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The Absolute Perfect Girl

Author: XanderTheGreat

Date: 20 January 2012

Blowjob, True Story, Consensual Sex, Cum Swallowing

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I opened my eyes, blinded by the sun pouring into the room through my window. I rolled over to look at the clock. It was only 9AM. I tried to go back to sleep, but I just couldn’t. 9AM on a Sunday was too early for me. I was usually asleep until noon at the earliest. But today was different. Today, fate stepped in.

I sat up, pulled the covers off, and stood up. Being up this early really was a hassle; I could barely stand. Something had to be done. If I couldn’t go back to sleep, I had to find a way to wake up. Completely.

I got a shower. Didn’t work. I got dressed and went into the living room to watch TV. I was still way too tired. I went into the kitchen to find coffee. We were out. I had one option: go out and get coffee. I didn’t have a car, so I had to walk, but luckily there was a Starbucks a few blocks away.

I grabbed my wallet and my keys and headed out. It took me no longer than ten minutes to reach my destination, for which I was very thankful. The cold weather was not pleasant, especially so early in the morning. But the heat of the building warmed me up instantly.

I stood in line for a few minutes. When I got to the counter, I ordered a tall latte with extra foam. I needed that extra sugar, especially today. I paid, got my latte, and turned toward the door to leave. However, something caught my eye as I did so: quite possibly the most beautiful girl I’d ever seen in my entire life, without a doubt. It was remarkable. She was sitting at a table across from her friend, clearly in conversation. It was a good thing, too, because had she not been distracted, she’d probably notice me staring at her.

From the fifteen-foot distance, I could see her piercing blue eyes. She was wearing a black bucket hat that covered most of her wavy, shoulder-length, brown hair. Her lips were pout and perfectly-shaped and she had a perfect snub nose. She was just perfect. From the moment I saw her, she looked...well...perfect.

I watched her nod as her friend told her something very clearly interesting. Then she smiled. And boy, was it an incredible smile. She had two subtle dimples, and her teeth were as straight and white as they could be. And most importantly, it was genuine. She looked legitimately happy when she smiled. It was the kind of smile that made you wish she was smiling all the time.

“Excuse me,” someone said from behind me. I was blocking their way out, as I had been standing at the door, watching this girl, for nearly two minutes now. I decided to sit down and drink my latte.

I took a table a few places across from her, so I could get a good view. I didn’t want to make it obvious that I was watching her, but I wanted to be able to see her. Then she stood up. She left her coffee cup on the table and walked toward the restrooms. She wore a black quilted puffer jacket that came down below her butt (unfortunately), skinny jeans, and mid-calf, tan Uggs with fur. She looked fantastic.

I only had a a couple of minutes to act. She was gone, to the restroom, and she would be back soon. So I got up and sat in her seat, across from her friend.

“Hi,” I said.

“Uh...hi?” She was obviously confused, and I didn’t blame her.

“I’m Alex.” I held out my hand to shake hers. She reciprocated.

“Tina.” She raised her brow and smiled a bit and she shook my hand. She was still quite baffled.

“Your friend.” I said, with no elaboration. She let out a small chuckle and looked down.

“Oh.” She was smiling, but you could tell she’s gotten this before, and she was quite annoyed by it. “You want her number.” I was actually taken a little off guard. What did I want? I had no idea. I went over, planning to talk to her friend, but why?

“Her name will do for now,” I said, trying to keep my composure. Tina didn’t seem too happy that I was doing this. She just shook her head and smiled a fake smile. “I’m sorry,” I said. “I don’t know why I did this. To be honest, I’ve never actually asked a stranger out.” This was one hundred percent true. In fact, I’d never asked any girl out. Ever.

Just then, I saw Tina’s eyes shift up and over my shoulder, and I heard a voice from behind me: “You’re in my seat, stud.” I froze. Slowly, I turned around to see the most beautiful girl looking down at me. She gave me a faux smile, and I stood up.

“I’m--sorry.” I lost my breath mid-sentence. She sat down in her chair, as I stood next to the table, not looking at either of them.

“Well? Who are you?” she asked. She smiled. “Did I just interrupt your game? Were you asking Tina out?” She looked at Tina and smiled. Tina did not reciprocate. Seeing this, the beautiful girl stopped smiling and looked at me. “What?”

“I--um...” I was at a loss for words. This was just as hard as I’d imagined it would be. “I came over to ask you out.”

“Well why did you wait until I wasn’t here?”

“I have no clue, to be honest.” I let out a nervous laugh. She shook her head, smiled, and held out her hand.

“I’m Amber,” she said, looking me in the eye. I now saw that her eyes were not merely blue. They were blue-green, and they pierced my own.

“I’m Alex,” I said, shaking her cute, petite hands. She had a glossy greenish-blue nail polish on to match her eyes. After we finished shaking hands, I continued to stand there awkwardly. She laughed.

“It was nice meeting you, Alex, but we have to go.” She and Tina stood up and headed for the door, leaving me standing at the table. I didn’t look to see that they left, but I heard the door. It took me a few moments, but I mustered up the courage. I followed her.

I left the building, into the immersive coldness, but it didn’t phase me. I turned left after them. I walked quite briskly, and as I reached them, I made the strange decision to grab Amber by the arm and stop her. Her immediate reaction was to pull away. She turned, and seeing it was me made no difference. She was puzzled. She didn’t say anything.

“I’m sorry, but I have to say it.” The words just came out of me. “You are quite possibly the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. I know that’s probably a weird thing to say to a complete stranger, but it’s true.” She had her mouth open, half-smiling “I’m sorry,” I added. She turned to Tina, her mouth still ajar.

“It’s not weird at all!” she said. It was clear she wanted me to say something. She just looked at me, smiling.

“Really?” It was all I could come up with.

“Really!” She was very clearly taken aback by this, which surprised me; a girl as beautiful as her, you would think she’d heard this all the time.

“Okay,” I said. “Well...do you wanna go out sometime?” I was still nervous as hell. She could still say no.

“How ‘bout if I give you my number? You can call me.” I handed her my phone and she inputed her number. She handed it back, smiling. I smiled back. “Okay?”

“Yeah! Great!” She and Tina turned and continued walking. I stood, rooted to the spot, feeling an incredible sense of elation. I just asked the most beautiful girl in the world out. And she said yes!



Seeing as how it was a Sunday, and I had class throughout the week, I wasn’t going to call her before Friday. However, on Friday, I sat on my bed, and held my phone in my hand, her number ready to call, my thumb over the ‘send’ button. I knew I wanted to, but I didn’t know what I was going to say. Finally, after a few long minutes, I pushed ‘send’. The phone rang. Again.

“Hello?” her beautiful voice said on the other end.

“Hi, Amber?” I said.

“Yeah?”

“Hi, this is Alex. From Starbucks.”

“Hi, Alex!” she sounded happy to hear from me.

“Hey! What are you doing tonight?”

“Tonight?” She hesitated. “Tonight I’m actually...completely free.” My heart leaped out of my chest.

“Great! Wanna meet at Santa Monica Pier?”

“Sure, that sounds awesome! What time?

“Um... six o’clock?”

“Awesome! Meet at the Ferris wheel?”

“Sounds good!”

“Okay, Alex! See ya later!”

“Bye, Amber!” I hung up, my heart beating fifty times a second. I couldn’t believe this was happening. I’d never been on a date, let alone with a girl as gorgeous as Amber. And she was enthusiastic about it, too! This was just great!

