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  1. Harry Potter: As One War Ends Another Begins Part 1
  2. Harry Potter: As One War Ends Another Begins Part 8
Harry Potter: As One War Ends Another Begins Part 1

Author: HpUser25

Date: 16 June 2012

Cheating, Fiction, Fiction, First Time

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Disclaimer: This story does not reflect the attitudes or characters in the Harry Potter series, nor does it have any affiliation with its author.

Part One

Harry lay awake on his back as the small clock on the wall signalled that it was midnight. Not only did this tell Harry that he should be asleep by now but also that his 18th birthday had begun. Harry sighed to himself as her turned over onto his side to get comfortable.
The battle of Hogwarts and the fall of Lord Voldemort had taken place a few weeks earlier and since then Harry had been stopping with the Weasleys at The Burrow. To him this place felt more like home than any other place ever had. Once the war had finished Mrs Weasley has kindly offered that he came to stay with them for as long as he needed as he had nowhere else to go. Private drive was part of his past and after everything he had been put through he felt that he finally deserved some peace, something he wouldn’t get with all of Uncle Vernon's moaning. There was also 12 Grimmauld Place but thankfully Mrs Weasley understood that the place still haunted Harry's memories of his godfather Sirius.
So Harry had moved into his best friend Ron's room for the summer. Although Mr and Mrs Weasley accepted his relationship with Ginny they refused to allow them to share a bed whilst they was living in their house. They had also implied the same rules to Hermione as she had begun dating Ron and was also stopping at the house for the summer. Tonight however Harry's sleeping arrangements had changed. Bill and Fleur had stopped by a few days ago to announce that Fleur had fallen pregnant and that they were having a baby. This came much to the delight of Mrs Weasley who instantly declared the need to celebrate this good news and had planned a joint party for Harry's birthday and to celebrate the family's forthcoming member.
So members of he Weasley family had travelled far and wide from across the country to join the celebrations and because of this Mrs Weasley, whilst apologising repeatedly, had asked if Harry and Hermione could sleep down stairs as family members would require the extra space in the bedrooms for the party the next day. So Harry had carried bedding down from the bedrooms and kindly offered that Hermione sleeps on the small sofa, thinking that Ron wouldn't appreciate him sleeping to close to his girlfriend.
As Harry lay on the hard living room the floor struggling for sleep he began to reflect on his time at the burrow so far.
He had welcomed the news that Fleur had fallen pregnant as it had helped lift the mournful state that had hungover the house as everybody grieved the deaths of Fred and good friends like Lupin and Tonks. Not that Harry hadn't grieved as well. He was ashamed to admit to himself, let alone anyone else, that he had come to rely on alcohol to help numb the pain that had been caused by the deaths of so many of his friends. Often he would take walks into the local muggle village and find himself purchasing alcoholic drinks such as vodka and whiskey, which he would take home and drink that night before he went to bed. Not that anyone in the house had noticed his behaviour, as half of them were doing exactly the same. Bottles were clumsily left hidden behind bins and under beds as every tried to hide their secret from the others.
But all this had stopped when Fleur had brought that happy news. Well all except Harry. He still struggled to get to sleep at night without having to have a large drink to the take the edge of it. Although not tonight. Not with Hermione sleeping so close. Ron knew of Harry's new troubles with drink but he had promised not to say a word to anyone about it, especially Hermione who would kick up a lot of fuss. So tonight he had left the bottles safely locked in his trunk upstairs and because of this found that sleep once again wouldn't come to him.
Ron and Hermione had been dealing with things a lot better than himself. As everyone became busy and excited planning the coming party, it was common for the both of them to disappear upstairs, although only Harry and Ginny ever noticed. They had heard the evidence of what they were up themselves as they lay cuddling in Ginny's room. Soft passionate moans could be heard through the wall, and at this thought Harry realised he should probably remind Ron about the silencing charm.
As for himself and Ginny? Well Mrs Weasley had made her wishes perfectly clear and Harry had no intentions of breaking them and disrespecting her after all she had done for him over the years. It was because of this that he had turned down all of Ginny's advances, although in his head he was practically ripping her clothes off.
Although he had always found Ginny beautiful, he had to admit to himself that she had turned into a fine young women. Her soft red hair seemed to elegantly fall down to her shoulders, and her freckles only complimented the beauty of her kind face. There was also her toned body which she had gained through 2 years of Quidditch training, and also her perky teen breasts which had grown into a splendid C cup size. Despite turning down Ginny's advances he had thought about her body a lot recently as he realised the urges that his body had for her. All he had seen of Ginny's body so far was when he went into her room in the morning to talk to her and she was in bed in her bra and shorts. But he definitely wanted to see more of her body soon.
As these happy thoughts floated through his mind he finally managed to fall into a deep sleep.
******

Harry woke the next morning to someone whispering in his ear quietly.
'Happy birthday handsome' as he opened his eyes to see Ginny bending down in front of him, her cleavage directly in his eye line.
After 10 whole seconds of being unable to take his eyes away from Ginny's mesmerising boobs she asked 'See something you like? As she slid her hand under his blanket to squeeze his morning glory through his boxers.
'Not now Ginny your parents could come down any minutes.'
'Alright, alright but you best get up and get ready, the whole family will be down soon and as much as I enjoy it I doubt they want to see you half naked' she responded with a smirk as she got up and left to go to the kitchen and start cooking some breakfast.
******

Harry had a very enjoyable morning opening his presents sat around the kitchen table with the Weasley family. His first present was from Ron and turned out to be two season ticket for the Chudley Cannons for the forthcoming season. Ron also looked at Harry questioningly as he open this gift and Harry fully understood who Ron wanted him to take with him.
'Well me and George will definitely enjoy these' said Harry as he watched Ron's face drop and then regain a smile when he clicked on to the joke.
His next gift was from Hermione, which turned out to be a book. Harry was a little disappointed as he thought now that he has finished school Hermione wouldn’t keep pestering him to read books. But as her turned it over and read the title he realised the amusing sentiment behind her gift.

'Hogwarts: A BRIEF History'

'Now you can read up about all the things you should know about Hogwarts without having to read the 1000 page original' She said whilst chuckling to herself.
Next up was Mr and Mrs Weasleys present which was a small box wrapped up. As he opened it and seen he gift inside he tried to hide his confusion until Mrs Weasley said sweetly ' Its a key to the front door sweetie, I want you to know that you'll always be part of this family'.
'Thank you so much!' Harry said as he rushed to hug her, kissing her fully on the lips. Mr Weasley then held out his hand to shake Harry's but he ignored the gesture and hugged him tightly as well.
Harry then got round opening his other present from the Weasley family and friends like Hagrid and Neville.
Once he'd finished opening all his presents Ginny came up to him and whispered ' I'm really sorry Harry I’ve left your present upstairs. Come up in 30 minutes and I'll give it to you then'.
Abit hurt that Ginny would forget to bring her boyfriends present down to give him first, he busied himself packing his presents away in his trunk until he walked to Ginny's room half hour later.

