Comments Chat TOP rating Top 300

стрелкаNew stories 68789

стрелкаAnal 12632

стрелкаAsian 1564

стрелкаAss to mouth 3439

стрелкаAuthoritarian 2663

стрелкаBDSM 6033

стрелкаBestiality 2925 +1

стрелкаBi-sexual 5363

стрелкаBlack 1783

стрелкаBlackmail 1860 +1

стрелкаBlowjob 17691

стрелкаBody modification 1169

стрелкаBoy 1700

стрелкаCheating 4015

стрелкаCoercion 2220

стрелкаConsensual Sex 14544 +5

стрелкаCuckold 1075

стрелкаCum Swallowing 7627

стрелкаDark Fantasy 5290

стрелкаDeath 785

стрелкаDiary 2845

стрелкаDiscipline 853

стрелкаDomination/submission 3419

стрелкаDrug 931

стрелкаErotica 3508

стрелкаExhibitionism 2823

стрелкаExtreme 881

стрелкаFantastic 2201

стрелкаFantasy 11824

стрелкаFemale Domination 1068

стрелкаFemale solo 2010

стрелкаFiction 31367

стрелкаFirst Time 4740

стрелкаFisting 291 +1

стрелкаFoot or shoe fetish 241

стрелкаGay 2818

стрелкаGothic 167

стрелкаGroup Sex 2447 +1

стрелкаHardcore 1861

стрелкаHumiliation 1446

стрелкаIncest 9076 +3

стрелкаInterracial 1122

стрелкаJob/Place-of-work 1118 +2

стрелкаLactation 210

стрелкаLatina 180

стрелкаLesbian 3137 +1

стрелкаMale / Female 6342

стрелкаMale Domination 453

стрелкаmassage 191

стрелкаMasturbation 2113

стрелкаMature 954

стрелкаMind Control 613

стрелкаMonster 270

стрелкаMurder 179

стрелкаNon-consensual sex 918

стрелкаNon-Erotic 650

стрелкаOral Sex 3098

стрелкаPoem 453

стрелкаPregnant 436

стрелкаProstitution 317

стрелкаRape 1009 +1

стрелкаReluctance 652 +1

стрелкаRomance 2121

стрелкаSchool 780 +1

стрелкаSex Joke 689

стрелкаSlavery 238

стрелкаSpanking 288

стрелкаTeen 4476 +3

стрелкаThreesome 683

стрелкаTorture 147 +1

стрелкаToys 233

стрелкаTranssexual 243

стрелкаTrue Story 11349

стрелкаViolence 398 +1

стрелкаVirginity 673 +3

стрелкаVoyeurism 577

стрелкаWater Sports/Pissing 214

стрелкаWife 621 +1

стрелкаWritten by women 813


Sex games

Necrophism PT1

Author: Morbidreams

Date: 10 September 2004

Anal, Dark Fantasy, Gothic, Group Sex

  • Font:

Картинка к рассказу

Title: Necrophism PT1
Author: Morbidreams

Comments: MORBlDreams@aol.com
--------------------------------------

Amber glided easily between the rows of headstones, the Magnolia trees and the oaks hanging heavy with Spanish moss. She walked slowly through the graveyard, enjoying the warm breeze and the way the light of the full moon broke through the trees lighting her way. This graveyard was the only thing she liked about this shit whole town in southern Alabama. She could feel the night calling to her as she walked, hearing the crickets, an owl and the soft padding of her footsteps.

She wore her knee-high leather boots, ripped fishnet stockings, black satin mini-skirt, and black corset. Her pale white skin gleamed through rips in her skirt and her stockings, and her silver rings glistened from her fingers and Ankh hung around her neck. Her ears were pierced six times each her left eyebrow had two rings, her lip three rings, her nose had one through the right nostril and her tongue had a barbell, and if her mom would let her she would pierce quite a few more places as well.

“Damn, it sucks being seventeen” Amber thought, “especially in this hick ass town. Fuck, at least the hicks leave me alone.”

