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Best Friends Part 5 Conclusion

Author: Huggy Bear

Date: 10 January 2013

Cheating, Fiction, Consensual Sex, Oral Sex

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Part 4 was the hardest part for me to write. I knew I had to create a separation for the sake of the characters and the story but I didn't want to separate them by anger because the real Alex and Emma had never fought or argued about anything so it didn't make any sense to have them fight or argue in the story. Hopefully the final chapter makes sense and ties it all in together for the reader.





Looking back, it was a pretty big gamble moving back to the states after so many years but it was a gamble I was all too eager to make. There were a lot of unsure emotions going through my head at the time. Was I doing the right thing? Would I find what I was looking for when I did arrive? I knew in my heart that I was making the right decision.

Before I had left, the company I had worked for was also a global company meaning they had plants all over the world so the one I worked at was simply one of many. There had been a corporate tour group from the states that came through my plant one day. The president of the group stayed behind my area after the rest of the group carried the tour on to the next stop. He was a pretty nice guy and with both of us being Americans on foreign soil, the conversation eventually turned to him asking what brought me all the way to Australia. I was honest with him and explained that I had moved there with family several years earlier but admitted I had been strongly interested in moving back very soon. He had then explained that the company had a plant in the state that I had come from. When he told me the town, I was stunned. It was towns about fifteen minutes drive from where I grew up. He had then gave me the information on the plant and told me when I got back to look the place up and he would help me get a job there by giving me permission to use him as a reference. I couldn't believe my luck. One day I am having anxieties over how things would work out and the next day the cards appear to be falling in all the right places like it was meant to be. My mind was now made up and I was finally leaving Oz.

When I landed in the US, I was picked up at the airport by my grandparents who were my only relatives I still had from back home that were still local. I had talked to them before leaving and they agreed to let me stay with me until I was able to establish myself with a new job and a place of my own.

After establishing a US driver’s license, I immediately looked up the company I had worked for and saw by a sign on their door that they were not hiring for production positions but they were hiring for data entry. I was qualified for that position as well so I went in and filled out an application, not expecting much but to get my foot in the door anyways. I did use the president’s name as a reference like he had offered and it worked. A week or so later I was contacted for an interview and was immediately given an office position.

I didn't have much of a new life yet besides going to work and come home for dinner and sleep but very often I would get off work and just drive around to familiar places for me, hoping to reacquaint and hoping to maybe run into familiar faces. I would even drive by Em's house hoping her family had still lived there but I had found out that they had moved quite some time back when I had finally gotten the nerve to just get out of my car and ring the doorbell.

I had been on the job now for a few months and was having just one of them days. It was late morning so I hadn't fully woken up yet, not in a bad mood and not in a good mood. Just...there, but not necessarily into things that particular day. Unbeknownst to me, things were going to drastically change for me that day. Typing away, I could see through my peripherals that our office manager had come upstairs and had brought someone with him. At first I didn't pay much attention but I could hear him talk as he made his way around the office that he was clearly showing around a new employee. Again I didn't pay much attention to what was going on...until I heard him say her name when they got to my desk.

"Alex. This is Emma. She will be joining us starting today as our new receptionist."

I looked up while holding out my hand to shake hers out of polite habit when you are introduced to someone. Our eyes locks and it took a second to actually register with both of us. After all these years, it was really my Em!

There was so much I wanted to say to her but I obviously couldn't since she was preoccupied. If one was sharp enough, they could tell by the looks on our faces that there was a connection and a history between us. She smiled as she instantly recognized me too. I could see in her eyes that she was dying to talk to me as much as I was dying to talk to her. It was going to be a very long day and my mind was no longer on my work.

All I could think about was how and when I could talk to her but my mind was put at ease when late in the afternoon I suddenly had an email pop up on my computer from "emmap." It was brief but to the point.

"Hello stranger. Meet me at the park behind the library after work."

The library was just a couple of minutes drive away from work but I found myself not being able to get there fast enough. When I pulled up, there was just a few cars in the parking lot that overlooked the peaceful park. Her car was an early nineties model Firebird and was easy to pick out since she was still in her car when I pulled up next to her left. She wasted no time jumping out of her car very quickly and into the passenger seat of mine.

"I can't believe it. After all this ti..."

I didn't even get my first sentence out when she threw her arms tightly around me.

"You said you were going to write me everyday you were gone."

"Em. I did write you all the time. I wrote you while I was on the plane. I wrote you every day after that until I started getting all of my letters sent back to me saying you weren't at your address anymore...I eventually got one in a strange hand writing saying you hadn't been eating or sleeping until you had finally moved on to someone else. I had even brought the letters all back with me...Em? What happened after I left?"

She was quiet as if she was wondering where to start.

"I did have trouble eating and sleeping at first because I was missing you like crazy but the birthday present you gave me got me through it in anticipation of your letters. I didn't move on though. Not for a long time anyways when I thought I was never going to hear from you again. I don't know who would be terrible enough to tell you such a thing."

"Like I said, I still have the letters. Maybe you would recognize the hand writing because they didn't bother to sign it. They said you started seeing Steve. The only Steve that came to mind was seven-minutes-in-heaven-Steve from junior high."

She suddenly looked like she was going to be sick at the thought.

"Steve? Eww! Never in a million years would that have happened. Things did change dramatically though. A few days after you left, my dad informed me that Anna and I were being enrolled in Catholic school for the following year."

"Catholic school? What was his reasoning behind that?

"To this day we still don't know and he would never tell us but I believe it was because he somehow found out about the things you and I used to do."

"Well that would explain his mood change towards me before I left."

Not wanting to talk about her dad, I was quick to change the subject.

"So, tell me about yourself. Did you marry? Did you have any children?"

I wasn't sure I wanted to know that either. She seemed a little uncomfortable talking about it but she finally spoke up.

"I did get married about ten years ago. He treats me OK and I have two kids, a girl and a boy. How about you? Did you ever marry? How long have you been back?"

“I have been back for a few months now. I am staying with my grandparents right now until I establish myself in a job and place of my own. After work, I still have a lot of free time on my hands so I like to drive around and see places I hadn’t seen in a long time like our neighborhood. I had been hoping that I would run into you on one of my outings but it is weird seeing familiar neighborhoods and houses but knowing that someone else is living there now. I think a lot about the times we both had growing up and I can’t help but wonder if what happened with us is now happening with two other kids now. I did eventually get married after several years but that lasted about five years before we realized we should have never been together in the first place. We divorced amicably and thankfully we never had any kids together.”

