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  1. Hunting the Hunter
  2. Hunting the Hunter(Part Two)
  3. Hunting The Hunter (Part Three)
Hunting The Hunter (Part Three)

Author: CAliGirl1809

Date: 2 December 2012

Written by women, Fiction

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Skyler sat there nursing her Brandy as she kept a look out for Jose Soto. It was already close to midnight and there was no sign of him. Was he going to show? Or stand her up? He couldn't, Skyler saw the way he was looking at her, he wanted her. Her second night out and she might leave empty handed again.

Yesterday night she got a glimpse of him, he watched her from a distance and then as she approached he left, tonight he wasn't going to leave. He got away, but he wasn't getting away tonight.

Her body tensed up as she put her Brandy down, someone was watching her. She watched her drink as she started to move her glass in a circle before downing it and signaling the barmaid.

She felt eyes on her in all directions, usually she could always pin point it but not this time. She couldn't look around, that would give her away.

Skyler started tapping her foot on her bar stool, tapping her fingers as the barmaid served her another drink.

“Don't you think ones enough?”

She froze, please tell me its not the damn SEAL. Out of the corner of her eye she saw someone sit down.

“Odd seeing you here, I didn't think you were the party type girl.” Noah signaled the barmaid.

“I'm not, I'm just out and about?” she picked up her drink and took a sip.

“Out and about, huh. Thank you.” he smiled back at the beautiful barmaid.

Skyler kept her attention on her drink that sat in front of her, what was Noah doing here? she thought.

"What brings a SEAL to this place? Wait, never mind, its where all military come when looking for a simple fuck," her tone, that didn't come out right, not how she wanted to have it come out.

Noah cleared his throat, "Actually I came here for business."

"Business, what type of business?" It was Saturday night and he was here doing business? That didn't sit right with her for some reason, he was here for something else.

"Classified," he smiled at her.

Sklyer couldn't help but take a peek at him, she liked his smile. So, he was here for business and it was classified? What could be classified? It doesn't matter, she told herself. She was here with her own classified piece of business. And if Noah didn't leave, she was sure he would ruin everything, maybe he already has, he was sitting next to her and having a conversation with her. Jose Soto could be watching them as they spoke.

"Hey, how about you get lost?" Skyler playfully said.





"Cody, who is Noah talking to?" Blake asked as he watched the video footage.

Cody stopped cleaning his Beretta and got up and walked over to Blake. He looked at the video footage that was playing, his cousin was having a conversation with a woman.

"I'm not sure sir, do you want me to go down there?" What was Noah doing? We were here to take and capture Jose Soto, we were on the look out for that woman him and Whitman saw the other night.

"No need, we'll check her out right now. Whitman get me a camera that over looks the bar area and run a facial on the woman next to Noah."

"Sir, its just a woman he's talking to, nothing more. You know Noah." Cody added.

"Have you forgot what we're here for?" Blake questioned Cody.

"No, sir. I want this bastard just as much as you do."

"Then lets do our job, I don't care if he's a cousin now, just as I don't care that you're my brother-in-law now. A job is a job, Cody, and right now his head is not in the game, I don't know if you've noticed but he's distanced himself over the past two days and I plan to find out why."

"Yes, sir."

"Whitman, do you have a facial yet?" Blake asked.

Blake noticed, why hadn't he? Even Whitman noticed, he was the first one to point that out and yet he still hasn't noticed. Really he hasn't given Noah a thought the past two days, he's been too distracted with Blake, plotting and finding every little detail they needed to catch Jose Soto, maybe if he wasn't so focused on that he would have noticed? He should have noticed, Blake noticed, he noticed everything though.

Blake was in charge of everything and soon he would be too, he would have his own team to watch and take care of and here he was missing something so simple, he couldn't make that mistake again.

"Whitman, I need that facial now." Cody ordered.

He didn't bother looking at Blake, he could feel his gaze on him.

"Cody, you're not going to like this." Whitman said in a shaky voice before glancing at Cody and Blake.

"What is it," Cody and Blake said at the same time.

They looked at each other before looking at Whitman once more.

"Its that woman we followed home, the same one, I'm sure."

Cody leaned down and looked at the picture and cursed, it was the same woman. This whole time she's been talking to Noah and they didn't even know it, Noah didn't know it and if he didn't stop he was going to fucking ruin the mission.

"Get Noah out of there now," Cody demanded.

"No," Blake ordered.

"Whitman, find what you can on that woman and why she has anything to do with this, Cody said he has a feeling that she is in on this."

"Gut feeling sir," Cody muttered.

"Get on it, Whitman. Cody, get over here and observed what I've been watching the past ten minutes."

