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Sex games

Who do you want to kiss

Author: dirty girl

Date: 20 February 2005

Bi-sexual, True Story, First Time, Lesbian

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I was about 13 years old when this happend I was a very horny child, but for now some reason I dont get that way anymore. I fabricated at it a bit : P




"I can't wait to kiss a boy!" Carolina said as she paged through her Tiger Beat magazine.

"I wan't to kiss Devin, the guy in my math class. You know him right?" she said as she looked up at me.

"uh hu." I muttered. I was too busy thinking about the boy that I wanted to kiss to say anything else. I didn't want to tell her, but I thought her 16 year old brother was very enchanting. Almost every night this month I had gone to bed and fantasized about his pouty lips, slowly grazing every inch of my body. Eventually I'd masterbate, and call out his name. I saw people on some soap opera do that. "Oh, Kyle," I'd moan, as if he was right there listening to me encouraging him.

Carolina stood up and tossed her magazine on to her bed. She walked over to her mirror which hung above her dresser. "Im pretty..right?" she turned and looked at me.

"Yeah," I said quickly so she wouldnt ask me what I was thinking about.

"I'd kill to have those boobs, you get all the attention."
Carolina smiled.

She was pretty tall for a thirteen year old, about 5'5. She had dark brown curly hair that went down to the middle of her back. She was fairly skinny, but she really did have some curves. A lot of the girls in our grade hated her because of her body. No one liked to compair thier pre-pubescent bodies to hers, we all felt inadiquate around Carolina.

"What boy do you want to kiss?" she said as she pranced over to me.

"Well," I stammered for the words. "He is an older guy....it doesnt matter..nevermind."

Carolina snaped back "What does he look like?"

I started to blush as I began to describe Carolina's brother to her. Inside my mind I was hoping that she would know who I was talking about, I thought maybe she could help me get to kiss him. But at the same time I didnt want her to know, becuase of the obvious reasons.

"Well, he's got big green eyes, and long pretty eye lashes. Um...the most beautiful lips ever.. the bottom one is so pouty..brown hair down to his ears...."

Carolina snapped me out of my day dream to hiss "You want my brother...dont you....admit it!"

She was fascinated with this new discovery.

After about 30 seconds of being embarassed and looking down at the floor I finally sputtered somthing out "yeah...I do...dont be mad, theres no way he'd go for me anyways."

"I know for a fact that he likes younger girls, so dont rule anything out yet. I mean your pretty too, you have beautiful long blonde hair, and sparkly blue eyes...I mean you have a pretty face, you'll be hot when your older." she said matter of factly.

"Im scared to kiss a boy, I dont know how to do it...Im afraid Ill mess up and do somthing stupid." I said disheartendly.

Just then Carolina looked like a light bulb went on in her head. "Let's practice on eachother!"

I was by no means shy, so after a bit of thinking I went for it. We sat indian style facing one another on her bed. She leaned in after a bit of nervous silence. I sat very still, as I felt her hot breath getting closer to my lips. I shut my eyes tightly and soon I felt her bottom lip brush up against my top lip. As she opened her mouth slightly, she wraped both her lips around my bottom one, she then began to suck on it gently, and then she released it. We pressed our lips together interlocking them together as if they were puzzle pieces. Our lips danced together for at least 3 minutes before breaking.
"Ohhh!" Carolina squeeked "
"that was so cool, lets try it with tongue!"
I nodded and leaned in.

We opened our mouths and our tongues met in the middle, I focused on pressing mine against hers slowly and softly. It felt warm wet and spongy. Durring the kiss I could feel somthing happening in my pussy. It was the same feeling I got when I thought about Kevin. The feeling made me want to touch myself. It was a warm, heavy, tingly, buzz that rushed through my pussy as I kissed Carolina.

With out knowing it I let out a small moan that made Carolina stop.

"Whats the matter? Are you getting horny?" she giggled.

"I think so, is that bad?" I questioned?

"No, not at all we should try more stuff...you know so we know what to do when we are older." she announced.

"Pretend your a guy...what would you do...show me." she instructed sitting upright on the bed.

I tugged at her shirt as she nodded with acceptance. I had to kneel to get it over her head, but the prize in the end was worth it.

