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Times in my Life : Part One

Author: Catmandue53

Date: 3 November 2014

Consensual Sex, Fiction, Masturbation, School

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ALL CHARACTERS DEPICTED IN SEXUAL ACTS ARE OF LEGAL AGE. THIS STORY IS A FANTASY LOOSELY BASED ON TRUE EVENTS. ALL NAMES AND PLACES ARE FICTIONAL, AND ANY RELATION TO ANY PERSON, PLACE, OR THING IS COMPLETELY COINCIDENTAL. THIS STORY IS COPYRIGHT 2014 BY THE AUTHOR AND UNAUTHORIZED COPYING OR OTHER FORMS OF REPRODUCTION ARE STRICTLY FORBIDDEN WITHOUT THE EXPRESS WRITTEN CONSENT OF THE AUTHOR.

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My first attempt at erotic fiction. Constructive criticisms welcome.

Preamble:

I lived with sexually active parents, and my mother was an “at-home” indoor nudist. Dad had a life-time subscription to Playboy and Penthouse magazines. I started looking at the back-issues I found in boxes in the attic. After years of seeing my mother naked I was amazed to find out that women came in many, many different varieties.

The older issues were pretty tame compared to the porn available in print and online nowadays. While showing breasts and pussy hair was acceptable at that time, wide open pussy shots were still frowned upon.

I was 12 years old when I found the first Playboy magazine. I was looking for comic books that were still in storage in the attic after our last move. Imagine my surprise when I found boxes and boxes filled with mostly naked women!

I looked at every picture in every one of those magazines. I removed all the centrefolds and carefully stored them in the bottom of a box of comics. No one but me read the comics and the pictures were safe and sound under the pile of comics.

Chapter One: Another Move ---

Another move. My father worked for a bank and was transferred to a different branch every few years. It always involved a higher ranking position and a pay raise so it was kind of a mixed blessing sort of thing.

The new (for us) house sat on one side of the end of the street, facing the houses on the other side of the street with the river running behind those houses. It was a 3 bedroom house with a combination kitchen / eating space, a front room, a laundry room, and a bathroom all on the main floor. Downstairs had a family room, an office, another room that could be used for laundry that was far larger than the one upstairs, and a recreation room. At one end of the recreation room a small room branched off of it. No door or anything. It was not meant to be used as a bedroom and I immediately claimed it as my own personal recreation room. Seeing as there was no door (or door-frame for the matter) for privacy my parents agreed to let my claim on the room stand.

This house had no attic so all the extra boxes were stored in the opposite end of the recreation room from my claimed area. This worked out great for me as I could get into the boxes of comics and the boxes of Playboy and Penthouse without ever worrying about getting caught at it. The recreation room did have a door, but closing it would invite suspicion and I didn't want that. The comics and skin magazines were right beside each other and it was easy for me to pull a stack of comics out of a box if need be.

New issues of Playboy and Penthouse continued to arrive every month. Once a new issue had arrived, the previous ones were likely to be boxed up as well. This was fine by me... I was now 15 years old and was starting to look at the pictures in a new light. For one thing, both magazines were showing a lot more nudity, especially in the pussy area. In the Penthouse magazines particularity it was more often than not that you could see the whole pussy in many of the shots.

For reasons I didn't yet understand I was really examining these more revealing photographs. I also started reading some of the columns in the magazines. Hitherto they had been completely ignored... now they provided an erotic and evocative education. The letters columns were interesting to read as real people were writing in with real questions that were being answered by real women. And the answers to those questions was an education in itself.

I started reading all the columns in both magazines from the oldest issues stored away until I had caught up with the current issues of both magazines. They were always “hidden” under my parent’s bed... not a terribly hard place for a teenage boy to find them. After reading and viewing them, they went back under the bed in the same position I had found them.

I would go to sleep at night with a panorama of naked beauties playing across the insides of my eyelids. I always had a good nights sleep.

Chapter Two: School Starts ---

My parents had planned the move to coincide with the resumption of school for my sister and I. She was 3 years younger than me and went to a public school. I was going to be entering grade 9 in my first year of high-school.

We lived in small town and the two of us were bussed to school. My sister's school was only a 15 minute trip straight to her school while mine was 45 minutes of boredom picking up all the kids who lived in the country before dropping us off at the high-school, located on the very edge of the city.

At lunch time I went outside to the smoking area and had a smoke. It was a small area adjacent to the parking lot and the football field at the rear of the school. There was 1 picnic table to sit on and that was it. I later learned that most of the smokers walked to the other side of the parking lot to sit on the gentle rise of a hill. But... first day for me and I was sitting on the top of the picnic table with a small group of kids the same age and grade as me.

We engaged in small-talk about classes and teachers and the location of all the rooms in the two story school. After we had finished smoking everyone went back inside to sit more comfortably in the courtyard at the center of the school. I lingered a while, looking around me, taking in the view and trying to remember where everything inside the school was. I'm sure you will remember your first day of high-school and how hard it was to remember where everything was.

Just as I was getting up to go inside a girl came out and sat on the picnic table top beside me.

My initial impression of her was that she looked a bit like a female version of your average teenage boy. Her dirty blonde hair was short and untamed; it looked, as my mother would say, as if “A hurricane had gone through it”. She had freckles on her face, small, and low in number. She wore no makeup at all. In fact, her face seemed a bit dirty. It was hard to tell the freckles from dirt spots.

A school football jersey covered her upper torso. It was at least 2 sizes too big for her, trimmed in the school colours and was a dull white colour. And it did nothing to hide the fact she had large breasts. After seeing them protruding outwards, the rest of her clothes and looks became a bit of a side note. She wore blue-jeans, straight-cut, not tapered, had on blacks socks and black weathered short-back style shoes baseball shoes. I tried to see more of her but my eyes were drawn like magnets back to her breasts.

She noticed me staring and gave me a hard look. “It's not polite to stare you know” she stated in a low, quiet voice.

I looked away as she flicked her cigarette out of her hand. “I'm sorry” I said quietly. I risked another look at her face to gauge how angry she was with me. Instead of the expected frown there was a small, somewhat grim-looking smile.

“What exactly did you find so interesting that you had to stare?” she queried.

Completely flustered, I managed a weak reply of, “Your football jersey”.

“What about it?”, she asked after a few seconds. Her voice was still quiet but now carried a menacing overtone.

I was completely at a loss for words, a previously unheard of event in my life. I thought quickly about an answer, thinking and discarding them one after another. There seemed nothing I could say that would appease her so I decided to go with the truth. My mother always said it was best to go with the truth if you have no other options.

“Well... it really doesn't flatter you” I managed.

Her eyes immediately flashed and her visage darkened. “WHAT?! What do you mean by that?!”

Speaking quickly I spurted out, “Well, it's too big for you and really hides the beauty of your breasts”.

She sputtered and looked at me in disbelief. “Say what?! What are you talking about, 'my breasts'?”

“Your boobs I mean. I'm sure they are beautiful and would make you look even better than you do now if you had on a shirt that was much smaller and made them stick out more”.

I wasn't sure that there was anything that could be done to make her look better than she did right then, short of a complete make-over, but I was skating on really, really thin ice.

She looked straight at me, her expression still dark for what seemed an eternity, although I'm sure it was only a few seconds. I held her stare, unwilling to give up after having committed myself with my bold words. Slowly something happened that I can still remember and see to this day... a small smile slowly crept across her face. It was like watching the sunrise as her smile softened her hard look and the grim lines around her eyes faded away.

“You're kinda cute, you know that?”

Now I was the one sputtering and blushing. I quickly dropped my gaze straight to my feet. This was the longest conversation I had ever had with a female I wasn't related to. I could feel the blush burning across my face. I never expected her to say that! I really had no idea what she was going to say, but that sure the hell wasn't it.

She placed her hand under my chin and raised my head back up to the same level as hers. Peering intently at my eyes she asked, “You're not shy are you? You sure look shy. How can you be shy after talking about my boobs like that?”

