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A Not-So-Simple Life: Part 4

Author: SomeStory

Date: 11 May 2012

Teen, Fiction, Threesome, Young

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The cafeteria died, figuratively of course, but it did feel like I was staring at bunch of ghosts after that. Everywhere I looked I was met with pale, awestruck faces that I tried my best to ignore as I weaved through the crowd. Keeping my head down, I managed to break free from the mass and escape the cafeteria, leaning up against the wall to try and gather myself momentarily before heading towards my class.

When I was about halfway there, I heard stampeding footsteps behind me. I turned to check who it was when Shawn suddenly tackled me to the ground.

“Are you insane!” he shouted in my ear, strangling me in the process. “Do you have any idea what you just did!?”

“Shawn relax,” Jason wrenched him off me.

“Relax? Did you not hear what he said?”

“Yeah, I heard him. So what?”

“So what? He just said no to Heartbreak Hailey! He’s got to be insane!”

“He’s probably got a good reason Shawn. Jeez you’re his friend remember? You can’t go tackling him when he’s already banged up like that. What the fuck is wrong with you?”

“What’s wrong with me? There’s nothing wrong with me! There’s something wrong with him!” he pointed at me as I sat up and rubbed my already bruised ribs.

“There’s no point talking to you is there?” Jason helped me to my feet, “You alright man?”

“Yeah, just a little shaken up at the fact that my own fucking friend did that,” I replied looking at Shawn.

I tried to take a step forward but was met with a wall of pain that almost caused me to collapse. Luckily Jason caught me and held me up, “Christ bro! Thought you said you were alright?”

“Well I didn’t exactly plan on getting my ribs smashed in again,” I clutched my side. “Nice catch by the way.”

“Don’t mention it. C’mon, we need to get you to class so you can rest before this shit storm catches up to you.”

With his help, I limped my way to the classroom with Shawn grumbling his annoyance the entire way. It was a pain to listen to the blubbering’s of a jealous horn dog the entire way but I was more focused on breathing properly then telling off someone who I thought was my friend to quit being a bitch about it.

When we got to the classroom, Melissa dropped the coffee mug in her hand the moment she saw me. It splattered like a bug on windshield once it hit the ground, the coffee and shattered remnants of the mug flying in directions, but she ignored it all as she rushed to my side.

“What happened to you?” she asked worriedly.

“Long story short, Tucker got in a fight a couple days ago and Shawn decided that it’d be a good idea to tackle him to the ground.” Jason explained.

“Why on earth would you do that Shawn?”

He mumbled something under his breath, making sure to look away now that the spotlight was on him.

“I think what he’s trying to say is that he hit Tucker in a jealous rage because the love of his life asked Tucker out and he said no.” Jason said after helping me to my desk.

“Are you ok?” Melissa asked, leaning down to look at me.

“I’ll be fine,” I tried to reassure her, “Just wasn’t expecting to get hit by my own friend.” Resting my head on the desk, I sighed softly, “I just need a couple seconds to recuperate is all.”

“Alright, but if you want to go to the nurses office just let me know ok?”

I nodded my head softly as everything slowly but surely started to calm down. Eventually the bell rang to begin class and everyone filed into class, although any idiot could have guessed that there was something wrong. The elephant in the room became clearer as the day went on because no one actually paid attention to Melissa as far as I was aware. There was constant whispering and I caught the occasional glances from my classmates that quickly snapped their attention back towards the front whenever I turned to acknowledge them.

Hailey was the worse as far as I could tell. Since she sat near the front, it meant that everyone could see her statue like body. I’m not even kidding when I thought she had turned to stone because she didn’t move an inch all through first session and break, and only after some friends got her attention did she finally get up to go get lunch.

“Jeez, she’s taking it pretty rough,” Jason said. “Can’t really blame her though. I mean, she never takes a chance on any guy, and the first one she does, shuts her down in front of a crowd of people.”

“I didn’t invite those people did I?” I countered while bringing out my lunch.

“Exactly,” Shawn said, sitting down in the desk in front of me, “It’s about time someone broke Hailey’s heart instead of the other way around.”

He went to grab my lunch and I latched onto his wrist angrily.

“You’ve got a lot of nerve jackass,” I growled. “After the shit you pulled this morning you’re lucky my hands are wrapped up because if they weren’t I would’ve hit you so hard you wouldn’t remember all the hypocritical shit you’ve done.”

“What are you talking about?”

“Dude,” Jason shook his head, coming to my defense. “You deserve an award for all the hypocrisy that shoots out of your mouth. Seriously man, fucked up.”

“Oh come on,” he sounded desperate. “You’re not seriously gonna get mad at me right Tucker? Right?”

“Mad? Shawn I’m at the point where I’m wondering why we even hang out,” I said.

“Jason talk some sense into him man.”

“Hell no. I agree with Tucker. He took a fucking beating protecting one of the billion girls of your dreams and instead of thanking him you just reinjure him. I’m starting to wonder why I hang out with you too.”

Like a scolded puppy, he turned around and put his head down but I’d be lying if I said that I wasn’t pissed off at all the crap he was inadvertently putting me through. I wolfed my lunch down quickly before putting my head down and trying to pretend that I didn’t just make headline news at the school again. It was pretty hard though. And by pretty hard, I mean fucking impossible. The doorway out had people looking in…at me, and the classmates that were inside had eyes glued to me like some kindergarten arts and craft project, and it was taken to a new level when I glanced outside and saw people actually standing right outside the window to look at me. My only option was to close my eyes, so that’s what I did until the bell to end school rang.

Thanks to my injuries, I couldn’t dart out of the school like last time, so instead, I opened up the window and went out that way. Jason laughed so hard he cried, but being the good sport that he was, he followed me out the window and helped me sneak out of the premises before anyone could stop me. We parted ways at the park and I dragged my gimp ass to the restaurant, which was the lone silver lining in all of this.

My apron as well as my old pair of keys was waiting for me inside my locker. I got dressed and looked at the list to see what I’d be doing today. After lucking out with kitchen duty, I joined Rocky in the kitchen.

“Feeling better?” he asked.

“Turned down the most popular girl in school in front of a couple dozen people. So…no.”

“Could be worse.”

“How so?”

“You could still be looking for a job.”

“Good to be back Rocky.”

“Good to have you back.”

That was the extent of our conversation, and it brought a smile to my face as I continued to cook without a hitch. It was almost like I hadn’t left it all. No one came in and welcomed me back either. Everything went on as if the last couple weeks didn’t happen, and if I had to be honest it was just what I needed to relax.

Time flew by and before I knew it, I was already done with my shift. When I went into the locker room to change, Lexi had just finished up her shift as well and was waiting for me to get off. The tension between us had lessoned a bit so I agreed to walk home with her.

“How was school?” she asked.

“Pretty terrible,” I kicked a rock down the sidewalk.

“Did something happen?”

“Just school drama. I don’t really want to talk about it.”

“It can’t be that bad can it?”

“It can actually.” Rearing back, I punted the rock as far forward as it could. We both followed it with our eyes as it hopped, skipped, and jumped down the side walk at a surprising speed until it bumped into someone’s foot. My gaze slowly started to lift up as I got a good view of a very sexy, and very familiar body. “Um, hi Ms. Benson.”

“Hello Tucker,” she smiled at me before looking at Lexi and I watched as her smiling face slowly morphed into that of a professional poker player’s, “And you must be Lexi.”

“Um, yes I’m Lexi,” she replied giving me an uneasy look. “Who is she?”

“She’s my homeroom teacher.”

“Oh, well it’s nice to meet you Ms. Benson.”

“Likewise.”

“So,” I cautiously began, “Is there something you need Ms. Benson?”

“Yes actually, I was wondering if I could speak with you two.”

“Both of us?” she nodded. “Uh, sure, let’s go inside I guess.”

A tsunami of uneasiness swept over me as I walked over to my door and unlocked it. I had no reason to feel like something bad was going to happen but with the day I was having, I was starting to expect the worst possible outcome with everything I did. Maybe the reason I felt especially wary at the moment was because I’ve had sex with both of them.

Yeah…something tells me that might be why.

After setting my things down, I went into the kitchen, “Can I get you anything Ms. Benson?”

“No I’m fine.”

“Lexi?”

“I’m good thanks.”

They both strangely followed me into the kitchen, taking a seat at the table across from one another as I leaned up against the counter and cracked open a soda.

“Well?” Lexi began, “What can we do for you Ms. Benson?”

“I’m here to talk about Tucker and his behavior over the last month.”

“And,” Lexi looked at me but I shrugged. In all honesty I didn’t know where she was going with this either. “What has his behavior been like over the last month?”

“To be frank, it’s bad. Over the last month his normally good attitude has shifted drastically. He’s always tired, his grades are starting to slip, he hardly talks in class anymore, and when he does it’s only to argue with one of his friends. Not only that, but from what his other classmates have told me he even turned down a girl that he had crush on for no reason. And let’s not forget the fact that he got into a fight as well. This all started the day you walked into my class as well, which, I might add, was extremely disrespectful and caused a lot of backlash for Tucker by the other students too.”

Lexi’s eyes slowly narrowed, “So you…think it’s all my fault?”

“I do actually.”

“You really think I’m the sole cause of all of this?”

“There’s no other explanation as to why he’s been acting so irrationally, so yes, I do. He also told me that you two had a little bit of history and I know that you forced yourself into his home so it’s obvious that you’re having a negative impact on him.”

“Is that so, Melissa.”

That sentence threw up more flags then the U.N.. I haven’t said Melissa’s first name in front of Lexi yet, so how the fuck does she know that? Unless…oh shit.

Realizing my situation, I tried to leave the room as nonchalantly as possible but Lexi caught my wrist.

“I think we should discuss this,” Lexi’s tone was surprisingly cheerful, but I could tell it had hidden force behind it. It may have sounded like an offer, but it was really an order. “Don’t you Tucker?”

“Yeah, just um, let me grab something from my room,” I put up one last desperation play in hopes of escaping but it was foiled by her grip.

“I’m sure it can wait,” she yanked me back towards the table. “Please, take a seat.” Yep. I’m screwed. I sat down in the chair, slinking as far down as I could without falling down. “So let’s talk about this a little more Melissa. What do you think we should do about this little problem?”

“I may be overstepping my boundaries a bit but I think you should leave,” Melissa proposed. “Or at least move out of his house.”

“Because I’m a bad influence, right?”

“Yes. You’re interfering with his education and health.”

“All by myself right?”

“Yes.”

“No one else is helping?”

“Not that I know off.”

“I see. I guess you have a point there, but are you sure I’m the only one at fault?”

Melissa raised a brow, “What do you mean? Do you think there’s another person affecting his lifestyle?”

“I don’t know,” she twirled her hair around her finger, “Is there?”

Call me impatient, but these hints were starting to get on my nerves. Seriously, if this was going to happen then I wanted it to be like ripping off a band-aid. Quick and incredibly painful.

I think Melissa was starting to get the hint because her stone cold expression slowly faded and her eyes moved to meet mine. Of course, I was staring at the center of the table as if my life depended on it so she wasn’t going to get any answers from me.

“I guess if you really wanted to point fingers then I might be held a little responsible, but I wouldn’t be the only person Melissa. After all,” she ceased her hair twirling. “It’s not like I claimed that I was pregnant right?”

She exploded to her feet, “Tucker you told her about that!”

All I could do was face palm.

“Nope, someone else did,” Lexi smiled. “But I thought she was kidding when she said that Tucker’s teacher claimed to be pregnant.” And that’s why I face palmed. Melissa must’ve realized it too because she slowly slithered back down onto her seat and groaned while Lexi laughed it up. “So this is the famous Melissa I’ve heard all about. I’m sorry that I didn’t really get a good look at you when I dropped off Tucker’s lunch that day but now it all makes sense at least. I’m curious though, how many times have you slept with him?”

