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Harry potter chapter one

Author: nathanhutch18

Date: 26 June 2012

Teen, Fiction

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It had been barely 24 hours since the battle between harry potter and lord voldermort, since the battle harry had destroyed the elder wand and spent most of his time with his best friends ron weasley and hermoine granger, he had also spent a little time with his girlfriend ginny weasley who just happened to be ron's little sister, after a soft kiss on the cheek from ginny harry had wrapped both arms around her and cuddled her softly as she mourned the death of her brother fred weasley, during the battle countless casualties had occured with harry and the people he for all intensive purposes called his family the weasleys losing people they knew and loved. The morning after the battle everyone awoke from their sleep, most people had spent the night at hogwarts, only the weasley's, harry and hermoine chose not to instead they all spent the night at the weasley home, Mrs weasley was first up and was preparing breakfast for everyone when she heard footsteps running down the stairs, ron burst into the kitchen shortly followed by ginny and hermoine, *mum have you seen harry* Ron asked in a half worried tone - *no why dear* mrs weasley replied not even taking her eye's of the cooking - *he's gone* ron nearly shouted *his bag, all his clothes, all his possesions, everything is gone* - Now that got mrs weasleys attention as she nearly dropped the knife she was holding, *what do you mean gone* she said in a extremely worried tone - *mum, when we woke up this morning harry just wasn't there, we thought he might of slipped out this morning* ginny quickly explained - *he hasn't gone past me, i would of seen him and would of stopped him* mrs weasley calmly replied - *well were going to go look for him, hope he hasn't gotten too far* ginny replied before running back upstairs - *yeah what she said* ron quickly said before heading back upstairs himself with hermoine on his trail, five minutes later hermoine, ron and ginny were dressed and on there way out the door. After the best part of three hours of searching hermoine, ron and ginny found themselves outside number 12 grimmauld place, knowing that harry knew of the place well as it had once belonged to his godfather sirius black they all decided it might be a good place to start searching for harry, a quick sweep of the house came to some avail as it had proved harry had been there recently, seemed to have spent the night there aswell as there was a sleeping bag set up, Deciding he might return all three decided to set up camp in the house for the night and wait to see if harry would come back. The next morning it was apparent harry wouldn't be returning to the house, he hadn't shown up once since ron, hermoine and ginny had arrived and it was doubtful he would return for aslong as they were there. It was three days later that they found there first hint that harry was still alive and doing okay as far as they could guess, a letter had arrived via owl early morning landing on ginnys bed scaring her half to death, she opened it pretty quickly with the exception of fully waking up, now i know everyone is expecting some massive long letter explaining where he is and how he is doing so here is what he wrote - *i'm okay, dont worry im thinking of you* - after reading it over and over ginny finally let out a sigh of relief before jumping out of bed and crashing straight ontop of hermoine, in all her excitement ginny had forgotten hermoine was sharing a room with her per her mother's request, hermoine awoke in shock having someone crash down on her, looking to see who it was she saw ginny quickly climbing off her with an apologetic look on her face, *well that was one way to wake up i guess* hermoine stated in a mock angry voice - *sorry, im really sorry* ginny cried out apologetically *just ive got a letter from harry* - *what!!!* hermoine pretty much shouted *when, how, where* - *just now, its here look* ginny said as she held out the letter, hermoine took it and read it over and over for what seemed like an eternity to ginny who stood there waiting, *this is it* hermoine asked a little quizzical *this is the letter that has you all excited* - *yes* ginny replied a little sheepishly *i know it's not much but* - *not much, it's nothing* hermoine quickly said cutting ginny off from finishing her sentence - *but* ginny quietly said - *ginny, it's nothing, it doesn't tell us where he is or when he will be back* hermoine softly stated seeing her friend was close to tears - *but atleast we know he is okay* ginny quietly said more to herself than to anyone else - *yeah* hermoine replied *we know he is okay* - Hermoine knew deep down that the letter was a fake, harry wasn't doing okay and she knew he needed help but she put on a brave face for ginny's sake, the rest of the morning hermoine and ginny just sat around talking about harry, ginny kept sounding so upbeat everytime she mentioned the letter that hermoine thought better than to try and tell ginny that she knew harry was in trouble, how did hermoine know he was in trouble - well - it was the night they were all at 12 grimmauld place, ron and ginny were fast asleep when hermoine had heard the front door to the place creak open, knowing it could mean trouble she drew her wand and pretended to be asleep, as soon as she saw a figure pass the room her, ron and ginny was in she quietly got up and walked out the room, hearing noise coming from the floor above she slowly and quietly crept up the stairs only to see a dark figure with his wand aimed straight at her - *hermoine* the voice quickly said beforing lowering the wand they were holding - *harry!!!