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Kristen and the Band Room

Author: mad1

Date: 16 November 2004

Anal, True Story, Blowjob, Consensual Sex

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When I was in high school there wasnt a whole lot of action going on.I was one of these kids that wasn't realy into sports.Or into the popularity scene.But one thing i could do and do rather well is play the piano.I was self tought.Never had a lesson. Not meny people knew I could even play.Except for Mrs Olson.She was the lady in charge of all of us at lunch time.A hall monitor if you will.So every day at lunch hour, she would unlock the band room.Llet me slip in undetected.Then let me alone for the lunch hour and the hour aferward (my study hall) .I would be in that big room all by myself just me and that old Baldwin grand piano.I would play and play.Practicing songs that i was writing, just enjoying the magic of it all.Oblivious to the world around me.
There was a girl that i always watched at lunch time threw the big side window in the band room.Her name is kristen,she has medium lenth dark brown hair.Big brown eyes and a long slender body that has developed wonderfuly over the years.Every sense i could remeber from kindergarden on up to the present day(at that time), being jr's in high school i have had a deep emotional yerning for her..In my opinon the best looking girl I have seen in my life.Even to this day.
Kristen always hung out with two girls Jenny and Ranee, they all were in band together and choris.The hour after study hall was the first hour of band practice.Shy as I am, I would always slip out of the band room 10 min early not to be detected by anyone that i was in there.Sure the band teachers knew I was in there and Miss Trody even tryed to talk me into playing in the band. But i always would turn her down.I didnt feel confident enough to go threw with it.But knew i could do it.Miss Trody would even give me a lesson from time to time. Comming in to the band room on my study hall hour teaching me how to read sheet music and so on.She was a very nice lady(atractive too i might ad). But i never dared to make a move at her.I respected her autohrity way to much.My goil was at a larger scale in my mind. To become good enough, and confident enough to reveal my talents some day to Kristen.Kinda show off alittle.I knew her teen age emotions well becuase of my own. It seemed that the girls emotions were alot easier to minipulate with the sound of a piano.I could see even in Miss Trodys eyes, I could seem to strike a chord (lol) from time to time..
One day after school my best frend Jeff and I were working on his faimly farm .They lived about 2 miles away and after school I would get on my four wheeler and ride threw the hills and fields to get to there house. Jeff and I were horn dogs,typical teen age boys.We used to be pretty radical as well.This is back in 1988 and they had just bought a brand new chevy s10 4x4 for the farm.We would sneek off with the truck and go up to the state line were there was a party store. i would order up our dinners (deli subs) and jeff would head streight to the magazine rack and start stuffing his pants full of all the latest issues of husler,penthouse,playboy and whatever else was on the shelf that had tits and ass on the cover.Meanwhile i kept the clerk busy with our sandwiches.I think that the clerk knew but never said anything becuase there were times we would wind up with 25 dollars worth of sandwiches there with as much meat and cheeses i had added to them to keep him busy.
On our way back to the farm we would talk about the latest porn movie Dougie(jeffs older brother) had, and would sneek into his collection and quikly make a duplicate copy of it.Those movies tought me things i would use even to this day.Its amazing how such a picture gets burned into your memory.Just like the day im about to tell you about.
It was a typical mondane day, we had a award ceramony at school.Now i knew with Kristens academics she should win a few awards , me being a typical student would never even get a award.Kristen and i knew each other but only would talk in passing.Sense kindergarden we might have said maybe twenty words to each other over the years.Me always sticking my foot in my mouth half the time.She must have thought i was a complete freak or something. Jeff and i were sitting in the audatorium watching the awards ceramony talking about Dougies movies and then thay called Kristens name for one of the awards.I abruptly turned my head to see her grace the stage, cutting Jeff off in mid sentance.Now the way they were doing the awards was the previous winner would annouce the next winner.The next award to be awarded was the Princables award." The award going to the student that has held a consistent grade level for the past three years."I watched intently as Kristen began to speak.Her soft velvet like voice read the notes there on the podium so perfectly.I watched her with the tention of a bird dog on point.Then she spoke my name as the winner of the princables award.I was shocked and shaken at the same time.The adatoruom lit up with cheers im sure that half the school knew i had the hots for her.I stood up,my knees went weak as i started heading towards the stage. I started to walk up to kristen and she extended her hand tword mine.My heart was racing and i started to feel alittle bit excited.i noticed my cock was starting to get hard every step i took torwd her.if i let my primative intencts take over i would have jumped her right there in front of the whole school.When her hand touched mine i felt a trimmer up my arm . I took my last step to her and she reached up and kissed me right smack on the lips.My heart dropped I felt kristens breast brush up my chest her nipples were hard and i could tell that she was very happy to see me. She let go of my hand from the hand shake she accidently grazed my buldging cock .She stopped and rubbed it for a second and said" wow good to see you to."Grant it we were blocked by the podium but i felt alittle embarrised.The audatorium just was wild from her kissing me.If they would have seen her cop a feel i think a riot would have broke out.That day was actualy one of the best days of my life to that point.