She had on a black bra, which was unheard of in our school. I gasped as I saw her cleavage spilling over her tight bra.

"I need to get a new one, its too tight!" she added quickly.

I was really into it now. My pussy was so hot, I couldnt wait to see my first pair of tits. She helped me unhook her bra and I sat there in awe awaiting her large B cup breasts. They seemed to bounce out as she removed her bra, and then she jiggled her chest at me. They swayed as she moved, they beckoned me to grab them. Her light pink nipple was the first place I touched. I pinched it softly and watched as it deflated and got hard.

I cupped her right tit and I almost came right there. It was so soft and juicy. I kneaded her right tit for a bit more and then grabbed the other one. I became so horny as I pawed at her, I had a tit in each hand. My tongue darted for her hard nipple, I slowly licked around it, I even tryed nipping at it. Carolina began to moan, softly as her eyes rolled back into her head.

"Take off my pants" she ordered.

My eyes widened as I undid her top button, and pulled the zipper down. She quickly stood up and took them the rest of the way off, then hopped back onto the bed. I could see her tuft of dark pubic hair poking out on one side of her pink hearted underwear. I was so hot, my pussy hurt, but I tugged off her underwear and placed my hand on her mound.
"I like to rub all of it like this...when I masterbate." I said as my hand gently moved up and down her.
Her puss was so warm, and It seemed to be dripping some sort of stuff.
"Put your tounge on it!" she demanded.
I lowered myself down, and parted the hair, then I took one lip in each hand and spread her wide.
I gently licked somthing that looked like a button, and heard her moan louder. There were so many folds to explore I thought as I gently sucked on her nub. I licked around the sides of her button, very slowly before lapping at her slit like a thristy dog. I snaked my tongue around every crevice. I tryed many techniques too. I held my tongue stiff as I ran It slowly up her slit, and even more slowly back down. I slowly swirled my tongue around as I went up and down again. I flicked my tongue at her soft rubbery clit untill she squealed with excitement.
"Stick your finger inside!!" she screamed.

I looked around for the area to insert my finger. I had never done this to myself, so I was pretty nervous.
I poked around a bit untill my finger slid in a tight mushy hole. It was so warm and wet in her puss. I began to move my finger in and out very slowly, I was hesitant because I wasnt sure how much she could take. She grabbed my hand, shoving my finger deeper inside her.
"I do this all the time, I can take it." she said as she took a break from moaning.
I began to wiggle my finger deep inside her, I pet each side of her inner walls with the tip of my finger. With my finger deep inside her, I leaned down and put my tongue on her wet young pussy. Feverishly, I moved my tongue from side to side on her clit, while my finger slid in and out of her hole. She began to howl as her cunt started to leak heavily. Her clear juices trickled down my finger. Just then her door opened, and we imeadiatly jumped off eachother. "Kyle!" we screamed in unison.

"Holy crap," Kyle stammered as he quickly shut the door behind him.


Part two later....if you like it.


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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 11:01
    You should definately continue the story... One suggestion though: Please do NOT say Kyle blackmails them. Black mailing is so old. They should just meet up and have a nervous talk about the incident, and then let things slowly happen from there... I liked the story very much. Ten out of ten. Make the next one a little longer though... This one was too short... ;-)

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    READER 500
    26.02.2005 11:23
    i readily agree with the only comment here! lol, made me cum, im 14

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 11:40
    dido what raybid said. great story, but longer on the next part.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 12:18
    I liked it alot made me cum HARD im 15 and it takes alot to make me cum! make the next one longer.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 13:59
    needs to be longer. part2 would be cool. hot.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 14:41
    Sounds good, wish it was me there. The other comments are correct, your story needs more development. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
    I gave u a 9 for content and excitement.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 18:51
    I like this story alot! It made me so wet. I love stories about the young learning about sex. Keep writing, Baby. Hey 2 Young 4 U, You're not too young for me. E-mail me, and I will get you horny.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 19:25
    I cummed the first quater of the way through! hot hot hot! where is the second chapter?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 20:37
    i think that was hott it made me goet off n im 14 so yea.........make it longer

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 20:39
    FINEST KIND!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 20:47
    heh quite a few young'uns on here eh lol*

    oh yeah - great story nicely written too - keep up the good work

    *including me ^^

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 21:42
    great story 10/10 in part 2 add kyle in on it!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 21:59
    Very good story so far got me hard

