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  1. 3 Evil Sister-Part 7
  2. 3 Evil Sister- Part 8
3 Evil Sister- Part 8

Author: duskflair

Date: 31 March 2012

Domination/submission, Fiction, Incest, Teen

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Introduction: Thanks to everyone who voted and commented on Part 7. The response was overwhelmingly positive and I was really flattered that everyone enjoyed it so much. The main reasons I write here are because I enjoy it and to see the response from the fans, so if you guys want more stories and want for them to come out faster, the best thing you can do is leave comments, especially ones with feedback. After all, the better the feedback I get, the more I can improve and the more I improve, the better the stories will be that you'll get to read. To the people who weren't pleased that I wrote my own Part 7, just know that I wrote it out of respect for Somestory's excellent series and for the other fans who wanted to see an end to 3 Evil Sisters. If you can't handle that or feel that I am "ripping off" Somestory somehow, please just ignore my stories or treat them like an alternate universe of the Evil Sisters storyline.

Some of you wanted me to tell you a posting schedule for my parts, but unfortunately, I don't feel like I could tell you guys a reliable one right now. I will continue the series unless I post something saying definitively that I am stopping, but as to when each part comes out, it may take more or less time depending on my schedule. I wrote Part 7 in a day, but because of various thing popping up, Part 8 took about a week. Anyways, keep checking in and I'll do my best to get the next part out as soon as possible. A lot of blood and sweat and cum go into making these (only half joking), so I hope you guys like them. Now, sit back, relax, and enjoy the ride.
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I woke up smelling pancakes and syrup. I opened my eyes and sniffed again. Definitely pancakes and syrup. I had my arm around Riley, my nose almost touching her long, blonde hair. She was laying on her side, breathing in and out slowly. I turned over to look at my clock which was still on the floor. The numbers were blurry, so I blinked a few times to clear my vision. 10:14. We had really slept late, but I guess that's what Earthquake holidays are for.

For a few minutes, I just lay in bed, enjoying the sensation of being pressed against Riley's warm, soft body. I thought about what had happened, about hearing Riley tell me that she was in love with me and about her promising to be there for me from now on. It kind of felt like something I'd been missing had suddenly turned up, or like I'd gotten a puzzle piece to finally fit into place. It was a nice way to wake up.

Yawning, I climbed out of bed, stood up, stretched. As I pulled my arms up over my head, I felt my morning wood rub against my boxers. I turned my head to look back at Riley. If someone was cooking, that meant at least Mom was up, but if I woke Riley, she'd probably be willing to help take care of a little morning wood. At the same time, she looked so happy and peaceful wrapped up in my bed that I didn't want to wake her. I stretched my arms wide and felt my cock tense as I did so.

"Nice." A throaty voice said from the doorway. I turned and saw it was Izzy. She came in, shut the door behind her, and walked towards me. "Want some help with that?"

"Isn't Mom up?" I asked, taking a step back as my sister pursued me.

"She's downstairs cooking brunch for Riley's birthday. Now..." She reached out and hooked the waistband of my boxers with her finger. "How about a little appetizer."

"Izzy, not here!" I whispered. "Riley's asleep."

"So what? She's watched us fuck before."

"I don't want to wake her up."

"So be quiet." She sank down on her knees and pulled my boxers down to my ankles. She was still in her sweatpants and tanktop from bed and as she kneeled down in front of me, I could see down her shirt. Her d-cup tits were pressed together in the tiny top, leaving a slit of cleavage that made my cock swell just from looking at it. "Mmm." I heard Izzy hum, then I watched her go down on me, sliding her mouth around my cock.

"Unh." I groaned, trying to keep my voice down. Izzy kept gliding down my shaft until her lips were wrapped around the base. Out of habit, I dug my hands into her hair and pulled her down until I felt her nose press against my skin and the tip of my cock hit the back of her throat. I felt her gag, then I let her back up for air. She pulled off me and wiped a line of spit off her mouth.

"You know, I shouldn't even help you out... " Izzy said, wrapping her hand around my my dick. "I should be pissed that you didn't come fuck me last night." She growled, squeezing my dick hard enough that I winced from the pain. Crap. I'd known this was coming. "But I guess even I'd want special treatment on my birthday." Izzy added, glancing at Riley with what almost looked like love. "You can bet you'll be paying me back later though..." Izzy said, looking back at me. "-with interest." Then Izzy started sliding her hand up and down my dick, using her spit as a lubricant.

"Unh. Okay." I moaned as she ran her tongue along my head.

"Okay what?" Izzy taunted me, suddenly pumping her hand up and down my cock and flicking her tongue along the head.

"Okay, Izzy, I'll pay you back."

"And no complaining... no matter how rough it gets." She added. I started to say, 'I promise,' but the words were lost as I felt her mouth slide down my cock again. Within a few seconds, I was pumping into her mouth as her hands grabbed my ass, forcing me forward again and again. Looking down at her, it was easy to see how any man could have a hard time saying no to her. With her short black hair and green eyes, just looking at her was entrancing and her arms were plump, but firm and sculpted. She had smooth, creamy skin that was pale from being indoors so much and her complexion only made her even sexier because it went so well with her hair. And then there her boobs, her enormous, supple, perfectly shaped tits. As Izzy slid her lips back on my cock, I could a glimpse of them through her top and then as she slid back down my shaft, I felt her chest press against my thighs.

"Izzy..." I moaned. She ignored me and ran her tongue around my head, trying me wild and making my hips buck. "Izzy." I repeated, with a little bit more control. Izzy pulled her head back, licked her lips, then looked up, giving me a sultry stare,

"Yes, little brother?"

"Let me fuck your tits." I asked quietly, practically begging with my eyes.

"No." She smiled up at me wickedly, then I remembered that dealing with Izzy was different from Riley. I bent down and wrapped my hand around her chin, digging in just enough to make it a little painful.

"Isabel, fuck me with your tits."

"No."

"Right now!" I ordered her, louder than I meant to be. I reached down with my other hand, grabbed her tank top, and yanked it up, exposing her tits. Now that she'd been harassed enough, Izzy pulled off her top, fully exposing her chest, and leaving her naked from the waist up. Then she craned her head forward a few inches, tucked her chin down, and opened her mouth. The tip of her tongue protruded over her lips and she looked up at me with her green as spit flowed down her tongue, then dripped down between her tits. My cock was going wild at this point, practically screaming to be between those mountains of flesh. From the way Izzy's nipples were puffed up and hard, I could tell she was into it too.

Once her tits had received an ample helping of saliva, Izzy pulled her tongue back into her mouth and placed a hand under each of her tits, then rubbed them together, spreading her saliva around and slicking up her cleavage. Ready, she walked towards me on her knees, then pressed my head to her lips and sucked down my shaft one more time, relubricating my cock. Now that my dick and her dick were both soaking wet, Izzy took hold of my dick and pressed it between her tits as she came forward. Once I touched her chest, she hunched her shoulder forward, pressing her boobs together as much as she could. It felt so warm and soft, I thought my dick would melt. When she knew I was trapped in her cleavage, Izzy let go of the bottom of my shaft and pressed herself against me as she brought her hands up to her tits again, When she had them cupped in her hands again, she pushed her boobs together and I groaned from the pleasure.

"Fuuuuck, Izzy." I said as my head went back. I looked down and saw Izzy grin, then she pursed her lips and mouthed,

"Shh." I swallowed, trying to control myself as Izzy started moving her tits up and down, titty fucking me. Her tits bounced up and down my shaft, with Izzy keeping them pressed together so tightly that her nipples were almost touching. I looked down in awe as her tits rippled and bubbled around my cock, my head disappearing into the crevice and then reemerging from her cleavage pussy.

"Does that feel good, Max?" Izzy asked, her voice thick with arousal.

"Yesss..." I groaned, my head getting light and my cheeks burning. It felt incredible.

"How 'bout this?" I watched as Izzy wrapped her lips around the head of my cock, then swirled her tongue around it as she rubbed her boobs along the shaft.

"Oh, god... Izzy, that feels so good... if you keep doing that... I'm gonna..." She started moving her tits even faster and I felt her tongue press against the tip of my head, her lips wrapped hot around the bottom. "I'm gonna cum, Izzy!" I choked out, barely able to keep my voice down. Izzy lifted her head to see my expression and kept her tits pressed together. My hips were bucking so hard, she didn't have to move them at this point. I felt the irresistible feeling race up my cock and I couldn't take it anymore. I reached forward and grabbed Izzy's boobs, mashing them together as I thrust into her as fast I could.

"UNH!" I yelled as I felt the first wave of cum shoot up. It splattered on Izzy's chin and ran down her throat, before pooling into her chest. I was still cumming when I suddenly heard Mom call up the stairs.

"Izzy, I told you get the others! Breakfast is ready!" Mom yelled.

"Sorry! Max is cumming!" Izzy yelled back to the door, smiling as another shot of cum landed on the side of her face. When I finally stopped cumming, Izzy's face and chest were coated with my cum. She looked up at me, her skin practically glowing with satisfaction. She stood up, walked over to my tissue box, and pulled out a clump of tissues. It seemed like it took half the box, but she finally cleaned all the cum off, then pulled one more out, walked back over to me and wiped my body off as she sucked my dick clean. "Remember, no complaining later." She said, then she stood up and chucked the tissue into my garbage can with all the others. All clean, she walked over to the door.

"Oh," She added, looking back at me as I sank down against my bed. "Breakfast is ready." Izzy smirked at me, then opened the door and walked out. I pulled my boxers back up, covering my now flaccid dick, then I collapsed onto the bed.

"Mmm. 'Morning." Riley whispered as she stirred beside me. Turning over, she wrapped her arms around my neck and smiled. "Did you sleep well, Max?"

"Yeah." I replied, looking deep into RIley's eyes. "It felt so good sleeping with you." I added, then kissed her lips lightly.

"Well.." Riley ran her teeth over her lower lip. "Would you like to sleep with me right now?" She slid her hand down my body until she reached my waistband. I caught her wrist and she looked back up at me, surprised and disappointed.

"I do want to, but Mom's got breakfast ready downstairs. Izzy just came upstairs to get us. And if we don't go down..."

"Ass kicking central. Got it." Riley leaned forward and kissed me again. Feeling her lips pressed against mine, I deepened the kiss, then we both realized we had morning breath. "Egh. Gross." Riley gagged, sitting up.

"I guess we'll save the birthday kisses for later, okay?" I said, sliding off the bed.

"MAX!" Someone called up. When Mom and Izzy raised their voice, they sounded almost identical.

"Coming!" I yelled back.

"Still?" Was the snarky reply- definitely Izzy. I found a comfy shirt in my closet and pulled it on, then I followed Riley downstairs. When I rounded the corner to the kitchen, the sight almost took my breath away. There was a table covered in food- homemade, fresh food. There were three stacks of pancakes in the center of the table, a bowl of fruit, a whipped cream dispenser, two types of syrup, a plate of bacon that looked like it had just come out of the pan, sausage, and even a bowl of scrambled eggs. Mom had even set out our glasses and a carton of orange juice. Seated around the morning feast were four beautiful women, still wearing what I'd seen them in at three in the morning. For a kid who was used to doing all the cooking and getting the crap taken out of him on a daily basis, it felt surreal.

"Come on, Max. We're waiting on you." Mom said, looking at me.

"Oh! Yeah, sorry."

I pulled my chair out and sat down, then we started passing the food around. "We can still go out for dinner tonight like we planned." Mom said, looking at Riley. "But I woke up and thought you might like a homemade breakfast." She added as we sent around the eggs and bacon and sausage.

"Yeah, Mom. This is incredible. Max usually just makes toast and cereal." Riley replied, still looking at the food in astonishment.

"Uh-huh. And what do the rest of you make?" Mom cocked an eyebrow and smirked. All three of my sisters suddenly found things to glance at that weren't our mom. Mom gave a small laugh, then used her fork to point at the stacks of pancakes.

