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My Pretty Little Slaves

Author: mrfootlong69

Date: 3 August 2012

Anal, Fantasy, Authoritarian, Black

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My Pretty Little Slaves – Chapter 1 – Broken Family – New Beginnings

Characters:

Ben “Big Ben”, 30 6'5 Black Male (light skin color).
Tiffani, 28 mother 5'5 White woman Blonde hair Blue eyes 34c breast
Brittany, 13 daughter 5' White girl with Blonde hair and Blue
Nikki, Ben's daughter
Gerald, Ben's friend


Tiffani's husband had passed away just over a year ago when her daughter was just twelve leaving her without means to support herself. She has gone from one job to another before finding what looks like a great job. She finds it on a career board on the internet. It comes with a house to rent and provides all the training she would need to advance her further into a promising career. The only downside is it is in another state, it is all the way down in Alabama in a small town on the Georgia boarder. She send them her resume, the requests a picture (which she finds strange) and sends them a picture. She has an online interview through a web cam session with two gentlemen both African-American one is light skin clean shaven very handsome the other guy is dark skin and rather average looking. They ask about her job experience and ask her to tell them about herself. She tells them about herself that she is a single mother looking for a chance to take care of her thirteen year old daughter. Right then Becky walks in and come with in camera view. Becky ask her mother something and Tiffani tells her she is in an online interview and tells her she will get back with her after it is over. The light skin black gentlemen name is Ben he notices Becky and says “Hello young lady, I am Ben” and smiles. Tiffani says “Sorry, let me take care of my daughter really quick.” Ben put his end on mute and tells his friend, Gerald, that this is the one he wants. He tells him that he thought the mother was beautiful but the daughter looked like she stepped straight out of heaven. He tells Gerald to get more details and then tell her about the house and everything. Tell her she needs to come down here with her daughter for an in person interview, all expenses paid.

Tiffani comes back to the web cam and waves “Sorry about that”. They go over the details of the job and that it would require three to four weeks of training and that the next step would be for her to come to do an in person interview all expenses included. The only requirement is that Becky come with her to see what they are both getting into. She accepts and they tell her they will email her with the specifics about the itinerary. Within two hours she sees she is on a flight for two from Chicago to Birmingham she see there will be a car waiting for her to drive her to the interview.

Tiffani tells Becky that she has to go out of town to go on an interview and the company wants you to come with me so that you can see the town and get a feel of the land. Becky says “Okay, looks like an adventure.” They leave the next day for what they hope will be a new beginning and Tiffani hopes is a start on a new career and life for her and Becky. Tiffani and Becky have always been close, she had Becky when she was just 15 and she kind of grew up with each other. They did everything together like best friends. Becky is a beautiful Blond hair blue eye stunner like her mother. Becky never thought she had any features of her father who had gotten Tiffani pregnant when he was 17. Becky was an early bloomer as the doctor always told them. She had started getting her period when she was 10 and started developing womanly curves. She is just five feet tall and has a swan like neck with a nice ass and 34c breast. Her mother looked like a twin except that she had 36d breast and was 5'5.

The next day they board the plane carrying on their bags. They think it is just for a couple of days. After arriving at their destination they go outside of the airport and sees a sign with the companies name on the top and their names. The driver introduces himself and tells the ladies that he is to take them to the companies headquarters. He then takes their bags and takes them to a black limo and opens the door for them. He tells them there are sodas and juices in the refrigerator and help themselves. He gets in the limo and puts the privacy screen down and tells them there is a TV that is hooked up to satellite and asks them to get comfortable that the company headquarters is over three hours away. If they need anything just call on the phone. Becky cannot believe the way they are being treated.

They arrive just before noon and are escorted into the executive suite. Ben introduces himself to Tiffani and then to Becky. Becky thinks he is very charming and extremely handsome. Gerald tells them that the interview will take a couple of hours and Ben offer to take Becky to lunch and show her the town. Tiffani is reluctant but Becky convinces her mother that she will be safe with such a gentlemen. She agrees and Ben gives her his cell phone number if she needs to call.

Gerald already has his instructions from Ben to get her to except the job to triple her current salary. Ben and Becky leave the office Ben takes Becky's hand and tells her she is perfectly safe with him and that he is honored to have such a beautiful lunch date. She blushes and says “Thank you”. They go to this fancy Italian restaurant. Ben ask her is she has ever had veal and she says no and he orders her Veal Picata and he gets a dish with conk, shrimp and scallops. He orders a bottle of red wine and pour them both a glass. She tells him her mother does not let her drink wine and he says that he will take care of her and that she will only have one glass and she tries it and likes it. They eat there meal and Ben ask her to try his she does and he feeds her delicately watching her swallow every bite. He then orders a round of gelato. She asks him what that is and he tells her it is Italian ice cream and that this restaurant has the best gelato outside of Italy. They serve the containers and Ben tells Becky to close her eyes and try to guess what flavor each one he gives her. She does thinking this is really romantic. He proceeds to give her a spoonful of each and she guesses the flavors. All along Ben is checking her perfect 13 year old body out. He thinks she looks like she could be at least 18. After lunch he takes her by her hand and escorts her out to the awaiting limo and tells the driver to take a scenic tour around town then head to their final destination (his very large house). The get to his house and they get out and Ben tells her that this is his house and that they had some time to kill and he wanted to show it to her. He enters the front door and he gives her the tour of the house. Large living room, dining room, what looks to be 10 bedrooms and a large master suite with a huge shower that she thinks can fit 10 and a large tub. Ben then shows her the indoor pool and then finally the kitchen. In comes Ben's 14 year old daughter that is about three inches taller without the figure that Becky has. Ben introduces Becky to Nikki. Nikki asks if she could take Becky to her room to play some Wii. Ben says ok and Nikki says excuse me for a minute. Becky comes up to Ben and thanks him for the best lunch she has ever had and gives him a kiss on the cheek. He say you are welcome angel and gives her a kiss on her lips. She is surprised by this but is turned on and they begin to kiss passionately. Nikki comes back into the room and clears her throat to get there attention. Becky look down and blushes. Ben tells her that she kisses really well. Nikki shakes her head and they leave. An hour later he gets a call from an estatic Tiffani. She asks where they are. Ben tells them they are at his house and that Becky is playing with his 14 year old daughter and that he will come pick her up.