I looked again at her face. It was closer now and I could see mischief in her eyes as her smile widened. I had no answer for her; I had never felt this way before. I did notice that she looked less like a boy from this view.

“Come with me”, she said and grabbed my hand, pulling me off the table. Having no choice in the matter I stumbled along behind her.

“Where?” I managed to squeak out.

“Shhhh”, she whispered, turning around and putting her finger to her lips in the universal gesture of “be quiet”.

It was then I became aware that she was quite strong; she had no trouble pulling me along behind her.

My view of her from behind her as I was led along did somewhat change my initial assessment of her physical build. Although she was bigger than me, she was also built very well. The jersey did nothing to compliment her torso, and hid most of her back as well. I could see the shape of her ass and a bit of her hips as the jersey rode along them. What I could see looked good.

We travelled alongside the school in the direction of the football field, making a quick right turn at the back end of the school. About 10 yards away was a small shed, hidden away in the shadow of the school building. She looked carefully around and after determining the coast was clear led me to the small door on the side of the building. She slipped the door open just enough to push me through it before entering herself and closing (and latching) the door.

It was not very light in the small shed. The only light came from a dim light bulb attached to the wall near the top of the shed. Looking around I saw some old football equipment that was covered in dust sitting atop a very small bench.

She knocked the stack off the bench and sat me down on it. She sat down astride the bench and turned me so that I was facing her.

“So... you think that my 'breasts' are beautiful eh?”. Although it was quite dim in the shed I was sure I could see a twinkle in her eyes.

“I'm sure they are”, I started. “Even with that big football jersey on I can tell that they are big, round and firm.”

Again, that look in her eyes as she tilted her head a bit while looking at me. After awhile she seemed to have come to some sort of a decision. She was again looking me right in the eyes.

“Would you like to see them?”, she asked quietly with no menace in her voice.

“Oh yes please”, I replied as I thought to myself, “Do I want to see them? God-damned right I do!”

That seemed to be the right answer as she smiled again and pulled the jersey over her head and off of her body, setting it down on the bench behind herself.

I couldn't believe what was happening. Right there, less than 2 feet away was a girl smiling at me; wearing a bra and no shirt. The bra was a somewhat dingy shade of beige and well-constructed. Much like the football jersey, it did nothing to flatter her considerable assets.

“What do you think”, she asked in earnest.

I thought for a few seconds and said, “Honestly, I can't tell. Your bra is doing a wonderful job of supporting your breasts... uh... I mean boobs, while at the same time doing a really poor job of showing them off”.

There was no hesitation or tilting of the head before she turned away from me, reached back and undid the bra, adding it to the jersey on the bench behind her. As she turned back to face me I was able to see...

WOAH! NICE BOOBS! And they were! Larger than my mother's, perfectly round and the diameter of large cantaloupes. Her nipples had to be at least half an inch long... far longer than anything I had ever seen before. They were also far larger in diameter than even the ones in the skin magazines. And... there were just a few tiny, thin, and very blonde wisps of hair sparsely growing in the large, dark circle around them. “Damn”, I thought... these are really nice!

I looked a bit longer, moving my head up and down and side to side in an effort to see these wonderful mounds in all their glory. I wondered a bit about the hair, but only briefly. I wasn't sure if that was normal or not and I sure wasn't going to risk my view by spending too much time looking at it.

“They are truly quite stunning”, I said, a real note of awe in my voice. I had never been this close to exposed breasts before, and hers were really something to see.

I leaned over a bit, slowly, watching her face until my eyes were close enough that I couldn't focus on them if I moved closer. They looked even more amazing up close..

She watched me marvel at her assets for awhile. “Would you like to touch them?” she asked, the mischief clear in her voice.

“Oh... yes, please. I would like that very much”.

She took my left hand and guided it to her right breast, placing it palm opened, and dead center on it. My hand was barely big enough to hold all of it at once, but she seemed not to mind.

“Your hand is very warm”, she said quietly.

“Yes, I have been told that I am a very warm person”.

“I bet you are”, she quipped. I didn't know at the time what she actually meant by that.

Still with her hand over mine, she pushed my palm down more firmly on her breast while manipulating my fingers to give it a rudimentary massage. After awhile she slowly removed her hand from mine, making sure that I didn't stop what I was doing.

She quickly put my other hand on her other breast and I started massaging it as well, correctly surmising that was what she wanted me to do.

“Ooh... that feels nice.” She shuddered a bit, continuing, “Yes... very nice. Are you sure you've never done this before?”

“Quite sure... I am quite sure I would remember doing something as nice as this”.

She leaned into me, her face just an inch from mine, before closing her eyes and giving me my very first kiss from a female who was not a relative. I could tell this kiss was going to be different. For one thing, it kept going on. For another thing, her tongue was soon questioning at my lips for entry.

I was seriously out of my depth by this point. I would like to say that I instantly recalled everything I had ever read about kissing and french-kissing, but that was not the case at all. My memory was a muddy swamp, refusing to allow any information to breach it's murky depths.

Purely on instinct I allowed my lips to part and her tongue was soon saying 'Hello' to my tongue. I pushed a bit to see if I could get my tongue into her mouth but that didn't work out. She would allow my tongue as far as the undersides of her lips, but no further. I then retreated my tongue with hers right behind it. Back and forth this little dance played out while I continued to massage (or fondle if you like) her breasts.

I had started moving my palms around a bit... getting the lay of the land so to speak. I was soon feeling the firm underside of them and pressing upwards with the palms of my hands and all the while continuing to move my fingers around. I gently held one nipple and twirled it around a bit, squeezing very softly.

She broke the kiss, and said with a touch of surprise in her voice, “Oh! That feels good. Squeeze a just a bit harder though”.

As she resumed our kiss, I complied with her wishes and soon she was making little moaning noises. My other fingers quickly grasped her other nipple and began squeezing and twirling as well.

She again interrupted our kiss long enough to order, “Oh fuck... that feels good! Don't stop!”

I had no intention of stopping as I moved my palms around and twirled her nipples. After a bit I squeezed them just a tiny little bit harder. She paused with her tongue, and I backed off on the pressure. As soon as she started with her tongue again I tried to get my tongue into her mouth again. Again I was denied. I retaliated with a quick pinch to both nipples before returning them to their more restrained twirling motions.

“Wha..?” she blurted out in surprise. As soon as her mouth opened to speak I quickly shot my tongue between her lips and into her mouth. She was momentarily rattled by my actions and seemed unable to decide what to do next. Another quick pinch to her nipples as my tongue quickly moved back to the neutral zone on the outside of her lips, and then a continuation of the twirling motion but with a little more pressure than before on her nipples.

She shuddered and moaned as my fingers and palms gave her breasts the best time they had ever had.

She stopped kissing me and smiled, “Would you like to kiss my breasts?”

“I would like that very much, 'Please and thank-you with sugar on top'.”

“Your sure are polite!”

“My mom told me to always be polite to a lady.”

“A lady?”

“Yes, a lady.”

“Kiss my boobs and suck my nipples you little charmer.”

She leaned back a ways so I could better bring my face to her breasts. I brought my face up to her right one and began to softly suck on it. I left my other hand doing what it apparently did best on the other one.

I expanded the area I was sucking on while moving my tongue as fast as I could across the top of her nipples.

“Fuck!” she exclaimed, “Where did you learn to do that?”

“I read it in a book”, I replied.

“A book?!” she asked incredulously.

“Yes, a book.”

She clasped my head to her bosom and continued to moan and sigh. After a little while I switched my face and mouth switched sides with my busy hand and began anew on the other side.

“Oh gawd...”

I was staring to wonder what would happen next when suddenly the bell rang. We both snapped up straight on the bench and looked at each other.

“That was really, really very, very nice”, she purred. I could see something else in her eyes now, the twinkle was still there but something else as well. I didn't know the look of lust when I first saw it there.

“It was really my pleasure you know”, I replied as she quickly strapped the bra back on and pulled the jersey back over her head.

