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My stepbrother fucked me

Author: taylorabby166

Date: 27 March 2013

Ass to mouth, True Story, First Time, Incest

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I’m 16 and my stepbrother(JD) is 17 and I had been having a crush on JD for 3 years because I just met him 2 years ago. So ok it was a Saturday and I was there for a week and JD’s gf was leaving and she was playing with his dick and I walked in so I told my dad. Then my dad and stepmom were going out to eat so me and JD were left alone. I told JD that I was getting in the shower and he said why you smell good already. But I thought I stunk but I took the shower and got out of the shower and I was only in a towel and JD took my towel and ran so I got embarrassed and ran to my room. He then told me that he didn’t see anything. I told him that I was getting dressed and then me and him agreed we were going to watch a movie. I bent over wearing booty shorts to get American Pie and I put it in. Then I sat next to JD and I didn’t mean to put my hand on his crouch but I did. I got tired and fell asleep on his lap. He woke me up and our parents were still not home. I asked him if I could barrow a pair of his boxers due to I got super wet and my panties were soaked. He lent me a pair then I cooked us dinner and he asked me are you a virgin I said JD of course and then I said why he was like because your virginity should be took by someone that loves you. And I couldn’t help but turn around and kiss his cheek and say someone like you thanks for looking out for me. He said yes totally like me I should take it right now. I said what! No I was kidding and he said no you wern’t I know you fantasize about me. And I tripped and kissed him and I then just stod there lost in his hotness as he squeezed me harder and harder. I then said we shouldn’t be doing this but let’s do it. We ate then he took me into my room and I said just go slow at first and he said can do. I then took off the boxers and he got on his knees and said moan all you want no one can hear. JD then started licking my pussy and fingered me I moan once or twice. Then I said stop so I can suck your cock and I did so. He said are you sure you’ve never sucked a cock and I says I’m sure what goes into my mouth. He came in my mouth and then put his dick in my pussy at first I screamed and he said pain will turn into pleasure. And it did I was then moaning more and more he then stoped and said I love you sis. I said I love you too and he started up again but faster and we didn’t stop until we both came. Later after we ate again and our parents went to bed we watched a movie and this time instead of him being on top I was and then we fell asleep together. I had a thong on and a t- shirt he had only boxers on and our parents woke up and saw us and took a picture of us sleeping. We’ve fucked in many other places and we keep doing this we love each other because we satifi what are gf and bf can’t do so yea more stories of us to come this was our first time.


Next story
Me, my boyfriend, JD's girlfriend, and JD was at a carnival. We had so much fun that we got sick on the Zipper. And then JD's girlfriend left so it was just me, JD, and Jonathan (my boyfriend). So our parents drove us home and then left to go eat for 3 hours. I got hungry and made all of us food. We ate then I got horny watching Scary Movie 2. So I asked if jonathan wanted to have sex and he said, "yea why not." So I got my thong on and took my bra off. I walked out of my room because JD looked like he was sleeping. Jonathan pushed me in the chair and started to lick my pussy and then fingered me. JD woke up and I was sucking Jonathan's dick. JD then said, "hey your not supposed to be doing that but if you let me in this I won't tell." I got scared and said, "no." Jonathan pulled JD aside and said, "let's make her fantasies come true and make her super wet." JD agreed and started to kiss me and finger me. Jonathan took his dick out and stoked it. I pushed JD and then Jonathan grabbed me and I started to suck his dick and JD stuck his dick in my pussy and went slow then fast. We stopped then I sat on Jonathan's dick and bounced on it, while JD sucked my nipples. Jonathan pulled my hair and squeezed my tits. JD shoved his dick in my mouth and moaned a little. Then Jonathan asked if I was okay. And then pushed me on the couch and left. JD then took over and I moaned all lot. Finally I came and JD came.

The songs that played in both stories.
Radioactive

I'm waking up to ash and dust
I wipe my brow and I sweat my rust
I'm breathing in the chemicals

I'm breaking in, shaping up, then checking out on the prison bus
This is it, the apocalypse
Whoa

I'm waking up, I feel it in my bones
Enough to make my systems blow
Welcome to the new age, to the new age
Welcome to the new age, to the new age
Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, I'm radioactive, radioactive
Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, I'm radioactive, radioactive

I raise my flags, don my clothes
It's a revolution, I suppose
We're painted red to fit right in
Whoa

I'm breaking in, shaping up, then checking out on the prison bus
This is it, the apocalypse
Whoa

I'm waking up, I feel it in my bones
Enough to make my systems blow
Welcome to the new age, to the new age
Welcome to the new age, to the new age
Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, I'm radioactive, radioactive
Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, I'm radioactive, radioactive

All systems go, the sun hasn't died
Deep in my bones, straight from inside

I'm waking up, I feel it in my bones
Enough to make my systems blow
Welcome to the new age, to the new age
Welcome to the new age, to the new age
Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, I'm radioactive, radioactive
Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, I'm radioactive, radioactive

Money and Hoe

I Got Money And Hoes,
In Different Area Codes.
They Come Down The Block,
They Want My Cock.
I'm Flashing My Bling,
There Sucking My Ding.
Asphxiation, Prescription Perfection.
So I Walk Up To The Bar,
Looking Like A Star.
When Diamonds And Ice,
Look O So Nice.
Hi I'm Danger!
Hi I'm Gangster!
Hi I'm Mighter Than
Any Power Ranger!

