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My Sister's Friends

Author: dirty

Date: 1 March 2005

Blackmail, Fiction, Blowjob, First Time

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This is a FICTIONAL story. It never happened so if you don’t like it or if anything is hard to believe, that’s why it is fictional. With that said hopefully you will like it.


My sister was having a pool party with a few friends. I was just a little guy at the time who just wanted to hang out with them but they always said I was too young and always in the way. They always made fun of me because I was little. My sister and her friends were all seniors in high school and were all 18 on their way to college next year. My sister was 6 years older than me. They were all horsing around in the pool in their bikinis but I was too young to notice things like that. They were all gathering around talking and giggling when my parents weren’t home one day and I tried to sneak up on them to hear what they were talking about. I had clothes my mom bought me which were some short shorts and a goofy t-shirt that only a mom would buy. I could hear them talking and as I walked out to hear what my sister Tiffany said one of her friends, Heather spotted me.

“Oh look who decided to join us.”

Heather was a brunette. My sister and all her friends were all beautiful girls with huge boobs, ass and killer bodies. The only thing different about each one was their hair color and attitude. Heather poked fun at me the most while Tiffany who had black hair always bitched and moaned about anything I did. Nicole was a blonde was also a rich bitch who was stuck up about everything. She was very similar to my sister except without the sister qualities. Also there was Jessica the red head who was a prima dona. Thought she was the greatest, got more guys than the rest and thought she was the greatest thing on the planet for it. All these girls thought they were better than everyone else who could get anything they wanted. None of them had any siblings except for my sister. They always made fun of me and got me into trouble.

“Brandon what are you doing out here, I wish mom would of taken you with her. I hate babysitting you,” said Tiffany.

“Nice shorts,” said Heather “Did your mom pick them out for you?”

“Actually my mom probably did pick them out for him.”

“I just wanted to hear what you guys were talking about?”

Jessica, “Get out of here you runt and let us be. Go play with your toys inside while me reminisce about who has gotten the greatest lay.”

“Whats that Jessica?”

Tiffany “No, Brandon go inside”

Heather gave a teasing smile and wanted to join in this game of telling Brendon about sex and teasing Tiffany at the same time. “Well its about getting a girl all wet”

“Shut up Heather that’s my brother. Go inside and leave us alone.”

“How do you get a girl wet Heather.”

“Like this.” Nicole said as she came from behind Brendon to push him into the water.

Brendon fell into the water and quickly came up for air as he heard all the girls laughing at him. He then swam towards the shallow side of the pool. All the girls continued laughing at him as he went to sit on the steps.

Tiffany “Oh now he’s probably going to cry and tell on my mom.”

Heather “Here I’ll go talk to him.”

Heather swam to other side of the pool as she approached Brendon she past by a water jet and was at first shocked to come across it. But as soon as she realized that the jet had sprayed her she came up with a great idea. She knew a great way to embarrass and get another laugh. “Hey Brendon I know what can make you feel better.”

“what?”

“I’ll tell you what we were talking about if you come over and face the wall, count to 30 and stand on top of the patio.”

“Really”

“Really,” Heather knew that Brendon was always gullible. She grabbed Brendon laughing inside as she brought him towards the pool wall to make sure his private area faced the water jet.

“Just stand right here and count to 30.”

As Brendon faced the water jet he felt a funny feeling in his private area but he ignored it because he was so excited to hear that Heather was being nice to him and about to tell him what they were talking about.

Heather turned around to look at the other girls. They were all facing away from them having small girl talk. Wait till they see this she thought, you will be able to see his tiny erection through his pants, it will be hilarious. Finally Brendon finished counting to 30.

“..28, 29, 30. I’m done.”

“Ok then walk up the steps and stand on the patio. “

As he started to walk up the steps Heather was about to tell the girls to look when she took one more look at Brendon. Her jaw almost fell off her face. She couldn’t believe what she saw. It had to be the biggest dick she had ever seen her life trying to fight its way out of Brendon’s shorts. It was almost obscene as it outlined in his shorts.

Brendon was beginning to feel uncomfortable, because the pants were so small he felt a lot of pain in his private area. “Heather I am going to go inside everything hurts where I usually pee.”

Heather still couldn’t talk she was glued to this enormous cock that she couldn’t believe existed on any human being of that magnitude and of all people Brendon. All Heather could do was nod with her mouth wide open. Brendon then turned around towards the house and walked inside. As soon as he turned around and the cock was out of Heather’s view she was able to snap out of her trance as she caught herself drooling. Brendon then opened the door and then went inside. The girls turned around at that time.

“Where did my brother go heather?”

“Uhhh, he said he didn’t feel good and he went inside.”

Nicole started to laugh, “ugghhhh is he going to be alright”

All the girls laughed except for heather. Heather still couldn’t believe what she had just witnessed

“I’ll go check up on him”

“Well thanks Heather I didn’t know you were all concerned about my brother all of a sudden.”

All the girls laughed at Heather.

“Jessica, let her go I have to tell you about this guy I just had sex with.”