She was quiet for a moment as she listened to my back story before finally making a suggestion.

“Would you like to see some pictures?”

"Of course, I would love to."

She seemed a little apprehensive at first but slowly pulled out her wallet while flipping her photos open. I saw her son first and noticed him to be about nine in age and looked a lot like his mom.

“Your son?”

“That would be my little guy Travis. He just turned nine back in June.”

“He’s got his momma’s looks.”

I flipped the page and came to a photo of her daughter. She looked about fifteen and the closer I looked, I couldn't shake the feeling that something seemed a little different. I was silent as I tried to figure it out and Em had patiently watched my every facial expression to see if I would figure it out. After a minute of concentrated silence, she finally snapped me out of the trance I was in.

"She is your daughter Alex."

I looked at Emma and then back to picture and that's where I had finally realized what it was that seemed different to me. I had suddenly realized that I had been looking into my own eyes. It was then that I had started to cry. Emma moved in closer, held my hand, kissed me on the cheek and hugged me close.

"She is so beautiful. What is our daughter’s name?

"I named her Heidi."

"That is a beautiful name. Does she know about me?"

“Of course, I have told her a lot about her dad. She keeps saying that she hopes she gets to finally meet you someday.”

“Looks like I have a lot to catch up on huh?”

She looked up at me as if recalling that special night so many years ago.

“I remember that last night we had together. I said to you that I wanted as much of you as I could possibly have. I woke up one morning and was a bit nauseous but I didn’t think too much about it. It got to be an everyday thing until I bought a test from the drugstore out of curiosity. It came up positive and I was happy but scared at the same time. I wanted so much to tell you and for you to be here with me while I was going through it.”

My heart sank in a matter of seconds. As she said that, I went from being happy to know that I had fathered a child with the only woman I had ever truly loved to realize that because of someone else, we were robbed of what should have been a very special moment in our lives.

“By the time I found out I was going to have a baby, my dad had already enrolled Anna and I in Catholic school so I kept that a secret from him until I was already at the school. Mom was kind of happy but dad was livid when he found out. For the first time in my life I didn’t care what he thought. I just knew I was blessed to have this connection with you.”

I kissed her on her forehead as I remembered how much I had loved her so much and why.

We talked for a long time until she informed me that she finally had to get going since her husband was probably wondering where she was at.

"It's my first day on the job today. I will just tell him I stayed later to learn some things. Not exactly lying right?"

"I guess not." I agreed.

The next day at work was the start of us having many, many, email conversations back and forth. On one hand I loved the conversations we had and they made the day a lot more tolerable. On the other hand there was now a sense of having limited access to a woman I had never been limited to before. She was now married and even though I hated that fact, I had no choice but to accept it because of the hand of fate we were dealt. We still had each other though which was better than nothing. In a way it was like we were spending a lot of time getting to know each other all over again. She told me a lot about our daughter and she also informed me that her parents had divorced several years ago.

Because of our email conversations, I know it put me on the borderline of being fired a few times because my supervisor would walk by in the middle of me typing. All he would have to see was her name on the screen and he would be quick to remind me about company policy. I couldn't care less. We weren't hurting anything or anybody and we still got our work done. As friends, the two of us had become inseparable once again.

Because of our many conversations, I had found out that her marriage was good but not entirely a happy one. They did spend a lot of time doing things apart rather than together. She would spend a lot of time with her sisters and friends while he spent a lot of time with his buddies or with his head wrapped around baseball coaching Travis' little league.

Emma was honest with her family by sitting her husband and Heidi down to let them know that I was back and she was in contact with me. I don't think her husband was too entirely thrilled about it but she reminded him that there was always a big possibility of it happening someday from the time she met him. Heidi on the other hand was surprised but excited that for the first time she was going to meet her real dad. Emma had arranged a meeting for us to make it official by letting Heidi and I have the time together to ease into things with as little pressure and awkwardness as possible. She had told her husband about it before hand and although he was uncomfortable with it, he accepted the reunion quietly. After our meeting, I would then meet with her whole family so that her husband and her son could finally meet me.

By this time I had already had my own place so I invited Emma and Heidi over for a nice dinner that I had prepared for them. My heart was absolutely pounding before their arrival, not knowing how Heidi would take to me.

When the doorbell rang, I paused and took a deep breath before opening the door. I thought I had died and gone to heaven. On my porch stood the two most beautiful girls I had ever seen. Emma always made my heart skip beats while Heidi stood before me standing a petite four foot ten or so and she had her mother’s thick beautiful hair. Taking a long quiet look at my daughter, I drew her close to me and hugged her tight. With tears in my eyes, I had hoped I didn't make her uncomfortable but when I felt her hug me tightly in return, I could tell that she was just as happy to see me as I was to see her.

As we broke our hug, I acknowledged Emma with a hug and a kiss on the cheek and invited my girls inside.

"Mmm. Something smells yummy. What are you cooking us?" Asked Emma.

"Just my specialty, chicken enchiladas. Would you ladies like a beverage?"

I already knew Em was a diet coke girl. I was a little curious as to what Heidi preferred not having raised her to find out.

"Mountain Dew for me thanks."

Yep. She's definitely her father’s daughter. Mountain Dew is the nectar of the Gods in my longtime opinion. I wondered what other ways she took after her old man.

While dinner was in the oven, we sat in the living room and talked. I was pretty excited to get to know my daughter finally.

"Your mom tells me you are a freshman in high school now. How is that going? You have any favorite subjects?"

"I'm not an honor student or anything but I do ok. I am enjoying high school better than middle school. Less drama anyways."

Em and I looked knowingly at each other and I could tell we were both suddenly thinking back to our own middle school days and Tonya's party so many years ago.

"My favorite subjects are creative writing and journalism. I absolutely hate math."

Yep, definitely her father’s daughter. Math was my worst subject too.

"What kind of things do you enjoy doing?"

I really like music, hanging out with my friends, dancing, and watching movies."

Ahh music. More common ground that we shared. Did she inherit my taste in music?

