    Excellent writing and story line. Good plot development, so erotic and sensual - taking us along on the journey of Molly's lessons. You definitely have skills.

    You're pretty good at writing from the male perspective, although you don't have it exactly. However, that is not a complaint. There have been a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes along the way, but they are easily overlooked.

    All in all - well done. As I did so often when listening to Paul Harvey, I am anticipating "the rest of the story,"

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.10.2011 00:44
    Have yet to read any negative comments, but if you do get any, just ignore them as they are just ignorant fools. Good story and excellent plot. Looking forward to the continuing saga of Molly and her Dad. Thanks and keep on writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.10.2011 00:51
    Have yet to read any negative comments, but if you do get any, just ignore them as they are just ignorant fools. Good story and excellent plot. Looking forward to the continuing saga of Molly and her Dad. Thanks and keep on writing.

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  • Horseman919
    07.10.2011 13:05
    @Drella:

    First, I'm posting this not as Anonymous, but as a fellow author of stories posted here. Second, having a 95+% approval rate says more about your work than any negative the 4. whatever % feel. Third, some people read these stories - to jerk off - then blame you for their need! I'm afraid it is just human failing. It seems some people would rather tell someone else they are wrong or bad, rather that look in the mirror and see themselves.

    If you were getting 50% ratings you might have reason to question yourself. But, your work is liked and enjoyed by the vast majority, so as others have said ignore critics. My back ground is Theatre and we have a way of describing "critics" .... Critics are people who hate those that "can", because they "can't". Constructive criticism is a whole different thing!

    We all learn by experience! Realize you are a good story teller, so just keep telling your stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.10.2011 13:29
    really! your 16 and dont know cum from pissing?! lol ok i'm a girl i knew about cum when i was 8! i sould know thats the frist time dad pop a nut in my mouth! yummy! i'm 18 now and still fucking daddy! it was fun to watch guy at the beach looking at me at 8 with a camel toe! now i know why guys likes our pussy shaved bald!

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  • Horseman919
    07.10.2011 13:42
    @Drella:

    First, I'm posting this not as Anonymous, but as a fellow author of stories posted here. Second, having a 95+% approval rate says more about your work than any negative the 4. whatever % feel. Third, some people read these stories - to jerk off - then blame you for their need! I'm afraid it is just human failing. It seems some people would rather tell someone else they are wrong or bad, rather that look in the mirror and see themselves.

    If you were getting 50% ratings you might have reason to question yourself. But, your work is liked and enjoyed by the vast majority, so as others have said ignore critics. My back ground is Theatre and we have a way of describing "critics" .... Critics are people who hate those that "can", because they "can't". Constructive criticism is a whole different thing!

    We all learn by experience! Realize you are a good story teller, so just keep telling your stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.10.2011 13:52
    فديو سكسي لممثلاه التركيه جواهر في مسلسل جواهر

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.10.2011 13:53
    فديو سكسي لممثلاه التركيه جواهر في مسلسل جواهر

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.10.2011 17:32
    you are an amazing writer, and dont let others bring you down

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.10.2011 12:17
    Keep the series going, great story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.10.2011 12:40
    You are a wonderful writer don't let negative comments delsroy your great writing style. Keep up the good work!!!, I look forward to reading more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.10.2011 12:40
    You are a wonderful writer don't let negative comments delsroy your great writing style. Keep up the good work!!!, I look forward to reading more.

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  • jeffreyd
    08.10.2011 13:28
    loved your storries,cant wait till you post part 3

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.10.2011 19:22
    Right on Drella..why do they keep reading if it discusts them

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2011 11:00
    This was a wonderful story can't wait to read number three-- and please don't let mean words take a way from your talent and creativity!!

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  • il-pam
    09.10.2011 16:29
    16 an a virgin lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 18:04
    Keep it up ;)

    Grtz belgium

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.10.2011 23:52
    Good writting, story plot and style. In part one you mentioned the daughter was 16 way too many times, became redundent but excellent work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 00:25
    A EXCELLENT PART BUT NOW YOU HAVE TO COMPLETE THE TASK AND FUCK HER 8/10

    ;; JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 02:43
    I'm in SC too. Want to write a story together?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 02:44
    I'm in SC too. Want to write a story together?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2011 05:26
    Great story so far. Very well written and certainly gets the juices flowing.

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  • hardharrydick
    11.10.2011 12:10
    Great fuckin story. you made me hard i and i had to cum

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  • w1drng
    16.10.2011 09:47
    I am enjoying your story. Continue.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 16:14
    apparently we have hit a period of writer's block, which in my opinion started high in the left hand corner of page #1. give it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2011 20:40
    great story im waiting on part 3

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  • jbarnes61%40tampabay.rr.com
    17.10.2011 03:36
    i read your story, as if you were sitting across from me with your legs spread,showing me your beautiful pussy....