Heather drowned out everything that she heard and like a zombie she walked inside. She felt all tingly inside and couldn’t believe how turned on she was becoming. She went to the stairs and walked up to brendons room. The door was cracked so she slowly opened it a little more. She was looking at bredondon from the rear as his shorts were down on the floor as he examined his member. She went to creep closer as Brendon jumped when she got right behind him

“What are you doing here Heather?”

Brendon quickly covered himself up

“I came to see if you are ok, let me check you out” As Heather came closer salivating and the thought of see his naked cock.

“I don’t want you looking at it.”

Heather reached out to touch his cock.

“No” said Brendon as he started to walk away from Heather.

Heather went from being turned on to pure lust. She couldn’t believe the biggest dick she had ever seen was now being denied to her. She didn’t care who this magnificent tool belonged to she just knew she had to have it. She would be damned if this little brat, Tiffany’s brother would deny her most inner desires and real satisfaction for her now drenched pussy.

“Damn it Brendon, you get the fuck back her.” Heather grabbed Brendon by the arm and tossed him on the bed flat on his back.

“you are going to do as I say or so help me you are going to regret it.”

Brendon was scarred. He knew his sister and her friends were fully capable of being evil to him and then also getting him into trouble with his parents. He just laid there still afraid of what Heather was going to do. Heather meanwhile just salivated at the beauty of this amazing cock. It just stood there in the air pulsating. She eyed the veins slightly protruding from his shaft and enormous bulbous purple head begging for a home to go to and this little shit was trying to deny this magnificent creature its one true purpose in life. Heather didn’t know whether to worship it or to give herself the satisfaction of a lifetime. She knew it needed attention and thanks to its owner it wasn’t getting near the attention or especially pussy that it at least deserved. How could this guy deserve this, most women didn’t deserve this and there were so many guys out there who deserved this cock, but not Brendon. Heather had to know how big this cock was.

“Do you have a ruler you little shit?”

“Over on my desk.”

Heather rushed over to the desk and grabbed the ruler and brought it back. She held it up to the cock and her jar dropped at the results.

“Holy shit, it’s a little over 14 inches long!” She had to touch it. She grabbed a hold of it with both hands to give it a slight squeeze. Her hands looked so tiny compared to the massive erection.

“What are you doing?”

“Shutup and don’t say a word and let us be, you just have to come along for the ride otherwise I would take this away from you and put it on a better man for this. You better take care of this because this is the only difference between you being a little shit and the potential of being a REAL man.”

As Heather starred she knew she had to taste it. “You don’t take care of this at all. I am going to have to clean it for you and it is going to take a lot of cleaning.” Heather opened her mouth to let the head inside. She was almost in instant ecstasy when she tasted it for the first time. This was the best cock or anything for that matter that she had ever tasted in her life. She could do this for days on end. She just licked it like it was ice cream and the more she licked and sucked the better the flavor got. Soon she was sucking as if she hadn’t eaten in days.

“mmmmm this is sooo good. How did a little shit like you ever get something so great. You better let me clean you every time you need to be cleaned here or I’ll beat you to a pulp if you don’t let me.”

Brendon didn’t know what to say

“Did you hear me you fuck?”

Brendon nodded his head.

“Then answer me.”

“Yes Heather”

“That’s fucking right.”

Heather suddenly came to orgasm she hadn’t realized how furiously she had been rubbing her pussy while sucking his cock. She let out only a muffled scream because her mouth was full of cock. Heather had to take this to the next level her pussy was begging for it. Her pussy had taken over every thought and wanted nothing more than to be wrapped around this fantastic cock. It had taken over every thought in her head to let it have complete satisfaction. Heather stood up to face Brendon.

“Oh you little shit, look what you did.”

Brendon was completely confused, “ What did I do? I didn’t do anything.”

“Yes you did you bastard, I am completely soaked with sticky pussy juice and it’s all your fault. I need to get it all out. So you better clean it all out.”

“How do I do that?”

“Well for starters, stand the fuck up.”

Brendon got up with his cock standing straight out. It looked to Heather like he should fall forward with such a massive cock. His cock made him look tiny. Heather took off the bottom part of her bikinis and laid face up on the bed with legs spread and her pussy dripping.

“I need your thingy to get this pussy juice out of me. Bring it over here and get it out.”

Brendon slowly walked up to Heather with his cock just inches away from the opening of Heather’s pussy. Heather began to twitch in anticipation and could no longer stand how slow he was moving. She needed to have this cock now.

“Get that thing in here now!” as she pointed to her pussy opening.

The head of Brendon’s cock brushed against here pussy lips and the Brendond hesitated, “ I don’t know.”

Heather jumped with excitement at the touch of this beautiful cock and immediately got frustrated with Brendon for not giving her pussy what it wanted, what it desperately needed.

“You bring that thing here. I deserve it and need it more than you do.”

Heather leaned up and grabbed his cock near the tip and dragged him to her dripping entrance. She then began shoving the head inside her.

“Oh my god, its so huge it feels so fucking fantastic.”