I Got Money And Hoes,
In Different Area Codes.
I Walk Down The Block,
They Want What I Got.
I Got Money And Hoes,
In Different Area Codes.
I Walk Down The Block,
I Get What I Want!
(X2)
Don't Even Dare,
You Can't Fucking Compare.
You Best Prepare,
I'm About To Declair,
My Money Affair,
Will Be Your Worst Nightmare.
Your Rap Is Whack,
So Lay Off The Crack.
Just Follow Me,
And Be Obscene.
Leave Parents Feeling, Disgusting.
So Honey! Get Some Money!
Fuck Me Like A Playboy Bunny.
I Got Money And Hoes,
In Different Area Codes.
I Walk Down The Block,
They Want What I Got.
I Got Money And Hoes,
In Different Area Codes.
I Walk Down The Block,
I Get What I Want!
(X2)
Make Love Not War,
More Stellar Than Star Wars.
I'm So Epic,
My Collection Is Ecletic.
If The Price Is Right,
You'll Be Mine Tonight.
I'm From The Streets Bitch,
And I'm Hood Rich.
My Grill Is So I'll,
It'll Make Your Titties Spill,
Yeah I Kill Bill,
So Lay Off My Thrill.
I Got Money And Hoes,
In Different Area Codes.
I Walk Down The Block,
They Want What I Got.
I Got Money And Hoes,
In Different Area Codes.
I Walk Down The Block,
I Get What I Want!
(X2)


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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2013 19:51
    This was a total pile of shit!!! Definitily one of the worst on the whole site. Strongly encourage you to not waste anymore of your own or anyone else's time!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2013 20:12
    Sort out the grammar, punctuation, paragraphs etc and don't write in such clipped, rushed sentences. Go (back?) to school, pay attention in English Literature and read some books to get an idea of what a story should look like.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2013 20:35
    What a peace of shit, I can't belive you even posted it, so don't continue with more crap like this...

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2013 21:38
    What the fuck was that. ?

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2013 23:19
    How do you have a crush on someone a year before you even meet them?? I stoped reading as soon as I read the first line and within that one line it contridected its self and made absolutely no sense.

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.03.2013 23:33
    let me see if I can be helpful.
    you need to do what ever one else says as far as grammar and spacing.
    You need to describe things, think of how things feel, smell, taste sound look, etc.
    I love stories written from females and so I hope you try again

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 02:46
    ahhh hmmm ok whatever what are you like 11 if that? seriously WTF

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 10:06
    Troll story is troll stor

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 15:54
    This was a good story keep it up

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 17:43
    Please don't waste our time with this drivel.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 20:13
    Okay, I am going to try and be as gentle as possible. You must have read enough of what’s on this site to put in a story of your own. So, time for the CONTRUCTIVE criticism, you must proofread before you send anything to a website. Proof read, Proof read, Proof read… it is a must! Now, if you’ve seen with the comments of others, when you send your stuff out there for the public to see they will be brutally honest. Yes it can be hurtful but take it all in stride. This will make you a better and stronger writer. I am in NO way perfect but, I have been writing for almost ten years and you might find what I say helpful.
    You have too many run-on sentences. “I’m 16 and my stepbrother(JD) is 17 and I had been having a crush on JD for 3 years because I just met him 2 years agoâ€u009d, your first sentence completely contradicts itself. Your story needs an intro! Without it, how will your readers be invested in your characters? Who are they? Who are you? You need the buildup (haha!!! No