"I love music too. Who are your favorite groups?"

"I love Gwen Stephani, the Black Eyed Peas and the Pussycat Dolls."

Damn. Oh well. We can't have everything in common I guess. Like all fathers and daughters we have to disagree on some things.

As the evening wore on, we talked a lot more and listened to some of Heidi's favorite music while her mom and I broke out old photo albums to share with her. We also had many stories to share with our daughter of how we met and the things we used to do together.

As comfortable as we all were, I had excused myself to go to my bedroom and bring out a box I had kept with me for many years. Placing it on the coffee table in front of Em, she had an idea what was in the box although Heidi hadn't a clue as we both watched Em open it with uncertainty. As she opened it up, she peered inside and immediately recognized the stacks of envelopes as all of the returned letters I had sent her so many years ago. Pulling them out, she showed them to our daughter as she explained what they were.

"You were serious. These are all the letters you wrote to me from Australia."

"I thought you would like to finally have them after all this time. Better late than never huh?"

Reaching into the box, I pulled out the letter that explained to me that Em had moved on.

"Here is the one letter I had told you about."

When she took it, she examined the envelope and the postmark carefully as she recognized the hand writing.

"That's my dads writing."

She removed the letter from the envelope and started reading as a storm of confused emotions swept her face.

"I am confused. He had always liked you, or so I thought. Why would he write such a letter? So if he knew where to send you a letter, he had kept all of these ones from me. But why?"

The why wasn't as important to either of us the moment. That was a question best answered from the source itself when the time was ready but for now, we concentrated on enjoying each others company and reading the existing letters out loud.

Heidi seemed to genuinely enjoy the time we were all spending together that by the time Em said it was time for them to go home, it was around midnight and Em wasn't in the mood to leave which made me feel pretty good. I could tell by her body language and facial expression that Em didn't want to really leave either but she knew it was late. I didn't want her to leave either.

Since our meeting, I had taken financial responsibility for my daughter, she would also spend time with me and now had her own room at my house.
I had also finally met her husband and her son Travis at one of his little league games that her husband also coached. He was friendly with me but clearly didn't have much interest in getting to know me more. Travis on the other hand took to me pretty well. I also got to see some of Em's family that I hadn't seen in many years. Her twin Anna was at the game and we got a chance to talk and catch up. I had found out that she had left her husband and had two young boys. Like Em, the years had been very good to the both of them.

Also with the family was their mom who was just as warm friendly and friendly with me as she had always been while Heidi brought along a few friends of hers that she had introduced me to. The game itself was very exciting and the evening was warm and relaxing when I realized that I was happier and content than I had been in a long time.

The day is still just as fresh in my mind now as if it just happened yesterday even though it occurred about four years after we had been reunited. It was a day I saw Em in a great deal of emotional pain at work and of course that always got my attention. When I had confronted her about why she was upset, she had then told me that her husband has been having depression issues lately and has been pushing her away. They sought some medical help for him and his doctor believed him to be bi-polar. After seeing her pain and the hell it put her through, I wouldn't wish that shit on anyone.

Almost as if she was being put through a test of strength and courage, she had also found out that her dad was diagnosed with terminal cancer. It was a devastating blow that took a lot out of her and I would gladly absorb every bit of the pain she felt if I could.

In the many months that followed, she stuck with it as best as she could and even though she had her good days and very bad days I had always tried to be there for her to fill the void and to ease the pain. Her birthday came up and I had some nice gifts waiting for her on her desk when she got to work that morning. She loved what I did and most likely thought that was it when late morning arrived and a beautiful bouquet of flowers were delivered for her. I wasn't trying to outdo anyone, least of all her husband. I did it because I genuinely love her, she means everything to me and she deserved it. It wasn't until the next morning I would find out that I completely made her birthday very special. Her husband on the other hand had totally forgotten her birthday, never even acknowledged it and preferred to roll over burying his nose in a book about baseball and refused to even talk or make love to her. That wouldn't have even happened to her if I was the one she had gone home to last night. I would have made love to her all night and as badly as I want to sexually ravish her again, that is not something I preferred to act on. I am a close friend, not a home wrecker. I knew in my mind that her marriage wasn't going to last much longer but if it was going to end; it would be by his hands and not mine.

With summer also came our state fair. Em and I learned that Daughtry would be playing this year in support of his first album. Both of us being big fans of his as well as a mutual friend and co-worker, we all had made plans to go. Her husband by this time was officially bi-polar and was putting the family through a lot of shit. He had become obsessed with religion and he and Em spent even more time apart now than they did before his diagnosis. Mainly it was an escape for her. She told him that she was going to go to a concert that night but she of course didn't mention that I would be with her. Only our friend Dawn would be going with her.

When we met up at the fair it was early evening. We had gone to the beer garden before the show and had a couple of drinks and socialized.

The show itself was great. We sat in the first several rows while Em had some difficulty seeing because she was five foot two. What can I say, I love short women but I helped her out by trading seats with her for a better view. When he sung "Home", Em had been standing directly in front of me. I couldn't resist wrapping my arms around her. She responded by grabbing my arms and wrapping them tighter around her while we both just lost ourselves in the song.

Daughtry put on a fantastic show and proved himself to be about the only decent American Idol to ever come off that show.

After the show, the three of us hung around and took in the carnival sights and sounds looking at all the booths. I couldn't help but notice how beautiful she truly looked under all the multi colored lights. She must have noticed me looking closely at her as she returned my gaze with a smile just as beautiful as she is. The atmosphere must have been getting to her too as she suddenly slid her arm through mine and moved in as close as she could. With a contented sigh, I could tell she was more relaxed than she had been in quite a while. One thing was clear. Neither of us was in hurry to leave that night so we walked around, holding hands, and shared a funnel cake before we closed out the fair for the night.

I remember feeling a little discombobulated as we walked Dawn to her car. I didn't recognize the parking lot we were suddenly in until I remembered that we exited from a different place than where we entered so it was no wonder I didn't recognize the lot. As we said our goodbyes, I walked Emma to her car where the lot was clearing out fast.
We got to her Santa Fe which was parked next to a fence on the far side of the lot. Most of the cars had already cleared out in that area. She still had a hold of my hand and instead of walking to the driver’s side; she walked me around to the passenger side where we were between her car and the fence out of view from anyone else and in the dark. She stood with her back against her car and wrapped her arms around my neck once again pulling me closer into her and our lips met in a passionate kiss that neither of us was in a hurry to break. Oh how I missed the softness of her lips against mine, the taste of her tongue and the warmth of her sweet breath. There was no husband that night, just the two of us the way it used to be and I didn’t feel a damned bit guilty about it.