“I'll see you later, or else tomorrow, okay?” It was more of an order than a question, and I happily nodded my head up and down while smiling broadly at her.

Suddenly it occurred to me I had no idea what her name was. “What's your name?” I quickly asked. She turned to look at me and shook her head from side to side while smiling like the proverbial cat that had eaten the canary. Whatever her name was, I wasn't finding it out at that point in time.

We made our way back to the picnic table and inside with no one seeing us. We headed off in different directions as we both made our way to the next class. My next class was English, and was on the second floor. The teacher's name was Ms. Somebody or another and a mental vision of an ugly old woman droning on about English punctuation rules sprang to mind.

As I got to the door to the classroom I slowly turned the knob and pulled the door back. A female voice soon began, “I don't tolerate late students, but I will allow you this one exception because it's the first day of school.”

I already had my head lowered as I walked into the room so the teacher could see that I knew I was late and probably in trouble.

“I am really...”, I started as I slowly brought my eyes up to look at her.

I gulped... and stuttered out, “Really, really sorry Ms....” I couldn't remember her name for the life of me.

Would I would remember is that she was a stunning young woman who looked like she had just stepped off the pages of Playboy magazine and put some clothes on. Her hair was flowing golden yellow with a loose ponytail hanging down her back. She had on a tight red turtle-neck sweater that did everything to complement her. Smooth round hips covered in a pair of white corduroy pants. She had a pair of red 'Elf' style boots surrounding her feet. She looked unlike any teacher I had seen before (or since now that I come to think of it).

As I blinked at her, I could see in my mind's eye exactly what she would look like with no clothes on.

I quickly lowered my gaze to her feet... I surely didn't want to get called out for staring again.

“All right, all right. Find a chair, sit down and be quiet.”

I quickly sat in the first available seat, right in the front row. There were only two other people in the front row... a mostly skinny girl in a bright yellow sun-dress to the left of me and her identically dressed twin sister to the right of me. I quickly gave the one to the right a quick look up and down, filing the information away for later. After quickly dismissing them from my mind I found my English text-book, my note-book, and a pen. I looked up to see what the teacher was writing on the board.

End of part One.

Part Two.

Chapter Three: Waiting for the Bus ---

After school had let out for the day I headed out to the front of the school to where a large number of yellow school buses were lining up in the long circular driveway at the front of the building. I walked along the line of buses, looking for the bus driver who had picked up a group of us in the morning beside the arena.

As I spotted her I started walking towards the stairs to the bus.

“You have to wait for the late bus”, she said, not unkindly.

“Why?”, I asked.

“Because you got picked up this morning at the 'late bus' stop at the arena there”, she answered.

It was obvious I had no idea what she was talking about. That was the first day I had ever ridden a school bus, and knew nothing about 'early' or 'late' buses.

“How long do I have to wait?”, asked I.

“45 minutes and I'll be back to pick you and the others up”.

I looked at my watch. It was nearly a quarter to four, meaning I had until 4:30 to wait around the school before I would be able to get the bus home again.

As I walked back towards the picnic table I thought of my encounter with the girl who refused to give me her name. I sat down on the top of the table and lit a smoke. As I was gazing at the older students across the parking lot on the little hill, my mind wandered a bit; images and voices had been bombarding me all day. I couldn't remember even a small percentage of what I had seen and heard.

Suddenly, the mystery girl was sitting right beside me. “Hiya cutie!”

I'm sure I jumped a bit as her sudden appearance but fought to quickly compose myself.

“Boo!”, she added, lighting up a smoke of her own as grinned at me.

“Hi”, I answered in a bright voice. I didn't want her to think she had gotten away with trying to startle me. We both know she had, but she seemed disinclined to make anything out of it.

She took a long draw on her smoke, exhaling the smoke slowly out of her mouth, her lips pursed into a perfect “O”.

We sat together, side by side, until we had finished our smokes. She flicked hers off into the parking lot while I stomped mine out on the pavement. I had a quick look at my watch to check the time... I didn't want to miss my bus.

“How much time before your bus?”, she asked.

“About half an hour I guess”.

“Half an hour eh?” She was smiling again and definitely had mischief in her eyes. “You want to go back to the shed with me?”. She was already walking in that direction.

“Uhm... sure, I guess”.

I tried to sound as if I was worried about the bus. “Just for a bit though...”

“Don't worry, you won't miss your bus.” I could hear the confidence in her voice so I stopped worrying about it.

Missing the bus would be disastrous as there was no other way home short of calling my mom to come and get me; I would never hear the end of it or be able to live it down. Still... her voice was very confident.

Soon enough we were back in the shed. It seemed somehow darker inside than before. I'm pretty sure it wasn't, but it seemed that way at the time.

We sat astride the old bench and faced each other, as we had done before.

“Would you like to do some more of what we were doing before?”, she asked slyly.

I smiled back at her, “You know I do, don't you?” I said in my most pleasant voice.

Her eyes zeroed in on me,“Say it to me then.”

“Please, could we do what we were doing before?”

She quickly leaned over and we started on my second kiss with a woman I wasn't related to. Her jersey and bra were quickly taken off and set behind her on the bench.

Not being taken by surprise by her actions this time I had a bit more time to think about what I would do next. I took my hands and cupped them around her, just above her waist. Opening my palms, I slid my hands up a bit and then slowly wrapped them around her back. After a bit they moved up and down and around the bare skin of her back, meandering all over it, gently massaging with my fingers while my palm followed along to smooth out everything as they by.

She really shuddered when the palms of my hands went up the sides of her spine, my fingers pointing upwards, and slowly came back down her back, my fingers now pointing downwards, gently massaging her back as my palms came back down either side of her spine.

“Ooh...”, she moaned, “did you read that in a book too?”

“Same book.”

“Good book... oh... ooh”, I had gently finished our kiss and was now kissing my way down her neck as my hands moved from her back and up front to her shoulders, massaging them very softly. As my tongue moved from spot to spot on her neck, I let the very tip of my tongue slide, very lightly, between the spots.

Her 'oohs' had become more, “Ah... oh...” and a slow, low continuous moan; punctuated now and again with more, “Uhhh... that feels... ooh... really good”.

I let my hands fall from her shoulders as my head continued kissing her; lips, face, neck, and back again. I brought my hands slowly and gingerly down to her breasts, my fingers barely touching the surface of her skin. My mind was working far better this time around and I started remembering some of the things I had read between the covers of the magazines.

As my fingers continued teasing her skin I lowered the palms of my hands over her nipples and onto her breasts. I slowly cupped my palms, trapping her nipples as I slowly lifted my hands up. I had read about this technique and was curious as to how well it would work.

My kissing had descended from her neck to the small area of skin between her breasts. As my hands reached as far as they could without losing their grip on her nipples my tongue started to flatten out as I now licked her from the side of one breast, across the center area and to the side of the other breast and back again, with a little detour up the center section between them, then back down again.

By now, she had let her head fall back and was running her fingers through my hair. Her breathing was long and a bit ragged, the occasional catch in her breath tipping me off to something I had done right.

As I brought my lips down to suck those unbelievable nipples my other hand stopped palming her other breast and started twirling and squeezing her nipple again. I sucked it a bit harder than I had before and she moaned loudly.

As I started flicking my tongue across the top of her nipple she hardly noticed that my other hand was now twirling and squeezing slower, and with quite a bit more pressure than before. Her head came forward and she started to kiss the top of my head as she caressed my face and the back of my neck. It felt good.

I suddenly gave one nipple a twisting motion through my thumb and pointer finger squeezing it quite hard for just a fraction of a second before returning to the twirling and more gentle squeezing of before.

By the time she responded to the sudden pain in her nipple I greatly increased the amount of suction on the other one and allowing my teeth to give it a quick nip.

“UH...”, her breath caught.

Just as fast as it had started, it was over. I went back to what I had been doing before.