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 22:41
    first kyle, then kevin, then back to kyle???? ,,,,,no pics???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.02.2005 23:54
    part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2005 00:55
    excelent story.
    cant wait to jack off to part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2005 08:12
    this a is a hhot story. can't wait to read part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2005 11:28
    how cum the bros name changed? =/

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2005 12:34
    oh my god that story is SO hot!!! i just loved it from start to finnish. 10/10 all round! cant wait for part 2 =)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2005 14:15
    NO NO DEVIN is carolinas crush, KYLE is carlinas brother

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2005 18:46
    this person rates their own story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2005 19:59
    part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.02.2005 22:43
    Like youve never done it, quit lying you pompus bastard.
    Further more It was accidental, I wanted to see if I COULD rate my own story. Just so happens that you can.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2005 01:02
    y the fuk are u still waitin...get part 2 in quick

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2005 03:56
    Just great! i can't wait to read th part 2 so keep posting stories like this one 10/10 from my side

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2005 11:28
    are you from nh by any chance?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2005 18:46
    you are a hot girl! even though you are lesbo, i still like you. you should be a writer

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2005 19:06
    so - who's Kevin and why are you thinking about him instead of Kyle? Decent story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.02.2005 23:19
    Good story, but u need more action, and u gotta get some incesy, have her bro join in with them

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2005 10:37
    can't wait for part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2005 13:11
    alright already!! if we have to ask!! the WE ASK!!
    Please...Part two...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2005 21:41
    please no more, one part is enough 5/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2005 04:00
    get part two. we all like it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2005 15:43
    If your moaning about kevin then why did her brother, kyle come in the room?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2005 16:52
    pretty good.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2005 17:21
    I cant wait till part to my friend!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2005 18:11
    im going to explain this slowly for the people who dont understand...
    Im moaning about KYLE carolinas brother....DEVIN is carolinas crush, she talked about wanting to kiss him, to start the story off. then she asked me who I wanted to kiss and I said kyle. THE NAMES DEVIN AND KYLE ARNT THAT SIMILAR...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2005 19:25
    Make part two with an all lesbian threesome with an older woman. DO IT NOW!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2005 19:31
    WOW~~~~~part two............ plzzz!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2005 21:26
    story is crap, fuck a part 2, can't stand part 1 , 1/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.03.2005 23:18
    look at name

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.03.2005 04:45
    Part two defintely, some of these people just have difficulty understanding what you have written, which is not your fault.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.03.2005 06:32
    fuck ya'll. it was good enough for a true story. altho the kevin/kyle mix up makes it harder to beleive. how can there be a part two to a true story? it means you have to make up stuff. admit it was fiction! and then it will rule.

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    READER 500
    03.03.2005 09:51
    Actually Rachel u said kevin instead of klye once---so i'll explain slowly so you can understand---you wrote the wrong name you stupid bitch---you also said it was true story but you fabricated it a bit---ffs make up your mind you stupid dyke---never write another story again---was that slow enough for you!?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.03.2005 17:40
    part two sounds greatttt, plz write it soon!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2005 00:41
    Part two!!!!PLZZZ!!!! maybe some incest? something to make it more exciting.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2005 12:30
    Part 1 was Awesome..... can't wait for Part 2.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2005 15:42
    It's really good I think it a true story cause somrthing like this happen to me.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2005 15:57
    Fingers in it, with a tongue on it. Makes it feel like two guys doing you.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2005 19:52
    Wow. That was hot. Make a part two, definitely. Maybe something with kyle. That'd be hot. Do it! DX

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2005 20:39
    I never said kevin....I said D E V I N
    its quite different.
    This is my "shout out" to sockman!! (who is a friggin coward by the way) I think that instead of me never writting a story again, you should try to never ever read one again, untill your IQ goes up quite a bit, or you learn how to read, I think those two go hand and hand, anyways get over yourself you jealous snot. Also the part that is fabricated is kyle walking in. Thanks and please get a life.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2005 21:11
    Yo dat was da shit... you gotta make a part 2. But next time, double check your work because people wanna be messed up and call it a bad story cuz of a damn mix up.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2005 12:47
    it was good, but u fuck up wit kevin and kyle. u said its the same feeling when i think about KEVIN. but the whole time u said he was kyle, so it makes it hard to believe its a true story.