A couple hours later, I headed out the door, wearing a grey sweater over a long-sleeve, white, button-up shirt, and jeans. I was wearing my favorite cologne, dressed to impress.

I called a cab to meet me out front of my apartment building. I got in, told him where to go, and he was off. The cab ride might as well have lasted three hours. The nerves and the excitement built up inside of me.

The cab pulled up at the top of Santa Monica Pier. I stepped out of the cab, and walked down the pier, toward the ferris wheel. As I got closer, I could see her sitting on a bench, legs crossed, just observing. Most girls would be on their phones or something. Not Amber. She was something special.

As I got to about ten yards away, she spotted me. “Hey!” she shouted, as she got up and enthusiastically walked over to me. She immediately gave me a big hug, and as I hugged her back, I smelled her hair. It smelled of fresh coconut.

“How are you?” I asked as I took a look at what she was wearing: a maroon leather jacket, black leggings, and those famous calf-high tan Uggs. She was stunning. “You look...” I couldn’t think of the appropriate word. She looked at me, half-smiling, waiting for the word. “...incredible.”

“Thanks!” she said with such enthusiasm. I could tell she was genuinely excited to be on this date, perhaps just as much as I was. We began walking toward the end of the pier. “So,” she said. “What do you wanna do?” Luckily, I had put some thought into that.

“I was thinking we could go to Mariasol Cocina.” And so we did. We ate dinner and talked for a long time. I found out she grew up in San Francisco; that her favorite color is green (just like mine); that her favorite movie was Titanic (it’s one of mine, as well); that her parents were divorced when she was little, and her dad moved to LA, so that’s why she was here now; that her favorite musician in Frank Sinatra (he’s one of mine, as well), and so many other things. It was truly one of--if not the best--meals of my life.

After dinner, we decided to go for a walk on the beach. We walked for about a mile, telling each other about ourselves. After a mile, I just decided to plop down and sit in the sand. She laughed and sat right next to me, and we sat and talked for a while, watching the tide and the moon and the stars. I don’t remember how it came up, but I eventually told her that this was my first date....ever.

“Really?” she responded. It wasn’t an are-you-serious kind of response. It was more of a legitimately surprised response, which made me feel good.

“Yeah. I’ve always been too shy to ask a girl out. Which means I’ve never even had a girlfriend.” I didn’t feel ashamed to tell her that. I felt--even after just a few hours with her--that I could trust her. And she confirmed that.

“That’s okay,” she said, assuringly. We both collapsed to the half-laying, half-sitting position by now. And for a good two or three minutes, we just lied down and watched the tide and listened to the waves crashed. I looked over at her beautiful face, lit by the moonlight. She didn’t see me. It was clear she was thinking about something, and it wasn’t long before I knew what it was. “You’ve...kissed a girl before, right?”

I was taken off guard. The truth was, no, I hadn’t ever kissed a girl. But I couldn’t tell her that. What would she think of me? But it was evident, by my hesitation to answer, that the answer was no. She looked right at me and said, “Alex, it’s okay if you haven’t. I’m just asking.” I still wasn’t sure how to respond, so I just said...

“No.” She smiled at me and let out the smallest of giggles. She turned and continued to watch the tide for a few moments, then said...

“Do you want to?” My stomach dropped. I let out a nervous laugh. She didn’t even smile.

“What---really?” was my lame response. I could have just rolled with it and have been so smooth, but instead I chose that. But it didn’t matter, because seconds later, she moved in and pressed her lips against mine. They were as soft as I’d imagined them. It was a gentle kiss, but I’d still never done this, so I had no idea if I was doing it right. But it felt right. I was enjoying it, and she seemed to be, too.

After about ten seconds, she pulled back. I was left speechless. She just looked at me, awaiting some sort of approval. “Well?” she said. I was at a complete loss for words.

“It was, uh... It was--good,” I managed to mutter. She giggled.

After a little while, we decided to get up and walk back to the pier. When we did so, Frank Sinatra’s ‘The Way You Look Tonight’ was playing. It was almost too perfect. We had a laugh, but I don’t think she expected me to hold my hand out and say, “May I have this dance?” because her eyes widened and she smiled so wide as she took my hand. We danced to the rest of the song. She laid her head on my chest as she softly sang along with the tune. I joined her.

We were so lost in the crowd, that nobody had probably even noticed. But I wish they had. I wish they could see the amazing girl I was dancing with.

When the song ended, I called a cab for us, and we decided to make our way back up the pier. She decided she wanted to race up. Me, being the lazy person I am, allowed her to get far ahead of me. This was the first good look I had at her butt, and boy, was it perfect. Perfectly-shaped, just the right size, not too round, not too tight. And the leggings accentuated it perfectly. I felt myself become ever so slightly larger in my pants at the sight of it. What I would give to hold it firmly in my hands.

We got into the cab that was waiting for us and told the cabbie to go to Amber’s place. We talked a little but, but the drive was only about ten minutes long, and we’d already talked so much. Plus, we were both so tired. It was midnight by now.

We arrived at her place. She lived with her dad in Toluca Lake. It was a very nice house. I walked her to her step, telling the cabbie to wait for me.

We stood on her doorstep, looking at each other for a few seconds, then began laughing. Laughing at what? I don’t know. But when the laughter died down, I looked at her in her beautiful blue-green eyes and she looked back into mine. There was quite a bit of tension before I slowly moved in. I went ninety percent of the way, and let her go the other ten (I’d learned that from Will Smith). Once again, her moist, soft, pout lips were frisking with mine. This time, however, I took her by her waist and pulled her up against my body. She placed her hands on my chest as we continued to lock lips. I ran my hands up her waist, to her sides, and around to her back.

As much as I wanted to use tongue, I didn’t know anything about kissing, so I didn’t want to do anything weird. So she did it for me. I felt her tongue push its way into my mouth, and so I put mine in hers as well. I was lost in this kiss. You could have hit be over the head with a tire iron, I would not have noticed.

Finally, after about fifteen or so seconds, I slowly slid my hands down her back, to her lower back, to the start of her butt. I stopped there. But I figured, if she wanted me to stop, she’d have stopped me by now, so I went the rest of the way. I placed my hands over her nice, juicy butt. I just left them there for a few seconds, then gently squeezed. It felt just as incredible as I’d imagined. And the leggings made for the perfect access. She was definitely wearing a thong, too, because I didn’t feel any panties or panty-lines. With that, I felt myself grow slightly larger again, and this time, I was pressed right up against Amber. I was sure she could feel it. But if she did, it didn’t phase her. We just continued kissing.

Sooner or later, one of us had to end the kiss, and I decided it should be me. I didn’t want to be the one in the palm of her hand. It’s just a control thing.

I walked back the cab the happiest man alive.



I lied in bed that night, trying to go to sleep, but I just couldn’t. I couldn’t stop thinking about her: her smile, her eyes, her lips, her perfect body, her soft tan skin, and her fantastic butt. But most of all, her incredible personality. Part of the reason I never had a girlfriend was because I was so picky. But this girl was just perfect. There was no other way to describe her. She was perfect.



There were so many things on my mind over the next several days. I so badly wanted to see her again, but she was too busy. We texted back and forth every night, talking about our families, our childhoods, and lots of other things. But that wasn’t enough. I wanted to hold again, feel her lips against mine, and squeeze her butt. Every time I thought about her, I not only felt happy and a sense of elation, but I also got slightly aroused. There were a few nights that I would jerk off just to the thought of her. It wasn’t until two weeks had gone by that I got to see her again.

