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Chris and Christie

Author: theblackknight

Date: 4 December 2012

Consensual Sex, Fiction, School, Teen

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Chris and Christie

I had known Christie my whole life, and to hear our folks tell it, I had been in love with her too. They say that I used to follow her around like a little puppy dog. Whenever mom couldn’t find me, she’d go next door to their house, and sure enough, I’d be wherever Christie was, just watching her. They once found me curled up under her bed while she napped.

They would tell these stories to anyone, while I would blush madly and stare at my shoes, but who could really blame me? Blue eyes, blonde hair, Christie was the epitome of the all-American girl next door, while I was the all-American geek.
I had asthma, so I couldn’t run around, and had no interest in sports whatsoever. I was into my computer and on-line role playing, while she was a gymnast who converted to cheerleading after her boobs became a liability on the balance beam.

As we grew up, we gradually grew apart, but had always remained friendly. She was two years older than me, and kind of looked out for me at school in a way. She basically told the jocks to leave me alone, and they did. Whenever I would be doing yard work out back, she would chat with me over the fence as she was sun bathing. I always took the chance to steal glances at her in her bikini whenever she wasn’t looking. I came to enjoy those Saturday afternoons. I couldn’t help but notice that she had developed, so my life-long puppy love got infused with pre-teen lust. Those long afternoons idly chatting with her actually helped me develop the social skills to talk to girls my own age and not come across like such a total dweeb.
By that point, Christie was starting to date, which secretly crushed me, but I also understood that I had no shot with her.
In the middle of my 8th grade year and her 10th, things changed quite a bit. She started dating a Senior, who was the school god. Football and baseball star, she was so giddy that he asked her out. She was the envy of all her friends, and was now more popular than ever. She was bouncing up and down when she told me.
“Can you believe it? I mean, he’s a Senior, and soooooo dreamy!! He’s taking me to Josh McDaniel’s party on Saturday night, this is going to be soooo cool!!!”
I nodded. “Yeah that’s pretty cool, I guess….”
“Pretty cool??? It’s awesome!!!”

That Saturday night, I watched as he picked her up with a heavy heart. I got online and started chatting with a few friends, when I struck up a conversation with a girl in my grade. We hit it off pretty well, she was a bit of an outcast, like me, so we got along pretty well.

As the months went by, she and I chatted a lot online, and started hanging out after school. One Saturday, Christie called to me across the backyard fence.
“Who’s that girl I saw leaving the other day?”
“Sylvia, she’s in my class.”
“Is she your girlfriend?”
“She’s my friend.”
“So do you like her?”
“I guess so.”
“Then why don’t you do something about it?”
“I wouldn’t know what to do.”
“You kiss her.”
“I’ve never kissed a girl before.”
As I said this, Christie leaned across the fence, grabbed my face in her hands, pulled me to her, and kissed me full on the lips.
I was stunned. I had always wanted to kiss her, but this was unexpected. I just stood there while she softly pushed her tongue against mine.
She finally pulled away. “Well you have now.”
She turned and walked back inside.

So the next time Sylvia and I hung out, I kissed her.
“What the hell?!?!?” She angrily shoved me away. “What do you think you’re doing?”
“I like you, and I thought…” I lamely began.
“You thought wrong, I don’t like you that way. You’re cool and all, but you aren’t my type.”

“Not her type? What is her type?” Christie looked puzzled.
“I dunno. Not me, I guess.” I shuffled my feet.
“Well, don’t worry about her. She wasn’t that cute anyway.”
I looked up at Christie, exasperated. “Come on Christie, look at me. I don’t have girls throwing themselves at me.”
She seemed a bit put off. “Well still, I didn’t like her.”
Now I was getting annoyed. “You didn’t like her? You didn’t even meet her!!”
“She looked wrong. Too mousy. You can do better than her.”
I threw my arms up and laughed. “Well the only two girls I really talk to are you and her.”
Christie laughed. “Chris, you’ll always be my baby.”
Just then her phone rang, and she answered excitedly. “Hey sweetie!” She waved good bye to me, and walked inside, chatting with her boyfriend.

The news of my attempted make out session with Sylvia had made the rounds, making me the laughingstock of the middle school. Sort of. As further proof of how pitiful my life was, none of the popular kids even knew who I was, and the gossip had died out by mid-morning, whereas when the cheerleaders had mooned the track team, that had kicked off an entire week of drama. So the year was drawing to a pitiful close.

About a week later, I saw Christie on a Friday afternoon on the sidewalk, and she looked like she had been crying. When I asked her what was wrong, she began to sniffle.
“Mike broke up with me. He said that he wanted to spend more time with his friends now that his Senior year was ending, and he didn’t want to be tied down.” The tears started flowing.
“Gee, I’m sorry …. I guess he’s a jerk.”
She glared at me. “Don’t say that.” She hissed. “You don’t know what you’re talking about. You don’t understand love, you’re just a stupid little kid.” And with that, she turned and ran into her house.
I stood there, bewildered, before finally walking next door.

The next night, as I was lying in bed, I heard a tapping at my window. I went to investigate and discovered Christie there, with a bottle of vodka in her hand, and in a foul mood.
“Mike is a jerk!”
“Ummmmm.” I didn’t want to piss her off again. “What happened?”
“’Spend more time with my friends’, my ass!!!! That fucker was hooking up with Lisa Meyers tonight at the party!!! That slut!!! I hate them both!!!!” She took an angry pull from the bottle and leaned up against the window sill.
“Let me in!” She angrily demanded.
Not wanting to make her any angrier, I opened the window and she clambered inside.
I fumbled for the light switch and sat back on my bed.
She leaned against the wall, drinking from the bottle and muttering dark curses about the two of them.
“Goddam skank. Hope she enjoys him, he’s got a tiny dick anyway, and doesn’t know how to use it.”
I sat there, unsure of what to say. I guess I figured the two of them had to have been doing something, but it was still difficult to think of her having sex with someone else.

As I was thinking this, I took a good look at her. She had her hair hanging down straight to frame her face. She was wearing cowboy boots and white denim short-shorts, with a multi-colored striped top. The blousy material hung loosely on her C cup boobs.
The dark scowl on her face did nothing to take away from her pretty features. She took another swig from the bottle. I began to fantasize what it would feel like with her lips wrapped around my dick. I was starting to sprout an erection, and tried to hide it by scooting around and crossing my hands in my lap.
She noticed my movement and glared at me. Her eyes glanced down at my crotch, and locked there. She looked back up at me.
“Are you hard? Do you have a boner right now? You little perv, checking me out and getting wood!” She angrily spat at me.
She stalked to my bed, grabbed my hands, and yanked them out of the way. The erection in my pants had completely tented my shorts. She seemed captivated by the sight.
“Oh” was all that she said. She eventually looked back up at me, the anger having disappeared from her face.
She seemed to be struggling with something, and then a look of steely determination came over her.
“Lay back.” She directed me. I dumbly followed her directions. She swiftly stripped my shorts down, airing out my dick.
I never showered at school, since PE was the last class of the day, so I didn’t really know how I compared to other guys, but Christie seemed impressed. She grasped and squeezed my hard-on, then quickly stripped off her shorts.
She climbed onto my bed, and straddled me.
“You can’t cum in me, ok?”
I stared at her, dumbfounded. Was she really about to fuck me? I had taken health, so I was aware of the mechanics, but had no real idea of what it would be like. My friends and I never really talked about sex, unlike the jocks who would often brag about their sexual exploits.
“Ummm, how will I know….?”
“You’re so cute. You’ll start to feel something in your balls. I’ll probably know before you do.”
With that, she grasped my dick, and guided it between her legs. She moved it around a bit with an annoyed look on her face, before she finally located the entrance to her pussy.
She took a deep breath and slowly began to lower herself onto my dick.

I felt like I was sticking my dick into a ….
I don’t know. It was warm, tight, and slick, and felt amazing.
“Oh my God.” She gasped. She was slowly lowering herself onto me. Every couple of inches, she would stop and wiggle a little bit, trying to get a little more of my dick into her.

I was going nuts. I began babbling at her.
“Christie, oh my God, I love you, this is amazing, I can’t believe this, oh, oh, oh.”
“Shhhh!!!!” She clamped her hand down on my mouth. I could feel my dick starting to twitch inside her, and a churning in my balls. I shut my eyes and groaned.
Christie leapt off of me, just as I began to spurt. Strings of cum shot out of my dick and 3 feet into the air. She made a face as she looked around at where it had splashed back down on my bed. “Yuck.”
She glanced back down at my prick, which was starting to deflate a bit, but was still rigid. She stroked me a couple of times.
“I’m sorry Christie, I didn’t mean to, I just couldn’t stop myself.”
“Shhhh, you’re still hard enough.” She whispered to me, and climbed back on me. She lowered herself onto me again, and began to slowly grind into me with a grimace.
“Jesus Christ, you’re huge.” She groaned.
“Really?” I asked. Like I said, I didn’t have anything to compare to.
“Oh yeah.” She replied. She kept rolling her hips around in a slow, rhythmic fashion. “Now be quiet, and let me concentrate.”
Having already shot my load, I was able to relax and enjoy the sight in front of me.
Christie was rolling her head back, and had pulled her shirt and bra down below her breasts. She was squeezing and tweaking her nipples while her hips slowly rotated on top of me. She was shaven, and her bare mound glistened with sweat. Our bodies seemed to be conjoined at the hips.
I reached up and put my hands on top of hers, and began to pinch her nipples. She smiled down at me, and placed her hands atop mine. She began to slowly guide my hands with her own. She gently guided my fingers around her nipples, and began to caress them.
“Be gentle, baby.” She told me. “They’re sensitive. Caress, don’t squeeze.”
So I followed her directions while she rode me. She soon slowed, and I felt her pussy start to contract around my dick. She began to flush.
“Ohohoh, here it comes” she moaned. “Oh, yeeeeessssss…..”
She collapsed on top of me, completely spent.
“Thanks Chris, I really needed that.”
She rolled off me and pulled her shorts back up. She glanced at my bed, splattered with my earlier ejaculation.
“You better clean that up, it would be hard to explain.”
“I’ve had wet dreams before, my mom knows it.”
She smiled at me. “Take a shower anyway, you smell like sex. And air the room out, too. Your mom may be used to stains on your sheets, but she’ll recognize this is a little bit more. You can’t tell anyone about this, you know that right?”
I nodded dumbly.
“See you later baby.”


I was nervous the next time I saw her, but she acted like nothing had happened, and never mentioned it. I didn’t know how to talk about it, so I never brought it up.
About a month later, I heard a tapping at my window again. Christie was outside, crouched in the darkness.
“Hey baby! Can I come in?”
This time she had a condom for me. Half an hour later, she rolled off of me, and was back out the window. “Don’t tell anybody…”

And so it went. Every couple of weeks or so, Christie would tap on my window, and then ride me until she came. Sometimes she would come before me, and leave me with an aching hard-on. She would teach me something new every now and again. She taught me how to pleasure her orally, how to rub her breasts without hurting them, and how to rub her clit while she bounced up and down on top of me. She had gotten used to the size of my dick, and was now able to drop right down on it. She was still tight, though. I had tried in vain to get a blow job from her, or to try a different position, but she wasn’t having any of that. She wouldn’t even let me kiss her.

At the beginning of the next school year, I joined her at the local high school, where she was a varsity cheerleader. I was a little bit nervous about the first day. I was a skinny little Freshman who didn’t play any sports, didn’t hang out with the cool crowd, and was generally considered an outcast. A prime target for jock bullies and all the other assholes who made themselves feel big by putting others down. I shuffled from class to class, before heading to lunch. I sat down out in the courtyard, away from everyone else, and began to eat my sandwich.
“Hey dude.”
I looked up.
Shit.
The guy was shaped like a refrigerator, and about the same size. He wore a t-shirt that proclaimed him to be a football player. About 5 yards behind him was a group of about half a dozen other players.
Great, I figured. I’m going to get hassled by some jock asshole on my first day.
I looked back down at my food.
He glanced round at his friends, who had shaped up in a semi-circle behind him.
“I said, ‘hey’.” He said, a little more emphatically.
I looked back up. I sighed inwardly. “Yes?”
“You don’t want to eat by yourself, come with us.”
I blinked a couple of times. “Ummm, no…. I’m fine here.”
“Naw, you’re coming with us.” He reached down, grabbed my arm, and hauled me to my feet, spilling part of my lunch. By this time, we had gathered a little crowd around us.
I glanced around, hoping to find an adult who could save me from what I was sure was a fate worse than death.
His next move gave me pause. “Shit man, sorry about that.” He reached down and gathered the food that he had spilled in one massive hand. “Well you don’t want that shit. 5 second rule, ya know? I’ve got some you can have.”
He draped a massive arm around my shoulders, and guided me into the crowded lunchroom. An open table beckoned to us.
“This is where we sit.” He plopped down, and I sat with the rest of the athletes, nervously glancing around, waiting to see what would happen. Glancing around, I could see all the other Freshmen were watching, and trying not to be too obvious about it. What was the loner loser doing with the football players?
They pretty much ignored me for the next 10 minutes while they wolfed down their lunches. Every now and again, they would pass me some food they didn’t want.
“Eat man, you’re too skinny.”