* hermoine screamed - *shush not so loud* harry quickly said in a hushed tone *dont want the others to wake up* - *but harry, where, how* hermoine stuttered out before rishing over and hugging harry tightly causing him to wince in pain - *not so tight* harry said in a pained tone - *sorry* hermoine said apologetically before raising her wand and muttering the spell lumos, the first thing she saw was harry's face, it was cut, bruised and she could swear his cheekbone looked like it had been fractured, that was only the half of it, as she looked further down his body she saw more cuts and bruises, a few fractures and what looked to be a bandaged leg under his torn jeans, *harry you look dreadful* hermoine exclaimed *what happened to you* - *death eaters* harry quickly replied *ever since i defeated voldermort they have been after me non stop, everywhere i turn there is a whole bunch more looking for revenge, been fighting them non stop since i left the weasleys home* - *but why did you leave, we could have helped you* hermoine quickly asked in a serious tone - *i didn't want anyone else to get hurt or die because of me* harry quickly shot back *what happened at hogwarts, all our friends* - *harry, they died fighting for a good cause* hermoine softly said as to try keep harry calm *they died protecting the place they loved, their friends* - *they died because of me* harry shouted *they died because i couldn't face the army alone* - *harry listen to me* hermoine said in a demanding tone which caused harry to look at her *it wasn't your fault, our friends chose to defend hogwarts, they gave their lives to protect everyone else* - *you're wrong* harry shouted causing hermoine to back away a little *they thought because of me, if id of surrendered, if i'd of faced voldermort straight away, the war wouldn't of happened* - *but harry, you needed to find the horcrux, without it voldermort would of won* hermoine stated in a matter of fact tone *you know that, is that what you'd have wanted, voldermort to rule the wizarding world* - *no but still* harry stammered, he didn't know what to say, he knew hermoine was extremely smart and she could easily use words to outwit him *it doesn't matter now does it, voldermort is gone, our friends are gone* - *harry, they died so we could all live, you managed to stop voldermort, just be happy please* hermoine half pleaded half stated - *i..i..i have to go* harry quickly said *please dont tell anyone i was here* - *wait harry don't..* her sentence was cut short as harry disapparated leaving her standing there all alone, knowing harry wouldn't be back she quickly snuck back down into the room and climbed back into bed. Later that morning once hermoine and ginny heard ron getting up ginny quickly rushed into his room only to be greeted by him standing there with his boxers half way up his legs, ginny caught a quick glance at his penis before blushing and rushing back out the room and nearly knocking hermoine over in the process, *woah ginny slow down* hermoine quickly exclaimed as she quickly moved out the way as to avoid ginny - *sorry* ginny said a little flushed *just saw a little too much of ron if you get my drift* - *oh, well maybe i should go in and see him* hermoine said with a little giggle, with that she slowly walked into roms room to find him nearly fully dressed, he was sat on his bed putting his socks on as she entered, *oh, shame, ginny got to see more than i do* hermoine said with a half giggle -*guess we could change that* ron said as he slowly advanced towards hermoine, upon reaching her he wrapped her hands softly round her as he pulled her to him for a kiss, the kiss lasted all of five seconds as they knew they were on a time limit with rons parents still been asleep in the room not too far away, ron quickly ran his hands down hermoines sides and gripped the bottom of her pyjama top, that was quickly pulled up and thrown aside to reveal her braless 34b cup breasts, *no bra* ron asked a little quizically - *thought i would go without* hermoine replied a little shyly *hope you like* - ron didn't answer, instead he quickly latched his mouth onto her right nipple and began flicking it with his tongue, hermoine let out a soft moan followed by a little louder moan as ron's hand found its way to her left nipple and began softly pinching it, his spare hand had began running softly down her stomach and was almost in her waistband when they heard ginny scream, while hermoine and ron had been having their little fun ginny had decided to go make breakfast, whilst she was pouring milk over her cereal she had heard a faint knock on the door, quickly putting down the milk she walked over to the door and opened it, the look on her face said it all - she was shocked and all's she could do was scream, *harry!!!* she screamed louder than she had meant to *harry, are you okay* - Harry was just laying there, unconscious, bloody, bruised and broken, ginny's scream had woken up the rest of the house and she heard footsteps rushing down the stairs, *harry!!* hermoine screamed as soon as she saw him - *harry* ron quickly shouted *you okay mate* - *of course he's not okay you idiot* ginny shouted angrily at ron, he was going to say something back when he noticed the tears streaming down ginny's cheeks and thought better of it, mr and mrs weasley were soon down the stairs and noticed everyone crowding around the door, when they saw harry mrs weasley nearly collapsed on the spot and would have if it weren't for mr weasley holding her up, *come on ron, help me get him inside* mr weasley said - *yeah good idea, but where we going to put him* ron quickly asked - *my room* ginny quickly shouted *put him in my room please, i'll look after him plus in there he get's to have a comfy bed* - *i dont know* mrs weasly said a little worried *might be better putting him george's old room* - *no!* ginny pretty much screamed *put him in my room* - *ginny, it's a lot of work caring for someone* mrs weasly exclaimed in a soft tone *he would be better off in george's room where i can look after him till we can get him some real care* - *no!* ginny shouted in a way that made everyone back off from her *put him in my room* - *oh fine* mrs weasley said in a defeated tone *take him up to ginny's room* - with all said and done ron and mr weasley carried harry up the stairs and into ginny's room where they laid him down and mr weasley left leaving him with ginny, ron and hermoine.