We were Facebook friends by now, and it was there that we planned our second date. We agreed on dinner and a movie. The night of the date (Saturday), I got the mixed feelings of nervousness and excitement in my stomach. Despite having been talking to her for at least two hours almost every day, it felt like it had been forever since the last time I’d seen her, and I was excited beyond my wits to be seeing her again.

I called a cab to pick her up. We got to the restaurant at about 6PM. Because I’d made a reservation, our table was ready. The hostess led the way to our table. I let Amber walk in front of me, mainly for chivalry reasons, but also because I wanted to check her out in her skinny jeans. Once again, her butt looked too perfect for words. She was also wearing the same red leather jacket she’d worn on our first date, and the bucket hat she was wearing when I first saw her at the coffee shop.

We got to the table, and I pulled her chair out for her. For some reason, she seemed surprised at this. I was just trying to be a good date. When she sat down, she took off her jacket and hung it over the back of her chair. And then I fell in love with her breasts. Before, she’d always worn shirts a little to baggy to show their true form, but tonight she wore a nice, figure-hugging, blue blouse. Her breasts perked up just perfectly. If I had to judge, I would have guessed they were a 32C. What lovely, lovely breasts, she had.

We sat down and talked. And talked. And talked. It took us nearly two hours to finish dinner, and when we did, we went straight to the movie theater, which was only three blocks away, so we walked. It was a cold walk, but enjoyable. I didn’t mind the cold one bit, actually.

We arrived at the theater, and realized we hadn’t even decided on what movie to see. The only thing we could agree on was Paranormal Activity 3 (I didn’t really want to see it, but I was always told: when going to the movies on a date, always see a horror movie).

The theater was only about halfway full. We sat in the back. And this wasn’t my decision. The movie started, and for the first fifteen minutes or so, we sat, my arm around her, her head leaning against me. But soon enough, something too scary for her liking happened, she she was holding me as she watched with one eye open. I held her back. At this point, I wasn’t even paying attention to the movie. I would just smell her hair, lightly enough that she wouldn’t notice, and rub hug her back. It was a great movie, even though I don’t remember much of it.

I had to admit, I was expecting some make-out action during the movie, but I was perfectly fine with what it was. We left the theater, and she was shaking. She loved the movie. I told her I did too.

I called a cab, and we got in, and I told the cabbie to go to her place. For the first few minutes of the ride, we were both quiet. Then I saw her look at me from the corner of my eye.

“You were expecting to make out in the movie, weren’t you?” she asked, smiling. I laughed. Of course I was, but I wasn’t going to say so. “I knew it. Is that all guys want out of a date is action?” She was still smiling, so I could tell she was joking.

“No, I was completely fine with what we did,” I told her. “Seriously, I really enjoyed it.” She just kept smiling at me.

“Sure...” she said as she turned her head facing forward again.

“I mean, yeah, I was hoping I would get to make out with you a little bit. But it’s not like I enjoyed the date any less because of it.” She turned and looked at me again, with her eyebrows curved and a smirk on her face, as if to say ‘am I supposed to believe that?’ I just looked back at her. And she continued to look at me. I slowly leaned in toward her beautiful face, closing my eyes. I heard her let out a tiny chortle before she moved in and kissed me. This time, we almost immediately used our tongues.

We made out for the rest of the ride, which lasted about ten minutes. We seriously did not stop for the entire ten minutes. I thought I’d died and went to heaven. There was no groping this time, but I did run my hands through her beautiful hair. She ran her fingers through my hair with one hand, while touching my chest with the other. It truly was a heavenly moment.

The cab stopped out front of her house. I opened the door for her and walked her to her door. This time, we merely hugged and said goodnight. Once again, I walked back to the cab the happiest man alive.



We went on several dates over the next month. From going out to eat, to hanging out at Santa Monica Pier, to just hanging out at the beach. I told her more about myself than I think I’ve told anyone. I spent more time with her--whether in person, on the phone, on Facebook, or texting--than I had any of my friends combined. And I think she could say the same. I was falling in love with this girl, and I was loving every second of it.

It wasn’t until the sixth date that I decided it would be appropriate to ask her over to my place so that I could cook her dinner. And she agreed.

I decided to make Fetuccini Alfredo with broccoli and garlic bread. It’s my absolute favorite meal, so I’ve made it ton of times, so it’s what I make best. I got dressed--jeans and a black button-up shirt--with my hands shaking. I didn’t know why I was so nervous. I knew and trusted this girl more than most people in my life. What was the deal?

Soon enough, she knocked on the door. I walked to the door, took a deep breath, put a big smile on, and opened the door. The second I saw her, my smile became sincere. She smile backed at me.

“Hey!” she said with such enthusiasm. She threw her arms around me and we hugged for a good five seconds. She came in and I took her coat--a black pea coat. She was wearing a black embellished, mock-layer dress that came down to her knees. There was also just enough cleavage. She looked gorgeous.

“You look...gorgeous!” I said, looking her up and down. She smiled.

“Thanks!”

“You can go sit on the couch. Dinner will be ready in like five minutes.” She looked at me, then looked at the couch, then back at me.

“I wanna help!” she said with this ‘duh!’ tone to it. I told her there really wasn’t anything left to do but wait, so she went and sat on the couch. Immediately, she picked up the first magazine on the coffee table (Entertainment Weekly). She began flipping through it. This was a relatively small apartment, so we could have very easily had a conversation while I finished cooking, but she kept quiet and read the magazine.

“It’s ready!” I said after setting the table, and she put the magazine down and came over to the table. I pulled her chair out for her and she said a quite ‘thank you’. I sat, and we dug in.

“This is delicious!” she said. “How did you learn to cook so well?” I chuckled.

“Practice,” I said, dishing out some broccoli for myself.



The night went on with conversation and a great meal (if I do say so myself). We talked about the usual: childhood, family, school, interests. But a certain topic came up after dinner that I was not expecting.

We were sitting on the couch, her head on my shoudler, my arm around her, watching The Office. We hadn’t spoken for a good ten minutes because we were watching the show. But then she said something.

“So you’ve never been in a relationship?” she asked, still watching the TV.

“Nope,” I responded.

“And you never kissed a girl before me?”

“No...” I was scared. I was afraid I was being tested. Or perhaps judged. Then she said it...

“So that means you’ve never had sex.” It came as such a shock to me, that I nearly choked on my soda that I’d just taken a sip of. She sat up and looked at me. “Right?”

Still somewhat choking, I nodded. She paused, then laid her head back on my shoulder.

“Me neither,” she said, rather nonchalantly. I felt my heart leap and my face get red. And I smiled, quite possibly the widest smile I’ve ever smiled. But she didn’t see me.

When the next commercial came on, I changed the subject. “I’m gonna get more soda. Do you want anything?” She sat up and thought about it for a minute.

“I’ll have some more water.” She handed me her glass and I went into the kitchen. I hid behind the cabinets so she couldn’t see me, and I exhaled, smiling. She was a virgin. I’m not sure, but I think I knew I was in love with her at that moment.

I went back in the living room with my Sprite and her water. I handed her the water, placed my Sprite on the table next to the couch, and sat down. She took a big sip of water, and from the corner of my eye, I saw her looking at me. I turned and she was holding the glass with both hands, just looking at me, smiling with her mouth closed.

“What?” I said, smiling back. She put the glass of water on the coffee table, then sat back up and continued looking at me, smiling. “What?” I said again, still smiling. She laid her head back on my shoulder.

