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Special Bond - Long Weekend at the Lake 1-2

Author: DSGIRLSD

Date: 27 October 2011

First Time, Dark Fantasy, Incest, Lesbian

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A SPECIAL BOND
Long Weekend at the Lake
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This is a work of fiction. Of fantasy. It’s called ‘My Right of Free Speech.’ If you do not approve of youngsters engaged in various sexual acts . . . or if you live in one of the God-forsaken States that bans possessing/reading such material . . then please, PLEASE, go someplace else.

This is not some 4 page fuck/suck story. This story consists of almost 30 chapters! It has the main story, the back story, lots of detail, enough sex to satisfy almost everyone and some humor. It will be posted in multiple segments.

Lastly, ‘A Special Bond’ is a Trilogy. ‘Long Weekend at the Lake’ is the second part and will be followed by the Prequel and finally by The Later Years.

I’ve spell-checked and re-read the chapters multiple times. Yet I am sure there are spelling errors, grammatical problems and incorrect words. I don’t have an Editor! Just read and enjoy.

Characters:
Kathy Evans – Age 31 Aunt Karla Peters – Age 36
Rob Evans – Age 36 Uncle Tom Peters – Age 37
RJ Evans – Age 16 Ken Peters – Age 17
Kayla Evans – Age 15 Candace Peters – Age 14


Chapter 1 of 29

School had been out for the summer for weeks now. Robert Jr, or RJ as everyone called him, was starting to feel that edge of boredom. Certainly he had a whole group of school chums, most of who were on the High School Football Team with him. However, several of his buddies were gone on vacation with their parents and siblings. Those that were still in town had started to become a little repetitive to hang out with every day.

Kayla had a gaggle of girlfriends and like most 15 year old teens seemed to spend an eternity on the phone talking to them. Kayla had just finished her freshman year while RJ had completed his sophomore year and he was looking forward to his Junior year and advancement to the Varsity Football Team.

Kayla had blossomed into quite a beauty. She now stood over 5’6” tall and her wavy strawberry blond hair flowed below her shoulder blades and she had pale hazel eyes that seemed to change color with their surroundings. Puberty had come early, no it was more like puberty had arrived like a freight train, upon Kayla. From the age of 11 she started having periods, her hips flared out, her waist narrowed, her strawberry mane seemed to thicken and grow and inch a month, and her breast went from non-existent, to a ‘B’ cup at 12, and now a 34 ‘C’ at age 15. Kayla was not only tall, but athletically built from years of gymnastics, with legs that seemed to go up forever, 34 inch hips and a 21 inch waist. Her stomach was flat and toned, unlike many of the teen girls at Cheyenne High School who had flabby guts!

Kayla’s mother, Kathy, as well as her Aunt Karla, were both natural blonds. Kayla’s father, Rob, had light red hair. The combination of her Mother and Father no doubt accounted for the beautiful head of strawberry blond hair Kayla had. It also gave her just a smattering of freckles about her face, and across her chest. Her father had always told her that freckles were “angel kisses”.

RJ had blond hair like his mother and both he and his sister had very fair complexions.

Shortly after his 16th birthday, RJ approached his father one afternoon. Rob Sr. worked long hours and commuted home on the weekends from Washington DC. RJ understood his father was often exhausted from his work-schedule, so he bided his time in approaching his father.

“Dad, may I have a word with you” RJ asked as he approached his father while lounging on the patio one Saturday afternoon.

“Sure RJ, what’s on your mind, son?”

“Dad, I’ve been thinking that now that I have my driver’s licenses and all, well, I was thinking that I’d like to buy a car.”

“Oh, you have, have you? You know RJ a car is a pretty expensive investment. What were you thinking about getting?”

“Well Dad, I’m thinking that I’d like to get a pickup truck. That way I can have transportation, and if I find a job this summer while school is out, I’d have a truck for my job. I’ve been saving all my money for some time now . . .over two years, and I have about $3,500. I’d like to get a Toyota Tundra like your truck some day, but I know they cost a lot more then what I have right now . . so I figured I could find something older, and maybe smaller. What do you think Dad?”

“Your mother had told me you were saving all your money, for some time now. But you are correct RJ in that you will have a hard time finding a reliable truck for $3,500. How about you let me think about it for a while, and I’ll talk to your Mom about it. OK?”

“Sure Dad. Thanks for thinking it over for me.” RJ knew better than to press when his dad said ‘he’d think about it.’ To press his point further would result in a definite ‘No’!

Late Sunday afternoon RJ and Kayla were watching TV in the Family Room when their parents returned from town. Nothing was said, and Kathy set about making dinner, while Rob got the barbecue fired up. The family sat down to dinner together and after a while, Rob cleared his throat.

“RJ, your mom and I discussed what you approached me with yesterday . . . you know about buying a pickup truck. Well son, we don’t think you should be wasting your $3,500 on some truck that in all probability will be a piece of junk . . . which is about all you could get for that price.”

RJ tried to mask his disappointment, but it showed through on his face. He put on a brave face never the less, and said “I understand, sir. Maybe after I save some more money we can talk about this again,” RJ questioned.

“Well RJ, you Mom and I thought that we’d make you a proposition.”

“What’s that sir?”

“Before I tell you the proposition RJ, I haven’t seen your report card for end of year yet, how are your grades doing in school,” his dad questioned.

“Doing good Dad, I have two ‘A’s and three ‘B’s” RJ reported in a chipper manner. Actually Kayla was a straight ‘A’ student but both Rob and Kathy knew that while school was harder for RJ, he worked at it very diligently.

“Two ‘A’s and three ‘B’s is pretty good RJ . . . which one of those grades is your math grade?”

“Math is one of the ‘B’s Dad” RJ reported.

“Well son, I wish that math was one of the ‘A’s and I’d like you to try and bring that grade up for me next year. OK?”

“Yes Sir, I’ll try . . but I have a hard time with Geometry Dad.”

“Well RJ, those grades are certainly good enough for me to tell you our proposal. As I said your Mom and I don’t think you’ll get much of a truck for $3,500. So our proposal is, we’d like you to put that $3,500 in an account for your college. We’ll match the $3,500 in your college fund if you promise to keep putting your savings in the college fund from here on in.”