    Durring the kiss I could feel somthing happening in my pussy. It was the same feeling I got when I thought about Kevin.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2005 23:02
    Dang that was good!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.03.2005 23:39
    part two pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeze! lets have kyle get in on this with them!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2005 10:42
    that was a great story make part two fast

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2005 10:59
    Hey!! it was sooo good!! i cannot wait for the second!! it is the same thing which happened to me! and i think i was 13 too!! it ia just like my story!! uhh i cannot wait 4 the second one!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2005 12:22
    I think this is a true stori i had something almost simalar to happen to me! i might just post my story so yall be looking out for it! P.s. Make a part two fast

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2005 15:38
    oh at least you pointed out the mistake to me while being civilized. Thanks, thats my bad,...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2005 21:01
    IM me!! elvesrule420!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.03.2005 21:07
    plz IM me!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.03.2005 08:58
    so is it kyle or kevin?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.03.2005 00:21
    Boy there had better be a part 2. It got me hotter than a firecracker bacause I would love to see two women go at each other. I love to eat pussy myself so her description was perfect. Look forward to part 2.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.03.2005 18:26
    Damn you can write. :) Great story loved every part. Cant wait for part2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.03.2005 03:37
    My god, how can a story like this get a 7? Is everybody in here 13 years old? Don't publish a story until you rewrite it at least 5 times. Work on your punctuation. Get the thought firmly visualized in your mind before you put it on paper. You can do better.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.03.2005 12:09
    omg u have got to make a part two like so fast this was brilliant!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.03.2005 16:52
    yes 8

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.03.2005 15:10
    thought it was excellent keep writting. cant wait for part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.03.2005 15:15
    I liked the ending alot, but you should have made it longer!cant wait 4 part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.03.2005 20:48
    Damn... 10/10... but you gotta make a Part 2 MAN!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.03.2005 14:25
    I like. When I was 13 all I could do was dream and hope. What's the brother's name???? Or who is it that walked in???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.03.2005 08:45
    nice story dying for part two maybe you could include some feet licking and smelling too

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.03.2005 08:46
    keep it goin get part 2 out

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.03.2005 11:03
    really good story!!!cant wait for part nr 2 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2005 00:12
    dripping i mean really dripping

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2005 21:53
    It was good go on 2 part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2005 04:30
    why this is the best story ever...you need to make part 2 bitch...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2005 16:37
    Yes! Part two now.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 10:11
    why is it that with the best stories it takes forever for these morons to post the next chapters

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 16:51
    i liked the ending ;-) write moreee

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 18:00
    that was awesome get part 2 out

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.03.2005 01:54
    Awesome, write part 2 soon!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.03.2005 04:46
    dat waz da best but dun make it too long make it end in part 2 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2005 03:36
    Well that was definatlly a good story. I really hope you decide to do part to and i hope I notice it. Loved it much.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2005 07:07
    Many females would love to get it on with another female and a guy. I saw the high ratings on this. It also shows in the comments you are getting.

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    READER 500
    01.04.2005 16:37
    Rachel, good work, really. But the name's mistake is during the french kiss: you have mixd Devin & Kyle to create "Kevin" :) don't worry about stupid guys insulting you and keep writing...pls:)

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    READER 500
    04.04.2005 23:42
    A bit of a cliffhanger, yes, but a nice, funny, awkward ending!

    You really lengthened the deed itself. I love discovery stories and this one was pretty good. The elevation of the situation was well-paced and took me a little off-guard. ( A good thing! (^_^) )

    I like your writing. Keep it up!

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    READER 500
    09.04.2005 18:23
    omg i love it...cant wait for 2nd part

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.05.2005 19:23
    You fuckin gay faggots with no life that look at this impossible fake faggot shit can go fuck yourself for the rest of your life!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.05.2005 11:40
    You are so wonderful, i can feel your hand on me now, it is sol delicious.
    Trish

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    READER 500
    01.06.2005 20:55
    I LOVED IT I WANT MORE

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.06.2005 18:51
    loved it, give me more.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.06.2005 20:20
    write more....please

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    READER 500
    19.06.2005 10:34
    very good loved it!