I broke the kiss only to set the mood by opening up her passenger door, taking her keys and slipping them into the ignition to find some mood music on the radio. "Faithfully" by Journey. Perfect!

Taking her back into my arms, we began to dance to the soft music as a peaceful calm drifted us off to a place all our own. The music played, our bodies swayed and before I knew it she had turned her body around in my arms so that her butt was grinding seductively into my groin. It didn't take long for my cock to harden in my shorts to the point of her taking notice which of course made her grind harder against me. With one hand firmly on her hip, my other hand dropped down and was rubbing her pussy through the fabric of her shorts. I was not surprised that her crotch was damp and radiating a lot of heat.

The hand that was holding her waist had slowly moved north until I was now cupping one of her soft breasts underneath her t-shirt. When I kissed her neck and nibbled on her ear, I could feel her nipple harden in my hand and her breathing was rapidly increasing until she wasn't able to take it anymore. She broke free and turned around to face me with a look of hungry lust in her eyes. Grasping the front of my shorts, she undid the snap and the zipper pulling my shorts to the ground and freeing my very hard cock. She then undid the snap and zipper on her shorts and removed hers as well. When she smiled and turned around, she bent herself comfortably over the front seat. Feeling the damp heat of her crotch moments earlier, I already knew she was very wet and ready for entry.

I took my hard cock in hand and lined up to her tight womanhood and slid into her as deep as I could penetrate. A loud moan echoed from her lips the deeper I went and I took hold of her waist while finding the perfect rhythm for the two of us.

This was the first time Em and I actually had sex since our reunion and I was determined to make it last as long as I could because I wasn't sure when or if it would happen again. All I knew was, being back inside of her like I was now was just like being back home where I belonged. Her muscles were gripping me tightly with each stroke.

"It's been so long. Fuck me Alex. I miss your hard cock so much. It was always such a perfect fit."

I knew from one of our many conversations that her being a diabetic, she had a very difficult time giving birth to her son so she had her tubes tied after having him so I knew there was no chance of me getting her pregnant. In a way I was sad about the idea of not being able to conceive another child with the woman I truly loved but at the same time I was also very grateful for the one child that we did create together.

Things were now feeling overwhelmingly good and we had been screwing for several minutes when suddenly we heard a few voices in the close distance. We had froze with my cock still deep inside of her as we hoped to figure out how close the voices were. Since Em had her head comfortably splayed across her passenger seat, I was in the best position to see where the voices were coming from since I was still standing behind Em with a better view of the rest of the parking lot. As we were both very quiet, Em's pussy gave my cock a few tight noticeable squeezes to get my attention.

"Who is it my handsome man?"

"It's ok. It's just a family across the way walking to their car. They don't even notice us."

Once the coast was clear, we resumed fucking and if I didn't know any better I would say that the thrill of almost being caught was a big turn on for Em. Her moans grew louder and she started bucking wildly into me until she was soon overcome with an intense orgasm that would have carried across the rest of the parking lot if she hadn't been using the seat cushion to muffle her screams. I had kept thrusting into her during her orgasm to keep her as stimulated as possible and to increase the sensation for her.

After she came, I wasn't far behind her. She had tightened her muscles around my cock and was causing a more intense sensation on the bottom of my shaft every time I was on the out stroke. My balls soon tightened and I had passed the point of no return. Pushing in until my pubic are was firmly pressed against her firm butt, I started to fill her with my cum in a seemingly never ending torrent since I hadn't had sex for a while. When I had finally finished and slowly pulled out, a little of my spunk had followed the exit and dribbled onto the ground. Em had stood up and we kissed for several minutes before finally putting our clothes on and reluctantly leaving each other for the night. Not because we wanted but because it was very late and Em needed to finally get going.

In the days that followed, things at home were not improving with her husband. In fact they were getting worse. He had moved in with his parents so his mom could take care of him because he was still rejecting his family. Em had finally confessed to me that she was probably done and that she was tired of trying to make it work without success.

A week or so after the concert, we were both at work. The morning was fairly quiet but it didn't take long for things to change. Em had received a call that led to her running out of the building in tears. Running after her, I already knew what had happened. Her father had passed away in his sleep. As we stood by her car, I took her into my arms and held her tight as she cried on my shoulder.

With her marriage and losing her dad, she was in a pretty dark place and I wanted nothing more than to pull her out of it and give her the comfort that she desperately needed. Especially when I knew her husband wasn't going to give it to her. It was killing me to see her in the tremendous pain that she was in.

She had taken work leave for almost two weeks between the funeral and other arrangements with her dad’s estate. Work was very lonely not having her around to talk to like I always did but I was there for her nonetheless whether it was to talk to her, lend an ear, or lend a hand. Whatever she needed, I made sure I could provide it for her. We would spend our evenings talking on the phone as long as possible. On one particular conversation she had brought up her dad and one of the last conversations that they had before his passing.

“You know, I finally had a talk with dad a couple of days before he passed away.”

My curiosity was now piqued.

“Oh?”

I asked him about the letter and the whole catholic school thing.”

“What did he tell you?”

He didn’t want to say anything but I made him tell me. Apparently he had an idea that you and I were having sex. He had heard us early one morning when you walked me home and immediately thought the worst although he didn’t want to come out and talk to me about it. He talked to mom and he also talked to your parents but was met with mixed opinions. My dad and your mom were the only ones that were against our being together sexually. My mom and your dad were reasonable ok with.”

“I still don’t understand why they didn’t feel like they could come and talk to us if they had issues with it.”

“He had also confessed to me that your move to Australia and my enrollment in catholic school were orchestrated to separate us for good. My dad and your mom planned the whole thing.”

I was stunned. After all these years, the truth finally came out. I was livid that these two individuals had bitterly robbed us because they were too blind to understand what she and I had together. Hate and grudges were tempting but not an option. They may have robbed us of the life we could have had together, but we were back and still just as close as we were when I left. If anything, we proved that true love can never be permanently separated.