Cody followed Blake back to the video footage and stared as he watched his cousin talk to the woman, he's never seen Noah smile like that.

"Watch and observe." Blake ordered as he sat down in his chair.

Cody did watch, he observed Noah and couldn't believe he didn't notice earlier, the way his body language was, the way her looked at her, she had his undivided attention and she didn't even know it. Why did it have to be her? Of all the woman he picked up, it had to be this one who made him start thinking about things.

"He's going to ruin everything sir".

"I say otherwise, we don't know how things are going to go, Jose wants her, he's going to want to watch her and observe before he makes his move, he's going to follow her home again. This time Noah's going to be with her."

What? "Sir, I don't see how that’s going to fucking work, he'll see Noah as a challenge, he'll stand clear of that woman."

"I disagree, it will be a challenge, he'll see that and want her even more." Blake tried to reason, Cody wasn't going to let this go, he could tell, not when it involved Noah.

"I know things are different now, we're family but don't fucking put him in the middle of this. What if something happens to him?" Cody yelled.

"He's a fucking soldier Cody, this is his job, he'll agree, look at him." Blake stood up and pointed at the screen. "If he wanted just a fuck he would have had her ready to leave the damn club in under ten minutes, he's giving that woman his full attention, his undivided attention, so many women have passed by him, trying to grab his attention and he didn't give them a second look, this ones different, whether you see that or not. He's fucking doing this and if I have to I'll make it a damn fucking order. I'll give you a damn order to stand down or do I have to go as far as taking you off this mission?"

"No, sir." Cody muttered.

"Go cool off, that’s an order."

"Yes, sir," he muttered as he stocked over to the door and slammed it shut.

Blake heard Whitman clear his throat. "What do you have for me Whitman?"

"Get Cody in here, he needs to hear this too."

"I say, if he needs to hear this too."

"It somewhat involves Bailey sir."

"Go on." Blake ordered.

Whitman sighed and turned his attention back to the computer. Blake walked over to the screen and hovered as Whitman explained.

"Her name is Sklyer An Sommer, she served with Bailey in Afghanistan when Bailey did her last tour."

"That was over a little year ago, what does that have anything to do with her? So they served together."

"Sir, they were in the same platoon, under the same Commander."

"Doesn't mean anything."

"She reported that she was assaulted, attempted rape is on her file."

"Go on."

"The report wasn't filled when it should have been, she reported it before she left Afghanistan and then Bailey was raped."

"What do you mean? Why did she leave?"

"She was assaulted, she got a call that her sister had passed so she came back to the United States, almost two weeks later Bailey was raped and that attack happened. The reason why it didn't get filled, I have no clue but it was too late to do anything about it."

"Go on," Blake couldn't believe what he was hearing, his sisters rape could have been prevented if they filled the repot when they should have.

"Skylers sister is Allison Grace Sommer, Jose Sotos last victim."

"Ok, Cody was right, she's made herself a target on purpose, everything makes sense now. What else do you have?" Blake asked.

"She's not in anymore, she did one more tour there but it was brief before she got out and now she’s after Jose Soto."

"This changes things. She’s going to get in the way of our mission, we have no choice but to bring her in this." Blake sighed as he started to pace.

"Whitman, turn on Noah’s ear piece and inform him of what’s going on."




Noah couldn't believe what he was hearing at this very moment. Skyler was the woman they were looking for and this whole time he’s been talking to her and didn't even realize that she fit the description he was given. Those honey colored eyes he loved looking at belong to a hurt woman, a woman full of rage, someone who was taking justice into their own hands, someone out for revenge.

He wouldn't have never thought that she was that woman, she didn't give off that vibe, it could be a front after all.

"Skyler why are you here?" he asked as he turned his full attention back on her.

"What-what do you mean?" Where was this coming from?

"Tell me why you're here."

"Why are you here? Why are you not alone Noah, I've seen your men watching us for the past ten minutes, why are they here if you are just out for business?" He was going to be the one to tell first, not her.

"Do we have ears listening?" he calmly asked.

Sklyer looked around, "No."

"We're after the same target, for different reasons though."

Sklyer swallowed and tried to keep her face composed, "Soto is your target?"

"Yes, we've been tracking him and you're a problem now."

"Problem? How am I the fucking problem?"

Noah looked at the barmaid and then Sklyer, "Keep it down, don't cause a scene."

"My commander is willing to bring you in on the mission under his orders of course."

"I have my own agenda and it does not include you or your SEAL team, so I decline." Skyler slid off the bar stool.

Noah gripped her arm and pulled her close, "You don't understand, you don't get a choice. Either you accept and you're in or he'll take you out of the situation so you don't get in the way. So if I were you I would think about it." Noah released his grip and gave her a little shove.