Ben arrives back at the company headquarters and goes into the executive suite and finds Gerald and Tiffani. Gerald informs Ben that Tiffani has excepted the position on one condition that she inspect the house first. Ben says sure and takes Tiffani to the house that is on his property. It is a three bedroom single story house with a kitchen and two bathrooms. Ben tells her it comes with the job. He tells her that he is planning on dinner at his house with the four of them. Tiffani goes to his house and is amazed at the size of the house. He takes her on a tour and she is quite impressed. He tells her that he has money from his family and that he likes to help single mothers get a start to a better life telling her it is his was of giving back for all the blessings in his life. He then gets the two girls and goes to the dinning room where they are served lobster and steak. He pours Tiffani and himself a glass of wine and then winks at Becky without Tiffani noticing.

Ben “So do you think you will accept the job?”

Tiffani “I thinks so, what do you think Becky?”

Becky “I want you to take the job it sounds like a great opportunity and I think I just found a new friend, I feel comfortable here”

Tiffani “I think it is decided, I will take the job. The salary is more money than my husband use to make and the advancement possibilities are endless”

Ben “That sounds great, Gerald told me to tell you that he needs you to start training on Monday and that I am to give you this.” Ben gives her a large package with employment documents and schedule of classes.

Tiffani “What about clothes and where is Becky going to stay and packing and moving of our stuff?”

Ben “We can go shopping tomorrow for clothes for you two. There is a company credit card in there for your expenses. Becky can stay her with my daughter and myself. If you give me your house key and car keys we plan to have your stuff professionally packed and moved down here while you are away.”

Tiffani “I don't know about leaving Becky here”

Becky “I will be fine her with Ben and Nikki they are really nice people and this is too good of an opportunity to pass up” Ben is just dreaming about sweet little Becky being in his bed next week.

Tiffani says ok. After dessert Ben shows them to their rooms and asks if they would like to watch some TV with him in the living room. Tiffani says no but Becky says ok. She clearly has a crush on Ben. Ben looks like a Greek God in Becky's mind. They go to the living room and Ben gives her another kiss on the lips and tells her she is the prettiest person he has ever met. She blushes and then kisses him back opening her mouth and they start to french kiss. They break apart when they hear somebody walking down the hall. Her mother comes in and kisses her daughter goodnight and tell her to go to bed at 11.

Becky “OK, mom!”

Tiffani “Do not give Ben a hard time.”

Becky “Mom”

Tiffani leaves and about a half hour later Becky leans over and puts her head on Ben's chest. He then wraps his arm around her. Becky hand drops to his lap and she inadvertently lands on his cock. She says “Sorry, I did not mean to do that Ben.” he says it is OK and she continues to stroke his cock. She falls asleep with her hand on his large bulge in his pants. He then picks her up and takes her to her room and then goes to his room for a cold shower.

The next day they get up and head to the mall. Ben tells Tiffani that she needs enough clothes to last her for three weeks and to get Becky clothes for two weeks. Tiffani thinks that is too much but is persuaded by Ben. He watches them shop for the cheapest stuff. When the come back he tells them to come with him. He picks out the finest outfits for both of them. Not even looking at the price tags. He tells them to put on a fashion show. They do and they both think they look like models and Tiffani says that this is too much. Ben tells her that she has to look the part of a up and coming young executive. He tells them to pick out under garments and shoes and quit being so cheap it is on the company.

Little do they know that he is paying for everything, even her salary. He then takes them to the department store to get luggage for Tiffani's trip and a brief case (so that she looks the part) he takes them by the cosmetic counter and the lady does their make up. Becky tells Ben she has never done that before and the lady tells her that they have classes for young ladies. Ben tells her that he will take her to the classes. They both get makeup and perfume. Becky asks Ben which fragrance is his favorite. He shows her and she gets a bottle of that (to tempt him she thinks).

The go back to Ben's house and Tiffani prepares for her departure in the morning. She has to leave at 5 am for her flight. She washes their undergarments and drys them and then starts to pack her suitcase and garment back for her dress suits. Tiffani thinks that they must of spent at lease $2000 today on clothes and stuff and shakes her head. Tiffani comes down for dinner which is steamed shrimp and cracked crab. Tiffani tells Becky that she is going to bed and to not stay up to late. She is asleep in no time. Ben and Becky go to the living room.

Becky after an hour of cuddling with Ben she asks him something so softly he cannot hear her. Becky says a little louder can I see what I am holding here. Ben says sure but only quickly because they might get caught. He unzips his pants and takes out his cock. It is 16” long and 5 1/2” wide with a 7” head.

Becky “Man that is larger than the ones in magazines I have seen, can I kiss it?”

Ben “Quickly” she does and she puts it away for him. “We can't do anything else until tomorrow, OK!”

Becky “OK, but I want to do more tomorrow.”

They snuggle watching television and she falls asleep around midnight and Ben carries her to her bedroom and lays her down on her bed, she wakes up and takes off all her clothes and tell him this is for him tomorrow. He gets up and she sees that he is erect and he leaves. She knows he is going to pop her cherry tomorrow and cannot wait. He set his alarm for 4 and takes a shower and hears Tiffani kiss her daughter goodbye and tells her to obey Ben while she is away and be a good girl. He goes into the kitchen and Tiffani is there drinking coffee and they chat. Tiffani tells Ben to take care of her baby and that she will call when she arrives at her hotel in Los Angles. Ben informs her she has a driver waiting for her in California and he is at her beck and call and he is to take her to dinner every night and show her the sights on the weekend. He tells her to take in all the sights and gives her a camera to take pictures for her daughter to see. Tiffani thinks that is a great idea. She leaves and give Ben a kiss on the cheek and tells him she is trusting him with her daughter. He knows and tells her she will be fine. Little does she know that Nikki is going to be going back to boarding school for gifted children later that day and it will be just him and Becky at his house.