I was sitting there in a confused daze. I was certain that there was some practical joke going on here. Finally, the massive guy who had first approached me turned to me. Here it comes, I thought.
“So you’re Christie’s neighbor, right?”
I breathed a sigh of relief to myself. “Yeah.”
“Cool.”
“Hey man,” a black guy across the table leaned towards me. “Can you hook me up with that? That girl is fiiiinnnnneeeee.”
“Um, well, I, umm…”
The rest of the table burst out laughing.
“Dom, give it up man, she ain’t going for your black ass.”
“Hey man, you don’t know, she might not be as racist as the rest of you mother fuckers!” He turned back to me. “So waddaya say man, you gonna hook me up?”
“I’ll see what I can do.” I lamely said.
“Alright” he said, and grabbed my hand. He performed a little routine with our hands. I just stared at it, and the rest of the table burst out laughing.
“Hey man, you ever seen her naked?”
“What?????” This time, the table broke up with howls of laughter.
I thought to myself. Honesty might be the best policy, and it would probably shut them all up if I told them I had been fucking her for the past 4 months, but there was no way I could do that.
“Ummmmm. I don’t think so.”
“Oh come on, man. You telling me you ain’t ever peeked in her window while she was changing? Shit, I’d be camped outside her window every night. Hey, can I come over to your house to watch her change?”
“Umm, no…. I don’t think that I could do that…”
The rest of the guys broke down laughing.
“Alright man, leave the kid alone, he ain’t no fuckin’ perv. Come on Dom, you’re going to corrupt him.”
Dom just winked at me. “Naw man, I’m just messin’ with you. She still fine, though.”
“Hey, so Christie says that you’re really good with computers, that true?”
I spent the rest of the lunch helping one of the guys with his laptop, and talking video games with them.
It was actually kind of nice, and I found myself re-appraising my opinions of jocks in general.
Sure, they were big, and they played football, but there was more to them than just that. My friends and I had always just dismissed jocks as one-dimensional, but these guys sure weren’t.
One was also the class valedictorian, and was weighing offers from several Ivy League schools. Another played bass, and another wrote for the school newspaper.

As I left, they took my phone number and told me to join them again the next day.
That night, there was a knock at my window.
Christie was outside. “How was your first day?”
“Fine.” I replied. “I met a bunch of football players at lunch.”
“I told the boys to take care of you, I’m glad.”
“Dom wants me to put in a good word for him with you. He thinks you’re fine.”
She laughed. “Dom thinks every white girl is fine. I ain’t messing with him, he’s already got a kid, and I don’t want no baby mama drama. His girlfriend would cut me.”

She climbed in the window, and started pulling her shorts off…

My year started going pretty well. Thanks to Christie, I was somewhat plugged into the school’s social scene, although the guys didn’t invite me to any parties, but I wasn’t really interested in that scene. They did call me to hang out on weekends to play video games, and I helped them with their computer problems after they picked up viruses while downloading internet porn. I could tell that I was a quasi- part of the group when I could bust on them for that stuff, and they didn’t threaten to kick my ass.
I even started going to football games to cheer for them.
I only had a problem once, when some dumbass Freshman football player gave me a hard time in class. I don’t know what happened, but the next day, he was waiting by my locker to apologize to me. He was shaking. As he left, I looked around, and down the hall I saw my group watching. They waved to me and walked off.

Finally, at the end of the football season, Aaron, the big guy who had approached me on the first day, spoke out of the blue. “Chris, you need to get a girlfriend.”
“Umm, do you think so? I don’t really know any girls.”
“Fuck, you have class with them don’t you?”
“Yeah, but I wouldn’t know what to say to a girl.” I protested.
Big mistake. I was immediately inundated with advice that seemed completely off the wall, and often contradictory.
“Compliment her.”
“Ignore her.”
“Insult her, but not like a dick, make it sound like a compliment, but it’s really not.”
“Act like you don’t know who she is.”
“Act like she’s the most important person on earth.”
None of this made any sense.
“The last girl I liked turned out to be a disaster.” I told them about my experience with Sylvia.
“What a bitch.”
“Fuckin’ cock tease.”
“Chris, you come with us.”
I was swept along with them as they walked to the edge of the patio. Aaron cast his arm across the open space, wherein scores of Freshman girls sat. “Pick one out.”
“Aaron, it doesn’t work like this.”
“Sure it does.” He pointed to a cute little girl. “How about her? Do you know her?”
“Hailey. She’s in English with me. No, Aaron!” Too late, he was already walking towards her, tugging me along with his arm draped across my shoulders.
“Hey Hailey.”
She turned, eyes wide with surprise. “Um, yes?”
“I’m Aaron.”
“I know. Everyone knows.” Her friends giggled behind their hands. Aaron may not have been the school god, but he was pretty damned close.
“You know my boy Chris, right?”
Hailey glanced at me. She had pretty much ignored me all the years we had been in school together. She was a Freshman cheerleader, part of the popular crowd who barely knew I existed. “Ummm, sure. We have a class together.”
“So you’d go out with him if he asked you, right? He’s a cool kid, really smart, even if he doesn’t apply himself.”
Dammit Aaron, fucking class valedictorian would occasionally get on me about my grades.

Hailey looked at me, clearly uncomfortable with this situation. Her friends were laughing at her predicament.
Aaron looked back at them. “Any of you girls would, isn’t that right?” The laughter stopped. They all sat there in mortal terror that one of them would have the spotlight shone on them.
“Hailey, it’s ok, you don’t have to go out with me, I’m not asking you, Aaron’s just joking. “
I punched Aaron in the shoulder. It was like hitting a log.
“No, it’s ok, I want to go out with you! Let’s go to the movies on Saturday.”
“Umm, ok. Let me get your number….”
I got her number and quickly beat a withdrawal. As Aaron and I left, we could hear peals of laughter, followed by a fierce, “Shut up!!!” from Hailey.

“Goddammit Aaron, why did you do that? She doesn’t want to go out with me!”
“Relax Chris, you just need to get the first date out of the way. It gets easier.”
“Well, I just about died of embarrassment. There isn’t going to be a next time.”
“Damn straight. Next time, I’m not asking for you.”
I groaned. “I hate you.”

After school, I was on my computer when I heard a horn honk, and my name shouted out. I looked outside and saw Aaron and Dom sitting in Aaron’s truck.
“Come on man, let’s go.”
“Where to?”
“We’re going to get you fixed up. Can’t have you going out with a cheerleader looking like that.”
I looked down at my clothes. “What’s wrong with how I look?”
They rolled their eyes. “Get in the truck, we ain’t got that much time.”
2 hours later, they dropped me off, complete with some new clothes, and a new haircut that actually made me look stylish.
Christie was pulling into the driveway as they dropped me off.
“Hey Chris, hey guys!”
“Hey Christie.” Dom started chatting her up, but she just laughed him off. She turned her attention to me.
“Hey check you out, you’re looking pretty fashionable.”
“Gotta have him looking good for his big date.” Aaron explained.
“Oh really?” Christie looked me up and down. “Who’s the lucky girl?”
“Hailey. She’s in my English class.”
Aaron pulled away. Dom leaned out the window. “Chris, you better tap that fine young cheerleader ass, after we put all this effort into it.”
I waved them off. I turned back to Christie’s raised eyebrow.
“Hailey? Freshman cheerleader Hailey?”
“Ummm, yeah….”
“I don’t know. She doesn’t seem your type. She’s a ditz.”
“It’s not like I really know her. Aaron kind of set it up, and I couldn’t get him to stop.”
She crossed her arms as she scrutinized me. “Well, it’s not really my business. Have fun, I guess.” And with that she turned and went into her house.

The next day, Hailey approached me at my locker.
“Chris, can I talk to you about this weekend?”
“It’s okay Hailey, I know this wasn’t your idea, you don’t have to go.”
She looked relieved. “Thanks Chris, I knew you’d understand.”

That night, Christie climbed through my window, stroked my dick once or twice, unrolled a condom on it, and started to ride me hard. She seemed angry.
“Fucking bitch. She doesn’t know what she’s got here.”
I was a little confused, but wasn’t going to interrupt her. After all, she was bouncing up and down on my shaft.
She stopped her bouncing and rotated her hips, grinding her clit against my pelvis, and letting out a slow moan.
She glared down at me.
“You owe me.” She started moving faster, trying hard to get off quickly.
She soon succeeded, making me rub her clit as she rotated on my dick.
She gave me one last glare, and practically spat at me.
“And you better not fuck her!”
I stared at her in utter confusion as she climbed off me and started pulling her clothes back on.
“What are you talking about? Do you mean Hailey?”
“Fuckin’a I mean Hailey. I don’t want you fucking her. I don’t even want you touching her, got it?”
“But Christie, we aren’t going out, I called it off.”
“I know. I called it back on. You’re going to the movies on Saturday, and you’re going to be a perfect gentleman, understand me?”
“Christie, you can’t do that!” I protested.
“Oh yes I can!!” She emphatically responded.
“Well this isn’t fair!!! You make her go out with me, but then tell me what I can and can’t do???? What the hell, Christie?”
She stared at me for a moment. “You’re mine. Mine, understand me? And I’m not sharing you with anyone.”
“Yours?” I sputtered. “I don’t belong to you. You’re not my girlfriend. Hell, we don’t even go out, you just sneak in here when you want sex!! You won’t even let me kiss you!! This isn’t fair!!!”
She glared at me. “You think that I can’t get sex from anyone I want? Are you kidding me? Fair???? FAIR?!?!?!? Kiss you??? You should be grateful that I even acknowledge your existence, you don’t exist without me!!! I made you!!! All your friends at school??? They’re because of me!! Your ‘date’ on Saturday? It wouldn’t be happening without me!!! You’re nothing, NOTHING without me!!! One word from me and it would all disappear!!!! So don’t you fucking cross me!!!”

I was stunned. I had never heard her say anything remotely mean to me in a serious fashion, this was just devastating to me. The girl I had adored all my life had basically told me that I was worse than dirt in her eyes. I could feel the tears spring to my eyes.

“And don’t even think about threatening to tell anyone about what we’ve been doing. Do you think that anyone would believe that I would be fucking a total loser like you? Or I could just tell people that you raped me.”

And I thought that what she had said before was cruel. I was devastated. I just couldn’t believe my ears. Tears started flowing down my face.
She spun around and climbed out my window.
I cried myself to sleep that night. It may sound odd, a guy crying himself to sleep, but Christie had always been my dream girl, my special friend, and over the past several months, my lover.
As I lay there however, I started to think.
We weren’t really lovers.
She came over when she was horny.
She didn’t care whether or not I came.
She made me go down on here, but never sucked me off.
I was her dildo, for all intents and purposes.
She had called me a loser.
I always knew that was what all the cool kids called me, if they could remember me. But she had never treated me that way.
But she had said it.
I was a loser.
And I was heartbroken. And I didn’t have anyone that I could talk to about it, because Christie was the one I always talked to.
Fuck.

The next day, Hailey saw me in English class.
“Listen Chris, this Saturday will be fine, we can go to the movies.”
I looked up at her. She was clearly hating this.
I looked down and mumbled,
“I know you don’t want to do this Hailey, I know that Aaron embarrassed you into it, and Christie is making you go through with it. Let’s just forget about it, ok?
“No,” she said. “Christie said that you’re a really sweet guy, and that I was making a huge mistake by not going out with you. I want to know what she sees in you.”
She blushed as the words came out of her mouth.
“Ummmmm. I didn’t mean that to sound as bitchy as it did…”
I looked up at her. She shuffled her feet and looked uncomfortable.
“Okay. I appreciate you giving me a chance.”
She turned and walked towards her seat before she turned back towards me.
“I like your haircut. It looks really good on you.”
“Thanks.”

The rest of the week went on. The guys didn’t treat me any differently, so Christie obviously didn’t say anything to them. They quizzed me about my plans, and how I planned to make my move.
Dom was insistent that I try to get at least a blow job. Aaron suggested that a handjob was a more achievable goal, while Joel, the writer, opined that feeling her titties was a more reasonable expectation.
I looked at them with some exasperation:
“Guys, live in my world for a second. God only knows why, but any of you clowns can get a girl to give you a blowjob under the table right here! It doesn’t work like that for me!”
They laughed.
“Chris, you need to have a little self confidence.”
“Yeah dog,” Dom interjected. “What I do, is I just whip out the Black Mamba, lean back, and wait for the girls to come running.”
I looked at him incredulously. “Is that why you have a criminal record?” I queried. The boys broke up laughing at this.
I glanced across the lunchroom and locked eyes with Christie. She looked down and tucked a stray hair behind her ear. I turned away.
“What’s up with you and your girl?” Dom asked me.
“She’s not my girl. And nothing.” I said quietly.
Aaron looked back and forth between the two of us and thought quietly for a moment.
“She may not be your girl, but she’s something to you, and there’s something going on.”
I froze for a second.
Aaron just kind of shrugged. “But that’s chicks for you. Just get Hailey to jack you off in the movies, and you’ll be fine.”

Saturday afternoon came, and I met Hailey at the mall. We stopped to grab a bite at a Mexican restaurant before the film. It was kind of awkward at first, and Hailey had insisted that we go to a mall that was further away from our homes, so that she wouldn’t be embarrassed at being seen in public with me. A week earlier, that would have stung, but after what I had gone through with Christie, it barely registered.
She actually turned out to be a pretty nice girl, even if she was a bit of a ditz.
She admitted that our entire grade was puzzled that I had been accepted by the Varsity football Seniors. Everyone was wondering how that could have happened.
And the situation with the punk Freshman football player had astounded everyone. He had been bragging during football practice that he had bitched me, and apparently my friends had gotten wind of it. They surrounded him at his football locker afterwards, and made it clear, in no uncertain terms, that if it ever happened again, he was going to be used as a tackling dummy by them. As a matter of fact, it was all just a big misunderstanding right? He probably didn’t mean anything by it, right? Why he was probably anxious to go apologize to me to show that there were no hard feelings, right?

I just shrugged and said that Christie had told them to look out for me.