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 22:11
    that was so awesome...cant wait for the 2nd part

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.06.2005 00:55
    awsome 10/10 cant wait for second part.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2005 07:27
    HAY BABE THAT WAS GOOOD I LOVED IT IT MADE ME SO HORNEY CUM ON PART 2 'kr@zy'

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.06.2005 13:59
    awesome!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.07.2005 09:10
    I've been coming here reading for a few weeks now and have to admit to liking some stories and no being moved at all by some stories. The Post Comments are good cause they tell a writer if it's liked or not. This story I enjoyed very much, my question is to Foggots post. Why beat up on a good writter trying to express feelings and sexual fun, Sorry if nothing like this has ever happen to you, and I'm sorry your mind is so closed minded you belive it could never happen to anyone. So the the writter of a good story please write on and to whom this may concern. Please do yourself and those of us that liked the story a favor. Keep rude and silly comments to yourself and the small world inwhich you dwell.....(NO I'M NOT THE WRITTER OF THIS STORY)

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    READER 500
    11.07.2005 23:19
    I love it it made me hot i have done this before it rules can't wait for part 2!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.07.2005 00:09
    Pretty good story. Made my pussy wet and makes me want to call my little friend, Alice. Definatly did what I wanted it to.....made me horny!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.07.2005 21:46
    it made me horny..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.08.2005 19:18
    amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.08.2005 17:25
    Ye be a worthy follower

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.08.2005 18:16
    write more now!!! made me cum like hell!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.09.2005 23:21
    is it writtin yet

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.09.2005 08:28
    sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... every inch of it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.09.2005 02:02
    it was so awsome

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.09.2005 16:16
    very nice...keep writing

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.09.2005 19:01
    cumming...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.09.2005 06:36
    its very impressive hope you hurry up with part 2 cant wait to read it ,made me horny as hell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.10.2005 16:56
    more please!!!! great start

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    READER 500
    03.11.2005 05:49
    Haha, I remember back when I used to do that with my friend Gabby.. WE never got caught.. *giggle* always lock the door!! I think you guys would like some of MY stories.. ^.^

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    READER 500
    04.11.2005 18:57
    That Was awsome very entertainin:P cant wait to read more:P;)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.12.2005 18:21
    it was really good. can't wait for part two. I write stories to and was hoping someone could tell me how to actually get the stories onto the story board?

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    READER 500
    06.12.2005 09:42
    so exiting & very sweet one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.12.2005 10:58
    Loved it!!!! young girls rule.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.12.2005 20:51
    great story! worked for me *wink wink*

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.12.2005 17:56
    loved every bit of it, you need to finish it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.01.2006 12:30
    awsome

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.01.2006 15:52
    wow. nice cliffhanger at the end. good storyline too. 9/10. im eagerly awaiting part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.01.2006 02:11
    more more more more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.01.2006 13:49
    WOW awesome.. more more more

    12/10 =]

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.01.2006 18:28
    you definately have to continue...i'm excited to see what else happens

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.01.2006 21:15
    So what's the guys name ya wanna kiss, Kevin or Kyle or Carolina's brother?? You changed his name already twice during the story....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.01.2006 02:56
    yeah continue

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.02.2006 00:34
    yes plz finish the story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.02.2006 10:30
    Good story. No name changes either, She wants to kiss Carolina's brother Kyle, Carolina wants to kiss Devin from math class, and there was no Kevin. Please right more! :)

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    READER 500
    10.02.2006 09:25
    Awesome story can't wait for the next part

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.02.2006 11:14
    sexy

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.02.2006 12:16
    hurry up with the next one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.03.2006 18:59
    Part 2 Part 2 Part 2 Part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.03.2006 11:03
    write a part 2 now

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.03.2006 19:37
    i demand part 2.. o.o hawtnessssss =) lmao and that happened to me before... shena and her brother matt -smh-

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.03.2006 12:57
    good story but use a program with spell check....they make those now.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2006 17:23
    I wouldn't mind a sequel.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.04.2006 17:07
    plez finish the story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2006 16:16
    holly shit that was owsome. Part two better be as good. Very sexy... makes me very horny
    especially cause you where only 13.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2006 20:01
    Ok I liked your story but the first person to comment is a fucking pedafile!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.04.2006 01:57
    nice thats the only word i have 2 say. nice