As I continued, I switched sides to her other breast, bringing my hand up deftly along the bottom of the breast as my fingers captured the nipple. As my mouth came to rest around the previously rolled and squished nipple I sucked as hard as I could, drawing the entire nipple and surrounding area into my mouth.

My tongue snaked all over the nipple, top, sides, bottom edges, everywhere I could find to get it while still sucking for all I was worth. He respondent large shudder and a sudden intake of breath told me I was doing a good job of giving her pleasure.

While she was still shuddering, her body trying to process the feelings my mouth was bringing to her breast, I used the same roll and squeeze technique on the nipple of the other breast. A quick jump told me she had felt it fully this time. I quickly released the nipple from my fingers and brought my palm down around it. Cupping it again, pulled it as far as I could before coming down and fondling it. While that was happening I was sucking hard and drawing the nipple down to my lips so that all that I was left sucking on was the top section of the nipple itself.

“Ungh... what are.... you... ah!” I had gently bitten a tiny bit of the nipple I was sucking then released it and sucked more of the breast back into my mouth, my tongue again moving across, around, up and down the nipple.

My other hand was now twirling and squeezing with the new, harder pressure and my tongue was really giving the nipple I was sucking a good lashing.

Her moaning had quietened and was more continuous again. I took this as a good thing, and then I slowly brought my head back up to her lips, kissing everything they could reach on the way. My hand were again caressing her back and sides, my fingers now tentatively seeing how far down her waist they could get before they got to the fabric of her jeans or she made me stop. I could now feel the form at the top of her waist as it narrowed a bit before starting to flair out as my fingers felt downwards.

As our tongues met again, I slid my hands between her panties and her ass, bypassing the jeans entirely, moving down, caressing, massaging, and generally making themselves as useful as they could. This was done gently but with more speed than I usually used. She seemed not to mind. Not at all.

While I was exploring this new territory, she put her arms around me and pulled my as close to her as she could, her hands and arms hugging me while we got hotter and hotter.

There was no resistance now to my tongue exploring the inside of her mouth. Our tongues and lips made love to each other as she hugged me, and I massaged as much of her as I could reach; up and down from her neck to the full cheeks of her ass. I was in heaven!

As our kiss began to slow and cool down a bit, I took that as a sign that it would be a good time for me to return my wandering hands back to hugging her back and gently caressing it. She slowly and reluctantly released me as I released her.

Her face was glowing as small beads of sweat rolled down her face. Her eyes were glazed over and her breath was starting to return to normal. She smiled at me as she put her bra and jersey back on. I returned the smile, happy that she was happy. She looked very nice to me now, the sheen on her face seeming to glow in the dim light of the shed.

“My name is Terri. And your name is Nick.”

“How do...”, I started.

“I knew your name before you got on the bus this morning”.

“But... how...?”

“My mom is the bus driver!” She laughed as she looked at the surprise on my face. It occurred to me then that I hadn't really looked at my fellow bus passengers that morning. I had slipped into the first open spot I could and had not looked around or in back of me the whole ride. I had been in a bit of a daze, worrying about all the things a first time bus rider would worry about on the way to his first day of high-school.

She looked at me intently again, her eyes locked on mine. “You can't tell anyone what we did here today. My mom would have a fit!”

I nodded my head in agreement. I didn't want my bus driver pissed at me... that would be a disaster of the first degree.

“And don't be looking at me on the bus or in the halls, or anywhere else. People would start to notice.”

“Okay” I said.

She gave me a less intense hug and a big kiss after we stood up and before she opened the door to the shed

“That was really nice, the things you did.”

“I enjoyed making you feel good. It makes me feel good to make you feel good.”

“You know, I have kissed other boys before, but they all wanted to grope me, trying to get their hands on my boobs or down my pants.” She seemed to forget that I had put my hands down her pants, at the rear yes, but still down them. I thought that maybe that didn't count.

She paused a bit before continuing, “You are the first boy to see me with my shirt and bra off. You are the first boy who didn't try to take advantage of me. You were gentle, and nice, and you took your time making me feel good. You are the first boy to touch or suck my nips or touch my boobs. No one has ever seen my whole top area with no clothes on. And you hugged and massaged my back. That was in incredible turn-on for me. It felt so good!”

“I'm glad you liked it... I aim to please.” My mind lingered over her words, “...turn-on for me...”.

“Hmm... your aim is very good. Because you were so good to me, I have decided to give you a reward.”

“Oh?”

“Yes, because you were taking all of your time to make me feel good without a thought for yourself, you are going to get a very, very special reward.”

“Wow! Thank-you!”

“Come here...”

As I moved closer to her she turned so that her back was to me. “Put your hands under my bra and massage my boobs some more”.

I thought we had finished, but I guessed I was wrong. A very, very quick look at my watch (thank God for glow in the dark watch hands!) set my fear of being late for the bus to rest. I still had just over 10 minutes before I had to board the bus.

I moved closer to her and my hands went under the material of the jersey and up to the bra. I carefully wedged my fingers under the bra until it popped up and over her breasts. I took a full handful of breast in each hand and gave them a friendly squeeze followed by a full-handed massage.

“Uhm... yeah... that's good”, she whispered. I closed my eyes and let my head rest on her back as I continued doing what she obviously enjoyed. About a minute later I heard a soft pop followed by a quiet zipper noise. What was she doing? I knew those sounds, and what they usually meant.

“Okay... move your hands down, slowly, to my waist, and keep massaging me”, she instructed.

I did as I was told, and slowly started down from her breasts, across her smooth flat stomach until my hands were just above the waistband of her pants. She put her hands over mine and slowly guided them under her panties and down the sides of her legs.

“Oh my gawd, your hands are so fucking hot!” she exclaimed. Just keep doing that for a while, up and down my sides and the sides of my legs.”

As my hands started upwards she took her hands off mine for a few moments. I could feel her adjusting her pants a bit, then her hands were on top of mine again. She sighed, a quiet and very content sigh. With a bit of daring, I brought my hands all the way up to her breasts, fondling them a bit before moving back down again.

“I love when you do that... the heat of your hands feels amazing”.

As I slowly moved my hands back down towards the sides of her legs, massaging and rubbing as they went, she guided my hands very slowly and very carefully off of her legs and onto the flat of her stomach. I continued rubbing gently, getting a feel for the area. Her sigh was less a sigh now and more of a catch as she guided my hands even further down.

“Be careful now, I've never done this before...”

“Neither have I”, I thought to myself.

As my hand slid around the side of her pubic mound and along the insides of her thighs she moved her legs together a bit, pushing her pants and panties further down her legs until they bunched up in a pile at the top of her shoes. She adroitly lifted one foot up and out of the clothes, spread her legs and put her foot back down on the floor. As her legs spread, she leaned back on me somewhat. I was concerned I wouldn't be strong enough to hold her until I heard...

“All right, gently now, bring your hands up alongside the insides of my legs.”

“Okay”, was all I could manage to articulate.

As I brought my hands together and upwards I could feel with my fingers that her panties were really wet in the crotch area. My palms slid carefully upwards and I could feel that her pubic mound was wet and slippery. I paused for a moment, not wanting to go too fast and ruin the moment.

“Keep going...”, her voice was so quiet I almost couldn't hear it. I could hear the heat of her body in her voice... It was unmistakeable, almost like a cross between a purr and a growl, if that makes sense at all.

With the greatest care I had ever taken in my life, I brought my fingers up and together.

I carefully moved my hands and fingers up and down, just a bit, and very slowly; taking the opportunity to build a map of sorts in my mind. I knew from pictures what the general shape and construction of a pussy looked like, and now I was matching what I felt with what I had seen. I was very careful not to linger at any one place, my fingers and hands gently rubbing now and they moved up and down with a little more distance between the strokes. Folds of warm flesh, her outer labia, the hood above them, and all the fine details of the outside of a pussy were revealed to my hands.

She was so wet between her legs I couldn't believe it. I had read of women getting “wet” before, but not to this extent. But is was not like piss... it was slippery and... kinda like a thin jelly to the touch.