Tiffani is gone for about an hour before Ben goes into Becky's room. She is wide awake.

Becky “Take off your clothes and come to bed, Ben, I want you to take my cherry”

Ben takes off his clothes and jumps into the bed with Becky. He then kisses her on the lips and then moves down her neck on either side caressing her breast in each of his hands. He the kisses her tits all over and licks her nipples and they become erect and he starts to suck on them one at a time. Becky then start to breathe really hard and starts to pant. She then feels a tingling feeling all over her body but especially in her pussy. She notices her pussy is getting wet and starts to stroke it as Ben continues to suck on her breast. She climaxes and asks Ben “What was that?” he replies “that is the first of your many orgasm that you are going to have today” she says “I like that feeling and want more of it”

Ben then proceeds further down her body until her gets to her pussy. He separates her legs and starts to suck on her pussy making her cum again and again. He tells her that is called “EATING PUSSY” or “GOING DOWN ON A GIRL”. She tells him that he could do that to her anytime he wanted too. She liked it a lot. Becky tells Ben that she is a virgin and to go gentle on her. Ben says “I am going to take it real easy on you until you tell me otherwise, I would never do anything to her my sweet little angel”. Becky tears up thinking to herself that she has never been so adored before.

Ben “Are you ready angel, I am just going to be the head in.”

Becky “OK, go slowly”

Ben spreads her lips and pushes the head of his cock into her pussy, she starts to breathe faster. He tells her his is going to put a couple more inches in. He pushes up into her hymen and she winces in pain.
“Angel this is going to hurt, there is no getting around it, it only hurt once and then you will start to get accustom to my size. Are you ready”

Becky “Yes, pop my cherry!!” OWWWWWWW, damn that hurt”. Ben gets 9” inches into her before hitting her cervix and stops and lets her pussy adjust to the enormous 5 ½” thick cock. She is panting and breathing hard.

Ben “The hard part is done, just relax and get use to my size”

Becky “You are a lot thicker than most men right?”

Ben “The average mans cock is 6” long and 2” thick, Becky. I am well above that and it is all for you”

Ben then starts to pull out and then push back in, a couple of inches at first and then five and then all 9 inches are pushed in and out. She is starting to like it and starts smiling and kissing his chest and sucking on his nipples. She then tells him to go faster. He does and then faster not penetrating her cervix.

Ben tells her “I usually end up in my partners womb, but I am going to do that another time. We have plenty of time to enjoy each others bodies”. He starts going really fast and she climaxes. He continues and after she climaxes the second time Ben starts to cum. He hold his cock tightly so that no more cum leaks out and pulls out of her once virgin pussy. He tells Becky to take his cock into her mouth and swallow his cum. She agrees and does it swallowing as much as she can. He finally stops and asks her how she liked the taste of his cum.

Becky “It was OK. I will get use to it, I am sure I am going to get a lot more of that in the coming days and weeks.” They cuddle for a while and then Ben whispers in her ear for her to suck his cock if she wants. She tells Ben “I will do anything you want lover as long as you keep loving me.”

Ben “I will, when my cock hits the back of your mouth breathe through your nose and swallow and keep swallowing until the head goes past your gullet into your lovely throat, OK Becky”. “Yes, lover your training me to be your lover aren't you” “Yes Becky, remember SWALLOW AND BREATHE THROUGH YOUR NOSE, my sweet angel”

Becky opens her mouth as wide as it can go and Ben manages to get the head of his cock into her mouth, he pushes two inches and is at the back of her mouth she immediately starts to swallow and breathe through her nose like instructed. He pushes back and forth for a couple of minutes and then pops the head into her throat pushing inch after inch all the way down her swan like neck. He notices her throat bulging out and starts to stroke her throat.

Ben “Becky you have an amazing throat, it is pulsating around my cock.” He continues to pump her throat. She is breathing through her nose just like he instructed. After about 15 minutes Ben erupts and shoots at least a half a quart into Becky's stomach.

Becky “Now that is what I call a hot breakfast”. Ben laughs.

Ben “Becky, I have something serious I want to talk to you about.” “OK, my lover and teacher!”

Ben “Do you know what a Master and Slave relationship is in relation to sex?”

Becky “No, but I am more than will to be your slave to sex!”

Ben “Well, A Master takes a slave and takes care of her for the rest of her life, if she chooses, it is a voluntary servitude position. I want to train you as my slave. Training consists of performing a sexual a number of times. For my training sessions I make my slaves perform a blowjob 20 consecutive times without interruption, the next step is to have vaginal sex 10 consecutive times without interruption and finally and probably the most painful for the female at least at the start is to have anal sex 10 consecutive times with out interruption. After that you are my slave. There are rules that you must follow, One no talking about what we do to anybody else, two you must be devoid of hair below the neckline at all times, three no clothes are allowed in the house unless guest are here (which is very rare) four you will refer to me as Master at all times unless we are in public. You will be required to get tattoos celebrating your achievements. You will get a Queen of Spades tattoo on your pussy mound this signifies that you have completed you pussy training. A tattoo that reads “Excellent cocksucker” will be put right above your clitoris. On either side of your pussy a tattoo will read “For Black cocks only” “Must be over 10” “. On the small of your back right above your ass crack it will read “Property of Ben” On the Back of your Neck will be another Queen of Spades tattoo a little fancier” The Queen of Spades represents that you prefer black cock over white. Do you have any questions, Becky?”

Becky “Can we have more sex before I decide please? I want to try the anal sex before I decide also”

Ben “That's fair, lets go take a swim in the pool to cool off”. They go to the pool both naked, Becky watches Ben's cock bounce back and forth and Ben watches her tits and ass.

Becky “I will shave my pussy when I take a shower today, Master”

Ben “You have not decided to be my slave yet, so you do not have to call me Master yet!”