Heather fell back to the bed.

“Fucking keep pushing it inside you fuck, hurry, hurry, fucking puuuussshhh”

Brendon pushed hard. Her pussy was so tight and it wasn’t letting him in.

“Get it inside me you fuck, push harder, get it in me!”

Brendon frustrated then took when hard shove and Heather’s pussy finally let way.”

Heather couldn’t speak. She oragismed right then. Her hands were hitting the top of the bed as she leaned up.

“Holy shit, that was fucking fantastic.” Heather was continuing to cum and cum and cum and cum. Just as everything began to slow a little down, she looked between her legs. She was in complete awe of this cock. It felt so huge inside her and it was only half way in.

“I can’t believe it’s only half way inside. Hurry up and get it all the way in. Push as hard as you can. I need to feel it all the way inside.”

Brendon gave another hard shove and got all of it inside her.

Heather had another orgasm. “ I can feel it all the way inside, I feel like it’s going to come out of my throat if it was any bigger.”

Just as the orgasm subsided she noticed Brendon wasn’t moving.

“Are you clean now, am I done?”

“Huh? Are you kidding me? You haven’t even done anything yet. You need to start moving in and out to get the juices out all you have done so far is make it worse. You have just begun to scratch all kind of itches that I never thought possible to be scratched and I need more. You can’t stop now that I have tasted and felt the greatest thing in the world which is the cock of all cocks. Now start moving and move fast and hard or I am going to beat you senseless and if you slow it down for one second you are never going to live to see tomorrow.”

Brendon didn’t waste a second, he began to pump like there was no tomorrow.

Heather was in the ecstasy of all ecstasies. The kid was pumping his cock so fast and hard into her that she felt like she was going to split in two if he had his way with her. The way his cock was just sliding in and out of her, rubbing against her inner walls and hitting her g spot, causing her to hit climax after climax. Heather’s eyes just rolled to the back of her head as the cock pulsed inside her sending her into another world.

“Oh my god Brendon it works so good. This makes me so happy, don’t stop, don’t you ever stop.”

Brendon just kept pounding away at her pussy, sliding in and out and jack rabbit speeds. Heather had never felt so full or stuffed in all her life, this cock had become everything to her. How could she ever go to have sex with anyone else again after such wonderful bliss. Heather’s pussy kept dripping everywhere creating a puddle of pussy juice on the carpet below. Brendon began breathing harder beginning to tire out. Heather was getting sooo close to the ultimate orgasm that she couldn’t have Brendon stop now.

“I am getting so tired I need to have a break.”

“Don’t you fucking stop, I am almost there. Don’t you fucking stop. Go faster.”

“I can’t”

“Faster you fuck.”

“Ok”

“Just keep pumping me with that huge dick.”

Heather was on another planet feeling something so huge sliding in and out of her. She needed to cum again to get full release.

“Harder I want more. I need more. Give me more of that cock. Don’t fucking stop. Fuck me you shit. Fuck me. Fuck me. Fuck me. Fuck me. Fuck me with that cock. I need moooorrrrrreeeeee.”

Heather exploded with the orgasm of all orgasms.

“Fuuuuuucccccckkkkk!!!!!”

Brendon started to feel a funny feeling inside his thing. He quickly pulled out. Heather immediately responded.

“Where the fuck do you think you are going with that cock?”

“I need to go to the bathroom.”

“No you don’t. You just need to cum.”

“Huh?”

“All that juice you just extracted from my pussy it’s in your thingy, now let me get it out of you. Bring it over here.”

“But, but….”

“But what? Get the fuck over here.”

Brendon walked back slowly to Heather and as if Heather never had tasted it before she grabbed the cock and began to give head. Bendon felt his thing pulse more and more.

“I don’t want to let it go Heather. I need to hold it or go the bathroom.”

“Don’t you hold it I want that cum. After all the work I have done I want all the cum. Let me have it, don’t you dare fucking hold it back.”

Heather started suck faster and faster until Brendon could hold back no longer.

“I can’t hold anymore, it’s coming.”

Heather was unprepared for the amount of cum that this cock could contain. It just squirted out, shot after shot after shot. Just when she thought she had gotten it all it just kept cumming. She had never known a cock could cum so much. But she was loving every second of it. She thought the cock tasted magnificent but it was nothing compared to the taste of its cum.

“That tastes sooo good. That tastes better thn anything I have ever had in my life. You better save that for me next time.”

“Next time?”

“Hell yeah next time. Are you kidding me? Now that I learned how much of a little lucky shit you are, we are going to be doing this on a regular basis. And don’t you fucking say a word to anyone or I will fucking kill you. And you better not waste a drop of that cum, I want it all.”

Heather then got up and got dressed back in her bikini. She could barely walk.

“Alright I am going home, get dressed and don’t fucking say a word to anyone. And don’t let anyone see that thing other than you and me. You hear me.”

“Yes Heather.”

Heather then walked out of the room and Brendon got dressed.


TO BE CONTINUED…..