Terri spread her legs as far apart as she could, and I could see her face was really flushed. I remembered what she had said about “a turn-on”, and knew that she was really turned-on.

“Keep rubbing, right in the middle with one hand... yes... that's..... oh... YES... just like that!”

I put my other hand right on the crack of her ass and pushed as far and wide as my fingers would go, then using my heel of my palm, pushed down until my palm was pushing on her ass-hole and my fingers were back up to the hot moisture of her pussy.

“WhAT ARe YoU... holy fuck!” She started to shudder quite forcefully, and her breath was coming in quick, ragged breaths. The words, “holy fuck, holy fuck” echoed over and over again as she leaned even more against me. It was taking all my strength not to fall over now, but I wasn't going to let that happen!

I used both hands and all my fingers to rub and massage from the front and back of her pussy at the same time. Every time my palm crossed over the top of her pussy there was that area that had more give, but was firmer underneath; and I knew that her clit was being stimulated. She rocked whenever my palm pressed over it, on the way up and on the way back down again.

I knew she was about to cum... all that reading and looking had taught me some things.

I held her as close and supported her as well as I could as I increased the pressure from both hands, moving them faster now, up and down, until she finally jerked violently back and forth few times, then went stiff as a board.

“YARgh... OH, OH, AHhhhhhhhh... FUCK!”

She was breathing so fast and hard I was afraid she was going to collapse. After a full minute, she relaxed again and stood upright under her own power.

Both of my hands were soaking wet and there was a dark, wet spot on the floor.

She quickly pulled her panties and pants back on and did the jeans up again, then turned to me and hugged me so hard I thought I was going to pass out. She really was quite strong.

As she relaxed her grip a bit she opened her mouth a bit and moved in for our slow, sensual and final kiss of the day. I could feel her relaxing even further... she was a happy, content camper.

“That was the most amazing thing that has ever happened to me”, she gushed.

“You sure seemed to be enjoying it”, I said.

“I have never cum before! This was my first time! It was fucking incredible!”

I looked at her and smiled my nicest smile, “Thank you for letting me have such an incredible reward. I have dreamed of making a woman hot, wet and taking her to orgasm.”

“All of that eh? Well, you have fulfilled that dream to the fullest extent then.”

“I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I have never seen, let alone touched a woman before like I did with you today”.

“Really? I find that hard to believe... your hands, your tongue and your... fingers. Hmm... your fingers.”

“What? What about them?”, I wasn't sure what she was going to say, and worried that she was going to chide me for tweaking her nipples like I had.

“You tweaked my nipples with them, but you didn't try to put them inside me.”

“And that's a good thing?”

“Yes... your twirling, twisting and tweaking felt... oh jeez... so fucking good. It kinda hurt for just a little bit but then you would do something else that took all of my attention.”

“I was worried a bit... I didn't want to hurt you. That would have been a real downer.”

“You hurt me in just the right way. And you rubbed me exactly the right way. And sucked, and kissed and....and... I can't believe you didn't try to stick a finger inside of me. I was sure you would, that's all I have ever heard that boys want to do.”

“No, not me. I would never go where I wasn't invited.”

She grabbed me again and hugged me ever tighter than before.

“Thank you so much. You were so nice and so good. No other boy has ever treated me nice like you do. I will always remember what you did here today for me. Giving you a reward turned out to actually be one for me.”

She glanced at her watch and said, “We need to get going... I'll get on the bus first. You wait a couple of minutes and then get on too. Sit as far back as you can, and remember, no looking at me!”

“I remember”, I assured her.

“Right then... let's go.”

From the shed we made it back undetected to the inside of the school. She smiled at me and headed for the bus. I headed into the bathroom to wash my hands. Being a guy I naturally stuck them up to my nose to see what she smelled like.

I didn't know what to make of the smell. It was strong, but not offensive, with a tiny sweet scent to it. I tasted my finger and was surprised at the taste; it was mostly very sweet with just a bit of a salty taste. I tried the other fingers and they all smelled and tasted the same. I washed my hands and left the washroom for the bus.

Terri was seated near the front of the bus and I looked away from her as I boarded the bus and headed right to the last seat at the back. I kept my head down mostly but I did spy her glancing and smiling at me a few times. Apparently it was okay for her to look at me, but not the other way around. I thought about that for a microsecond before deciding that if she wanted it that way, it was fine with me.

It never dawned on me until I was home and saw Mom naked that I thought about what my hands had, and.. hadn’t felt. Mom had a nice bushy triangle above her pussy area, but Terri was as smooth as a baby's bottom down there.

“How was your first day of school?”, she asked me.

“It was okay.”

“Did you meet anyone? Make any friends?”

“No... I kept to myself and tried to blend in.”

“All right then, wash up for supper. Oh... you have a telephone message... I left it on the counter by the phone.”

I picked up the note as I approached the phone... “Call 555-8855 after 7:00 pm.”

I wondered if that was Terri's number, then immediately thought that it couldn't be, not after all of the admonishments she had given me about not even looking at her.

“When's supper Mom? I'm really hungry...”

End of Part One ---


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  • anonymous+reader
    08.07.2013 23:35
    well written. Nice build up. I look forward to the series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.07.2013 23:54
    Awesome story look forward to your update :

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 00:46
    Great! Keep it up! It's not something I would jerk to but I love to read this!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 01:48
    a very interesting story well written so write parts please

    ;;jj

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 02:27
    Wow great build-up, I haven't seen writing this good on here in a long while. Overall the story is great and I love the plot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 10:09
    Yeah a great start to a good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 13:04
    Fantastic Story!!! Very well written and extremely erotic!

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 13:56
    NEED more. Thus is amazing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 15:34
    Excellent start, very detailed and believable. Hugely anticipating the next instalment.
    Hope its soon.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 16:31
    Good story setup. I get the feeling this was before cell phones?

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 18:00
    wow this is great and leavesme wanting more

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 18:20
    Very well done. Your sneeky development of the characters was awesome. My intrest is now piqued and I cant wait for the next part.

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.07.2013 19:26
    A very well written and intriguing story, one that really pulls the reader into the action and pulls the reader along. I was quite upset that I had reached the end so fast, as I wanted it to keep going. Keep it up, Catmandue53, as you have many eager readers awaiting the next installment!

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2013 02:20
    Wow hard to believe this is your first time wwriting. Great story details and all are good length all in all amazing looking forward to pt 2 soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2013 08:37
    very well written. a few of the phrases could he replaced with something else like
    the room was not so light could be replaced by the room was quite dark or the room
    was not bright :)

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  • Mucker
    10.07.2013 09:17
    That was an outstanding story. It was very well written and has the perfect balance between the sexual and non-sexual narratives. The sexual descriptions were very erotic. I'll be looking forward to the next parts to follow.

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.07.2013 19:42
    I absolutely want more! Make another one. Don't change a thing, it had the perfect balance of non erotic and sexual peaks and descriptions. Definitely want more!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 02:36
    Great story NEEDS A PART 2!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 03:34
    GREAT story!!! Had 2 orgasms!

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 04:12
    you should made another 50 of these.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 06:22
    Very well written. A good story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 06:25
    ANOTHER EXCELLENT PART WRITE MORE PLEASE

    ;;

    JJ

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 08:52
    uyihoiàçàçijijjijphohohol;jkjiuiluiuo

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 09:25
    This is so good stuff, id pay for that :D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 10:20
    Catmandue53, You truly have a gift as a writer .This is by far one of the best stories to ever grace this sight

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 12:10
    I CAME IN MY PANTIES OH MY FUCKING GOSH I NEED TO FUCK SOMEBODY

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 12:29
    Reminded me of my cousin when I walked her home after school on day back in 73. She was 16 and I was 18 young and just got out of basic training in the Air Force, she was a soutmore in highschool. Love those memories. Keep up the good work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 13:33
    Great detail. Easy to visualize the situation and feel a part of it. Great writing overall. Keep it up. I'm looking forward to the next part of the series.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 14:37
    You are a blessed writer.. Eagerly waiting for more

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 16:12
    Seriously, that story goes hard.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 16:15
    Seriously, that story goes hard.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 16:17
    I wouldn't mind being apart of the story, I could easily do all those things with my mouth, hands, and strength.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 17:57
    Please keep it up with Sylvia. She is a much more interesting character and way, way hotter.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 18:13
    It wasn't very realistic, but good try.