It took all his will power not to shout aloud in surprise as he walked into Ginny's bedroom. She was on the bed lying on her back stark naked with her legs wrapped tightly around his firebolt, the handle pressed against her perfect tits.
Harry couldn't help but stare. This is what he had been imagining a lot recently and he had finally got to see a whole lot more of Ginny. Two of his loves, flying and Ginny were erotically entangled on her bed and as he felt a twitch in his cock as he felt himself getting hard.
Ginny instantly noticed the growing bulge in his shorts and after licking her lips she seductively asked 'So birthday boy, how about you come take a ride?'
Harry's mind went into overdrive. He was about to tear his clothes off and join her on the bed when...
'Ginny we've been through this!' his voice raising with every passing second. 'I'm respecting your mothers wishes as so should you'. And with that he turned and left the room, leaving Ginny on the verge of tears.
******

The party that night got into full swing as everyone (with the exception of Fleur, obviously) was drinking plenty of alcohol. Mr Weasley, after having to sit down for 10 minutes as he went weak in the knee's with excitement, had taken the muggle money Hermione had given him and walked to shop in the village to buy some creates of lager and bottles of spirits.
So under the influence of alcohol Harry and Ginny had looked past their argument earlier and spent the night dancing and taking romantic walks around the nearby fields holding hands. All until Ginny, head dropping with a mixture of tiredness and too much alcohol, had chosen to go to bed.
Harry continued through his party though, and after drinking several more cans looked around at the remaining people enjoying the party.
Ron was lying face down on in the grass, being sick every few seconds. He had never properly drunk before and as it was Harry's birthday had hit it pretty hard. After a few more minutes when all the sick seemed to have left him Charlie picked him up and took him inside to bed.
Not many people were left now, most of the Weasley family had gone to bed long ago, and Harry couldn't identify any of the remaining red heads. He presumed they must all be distant cousins and aunts and uncles. However sat alone in the corner was Hermione happily sipping a glass of champagne smiling merrily to herself.
Harry decided he wanted to dance so as he stood up, his heading spinning because of all the alcohol he had drank, and stumbled over to Hermione and asked if she'd like to dance.
'Ohhh pleaseee Harryy' she replied whilst giggling to herself, and Harry could tell that like him she had had too much to drink.
So as the two teens slowly danced to the last few songs the remaining guests either left or went inside to go to bed.
'I suppose we should get some sleep now then' said Harry has he led Hermione into the living room. Picking up his own blanket and pillows he began to lie down on the floor.
'Oh don't be stupid Harry, here stand up' she ordered, as she lifted the big comfy cushions of off the sofa and made a reasonably sized bed on the floor. 'This way we can both be comfortable, it is your birthday after all, you don't deserve to be sleep on the floor.'
Harry had to agree as he got comfortable and extinguished the lights he rolled over and tried to get to sleep. What happened next however shocked him so much, even more than Ginny and the firebolt earlier, that he was wide awake instantly. Hermione had turned to face him and slowly placed her hand on his cheek, reaching forward and brushing her lips against his. It was such a soft and passionate kiss but what followed was pure lust.
They lunged at each other kissing furiously, not knowing where to put their hands first. Hermione pressed herself against Harry whilst he reached round and squeezed her arse cheeks. He was surprised at how soft they felt and how rounded and curvy Hermione's bum was.
Hermione had reached around Harry and was pulling on the back of his head, pulling him closer to her until she felt his hardening cock press against her stomach. Harry was getting more adventurous and had brought his hands round to the front of Hermione and pushed them up her top fondling her boobs. He was shocked to find out that she wasn't wearing a bra, giving him easy access to touch her where he'd never touched a girl before. But he also made another discovery. Hermione's tits were a lot bigger than she had led people to believe, although school robes were hardly revealing.
Harry's hand were all over them instantly. The fact that they was so soft and gentle in his hands excited him as he began to squeeze them together and pinch and rub her nipples until they became hard. This all led to Hermione moaning into his mouth and she continued to kiss him, until she pulled away and begged 'Please Harry, I need more' as she pushed his hands down towards her lacy panties.
Harry slipped his hands into her pants and felt her shaved wet pussy. His mind was working overtime and he had no idea what to do next, although the alcohol encouraged him to just go for it as he started to rub his index finger against her slit. As Harry continued to to rub his finger against her pussy until Hermione squealed with pleasure as he accidentally brushed against her clit. Realising that this spot must be sensitive to her he continued to rub it, whilst pulling down her top to suck and lick her nipples.
Hermione couldn't stop moaning in pleasure as Harry got to work. She knew all about Harry turning down Ginny's advances as the poor girl had come to her for advice. Because of this she knew that Harry had probably never done this before, not that he wasn’t doing a very good job now. Thinking that she should probably return the favour she pulled his boxers down and began to stroke his 6 inch erection with one hand whilst fondling his balls with the other.
Although Harry had no idea what he was doing Hermione seemed to be enjoying it so his confidence grew and he pushed down slipping a finger into her wet pussy all the way to the knuckle.
'Ohhh yess... Right there Harry that’s the spot!' she moaned into his chest as he began to pump one and then two finger into her pussy. 'Harder Harry, HARDER! Oh my god, I’m so close...'.
With a moment of genius Harry pumped harder with his fingers and with his thumb began to frantically rub her clit.
'Holy fuck Harry! I'm gonna... gonna... ohh fuck I'm cumming! She moaned into his ear and her body began to shake and her legs closed together around his hand. The moaning and hot breath on Harry's neck were all too much for him as he fired his load all over Hermione's flat stomach and large tits as she continued shaking because of the powerful orgasm that was rocking through her.
As they both caught their breath and regained the sense of being that they had lost through their individual orgasms, Hermione turned to Harry and said 'That was amazing Harry, imagine how good the sex would be.'
And with that they both fell asleep.

To be continued....

Authors note: This is my first attempt at a story so any form of constructive feedback would be appreciated.


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  • HpUser25
    16.06.2012 09:23
    Could I ask that people comment on what they like/dislike about the story so that I can improve on my future stories and make them more enjoyable for everyone :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 09:42
    There were a few grammatical errors, but the overall story was well written. You did a good job describing your scenes well and left the story open to further chapters. Well done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 09:56
    I really liked it. dont change anything. its really good

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 09:56
    I really liked it. dont change anything. its really good

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 10:28
    There were a few grammatical errors, but the overall story was well written. You did a good job describing your scenes well and left the story open to further chapters. Well done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 11:16
    The story itself was set up very well. It was nice that you gave a clear reason for everything that was happening. Overall it was a great story and I would strongly recommend you continue the story.

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  • HpUser25
    16.06.2012 12:59
    Thanks for the comments guys :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 13:19
    Harry/Hermione is boring. You should have used Molly instead of Hermione. That way it would be more exciting with Harry knowing he's fucked his future mother in law.