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  • GingerCat
    26.06.2012 07:30
    It is to hard to read as one big block of text. Also it is important to have proper punctuation as characters names need to be in capitals

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2012 08:14
    Dude did you pass English class. Because this is impossible to read. Well not impossible just a pain in the but as the previous poster mentioned.

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  • nathanhutch18
    26.06.2012 08:38
    I will repost this story in another format then, more of a script writing but for some people it is easier to read, I will sort the punctuation out as I go through the story okay.

    as for the anonymous reader, how about stop been anonymous and why dont you do better? post something and see if you can do any better..just because I didnt pass my english class due to a minor problem I have doesnt mean this is impossible to read

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  • nathanhutch18
    26.06.2012 08:45
    I will repost this story in another format then, more of a script writing but for some people it is easier to read, I will sort the punctuation out as I go through the story okay.

    as for the anonymous reader, how about stop been anonymous and why dont you do better? post something and see if you can do any better..just because I didnt pass my english class due to a minor problem I have doesnt mean this is impossible to read

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  • demck23
    26.06.2012 12:11
    hell I enjoyed it very much just hope you finish it most just don't compleat them after starting them. just wish you had put Harry with Hermy not Ginny. Allway though she should have been with N longbottem and Ron with Luna.
    So lets have the next part and keep it going. your right to tell them to do or don't make negative remarks

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2012 13:40
    You need to add gaps, it makes it very difficult to read

    Also, would love a orgy scene at some point. (Tonks and Fleur please)

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  • nathanhutch18
    26.06.2012 15:16
    Thankyou for actually giving some positive feedback..it is my first official story and I will add part two as I re-write in a new format where it is easier to read..gaps wont be a problem as I have been told my style is made for plays so the gaps will be there in screenplay format..next part will be added in the next couple of days..hopefully anyway..see how it goes..as for the orgy..sorry that part wont be there..instead there is ginny giving harry a blowjob while he sleeps..ron/hermoine full on sex scene and maybe an hermoine/ginny scene

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 02:42
    The pairings you just said are boring. Have them all, mix up, add tabboo, harry / hermione and more.