“What the fuck?” I interjected. “Why are you asking her that? It has noth-”

“Tucker I’m talking to Melissa right now,” she interrupted, using the same tone she used when she blackmailed me into letting her stay here. “However, if she doesn’t want to answer then that’s fine. But since this is so serious I’d have to go to the principle tomorrow and talk to him about Tucker’s recent change in attitude. Of course, he’d have to know all the details, including the fact that Tucker’s homeroom teacher had sexual intercourse with him.”

“Twice!” Melissa said immediately. “We had sex twice.”

“Oh really? I didn’t think you guys actually had sex more then once but I guess I was wrong.” My hand was glued to my face now as Lexi continued to play Melissa like a drum. “So where did you guys have sex the second time?”

“The park.”

“No way! You guys did it outside?” Melissa weakly nodded. “How was it?”

“It was…nice,” her voice was reduced to a whisper.

“And who led the charge?” Melissa raised her hand sheepishly causing Lexi to laugh. “He did the thing where he makes you feel special didn’t he?”

“What do you mean?”

“Like, the first time we had sex he said the cheesiest thing ever to me,” she sighed, “But it still made me feel all warm and appreciated inside. Did he do the same thing to you?”

“Kind off. Wait, you guys had sex before?”

“You can answer this one Tucker.”

“What? No, keep me out of this.” I shook my head. “It’s your conversation remember?”

“C’mon Tucker you don’t want me to explain what happened do you?”

She’s right, I don’t want that. “Fine! Six years ago she took my virginity when she was babysitting me. We spent the next month having sex. Happy?”

“You lost your virginity at the age of ten?” Melissa asked. “Was it…willingly?”

I nodded.

“He was just so cute when he was a kid,” Lexi rested her head on her hand and looked at me. “That combined with what he said just drove me insane. Plus he was dangling his innocence in front of me like a string in front of a cat. And damn did I want that string.”

“Why are you telling her this?” I asked.

“I figured she’d want to know more about you and your sneaky ways.”

“Whoa don’t try and act like I’m some jackass who says whatever he needs too to win a girl’s heart. I meant what I said, to you, and to her.”

“And what did he say to you? I want hear it from Melissa’s perspective now.”

“Well,” Melissa began. “He said that if I was pregnant that he’d help raise the kid. He even offered to let me move in with him and talked about getting an extra job if he felt we needed me more and promised to never leave me. Through the whole thing he was calm and collective and never once got angry at me even though I was an emotional wreck. I just…thought it was so sweet of him to say that after everything that happened.”

“Where are you living now Melissa. If you don’t mind me asking.”

“I’m staying in a motel a short walk from the school.”

“Perfect!” Lexi clapped her hands together. “I expect you to move all your stuff in by tomorrow.”

“What?!” Melissa and I shouted in unison.

“You’re moving into this house,” she smiled devilishly. “Duh.”

“I-I can’t!” Melissa shook her head. “He’s my student it wouldn’t be right.”

“Yeah, and it’s my fucking house Lexi!” I shouted. “You can’t go making decisions like that!”

“But I can,” Lexi sang, “because if she doesn’t move in, I’ll tell the principal all about your little love affair with her.” That stopped all protests in their tracks. Melissa, much like myself, was left awestruck. Lexi had just blackmailed both of us into making Melissa move into the house but I have no idea why. “Is there a problem Melissa?”

“N-No. I’ll get my stuff and bring it in tomorrow I swear.”

“I’m glad you see things my way, now is there anything else you need or will that be all Melissa?” She shook her head. “Well then I’ll see you tomorrow!” Lexi showed her out the door and exchanged phone numbers as I followed cautiously. With a fearful wave, Melissa walked out of the house as Lexi slammed the door shut. “I think I’ll go make dinner now.”

“Start explaining!” I shouted as she walked past me.

“What is there to explain?”

“You just blackmailed my teacher into moving into my house. What the fuck do you think there is too explain?”

“I think you’re missing the point. When life hands you lemons,” she looked at me expectedly.

“When life hands me lemons? I don’t make lemonade. I make life take those fucking lemons back and have them explain why the fuck they think I wanted these lemons in the first place! In fact, I demand to see life’s manager because I’m absolutely furious as to why life thinks I want these fucking lemons. What am I gonna do with these lemons huh? Fuck lemonade, I want answers instead!”

“Wow!” she giggled, “I take it you’re referring to me when you say life huh?”

“Yep.”

“Do you really not like lemons though?”

“Cut the shit and start explaining!” I demanded. “I thought I could finally start trusting you again but then you pull this? What is going on in your head?”

“You’ll see.”

Call me an animal because I growled threateningly before heading for the door, “I’m going for a walk.”

“Ok! Don’t be to long though!”

I wasn’t in the mood to take orders from her, and since my hands were wrapped up I couldn’t take out my rage on a punching bag. So I headed to the one place I knew I could just say whatever I wanted.

“I mean honestly!” I shouted, pacing back in forth. “I can’t figure her out at all. This morning I thought things might actually start looking up for me, but holy crap was I wrong! I’m practically being alienated at school, my dream girl is a two faced bitch, my teacher is about to become my roommate, and my old babysitter does whatever she wants. Why is everything so complicated! Is it too much to ask for a simple life?”

I dropped to my knees and took a deep breath. I had been shouting for almost five minutes now and if anyone else was around I’m sure they wouldn’t have been particularly happy to me hear what was going on in my life.

“Who am I kidding though?” I mumbled falling backwards, “Life’s not simple. It hasn’t been simple since you two died.” Sighing, I looked at the tombstones of my parents, my tone admittedly becoming quieter as I calmed down. “Just once, I wish you guys would answer me, even if it was just to tell me that this is all my fault, which wouldn’t be too far from the truth really. Give me a break though. I know I screwed up in more ways than one, but I don’t exactly have someone to teach or reprimand me y'know? The small amount of guidance I have comes from Missy K and even then it’s like, only when I screw up and she finds out about it. If I really thought about it though, I should probably stop telling everyone at work about my life. A lot of problems seem to be stemming from that actually.” I chuckled a bit before getting to my feet and dusting myself off. “I better get back before she does something else that I’m going to regret. Take care guys…I uh, love you both.”

Shoving my hands in my pocket, I turned and left without looking back. I realize that talking to tombstones is about as effective as talking to a mirror, but I guess it was my way of showing that I still remembered them. Not that I’d ever forget them of course. It was just something I started doing whenever I was lost or needed help. That’s what normal kids would do right? Talk to their parents about problems. Some problems anyway, I mean, if my parents were alive no way in hell would I have told them about what I did with Melissa and Lexi. I’m stupid but I’m not that stupid.

I was back home before I knew it. Slamming the door shut I walked over to the table where Lexi was already enjoying her dinner.

“Welcome back!” she pulled out a chair next to her and patted it. “Did you have a nice walk?”

I grunted in response, taking a seat and not even bothering to do my usual food protest. She seemed bubbly after seeing me eat her food in front of her now that I had the choice of whether or not I wanted to.

“I’m going to go bed,” I announced, leaving my plate at the table. “Before I get blitzed with more surprises.”

“You want some company,” she purred.

“Nope.”

“Suit yourself!”

It was a peaceful night that led into a peaceful morning, and after grabbing my lunch Lexi announced that she was taking the day off to help get Melissa settled in who, coincidentally was also taking the day off. That was good news for me because I needed to do something at work without Lexi interfering, and if I saw Melissa at school right now it’d be more awkward than a hunchback chiropractor.

After successfully hopping through the classroom window again with Jason’s help, I sat down in my seat and relaxed.

“Heard we have a sub today,” he said leaning back in his chair. “Guess who’s not paying attention today.”

“You?”

“No, you.”

“How is that different from any other day?” I joked.

“You got a point there man,” he laughed before abruptly stopping. “Um, Tucker do me a favor and tell me if you see what I’m seeing?”

“Huh?” He pointed towards the front of the class and I skeptically followed it until my jaw dislodged from my mouth. Smack dab in the front of the class was Shawn, and wrapped around his arm was none other then Heartbreak Hailey. I’m not talking like a good, friendly type of thing that you see some guys and girls do around the school, I’m talking pressed against each other as if they were glued that way.

“Wow, she got over you quick.”

I looked at him dumbfounded, “Dude you serious right now?”

“What? Man I know she’s only doing this to get to you, but damn does she act fast. Give her credit too for finding the perfect idiot to act as her boyfriend.”

“You realize this can only end badly though right?”

“The most popular girl in school is currently dating a moron in order to get revenge on the only person that rejected her the day after said rejection took place. This is like the plot to a bad high school romance story. So to answer your question, I’m expecting this to end as badly as every movie directed by M. Night Shyamalan (DOUBLE ZING).”

“Colorful choice of words but I get what you’re saying. Plus, I think Shawn’s the only person in the school that doesn’t realize it. His obsession is going to be his downfall, but…”

“But?”

“But we probably shouldn’t say anything.”

“What?” Jason leaned forward, “Dude he’s being used and abused right now, we gotta step in.”

“You want to go tell King Hypocrisy over there that his dream girl is using him? How well do you think that’s going to go?”

“Point taken.”

“Call me selfish man but this is great news for me. Shawn gets his dream girl and all the attention will now be thrust his way. Maybe now I can make it a month without fighting off questions and listening to ridiculous about myself.”

“Alright man, I’ll play along I guess.”

“Thanks. I’m pretty sure if Shawn was listening he’d thank you too.”

“Who am I thanking?” Shawn asked.

“Um,” I stammered, admittedly caught off guard by his sudden appearance. “Hey Shawn! What’s up?”

“Well,” he smiled smugly, “I’d like to introduce you guys-”

“Dude we already know who she is,” Jason interrupted. “It’s not like we haven’t heard you talk about her for the last two years or anything.”

“Oh Jason,” Shawn shook his head…smugly again. “You know it’s alright to be jealous man. We can still hang out, maybe even all four of us. Right babe?”

During this time, Hailey’s heat seeking eyes had locked onto mine, and the death stare she was giving me unfortunately had no effect on me this time. After all, this was the break I was waiting for. I mean, holy shit! She practically solved the problem for me. I should be thanking her. Spotlight’s off me now and onto the new couple. Can this get any better?

“Babe?”

“Huh?” Hailey snapped out of her trance and looked at Shawn, “Oh yeah. That’s fine! I’d like to hang out with you and your friends sometime. I think it’d be awesome!”

I had to cover my mouth to hide the fact that I was smiling so wide. Luckily the bell was on my side today, and it decided to ring before I had to explain why I was starting to shake with laughter. With one last spiteful glance, Hailey whirled around and let Shawn walk her to her seat

“I think I found another silver lining in all this too,” Jason said with contemplative nod of his head.

“What’s that?”

“We don’t have to put up with his hypocrisy as long as she keeps him busy.” We bumped fists in approval.

“Don’t get me wrong though, he’s still our friend. A terrible friend, but still a friend.”

“Yeah man, but as long as we’re on this ride it can’t hurt to enjoy it right? Or does that make us bad friends?”

“I could care less right now to be honest. I’m going to enjoy this while it lasts.”

Now that I had some good news, the rest of the day was sunshine and unicorns and anything else that could be associated with happiness. Hailey took Shawn to lunch with her so I enjoyed lunch with Jason, uninterrupted by Shawn’s bullshit and finally able to relax now that all eyes were on him. It was so perfect that I was able to walk out of the school as just another student instead of the target of whispers and pointed fingers.

The walk to work was a breeze too, and the best part was that I met the perfect person in the locker room.

“You look happy today Tucker,” Melody greeted.

“Yep. Today was a good day.”

“What happened?”

“Not going to tell ya,” I smiled.