As I mentioned Christie, her eyes kind of widened.
“Is she like, related to you or something?”
“Nope. She’s just my neighbor.”
“Did you guys used to go out?”
I almost choked on my water.
“Are you kidding? Why would she go out with someone like me? We’re just neighbors. I’ve known her all my life.”
“Well, the way she talked about you, I got the impression that she had some strong feelings for you. She really wanted me to go out with you today. She told me all sorts of wonderful things about you.”
I blushed, remembering my last conversation with Christie.
“Well, she probably exaggerated pretty badly. I hope I can live up to it.”

We chatted a bit more, then went to the theater. As the lights went down, she looked me over. “You know, you’re actually kind of cute. In a nerdy kind of way.”
“Thanks, I think.”

As the movie played, she kind of leaned into me, but I wasn’t really sure if it meant anything.
As we left, we wandered around the mall. We had met for an afternoon showing, that had made it seem a less “official date”, but it had also given us some time to kill. As we walked, we talked about all sorts of things, and I realized that she was really a very sweet girl.
We finally came to rest on a bench outside. She turned to me.
“You really are a nice guy. I’ve gone out with a couple of other guys, and all they wanted to do was grab my boobs, or try to get me to touch their junk. Gross.”
I was silently thankful that I had lacked the courage to follow though on my idiot friend’s advice.
As her ride pulled up, she thanked me and left. As she got to the car, she turned to me. “Would you like to go out again next weekend?”
“Really? You want to go out with me again?”
She shyly looked at her feet and nodded her head.
“I think it would be nice. Do you IM?”
I nodded yes. She scribbled something on a scrap of paper and handed it to me.
“Here’s my contact information.”

Monday rolled around, and the guys grilled me about my date.
“So come on, how far did you get?”
“My money’s on second base.”
“Nope, my man got to third.”
I looked at them. “Are you assholes betting on my date?”
Aaron nodded. “I bet that you only held hands.”
I stared at the ground. “Actually, we never even touched.”
“Oooooohhhhhhhh!!!!!” Everyone turned to see what was going on.
“I knew it!! I knew it!!!! My boy couldn’t do it!” Joel put his arm around me. “Thank you young sir, your gallant ways have won me the pot.”
I stared as they each pulled out $5 and handed it to Joel.
About this time, Hailey walked up to our little gathering.
“What’s going on here?”
“There she is!! Queen Guinevere to our noble Sir Galahad! Welcome m’lady.”
Joel made a ridiculously exaggerated bow.
I burned with embarrassment. “They were betting on what would happen on our date.” I explained.
She arched an eyebrow at me. “I see. And what did you tell them?”
“I told them the truth, that we never touched.”
She thought for a moment. “Well that’s not entirely true, I cuddled up against him during the movie, but he didn’t push it.”
OOOOOHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Really????? Chris, you’ve got to recognize the signs man!!! I bet you could have gotten to 2nd base!!!”
Hailey whirled on Dom. “Eeeeewwww, you’re gross!! But I tell you what; Chris is too much of a gentleman to do that. That’s why we’re going out again next weekend, and you guys can’t get decent, self-respecting girls.”
She clasped my hand and led me down the hall while the guys dissolved in laughter.
“Chris, you the man!!!”
“I’m awfully sorry about that.” I told her.
“That’s okay,” she replied. “They’re boys, that’s what they do.” She smiled at me. “But I like you, you’re different.”
In the meantime, we were attracting quite a few stares. The cute cheerleader and the oddball loner, who wasn’t quite a loner.

After school, I got hijacked on the way to the bus. The guys grabbed me and led me to the weight room.
“What am I doing in here?”
“Chris, you’re going to start lifting weights.”
“Um, no. Not my thing.”
“Chris, trust us. There’s going to be guys who are pissed off that you’re dating cheerleaders and they aren’t. You need to be able to take care of yourself.”
“But I’m not dating anyone. And Hailey is just one cheerleader, and we’ve only gone out once.” I protested.
“Doesn’t matter. You need to put some muscle on. And Hailey will like it. “
That piqued my interest. “You really think so?”
“Absolutely. Another 20 pounds on your skinny ass, and she probably would have raped you in the movies instead of just cuddling with you.”
I got to work.

As the year progressed, things really fell into place for me. Hailey and I saw each other on a regular basis, and I guess we were officially dating. The guys oversaw my training, and I filled out and toned up. I wasn’t an Adonis, but I also didn’t look like I would blow away in a swift breeze. Joel was an all-State wrestler, and he taught me how to look out for myself, while Dom, the ferocious linebacker, taught me how to deliver a hit.

The only dark spot was Christie. We hadn’t spoken since the night she broke my heart, and we barely acknowledged each others existence on the infrequent occasions when we did see each other around. When I would work in the back yard, she would even get up and go in the house.

One spring night at the movies, Hailey had swiped some rum from her mom’s liquor cabinet. She poured it into her soda as the movie started, and got progressively touchier as the film went on. We were seated in the back of the theater, and it was almost empty. About halfway through the movie, the few remaining patrons had left. The movie was terrible, which was part of the reason we had chosen it.
Eventually, Hailey started to rub my inner thigh while we made out. She started rubbing her hand higher and higher, until she brushed the tip of my dick. Then she started to gently rub up and down on it. I was a bit surprised; we had “accidentally” brushed against each others private parts a few times before, but this was the first time that either one of us was ever openly intentional about it. As I quickly grew to my full length, she stopped and broke our kiss. She looked me in the eyes, then looked down at my crotch. She looked back at me, then slipped her hand inside the waistband of my pants and grasped my dick. She started tracing her hand up and down the length of my shaft.
“Oh my God.” She finally said. “This is ….. huge.” She slowly started stroking me up and down inside my pants. It felt fucking amazing, but I knew that I wasn’t going to last long under her ministrations.
I grabbed her wrist and stopped her. “You’re going to cause me a problem.”
She looked at me, took my hand, and placed it directly on her boob. She leaned in to continue our kiss, and continued stroking me.
I went back to the lessons I had learned from Christie. I slipped my hand underneath her shirt and bra and cupped her bare breast. I caressed, I didn’t squeeze. I gently tweaked her nipple, and she moaned into my mouth. She jumped back, looked into my eyes, and then ran out of the theater.
I waited for a few minutes for my hard on to subside, and then I followed her outside.
She was sitting on a bench, rocking back and forth and crying a bit as she spoke into her phone.
She quickly hung up when she spotted me. She came up to me and hugged me.
“I’m sorry babe, I really am. I really care about you; it’s just that I’m not ready yet.”
“It’s ok.” I told her. “We don’t have to do it, we can just fool around a little.”
“No, we can’t.” She sniffled. “Because once we start fooling around, I won’t be able to stop myself, and I’m just not ready.”
I was flattered, frustrated, and horny, all at the same time.
Her mom had arranged to pick us up later, but she called, told her that she wasn’t feeling well, and we needed to be picked up now.
As we waited outside, she leaned against me. “Are you mad at me?”
“No.” I replied. I don’t want to pressure you or anything, but…. It’s tough. I don’t even think I can sit here next to you without wanting to screw your brains out.”
And that was true. Slender and petite, Hailey was a flier on the cheerleading squad. Her dark brown hair and green eyes gave her a slightly exotic appeal.
“Have you screwed anyone else?” She asked.
“No baby, I’ve been faithful to you.” I told her.
“I meant before me.” She asked.
This gave me pause. What the hell did I do from here?
“Yes.” I finally said.
“Really? Who?”
Now I had to tread carefully. “No one you know. It was a girl I met on vacation. We snuck off together one night.” It seemed plausible; I just hoped that she wouldn’t pry any further.
“I’m not sure I like the idea of you doing it with anyone else.” She pouted.
“I’m sorry.” I told her.

At that point, her mom pulled up and we headed off, bringing our conversation to an end.

I lay in bed that night, sexually frustrated. So I knew that Hailey wanted me, but I also knew that she wasn’t going to give it up to me. Which meant that if I wanted relief, I was going to have to either use my hand, or find someone else. I knew that my chances of finding another girl weren’t actually bad. Dating Hailey for the past few months had really enhanced my reputation, along with hanging with the Senior group. My time in the weight room had also paid off. But I really didn’t want to break up with Hailey, and I knew that screwing around on her wouldn’t stay quiet for long.

I was aware of some movement outside of my window. Suddenly it popped open, and Christie crawled in.
I sat straight up. “What are you doing in here?”
“I want to talk to you.”
I lay down and turned my back to her.
“Well I don’t want to talk to you. And I think that you said everything that you had to the last time we spoke.”
Christie slipped into bed behind me and snuggled up to me.
“Hailey called me tonight. She told me what happened. She’s really upset.”
“That’s none of your goddam business.”
She reached her arm around me and grasped my prick. “She was also very impressed by your dick. I had to keep from chiming in when she described it to me.”
I turned towards her. “Christie, you can’t tell her.”
She looked into my eyes. “Relax. I didn’t tell her anything. Although I have to say, your ‘vacation fuck’ story is a little bit thin. You may need to come up with something better, or at least more detailed.” She had begun stroking me by this point. “I’ve missed you.”
I turned back away from her. “Leave me alone.” I snapped. “I don’t want anything to do with you. Besides, I thought you said you didn’t want me fucking her.”
She kept stroking my dick. “I was upset last time, I’m sorry about what I said.”
“Maybe so, but you can’t take it back. You called me a loser. I hate you for that.”
Christie pressed up tight against me. She actually let go of my dick at this point and clasped her hands across my chest.
“Baby, I’m sorry. Can you forgive me for that?”
“I’m not your baby.” I snarled. “And no, I can’t.”
“Yes, you are my baby.” She replied. “You’ve always been my baby. Ever since I came over here and your mom let me hold you. You were only a couple of weeks old. You’ve been my baby ever since, and you always will be.”
I had seen the picture of that day. I looked like a red raisin, peering up at the little blonde toddler, my beady little eyes locked with her angelic blue ones.
“No.” I told her with finality. “Get out of here.”
I heard her sniffle a little. Was she crying? Fuck it, I didn’t care.
“Go on. Leave. I don’t want to see you ever again.”
She released me from her grasp, and crawled out of my bed. As she stood over me, she bent down and kissed me on my cheek.
“Goodbye, baby.”

I barely saw her after that.
Even after the guys had graduated and moved on, I continued weight training, and found a new group of friends. With a stunning cheerleader girlfriend, and a decent body, I was starting to get invited to parties.
It was at one of those parties that Hailey and I had sex for the first time.

My friendships from the previous year had introduced me to guys on the current team, so I was invited to the big football parties. And it was at a football party that it finally happened. I had gotten there a little bit late, separately from Hailey. She was already buzzed when I got there.
“Babe!!” She greeted me with a kiss as I walked in. “I was getting lonely and bored. Some dirtbag tried to seduce me, but I remained faithful to you!!” She winked at me and danced off into the crowd. I went looking for a drink, but the keg was already floated, and in the process of being replaced. I was told that there was a cooler on the deck. As I walked outside, I discovered that the deck was empty, except for one person sitting on the cooler. Christie. It was a little bit awkward, as cheerleaders both Hailey and Christie moved in similar social circles, so we were all occasionally at the same place.
I had finally gotten used to seeing her in these situations, and merely nodded at her. “You mind if I grab a beer out of there?”
She gazed at me. “I really don’t want to give up my seat.”
“C’mon, don’t be difficult.”
“I could say the same to you.”
I opened my mouth to protest, then gave up. “Never mind, I’ll find another.” I went back inside and plopped down on a couch.
Hailey was dancing up a storm, shaking her ass and pumping her fists in time with the beat. I sat back to enjoy the show. She was one hell of a dancer.
Christie came in and sat down on the arm of the couch, draping an arm across my shoulders and one of her legs between mine, she handed me a beer.
“Tonight’s the night.” She told me.
“What?”
“Tonight’s the night she wants to give it up to you.” She gave my shoulder a quick squeeze. “Think of me when you pop her cherry.” And with that, she got up and left.
I was a bit startled to say the least. Why the hell would Hailey be talking to Christie? And why on earth would she tell her something like that, I didn’t think that they were very close.
After a while, Hailey danced off the floor, grabbed my hand, and hauled me upstairs. As I glanced back, I saw Christie gazing at me intently.

We found an empty bedroom and Hailey dragged me in, locking the door behind us. She flung herself into my arms, and I fell back on the bed as we shared a passionate kiss. This wasn’t too uncommon, we’d make out for a while, feel each other up on top of our clothes, and then stop before things got too heated. I had managed to sublimate my urges by finding some girls across town to let off some sexual steam with, girls that Hailey would never meet.

But this seemed different, Hailey seemed insistent. She broke our kiss and looked at me with raging lust. I returned her stare. She was dressed in tight jeans and a black, low cut top which displayed her cleavage. She sat up abruptly and pulled off her shirt to reveal a lacy bra, which quickly joined her shirt on the floor. I gazed at her.
“Are you sure?”
“I’m sure babe. You’ve been great about waiting and not trying to pressure me. I’m ready.” She felt my cock through my jeans. “And it feels like you’re ready, too.”
I stripped in record time as she struggled with her jeans. They were so tight, her skimpy panties got pulled down as well. There was a condom in her hand. She stood there with a tiny landing strip above her tight pussy slit. Her lips were already puffy, and glistened with her juices. She was staring at my cock, transfixed by it. I had since measured it, and it stood at a proud 8 inches.