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  • HpUser25
    16.06.2012 13:23
    I understand that alot of stories like this do involve Harry and Hermione, but if you read my next part to the story you'll see that nothing continues between them. I just wanted to add a concept of them cheating on their partners as it wasnt some thing I have read in other harry potter related stories

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 13:33
    i like both chapters. Please don't add incest and ruin it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 15:03
    nice,but you should add harmione

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 15:55
    Awesome man!!!! I like both parts :-) !!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 15:55
    Awesome man!!!! I like both chapters :-) !!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 20:34
    also dont add gay sex

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  • HpUser25
    16.06.2012 20:41
    Don't worry I have no intention of adding gay sex

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 22:13
    No, dont stop harry hermione.. keep that going, even if you bring other pairings.. Story on this site should have sex.. the more the better.. I liked harry molly idea too..

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 22:15
    Awesome work man... thanx for no gay sex.. other sex though should be encouraged.. incest and any type..

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 22:15
    waiting for next chapter. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2012 22:23
    waiting for next chapter. :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 01:24
    Thanks for Harry and Hermione. If you read the books they are perfect for each other. Dont believe me check out Harry Potter and The Sword Of Griffendore posted on this site

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 01:31
    Id like a little more SEX in it. Our great at story line but I was like," ok where can I get turned on enough to jack off." End of the story "DAMN IT!" Nothing...

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 04:40
    The only advice I have for you is to separate the paragraphs with an extra return. other than that, this story is done very well for a short story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 05:17
    Submit the nwe chp ASAP NOWWWWW!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 06:04
    I am against adult HarryPotter stories. The reason is that I love the books and adult stories with cheating and stuff is not a part of JKR's world. To be honest, reading the books, you get the feeling that Harry would be more likely fancying Ron than Hermione. Anwyay, your story is nice but but the H/HR pair doesn't excite me after so many stories with this concept. I would go for some Harry/Fleur and maybe add Ginny for some hot threesomes with lesbian scene of Fleur/Ginny or Hermione/Fleur or Hermione/Ginny.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 19:15
    Really good, but could you use while instead of whilst, it's very annoying seeing it used in conversations where it doesn't belong.

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  • HpUser25
    17.06.2012 19:20
    Hey, yeah sorry I do try to read everything over before posting it but its hard to notice everything :) i'll take extra care in future

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.06.2012 23:52
    Alright. Great story, though Id like hermione ginny and harry all at once!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 00:58
    Awesome series, I can't a wait to read the next installment, I always thought that Ginny was just as hot as hermione, would love to see the two of them have some fun together ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 01:06
    good job, but stop being being so one dimensional in relationships. Harry/ ginny, and ron/hermione are boring.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 04:39
    Agree with the guy below... Harry is the hero, he should be the one we care about, not ron anywaz.

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  • HpUser25
    18.06.2012 07:11
    Just trying to set the story at the moment, they'll be some twists in relationships coming up soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 09:26
    Awesome series, I can't a wait to read the next installment, I always thought that Ginny was just as hot as hermione, would love to see the two of them have some fun together ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 10:05
    defintely hot series. you should expand the pairs to more like Mr and Mrs Weasley, Bill/Fleur or you could use Lavender for some lesbian scenes with Ginny or Hermione or both. Ron/Harry could double fuck Fleur or Luna.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 15:53
    Really good and Hot, good that you are keeping it canon Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione are really rare. Please update soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 16:25
    Great story, glad this is not the generic harry fucks everyone (hopefully its not) hope you make this with cannon pairings with a bit (preferably a lot) of romance.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 16:53
    please show some Ron/Hermione action please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 18:43
    Thankyou for somewhat writing Ron/Hermione and Harry/Ginny as despite being canon pairings it is actually very rare to see.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2012 18:48
    Also you have established that Harry's cock is 6 inches (which is realistic as he is a bit on the short side) but as a Ron fan could you please make Ron's cock bigger.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2012 02:16
    Damn it! Hermione was there. she could have joined. Hermione is hotter then ginny. She has an ass, tits, and kinky hair. I mean fuck, why start the seris with her if your not gonna use her!?

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  • GingerCat
    19.06.2012 06:55
    Actually you are thinking of the movies. In the books Ginny is described as very good looking. Ginny is supposed to have a Prewitt build so she is quite short but very stocky as well (not fat) so Ginny would have much larger breasts than Hermione would (if you like that sort of thing).

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.06.2012 05:11
    hermione is hotter agreed. But anyway dude, hurry up.. waiting for the next story.

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  • GingerCat
    21.06.2012 05:27
    To Harry at least Ginny is much better looking (at least in the books). I suspect Ron would have a completely different opinion though.

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  • HpUser25
    21.06.2012 06:39
    Sorry for the delay in the next chapter, im abit busy at the moment. I plan on starting it either tomorrow or saturday.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.06.2012 15:16
    Actually in the books Hermione is described as someone not very attractive. Bushy hair, flat chest, not very athletic. On the other hand, Ginny is kinda like Hogwarts hottie. She's described as having beautiful red silk hair, athletic physic, quite developed for her age and she often wore revieling dresses like the one at Bill's wedding that made Harry drooling. Also she had already 2 boyfriends before 15 and Ron and Harry didn't like (for different reasons obviously) that she received a lot of male attention and even in DH, during the Bill/Fleur wedding, Krum asked Harry if Ginny was single while he ignored Hermione. All this are clear hints that Ginny is a lot hotter than Hermione. Sure Emma Watson is hotter than Bonnie Wright, but Ginny is hotter than Hermione. That's a fact.

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  • GingerCat
    23.06.2012 18:50
    Well it isn't a fact as Hermione got a lot of attention from Krum and McLaggen (not to mention Ron) but I do imagine Hermione being around 5'7 with B cup breasts while Ginny would be around 5'3 with C or perhaps D cup breasts. You are right though that in the books Ginny is supposed to be very attractive. Hermione is supposed to be attractive as well but Harry isn't personally attracted to her so he does not notice so much (and the books are from Harry's perspective).

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.06.2012 02:33
    Hermione is flat chested? where the fuck did u get that "described in the book" from?

    Hermione is exactly like Emma Watson. Ginny may be more sexy than Bonnie, but Hermione is more sexy for me... Emma Watson has big boobs, and thats how there hermione I have in mind has too.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2012 09:59
    Next chapter?
    soon?

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  • HpUser25
    27.06.2012 19:04
    Yeah sorry again on the delay in the next chapter, i've been really busy last few days. im most likely going to write the next installment tomorrow.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 18:30
    hoping for more Ron/Hermione please update soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2012 16:20
    hermione is out of character.

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  • GingerCat
    29.06.2012 20:12
    I imagine Hermione being a very sexual person when it comes to Ron and when it comes to Ron she is more capable of taking a few risks sexually. She would want Ron to see the side of her that she has locked away for years.