This is my first story ever written. It is fine if you don’t like it. If you do like it though respond so I know whether or not to continue with the following chapters. Girls and guys respond so that I know where I am going to go with this. If there is little to no response then the story ends here. Ideas are welcome as well.


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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 15:26
    great job, amazing, have him fuck his sister and another girl. dont let that bitch treat him like that. keep going with it i just keep cumming

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 16:41
    sweet story, i agree make him do stuff with his sister

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 16:46
    Write faster! FASTER!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 16:49
    good, make him rape her.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 16:51
    Yeah, have him learn about what he is doing and turn the story around, make it seem like he is in control. And have him make all the girls beg him for his cock! 9/10!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 17:19
    Damn.....that's hot. But, Brandon is really stupid for a kid old enough to get a king sized woody, and blast a size load. He should be wised up by now.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 17:25
    Ok... good story... but comon!! 14 inches on a 12 yr old!! ure dreaming man!

    Keep writing tho

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 18:05
    very fuckin good!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 18:05
    dam nice story got me hard keep the story going

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 18:09
    This story was awesome man, and don't have him turn it around and rape them. He's twelve, and they're 18, they could kick his ass easy. You should have it be a gang bang or some shit like that.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 18:27
    You were lucky! When I did my younger brother age 13 he only had 5 inches. But by the time he was 18 he had a thick seven incher that he used on me every day, even periods. No cramps if regularly fucked. Great Story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 19:02
    maybe mom could catch him in the shower, and then his sister could catch them.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 19:39
    Its was asome but not 14 inches make it like 10 man

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 20:25
    Wow Hot Mama, you're one sick fuck. Oh yeah and:
    A. You're a guy
    B. You're 12
    and
    C. You're a real fuck up

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 20:33
    One hot fucking story, what an imagination!!!! Dude youu wrote it gggooooddddd. I could have cum had I wanted. dbl thanks, and u got a 10
    r

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 21:00
    Excellent! Please keep it comming. Ideas: have the other girls come in and be really jealous. The sister will be releuctant, but her friends will know that what she really needs is her bro's cum, so they hold her down while Heather jacks him off onto his sister.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 21:53
    Good story, but it switched from first person to third person midway through.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 22:33
    Not only did he switch from first to third person, but Brandon turns into Brendon at the same point.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.03.2005 23:42
    hurry up and make chapter 2 this is good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 00:33
    You really should keep this story going. The comments at the beggining and end are true to if u dont like fiction dont read fuck stories... because that is all they are someones fantasy brought to life on paper!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 01:33
    dude that was soo fuuucking good make more stories but make it so like next one is a gang bang and the sister doesnt want to with her friends but after the gang bang she does him by herself

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 02:02
    that story is fucken good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 07:32
    great. but spelling and grammar mistakes cost you 1 point. but all the same the swearing and the 14" and the blackmail saved this story who agrees with me?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 13:04
    Damn that story was greatcan't wait for 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 15:37
    holy shit man that was good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 16:04
    wow.... i loved this... and for all u that say 14 inches is too much.... well guess what this is? FICTION! DUH! keep writing man your good at it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 16:10
    great story kid older say 14 or 15 and cock closer to 10 or 11 but great story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 16:48
    that was a good fucking storie you should've kept it goin or make a second one where she goes down stairs and the other chicks find out and they screw him too.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 17:51
    You switched from first to third-person. I like it better in third. Post more.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 19:50
    fucking fanastic story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 22:30
    that was great i cant wait till the next one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 23:22
    yo nigga it was hatt

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2005 23:54
    great ass story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 01:38
    fiction or not i would probably do the same thing that slut did!!! A 14 inch dick...OMG keep writng, can't wait for the next one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 07:17
    Yoyoyo! are u stupid or somthing.... can't u fucking read... its a FICTION! dumb ass....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 10:00
    good keep writing

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 11:54
    dude awesome story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 13:29
    keep up the good work

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 13:43
    great story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 14:47
    should do a 3 some in it or some shit like that nigga

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 16:00
    great story but the kid could be a little more mature in the next one. Keep it up.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 16:40
    Nice story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 17:42
    that was a great story. it got me dripping! keep up the good work. hope there is a second one!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 17:58
    14 inches on a 12 yo. Man or woman, you just wanna have that in you.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 19:12
    u should make this like have kept up fo a year or so in the next story so the kid is super talented

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 19:18
    AWOSOME !!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 20:18
    amaming

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 20:20
    Horse shit. I get tongue tied just trying to read this shit. Why did it ever get an 8? Are a few people in here spending all their time rating their own stories? I would bet on it. This doesn't deserve a 7.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.03.2005 21:45
    Great story, dirty! Cum back with another story soon! 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2005 01:58
    Amazing what would of bin better is if the girl wasn't so mean and if the girls were 16 and he was 14 or they need to onaly be 2 years appart otherwise it is weird but great story tho

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2005 06:13
    Its awful! couldnt get into it at all