RJ swallowed hard. “But Dad if I do that then I’ll never get the money for a car of my own!”

“Oh, I guess I forgot to mention the part where I give you the key and the Pink Slip to what used to be my Toyota Tundra!” Rob passed the ignition keys to RJ attached to a new key fob.

RJ didn’t know what to say. At first he was not sure he grasped what his Dad had just done. His father’s Toyota Tundra was beautiful, about 3 years old, jet black with crew cab and only had about 30,000 miles on it! Finding his voice, RJ finally said “But Dad, if you give me your truck, what are you going to drive when you’re home?”

Rob grinned. You Mom and I just came home from the Toyota dealer, and MY brand new White Toyota Tundra is sitting in the driveway beside your truck!”

Again RJ didn’t know what to say. Kayla however said “Kool. Daddy does this mean that when I get my driver’s license next year I can have Mom’s Mercedes?”

“NO it certainly does not mean that Kayla . . . for what your mother’s Mercedes cost, you could buy a couple of Tundra’s. We’ll cross your bridge when we get to it.”

At that, the whole family went out to the driveway to see Rob’s new truck, complete with all the options available, and for RJ to slide into what was now his new ride.

“Hey big brother,” Kayla grinned, “take me for a ride in your new truck?”

RJ looked questioningly at his dad, and then his mom. They just nodded and Kathy told her children not be gone too long as it was getting dark and she would worry.

RJ gave his dad and mom a huge hug and thanked them profusely. Kayla ran into the house and grabbed her purse. As Kayla flew out of the house she slid into the passenger door of the truck and fastened her seatbelt.

As RJ gingerly backed out of the driveway, Kathy loudly admonished RJ to drive carefully.

As Kathy and Rob walked into the house, Katy lamented “I worry about them being out on the road, particularly at dusk.”

“Relax honey, RJ took Driver’s Training and from what I’ve seen of his driving he seems to be very conscientious” Rob replied. With that, he slapped his wife’s ass to hurry her along inside!

Chapter 2 of 29

“Where would you like to go ‘K’” which was RJ’s pet name for Kayla.

“Let’s go down to our spot at Big Bend, down off Johnson Road” Kayla said to her brother with a wicked grin. Big Bend was a secluded spot along Johnson Creek that Kayla and RJ had discovered some time back. It was ‘their special place.’ They had been there many times to skinny dip and partake of other extracurricular activities!

“You’re kidding ‘K’” RJ said. “Mom told us not to be long.”

“Oh we won’t be very long” Kayla said with an evil look.

Johnson road was two-lane and twisty. RJ kept his eyes glued to the road, carefully approaching each switchback in case there was a slow hay wagon just around the next corner. Kayla had slid over to the center of the seat, once they were out of visual range of both their parents and the general public, including any of their friends they might happen to pass.

Kayla had pulled her blouse out of the skirt she wore and RJ was wondering what all the squirming about was for. Kayla reached her hands up behind her back and under her blouse and unclasped her bra. As only a girl can do, she then shrugged her shoulders and snaked her arms out of the bra straps, still under her blouse. Finally she reached up through and arm hole and withdrew the whole bra. Folding the bra Kayla placed it on the seat and for the first time RJ was fully aware of his sister’s actions.

“Kayla, you are crazy – do you know that” RJ asked?

“Crazy for you big brother” Kayla grinned.

RJ reached the dirt turnoff on Johnson Road that wound its way to the spot they affectionately had named Big Bend. A spot where the creek widened inordinately, it had sandy beaches on both sides and huge overgrown Oak Trees hung over the creek itself extending out from the shores.

The dirt path narrowed and as RJ carefully guided his new truck so as not to scratch the doors on an overhanging bushes, Kayla worked the buttons on her blouse such that it hung open to her waist, barely concealing her light pink areola and darker nipples. Excitement coursed through her, and her nipples stood erect like the erasers on a pencil.

Big Bend was technically on Twin Peaks Ranch, through which Johnson Creek flowed. However, in all the times RJ and Kayla had come to this place, always on bikes before, they had never encountered another soul.

RJ pulled into a wide spot at the end of the dirt path, and cut the engine.

No sooner had he started to turn towards his sister, than she thrust herself into his arms and started kissing him wantonly. Conditioned mouths opened for one another and tongues started to swirl. As RJ returned his sister’s passionate kisses, instinctively his hand rose to her breast as it always did at these times. RJ’s hand found Kayla’s blouse already open and her ample and firm breasts exposed to his touch, absent her bra.

Kayla finally came up for air as RJ rolled Kayla’s engorged nipple between his thumb and forefinger, causing an involuntary shiver from his sister. “God I needed this RJ” Kayla whispered in his ear breathlessly.

“My, aren’t you a horny little thing this evening” RJ teased her.

“Damn right I am” Kayla said, “what with Daddy home for the weekend, we haven’t had sex since Friday afternoon!”

“K, sometimes I think you are a nymphomaniac!” RJ continued to tease his sister, all the while fondling her wonderful tits.

“Look who’s talking. I suppose you aren’t horny at all RJ?” Kayla leaned in and started planting kisses all over his face, increasing her sense of urgency.

RJ ran his fee hand up his sister’s thigh and Kayla automatically spread her legs wider, urging her brother to touch her female treasure.

RJ cupped her sex. “Jesus K, you’re absolutely dripping sex. What’s gotten into you tonight?”

“What’s gotten into me is that I have thought about nothing else but you fucking me, for two days now!”

RJ snaked his finger under the elastic of his sister’s panties and was greeted by a gooey mess. “I don’t think I’ve ever felt you so wet as you are now, sis” RJ again said.

“God RJ, I want you to fuck me so bad . . . .but I’m mid cycle right now, and we don’t have any rubbers!” RJ knew his sister was right, they both understood the rules and understood they were inviolate. Still he had the urge to rip off her panties and pound his cock into her soppy pussy right this instant.

