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Sex games

The 13 year old sleepover.

Author: Unknown user

Date: 9 March 2013

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So this is not a true story but its about this wild fantasty i had with a girl named Lily. This story contains sexual activities between underage people and more
specifically 13. If your not into this leave now and take your comments elsewhere. Remember this is my first story so please leve any constuctive critsism down below.

So this starts with Lily one of my good friends inviting me to one of her sleepovers with Emily. Lily and Emily are both 13. Emily has a perfect body and beatiful face,
as well as long blonde hair that goes down past her shoulders. Lily is a little chubby but not too much. Just enough to make her body very sexy. She has brunnete hair
that about reaches her tits. So lily lives with her grandmother and she is rather old and doesnt think too well and I told my parents that I would be at my friend
Jake's for the night, wich is how I even got to this sleepover. It started off as expected with small talk about boys and shit until emily made the suggestion
to play truth or dare. This deffinetely got my attention as I knew it would lead to something interesting. I went first and emily asked me a question. "do
you like Lily" . Shyly i answered " a little i guess" not knowing how they would react if I told them I wanted to fuck lily's brains out right then and
there. So next it was Lily's turn. I asked her if she had ever kissed a boy and she said yes "but only one time with one of me ex's." The game carried on with silly
middle school like questions, until it finally got interesting when I picked dare, and Emily dared me to make out with lily. We both looked at eachother and smiled
a bit and I said "ok I'll do it". Emily looked at me in shock, and I was sure she had noticed the boner I was getting from the thought of what was ganna happen
next. I leaned towards Lily with now a raging hard on and started to kiss her. The way we were possisioned my cock rubbed up aginst the top of her leg and she
automatically stopped. Once she realized what it was she immediately reached back in and began to passionately make out with me, wich took even me by surprise. But
when she was done, she just stopped and said "ok emily its your turn now". "ok" she said confused. "I dare you to let andrew grab your boob" said lily with the most
confident voice. We just sat akwardly in silence until.. "ok i guess i have to its the game". At this point my dick was almost throbbing in pain I was so hard. I
reached over and slowly cupped my hand around her perky tit. And when i did emily let out a soft moan. So I continued to rub and play with her nipple for about 30
seconds or so. And we continued on with the game strangly and akwardly. "ok lily ive got a dare". "I dare all of us to get naked" I said preying not to get smacked
across the face. Immediatly Emily, still horny from the nipple play earilier began to take her shirt off. Following Lily who had preiously started I began to strip.
And when I let my hard 7 inch cock spring loose from my boxers all four eyes immediatly gazed in amazment. This is were things got interesting. At this point our
little game had ended and Lily came over and started kissing me and suprisingly enough had my cock in her hand as she did it. Then Emily came over and began playing
with the rest of my dick that couldnt fit in lilys hand and playing with my balls. With the other hand she started rubbing Lily's clit wich just made her kiss me even
harder. Emily than reached down and started to suck me off! While still playing with lilys clit we were all moaning at this point. Then we swapped positions and Lily
sat on my cock taking alot of the length of it into her tight virgin cunt. Emily sat on my face and I began to eat out her cute little pussy. I started to moan and
then skreeched out "im ganna cum". Emily jumped off my face and begged to swallow my cum. Lily hopped off and Emily took the FULL length of my cock in her mouth, and I
came rope after rope into her hot mouth. She tried to swallow it all but it started to come out of her mouth and seep around the side of her face. With cum still
dripping off her chin she turned around and screamed "fuck me, I want you so bad". I took her by surprise as I plunged my cock right into her ass and she screamed in
pain. "NO!" she screeched, knowing thats not what she ment. I kept going though and she started to enjoy it, wich i could tell from her moaning and the way she was
licking the rest of my cum off her face. I then reached over and started licking Lily's beatiful breasts, and fingering her pussy viguorously. I was slowly circling
my toung aroud her small nipple and i could tell she was loving it. "OH Fuck" she screamed as she came all over my hand. She was a serious squirter and she grabbed
my hand and licked off all of her own pussy juices. As i continued to fuck Emily in the ass without warning i shot my cum right into her little fuck hole. She
screamed and came so hard as she felt my semen seep into her ass. All of us exhausted we fell asleep, with my cock still in Emily's ass, and Lily still having her
own juices in her mouth....

To be countinued.. Sorry this was kind of a short story but it was my first and i would like some help for my future stories down below. Thank you for reading :D


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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2013 14:54
    you should split it up into paragraphs so that it is easier to read. however other than that it was a good read.

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  • bigbob1200
    09.03.2013 15:09
    yea sounded good but the way you do the CR it comes out extremely hard to read

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2013 15:12
    Seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeex



    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeex

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2013 15:26
    The ideas behind the story are good, but you need to clean up your formatting and get a proof reader.

