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Sex games

  1. Please stop
  2. Please stop part 2
Please stop part 2

Author: Sexyanna23

Date: 1 April 2012

Incest, Fiction, Male / Female, Rape

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Woke up scared and in pain I wish none of this had happend
About 10min has gone by since I woke up and my dad walkes in I quickly shut my eyes and pretend I'm asleep he dose the same as he must of done last night I feel my legs parted and a dick go into my pussy "fuck yea I'm having. Sex with you wail your sleeping mmmmm that's right daddy's fucking your dirty pussy oh yea" I quickly open my eyes and he soon sees I did he forces me by my neck to stand up "GET ON THE BED LIL WHORE" "daddy please don't I'm sorry please just stop doing this""YOU ETHER ENJOY THE SEX OR IL MAKE IT AS PAINFUL AS EVER" I should just do as he says I clime onto the bed and he lays on "RIDE ME BITCH" iv learnt in sex ed all this stuff so I just do as I'm told at least I can enjoy it a little if I'm doing it "FUCK DADDY FASTER YOU AIN'T DOING IT RIGHT.........THAT'S IT IV HAD IT" he grabs my shoulder and shoves me out my door and into the bath room gets a pair of clippers "please daddy don't cut my hair please" "SHUT IT BITCH" he starts to cut my hair shoulder length badly I feel horrible now who I'm I as I'm standing forced into a sink I look at the mirror there's a big cut on the side of my face and cut on my lip and a black eye and now short hair who is this girl I see "NOW YOUR GOING TO FUCK ME RIGHT OR YOU WILL HAVE THE REST CHOPPED OFF " he dragges me by the neck back to my room and cos I do not want the rest my hair gone I do as he says "mmmm that's right fuck me faster slut" I just bite my lip even tho I like the feel if he knows that he will just carrie on"IM CUMMING DADDY....MMMM IS CUMMING" as soon after that I feel tingly and start to fuck faster I start to moan and as soon as he cums so do I few min after that "Looks like my sex toy enjoyed that" he pushes me off and I hit the floor after that the pain goes away agein
"Katie Katie wake up please" I open my eyes and I'm in a white room "Katie I'm sorry I hit you so hard you passed out I got you hear as soon as I seen you on your floor I'm so sorry"
"wear am I" "your in hospital you have a broken wrist and fracture to your head I'm so sorry and why the heck did you do that to your hair I found hair all in the bathroom why would you cut your hair so short"
"you cut my hair I I begged you not to but you did I hate you" he ran out the room crying so fast I hardly seen it
In the 4 days I was in hospital I hardly seen my dad he come in the room placed new clothes on the chair and went home
I was finally realised and sent home in a taxi when I got home I opened the door and my dad was up stairs smashing some think I put my bag down and ran up stairs he was in my room as I got in there my mattress was on the floor and all my pictures was smashed up so was my window
"DAD WHAT R YOU DOING" I go over to him to try stop him but he pushes me on the mattress and starts to rape me "DADDY PLEASE STOP PLEASE YOU GOTTA STOP" SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU LIL BITCH YOUR SO SELFISH MMMMM....I HAVE TO RAPE YOU FOR YOU TO HAVE SEX WITH ME" "daddy please stop" by now once again he's raping me hard and fast as he could.
This carried on for 5more weeks untill he stopped the drinking every time my hair was trying to grow back he cut it short I had more marks on me then a bashed in Barbie doll
I woke up on my mattress and my dad walked in probaly sober now I kept my eyes shut just incase I felt his finger poking at my legs wear his marks were at my rib cage were there was more marks,he touched my hair and then the black eye my cut lip I felt him bend over me and kiss me head I decided to pretend to wake up
"good morning Katie" i decided to give im a morning in a firm nasty tone "morning" "I know your mad just please forgive me here lay back"I was not going to fight any more I would only get hurt worse so I layed back,unlike every other time he started to lick my pussy "mmmm daddy" he licked round my soure hole then back to the lips and back to the hole "mmmm daddy faster"I pushed his head agents my pussy he licked round my clit "mmmm daddy....I'm I'm comming" I feel all warlm and amazing this is the best thing ever I tout I peed my self in daddy's face "sorry I peed on your face daddy" he started laughing "Katie that was not pee that was cum you squirt only amazing girls can do that and your amazing I love you please let me make it up to you""ok daddy" he came up to me and for the first time ever gave me a lovers kiss so much care and love in it felt like heaven,he started kissing down my neck then he got to my boobs he creased one at a time then started licking round my nipple and sucked "mmmm I love you daddy" "love you too princess" he licked slowly down my body and then my inner thighs he sat up and got between my legs and slowly this time pushed his cock in me,he started to go in and out first slow and soft be he picked up the pace a little at a time "mmmmm daddy fuck me harder mmm yea faster " I can tell he's enjoying it too he has his eyes closed and his breath is spreading up so is he"mmmmm daddy I'm cummmmmiiiinnnggg".....(sorry you did not like part 1 iv tried a little harder now I did say it was my first story hopefully they will get a lot better)