RJ thrust two fingers into her swampy womanhood and there was so much sex-lube it made squishy sounds. “God Yes! RJ finger fuck me. Rub my clitty brother, I really need to get off!”

RJ pushed his two fingers into his younger sister as far as they would go and started to rub Kayla’s most sensitive spot with his thumb. “YES . . . oh Jesus, RJ, . . . . I’m gonna cum so quick baby . . . . fuck, you make me so hot big brother . . .”

RJ continued finger-fucking his sister through the leg-hole of her panties, Each time his fingers thrust, more girl-goo would ooze out making Kayla’s panties sodden. Kayla’s cries and moans were stifled only in that RJ had his mouth glued to hers and was busy plunging her mouth with his tongue. Each time RJ thrust his fingers in, Kayla would buck wildly on his hand.

Suddenly Kayla pushed back, breaking the kiss. She let out a shrill scream and her whole body went rigid. Kayla grabbed RJ’s wrist and held it hard against her pelvis, pressed on RJs thumb with her clit with all her might. She was panting so hard, her whole body rigid, and focused on the volcano erupting in her loins, that RJ feared she would hyperventilate.

After a minute, Kayla collapsed into a heap and tried to catch her breath. “You alright K?” RJ looked as his panting sister with concern.

“No I’m not OK you fool” Kayla laughed, “I am in ecstasy! RJ, I just can’t imagine that there is another guy on the planet that can bring a girl off with their fingers . . . like you can.” With that Kayla struggled to sit up and again planted a very wet ‘thank-you’ kiss on her brothers lips.

As Kayla started to try and straighten her dripping panties and skirt, RJ spun in his seat and looked like he was going to start the truck.

“What are you doing, RJ? Hold on a minute” Kayla said to her brother. She then grasped the passenger door handle and leaped out of the truck.

RJ thought that his sister needed to pee and was going to squat behind a bush. Instead, she raced around the truck and opened his driver’s side door. “Turn sideways big brother,” Kayla said, “turn-about is fair play.” As he did Kayla reached into his lap and began to unzip his pants. She had to be careful as RJ’s ample cock was straining at full erection against his blue jeans.

“You don’t have to do that K,” RJ said.

“Maybe I don’t, but I really want to. You just gave me a super orgasm and I love you so much, I want to make you feel good too” Kayla told her brother.

“What I SHOULD do, is let you fuck me with that giant cock of yours RJ . . . . mid-cycle or not . . . . rubbers or no rubbers . . . . I really should let you dump your load in me!”

“It’s OK sis . . . I really don’t mind waiting” RJ assured her.

“No it’s not OK, RJ . . . .you’ll just wind up jacking-off later . . . I know you are very horny and we won’t be able to sleep together with Daddy home for the weekend. I’m so stupid, I don’t know why I didn’t think to grab some rubbers before we left” Kayla finished.

Kayla had worked the zipper down on RJs Levis and had his cock free of his underwear.

RJ had an unusual cock for a 16 year old, in that it was approaching 9 inches. They knew because he and Kayla had measured it once. They had a debate about whether you were supposed to measure a guy’s cock from the top, from tip to public bone, or on bottom from tip to ball-sack. RJ had assured his sister you were supposed to measure on the top. So, they had measured on the top and found it just short of 9 inches, and almost 2 1/4 inches around.

Kayla had asked RJ if he was done growing his penis yet and RJ had said he wasn’t sure. Kayla was OK if he didn’t get any longer, as sometimes he would hurt her a little bit when he hit bottom. However, RJ said he would like to get thicker.

Kayla said she didn’t know why boys were so concerned with their penis size, as she couldn’t believe that being thicker could provide her any greater pleasure that RJ gave her now. RJ told her that boys worry about size, for the same reason girls worry about how big their tits are gonna get!

Once Kayla had RJs cock free of his underwear, she started to stroke him up and down, as she had a hundred times before.

“RJ, don’t hold back . . we don’t have a lot of time and I want to make you feel good for tonight.” With that Kayla wrapped her lips around the head of RJs cock while she continued to stroke his shaft for all she was worth.

RJ moaned as his sister’s warm lips engulfed his manhood. She had this technique of swirling her tongue all around his Glans, followed by a sudden and strong sucking sensation. This drove RJ mad every time she did this. RJ knew that at some point she would bite him. RJ had admonished his sister a hundred times not to nip at the head of his cock! Kayla always laughed and told him to ‘be a man about it . . . besides a little pain is good for you!’

Somehow, Kayla would sense when RJ was getting close. Perhaps it was the imperceptible (to him) swelling and widening of the head of his cock. At that point, just as RJ would be feeling the stirring in his balls, she would strike. She called it a ‘love bite’ . . . just a little nip, she would say. But to RJ’s engorged and ready to pop member, it would feel like a dragon had chomped down on him!

Perhaps Kayla had some masochistic genes. Secretly, RJ had to admit to himself that although it was painful to have the head of one’s penis bitten, it only lasted a second and the heightened rush it gave him when he ejaculated was immense!

Kayla practiced her technique and each time she sucked hard, RJ bucked his hips against his sister’s warm mouth. After just a few minutes, Kayla has him worked to a fever pitch. He wondered how she had become so excellent at this, as he knew for a fact that his sister had never performed this act with anyone but him.

Suddenly he felt it, the stirring deep in his loins. The guttural urge to release. He bucked his hips and there it was . . .the painful nip on the head of his cock, which in turn sent him over the edge. RJ saw an explosion of stars as the combination of the painful bite and the surge of his semen created an exquisite orgasm for the 16 year old boy.

RJ had another sexual oddity. He produced an unusual amount of seminal fluid. When he popped, squirt after squirt roped it way into his sister’s sucking mouth and down her throat. Kayla loved his taste and would love to drink his cum all day, if she could.

After about 5 or 6 very strong ejaculations, followed by a couple of minor contractions RJ felt in his balls and prostate, he collapsed in a heap in the driver’s seat. Kayla licked him clean and stood upright now in the door.

“So, big brother, was I a passable cock-sucker for you this evening?”