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  • anonymous+reader
    11.07.2013 22:07
    Wow this is just great! Good story all around keep it up looking forward to part3

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 00:27
    Thank you..know your words are loved as you take me to places in my head that visuals cant......keep writing...)"(...

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 00:30
    Ok my brother an I are more interested in the mother running around the house without any clothing on. My brother an I do that in our home. As soon as we close the front door, the cloths come off. We keep robes hangin' on hat tree, by the front door, for when someone comes to visit un-announced. The pizza guys loves comin' to our home, because I alway answer the door nude for him. That's his tip. Does anybody else in our hero's home run around without their clothing on? The rest of the story has been wonderful. Hope there's more to come... or is it cum?

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 02:36
    Awesome, where have you been. This is a superb development of the characters, and driving straight for the conclusion just like real sex does. Keep writing as you surely have the talent and truely artistic.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 05:24
    This is a far better story than most that I find to read here. Too many 'instructions' from the girl, but otherwise a hot read.
    I rate this a 6 out of 10 so there's still room for improvement.

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 08:28
    Dude I looove this Story so much!
    Pls keep goin and write more about Sylvia :3
    This is so awesome, I cant wait to Read the next Part!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 10:32
    thus just gets better.
    you have lived up to and exceeded my expectations :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 10:39
    dude.
    you're fucking awesome :)

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  • kinky_kitty214
    12.07.2013 12:25
    Im a Teen girl and I'm so horny anyone interested ??

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 15:10
    i totally agree with "dude you're fucking awesome"

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 16:15
    I you don't write a part 3 soon you might just have an angry mob outside your house. Cuz this is amazing for a rookie writer. Amazingly few mistakes and the awesome plot completely makes up for them. Bravo dude this has quickly brought you to the same level as the best series on this site

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 16:36
    Tis very kind and generous of the young man to give his lovers such pleasure, and the degree of pleasure that he gets from doing so I understand, but wouldn't he like to receive a little pleasure as well? Going home with blue balls gets a little old after awhile, I'm sure he has a whole lot of spunk to release!

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  • anonymous+reader
    12.07.2013 18:07
    Nice to see something on here that is well written and not about incest or pedophilia...keep up the good work!

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  • ZondarTheBear
    12.07.2013 21:55
    This is an amazing story, for a first timer or for someone who has been writing for awhile. The dialogue is a bit stilted sometimes, but it doesn't detract from the overall sweetness of the story. With a bit of editing, I could see this story being published as a 'for pay' story. I wouldn't mind including it in the lineup at Zondar's House of Weirdness.

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2013 01:33
    Kitty I am interested teen boy

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2013 02:15
    Awesome story, I loved it. I know u just published this but whens part3 coming out?

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2013 10:31
    i agree with Zondar you need to work a little on the word play between characters not many kids are so sharp witted and smooth talking. I understand that the young man in the story is unique but he is still a teen. Other than that great work I look forward to reading the rest when it comes out

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2013 11:15
    I enjoyed reading this story. I felt that the boy's dialog was too stilted and formal for a teen, but you obviously have a GREAT command of the English language as well as being endowed with very good writing skills. Get the language a little more conversational in the style of a teen-aged boy, but keep it slang free and avoid "ya" at all costs. I hate that some wannabe writers keep using that word.
    I would rate your story 9.5 out of 10. VERY GOOD!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2013 13:31
    Excellent job on the stories! Please keep the series going!

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  • Catmandue53
    13.07.2013 13:36
    Thank you all so very much for your kind words and advice. I am nearly overwhelmed by them.

    I have taken note of the advice offered, and will incorporate as much of it as I am able to.

    I am working on the next installment, but it will be a few day at the very least.

    Again... thank you all so much!

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  • Catmandue53
    13.07.2013 13:39
    Thank you everyone for all the really great comments! It is those comments that inspire me to keep writing!

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  • anonymous+reader
    13.07.2013 20:22
    Your writing is great, injecting emotions into each comment, action, and reaction that you describe. You shouldn't just post on this site, you should write a book. The fact that you are a beginner makes it all the more amazing.

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.07.2013 09:14
    Keep going to number 3 4 5 and all way to 9 lol good read

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  • anonymous+reader
    14.07.2013 19:31
    If this turns out to be J K Rowling again...

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2013 06:05
    Part 1 was awesome holy fuck I pictured the while thing props to the author

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2013 11:02
    What I liked about this story was the fact that the boy wasn't too forward with Sylvia and pleasured her slowly as most females prefer. Good for him! I rate this a 7 out of 10. I liked the part where he is going to touch her pussy and his imagination was painting a picture of what he was able to feel....GOOD ONE!

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2013 15:02
    Best story I've read. Hope to see more

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2013 16:55
    that made me so wet

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  • anonymous+reader
    15.07.2013 17:52
    Nothen I can say but great. Write more.

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2013 10:34
    Amazing I masturbated to this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    16.07.2013 11:48
    I really liked this, I wonder when nick gets some action

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 04:02
    I thoroughly enjoyed the story, but I must say, "colour" is actually "color." Just wanted to let you know. Other than that, flawless, not only was was the story erotic, but captivating as well. I would very much like to read the rest of nick's story if you get around to it. Best of luck.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 04:52
    Very well done - I am looking forward to see how this progresses.
    BTW - to those who pointed it out earlier - colour is correctly spelled for a UK english version - not everyone lives in the US or uses their written system.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 04:59
    Positive rating definitely, hope to read more, really enjoyable read, congratulations.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 06:47
    Got to agree with people, unless you are American colour is spelt correctly.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 10:01
    Wow ! That is a story I liked so much !

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 15:20
    Good story man, hope d next part comes out soon!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.07.2013 20:03
    Man I really want nick to get laid. I understand women's pleasure is important to him and everything but I really want some chick to get fucked...HARD...all in all great story

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  • johnnydow
    17.07.2013 20:06
    I love stories with busty females, especially teens. I was looking forward to more story with Teri. Sylvia sounds amazing too. Good job.

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.07.2013 00:26
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.07.2013 04:01
    Definitely the best story I've read on this site. keep it going!

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  • butter+fingers
    18.07.2013 18:32
    Awesome story!! Lucky girl :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.07.2013 10:14
    This is my 6th time reading this story, it really gets me in the mood for sex.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.07.2013 22:12
    the story is really good and off course the the author has really good command over English language

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2013 15:53
    Your eye for details is amazing and I like the pace. Don't rush it and keep using all these details!

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.07.2013 17:05
    This is pure art, pure art I tell you.

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  • JackStr
    22.07.2013 17:14
    This is pure art, pure art I tell you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.07.2013 23:17
    This story is very well written, the storyline is good, and the English is excellent. However, make sure that you do not fall into a predictable pattern. Do not have a third girl who also needs a massage, and lands up cumming after he fingers her or eats her. have the girl reciprocate, and give him a blowjob or something. Make the girl aggressive, or give her some kinks. Also, you should think about bringing in an antagonist, maybe another boy at school who gets jealous of the attention Nick gets, perhaps one of the football team kids, or some other popular guy. Just some suggestions from an avid reader who hopes to see more of this art as Jack says. :)
    --K

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2013 09:15
    Great Great story! Keep it up!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.07.2013 22:16
    This was fricking amazing please post pt 3 soon!

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2013 07:09
    I hope to see a very large series

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.07.2013 11:49
    Your stories are great please continue the story.