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.10.2011 07:34
    Too formal. People in the heat of sexual passion don't have a drawn out conversation of long sentences. Think of yourself when you're in the middle of it and have Molly talk like that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.10.2011 18:58
    You have got to write part three, You have left me with a raging hard on.You have got to fuck her and take her virginity You don't mention her mother at all so if she excited you had better fuck before she turn's up

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 21:13
    new concept for other stories.... dad fucks her every which way..... and mom walks in on them at the end
    PWNED!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 14:23
    more plz this is a great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.11.2011 20:15
    Very nice. He is romantically sensual and still a caring father. Love it. Plz write more. Teaching sex an more anal!6

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.11.2011 20:18
    Plz post back if u might be this girl because I could treat u the same way as your fantasy since u are legal age, role play is fun

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  • fire5122
    05.11.2011 20:42
    Plz post back if u might be this girl because I could treat u the same way as your fantasy since u are legal age, role play is fun

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2011 04:46
    These shorter stories are amazing. keep doing what your doing! my gf cant wait for your next one so i can read it to her. and i cant wait either!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2011 23:31
    too formal. your draging the conversation out too much. just have molly say short, simple
    sentences. but...overall the storie was freakin' awesome!!!! keep writing ,girl. don't let others people say your stories are bad...the only reason they do is 'cause you let them, so show them your best stories...not just this one ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 20:48
    I cannot wait for the next...

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2012 14:25
    That was an amazing story. I can't wait to read the rest

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 23:23
    hey one gurl writer to another fuck the haters its a good story, check out my stories my user name is Daddy's Gurl... before you think it no i'm not coming on to you, i just want you to know they hated on some of my stories also, but i also got some really good advice. so dont let the haters rule ya.... now i do have to say the talking between daddy and daughter does come off a bit stiff. or formal as someone already said...relax it a bit.. your good so dont sweat the mistakes they are how we learn.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.02.2012 03:08
    Awesome story...love the female touch

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.02.2012 08:35
    thanks for a GREAT story...

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.03.2012 02:43
    Wow these stories are surprisingly well written. The surprise being that you are only eighteen. I'm pretty sure that most authors here are older. Anyways this was an awesome story, plenty of detail, good pace. Thanks for a job well done. =rwv=

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2012 10:50
    I'm in SC too. Maybe we can cowrite.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.03.2012 21:39
    amazing, i'm an 18yo male, loved it

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  • sexynicole69
    19.03.2012 23:06
    H O T that story sure made me cum like Molls did! Whens Daddy going to give her the real thing? :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2012 22:44
    That was really hOt but Molly's ignorance was a little annoying that she didn't know and kept saying ohh it feels like or wow I've never or I want them all to feel like that

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.03.2012 11:43
    i i dont know what the haters are talking about, this was a great story, hope you will post lots more

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.03.2012 11:43
    i i dont know what the haters are talking about, this was a great story, hope you will post lots more

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.03.2012 16:35
    I think your doing amazing. Don't listen to any of the haters they don't know what their talkin about. You wrote this story with great detail and made the characters well too. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 09:10
    This story is actually quite good. I'm not into molly constantly relaying what her dad is saying and doing. Seems a bit like a bad japanese cartoon. I would recommend being a bit more personal with it. Like project yourself into it. How would you have acted and what would you say in a similar situation. Other than that I think this story is very good and I look forward to part three and hopefully even more after that. I hope this wasn't to harsh. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 13:12
    you want horny chat...jmc1oo@co.uk

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2012 18:42
    i am so happy that you are very proud of this story and offer the following: as you mature in life and get the opportunity to reread your pride and joy, you will come to appreciate how inmature and pathetic it really is. i would give it a 1 out of 10. sorry, it dont flip my skirt.

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  • bbkradwell
    16.05.2012 13:51
    Where was the Anal Sex?
    Sorry, I had to get that complaint out of the way, first.
    All-in-al, it was a rather nicely Erotic story, dear girl. I think you should listen to and take all the criticism that comes your way. Especially, of course, the constructive criticque. Otherwise, how can you expect to grow as a Writer?
    Now, with that said, I hope there's a story where little molly loses her Anal cherry. (Hey, I like young girls' backdoors. I'm a Dirty Old Man. What else can I say?)

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2012 12:57
    dude why dont u write the rest its jus awsome

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  • The_Purvv
    09.10.2012 16:06
    As a writer of 100 plus incest stories on another site (I only found this site in the last couple of weeks) I thought I'd respond to your initial comments. That you're only 18 is quite surprising, as you seem to have a very good handle on what you're doing and what you're writing about. If I can offer a bit of advice, read the comments with more than a grain of salt. Judging from this story, if I were you, I would never listen to criticism unless it is from a friendly source. Keep a thick skin. As far as those criticizing in spite of your stating upfront that the story contains incest, I suspect there is a group who are deliberately trying to get all such stories banned and criticizing is done to impress the site's moderator. Looking forward to more of your work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.10.2012 01:55
    hell yes god i wish i had a sixteen yr old to fuck good storie keep them cumming
    .