“Kayla, you know I don’t like it when you call yourself a cock-sucker. But yes, you are one very accomplished person at oral sex!” RJ could only grin back at Kayla’s smile, knowing she had just given her brother . . . her lover . . . much pleasure this evening.

Kayla walked around the truck, buttoning and tucking in her blouse to her skirt, and jumped in the passenger side. “We better be getting back” Kayla said, “mom will be getting worried. She told us not to be gone long.”

RJ put the truck in reverse and carefully backed out of ‘their spot’ onto Johnson road. As he accelerated out of sight, 11 year old Penny Benjamin stood up from the spot where she had been crouched in the bushes. Penny was dressed in a two-piece bathing suit and she had a towel around her neck. The bottoms of her two piece suit were around her knees and she was furiously rubbing that ‘special spot’ she had recently discovered between her legs. She was there now, and felt the tightening in her tummy that signaled that ‘good feeling’ that rubbing her ’special spot’ always created.

As Penny rubbed her clit furiously, suddenly there it was. She shuddered and became totally rigid as she pushed on her magic place. Her breathing was ragged and her chest had a deep flush to it. She had had yet another ‘good feeling’ as she called it.

As Penny pulled her bathing suit up, she thought to herself, ‘I don’t know who those kids were, but I hope I can see them again some time!’ While Penny could not see what the boy in the truck had done to the girl, she certainly had a bird’s eye view of what the girl had done to the boy. She and her girlfriends had giggled about ‘blow jobs’, as her girlfriend called them, but she had never seen one before.

It didn’t take RJ long to drive home. As he and Kayla entered the house through the garage they found their father sitting at the kitchen table reading the paper and their mother at the sink just finishing the dishes.

Rob Evans didn’t look up from his paper but he asked his children “So, where did you two wind up going?”

Kayla hated lying to her Daddy, but she couldn’t very well tell him where they had really been. So, she said the first thing that came to her mind. “Oh we just went and had some Ice Cream.”

Kathy Evans was just turning from the sink to look at her daughter. As she did, she glanced up and down her daughter. Kathy reached out as Kayla passed, grasped Kayla’s wrist and simply said “come here honey,” pulling the teen girl toward the sink.

It took Kathy all of 1 second to note that her daughter was not wearing a bra . . .and she was quite sure she had been when they left.

Still grasping Kayla’s wrist, Kathy picked up a damp dishrag from the sink. Kathy had a bemused look on her face when she said to her daughter “looks like you got some of that ‘cream’ on your blouse honey!” Kayla’s eyes got huge and the expression on her face said ‘what are you doing, Mom?’ and gestured at her father with her eyes, as he sat, still reading the paper.

Kathy still had a smirk on her face as she said to Kayla “I wasn’t sure it would cum . . .off.” Kathy had made a very slight pause between the word ‘cum’ and ‘off’ as she rubbed the glob of semen with the dishcloth.

“Kayla, why don’t you put that blouse in the washer so it won’t stain, sweetie? Then you can go and take your shower.” Aside from the stain on the blouse, Kayla reeked of sex and Kathy could smell the girl.

As Kathy released Kayla’s wrist, Kayla’s eyes were still wide. It was all Kathy could do not to burst into laughter. As Kayla exited the room, Rob sat there still reading the paper and totally unawares.

A couple of minutes later, RJ reappeared in the kitchen. “where is K” he asked his mom.

“She’s doing some laundry, why don’t you see if you can give her a hand RJ”

“OK” he said cheerfully, and went in search of his sister.

Bt the time RJ found Kayla, she was already in the shower. He was tempted to jump in with her, but that was way too risky with their father home. Sometime later, RJ entered Kayla’s bedroom and found her already propped up in bed, reading.

“Going to bed early tonight K?”

“Yea, I’m kind of tired tonight. I think you wore me out” she said with a wide grin. “RJ I need to tell you what happened when I came in from the garage earlier though.”

Kayla then went on to explain to her brother that their mother had found a dollop of Cum on her blouse and made a show of cleaning it off. RJ just laughed. But Kayla said that she was quite sure their mother had been enjoying her discomfort with their dad in the room reading the newspaper.

RJ leaned in and gave Kayla a big hug and a very warm goodnight kiss. “God, I hate not being able to sleep together when dad is home on the weekends” RJ said.

“Daddy is off back to Washington in the morning. After he leaves why don’t you come in and surprise me? I love the way you wake me up” Kayla laughed out loud.

RJ gave her a quick peck and said “see you in the morning. Love you little sis.”

“I love you too big brother, g’nite.”


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  • 120489
    28.10.2011 02:14
    Thats a good start I can't wait till the next part

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 11:13
    Great story, and super hot. I foresee Mom getting in on the action in the near future? There is only one problem with these chapters... They went by super quick. Hahaha. I'll be watching for the next part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 11:23
    Boring piece of crap!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 11:36
    Outstanding story line, looking forward to the reading the entire series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 15:22
    Outstading looking forward to more.

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  • pervy+pete
    28.10.2011 15:24
    Enjoying the story please keep them coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 15:45
    not bad.please keep it going.is rj fucking his mom too?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 16:17
    this part is better.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 16:32
    Ecstatic that I have another novel to peruse at my leisure. The last erotic novel I read was Camp: Ron's Journey, which floored me in its storyline, science fiction aspects, and of course, the sex. This is shaping up to be quite the adventure, wrought with discovery and forbidden lust.


    Cannot wait for more,

    NGSalem

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 16:41
    it is starting to get interesting.keep it going

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 16:42
    By humor you meant the Tyota Tundra right? Ahahaha good one

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 17:04
    good storys keep them coming very good this is best so far iv raed on this site

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 21:55
    Hope you get the rest of the chapters on this site ASAP!! I really like getting a woman's take on romance/porn. We men tend to go too much for the mechanics and leave out most of the feelings -- and it really does get boring without much emotions shown!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2011 22:27
    I like the story but just to clarify i played varsity football in my sophmor year
    And also i hope to hell ur not serious about the
    Toyota tundra omg ford f-350 or f-150 lighting are my favs

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 02:12
    You are such a good writer!! I can't wait for the next chapters!! :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 07:58
    i love your series i would buy this story if it was a book. please make the rest as soon as you can. keep up the good work!