“I love you,” she said, as if it wasn’t a big deal. My stomach dropped. I moved so that she would sit up again.

“You what?” I said, looking at her dead in the eye.

“I love you,” she said, in the exact same way. We just looked at each other. I smiled and she smiled.

“I--I love you too,” I said, becoming light-headed as I did so. She smiled even bigger. I did too. We both laughed. We moved in closer, and she laid her head on my shoulder again. As we stopped laughing, I began to rub her arm and massage it.

“Oooh, that feels good,” she said, sitting up. “Give me a massage.” She demanded it. No questions asked. So I agreed.

“Okay,” I said as she turned her back to me, still sitting on the couch. I began rubbing her shoulders, and she moaned as I did so.

“That feels sooo good,” she said. I had to admit, I was getting turned on. I continued by rubbing her neck, then rubbing my hands through her hair, massaging her scalp, then back down to her neck, then back down to her shoulders, and down to her arms again. She kept moaning, saying it felt good. Needless to say, my pants got a little tighter.

After a couple of minutes, I decided to give her a light kiss on the neck. She didn’t respond, so I just continued massaging. Then, after another ten seconds or so, I kissed her on the neck again. She turned around and looked at me. She looked at my lips, then in my eyes, then at my lips. She moved closer and kissed me. Softly at first, then I slowly pushed my tongue into her mouth, and we proceeded to make out.

I had my hands on her sides, and hers were on my chest. But she did something she’d never done before. She moved one of her hands down to my stomach. Then back up to my chest, then down to my stomach, over and over again, slowly. I decided to reciprocate. I moved my hands around to her back, then up. I felt her bra, and held my hands there for a few moments. When she didn’t react, I attempted to undo it. I’d never done it before, but I’d seen how it was done on a TV show or something, so I tried. And it worked. Her bra was now undone. However, she didn’t do anything about it.

We made out, rubbing our hands over each other’s torsos. Eventually, she moved even closer, still kissing me, and straddled me. She was now holding my face with her hands, kissing me. I felt her firm, yet juicy butt on my lap, and it made me grow.

I ran my hands down her back again, to the start of her butt. This time, just as I was about to touch her butt, she reached around and grabbed my wrist. I stopped. She took it, brought it around, and placed it on her breast. This was magnificent. I had one hand on her perfect butt, and the other on her perfect breast, all the while, making out with her.

After about ten seconds, I slid my hand off her breast and around to her back. I decided to try gently running my fingers along her back. I felt her shiver a little bit.

By now, I’m rock hard in my jeans, but she’s situated on top of me so that she can’t feel it. However, if she were to slide towards me even just two inches, she would feel it for sure. And this turned me on. So I grabbed her and gently pulled her toward me. Soon enough, she was on my hard cock. I know she could feel it, because there was nothing but her panties blocking it. She was straddling me, so her dress was pulled up to just below her hips. I couldn’t quite see her panties, but if the dress was any further up, I’d get a peek.

It took me a few seconds to notice, but she began to very slowly and very mildly grind her hips. It was apparent that she was rubbing her panty-covered pussy against my jeans-covered lump. It was getting pretty hot in here.

I held my hands over her butt as she did so, still fiercely making out. In fact, I don’t think one of us had taken a breath at this point. She continued to very slowly and very mildly grind her hips. I decided to start reciprocating. In accordance to her rhythm, I slowly and very mildly thrusted. I could feel a bit of pre-cum coming on.

I ran my hands up her back and realized that her bra had now completely slipped off her breasts. It was now down to her mid-back. I so badly just wanted to take her dress off to see those bodacious beauties. No sooner had I thought that, did she begin unbuttoning my shirt. She got about halfway down the shirt, then we broke apart for the first time so that she could unbutton the rest. As soon as she did so, she assisted me in taking it completely off. I was wearing an undershirt too, and she slipped that over my head and off. I was now topless. We went back to making out.

I’d seen it plenty of times in movies: one of them takes an item of the other’s clothing off, the other does the same. I contemplated doing this, since all she had on was a dress. I decided not to.

Suddenly, she pulled away. “Bedroom?” she said, out of breath.

“Uh--sure!” I said, happily. She got up and took me by the hand and gleefully took me into the bedroom. She looked so cute with her hair a little ruffled, in that sexy black dress, with no shoes on.

We got into the bedroom, I turned the light on, and she immediately turned back toward me and started kissing me, lightly pushing me back toward the bed until we both fell on it. I couldn’t believe this was happening.

She was on top of me, both us us lying on the bed. I now had full access to her butt and I took immediate advantage of that. I squeezed it nice and hard, causing her to moan ever so lightly. We made out and made out. I brought my hands up to the middle of her back. Every now and then I would run my hands down to her butt, hold them there for a few seconds, and squeeze. Then I would bring them back up to her back.

I decided to roll her over so that she was on her back and I was halfway on top of her. I could tell she liked this because she smiled and wrapped on of her legs around me, to which I responded by rubbing her thigh. It was so smooth.

My hard cock pressing up against her pelvis, I could feel the pre-cum oozing out little by little. I was hornier than I’d ever been in my life. I didn’t think I could get any hornier. Little did I know...

Amber reached down and lightly rubbed my shaft through my pants, never breaking away from the kiss. I felt like I was going to explode. And if she’d kept it up, I might have. But luckily, after a few rubs, she stopped and grabbed my hand. I didn’t know what she was doing because she just held it there for a few moments. Then she thrusted it down to her pussy and placed my hand on it, still covered by her panties, which were quite wet. I began rubbing. I had no idea what I was doing--or what she wanted me to do. I just started rubbing slowly. But it was the right thing to do because she leaned her head back, closed her eyes, bit her lip, and moaned. I kissed her on the neck as I continued to rub her wet pussy.

“I want you to fuck me,” she said. My stomach dropped. She wanted me to fuck her. I guess I sort of knew that’s where this was going, but it was still amazing hearing her say that.

“I don’t have any condoms,” I said as I continued to kiss her neck and rub her pussy. She didn’t respond. She just pushed me off her, sat up, and knelt on the bed next to me. She proceeded to place her hands on my chest and run them down slowly to my stomach, to my pelvis. She unbuttoned and unzipped my jeans. She began to pull them down, so I helped her a little by lifting my butt off the bed. As she did so, my cock poked right up.

She pulled my jeans to about the middle of my thighs, then gently took my cock in her hand. She looked at me and slowly began stroking. Slowly and gently. I smiled as I watched her. This was amazing. I couldn’t get over the fact that this was happening. But I had to. I had to get into the moment and stop thinking about how crazy this was.

With each stroke she tightened her grip just a little. She continued to go slowly, though. After about ten or twelve strokes, I watched her lean down and lightly kiss the tip. She then proceeded to lick the entire head, swirling her tongue around, undoubtedly getting a small taste of pre-cum. After a few moments, I had to say something. If I didn’t I might cum.

“You’re gonna make me cum,” I said. She smiled and pulled away. She slowly crawled back up the bed and lied next to me. I wrapped my arms around her and went in for the kiss. But she stopped me. She put her hand on my chest and pushed. “What?” I said, confused and somewhat concerned. She put her other hand on my chest and pushed me, sitting up as she did so. So I took the force to mean that she wanted me in a sitting position, as well. Once we were both sitting--her legs out in front of her, mine tucked under me--she hiked up her dress so that I could see her panties. They were pink, seamless bikini panties. So sexy.