After the award ceramony people were coming up to me congradulating me more on the kiss then the award. Lunch time rolled around.Mrs.Olson congradulated me and unlocked the band room and let me do my daily practice.i slipped into the band room.cought my breath.Walked up to the piano and said.Well old friend its sure is good to see you today.The lights were dim just the sun light comming threw the the big windows.I looked out side where Kristen, Jenny and Ranee usaly were but only sawJenny and Ranee. I was rather disapointed not seeing Kristen.My heart was full of joy excitment and my hands were shaking .I sat down behind the piano and started to play the prettiest song i have ever played i felt all the emotions welling up inside me from the days events.I played hard.i played gently, it was like a intimate moment as the piano sang my song.As i was playing i felt as if someone other then myself was in the band room that day.Then two very slender arms reached over my sholders resting around my neck in a very delicate embrass. my hands froze on the keybord.The sound faded from the piano and i heard the prettiest voice in the world in my ear say keep playing its the prettiest song i have ever heard. Gently I reached up and put my hand on the two hands embrassing me.
Kristen I. I.. i.i cant beleive your in here.She broke her embrass and slid up next to me on the piano bench .I cant belive you can play the piano like that.My heart raced i think even she could hear it.I said to her in a low gravled voice.How did you know i was in here?She turned her head gently and looked deep into my eyes and said Mrs Olson told me you played in here every day.I didnt believe her and she unlocked the door to let you in, i slipped in behind you before the door closed completly,i waited a moment.Then I heard the music so i walked slowly to find you playing the most passionate song ive ever heard.She smiled and rested her head on my shoulder. i asked her why she was looking for me? i wanted to appologize for embarrissing you on stage.and after hearing you play the piano and feeling your cock earlier i wanted to ask you a queastion.I felt that flushing of embarrisment returning for how forward she was being.i replyed with " your question is?"Do you like me?Kristen i liked you from the first day ive laid eyes on you back in kindergarden.Why havent you every shown any interest in me?I ..... I figured you were out of my reach.I never thought i would see the day i would have a conversation with you, let alone the day i have a conversation with you and get a kiss.You liked that kiss didnt you.you wernt embarrased at all by it.
i pulled her head off my shoulder and looked deeply in her eyes "Kristen i could never repay that kiss it was the most exciting thing ive ever had happen to me".She leaned in and started to kiss me again.My haert raced, my cock started to get extremly hard.i reached over her back and put my hand on the small of her back pulling her a bit closer.I then relized what i thought earlier.She was braless.Her perky little breast pressed up agaent my chest i started rubbing her back. She let out a sigh and moaned. Looked deep into my eyes she said "would you like to feel them?"With out hesatation she reached around and placed my hand on her breast. This is the first time i had ever felt a breast. They were soft and the nipple firm.I coressed them like a pro.Like i saw in Dougies movies.She started moaning and she reached up and kissed me again.My cock was just throbbing at this point.As i corressed her breast she reached down and started to rub my cock again.Like she did in the audatorium.But this time it was just her and I.
She unzipped my pants, eagerly my cock poped out threw the flap of my underware.She gripped it firmly in her hand . Wow your a big one.look at that i cant even get my hand around it.I sat back a bit letting it poke up out of my briffs. It stood firm and girthy 8 1/2 inches tall. She started to stroke it firmly i felt the pre come lub her hand and my member.She moaned and started to kiss me again.i reached over and pulled her shirt off expossing a full veiw of her breast. She slid around and stradled the piano bench raising up. her breast were in my face at that point. I began to tease the nipple with my mouth nipping them so gently between my teath.She squirmed and started to pant a bit she also started to trimmer.Oh god im cumming .Im thinking god damn i didnt do nothing and she came?i started thinking i wonder if she will let me fuck her then ill show her what cumming is.I stood up and pulled my shoes off and my pants and underware.i turned in front of her as she sat on the piano bench. once again she firmly grabed my cock but then she also engulfed it about half way down the shaft in her mouth.The feeling was blissful. The first time in my life my cock entered into anything other then my hand.She pulled off it and tryed again gaining alittle more ground. my cock was about to explode having this girl of my dreams giving me my first knob job. But i held back,focussing on the sharpness of her back teath rubbing my shaft to keep from cumming.She pulled off and stood up and kissed me again .reaching down to the frount of her jeans and undid the button and unzipped them.gently reaching around to her very slender hips with my hands in the waist band of her panties. Iin one graceful movement, pulled them downward feeling her tiny ass and legs in the process of it all.