It took some time but once the dust had settled, her dads house had finally sold and the sisters were able to get back to some semblance of normal now that they had time to grieve and say goodbye in their own ways.

Em had made one last ditch effort to save her marriage by agreeing to go to a church marriage counselor at her husband’s request. The first visit went better than she had expected with the counselor backing her up saying that her husband needed to put more effort into courting his wife back into his life. As good an idea as that may have been, I couldn't imagine him wanting to put that kind of effort into saving anything much less his marriage. As far as Em was concerned it was too little too late. Deep down in her heart, she knew it and even her kids knew it was over.

It was about eleven thirty at night when my cell phone on my night stand rang. I hadn't been asleep long but I blindly reached for it and saw it was Em when I looked at the display.

"Hey beautiful, what's going on?"

By the sounds I was hearing, it was obvious that she had been crying before I heard her speak.

"Em. What's wrong? Where are you at?"

Through her tear choked voice, she finally answered.

"I am at home. Just having a hot bath."

Is everything OK? You don't normally call me this late. Not that I am complaining or anything. I always love to hear your voice no matter the time of day."

I could hear her smile a little bit through the phone.

"I'm OK...I am doing it Alex"

A million thing could have gone through my head at that point and I am pretty sure I knew exactly what she was talking about. I just needed to hear her say it.

"What exactly are you doing Em?"

"I am leaving Chuck. I can't do it anymore Alex."

I wasn't sure what to say or how to respond to that without sounding overjoyed when she was obviously hurting. I said the only thing I could think at that moment.

"I am proud of you babe. You deserve a hell of a lot better than what he has been handing you. Have you told him yet?"

"Not yet. He is still living with his mom and dad. We rarely talk anymore."

"Do you have a plan yet?"

"Not yet. I just decided it tonight. I was going to talk to my sister and see if she would let the kids and I stay with her until I could figure things out."

"That’s not necessary you know?"

"Why do you say that?"

"Because you have a safe haven here. You always have, you know that. I have plenty of room for all three of you. If you are interested anyway? Heidi already has a room here anyways."

She grew quiet as she was obviously contemplating my offer.

"You always were so good to me."

"We always were good to each other. And we were also always there for each other."

"That's true." she agreed.

"If you are absolutely sure this is what you want to do, just say the word. I will help pack you up."

There was more silence before she finally spoke.

"I love you Alex. I always have and always will."

"I love you too baby. I never stopped."

The next day was a Saturday and as it so happened, Chuck was off halfway across the state on a family camping trip which worked out perfect since he wouldn't be in our hair. I had rented a U Haul so we were able to get everything her and the kids wanted in one trip. It only took about half the day so by days end, I treated us to a nice dinner for the hard work.

The day itself had been somewhat hot and humid so with some air conditioning, we worked late unpacking and getting everybody settled in. The kids had crashed in their rooms about eleven while Em and I turned in about midnight where we both fell asleep rather quickly from a long exhausting day.

Having Em in bed with me once again after all these years was an incredible feeing. Knowing neither of us had to wake up in the early morning hours so I could quietly walk her back to her house across the street was an even better feeling.

About three o'clock in the morning, I opened my eyes to the sound of a loud thunder storm in progress. No longer seven years old, I laid in bed peacefully enjoying the sounds when I felt Em snuggle closer to me laying her head on my shoulder and draping her arm across my chest. I reciprocated by putting my arm around her to hold her close. When I heard her soft contented breathing, one thing was for certain. Neither of us were seven anymore. What used to bring us fear now only brought us calm in a very familiar way.

I had long been in the habit of sleeping in the buff. Not only was it much more comfortable but on a warm evening like what we had, it was also cooler. Em apparently had the same mindset as I was enjoying the feel of her soft bare skin pressed to mine.

I was not surprised when I felt her hand slide down my chest and softly fondle my balls. In the dark, we were facing each other as her hand roamed my body. When a brilliant flash of lightning lit up the room, we discovered that we were both smiling at each other obviously remembering and ready to recreate that same stormy night so many years ago.

As Em took my cock into her hand, we could both feel it harden in her hand as she gently stroked me. Pressing my lips to hers, I kissed her deeply while I fondled one of her breasts and she moaned softly as her nipple hardened in my hand.

Craving more of each other, we broke our kiss and re-positioned ourselves into a 69 position. Em took my cock in hand giving it a series of seductive licks before taking the fist couple of inches into her mouth. With her delectable pussy just in front of my face, I was more than ready to taste her sweet juices that were already starting to leak from her honey hole. My lips completely covered her womanhood as if I was passionately kissing her but I used the opportunity to drink up her secreting fluids by swabbing her lips and slit with my tongue before poking into her wet opening. At the same time, my thumb had found her clit and was gently massaging it.

Her hot lips slid slowly down the length of my hard shaft creating the most amazing sensations enhanced when her tongue would swirl around the head of my cock and teasing my frenulum. When the head of my cock would reach the back of her throat, I was sucking on her clit creating a humming sound that sent a vibrating pulse through her love button that had her cumming onto my tongue.

When Em gained her breath, she swung around and climbed on top of me. With a hungry look in her eyes, she took hold of my cock, lined the head up to her wet opening and sat slowly down until I was completely inside of her. As she started a grind, I began a thrust until we found a beautiful rhythm.

Outside the storm was still raging but was showing signs of settling while an occasional flash of lightning would illuminate the naked beauty riding me into the night. He pussy muscles would grip me tight on each upstroke while my hands fondled her bare breasts.

Switching positions, I held her by her ass and turned us over where she was now laying on her back with her head resting on the pillows. Her legs splayed open exposing her beautiful open pussy for my taking. As I moved between her legs, I took my hard cock in my hand and slid inside of her as far as I could go.

Lightning illuminated the room to show me her head tilted back with a look of ecstasy washing her face.

As I thrusted into her, I reached down and massaged her clit once again with the pad of my thumb while her legs draped over my shoulders.

Lightning flashed once again and I was overcome by the sudden sight of her breasts swaying back and forth, up and down with each thrust.

As her muscles squeezed me tight, I was now over the edge. My balls tightened and the head of my cock inflated inside of my lover and I filled her with spurt after spurt full of my creamy seed.