"I made enough of each for you guys to have whatever kind you want. I know Riley's favorite is blueberry, so I did a stack of those. These are banana-chocolate chip like Izzy likes and then I made a plain stack for Ashley and me." My sisters started helping themselves. After they were finished, Mom looked at me.

"What kind do you want, Max?" Mom asked. "Blueberry, chocolate chip, or plain?" I could feel all three of my sisters staring at me, waiting for me to make a decision, but I kept my eyes on the pancakes.

"Um, could I have one of each?" I asked, going for the diplomatic answer. Mom gave me a pancake from each of the stacks, put two plain ones on her own plate, then we started eating. It was really good- even better because I wasn't the one who had to cook it. Mom asked us how school had been. Riley told her about the AP classes she was taking and Ashley gave her a summary of her soccer team's season so far. They'd played well, especially Ashley, but if they didn't win their next two games, they wouldn't make it to States. I told her that my classes were going alright, which was mostly true, and that I really liked my art class. Mr. Edwards was really cool and Gene modelling for me after school was really helpful. I thought I saw a jealous frown pass over Izzy's face when I mentioned Gene, so I moved on as quickly as I could.

"What about you, Izzy? What have you been doing?"

"Oh, y'know, watching the house, taking Max to school, that kind of thing." Izzy replied, trying to sound nonchalant.

"You didn't take any classes this semester?"

"Uh, no. Not this time."

"Where are you working?"

"I'm, uh, still looking." Izzy replied, looking at Mom for a second, then glancing back down at her plate. I felt bad for her. I mean, it was Izzy's fault that she didn't have a job and that she hadn't even tried at the classes she'd taken at the community college nearby, but you could see she was embarrassed. Riley was taking a bunch of AP classes, Ashley was the star on her team, and even I was doing well at Art, but Izzy didn't have a single thing to show Mom, nothing to make her proud.

"What about that job I got you at Rite-Mart?" Mom asked. Izzy practically blanched. I remembered the day she'd come home after being fired or quitting- either way, she didn't have a job after that and I had a bruise on my shoulder for two weeks.

"It didn't work out..." Izzy replied quietly. Everyone who worked at Rite-Mart had to wear these stupid looking vests and a bow-tie... you could hardly blame Izzy for not wanting to work there. Mom started asking Izzy where she'd applied recently and I could see Izzy was getting angry, she was like a cornered animal who was trying to get away, but if Mom kept poking her, she was about to snap.

"So, what do you want to do for your birthday?" I asked Riley, cutting into the conversation.

"Huh?" Riley asked, surprised.

"Y'know, it is your birthday and we have the day off. What do you want to do?"

"Um," Riley paused for a moment, thinking. "It is really nice out today. I'd really like to go on a bike ride, maybe ride out to Langley Park."

"That sounds like fun! We can all go." Ashley said suddenly, she loved being outdoors. Riley and I both looked at her. Neither of us were very eager to spend the day with Ashley.

"Actually, I was thinking it would be just me and Max." Riley replied, her voice tinged with animosity.

"What?! That's not-" Ashley started, but Mom cut her off by putting her hand on Ashley's shoulder.

"I wanted to do some shopping anyways. You and I will have some mother-daughter time."

"Wait- what about me? Am I just home alone?" Izzy added, confused.

"You're going to go job hunting, Isabel." Mom said, giving Izzy a look. Izzy clenched her hands, balling them up into fists. Mom stared at her and Izzy stared right back. I guess most people say their eyes were shooting daggers, but with Mom and Izzy, it was more like claymores.

"Fine." Izzy said finally.

"Good. Then we can all meet back here at six for dinner. Think about where you want to go, okay, Riley?"

"Sure, Mom." The rest of breakfast was pretty quiet. Izzy ate quickly, then stormed off, hot under the collar. Ashley still seemed disappointed that she didn't get to spend the day with us- with me, I guess, but Riley and Mom stayed upbeat and I tried to help out. After everyone was finished, I told Mom I'd do the dishes since she cooked and she, Ashley, and Riley went upstairs to shower and get ready to go out. I'd been so used to do doing the dishes and being alone that washing everything was actually pretty relaxing. When I'd finished, I started the washing machine, then I headed upstairs to shower off as well.

After opening the door to my bathroom, I pulled the my shower curtain out of the way and started the water. I pulled the curtain back to keep the water in and turned on the fan so it didn't get too steamy, then I walked out of the bathroom to give the water time to heat up. I sat down at my desk and filled in a few answers that I knew off the top of my head for my history homework, then I headed back to the bathroom after I figured I'd given the water enough time to warm up.

I could feel the heat as soon as I opened the door. I hung the towel I'd grabbed on the door behind me then started undressing. Once I was naked, I walked over to the shower, pulled the curtains open, and stepped in at the end away from the shower head. I closed the curtain behind me and looked up.

When I saw her, I almost yelled, but somehow I managed to keep myself quiet. Izzy was standing under the water, facing me. Her hair was drenched and hung over her face in wet tangles. The shower poured over her from behind, sending rivulets of water running down her body, highlighting her ample curves. I couldn't stop staring at the way the water cascaded over her shoulders, down between her breasts and then down her body. I could barely see Izzy's eyes through her hair. Beads of water clung to her parted lips, little pants escaping from between them.

"I-Izzy?" I asked. Suddenly, she raised her arms up and stepped toward me. Her right hand slid around my head and grabbed my hair, then she pulled my face to her lips, yanking on my hair.

"Agh!" I yelled, muffled by the kiss, but Izzy ignored me, only shoving her lips against mine even harder. She pressed her glistening body against mine and wrapped her fingers around my left wrist, then brought my hand down between her legs. Her tongue was so deep in my mouth, I could barely breath, but the kiss was so forceful and the feeling of Izzy's pussy getting wet against my hand, that I couldn't stop. I felt Izzy wrap her hand around my dick and milk it till I was rock hard. When I finally had to break apart for air, Izzy attacked my neck, sucking down on my throat and leaving me moaning against the shower wall. Suddenly, I felt a stinging pain and realized Izzy had bitten me, breaking the skin on my shoulder.

"Ow! Izzy, that hurts!" I yelled, pulling my fingers away from her pussy and trying to push her away. She grabbed both of my arms and clamped one of her hands around my wrists, then she started sucking and biting her way down my body, leaving a trail of hickeys that stood out in red relief against my body. Pain and pleasure were being mixed together and I couldn't tell if I was enjoying what was happening any more. But my dick was still rock hard and as reached it, she wrapped her free hand around it and squeezed it till I grunted in pain. Simultaneously, she sucked down on the sensitive skin beside my dick. I squirmed and pulled, trying to get free, but Izzy kept a steel grip on my wrists. As Izzy sucked and pulled on my skin, I moaned in pain and pleasure until finally Izzy released the spot, revealing an already purple spot the size of a large bottle-cap.

"Izzy, what the hell are you doing?!" I asked, finally able to speak coherently.

"Shut up." Izzy snapped back. "Fuck me." She spread her legs and pulled my dick towards her pussy.

"No." I said as she pressed my head against her entrance. "What the hell is wrong with you? Why are you acting like this."

"WHAP!" My head whipped to the side and the right side of my face felt like it was on fire. Izzy had just belted me across the face.

"Izzy, what fucking fuck?! I don't want it like this!"

"You don't get a fucking choice, Max!" Izzy yelled back, then she slapped me again, sending me staggering over the slippery floor. As I stood up, wiping a trickle of blood from my lip, I realized my hands were free now and I was sick of her shit. I looked at Izzy for a second, then I grabbed her arms just under the shoulder and shoved her against the wall.

"You know what? You want me to fuck you? Fine." I pressed my dick against her pussy, then slammed all of my length into her in one thrust. With the water washing away her cum and no prior thrusts to warm up, the sensation was rough and painful. We both let out a grunt of pain, but I was determined to pay Izzy back for the slap. I started pounding Izzy as hard as I could, not even trying to make it feel good for either of us. I wanted her to hurt. She tried to lean forward to kiss me, but I reached up and wrapped my hand around her throat, then I pushed her head against the shower wall.

"Unh!" She grunted, either from me thrusting into her or her head hitting the wall. As we fucked, I kept my hand pressed against her throat, hard enough to keep her from moving and maybe even to make it hard to breathe. Against my will, the thrusts were starting to feel better and better and I could feel Izzy nails going down my back, raking long red lines as she writhed under me. I reached down with my other hand and grabbed Izzy's leg, lifted it up and held her thigh up in the air, making it easier for me to thrust in and out of her pussy all the way. Every thrust felt better than the last one and I lifted Izzy's leg higher and pressed down harder on her throat. Izzy reached up and grabbed my wrists, trying to pull my hand off her throat, but I only responded by fucking her harder.

I could feel I was getting close and as I looked at Izzy, her legs were shaking and she was moaning as much as she could with my hand around her throat. Her tits bounced up and down with every thrust and I felt my balls twitch as Izzy's back started arching.

"Take it!" I yelled, burying my dick in Izzy's pussy. "Take every last drop!" For the next thirty seconds, Izzy's body shook and quivered as I unloaded inside her. When I'd deposited every drop of cum in her pussy, I pulled out and walked forward, intending to use what little hot water was left to clean myself off. Just as I felt the soothing heat splash against my chest, something grabbed me. I felt Izzy's hands on my hips, then she spun me around. Before I knew what was happening, my dick was in her mouth and she was sucking on it like her life depended on it.

"Izzy, I just came!" I yelled, even though I knew it wouldn't do any good. As Izzy suck my dick, I felt myself getting swelling up again, but no matter what Izzy did, I wouldn't get hard. Frustrated, Izzy growled, sending vibrations through my dick, then I felt her hand snake around my ass.

"Wait, what are you doing?!" I asked when I felt her finger pressing against my asshole.

"Just relax, Max." Izzy leered up at me, pulling off my dick for a second, then diving back down. As her lips engulfed my head again, I felt her finger tip press against me and my whole body constricted. Izzy tried pushing again, but I squirmed away from her touch. She pulled her hand away and I relaxed, letting her suck my cock. I looked down and saw Izzy fingering herself. I closed my eyes for a second and enjoyed the sensation of every part of my body being warm- the hot water was splashing against my back and Izzy's mouth was wrapped around my dick.

"OHH!" I yelled out suddenly. All at once, I felt Izzy's finger slide into my asshole. There was a twinge of pain, but I couldn't get free and... I didn't want to. It felt good. Izzy started pulling her finger out, then she slid it back in and I felt my cock hardening inside her mouth. I moaned as Izzy kept sucking and while I let myself be washed away in the sensation of my oldest sister pleasure me, I figured out what had happened. Izzy had fingered herself to get her finger coated with her cum, then, while I was relaxed, she'd pushed in all at once. When my dick was as hard as stone again, Izzy pulled off my dick suddenly and slid her finger out of my asshole.

"You liked that, didn't you?" She grinned at me. Before I could muster up a reply, Izzy turned around and bent over, planting her hands against the shower wall and pushing her ass out towards me. Taking the hint, I grabbed my dick and guided it to her glistening slit, then I pushed in. I felt Izzy tighten around me as I filled her cunt and once I was all the way in, I grabbed her hips and started thrusting into her.

"Harder! You fuck like third grader!" Izzy growled at me, turning her head. Damn it! She was really determined to piss me off. Getting angry, I slapped her ass hard, leaving a red mark the shape of my hand, then I slammed my dick into my sister so hard, she almost slipped on the wet floor. I kept pounding her cunt, smacking her ass when she needed it. When Izzy started moaning and I could tell she was about to cum, I leaned forward and grabbed her tits, fondling them and tweaking her nipples as I fucked her to orgasm. When she was finished cumming, I kept thrusting, but felt myself getting softer, so I figured we'd stop. Izzy wasn't having that. She reached her arm around behind me and pushed into my asshole again.