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  • hotjohn4321
    26.07.2013 13:05
    Good story line. Waiting for chapter 3

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  • Mucker
    27.07.2013 09:57
    I am very impressed with your writing talent. This was an excellent sequel in the continuing story. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next installment.

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  • Catmandue53
    28.07.2013 01:22
    Thank you all for your brilliant comments! I will write a third story, I promise.

    And... I am a Canuk, and colour is spelled correctly for me :)

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  • Catmandue53
    28.07.2013 01:23
    Again, thank you all for your amazingly great comments! I will write more, I promise.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2013 05:16
    Great story... Please write chapter 3 soon!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.07.2013 11:07
    Hi,
    When is next realease... Good story

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.07.2013 13:27
    You have several errors that should have been detected and corrected by proof-reading your material properly.
    In the first paragraph, you wrote ",,,might as well make once(sic)" when you meant "one". Then you wrote "...door with a dead-bold (sic) when you meant "dead-bolt". You wrote "table her (sic)" and "kitchen her (sic)", when you meant "here". Then, when you got to Sylvia's bra, you wrote "...a font (sic) closure" when you obviously meant "front closure",
    The talking was way too mature and polished for a couple of teenagers. Just a bit too stilted to ring true.
    Learn to proof-read and don't go into so much detail about things that do not contribute to your storyline and you will be a very good writer.

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.07.2013 02:39
    love to read the next part,loved this story

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.07.2013 05:39
    First: to the grammar nazi, it's a sex story and the fact that the thoughts are coherent is wonderful and more than enough to make me graciously hit the positive button, so get over the 8 mistakes you found. I'd like to see you write 25 pages without a mistake.

    Second: you just had to start off your story with a great food description, huh -.- it made me realize how long it had been since id eaten, and I had to put off reading this story :p

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.07.2013 09:08
    Your fkn sick sick scum dirty peadophile cunts

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  • anonymous+reader
    04.08.2013 08:36
    Outstanding. Looking forward to more. This took me back to my first time with my cousin. Keep up the good work...Thanks!

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2013 05:46
    Please keep up the amazing work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2013 18:00
    So far so good..... Errors are common that is why we have erasers on pencils. Try making friends with spell check. Looking forward to your next part. Good luck......

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  • anonymous+reader
    05.08.2013 18:00
    So far so good..... Errors are common that is why we have erasers on pencils. Try making friends with spell check. Looking forward to your next part. Good luck......

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.08.2013 20:44
    Tell me your real profession... A painter? Artist? Your stories are no less than scenic paintings ? Any genetic relation to Leonardo da Vinci? Come on be serious, I am a frequent reader on this site any some more... But never came anything that can be compared to these two in terms of quality, passion and expression... And of course this is can only be a X generation material, language and characters are th greatest proof it... Good luck..... Waiting for more... Regards a true fan

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  • anonymous+reader
    09.08.2013 15:38
    Very well written, like some other reader said, this story is like art. However, u do need to use a spell checker as it will fix most of the errors u had and take care of that problem. That being said, please write the next part to this :)

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  • Catmandue53
    22.08.2013 18:17
    Times in my Life: Part Three has just been posted!

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  • Catmandue53
    22.08.2013 18:18
    Times in my Life: Part Three has just been posted!

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  • jmetal
    22.08.2013 20:49
    Amazing story so far. Brings back memories of some of my own teenage fantasies.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2013 01:52
    This story is very well written, dont stop writing :) Just make sure u run it through a spell checker first, so u dont have the grammar purists after u :D

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2013 03:44
    Awesome story can't wait for part 4

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2013 10:42
    Catmandue53, thischapter was well worth the wait ,very well done

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  • ZondarTheBear
    26.08.2013 22:45
    I really like reading this story. You still have a bit of a way to go on the technical side of your writing, but the story itself is spot on in a way that makes me want to read every chapter that you post. I'm glad that the poor boy FINALLY got to blow his load. Fucker should have been spanking his monkey like it robbed a bank after all that the girls had done to him in the earlier chapters, but at least now he got some fun for himself.

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2013 22:31
    this ch was worth the wat by far catmandue53 u rock I cant wait for the next ch. maybe a threesome between sylvia terri and the girl we met in this chapter. thanks

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.08.2013 22:37
    catmandue I think your doing a great job. I agree with the last comment. lets get terri lisa and sylvia and nick in a shower with some anal oral and pussy sex. Great job cant wait for ch 4!

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  • anonymous+reader
    30.08.2013 00:03
    i think you are doing a very good job with the story. RW

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2013 02:47
    all of you information had be forwarded to law enforcement's good day

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  • anonymous+reader
    01.09.2013 22:47
    next part!!! love it!!! and don't mind these dipshits posting all this spam, they only do this to the best stories!

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  • anonymous+reader
    02.09.2013 03:13
    Great read man. Definitely waiting for a forth and fifth.

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  • anonymous+reader
    07.09.2013 02:13
    That was great :) Keep up the work, and pls tell us when part 4 might be out

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  • MrSoftee
    08.09.2013 17:11
    Lovely storytelling, very involving and a great read :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    08.09.2013 19:49
    Damn I can't wait for next chapter u r a great writer

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  • anonymous+reader
    10.09.2013 10:42
    great! part 4 please please .these got me so hard!!!

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  • jenna-xxx
    10.09.2013 21:29
    wow, fantastic!...............................xxx

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  • Norton5
    26.09.2013 20:28
    Nice story. I liked how you wrote the boob-handling. Very hot.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.10.2013 09:17
    LxxwAR I appreciate you sharing this blog post. Great.

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  • Catmandue53
    24.10.2013 22:42
    For all of those people who are waiting for Part Four, I just posted it!

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  • Catmandue53
    24.10.2013 22:43
    For all of those people who are waiting for Part Four, I just posted it!

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  • Catmandue53
    24.10.2013 22:45
    For all of those people who are waiting for Part Four, I just posted it!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.10.2013 02:36
    Please continue. Loving it so far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.10.2013 05:06
    That was definitely the best part of this story so far.

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2013 01:01
    Didn't really enjoy this one, And I can tell you I enjoyed the others it was almost to "rushed" but please continue as I have great hopes for this series

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2013 03:26
    Wish you would continue this series, I've really it thus far!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2013 03:27
    I've REALLY ENJOYED it thus far!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2013 03:27
    I've REALLY ENJOYED it thus far!

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  • anonymous+reader
    28.10.2013 14:45
    I must say u r the most terrific story writer in this site...exceptional skills of bring the emotion nd lustfulness..terrific series just please keep it continued

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  • darthel0101
    28.10.2013 22:28
    Bookmarked - thanks for the links

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.10.2013 00:05
    This is the best story I have read in this site...truly awsum nd plz keep it continued

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  • anonymous+reader
    29.10.2013 19:33
    This is the best series I've read so far please continue

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2013 07:41
    U r a terrific writer...nd I hope u keep this series going for long time..terrific series

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  • anonymous+reader
    31.10.2013 07:43
    Already excited for 5th part...hoping that its coming soon

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.11.2013 18:20
    You should follow this skill at writing that you clearly have

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2013 06:26
    Damn good stories keepem cummin

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.11.2013 06:26
    Damn good stories keepem cummin

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.12.2013 10:13
    plz write more we r all eagerly waiting for it....wonderful series

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2014 18:18
    Omg I was freeeballing in bball shorts and I just came in them cus I was masturbating hopefully my parents dont see my cum btw: im only 11

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.02.2014 00:05
    I have read many stories on this here website, but, this sir, has to be my overall favorite. Thank you.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.03.2014 05:38
    When's the next part gonna be posted?? ;3;

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2014 14:56
    Fella. You have to write more. Come on. Don't leave it hanging like that...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.04.2014 17:38
    Hahaha, I'm loving the women have a gossip sense and once something happened they all know about it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.06.2014 22:03
    If it were a book, i'd call it a page turner! Damn good series, please write more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.06.2014 00:04
    Its really good hope to hear more :);)!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.06.2014 06:18
    Oh my god this is the best series I've ever read. Can you make more to this this series?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2014 11:25
    Moar we want moar!!! Great story man hope u will be posting more soon.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2014 19:53
    BEST STORY EVER POST MORE

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2014 16:43
    hey sir "2013-09-01 2:47:00 law enforcement" it DOES NOT SAY true story dumbass now stop being a SHIT

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2014 16:44
    and P.S. BEST STORY EVVVVEERRRRRR XD XB XP

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  • bigdiesel90
    27.08.2014 17:15
    Dude seriously, please write more of this! Let nick have sex with all the other girls and even let him have something with the twins!! Lots more chapters please! Incredible writing!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2014 17:15
    best story eva read in my whole life. keep it coming! :)<“><”>

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2014 14:47
    Great story cant wait for pt. 5

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2014 02:10
    Awesome brother to bad your bashful.......and catmandue

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2014 04:07
    Ha knew it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2014 14:11
    finally ive ben waiting 4 months! im now boared(bored). plz make it faster im gonna explode every where stay eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! p.s post more often diff series.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2014 17:10
    Geez, you dual identity gets out and you get downvoted. Really sick of the haters. This is a GREAT story!