“Take them off,” she said. So shifted my way to the bottom of the bed, leaned over, grabbed them by the waistband, and slid them off of her, over her butt, then sliding down the pubic bone (she had a neatly-groomed strip of hair), then off her pussy. It was beautiful with nicely-shaped lips. I slid them down her thighs, over her knees, and off her feet. I dropped them on the floor and looked at her: she had her knees bent, up in the air, arms on the bed at her sides, propping her up slightly, and she was smiling at me. I knew what she wanted.

She moved her legs apart I laid down flat on my stomach, in between them I was inches away from her pussy. I was so close, I could smell it. It smelled...interesting. Not good, but not bad. It was sort of a faint, tangy musk.

She moved her arms and lied flat on her back, looking up at the ceiling. The idea of eating out a girl never appealed to me, but she wanted it, and I was more than willing to deliver.

I place my lips on her labia and slowly inserted my tongue. I heard her moan and felt her slightly tense up, then quickly release. It was almost as if it was a shock to her.

I inserted my tongue further. The taste was actually pretty...sweet. It wasn’t the best-tasting thing in the world, but it wasn’t bad. At that, I began moving my tongue up and down inside her pussy, my lips still against her pussy lips. She moaned and tensed up again. I admittedly had no idea what I was doing. Like I said, eating a girl out never really appealed to me, so I’d never given much thought on how it was done. So I decided to treat it somewhat like a kiss.

I continued moving my tongue up and down for a few more seconds, then got a little more into it. I pushed my lips in between her lips and began to swirly my tongue around, while simultaneously sucking. She arched her back at this and moaned a little louder. She wasn’t a loud moaner--if someone were to stand at the door to my bedroom, they probably would hear her--but it was hot, nonetheless.

I continued to suck and swirl, occassionally throwing in a come-hither motion with my tongue. She was very much enjoying it, because she continued to moan, although quietly. And I had to say, I was enjoying it, too. She didn’t taste half-bad.

My mouth started to get tired, so I decided to pull my mouth off of her pussy for a second, at which point, I saw her clit. I decided to very lightly rub it. With that, she let out a moan significantly louder than the previous ones. It was a short, spastic moan, almost as though she couldn’t control it. And if there’s anything hotter than a girl moaning during sex, it’s a girl moaning uncontrollably during sex. So I continued to gently rub her clit with my thumb. After a few seconds, I inserted my index finger halfway into her pussy. It felt strangely tight. How would I fit my penis in there? When she didn’t react to my finger, I put it in more, slowly, until--at about two-thirds of the way in--she gasped. I just held it there as I continued to rub her clit. Her breathing got heavier by the breath. I decided to go in for another round.

I leaned in and put my mouth back on her pussy, this time just going for it. I shocked her. She grabbed my head and suddenly moved back a little. It was more of a good reaction than a bad one. She kept her hand on on my head as I ate her out. I started to feel a warm, thick liquid produce. It wasn’t thick like saliva, but it wasn’t as thin as water. And it tasted good, like a salty sweet liquid. It wasn’t very much, but I could still feel it as it seeped into my mouth with each suck.

Her breathing grew heavier, slowly growing to moans. Then the moans started getting louder. As she got louder, I licked faster. As I licked faster, more juices began to produce. My tongue was starting to hurt.

“Don’t stop!” she exclaimed, now hardly able to control her breathing. “Don’t stop!” she said again. I wasn’t going to stop. My tongue hurt and, frankly, was starting to cramp. But I wanted to please her more than anything.

She still had her hand on my head, but now she was pushing me into her pussy. She wanted to be sure I did not stop. “Oh God!” She was really liking this. As was I.

I licked faster as she moaned louder. She moaned louder as more juices produced. More juices produced as I sucked harder. I sucked harder as she push my head harder.

“Keep going!” she yelled. She squeezed my head with her thighs. “Yes!”

She yanked my hair and pulled me back. She stopped breathing as her eyes widened and she arched her back. She began to writhe uncontrollably. After a few seconds, she let out her loudest moan yet--it was almost a scream. She lied flat on the bed again, still moaning, writhing. She moaned and she moaned as her orgasm overcame her. It died down after about ten seconds. Her breathing, however, didn’t subside. She was breathing as if she’d just ran a mile. Soon enough, that died down, too, and she started laughing. I laughed with her as I kneeled on the bed. I could have watched her orgasm for hours.

She sat up and her her face in her hands. She then looked at me and smiled. I smiled back, speechless. She moved in and kissed me hard on the mouth.

“Thank you,” she said, holding my face. I just smiled at her. My cock was still fully exposed, and still fully erect. So she reached down and began stroking it looking me in my eyes. “I want you to fuck me,” she said, looking me dead in the eye without blinking.

“But I--”

“It’s okay,” she piped in. “I’m on birth control.” She took my face in her hands again and smiled. Once again, I smiled back. We kissed, and she got off the bed and stood up. She lifted her dress over her head so that her bra fell onto the floor. Now that I thought about it, I was surprised it hadn’t escaped her dress sooner.

She was completely naked. I just stared at her and she climbed back onto the bed. She just kneeled on the bed, looking at me. I looked at her back, admiring her beautiful, flawless naked body. How did I end up with this girl?

I snapped back into reality and realized she was waiting for me to get completely naked. I stood up and pulled my pants completely off. I climbed back on the bed and we kneeled across from each other, just admiring each other’s naked bodies. I think we did this much longer than necessary. I just think we couldn’t decide who goes on top and who goes on bottom.

Finally, I decided to tell her to lie down. She did. She spread her legs, knees bent, 45 degrees to the bed. She looked at me as she rubbed her clit. I slowly made my way over to her. I got between her legs, lowered myself down, holding myself up with my arms. My legs were flat on the bed. I grabbed my cock and slowly guided it towards her pussy.

It felt like a lifetime, as I was getting closer and closer. My tip touched her lips, and I looked at her. She had a face of beautiful agony on. “Are you ready?” I asked her. She nodded.

“Put it in.”

I looked at her gorgeous face, into her blue-green eyes, and pushed my cock past her lips and into her pussy. I barely had the head in when she gasped. I didn’t know if it hurt her or felt good, but she didn’t stop me, so I kept going. I pushed in further. At about a third of the way in, I felt like I couldn’t go anymore. It was so tight, I felt that if I’d gone further, I would seriously hurt her.

“Deeper,” she said when I stopped. I went deeper. At about halfway, I realized what all the fuss was about. There was no other feel like fucking a pussy. It was incredible. At two-thirds of the way in, I pulled back out, then back in two-thirds, out, in, out in, going progressively faster with each thrust. I already felt like I might cum. But I couldn’t. I had to last. For her.

She contorted her face as I fucked her. It was beautiful. I kept my eyes on her the entire time, watching her face. I thrusted my hips, faster and faster. She lied there, taking it, enjoying every inch.

“Deeper,” she said.

“Are you sure?” I asked.

“Yes.”

I pushed every inch of my cock inside of her, causing her to gasp. She grabbed the sheets and she tilted her head back. She let out a moan.
“Oh, fuck,” she said. She was not expecting that, whatever it was.

I continued to fuck her with every inch, faster, but still gently. I really thought I might cum. I had to take my mind off of it somehow.

I thrusted, trying to think of other things--running, clothes shopping, air travel--stuff I hated. It wasn’t working. I couldn’t keep my mind away from this moment. Why would I want to?