For some reason, the idea of my big sister being inside me, almost like a part of me, was so sexy, I felt myself start to get harder. Then she started rubbing inside me, her finger gliding in and out, as I kept giving her small thrusts and within a minute, I was raring to go. I reached behind me and and grabbed her wrist, then pulled her hand away, slightly sad to feel her pull out, then I guided her hand down to her pussy. As Izzy started rubbing her clit, I started fucking her hard again, pulling out until only the tip of my head was still inside her, then pushing back into her and filling her pussy in one plunge. I looked down as we kept fucking and I watched my dick slide in and out of Izzy, then I had a thought. It was time for revenge.

I reached down and started fingering Izzy's clit beside her. She moaned at the sensation of both of us rubbing against it, but when my hand was coated with her cum, I brought my finger up and slid it into her asshole.

"Shiiiit." Izzy whined, dropping her head down. When I felt her asshole loosen just a little, I started sliding my finger in and out of her as I kept pumping my dick into her pussy. "Shit, Max. That feels so good!" Izzy grunted out. My only response was to go even faster. Before long, my dick was flying in and out of her pussy and I felt my second orgasm about to erupt. I pulled my finger out of Izzy's ass, then slid two in, stretching her asshole around them. As Izzy felt her insides move to accommodate my fingers, I picked up the pace, burying my dick in her as fast as I could.

"Shit, shit, shit. Max, you're gonna make me cum!"

"Not till you make me cum!"

"Shit, yes, Max! Fuck me till you cum! Use my body!" Ready to unload in her, I pulled my fingers out of her ass and grabbed her hips with both hands, digging my finger into her, then I pumped Izzy as fast as I could, fucking her like a wild animal.

"I'm about to cum!"

"Yes, Cum! Oh, god, I'm cumming!" Izzy yelled, then I felt her pussy clamp down on cock, sending me over the edge. I started cumming inside her and kept thrusting in and out, prolonging the feeling as long as possible. Needless to say, when I finally got to shower off, all the hot water was gone.

Izzy sat on the edge of the bathtub while I showered. Once I was clean, she took her turn while I toweled off. Once I was dry, I looked at myself in the mirror.

"Holy shit, Izzy! Really?!" I yelled into the shower, pointing to my body. There were more than a half dozen hickeys going down from my shoulder to my groin and there were scratches going down my back like I'd decided to go diving into thorn bushes. And my ass was a little sore...

When I'd finished getting clean, I slipped into my room as quickly and quietly as possible, trying to go undetected. I just had enough time to pull on a pair of sweatpants and a long sleeved t-shirt before Riley walked in. There was no reason for her to think Izzy and I weren't having sex, but somehow, I didn't think the sight of my body covered in marks that weren't hers would make her very happy.

"You ready? Sorry I took so long getting ready." Riley said, toeing the ground and rocking her heel back and forth as she clasped her hands behind her back. It was adorable and she looked beautiful. She had on a pair of orange short-shorts that hugged her backside nicely, a white t-shirt with a matching orange stripe going across her chest, and she'd put her hair up and tied it with an orange ribbon. She was also a pair of running shoes since we were going riding, but she'd also put on make-up- more than usual and it looked amazing. She had added just a touch of glittery eye-shadow and mascara and little lip glass. Riley was already, but right then she was-

"Wow." Was all I could say. Riley smiled and looked down at the ground, pleased but a little bashful. I walked forward and I laid my hands on her hips gently, then I pressed her against me and kissed her.

"You ready to go?" I asked.

"Yeah, just let me grab my bag." Riley smiled, then she ran off to get it. While she did that, I grabbed my own bag, put my phone and the couple things I might need in it, then slung it over my shoulders. Once I pulled on my shoes, I walked out and opened the bathroom door. When it was open just a crack, I saw Izzy standing with the towel in her hands, half raised over her body. She seemed kind of dazed and out of it, but when I opened the door the rest of the way, she snapped out of it and smirked at me.

"What are you doing, perv? Spying on your big sister while she's in the shower?"

"Yeah, yeah. Fuck you too." I quipped at her, giving her a grin of my own.

"What'd you say?" She said, her voice tinged with either real or play anger. I didn't want either one directed at me.

"Love you too!" I exclaimed, shutting the door. "Bye!" I called through the closed door, then Riley came down the stairs and we headed down to the ground floor. We found Mom and Ashley talking downstairs and told them bye. Ashley still looked disappointed that she couldn't come, but that's what happens when you go around cheating on people.

"Be thinking about where you want to eat dinner!" Mom called out as we headed into the garage.

"Got it!" Riley called back as she shut the door.

We took our bikes down from the racks on the wall of the garage, but my bike was too small for me now, so I grabbed Izzy's instead. After I lowered the seat a little, it worked fine. We headed out into the warm sunlight and coasted down the driveway.

"So, to Langley?" I asked, looking at Riley. She nodded, then kicked off and started pedaling. I followed after her and for the next fifteen minutes, we biked to the park, enjoying the feeling of the sun and win on our faces. We didn't talk much on the way there except to say when to turn or stop. It was nice though. I couldn't remember the last time I'd just done something fun with Riley.

When we got to the park, we locked our bikes at a rack, then we found a picnic table in the sun to sit at and rest our legs. Once we'd recuperated, we went a walk through the park, up in the wooded hill part of the park, then back down by the community center with the flowers outside and then back around to the grass field. While we walked, Riley asked me how I was feeling. She actually seemed to genuinely care about the situation with Ashley even though she was still mad at Ashley.

"What about Gene? I haven't seen her much since, um, that day." Riley said, making us both think of the afternoon I'd taken Riley's virginity in a classroom as part of a bet.

"She's fine. She modeled for me yesterday. Izzy modeled for me too, but working with Izzy is always..."

"Like playing with fire?"

"Sharp, acid-coated fire." I added, then I asked Riley where she was looking at going to college. She listed several in the area and told me she really wanted to apply to at least one Ivy League school, just as a stretch.

"I just want to see if I can get in." She said as we paused by the community center to admire a patch of daffodils. They were yellow with orange centers. After checking to make sure no one was looking, I bent down and plucked one, breaking it off with about four inches of stem. I pulled off the leaves, then turned to Riley.

"For you." I said, smiling and holding the flower out.

"You're not supposed to pick them!" She said, trying to chastise me, but she took the flower and slid it into her hair, just over her right ear. When we got back to the field, I told Riley I had a surprise for her.

"What is it?" She asked.

"I'll give it you, but you have to close your eyes first." I replied. Once Riley had closed her eyes, I led her over to a nice spot in the grass and had her lie down, then I sat down a few feet away from her and pulled out my sketchbook and pencils from my bag. "Okay, you can open your eyes." I said.

"A notebook?" Riley gave me a confused look.

"I want to draw you." Riley blushed a little, but she didn't argue. She seemed a little nervous and kept trying to fix her hair when the breeze moved it, but she did pretty well holding still while I worked. After about twenty minutes, I had most of the drawing done and after a few more minutes, I'd finished touching everything up and I was actually really pleased with it.

"There. This is for you. Happy Birthday." I turned the pad around and handed it to Riley after she sat up. The drawing showed her on her side, her head resting on her hand, propped up on her elbow, her hair blowing just a little with the breeze and the daffodil resting in her hair. With the sunlight coming down on her, she looked beautiful- just like she was supposed to.

"Oh my god, Max..." Riley said, staring at the picture so intently I was worried I'd made some major mistake and hadn't caught it. "This is so beautiful." She looked up at me and I could tell she'd really liked it. "The line work is really clean and I like the shadows.. it's almost like an Impressionist piece."

"Uh, thanks." I said. I only kinda knew what Impressionism was. We hadn't really covered that in school yet. Riley set the pad down on the grass, then crawled over to me and pulled me in for a kiss. We were in public, so we shouldn't have done it, but the odds of someone who knew us seeing us were pretty low, so I kissed her back and enjoyed the soft pressure of her lips on mine.

"I love you, Max." Riley said after we broke apart.

"I love you too, Riley." Riley smiled and picked up the sketchpad, then flipped it closed so that nothing would get on the drawing. For the rest of the afternoon, we talked in the sun, went on another walk, and Riley had brought a Frisbee, so we threw that around for a half an hour or so. It was the most fun I could remember having with any of my sisters in a long, long time. And for once, there was no sex, just me and her, enjoying eachother's company. Okay- we did kiss and while we were in the woods, we did get a little caught up and start feeling each other, but for the most part, it was just us. And that was nice.

When it was about four thirty, Riley said she was getting hungry and I was too, but we knew we'd have dinner when we got home around six, so we decided to bike over to Charles' Creamery. Charles' was an old style ice-cream place. They only had like three flavors, but that was all you needed. Riley and I sat outside and ate our icecream cones while we watched cars go by. When we'd finished, we decided to take an alternate way home. It was only five, but by the time we got home, it'd be close to five thirty, so we weren't missing out on that much time together.

Riley and I started pedaling back, but when we were biking by this gravel parking lot beside a closed down store, I looked over and saw Izzy's car parked in the back.

"Riley!" I yelled ahead of me. She stopped and we looked over at the car. It was definitely Izzy's. We got off our bikes and walked them towards the car.

"She's crying." Riley said suddenly, coming to a stop. We coming at the car from behind, but when I leaned to the side, I could just barely see Izzy face.

"You're right." I said softly. "Should we check on her?"

"Y-yeah, I guess so." This was weird. I didn't think either of us could remember Izzy ever crying... ever. We walked up to the car and when we were a few feet away, I could see Izzy suddenly hear us coming. She started wiping her face off as we leaned our bikes against the car. I opened the passenger door and looked in on her.

"Hey, how's the job hunt going?" I asked, trying to sound nonchalant, but caring at the same time.

"Oh, you know... all the jobs they have are the shitty ones working at Taco Bell or whatever." Izzy said, her voice still a little choked up and her eyes red.

"You mind if we hang out with you for a minute?" I asked, then slid in the car before Izzy could say no. Riley climbed into the back seat, and leaned forward between the seats so that she was up with us. For a minute, we were all quiet.

"So... um... Izzy, are you okay?" I asked, breaking the silence. For a second, Izzy took on an expression that made me think she was going to be typical Izzy and box my shoulder or make a crude remark, maybe even Izzy thought that, but then the energy just drained out of her face.

"Yeah. I'm fine." She said, sinking back against the seat.

"What happened?"

"No one would hire me."

"Well, I guess you could always do a little time at Taco Bell and then move up."

"Taco Bell didn't even want me."

"What? Why not?"

"No experience. Everyone my age is either in school or has already worked plenty of places. Places like Taco Bell can find people who they don't even have to train. And I mean, if I don't have any experience, how am I supposed to start anywhere? And Mom wants me to go back to school... like I can do that."

"Why not?"

"Everyone would just make fun of me. I remember when I had to drop out before. You guys thought I was so fucking lazy."

"You didn't ever study, Izzy!"

"Fuck you. I did study. I studied a lot at first and I still got a C on my first test... I got a C on the test for Chapter 1. I felt like a retard. I tried to do better, but..." Izzy's voice started sounding upset and so she shut up. After a second, she tried talking again. "I'm not smart like you two... and I'm not athletic like Ashley... I can't... I can't do anything." Izzy let out a sob and tears started falling down her cheeks. "I'm just a fucking failure." She started crying and was so ashamed of herself for showing her feelings, she slammed her fist into the steering wheel, honking the horn accidentally. That just made it worse, Izzy hunched over and kept crying. Riley and I looked at eachother, then Riley reached out and started rubbing Izzy's back.

"You're not a failure. So what if you took a couple years off? Plenty of people do that."

"What am I supposed to do? I can't find a job and I'm too fucking stupid to go to school."

"You're not too stupid to go to school." Riley said firmly.

"And you could always get a job as a lingerie model." I suggested. Riley gave me a look that was half disbelief and half irritation, but I hadn't meant anything bad by it. "I'm serious." I continued. "You're like six feet tall, you have natural, um, really nice double D breasts, long legs, and green eyes. I think most women would kill for a body like yours. That's exactly what modelling agencies want. You're beautiful."