I stared at her perky breasts, proudly upturned with no sag. Her bright pink nipples jutted upward on her B cup breasts. I lowered my head to one of them, and gently took the nipple between my teeth. With my right hand, I gently caressed the breast I was nibbling, and my left hand traveled down to her pussy. I gently rubbed a finger up and down her slit, briefly dipping inside of her. Fuck, she was tight. Her knees buckled and she fell against me as she had several small tremors run through her body. Her hands pawed at my cock.
“Babe, I don’t want to wait any longer, I want to feel you inside of me.”
She laid down on the bed and spread her legs, rubbing her fingers in and out of her slit.
“Ummm, this may be a little painful for you.”
“It’s okay babe, I’ve been practicing. I got some sex toys and have been working to open myself up a bit.” She reached toward me and unrolled the condom onto me.
I laid down between her legs, and started to gently run my dickhead up and down her slit. She gasped as I popped the head inside of her.
“Are you sure? “ I asked her.
Her eyes snapped open and she glared at me. “I’ve been waiting for this for almost a year, stick it in me.”
She wrapped her legs around me and tried to pull me deeper inside her.
“Oh shit.” She stopped and squirmed a bit.
“Just relax babe.” I slowly began sliding my dick in and out of her, leaving it in for a few seconds each time, letting her adjust to my girth. She was so wet, she was practically squishing. I gradually worked my way up to her hymen. When I felt the resistance, I backed off a bit.
“Here it comes.” I warned her.
She opened her eyes. The lusty look in them couldn’t quite hide her apprehension, but she was determined. She bit her lower lip and nodded.
I pushed through, and she let out a shriek and grabbed me close.
“Oh fuck!!” She gasped. I could feel her pussy pulsating around my dick, buried deep inside her.
“Don’t move babe, just hold still.” She gasped. For several moments, we just lay there entwined in each other, her pussy spasming around my cock. She eventually began pushing her hips up into mine.
“Ok, go slow now.” She whispered.
I did, and she started to get into the rhythm, gasping and moaning. By this point, juices were flowing out of her and had coated both of our groins. She was bucking up against me uncontrollably. I took my thumb and pressed it against her clit, and started to stimulate it. Her eyes rolled back in her head, and she shuddered as she came. I thought her pussy was tight before, now I thought I had my dick in a velvet vise. I gasped and shot my load into the tip of the condom before collapsing on top of her, then rolling off.
“Oh God, that was amazing.”
“It was worth waiting for, wasn’t it?”
“Oh yeah.” I replied. “Of course, it would have been just as good last year.”
She gazed at me. “No it wouldn’t. We didn’t love each other then.” I leaned over and kissed her. At that point, a disturbing thought ran through my head. I was looking at Hailey, but I was seeing Christie. What the fuck?

We eventually got re-dressed and headed back downstairs. She kissed me and went to find a drink. I plopped back down on the same couch to catch my breath. It wasn’t much of a surprise when a beer appeared in front of me. Christie perched back in the same position that she had before, and stared straight ahead.
“Did you think of me when you took her cherry?”
“No.” I replied. “But I thought of you when we were done.”
She smirked at that. “I told you that you would always be my baby.” And with that, she got up and left.

After that, sex became a regular part of my relationship with Hailey. She was an experimental little minx, and liked a little bit of danger mixed in. For some reason, quickies in the middle of the day thrilled her. I wasn’t exactly complaining, but we had a couple of close calls that left me panicked, and left her hot as a firecracker.
We cut it really close at one of her cheerleading competitions. She dragged me into the bathroom, pulled her bloomers and panties down, leaned back against the wall, and lifted her leg above her head.
I just stood there, dumbfounded. What an awesome sight. Her toned and tanned legs rippled with muscle, and her shaven mound glistened with desire. The deep tan on her legs was set off by the delicious pink of her pussy lips.
“Chris!!!” she hissed at me. “Come on, we don’t have much time!!”
That snapped me out of my stupor. I dropped my pants, stepped forward, and impaled her on my shaft.
“OHHHHH MY GGGOOOOOOOODDDDD!!!!” She moaned. She had grown accustomed to my size, but she was still tight, and this position made her little pussy even more snug. I started to settle into her, briefly stopping to rotate my dick inside her, but she grabbed my neck and pulled my face to hers. She planted a hot kiss on my lips and hissed at me. “Don’t have time babe, pump it hard!!”
So I pumped it hard. She squealed with pleasure, and then almost immediately started cumming. I kissed her hard to silence her cries.
Shortly after, I looked into her eyes. “I’m cumming, babe.”
She nodded, and pushed me away from her. As I stepped back, she dropped to her knees and immediately took my glistening cockhead into her mouth. She had tried, God bless her, she had tried to deep throat me, but had been unable to do it.
Despite this, she was an enthusiastic participant in oral sex. The first time I had gone down on her, I almost died. She clamped her thighs around me head and damn near suffocated me, then practically broke my neck as she began thrashing around with her legs still wrapped around my head. It had taken all of my strength to pry myself loose.

We had a couple of close calls when we were just too horny to take proper precautions, and her next period had been a little bit late in coming, so she had started being really strict about things. We could still fuck without condoms, but I had to let her know when I was cumming, and she would go down on me and swallow my load.
Which was where she was currently at.
Down on her knees in a bathroom stall in the city convention center, her panties around one of her ankles, both hands wrapped around my shaft, jacking me off. Her luscious lips were wrapped around my dickhead, sucking at it. Her head bobbed up and down in short, sharp movements, as she kept taking the tip of my dick into her mouth. She whirled her tongue around my head as she sucked me in and out of her mouth. She gazed up at me with her green eyes, her hair set off with a big bow, looking so innocent while performing such a depraved act.
I lost it right there, grunting like a caveman and shooting thick wads of cum into her mouth. She took it all, swallowing as she went, her eyes never leaving my face. My knees went weak, and I collapsed back against the wall. She still had my cockhead in her mouth, with that innocent little girl expression on her face. She slowly pulled her head back, ssslllloooooowwwwwly letting my spent prick fall free. She smacked her lips.
I roughly hauled her to her feet, and kissed her passionately.
“Fuck your cheer competition.” I roughly whispered into her ear. My hand sought out her slit, and I began rubbing her pussy lips around the outside of clit, providing indirect stimulation to her.
“I’m going to take you out and fuck you right in the middle of the floor in front of everybody.”
I grabbed her by the hand, and started to drag her out of the door.
“Wait, wait!!!” She called. “My panties!!! Chris, I’m half naked!!! And so are you!!!!”
“Oh, yeah.” I mumbled.
She giggled, pulled her panties back up, kissed me quickly, and ran out the door after checking to see that the coast was clear.
She almost missed her call time, and her coach was furiously looking for her as she raced out there, yelling that she had been in the bathroom….
Well, it was true…..
She went out and performed flawlessly, glowing the entire time.

The odd thing was, we actually did most of our fucking while half dressed, I don’t think we ever saw each other completely naked more than half a dozen times. We actually fucked quite a few times with her in her cheerleader uniform; it got to the point where whenever I would see those uniforms, I would start to get an erection.
And we rarely fucked in a bed. On top of desks in empty classrooms, in bathroom stalls, behind the bleachers a couple of times, on school busses a couple of times, on the hoods of cars…. Sex in unusual places, in unusual positions became our M.O. One time, she came into the weight room while I was working out, pulled my shorts down, and rode me while I was laying on the bench press.

As the year came to an end, I walked into our living room with Hailey after school one day. My mom turned to me, holding a card.
“Christie is having her graduation party this Saturday, what do you want to get her?”
I had barely seen Christie during this year, our conversation the night Hailey and I first had sex was the most we had spoken in over a year.
“Ummm, I hadn’t really thought about it. Besides, I think Hailey and I will be busy on Saturday….”
“Now Christopher,” my mom began, “you’ve known Christie your whole life, you used to have such a crush on her, you have to go.”
“Mmmmmoooooommmmmmm….” I groaned. Why in the world would she say that in front of my girlfriend?
“It’s ok.” Hailey piped up. “I think its cute how you had such a crush on her and used to follow her around. Besides, she and I are friends, we’ll definitely go.”
I blushed and covered my head with my hands.
“Ohmigawd mom, WHY do you have to tell everybody that?”
“What? Oh sweetie, it’s so cute how much you used to like her.” At this point she turned to Hailey. “It was so adorable; he would just follow her wherever she went. Why one day when he was three, he went running down the sidewalk after her when she was riding her tricycle. His little legs got to moving too fast for him, and he tripped and fell. He skinned his knee and started bawling, and Christie turned around and came back for him, and offered to kiss him to make it all better. Why I tell you, that stopped his crying immediately.”
“Mmmoooooommmmmmm…..” my head was in my arms on the kitchen island. “Hailey’s my girlfriend, she doesn’t want to hear that.”
Hailey just giggled. “I think that’s sweet.”

So Saturday came, and we were headed to Christie’s.
It was pretty busy, so it was easy to melt into the background and avoid her.
I eventually had to use the restroom, so I headed into the house. Their guest bathroom was occupied, so I used the one in her parent’s bedroom.
As I stepped out, Christie was leaning back against the sinks. I walked by her to wash my hands.
“Congratulations on graduating. Where are you going to college?”
“Duke. I have a scholarship.”
I nodded. “It’s a good school, congratulations.”
She looked at me. “You and Hailey look really cute together; she’s been good for you.”
I nodded gruffly. “Yeah. How about you, you been seeing anyone?”
She looked at me with a pained expression. “Once upon a time, you wouldn’t have had to ask me that.”
“Times change.”
She leaned her forehead against my temple and ran the back of her hand down my cheek.
“Baby……”
“Stop Christie.”
She gently kissed me on the cheek and left the room.

Towards the end of the summer, Hailey and I broke up. Our relationship had run its course, and we parted as friends. We had a quickie in the laundry room at a house party the night we broke up.
“For old times sake.” Hailey suggested with a twinkle in her eye. I grinned back at her, and then kissed her hard as I bent her backwards against the dryer. I spun her around and yanked her booty shorts down her legs. Her slit was already glistening. I grabbed her hair and pulled her head back as I growled in her ear.
“No panties? Naughty girl. I think someone was looking to get fucked tonight.”
She giggled back at me. “Do me hard babe, I’m a bad girl.”
I unrolled a condom on my cock and started smacking her ass with it.
“Oooohhhhh, don’t make me wait, push that big thing into me.”
“Not yet, if this is going to be our last fuck, I want to make it last a while.”
“Who said it has to be our last fuck? Just because we aren’t dating doesn’t mean we can’t fool around from time to time. What if I get loooonely?”
The way she drew out the last word, combined with the way she was rolling her hips around drove me nuts.
I kept tapping out a little beat on her ass with my cock. “Bad girl. Bad, bad, girl.”
I rubbed my cock up and down on her slit. She was so turned on, her juices were running down her legs.
“C’mon babe, put it in and pump it hard.”
I lined up with her moist opening, and shoved forward.
“Ooohhhhhhhh!!!!!! Mmmmmmmhhhhhhh!!!” Hailey gasped at my forceful entry. Despite 10 months of being stretched out by my cock she was still a tiny girl, and was still really tight, but she enjoyed the forceful feeling as I burrowed into her.
“God, I love it when you just shove that thing into me. It makes me feel …. Naughty.”
She leaned forward on the dryer, and dropped her head.
I grabbed her hips, and started plowing into her. Even though our breakup was mutual, I still felt a bit miffed about it, and had to get some aggression out.

“Uhhn! Uhhn!! Uhhn!!!! Oh God babe, oh God!!!” You could hear whispering outside the door. It wasn’t exactly a secret that the two of us were sexually active, and it didn’t take a genius to figure out what was going on. I could hear the muted laughter of several girls.
I leaned forward and whispered in her ear.
“What if I get lonely?”
She tossed her head back, flinging her soft brunette hair into my face.
“I don’t think that’s going to be a problem for you, you’ve been so good to me, plenty of girls will want to date you. And I may have mentioned once or twice how big your dick is.”
“Well just in case you forgot….” I drove deep inside of her, and then slowly rotated my hips, scraping the walls of her pussy with my cock.
“Oh God.” She clamped down on my dick with her pussy walls, her orgasm overtaking her. She stood there on shaky legs while I kept pumping into her.
“Are you close babe? I don’t think I can stand much more.” She whispered.
“Just a little bit.” I had a little surprise in store for her. I had been staring at her athletic ass for months, and had started to wonder about sticking my dick in it. It wasn’t exactly something we had ever discussed, and I had never really thought about asking her, but I figured that since we had already broken up, why not?
I pulled out of her, pushed her down flat on the dryer, and pushed my dick against her sphincter.
“Wait, babe, what are you doing?” She started to panic a bit.
“Call it a goodbye gift.” Her ass was so tiny, I really couldn’t hope to get my dick in there, and besides, I didn’t want to hurt her.

I pressed just a little bit of my cockhead into her ass, and felt her sphincter give way to the intrusion.
“No, no, no!!!!” She cried.
“Shhhh, babe it’s ok, I won’t hurt you.”
With just the tip of my cockhead lodged in the ring of her anus, I started rocking back and forth. She took a deep breath and let out a low, guttural moan. She begin quivering, and that sensation on my dick pushed me over the edge. I shot into the condom, throwing back my head and shouting.
There was the sound of cheering outside the door.
I gently extricated the tip of my dick from her ass.
Her upper body lay flat on top of the dryer, her legs dangling off the edge. She was moaning softly.
I bent down and kissed her on the cheek and gently stroked her hair.
“Are you ok?”
“You asshole” she moaned “ooohhhh, I won’t be able to sit down for a week.”
“I’m sorry babe. It was just something I wanted to try.”
“Yeah, well you could have at least asked me first. That was like having a baseball bat shoved up my ass.”
“And that was just the tip.” I pointed out.
She pushed herself up and turned to face me. “Yeah, well if you had tried to get any more of that log up my ass, I would have cinched down and cut it off. You know I’m strong enough to do it.”
We shared a laugh and a kiss.
“So you aren’t mad at me?”
“No babe, but I may warn the other girls now.” She laughed at me, pulled her shorts back up, and walked out of the laundry room to cheers from the people outside.