As she got closer to the grave she was looking for in the older part of the cemetery, she could hear some faint music coming from the distance. “Dumb ass hicks throwing a party in that cow shit infested old barn again,” she thought to herself. And it was spring break too, which would mean all the collage losers from this town would be back since they didn’t have anywhere else to go.

It didn’t matter, they could all get drunk and high over there in that barn and puke their hearts out, but she had work to do in the grave yard. All, she needed was just a few things from on of these old stone sarcophagi, or more correctly from what was in them. She was sure some of the older ones would have some nice bones in them that she could use for one of her spells.

Finally, finding a nice large stone sarcophagus that looked promising, she set her back pack down and pulled out a crow bar. It took her a few minutes of straining before she was able to remove the lid. As the lid slide off it caught on her skirt tearing it to her belt, revealing the black thong she was wearing, and her pale rounded ass. She cursed thinking about how much she loved the skirt, but it was nothing a few safety pins wouldn’t fix. Removing the wooden lid from the coffin underneath was a bit quicker.

Bending over and reaching into the Sarcophagi she picked up a femur, and examining it deciding that it would do for her “spell.”

“hoooooooooly FUCK! Look at what THIS sick bitch is doin!” Someone yelled from behind Amber causing her to freeze in her place.
“Shit damn, boys! I always knew she was a freaky little witch.” She heard another voice say and she slowly turned around to see five members of the football team and two who had graduated last year.
“hmmmm. Nice ass though.” Said another, and she mentally cursed the tear in her dress again.
“yeah she does.” Said one of the others reaching out for a feel.

“Oh fuck,” she thought. She would never live this down, sure they all knew she was a freak and she kind of liked that because it scared some of them and the rest left her alone even though they called her a “slut”; but she didn’t like the thought of them staring at her practically bare ass. And, worse, she definitely didn’t want some drunken hicks pawing at her she thought as she quickly slapped his hand away.

“Fuck you bitch, you’re the one showin off your ass!” He yelled at her.
“Damn, I don’t think she likes you, man.”
“I’ll make the bitch like me.” He said as he started to move toward her.
“Get the fuck away from me assholes!” She screamed at them as the slowly closed in on her.

She turned to run, but before she could even take a step he had grabbed her tightly by the arm. With force he spun her around and threw her against another sarcophagus; bending her young body over it at the waist and forcing her ass back into him. Her torn skirt hung open allowing her bare ass to rub against his rough jeans, her little thong offering no protection. She felt his strong hands close over her mouth before she could even think about screaming, almost as if he had read her mind.

The other boys leapt toward her as if on cue. One grabbed each of her arms and pulling them wide; her hand still held the femur. Another pressed her chest and head hard against the top of the sarcophagi. She could hear the others laughing as they went through her back pack, and dropped its contents on the tomb by her head. A large ceremonial knife, several black candles, a skull from another tomb she had visited before, a book dedicated to the dark arts, incense. She could feel others hands on her as well, some were untying her corset she knew, others she felt pulling her legs wide exposing her to the boy holding her down from behind.

Amber felt a hand sliding between her legs pressing up against her crotch, she didn’t even know who’s hand it was; it could have been any one of the seven. She felt a hard yank and her thong was torn from her body and she knew her unguarded cunt and ass was now pressed up against one of her assailants. She shivered with the horror; knowing that she was about to be gang raped, and shivered again with the morbid thought of it happening in a cemetery. What an appropriate place for the last of her innocence to die.

She felt the hard, rough stone of the sarcophagus on her breasts rubbing cruelly on her nipples as they finally removed her corset from her young body. The cold stone pressed against her, and immediately her nipples hardened from the sensation. She felt it rubbing against her thighs and belly, pressing in on her. She had often dreamed that this is how her “Dark Master” would take her. The boys forced Her mouth open, and some cloth was pushed in. She slowly realized that it was her panties, or at least what was left of them.