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  • nathanhutch18
    28.06.2012 04:53
    How about harry and hermoine..harry, ginny and hermoine threesome? that any better

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 07:30
    So, all in all, add some spacing. five-ten lines is good. Please use come correct punctuation. Ex: I'll, You're, that's all for me XD

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  • GingerCat
    28.06.2012 07:36
    Please please please don't write Harry/Hermione. Ron/Hermione all the way (perhaps other combinations as well but no Harry/Hermione).

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  • nathanhutch18
    28.06.2012 09:56
    I seriously dont know how to win with you people..so far its have harry/hermoine then dont..have ron/hermoine..harry/ginny..then others want ron with luna and harry not with ginny :/ seriously..how do I win

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2012 18:14
    there's too much of harry/Hermione floating around already please do a Ron/Hermione where they are with each other exclusively.

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  • nathanhutch18
    28.06.2012 18:38
    Deal..no harry/hermoine..if everyone stops asking for certain things I will add some different stuff..ron/hermoine..ginny/hermoine..harry/luna..ginny/hermoine/luna..ginny/luna/harry

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2012 20:29
    v OK :) thank u so much, happily waiting for your update.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2012 20:33
    and one more small thing, try and keep your story in small paragraphs you will get much favorable response from the readers.

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  • GingerCat
    02.07.2012 23:51
    Very nice start. I don't want to get to excited as it might not happen but I would love to see a Hermione/Ron/Ginny sex scene.

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  • GingerCat
    02.07.2012 23:54
    Also a small note (which isn't that important) but Ginny is supposed to have the Prewit body so while she is quite short she would have rather large breasts for her size.

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  • nathanhutch18
    03.07.2012 04:59
    Don't get too excited as that scene may OR may not happen..to be fair I don't know where im going with this story..going to take it as it comes and see what feels right.
    i can change the minor details once I have finished writing it, give ginny bigger breasts while hermoine can happily stay whatever size I chose for her

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  • GingerCat
    03.07.2012 07:52
    Thats okay as you are the one writing the story. I am just somewhat excited at even the prospect of a Hermione/Ginny/Ron threesome as I think I have only ever seen that threesome in one other story (and I have seen thousands of Harry Potter stories). Also I like the idea of Ron being involved in a FMF threesome as that is also something that is very rare in Harry Potter fan fiction.

    Anyway even if it doesn't happen thanks for a good first chapter.

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  • nathanhutch18
    03.07.2012 09:44
    Not big on the ron/ginny part..not saying I wouldn't write it BUT there are other threesomes..ron/harry/hermoine..ginny/luna/hermoine..ron/hermoine/luna..ginny/harry/luna..there is also the whole luna/ginny/hermoine/harry or ron

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  • demck23
    03.07.2012 09:49
    So lets have Harry getting together with Luna and they become a couple and making a life without Ron or Ginny in it but keep hermy in it

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  • GingerCat
    03.07.2012 10:10
    Pity about the Hermione/Ron/Ginny idea but I understand why some people might not like the incest part of that idea. Still of your suggestions I (or variations of them) I quite like the idea of

    Hermione/Ron/Luna
    Hermione/Ron
    Luna/Ginny/Hermione/Ron (even if there is no Ron/Ginny contact)

    For some reason I have also always thought that a part of Harry would love to know what it feels like to have Ron's cock inside his arse. I think if Harry ever had any gay thoughts those thoughts would have most certainly been about Ron.

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  • nathanhutch18
    03.07.2012 10:18
    Can do the foursome..if I make sure ginny pairs with luna while ron has fun with hermoine then have ginny with hermoine while he has fun with luna and to finish can have all three of the lasses have a threesome while ron just watches
    i do want to do a ginny/luna/harry scene but later on..most of them choices given will be later on as there is still a part I need to do..harry/ginny..she has her way with him while he sleeps

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  • GingerCat
    03.07.2012 10:39
    Sounds like a good idea to me and I am looking forward to reading it. Personally I don't imagine Ron would have to much of a problem with the idea of Hermione being bisexual as long as she wants him just as much (ideally more) than the other girls she is having sex with.