“Why not?”

“Because every time I tell you something, you go straight to Missy K about it or go to Lexi. Don’t think I don’t know that you’ve been telling her about all the stuff I’ve gotten into over the last two years, and frankly I’m kind of annoyed that you’d sell me out for pussy.” Never thought I’d say that too a girl but I guess anything could happen today. Best part was that I wasn’t even yelling at her, I was just talking normally. “But I realized this morning that you got what was coming too you.”

“What?”

“Melissa moved into my house today.”

“What!?” she slammed her locker shut. “Your teacher?”

“Yep, and the best part is that Lexi was the one who invited her. You’re dream girl might have a thing for my teacher instead of you,” I finished changing and walked past her.

“She did what!”

“Karma’s a bitch ain't it?”

Shoving open the door, I went to work with a genuine smile on my face. Because my injuries were still healing I was on kitchen duty again but that was just fine with me. Leo was working with me today and he was just glad to see me back at the restaurant so I caught him up on things that I had done while I was looking for work. Of course I left out everything involving the three main problems in my life, Lexi, Melissa, and Hailey. It was a sure fire way to make sure I wasn’t going to get shit from Missy K about the reemergence of Melissa, or the fact that I was intentionally letting my friend get played just so I could finally get some peace and quiet.

Guilt would eventually catch up to me, but right now I could give two shits about that. I finished up my shift without a hitch and left the restaurant at around eight. My good mood was even more obvious when I came home and smiled goofily all the way to the table, ignoring the fact that Melissa was sitting in the living watching TV.

Fuck it! Not even the fact that she moved in could ruin this day.

“Well you look like you’ve had a good day,” Lexi said while putting away some of the dishes. She went over to the microwave and pulled out my plate and set it on the table. “Did something happen?”

“I think today was probably the best day I’ve had since you moved in,” I admitted. “Everything went right for once. I got Melody back, cooking duty with Leo, actually stayed awake in class, stopped all rumors about me in the school, and let my horrible friend date the girl of his dreams allowing me to enjoy lunch peacefully without him spewing out bullshit.”

“Wait what happened at school?” Melissa got up from the couch and joined us in the kitchen. Instead of her normal prim and pressed attire she was wearing a long sleeve shirt and yoga pants which looked pretty damn nice on her to be honest.

“Hailey’s dating Shawn now,” I said, shoveling food into my mouth.

“What? But I thought she asked you out yesterday?”

I nodded my head before swallowing, “She did, but now she’s with Shawn so I don’t care.”

“I haven’t seen you this happy in a long time,” Lexi said.

“Huh? Why would she do that so suddenly?” Melissa asked.

“To make me jealous,” I shrugged. “Shawn’s obsessed with her so he probably doesn’t even realize it.”

“That’s terrible.”

“No, that’s awesome. I’ve been in the limelight for too long thanks to that girl, and now she’s willingly taken it away so I’m gonna enjoy this time while it lasts.”

“But what about your friend?”

“He’ll live. Trust me. And even if I wanted to stop them, I couldn’t. Shawn’s not going to listen to anything I say and unless I ask Hailey out, she’s not going to care about what I say either. My hands are tied and I’ve never been happier.”

“Sounds like we should celebrate!” Lexi said abruptly. “Tucker had a good day and our new roommate is all settled in now.”

“Oh no!” I stood up, “I’m getting as far away from you as possible.”

“Awe, how come?”

“Because I know that if anyone can ruin this day, it’s you. Plus I don’t want to hear your crazy idea for celebrating.” I looked at Melissa, “If you need anything you know where to find me.”

I retreated to my room and sat down at my desk to do some homework. It was pretty boring and a couple of times I couldn’t help but close my eyes and rest my head. Eventually I did start chipping away at it until I heard a knock on my door and I tilted my head in curiosity.

“Uh, come in Melissa,” I said.

The door opened to reveal that I was right, “How’d you know it was me?”

“Lexi wouldn’t knock.”

“I see,” she laughed. “Do you have some time to talk or are you busy?”

“Sure, we can talk.” She nodded and sat down on my bed, “So what’s up?”

“I-I just don’t know to be honest.”

“You don’t know what’s up?”

“I mean I don’t know exactly what’s going on. Lexi just forced me to move in here but when we were moving my stuff into my new room she acted like we were best friends. Completely different from how she acted yesterday.”

“Sounds about right.”

“Is there a reason she’s doing that? Like, I didn’t realize it until I went home yesterday but she was smiling the whole time she was blackmailing us.”

“Also sounds about right.”

“But why? Don’t you know anything about her?”

“Not really. I mean, yeah she babysat me but we didn’t talk that much. Even when we started having sex we never talked about each other. The only thing I know about her is that she loves the mess with people, and I’m pretty sure you’ve figured that out by now. I guess the only time I really saw her worried or upset was when I got into a fight, other then that she’s been parading her blissful attitude around without a care in the world.”

“She must care about you then.”

“You’re probably right, but she does have a weird way of showing it. So what do you think about all this?”

“About all of what?”

“Well, you moved into my house,” I chuckled. “Are you happy, sad, scared, don’t care?”

“I…guess I’m a little happy. The motel really wasn’t that glamorous and it doesn’t compare to your house at all. What about you?”

I shrugged, “Don’t really know what to feel. I mean, I don’t hate you, but given our past encounters I thought it might be a little awkward y'know? For you at least.”

“For me? You’re telling me that you don’t feel awkward at all seeing me in your house? Clothed I might add.”

“Not really. At school it’s a little weird but after awhile I finally stopped picturing you naked.”

“You were picturing me naked at school?”

“Maybe,” I spun around in my chair to avoid eye contact.

She giggled a bit, “I guess I can’t really control that can I?”

“Sadly no, but I’ve admittedly gotten better at it. Maybe that’s why I don’t think it’s so awkward to see you in my home. Yeah, we had sex, and since Lexi knows it why hide the fact that I’m kind proud of having sex with you?”

“Proud?”

“As a peacock.”

“With me?”

“Should I not be?”

“I’m not saying that it’s just that compared to Lexi I’m not exactly up to par.”

I turned back around with a funny look on my face, “How so?”

“Well she’s younger, more attractive, curvier, and doesn’t look like a nerd.” She pointed to her glasses.

“I kind of like your look to be honest. So what if you have glasses and age doesn’t really have anything to do with it. Plus you can’t compare Lexi’s look to yours, you both dress and act completely different. She’s loud and eccentric and you’re more quiet and composed. I also think you got her won in the boob department.”

She blushed at me as I got up and stretched out.

“All finished?” she asked.

I had been done since she came inside but I don’t think she realized that so I just played it cool. “Yep. All done.”

“Mind if I check it?”

“Wouldn’t that be cheating to have a teacher check my answers?”

“I’m not going to give you the answers, I’ll just tell you which ones are wrong,” she got up and walked to the desk as I plopped down onto my bed.

“Knock yourself out I guess.”

While she combed over my work I closed my eyes and listened to her quiet humming. My eyes shot open a couple minutes later however when she hopped onto the bed and laid next to me.

“Looks good,” she smiled.

“Yeah you do,” I replied coolly.

“Using your words again huh?” she glanced up at the ceiling. “Be honest, is it intentional?”

“Is what intentional?”

“What you say? Like, what you just said to me about how I look. Are you planning that out or what?”

“I’m pretty straight forward I guess, I mean, I know when to lie but I don’t like to unless it’s a sticky situation. Plus, how could I plan it? I’m not that smart.”

“Well you definitely know how to make a girl feel good about herself. Is this the part where I throw myself at you?”

“You don’t have to throw yourself at me, I could just get on top of you if you want.”

“Then why don’t you?” she glanced at me, playfully shrugging.

She was basically taunting me, but I had no idea whether or not she wanted me to actually do it or what it would lead to for that matter. I almost decided not to, but then I realized that this day was letting me get away with whatever the fuck I wanted to so I was going for it!

I rolled over and pounced on top of her with a playful smile. She giggled as I hovered over her body, staring at her adorable face as she blushed.

“So what do I win?” I asked.

“What do you want?” she fired back.

“How bout a kiss?”

“Kind of bold but I think I can manage that.”

I leaned down and kissed her.

“Maybe one more,” she smiled, leaning up to kiss me again.

After that kiss, something turned on inside of us both. She lost her playful stare, taking off her glasses and carefully setting them on the nightstand while never taking her eyes off of my hungry gaze. It may have started off harmless but after two kisses it was already heading downhill.

She moved her hands onto my back and I moved back down as we started making out. Our kissing didn’t become lustful, and sloppy like our last two meetings. These were slow, and tender. Even when we started French kissing neither of us immediately dominated the other, instead we let our tongues intertwine and enjoyed the feeling.

It was romantic, which was completely different from all the other times I’ve had sex so I was content with keeping it like this, but Melissa had a different idea. She grabbed my shirt and pulled it over me, tossing it to the side and pushing me over onto my back. Getting rid of her shirt immediately after, she slowly started kissing her way down my body until getting to my waist. She unbuttoned my pants and pulled them off revealing my dick that was already covered in pre-cum. Not wanting to waste anytime, she wrapped her mouth around my dick and started sucking on it while I moaned.

Her ass was sticking up high in the air to my left so I grabbed her yoga pants and slid them down to her knees, rubbing two of my fingers over her soaking wet pussy while she continued to suck. I shoved them both in after that and I noticed she started sucking faster as well, moaning into my dick while I continued to play with her pussy.

My door suddenly slammed opened scaring the shit out of both of us.

“Gotcha!” Lexi announced walking into my room.

Melissa and I froze like teenagers caught…doing what we were doing basically.

“This isn’t what it looks like,” Melissa said for some odd reason.

“This isn’t? Then do you mind explaining what you’re doing half naked on Tucker’s bed with two of his fingers shoved into your pussy and your mouth right next to his dick?” After neither of us answered she shook her head, “I can’t believe you two.”

I slowly removed my fingers from Melissa’s pussy but that proved to be a big mistake.

“What do you think you’re doing Tucker?” Admittedly I didn’t know how to answer that question with turning beat red. She walked over to the bed and grabbed my hand, “You need to finish what you started.”

“W-What?”

She grabbed my two fingers and shoved them back inside Melissa’s pussy. Melissa immediately gasped causing Lexi to giggle evilly.

“Look at how wet she is,” she ran one of her fingers over Melissa’s clit and started to rub. She immediately gasped again as Lexi gave her ass a good smack, “C’mon Melissa, start sucking.”

I could see the hesitation in her eyes but she leaned back down and started sucking my dick again. Lexi was enjoying the situation too much as I glanced at her plastered smile. She moved her hand to Melissa’s tit and started pinching and squeezing one of her nipples causing her to stop sucking and let out a long moan. Lexi climbed onto the bed after that and lifted up Melissa’s head, stealing a kiss from her immediately.

“Mind if take it from here,” she asked, taking off her shirt and undoing her bra.

Melissa nodded her head weakly as Lexi bent and licked my dick clean. It sent shivers through my body as she sucked on the tip of it while slowly jacking me off with her other hand. Melissa took my hand out of her pussy, bringing it up to her mouth and sucking on it like pacifier. Once it was all clean she leaned down to kiss me, her hesitant look replaced by a lustful one as we started making out again all the while Lexi continued to suck my dick.

She stopped a few seconds later however, and I was so caught up with kissing Melissa that I didn’t notice her as she climbed on top of my dick. I moaned loudly, cutting off my kissing and causing Melissa to investigate as well, and the look on her face when she saw Lexi riding my dick could’ve broken someone’s heart.

Realizing this, I whispered “I can eat you out if you want.”