When we finished, I collapsed by her side holding her face in my hands and kissing her deep while we drifted off back to sleep with the rumbling storm now in the far off distance. We were no longer seven but two people who were still very much in love.

Chuck was certainly not happy that Emma had filed for divorce and showed it by trying to make things very difficult every step of the way which both angered and confused me. He spent so much time pushing her away and now that she has moved on he has now realized that she's no longer going to be there waiting for him to get his collective shit together. I guess that's what happens when you take things for granted. With Chuck's logic, she was only worth fighting for now but not when she was still with him putting up with all of his shit. He was too stupid to realize that if he had put that much effort into his marriage he would probably still be married to her.

Em's divorce became final about four months after she filed. Em and I married a year later in a nice beach side ceremony surrounded by close friends and family. As I placed the ring on her finger, I leaned in and whispered softly to her;

"I told you I would be back to give you the real thing."


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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 07:09
    A wonderful conclusion to a heartwarmingly soft epic tale of love and lovemaking. I salute you.

    - Wei Shen

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 12:33
    Thank you for such a great series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 17:25
    good ending to a great story

    would have liked him to confront his mother just as a little extra but thats just me....

    i hope you go on to write other stories as good as this one

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  • Mucker
    10.01.2013 18:06
    The series in its entirety was outstanding and shows a lot of writing talent. Thanks for sharing it with us. I hope you will continue to write and submit more of your stories here.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 18:10
    great story, please continue to write more stories like this, they are amazing :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 18:46
    OK, you redeemed yourself. Excellent story. With a lot of class. As with any really great story, there has to be an ending. The music rushes to crescendo conclusion. The camera pulls back from the ring on the finger to a soft dissolve to and helicopter shot over the beach setting with surrounding family, pulling back to include the ocean that looks as infinite as the love these two people will share for the rest of their days. The End displays on the screen followed by the comment ''And they lived happy ever after'' and a slow fade to black.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 18:48
    I agree, PLEASE, PLEASE!!! write another great story like this one. PLEASE!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 20:30
    great storie I liked the hole 5 chapters but I would have like to hear what your mom had to say about keeping you too apart

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.01.2013 23:39
    great storie I liked the hole 5 chapters but I would have like to hear what your mom had to say about keeping you too apart

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 02:48
    I haven't commented on any of the other chapters, but over the past hour or so I read them all and I have to say that it was and is my favorite price of writing on the site. All of the emotions felt genuine and not forced, more so than most other stories posted here. The sad truth is that most stories posted here are the written equivalent of cheap modern porn, the kind where there are maybe a couple of lines before the clothes come off, and this isn't that. This is a romantic movie, yes there are sex scenes, but the majority is a story about two people who are truly in love, as well as the story of how that love came to be. Other writers both on this site and off could learn a lot from this, and I can't wait to read your next work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 03:32
    First, let me say that your writing is really good, and the first several chapters were great. But as far as I'm concerned you TOTALLY fucked up what could have been a great love story. Chapters 4 and 5 sucked. It would have been a much better story if as soon as he finished school he came back to fine Emma, they both stayed true to each other and got back together. And as far as forgiving his mom. Fuck that! I would have never talked to my mom again. Like I said, great writing, but I hated the direction the story took.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 03:56
    i waited until I read the whole story before commenting. This is really a good nbtory of a lasting love though all the chalenges that were put upom them and finally came to the proper conclusion. Kudos and definately a positive rating from me.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 04:05
    As I said about part 1, a great story and reminded me of the girl I left behind so many years ago. You did a real good job and enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 05:02
    awesome story thank you it brought back a ton of great memories of my younger years

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 05:03
    What a story mate!And I agree fully,Daughtry is the best thing to come out of American Idols...back 2 the story,I have to agree with some other comments,C5 didn`t really live up to the expectation but this is a great romance story!Your ability to capture imagination is great

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 07:05
    A treat to read a series of good stories for a change rather than the immature pathetic garbage that clogs this site up

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  • Huggy+Bear
    11.01.2013 09:03
    Wow. I am overwhelmed by the feedback. Both good and bad. I thank you all for your words of encouragement. @unknown 3:33. I took the direction I did because Alex felt rejected and depressed like there was no longer a need to go back home. Otherwise I would have had him going home immediately. As far as mom goes, I never said mom was forgiven. I just said she was proven wrong. Like I said, there are a lot of true elements to this story so in a lot of ways, the story is still being written. Again, thank you all for the encouraging words. I truly appreciate them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.01.2013 19:42
    HuggyBear that was a great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2013 00:56
    THIS SERIES IS GREAT ONE OF THE BEST ON THIS SITE I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE SERIES KEEP THE GREAT WRITING COMING

    ;;

    JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2013 01:57
    This story reminds me of my life before my wife died

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.01.2013 02:04
    Best storie I ever read on this site. Great job mate =)

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.01.2013 21:08
    This story had many dramatic twists that could make it into a great book try and get it published, mabye it would even sell as a movie. It was full of ups and downs. I read all 5 in one night. This is the definetley the best series that I have read on this website, Make a 6th that tells about there life now.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.01.2013 00:33
    This brought me to tears. It's a beautiful, sappy love story. You, sir, have made mt day

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2013 00:24
    this was so incredibly beautiful! I loved each second of my reading! cried loads! amazingly well written! <3

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2013 00:33
    I wanted to read all 5 chapters before I commented and you sir have a tremendous talent. I thoroughly enjoyed reading these. Keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2013 03:04
    I absolutely loved this story. had me in tears a few times. I genually enjoy the coming of age stories but you took that and wrote a beautiful life story from it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2013 07:40
    You should make this into a book because it isn't all porn

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2013 17:57
    I didn't really like te ending the first four chapters were amazing but I didn't like the twist. Especially the kids maybe the one daughter would have been good but it almost tainted the love for each other

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.01.2013 17:57
    I didn't really like te ending the first four chapters were amazing but I didn't like the twist. Especially the kids maybe the one daughter would have been good but it almost tainted the love for each other

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.01.2013 10:46
    Absolutely amazing. The best story I have read in a long time, including published books. Very heart warming. Keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2013 00:24
    Soo fucking amazing

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.01.2013 01:35
    I loved this so sweet made me cry alot but I'm glad they ended back up together :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.01.2013 13:01
    It's a great story, but Alex's parents are assholes

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.01.2013 09:51
    If you toned down the porn this could actually become the storyline to a book or movie. You are definitely a quality writer, something that we dont see often here. Well done!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2013 01:50
    why the break-up :( oh well gotta have drama right :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.01.2013 17:56
    Glad for Alex. His Mother was a bitch and Emma's dad was an ass.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.02.2013 18:21
    Thank you very much for this masterpiece of a story.