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  • nathanhutch18
    03.07.2012 13:30
    yeah, hermoine wont be having too much girl/girl fun..thats going to be more luna/ginny..but I still have to find a way to get harry to take ginny back..have harry sleep with luna and have harry appear at the burrow all beaten, broken and barely breathing..have ginny nurse him back to health in her room while also having some pleasure with him while he is asleep :/

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  • GingerCat
    03.07.2012 14:34
    You could have Harry sleep with Luna shortly after discovering Ginny cheated on him. Perhaps when Harry is beaten up and has to return to the Burrow (maybe Grimmauld Place isn't safe or he needs to warn the Weasley's) Harry and Ginny can sort of make up while Ginny is nursing Harry back to health.

    I am quite curious to see what you do with Ron and Hermione in this story,

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  • nathanhutch18
    03.07.2012 15:14
    To be fair you aren't the only one, I don't know where im taking them two..maybe things will change between them after hermoine realises she likes girls more..maybe ron won't want to be with her and will do his own dissapearing act leaving ginny/hermoine/harry alone to become a threesome relationship :/ we will both have to wait and see haha
    thats an idea..death eaters follow harry..always attacking him to avenge voldermort..they follow him to lunas house and after he leaves they jump him and leave him for dead..luna hears the commotion and rushes out to find harry beaten and apparates him to the only place she knows is safe..the burrow

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  • GingerCat
    03.07.2012 15:25
    I am personally hoping that Hermione does not like girls more as I would love to imagine Hermione wanting Ron more than she wants anyone in the world but also enjoying the idea of having sex with girls. However in my mind Ron will always be the main course and girls would be a side dish.

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  • nathanhutch18
    03.07.2012 15:33
    see how it goes..she does cheat with ginny hence the letters..harry dumps ginny..ron dumps hermoine..harry sleeps with luna..ron and hermoine talk it through after she offers ron something special :) harry gets beaten without the use of magic..ginny looks after him..he wakes up everynight and trys to tell her he is sorry but collapses before he can

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  • GingerCat
    03.07.2012 21:53
    I can only imagine what Hermione would offer Ron that is 'special' but I really like the idea of it. I could see Hermione offering to perhaps have a FMF threesome with him though it might also be something else. I think Hermione would really want/need Ron's forgiveness (plus Ron is a amazing shag and she would always cum when she is having sex with him).

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  • nathanhutch18
    04.07.2012 05:04
    Was thinking along those lines..letting ron watch her and luna have fun together then let him take her ass :/

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  • GingerCat
    04.07.2012 07:06
    I think if Hermione cheated on Ron and she has sex with another girl as well (even if she is having sex with this girl with Ron's permission and Ron is watching) it is only fair if Ron gets to have sex with Luna as well.

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  • nathanhutch18
    04.07.2012 10:14
    True but I was thinking of saving luna..maybe make her harrys/ginnys..that way ginny gets to be part of a couple and gets her best friend ginny whenever she wants aswell as having harry when she needs

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.07.2012 10:49
    Thats not particular fair to Ron as Hermione gets to have sex with 3 people (Ron, Ginny and Luna) and Ron only gets to have sex with 1 (Hermione). Still I do understand your reasoning behind it.

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  • GingerCat
    04.07.2012 11:00
    The last comment was mine. I don't know why I was not logged in.

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  • nathanhutch18
    04.07.2012 11:18
    To be fair..when has anything ever been fair to ron..thought it might be nice for hermoine to have options but ron be one of those guys who would never cheat even if permission was given :)

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  • GingerCat
    04.07.2012 11:21
    That is a good point. Ron is not a cheater. He loves Hermione with ever fibre of his being.