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  • pervy+pete
    29.10.2011 08:23
    I just love the story line. Whens the next helping coming?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 12:30
    Ok but it needs more info!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 13:35
    Getting better and better!! I just love the way you're building the sexual tension -- and waiting for the explosion!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 13:51
    Great story keep going.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 14:04
    God I love these chapters I can't wait for the next installment.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 14:46
    Great dude keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 15:53
    great story keep em commin'

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 16:54
    A bit clinical (the STD advice might well help some readers, though), but very enjoyable! Now you can get down to the basics of your story, as the two couples find the pleasure of all kinds of mingling!! I can hardly wait!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 17:25
    So where do Carlo and Gina come in? Are you setting up a community of consanguineous couples? All free and easy with one another? That would be interesting!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 19:44
    That was as awsome story keep it going.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 20:41
    Last part she was worrying about not having sex because they didn't have condoms, now she has birth control pills? Attention to detail!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2011 21:25
    Kayla's name changed to Karla then to Kathy. Gees whiz, proof read!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 00:18
    Great story keep doing what you're doing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 00:37
    Great series but you should definitelly bring Carlo and Gina back.

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  • Psychoklr
    30.10.2011 12:00
    This is a great series and when are the next chapters coming out?

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 12:45
    for the guy who wrote this:
    "Kayla's name changed to Karla then to Kathy. Gees whiz, proof read!"
    hey smart guy if you looked at the top of the page at the family members names and ages you'll find the girl's name is kayla and her mother is kathy and her aunt is karla so there is no mistakes in the names pal. the point is Gees whiz. know how to read man

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 16:02
    i have really liked this story so far and cant wait for the next 10 chapters.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 17:04
    Candy makes me laugh. She's definitely a great addition to the story, which was already great!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 17:25
    tpain akon chris brown

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2011 20:25
    You are by far the best writer on this site. I wouldn't change a thing, except there should be more detail when they have sex. Other than that there is no complaints for me!! :) 10/10!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 15:22
    Wow you are a great writer, please hurry up on the next installment can't wait for it to be out

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 16:08
    Nice Cliff Hanger at the end now i REALLY want to read the next chapters

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 17:04
    Great story hurry with the next one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 20:01
    The only thing I can think of to make it any better, is to make it longer. The kids should get back together during a school break and go camping or something. Otherwise the story was great

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 22:00
    Aren't there still more chapters, you said at the beginning that it was a 30 chapter story this is only 27

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 22:30
    This is the shit. You need to make this longer :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 23:00
    How come Gina and Carlo haven't gotten involved with the others? There seems to be an obvious attraction! Should have arranged it somehow to all meet at the cove with the swing - or somehere else!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2011 23:06
    Nothing really happened here - kind of disappointing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 03:44
    i really enjoyed reading this part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 04:05
    God damn it. I have read chapter 27 and I have to say that you really have ruined the story for me with chapters 25-27.

    Why do you hate Kenny so much? Let's review:

    1.The build up to the cousins switching all has to do with RJ and Candy's attraction to each other. At no point before the "pre-let's-switch-brothers conversation" do RJ and Kayla talk about Kayla and Kenny getting together or Kayla's attraction to Kenny.

    2. The first time the 4 of them switch dancing partners, you spend no time at all detailing Kayla and Kenny's dancing while RJ and Candy's dancing scene is filled with eroticism and dialogue.

    3. As far as we know, RJ got Kayla's 3 virginities (vaginal, oral, anal). So, naturally Candy should have her first time condom-less and her first time anal happen with...RJ? Also, in chapter 27, Candy feared that Kayla would be mad about her non-stop sex with RJ, but they don't care how Kenny would feel about anal and no condom? FUCK!

    Just kill off Kenny already.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 06:17
    I think that you could add to the story thier trip home as they could stop on the way home or you could talk about how the story continues after they get home and how all their lives change but it was an amazing story

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 13:12
    The story is flawless ! Just hope that it never ends ..!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 15:43
    sdgsds gew wtywey wr y

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 15:58
    I really appreciate authors like you taking the time to write a great story like this, and so I am going to take the time to write a response. If there was one thing that I would suggest to improve this story it would be to mix up the sex a little more. I know that you did in this last chapter but I would have enjoyed seeing the partner switch a little earlier and also some more scenes with the different partners. In the last few chapters the sex scenes became a little repetitive. Overall though I liked how you combined the build up of Candy and Kenny's relationship with RJ and Kayla's relationship throughout. It gave the combination of sexual tension and kept me satisfied at the same time. Great Job.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 16:00
    can't remember when I have enjoyed a story as much. Please keep this going. How about getting everyone back together with Gina & Carlo

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 16:09
    this is a great story.there is a equal amout of love for each other a plenty of nasty sex .keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 17:23
    I was thinkin how Kathy had admired RJs size and we never heard the explination of what went on with Rob and Carla on their camping trips i hope this isn't the end to the story. I would love to see Kathy hook up with RJ, and maybe Rob accidently walk in on Kayla coming out of the shower and go jurk off, only to have his daughter find him frustated and in need of sexual releif. As for the cousins that could develope into a hole other stoy if you wanted to.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2011 21:17
    Have one of this girls DP please let rJ fuck her ass while Kenny fucks her pussy ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2011 19:28
    it'sa very good detailed story. keep makin more :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2011 11:16
    Can't wait for the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.11.2011 17:50
    I'm still waiting for Chapter 28 & 29!! Pleeease!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2011 11:32
    It needs more of a back story especially with dad. You could've taken the story farther as in what happened with them when they got home. But otherwise not bad

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2011 20:19
    Pills don't work mid cycle dumb ass