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2005 08:36
    SWEET STATUTORY!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.03.2005 10:03
    now this is what i've been talking about '' the part about as soon as she seen the cock it was the fucking biggest cock she'd ever seen ' this is so much more erotic than it being a tiny dick'' so writers take note ' always describe the cock as huge' the bigger the better

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 10:29
    man this story is fucking awesome and don't let nobody tell you otherwise'' for later parts please add voyuerism' like his sister tiffany catching them fucking and standing at the bedroom door staring and playing with her pussy or mom and his Aunt discussing the growing bulge in his shorts'' remember 'voyuerism

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 12:04
    :-) Excellente amico. Si Chiamia Maria. 10+

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 12:07
    a 14 inch + come on thats just stupid
    also the guy needs to be older. but that aside it was an awsome story line with a lot of potential for future chapters

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 12:08
    now this is another one of those cases where a person has another person at their mercy and they'll do just about anything they ask''now this slut wants his huge cock so bad that he can make her do anything for a chance to feel it and he should make her help fulfill all his fantasies like the one of seeing his sister being fucked by a strap-on or the one of Heather seducing his Auntie Dawn or Heather convincing his mom to let him masturbate all over mom's big tits or he'll settle on his Auntie Dawn's tits but Heather has to seduce a female member of his family before she can have some of his monster cock

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 12:16
    great story, but get some of the other girls in it and have her take off here top next time, but still a great story and i give it an 8.

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 12:33
    this whole shit is fucking messed up.
    How does a little kid, have a 14 inch dick!!!!
    Most men in the world dont have a dick that big!!!
    Call me jealous, but that is just messed up.
    And i did read the intro, but still!!!! Whatever.

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 13:08
    write more

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 13:57
    hurry next part add voyuerism' like mom or auntie finding out he has such a huge cock and heather getting mad because now she has to share it with his mom and aunt and she figures the best way to do that is with orgies

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 15:46
    Best fucking Story ever ! I gave it a 9

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 20:14
    Are you fucking nuts? This is trash, from start to finish. Messed up story, totally unbelievable, too convenient, with 4th grade errors all through it. It's trash!!!

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 21:47
    This is fucking awesome as shit! You would be stupid to not write more....We thought it was even awesomer when we were drunk!!!!! Write more fucker!

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    READER 500
    19.03.2005 21:55
    I've defniatly seen better, I like the story, and most of the dialogue, but you should proof read your story next time. You started the story from a first person view, with brendon telling the story, but then out of nowhere you switched to third person. I also think you made brendon a bit innocent. I mean come on, he was 12 not 6.

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 01:36
    write more! just like this! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 03:15
    dude...those guys that said that was shit...can fuck themselves because that story wasn't great...it was phenomenal and u should definately write another chapter. it reminded me of when i was around 13 and my sister had a ton of hot friends, thats probly y i like it so much but seriously...continue!

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 11:04
    its good but how the fuck did that kid get a 14 inch dick

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2005 12:46
    dude that was an awesome story keep writing next series..but ya 12yr old & 14in cock?!!!! lol

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 12:53
    great fucking story........

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 13:38
    dude that story was wicked cool.... 14 inch cock lol.... keep writing nigga!!!

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 14:13
    hey why dont you bring ur sister on that will be real fun

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2005 14:55
    This is an excellent story. Is there a part 2.

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 17:58
    @Mort
    That is a legit writing tactic, to switch from 1st - 3rd or 3rd- 1st, it helps convey the full stories

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 18:00
    It got boring after a while. Its never fun when the guy's not having fun, but I would incourage you to write more cuz you have a good story line.
    also, check the grammar, it started out in the 1st person, then it changed to the 2nd. and you changed his name also.

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 18:24
    OMG. I want more

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 18:44
    fucking great man

    and to the dumbasses above....

    ITS FICTION A 2YR CAN HAVE A 14IN DICK

    damn losers......there BETTER be a second....

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 19:14
    fucking good write another and another and another or i will kill yo

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 19:25
    nice man, he should have enjoyed it at least when he came tho. very good pace, it built up as action got more intense. you have style. and I KNOW ITS FICTION but should have made it a little more realistic just so it seems more likely. didint really detract from story tho, very nice

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 20:03
    please write a sequel more more

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 20:38
    write another ur a fucking good writer pleaz write another

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 21:09
    Hey! what is so unbelivable? I thought the story to be relisticly entretaining! now if you excuse me i have to look for a towel to wipe myself with...

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    READER 500
    20.03.2005 22:29
    I found it being more funny than erotic. But a sequel would be nice....

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 00:00
    holy shit that was great you need to continue and make a few more chapters we need to hear more

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    READER 500
    21.03.2005 05:16
    moremore!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 10:17
    put a little more description it was great other than that

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 14:01
    sweet
    liked it alot, write more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 14:06
    brandon should be enjoyin da hole thing 2 other dan dat u should be a bestseller. this was pretty awsome.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 15:35
    fucking amazing, read it twice, 10/10. more more more

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 16:12
    came 3 times. i have once seen a 20 inch cock. made me have at least thirty mind blowing orgasms. please write more

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    READER 500
    21.03.2005 16:23
    Good story but try to keep the narrative the same in future stories, e.g. changing from "me" to "Brendon" mid-story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 17:26
    good stuff--- write more-- dont switch narratives, give some more details about the girls and the action... other than that- nice job

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 17:44
    Like the others, good story, keep it in either first or third person, and write more...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 18:30
    That is one hell og a story... I got half erection

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 22:20
    your story was good but you need more and better details, more excitement .looking forward to seeing more from you.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.03.2005 23:40
    Well done story but anatomically incorrect. No woman can take a 14" dick. About 7" would be absolute max.