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  • GingerCat
    29.06.2012 20:12
    I was referring to the reviewer underneath me when I said that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2012 20:21
    there are hints of future H/H please don't, I beg u keep this R/H.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.06.2012 07:23
    I beg u to go to H/H. R/H sucks.

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  • GingerCat
    30.06.2012 10:58
    H/Hr makes no logical sense if you read the books. They are not attracted to one another and have no feelings for each other beyond friendship.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.06.2012 23:24
    H/HR all the way. No R/HR or H/G anymore.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.07.2012 08:16
    I think it's kinda pathetic from that same anonymous person to post all the time the same begging message about H/Hr. Okay we got this. You like H/Hr. Your first comment was enough. No need for the other three.
    To the author. Don't listen to him. You're writing a very hot story without bringing in the hilarious h/hr bullshit. If you want advices about potential sexual encounters, I would suggest a threesome with Fleur and you can choose whoever you want as her partners, girls or boys. Also it would be a lot naughty to have Harry having sex with Molly. Please no incest or gay stuff. and no h/hr. I love seeing this guy getting pissed of and all his whining earned him nothing, haha.

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  • GingerCat
    02.07.2012 00:29
    Interesting chapter. I am not a fan of the H/Hr elements in this chapter but I had no problem with the Ginny/Luna parts.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.07.2012 06:33
    would love to see a chapter of Harry & Ginny & Luna getting it on and him getting them both PG. As is the custom of the wiz world he would have to marry both of them. that would be great

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.07.2012 07:34
    Work on spelling. Maybe separate the paragraphs a little more. Other than that, you're straight.

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  • demck23
    02.07.2012 18:30
    enjoyed it but wished it would have been Harry doing it with her

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.07.2012 03:12
    Great story. So Harry turns down Ginny and then gets to third base with hermione????? Weird guy. Haha jk still a great story 5/5

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.07.2012 04:06
    Good job. Loved it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.07.2012 08:23
    i liked the little molly/harry hints. I hope more of this to come. and don't forget that molly is not supposed to be as old as the actress who played her in the films.
    i would love for ginny to catch fleur in the bathroom and maybe shower together and more.

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  • HpUser25
    05.07.2012 18:41
    What does everyone think of the Molly/Arthur scene? If I get positive feedback i'll include them in future chapters

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2012 16:06
    Try and do a Ginny/Luna scene again please

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2012 01:04
    The Molly/Arthur scene was alright. I think you played it well in this chapter, cause seeing Molly say something like "Fuck my pussy" would be slightly disturbing lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2012 05:19
    I don't know.. I think Molly letting them move into each other's rooms seemed a bit out of character... Not really sure how I feel about that. But the rest of the story was great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2012 23:27
    to that anonymous reader that said hermione is out of character. the point of writing erotic fan-fiction is to take the characters to a place never before explored.

    to the author your doing a great job but please use molly more.No H/HR

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2012 23:57
    molly and harry definite, but try exploring threesome with harry, Ginny and Luna

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 00:42
    You need to write the series faster I can't get enough. Sorry if I seem pushy your just writing these stories amazingly.

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  • GingerCat
    05.08.2012 02:37
    Nice. Its strange that Ginny feels so comfortable being naked in front of Ron but I am certainly not complaining.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 15:19
    quiet good... but concentrate on main characters, and less on Luna OMC. Still I love where you are heading with Ginny suggesting Harry / Hr combo. Keep it going fast.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.08.2012 01:39
    to 2 below me: thats the point of fan fiction. get characters "out of character."

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.08.2012 22:11
    Please no Hermione/Harry scenes. Its horribly cliche these days.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.08.2012 23:25
    Put luna in more. But try to meld her in with the main plot. That way we don't have to deal with a subplot and multible major sex scenes in one installment. Great job, though.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2012 06:32
    finnaly its out! do harry/ginny and ron/hermione more and add some luna too but I love harryxginny the most

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2012 07:18
    These are the fucking best thing ever.

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  • HpUser25
    20.08.2012 09:14
    i know theres been a delay in chapters... Hopefully get a couple up this week.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2012 01:32
    I like your series, but there isn't much of a plot. For example, the title is As Ond War Ends Begins Another, but you've only made one reference to that, and no follow up. Also, in most Harry Potter fan fiction stories, it isn't sex, sex, sex. Try making the chapters longer, adding a plotline, and following your title. Then it would be much better

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2012 21:27
    Hurry next one quick

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2012 09:11
    I ve the books many times and even though the isnt really anything between H/HR I have always felt that they should be together as many fans do I think it should be ron/luna ginny/neville and h/hr .Plus I read a story which they referred ginny as looking like harrys mum so now I cant read any h/g withoout getting freaked out

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.09.2012 10:08
    well I thought id never read one to top the harry potter and the sisters black saga but I stand corrected great story keep em comming

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.09.2012 15:02
    Great story again, really enjoying this saga but I wish there was less of a wait ebtween stories! Well worth the read though, keep it up!!

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  • demck23
    13.09.2012 09:46
    very good story just wish you would post it faster next time and hope you finish it

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2012 12:47
    Ooooohh!! That was a great cliffhanger for this chapter. When I read Dudley sitting there crying I was like "oh no". I knew what he was going to say

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2012 12:50
    Ooooohh!! That was a great cliffhanger for this chapter. When I read Dudley sitting there crying I was like "oh no". I knew what he was going to say

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.09.2012 18:46
    AWESOME.. but lets not wait as much for the next one!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2012 21:28
    Honestly I wasn't expecting a good Harry potter story after I read the spell book of desires, but this is a well written story with alot of twists and turns and shocking outcomes that makes the reader wanting more. All I ask is that you release the stories a little earlier. Besides that, awesome work! Please post the next one soon!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.09.2012 21:29
    Honestly I wasn't expecting a good Harry potter story after I read the spell book of desires, but this is a well written story with alot of twists and turns and shocking outcomes that makes the reader wanting more. All I ask is that you release the stories a little earlier. Besides that, awesome work! Please post the next one soon!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2012 05:58
    Maybe a wedding of Harry and gin or Ron and hermione but let's see Luna and Neville get together soon please

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2012 05:59
    Maybe a wedding of Harry and gin or Ron and hermione but let's see Luna and Neville get together soon please

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.09.2012 23:08
    Ron & Ginny Hermione & Ginny. Maybe harry & mrs. Weasley

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2012 20:48
    Oh that was so erotic!!! I feel sorry for Dully though... I hope he get's to bang her!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2012 23:40
    Ever since Tamperer went M.I.A this is the only series I have consistently checked up on.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.10.2012 23:40
    Ever since Tamperer went M.I.A this is the only series I have consistently checked up on.

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  • GingerCat
    04.10.2012 00:52
    Need more Ron and Hermione as their sex life would be even better than Harry's and Ginny's. In saying that though I certainly enjoyed reading this chapter.