Her attention shot back to me as she immediately got up and placed her knees next to my head, lowering her pussy down onto my face. It was hard to concentrate with Lexi moaning and the warm feeling of her pussy as I slid up and down my dick, but I tried my best to lick Melissa’s pussy any and every way I could think of. Since I liked her taste however, it became easier for me because I just licking and probing her hole as she started moaning loudly as well, grabbing her tit with one hand and balancing herself with the other.

It quickly turned into a hot, sweaty, and loud mess as we all lost ourselves in the sex. Melissa was the first to cum, moving her hand to her clit and rubbing it furiously until she started shouting out, “I’m cumming!”

I was showered in her juices as she shakily climbed off of me, breathing heavily and turning to look at Lexi who was bouncing up and down. Melissa grabbed onto her tits and got a little revenge as she squeezed them together and played with them.

“M-Melissa please stop,” Lexi pleaded, “or else I’m gonna…I’m gonna…fuck I’m cumming!” She shut her eyes as Melissa continued to play with her tits.

“I think I’m going to cum too,” I mumbled, “Shit. Here it comes.”

Lexi climbed off me unexpectedly and I was about to ask what the fuck she was thinking when I realized why she did it. Her and Melissa started licking my dick at the same time and the moment I felt both of their tongues I shot my load all over both of their faces.

A huge weight had been lifted off my shoulders as I hazily looked at Lexi and Melissa as they wiped cum off their faces. Of course, Melissa took all the cum she wiped off her face and swallowed it, even leaning back down and sucking every last bit of cum off my slowly shriveling dick. Lexi on the other hand was fine with just licking a bit of cum off her fingers before letting Melissa take the rest.

“I think we should celebrate more often,” Lexi looked at me, licking her lips and smiling.

“I-I kind of agree with you,” Melissa admitted sheepishly.

I closed my eyes and smiled, mumbling the words, “Best. Day. Ever.”




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Author's Note:
I have a feeling that i fucked up and missed an important error in this story. But after rereading it five times, i can't find it xD Sorry. Have a nice day.


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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 02:53
    Please keep writing more the series is great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 02:59
    U nothing missed u r the best.just this part was a lil bit short

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 03:34
    “When life hands me lemons? I don’t make lemonade. I make life take those fucking lemons back and have them explain why the fuck they think I wanted these lemons in the first place! In fact, I demand to see life’s manager because I’m absolutely furious as to why life thinks I want these fucking lemons. What am I gonna do with these lemons huh? Fuck lemonade, I want answers instead!”

    Fucking Portal... swear I heard that line in Cave Johnson's voice...

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 03:49
    Great story, I few spelling errors but nothing that distracts you from the story. Keep it up my man, also you should totally get this published or something id by a book if it was like this!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 04:25
    U rock man.. But get the next part sooner

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 05:15
    stories where the blackmail is as absolutely stupid as this one lose my interest fast. 'lexi' needs to be put in her place, what about the fact she started raping him when he was a kid, and she's the one blackmailing people? nah, this has gotten beyond stupid, i'm done with it, and I only read to the part where the slut threatens to go to the principal, like her word would be enough proof, absolutely one of the stupidest stories i've ever read

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 05:25
    Awesome. Don't stop writing!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 06:17
    Nice a false blackmail so she can get him to like her for the threesome she planned. Or is it to show melissa that he wants lexi more either way love it

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 08:08
    I love all your stories, absolutely fucking awesome. I will have to agree with a previous comment. I wouldn't mind seeing Lexi get her just desserts. It would be a good twist. Other than that man, keep it up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 08:14
    I love all your stories, absolutely fucking awesome. I will have to agree with a previous comment. I wouldn't mind seeing Lexi get her just desserts. It would be a good twist. Other than that man, keep it up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 09:03
    That was a great line.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 10:18
    Awesome you have a gift but please try to write the next one faster ,,,,,,,, the waiting is killing me

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 11:52
    Nice twitst with hailey proposal

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 11:58
    I agree with the guy 6 posts down. Give tucker some balls this is turning into 3ES where the guy is powerless. You could have Tk call lexi's bluff. He could accuse lexi of having sex with a minor. He could turn to haliey for help inexchange for his soul( being her boyfriend)

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 12:22
    Good but not up to ur average level. It might be acceptable from other authors but we expect more from u. I absolutely love every single one of ur stories.... Well except this one

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 12:26
    Excellent as always Some.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 13:05
    AMAZING! Can't wait for part 5!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 13:56
    Do I detect a Portal reference in the lemons rant?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 14:00
    Do I detect a Portal reference in the lemons rant?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 14:58
    Since you burnt your hand have you thought about using a thing that types for you as you speak?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 15:16
    I had no idea there were spelling errors, if there were good job at makin them little things, Great Story more intriguing that 3ES, just amazing keep it up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 15:24
    That lemons rant was awfully similar to the one in portal 2.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 16:10
    Still good, but this one almost seemed like more of a fan service with how short it was and how they ended up in the threesome. You can do better but it was still good. Keep it going.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 16:16
    lexi and melissa should be bisexual, and become a couple, it will make life easier for all three of them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 16:16
    lexi and melissa should be bisexual, and become a couple, it will make life easier for all three of them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 16:26
    Dude...you really need to kill Lexi off. Please?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 16:56
    It's weird how I keep coming back to read more of these, even though there's little sex. You got me hooked on the actual STORY! ;P

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 19:21
    Great story. But need little more sex I think

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 19:29
    Is it me or are three part fours?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 19:52
    you incorrectly used 'too'. that was the only mistake I could find.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 20:12
    MORE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD ..... MORE !!!!!

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  • the+unknown+user
    11.05.2012 21:15
    Great story! I also love the awesome portal reference

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 21:49
    Fuckin A!!!
    And yeah there is 3 part fours that are the same

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 22:06
    Yeaa..I hate lexi too..

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 23:11
    i didnt see any errors so just keep on writing..

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 23:21
    I read this story an I'm really high I'm not Gina lie but that is one sexy ass story sexy dude keep going that my life

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2012 23:38
    Wow! That was even a tip of the iceberg. They should've fucked for three phases. Wanna contact me, call +2348034626584

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 00:11
    I check every day for the next issue. Cannot wait for 5. Keep up the awesome work

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 00:26
    Thank you, I have to work tomorrow at 8 am, So I'm like Fuck it I'll only sleep 5 hours!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 00:41
    Wow, Lexi is just someone I cannot stand in this story. Other than that, great writing!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 00:44
    12 days.. that's understandable, I write even slower, much better than a month or six per chapter... :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 01:50
    best fucking stories ever keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 01:50
    best fucking stories ever keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 02:03
    Amazing dude keep it up can't wit for prt five. By th way love both your stories dude nice work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 02:56
    Plz rite faster I rly like the longetivity but I hate the wait and u posted this three times tht might b ur mistake

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 03:41
    Fucking hate Lexi. If I was Tucker, I would get a restraining order on her and tell her to get the fuck out of my house. Other then that great story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 06:04
    honestly great story much better than the 3es but you should probably drop Lexi soon shes an annoying bitch that took the title of king/queen of hypocrisy away from Shawn

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  • Hornypleaser
    12.05.2012 07:09
    DANNNM this is one of yout best story I like 3es better but danm this is a great stary I was checking XnXX every single day for this episode and all can say is danm I hope you make another soon And could you try to make it a lil more longer please

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 08:32
    great story keep lexi Awesome

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  • Jswab
    12.05.2012 08:52
    Somestory,

    As much as I hate you for cutting off 3ES, and knowing you most likely won't continue it, I have to say, you have amazing writing skills. The atmosphere of this story reminds me of 3ES in so many ways! Please, for the love of god, finish this series,don't cut if short, like 3ES, and see 3ES through once this is complete.

    Also, get rid of Lexi, please. If I was Tucker, I'd of most likely killed her black mailing ass.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 11:10
    Casual Portal reference thrown in. Love it!
    Great Story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 13:43
    I love this series!!!! I was also looking every day for this episode. Keep up the awesome work!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 15:19
    I'm going to continue to plead for a future novel as I did before. Release it as a free/paid ebook. What was the portal reference, I couldn't find one. Curious who would you say Melissa is modeled after, trying to create an image in my head of a model or actress can't think of any. Look forward to you next post. Somestory FTW.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 16:27
    i'm glad someone is keeping a schedule, fucking dusk is taking way too long to post 3es, pleading final exams, which was more than a week ago. keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 19:15
    Fucken great story . Dont drop lexi. She turns the atmosphere hot. Plez dont leave this series

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 20:10
    I love that everyone hates Lexi. You're doing a fantastic job creating believable characters. My only issue is that I can't tell Tucker's relationship with Melody, as he is incredibly friendly with most of his other co-workers, but she is a mystery.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 22:05
    keep lexi though have less blackmail!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2012 23:35
    SomeStory, you're an amazing writer.
    I know its hard creating a story haha.
    But don't listen to the commentors.
    It's your story, keep it the way you want it.
    Buuuut, I gotta agree with some people.
    Longer story, whether it means a longer wait or not.
    But if you could, make it in a short time length.
    I read for the story.
    The sex in it is just a bonus ;)
    Lol, but great work xD

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.05.2012 00:51
    Hey it's good an all but do something about lexi. Say she got "offed" by accident because that bitch is ruining the story for me. Kill the cunt ass mofo please!!'

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  • kuche254
    13.05.2012 09:12
    love this series. Wats going 2 happen with the three evil sisters nw that mom's home?

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.05.2012 02:02
    OMG. keep this cumming (haha zing) this might just be the best shit I have ever read. you need to write a fucking book!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.05.2012 02:34
    I think I like this even more than 3es.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.05.2012 04:33
    Why do I get the feelings that LEXI , cares the most about TK ? Its weired .
    And who is his Dreamgirl . Is it MELODY ? ?

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  • my_apocalypse_pony
    15.05.2012 01:05
    YAY! So happy this is finally up! I love this story so much. lol. Thank you for writing it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.05.2012 07:48
    Don't geht fooled by all the negativ comments about Lexi. - A character that evokes such disliking is nothing but compliment for her creator.
    I myself enjoy characters with questionable behavior, like Lexi, a great deal in my reading.
    Keep it up!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.05.2012 07:48
    Don't geht fooled by all the negativ comments about Lexi. - A character that evokes such disliking is nothing but compliment for her creator.
    I myself enjoy characters with questionable behavior, like Lexi, a great deal in my reading.
    Keep it up!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.05.2012 08:58
    Hey man fantastic writing. Are there any more in this series of books? Keep writing though

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.05.2012 08:58
    Hey man fantastic writing. Are there any more in this series of books? Keep writing though

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.05.2012 22:39
    I fucking love you!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.05.2012 14:05
    U just made it too easy . Blackmail ! , thats weired . I thought both Lexi and Melissa , wont share him . But its just became too easy . No hard feelings , No jealousy . . . Just blackmail . U r 10 times better than that .

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2012 03:38
    Are you going to continue 3es

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2012 06:46
    fucking awesome was hoping the 3 evil sisters would get another chapter, but I like this one as well cant wait for the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2012 11:32
    I personaly think this 4 part story was the best ive read on this site. I love the storyline its very interesting. And the blackmail works just fine dont listen to that dumbass!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2012 15:24
    I dont understand why ur trying to make melissa so dumb.....nd lexi a strong character,
    but the blackmail part was quite stupid.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2012 16:06
    How many time Lexi is gonna Blackmail TK ! Its not good . The human self in ur story disappeared during that blackmail . There should have been more feelings . Like love or jealousy or anger or hatred . U just made things Easy .

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.05.2012 14:37
    I noticed that you have poster part 4 thrice. Are all the same?