Who the fuck was this guy? What happened to the sweet SEAL she was just talking to? Sklyer took one last glance at him before exiting the club and running right into a body.

"Sorry," she muttered.

What was he talking about, she didn't have a choice, she always had a choice and no one was going to take that away from her, not some SEAL or a fucking SEAL team. The nerve of that guy, Skyler sighed heavily as she got into her car.

Damn SEAL, thinks he can tell her what to do, over my dead body. Skyler turned on the radio as she pulled out of the parking lot. She was so angry she hadn’t even realized what she was listening to, this was the first time she heard a Taylor Swift song in a years time.

She raised her hand to change it and hesitated, she took deep breathes as she listened. She should leave it, this was ridiculous, no it wasn't, she suddenly thought. This is normal, she told herself, wanting nothing to do with things that reminded her of her sister Allison.

Skyler sighed and gripped the steering wheel once more, she listened to the damn song and it was taking everything she had not to cry and change it.


After thirty minutes of driving she pulled into her drive way and got out. She checked her door knob and noticed the piece of hair was still in place, she took it off and opened her door slowly.




“Are you watching this? Look at her, I don't know why so doesn't want in, she's making a mistake if she doesn't joining.”

“I see her,” Noah was watching her every move. How can she not accept the offer? Sooner rather then later she'll realize that she has no choice.

Noah took a glance at Cody, he looked so serious as you stared at Sklyer’s house. “What are you thinking about?”

Cody moved his gaze to Noah and looked at him, he noticed for the first time how relaxed he looked, his guard was down and he didn't look so up tight as usual. Was this all due to the woman in the house, his cousin barely knew the woman, as far as he knew.

“When did you meet Skyler?” Cody asked him.

“I asked you a question first.” Noah pointed out as he looked away, turning his attention back on Skyler’s house.

“I don't think you want to know what I was thinking,” he wouldn't, Noah wouldn’t like him pointing out that he didn't look up tight and a bad ass anymore, he looked more like a softy now, strange how he could just change like that. Who was this woman?

“Fair enough, I met her a few days ago. I was running on the beach and literally ran into her. I didn't know who she was until tonight I swear.”

“I know you didn't know, none of us knew. I just hope she realizes that we're not going to go any and let her have her way, she doesn't know what’s at stake, she’s too concerned about her revenge that she doesn't realize his brother is a drug lord and the real mission.” They both sighed as they watched the lights turn off in the house.


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  • CAliGirl1809
    02.12.2012 06:38
    Sorry for the very last part, I don't know why its like that.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2012 11:12
    Yaayyy you put it up !!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2012 11:13
    Thank you for posting! Amazing as per usual!

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  • Physlcian
    02.12.2012 12:28
    Great like always. I love your stories cause I never know what your going to do next. I can't wait for more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2012 18:25
    It was great! Can't wait til the next part.

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  • angieslover
    02.12.2012 19:07
    geat story, yea the "A" are showing in all stories and the whole site is acting wierd stories not updating and new stories not uploading into sytem in a timely manner

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2012 22:47
    So good like always (:

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.12.2012 23:22
    Can't wait for the next part and as good as usual!

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    02.12.2012 23:47
    I love your stories,

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.12.2012 07:48
    love your stories can't wait for the next

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.12.2012 17:01
    part 4 hopefully soon :) but it's ok otherwise we know you have a life

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 13:04
    what A's are you guys talking about? I got no odd A's in the story. a story that I am enjoying very much by the way

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 22:17
    All the A's are gone now

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2012 14:54
    Can't wait for part four !!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2012 16:59
    Wonderful! but please don't make them mad at each other :( but then again it's your story! Loved it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 17:15
    For how long we waited, I feel like this part should have been longer. But I hope you upload a new part quicker. Overall, a good story!ðŸ‘u008d

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 23:40
    I agree with the person below me we waited a couple weeks I think even a month and a half Well ur computer was broke so but this part could have been a little longer not like the whole story long just a little overal great story!!!;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2012 23:20
    Hey, ignore the last 2 people, your stories are amazing and part 3 of this series was great, I can't wait to read part 4 and all of your future work, you have a fan for life right here :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2012 23:42
    Could you tell us when you think You will put part four up ? I don't want to rush you though

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2012 13:30
    Amazing as usual! Haha can't wait for next part'

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  • CAliGirl1809
    09.12.2012 19:17
    Some time this week I'll put it up, maybe by Friday. I have a paper 10 page paper that's due on Wednesday and I've been working on that but as soon as I'm done then I'll finish part 4, its half way through I just stopped because of my paper, I'm sorry guys but its coming soon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.12.2012 23:28
    Thank You for telling us (:

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2012 16:10
    YAY! Thank you for tellin us!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.12.2012 21:30
    Do u think it will be up by tonight???!?!?!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.12.2012 21:56
    R u going to put part 4 up tonight

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  • CAliGirl1809
    15.12.2012 01:16
    I'm almost done with it but I'm now also working on three papers my professor just assigned, I'm sorry guys, I really am.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.12.2012 12:59
    Do your papers first school is more important

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.12.2012 14:35
    It okay just hope its up soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2012 22:35
    When r u going to put part four up ? I miss your stories !!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2012 23:43
    I ligit re-read all those stories and I stil get horny reading them there amazing I hope u continue because your young u have a long life left to live I aleays look forward to them
    !!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.12.2012 20:59
    Can't wait til part 4. :) Take your time!!! :P

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2012 00:48
    I hope part three is up soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2012 22:06
    Person under me do u mean part four

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.12.2012 23:52
    Could u tell us when u think part four will be up ???

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2012 13:58
    When's it going to be up??? I can't wait!!:) love your stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 01:14
    Happy new year CaliGirl!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 21:02
    I would kill for part 4 !!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.01.2013 22:45
    I don't think she's going to finish, I mean she said it would be up weeks ago and she hasn't posted anymore comments to say what's going on.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.01.2013 01:39
    Let her take her time. We don't know what her lifestyle is like so we just have to wait! Take your time CaliGirl!:)

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 08:00
    ur ryt. I dnt think she wont b finishng it. im not mad,jst wondrng.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 08:54
    ur ryt. I dnt think she wont b finishng it. im not mad,jst wondrng.

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  • CAliGirl1809
    11.01.2013 17:25
    I'm still writing, I'm sorry I've been busy.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 19:18
    Thanks for telling us. :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 15:40
    its fine thanks for letting everyone know :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2013 22:44
    I don't think she is going too finish. I used to check everyday and now I barely ever look.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2013 17:12
    I dont think its going to be up here anytime soon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 21:52
    I think it'll eventually be done, just not anytime soon! I'm hoping I'm wrong though, cause I really miss reading her stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.01.2013 21:52
    I think it'll eventually be done, just not anytime soon! I'm hoping I'm wrong though, cause I really miss reading her stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.01.2013 15:04
    obviously she isn't going to post it until she has "time". what a joke. not only did she write a short and chopped story for chapter 3 but now she hasn't bothered to post the next chapter. even when she does it will probably be just as half assed as this one. many of us were devoted fans checking every day. now i'm going the same way as the other fans she has lost. I won't be bothering to check for a new chapter again.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.01.2013 17:25
    Just give her time. If we act this way she won't post anything.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.01.2013 13:53
    It be a month we should just expect the worst by now

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.01.2013 19:55
    Really wanna read more of your stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.01.2013 21:31
    I wish she would do another story

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.02.2013 02:25
    Wish she would post something

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.02.2013 20:03
    I hope she writes soon, I understand she has school but surely she can post a comment informing us, she is losing all her fans.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2013 13:45
    Its starting to annoy me.
    She shouldnt be surprised if she comes back or if she writes another part, and if a lot of people dont read it.
    Its so stupid to start something and to not finish it.
    Im done waiting. She defiantly lost my attention and good vote on her stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2013 14:01
    She lost me as a fan.
    Im not checking anymore.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.02.2013 19:05
    Maybe some of her talented readers should write it for her like fan fiction

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.02.2013 23:09
    Wish she would say something

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.03.2013 11:29
    if some of you hadn't already realized she had a shitty attitude toward her fans from reading her comments in her first series, you sure know it now. she pissed off a lot of people, look at how low her ratings are. that should be a clue

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.03.2013 09:10
    Let her write it n her own time I mean she has school which is way more important than this so guys just think bout it she'll put it up when she done with it

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.03.2013 22:55
    Maybe if ya'll weren't so negative nelly she'd feel movivated to make more...

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.04.2013 00:21
    As much as I hope she makes a part four it as been months since this part and she hasn't made any comments

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2013 19:50
    It's because of the negativity
    She should ignore them, her are awesome and worth the wait.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.04.2013 19:51
    * her stories are..

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.04.2013 17:33
    Really want this to continue

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.04.2013 04:03
    Yea according to the forums she's occupied with some guy from off here. Phone sex and all that jazz so she's gone *shrugs* oh well I guess

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2013 12:45
    Hoping you will be back soon

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2014 03:31
    Awesome like all the ones before it!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.08.2014 20:16
    This story is great. All of your stories are great. When you think about writing more, please continue this story and do a spin-off of The Boy Who Lived Down The Street. Keep up your good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.03.2016 06:51
    Please continue this .......

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