    Like someone said before you don't have created some cheap porn, but a expensive Hollywood Blockbuster.
    Thank you for wasting you writing talent on this site, it is a major improvement to the average story quality and topic

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.02.2013 17:34
    Man that packed quite a punch. Such a bittersweet story. I actually put on that journey song and in combination with your story it brought tears to my eyes. Brilliantly done, thank you for it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.03.2013 02:45
    Great story. It's too bad Em had her tubes tied. It would have been nice for you and Em to have another child. But the story seemed to end on a happy, loving note and that, after all, is the best way.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2013 08:36
    That was such an awesome story. I almost cried when you where seperated

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2013 04:54
    good job I loved it

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.04.2013 04:56
    is there a way for us to get in touch i'm a student and theres a project that I am going to have to do in a few years that requires me to shoot a film and I think this is the perfect story to tell

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.04.2013 21:58
    This story... it's just ridiculous how well devoloped and seen through it is. Very, very, very great story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.05.2013 01:42
    beautiful story of heart break and then love and reunion again.... it is sort of too bad that she had to divorce her husband, but, he did in fact ask for it and I'm glad they finally got back together again

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.07.2013 14:41
    So beautiful I wish to find love like that some day.
    Parents that try to break love are nothing but monsters

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.07.2013 11:46
    Great story, really thought out and one of the best series out there

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.08.2013 20:54
    Such a beautiful story. I wish I could have what Alex and Em had

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2013 10:04
    Excellent story, I really enjoy it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2013 11:41
    I'm not one to very or anything nut that put a tear on my cheek
    Great story

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2013 11:42
    Lol it was meant to say
    I'm not one to cry or anything but that on put a tear on my cheek

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.11.2013 15:47
    very good story, excellent job establishing a realistic group of characters. Slightly dissapointed by the ending tho, something tells me aAlex would be harboring some resentment towards his parents. While not nessasary to the story I would really have loved to hear that particular encounter play out. VerryVery entertaining story. Thank you so much for posting it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.12.2013 04:43
    Loved the story I am glad I finished it hate that they got deprecated like that because the son of the other man must feel like a third wheel and that Alex doesn't love him like Heidi :( but still the fact that they ended up back in each other's arms put a smile on my face I really wish there was more to read =(

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2014 09:10
    No joke this can be a screenplay

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.01.2014 22:18
    Epic story..best love story ever

    Love it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.01.2014 16:35
    TbgFc0 Really appreciate you sharing this article.Thanks Again. Great.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.04.2014 07:19
    This was fantastic! Not only the detailed sexy but the romance and love between the two was great. Would love more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2014 00:24
    Really loved (but not the apart time, I didn't understand why she never tried to contact you) this whole tale it was endearing , loving, erotic , heartbreaking , horny and heart warming and it made me cry twice. Please write and post more, you're a very talented writer, it all flowed nicely except pt 3 you slightly skimmed over the break-up (,but I was distraught so didn't mind so much) had great pace , a good beginning ,middle and end , all in all sublime please continue Huggy, thanks. Luvsalik xx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2014 06:44
    Great story. The one thing that bugged me was that Alex didn't try to call Em from Australia. I had a long distance relationship when I was that age and we wrote letters and called each other.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.06.2014 07:02
    This story is just.....perfect.
    Real or not it's one of the best on this site.
    I envy a relationship like that.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2014 14:35
    allll thats so cute sencerly

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.08.2014 14:45
    this made me cry....just perfect, you're a lucky guy, Huggy Bear.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2014 09:30
    WHY DO I FEEL!!!!! UR STORY WAS AMAZING BRUH!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2014 09:34
    i was listing to daughtry while reading cried like bitch

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2014 05:33
    Wht a awsum gr8 story! I 4got I had a xam when I was reading! Thnx a lot bro.. Keep it up.. We want more lyk this frm u..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.09.2014 05:39
    Why this story makes me cry? I got super emotional reading this..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.09.2014 14:05
    Can u countiue this story please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2014 23:16
    Please continue this series. Your writing is great and there was a real connection with the characters.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2014 21:13
    i almost cryed when he read the letter and I thought she or he gonna die from depression or suicide

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2014 23:05
    I loved the entire story, wish you had more to show how their lives were together afterwards, must the hopeless romantic in me I guess... please do consider amending to it if you would... thanks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.11.2014 03:58
    This entire series was amazing. Sexy, funny, and it hit me in the feels. There were parts where I wanted to cry. Talented. That's a good word for you. You should write another romance like this series. I totally enjoyed it. AMAZING!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.12.2014 06:33
    Beautiful, Just Beautiful

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.02.2015 06:46
    That was truly an awesome story! Thank you so much for sharing that with us!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.02.2015 04:14
    u should make a series on tonya and steve from earlier in the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.02.2015 05:21
    I loved this story!!! I almost cried when he got the letter from her dad:( My hear dropped I wasn't expecting that at all. I'm glad they got back together! :) Please tell more! I want to know more! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.02.2015 05:23
    I loved this story!!! I almost cried when he got the letter from her dad:( My hear dropped I wasn't expecting that at all. I'm glad they got back together! :) Please tell more! I want to know more! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2015 22:42
    It was really a nice story guys,I got tears in my eyes . recently I got broke up with my first and true love because my mom dont like her and I hope I would also meet her again in my life I love her sooo much

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.03.2015 08:21
    I was crying throughout 4 and 5. All in all, a great story. Would love to read more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2015 22:01
    If ur reading this please make more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2015 22:57
    If ur reading this please make more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.03.2015 23:27
    What was true and what wasnt?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.04.2015 15:05
    That was a beautiful story. Chapter 4 was tough read but the ending made it so amazing. Thank you for writing such a great story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.04.2015 04:36
    Not the end why !! I love that story so much