"R-really?" Izzy asked, sitting up. "I actually kind of think I'd like that." I could actually picture Izzy enjoying all the attention from photographers or people watching her on a runway. She'd definitely enjoy basking in the glory of seeing herself on billboards or in a magazine. I definitely wasn't stupid enough to suggest that she could find work appearing in other magazines.

"And besides all that, you're a good big sister and we love you."Riley added, and I almost gave her a look that would have sent Izzy sobbing again... or she would've just murdered me. I mean, I did love Izzy, but good big sister...

Riley caught my expression and frowned at me. "No, really. Izzy wasn't perfect, but how many times did you get picked on?"

"Like fifty times a day! What house did you grow up in?!" I exclaimed in disbelief.

"No. At school."

"Oh, just like, twice."

"And why is that?" Ohhh. I saw where she was going with this.

"Because Izzy kicked the crap out of them." She had said it was only because she was the only person allowed to beat me up, but still, Izzy had thrashed Stevey Horneman when I was in sixth grade.

"We love you, Izzy. It's going to be okay." Riley said, then she gave Izzy a hug.

"Promise." I added, then I wrapped my arms around both of them. When we let go, Izzy looked into my eyes.

"Thank you, Max." She laid her hand on my cheek, one of the few times she'd touched me gently in her life. I could tell she wanted to kiss me and I glanced at Riley. Riley nodded. It was okay. I kissed Izzy, then kissed her again on the forehead. "I love you, Max." Izzy said quietly. I almost didn't trust my own ears. She really did have a good side to her.

"I- I love you too, Izzy." I said, sinking back down onto the passenger seat.

"Thanks, Riley." Izzy told Riley, then she moved forward. My eyes went wide- then Izzy's and Riley's did too. Izzy had just kissed Riley- on the lips!

"Uh!" Izzy said, pulling back suddenly. "I, uh, sorry, I got... wires crossed." I looked at Riley, she was blushing and seemed a little freaked out. Amused, I smiled at her and Riley looked at me, then her face took on this surreally calm expression. She leaned forward, cupped her palm around Izzy's cheek, then she pressed her lips against Izzy's. This wasn't a a little peck. It was the same kind of kiss she gave me. I watched Riley throat move and realized her tongue was moving, then Izzy pulled back.

"The fuck are you doing?!" Izzy yelled. Was she- Izzy- blushing? This day was getting weirder by the second.

"I love you too, Izzy."

"Uh-huh... and apparently you're a little bi-curious."

"Oh, come off it. You're the one who offered to teach me about masturbating, who offered to show me, then wanted to watch to make sure I did it right. And who taught me about kissing?" Oh, dear God, what had been happening on the third floor while I was growing up?!

"We were just-" Izzy started, but Riley cut her off with another kiss, pressing her tongue into Izzy's mouth and this time, Izzy started kissing her back. As amazing as it was to watch, I finally cut it off.

"Um, what the hell?" I said, Izzy and Riley broke apart, then they looked at me.

"Do you not like watching your sisters make out?" Riley asked playfully.

"No, it's not that... it's just, uh..." I didn't even know what I was trying to say. Riley leaned forward and brought her lips to my ear.

"Max, what's the better option? The three of us being together or Izzy and I fighting over you and you probably wind up torn in half." Every so often, Riley really proved why she was the smart one. I turned my head and caught her in a kiss, pressing tongue between her lips and finding hers. It was a little weird knowing that some of her spit was Izzy's, but at the same time, it was kind of arousing. While I was kissing Riley, I suddenly felt another pair of lips on my throat.

"Unhhh." I groaned as I felt Izzy's tongue slide across my skin. Riley kept kissing me as Izzy played along my neck. I felt my head getting light it felt so good, but finally, Riley and Izzy pulled back.

"Do you want your birthday present now?" Izzy asked Riley.

"What- now?"

"Yep. If you ask real nice, I think you could convince me to share Max with you."

"Like I need your permission. I think Max is more mine than yours right now." Riley said, a slight edge in her teasing.

"Oh, really?" Izzy said, cocking an eyebrow, her natural Izzy swagger back. She reached forward and grabbed my t-shirt, then yanked it up, exposing my hickey splattered body. Riley's eyes went wide as she looked at me, then she looked back at Izzy.

"Okay, deal. Now..." Riley turned her eyes back to me. "Maybe you and I could play with my birthday present?" She ran her teeth over her lower lip again and Izzy responded by unfastening her seat belt. She crawled into the backseat with Riley and sat down.

"You know, you're not a half-bad little sister." Izzy said, smiling at Riley, then she leaned forward and I watched my sisters' lips press together, melding into one mass of pink on pink. Riley's hands started caressing Izzy's body and I watched as my sister started doing things that I'd only done before. Izzy's more experienced finger went right for Riley's shorts. She found the bow keeping them tied, pulled it loose, then slid her hand into Riley's short.

"Ohhh." Riley moaned, arching her head back. I felt my cock twitching in my shorts and I had to admit that watching my sisters play with each other might've been the hottest thing I'd seen in my short life. Riley pulled Izzy's shirt off, exposing her bra cupped tits. That was it. I pulled off my shirt and started undressing as my sister's did the same to one another. When we were all down to our underwear, Riley and Izzy looked at me.

"What are you waiting for, Max?" Izzy asked.

"Come on." Riley said, giving me a very inviting look. I crawled into the back and Izzy pulled my against her, her lips dragging across mine roughly while I felt Riley's hands on my boxers, pulling them down. I brought my hands up and started fondling Izzy's chest as we made out, then suddenly my eyes went wide as I felt Riley start sucking on my cock.

"Holy shit..." I thought to myself. it felt like my body was melting. With what little control I could muster, I pulled Izzy forward and found the clasp to her bra. After a little fumbling with the unfamiliar mechanism, I unhooked her bra and Izzy let it tumble off of her. Suddenly, Riley pulled off my dick, then pursed her lips and went down on me again, making me grunt loudly from the feeling. I turned my legs sideways so that Riley could reach me easier, but kept my chest towards Izzy and my hands on her massive, lingerie model tits.

"Unh! Izzy!" Riley moaned suddenly and I looked over to see that Izzy had pulled Riley's panties down to her knees and had started fingering my sister. Riley's long blonde hair hung over shoulders, partially obscuring her C cup tits from view, but I could see her starting to move her ass towards Izzy's hand, trying to press Izzy's finger into her pussy.

"Do you want to taste your sister, Max? Izzy asked, pulling out of Riley and offering me her glistening fingertips, wet with Riley's cum. I couldn't stop myself. I sucked the cum off them as Riley and Izzy watched, then I felt Riley's lips wrap wrap around my dick again. As Izzy kept playing with Riley, I left one hand on Izzy's breast and let my other hand slide down her body, under her thong, to her soaking wet cunt, still full of my cum from the morning. I slid my fingers down across her clit and Izzy moaned into my mouth, her hips gyrating as I started rubbing.

Within two minutes, we were all panting for more and moaning every time we were touched. Summoning all our will, we managed to break apart long enough to pull off the rest of our clothing, I kicked my boxers off and helped Riley out of her panties. When all three of us were completely naked, I sat down on the armrest and admired my two incredibly beautiful older sisters while they fixed their eyes on a certain part of my body.

"Max, open the armrest. There should be some lotion in there." I did what Izzy told me and found a bottle of moisturizing skin lotion. I handed it to Izzy and opened the top, then squirted a massive dollop into Riley's hands. She squeezed out another portion for herself, then the two looked at me hungrily. I knew what they wanted. I moved towards them, resting my knees on the seat cushion between them. I looked at Izzy's glistening pussy, then at Riley's. Izzy's was waxed bare except for a small triangle of hair and it looked like Riley had shaved hers yesterday or the day before. They were both beautiful and I touched them at the same time. I felt my fingers slip into my older sisters and they moaned as the middle and ring finger on both my hands disappeared inside them , filling their cunts.

"Fuck yes." Izzy moaned.

"Max..." Riley sighed, then they sat up enough to reach out and wrap their lotion coated hands around my dick.

"Unnnhhh." I groaned. It felt amazing. Izzy squeezed the base of my shaft as Riley played with the head, then I started moving my fingers in and out of them and Riley and Izzy started milking my dick in response. The sensation of being in Riley and Izzy at the same time and knowing that I was making them both feel good simultaneously drove me wild. Within a few seconds, I was pumping my finger in and out of them at lightning speed. They kept jerking me off together and at the same time, I watched as their free hands went down to their pussies. They rubbed their clits as I fingered them. Soon, we were all moaning like crazy and the windows of Izzy's car were completely fogged up.

"O-oh my God," I moaned. "F-feels so good."

"Yes! Yes!" Riley moaned with me. Izzy let out little cry as I fingered her g-spot.

"We need to cum. All of us." She said, the stopped rubbing her pussy and grabbed the lotion from the side where she'd laid it. She squeezed it over my cock, coating her hand and Riley's with creamy white lotion. When they started jerking me off again, I knew I only had seconds before I would cum. I buried my fingers in Izzy and Riley and fingered their g-spots as fast as I could, pushing them closer and closer to orgasm.

"Cum for me!" I yelled as their hands flew up and down my cock and rubbed their clits.

"Shit! Shit!" Izzy yelled.

"Don't stop, Max! Don't stop!" Riley moaned. Suddenly, I felt my cock start spurting and my sisters pussies clamped down on my fingers as they screamed and arched their backs

"CUMMING!!" We screamed at the same time. I watched as my cum shot out, landing on their hands and Izzy's back seat. The girls shook as each wave of pleasure raced through them. I finished cumming first, then Riley, and Izzy finished last. She was spent afterwards she just slumped against the side of her car and shut her eyes. Suddenly, I heard a phone ringing.

"Shit!" I realized we hadn't checked the time just as I jumped into the front seat and found Izzy's phone. I tossed it to her.

"Hey, Mom!" Izzy said, trying to sound as though she hadn't just cum seconds ago. "What- oh, sorry. What? No, no, no. There with me. Sorry. Yeah, we're on our way home. Sorry, we got caught up talking. Okay. Bye." I Izzy closed her phone, then slumped back against the car.

"-was mom... called you guys... we need head home..." She mumbled, half conscious.

"Crap. We left our phones outside in our bags didn't we?" I said, looking at Riley.

"Ugghh." Izzy groaned, sitting up. "Get dressed and I'll meet you guys at the house. I'd give you a ride, but the bikes won't fit in my car." The three of us sluggishly put our clothes back on, then Izzy started her car, giving her windows time to de-fog. I glanced at the car's clock. 6:20. No wonder Mom was calling. Once we were dressed, Riley and I told us Izzy we'd see her at the house. I kissed Izzy, then hopped on my bike, then Riley did the same thing. Riley kissing Izzy was something that was going to take some getting used to, but I thought I could learn to live with it.

"We'll see you at the house!" I called out to Izzy as we got ready to pedal away.

"Okay! Oh, Mom said there were guests, so..." Izzy called back.

"Who?"

"Gene and Tiffany something?" Izzy said, raising her hand in an "I don't know" gesture.

"Wait- Gene and her Mom at the house?!" I asked in disbelief. I glanced at Riley and seeing my expression, Izzy figured something was up too. Things were about to get very interesting... and very dangerous.


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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 01:58
    Where are the other parts?

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 01:58
    Where are the other parts?

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  • DragonFangs
    31.03.2012 02:14
    First you take someone else story and ruin it. Then you add in gay anal shower scene and he loves it? Stick to your own crap and don't ruin other work, especially when it is better than yours.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 02:28
    The other parts are on the original writers page...