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  • George+Luna
    12.11.2011 07:52
    I Loved this story. Hope there is more to this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 02:13
    i personaly loved your story and fr suggestions i think everything was perfect, so i have asuggestion you can use in the prequill make it so that its in candy's and kenny's house geting ready to go on the trip & tell about kathy and the aunt talk about everything tell us wut they said. S.O.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 21:07
    i personaly loved your story and fr suggestions i think everything was perfect, so i have asuggestion you can use in the prequill make it so that its in candy's and kenny's house geting ready to go on the trip & tell about kathy and the aunt talk about everything tell us wut they said. S.O.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 21:08
    i personaly loved your story and fr suggestions i think everything was perfect, so i have asuggestion you can use in the prequill make it so that its in candy's and kenny's house geting ready to go on the trip & tell about kathy and the aunt talk about everything tell us wut they said. S.O.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2011 21:08
    i personaly loved your story and fr suggestions i think everything was perfect, so i have asuggestion you can use in the prequill make it so that its in candy's and kenny's house geting ready to go on the trip & tell about kathy and the aunt talk about everything tell us wut they said. S.O.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 14:40
    when are we going to get the ending chapters?i have been waiting for a couple of weeks now.please finish this so you can get on withn the sequal and the prequel.i cant tell you how much i have enjoyed this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2011 14:44
    for the sequal please have the boys fuck their moms and aunts.maybe the girls could take their dads and uncle for a ride in their cunts.also lets have a little more cock sucking and pussy eating.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 19:27
    uuuuuum birth control doesn't work all the time and I think that she did not want to make a mess in his car

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.11.2011 19:27
    Call me at 17166510057 for phone sex

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.11.2011 08:24
    this is shaping up to be one helluva weekend

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2011 20:11
    droberts2323@aim.com
    love to talk with girls ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.12.2011 09:54
    This was a promising series (though Ch27 was slightly disappointing) but it seems to have died without finishing 28 and 29. ????

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2011 16:09
    loved the concenpt and the story. Don't worry about knocking the girls up. Keep the romance and the sex and let the characters develop

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 18:36
    So does RJ's & Kayla's mok know they do incest with each-other?

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 18:38
    Does RJ & Kayla's mom know they do sexual "things" together? Just not their dad knows?

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2011 18:40
    Does Kathy Evans "know" about her children?

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2011 22:43
    It's great that you finally finished the story, DSGIRL - or at least this part! It will doubtless rival War and Peace when the other parts are added! And I hope the delay is not so long as between 27 and 28. Parents and kids, no doubt - and who are the parents of the kids you mention? Go, girl, go!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 01:27
    You weave an interesting tale! Nicely done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 01:58
    This was a great story, looking forward to reading more!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 02:17
    shes gonna get pregnent

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 03:38
    Great story please post your next one soon please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 04:22
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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 04:22
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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 11:45
    wish you would have continued the Gina & Candy encounter instead of leaving it hanging....

    otherwise, good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2011 11:46
    wish you would have continued the Gina and*** Candy encounter instead of leaving it hanging....

    otherwise, good story

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  • Nympho+Cassilac
    18.12.2011 16:16
    Great story, but you got the names confused a couple times ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.12.2011 19:05
    DSGIRL: You have taken the place at the top of my favorite authors list. Your "Special Bond/Long Weekend at the Lake" series has been one of my favorite reads ever on this site. I cannot wait to see what you can come up with next!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2011 17:02
    This is an amazing story. Dont waste your time on some crappy old website for old people who want to get horny, you have some talent! Get out there and show the world! Im telling you this could be big!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2011 17:03
    sorry this is the same person as last comment. GIRL YOU COULD MAKE IT BIG!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2011 01:36
    More! More! Bravo, Bravo!!! Encore!!! :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2011 01:37
    More! More! Bravo, Bravo!!! Encore!!! :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2011 19:58
    DSGIRLSD, thank you for writing and sharing your exquisite story. It's one of the best I've read on this site. I'm looking forward to reading future installments.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.12.2011 03:28
    Aside from a few things, quotations out of place and letters dropped this is an AMAZING story. Keep it up, u could go very far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.12.2011 22:09
    It was good other then goo discriptions but bravo

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 01:03
    Good store! Just a tip though, you've used this word a few times and it's kinda making me crazy: diaphones is spelled diaphanous. It's a little thing, but distracting the hell out of me. Thanks, keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 10:53
    Hard to get into it with such bad style and all the errors.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 12:50
    I loved reading this story, and cannot wait until it is continued. Every part of the story was perfect, aside from occasional spelling or name errors, but I loved every minute of reading such a great story. My only complaint would be that the actual epilog was more descriptive. Who married whom? Who were the children's fathers? Anyways, just small complaints. I wish to thank you very much for such a great series, and good luck for the future.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 15:39
    Wow! A long read but a fantastic one at that. Well done. Can't wait to read the next part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2011 16:40
    This is one of the best yet! Your obviously a very smart girl...keep going

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  • anonymous+reader
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  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2011 13:12
    What the heck is comment #13 supposed to say????????????

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2011 18:14
    Great work.... Awesome starting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.12.2011 06:38
    Something the bugged the hell out of me: "PUBLIC bone & PUBLIC hair." PUBIC!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.12.2011 12:47
    Maybe a foursome scene or a 69 scene?

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  • DSGIRLSD
    24.12.2011 18:11
    Well of course I know the difference between the 'Pubic' Bone and the 'Public Bone' . . . . the Public Bopne is what you get when you read my work! Seriously though, this is the problem with Spell Check. . . . if it is a REAL word, it doesn't pick it out. As I said before, proof-reading my own work is a problem.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.12.2011 14:01
    Wow! Your story just keeps gfetting better and better. I wish I had had a sister like Kayla when I was coming of age! I can hardly wait to read the next chapters. Thanks so much for writing this story. It is fantastic!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 03:23
    Absolutely phenomenal! Best story I've read on this site

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 17:46
    1-27 i just loved it
    Best story together with my sister in law, beth