Becky “It just has a ring to it. You are teaching me about sex, so you are the Master”
They arrive at the pool and they jump in. The splash around and Nikki come to the room and tells her dad goodbye and that she loves him.

Nikki “I see you like my dad, He fell for you the minute he saw you on the video interview with your mother. Enjoy him he is a wonderful man”

Becky “Where are you going Nikki?”

Nikki “Back to boarding school for gifted children, I plan to go to Harvard and study law when I get out!”

Becky “You really have your life planned out, right now all I want to do is have as much sex with your father as I can”

Nikki “You will, see you at Christmas, I hope you are really a nice person Becky”

Becky “You too, Nikki lets stay in touch while you are in school”

Nikki leaves and is taken to school.

Becky goes over to Ben and starts stroking his cock and says “Is the big fella ready for some more pussy?, MMMM it sure feels like it. They have sex in the pool.

Ben “This is called making love, when you are in training we will be fucking each other. One is more tender than the other. I will let you come to your own conclusion which is better”

Becky “This is really good, mmmm I am cumming... I like this” the phone rings and the maid brings it to the pool.

Ben answers and says “Hello, Tiffani” looking at Becky he stops pumping her pussy, “How was your flight and your hotel?” She tells him everything was great, the driver was friendly and she can't wait to start the training. She asks to speak to Becky.

Ben “Becky your mother wants to talk to you” saying it in a loud voice. He hand her the phone.

Becky “Hi mom, how is everything out there in California, great, yes I am behaving, yes I will do everything Ben tells me to do, yes Nikki is great she is just so nice, yes I love you too, goodbye” she turns off the phone.

Becky to Ben “That I love you was for you too. I think you are going to need to put some lube and take it easy when we have anal sex. I had a crush on you since we were at the restaurant yesterday. You treated my like a lady, not as a 13 year old girl. You have made love to me with your beautiful cock. I truly do love you Ben.”

Ben “Nikki was right, I felt a connection to you when I saw you on the web cam and then in person at the interview, I am always going to be truthful with you my love. The job your mother has excepted is a sham. It is a legitimate job and she can keep it as long as she wants, but I am paying her salary her credit card is coming out of my account. The company is paying for the training. I did all this so I could meet you. I wanted you from the first time we met. I want you to be my slave. My number one slave. I also plan to make your mother my slave but only after you. If that is OK with you.”

Becky “WOW, do you love me?”

Ben “Very much so, especially after the way you gave yourself to me.”

Becky “I will be your slave, for you to train me, but I want to be more than your slave. I want you to love me and eventually make me your wife if you want after a time. I completely submit myself to you willingly and with all my heart” as she says those words she starts bouncing up and down on his cock.

Ben “I want you to get use to sex before we start your training. I do not want to hurt you.”

They continue to have sex and Ben finally climax and she climaxes as he pump his seed into her.

Ben “I need to get you on the pill”

Becky “Too late already on it, thanks for caring lover”

They kiss and embrace as they get out of the pool and sit next to each other and dry off never without a part of their bodies touching one another. They go to the kitchen and the maid fixes them breakfast.

Ben tells the maid “This is the new Mistress of the house”

Maid “Mistress, pleasure to meet you. You two look like two very compatible people”.

She servers breakfast and clears the dishes after. Ben and Becky head to the Master Suite.

Ben “This is where you will sleep and have sex from now on. Here is the master bathroom.”

Becky “Let me shave my pussy and under arms and lets get into the shower together, OK lover”

Ben “That sounds like a plan”

After Becky shaves her pussy and armpits Ben inspects and gives her a touch up where she missed a few strands. They get in the shower and the wash each other. Becky pays close attention to his cock she strokes it cleaning it. It get hard and she says “I created that so I better take care of it and she sucks him down her throat in one shot and makes him cum in 15 minutes. “How was that Master?”. Shaking his head “It was wonderful, you are a natural at it”

Becky “Natural Born Cocksucker, I should get that tattooed also”.

They get out of the shower and Becky goes over and looks in the cabinet and finds anal lube. And takes Ben to bed and tells him to fuck her in her pussy and then in her ass going gently ass he did when he took her cherry.

Ben “I will” After having sex for an hour in her pussy and cumming twice he finally cums. And Becky tells Ben “After you get your second wind fuck my ass”. Ben tells her to get her ass nice and lubricated telling her to put her fingers in her ass with the lube. She does and after 15 minutes Ben is ready. He is erect and ready to take her anal cherry.
Ben “Lube up my cock really good and put a large glob on the end of my cock.” she does “are you ready, Becky my angel”

Becky “Yes, Master and lover, go easy at first”

Ben pushes head of his cock through her anal ring, she screams, he keeps it there for a couple of minutes until she says to push, he then starts to push his whole cock into her ass until he bottoms out.

Ben “You took all 16 inches in baby”.

Becky “It feels like a baseball bat, I am use to it now you can begin to stroke now like you did last night”. He does and eventually he starts pounding her ass. Before he is finished she has climaxed 5 times.

Ben “How was that my darling little angel lover?”

Becky “Hurt worse that you popping my hymen, but after a while it became really pleasurable. We need to do that more before I start the training, Master.”

Ben “OK, Let rest a while. I signed you up for makeup classes with the lady at the department store for 4 three days this week starting today.”



Hope you enjoyed the first chapter … more to come next is Becky's Training and Tiffani's BIG decision. I have plenty of chapters hand written with many more characters and more of Becky's family. Le me know what you think.


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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2012 05:12
    I like,write some more soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2012 05:28
    this is a very stupid story you exagirate too much 16 inches is to much and not forgetting its thickness to a 13 year girl what was it you thinking to put all in her ass go fuck your self

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.08.2012 11:20
    You are careless. In the cast you tell us about Brittany, but she is really called Becky - get it right; it isn't rocket science to remember the names of your characters.