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  • DrinkMe
    09.03.2013 15:47
    Nice story. I recommend slowing is down a bit an discribe more of the sex and their bodies. I look farwared to the nex chapter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2013 16:55
    Ummm... first, I would suggest a course on the use of the English language (grammar, punctuation, capitalization, etc), then recommend you try again. @t has some po

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2013 18:43
    little longer pleeeeeze

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2013 20:52
    Nice,Keep Continuing

    Bitch

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2013 21:37
    Good story but seemed rushed and needs lots of work on grammar. Not sure why the main character suddenly turned into a sadistic asshole and ass raped one of his loving partners for no reason? Nothing like taking a beautiful night of enjoyable sex and ruining it by brutally ripping a young girls unprepared ass to bloody shreds while she screams NO in pain. if this is the direction your future stories will follow, please be sure to tag them appropriately so I can avoid them.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.03.2013 23:15
    Your spelling is atrocious!!! No excuse for that, plenty of programs that will check that for you. You're gonna have to work a lot harder than this if your gonna impress anyone!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 10:21
    Story structure sucked.
    And the direction was rushed and disjointed.
    Get something other than a D on the English papers you are undoubtedly getting in high school and try again.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 15:27
    wow that formatting is really hard to read! paragraphs are your friends, they don't mind if you use them!

    other wise, a good story!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 15:40
    7 inch cock? Bullshit.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 15:52
    I get that this is a fantasy and all, but the whole story had no build to it.try expanding the story so that it take a while to get to the climax. also, the "truth or dare" part esculated way too quickly. at first its all "have you ever kissed a guy?" the next second its " lets get naked and do anal without lube!" expand more and slow down the pace,then you will have great story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 15:53
    Why do you leave your sentences dangling and pick up again on the next line. That looks so sloppy and make your story very difficult to read. Proof-read your stuff BEFORE submitting so that you can correct all of these errors.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 16:50
    you have an eye for detail that is a refreshing new feel to this site good job. You need to start to create a backstory with your next series or even a bit later in this one to really give it the feel of reality.
    overall I did enjoy it thank you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 17:05
    Sorry to see that you left the brutal ass rape scene in, and as I had posted previously there is nothing like ruining a great sex scene with loving partners than by willingly brutaly ripping a young girls ass to a bloody mess while she screams no in pain. I`m guessing this must be your prefered sexual style to write, and as I receive no enjoyment from reading about torturing, especially young ladies I`ll be sure to avoid your future stories.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 17:36
    You are fucking her ass but shoot your load into her little fuck hole, do you not know the difference?

    Please no follow ups and learn to write and format too.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.03.2013 17:51
    m8 vry good! I hor horny aswell... :) ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2013 02:12
    No blood, no mess, no rape. There are a small percentage of partners who like the feeling of pain with their sex, the writer clearly indicated that the girl eventually got off on the accidental ass-poking. Judgmental asshole.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2013 12:51
    No means no. its that simple. negative rating from me.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.03.2013 13:31
    Good first story but in later ones try to add more details and slow it down a bit, also maybe add a bit of a story to lead up to the sex

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.03.2013 07:14
    It was a good being to something that could be a long on going storyline.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.03.2013 01:47
    Good start to a story. If you added a little more detail that would help, cause it felt really rushed. Also, the formatting made it a little bit hard to read. Looking forward to reading more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.03.2013 22:21
    1. Use spell check or something of the sort. I hate incorrect spelling.
    2. Check for over used and misused words. You over used and.
    3. Try to separate ideas into a paragraph format.
    4. Slow down when you write to take a chance to fully draw a picture of what you are trying to get across. Your first story is short, but all that matters is that you put 100% effort into making it. If you didn't really try to make this, that's why it came out as 10%. If you did try, I am very sorry you wrote such a sad first story.
    5. Use more tags, so I know what I'm going to be reading about.

    ~Hope your future stories are an improvement.
    Good luck.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.03.2013 11:40
    Hey fucktards, MALE DOMINATION and ANAL are clearly in the tags, why don't you read those before giving a bad review

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.05.2013 02:31
    It has potential but you need to split it up into paragraphs,get a proof reader, format it better, etc,.

    --DtA

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.05.2013 21:29
    Theshadow.





    Ummm it whent a little fast dont ya thnk and it well...how do I put this... unrealistic but its ok for you first story

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.05.2013 17:09
    It's a giod strt but try to make your stories a bit lobger by adding some more detailas. and try not to make it so fast. let the story to flow slowly to catch the reader.


    Good luck!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.05.2013 01:29
    It doesn't have anything with the ages of the characters you had picked up!
    But FUCK, don't torture us anymore!
    DON'T WRITE ANYTHING ELSE!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.05.2013 19:59
    good story as in the first two comments make it longer but it still was great

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.05.2013 17:34
    its was amazing and I injoyed it

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.05.2013 03:54
    make it longer babe but it still made my set wet











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  • anonymous+reader
    26.05.2013 20:53
    made me so horny im gonna masturbate

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.07.2013 04:13
    this was ok put more work into it

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2013 11:13
    i am horny as fuck good story but the words were to close

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 00:02
    i had fucked 2 girls at once and I just turned 9.5

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 23:40
    Your the best keep fu**ing people even harder.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 13:06
    wait a secound I know this lily she was one of my friends before she moved away the description fits her perfectly

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 13:09
    good work continue........

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2013 05:26
    Do not call the number below I was almost caught by my parents... Please don't call the number below THANK YOU

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2013 10:36
    Pretty good but I found it wasn't really discriptive enough

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2013 22:24
    ima tit lover to raging boner hole time

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2013 14:22
    the story was a bit short and a little bit unrealistic, so try to improve that next time

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.08.2013 14:26
    the story was a bit short and a little bit unrealistic, so try to improve that next time

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.09.2013 11:55
    im rachid erid in adrela ma3akem fi xnbxx

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2013 08:21
    I've really wanted to fuck a 13 yr girl anyone want to send me pictures?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2014 09:40
    Well that escalated quickly

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2016 23:10
    ADD MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

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