Samantha, a pretty blonde, leaned against the door and eyed my dick as it hung between my legs.
“So Chris, I hear you and Hailey broke up. What are you up to this week?”

The next two years of high school were unremarkable. Despite breaking up with Hailey, I still maintained my popularity, and the fact that Hailey didn’t say anything bad about me afterwards helped out. The time we had spent together had given me confidence, and I became more outgoing, and even joined some clubs and organizations at school.
Christie was right, Hailey had been really good for me.

I dated various girls, fucked quite a few others, and occasionally hooked up with Hailey for quickies. Our Senior year, she was competing in a National Cheer competition being hosted in our town, and she begged me to come support her.
When I got there, she dragged me back into that same bathroom for a repeat performance.
At the time I was dating someone, and tried to turn her down, but she wouldn’t take no for an answer.
“Listen babe, the last time I won the competition, so I figure that you’re good luck. Besides, this is tradition, and you don’t want to let the school down, do you?”
How could I do that? This time, she sat me down on the bowl, bunched her panties to the side, and rode me like a stallion for 10 minutes.
“Ohhhh, fffffuuuuuuucccccccckkkkkkkkk!!!!!”
Just then, the door burst open.
“Hailey, we’ve gotta go, no time!”
Her team captain Nicole grabbed her by the arm and literally pulled her off of my cock while Hailey was in the middle of her orgasm.
“Damn you Nicci, I wasn’t done!!!”
“Well you’re going to have to be satisfied with what you got, we’re on right now.”
Nicole turned back towards me, looked my dick up and down, and then smirked at me.
“Call me.” She mouthed.
They won the competition.
And I called Nicole.

As high school came to an end, I was kind of at a loss for what to do, so I enlisted in the Marine Corps. I figured a few years in the military would give me some direction.
I shipped out the week after graduation.

I did a couple of tours in Iraq, and was honorably discharged at the end of my 4 year term. I returned home to see my family, and enroll in college.
On the way home from the airport, my mom kept prattling on about things. Hailey was getting married to some guy she had met at Ole Miss, old Southern family, plantation house, the works.
“And Christie is back in town.”
I had barely seen Christie since she left for Duke 6 years ago. Her family usually was visiting relatives over Thanksgiving and Christmas, Spring Break was a College party tradition, and her summers she spent on various internships or study abroad programs.
And after I had enlisted, I hadn’t been back but a couple of times, and never when she was in town.
“She just finished up her Masters, and is home visiting. Isn’t that wonderful? Oh it will be so much fun for you two to get back together, I remember when you would follow her around….”
“Mooooommmmm…..”

But Christie wasn’t home when we arrived and my mom dragged me next door.
“Oh! Christie will be so disappointed!! She’s out on a date tonight.” Her mom told me. “That’s ok.” I replied.
Her mom walked over and swept her arms around me. “Chris, I’m just so grateful that you’re home safe and sound. Why, when Christie found out that you had deployed to Iraq, she cried her eyes out for two days.”

Later that night, I lay in bed in my old room, enjoying being home and not having to deal with the insane heat. Combat tours tend to make you hyper-sensitive to your surroundings, so I could hear footsteps crunching outside my wall. Then the fiddling at the window before it popped in.
Christie gracefully slid inside my room and stood looking at me.
“Hello baby.”

The moonlight streamed in after her, highlighting her magnificent body. The light cast a shadow of her feminine figure through her thin slip. She was no longer a teenager, she had filled out a bit, but was still remarkably fit. Her breasts seemed fuller and rounder, and her hips more pronounced. Her hair shone in the moonlight.
I was quite simply stunned.
“Christie.”

She flung herself on top of me, took my face in her hands, and kissed me passionately. She pulled back, looked deep into my eyes, and leaned back in for more. After several minutes of heated kissing, I was starting to feel a stirring in my cock. She could feel it too. She sat back, smiled shyly at me, and pulled her slip off over her head. She scooted down the bed, yanked down my shorts, and devoured my dick.
I was shocked. She had never done that in the time we had been having sex, never even humored my suggestions or hints, but here she was, gobbling me down like there was no tomorrow. She sucked the head like a lollipop while she stroked the shaft, then began licking up and down the side, before moving down to my balls, and taking each one individually into her mouth, and gently swirling her tongue around them.
After several minutes, she looked up at me with her big blue eyes, and took my dickhead in her mouth. Still maintaining eye contact with me, she started to go down further on my dick. As she got about halfway down, she closed her eyes and tried to take me down her throat. She would push a bit, feel the resistance, and start to gag a bit, before sliding another inch or so. Then she managed to get all of me down her throat, and started bobbing her head up and down on me.
I groaned, and Christie pulled off of me. She slowly crawled up my body, her eyes locked on mine the whole way, like she was trying to hypnotize me. She came face to face with me before she sat back, took my dick in her hand, and guided me to her pussy. I had a brief flashback to the first time we had done this, nearly 9 years ago.
Still staring into my eyes, she brought my shaft to her opening, rubbed it back and forth a couple of times, then slowly impaled herself on me. She gasped as I entered her, but never took her eyes off mine as she slowly settled all the way down.
She was still tight, and I could tell that she was struggling a bit.
As her pubic bone finally met mine, she let out a contented sigh, placed her hands on my chest, and then started to rock her hips back and forth in a steady motion.

Even though we hadn’t fucked in forever, I could tell that there was something different about this time, even if I couldn’t put my finger on it. She rocked back and forth, rotating her hips in a circle every now and again, all the while her eyes never leaving mine. She started picking up the pace, her hips moving faster, and her breathing quickened. Even though it had been years, I could still recognize the signs of her impending orgasm. She began gasping and whimpering, and then she shuddered, reaching her climax and letting out a low moan.
At this point, she surprised me. Back when we had been fucking, as soon as she reached her orgasm, she would roll off of me and leave, but this time she stayed on top of me. Her hips were still rolling a little bit, and as she recovered, she begin to speed back up. It didn’t take me long to reach my own climax. My breathing started to become labored, and as I closed my eyes and threw my head back, she grabbed my face, and brought it back level with her own.
“Stay with me baby, stay right here.”
My balls begin to boil, and I could feel that familiar tingle.
“Christie, I’m cumming.”
She clasped my face in her hands and looked deep into my eyes.
“Cum in me baby, I want to feel you cum inside of me.”
So I did, looking into her eyes the entire time.
She gasped as my first blast coated the inside of her vagina, pumping into her cervix. She trembled though the next couple of blasts, before her eyes grew misty and tears began to run down her face. She laid her head down on my chest and quietly cried.
“I’m sorry baby, I’m so, so sorry.”

I lay back and let her cry for a while, gently stroking her hair while my dick softened and slid out of her.
“Christie, what are you sorry about?”
She sniffled. “Because I fucked everything up. I was young, and I was stupid, and I fucked it all up.”
Between sniffles, it all came out.
How she had always loved me, but never was attracted to me.
The first night we had sex, it had been the furthest thing from her mind, until she caught sight of my erection, and figured out how big I was. More then anything else, I was a revenge fuck, a way for her to get back at her ex.
But after that, her life-long affection for me started to develop into something else.
The problem was, she couldn’t date a younger guy, especially someone who wasn’t cool.
How she was using me for sex, but couldn’t bring herself to admit her feelings for me.
How she hated herself for being so shallow.
How she got mad at Hailey because she saw that Hailey was rejecting me for the same reasons she was, and was angry at herself. So she pushed Hailey towards me, trying to make up for her own actions, but was still insanely jealous.
And finally, how all of her anger at herself came boiling out at me.
She told me that after she left me in tears that night, she had gone home and cried herself to sleep, realizing that she had hurt the person she loved most.
After that, she was too ashamed to talk to me, but she would ache when she saw me. And then to have me reject her was more than she could stand.
So she avoided me as best she could, but still tried to keep tabs on me through Hailey.
Then when I deployed to Iraq, she feared that she had lost me forever.
“All those years, we lost all those years that we should have been together, because I fucked everything up.” She sobbed.

I kissed the top of her head. “We’re here right now Christie. We’re together right now.”
I rolled over on top of her and kissed her deeply. She looked into my eyes with longing.
“You don’t hate me?”
“No. It was a long time ago, and like you said, you were young. We both were. Things may not have worked out then, but that’s in the past, and this is the present.”
And in the present, I was starting to get hard again. I was a bit surprised at my rapid recovery, but being overseas for so long kept me deprived of sex. She felt my cock start to stir against her leg, and she grinned at me.
“Already? I guess you really are glad to see me.”
This time, I slowly traced my way down her lithe form with my lips, planting tiny kisses on her body. I stopped at her breasts, and gently caressed them as I tenderly kissed her nipples.
She stretched back as I continued my way down, tickling her navel with my tongue before tracing my way down to her mound.
Unlike most girls, she actually had a neatly trimmed bush. I paused at that and considered that it was the first time I had actually seen something like that. All the other girls I had been with had tiny landing strips, or were completely bald.
I began to lightly kiss around her groin, never directly on her pussy. I took my hand and gently rubbed her lips up and down around her clit, causing her to gasp and moan. I took my other hand, hooked two finger inside of her and pressed into the fleshy patch on the front wall of her vagina.
She froze for a moment, and then let out a long, slow moan as her hips began to slowly swivel. “Chris, oh my Gooooooddddddd……”
I then pulled her lips apart, and sucked her clit into my mouth. She started jerking a little more erratically now, and her moans increased in frequency. I then began to lick her pussy with the flat part of my tongue, occasionally sucking her clit back into my mouth.
Her breathing was coming in short rapid bursts, and her hips were jerking up and down.
“Oh God baby, oh God oh God oh God, I’m gonna cum, I’m gonna cuuuuuuuummmmmm!!!!”
She threw her head back and let out a guttural moan that sounded almost animalistic. She rode the throes of her orgasm as she clamped her thighs against the sides of my head, and pulled my head against her pussy.

When she finally collapsed back, she looked at me in a daze.
“Wow…. That was even better than I remember.”
I grinned at her. “I got some practice after you. The lessons you taught me served me pretty well, and a lot of girls were really appreciative, and showed me even more stuff.”
She made a face. “I don’t want to think about you with other girls’, baby …. It was sheer torture listening to Hailey tell me about your sex life. I used to go home afterwards and fantasize that you were doing those things to me and masturbate.”
“You didn’t have to ask her about it, you know.”
She rolled her eyes at me. “Are you kidding me? She was so grateful to me for forcing her to keep that first date with you, I think that was her way of thanking me, letting me know how much fun she was having with you fucking her.”
I chuckled at that.
Christie pouted at me. “It was sheer torture, listening to her tell me how you took her virginity, how wonderful it had been, and how gentle and considerate you were… My first time was so awful, that asshole just climbed on top of me and shoved it right in with no warning, no preparation…. It hurt so badly, and he just pumped for like 10 seconds and was done…. I thought that it would get better, but it never did, and he was so popular, I didn’t know what to do, so I just kept hoping it would get better, and it never did. I started masturbating to figure out what made me feel good, because he sure couldn’t, and then he dumped me for that whore, and I came over and saw your dick …..”
She looked down, tearing up again. “Baby, I’m sorry.”
“It’s ok.” I reassured her.
I started working my way back up her body, lightly kissing as I went. I started right above her slit, and kept going.
Christie leaned back, bit her lower lip, and smiled shyly at me.
I started trailing pre-cum up her inner thigh, and I could feel her juices on my shaft.
As I drew even with her, I looked into her eyes and circled her pussy with my cock.
She closed her eyes and purred at me, rotating her hips in a slow movement. We kept circling one another, until she grew impatient.
“Stop teasing me dammit!”
I placed my cock at her opening and started to push forward, once again entering her velvety folds.
She started to whimper a little. “Oh God, you’re huge….. oh, go slowly.”
I started to use shallow thrusts, only putting about half of my dick in her, before bottoming out every few strokes and rotating. The first time I did that, she gasped and wrapped her legs around my waist. The second time. she dug her fingers into my ass cheeks. I reached back, grabbed her hands, and pinned them behind her head before interlocking my fingers with hers.
“Now I’m in control.” I whispered to her.
She opened her eyes and smiled at me. I was still pumping and rotating, but her legs wrapped around my hips kept me from withdrawing from her.
“Now that you have me here, whatever do you plan to do to me?” She asked in a little girl voice.
“Well” I thought for a moment before giving a deep thrust that made her gasp. “I thought I would pound you so hard that you couldn’t walk straight for a week. Or I may just take my time and be nice and gentle.”
She laid her head back, smiled and moaned.
“Or I may tie you to the bed and ravish you for a couple of days.”
She shuddered.
“Or I may spank you.”
She giggled at that.
“Or I may …”
I never got to finish my sentence. My bedroom door flew open and my light turned on. Christie screamed and tried to hide her face, but with my hands pinning hers to the bed, there was nowhere for her to go.
My mom stood in the doorway, hand over her mouth and eyes wide.
“Oh my word….. Chris ….. Christie??????”
“Uhhhh, hi mom.” I replied lamely. What else could I say?
Mom gathered herself as best she could.
“Well …… I must say this comes as a bit of a shock….. but I suppose at some point, I’ll be telling this story to your children.”
With that, she turned off the light, closed the door, and went down the hallway.
Christie and I stared at each other for a moment before we both burst out laughing.
“Now where were we?” I asked.
Christie rolled her hips, and pulled me tighter with her legs.
“Oh yeah, now I remember.”
And we kept making love throughout the night.