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 02:38
    are u sure ur not somestory with a new name

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 02:50
    Incredible grammer bro

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 05:34
    Another spectacular read my friend, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 05:35
    Another spectacular read my friend, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 05:35
    Another spectacular read my friend, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 05:35
    Another spectacular read my friend, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 05:35
    Another spectacular read my friend, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 05:35
    Another spectacular read my friend, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 05:35
    Another spectacular read my friend, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 05:36
    Another spectacular read my friend, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 05:37
    good story, loved it but gay anal should not be included and I want to point out Max's room is down stairs not upstairs. I believe it needs a re-write

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 09:41
    I really like this series and you have the same style as the original writer of the series. Pls continue.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 09:44
    Listen to this douche, reading a story about incest and he gets uptight about a little hetero anal play. Give me a break. You're right though, his room is on the ground floor and there isn't any third floor as far as I could tell. The description of Izzy didn't match the picture in my head, but that could be because the original description was vague. As for story, I like the inclusion of a little girl on girl, since there's so many females, and the return of Mom could lead to some interesting twists... You might review the original author's stories and take some notes so you can stick to the established details. Only a few grammatical errors I noticed, better than most. Keep up the good work and don't listen to the haters.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 11:05
    why do you keep leaving ashley out of the story... its starting to get boring with the regular izzy n riley

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 11:56
    More....! max having sex with his mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 12:24
    I do agree Ashley should be more involed and yes Maxs room is downstairs lol little adjustments but all in all good job definatly keep the series going

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 13:31
    You now have to insure that you don't go in a direction Somestory was not headed.
    If you bring Gene & her Mom into it keep it in a way Some seemed to imply. They are concerned for Max and want to make sure that he is not being hurt. Gene seems to have feelings for Max and we know her mom likes him sexually. It is time that the girls get a come uppencee in a way that truly frightens them and makes mom realise that she has failed her children.
    Have Tiff be pregnant and her husband is fixed causing some turmoil there.

    To those that don't like where this author is taking the plot line write your own and we will hold a contest on whose is best.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 14:07
    Don't invlove the max's mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 14:13
    Please put more Ashley! Maybe have riley or izzy watch over them or something to make sure max isn't getting taken advantage of.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 14:29
    No pregnancy how is that hot thats ridiculous for a sex story, include Ashley a lot more and the mom

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 14:29
    Leavine me wanting more as always. Keep it the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 17:54
    ohhhhh shit a good twist man I like it but once again dont get anyone pregnant and no fucking the mom please
    good story man cant wait for 9 thank you so much for continuing

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 18:15
    you have taken a story I thought dead and revived it and made it soo much better thx-from Kidd

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 20:29
    mo offense man but u need to read the somestory stories thouroly and get all thing strate lol brill chapter tho but not sure bringing gene and tiff back in was a good idea lol post asap im really intrigued now brill mate just brill

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 20:35
    you need to shoot maxs mum out of it asap and maybe have a crazy all out weekend u no all 4 stay at home sort of thing

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 21:36
    There were two things I noticed one u should re read your story before u post it and maxes room is the master bedroom on the ground floor his sisters rooms are on the second idk where u got thind floor from other than that amazing

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2012 22:57
    i like this stuff really good I really do think u got some connections with somestory it sounds like somethign xactly like he'd write

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 00:11
    fuck the mom! fuck the mom!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 00:27
    max sleaps on the ground floor and has a shower in his room I remember that much from ch 1 lol other than that perfect story definetly worthy sequals keep posting

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 02:23
    Good story try to remember max has the ground floor master bedroom and dont include maxes or genes mom in the sex because because tiffiny should be a once in a story hook.up character and take it slow and romantic with gene and have more jeleasouy towards her from the sisters

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 02:52
    I love seeing all these comments on grammar and spelling, yet they type like complete morons.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 02:59
    Keep writing forever

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 06:12
    Dude awesome job picking up where the other guy left off you totally make it better

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 09:02
    Good story. When somestory brought Max home, I really thought that would be the last we really see Gene. I liked her and hope you bring her back. The only problems were minor grammer problems (easily ignored though) and the location of Max's room. Also, I'd like to ask for NO mom fucking. Tiffany is married and it seemed like a one time thing for her. If you do have Max's mom fuck Max, please put in alot of her reasoning that's not, "I'm horny and I love you and I gave birth to you so fuck meh!" Well, regardless of what you do, keep on keepin on.
    -Anonymous reader 80thous-and somethin

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 09:53
    YOU ASSHOLE
    THIS IS NOT YOUR STORY !

    STOP WRITING !!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 09:54
    what the monkey fucking a dog in the butt on saturday night with a ass clown fucking obama is this shit !?!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 10:00
    You are a dick head duskflair !

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 10:02
    i fucked your mother duskflair .

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 10:04
    don't drop the soap duskflair.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 10:06
    hello faggot police duskflair is back

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 11:29
    Great. I love how you carried on with the story. Please I want the story to go on for a long time. So could you like, idont know, make the story last. Mabye let Max and Riley fall in love, then Ashely and Riley Fist fight over him then the mom finds max and riley in the bed togather then the whole family falls apart. And dome how max finds a way to bring the family back togather some how.

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  • red763tx
    01.04.2012 12:30
    well I can't wait to read more of this story. and could you re post chapter 4-6? I missed though and I can't find them and would like to read up on the parts that I missed.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 13:21
    Keep Writing, but stick to SomeStory's (SS) formula. People should be grateful that they get to hear an end to this storyline after SS disappeared

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 13:50
    great story love it alot cant wait for the next chapter great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 15:17
    ashley and riley should work out their differences and learn to share max. love the story and hope you keep I going for a really long time.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 15:25
    duskflair guess what

    i know where you live and if you don't stop ruining other peoples stories im going to kill you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 16:01
    Great. I love how you carried on with the story. Please I want the story to go on for a long time. So could you like, idont know, make the story last. Mabye let Max and Riley fall in love, then Ashely and Riley Fist fight over him then the mom finds max and riley in the bed togather then the whole family falls apart. And dome how max finds a way to bring the family back togather some how.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 17:48
    Again a really good interpretation of what could've happened if somestory continued. There was a couple of times where I was reading and you said some weird things like early on you said my dick and her dick, but that will happen. Other then the minor mistakes it was still a really great story. I also loved the part where Riley and him weren't fucking added a bit more feel to the entire series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 19:00
    I love how one nolife hater posted five comments in four mins btw keep going ya I found the two mistakes of the grammer shit and part one has alot of description maybe you should read that again

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 20:57
    Please dont coutinue with the lesbean stuff. I reall enjoy the strong love with Max and Riley, Also bring Ashley in it. And pleas put alot lot of affection between max and riley and max and ashley! like how somestory worte it when max and ashley were deeply in love! please people like the affectionate side too

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 22:27
    keep it up with max and riley and keep them in love.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 22:28
    have more the the "dates" with out all the sex it really brings the story together

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 22:31
    DEFENITLY NO PREGNACY

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  • lammar
    01.04.2012 23:15
    ok if any one wants to discuss they're displeasure with this story message me because hiding behind an anonymous comment does not justify your stupid reasoning for dislike of this man's writing; obama getting fucked by an ass clown has nothing to do with it and you are not funny, and no he will not stop writing this story because he is just trying to form a closure to one of the greatest stories on this site, STFU and stop complaining! unless you have any criticism, review, or suggestions, DO NOT COMMENT

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 00:27
    dont listen to the negative comments. your story is very good, maybe even better then ss

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 01:07
    I can definatly tell a difference between the two writing styles, but this is still just as good as ss, if not better. Much obliged!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 01:39
    Don't add mom incest.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 01:47
    Could have done without Riley/Izzy
    More Max and Riley

    Nevertheless, you shall continue the story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 01:59
    way better than part 7 INFANITLY better I was scared of the direction I thought it was going it but this seems it would be something somestory would write lots of suspence can wait for part 9

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 02:11
    u shoul linclude his mom and gene and have riley get pregnant but great story make it a little longer tho

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 03:53
    There are two grammar mistakes. I don't want to be a dick ,but please re-read. You'll easily find out where you made your mistake.

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  • Thaifortune
    02.04.2012 06:29
    Alright, so apparently it did log me in, so now that first sentence in my last post just makes me look like a retard. Also though, I did want to add one more thing. It's just my opinion, but I personally wouldn't enjoy adding in some big orgy of the sisters, mom, Gene, Tiffany,etc. It just feels too cliche, because I swear every story I read where there are multiple women, it ends in a giant orgy where suddenly everyone's bisexual. But it's your story for now, you lead it how you want.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 07:37
    mate you are a legend keep going I think you are better than ss I love the fact that riley and max are in love but not so much the anal bit but it was pretty hot keep going stong mate

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 10:03
    Get everyone involved loved all the lesbian and bi bits .. Quality not quantity

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 14:58
    Alright, so apparently it did log me in, so now that first sentence in my last post just makes me look like a retard. Also though, I did want to add one more thing. It's just my opinion, but I personally wouldn't enjoy adding in some big orgy of the sisters, mom, Gene, Tiffany,etc. It just feels too cliche, because I swear every story I read where there are multiple women, it ends in a giant orgy where suddenly everyone's bisexual. But it's your story for now, you lead it how you want.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 15:07
    now just have to get the mom on board and then gene and the rest have a nice big orgy.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 19:11
    Thanks for writing these, you are doing the original story a great justice.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 19:12
    Write the next one fast please

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 19:59
    Won't let me log in (arkhamlink) only got half way before I give up with this awful rip off. you need to read the origonals again, you've really wiped your arse with this, people might slate me for being picky but when it comes to these stories it matters, you focused more on sex again rather than emotion, you put that maxs room was upstairs which it isn't and where the hell has this suddern love for riley come from?

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 21:35
    Loved the Anal fingering.... I think you should work your way up from there... Maybe for a special occasion like christmas, have Max, Izzy and Riley together, but Izzy introduces a Strap on...

    Not nearly enough pegging in the stories on here..

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 23:02
    Yeah, loved the story, but didn't so much like the anal fingering part... Other than that, I agree with that one dude, the story was originally about the emotion, not just sex. I DO like the version you're writing though. Honestly, don't do what everybody seems to be obsessed with. No giant sex orgy. I know it's fantasy and all but I like it not being too farfetched. Good job all in all and kep it up :) look forward to the next part!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 23:18
    The 7th one was great but you just shit over this one. A ton of grammar errors. And dude come on, that anal fingering just ruined this entire shit fest. Thumbs down hard.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 23:59
    Again u failed to do the series justice

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 01:26
    I think hes doing better than somestory

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 03:07
    pls write more u have true talant plz write more parts and give a happy ending

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 03:44
    lol u are the new somestory :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 04:49
    If your thinking about making Tiffany pregnant please don't do it

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 08:32
    THe main thing which grabbed my interest in this series wasn't the sex, good as it was, but the emotional dynamic. I like ow Max and Riley are getting closer, but it seems a little sudden and there's still the loose end with ashley that needs to be covered. again, maintain focus of the emotional aspect.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 09:04
    just spend a little more time on the plot than you do the sex scenes and it'll turn out as good as (or better than) somestory's :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 09:11
    only thing I didnt like was the finger in his ass.... kinda gay bro -_- other then that awesome.... keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 10:16
    i love this guy I mean I REALLY do (no homo) this is the best story EVER and I am VERY happy that you continued the series I really cant wait for part 9 I really cant better do it quick b4 ALOT of ppl kick your ass XD

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 10:42
    Put max and his mom togther plz!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 10:58
    Hey, I've followed this series from the beginning and I firmly believe that you have done an exceptional job of continuing the story. I did not notice any significant difference in SomeStory's writing style and yours which only enhances the enjoyment I get from reading this. I implore you to keep up the amazing work and hope you start a new series yourself. Thanks!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 12:48
    I like it so far ;) but whatever you do... don't involve mom.
    Other than that, the only thing I, personally, would like to see is Max doing something about the way Izzy uses him again and again. Especially now that it seems he and Riley have something deeper than just sex. But anyways, thats just my thoughts, so by all means, as long as you keep writing, I'll be happy to keep reading.