“Okay,” Amber said, somewhat unable to control her breathing. I pulled out, and she sat up, pushing me over so that I was now on my back. She mounted me, straddling me at my waist, her warm, wet pussy resting against my stomach. She bent down and kissed me.

Sitting back up, she slid back, lifting herself up slightly. She hovered over my cock for a moment, and took it in her hand. She held it and she slowly lowered herself, guiding it in.

She lowered herself onto my cock, inch by inch. She got it all in, shuddering at she did so. Her pussy lips were now right up against my pubic bone. I was buried. She had that look of beautiful agony on her face and she pushed herself up again, then lowered herself down. Up, down. Up, down. I was now clenching the sheets, closing my eyes, tilting my head back. It felt amazing. There was nothing in the world like it. Her tight pussy, clasping down as it massaged my shaft and tickled my head.

Up, down. Up down. She did this slowly about ten times, before starting to pick up speed. She went faster and faster, soon making a clapping sound as she went down. I didn’t want to cum yet. I knew, once I came, it was going to take a while for me to start back up again.

“You’re gonna make me cum,” I said again. She lowered herself one more time, then stopped. But she didn’t get off. Instead, she just grinded her pussy against my pubic bone, my cock buried deep inside her. I could feel my cock moving around inside her pussy, pushing on the smooth, silky walls. She went in circles, then back and forth. Then in circles, then back and forth, all the while my cock balls deep inside her pussy. I was going to cum in a few seconds.

“Stop!” I yelled. I think I startled her, but she hopped off as quickly as possible. It was a close call, but I didn’t cum. “I’m sorry, I just don’t want to cum yet. I want this to last.”

She didn’t say anything. She just bent over and put my cock in her mouth. It was so sudden, I flinched. In no time at all, she had my whole cock in her mouth. She wasn’t quite deep throating, but she was close. And then she did. She deep throated me. It was the weirdest feeling. I could feel the back of her throat. But it felt incredible. She’d obviously given head plenty of times before.

She sucked and sucked, harder and faster, stroking me at the same time. I was getting close. This time, however, I wasn’t going to worry about it. I was ready to cum I’d waited long enough. Plus, it wasn’t in her pussy, so there was no real risk.

She sucked and stroked, sucked and stroked. “I’m gonna cum!” I said. At that, she took my entire cock and went balls deep. I grabbed her hair as I exploded in her mouth. I could feel the pressure from my cum hitting the back of her throat. She gagged a little bit, but didn’t take it out. She just let me cum...and it was a lot of cum. It had been building up for nearly an hour now. I was surprised I didn’t have blue balls!

When the cumming subsided, she pulled my cock out of her mouth and licked me clean. She swallowed my semen.

She lied next to me and we wrapped out arms around each other. I could tell she wanted to kiss me, but she was being polite--she had, after all, just drank my bodily fluids. So I kissed her. I didn’t mind.

We broke apart, and lied there, her snuggled up against me, my arm around her.

“I love you so much,” I said.
“I love you, too.”
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I woke up to the sound of her breathing right next to me. We were still both completely naked, our bodies together, still kind of sweaty. I watched her sleep for a minute, then I kissed her on the forehead and closed my eyes to go back to sleep. However, that’s not what I did.

“Alex?” I heard her small voice whisper.

“Yeah?” I didn’t mean to wake her.

“Are you ready to go again?” These words alone made my cock stand up.

“What do you think?” She looked at my cock and laughed.

We remained lying there for another minute or so. “I want you to take me from behind,” Amber said, still kind of whispering. I was taken aback.

“What? Like...like anal?”

“No,” she laughed. Just fuck me from behind. With that, she turned over and lied flat on her belly. She stuck her ass in the air. I pushed myself up (I was still kind of tired), and got on my knees. Her pussy was spread open for perfect access. It was beautiful.

This time I spent no time wasted. I put my cock in her, slowly at first, then I thrust it in her. She moaned. I thrust again. She moaned again. I fucked her nice, warm, wet, tight pussy from behind for a good two minutes. She moaned louder and louder. Something in this position hit her. She was enjoying it far more than the other positions. I couldn't complain, either. Her butt was pointed directly at me. I squeezed it over and over. I even spanked it a couple times

I fucked her fast. “Harder!” she yelled, trying to catch her breath. I started fucking her harder. Strangely enough, I wasn’t even close to cumming. I think because I had to focus on body strength more. That, plus I’d just came shortly before.

She was moaning uncontrollably. Every now and then, she would say something, and it would be tough for her to get out. “That f--feels--good”, or “Righ-t th--there”. She was having some amazing sex. I, on the other hand, wasn’t getting much out of it. I didn’t care, though. Pleasuring her was just as--if not more--important as my own pleasure.

After a few minutes, she lifted herself up on all fours. She remained that way for a while.

“I’m gonna cu--cum,” she said. I didn’t hear her.

“What?”

“I’m gonna--cum!” No sooner did she say that than she arched her back and screamed. She was shaking as her pussy grasped my cock, pulsating as she shook. After the orgasm stopped, she flopped down onto the bed, off of my cock, breathing heavier than ever before. “Oh fuck,” she said. “Oh fuck. Oh fuck.” She said it with every deep breath she took.

She got up on her knees and said, “Your turn.” She pushed me down so I was on my back and mounted me. She immediately guided my cock into her pussy, lowering herself. It took her a bit, but she soon got the entire thing in. She proceeded to ride me like a cowgirl.

I rubbed her thighs as she bounced up and down on my cock. She moaned each time she came down on it. With her fucking me and moaning at the same time, I was as turned on as I was going to get. I felt my orgasm coming on.

“I’m gonna cum!” I said. She didn’t stop. “Amber, I’m gonna cum!” She stopped bouncing, and stayed on my cock, balls deep. I was buried, about to cum. “Amber!”

“Cum in my pussy, Alex,” she said in the dirtiest way.

I shot my load up inside her. It took her a moment, but she felt it.

“I can feel it,” she said, looking me dead in the eye. I shot about four or five times, my cock pulsating inside her pussy. She had her beautiful agony face on again. She leaned over and kissed me, long and slow. “I love you,” she said.

She rolled off of me and snuggled up against me one more. I held her in my arms as we fell asleep, my cum still deep in her pussy.


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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 10:39
    Loved it great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 12:17
    The build up was a little long, but it did not take way from the story. Great sex no doubt.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 12:25
    Great story I really enjoyed reading it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 15:15
    It's a very good and, for the most part, a well written story and It's not too lengthy. You wrote a nice preface but the story ended way too abruptly. A concluding summary of just a sentence or two would have been a big improvement.

    Also your local geography is way off. Toluca Lake is much, much farther than a 10-minute drive from the Santa Monica Pier. I know this is just a technicality but factual errors can be a distraction in a story like this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 15:32
    Was amazing, i loved it. Keep It Up :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 15:33
    Was amazing, i loved it. Keep It Up :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 16:03
    Was amazing, i loved it. Keep It Up :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 16:41
    i love stories like this because it reminds me of my first time with my girlfriend, great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 19:59
    MY KIND OF GIRL !!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2012 20:10
    I WOULD LIKE TO FIND ONE JUST LIKE HER I WOULD DIE A HAPPY MAN!!! THE CLIT MASTER!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 02:14
    you are so lucky... 100/10 stars

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 04:32
    I thought the stroy was orgasmic

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 05:36
    Eh yo dat was a good 130 am read for me and 20 other guys hahah on a hockey road trip;)
    #kenaihockeybros

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 06:02
    Wow, a girl in this day and age who knows who Frank Sinatra is? You've got a keeper there, man.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 13:36
    Oh yeah, I have to say the same thing about the taxi ride from Santa Monica to Toluca Lake area, had to be about $80 or $90 plus the wait time while you walked her to the door. Then your ride to your home, had to make that ride close to $150 plus tip. Plus the dinner and other incidentals, had to make that date over $250. So you didn't say what it was that you did for a living. You must have a really great job, making enough that spending $200 bucks or more on just one date. That's called makin' a good first impression. Excellent story. I hope your life with her turns into the success my life with my wife has been. OVER 45 years.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 14:11
    excelent story. am so happy for you

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 15:09
    i really liked this story.please continue writing more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 16:22
    how old were you and your girlfriend at that time?