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  • demck23
    04.10.2012 10:36
    Enjoyed the story just wished that dudly had got laid by Luna and when they did it somthing happened to make them married by magic. that would be a great twist in the story and make him and harry have a better life

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  • demck23
    04.10.2012 10:38
    Think it's time for the girls to get PG by the guys and make them playing alot more and with lots of action

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.10.2012 05:08
    More Fleur and possibly some lesbian action with her and Ginny. I love your story so far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2012 16:19
    This is phenomenal stuff matey. Enjoying this even more than the books. Really got me on the edge of my seat! More ASAP!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.11.2012 16:22
    Foursome with Harry / Hermione and Ginny / Ron

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2012 23:55
    Come on m8 been w8in 4 so long don't stop writin dis it is 1 of the best stories I have read on this site and possibly 1 of the best hp fan fic series ever

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.11.2012 15:20
    molly and arthur are fantastic, I really want to see lots more of them. I would be so hot if they had a 3 way.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.11.2012 04:45
    more molly and arthur!!!!!!!

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  • handparty
    26.11.2012 15:27
    That was a great new chapter. Take your time, I'll keep reading.

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  • demck23
    26.11.2012 15:34
    It was very good new chapter enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to the next one. keep it going & finish doing them. most just stop and leave it hanging

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.11.2012 20:47
    Your chapters are great ad I enjoy reading them. I'm glad that you are going to finish the story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.11.2012 05:17
    I agree 100 percent

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.12.2012 00:46
    Yea, please take your time. They are totally worth the wait.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2012 04:19
    with all due respect post the next damn one already.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2012 04:20
    with all due respect post the next damn one already.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2012 01:07
    this story is best take your time and finish the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2012 01:13
    I have followed your stories since you started them your an amazing author without and the wait for the next chapter will be worth it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2012 08:11
    it wasn't as exciting as I was hoping for but hopefully the rest of the series will be better. just go for something original instead of the same drama cheating.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 10:41
    it rokss kep doin like thisz

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 11:02
    Took to long to get to the erotic part

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 11:46
    Avatrek! You're still alive! YAY!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 12:44
    Are you going to continue writing stories on this site and sexstoriespost?

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 12:51
    I hope there's more

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 15:27
    IS this your story I have read it before?

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2013 02:19
    Good to see you back in business Avatrek!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2013 07:14
    The sequel that I've been waiting for. keep up the good work, sir avatrek!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2013 16:36
    What is it with you cunts and Harry Potter? Can't any of you find something original to write about? You keep churning out the same old bullshit over and over again. Give it a rest!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2013 16:38
    Just out of curiosity, where have you been, Avatrek?!?

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2013 18:58
    You are a wonderful writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2013 23:05
    Great story!! For the next one, go back to Harry/Hermione/Draco. Keep the change going.

    A little advice as well: maybe make them a little more sexual. Like, have a lot more sexual content and details.

    It still had me rubbing my cock all the way through, again!! Keep it up!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2013 23:06
    Great story!! For the next one, go back to Harry/Hermione/Draco. Keep the change going.

    A little advice as well: maybe make them a little more sexual. Like, have a lot more sexual content and details.

    It still had me rubbing my cock all the way through, again!! Keep it up!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2013 07:39
    Welcome back Avatrek!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2013 11:07
    Um no ones read it according to the counter but I rated a few timez m it hasmt come up...

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2013 11:12
    Um conter thingy still broken ...

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2013 11:19
    Some one contact an admin for the counters they r very much broken...

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2013 11:24
    @ n00b below

    FUCK OFF

    @ admins FIX THE COUNTER ...

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2013 23:06
    Your a great author, keep it up and With all due respect, post the next part already!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.01.2013 03:58
    holy shit im reading the books and it just hit me with a HOLE [giggle] new perspective

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2013 00:26
    This was super hot. It made me so wet. Post again soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2013 11:56
    Come on, make this a Ron and Hermione story, not the cliche Draco/HErmione story. There are simply too many of those.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2013 11:58
    I was hoping Hermione would give her virginity to Ron. Please do this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2013 19:38
    post the next one already

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2013 22:46
    PLEASE NO RONhermione! ron is a bit of an idiot, and hermione is way better of with harry

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2013 23:10
    Oh my lord, anyone that has never read the books are quick to assume that Ron's character is an idiot because of the movies. If you read the books, you will find that Ron is a excellent chess player which requires intelligence. Ron is just lazy to do his work is all. The movies only portrayed Ron as a chess player in the first movie, but never again after that. Ron is in fact actually intelligent in some areas. Hell, even Hermione's character and Harry's character can't beat Ron at chess. There you go, now call Ron an idiot again and you'll be the real idiot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2013 23:12
    I AGREE! harry broods 2 much 4 hermy.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.01.2013 23:14
    I AGREE! harry broods 2 much 4 hermy.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 13:01
    Harry Should have some Fun too but generally the Idea is Great

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 14:36
    Please write a Ron and Hermione scene.

    Before anyone says no! No Ron and Hermione, Ron is too much of an idiot, read the books before commenting such thing. Ron isn't a idiot at all, only the movies view him that way because they couldn't use everything from the books. If you call Ron an idiot, you are the real idiot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 18:31
    Sounds a bit like the hangover :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 19:42
    These are good. Post again soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 20:24
    Please make a Ron and Hermione scene!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 20:25
    PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.01.2013 23:17
    good stories for the most part, but your writing gets worse with every one. did you even finish high school?

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2013 02:35
    "PLEASE NO RONhermione! ron is a bit of an idiot, and hermione is way better of with harry"

    Fuckin' harmonians. You lot are a plague on the HP fandom.

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  • ghostsilver47
    07.01.2013 13:29
    Avatrek, you have no idea how glad all your fans are that you're back. This was an amazing chapter, and I can't wait for more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2013 14:46
    cant wait for more soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2013 17:26
    In the words of Queen: "It finally happened"

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2013 02:05
    Please make harry and lilly have sex. thnks good stories bro :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2013 03:54
    Some Harry/Molly would be so Awesome. ^_^

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2013 08:56
    Year Harry lilly please

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2013 09:01
    I second ghostsilver47
    so glad you're writing again!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.01.2013 17:11
    i've been reading all your stories, they are so good! I like the mind control malfoy is doing on hermoine. that's probably my favorite part of your stories. thanks :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2013 23:20
    Love your stories they are awesome love the Ron and ginny it's hot

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2013 13:39
    So glad you are writing again! continue with this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2013 14:14
    Avatrek! I'm so happy you're back, I posted a comment. :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2013 15:10
    awesome bro. glad you're back! keep going. make a harry and lily have sex

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.01.2013 15:57
    Keep going!!!! Fucking amazing stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 03:34
    Three Thumbs up! Haha love your stories! Great detail keep them cumming please!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 04:59
    Fuck ron/ginny incest is so fucking hot, immagine them having a threesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 16:30
    Draco and Hermione now I didn't expect that

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 21:55
    Boo his this has nothing 2 do with hogwarts/Harry potter!!!!!Fuck this

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 23:33
    i hate this fucking story its a big pile of cow shit

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 23:48
    Dude, I've waited around a year for you to keep it up, y'think you could update this story faster than "The Restricted Files", please?