She looked into my eyes . Ive never been intament before but i want you to do the honners of taking my cherry.i just about spoiled my load hearing those words.there we were in the band room almost totaly naked my cock in its full glory and for the first time in my and her life i reached gently down to her pubic mound.the small dark well groomed patch of hair was in my hand.i felt a very tight passagway and alittle further down was a very moist canal i gently pressed my index finger in.she moaned and squirmed again.she sat down on the piano bench and spread her long slender legs apart.I knelt down in front of her small body and placed my mouth directly over her small pussy and licked up ward. I found the clit rather easaly.It was throbbing with her every heart beat.She let out a high shrill and leaned back on the piano keyboard.It let out a load chouris of notes.to me this was the sweetest song ive ever heard.
i continued to lick that sweet tangy clit and all at once my mouth was filled with a creamy feeling liquid.it taisted rather musky at first and i forced it out of my mouth into her little pussy. she let out moan and i proceeded to stick my finger into her tight very wet pussy with no resistance.she pulled me up off her pussy and we were lined up she was kissing me franticly and told me to fuck her hard with my massive cock.i leaned in tword her and felt the head of my cock penitrat into her lips.i kept thinking how am i going to get this big thing in that small hole.i rubbed it back and forth gently gaining alittle head way each time. she groaned and started panting.all at once it slid right in there and i felt a very strong pulsing comming from kristens pussy.there was some resistance about half way in and then what felt like a snap. the resistance subsided.. she learched back and squilled.i pulled it out and then procedded to ram it in gently but with autority again. this time it was a little easier but still extremly tight.and she was panting and groaning and she let out another squill. .
Am i hurting you the last thing i want to do is hurt you.she was like no im fine your just so damn big.it feels realy good keep going fuck me hard. I want you to so bad. Ram it in me again, ill lossen up.So i pulled back again and thrusted in her one more time. this time she followed rythem and thrust upward at me and it felt extremly good i started to think. i hadnt jacked off for days so im going to fill her right up i better pull out when im ready. i dont need to be a father at 16. But i would love to bury as much cum in this pussy as i could ...i dremt about this sense i was 8 years, old jacking off to this girls memory in my mind for years .But now im getting the real deal.i proceeded to fuck her she looked deeply in my eyes as i was starting to be a little reluctent.you can come in me my mom has had me on the pill sense ive been 12.With that i felt a swelling in my balls i knew oh so well when i jacked off but this time it was way more intense.Her tight body and pussy was keeping rythum with me .my balls slapping aginst her ass.i pulled up alittle to far and when i came down my well lubed cock slipped into her tiny ass hole.she screamed out.. all 8 1/2 inches buried in her ass. it was tighter then her pussy but didnt seem to give as much resistance. she just freaked out kissing me.oh my god.. It went right in and i came the second you went in there .i gently pulsated back and forth driving her innocents right out that big window in the band room. i stoped and pulled out of her ass.She said are you done?
No No i want to try somthing i seen in a movie.Flipping her over her belly on the piano bench those long thighs to her knees to the floor. She turned and looked at me with apprehension as i stepped up behind her.Trust me ill be gental and leave your back hole alone this time.i slid my hard long cock into her pussy one more time. that little ass was such a turn on.every time i would pualsate in her , her butthole would pucker up like it wanted a kiss. I figured its time to give here 8 years of dreaming about her in one final deep thrust... I hit bottom.shootting my load deep in her she felt the paulsing and i felt her paulsing at the same time . i came hard. realy hard but i kept pumping her.the preasure from it was so intence. it was very wet now and my cum was buried deep in her. i figured the chance of this happining agiain will probly never be.she screamed a exotic scream and i let out a deep groan the next thing i know im cumming again twice as hard hitting bottom . each time i did... wimpering and moaning .i wrapped my arms around her waist in a bear hug type fasion and pulled her up off that piano bench swung around and sat down with her still around my cock.Her back facing me and her small ass on my huge cock sitting on my lap i embrassed her one more time.i gently kissed her shoulder and told her i would always be in her debt.
She stood up. my cock leaving that sweet pussy moarning its departure i noticed my cum running profusly down her leg ...wow you realy filled me up.she reached into her pants pocket and pulled out a tampon and placed it in her.i came prepared she gose..we proceeded to get dressed at that time our lunch hour was just about over.i played her a song on the piano. You know every day after that day that piano just never sounded the same.Kristen and i enjoyed lunch in the band room the rest of that year. i wish we had summer school