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 18:17
    This hit too close to home, my dear. The slowly building intimacy---emotional, even more than physical--and the direct, open communication that nurtured that intimacy, have to be experienced to be expressed. I don't really want to know how true a story this was for you, for fear of being disappointed; but the risky familial attraction among four people and its fulfillment on a boat, away from the real world, are true for us and as real as if it were yesterday. Bless you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.12.2011 20:30
    Is there any more coming up? I would love to read more!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2011 20:06
    True intimacy, trust and caring---responsibly, no less!---between two people is hard enough. With four, or even three, it's a major accomplishment. Six? Wow! None of our foursome, even after 12 years together, can imagine such a thing working out. But it is inspiring, if more than a little bit scary. Keep it coming, my dear.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2011 05:05
    You should write a prologue, how the brother and sister first started having sex. One of the best part of incest stories, imo, is the way the two go from just brother and sister, to liking each other, to screwing each other every moment they get.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 23:04
    It's BONER not BONNER god that's annoying, amazing story though keep writing your awesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2011 23:11
    It's BONER not BONNER god that's annoying, amazing story though keep writing your awesome

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  • DSGIRLSD
    02.01.2012 00:22
    Boner, not Bonner, huih? Yet another word that wasnt in Spell-Check! I'll add it :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2012 11:47
    great story i cant wait to read more of the story line excited to see what happens next

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2012 00:04
    Absolutely incredible these characters become real and meaningful as any great story I'm blown away best work on this site no doubt keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2012 01:19
    this story was great!!!!!!! omg. the best story i have read on this site by far!!! this story actually has a plot line. its very good and you need to definitly write more!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2012 05:56
    never really been into sex storys but i like this 1

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2012 07:07
    the only thingi hate about this is its now over and i also wanna know about Tom-Paul Gardner

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 15:18
    Absolutely a great story hated for it to end!half way thru the story I had to take care of the hardon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2012 15:18
    Absolutely a great story hated for it to end!half way thru the story I had to take care of the hardon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2012 22:52
    Absolutely loved it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 14:28
    Excellent story, very well told. More from this author please. I was sexually aroused throughout and loved the ending.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2012 19:50
    Great ending to the chapters beforehand

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2012 15:36
    it is a bit long and missed a foursome

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.01.2012 08:34
    get a part 2 on this one FOR SURE. I loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 11:26
    man read the whole till chapter 35.good one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 05:41
    man it was certainely too good.............

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  • cArEbEAr279
    29.01.2012 13:39
    needs more info, it was good though

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  • EngagedReader
    29.01.2012 17:57
    Is there any way to tell when we can expect the Prequel mentioned in the introduction? After reading this brilliant story, I'm really looking forward to finding out how the romance between Kayla and RJ started in the first place!

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  • EngagedReader
    29.01.2012 17:58
    Is there any way to tell when we can expect the Prequel mentioned in the introduction? After reading this brilliant story, I'm really looking forward to finding out how the romance between Kayla and RJ started in the first place!

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  • EngagedReader
    29.01.2012 18:01
    Is there any way to tell when we can expect the Prequel mentioned in the introduction? After reading this brilliant story, I'm really looking forward to finding out how the romance between Kayla and RJ started in the first place!

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  • CrownClown29
    30.01.2012 22:55
    Wonderful story and character development! the sex is pretty hot as well!! RJ really wants Candy! They have a bigger bond then any one else!

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  • CrownClown29
    30.01.2012 22:55
    Wonderful story and character development! the sex is pretty hot as well!! RJ really wants Candy! They have a bigger bond then any one else!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 00:09
    Awesome! Can't wait for the sequel! Would love to know who they married and how the new partners deal with all the sex between the siblings and cousins. Looking forward to more! Great writing!

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  • CrownClown29
    31.01.2012 00:25
    You have a great talent! Looking forward to the next instalment!!

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  • CrownClown29
    31.01.2012 00:26
    If you need a proof reader! I would love to help! :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 17:04
    U r a great writer and i enjoy reading ur work i would like to read more if u have any i like the rest of u fans cant wait to read te sequel when u post it. ur fan spanky1426

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2012 06:58
    Graet! I love your ideas!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2012 10:19
    Its a great fun to read yours stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 19:54
    sYz97b Post brought me to think, went to mull over!!...

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2012 20:52
    Txmx8j Thanks for the article! I hope the author does not mind if I use it for my course work!....

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2012 14:45
    You are my favorite writer on here woo my 18th birthday tomorrow

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 12:05
    you rushed it i would have likes to know how the whole thing starts but other than that good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 12:05
    you rushed it i would have likes to know how the whole thing starts but other than that good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2012 06:32
    I'm the Human Resource manager for an international company and had a man as my secretary for some years. He left and I found myself working with Mina, a girl from finance.
    I'm stylish and like to show off my figure but in a discreet way. Mina was Indian, delicate and pretty but rather prudish in her demeanour and severe in her dress. She was however an excellent secretary.
    We went to Italy on work related business but did a little shopping and Mina purchased a typical Italian business woman's two piece suit.
    That evening we were to meet some company people and Mina came to my room in the suit, the skirt was short and it was not long that I became ware the she wasn't wearing panties. I asked her if she thought is was appropriate and she said it was for what she had in mind and proceeded to undress completely, herself then me.
    I'd never fucked witha girl before but it was fabulous and orgasmed until the bed was wet through. Girls only for me now and I still love Mina best of all.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2012 08:11
    Good work! It's clear that the author did do some creative editing (or I should say that to me this appears to be the case) which is always a good thing to do: essential really, and too often lacking in stories here. People really like the story... and that's the main thing. Only feedback I would venture is maybe even a bit more editing, down to the essence... but it's damn close as is, so bravo!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 09:07
    Kathy and Kayla should get together and fuck RJ. While Kenny And Candy Should get AuntChristy involve Then all six Should camp for a week and fuck all four women should get pregnant not caring who fathered who and continue to make babys

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 19:31
    Why have Kathy And Christy Fucked RJ and Kenny. Christy could not take her eyes off of it and was wondering how her sister-in-law managed to keep her hands off RJ, with Rob being away in Washington DC all the time.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2012 18:38
    verry good he was carefull

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 02:39
    Great story, can't wait to read more. Wonderful writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 02:39
    This is one of the best stories I have read.