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.04.2006 21:33
    Let me know when part 2 is ready!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.05.2006 05:51
    you have to do a part 2, i can't stand to be left standing. you are a good writer

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.05.2006 00:01
    fuck u have to finsh

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.05.2006 16:55
    FINISH, FINISHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.06.2006 11:09
    part 2 pleeaasse!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.06.2006 12:56
    I dont think a sequal can be any better than that. Great writing girl

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.06.2006 08:01
    i hate u 4 that

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.06.2006 10:15
    OMG REMINDS MYSELF OF ME!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.06.2006 19:58
    kept my dick hard

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.06.2006 17:52
    Plz finish part 2.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.06.2006 18:25
    I´d die 4 part 2 :O =)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.06.2006 00:11
    too short

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2006 02:31
    You are EVIL you cant end it there so far it was AWESOME however

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.06.2006 01:59
    his name changes from kyle to kevin then back to kyle

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.06.2006 16:41
    i liked it so much!!!!get part 2 out now!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.07.2006 00:05
    Good job, a part two would be amazing!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.07.2006 04:17
    awsome story, I gave it a 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.07.2006 10:46
    omg makes me want some pussy rite now, to lick and suck and finger

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.08.2006 00:11
    ver hot def want to see part two cant get anybetter then two hot teen girls doing it

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    READER 500
    07.08.2006 22:25
    This is the best story in the whole site. You should definitely not only consider writing more, but also writing more stories like this, maybe with older teens next time?

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    READER 500
    10.08.2006 16:08
    good story. however, you switched off the names of her brother. first you said kyle, then you said kevin, and then kyle again.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.08.2006 21:38
    i've been waiting for part 2 for more than a year plez hurry

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.08.2006 10:27
    OMG...whats part 2!!! i wanna read it...will kyle fuck both of them...im so curious cause kyle seems hot! i cum thinking about him:)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.08.2006 23:39
    now i gota get sum pusy im in the mood!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.08.2006 12:11
    u never wrote part 2 y please write it!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.09.2006 20:19
    A good start, but a hell of a way to leave it hanging. Is part 2 on the way soon?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.09.2006 21:05
    that same thing happened to me my bro came in my room when i had 2 of my friends in my pussy

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.09.2006 13:21
    casie the molster is the greatest

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.10.2006 20:58
    Sure would, like to watch, 2 teen girls getting it on, it would be great. It really excites me, makes me wet. Sweet nice body's, See all those nice, things, they do to, eachother. Helen

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.10.2006 22:04
    part2 please this made me so horney i wonder what part to is going to be

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.10.2006 18:01
    Great story, can't wait for part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.12.2006 02:55
    Quote "That same thing happened to me my bro came in my room when i had 2 of my friends in my pussy" me too, only it was my sister...fun things happened...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.01.2007 19:29
    did the brothers name change like 5 times thrgought the story?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.02.2007 02:36
    can't wait for part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.02.2007 22:00
    Good story! I played with my clit and had my bf suck my nipples while reading that story-my climax was amazing!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2007 20:57
    Cant miss with Part 2...great foundation for some
    terrific sexy things to happen. Thanks.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2007 09:32
    whoa....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.04.2007 11:42
    can't wait for part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.05.2007 14:14
    god damn I can't wait for #2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.05.2007 15:54
    ur awesome bring on part 2 cant wait. later babe

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.05.2007 19:48
    Getting off to a great start. Witge part two soon.

    Good work!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.03.2008 18:08
    keep it cumming if you know wat i mean

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    READER 500
    30.03.2008 22:36
    bvgcnm

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.05.2008 12:40
    Damn this HOT !
    i love when some hot girl teach another horny young girl how to do it right !
    KEEP GOING...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.06.2008 09:05
    plz tell part -2 i just love girls.
    u av inspired me.think i too should have a proper sex.h

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2008 23:01
    haha busted good start to a story finish up just as well

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.09.2008 16:54
    Haha that was good.

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  • WILD+WEST
    24.06.2009 00:46
    PLEASE make another one PLEASE this was so freaking HOTT.

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