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  • Ed+Itor
    03.08.2012 21:39
    Do us All a favour no Capter 2, please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 01:28
    Holy shit this was fucking torture to read

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 02:17
    i stopped at 16" cock hahaha

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 04:20
    Hmm nice story to read > So U finaly made Ur Mother to be Ur Slave > well it should off been Ben to seduce Ur Mother Not U > to give her a beating and threaten her to be in the street if she those not become his Slave > I do not agry with that desetion of a threate > So U should Readue the Ending in Ben to seduce her his way > with out Ur Interfierence Let Him Make Her His Slave by her ownd Accord to be a slave

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 11:49
    16" cock u have got to be kidding me it's to much. U exaggerate to much. A 13 yr old girl can take a 16" cock yeah right. It's a good story otherwise but stop exaggerating that much its just bull shit.

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 12:02
    i enjoyed please write more

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2012 19:52
    I loved yr 2 chapters
    Please write ALOT MORE LONG CHAPTERS. So enjoyable 2 read, ASAP Please!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 02:20
    The moment you said 16 inch cock I lost interest in the story. Too much exaggeration in it

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 07:46
    more sex or less talk

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2012 17:15
    I love the story,even though Im not into the technical crap I the story was a bit all over the place and it could use some tidying up maybe a revised version....but great story and the fact dat its not forced makes it even hotter

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.08.2012 22:19
    amazing story. continue please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2012 01:33
    This story was a fail before you even posted. unreal cock size and fucking up one of the characters names right from the start.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2012 13:12
    any girls wanna chat, 5623611000

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2012 18:30
    male dom36 wants young ladies to train 602 377 7619

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2012 12:35
    For a stroke, its a 5 out of 10. Just too confusing, needs to have some conitnuity throughout to be more than a mediocer stroker.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2012 23:53
    Black dicks r big point blank

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2012 02:52
    hey my phone number changed dont text me on that one phone

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.08.2012 04:24
    booooo 16 inches what a load of crap

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  • achimvw
    13.08.2012 07:46
    Not sure what car dealers you deal with but your mark downs are way off the mark.

    You need to do some spell checking: The contraction of you are is you're,not your. You also have a habbit of dropping the y on the word they, and dropping the d on the word and.

    You need to add the quotation marks on your sentences that are denoting conversations.

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  • murre
    14.08.2012 19:19
    This has been boring for quite some time now. There is no tension in the story since every girl literally submitting to sex slavery from the beginning and then gets fucked 42342 times in the ass pussy and mouth. What kind of sex slavery is all that cuddling "Oh I love you, you are so great, the best" and "Let me buy some bling bling for my sex slaves for no good reason" You are just writing what you want to do and its really shallow and boring. I want all the bitches and all the money and admiration!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2012 02:03
    Don't exaggerate the size of his cock that much. It is actually disgusting when the largest is smaller than that. Besides that though fantastic story and I can't wait to read the rest of the series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2012 15:49
    Good story but ever heard of spell check?!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2012 17:31
    can not wait for more of the storys

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2012 00:01
    Awesome stories. Just read all seven in a row. The only thing I would recommend is spell check. Otherwise AWESOME JOB!!!! Keep up the great work

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2012 00:50
    Your writing is kinda awkward . But good story line

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.09.2012 08:20
    fuck you author I can leave negative fucking comments all I fucking want you piece of shit

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.09.2012 22:34
    What a piece of trash. You first introduce a list of characters that would challenge a memory wizard and then the first 3 chapters tell about a half dozen characters who aren't even listed Perhaps you should consider another hobby or take an evening course in writing. Way too many words and far too much drifting around from one plot to another. I couldn't even finish reading this mess.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2012 14:17
    You need to read the previous chapters. This is an on going story. It builds on the previous chapters.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.09.2012 01:12
    When will the next be posted? im Exited really!!!

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  • djb8247
    03.12.2012 15:10
    way too much exageration ,completely unbelievable load of crap///

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.12.2012 03:39
    Please learn english

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  • mrfootlong69
    04.12.2012 17:33
    Please go fuck yourself. Try writing a story yourself before you criticize others ASSHOLE.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 18:09
    This sounds soo much fun. I need a dick to ride boys.
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    Jayme

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 13:05
    the only thing I have to say is it seems like you overuse the word lover like it doesnt mean anything to them

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 14:11
    the only thing I have to say is it seems like you overuse the word lover like it doesnt mean anything to them

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.12.2012 17:38
    I love the story line ,just the right amount of sex and story this is great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2012 11:49
    Don't quit your day job

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2012 21:23
    i love this stories I hope for more soon u rock at writeing

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 17:45
    whoooo the best porn storie ever

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 22:24
    eyttutututuatuututututu

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 00:03
    Ben needs a bullet in the head for every wife he steals from another man.

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  • angieslover
    13.01.2013 01:47
    You must have a tiny penis, at least that is Angies opinion, we love the story and he has not stolen a single woman they have come to him, of course the assholes that messed with there own women have gotten what they deserve.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 03:43
    While this is a love story, it just seems like the same old boring song and dance that I always end up seeing in the interracial and/or cuckold sections of the sex stories in this site. White usband is eiter an asshole or isn't pleasuring teir wives correctly, black guy comes in and seduces her, she leaves with the black guy. This also reminds me of several interracial stories that used to be on a while back that had black men fucking young white girls cumming in their wombs and impregnating them. While this story ddoesn't suck, its just the same old song and dance that I have read over and over again

    --DtA

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 03:45
    Whoops, I meant doesn't not ddoesn't and husband, not usband. Mind the typos on my last comment, the buttons on my laptop tends to get screwy sometimes

    --DtA

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 06:38
    Wrong Angie. Ben has NO remorse in letting women cheat on their husbans.. how would he feel if one of HIS women cheated on him perhaps he should think about that.

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  • mrfootlong69
    13.01.2013 13:00
    Ben does not make these women cheat on their husbands. Their husbands are deadbeats, Crystal's husband was abusive and tried to rape his own daughter. They come willingly. His women do not need to cheat. They get all they can handle with Ben. He also lets them fuck his friends when they are around with a clean HIV/STD certificate.