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    READER 500
    22.03.2005 02:03
    Awesome, please write more, and yes when i was 12 or 13, i had a 12 in at full erection, but in the furute, make the guy a little older 6 years is a bit to much 5 or 4, but other than that AWESOME, i came 2wice

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    READER 500
    22.03.2005 04:18
    hmm only two probloms 1. keep it in ether first person or third person 2. the so called twelve year old had the mind and thinking of a seven year old. but other than that great story 8/10

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    READER 500
    22.03.2005 13:27
    ficken

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    READER 500
    22.03.2005 16:51
    hurry up and make part 2 ffs!!! your killin me

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    READER 500
    22.03.2005 18:42
    this person rates their own stories continously, will report to the administration, checked it on data info link to this page and saw it was done from same pc, 1/10 for real because of it

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    READER 500
    22.03.2005 19:06
    yeah the narratives were a bit fucked up going form third to first and back again all the way through, and guys a woman can take 14, but i was poppin throughsomethig else, hope shes allright, yeah good story jacked off just once though later dudes

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    READER 500
    22.03.2005 20:15
    i think that is was ok. you could put more deeper details. but either than that, good story 7/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2005 01:05
    It would of been better if it was like 7 or 8 inches, but good start to a story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2005 01:39
    IT WAS NICE! I LIKE IT!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2005 07:19
    I have an 11' dick and most women can take it very very well :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2005 12:48
    It was really good 8/10 but it has 2 many mistakes.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.03.2005 20:43
    try and write a lil more on what hes thinkin and use "little shit" not as much
    all in all good, made me cum

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2005 00:44
    it was good made me cum

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2005 04:13
    make part two and include all of the girls

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    READER 500
    24.03.2005 07:01
    I agree with "Bullshit". This guy is rating his own story When you compare this rambling piece of shit to the top rated story, Ripe fruit, it's like night and day. It had potential, but sloppy writing killed it. 1/10 for cheating.

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    READER 500
    24.03.2005 10:43
    Interesting, But can a guy really be that much of a dork when it comes to sex? was he "special"?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2005 15:56
    that gave me 1 of the best orgasms ever.. his dik 2 big tho

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2005 16:25
    Wow, Fantasic, give us more.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2005 18:58
    yes very good
    make more chapters

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2005 20:34
    Great story. Keep it cumming :)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.03.2005 21:51
    yo no shit this is good dkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.03.2005 06:49
    mmmm, not bad, lineup the next episode, with accidently meeting more of the other gals.. *winks..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.03.2005 07:00
    fantastic my sisters friend played with my cock and then her friends joined in i loved it .i would have been his age .loved the story

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    READER 500
    25.03.2005 10:23
    Very nice, I wish I was Heather, and fuck you Hipshot!

    10/10

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    READER 500
    25.03.2005 13:54
    A great story. Made me fantasize (except for the size part and Im happy, Im not that well hung) about the times I was young and this dick of mine would be raw with rubbing looking at the Playboy.

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    READER 500
    25.03.2005 15:29
    great story. Keep up the good work.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.03.2005 18:12
    Please make chapter 2! This story was amazing!
    10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 00:41
    THIS PIECE OF SHIT IS WAY OVER RATED BY SOMETHING OR SOMEONE........... FUCK IT'S GOOFY 1/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 01:09
    1. 14 inches??? no
    2. the kids 12 and doesn't know what sex is?? no again

    other then that it was good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 11:21
    good story. a little unrealistic in some parts though

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 11:35
    that was great keep wrighting

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 16:27
    nice nice, keep it going, but more realistic

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 16:34
    put mom or an Aunt doing some voyuerism in following chapters and great fucking story 'only problem is when you writers have a great story going you leave us readers hanging'' waiting for the next chapters and then we begin to hate your asses and your fuckin stories too
    '

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    READER 500
    26.03.2005 16:41
    I don't care if you put the preacher watching and the aunt holding his balls it's still over rated and just a piece of shit

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 16:57
    good stuff! Keep it up!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 18:01
    make the motherfuckin chapter 2 now bitch!!!! your driving me fuckin crazy dammit!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 23:03
    good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.03.2005 23:46
    It's a frik'n fictional story... if the guy was one and had a 3 ft cock it wouldn't matter... fik-shun-al... if you want more accurate details write your own stories and quit worring other people about theirs.