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    READER 500
    21.11.2004 16:52
    good story - lousy spelling

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    READER 500
    21.11.2004 17:04
    Excellent story, but like tj said, get a dictionary, also look in the grammer section and you'll learn how to use the three forms of to(going somewhere), too (also), two (number of). Hot story tthough, I gave U a 9 for content.

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    READER 500
    21.11.2004 20:28
    learn to spell and bullshit that is a true story

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    READER 500
    21.11.2004 20:30
    Good story, lousy spelling and grammer. You got a 10 for butt fucking her.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.11.2004 21:20
    Good story there should be a spell check though

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.11.2004 02:31
    i wish that happened to me (by the way get a spell checker asshole)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.11.2004 20:34
    good story be better if you could SPELL

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.11.2004 15:58
    A quick look at the whole tale indicates the spelling errors are calculated, most of the long words are correct.; a smoke screen for an educated person?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.12.2004 03:19
    pretty good, I could say spelling, but I think you get the picture ;)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.02.2005 23:44
    i dont care about spelling!!!!
    that was a great story .
    it also brought memories of my highschool days back!!!
    thanks for a great story

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    READER 500
    09.02.2005 06:00
    Good story, but A, you need to learn to spell a bit better, and B, and I do mean this as a big B, seperatie into paragraphs, and make it earier to follow whose saying what, and "quotation markes" are your best friend I gave it an 8 out of ten, good story, but..... the other detracted alot from it.