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    16.05.2012 17:00
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    08.06.2012 21:23
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    21.09.2012 10:53
    brilliant until the chapter 35 then its just aslut fest

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2012 06:38
    Okay, that is COMPLETELY her. Her middle names shulod be Bright and Vivid, or maybe just JOY. That girl knows how to wring it all out of life. And I love that she still wants to sit on my lap. Now I just need to work on Astrid .

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2012 14:10
    Robyn Thimsen - I cannot say engouh about how you captured every moment of this beautiful event and our beautiful daughter. Happiness and satisfaction of the final product are an understatement!! The Lord blessed us with your talents and we are forever greatful. Natalie and Kenny will be able to reflect on their wedding day pictures, smiling always at the amazing job you did.Perhaps, grandbaby pictures down the road will be where we meet again Blessings & love to you both. MOB

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2013 22:06
    Dear Kathy,The residents at The Manor at Canyon Lakes rlealy enjoyed your performance. You were a breathe of fresh air the moment you started. You and your husband Gordon are very wonderful people and I envy the life that you live traveling around from place to place and getting to meet new groups of people everyday. You both are very good at what you do and I can't wait to have you back here again. Good Luck and Thank You Soooo Very Much!!!Jenna

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 10:44
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  • anonymous+reader
    14.02.2013 22:41
    This is very well-written. I keep looking for a story like this, sans the incest, (that is, lighthearted, no weird fetishes, maybe a trip to the lake), but no dice.

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    24.02.2013 13:55
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    29.03.2014 08:58
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    14.08.2014 17:57
    - I feel silly remembering that I spent most of that day in the house and did not enjoy it. Since it was chlily today it is hard to remember that we had a day like that just last week! Where were those pictures taken?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2014 20:17
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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2014 09:47
    Erin - Andy's cousin just had twins. We were lonikog at their pictures last night on Facebook. Now you're showing pictures of your twins. I was certain that I didn't want to have any more kiddos for awhile, but now I'm not too sure.wink wink

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.09.2014 05:29
    Damn man!! i've been waiting for 2 months now.. Where are the next installments :|

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2014 04:38
    needs another part to the series

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2014 06:31
    and figure out the ciookng day, freezing & serving plan. So this month, I picked meals out of The $5 Dinner Mom Cookbook, for my ciookng days. Here are the 10 meals I chose to prepare this month {I make three of each

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2014 12:22
    Would love to read the prequel and later years that were mentiond. Love the story and would love to find out the final outcome of the relationships between everyone.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.11.2014 05:24
    As a nurse most pills do work mid cycle and to the author you did go through a patch where the names got mixed up.

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  • stevers
    22.12.2014 21:39
    Very well done.
    I expect, what, 30 chapters? What comments or questions I might have will be answered

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  • stevers
    23.12.2014 09:50
    Interesting posts.
    Keep up the good work.

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  • stevers
    23.12.2014 11:59
    Love it, love it !!!!!!! Love it when there is someone there that cares and shows you how to do it right.
    Great story.

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  • stevers
    23.12.2014 19:08
    Awesome! I wont more. Thank you

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  • stevers
    23.12.2014 21:06
    Very hot!! I'm very hot. I'd cheat LOL As my hand went in the bag, I'd ball up one pair and palm it. I get one pair he gets one pair. The guys don't know who's is who's so, the girls chose. A win win

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.12.2014 01:22
    I really like the way this story is progressing, the build up. Looking forward to the next chapters.

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  • stevers
    24.12.2014 01:57
    Love it!!!!!!!!!!!! There are so many was to go. Hope to read much more

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  • stevers
    24.12.2014 15:47
    Where is the rest of this story? Is it written? How do I find it if it is?
    Loved it, great story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2015 11:57
    2 fucking long

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2015 11:58
    this was all most as long as my dick

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  • hahaicu
    09.05.2015 21:51
    Wonderful. Everyone should read this

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  • falseprofit
    09.05.2015 22:07
    I spent a long time reading this. Fucking great. Totally rocked it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.05.2015 07:12
    I know it's you, uncle Bob.

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  • MasterTtrianglelord
    05.09.2015 12:34
    Very good and interesting story. However, and I know you can't really change it now, do a little research. The purpose of "the pill" is to prevent ovulation. The ONLY reason for rubbers when on the pill is if you are fucking multiple people, and you do not know if they are STD free. While true that you need to use other protection if you have JUST STARTED the pill, once on it, and if faithfully taking it, you don't need rubbers.

    Your story is a great work, and you paint your picture very well. Keep up the good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.12.2016 23:54
    I liked this story. It is about time someone wrote something about mature minded teens. I read all the chapters, (even the epilog) I decided to leave just 1 comment instead of several. In the first group of chapters, you mentioned a little girl named Penny Benjman, she was masterbating in the bushes when R.J. and Kayla took the Toyota Tundra out for the first time. I was a year younger her when i first started to explore my sexuality, and one night i was sleeping in the treehouse in our back yard when i had to pee,as i was about to go into the house i saw my big brother and his g/f at the time in the livingroom and she was giving him a blowjob. I watched forgetting I had to pee. I squated right there on the patio as i watched. I wish you had put more about Penny in the story. I to masturbated in bushes, i had 4 older brothers growing up, I was afraid of being caught.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.01.2017 03:33
    Best story i've read so far, well done! Took some time to read but completely worth it

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  • sodapopsweet
    09.10.2017 06:38
    Pretty decent, but it gets distracted at times with pointless detail. Especially cleaning the boat. Seems like you just want to prove that you know how a boat works. Just not necessary.

    That said, there were a lot of great moments, and the overarching plot was fun to follow. Candy is adorable, and the standout scene is when the two couples incestuously hook up in view of each other. I wish there was more of that.

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  • White+Walls
    18.03.2018 16:35
    This is such a fantastic story. I hope that you're working on something new. The French Lesson and Long Weekend are special pieces of work on this site.

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  • RecHiker
    15.09.2018 15:10
    What a wonderful details story. I loved all the chapters

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  • yada85
    20.06.2020 23:31
    This was a great series. Enjoyed everything about it.

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