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 01:43
    I love these stories. Keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 02:20
    keep writing. glad you're back with this one. keep going!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 02:40
    Harry/Molly Pleeeeaaasse.
    Harry/Minerva, Harry/Narcissa, Harry/Amelia Bones...
    All the older women of HP series..

    They can continue this affair even after Harry goes forward back to 1990's

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 02:43
    Incest is creepy. You should pair Ginny with someone other than Ron. Stop writing creepy shit such as incest

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 02:43
    Incest is creepy. You should pair Ginny with someone other than Ron. Stop writing creepy shit such as incest

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 05:44
    What the hell r u people talking about so far this hole story has been awesome I love it keep up the good work mate

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 07:59
    Anon 2013-01-11 02:43:08, if you're on this website and have issues with incest, you're in for a bad time. Anyway, in this particular chapter, it's not Ron, I'd guess it's Malfoy. The other Slytherins probably wouldn't even know who she is.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 18:23
    Since this is 19-something, I guess there won't be any Veela action. I kinda liked Harry-Fleur pairings...

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2013 00:39
    Like to see a harry and Lilly!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2013 12:19
    this is good! show what's happening at slytherin's place. I want to see hermoine and malfoy!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 05:25
    Pair Ron and hermione and Harry and Ginny.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 08:24
    Love you so much Avatrek ! this is by fare the hottest story I've read in a long time, I'd love u even more if u could write some R/Hr too cause they are my favorite couple :) , also really liked the R/G in here I'm a Ron fangirl so that's not a surprise I guess.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 08:29
    obviously this series is stolen but I can't remember from where.
    now as a chapter it was good but incest is so boring. why would ron wanting to fuck ginny anyway? he could lust after luna, hermione or a new character but he's obsessed to fuck ginny because the story is ultimately going to end as hermione/draco, so he ron can't have her.

    totally waste of time this series. it reminds of nothing the HP world besides the names.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2013 17:44
    Not a stolen series, it's Avatrek himself posting here.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.01.2013 16:15
    vigazle biscuits and soggy cream cummy cakes

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.01.2013 16:15
    vigazle biscuits and soggy cream cummy cakes

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.01.2013 21:36
    Post more of this story not the star woes one! This is way better

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2013 08:31
    Personally I hate stories where other characters besides Harry get to fuck but but I read the story parts that are out and he hasn't even fucked yet so I may not read the story

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2013 01:59
    More Ginny Luna stuff

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2013 09:34
    Post on this one again not the Star Wars one. This one is way better

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2013 13:36
    We're so glad you're back, Avatrek, your stories are the best I have ever read, without a doubt.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2013 13:37
    We're so glad you're back, Avatrek, your stories are the best I have ever read, without a doubt.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2013 13:47
    This story is so fucking great, love every bit of it. Ron/Ginny definitely my favourite. Although I noticed a small mistake-you wrote that in the finals Alyssa was the fifth, but later you replaced her with Mary Macdonald.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.01.2013 02:43
    Please keep writing this story!!!

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  • GingerCat
    20.01.2013 01:02
    I asked on the forum as well but since you have not posted there in 3 years I thought I would ask here if you are open to story suggestions or challenges? Thanks.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2013 19:15
    well worth the wait.

    Please make the next one soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2013 21:46
    Well Harry and Hermione didn't hook up in the movie at least they do in a fake story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2013 08:42
    Man, I thought that you had left these stories for dead long ago Avatrek. I am so glad that you decided to start back up aagain, you really are a brilliant author! The oonly suggestion I have is to keep them coming!
    - ???

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  • Swagspray
    21.01.2013 21:39
    Good to see you back

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2013 22:53
    Please no more Molly and mr weasley... It's very disturbing. I skip over it everytine

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2013 19:00
    Do u think you'll be adding more harry potter stories soon? Unlike most ppl I don't really care for star wars all that much and although you're writing always has me checking this site everyday I get disappointed when there is still no new harry potter stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2013 20:41
    Do you have Any others coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.01.2013 20:43
    Do you have Any others coming

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 02:09
    Make a new one soon plz and good ending!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 10:23
    Take ur time, so far it's bin gr8

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 12:54
    hurry up and make the next one for fuck sake

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 14:14
    Every Star Wars lightsaber has deinerfft methods of opening it to insert the batteries. I have 7 deinerfft ones and out of the 7 5 open deinerfftly. Plus there are several more new ones just released.Depending on which one you have you may have to unscrew the top base where the blade starts, or remove the 2 screws in the hilt, or remove 1 screw in the hilt base, or remove 2 screws on the right side of the hilt.Now the new Clone wars series are like the 1998 models and you have to unscrew the top base. You can usually see where there is a section that looks like it could be removed easily and is held in place with a screw. Some have 2 now but the ones from last year and further down the road have just one. Usually on the bottom of the saber holding the blade section vertically.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 15:07
    Need more Ron/Hermione scenes!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 21:09
    Oh man... Good one just make it more derailed and more sex scenes

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 21:10
    No sereousley mor sex sex sex
    This is a sex site

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 23:10
    Post another star wars is not as good harry and lilly plz

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 23:11
    Post another star wars is not as good harry and lilly plz

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2013 18:40
    Dude the sex scenes are great and the story itself is fantastic. I do think that Galvin is the killer though it just seems to fit.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2013 20:08
    i suggest reading your work aloud to yourself before posting. the stories are great, but there are some typos where a letter might have dropped, and it was still a word

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.01.2013 01:09
    Good ending tell Emily what happened and the truth don't just mind wipe her.
    Good story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2013 02:14
    WOW! I did not expect you to make a sequal but it's so awesome you did Keep Writing!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2013 05:42
    Why are you no longer writing? You can't leave me hanging like this!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.02.2013 02:55
    I agree with the below comment I think I speak for many when I say more Harry Potter they are the best

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.02.2013 13:08
    Your Stories are amazing!!! Though I think it would be hot if you had some boy/boy pairings on your harry potter ones. Maybe even a threesome with two guys and a girl!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.02.2013 00:58
    I want more of ginny and hermione. plz plz plz

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2013 15:14
    im was allways a harry potter fan but this take it to a new level. pretty damn good. but not jerk off worthy (for me) .but will keep reading

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2013 06:19
    It's been a month! This is the only reason I check this site! Please continue soon!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.02.2013 22:08
    Whens the next one gonna b on?