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2012 16:23
    we want to read more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2012 05:01
    truly awesome...hell.yeah damn awesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2012 13:54
    that was an unbelievable story. write another soon!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2012 18:06
    You have excellent writing skills. Please keep writing. I'm sure there is much more you can tell us about your relationship. Your story has a very good ratio between the love story aspect and the eroticism. Keep that in mind when you make any future endeavours.

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  • niceguy4life
    22.01.2012 20:52
    wonderful, a truley belivable story thanks for posting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2012 15:09
    thats truly awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2012 18:32
    I like it. Please write more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2012 15:34
    Great starting and perfect explanation....
    Best of luck for your next text and as a regular reader i would like to advice you to maintain good ratio between romance and sex.
    keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2012 23:00
    Couldn't stop reading even through all of your overwhelming admiration of amber. But other than that it was great!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.01.2012 18:39
    THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORY ON HERE I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE PARTS

    10/10

    ;; JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.01.2012 23:25
    A very good story with the balance of romance and sex just about perfect. However, do not use "she lied next to me." Rather, use "she lay next to me."

    Keep up the good work and I hope to read more from you in the future.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.01.2012 11:50
    well i think u have read manga "100% perfect girl"coz some lines which u hv written r similar to that if not try reading that manga on 'mangahere' i hope u will enjoy it :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.01.2012 04:18
    Hey me frm india.. A fab stry.. Wana cntct u ..

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.01.2012 16:04
    i have never read any sex story till the end because all of them are almost same but you have written this story in a perfect way. Its very difficult to write our own personal experience in words but this story did the impossible. I read this story till the end and its fabolous..!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.01.2012 23:33
    Wow... Simpley amazing. This story is one of the beast storieS I have ever read.YOU ARE GOD!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2012 13:15
    Amazing man just amazing rite more plz

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2012 16:40
    Just a beautiful romantic story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.01.2012 18:19
    Just awful, awful writing.... Probably the worst I've read on this site.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2012 01:26
    Enjoyed this story alot

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2012 06:31
    I wanted to cum while reading this.perfect to make anyone horny

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2012 20:11
    now Ambers version ,it's a must.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2012 23:19
    Umm, when there are veggies in fetuccini alfredo, it is called fetuccini prima vera

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2012 00:02
    Amazing romantic story. You're a good writer, knowing what details should be put in. *****

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2012 01:23
    so sweet and got me so wet ! :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2012 01:32
    This got me really horny i love it

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2012 08:23
    Really great story!!

    (=':'=)

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2012 09:02
    etetwwtetwetwtwtwett

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2012 13:12
    Really nice. Great story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2012 20:13
    The best story I have read so far

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 11:33
    Wow. One of the best stories I've read! I had some similar memories while reading this about my girlfriend when I was 18-20. I was deeply in love with her and although sex is almost always good, when you're in love it's the absolute BEST! My GF didn't care for oral at the time and I felt kind of perverted asking if I could go down on her. She tolerated it and I got my first 'scent of a woman' which offended me for about 3 seconds until I was suddenly possessed by her entire body. I still love Jenny to this day and will always have sweet memories similar to this story. This was a true LOVE story and I applaud the author. 10 out of 10 from me!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 13:16
    Wow, that was an incredible story dude. You're very lucky! If it's alright with you guys, I'd love to read more stories! :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 13:18
    that was well wicked, hoping for a similar experience myself! ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 15:44
    Soooo Sexy!(; im Superr Horny right now!(; haha, plzz write more and u and her(:

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 16:23
    I must say that this is one of the most well written stories on this site. I actually felt the emotions your characters portrayed. Bravo. Thank you you for sharing that with us and I wish the two of you many happy years together.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 16:27
    Best thing Ive ever read. This is art right here. Your an amazing writer. and such a great cute story. I wish you guys nothing but amazing happiness.(: It sounds like you guys have something true, real true love here. It doesnt happen often. especially for two virgins cherish it guys. My boyfriend and I do. Please write another, this was genuinely the best thing Ive ever read. Makes me want to show it to an editor of a book to make a story out of you guys.(: Keep writing!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 16:33
    Great story ... Hoping the best for u

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 16:34
    Great story ... Hoping the best for u

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 16:34
    Great story ... Hoping the best for u

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 17:10
    I must say that this is one of the most well written stories on this site. I actually felt the emotions your characters portrayed. Bravo. Thank you you for sharing that with us and I wish the two of you many happy years together.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 17:34
    Was a great story no arguing with that but your favoutite films titanic, dude seriously?

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 19:33
    Your talent is evident. That was beautiful.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 23:01
    Amazing story man. You give me the confidence to just walk up to a random beautiful girl and ask her out :) best wishes in your relationship.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.01.2012 23:59
    wow man fucking good story i envy you man you one lucky guy

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 00:00
    The best story I've ever read... <3

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 01:58
    10/10 screw anyone else who says anything different

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 07:22
    Really amazing I loved every second of it

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 09:01
    The most emotional, beautiful and amazing stories on this site!!! purely amazing! <3

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 19:56
    10/10 WOW. Beautifully written. Once I started to reading this, I got so woundup in the story. Please, another chapter or two.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.02.2012 20:00
    Wow that was... Beautiful

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.02.2012 15:16
    i loved this story.its the first one ive read on this website bit i have a strong feeling its gonna be my favorite one(:

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.02.2012 15:18
    i loved this story.its the first one ive read on this website bit i have a strong feeling its gonna be my favorite one(:

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.02.2012 16:59
    Are you still seeing her make another

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.02.2012 17:00
    Are you still seeing her make another

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  • thom0128
    02.02.2012 22:48
    Great story. She sounds so hot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 01:47
    That is the best story I've ever read, it doesn't make women sound like whores, and it doesn't make it sound like all men want is to pound a woman.
    That is beautiful and VERY well written.
    Good job, I hope your still with this girl, by the sound of this story she makes you extremely happy.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 07:36
    this is the best story which make me cum

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 08:28
    This story is making me wanna fuck som pussy!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 13:55
    its really a great story,

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 18:20
    really good story hope theres apart 2 coming soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 19:29
    Your writing is shit!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 21:56
    Great story.. I'm a sexy 19 year looking for some sexy chat.. please text or call me at 2397284916..

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2012 22:34
    to two comments down: next time, keep your pointless and depraving comments to yourself. you know this is a terrific story, and are probably incredibly jealous of the authors writing skill, which you lack, and thus express your discomfort in the form of anger. to XanderTheGreat: i dont think this needs to be said, but great story. i was into it every step of the way. i am also an ass man, and the way you described hers almost had me drooling. the only part i didnt like was that alfredo pasta. that is a dish made for fat old women who watch oprah.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.02.2012 02:18
    damn good story bro. I too had a girl that made me that happy and we had great sex too, brings back memories.