    Ben treats his women like Queens. He loves and respects each one of them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 17:29
    So whats randee's escuse to cheat on Callum and make him a cuckold ? He does not seem to be a deadbeat

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  • mrfootlong69
    13.01.2013 18:44
    Callium is not a cuckold, yet. You have to wait until chapter 17 to find out. Imagine him watching his wife and daughter both pregnant with Ben's babies and getting double teamed by the movers. Just a thought.

    They love it and tell him that is the way it is. They ask him to join teh family. Reba seduces her father and fucks his brains in

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 18:49
    It just seems to contradict Randee saying she loves him but yet she is willing to go behind his back have another mans kid, with NO regard to how he may feel, seems to me she is a pretty callous person ( randee that is). Even if he does become a member of the family, he only would have rights to his wife when BEn says .. seems so wrong, betrayal

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2013 01:47
    there is one simple fact that all the negative commenters have overlooked. ITS A STORY! FICTION!

    Granted. I love the series. I think its a great storyline

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2013 02:44
    To the last anonymous commenter, I think there was only one negative commenter. Not sure if you or anyone else considered mine to be negative and I apologize if you or anyone does, but all I said was (and maybe I should have worded it this way) was that while this is a good story so far, the premise is nothing that I haven't read before. This one however has Ben actually treat the women and girls like queens. While I'm one who personally doesn't condone of cuckoldry for any reason. This may be the ONLY one (unless its one where the cuckold gets revenge but thats another story for another day) cuckold story that I have enjoyed reading despite me getting bored from the what I've stated in my first comment here. Sorry for any typos here and good work regardless,

    --DtA

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2013 16:04
    i have to say that I loverd all the stories chapter 1 to 14 ...but I want more ...its a request from your reader ...i am suprised that the rate was low ...what a story u have here ...pardon me not commenting on the others but I was busy reading your story and have to say very lost in it tooo,,as a reader I am hooked on this story so I was hoping you never end with the chapters by geting ideas from others stories and adding more things ...thanxss

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2013 19:11
    it was great like the rest and I am hungry for more

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2013 19:11
    it was great like the rest and I am hungry for more

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 11:42
    You can get what's called a Duo test at 4 weeks after poitnetal exposure. This test looks for both antibodies and antigens. The standard antibody-only test has a window period of 12 weeks and it's recommended you go back to confirm the result at that time. However, the duo test is highly accurate (around 98%) and it's unlikely the result would change. American guidelines state 6 months, however this would only be necessary if you have some kind of autoimmune disorder. If you have an autoimmune disorder it is something you would be aware of so for the vast majority of people an accurate result can be found at 12 weeks and a very good indication at 4 weeks.If you always use condoms and if you understand how HIV is transmitted and practice safe sex you will not be at risk of HIV infection. This fear you have of HIV transmission indicates that perhaps it would be useful to talk with a health adviser or counsellor to help you learn to control this anxiety. You really won't be at risk if you

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.01.2013 07:03
    This posting kcnoekd my socks off

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.01.2013 07:03
    My hat is off to your atstue command over this topic-bravo!

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2013 01:01
    Excellent. Perhaps adding some political figures such as the female relatives or even a female politican.

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  • angieslover
    04.02.2013 00:44
    THIS WAS GREAT WE REALLY LIKE IT NICE TO SEE EVERYTHING IS COMING TOGETHER FOR BEN AND FAIMLY

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.02.2013 13:20
    it was great ,,i am hoping to read more of it soon I have been reading part 16 and will finish in 30 minutes ...i hope you get new ideas so that it will expand more ..like going globel in bens life and more ..good luck and hope a muse inspires u ..

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.02.2013 11:02
    Mujeres teniendo sexo con animales

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2013 08:46
    Les filme x france

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.02.2013 22:21
    This story is my FUCKING dream
    I wish I was ben barnes

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.03.2013 15:34
    great story keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2013 17:39
    Looking forward to chapter 17, When is it coming out? its been over a month since the last one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.03.2013 07:23
    I tend to agree with the other comments made, one more statement though,, too unbelievable,, so I give you 2 out of ten for effort and a big fat 0 for content.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.03.2013 20:21
    مشكرووووووووووووووووور

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2013 18:11
    I enjoyed the storie

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2013 18:11
    I enjoyed the storie

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2013 17:12
    there is NO STORY!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2013 16:27
    This would never happen. He would be found killed in some horrific manner and his property would be stolen in return for treating people, marriages, and families like garbage. How do you think this is even realistic?

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2013 22:38
    could care less if it's realistic, its just a total piece of shit period. although having him tortured, mutilated and slowly killed would have made it slightly more tolerable. but it would still ultimately be a piece of shit.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2013 01:12
    great as Always, do not understand the negative comments but the dickless and spineless are always the first to complain. don't see them doing any writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2013 03:01
    To the 3rd anon reader, I understand why the first anon reader was negative. Hell, he or she even says why. I wouldn't call the person dickless or spineless for that. Some people simply aren't cool with marraiges and families getting put trough that. However, to the first anon, calm down dude or dudette. This IS a fictional story ya know. I mean come on, if something like that happened in real life you know a massacre would happen and secondly, I'm pretty sure mrfootlong69 doesn't approve of 99% of the stuff in this story happening in real life anyways. Its just that, a story. To the 2nd anon, this story wasn't bad at all. While I admit, at first it looked like almost every other black guy/different race woman cuckold story that I've read on this site, its actually a hell of a lot different (for the most part and by most I mean 98%). All in all, this story is great. Keep up the good work

    --DtA

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2013 05:13
    Great story yet again and to negaive commenters abouti this beui

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2013 05:20
    Great story and to those talking about this being realistic read the tags it is in 'fantasy' not 'true story' so if you are looking for real life go to 'true story' not here to negatively comment amazing writers with comments that put them down and not help with improving their writing, keep thoughtless comments to yourself...you are a