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  • baileyj1996
    15.02.2013 03:55
    woo, loove the fact that you're writing again. Can you write some harry/lily please? I wuold love to see that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.02.2013 18:57
    For gods sake man its been over a month please post something

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.02.2013 08:15
    A few more years without a new chapter!? Well live just lost some of its luster :(

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2013 07:40
    great story
    not all great stories have alot of sex which is great
    keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2013 19:24
    Please please please update!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2013 16:20
    Umm its number twelve grimmauld place and number four privet drive get your facts straight

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.03.2013 20:12
    AAAAAHHHH The ending killed me!! More, soon, please!!! You are a wonderful writer!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2013 16:46
    Over two months! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2013 22:58
    ... I went to fanfic for some good stuff but it was all hp or star wars..... I just love the series too much and this makes me kinda mad... besides Harry would never cheat on Ginny HE just loves her too much... btw it is 4 privet drive and 12 grimmauld place

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2013 15:28
    Why dont you write a new serie? These stories are awesome!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2013 07:05
    systems online, blood flow optimal BONER ACTIVATE!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2013 00:06
    please finish! your stories tease the fuck out of me!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2013 16:13
    Please update! It's been too long!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2013 17:01
    Thanks! I have been looking onnile, but all I could find were the kinds that were too obviously folky and not like yours :) It would be the perfect summer bag!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2013 20:49
    Where have you been for the PAST 3 YEARS!?!?!?!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2013 12:42
    Please update your series! I love it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2013 16:34
    An intelligent ansewr - no BS - which makes a pleasant change

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.04.2013 05:32
    Dear LiatYou are on of the best teacher I have ever met lots of them beieng one myself. the lessons is done in the best and clear way thank you very much. The one on mending socks was so very helpfull to me and others of course, as I am knitting socks for more then 30 years I have lot to mend and I had done it in diffrent ways even with the wodden mushrom I inharited thank you very much for prseanting us with lots of good ways that are so helpfull.Have a nice Passoverlea

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2013 15:21
    Please continue the story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2013 11:35
    I love your smut scenes avatrek but I probably won't read anymore on the account of not liking smut with Harry potter not being the only boy in the scene

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.05.2013 23:22
    This is more a story. A real story then a sex story. Add more detail to the sex. It just seems so rushed.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2013 15:09
    Fantastic, when is the next instalment?

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2013 00:52
    That was pretty good. I'd love to read a part 2

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2013 05:45
    Have Mrs. Weasley show Ginny, how to give a good blowjob! hurry up and write part 2

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2013 06:27
    I loved it and more because you didn't go for the cliche Harry/Hermione nonsense. Harry/Molly is too naughty and now with Ginny there is going to be awesome!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2013 17:12
    That was really intresting. I would love to read part two

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.06.2013 22:41
    C'mon mate, finish the story already!

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.06.2013 00:59
    Great story plot and sex but please get a beta or proof reader because there are some grammar issues that killed parts of it for me. Can't wait for part 2 though

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.06.2013 01:37
    Only thing I hated was that Fred got killed in the book not George. George lost an ear but that was it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.06.2013 01:57
    OK I agree with the Fred dying thing but thats not important right now. Right now I see Harry fucking Ginny,Molly and McGonagall during the "private lessons" cant wait to see more of this series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.06.2013 15:33
    Can'twait for art two!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.06.2013 15:30
    Please don't stop like other people do with there series I think you should continue this

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.06.2013 03:01
    Awesome. More Harry/Molly please.
    Update quickly.
    ^_^

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.06.2013 03:08
    C'mon, C'mon...Update already.

    D:

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.06.2013 00:19
    If you could at Least tell us when you will update next it would be amazing!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2013 22:49
    I loved it, please continue this potion inhibitor thing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2013 02:28
    Please update! Or at least let us know when one is coming. This is a fucking awesome story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 20:39
    I want to see a orgy between harry hermione galvin ginny dudly emily luna

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2013 17:05
    Are you ever going to finish this, man? Please do! I've cum like twenty times over this story!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2013 09:02
    yyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2013 09:04
    as usual u r gr8 . but lik d prvius sirs I dnt lik d draco -hermione pairing

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2013 16:14
    This is the best sex story I have ever read keep up the good work

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2013 16:24
    that was awesome I loved ever bit of it keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2013 16:40
    keep it like R/H considering at the end of the seventh book ron and hermionie end up married

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2013 14:13
    I love this story! Please continue!

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  • Catmandue53
    09.08.2013 20:59
    I enjoyed this story.

    Paragraphs are your friend.

    Keep up the good work.

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  • Catmandue53
    09.08.2013 21:16
    Good work... keep it up!

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  • Catmandue53
    09.08.2013 21:25
    I'm reading these very quickly... keep it up!

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  • Catmandue53
    09.08.2013 22:27
    I'm still reading these at a breakneck pace!

    Keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.08.2013 22:38
    Another fine read, but a bit short perhaps?

    Keep up the good work.

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  • Catmandue53
    09.08.2013 22:53
    I'm still enjoying these stories, but this chapter felt a bit short too.

    Keep up the good work.

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  • Catmandue53
    09.08.2013 23:27
    Another good story... can you tell by how fast I am reading them that I am quite enjoying them? Well I am!

    Longer stories would be even better! Cheers!

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  • Catmandue53
    09.08.2013 23:46
    Good work! Keep it up!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2013 00:09
    Not bad... not bad at all!

    It seemed longer than the previous ones, and I liked that.

    Keep up the good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2013 00:10
    Not bad... not bad at all!

    It seemed longer than the previous ones, and I liked that.

    Keep up the good work!

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  • Catmandue53
    10.08.2013 00:29
    Really well done mate! It pleases me immensely to see Dudlley grow up into a good young man.

    Keep up the good work!

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  • Catmandue53
    10.08.2013 00:41
    Well done! I really enjoyed reading this latest installment!

    Please, keep up the great work!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.08.2013 18:15
    Great story! Harry should have an affair with Molly

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 06:10
    Dude could you please tell us when the next update will be?

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2013 18:11
    What happened? You were easily the best writer here, where did you go?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2013 07:20
    " It was the fact that there was so many pairs of boobs and the odd pussy, that he couldn't believe he was actually here."

    I love the phrase "the odd pussy" like there's one weird odd pussy there amongst the normal ones.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.08.2013 07:21
    Where did Ginny go all frustrated? Maybe to Luna.......?