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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 00:49
    A EXCELENT AND TOUCHING STORY I RATE IT VERY HIGH I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING STORIES LIKE THIS 10/10

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 01:48
    ...this has to be the best story on the site. Except for the happy ending, it plays just like my first experience. Well done sir, well done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 02:19
    That was by far the best story I have read on this site to date. You had a great setup, and background. I really did enjoy his mom always telling about when he was younger that was really good. You should really keep writing this was truly a great story to read.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 04:41
    This was quite good. Since this site is nothing but honest, after I came I continued reading simply because I wanted to know the end. That is something you should be proud of. Not many stories can elicit such a reaction. Keep writing and consider doing more than publishing such work here. While there is certainly a limited audience for such literature, you certainly have something to show to the world. Good luck! I'll certainly be watching ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 07:37
    That was such a good story! It's got the basis of a good story with sexual content. I just wanted to keep reading as the story had me so intrigued on how it ended. Good work, you should be proud of your talent! Keep it up.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 08:01
    Mate that was the best story I have read on this site !! You have serious talent and to be honest I believe you should send this in to a film company because this is the perfect basis for a movie ! Keep up the good work and I will be looking forward to reading your future stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 12:59
    Great story u should of put a ending on it if they got married and had kids

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 14:56
    Best read I've had in a while

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 15:10
    make more of a story

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 15:43
    i have to say... I usually skim skim skim to the sex parts but ni stayed reading all the way through. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. sex throughout.. and story throughout.... qand based upon my upbringing in my neighborhood...thouroughly believable

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 21:46
    Excellent !!! Keep writing. You have real talent!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.12.2012 22:25
    This was amazing! I think you should be an author man and if this is all real you should write a biography about it full story honestly wondering though what made u want to post on this site?

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  • Push-up_king
    05.12.2012 23:11
    That was one hell of a story
    It was a big turn on

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2012 12:45
    Wow, this story was really really good. It was beautiful. Truly. It was emotional, comical, it had bad times, good times, a lot of emotions. I love how you wrote the story. The ending was pretty good, it was perfect actually, it wasn't the typical, but it also makes you hunger for more, like you wanna know what happens with them, how it turns out, but you ended it beautifully all the same. I hope you write more, and thanks for sharing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2012 13:41
    Superb story man.You know how to keep it REAL.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2012 18:21
    Thanks for the feedback folks, I really appreciate your compliments. I'm working on some other stuff, but this one I felt more compelled to write, simply because I like the characters, and wanted to make them likeable. Some other ideas I have in mind, the characters are more shallow and self-centered, or just plain mean, so I'm not really sure how well the story will turn out.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2012 18:22
    Thanks for the feedback folks, I really appreciate your compliments. I'm working on some other stuff, but this one I felt more compelled to write, simply because I like the characters, and wanted to make them likeable. Some other ideas I have in mind, the characters are more shallow and self-centered, or just plain mean, so I'm not really sure how well the story will turn out.

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  • theblackknight
    06.12.2012 18:23
    Forgot to log in the first time....
    Thanks for the feedback folks, I really appreciate your compliments. I'm working on some other stuff, but this one I felt more compelled to write, simply because I like the characters, and wanted to make them likeable. Some other ideas I have in mind, the characters are more shallow and self-centered, or just plain mean, so I'm not really sure how well the story will turn out.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.12.2012 18:44
    One of the best stories I have read in this genre. Very true to life!

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 01:01
    I must say this was the most amazing story I have ever read. I mostly read till I cum but this story I just kept going and going. I really think a book/novel would be great. Id diff buy it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 01:42
    please write a follow up to this story, it was amazing!!! <3

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 01:57
    There has to be a part 2

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 05:00
    Excellent - very well written.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 06:55
    This was the best story I had read. You rock, mate! I will be waiting for other stories of yours, Thank you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 12:54
    An amazing story. I was hard the entire story, but I was also drawn in by the fantastic work put into the story line and the build of the story. I hope to be able to read some more stories like this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 15:20
    Best story here. Believable and clean. Part two?

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 15:40
    Ladies only i_fuckwithu

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 16:23
    what the fuck man I came here to wank off but I was more interested in the story haha that was brilliant.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 19:12
    Wow! That was an epic story and one of the very few very lengthy stories to hold my interest all the way through. Just out of curiosity, I did an automated word count - 14, 809 words. This was extremely well composed and well written with an excellent balance between character development and erotic, descriptive sex. You also managed to keep it within the realm of believability. The story stands very well on its own without any need for a sequel. The only thing I disliked was the part about the intrusion by Chris’s mother near the ending. That, I thought was superfluous and distracting.

    I would urge you, in your future stories, to continue depicting characters that your readers can relate to with feelings of caring and compassion. That was definitely one of the strengths in this story. If the story had been centered around callous and cruel characters with selfish, uncaring behavior, I would not have been inclined to finish it.

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  • Mucker
    07.12.2012 19:27
    I just wanted to identify myself with the comment below 2012-12-07 19:12:25. When I submitted it, my login must have timed out.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2012 02:06
    FaZe was here FaZe ELiTE

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2012 08:44
    i like stories, true stories, not no fuck stories, stories bout love

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  • adamvarnhoff
    08.12.2012 12:54
    Not even kidding, not only is this the best story on this site I have ever read, its one of the best stories ive ever read overall. you have serious talent and please please please write a sequel to this, I want to know more about chris and christie and what lies ahead! mind you, if you do write a sequel, please don't rush it, I know it will be hard to match this but at least give it the same amount of care as you did with this one! great story man, good work!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2012 17:03
    so good plz keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2012 18:44
    I wish I could write like that

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2012 03:38
    I've never commented on this site before, cause I've never read anything on this site that I classified as true literature. You did an astounding job, I enjoyed the whole thing. I hope you will continue to write stories, and if you continue long enough to get published, (I'm pretty sure I speak for everyone when I say) please inform us.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2012 04:33
    this was truly amazing, kept my attention the whole time I was rooting for chris and christe

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2012 05:00
    Not exactly the sort of secret love story I'd expect on this site, but definitely one of the most innovative. The confession was a little sudden and I thought the ending was a little abrupt, but otherwise I'll say you have the chance to become one of the best writers on this site. VERRRRRY reminiscent of thephantomstallion, if you know what I mean.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2012 06:37
    Good God..!! I've never seen a talented writer on such a website like this. Why don't you step in to the main frame literature? It would be such a great thing for you and to the world of literature.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2012 15:39
    This could actually be a film.... or a novel like a dirty forrest gump it could be possible of being one of the greatest erotic film or novel ever, not just hid away like normal porn but admired like 50 shades of grey but ALOT better....

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2012 16:13
    All I can say is that, that is a fantastic story...there are loads of stories on this site that are shit compared to yours I was incredibly suprised on how good it is...you should think about publishing a book or something!...really good :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2012 21:17
    I cried a few times while reading this. Keep up the good work I hope you keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.12.2012 03:22
    oh my good god!! Am a nigerian and I hav read stories of sum so called best writer in dis site.. Well I really love this article.. Long and elaborate nt just fuck fuck fuck lile other stories.. It portrays love, emotion and so many things.. Thumbs up to d writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.12.2012 12:29
    The best on the site. God dammit

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.12.2012 07:50
    Absolutely and utterly fantastic this is without a doubt the best story I've read on this site. Please continue writing your stories they are truly amazing

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2012 00:57
    theblackknight you have writen the best stry I have ever read!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2012 17:41
    Probably the best or one of the best stories I've ever read. You should seriously try making a novel or something

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2012 19:52
    This gave me faith in humanity
    Also
    It's like an erotic, better. Version of the notebook
    Amazing

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.12.2012 20:02
    one of the few stories I kept reading when I finished, well done

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2012 11:45
    WOW...........................................................

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.12.2012 14:07
    Wow, fantastic story. Very well thought out.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.12.2012 17:44
    Awesome it was.......,.................,..............
    ................


    ........

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.12.2012 03:03
    I REALLLY loved the Entire Story. Even the ending I sorta was thinking about occuring as a possible ending. As I myself am a writer. And you DID add that thing in with his mother. It adds some Charm to the story.

    I suggest you write a PART 2 as I definately would LOVE to read more that you write.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.12.2012 16:42
    This is probably the greatest story I've ever read. Well done, and keep writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2012 00:15
    I love this entire story keep writing more PLEASE!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2012 07:02
    Awesome! The best i've read my entire life. Keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2012 09:06
    Write more. I know where you live and will kill you and before I kill you I will chop off your dick and balls and stick them in your mouth.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2012 11:33
    The comment below me is really creepy but this is the best story on this site by far

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.12.2012 16:56
    I loved the story omg can't wait for another .....please

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2012 02:36
    This story is completely mine literally, up until 9/10ths of the way through you tell MY (unwritten) story! Please, keep writing. I loved it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.12.2012 22:43
    Girls only! 765-251-0529. I'm 16

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.12.2012 04:36
    Holy shit! Best short sex/normal story i've read! Wow that storyline and the dialogue was just beautiful! :D

    Hope you write more because I'm officially hooked!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.12.2012 20:15
    The mom made me laugh!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2012 19:37
    Oh my gosh PLEASE make a part two to this story. It was amazing and you should be paid.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2012 19:38
    make part 2! this was great and the comment below me is right you should be paid. amazing story!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2012 21:29
    Lets Get this Part To going.!
    #Desil

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.12.2012 23:03
    WOW, WHAT A STORY, I THINK THAT THIS STORY SHOULD BE ONE THAT SHOULD LAST A LIFE TIME!!
    PLEASE JUST MAKE IT HAVE A GOOD, LONG ENDING, WHERE CHRIS AND CHRISTIE GET MARRIED, AND KEEP THE LOVE GOING...PLEASE.. SO THAT OTHERS CAN RELATE!!
    THANK YOU!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2012 00:32
    That was simply amazing you kept the momentum. Going throughout the entire story I would like to know where you got your inspiration. I hope there is more to come from you and. I have to say that you are the vest writer on this website

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2012 03:48
    Amazing story. Not just as an erotic little tale, but also as just a romance in general. I mean there was even character development and good grammar! Finally, a good story! Well done Sir! Well, bloody, done!

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2012 05:35
    Please write a number two! This was facinating. I read it twice.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2012 08:29
    Fucking hot story! Publish part 2 soon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2012 15:08
    lovexxxlsexmorxxxysex

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2012 15:10
    xxxlsexlovekassasmakwat)

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2012 16:54
    Best story on the website...best bloody story iv read in ages,u are a sining star sir.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.12.2012 16:57
    Dear sir you need a publisher and a nobel prize...your work is genius!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.12.2012 15:41
    You really are a genius. Amazing story with passionate romance. Please write a sequel.

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.12.2012 00:26
    Bravo!!! I agree with the others, a truly great story. Please do continue to post your fine literature here and sincere gratitude for doing so.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2012 00:34
    This calls for a sequence.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2012 02:26
    You hade hooked reading this great work!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2012 08:49
    I forgot to check my oven and burned my pizza because of this amazingly written story. I hope there will be more splendid stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.12.2012 13:43
    The best story I have ever red on this website..

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.12.2012 21:19
    Fantastic story! Well done.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.12.2012 08:52
    that was fucking hot........now what am I going to do about my dripping wet pussy....

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2012 03:31
    outstanding. except for the end with mom barging in. horrendous mood killer. and I didn't like the main character turning into a cheating douche.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.12.2012 09:54
    You done great on this one.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2012 00:49
    outstanding. except for the end with mom barging in. horrendous mood killer. and I didn't like the main character turning into a cheating douche.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.12.2012 02:29
    ...Make more like these. :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.12.2012 16:37
    Wow....awesome story ;) BRA.....VO

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2012 06:35
    I came to this and came the most to it then I ever have. But then again, I was jerking for an hour. I ate some bad shrimp!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2012 20:21
    ANYA MOROZOV I LOVE YOU! YOU HAVE BEAUTIFUL EYES AND GORGEOUS HAIR!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2012 20:22
    ANYA MOROZOV I LOVE YOU! YOU HAVE BEAUTIFUL EYES AND GORGEOUS HAIR!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2012 20:22
    ANYA MOROZOV I LOVE YOU! YOU HAVE BEAUTIFUL EYES AND GORGEOUS HAIR!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2012 20:22
    ANYA MOROZOV I LOVE YOU! YOU HAVE BEAUTIFUL EYES AND GORGEOUS HAIR!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.12.2012 20:24
    I farted it smells like dead carcass

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.12.2012 13:18
    AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 02:41
    Sweet romantic story........thanks

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.01.2013 21:14
    Jocelyn Kate. Which one are you

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.01.2013 18:20
    I can see where this kind of a story could happen in today's high school. Being one of those nerdy type kids when I was in high school. Loved the story line saw it real quick but enjoyed the story anyway. It was well written, kept the charters in content and prove to be very enjoyable to read. I loved the ending about be caught by his mother. When I read that my wife asked me what was so funny and explained it to her, she looked at me and said just like Robert and Katy (our youngest daughter and her husband). Please continue to write great stories. Thanks.

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2013 12:55
    It felt like I was reading a book and I LOVED IT!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.02.2013 13:02
    This is a lot like my high school life!

    I started as a fat asthmatic loner in middle school but the high school jocks were so much different and I eventually got kinda popular, even joining the wrestling team.

    I only ever had two high school girlfriends, but after that it was pretty good. never cheated on them though lol.