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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 19:18
    Can't even try to read it. Gibberish. Do some editing and formatting.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2012 21:17
    Well, you still can’t spell or use sentences.

    As far as getting a lot better, if this is an example don’t bother.

    You are not a very good writer. Admit it! Then get on with your life.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 01:52
    Structure is bad, but I do not rate on structure, I just think this is a bad
    story, just right in to dad just rapes daughter for no reason. bad story line....

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 15:46
    After getting her arm broken and spending three days in the hospital she comes home and Dad rapes her to an orgasm.

    Get real.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 16:47
    QUIT WRITING. YOU DON'T KNOW HOW!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 18:25
    Please use a spellcheck the letter "r" is not a replacent for" are" in a story your not texting your friends. Decent story kind of short though just keep at it spellcheck and proof reading helps a lot

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 19:59
    Just some friendly advise, first try to build a better storyline, second use spell check or have a friend proof read. Lastly if you want to write a first person narrative, write as someone you can relate to and write as. No negative comments here, just advise. Keep practicing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2012 23:54
    I like the story line. But if your gonna do abuse things you should keep it tha
    T way. If my father raped me I would never forgive him just because he eats me out. Even if this is just a sex story I'm an author and I have a literature degree. The story would actually make a great book if you would check your spelling and turn this into a longer more sectioned story. Other than the very few things I found that needed work you have great potential. Keep it up. 8 out of 10.

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  • Ed+Itor
    03.04.2012 07:03
    Do us a favour and make this your last.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 11:34
    This is for all who have written negative comments.

    Whether or not he is a good writer is only a matter of opinion. And don't tell him to quit writing! A ll he needes is practice and support. If you must leave a negative comment then do so in a manner where you will still be giving him support through helpful advice.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2012 22:05
    @ 2012-04-03 11:34:48
    Dude this is not a second grade classroom. No'one has to coddle the writer. The simple fact is that this story SUCKS MAJOR ASS. All of the comments say why this story sucks major ass and I happen to agree. It's not an opinion it's a fact. there is no flow, rhyme or reason to this story. The grammer is so horrible that it made my brain hurt to read it. I selected the story by mistake, but decided to read it since it was up and as a result my pussy dried up faster than a snail in the Saharan desert by the time I was done. Thats how you know this story sucked. A pussy that was wet became dry.
    @the auther
    Try finding an editor before you post anymore stories. The story has potential but it's just sooooo so so bad bad.
    SERIOUSLY, GET AN EDITOR OR NEVER POST ANOTHER STORY AGAIN.
    Best of luck.....

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2012 18:38
    Is this hw u write stories,go n learn mre.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2012 09:14
    I have read part 1 and now part 2...***AND IT ALL SUCKS***give this shit up ***AND DO IT NOW NOT LATER***...

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2012 03:33
    Made me cum so hard All over my laptop and on my bed you are the best author ever keep writing more

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.11.2013 20:09
    I think your story is great just the grammar and misspellings are the problem. I dont want to be mean like all the jerks but this needs some editing. I think since you are 22 you can work on it. Like misspellings and the grammar and when you use dialogue you should press enter to go down and write who said it like my brother said. One time I thought it was the broter speaking, speaking of brothers the brothers have never done a thing. She and the father screamed a lot and it never said the door closed so maybe you should squeeze in the brothers. I hope that this will help. Again I am not trying to be mean.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.01.2016 19:01
    Fucking pathetic

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