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  • EngagedReader
    03.04.2012 13:10
    I firmly believe adding more people having sex with Max would ruin the story. Having the mom fuck him too, definitly would ruin it. I also didn't like the finger in the ass stuff. Also, I hope Riley and Max will continue to focus more on each other, grow closer. Her telling him that she loves him in a romantic way, not just as a brother, or some kind of sex buddy, came a little quick, but I guess since they are already fucking so much, thats not really an issue ;) Just don't focus too much on sex and continue to flesh out the characters relationships with each other, particularly Max's and Riley's. Oh, and I hope they come to a decision to leave out abusive, manipulative Izzy. The way she still treats Max, like he belongs to her, can't sit right with Riley. I'd hate to see this turning into another one of those stories, where suddenly, everybody fucks everybody.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 14:23
    there is no way in hell him having sex with his mom would ruin it

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 18:34
    dont freak have reily and max end up in the whole incestical love thing TBH its kinda lame, I think for a right ending eather max needs to end up with Gene or no one at all

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 18:54
    Keep it up! Finish it off with a giant orgy with max and all six of the women

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 20:40
    The dynamics of this story are great, my advice to you would be to not listen to every single mad theory suggested to you, the characters are interesting and 3 dimensional. A lot of people seem to have issues with Izzie but I think she may be the most important sister in Max's little harem and without her it would be difficult to make certain aspects of the storyline flow. Don't bring anymore women into the story though I think at this stage of the story it may be overkill, and I personally don't think max should sleep with his mum either, however if you write that chapter well it could well be an instant hit so i'll leave that up to you... Your talented I hope you keep writing :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 20:42
    PLEASE NO MORE ANAL PROBING!!! MAX CAN'T TAKE NO MORE ANAL PROBING!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 01:19
    This is awesome.Like you're really SomeStory

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 01:20
    This is awesome.Like you're really SomeStory

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 01:55
    Don't make his mom fuck him that's just to far

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 02:24
    What I dont get is how mom cant here them yelling at the top of there lungs. Details like these are what make a good story. Learn, get better, and make more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 02:54
    they should all have a massive orgy his mom, sisters, gene, and ger mom and riley and max should at the end get married by him gettin disowned

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 06:18
    Are you secretly somestory?

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 06:21
    Also aperently no guy here's had his ass fingered. It's all apart of female domination. Not fun trust me

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 08:12
    From what I recall, Izzy didn't actually masturbate together with Riley. She only taught her how "not to get caught". So that said, I agree with EngagedReaders comment in that I don't really like the involvement of Izzy in just about everything. Focus more on Riley and Max. And for the love of all thats holy, DON'T involve the mom.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 10:18
    I understand the story that u r tryin to take over but u r forgetting the fact that the story is called 3 evil sisters......u dont talk bout ashley at all, izzy only gets some of the action and u r makin a love story with riley..........BULLSHIT!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 15:10
    pretty good. my only suggestion isnto work gene into the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 19:23
    Yeah dude don't stick too much on the love story side, think the original pattern was meant to be sisters hurt max then max unleashes darkside (coming with great sex along it) then everyone forgives eachother and cycle starts again... Yes???

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 19:37
    stop being whiney bitches I dnt see u guys making the story so shut the fuck up u lazy jerkoffs

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 23:15
    This you story. You don't dependes on us so take it away and continu it yourself. Its a Great story just don't make it a love story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 23:43
    I thought Riley had brown hair?

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 00:09
    Great story but I did find something wired when you talked about the tit job you said mine dick and her dick was coverd in spit I think you meant her tits

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 00:27
    Like the continuation of story but feel a little more attention given to typos and what not could make it a whole lot better. Also, and I know this probably sounds odd, you kept changing details about Max's house from the SomeStory's work. Such as it being 3 stories tall rather than 2 and mentioning Max's room was somehow upstairs. It seemed like it was important to the original story that his room and his room along was on the first floor down a single hallway. Overall keep up the good work but try keeping the detail straight. (I know it's a pain in the ass as I commonly make the same mistakes in my own writing.)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 00:39
    so far you've done an amazing job picking up the story! I think I also like you're writing better than somestory's

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 01:36
    Hey I commented on your last story. So far really good. I personally feel that no one should be included in Riley's and maxs relationship except for them both. But. Ow with izzy in the scene it might take some getting used to. As to agree with one of the other comments I saw. I believe you should not include gene or Tiffany into the next part. They were just kinda side characters with little contribution to the storyline. Aside this, is just my personal comment and opinion, you are doing a stellar job, better than sometory, in both quality and time for for uploading keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 01:38
    yo all haters shut the fuck up if you dont like his story go write your own. I like this story and if you had a brain that is what happenes when you fuck a virgin they become attached to who ever they fuck, so he is actually doing a pretty fucking realistic job. keep up the good work, be kool to have ashley tied into newly 3 some fuck buddies lol great job thanks for keeps the story alive and again haters shut the fuck up and go do something better with your worthless lives

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 02:57
    You should try to continue the..
    MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT series

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 03:17
    I think you're doing a great job picking up the story. I'd love to see more girl/girl stuff in Part 9.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 03:51
    keep up the good work I am not going to tell you to change anything cause you are doing such a great job I cant say anything bad about it it is so damn good so keep up the good work and dont take anyones advice cause they pretty much dont know shit (trick question I said not to take anyones advice this is considered advice lol) write it how you want it is your story now atleast dont change PLZ

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 04:07
    I cant believe people trash talk this guy what is wrong with some people he is innocently making a story that people have been waiting and dying of old age for and you just wail on him. he is literally giving you something you want taking his time out of his busy schedule and u just say shit like you should kill yourself because you are sad that ur story is way worse than somestory I think he is twice as good as somestory keep up the good writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 04:59
    Awesome work and hope to see more parts. And thank you for continueing the story, I know I would never had read any more of the story if you didn't contiue so again thank you so much! Keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 05:17
    Great story, I have an idea I would like to read for maybe a scene, it's just a vague idea but it's bacislly that max or his sisters secretly fucks each other when his mom is around and without her finding out. But your the one writing so you can use it or not, it's up to you. And love the story's, hope to read more soon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 06:34
    Great job keep it up and do your best

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 09:52
    gret job tying all the main back in and exposing a side to izzy and as for the haters you took the story and kept it going thank you I enjoy this story line and you are actualy better at developin events than somestory in my opinion keep up the good work and just an idea but maybe a orgy with gene tiffany mom ashley riley izzy and max all at once

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 20:21
    continue my sister and the exchange student series!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 22:26
    this is awesome i've been waiting forever for them to have a 3some :D keep up the good work :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.04.2012 22:28
    hey heres a idea, why dont you introduce more guys in the story and have some bi action not only with girls but with max too, plus then they can have a awesome orgy too :) think about it,

    love the storys, please keep up the good work man!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 00:37
    I like the story more if there isn't more guys, I like how max is the only guy in the story. So far in the story, max is the only guy and the story's have been great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 01:21
    dont put a nother guy in the story that would just ruin it

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 02:52
    dude this stuff is awesome but if you add another guy it ill ruin the story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 06:00
    Nice man, keep it up, part 7 was good too :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 06:06
    Nice man, keep it up, part 7 was good too :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 07:48
    No dudes
    Keep it as is
    Don't take advice from others
    Do your thing
    Keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 08:06
    it was terrific but you got some things wrong he didnt live upstairs and there wasnt 3 floors in the house only 2 and he didnt have a cell phone...there where other things but I forgot beacuse the story was stil as good as somestories versions keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 08:07
    oh and there was a tipo that said izzy had a dick

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 10:56
    I agree, no more guys. Max being the only guy gives a harem atmosphere, which is one of my favorite genres in porn and non-porn anime. Can't wait for part 9 :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 17:58
    Good work. A few little slip ups but nothing that ruined the flow of the story. Really great work keep it up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 18:02
    Max is 13, but does anyone know the sisters' ages?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 21:39
    Great story, but you need to double check your writing. There were words missing and in the wrong spots, but all in all great work

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2012 23:56
    keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2012 04:02
    to the person who asked the ages of the sisters izzy is 21 and I think ashely and riley r both 19

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2012 13:07
    Riley's 18. Izzy is 21 ans ashley is 19 though.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2012 01:24
    This is one of the best carry over stories I've every read. Keep the torch burning

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2012 04:59
    YOUR EVIL SISTERS STORIES ARE FUCKING AMAZING KEEP IT UP
    CANT WAIT FOR PART 9

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2012 10:45
    Hey man, your doing a great job with these but the only problem with them is that you got your characters mixed up with Ashley and Izzy swapping roles. Apart from that it was great

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2012 19:07
    looking for part 9 anyitime now good writing!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2012 19:34
    You know what bro, I enjoyed somestory's version of 3ES, but yours have the potential to be soooo much better! Write #9 soon dude!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2012 23:14
    Love it bring mommy into it though:)

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2012 11:55
    I think I actually like this wiriting style more than somestory's. This series is absolutely brilliant. I am looking forward to the next one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2012 13:15
    Asome, just awsome story. cant wait for the nezt chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2012 16:03
    Now that my dick and her dick were both soaking wet, Izzy took hold of my dick and pressed it between her tits as she came forward.
    Now that my dick and her dick were boath soaking wet
    my dick and her dick
    her dick

    WUT?

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 01:12
    Does anyone have an idea or know when the next part will be out so I know when to check?

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 16:20
    Couple of errors, nothing that truely ruined it, would do some proof reading though before you release part 9. Dont add any guys, I dont care what you do with the mum aslong as it keeps the story good. Youre doing a better job than SomeStory. Plz put part 9 up soon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 19:17
    this was REALLY AMAZING
    great job
    :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 19:17
    lesbo action please!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2012 19:43
    Gettin a lil worried can u say something to us soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2012 00:02
    SomeStory is back!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2012 00:13
    You should do a part 9 just saying

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2012 11:18
    Yes SomeStory is back but he says he was struggling for ideas so will not write another 3ES part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2012 12:33
    when will u post the new part ??

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2012 13:08
    I hope part 9 will be out soon...

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  • duskflair
    11.04.2012 14:34
    Hey, Guys, Part 9 would have been out today, but unfortunately, my computer had an issue and I lost all 27ish pages that I'd written. I'll try to have it out this weekend and I'm sorry for the delay. No one is more irritated about it than me. In the mean time, check out my Mr. Wong's Curios series and thanks for reading.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2012 14:53
    Great story, keep it coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2012 18:50
    thanks man great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.04.2012 00:17
    I've been following these stories from the beginning and honestly I couldn't b happier with what you ve done so far

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.04.2012 08:21
    Epic ness. Just a note, noticed some continuity errors. Izzy knew Gene and Tiffany because Max admited having sex with Tiffany to her. Just sayin. Great otherwise, but I'm OCD about continuity so... But keep going

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.04.2012 08:52
    Damn hurry up with the next chapter. Your continueation of this story is brilliant.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.04.2012 22:10
    Have an orgy with the two MILFS

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2012 20:36
    Dude, Idk what somestory would have came up with but......I'm damn glad you took the reigns to this story. Epic, pure and simple.

    T

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2012 22:08
    Please get the mom in!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2012 19:11
    oh one more thing, Maxs room is on the first floor. lol

    T

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2012 09:00
    thanks for taking over on this story youve done a great job

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2012 09:04
    cant wait for the next chapter but dont slack on the quality
    i can wait for good quality

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2012 14:11
    It has been two weeks now. How much longer do we have to wait?!?

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2012 23:52
    i thought u said it would be out this weekend bro

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2012 00:13
    Dont have him sleep with the mom but the Idea with the two milfs together is interesting. and great job by the way

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2012 00:18
    All sexy females txt me @ 704 241 1850

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2012 00:19
    Man u r doin awesome wit this story somestory would be proud

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2012 00:27
    I like where this is going >:) well done.

    Friendly tips: pretty much any guy likes lesbian scenes, and seduction is ALWAYS a major turn-on in stories and videos.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2012 04:43
    Love the story, and u hv done a great job.plz write more

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2012 08:21
    For those who don't know somestory is back go check it out he has 2 new different stories with a message at the bottom of the first about 3 evil sisters

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2012 18:09
    I still can't wait for the next chapter.when you posting it?