    This was great and I really connected with the protagonist, please write more. You're good at it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.02.2013 13:56
    Awesome! You made this perfact you should fucking write another one like this!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2013 15:04
    Amazingly written story. Great just great. Please make more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.02.2013 22:01
    Its the love story that the world is missing

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2013 10:52
    THIS IS BEST SEX STORY AVE EVER READ,THE STORY IS JUST TOO GOOD.KEEP IT UP

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2013 21:59
    I know how he feels in regards to his mother.
    Lol

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.03.2013 13:02
    If Chris had asthma, how the hell did he get into the army?

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.03.2013 06:51
    could be childhood asthma or mild asthma, as long as it is managable and you can pass fitness test you can join.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2013 16:17
    That was a pretty great story, actually. Bravo.

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.04.2013 22:35
    This will help me creat an amazing story for my GF thanks! =)

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.04.2013 21:41
    Really, great job. Great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2013 22:20
    The.Best.Book.FUCKING EVAR!!! O LOVED IT

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.04.2013 03:31
    excellent story, could have made a series with all the other girls, but still a great story

    john

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.04.2013 23:26
    wow! is all I can say!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.04.2013 03:11
    Amazing. Very well done. One of the best stories that I've read so far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.04.2013 19:19
    best story.. I have read a lot of them but this one is the best

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.04.2013 12:51
    Awesome story loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2013 00:31
    The beast make more

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  • tinytitlover54
    24.04.2013 17:11
    looking to chat with girls that have small tits I love small tits I love to look at them kiss them an suck on your nipples PM me let's chat

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.04.2013 19:40
    Sex was a little underdeveloped, but the story more than makes up for it. Really funny and the dialogue actually sounded like real teens.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2013 01:41
    awesome storie. I can relate to the early part of the storie for I no gf and never have. keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.04.2013 22:14
    my dick used to be 6 in.long after I read this it mesured 9 in.long and I cumed 6 time as I read this keep writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2013 11:16
    Chris & Christie?

    Great story, not so sure about the names

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.05.2013 22:08
    I wish a man like chris would eat me out suck my tits and makeblove to me all night lucky christie

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.05.2013 11:04
    OH MAN
    MORE MORE MORE

    XNXX PLEASE MAKE A SPAM BUTTON FOR COMMENTS

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.05.2013 00:54
    Oh my god!!!!!!! Such a good story!!!!! Please write more!

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2013 23:47
    ive read alot of stories but that one takes the cake!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.05.2013 21:43
    Great story, I came five times during it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.05.2013 18:10
    Hey great story lol looking for snap chat 16m usee: MrUnknown250 im fun and funny as hell to talk too!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.05.2013 01:58
    Yo I wanna fuck a bitch now btw im15

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.05.2013 19:23
    Very great story please make more

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.06.2013 05:17
    Best story I've seen on this site, bravo!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.06.2013 04:14
    Best story on this site

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2013 03:40
    OMG, so long, but SOOO good! You must be pro sex story maker, cus this the best story on this site! BRILLIANT JOB!+!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.06.2013 19:00
    Ok, This story gets an AAAA+++++++++. Its very well made, has a great storyline, and so you deserve this score. POSITIVE RATING.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.06.2013 03:10
    best story ever call me at (209)-985-3855 for some fun :>

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2013 00:22
    Best story I have ever read. Full of love sex and emotion.

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2013 05:33
    This should be made into a book

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.06.2013 20:33
    This is a really good story, it should be a book, even after I came I still kept reading. Great story!! -AirForce SRT

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.06.2013 02:14
    This story is kinda heart breaking

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.06.2013 11:40
    Uhhhhhhh hi mom I laughed great story as usual

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.06.2013 17:06
    uhh.... hi mom... lol how funny. im glad chris and Christie got together.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.06.2013 04:41
    the whole time I thought Chris to look like Chris Brown in "Kiss Kiss"!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2013 02:49
    You people are Pervs for wanting to talk to young girls. Get lives!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2013 16:42
    8============================D

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2013 18:25
    good story and not even for the sex ( which was still f**king awesome ) but very well written. and like the 4th kid ( who was stupid enough to both put his number and his age ) im also 13.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2013 18:36
    saw through the rest of the comments does any buddy check this site for pedos and or for kids? p.s.same 13 yr old as before.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2013 18:44
    p.p.s. back to watching ((and trying to find) child porn) regular porn

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.06.2013 18:47
    p.p.s. back to watching ((and trying to find) child porn) regular porn

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.06.2013 20:52
    I'm also 13... but a girl.. -.- awkwardd haha

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.06.2013 02:33
    Person below me is lying, X.x

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.06.2013 02:25
    To the pedos and children: the NSA is watching. We have your IP addresses and we know where you live.

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.07.2013 09:30
    This is a NSA mandatory message. As of 7/2/13 9:31 am, this website is under investigation for child pornography and attempted rape and abuse by its members.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2013 18:10
    thank you nsa but think to yourself you all already knew what these teenagers were doing. p.s. y'all should design a porn site just for teens.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2013 18:14
    p.p.s. rape and abuse by members yes, child pornography however no because pornography is related to cinematography and trust me ive looked there is no child pornography. you can charge for child novography.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.07.2013 23:57
    For anyone dumb enough to respond to any of the ads for young ppl, ur an idiot and deserve to let bubba ravage u in prison. There's a difference between reading literature, and advertising under 18 sex, even if its consensual. If the NSA is watching this website, u can bet ur ass they are gonna try to entrap ur ass without it being entrapment. So, anyone like the thought of 25 to life being rammed by bubba please respond to any of the ads, but for ppl that just want to read the stories and that's all, u have every god given right to read literature that is covered by the 1st amendment freedom of speech, let the NSA log all my ip address' I don't care cause I just read, I don't commit felonies, ad my advice to all is to heed my warning.... Btw to the author great fucking story I give it a 15 on a sale of 1-10.

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  • anonymous+reader
    06.07.2013 08:42
    To the dude that said there is no child porn. Look into the hidden internet (search how to access the hidden wiki). There is shit there that will make you lose faith in humanity

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.07.2013 22:03
    i read this story just to get hard

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 02:03
    these story are good to read for like a prep to a date but not for cuming not because it cant but just cause you should enjoy it

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 02:04
    p.s nsa you havent done a good job. p.p.s you ever made that porn site for teens I suggested

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 02:08
    you should make a sequel to this one with incest of there kids maybe and I like also how you spaned it over multiple years and the kids should act like the ones from a story called you first

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 13:02
    Wow this was a really good and in away really sad story with a happy ending. Please do write more!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2013 23:38
    Holy fuck.. Longest story ever.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2013 00:15
    DAMN THAT WAS LONG! But DAMN THAT WAS SEXY!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 02:11
    I began looking for a story to masturbate to and instead I find an exquisite and sexual love story, well done I must say. Even made me stop jacking off and read it. You should write books instead of wasting your time here.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 13:49
    This was a great story long but good . I love the hole story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 13:52
    Long but it was a great story would love to read more like this.:)

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  • kinky_kitty214
    17.07.2013 16:01
    I'm soo horny any one want me to be their slut cheerleader ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.07.2013 00:12
    Wow, this guy really has an erotic / romance story going on there... Usually skip to the good parts but he key me locked into it from beginning to end!

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.07.2013 08:23
    Reading this one after the one from Hailey's POV kinda ruins the Hailey story

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.07.2013 10:32
    That was good, needs a squel. Where C & C goto Hailey's wedding and they double team Hailey as their wedding gift.

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  • BabyGir1
    21.07.2013 01:41
    im in love with this story.I even reread it hahaha

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2013 04:06
    This story is the best I have found on this site so far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.07.2013 04:09
    This story is the best I have found on this site so far. You should follow it up with part 2.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.07.2013 13:24
    I just have to say that I wasn't expecting an Ole Miss shot out. If she went to Ole Miss and pledged DG she had to be insanely hot. That added realism to the story for me. Hah.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2013 02:54
    Theblacknight, thank you for writing this beautiful piece, I give you very good remarks, there should defiantly be a part 2 though... Kinda left off on a cliffhanger

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2013 02:55
    Theblacknight, thank you for writing this beautiful piece, I give you very good remarks, there should defiantly be a part 2 though... Kinda left off on a cliffhanger

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 02:52
    To be honest I didn't get hard reading this because I just smiled like an idiot the entire time because of the story... It was beautiful and I'm glad you wrote !!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 18:38
    wow that was a real good read been in that situation b4 (havin sex then his parent walks in lol) but yea really good and you so sould write a secon one cuz that story was AWESOME

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 20:32
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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 20:32
    ^(#$!@#$)(()))******

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 20:33
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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 20:33
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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 20:33
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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 20:33
    ................windowswin.ini

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 20:33
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  • anonymous+reader
    01.08.2013 20:33
    Chris_and_Christie/.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2013 02:33
    that was the best story I have ever read. you have to keep writing your amazing. you should take this work to a publisher.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2013 15:50
    As a girl reading this, I have never been so wet ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2013 15:50
    As a girl reading this, I have never been so wet ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2013 18:20
    Gotta be the best story I've read yet ! (;

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2013 01:46
    Awesome awesome awesome awesome needs a part 2!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2013 06:44
    This story is quite bounding and amazing dude...I am a big fan of you after reading this.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2013 10:27
    most life changing story ever

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2013 20:27
    This story is amazing absolutely loved it and it actually brought tears to my eyes a bit. Thank you for this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2013 01:36
    16 and horny ;) 407-401-3548

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2013 14:14
    This story was amazing, please keep making more :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2013 23:55
    This story made me cry please make another just as long and great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.08.2013 23:57
    i love storys that r based around my age make another like this 1 please.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.08.2013 04:32
    This seriously made some people cry??? I was thinking: it's soooooo long!!! *yawn*

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 22:11
    Ohh my god *sniffle* I loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.08.2013 01:19
    Fuck yall old ass hags who like kiddie porn

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.08.2013 20:05
    He started from the bottom now he's here

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2013 04:28
    Ik wil lekker sex in mn poep! Bel me snel kusjes Esse <3

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.09.2013 22:33
    Oh my I can only express how many times this story turned me on to the point of no return great story pleassssseeeeeee right more

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.09.2013 22:34
    Write* lol story has my mind racing a bit

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2013 17:08
    Loved this story aged 14 whatsApp me at 07976217412

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.09.2013 01:24
    This isn't a sex story it's more like a best selling book

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.10.2013 23:22
    Nice it not just mainly sex but an inspirational happy ending published

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.10.2013 23:39
    AWWW!!! how sweet!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.10.2013 19:29
    Within a month of my marriage I was sent to Vietnam while my wife went to jr college. Her friends got her high at a party and some guy had unprotected sex with her. Lucky she didn't get prego or STD. Still she sent me a dear john and divorce upon return. I blame her parents because I wasn't a college guy or good enough. Took me almost 10 years to get her back. Now we have 3 grown sons and been happy for 30 years. She was the only thing I ever wanted in life and will always resent the hottest years together that we lost! So the story was bittersweet for me but deserves the highest rating.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.10.2013 10:13
    Anonymous Viet Nam Dude: Let go of that shit. If you've been married for 30 years and are still married, you've got more than most people end up with and should be down on your knees thanking God every stinking day for what you have. To the author, great story. Got a little slow sometimes, but that's totally better than a straight on suck and fuck. Well done

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.10.2013 23:34
    This was the best story of my life I hope these 2 got maried

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.10.2013 08:29
    the best story ive ever heard !!!! wasnt rediculous it was perfect

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.10.2013 16:43
    A lot of the stories on here are just for Getting off to, but this a really good story, you are a really talented writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 01:14
    C90mL4 I value the post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2013 23:13
    Very touching love love this story. Funny how one must hit hard knocks to appreciate something real. Emotional story for me

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2013 18:22
    This is just great, its a real story not just suck and fuck. I cried and got off to it. wierd

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.11.2013 03:11
    dude you literature is is good, im going to have to clean multiple things in my room! keep up your great work!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.11.2013 19:27
    Awesome story, the story never got boring!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.11.2013 11:00
    Great story! It was funny and hot and had a really good plot. :) and I didn't notice any errors.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.11.2013 00:26
    I wish this was my life. More touching story than Forrest Gump.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.12.2013 14:46
    Awesome story !! With slite changing of the ending, could make a really good film!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.12.2013 18:47
    We "all" are waiting for part two. Really another part with this bird eye veiw of the story would be awesome. I've read christie's point of veiw and it was good but I didn't feel that the story should end there. Another part would be a really good support for your story and would give all your readers great time. Don't forget "you're awesome and we are looking forward for reading part two of Chris and Christie.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.12.2013 20:14
    An amazing story, it could seriously be a movie 100 out of 10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.01.2014 17:05
    this is 1 of my fav stories here......