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  • nathanhutch18
    04.07.2012 11:36
    Where as harry..although he loves ginny..he will always do anything to help his friends when it comes down to it

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  • GingerCat
    04.07.2012 12:37
    That is true. Even in the final battle when he did not know where Ron and Hermione were he spent most of the time worrying about where they were. He could barely function when he did not have Ron and Hermione by his side. I do believe Harry loves Ginny but he would need Ron and Hermione as well (just not sexually).

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  • nathanhutch18
    04.07.2012 13:25
    In the end I think harry needs everyone more than he cares to admit..like you said without ron/hermoine he would of never gotten as far as he did..hermoine with her knowledge and ron with his..well his stupid luck has helped him more times than he can tell..so without friends he wouldnt be anybody :/ he needs people and ginny just happens to be one person..he needs more

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  • GingerCat
    04.07.2012 13:31
    Without Ron Harry would have led a miserable existance as one of the reasons Hermione loves Ron is that only he can make her relax and have a good time and I suspect that is also one of the reasons Harry likes Ron as Ron can stop Harry taking things quite so seriously and can make Harry enjoy himself. Of course Ron is a really talented wizard on his own but for Hermione and Harry what they most value with Ron is his ability to make them feel better and happier.

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  • nathanhutch18
    04.07.2012 13:36
    True..without ron harry would probably be in azkaban..he would be a completely different person and I dont think he would of ever met hermoine..plus there would be no ginny

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  • nathanhutch18
    04.07.2012 18:18
    On the final stretch now..hopefully by tommorow night I will post the re-write to chapter one

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  • nathanhutch18
    09.07.2012 20:32
    I'm sorry about the lack of sex, there will be more in chapter 2, well I hope there will but I suck at this whole writing so..never know

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2012 23:31
    Makes harry look like the biggest arsehole out. Nice job on the story though I guess.

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  • nathanhutch18
    10.07.2012 04:58
    Thats only chapter one..probably wont write chapter two to be fair..was going to have harry return after been beaten by a gang of death eaters..have ginny nurse him back to health and him try to make things right with her

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2012 08:24
    please write another chapter

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  • nathanhutch18
    10.07.2012 13:31
    But this one was a failure..chapter two wont be any better..more sex sure..but still I failed with this one

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  • demck23
    10.07.2012 15:29
    I gave this a negitive because you still put the Ashole RON with Hermione and made Harry look like an ashole. now lets try again and it's a harry potter story not a Ron story he was a total ashole in the whole books. All my daughters friends hated him and wanted Harry and Hermione together with maybe Luna with them. They all though Ginny should be with Nevile. so lets have the next part but do it right and cut the Ron out totaly

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  • nathanhutch18
    10.07.2012 16:21
    To be fair everyone is giving it a negative rating..its easy to change and make harry seem like a completely perfect guy who doesnt care that ginny cheated..can easily cut ron out..just make it about ginny/hermoine/harry through the whole chapter

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2012 20:45
    Wow ...

    Your writing style completely sucks what with so many run-on sentences and mixing caps into the middle of sentences and then using the storyboard approach to the dialog in the middle of the paragraphs while you're still setting up your scenes and going back and forth between the two and also going back and forth between 1st person and 3rd person in your presentation.

    Makes it really confusing to read.

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  • demck23
    11.07.2012 10:15
    As I said lets have the next part soon. I only gave it a neg because of how you made Harry look in it. In the wiz world Harry could have as many wifes as he is heir to head of houses. He is head of more then 6 the four founders and the Black & Potter and manybe a few more. lets keep it going and drop Ron from it . He was allways wanting what Harry had

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.07.2012 04:31
    To the idiot below ...

    You must be on some strong stuff dude, heir of 6 houses ? any wife that he wants ?
    lol, the Ron hate again,Ron is an awesome character, you being butt hurt over the fact that he got his love requited is just hilarious...

    Nathan while I agree to not make harry a douchebag, it would be better if u don't take advise about Ron from this fag.
    don't worry about the ratings since you posted the chapter 3 times when everyone was expecting an update it was bound to be low, glad u made it into readable size paragraphs.....
    Please try and write more, if not this story maybe a new one...