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.04.2015 06:35
    Best fricken story I've ever read.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.04.2015 00:44
    Why didnt he just ever call or email.....this makes me hate parents. Always ruining love

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.05.2015 10:26
    I cried about mid way and thats alot to say coming from a teenage male

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2015 01:11
    beautiful story. thanks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2015 01:08
    Best story ever written, worth a million euro

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.06.2015 05:42
    I loved this story(series). I could definitly relate to some parts of this. It's like ppl always say, true love never dies.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2015 10:37
    I really admire this story :) it helps me to believe that the word FOREVER Is real. Just have a faith in it. Thank you for this wonderful story of yours :) I hope I can still read some stories like this which really gave me that different feeling which I still felt at this time.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2015 01:29
    This is like a good fifty shades of grey

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2015 09:27
    Awesome piece of work, I loved it. It does not get much better than this. Congratulations

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.08.2015 06:13
    wow... That was amazing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2015 07:18
    The way alex feels about emma is how I feel about a special girl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2015 04:39
    Absolutely an amazing ending

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2015 10:42
    This story needs to have a longer version taking a longer anthology of the characters through the stages of development, and needs to also wrap or close with a conversation between Alex and his mom, for helping to split Emma and him up.

    She's the last character to get a bit more background and whatever logic was going through her and Emma's dad's head.

    What kind of parent ruins the purity of a deep romance of their child to another child who is already supposedly treated like family already.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2015 08:48
    I'm really curious as to what parts of the plot were true versus what was fictionalized.

    The real life Emma and Alex did have a romantic relationship yes?

    Did real life Alex's mom and Emma's dad really split them up vindictively without real explanations?


    Did real life Alex get denied early fatherhood experiences because of a real life separation?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.11.2015 08:53
    This was such an amazing story. I actually didn't treat it like a sex story I was just immersed in the entire thing. Bravo for writing a truly amazing story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.11.2015 06:14
    I hope parts of this was true especially the end. Even though I am a guy I am a hopeless romantic. Very good story. If it's true I hope 4 the best of both of u.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.11.2015 07:50
    Very nice love story. You did a terrific job!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.11.2015 09:20
    nice story I loved it Bravo!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2015 22:45
    tha was one of my fav storys

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.12.2015 16:38
    Such an amazing story, it was like an emotional rollercoaster and I actually found myself crying at points. The ending better be true because if it isn't I'll probably be crying some more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.12.2015 18:03
    This story is more than I expected. It was really good and I couldn't stop reading after the first part. (feel kinda sad that it's not s true story though)

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  • trashman110
    03.01.2016 16:40
    Very nicely done. You took time to carefully build up every part of the story. Definitely rates a 10 out of 10.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.01.2016 06:05
    Wow this has to be the best series on this site

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.01.2016 20:59
    Sad that it's over. I loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.01.2016 07:34
    Wow. Surprisingly sweet and sentimental. Not enough edgy sex for this site, but there's certainly a place for good story telling. Great job!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.01.2016 07:30
    Amazing that's all I have to say

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.01.2016 18:29
    He should have confronted his mother. Otherwise an awsome series.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 13:00
    Nice story dude..and unlike many I like the idea of not talking about the break up to your Mother... People didn't read the story to well.. why bring up the Mother.. what I read was she took her on life out of the life of her Granddaughter life for 16yrs.. enough said lol..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 13:41
    Trust me people..missing out on a granddaughter or your kid because of a bad idea is enough.. I watched my mom being killed inside out by my brothers and sisters holding theirs from her...I know how that's enough enough to say..mom guess what u have a 16yrs old granddaughter..lol I'm sure that's the first and only thing needed to be said..trust me that's will tear up any grandmother..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 14:05
    Nice story dude..and unlike many I like the idea of not talking about the break up to your Mother... People didn't read the story to well.. why bring up the Mother.. what I read was she took her on life out of the life of her Granddaughter life for 16yrs.. enough said lol..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 14:12
    Honestly the worst get back to mom would be true love..all u need to do is make sure u mom gets to know her..lol I would set it up to where she spends weeks at a time with your mom..allow love to break/crush the ice for me..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.02.2016 04:06
    Great story!!!!! About confronting his mother...I think it wasn't neccesary after Em's dad confrontation. It basically would have been pretty much the same in most detail.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2016 04:10
    That was a great story!!!! Many similarities to the way my own life had gone. My wife and I dated in high school and made our way back to each other after 23 years! Awesome story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2016 22:07
    Think you should continue this story line.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2016 03:31
    This was a great story that I enjoyed very much. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2016 05:18
    Loved the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.08.2016 20:52
    Loved the story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.08.2016 07:16
    I almost forgot I was on xnxx LOL. needless to say I hope you have many more stories like this to come

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.09.2016 04:04
    Lol yea had to look twice at it, just to see if I was still on xnxx, man that was a good story tho, keep it up Bro

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.09.2016 02:39
    Great story. But I almost forgot I was on a porn site LOL. I hope you make many more like this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.10.2016 23:07
    very,very good story. not a sex,sex,sex story. this story is a perfect mix of every-thing. thankyou for a really good read.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.11.2016 03:20
    I found all of it awesome. Not only is it erotic guy has so much heart in it.... I am greatful that I could read this. Thx

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.11.2016 18:56
    amazing story...loved the happy ending .....keep it up bro

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2016 19:34
    Fantastic!!! I'm a man and you had shedding a tear. Great writing. Great story keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2016 07:52
    Man I didn't even read this cor the sex I read it for the story, it is beautiful I just wish they had never been split up :(

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2017 15:11
    Dam I am the same as nearly everyone else didn't read this for the sex it was purely an amazing story and one of the few that make this site not just sex sex sex but somewhere people can really show their talents. I'm a man and this story had me on edge and emotional thinking about what it would be like to lose my girl like that... Amazing writing keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.01.2017 07:34
    God damn it you got me reading until 2:30 in the morning and now I'm in tears. Absolutely loved it, you have to start writing actuel books, plz make more stories like this, not mindless sex sex sex but a actuel story. If you ever write a actuel book plz post the name of it. I'm extremely satisfied, thank you

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.01.2017 05:16
    I came here to cum not cry. Please write a book. You're so fucking talented

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