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    READER 500
    27.03.2005 12:25
    Dirty,
    Your story, "My Sister's Friends," was one of the most amazing near-incestual stories that I have ever read. I most enjoyed how you gave it the aspect of continuation. Heather and Brendon will be having all the fun that I wish I was having again and again, it seems. Thank you again for a wonderful reader.

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    READER 500
    28.03.2005 12:49
    if he is 12 he knows plenty about sex

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2005 13:01
    very very nice i mean for your first story you would think you were a pro. keep the stories coming.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2005 16:22
    good work

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2005 17:08
    fuckin great story

    love it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2005 17:26
    this story was overrated sure, but could have been worse. i gave it a 7, at least im being nice this time instead of telling you to go hang yourself by you drooping loser ball sack.

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    READER 500
    28.03.2005 18:23
    I just wish i was that kid right when Heather got a hold of him. Sje must of had a awesome time.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.03.2005 21:26
    Seriously i know the story is fictional but couldnt you have at least made the kid 14? that was just kinda weird....good...but weird

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.03.2005 11:46
    Very good - in fact, very very very good ;)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.03.2005 14:10
    j'aime les femmes

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.03.2005 18:49
    Very Very Very Good.. I came 2 times

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.03.2005 18:57
    I know it's fictionaly liek everyone says, but this is about the writing, why did it go from 1st person to 3rd? and why is his name spelled 2 different weays

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.03.2005 20:46
    damn i wish my boyfriend had a 14" cock

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.03.2005 21:05
    Please keep adding!!!

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    READER 500
    30.03.2005 00:32
    I still think it's overated and somebody must have run up the numbers on this piece of shit.....Too many great stories on sight that are a hell of a lot better with much lower ratings

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    READER 500
    30.03.2005 02:04
    i dunno...12? 14"? that boy will be a monster when he grows up! it is ok

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.03.2005 06:21
    i don't beleave it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.03.2005 10:50
    ffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuccc... yyyyyyyyeeeeeeaaaaaaaaahhhh...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.03.2005 17:34
    stupid a 12 yo with that big of a dick stupid

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.03.2005 19:42
    that iz just stupid i've fucked a 20 inch so her cant compare to that that is unbelieveable

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.03.2005 21:27
    "That iz just stupid i've fucked a 20 inch so her cant compare to that that is unbelieveable"
    - learn to think and write coherently retard!

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    READER 500
    01.04.2005 14:03
    nice story keep it up

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.04.2005 17:07
    good story 10/10
    but ony problem no kid can have a 14 inch dick

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    READER 500
    12.04.2005 02:05
    that was awesome, and for all of u who say its unbeliveable, duh the auther states that is a fiction story, it doesnt have to be real, if u want real, read the true storys, and ps they need a 12 button becuase 10 isnt high enough. i am now speechless. :D

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    READER 500
    12.04.2005 17:18
    ok i think theres enough responses now bring the next chapter on please

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    READER 500
    07.05.2005 01:56
    Well, then Fuck Lover, what's you're e-mail address? Lol-JK! Great Job DIRTY! I liked this storoy a lot, I was reading it a couple of weeks ago when I lost my internet connection but I couldn't remeber what the story was called so It took me FOREVER to find this story to finish reading it. I hope that Jack Sprat is wrong about you never getting any but hey, I have to fight every day to NOT get laid cause of all the horny guys! Lol -Jack Sprat you leave truthful comments, I like that. Hopefully you don't sleep around w/ too many girls though. -I really am a tease, how much trouble can I get into?- ;-)

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    READER 500
    14.05.2005 07:59
    I think the next story the girl should be nicer i mean if she wants the cock really bad wouldnt she just be nice instead of having to boss him around i mean she could just be a bitch when she is around the other girls you know.

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    READER 500
    14.05.2005 17:26
    yo u cud have a story for evryone og his sisters friends and in every story a new friend fuckes him and then in the final one they have a massive orgy lol cool eh

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    READER 500
    20.05.2005 12:20
    excellent story write more about them and include his sister and all of her friends!!! As for Jack Sprat-you should phycoanalize yourself

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2005 23:59
    sweet dude

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.06.2005 00:15
    Great story!!!
    Now when do we get to read part 2?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.06.2005 21:23
    i agree with wet cunt....its not possible. But, great story, keep it up!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.07.2005 05:20
    great story, keep up the work

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.08.2005 11:27
    Yo that story was the shit. You should definetly make more.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2005 21:11
    Great story, but next story get one or all of his sisters freinds involved. Then they can have a 3some. Keep up the amazing work.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.08.2005 18:23
    Why won't you make part II? This story was awesome, but it's been on the site for a long time.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.08.2005 03:27
    when is part two coming out??

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.09.2005 19:06
    i was ok for a first time... oh who am i kidding it was the best storie ever for a first timer like you

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.09.2005 19:38
    forgot to say 100/100

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.09.2005 23:07
    i'm in love

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.10.2005 06:00
    great story now do part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.10.2005 17:30
    great story dude, unrealistic but good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    10.11.2005 08:40
    that was amaxzing write another one

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2005 04:37
    awsome story, best that i have read 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.11.2005 15:48
    800/800

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.12.2005 00:12
    my cock is over 15 inches beat that

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.01.2006 15:45
    kick ass story dude i loved it

    100/100

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    READER 500
    04.01.2006 03:57
    well knowing how painfully big that was and completely unrealistic I couldn't get wet....no discription, and even if a boy magicalls had that it's not like the girl would feel all the pleasure....I'll say it was good for your first.....the only compliment I could muster....needs more discription though...