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.05.2012 23:46
    are you sereuly quitting after 4 parts come on not agan like realy you say 10 days max and then its 2 years like come on dont do that to us twice and leave and come back 2 years later

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.05.2012 23:48
    are you sereuly quitting after 4 parts come on not agan like realy you say 10 days max and then its 2 years like come on dont do that to us twice and leave and come back 2 years later

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2012 06:50
    come on where is the next Part?

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2012 14:36
    Ur late dude,
    put up the next part fast........we are waiting!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2012 01:44
    i mad this ass aint finish 3es or this will say the stories are got but why wont you finish them.. come on or just stop writing give us nothing at all.then this half ass shit.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2012 11:48
    Bravo. Again, the best story writer on this whole website is gone again. Dont get me wrong, I love your stories, but if you just write a few and then leave id rather you just dont fucking write them at all.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2012 13:20
    its 25th already so where is the next part ?? (and yes im getting slightly upset)

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.05.2012 01:20
    when is part five coming out?

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  • my_apocalypse_pony
    25.05.2012 01:39
    Wow, people need to stop getting all butt hurt over small shit...for real its just a story, he is human, I am sure he has other shit to worry about other then making internet cry babies happy. I love this story and can't wait for the next one! Take your time, greatness takes time, and people need to have patience.

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  • my_apocalypse_pony
    25.05.2012 01:42
    Wow, people need to stop getting all butt hurt over small shit...for real its just a story, he is human, I am sure he has other shit to worry about other then making internet cry babies happy. I love this story and can't wait for the next one! Take your time, greatness takes time, and people need to have patience.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.05.2012 04:35
    hey my_apocalypse_pony shut the fuck u and stop telling people to stop getting angry becaus they`re right he starts a great story then just fucking stops we all have a right to be angry cause he needs to learn how to finish a fucking story or just stop writting them

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  • ramboy
    25.05.2012 05:09
    to all anonymous readers that have no life but to complain. does any of you actually write stories? does any of you have a day job, education, relationships etc. if you dont then shut the fuck up and let the writer do their thing in peace. they dont even read your comments till they post the next one. I contacted him and as far as I know 3es will continue when he sorts out the story line of the next chapter

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  • my_apocalypse_pony
    25.05.2012 12:36
    You mad anon? ;) cry more please.

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  • my_apocalypse_pony
    25.05.2012 12:38
    You mad anon? ;) cry more please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.05.2012 14:48
    If u need more time then just say it . 15 or 20 days is worth waiting for a part . But if u dont keep ur word then u shouldnt have said that u will finish it in 10 days . Thats irritating

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.05.2012 20:12
    Why did you stopped the 3 sisters ??? It was a great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2012 11:02
    Ok ya'll he did say he reached a writers block on the 3es and will continue after he is done with this series. Somestory we love your stories and can't wait for more and hope things get better in your personnel life can't wait for more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2012 14:41
    Its nearly 18 days . Wheres the next one ? Hurry up please . I cant wait . U said it would be done within 10 days . Its double of that time already . Hurry .

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2012 15:39
    Dude its been more thn double ur desired time between posting the stories im all for waiting a little dince it builds a nticipation but plz hurry

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2012 20:16
    Okay, he/she said they would try to throw it out within ten days. That was their GOAL just because it's a little late doesn't give you all permission to bitch 24/7. If this porn is so desperate for some of you readers then maybe you should go look for a girlfriend or just fucking get laid. Everyone chill, this persons like is a little hectic right now and everybody know that and read it. So stop because selfish bastards and chill. I'm sure it'll be here today or tomorrow. Give them a chance.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2012 21:31
    I think he could end the series on this story, are there anymore loose ends?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.05.2012 12:10
    You people are sad, if you want another story so bad you write one

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.05.2012 21:41
    If we keep bothering and pushing him he can/will end thisy.He could. do this
    because THIS A HOBBY NOT A JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SO STOP YOUR BITCHY NAGGING

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.05.2012 22:34
    U just misundestood the whole point . We know its his hobby . If he needs more time ,then all he has to do is say it . 20 or maybe 25 days is worth waiting for a good part . But u say , u will do it in 10 days and now its already 19 days then its irritating . And something are more interesting than having a girlfriend or getting laid .

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 00:10
    You guys have no lives. If its not posted then it is what it is, quit bitching.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 00:58
    Read something else first.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 08:46
    take a deep breath and relax guys. we dont know wat has happened. I mean ramboy is right the guy has a life outside the stories. and I dont even remeber reading about him releasing a story every 10 days

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 10:24
    not to bitch or be a pest but I would like to throw this out there I really miss the 3es story I wanna know what happens but from the point of view of the original author

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  • my_apocalypse_pony
    30.05.2012 13:01
    There are thousands of other stories in this site, go read a few of them, he could have had a family emergency or something, you never know sometimes shit happens. If I wrote stories I know this would be the last place I'd think about if shit hit the fan in my real life. I am 31 weeks pregnant so I understand thy things can just happen at a moments notice and you don't away have time to warn people. And please stop crying about 3es he said he would finish it when he was done with this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 13:44
    Can anyone suggest other stories as this one?? Plzzzz!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 14:31
    It seems I gained a few new enemies . Thats actually good . But when someone starts to like something then he wants it bad . Thats what happened . I like his stories very much . Thats why I want it bad . I already said its not about time . Its about ur word . U give someone ur word and then dont keep it , its bad . He might be in tough situation to write a story . But I am sure he could at least write " I will be late" if he isnt dead or had even a bit respect for his fans .

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 14:33
    Anyone can suggest any story thats not only about only sex and more like this one ?

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 17:03
    Read Alison and the primdales. You won't regret it

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2012 23:53
    He didn't give anyone his word dumbass, he said he would TRY to get them out every 10 days. Go find something else to do. Go outside or something.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2012 03:53
    Dark brother is the best writer on this site and he always finised his stories no matter how many chapters it took go read his stuff

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2012 14:09
    Its the 21 st day asshole . More that double time he asked for . How long he is gonna take ? A couple of years to write a part . Dont u think thats a bit much !

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2012 14:54
    ok, im genna say what everyone is thinking, this guy obviously has talent and I read his stories because I like them a lot. however, yes he's late, but everyone bitching about him needs to stop jerking them off, go outside, get a girlfriend..well that might be beyond some of you..and realise there is more to life than this website. htis wrighter knows it, so while your on here bitching, he's probably outside enjoying life

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2012 16:13
    I don't know why it may sound crazy, but I guess he trying to get the number of times read to the max.
    You see u get one of it say above 50k, he'll put one story. Then wait for the new to reach some 30k or something then he'll put the next one, and like wise.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2012 22:24
    I sense a pattern going on here..

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.06.2012 01:50
    serious dude I do got a life and all but I love reading fuck stories and urs got my attention and so far u blew off 3ES and now for a month u havent put up another a not so simple life get on with it already damn

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.06.2012 10:01
    Please dont give up on this story I really like it

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2012 01:53
    Ok the guy under me is retarded for saying that openly.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2012 10:31
    Ive been one of the patent ones but dude when you have 20+ thousand readers on your stories you gotta crank shit out or never put a time table saying when the next one should be I write stories to on this site jiggajames but I'm nowhere near as good as you

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2012 12:22
    I bet it writer's block

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2012 12:40
    Oh boy here we go again. I'll check again in August. You should be back by then.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2012 14:05
    It seems everyone starting to think my way . So anyone interested it finishing this one up ? I am not good at staff like this . So I cant do it . If someone does then dont forget to post the link

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2012 22:15
    More 3 evil sisters! This is nothing compared them! Vote negative of you agree!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2012 23:53
    Come on its been almost a month u promised at the most 10 days between chapters

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2012 03:42
    Yo fag you wanna write the next part of your stories or what? If you don't want to finish either of them or even use this site again the fine whatever, but don't be a bitch about it and not say that your not writing it anymore. At least be a fuckin man, not some sort of little pussy bitch

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2012 07:04
    I guess I'll check back in a month or so. You could at least give us an update or something. It's not cool to leave your fans hanging like this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2012 18:44
    awsome stories but you need to keep writing both of them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2012 19:09
    Txt me: 518-319-0443

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2012 21:12
    I agree with the last three pages of comments where's the new one I've been loyal scince the start of 3s soo I guess I'm still waiting.......

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.06.2012 12:12
    Finish 3 evil sisters! !!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.06.2012 23:43
    6 more days . After that its ur time over somestory .

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2012 03:02
    Please post a new one, don't turn into TAMPERER who left the story in the middle and dissapointed all of his fans

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2012 15:22
    Hey don't rap on te writer, if you like the story's just wait for them. The story's are always long and entertaining, it's understandable that it takes along time. If SS spent anyless time on them people would complain of spelling, gramical, or small amount of detail. Keep doing what your doing SS and take as munch time as you need.
    - BL

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2012 23:51
    This its ridiculous. You promise one thing and don't deliver. I'm tired of waiting forever for 1 damn story

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2012 14:18
    One month nearly ! Are u alive ?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2012 21:42
    lol BL
    last time he took forever he rushed it and made even more mistakes and the story lacked quality. im referring to the previous series btw

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.06.2012 23:36
    Chill.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.06.2012 14:11
    But 30 days ! ! If u write 20 lines per day then this part must be at least 600 lines ! !

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.06.2012 14:12
    If this is ur way to increase readers then u r a big dissappointment . . .

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.06.2012 16:43
    SS, don't let these arse wipes try and dictate to you. They aren't paying you and you owe them nothing, so you don't answer to them. These are pathetic, spoiled people who think that because they liked your story, you owe them work. You don't. Take all the time you need, because true fans (eg. Me) will wait patiently and then thank you for spending your time on these stories.
    To all the parasites who are giving SS a hard time; get off your high horses and quit being prats. When everyone of you can knock out stories half as good as SS's in a few days, then you can criticise.

    Sincerely Da Bossman

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.06.2012 22:21
    Hey can you please please please sens our like a 1paragraph note or something to tell us ure still there because if u do it will tell us your still there and all. You don't have to but it's just a little more hopeful to know your still there still writing these Magnificent,Entertaining,Incredible stories you've always wrote

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.06.2012 22:29
    a I got a whole next chapter written so ill give u 10 more days

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.06.2012 08:25
    You really shouldn't start stories if you never finish them. I'm done reading your work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.06.2012 14:27
    If u dont hurry up then I am gonna finish the story for u !

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.06.2012 17:26
    if ur gonna take thiss long 2 put out a chapter might as well finish the series nd post them all together tht way wer not itin around 4eva 4 1 a chapte r

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.06.2012 14:13
    Look I am sorry I said ur part 4 wasnt good enough . Now upload the fucking part 5 already .

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.06.2012 15:33
    I pmed ss and he said there are nomore stories coming, and for you all to leave him alone

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.06.2012 15:34
    Fuck that shit. He owes us a real ending

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.06.2012 16:21
    @comment below
    What the fuck is wrong with you? You think he owes you? Your a despicable little shit, did you know that? SS writes in his own time and all people do is rage at him. Fuck off! I'll bet the reason SS hasn't updated is either because he has a real life (unlike you, dipshit) or because people like you are harassing him. SS, I honestly think that if not finishing your story is what it takes to teach this retard some manners then thats what you should do.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2012 01:38
    Every time I look at these comments on his stories there always dumbass people telling him to hurry up and post! Shut up and be patient you guys don't know what he goes through.... If it bothers you that much there's other authors out there!

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  • ramboy
    11.06.2012 07:00
    the guy who pm ss when did u pm him?

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  • ramboy
    11.06.2012 07:06
    Anonymous reader
    2012-06-10 15:33:08
    wat is ur username?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2012 07:16
    can some one pls check when he was here last. and can a member send him a pm not some guy claiming to be a member

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2012 11:19
    guys come on i'm sure he has other things to do

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2012 01:04
    Ik all are raging but send out something for us to know if u did stop or have a problem I think that would be helpful to know; (it might be just.me who think that way....)