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.04.2013 03:21
    To the last anon. You DO know that telling people to keep thoughtless comments to themselves won't really work right? Just saying

    --DtA

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.04.2013 20:20
    Hola a todos, soy Mary Pelcastre conclued el T2 hace dos af1os y qrueio saber si ya este1 programada la prf3xima reunif3n global de ledderes del TMLP?Un millf3n de gracias por darme la oportunidad de vivir un liderazgo que hace una diferencia todo el tiempo.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2013 00:00
    The truth just shneis through your post

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2013 05:21
    I don't think I'm a full escape reedar, but I'm not a completely distracted reedar, either. Like everyone, I think it depends on the book. There are times when I couldn't move on after I finish reading the book (Never Let Me Go is the most recent example), but there are times when I can switch books just like that. I read more than one book at a time, but it's usually different genres and formats. So I may be reading one YA fantasy in print and I'm also reading a YA Contemporary ebook at the same time. The trick is not to read the same genres. My iPod touch is very useful for reading books when I'm commuting at night it keeps me less bored when it's traffic. I also read right before I go to bed especially when I find it hard to sleep. I think this meant that I read everywhere. So maybe I am more of a distracted reedar. ^^ LOL.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.04.2013 21:26
    I'm ipmsreesd! You've managed the almost impossible.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.04.2013 05:58
    Well I guess telling someone to keep their thoughtless comments to themseleves is more of a food for thought thing rather than a command, if they take the time to read such a comment they would probably just think about doimg it I guess

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2013 06:29
    You're the grateest! JMHO

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2013 12:14
    Your post has lifted the level of deabte

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2013 15:32
    I wanna read the realm of this story?

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2013 04:30
    سكس ورعان كويتين

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.04.2013 07:50
    اجمل مقاطع السكس اريد عرضها

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.04.2013 14:12
    i dnt see anything

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.04.2013 02:11
    You should keep the wait times consistant
    Love the story
    I need more NOW!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2013 20:29
    Why the fuck did you stretch the screen out so wide??? Are you a fucking idiot or what?

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.05.2013 21:51
    What difference does it make how wide the screen is? The story is what counts Anon reader 2013-05-12 20:29:17

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2013 17:37
    I wonder if ppl ever read the top of (EACH) story IT'S FICTION ALL STRETCHED OUT .. SO WHAT IS GOOD TOO

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.05.2013 14:08
    you can always tell when someone starts in the middle an does not take the time to read it from the start ... all the people he list are there ..some where ...

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.05.2013 05:55
    I am excited let my penise push in pusi

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2013 17:55
    All this for a sad little virtual male ego trip lol.

    And such terrible writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2013 03:44
    Well I liked it.
    So meh to you kind sir.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2013 04:46
    سكس Ùu0081تح جديد

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2013 12:13
    Death to ben the rapist. having to kidnap an INNOCENT family to get back at ONE guy, yep ben is a good moral guy ... NOT !!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2013 13:15
    Ben protects his current family. What morality does Ben need to show?
    Family is everything to Ben. Ben with the help of his wife Becky will show his
    benevolent caring side. He has BIG plans for his new office building. Social
    worker Petra come back into the story in next time chapter. Stay tuned. ... BTW this is the author

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  • Dimek
    31.05.2013 16:08
    Ha ha how is Kidnapping innocent people, druggin them, forcing them into Sex ( basically rape), breeding them Protecting his family. They were NO threat. Phillip was NOT them. he is a Unmoralistic Child raping Monster. Would love to see HOW yu turn that around to show a GOOD side /laugh

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  • mrfootlong69
    31.05.2013 21:32
    Mira and her sisters and daughter are not his family. He is protecting his family, the women that are already his. Wait till chapter 20, choices will be given to them. Rose and her daughters were given a choice. This is a developing story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.06.2013 19:04
    Spell check wouldn't fix the grammar errors. Awful!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.06.2013 16:07
    its such a turn on

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2013 00:49
    tjdgndncv cndfghdfghdfgh gfh dgjdgh j dgh fgh jdjghsdfghfdgh sf hsfg g fsh gfh

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.07.2013 15:44
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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2013 21:29
    So he won't for e them, then he does. He won't keep them, but he does. He protects his family, but he will kidnap and rape and force his victims to become his family. Am I missing anything because if he was such a good guy, why does he have to kidnap, force, brain wash and otherwise destroy people to get what he wants?

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2013 21:33
    Can the author please explain how kidnapping, rape and torture of innocent people is protecting his family? Or at least explain why an FBI agent who is investigating him for rape, kidnapping, torture etc etc warrants Ben to kidnap, rape, torture and brainwash Phillips family?

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2013 03:13
    Kurama ur a faggit go out in find a girl u low life peice of shit 2inch dick gay cock sucker oh in dude this story amazing I wish I could I'm u in talk to u about this story in how u came up with it I'm massage on all the story there simply amazing I fond this story by reading other story I normally only read shemale story but this was simply fan fucking tastic dude wish u made more

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2013 16:50
    Well fuck u guys this story was hella good if u don't fucking go suck a tranny dick in song read to beggen with u cock sucking no life bitch come eat my dick every girl won't what they so shot the fuck up u fag great story mrfootlong69

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2013 08:23
    اني اريد اتيج وحده

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2013 08:23
    ممكن بالعربي

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2013 10:36
    Ficking amazing story

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2013 01:25
    I tried reading this series again...but I keep stopping at "BIG FELLA". How cheesy can you get?

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.10.2013 16:39
    That was the worst story ive ever read, what was this made by a 10yr old? And 16in my ass. Make a story believable before you post it. YOU HAVE NO EXPIERENCE go jack off instead

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.10.2013 16:41
    I thought I told you not to write anymore?

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.10.2013 23:41
    I thought I told you not to write anymore?

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.10.2013 01:23
    That story was extremely hot. Ben is a fucking champ. The writer had to be getting his dick sucked before writing this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2013 13:19
    jU72bg Say, you got a nice article post.Really looking forward to read more. Keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2013 22:15
    mad6MA Wow, great blog post.Really looking forward to read more. Great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.10.2013 23:02
    44qWhx A big thank you for your blog post.Really looking forward to read more. Will read on...