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    READER 500
    05.01.2006 12:57
    very good would like to see more

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    READER 500
    07.01.2006 20:58
    nice very nice 10/10 the best iv ever read but if i had to give advice for your next story try to be more descriptive with the sexual parts and then your story will be amazing!!!!

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    READER 500
    09.01.2006 12:05
    This was a very good story. Nice and long. I also think you are a great writer. 10/10 GOOD JOB

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.02.2006 14:54
    Loved it. Keep going.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.03.2006 14:08
    I want to hear about the rest of the girls becoming involved. maybe taking turns with him

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.05.2006 23:56
    i dont have cock WAAAAA i want one lol (not really)

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    READER 500
    29.05.2006 20:00
    ok..
    1))the story ws good.. and i knw u said it never happnd.. but tht's sooo unrealistic.. next time pls make it sumtin i can bate wit!!
    2)it ws a GREAT first story tho.. 8/10
    KEEP IT UP BABE

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    READER 500
    31.05.2006 04:17
    were is the reat :{

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  • READER
    READER 500
    16.06.2006 22:28
    good, but next time have all the girls have at him. want 2 c another1. 9/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.06.2006 02:20
    pure garbage

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    READER 500
    30.06.2006 02:12
    dam >< a 12 yr old having a 14 inch cock thats unbelievable...he would have ripped the girl apart O.O 8/10 make his cock a bit smaller next time...way to exagerated

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    READER 500
    15.07.2006 04:08
    I think your story is a true work of art; it shows a real skill in the written word as well as the tact you use in forcing readers to join in on your imagination. I can't wait to read the next chapter... Great Job DW

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    READER 500
    18.07.2006 17:15
    its a real good one

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    READER 500
    24.09.2006 16:54
    gago

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.10.2006 16:13
    good job for a first story

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    READER 500
    10.10.2006 17:59
    great job it was amazng

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    READER 500
    16.10.2006 08:12
    Nice story, but next time I want that there are a lot of more girls have him @ one moment

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    READER 500
    16.11.2006 19:03
    WOW fantastic

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    READER 500
    26.11.2006 21:16
    that kid knows nothing about sex and hes 12? when i was 12 I Knew TONS about sex and BJs and whatnot.

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    READER 500
    17.01.2007 22:04
    good job but next time re-read it first

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    READER 500
    15.02.2007 02:48
    too good
    plz write another part as soon as possible

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    READER 500
    06.03.2007 00:50
    a ruler is only 12 inches not 14, but good story

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    READER 500
    06.03.2007 05:13
    i like it make more

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    READER 500
    29.03.2007 14:02
    it was alright but iv read better and no twelve year old boy is gonna have a 14 inch dick its im possible so dont use so musch fiction other then that i like it

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    READER 500
    01.06.2007 19:20
    lol erection

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    READER 500
    12.06.2007 12:21
    next time make the story with a lot of his friends fucking all of his sisters friends and the brothe and sister should fuck

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    READER 500
    25.06.2007 21:11
    great job !!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep going

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    READER 500
    10.07.2007 16:48
    maybe a actuall size dick would be nice... not 14. 10 inch would be streching it

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    READER 500
    14.07.2007 15:57
    keeping the story in the same viewpoint is a basic principle of writing. you stupid bitch. you switched from 1st person to 3rd. you stupid fucktard.

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    READER 500
    19.07.2007 09:22
    that was great

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    READER 500
    27.10.2007 20:15
    very very gd m8, maybe somethink happens and he does all te rest of the friends

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    READER 500
    16.11.2007 17:31
    comon plz write 2 already u wrote it 2 yrs ago hurry up

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    READER 500
    14.12.2007 07:18
    wtf???? the worlds biggest dicks like 14 inhes aint it??? ur suching a fucking freak dich head lying mother fucking viagra penis enlargement raping cheese face

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    READER 500
    31.12.2007 22:39
    u dum ass he said it was a FICTIONAL story dum ass!!

    any wy awsome story

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    READER 500
    03.01.2008 17:50
    i fucking hate this story

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    READER 500
    09.02.2008 00:03
    man jeez if you guys id pay attention and fucking read what he said then ok and so he switched person views everyone makes mistakes jeez i swear some of you are fucking children

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    READER 500
    11.02.2008 04:11
    the shet

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    READER 500
    01.03.2008 14:08
    jus fucking write more n more

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.12.2012 18:05
    keep writing this story its so good.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 03:45
    FzCZHD wow, awesome article. Great.

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 17:08
    pLVf9Y Really appreciate you sharing this blog post.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2014 05:39
    Write more noww!!!

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