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.04.2012 19:11
    Ur late again.... Oh sorry for the third time

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2012 00:03
    Patiently waiting for the next chapter man

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2012 06:44
    man u rock. keep postin and the good comments will kee coming!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2012 14:33
    dont want to be a party breaker or something but u are going to look like somestory that vanished for a couple of days and looks like ur not posting the next part !!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2012 14:49
    Hey, Guys, Part 9 would have been out today, but unfortunately, my computer had an issue and I lost all 27ish pages that I'd written. I'll try to have it out this weekend and I'm sorry for the delay. No one is more irritated about it than me. In the mean time, check out my Mr. Wong's Curios series and thanks for reading.

    im not duskflair just passing it on so people stop complaining

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2012 16:43
    he said that last thursday

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2012 17:51
    This guy does you guys a favour by continuing and you hammer him for not writing a new chapter quick enough? Fukkk get a life

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2012 18:48
    have you guys thought also he isn't going to write part 9 cause 3 evil sisters isn't his story and because somestory asked him to stop it cause again if u don't know people somestory is back not with the true part 7 of 3es but a different story and its really good

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.04.2012 01:07
    write the next one right fucking now

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.04.2012 14:21
    duskflair sucks donky dick and can only steal a series as good as 3es instead of making something of his own I would watch out if I was a writer on here this ass might try to steal more!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.04.2012 23:10
    Fuck all you haters. If somestory won't finish it, duskflair should. He's a better writer anyway.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.04.2012 00:07
    if somestory wont finish, it man can u pls finish it, this story is awesome PLEASE!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.04.2012 01:20
    I like the story so far but when are you going to write part 9?

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.04.2012 04:28
    You guys have to check out Ashley's diary! Its hot. The hole toy store boy series is a good read while waiting for the next 3es!

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  • soulmate087
    19.04.2012 17:30
    I've enjoyed the way that you've continued the series - the characters are, for the most part, constant and you've moved the plot along. I look forward to the next installment - keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.04.2012 23:07
    some story is having a hard time writing a part 7 of 3es. and now dusk's computer crashes! one would think that this series is cursed

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2012 00:15
    Why are you stealing somestories shit bruh

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2012 08:57
    Its a fanfic. So it not stealing

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  • Jswab
    20.04.2012 09:02
    Aside from it being a fanfic, it's hardly stealing. He's given proper notice that it's not his story. Personally, he has every right to continue this story since SomeLoser isn't going to.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2012 10:57
    All I can say is whens the next one?

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2012 16:51
    write part 9 already more more more plz

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2012 06:23
    when is the next part coming out cause I like how you continued (CONTINUED NOT STOLE FOR ALL YOU DUMBASSES WHO THINKS HE STOLE IT) the story since somestorys dumbass is going to writs another storyand not continue 3es his fucking ugly ass self

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2012 01:27
    when the fuck is the next one coming out or are your just gonna leave us waiting like the other author did.... dam cant count on shit anymore...fucking fail

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2012 12:01
    fuck this shit how long will it take before u upload the next part

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2012 18:10
    You all need to back the fuck up its just a story its not the end of the world if it stops here others have there was one I think of was called time stopper or something like that and it stopped and the world kept turning

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2012 19:47
    Pls dnt stop like some story did cause that would suck dick :( wanna ending to the series

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2012 22:24
    Deja vu?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2012 16:01
    when does part 9 come out

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2012 22:10
    p
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    9 please

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 03:43
    Dear duskflair, please don't ditch us like somestory........please bring out another part....i check 5 times a day and now its starting to piss me off......a humble request....please..

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 05:39
    Hey duskflair enough with the waiting already where is part 9? Its been over 2 weeks already so lets have it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 10:45
    Pretty good, a lot of spelling and grammar errors though. Do not rush just because some horny idiots can not wait. Take your time and check through all the errors. Keep up the good work. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 14:36
    It's happening again. He ditched us like SomeStory. Somebody else continue the story for us.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 18:11
    I give up on the series, I wont be back

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2012 23:54
    It's the story, its cursed to kill any writer who decides to continue it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2012 18:34
    In two days its been a fucin month

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2012 19:13
    Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaas don't ditch us
    Great story tough

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2012 21:03
    Christ, this will never end, we're never going to get a proper ending, it's mass effect 3 all over again

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.04.2012 17:12
    Give him some credit, it's not even his story but he's continuing it. At least give him 10-15 days. Nice story Duskflair.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.04.2012 23:11
    Didn't you people read his commint. His computer is not working and he lost all that stuff he made for next part. So pleas give him some time. If you guys can't weit, leave it.

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  • dav31092
    28.04.2012 22:57
    Im literally about to continue this story. Ill start writing right now and if its not up by the first im posting it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2012 05:55
    SomeStory is back, but won't continue.

    You still gonna keep going?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2012 05:55
    Ok this story is CURSED srysly fuck this shit someone write 1 more part and finish it PLEASE!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2012 06:14
    plz continue story and end this with happy ending THIS STORY IS REALY CURSED COMEON

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  • Shamsu
    29.04.2012 06:19
    plz continue this story make it long and make more romance caring etc

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  • Shamsu
    29.04.2012 06:21
    i like his last 3rd sister guys which character in 3evilsister you like

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  • Shamsu
    29.04.2012 06:21
    THIS IS IT THE MOST AMAZING ROMANTIC AND INCESTOUS STORY

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2012 13:02
    No dav31. Let him do it his own. I'm sure his computer will be fix soon he'll made it and by the way none of your story has rate more then 90. You'll ruin this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2012 13:02
    No dav31. Let him do it his own. I'm sure his computer will be fix soon he'll made it and by the way none of your story has rate more then 90. You'll ruin this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2012 14:11
    just to let everyone SomeStory is planning on writing 3 Evil Sisters Part 4 after he finishes his new series. So much respect for Duskflair for writting these parts, but after the next part perhaps it's time to hand it back to SomeStory - to avoid fans getting confused.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2012 19:24
    Wtf?? Wats takin the sob so long 2 write A F*ING STORY?? Its just A F*ING STORY, write nxt part already will u?!

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  • duskflair
    01.05.2012 14:32
    Hi, guys. I know you're all very eager for the next part and I'm eager to get it to you, but after my computer malfunctioned, you guys ran into when Final Exams start for me. I'll have the next Part out after Exams are over, so don't worry, the story's not cursed and I'm not dead. I have some very big things in store for the future. In the mean time, check out my other series (which I can see you haven't done yet), read some other people's work, and thanks for being patient. I really appreciate all your comments... even the insane ones.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.05.2012 23:10
    Fuck if it ain't cursed. Think about it.some story had problems wit his computer as well plus a bunch of other stuff that happened right AFTER he started ...... Like I said before CURSED. I'm getting pissed though I really want an ending and I'll continue it myself if I have to. O_O I'm mad bro.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.05.2012 00:06
    it be awsome if this story would just keep going like a show tipe thing just with a lol of sex ha ha.doing great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.05.2012 00:06
    it be awsome if this story would just keep going like a show tipe thing just with a lol of sex ha ha.doing great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.05.2012 01:42
    Okay, we have some pretty hilarious spelling/omission errors here.

    "Now that my dick and her dick were both soaking wet, Izzy took hold of my dick and pressed it between her tits as she came forward."

    ""Harder! You fuck like third grader!" Izzy growled at me, turning her head."

    " I crawled into the back and Izzy pulled my against her, her lips dragging across mine roughly while I felt Riley's hands on my boxers, pulling them down"

    Those are really minor quibbles though. Best Izzy scene of the story so far, and I love what you're doing with the characters. You definitely know them really well.

    I'd say we should let SomeStory decide whether he wants to acknowledge these "fanon" parts as "canon" or not. But I'd be PERFECTLY fine with both versions seeing continuation, as an "alternate universe" thing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.05.2012 22:18
    ik ur comp got wiped off the 9th part but plz this is probablly the nly book ive ever read in my life tht I like

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.05.2012 23:33
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    guy below it's supposed to say tits retard THINK

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2012 18:22
    "Pulled off my Dick" I started laughing at that part. In my opinion I like your stories a little better but that may be because SomeStory takes forever to publish.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.05.2012 13:12
    I really want dusk to post the next part now or sooner, BUT I also don't want him to flunk the exams just to write sex stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.05.2012 19:28
    Who is the real author of this story? You, or Athlonri? He's got all three parts of this exact story on his page.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.05.2012 15:52
    The original auther is Somestory. But, he flaked or something (IDK) and Duskflair picked up the series to continue the story.

    T

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  • AnotherDeviant
    08.05.2012 00:05
    You're like Ashley. Fucking with our emotions!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2012 09:43
    Final exams should be over man it's been a week fuck man this story really is cursed.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2012 16:17
    hurry up with part 9 please

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2012 16:17
    hurry up with part 9 please

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.05.2012 20:37
    plz write more I love this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 09:27
    I can't find the original story by SomeStory anymore, does anyone know it's whereabouts? Much appreciated.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 09:42
    I can't find the original story by SomeStory anymore, does anyone know it's whereabouts? Much appreciated.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 08:08
    Just find Somestory's profile by looking for A Not So Simple Life. Somestory promises to finish 3es after he finishes A Not So Simple Life. He also praises duskflair for his work on the series

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.05.2012 14:26
    Whoever writes this story never completes it :((

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.05.2012 15:32
    please where is part 9 please

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2012 00:47
    Half these people will commit suicide if Part 9 isn't out by next week lol.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.05.2012 23:41
    you have got to keep writing these. please. these are awsome.

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  • slobby
    22.05.2012 13:34
    KEEP GOING PLEASE ok enough shouting I really thought Mum was going to get seen too but hell I can wait.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.05.2012 18:01
    dude these our great cant wait for you to finish this btw dont rush take your time :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.05.2012 23:21
    hurry the fuck up dam

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2012 00:55
    great but when is the next part

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2012 01:46
    It's been 2 months dude hurry the fuck up. Nuff' said
    Lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2012 18:51
    it has been 2 and a half weeks since your "final exams" plea bargain. the least you can do is post updates of your status while you make us wait

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2012 20:18
    it has been 2 and a half weeks since your "final exams" plea bargain. the least you can do is post updates of your status while you make us wait

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.05.2012 13:31
    When you say "my dick and her dick were now coated in saliva" did you mean "my dick and her tits?

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.05.2012 13:32
    Really they made my quote symbols into words? Wtf...

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.05.2012 13:33
    Oh and soaking wet not coated, sorry for triple post

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.05.2012 22:06
    I really like what u hav done so far. im kinda upset about how easily max forgave his sister for blackmailing him with the whole friends mom thing and use spell check more. my idea if u want to completely finish off the story is have have a 7 way with him and his sisters, his mom, his friend and his friends mom but pls dont end it too soon. my suggestion for all thoes who are waiting try to forget about it and check in like in a few weeks bc when it comes out u wont hav to wait as long as the other people. back to the author I love what u have done so far keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.05.2012 10:03
    This dude chickend out someone else needs to right the next parts

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 00:50
    OK well both some story and dusk flair abandoned this story so,,, Could someone who is NOT a total douche bag write1-2 more prts and end this? A 10 part story would be good and also dusk set this up where you can tell it's about to end .please x 10 someone finish this I NEEED A ENDING.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 00:53
    Maby he doesn't have acsec to a computer or is grounded or somtin like dat. He just doesn't. Seem like someone that would drop out for no reason. Unlike a certain writer I know.......( cough)somestory(cough)

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 03:45
    I read this story the first dit came out! You're an amazing ass writer. Please continue to write this story. I check in here every week to see if you've continued it buuuut you haven't. :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.06.2012 15:51
    so is the story over with I hope not

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2012 05:21
    He lives downstairs just saying.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2012 02:22
    been a long while since your last update, its really cuality writing so I can wait but I really think you should at least give some sort of update as to why you havent posted or if you even plan on posting in the future

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 11:58
    very good writing but next story(if there is one) as punishment he should fuck issy in the ass

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 19:19
    Come on let's get another

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 20:57
    Loved the original series and you have picked it up so perfectly, please continue the story!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 00:20
    ur such a piece of shit I took a break and came back a month later and u still dont got the story ur prmised people u little bastard FUCKK YOU I wish u was under the twin towers when they fell

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 22:05
    C'mon, I hope you put up another chapter or let people know you stopped.