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 03:06
    eVbe5R I appreciate you sharing this article.Much thanks again. Really Cool.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 13:37
    M9oV4O A round of applause for your post.Really thank you! Great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 16:28
    Q2fi5s Im grateful for the blog post.Thanks Again. Keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 16:46
    zXrqlU Im thankful for the blog post.Thanks Again. Awesome.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2013 18:11
    rmGSMm Thank you for your article post. Fantastic.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.01.2014 05:38
    Plz cum back
    My pussy is aching for the next chapter
    I already read the others ovmer again
    My pussy need soothing ;)
    Cum back baby:)

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  • mrfootlong69
    24.01.2014 02:55
    working on Chapter 22. Had to write in a special character for my muse.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.02.2014 10:39
    seb8b2 Muchos Gracias for your post. Really Great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2014 22:16
    hbpMWs Major thanks for the blog article. Awesome.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.04.2014 00:19
    definitely NOT the best work that you have done, but readable at the least,,, good plot,, but I think you should rewrite it in a more mature way

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.04.2014 04:39
    I need the next chapter
    Im dripping wet typing this
    Plz cum back babe;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.04.2014 22:12
    i have read this story from part 1 to 21 many times hoping that you will post the next story soon and I will be able to continue reading the story again ....so can you please post part 22 and more again soon ...i will be waiting for it ...thankx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2014 09:32
    u dead man wheres ch.22 dieing to read it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2014 01:38
    one of the great writer on this site
    hope to read more as u get it ready

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  • Norton+X
    11.07.2014 06:12
    Great series, MrFootLong.

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  • Norton+X
    11.07.2014 11:39
    One of the best stories on this site. Super kind of work here. Fantastic.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2014 11:45
    Shallowest idiot bloke fantasy, character infodumps, simplistic syntax. Just bad tbh.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2014 03:12
    great as all ways hope we don't have to wait so long for the next part keep at it love this storie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2014 06:28
    I have really enjoyed this chapter. And see you have a great many fan and I can't wait for chapter 22,23,and 24. The stories read more like a real life Dallas and being being a JR . So in closing up the good work and make this a never ending story:-) and thank you again for posting it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2014 07:12
    The exagerations about the size etc of bens cock and the test of sexual abilities are absolutely ridiculous, but the story line is quite good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2014 07:23
    from the good, to the sublime, to the completely RIDICULOUS.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.01.2015 02:39
    I have been reading other stories but none can compare to yours how much longer will it before we get new segment to this epic story. As for now I reread the storys once more. Thank for fun time and a great story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2015 09:29
    When can we hope read the next part of your novel (part 22)? I hope it will be soon . :-)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.03.2015 05:11
    When can we hope read the next part of your novel (part 22)? I hope it will be soon . :-)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.04.2015 17:16
    u dead man? wheres the next part coming out??

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  • Catmandue53
    09.09.2015 04:52
    I stopped reading when I ran head first into that big wall of text.

    Also.. 16" ?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.09.2015 09:38
    Is there any news on chapter 22 and 23:-)?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.12.2015 19:27
    Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2016 15:35
    Caméra cache d'en les calle de vin

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2016 23:45
    Very long but good

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  • Lord+Vorn
    13.06.2016 16:55
    NEXT CHAP PLZ

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  • iwant3bigdicks
    16.06.2016 15:40
    I would love to try to take as much of this monster as I can into my pussy....mmmm...I'm shoving my dildo up my creamy Purdy right now wishing it was this dick!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2016 17:22
    can't wait until the next chapter. great chapters so far

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2016 01:07
    Great stories so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope It's not too long a wait.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2016 03:13
    You really should get beyond the 6th grade before attempting to write anything. Bad English, and terrible grammar.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.11.2016 07:11
    Mercy accept friendship identify possible special Come

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2016 13:29
    great stories so far. Can't wait for next chapter. Hope it's not too long a wait

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.12.2016 01:13
    Great story so far. Can't wait for the next. Hope not too long...

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  • Greenness
    23.06.2017 00:25
    To the last ANON did you not read the entire story

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  • Greenness
    01.07.2017 05:05
    Am I the only person who thinks Ben is a pedophile.
    Don't get me wrong I love the series but there is so much evidence. I know this is fiction

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  • wardgsaven
    27.11.2020 06:55
    I am pleased with the start that you made in your story. I think that you might pay more attention to the quotations of your characters and I think you might take advantage of grammarly.com as an aid in your writing. u96b6u901au7f09

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  • wardgsaven
    27.11.2020 14:56
    I would like to see the characters' comments correctly constructed. I still think you would need to obtain grammarly.com to aid you and your story construction. u96b6u901au7f09

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  • wardgsaven
    28.11.2020 01:35
    I realize that the story was written years ago, but the changes I talked about would make it so much easier to read. I don't know if you have written anything recently, as I would certainly be interested in reading it. u96b6u901au7f09

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  • wardgsaven
    28.11.2020 13:30
    I applaud you for all that you have done with your story, but at the same time, I hope you will take the advice of your supporter and improve on your work. u96b6u901au7f09

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  • wardgsaven
    28.11.2020 15:09
    I hope you will continue writing and improve along the way. u96b6u901au7f09

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  • wardgsaven
    28.11.2020 19:17
    I hope that you still will be putting pen to paper and churn out some more stories. u96b6u901au7f09

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  • Wild77er4u
    26.10.2022 05:48
    5 inch wide cock? And he's found 15? teenage girls who can open mouth 5 plus inches? And take a 5 + inch wide cock down their throats? 5 inches is a big mouth. Well it's fictitious I get it, but 5 inch wide cock in a 12 year olds throat? Is stupid as it gets and fucked up the whole story. Otherwise great read just can't figure out why you'd think anyone would be impressed with a unbelievable storyline.

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