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    READER 500
    09.02.2005 14:35
    selective memory for spelling? use spell check dumb-fuck!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.02.2005 12:54
    learn to spell you dumb-fuck
    hope you had a good time

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.02.2005 20:14
    learn to spell but it was still good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2005 02:08
    dude u are soo fucken lucky but put the DAMN SPELL CHECK ON !!!! and cheesse smells goood :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.02.2005 17:40
    learn to spell dumbass good story though 10/10!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.02.2005 10:08
    LEARN HOW TO SPELL. Good story though

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 00:09
    good story, but i really dont think u were ever an "average" student- u seem like a dumbfuck

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2005 02:43
    ok i guess.......next time just look up a dictionary and learn how to spell correctly.....gr8 story tho!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2005 03:09
    Awsome fucking story but learn how to use qutation marks and shit.8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2005 16:45
    good story!!! it made me cum!:> BUT USE DAMN QUOTATION MARKS

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.03.2005 20:30
    8 and 1/2 inches? whats that... sniff sniff... i smell bullshit!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2005 10:42
    Lern how to spell that's why they call it kindergarten good stoy doo.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2005 15:58
    i think you need to go go back to kindergarden and learn some grammar.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.04.2005 15:25
    hey put on the mud boots cause we're walking knee high in the bullshit..........8/12 inches yea right thats the biggest bunch of fucking bull i've ever heard. u are a sexless retard.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.04.2005 17:56
    Jesus Christ man... LEARN TO FUCKIN WRITE!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2005 12:50
    I AM THE PROUD OWNER OF A !$ INCH MONSTER

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.04.2005 20:15
    lern 2 spll otherwise not bad

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2005 17:25
    8 & 1/2 inches, do you need a napkin, cuz you got a little bit of bull shit on you. and learn to freakin spell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.04.2005 11:23
    are you kidding me 8 1/2 inches are you shiting me........ sorry i sneezed im alergic to bullshit learn how to spell and use punctuation over all not bad 7/10

    fucker t'ill i die

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.04.2005 08:08
    it was nt badbut,.......you shuld learn some grammar . well done

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.05.2005 22:30
    you fucking fucking dumb shit learn some grammer

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.05.2005 16:28
    8.5 inches isn't that crazy, you guys just have tiny cocks

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.05.2005 16:04
    My retarded brother and sister can write better then you. So go back to Kindergarden and learn to spell and use some punctuation.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.05.2005 03:21
    gooooood fucking story man dont listen to these fools their all jelous cuz their under six inches im at 8 damn dude your lucky man hope u get with her and just enjoy life

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.06.2005 10:52
    I've never before read such an awful written story... Nice idea, but terrible writing!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.06.2005 01:41
    8 1/2 what the fuck!? thats bullshit. And rewrite with grammer mother fucker

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.06.2005 08:56
    The story content was pretty good, but the grammar started to get annoying and took away from the story at times. Work on this and your stories will be much better. The 8.5 inch dick this is a bit surreal but hey it could happen, Good overall, just work on grammar. 8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.07.2005 02:43
    i agree. Good story: very bad grammar

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.07.2005 02:58
    All these people are making fun of the grammer of the story yet their grammer is terrible in their comments

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.08.2005 23:19
    Yo "Fuck U All" i think u just pissed cause u lackin in size. dont be dissin other people jst because u aint big enough to get a girl off!!!!! anyway,besides that fuck head, that story was really good. i give it an 9/10

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    READER 500
    03.08.2005 14:58
    The idea of the story was nice, but damn son learn how to spell. Spelling is essential in writing stories. You would spell a word one way and then spell it completely different two sentences later. Anyway, DipSet holla. ˜one˜