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  • bricewaters
    18.10.2012 18:08
    i agree with the purvv. this is great work. the inscest is done very well and i loved the anal aspect as the first penetration.

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  • iwant3bigdicks
    05.12.2012 09:16
    PLZ HURRY WITH PART 3....I COULDN'T STOP FINGERING MY PUSSY....MY LEGS R DRENCHED N CUM

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  • Pinkchick123
    07.12.2012 04:44
    I would live some older guy to txt me ;) 2563653479

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.05.2013 08:03
    seriosly good writing.Got me hooked! bring the next one, please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2013 04:08
    great story, couldnt stop reading even if i tried.. keep the stories coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2013 23:52
    I think this story is well written... Although I do think there should have been more leading up to it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2013 18:56
    Thirsty ppl now adays

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.10.2013 16:46
    I Jike To Eat Pussy After Its Been Fuck

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  • mildbill46
    17.01.2014 01:44
    Hi. I enjoined this story very much and I think you did a good job getting into a mans head. At the same time the the feelings and emotions that comes from a woman's point of view makes this story complete. Some times us guys want to get to the point too quickly and we miss the best part. I hope this helps.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.03.2014 09:43
    all horny daddies hit me up , Im daddy's slut

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2014 23:48
    I think your writing done pretty well! A lot better than some other stuff on this site.
    Decent grammar. Story line ok. You can get better! Keep writing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2014 23:49
    I think your writing is done pretty well! A lot better than some other stuff on this site.
    Decent grammar. Story line ok. You can get better! Keep writing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2014 21:19
    Very good, don't listen to negative idiots...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2014 02:42
    You make me wet, write more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2014 01:03
    I think your story is very well written. A lot better then a lot of the writing on this sit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2014 01:03
    Oops, I meant on this site

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.10.2014 16:59
    wow, carry on the way you are going, THANKS from a 70 yo

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.02.2015 04:33
    What a load of crapiola

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.03.2015 20:17
    I really enjoy your writing, don't stop and ignore the moaners

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2015 22:26
    I never been so hard in all my life good job wish I had a daughter like her

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  • DirtyOldManII
    01.09.2015 16:46
    I wish you would continue your story. I enjoyed it very much.

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  • SexyBeast26
    02.09.2015 09:55
    Cant wait for more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2015 23:13
    That was really well written

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  • PassionateCeline
    27.10.2015 18:50
    Drella, This story has made me cum three times!!!!!!!!!!! You must continue with this story, and NEVER mind what those other morons have said. Your a very good fiction writer and your topic about "Incest" is YOUR choice.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.11.2015 15:35
    great story. Made an 80 yr old start to feel warm again. Keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.01.2016 11:40
    Oh. My. God. I Cummed reading this! I wish I was Molly

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.02.2016 00:03
    I like this story were number two

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.02.2016 12:46
    Great story made me cum multiple times

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.02.2016 04:53
    typical flash in the pan writer, starts a story, then does not finish it..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2016 16:26
    MOOREEEEE I want to see the rest of the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2016 15:36
    I enjoy your writing. Especially your very accurate descriptions of the feel and touch . You have paid attention to your own body. Very astute observation skills .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2016 03:04
    Please write part3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2016 05:23
    Drella, I love your writing. I wish I knew where to find more. Some guys write pretty good also, but I get a better feeling knowing it's a female writer. I hope I can find more of your stuff to read. Just keep,writing, I think ur great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2016 23:08
    I NEED A PART THREE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.08.2016 16:17
    Very good story. Would love to see more stories from you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.11.2016 05:21
    Unbelievable mind blowing luck. She sounds perfect.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.12.2016 10:52
    If i'm her daddy i go for the real thing right now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.12.2016 12:36
    I consider myself a selfless lover who gives better than he receives, but your insightl in these two installments has given me a new view into the female side of "the dance". Thank you, and please keep up the outstanding work (more like passion than work).

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.01.2017 09:40
    i cannot wait to read rest of the story. chapters are too short.

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  • DaddysSubmissiveSlut
    13.03.2018 22:25
    Write another chapter please it's really good

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  • Benjamin2017
    22.05.2019 02:30
    Annabelle’s sweet just teen cunt felt so good. I had a finger inside her while we kissed. She had held her dress up for awhile but finally slipped it off. I nuzzled her perky tits before returning to deep kissing her. She stroked my cock and then guided it to her perfect pink pussy. As I entered her, I lifted her up off the floor and began to slide her up and down on my shaft. Annabelle locked her lips onto mine and let me fuck her. In just a few minutes I felt ready to cum. I pounded deeply into her smooth, warm cunt until I blasted a load of cum deep inside her. This was our second fuck since I’d gotten home and she had promised me her ass for later that night. Annabelle, I love you my darling girl!

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  • arig1
    30.06.2019 20:14
    Great stories+ I wish this would be continued would love to hear more.

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