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2012 02:18
    man its been a while since the last update, but its cuality writing so I can wait but it would be helpful knowing if you plan on comming back sometime soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2012 05:19
    The other 2 chapters were 14 to 17 days apart from each other. we just need to wait a bit longer im sure he will comeback

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2012 19:09
    lov the story want lost more

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  • DarkReader
    13.06.2012 02:48
    ive read all his stories and am still patient I have another writer I read I am not the anon that sent the earlier pm to SS but I did send one and waiting for a reply and ill let yall know what he tells me hopefully he does reply to all of u that are assholes get a life I have one I read these stories for fun. now if your intrested in a good story go read dizzy's work Toy Store Boy very good go read that and is SS hasnt written me back he is either busy or isnt writing anymore stories like anon said.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.06.2012 16:36
    Great stories .......write a book I would buy at least 10 copies just to cuddle with them lmao

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.06.2012 17:57
    Great stories .......write a book I would buy at least 10 copies just to cuddle with them lmao

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.06.2012 22:46
    Come on and get the next chapter up. Don't kill us like you did with 3ES
    Thanks

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.06.2012 22:31
    i think he's dead, his age is 99. Well its been a good run.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 01:07
    you know something FUCK YOU SS 10 days my ass

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 01:15
    The funny thing is, he won't even read our comments if he comes back. He'll just give us some retarded excuse, say he'll get them out faster, and be gone. Fuck you, SS. Just tell us you don't have time and leave, you're not liked anymore. Stupid ass, can't even get your stories out in a decent amount of time. Next you'll use the excuse "I broke both hands".

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 13:15
    I'm sorry, but I GIVE UP on SS and all his works. I won't read even if he does post a new chapter. For all those who say they will finish it leave at least a link in the comments.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 14:02
    bro ur storys are the only ones ive ever read dude and I have to say ur awsome man ur storys are great and its not the sex part what makes it so great its ur idears ur a great writter bro so weather ur goner keep writting or not even though ur amazing writter and ilbe so pissed bro lol thanks for writting them man dont worry about thoughs ppl who say all that shit they have no idear what there saying bro thanks dud [mw]

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 14:07
    bro ur storys are the only ones ive ever read dude and I have to say ur awsome man ur storys are great and its not the sex part what makes it so great its ur idears ur a great writter bro so weather ur goner keep writting or not even though ur amazing writter and ilbe so pissed bro lol thanks for writting them man dont worry about thoughs ppl who say all that shit they have no idear what there saying bro thanks dud [mw]

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.06.2012 19:47
    he never gave us a time when he would get the next story out, he only said 10 days or so when he posted part 3 for the next (part 4) to be out.
    but after saying that i'm dying for another chapter man, don't let this series die like you did 3ES, your one of the better writers on this site come back to us

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 05:32
    please some do the favour... please someone pick this series and write ur end ss may be coming back after his writter block is over with new story.. samw he did with 3ES. but just not stuck ur asa like duskfair,give us end

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 01:20
    I hate cliff hangars,he tends to do it a lot to get a lot of comments and likes/dislikes.

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  • Johnnyloon88
    18.06.2012 07:14
    What happened to the whole 10 day thing it been over a month at least let use know that you stopped writing this story too

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 09:22
    This is why I would never post a story here SS doesnt owe us nothing we didn't pay a damn thing to read his storys he was nice enough to post some great stories maybe we have to wait I have seen people take a year to post another chapter. So if you don't want to wait for these people to post stories in their free time then go pay for a website with shit stories but weekly updates. I will be here waiting for him to post another chapter or to start another story or if he decides never to post again then I will read someone elses works but could everyone please stop bitching about updates. Things happen in life and on the other hand have you tried to write a story and make it long and detailed like he does with out takeing time to think of what to write next or where to take the story now it's not easy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 09:33
    This is why I would never post a story here SS doesnt owe us nothing we didn't pay a damn thing to read his storys he was nice enough to post some great stories maybe we have to wait I have seen people take a year to post another chapter. So if you don't want to wait for these people to post stories in their free time then go pay for a website with shit stories but weekly updates. I will be here waiting for him to post another chapter or to start another story or if he decides never to post again then I will read someone elses works but could everyone please stop bitching about updates. Things happen in life and on the other hand have you tried to write a story and make it long and detailed like he does with out takeing time to think of what to write next or where to take the story now it's not easy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 18:41
    There is no time limit or dead line for stories. I really enjoy his stories and I want to read more. But its his story and he probably wants to do the best story and not cheapen it back doing a shoddy job. All of the stories have been well written and thouht out. I applaude you I am looking forward to the continuing story line. Keep up the good work. Thanks.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2012 05:08
    Damn, you're a good writer, keep it up!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2012 11:14
    The only reason I keep coming back to this story is to read what you fools have been writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.06.2012 17:01
    He's 99 guys. He probably droped dead.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2012 21:20
    So people post on here to bitch and call SS a dick or an asshole do you realize people who write these also have lives outside of writing sex stories maybe this guy was single and found someone maybe he had a family emergency then you say he owes you BS he writes because he can if he doesn't come back good for him he's moved on yeah we all don't like how he stopped in the middle of 3es but he came upon what is called writers block you don't know what direction you want the story to go or you become bored with it either way you stop for days weeks month or years because you can't think of what to do

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.06.2012 21:45
    If you don't plan to finish something, don't start it. It's that simple. He's started two different stories and has bailed on both of them. If he just quit writing, the least he can do is come on here and comment, or go on the forums and say something. He has no respect for his readers.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.06.2012 00:24
    4 words A-MAZ-ING I have to give it a 10000000∅to da⅞power!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.06.2012 00:27
    looked at me expectedly.

    “When life hands me lemons? I don’t make lemonade. I make life take those fucking lemons back and have them explain why the fuck they think I wanted these lemons in the first place! In fact, I demand to see life’s manager because I’m absolutely furious as to why life thinks I want these fucking lemons. What am I gonna do with these lemons huh? Fuck lemonade, I want answers instead!” my favrit part of the whol story

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.06.2012 01:33
    When life gives you lemons. Shut the fuck up and take them because they are free.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.06.2012 11:35
    its been a month and a week and a half since SomeStory's last post. most likely his/her time has come (if he/she really was 99) and if that's true, then 3ES will never be finished! :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.06.2012 13:42
    I just dont understand why I keep coming back to his stories . . . .
    I am furious at him . Yet I check if theres a new part , everyday !
    I really dont undestand . . .

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.06.2012 01:26
    Your killing me right now with all the pauses in your series, I just wanna read them!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.06.2012 05:10
    awesome story threesome made me feel akward for some reason even tho it is porn keep them away

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.06.2012 17:39
    Why you no post new story?

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  • TerasuRiku
    26.06.2012 10:52
    ok people let's give SS a break here. Sure he left 3ES off on a cliffhanger, but then again, whether it was intentional or not, all good writers do that and SS is one of the great ones. I mean seriously did you all forget were he left off? The mom comes back after Max has fucked all three of his sisters. One has pretty much fallen in love with him, one fucked up horribly, and the other is finally accepting him. Their mom will find that strange in and of itself, now imagine if she found out that her daughters had slept with Max? There are millions of possible ways that can go, and SS hasn't figured out which way to that story yet. Now as for this one, I have no words for how great a story this is. Now we all agree that SS is probably the best writer on this site, and yet not many of us take the time to think about the effort he puts into this stories. The character designs in this story are insanely good. and with character designs this good it takes time to make the stories as good.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2012 03:59
    This is a great story but you stopped writing it. When will you continue?

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2012 23:39
    Stop defending him. Sure life is more important than stories but he could at least tell us instead of just leaving high and dry. Wont be coming back so I wont be disappointed again.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 00:34
    Stop defending him. Sure life is more important than stories but he could at least tell us instead of just leaving high and dry. Wont be coming back so I wont be disappointed again.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 03:23
    BRO WHERE IS THE STORY,BEEN WAITING FOR AGES NOW

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 13:51
    THE GUY IS OFFICIALLY DEAD!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 13:52
    THE GUY IS OFFICIALLY DEAD!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2012 21:07
    Kissing SS's ass wont get you a story guys. STOP ASS LICKIN maybe he's finished . TBH its irritating 3ES was at a Cliffhanger so its not unfinished but its unfinished . with this however (2 Years Later) you just dropped it. I understand you have a life and things to do but show a bit of consideration , We dont deserve a story or a awnser or a reason I just wanna know if its the last for a while or forever, after 2 years you still came back , its only been a few months. lets just back off for a bit.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.07.2012 14:21
    the guy cant finish a story and doesnt really care about his readers or he would give us an update. both are bad qualities in a writer so I dont think he will ever cut it as a professional.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.07.2012 15:32
    Dude, 3ES was amazing and you stopped, eventually I forgave you. A not so simple life is fucking great and you just stopped. I can't forgive this time man. =-= you betrayed us.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2012 00:45
    If he really is 99(Rofl)he really might've died or in hospital maybe.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2012 01:28
    Either the Guy's dead...which I hope is not the case...or he simply didnt want to finish the stories which would be fucked up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2012 08:58
    Ffs SomeStory. I need more of this story. I really do not mean to be rude, but could you hurry up and put another chapter out? I mean, YOU did say it would be 10days per chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2012 00:25
    Fffuuuuuucccckkkkk uuuuuu gggeeeettt ooooouuuttt aaannnoootttthhheeerrr ssstttooorrryyy

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2012 01:50
    Fffuuuuuucccckkkkk uuuuuu gggeeeettt ooooouuuttt aaannnoootttthhheeerrr ssstttooorrryyy

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2012 20:00
    More!!!!! Why'd u stop :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2012 21:47
    Dude seriously hurry the fuck up it's been 2 months now get your shit straight

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2012 02:05
    Some story I hope you are ok. And ya'll he might be around those fires and lost everything so give him a chance it has been a while I know

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.07.2012 06:43
    Plz rite the next one this is an amazin series
    Thnx from somebody who would live you if you wrote he next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2012 02:45
    He's fine. Judging by the intro to his stories, he's just some kid that can't commit to finishing anything. That's to be expected when your 14.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2012 09:08
    And this is why you put a note saying that people should not expect the story to conrinue. I swear, kids and their phases...

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2012 16:51
    No offence ss but if your going to start something, you should finish it. It's called courtesy...

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.07.2012 04:32
    WTF why'd he post this three times

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2012 17:29
    Excellent stories.....I just wonder if its over like 3 Evil Sisters. Its been awhile, but there are no time schedules....so he can take as long as he wants. However he did not writed chapt 7 and 8 3 Evil Sisters. Its been over a over 2 months since last chapter of this story line.....so I was wondering if he is too busy or just lost interest. Too bad they are very good stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2012 23:35
    Scice hes 99 years old he prob died

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2012 04:37
    Well its been 2+ months since this chapter came out ... guess its about time for him to come back with a new story and cast this one to the way side

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  • Ry13
    03.08.2012 04:52
    HEY MAN NICE STORY HOPE U GOT MY MESSAGE KEEP THEM COMMING

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2012 00:16
    can someone else pull a duskflaur and write us an ending to this please

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2012 18:14
    He is dead. Dont u guys understand that much . He probably died cause he got some harsh comment .