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  • Afont
    04.02.2012 09:12
    Great Story, look forward to reading more about you and your girl. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.02.2012 12:04
    i loved it man its awesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.02.2012 19:55
    Absolutely beautiful! (Amber, I would love to hear this told from your point of view.)

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.02.2012 22:42
    damn good story bro. I too had a girl that made me that happy and we had great sex too, brings back memories

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.02.2012 22:44
    Iam in Auckland NZ. 24 year old male. looking 4 a lady for sex. txt me on 0210721381 if u are keen and if u are here in NZ.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2012 01:12
    omg this is amazing, would love to hear ambers POV as well, great job ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2012 03:49
    what a great story you have to going

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2012 10:30
    Fantastic story, one of the very best I've read on this site.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2012 10:30
    Fantastic story, one of the very best I've read on this site.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2012 14:19
    Very horny 19m txt me 8599058654

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.02.2012 18:38
    Great story, she sounds really hot! You are one lucky man!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.02.2012 15:19
    سكس

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.02.2012 15:19
    سكس

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.02.2012 16:39
    wow, a girl in this day and age who knows jazz, slow dances, and is pretty all at the same time - you've got a keeper there pal

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.02.2012 16:40
    wow, a girl in this day and age who knows jazz, slow dances, and is pretty all at the same time - you've got a keeper there pal

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  • Ed+Itor
    07.02.2012 13:43
    It is layed beside me not lied.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.02.2012 20:48
    You are one of the luckiest guys ever.....don't let this one get away...sounds like you guys were meant to be

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.02.2012 20:50
    You are one of the luckiest guys ever.....don't let this one get away...sounds like you guys were meant to be....hope I'm as lucky as you

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.02.2012 23:11
    *reads about true love* Some faith in humanity has been restored

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.02.2012 23:12
    *reads about true love* Some faith in humanity has been restored

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 16:34
    You could easily and should definately turn this into a movie. :) It's a lengthy piece of writing, a great one, but it would be much more easy to take in visually media-wise.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 20:30
    crazy good story... i have a hard time believing its true, but if so, you've got quite the catch

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2012 21:41
    I thought she was a virgin, but you said nothing about her hymen breaking

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2012 20:54
    My story was similar to this but it took about 3months to finally get laid.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.02.2012 23:42
    very good story,lengthily but very well told

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2012 05:02
    True story?!!!.....yeah right!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.02.2012 21:08
    lolll i saw his fb too this is not a true story loll

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.02.2012 18:50
    Ya wut bout hymen she not virgin

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.02.2012 20:41
    2 the little ones complaining about the hymen...some are so fragile they can brake durring something as mild as riding a horse. not a running one i might add.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2012 22:55
    I had to look it up to be sure, but its actually "laid", not "layed", nor "lied". Though in some of its instances the proper use is "lay".

    Awesome story. I absolutely love well written stories that focus on the build up, the relationship and the details surrounding the sex act(s).

    As many have also said, I would love to read the retelling of this story from Amber's point of view.

    Secondly, I am hoping for further chapters. Thanks, and keep up the great story telling.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 06:47
    Its obvious that a girl wrote this. Just saying. The discriptions of the girl's dress was a dead give-away.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.04.2012 10:47
    That was the best straight story that I have ever read. Please write lots more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2012 19:22
    Everybody who keeps going on about her hymen breaking is annoying me
    She probably used tampons!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.05.2012 16:58
    hey Xander can I fuck Amber?

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.07.2012 23:32
    Holy awesomeness... I think I fell for her a little bit too.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2012 01:28
    Great story I hope you are not done writing about these two.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2012 19:16
    Who doesn't LOVE a good, well written love story, especially when it's mostly true. Would love to see more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2012 20:49
    Lol I loved this!!!! most of these story's are shit .your really refreshing :-)!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2012 00:36
    It 'as fucking hot. Believing its true and imagining its all happening with u really excites one. Incredible, its worth the length.!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2013 16:05
    Awesome you should make more like these

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2014 01:13
    Cool story. If it's really true you are a lucky guy and wish you the best. I had an awesome girl like that, slim w a bit of feminine muscle, about 5'9", 130lbs, long brunette hair, blue eyes, long shapely legs, B cup tits, but with a cowboy cheerleader butt, and awesome in bed. Her only problem was that she was very insecure, which eventually led to our breakup. Thanks for share again!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.02.2015 02:22
    Very nice story. I really enjoyed reading it. It was definitely worth the length!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.02.2015 15:02
    You don't marry this girl, I'll personally shoot you myself

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2015 17:40
    Serious men, if you break this girl's heart, I'll break your neck

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.04.2015 09:30
    Soo nice enjoyed alot

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2015 20:02
    MY DUCK IS HARD

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2015 18:03
    Loved it I'm so wet right now

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2015 10:31
    Should this be a true story, u must...i mean u must marry this girl. Ur story's very dope, though. Nice piece.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2015 14:43
    What a lucky guy to find such a wonderful, sexy girl. I hope this relationship blossomed and you married her. It would be a real shame if the couple broke up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2015 23:32
    That was a great story! Thanks for sharing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.07.2015 20:51
    Wish I could change places with you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2015 08:07
    Awesome story ! I enjoyed it so well

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.09.2015 07:01
    Write down on hindi only

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2015 19:35
    nice one, don't break up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2015 17:25
    It Was Very Good N I Like It

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.01.2016 09:08
    Best story I've read on here. Just amazing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.01.2016 04:17
    Boring

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2016 20:26
    Superb story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.01.2016 06:34
    Great story. Write more!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.02.2016 14:00
    Seriously, you make this girl cry or let her go. I'll personally shoot you myself

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2016 03:57
    Best story I've read on this site in a long time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.04.2016 13:14
    the story made me have a hardon like never before.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.05.2016 06:36
    It was so good I put my dick away.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2016 12:02
    Wife her.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2016 23:47
    So many comments on this nice (~but too long~) love story that lsome have forgotren that the bio says it was written by a woman.

    /jab

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.07.2016 05:31
    You paint such vivid pics. I felt as if I could see and feel everything that you were expressing. I loved it and will be looking for more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2016 03:34
    That was great,true story!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.11.2016 06:45
    Awesome story. I loved it. Hope you make more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.11.2016 14:51
    IT IS VERY FINE I WOULD LIKE THESE TYPE OF STORIES

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2016 20:19
    I loved it! You me feel like I was the one making love to her! I hope you have more true stories like this one. Dg on stop writing.

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  • TheBourneOgraphy
    29.11.2016 07:37
    Ayy my nigga Hitch comin in clutch with the dating advice.
    Make more pls.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2016 09:22
    This sounds exactly like my first time...everything exactly. .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.01.2017 13:21
    This was an excellent story and one of the things that made it so good is you brought the reader into the story with you. Anybody that has been truly in love would feel the emotion of this story as it hits home to all of us. The next best thing about the story is that it didn't focus on cheap sex. You took your time to build the mood. Once again for those of us that have truly loved our partner this strikes home.
    Wonderful story. One question. Did you marry this girl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2017 13:17
    I wonder what will come of my first time but being like that will be a blessing.Very .

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  • Doozy+woof+Hunter
    08.11.2020 17:48
    GREAT story!! Romantic, more than sexual - but enough sex...Well done!!

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