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    READER 500
    13.08.2005 00:07
    simply put, sucky. it had an ok story line but the spelling and grammer...attrocious. not to mention the fact that you kept a steady gpa with that intellect? what was that...1.5? which would be what id rate this story but because it dont have halves i will have to settle with a 2/10...be lucky you got that...this story wouldve been good if there wasnt so much shitty spelling. oh hey Dude, you know what? its a proven fact that those who brag about their cocks often exaggerate and are insecure about their sexuality, go figure

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.08.2005 16:09
    good story. who cares about the grammer. i cant spell either so it dont matter

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.09.2005 20:48
    Hey, nice story, ignore all these ignorant people about your grammar, you just keep writing like you do..if they dont like it, TOO DAMN BAD! I liked it :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.09.2005 16:10
    I liked the story who cares about the bad grammer, its a fuck story not an english lesten

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.09.2005 08:27
    i thought it was great even if the grammar wasn't perect.i would have loved to be that guy who got fucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.09.2005 20:53
    Too much bullshit in the beginning. Only read enough to know it is all bullshit.

    Gve it a 1

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.10.2005 22:41
    Awesome story, who cares about Grammer?

    Next Part! 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.10.2005 17:22
    You're halfway there. Great idea, just not communicated 100%. Don't be afraid to try again.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.10.2005 04:33
    NIE ROZUMIEM PO PROSTU :PPP

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.11.2005 02:18
    bad spelling, impossible cock size.0/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.11.2005 00:17
    more ass fucking next time. that makes my pussy drip.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.11.2005 23:42
    I sense a smoke screen here.alot of the large words are spelled correct. a coverup in my opinion.this may be the doctor that saves your life guys so watch out.

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    READER 500
    19.11.2005 09:51
    who gives a shit about grammar? u ppl wanted a fuck story u got one wat else do u want?

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    READER 500
    23.11.2005 10:42
    U had an 8 1/2 inch cock? Lol what a loser i bet it was just a half inch and this story isnt even true dick head

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    READER 500
    16.12.2005 17:18
    I think this story would have been better but first you should write it in Mirosoft Word, then opy and paste. O well, over all it was good and ill give it a 7/10

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    READER 500
    27.12.2005 12:12
    Man ummmmm.It's kinda good. Maybe you should add NOTHING delete you sick underage fucker.

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    READER 500
    06.01.2006 03:09
    liar this sisnt happen....i know you that crushes name wasnt kristen it was/is timothy you motherfucker die die die die die die die die

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    READER 500
    14.01.2006 16:17
    Go back to school and learn how to spell!

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    READER 500
    07.03.2006 19:27
    Shit

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    READER 500
    12.03.2006 21:34
    have u really had sex before?

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    READER 500
    17.03.2006 18:15
    what dipshit actully cares about spelling? o and good story

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    READER 500
    08.04.2006 10:39
    If you want to experience some of these stories ladies then you need to explore some more sites or just take a cock in hand and get started. LOL Check it out. dracco_25 on adult friend finder. A site for swingers.

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    READER 500
    02.08.2006 18:18
    lol i stopped reading when he tried 2 impress us bout hoW his half inch cock entered his boyfriends eye

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    READER 500
    05.09.2006 06:28
    soso pangit as in ugly rate it 2

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    READER 500
    09.11.2006 12:11
    I believe tthat the illiterate resposble for puttimg this
    drivel on the website is only guilty of being stupid.
    Fuuucking computers have soell check, He makes up the nnams. so they are good. d I forget amything?

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    READER 500
    22.11.2006 02:37
    RAPE and LIES

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    READER 500
    07.01.2008 00:10
    all u fuckers that r ragin on this guy should fuck off!

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  • fuck+you
    08.07.2009 03:21
    you mother fucker you stole this from some other good auther you asswhole

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2009 22:05
    to the guy 2009-7-8, 3:21:33, storygal96 said that she got it off him but she just corrected the spelling, you idiot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.07.2012 12:30
    Please, please fix the spelling, grammar and paragraph format and repost. The story looks like it has potential but I couldn't get through it. When a story is painful to read, it kills the mood.

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