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2012 17:25
    Are you dead you jerk it's been three fucking months!! You'renot going to finish this fucking story like 3ES right you bastard. you son of a bitch continue with the story or I will kill if you're not dead and if you are I will fish you out of your grave feed the dogs with you're rotten body and born you to ashes and then throw you into the ocean and then and only then I wil let you go or whats left of you you got it bitch!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2012 22:17
    Dude Nice portal 2 lemons reference... your fucking awesome bre

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  • Wolf_Knight
    12.08.2012 21:48
    Love the story and your writing style. Hoping to see and read more from you

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2012 01:33
    Why! Did he have to write such a beautiful story then just kill it!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2012 02:09
    you piss us off when you do this you leave and 2 years later boom new story like what the fuck man what the fuck stop doing this 2 us

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.08.2012 02:10
    you piss us off when you do this you leave and 2 years later boom new story like what the fuck man what the fuck stop doing this 2 us

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2012 11:35
    Damn bro, this stuff was brilliant. I hope you post more :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2012 01:31
    Damnable dude best writer on site by far was jiffy on first chapter but you sucked me in damnable fine work. Cant wait work next chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.09.2012 23:46
    if you gagree with me then say something, & to somestory is this getting an ending or is there a new story on the way

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2012 15:48
    damn dude I thought you were dead. Or you know hospitilised for a while. Good to read from you again.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2012 14:18
    It was a good story. There were two or three minor errors but no glaring errors that I noticed. Don't let it bother you. I always COMPLAIN if you get the character's names mixed up, my pet peeve. Please keep writing. What are you going to do about Hailey?

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2012 14:20
    Why do you have Part 4 in here three times? Where are 5,6,7?

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2012 21:39
    DUDE I'VE CHECKED YOUR STORY OUT EVERY 4DAYS SINCE 5/11!NOW WTF I'VE STAY WITH U SINCE DAY1 OF YOUR FIRST STORY AND WAS RELIEVED YOU CAME FOR A NOT SO SIMPLE LIFE!BUT AGAIN.YOU'VE PULLED THIS BULL SHIT TWICE!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.09.2012 18:38
    been waiting for your next story really cant wait

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2012 20:34
    People need to calm down...maybe they got busy with real life or something. Write your own ending if it bothers you that much...

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2012 17:47
    Well if you're checking every four days then I doubt your gonna stop after a full year

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2012 18:14
    Seriously a great read, you need to finish this series, man. You could easily compile this into a super awesome book that I would totally buy, but first you'd have to FINISH THIS SERIES.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2012 18:17
    Man, you really need to finish this story. Take it as a compliment that you have so many people hanging, waiting for you to complete this series, but do your fans a favor and complete this story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.09.2012 10:33
    I gather its safe to say there probably will never be a part 5. 3 parts 4s which I rather had 2 of them become 5 and 6. Oh well life happens.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.09.2012 12:35
    Ok first things first your story's are well pretty good ok and I mean good but heres what I Realy don't understand about you you have good talent writing this shit and I mean alot best ones in her yet for some wird reason you start a story an without warning quit now to be honesty I hate it when you do that but if you arnt coming back instead of getting all these ppl who actualy wait give us let's say a hint that ur dude .

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.09.2012 12:35
    Ok first things first your story's are well pretty good ok and I mean good but heres what I Realy don't understand about you you have good talent writing this shit and I mean alot best ones in her yet for some wird reason you start a story an without warning quit now to be honesty I hate it when you do that but if you arnt coming back instead of getting all these ppl who actualy wait give us let's say a hint that ur dude .

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.10.2012 21:10
    Man come back finish your story dont leave us hanging like this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.10.2012 03:02
    Sir u are an asshole for not finishIng this

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.10.2012 04:01
    You have a true gift!!! Not only are all of your photos GORGEOUS!!! You shoot the ataremfth of a hurricane and it looks beautiful! You photographed my nephew and niece two years ago and if I'm ever blessed to have children, you're my photographer of choice!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.10.2012 16:36
    Guys he died he 99 years old...

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.11.2012 18:40
    Wunderbar, mein Komrad! Yes, even the Nazis think you're good. So, you up to finishing this :o?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.11.2012 08:22
    finish story please

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2012 04:31
    Part 5 pleaseeee, amazing story btw

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2012 22:44
    Hey great story but can you do the next part?? Thanks

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2012 22:45
    Hey great read....I can't wIt for part 5

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2012 11:30
    anyone knows if there is any other part on some other sites or someone restartrd it. If you do post the link

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  • esdj20
    30.12.2012 02:39
    Hey, loved it! More please, you left me glued to my seat with the whole Shawn and Hailey drama

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2013 14:42
    Dude, u so need to make more. Maybe make one of them become preg.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2013 01:35
    When life hands you lemons,â€u009d she looked at me expectedly.

    “When life hands me lemons? I don’t make lemonade. I make life take those fucking lemons back and have them explain why the fuck they think I wanted these lemons in the first place! In fact, I demand to see life’s manager because I’m absolutely furious as to why life thinks I want these fucking lemons. What am I gonna do with these lemons huh? Fuck lemonade, I want answers instead!â€u009d lololol

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 17:09
    brilliant. more please soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2013 01:13
    You should write more evil sister stories I'm hooked. Please???!!?????

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2013 15:44
    Why aren't you writing anymore??

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.02.2013 23:42
    Too bad they did not finish the story. Very good writing and very good plot line. In all a pretty good story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.02.2013 00:03
    damn I hope u come bck and able to continue both your stories. dont leave us hanging

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.03.2013 23:11
    I beg u please make anthor chapter of 3 evil sisters

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.03.2013 19:45
    fucking get back on your computer and type the next part fuuuuuuuuucccccckkkkkkkk CHINA you caused him not to write

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2013 20:27
    Please finish this story an 3 evil sisters!!! !

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2013 23:58
    Please post the sequal

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2013 19:48
    Great stories can't wait for part five

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2013 03:46
    I SPENT THE LAST HOUR READING ALL THE COMMENTS FOR THIS STORY AND I AM LAUGHING AT THE PEOPLE WHO DEFENDED THE AUTHOR SAYING HE COULD TAKE HIS TIME THAT MAYBE HE IS JUST GOING TO TAKE A FEW WEEKS HAHAHA HILARIOUS OH BOY. WHAT HAPPENED TO THE GUY WHO WAS GOING TO WRITE AN ALTERNATIVE ENDING HE JUST SAID 4 MORE DAYS THEN NOTHIN GUESS YOU TOO ARE A QUITER

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2013 23:14
    Agree with everyone :/ stories are so good dont leave us hangin

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2013 01:38
    Completely amazing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2013 19:11
    Shame this will never be completed I was really enjoying the series but guess he got cold feet again only this time he's not coming back

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2013 10:43
    fuck man. you broke my heart
    I would have fucked you if I met you in real life
    a girl

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.05.2013 15:17
    please make th 3es to show duskflair and metallica how its fucking done and how u r one of the best writers on here

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.07.2013 04:30
    please finish the 3 Evil Sisters..

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2013 08:24
    this is a dead work story now

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2013 17:42
    Best shit I've ever read. Make more of this shiznit!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2013 03:23
    You need to stop teasing the readers and keep writing this series. I'd love to see more. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2013 18:46
    need to keep goimg please great read need more though please

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2013 18:46
    need to keep goimg please great read need more though please

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2013 15:25
    ktaQda Muchos Gracias for your blog article.Thanks Again.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2013 19:06
    trrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.10.2013 10:57
    WOW, that was AWESOME!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2013 15:12
    PYhDId Very good article post.Much thanks again. Much obliged.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.11.2013 15:42
    You fucking bastard.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.12.2013 07:15
    I think he died... No more story :(

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2014 18:46
    can you please continue this please I really enjoyed this series so far and would love to read more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2014 19:45
    I hope one day he'll come back to finish this one and 3es upm

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.02.2014 11:26
    does anyone know if this storie will be finnished still waiting

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.02.2014 05:07
    When are you uploading part 5

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2014 03:59
    Not again like What the fuck man finish your stories this and 3es are great stories!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2014 23:07
    FINISH STORIES BRO

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.04.2014 09:23
    Why aren't you coming back D:

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  • Oldperv4u
    12.05.2014 22:54
    This series has been around for a while. It's witty well written and perceptive, with the characters. So please let's have the rest, or are you doing a Steven King? Seriously lets have some more please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2014 23:45
    Hey 18 year old get off this site

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.05.2014 06:57
    This is the first story I can legitimately read without the sole intention of masturbation. The story is great. Excellent plot twist and character build up. I can actually say I enjoyed reading this, But I have one problem. Where's part 5? Such a great story with excellent support deserves to have a legitimate ending, No? Please just finish the story. D:

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2014 11:13
    Is it just me or is this giving a foreshadowed snuff vibe?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2014 13:13
    MIA-Missing in Action ( Wheres part five)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2014 11:05
    why are there 3 part 4's

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 14:48
    Please continue the story ! It's FUCKIN awesome. :D not too much of sex or watevr , keeping us ever guessing and thrills jus wen we tot it was over . !! Best sex story I've read till now !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2014 06:27
    man these stories are amazing! im only 13 and your stories have changed me. thanks and continue the story please?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2014 17:21
    So... it's been 2 years since this thing was posted. Looks like there will never actually be an ending for this. Damn shame, too... It was some story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2014 06:22
    Bruh, I have read all of the parts of this story twice now. I highly suggest you try to get it published when you finish the story. Props for the best story ive ever read online.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.08.2014 11:51
    Maybe someone could finish it for this person

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2014 11:39
    hate it when a good story dies like this

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  • bigdiesel90
    27.08.2014 23:30
    More more more, love this story!! Great writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.08.2014 06:26
    I think I speak for a lot of people when I say make more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2014 23:47
    God damn this is a good story!

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  • Efon
    06.09.2014 00:02
    Speaking as a writer sometimes you just write yourself into a corner. The start of a good story is easy, but the ending is often unsatisfying given all the work that went into it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2014 05:48
    I loved it. Please keep going. I'd like to see them both pregnant along with the bitch Hailey. Good job.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.10.2014 01:39
    It's fuckin awsome when the next one comin out

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.11.2014 01:37
    Can't anybody finish a story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.11.2014 07:31
    Few spelling mistakes in this one. AMAZING STORY PORTRAYED AMAZING STORY LINE VERY VERY GOOOD

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.12.2014 05:07
    I think I can honestly say I stop reading to get off and started actually reading for the actual story one of the best stories I have ever read man

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2014 11:29
    I think I can honestly say I stop reading to get off and started actually reading for the actual story one of the best stories I have ever read man

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.12.2014 11:44
    Dude, what the HELL. I've been waiting for almost a month now. Tell you what you a seriously great writer but the bad thing is you dont know how to use your skills well. Here's an advise PLEASE atleast frame an ending in your mind before you start posting. I should be dead if I say you should stop writing your 3 evil sister was my first ever read sex story and I loved it(maybe because I had almost the same scenes in my life) but this is really bad that you are not completing the stories. No offence man, but there are a lot of expectations from you. If there's a problem in your life just let us know that you'll be a little late. Hope to see the next part soon cheers.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.12.2014 18:55
    My friend please keep it going I love the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.12.2014 02:26
    I loved the story please make more

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  • ilookau
    10.02.2015 03:04
    There were a couple of grammar errors, but no big deal. If you add a few more chapters and tone it down a bit I wouldn't be surprised if Amazon wouldn't put it out as an ebook. It's that good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2015 23:28
    You watch. This guy is gonna get a girl preggo xD. He's gonna have a baby that looks like shrek. Bruh this is some story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.03.2015 22:54
    when are u planing on making more ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.03.2015 14:36
    Why did you post this chapter thrice?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.03.2015 00:00
    One of the greatest story out there and it is driving me crazy that the story doesn't have an ending. I just wished some one would finshs it please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2015 20:07
    Where is part5 pls continue

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.04.2015 16:51
    Make this a 10 part series please and thank you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.04.2015 13:18
    please part 5! you're a brilliant writer and this has an amazing build up!!i read the whole series in one sitting!!don't stop just yet