She screamed into them and the hand pressed against her mouth as she felt fingers begin to force their way into her pussy, and she promised herself she wouldn’t cry. She could feel them inter her young cunt, pumping in and out; and then slowly another forced its way into her ass; and she bucked back. She had used candles on her own pussy and ass before when masturbating imagining her body being used by a deamon or vampire. Yes, Amber imagined herself being raped by those monsters, but it was just imagination, FANTASY; and this was very, very real.

Suddenly she realized the fingers that were raping her pussy and ass had left her, and something else was pressing into her, forcing her cunt lips wide. It must be the boy behind her, it was his penis, she realized; it had finally begun. She felt him slowly push inch after inch into her, and then with force he slammed his whole cock deep into her. His cock ripping through her hymen, and stole her virginity. Again and again he rammed into her as she heard the other boys laughing at her humiliation. With despair Amber realized she heard more than seven boys laughing, word must have gotten back to the party about her being here for the taking. How many had come she wondered? How many would take her? How many would abuse her young body, humiliate and rape her?

Again and again he rammed into her, and then she felt something pressing against her ass and knew it was one of her black candles. Her ass slowly stretched to accommodate it, just as her pussy had spread to take his cock. She felt his pace speed up, his thrusting pelvis rapidly hammering into her as he pushed the candle deep into her. Finally she felt him grunt, and she tried to scream out as she felt him cum deep in her pussy. He slid out of her; cum dripping from his now flaccid cock and her pussy, and he was quickly replaced by one of the other guys. The first guys cum and Ambers own blood began to trickle down her leg.

This one had an even larger cock, and she figured he was one of the college guys. At least this one slid into her deflowered pussy easier thanks to the cum from the first guy. She could feel the candle still deep in her ass wiggling with every thrust of that mans hips. She felt his balls slapping against her with the force of his every thrust. Finally he came exploding, forcing his cum into her tight little cunt. With a slurping sound he pulled his cock out of her, she could feel his and the first guys cum erupt out of her used, sloppy hole and run down her spread legs. The next guy wasted no time in taking the other guys place, easily slipping into her sopping, cum filled cunt.

Another guy, and then another guy took her; filling her with his cum. Some of them would use the candle to fuck her ass, others would just leave it in her as they used her cunt. She had no idea how much cum was filling her young pussy and running down her legs. Her cunt felt like it was gaping open, they must have been fucking it for over an hour now. Occasionally she would see a flash of light, and realized someone was taking pictures with one of those disposable cameras. They were no longer even holding her down, she was just laying there with her legs spread wide open as they took turns. Amber had accepted her fate; she would lay there and let them use her young body again and again.

She moaned softly as she felt the next guy remove the candle from her ass, she almost felt empty with it gone until she realized with horror what that really meant. She grunted with force as his large cock rammed it’s way into her ass; her thong flying from her mouth with the force of her grunt. More cum spilled out of her over filled, well used pussy and ran down her legs with each thrust. She could hear the guys around there and a couple girls voices laughing as her ass was deflowered. Finally and with much force he filled her ass with his hot cum. When he pulled out, he quickly pushed the candle back into her ass so that none of his cum escaped before passing her off to the next guy.

The next several guys also use her ass, and when the last one was done the candle easily slide into her ass and hung there loosely. She figured she must have been fucked by 16 or so guys now, and thought they must still be coming from the party for some young tail. Her bowels were beginning to feel full with her cum enemas and she knew the only thing holding all that cum in her ass was the candle. She could actually feel some of the cum sliding around the candle, and begin to run down her ass. She knew her anus must be nice and loose now.

The next guy made her stand up and she felt the candle just drop from her gapping sphincter. Cum burst out of her with an explosion and she heard everyone laugh again as it ran down her legs and dripped out of her gapping ass. She thought it was over until she felt his cock begin to slide into her loosened ass, and then saw another one of the guys step in front of her and she knew then that they were both going to use her. She felt both of those massive cocks penetrate deep into her well used holes, thrusting in and out of her. She felt as if she was in a trance, and barely felt the cocks as they slide in and out of her with ease.