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2013 10:32
    Why would british people watch INDEPENDENCE DAY

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2013 22:38
    Not so under the influence of alcohol people do things that they might not do regularly do... I know that quite well

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  • Wazzup
    04.09.2013 07:48
    Finnaly!!!!!!!! The return

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2013 03:00
    YoIHCj I really enjoy the blog.Really thank you! Really Great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2013 23:34
    Mr seas eye should tell Luna he needs persuading to get her case dismissed. Then she fucks him and sucks him off. Ginny sees and after they are done she asks Luna to fuck her with a strapon. Ginny cums screaming 'daddy' then they seduce Arthur together.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2013 15:10
    Eagerly waiting for Part 14! Please continue!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.09.2013 15:51
    bEix3c I loved your article.Really looking forward to read more. Much obliged.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.09.2013 10:36
    N3CYrT I value the post.Really looking forward to read more. Much obliged.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.09.2013 17:53
    @anon Ok, its very good.. But not the best.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2013 17:07
    We need the next part!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2013 19:25
    I'm a hermaphrodite and my partner is also one (we're both 12 and 3/4.). Though we were bouncing on each other for a full hour after reading, we both cheat. If u respond to this comment, I'll seat u! Giggle giggle. I am more of a boy than a girl, but have an F Cup and am willing to bounce.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.10.2013 18:57
    cmon dude, we're waiting for the next one

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.10.2013 18:18
    Don't get me wrong, it's a great story and a brilliant concept for a series....and I know you said you spent time on the grammar and spelling, but you missed a LOT of mistakes...it might be worth getting another person to read it over before posting so they can notice anything you might have missed

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.10.2013 06:34
    Dude please.. Waiting for like 10 months

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2013 23:39
    3HEIjf Really enjoyed this blog article.Thanks Again. Really Great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 04:33
    51t5jY Thanks-a-mundo for the blog article.Really looking forward to read more. Will read on...

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 16:58
    I4jTou I think this is a real great blog post.Really thank you! Awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2013 17:02
    jtU88L Great, thanks for sharing this blog.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2013 04:26
    Brilliant but needs more sex

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2013 14:15
    We have been waiting since the beginning of Jan! Come back please!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.11.2013 14:15
    We have been waiting since the beginning of Jan! Come back please!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.11.2013 11:42
    I'm so glad your back with more fantastic reading material!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.11.2013 11:53
    Where's the next part

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2013 21:56
    8aifhq Hey, thanks for the blog article.Really thank you! Awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.11.2013 06:50
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  • anonymous+reader
    28.11.2013 19:29
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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.12.2013 12:56
    I love the Draco and Hermione pairing!! You HAVE to make a chapter about them having sex or maybe make it a threesome/group with Harry and/or Severus (or anyone else): Omg do it. NOW. Ugh I'm so bloody horny ;P

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.12.2013 12:56
    I love the Draco and Hermione pairing!! You HAVE to make a chapter about them having sex or maybe make it a threesome/group with Harry and/or Severus (or anyone else): Omg do it. NOW. Ugh I'm so bloody horny ;P

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.01.2014 15:34
    Really enjoying this story. I love the balance of erotic and plot. I think it's perfect.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.01.2014 06:18
    great story, I love how its a real story, not just fucking.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2014 19:03
    its been a year. I wanna read the rest of the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.01.2014 07:32
    UPDATEEE!!! Youve left us waiting too long man. Too long!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.01.2014 20:39
    7oWO05 Im thankful for the blog. Keep writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.01.2014 08:51
    mOZg2U I cannot thank you enough for the article post.Much thanks again. Much obliged.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2014 12:40
    Bn8NO5 Really appreciate you sharing this blog article.Thanks Again.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2014 20:14
    Sweet. Awesome story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2014 09:36
    “Professor McGonagall didn’t say why you need the money but she did say I had to retrieve it because you three are currently band from Gringotts for being the only people to successfully rob the place.

    should be banned

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2014 11:21
    “Professor McGonagall didn’t say why you need the money but she did say I had to retrieve it because you three are currently band from Gringotts for being the only people to successfully rob the place.

    should be banned

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.03.2014 23:21
    when is the next part coming?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.03.2014 23:22
    when is the next part coming?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.03.2014 04:35
    terrible spelling, just awful, really, and you need more detail.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.04.2014 09:24
    to the person that asked if he finished high school
    don't be a dick and just read the story

    it's very good mr.author

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2014 07:54
    Hurry and post part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.05.2014 01:57
    great job. keep up the good work. next part?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2014 08:38
    There's another two or three chapters available elsewhere on the web

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2014 11:22
    Where is p14

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2014 10:17
    Still no update, is this guy dead or something.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2014 01:01
    14kaKs Enjoyed every bit of your blog post.Much thanks again.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2014 21:33
    I would love to see a threesome between Harry Luna and Ginny. Can you make it happen and I love the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.07.2014 03:09
    okay, ik a lot of you are gonna hate me for this, but wasn't FRED the one who died? george got his ear blasted off, and fred died. please check with a expert of HP before posting

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2014 05:38
    We want part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2014 00:51
    These stories are amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2014 00:52
    Yeah gunny/fleur

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.08.2014 01:50
    Love the detail, although his spellings a bit poor

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2014 14:52
    Goddamn these stories are so amazing...I hope you come back again, Avatrek. My pussy is dripping just imaging what you have up your sleeve next.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.10.2014 19:12
    So a story about Harry, Ron and Hermione does not reflect on the figures in the official stories? Total bollox! Why don't you get a life and invent characters of your own instead of stealing those of respectable writers?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2014 03:29
    Its been over a year! Cum back!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.01.2015 13:45
    So, wheres the next part?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.01.2015 04:34
    THE GODDAMN FUCKING HELL IS THIS GUY BELOW ME SAYING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.01.2015 05:00
    The 70's may have been groovy but don't forget the swingin' sixties! LOL!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.01.2015 05:53
    Please give us part 2!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.01.2015 00:58
    Please update! I'm addicted to your Harry Potter stories. Especially ones where they get the girls pregnant. In spellbook of desires I really wanted Draco to use the prostitution coins to sell men the opportunity to be the only guy that gets to have sex with a girl until she gets pregnant. That would've been so hot! Anyway these are sooo good and I'm hoping you'll continue!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2015 15:44
    I am really sad that you put Harry in slytherin instead of gryfindor. I think it would have been so much sexier if Lily was sucking off her own son instead of ron

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2015 02:45
    As a female, I particularly enjoyed Harry's oral performance on Ginny. Excellent!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.07.2015 04:14
    he's still updating, just not on this site. Check tssa.com in the harry potter section.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.07.2015 04:15
    whoops, I mean t-s-s-a.com

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2015 19:29
    That's really good my pussy is soaking my thong

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.10.2015 07:39
    Pussy juices are running down my thigh. Volunteers?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.10.2015 16:36
    its weird. i'm hornier now than I was when I started reading

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.10.2015 13:00
    i love how you incorporated my 2 favorite things into a series. sex and harry potter!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.12.2015 06:03
    damn fucking gud u should start writin manga

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 14:42
    Where is the next chapter

    Answer 0

  • Vul+Dovah
    10.02.2016 11:35
    Loved it. Very much looking forward to more of this story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.02.2016 10:14
    i like the story but you need to finsh it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.07.2016 16:37
    Write part 2!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.07.2016 01:03
    Finish it please!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.12.2016 04:35
    Where's part 2?! Post it please

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