    **furladrón**

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  • nathanhutch18
    14.07.2012 04:43
    I am looking at a new story..away from the harry potter series
    i know I made harry a douchebag..wasnt meant to go that way, it was meant to be a breakup/makeup sort of thing to make him seem like a nice guy when he apologised for acting like an asshole and promised to make it up to ginny

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  • RandJr
    17.07.2012 14:59
    Ya need to work on spacing, but I like Harry/Hermione. Ron is too fucking stupid to keep up, and they'd probably get divorced. harry is smart and thinks about others. Hermione is crazy smart, and has been there for him. Ron; eats magical jelly-bellies.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2012 04:22
    It looks great, the eyes are intense. I hear you about the kids being home for the sumemr. I have four and not much gets done during the sumemr vacation as far as quilting goes. I do try to go down and sew at night time but it's not the same as having a whole day.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2012 07:10
    Funny that someone meotinned Eliza Bennet, because I (though I'm female) was just thinking, Mr. Darcy. I resonate with his character in that I struggle with pride, and when it gets the best of me I default to written communication to keep from becoming overly-emotional and tongue tied. My pride leads me to want to set the record straight when I should let things go, but my people-pleasing desire makes me want to make amends just as badly. Puddleglum is by far one of my favorite characters ever. The way that CS Lewis crafted him with a character so negative, yet still so lovable and genuinely good-hearted is so funny to me. He's negative, but not at all bad or rotten in any way. The little girl inside of me still wants to meet a real-live Marsh Wiggle someday. Ransom from CS Lewis' space trilogy is also one of my favorites. The love that he has for the art of language, the sincerity he has before God, and the boldness he has before man. Ugh, he's just such a great representation I thi

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.08.2012 01:26
    Write chap 2 please this was a great story I loved it

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  • nathanhutch18
    22.08.2012 19:17
    Anyone who want's another part to this story, well if you aint kidding then i'm sorry to inform you that part two may never get made, I have other storys to pursue

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2012 03:18
    Funny that someone mnenioted Eliza Bennet, because I (though I'm female) was just thinking, Mr. Darcy. I resonate with his character in that I struggle with pride, and when it gets the best of me I default to written communication to keep from becoming overly-emotional and tongue tied. My pride leads me to want to set the record straight when I should let things go, but my people-pleasing desire makes me want to make amends just as badly. Puddleglum is by far one of my favorite characters ever. The way that CS Lewis crafted him with a character so negative, yet still so lovable and genuinely good-hearted is so funny to me. He's negative, but not at all bad or rotten in any way. The little girl inside of me still wants to meet a real-live Marsh Wiggle someday. Ransom from CS Lewis' space trilogy is also one of my favorites. The love that he has for the art of language, the sincerity he has before God, and the boldness he has before man. Ugh, he's just such a great representation I thi

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.11.2012 18:20
    a bit of advice plesae....I had (more like inherited) a photo studio. I still have the Bronica SLR medium format camera, multiple lens includiing a 35 mm (all sorts of other tools, umbrellas, etc) and have planned to sell these even tho I personally made some pretty good money shooting weddings, Seniors, family groups.......so on to my question,I hardly remember an aperature, f-stop, etc and have since purchased a cool digital camera. Now I'm interested (yes, retired-but not brain dead yet) in doing some stock work....do I sell the Bronica? (Yep, its bulky-heavy!) What do you suggest?

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2013 09:53
    Well, somewhat iambpusille. I went to London with a friend when I was 17 and it was just the two of us bopping around London, although we went with her father to Wales and Paris. Actually, I don't think 18 in August is old for a senior, either, but both of mine will have graduated at 18 1/2 because they've rolled back the deadline for entering kindergarten in our school system and both of mine had birthdays that fell right after the cut-off. I'm with Andi on the headless-girl covers being a turnoff. I just got an older copy of a Georgette Heyer book and it occurred to me that if there's a newer version it probably has a headless female. The 1970 cover is absolutely charming.

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