She could barely stand as they held her between them, thrusting in and out of her. Amber felt the one in her cunt cum in her, and then his cum drip out of her abused pussy. No sooner had he finished, than he was replaced by another. Then the one in her ass finished, exploding in a forceful thrust deep into her, and she groaned out. He too was replaced by another as more of the guys took their turn filling her two holes simultaneously and cumming into her, stretching her, using her young petite body.

The guys were enjoying ramming her as hard as they could, trying to get her to grunt from their thrusts, but she was getting so used to it and so well lubed by all the cum, she was barely noticing their efforts. Finally, the guy in her pussy pulled all the way out to slam his rock hard cock as hard into her as he could… but he missed. His large member slammed, and slid right into her ass; both the guys stopped and looked at each other, knowing they were now both deep inside her ass. She didn’t even make a sound as her ass was stretched by two cocks like that at the same time.

“Oh my god! We’re BOTH in her ass!” One of the guys yelled out, “Quick someone take a picture!”

More flashes went off as the two guys started to use her dirty, gaping ass. The guys pounded into her, again and again reveling in the abusing this young girl that was held helpless between them. Finally they both came, almost at the same time; Amber felt the new cum shoot into her and quickly run out of her hole. They then passed her off to two more guys.

She had no idea how many had used her body when they finally dropped her back on the sarcophagus. Her ass and cunt were numb and she could barely feel the sticky wetness between her ass cheeks and legs. She could hear the four or five people left laughing and talking about how wide her cunt and ass were and how no single man would ever please her, how she probably wouldn’t even feel most guys. She laid there on her belly with her legs spread wide as one of the guys held her pussy and ass open so that someone could take pictures of her gaping, sloppy holes. She had no will to even move, no strength left… … until she felt something hot dripping on her back!

She screamed out as her back was scalded, hot wax from one of her candles splattering over it. She felt rough hands roll her over and recognized one of the former college guys as he stepped between her legs, and held a candle over her body. She barely felt his cock as it entered her gaping, well used cunt; but she definitely felt the hot wax as he began to drip it on her bare, young breasts. She could feel her nipples hardening again under the hot wax, raising, begging for more?
Her breath caught as he thrust into her and let some of the wax drip on her clit, it didn’t matter that the two or three other boys were laughing at her humiliation and debauchery. The older man thrust again and again into her, roughly, forcefully enjoying her looseness. Cruelly he dripped the wax over her nipples, over her clit, over her navel. And passionately she came under her torture, thrusting her abused cunt into him as her nipples coated in wax pointed to heaven.

The guys laughed evilly with her humiliation. They chuckled as the guy came in her, adding his cum to all the other. She could barely think as this one added his cum to the others, she didn’t even know how many had used her ass or cunt, all she knew was they were full of cum and gaping open and that she would never be the same. The laughed again as the guy pulled out and more cum ran down her legs. She saw more flashes of light as they took pictures of her laying there, spread open and covered with cum.

That was when she felt something large and hard pressed against her gaping pussy, something hard, long, and old. She looked down and saw the sadistic man who had just taken her forcing the large bulbous end of the femur into her cunt. Slowly she watched as her cunt enlarged and took the end, and then more of it slipped into her. She gasped as half of the bone sank into her cunt. And then she gasped as she watched him pick up her ceremonial dagger, and moaned as he pressed the hilt of the dagger against her slick and sticky ass hole. She felt it slide in easily and knew that it was larger than any normal cock. She moaned as even more flashes went off, more pictures taken.

And then the boys left, going back to their party. Leaving her there, covered with the cum of over 30 high school and college guys; covered with hot wax, and her own juices; and stuffed with a femur and her own ceremonial dagger.

Slowly, carefully she reached between her legs and felt where the bone and the dagger entered her, felt their cum, and how stretched open she was. She realized that even these large objects didn’t hurt her, but aroused her. And then she thanked her dark lord for her humiliation as she slowly began to pump the femur in and out of her cunt and knew her spell would be complete when she used it, and then they would pay. They would all pay.