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.01.2014 13:28
    This is a great story. +1

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.01.2014 12:05
    Sexy story and emotional

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.01.2014 15:23
    Someone needs to make this shit into a movie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.01.2014 10:31
    Hands down ;) the best story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.02.2014 12:00
    Ùu0081يلم اغراء عراقى سكس

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.02.2014 12:01
    Ùu0081يلم اغراء عراقى سكس

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  • Tryzz_21
    28.02.2014 17:48
    One of the best stories I've ever read, including non-sexual. Very well done!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.03.2014 09:45
    I freakin love this story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.03.2014 15:14
    bloody awesome story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.03.2014 05:55
    This is the best ever non series story on this website it is so nice and erotic and I'm only ten and got huge boners from it.ðŸ‘u008dðŸ‘u008dðŸ‘u008dðŸ‘u008dðŸ‘u008d ok now with the Brofist to finish off. Byyyyyyyee👊👊👊

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.04.2014 18:00
    Great story...felt them feels...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2014 14:57
    July 21, 2008 at 1:15 pm I think the one you did for Errol and Georgia is the best, they are both just so ridiculously good loniokg. You're the best wedding invite designer ever to be sure.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2014 15:31
    Great story I felt I'm in activities in really n one speacial thing I lost my cum in panties

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.06.2014 15:41
    amazing... reminds me about my ex .... I love her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2014 22:56
    That was amazing. my boner was begging for Christie all the time. Absolutely LOVED it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2014 18:48
    Is there a part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.06.2014 22:39
    I love this story it made me soo wet!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.07.2014 20:44
    Great story man hope u start another series soon.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2014 10:26
    Lord jesus :3 :x

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2014 01:31
    Amazing. Totally. Amazing. Grammatically perfect , and amazing buildup to the finish ! Love the twist at the end!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2014 09:56
    Great story bru

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2014 10:07
    Great story bru

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2014 18:02
    This story is without a doubt in my Top 3 fav stories on this site . Your spelling and grammar was on point plus I loved how everyone had a distinct character , unlike in alot of the stories on this site! Keep on writing :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2014 16:38
    Awesome story my favourite ever!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.08.2014 22:25
    One of my favorites for sure

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2014 03:33
    Cool mom

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2014 22:07
    I wish my mom would have done that when she saw me, instead of chasing my girlfriend out the door with a baseball bat screaming "Stay off my boy, you little skank!".

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  • radioz66
    29.08.2014 13:32
    This is an awesome story I love it I wish I could write as good as you.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2014 06:55
    Damn it. I came here to get off not to feel.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2014 13:11
    Ended up reading this just for the story.... Great writing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2014 08:26
    Awesome story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2014 13:10
    Awesome read...!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.09.2014 21:44
    The bestest story I hv ever read

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2014 06:22
    This ended up being a great story. I just read it and enjoyed it instead of jerking to it. I was actually pretty well written and I liked it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2014 22:27
    Best story ever! When I was done I still kept reading cuzhow great it was!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.09.2014 05:05
    Amazing story. One if the best I've ever read by far!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2014 09:09
    So well written great job

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2014 05:30
    Holy jesus. One of the first that I read start to finish was actually good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2014 19:29
    I couldnt put my phone down it was good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.11.2014 19:53
    I love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.11.2014 08:16
    still a better storie than twilight

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.11.2014 20:15
    i want to keep read why u end up here...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.11.2014 21:51
    This was amazing please make another one it was great don't stop

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2015 13:31
    Awesome story . Well executed . ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.01.2015 02:22
    Awsome it had a little bit of everything for the reader

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2015 20:47
    Plz do a new s to if stories I love the Chris and Christie and if u did not write them get the person who did to start a new series of stories plz and thank u

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2015 11:36
    good Story My Niqqa

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.01.2015 03:07
    Best sex story ever. I laughed I cried and more. Amazing story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.02.2015 19:36
    That was so hot. I loved it!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.02.2015 11:50
    that guy was lucky

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2015 14:12
    Such a nice romantic story jst lovd it.... Best story I hv read so far....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2015 10:56
    Fucking awesome...that story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2015 23:53
    Best story I ever read so far.It moves me! So romantic!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.03.2015 04:41
    Made me so hot. I came so hard.

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  • Kittencat3
    18.03.2015 04:42
    Really sweet story and wellwritten.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2015 05:27
    Make this a movie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2015 22:58
    Wow I'm so wet right now
    this story was amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2015 00:37
    what a romantic one♥♥♥… love it much

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.04.2015 14:57
    That was soo beautiful and romantic I loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.04.2015 06:53
    a little bit BORING!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.04.2015 20:00
    Best story on this site by far.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.04.2015 10:31
    I love it. U took the time to draw out the story n gave the characters a good n detailed personality. Keep up the good work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2015 02:23
    Great job, but now every other story on this site is gonna seem like shit... Loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.04.2015 06:44
    I liked this story a lot. I am always a succer 4 true love. It makes me happy. I love romance even though I'm a guy. Excellent story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.05.2015 22:12
    Are there any other stories like that?
    They are freaking amazing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.05.2015 22:29
    It was wonderful. Sex, romance and emotions weaved through a great life-story. Beautiful.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2015 01:10
    I'm gonna do this with my girl I swear Read it to her till she can't handle my words any More u know tease her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.05.2015 20:26
    We can all agree that this is the best story this website has

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.05.2015 09:40
    that is the best story i`ve ever read in my life

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 17:26
    Wow this is an amazing story a passionate love story with sex best story ever

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.05.2015 17:27
    Wow this is an amazing story a passionate love story with sex best story ever

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.05.2015 05:53
    the best story ive read it was riveting. my eyes never left the screen and my hand never left my dick as chris plunged into each chick

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2015 01:04
    woow let cum in u christieee

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2015 21:51
    I read this story for the first time when it was on the homepage and since then I've read it at least three or for times. Each time I read it it just gets better and better.
    Skibum92

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2015 22:12
    OMG this story makes me so wet every time I read it!! Reminds me of my bf and his 8 inch cock :D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.06.2015 04:41
    This is magnificent

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2015 05:13
    good story !! I have these sexual desires, I started having them when I was like 15 years old, I lost my virginity, so I figure I such spice up my sex life, I looked at porn when I turn 16 and omg it was amazing , to see all of those big black and white dicks thrusting in big booty women and the orgies was making me so wet and horny I masturbated and it felt so good to me !!! I just love to suck dick and get my pussy eaten , and I just ride , dick all day !!, I also enjoy the sex in the locker room during gym class with some of my female friends and these dudes we used to date !! I miss those days , no that im

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.07.2015 07:05
    Fucking awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2015 10:42
    Oh god! Fuck yes!!! Amazing story, I'm so horns right now!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2015 12:15
    Wow! got me horny!.... My dick wouldn't fall even as I read the last word of the story

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  • Kit-Kat
    05.08.2015 14:34
    This story had me interested from top to bottom. Nice work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2015 11:53
    The best.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2015 06:02
    You wrote a story unlike any other. You should consider writing on an app call wattpad. Your stories could get more recognized or even published..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2015 22:29
    Great read all day any day its my 2end time reading thanks

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  • Bry83
    13.09.2015 21:23
    This was A great story very good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2015 03:58
    This is by far the best sex story ever. The romance and passion between the two of them was phenomenal. Well written and perfectly thought out. Great job!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2015 05:00
    Best Sex Story Ever Got me hard and made me cry

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2015 19:43
    best! best! best!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.09.2015 19:23
    Awesome!! Great story!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2015 06:39
    I like how sweet the ending was!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2015 18:57
    Awsm blosm

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2015 23:18
    This was absolutely sexy. I love this author. They are one of the best writers on here.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2015 02:24
    This should be a New York times best seller

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.10.2015 15:22
    best I hav ever read....!!!! hope to read more from you....!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.11.2015 11:56
    Absolutely perfect.what a hell of writer you are!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.11.2015 10:07
    As others have said, this is a perfect story. Only thing lacking is an epilogue. Otherwise such a great short story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2015 11:16
    Awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.11.2015 23:54
    This is the literal best sex story EVER posted on xnxx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.11.2015 04:04
    Wow this was really great I do have to say that last part had me laughing so hard

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.11.2015 22:44
    I loved this story it has made the top of my favorites list! There aren't many stories like this one.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.11.2015 10:12
    awesome story. did they marry at last. makepart2.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2015 23:10
    Shooting your load three feet in the air? Seems legit...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.12.2015 04:07
    Very good, just next time you write a story give more details I like how you put real life in and the whole story was not just fucking which I like thank you and keep on writing this is one of the best storys I have read on this website

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.12.2015 21:11
    I want expect more

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  • Bushhairs
    15.12.2015 18:37
    My compliments, BlackKnight!
    Indeed, a great story, very well written. I shall read on into this series in the order you gave. Then I will look at your other work. Thank you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.12.2015 11:50
    You stole this story you shit, it was written by deathsknight like 2 years ago and he's also posted sequels a and spin offs. Quit ripping other writers off.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.01.2016 17:27
    I've read this one before, years ago, but it was just as good to re-read.
    Thanks, you are definitely one of my favorite authors, in or out of XNXX.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 22:02
    Gr8 story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 23:23
    I read this story just for thw great story line this is truley amazing you are the first person that forced me to make a comment with the shear greatness of the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.01.2016 14:32
    great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.01.2016 04:01
    This... idek what to say... the romance... keep calm and make more stories

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.01.2016 14:00
    it was long . but its worth it . kinda .

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.02.2016 20:36
    Should've ass fucked her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.02.2016 07:40
    What a great story. Character development, good dialogue. It really captured the insecurity of teenage life, at least the way I remember it.

    Keep up the good work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.02.2016 08:38
    Great story. Read the Hailey story first and figured out that Christie loved him and was his first but her status mattered more to her in her teen years. This filled in the blanks very satisfactorily.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.02.2016 12:45
    Long but was worth the time.keep up the work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.02.2016 06:22
    What a bloody good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.02.2016 06:26
    New York Times best seller right here

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.02.2016 00:43
    omg so good I can say it is the bas of all I ever read. thank you for this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.02.2016 19:08
    Hey stop copying other author's story the was writen by blacknight nd the otjers oary of d story are also copied .....atleast mention tha this is not your work.....stop stealing.... Be original

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2016 05:09
    where is Christie's story? can you repost it? is it the third leg story?

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  • bcozYnot
    13.03.2016 18:59
    One of the best I've ever read. The writing is absolutely amazing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.04.2016 11:16
    Too goodan too good ..... d writing d story d characters
    Im sure 2 say dis is one story everyone have 2 read before dey die

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.04.2016 03:02
    Fuck! This story was amazing! You have great writing skills

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.04.2016 05:09
    That was great brother.. Nyc story. Keep up the heat

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.04.2016 06:07
    Bulk slogan here this wqs great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.04.2016 19:44
    That was a really good storty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.05.2016 10:37
    INCREDIBLE STORY! The Way you Represented it to the Readers is INCREDIBLE!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.05.2016 12:33
    Fuck so hot

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2016 07:35
    Omg I got so wrapped up in this story, it was so good. I cried over this Lol. Its so realistic. And AHHH perfect.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2016 06:48
    Omfg best story EVER

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2016 06:49
    This is literally the best sex story I've ever read. Its so realistic and amazing!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2016 06:56
    I get u dude when u told her u liked her and she said she doesn't like u back. I told a girl I liked her and she's said I'm really really really (infinitely) really sorry but I don't like u that way and I was crushed. And if u want to talk contact me by Instagram it's (562_parts)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.07.2016 23:12
    Wow really was the best story ever. It felt so realistic. There was everything in it the good the bad everything. My eyes were actually watery. I felt some emotions while reading it.I don't know but it feels to real to b fiction. I doubt it that is fiction. But to the writer of this story, thus is the best I've read compared to all other stories.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2016 12:43
    best story ever.it would make a great movie if u ask me,with a lot less sex in it ofcus

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2016 17:16
    Dude, I must say that what you wrote here is damn lit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2016 01:00
    actually really good could be movie minus sex.....but that's not the point of this site.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.09.2016 20:41
    This was kinda fucking great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2016 14:57
    why did chris broke up with hailey????

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.10.2016 15:32
    Its a fucking good story. I had boner as soon as I started reading till the end. Only girls call and say before speaking xnxx I ll understand dat u got my no. from here. 9007217728

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2016 20:29
    What a cute story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2016 15:21
    That's really cute and sweet.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2016 15:21
    That's really cute and sweet.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.10.2016 22:54
    WOW, NEVER read such a good story, and I am a writer myself, just WOW!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.11.2016 19:29
    That is such a good story, im not an emotional guy but this is just impressive, touching and cute!
    At first I only wanted something to jerk off to, but this turned out to be one of the best things I ever read, actually i'd really like to see this as a movie... Character development 10/10!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.11.2016 20:26
    TOUCHING REALLY!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.11.2016 20:26
    TOUCHING REALLY!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.11.2016 20:26
    TOUCHING REALLY!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.11.2016 22:28
    This is he bets story I ever read!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2016 04:16
    Holy shit, this was impressive. Honestly the best piece I've ever read. Keep up the good work, I hope to read more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.11.2016 18:22
    Awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.11.2016 07:30
    Loved that story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2016 19:11
    Dude really one of the best I had ever read!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.12.2016 05:12
    This is the best one I've read so far!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.01.2017 02:21
    Wow... Incredible

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.01.2017 13:40
    This one is the best I've read so far with an awesome ending, really liked Hailey though.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2017 05:05
    Fantastic story!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2017 23:17
    Has always been my favorite story seris

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.02.2017 03:03
    That was just incredible loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.02.2017 05:20
    Came for sex, stayed for story, really good one.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.02.2017 07:34
    Awesome.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.02.2017 07:35
    Wish I was Chris......

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.02.2017 03:56
    This is what I was looking for, someone got caught. I have been lucky as I never caught but it was close a few times.. very good.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.02.2017 19:36
    The mom was like uhhhh ok...

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  • DarklyAnonymous
    05.09.2017 02:44
    Honestly, I had the most amazing time reading the entire series. What a wonderful ending. It's a shame that this will only be found here. This story alone is novel material.

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  • Jackmiles2
    18.06.2018 04:41
    Wow....... Just wow.......
    This is now my number one favorite series. I know this was written in 2012 but please, keep in writing.
    #YOURNEWNUMBERONEFAN

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