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 20:15
    Part 1--- Okay, I am going to try and be as gentle as possible. You must have read enough of what’s on this site to put in a story of your own. So, time for the CONTRUCTIVE criticism, you must proofread before you send anything to a website. Proof read, Proof read, Proof read… it is a must! Now, if you’ve seen with the comments of others, when you send your stuff out there for the public to see they will be brutally honest. Yes it can be hurtful but take it all in stride. This will make you a better and stronger writer. I am in NO way perfect but, I have been writing for almost ten years and you might find what I say helpful.
    You have too many run-on sentences. “I’m 16 and my stepbrother(JD) is 17 and I had been having a crush on JD for 3 years because I just met him 2 years agoâ€u009d, your first sentence completely contradicts itself. Your story needs an intro! Without it, how will your readers be invested in your characters? Who are they? Who are you?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 20:15
    pt 2---You need the buildup (haha!!! No pun intended) we have to know the relationship between you and JD or else, why would we care? Also, you must separate your dialogue. While I was reading your story, I found myself lost and confused as to what the conversation was even about. The story seems to jump from one situation to the next. Do you read often? Reading anything and everything will help develop your writing skills even if it’s not something you want to do professionally. “. I told JD that I was getting in the shower and he said why you smell good already. But I thought I stunk but I took the shower and got out of the shower and I was only in a towel and JD took my towel and ran so I got embarrassed and ran to my room.â€u009d, huh??? You cannot write in the same manner that you speak! It’s fine when you are texting your friends but not okay in a more formal setting, like writing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 20:17
    pt3---Even though this is a porn site, remember that people still want to read good writing. They still want to read a good story. What about writing something like,
    “The scorching Florida summer had become too much to bare. I finally gave up and opted for a shower. As I gathered my towel and headed for the bathroom, J.D reached out for my arm. There was a sort of playfulness to his eyes that radiated all the way down to my toes. My cheeks flamed under my already hot skin. His touched lingered longer than it should have but I didn’t mind.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 20:17
    pt4--- “Taking a shower?’ he asked
    “Yeahâ€u009d I shrugged “It’s hot and I’m sure I smell like a skunkâ€u009d
    J.D flared his noise slightly, “Na.. you smell good. You always smell goodâ€u009d there was a husky breathless sound to his voice, like he had just run a marathon.â€u009d
    You see? It wasn’t perfect by any means but a little something to give you an idea of what I I’m trying to explain. Writing is all about writing what you see. You already have the image; now just “writeâ€u009d it down. Every detail of it! When the story finally ends it feels like it’s been left unfinished. As if you didn’t know what else to write or how to write it and just stopped there.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 20:18
    pt5---I will touch briefly on the second story; because let’s face it, this comment is getting a bit too long…lol…I don’t even know what to say to be quite honest. It was poorly written. Poorly detailed and not well thought out it all. How does someone who just lost their V-card get into a threesome anyway? And if they do, I doubt any guy would say this, ---, "yea why not." So I got my thong on and took my bra off. I walked out of my room because JD looked like he was sleeping. Jonathan pushed me in the chair and started to lick my pussy and then fingered me. JD woke up and I was sucking Jonathan's dick. JD then said, "hey your not supposed to be doing that but if you let me in this I won't tell.--- quite in that way. J.D is her step-brother still and there has to be some sort of care there. some sort of tenderness. I hope I’m not getting to personal but, have you had sex yet?

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 20:19
    pt6---From your writing, I’m not so sure that you have. You can’t write about something you have not done yourself. Although I like the music selection, I wonder why put it there in the first place? Was it filler? Or was it something to share, like, “this is what I listened to while writing thisâ€u009d… I don’t think it was necessary to add the songs (or the whole lyric for that matter)…so… just so you don’t think I’m some fraud talking out of my ass, I’ve put a small sample of my writing to show I have some idea of what I am talking about…it’s not a full paragraph or anything but it may give you an idea of a simple structure for your next story… good luck! ;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.03.2013 20:20
    pt7--- “Drink from meâ€u009d I said.
    I turned my back towards him and lowered my shirt a little to show my neck and collar bone. I could hear Damien’s breath shake. With shaky hands he gently grabbed my shoulders; I closed my eyes and held my breath.
    “Are you sure?â€u009d Damien spoke softly.
    I turned to look into his chocolate brown eyes. They were raw with passion and desire.
    “Yesâ€u009d I whispered and turned my head.

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  • DrinkMe
    29.03.2013 00:20
    This had so much potential but I had to stop reading because I had to fill in the blanks. I'll give it a read if you correct it and repost.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.03.2013 04:28
    what a load of illiterate crap, you are not tweeting or texting so use proper words and not abbreviations.

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.03.2013 13:17
    Must not have made it thru 5th grade. What a waste !!

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.04.2013 22:46
    ok you had a crush on him for 3 years, but you just met him 2 years ago. I stopped right there, and after scrolling down, i'm glad I did

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  • StoryTrollin
    17.04.2013 17:21
    Pretty difficult to have a crush on someone you haven't met...just sayin'.

    Wow, either join some first graders to read something that makes sense (and is far more complex in imagination than this) and increase your writing ability or just stop. Thanks.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.04.2013 08:18
    Hmmm,what a trash...wondas shall neva cease...is't a must 4 u 2 post a story,coz u r nt makin sense here...

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.05.2013 16:12
    it wasn't the best but it wasn't horrible it was just to scatterted make sure you describe in more detail next time but over all it wasn't bad

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2013 03:32
    Call me girl817 212 9850

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2014 00:08
    You need to take a grammar course you moron

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.11.2014 08:34
    pliz put in more detail it also adds pleasure to the reader so nxt tym put in more detail eg.how long his coak is nd how tight u r!!!

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