-------------------------------------------
* Epilogue
-------------------------------------------

As Amber gathered her items and tattered clothes to put in her backpack she felt the cum drying on her pussy and ass. She could actually feel the wind as it blue over her gaping holes. She knew that she must look like a complete slut, with her dress ripped open, covered in cum, and her corset torn in such a way that it didn’t completely cover her breast.

As she peddled her bike to her house, she felt the front of the seat slip easily into her pussy and knew that she must be really stretched. She actually liked the feeling, how dirty it made her feel; but that wouldn’t stop her from getting revenge. Those guys would pay, and so would the girls that were there.

She crawled into bed with her clothes still on, and when she woke up her bed was completely soaked with cum from where it had continued to leak and run out of her abused pussy and ass. Amber slowly moved her hand between her legs and felt her aching pussy, sliding 4 fingers easily into it to feel just how loose she was. When she removed them she brought her cum covered fingers to her mouth and licked the foul semen off. She must shower now, and then she would begin work on the spell for her revenge..


106125   1 17766   Rating +7.59 [429] Next part

Add to favorites
  • Complain about a story

    * Mandatory field
Comments 74
  • READER
    READER 500
    10.09.2004 18:03
    that was disgusting i didnt even finish it you are sick

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    10.09.2004 18:08
    A devil of a story

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    11.09.2004 08:57
    cool. the best writen story I have read in a long time

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    11.09.2004 09:31
    Great story, really enjoyed it and looking forward to her spell of revenge. One minor proplem. If she had used candles while masturbating wouldn't her hymen be broken? 8/10

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    11.09.2004 19:45
    nice one ... let's see the next part :P

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    11.09.2004 21:14
    Thank you for the comments. I generally write these when I’m in a dark mood so yes, they will be “disgusting” and I am most definitely “sick”, warped, and or twisted. No apologies; if it says “rape”, expect rape. Hopefully those with dark thoughts and desires similar to mine will enjoy them.

    I actually wrote this one a year or so ago, then decided to make an ongoing story with it so I updated and cleaned it up some. Hopefully I will have part 2 finished in a few days.. or sooner.

    For the hymen/candle part. I probably should have explained that more. Yes, she masturbated with the candle; but no she didn’t push it all the way in… at least not all the way in her pussy.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    12.09.2004 12:59
    awesome! i want to read the next part. Almost makes me wanna continue the story i started a few months ago

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    19.09.2004 00:26
    a kickass story

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    24.09.2004 03:09
    this was a good story cant wait for part 2 keep up the good work

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    13.10.2004 20:53
    lovely story! keep it up. i love your writing

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    04.11.2004 13:17
    Very ah...penetrating story. How soon before the revenge cometh?

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    04.12.2004 20:42
    nice story very nice story i may be a weird twisted sick whore after saying this but that storie turned me on ? is there a specific reason u based the story in alabama? j-w great story i hope to see more

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    09.12.2004 21:35
    I grew up in AL, and was thinking of a particular place while writing this one. I always enjoy hearing from like minded people ~ either sex; so feel free to e-mail me your comments

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    12.12.2004 00:44
    i liked it my girlfiend got really turned on by it and we kind of renanacet parts of it in a local graveard v sick but wow hot

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    11.02.2005 16:49
    Great Story u sick FucK i do believe i came 4 times. So keep up the great WorK o yea next let the girls get in on the action.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    13.02.2005 09:05
    nice i also fuck several time, but fucking is a art. fuck the girl/women/guy dosn't matter to me. i just fuck. if the water not come fire must be come, hehehe

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    15.02.2005 07:52
    Brilliant mate. Really enjoyed it. Only thing that would have improved it would have been a fisting or two...but that's just my kink. Can't wait to read the next part.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2005 17:47
    Good Story
    10/10

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2005 21:56
    verrygood

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2005 17:34
    I love sex and abuse, but this was terrible.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    08.03.2005 19:38
    u r 1 sick pervert , 1/10

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2005 23:01
    well holy shit i just got so fucking disgusted by your dtory that im afraid of water muwahahahahahahahahahahahah...