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  • Johnnyloon88
    18.06.2012 07:06
    It's summer schools out so now what's the reason you have not put the next part I'll like to see how you end it since somestory hasnt even finished the story he is working on

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.06.2012 02:32
    Cmon dusk where be pt 9? Dont give up on this yet and dont sweat p

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2012 17:06
    somestory seems to have abandoned his new story as well, and there looks to be no sign of ever seeing 3ES continued. I would love to see you finish, or even resume 3ES and ignore what somestory may or may not say, it's not like he's copyrighted his story, and if you're worried just change the name and move forward! There's no shame in a bit of fan fiction ;D. Anyways, looking forward to anything you put out in the future.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2012 17:06
    somestory seems to have abandoned his new story as well, and there looks to be no sign of ever seeing 3ES continued. I would love to see you finish, or even resume 3ES and ignore what somestory may or may not say, it's not like he's copyrighted his story, and if you're worried just change the name and move forward! There's no shame in a bit of fan fiction ;D. Anyways, looking forward to anything you put out in the future.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2012 17:07
    somestory seems to have abandoned his new story as well, and there looks to be no sign of ever seeing 3ES continued. I would love to see you finish, or even resume 3ES and ignore what somestory may or may not say, it's not like he's copyrighted his story, and if you're worried just change the name and move forward! There's no shame in a bit of fan fiction ;D. Anyways, looking forward to anything you put out in the future.

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  • KirillTheRussian
    24.06.2012 17:07
    somestory seems to have abandoned his new story as well, and there looks to be no sign of ever seeing 3ES continued. I would love to see you finish, or even resume 3ES and ignore what somestory may or may not say, it's not like he's copyrighted his story, and if you're worried just change the name and move forward! There's no shame in a bit of fan fiction ;D. Anyways, looking forward to anything you put out in the future.

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  • KirillTheRussian
    24.06.2012 17:07
    somestory seems to have abandoned his new story as well, and there looks to be no sign of ever seeing 3ES continued. I would love to see you finish, or even resume 3ES and ignore what somestory may or may not say, it's not like he's copyrighted his story, and if you're worried just change the name and move forward! There's no shame in a bit of fan fiction ;D. Anyways, looking forward to anything you put out in the future

    -forgot to sign in

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  • KirillTheRussian
    24.06.2012 17:10
    lol, FAIL *facepalm*

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.06.2012 17:13
    this is ridiculous, how we're all acting. sure i'm a little upset that dusk has made no post whatsoever, but when it comes down to it, its just a sex story, that's it. this may be my favorite, but its not a store opening up or a delivery, its just a sex story, so calm down and be patient

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.06.2012 23:06
    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 20:56
    Ok some of these comments r so crazy I'm pissed off too but cmon now.no need for death threats.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.07.2012 19:02
    the best story I ever read from the begining. but.. I dont like when its start turn to Bisexual..

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.07.2012 19:04
    the best story I ever read from the begining. but.. I dont like when its start turn to Bisexual..

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.07.2012 00:58
    PLEASE WRITE I CHECK ALMOST EVERYDAY BUT DONT EVER SEE #9

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2012 01:01
    Awesome story man, but use a different page set up because the people on phones and iPods can't read this easily and you could lose readers and fans. Keep up the story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2012 19:48
    when is the next chapter coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2012 01:23
    I really hope this a never ending series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.07.2012 00:14
    This story will never get finished somestory didnt finish and now duskfair wont. I really want to see a next part but I dont think there will be one

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  • Reader0602
    24.07.2012 12:08
    I love this story I can't wait to keep reading it. When is the next part going to come out?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.08.2012 11:05
    cant wait for more to see what happens next great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.08.2012 20:33
    And people say this story isn't cursed
    srsly if a new part doesn't come out in like a month i'll start my own user and start making a regular schedule for new parts of this series

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2012 01:00
    Please do but then u might see that wring 20 pages is alot of work

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2012 10:04
    ive been so reluctant to read your evil sisters stories because I had preferred the originals. but I dont even think somestory could top what you've done. Well done

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2012 00:30
    i am going to bust a nut if the next part doesnt come out within two weeks srsly dusk....if you plan on continueing somebody elses unfinished work...THEN FINISH IT IN AT LEAST 1-2 WEEKS PER PART

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2012 00:38
    What...The...Fuck... dont tell me ..... Are you getting so e amusement out of these comments ,dusk, ? are u?

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2012 08:59
    We want an0ther part please publish some more

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2012 08:31
    The next part please...........

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2012 19:49
    keep it coming man this is the best series on the site its a shame somestory diappeared and I think its good that your continuing his story and I think you still should the story is deffinately getting interesting you really should continue cant wait for the next part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2012 03:36
    ytcycfutfctbrubcbturcbrctutrbcurtbcurbtcubrtcubrtc turtles! :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2012 22:11
    Oh please please please make a new chapter!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2012 16:42
    I'm sooo sick of these types of authors who never finish a damn story. Like why even Fucking bother writing anyway if you are just gonna quit. First somestory now you after you picked up the story he quit writing! !!! Like wtf why!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.09.2012 14:59
    I love the story but Maybe the story is cursed

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.09.2012 14:46
    dieing to see were you go and what happens love the story keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.09.2012 07:00
    its big mastrubate10times

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2012 00:21
    dude where is part 9 and 10 cuz I love 3 evil sister story its the best

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2012 00:24
    Having gene mom at his house with max mom OMFG gosh this is going 2 get reall gooood dude plz hurry with the next part I am loving it 1000 times great keep it cummin

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.10.2012 00:35
    Every time I get on here I search for 3 evil sister 2 c if there is any new chapterr and u my friend u make strory that makes me super wet and cum all over my sheets plz bring n sum more chapters

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2012 07:05
    dude you got to make it were max gets it on with gene

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2012 15:32
    I thought It was awesome I'm so horny but when is parrt 9 coming out I wouldve been better if max was 16

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.10.2012 13:55
    When is part 9 coming out I love 3 evil sisters

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  • army+lad
    27.10.2012 05:31
    dose anyone know who wrote part 9?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2012 17:25
    This story is so cool my favorite way to jerk off to this is by shoving pencils in my dick and watching it bleed cum.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2012 23:04
    For the love of God write more!! I'd pay to read more $$$

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2013 06:55
    i would like to read more ...one question why are the rest of the parts or chapters missing after you submit a new story ..its kind of disapointing to know that most of your great works are gone and missed by some of the youngers who have come to just know your work but would like to see your previous works too..its sad because I feel that I come in that catagoury..hope you have saved your past work so you can repost it ....

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.03.2013 10:42
    And they said this story wasn't cursed!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 21:20
    so where's the next chapter,?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 22:01
    I hope the next chapter will be posted soon!! plz! plz! plz!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.03.2013 04:42
    chapter 9 please....

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2013 00:20
    Why did you stop writing these?

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2013 01:24
    You're doing pretty good, love to see more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.04.2013 15:20
    im honestly hoping that this story will continue

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2013 17:34
    Dude if you don't carry this on I will find you and kill you :) Al.so you are doing an amazing job with the story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2013 18:44
    I want part 9 please :3

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.05.2013 21:26
    Quite good!
    Hope to see a ninth part soon!

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  • dragonboy18
    09.05.2013 22:45
    what happen next I love to see more.

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  • datsuya
    12.05.2013 00:25
    You did an awesome job with this continuation. I wish you would do another chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.05.2013 18:20
    Great story, your continuation of this series is perfect in my opinion, your sex scenes are well developed and detailed an really creates the image in the readers mind, hope u finish the series and don't just stop writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2013 22:32
    to bad there probably wont be anymore sad when good things stop to soon :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.06.2013 19:51
    What the fuck? Why do all the good stories just stop? It's very disappointing. You did a great job writing this, but you can't just tease us like that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.07.2013 13:11
    Grate story plz continue

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.08.2013 16:27
    i remember reading this 3 years ago the whole series and I loved it then it just stopped when it got good wtf!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.08.2013 07:42
    Dude
    Finish the storie
    And make them longer in length,add more scenes

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.09.2013 15:38
    mfHjnR Enjoyed every bit of your post.Much thanks again.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2013 16:15
    Please continue with this stroy

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.09.2013 19:15
    Good so far. Making them a bit longer would be nice. Cant wait for the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 02:09
    Hey! where is part 9! tf man, come on, its been almost 8 months, how long u gonna keep us waiting?!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.12.2013 21:37
    how can you have a chapter seven and eight but no one through six unless you are stealing them. delete all stories and never post here again you couldn't write a complete story if your life depended on it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2014 03:36
    Comment before me ppl want the continuation so shut the fucking hell up you ungrateful bitch

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.07.2014 17:09
    Amazing more plz apparently dumb asses below don't know how to read the authors notes I love this series great job hurry up and write now plz

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2014 16:32
    Great. Hope there's a part 9

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2014 18:16
    This is absolutely amazing man pls more ashley perhaps izzy brings an uptight friend for max I dont know cause ur,an amazing author I say its ur choice

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2014 05:50
    Omg I love it!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2014 16:27
    I posted earlier but please mooooorrreeee lol im addicted to this series! I love it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2014 15:00
    Please post more your continuation of the series is awesome!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.12.2014 23:00
    PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER PART OR A COUPLE OF OTHER PARTS.. THIS STORY IS AMAZING AND I LIKE YOUR WRITING, MOST OF THESE STORIES ARE BORING ON HERE BUT NOT Y

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.12.2014 03:12
    Just to make sure this is the last one for now right.. Can anyone please tell me

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.01.2015 10:35
    Is the author dead?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2015 09:57
    Ver nie continuation

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2015 02:28
    i think this is the last one the author got hit by a bus well thats what I was told

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.05.2015 03:12
    It was great. You should add the mom in, make it a foursome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.07.2015 18:57
    its awesome if gene's house was destroyed and gene will live over their house ;-)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.08.2015 20:10
    "Now that my dick and her dick are all wet" lmao

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.08.2015 21:12
    "Now that my dick and her dick are all wet" lmao

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.09.2015 11:31
    Add more to the story I wane to see the sister and the mom join in at some point

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.11.2015 20:43
    Great story add in the other sister and mom and keep on posting

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.12.2015 08:30
    Izzy should not get a happy ending seriously fuck that slut

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.01.2016 05:46
    more more more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.01.2016 17:34
    I'm sorry to criticize but izzy is a blond but I still love the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2016 01:17
    Nope you're wrong in the very first chapter of this story Izzy is described as having: 'chin length black hair that always seemed to rest over one of her emerald green eyes.'

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.01.2016 09:10
    I think you should make it more about Max and Riley.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 18:36
    You should keep writing them

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.02.2016 09:43
    Somestory is great guy. Its amazing to see same story picked by various people and yet maintain the hotness. great job all the writers!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.02.2016 21:32
    you are great keep written

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.02.2016 13:26
    Looking forward to the next part
    ps I loved the model thing abt Izzy and bi curious was just genious..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2016 04:09
    Just for the record, Max's bedroom is the master bedroom on the first floor, but you said in this chapter that he was upstairs. Love the new chapters though, and can't wait for number 9!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2016 01:59
    Just for the record, Max's bedroom is the master bedroom on the first floor, but you said in this chapter that he was upstairs. Love the new chapters though, and can't wait for number 9!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.04.2016 23:00
    Now you got something in this part, waiting for part 9 through

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2016 01:19
    Can't wait for chapter 9

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.05.2016 05:22
    are you dead?.....lmao

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.06.2016 21:35
    SOMEONE ELSE DID CHAPTER 9-11

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.06.2016 10:52
    I don't wanna read chapter 8 until chapter 9 is out..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.11.2016 21:47
    Great
    Waiting for next chapter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 18:58
    Make them all into Max's harem.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.02.2017 22:47
    Get dem all pregnant

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