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2015 21:43
    No word on part five anyone?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 06:39
    I fucking loved that Portal 2 Reference with the Lemons. Made my day.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2015 07:47
    Honestly the best story I've read. Not just a huge fuck fest, some good humor and a pretty great story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2015 04:05
    PLEASE tell us you're going to make more chapters? I'd love to read them. Wonderful story and real emotions from the characters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2015 08:19
    Absolutely love it! Any other chapters in the making though?:( Really looking forward to more! 9 out of 10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2015 01:00
    I don't like the 3some.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.07.2015 02:56
    Part five please! This is the best series I have read on here yet.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.07.2015 20:18
    Oh please dont stop writing so far I've read everything you have out and hoping for more in either series.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.08.2015 09:40
    I just don't understand! You began writing two incredible stories that were probably some of the best ever poster on this site. Then what do you do? Stop in the middle and never finish the work. Then you have the adasity to write I'm the comments that you will be finishing 3ES and then never follow thru with your commitment. Quite frankly it's sad that you have this inability to bring your work to a successful conclusion. This is written 3years after your last chapter was written using the tag Somestory and still people comment on your talent. I have to wonder if you were simply playing your readers and had no intention of ever finishing either story. I can only hope that you have become incredibly successful writing your contemporary masterpiece.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.08.2015 11:25
    maybe some thing happened to the author, like some kind of accident

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2015 19:15
    Please dont stop writing, your story are the best

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2015 17:25
    Love this story
    Soooooo wheres chapter 5???????????????????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.09.2015 18:17
    It's actually amazing how I continued reading just for the amazing story. Not many stories on this go far after the sex scenes, but you just kept going. Thumbs up still waiting for more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2015 12:23
    So, where if the real chapters 5, 6, 7, ...?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2015 17:25
    Best one I ve ever read so far
    Amazing characters and real emotions
    Nice wurk
    Soooo horny

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2015 04:37
    Damn... the best i've ever read. Where's part 5, bruh????!!??

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2015 09:30
    nice im missing chapter 5 though (i think of lexi as a chubbyish white girl with black hair)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2015 18:37
    yes really looks like something happened to the author ,,,,, he left his 3 evil sisters series incomplete and now this one .......

    3 years have past. FUCK

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2015 18:41
    or he got married or something nd got a change of heart
    :@:@

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.10.2015 06:53
    to be quite plain about it, you're pretty bad at writing sex scenes, but pretty good at writing in general. I suggest you use wattpad or some other site and write some meaningful stuff instead of the garbage you're passing as sex scenes.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.10.2015 05:03
    I think somestory is doing this on purpose, because he is logging in(just PM and see his) and checking the comments.

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  • Bry83
    08.11.2015 14:59
    This is one very interesting story so far the way you tell the story we the readers like it when stories are told this way it is not only very hot & sexy but there is humor put into it as well & that is what makes a very good story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.12.2015 06:07
    You better be dead or in a coma because there is absolutely no fucking reason why you should ever stop writing, ever the stories are great and so is the sex. And the wit between characters are to die for, they're the best part. Just try to put another out even if you don't feel like it's great, everyone will love it. And if you can't, just write a message or something and post it so that we know or at least tell us that you're gonna stop permanently because you already have people like us waiting for the next part for several years

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2015 16:58
    Excellent story; I didn't expect to find something of this quality on this site. One thing I would've liked to see happen would be him fucking Hailey as well at some point (maybe a foursome? ;D), but other than that, great story, keep up the good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.01.2016 09:22
    does anyone fap to this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.01.2016 06:12
    more stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.01.2016 23:53
    chapter 4, three times...your killing me!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.01.2016 05:25
    Its the best story I hav read... I I would be interested to read future secular... u should definitely write a book ... it was fucking awesome..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.01.2016 13:20
    When is the next part coming dude?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.01.2016 04:07
    There should really be more to this. It just ends abruptly then drops off. Like do they get found out? Do they stop eventually or do they continue? Please continue this story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.02.2016 06:17
    Like both stories hope u continue.

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  • CoolShyt
    15.02.2016 09:32
    This overall series is both hott and humorous

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.02.2016 17:11
    To bad there isn't part 5 to this or a part 6 to 3es. What a shame, hopefully he does come back to Finnish what he started. Nice stories man 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.02.2016 17:19
    keep on writing, good story plz continue the story to part 5

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.02.2016 15:25
    3ES AND THIS ONE ..BOTH ARE AWESOME. PLZ CONTINUE YOUR WORK IT'S AMAZING!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.02.2016 23:57
    Please continue to work on this series, I've read all your writings and I just want more, I find myself blanking thinking about the characters while doing things. I need you to continue.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.02.2016 15:52
    Fucking 5 yrs man..come back!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2016 15:33
    When's the next story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 06:11
    please we need you to continue these series they are my favorite

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.04.2016 14:19
    For free

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2016 15:53
    Why'd you stop writting dude?? Give us all a part five...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.05.2016 05:29
    U wrote great stories . But a decent ending was a little something v needed. Y dont u complete them . Even if u think the ending ll not do it justice then also post it .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.05.2016 05:38
    I wont disrespect ur stories by abusing u like a mother fucking reader but I also demand for a clarification to sudden run away . Every story deserves a ending . But ur work truly has something special

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.05.2016 06:39
    More please!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.05.2016 02:26
    Moreee plssss

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  • Terrired
    22.05.2016 04:49
    Wow, it just gets better! Thank you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2016 08:05
    Any guys trying to use this comments section to meet girls, I'm so sorry for your inability to speak to them in person.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2016 08:08
    respected you until I saw that you reposted the same chapter twice. How tasteless. Not even an explanation for why you quit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2016 08:25
    I want to read more!!! I don't care which one because I love both but please hurry I wanna read more!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2016 14:22
    I encourge u to write more its a very intresting and exotic story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2016 09:54
    The story was very well paced from the start but I felt you rushed it a little at the end.. Anyways, great story again! You're one of the best writers on this site.cheers!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2016 10:38
    when will the fifth part comeout?

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  • olblueyes
    20.06.2016 03:06
    good story as far as it went, well written,etc.etc, yada, yada,,,,, so! what was the point of melissa moving into the house????????????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2016 11:04
    Best story ever

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2016 06:18
    Best story ever

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.07.2016 02:58
    I actually started enjoying this story for the plotline too and not just the sex. Excellent writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2016 08:06
    This is a great story, like 3ES. Too bad they both stopped. Sometimes life happens. Other times, you write a story, you think you know where its going, and then you lose inspiration. The story is not going where you want it. Or you block because you can't figure out how to say what you want to say. Or maybe you're a genius sadistic writer who hooks people and then leaves them on the edge of a literary orgasm (this last is a joke). I think SS got stuck, then reading the nasty comments, decided not to post any new stories because people got irritated. This is not paid work. Writing well is not easy and needs to be fun. I am published, sometimes you have nothing left for a story and it dies. Even if there is money involved. It is more painful for the author than you know. Happens to best selling authors. Reading these stories I can imagine endings for them, but it would help if SS would come back since mine all have happy, sex-saturated endings :-). Maybe his would also.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2016 09:11
    I don't even read these for porn

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.07.2016 02:17
    Really for me it was the awesome story not the sex. The plot was good, honestly I hope the author could possibly go into more 'serious' work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2016 08:58
    Come on write the next chapter dude

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.08.2016 14:50
    What saddens me most isn't the story not ending. It's these bashful uncultured morons slandering the writer. Writing a story, especially a story which flows together as well as this one isn't easy nor is it something quickly doable. Immeasurable time and effort taken from the author's life, their free time, to write a story and get over the fear of showing it to others, only to be met with people who, despite being blessed with free access to great stories like this, don't appreciate it in the slightest and selfishly ask for more without even a thank you. And you wonder why the author doesn't come back with more. Insipid and self-centered cunts with no sense of integrity is what you are. SomeStory, your work is pure magic, and I will be sure to check back regularly as long as your stories are here, as both were by far the best I've read on this site and with story quality putting many published writers to shame. Don't stop writing, even if you stop posting here. You are an inspiration!

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  • KingKunta187
    07.08.2016 15:44
    Saddens me That you stopped writing this story and 3ES, can honestly say Taft this is one of the best written work I've seen in this site

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  • Red+Velvet
    10.08.2016 20:14
    My man, please continue this! Don't give us another blue balls.
    I believe in you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2016 00:51
    I didn't see any error.
    Positive rating

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2016 05:39
    " BEST DAY EVERY! "
    Gotta love it..........

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2016 05:49
    " BEST DAY EVERY! "
    Gotta love it..........

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2016 07:39
    Omg!!this was the best erotic story I have ever read.awesome!keep up the good work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.08.2016 02:12
    wow. feels like a really good anime, lol

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.08.2016 02:17
    Dude, love your work.Take all your time,my imagination is running wild with how this will end. feels like a really good anime

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2016 09:44
    Please please please write more of 3ES and this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2016 03:25
    Plz finish this story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2016 16:16
    Waiting for the next part.
    best day ever. loved it !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2016 04:42
    Please write another one this is one of my favorites playing make another one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.09.2016 11:07
    Its 2016 and 4 yrs have passed and I think you should step up and continue what you started don't get leave one more story just because you could not finish the first one belive me I was angry when you left 3es but this made me forgeg about that one slowly you are a awsome writter u just need to belive in your story's :)

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  • DeathforceOne
    05.10.2016 08:37
    Great series!! Cant wait for more. Keep me cumming

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.11.2016 04:01
    What happens next?? You need to continue this story line

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.11.2016 21:09
    Damn good story. It would be awesome if you continue.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2016 05:56
    why is the next part of this story taking so long?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2016 05:59
    plz write the other parts of the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.11.2016 22:10
    Not too shabby. but I like it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.11.2016 11:55
    Dude for fucks sake can u finish 3es and give us a part 5 to this its been like 4 yrs now.And some fools who call themselves writers picked up your story and fucked it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2016 18:14
    I like your stories. Honestly I read them for the story. The sex is hot but the story is grate.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.01.2017 13:45
    The next one should somehow include heartbreak.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2017 07:06
    why did you stop? people said you probably died of old age or something, I hope that's not true.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2017 08:05
    Somestory, please come back to us!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.01.2017 07:52
    Pls somestory, your stories are the best. Don't stop.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.01.2017 06:36
    He's part 4 thrice now....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.01.2017 22:16
    Pt 5 plz good story needs an end

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2017 16:21
    Really bummed that this story stopped. This is one of the few stories that I've read for the storyline. Please keep it going!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2017 17:11
    Great story.. I like the plot and the sex is hot too. I'm aware that you stopped writing.. I'd, at least, want an answer to why even if you have no obligation to. Thank you for writing and please continue what you do. Don't be pressured and write at your own pace.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.02.2017 17:31
    it is a great story but an abrupt ending I mean you could have brought in hailey and shown her actual reason for using shawn and then you know what happens with whome

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  • Randy61
    08.03.2017 20:25
    I'M MOST INCLINED TO BELIEVE ANYONE THAT COULD WRITE A STORY AS GOOD AS THIS WOULD BE A GOOD AUTHOR OF COURSE BUT EITHER THAT OF HAD A FUCKED UP RELATIONSHIP GROWING UP. I LIKE PUSSY AND LOTS OF IT BUT DAMN! lol

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  • HornySaxPlayer
    10.10.2017 18:01
    You've got to finish this story!

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  • Jackmiles2
    07.06.2018 03:06
    Anonymous, you suck.“I am not silent,” McMorris Rodgers replied, pointing to a statement she gave a local newspaper disavowing the policy of splitting migrant parents from their children. “I have said we should not be separating families.”
    GF.Y in the f-ing bathroom

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  • anonymous+reader+%28guest%29
    11.12.2018 05:35
    I come back once a year and re-read this story in hopes that more chapters have been written. I would pay money to read this story

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