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    25.03.2005 18:07
    that was kinda kewl but sik

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    27.03.2005 16:26
    dear deities it was the shit 10/10 dude and great wook on the Black Magik

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    31.03.2005 16:20
    Good Story 8/10 because that was a werid Rape Story...

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2005 14:53
    Good story. I hope she kills all of them

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2005 04:19
    Y yEAH!!!! fisting would be good

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    04.05.2005 21:00
    awesoem...man that was really good, keep up the good work dude, this story rules XXXXXXXX

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    09.05.2005 18:33
    Thanks for making me cum

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    20.05.2005 05:19
    thaT WAS something you sholud ask yourself where in your head it came from. it was the sort of thing you look at and wonder its worth. as awritter look at it , its not arousing and you dont use the sex to show anyhting about the charcter besides her willingnes for abuseso relly what works about it besisdes a gross out piece?if your going for gross out alone then yeah absolutetly it works but otherwise work on creating more detailed charcters unlike your 1d rapists or more arousing sex

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    23.05.2005 06:57
    Great story! I just hope she got pregnant and they do it to her again and throw in some scat and beastiality.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    03.06.2005 18:05
    Wow i wish some guys would do that to me that sounds like so much fun the story got me soaked

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2005 02:12
    that shit was fucked up

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    23.06.2005 09:41
    Your story was horrible. It lacked any artistic talent. The young girl was also unrealistic in the fact that "witches" do not practice magic like that. If you're going to write a story like that I suggest knowing what the fuck you're talking about.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2005 20:59
    um ew

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    01.07.2005 03:24
    ok good detail and stuff but i could never do something like to a girl and this story actualy made my hard on go away and i would have killed every 1 of them if i ever saw something like that.if i even herd some 1 talking like that i would have to fucking nock them out.later but you tell a the story good even though i didnt like what it was about.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2005 15:36
    Don't pay any attention to those who knock your story. I personally have read it over many times and have enjoyed it immensely. I do agree with the comment that some fisting would have been nice, but the femur was just as awesome. I look forward to more of you work.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    06.07.2005 13:00
    Dude or dudet, that was very un amusing and it made me even less aroused then I was when I logged on! In lamins terms it was NOT hot at ALL!

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    01.08.2005 05:38
    Your good. Keep it up.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    08.09.2005 04:42
    yea that was shitty as all gey out...if i seen some guys doing that it would fly all over me by god and id me madder than a dog gonin honet son

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    28.09.2005 11:35
    WRITE MORE MAKE THEM FIST IT

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    06.10.2005 23:51
    I love your story,I do agree some fisting is in order.But over all it was awsome.I look forward to reading more of your work.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    14.10.2005 09:27
    Pretty good, People are just complaining because they cant write like that, or they just want to complain about a topic they dont like. so, Good job.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    16.10.2005 01:34
    it was an awsome story and the bone and dagger twist was awsome i enjoyed it vary much and would like to hear more. by the way with the spells you are on the right track but a little off i would read up on the dark arts before decribeing them.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    28.10.2005 05:30
    hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, give em hell girl

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    30.10.2005 21:22
    Very sexy

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    01.11.2005 05:04
    this story is one of my favorits on this site so good job you allso are good at writeing

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    06.01.2006 12:11
    good story the fatansy of rape and humilation was really good

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2006 15:08
    damn were is the part when she kills and beat the guts out of those bastards
    damn she should skin them alive an pop their fucking eyeballs out
    nice story but to unbloody end ;)

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    13.05.2006 02:46
    FUCKING AWESOME!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    15.05.2006 16:01
    Now that was good. That is what I call a gangbang. It would have been even better if they had fucked her throat.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    15.07.2006 10:46
    it was good but i think u should make more to it dont end it like that but it was good as hell ill give u that much

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    15.08.2006 14:02
    Awesome story, I love the double anal. I come to this story often. Keep it up.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    17.08.2006 12:52
    it was really awesome so what kind of spell did she cast. i give it a 12

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    20.08.2006 03:08
    i hope you get raped by a mad goat.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    17.10.2006 01:34
    great story.. a more fitting revenge would be cutting off their dicks and shoving them down their throats

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    08.11.2006 06:27
    If I was at that party, I would have lined up all the guys and said, "Take the ceremonial knife and castrate yourself or I'll shoot it off myself!" And for those who ran, I'd shoot out every joint in their bodies so that they can moap around campus with large chunks of flesh swinging from their zombied-out, ill-mannered lives. Later, I'd hunt down every last one of them-- line the rifle barrel up to the tip of their ass and fire...

    Leave 'em there-- let 'em bleed; suffer-- they'd deserve it.... Fuck 'em!

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    17.11.2006 00:52
    shit

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    04.01.2007 02:19
    dude that was fuckin hilarious it had me cumming every minute keep up the good work

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    01.02.2007 21:16
    Moo

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    31.07.2007 14:25
    That was evil...

    I feel so sorry for her.... what horible people would do that.. my girlfriend is goth.... its disgusting that there are such bastards in the world

    If i was there, I would've shot everyone of the guys, and when they laid dead on the floor, I would've but a stick of dynamite in each of thier mouths, and watch thier flesh fly everywhere as the bomb goes off....

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    31.07.2007 21:52
    you sick tw*t if you can think somethign like that up you deserve to be shot, its not even well written it just some sick, twisted fantasy,
    and it makes me phisicaly sick that anyone could enjoy reading that or that anyone could do that to another person.
    i give i zero.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    08.08.2007 19:54
    I thought it was very well written and I loved it..made me extremly wet. Forget the critisism and keep it up. You have a very twisted and unique way of thinking. If only more people had as much imagination..F*** limits.

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    25.09.2007 02:07
    i thought it was a great story and i hope u write another disscirbin the pain and torment that amber puts all thous goat rappin mother fucking hillbilly inbreed scum through
    i give it a 8/10

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    03.10.2007 17:01
    Very well writen enjoyed readin it keep up the twisted writen

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    13.01.2008 15:47
    All of you complaining about the rape, you're stupid. No you're beyond stupid. This story was labeled as a group sex, rape story. No one forced you to read it. So go take your useless comments else where.

    As to the author great job. I enjoyed your writing and will be reading more later.

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    31.12.2008 02:18
    That was so fucking hot.. I was a goth girl myself at one time and I would have loved to be in her shoes. Especially getting the revenge later. SO wet.. got me off so easily - you're amazing!

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    31.12.2008 02:20
    Oh.. and for all you idiots who wrote complaints about this fictional work - you sick fucks were reading it. No matter what you have to say about it, you did read it and you could have stopped at any time. The story was labelled clearly. If you didn't really want to read about it, your comment wouldn't be there because you never would have clicked on the link. You're just as sick as the rest of us.. you're just too dense to admit it. I think that makes you worse.

    Answer 0

  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2009 00:31
    I quite enjoyed that! Keep up the good writing!

    Answer 0

  • READER
    READER 500
    27.06.2009 21:44
    Very good FANTASY STORY. Obviously you read the story as well READER 2007-07-31. Dude or Dudette, it's just a story, if this is not ur cup a tea, go to another genre....DUH.
    Author, please write more on this, enjoyed it immensely.

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2011 02:27
    I am a female and I will say right now I dont give a flying fuck what any of you have to say about this.... This is the BEST story I have read. Made me wet n hot so fuck yes. Lmfao..... Very nicely put.

    Sinserely,

    Your your ginger girl

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 04:16
    Lool when the guys r punished they should be tortured like this but instead skeletons fucking them in hell as the asses are seared with fire from the skeletons as they plunge deeper until it punctures their heart...and after that they rape theyre souls forever

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 04:18
    Oh btw hmu im always up for roleplay, 619-374-4948

    Answer 0

  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2012 04:18
    Lol i mean 619-378-4984

    Answer 0

Sign Up and leave comment

Last stories by Morbidreams