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  • Catmandue53
    09.10.2014 17:30
    I'm pretty sure I don't know what you mean by "duel identity".

    I only have one account on this site. I the only stories I have posted are on that account.

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  • Catmandue53
    09.10.2014 17:31
    For anyone who is confused... I moved from Toronto to Mitchell recently.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.10.2014 21:23
    Not sure what's up with the "dual identity" thing. I guess folks are thinking you and fellow Canuck "BashfulScribe" are one and the same. His stories are also great and get downvoted by haters for no apparent reason. The rating for this chapter should DEFINITELY be above 90%. No matter, just please continue this awesome story. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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  • Catmandue53
    10.10.2014 01:59
    Well... I'm sure there are more than 1 or 2 more fellow Canucks who post stories here. Yes, most of the stories are from the U.S. and other more populous places, but there are a lot of Canadian authors as well. I have only 1 account, and this is it.

    Cheers!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2014 02:28
    When will 6 be ready

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.10.2014 08:06
    Man you are amazing writer..it was a pleasant surprise to see the 5th chapter and hoping that you will post many more chapters in this series..And cheers for replying to our comments here..it was very good chapter..when will you publish 6th chapter..i hope you do it soon because I cant wait for it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.11.2014 23:13
    Thank you for a great story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.11.2014 22:27
    Greetings all! And thanks for the favourable reviews! It really means a lot to me.

    I am working on Chapter 6 right now and it may be up within a week or two.

    Cheers!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.11.2014 12:40
    its been a month now

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  • Catmandue53
    20.11.2014 03:30
    Sorry everyone, I had to take a couple of weeks off from the Internet.

    I *am* working on chapter 6! I hope to have it up soon!!!!

    Thanks for all of the support!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.12.2014 11:36
    Sorry for the negative rating, punched it by mistake.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.01.2015 04:44
    Its been two months now buddy.
    When's chapter 6 coming up?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.02.2015 19:59
    Give it to me Aw yes

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.02.2015 01:00
    Thanks for the 5 exciting stories you published.
    i found them little masterpieces of their genre.
    Feel free to post more if you feel like and you can.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2015 09:42
    This story is very well written. Easy on the eye and has a natural progression. Please write more.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.03.2015 00:02
    I've been a fan of you work since you started writing here, and I would really appreciate if you wrote some more chapters. Even if you do stop writing I'd like to thank you for writing these amazing stories. Hope I can write my next comment on chapter 6!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2015 05:05
    Write part two

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.04.2015 05:32
    Great

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2015 14:36
    Can't wait for 6

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 03:19
    Next chapter? ;3; Any confirmation at all as to whether or not it will be put up? So as an answer to whether we shall wait longer or not wait at all for something that won't come?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2015 09:54
    I never thought there'd be a number 5, so I assume there will be a number 6, but who knows how long we'll have to wait.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.06.2015 23:18
    Next chapter? ;3; Any confirmation at all as to whether or not it will be put up? So as an answer to whether we shall wait longer or not wait at all for something that won't come?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2015 07:11
    What the hell man. I LOVE THIS. post more, good work, keep it up

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.08.2015 02:07
    Loved It

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2015 09:52
    Can u tell us when u will get chapter 6 realeased? Really looking forward to it, great story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.08.2015 23:20
    walking 5 miles to school? UPHILL BOTH WAYS? strangely weird landscape, other than that, a good story, SO FAR, the rest is yet to be judged...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.10.2015 00:58
    why do they all talk like they just walked straight out of an encylopedia

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.12.2015 05:39
    Very perceptive writing, what women want indeed.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.12.2015 07:29
    hella good story, I'd just like to see him fuck the teacher at some point

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2016 14:02
    Damn!!! Makes me want to have a run in with Nick too! :$ hot,wet & bothered!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2016 23:19
    Hands down the best series ever!!!! Pleeeasa write some more!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.01.2016 23:19
    Hands down the best series ever!!!! Pleeeasa write some more!!!

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  • The+Cup
    31.01.2016 22:25
    enjoyed the story

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  • The+Cup
    01.02.2016 00:17
    When does he get off? There is no mention of his needs. Still a good story just don't forget him.

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  • The+Cup
    01.02.2016 06:53
    About time he got his turn to go off!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.02.2016 19:23
    Really great story any idea if chapter 6 will come out?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.02.2016 09:22
    oh!what a horny story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.02.2016 08:38
    Catmandue53 plz post part 6 ....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.02.2016 17:08
    Fuck lovely

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.02.2016 21:00
    So beautifully written. Thank you for sharing it with us.
    DivineComedy001

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2016 02:42
    Dude. We want part 6 please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.03.2016 02:45
    Just tell us that should we wait or not wait at all . Don't fuck with us man. Just tell us what to expect.

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  • djb8247
    08.03.2016 04:23
    Basically just a reprint of chapter 1, just a different place and name.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2016 16:18
    Amazing work,but guys I dnt think part 6 will b coming cuz its almost been 2 yrs since he posted part 5 but.....if he does posts part 6 I'll b looking forward to read it....

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.04.2016 10:55
    great job, but maybe shy away from saying proverbial so often.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.07.2016 18:33
    School girls

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.08.2016 23:39
    You have got to have at least 10 parts or a dirty dozen with all these hot girls and mothers.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2016 19:51
    Oh my God these are the best stories I've read On xnxx. Please keep writing if you can add more to this series. WOW. Thanks for the great read, I couldn't put it down once I started. So many questions to hear an answer to.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.09.2016 12:39
    Pls post part six... Ive waited too long

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2016 21:42
    It's been nearly 2 full years. Does anyone know what happened?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.10.2016 18:59
    The author's dead or something?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2016 16:11
    I am wishing I could leave a comment. By the time I finished it would be a story almost as beautiful as yours if you would teach me English In return for helping you to relax

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2016 16:14
    I am wishing I could leave a comment. By the time I finished it would be a story almost as beautiful as yours if you would teach me English In return for helping you to relax.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2016 22:38
    Oh I wish I could give you my phone number or you would give me yours. I have enjoyed reading this so much I can hardly wait for the next five installments.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2016 04:13
    I'm pretty sure the author's dead or has given up writing due to his personal reasons...so we won't get to read sylvia, julie, anna, english teacher and lisa get fucked ever again

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2016 04:16
    He IS over 50 yrs so u can't expect him to do much

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.12.2016 08:31
    More please

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.02.2017 07:07
    These are not only interesting reading,they're funny too. Keep it up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.02.2017 13:42
    He's not dead!!! He just has a life more than just writing
    Sex stories for you to read.

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  • Catmandue53
    14.07.2017 07:20
    I am back! I never left actually, I just shifted back to reading from writing.

    Before I write the next chapter(s) I am going to go back over the first 5 stories for minor edits, spelling and grammar checking. Also, so I can remember what I wrote. Continuity is a thing that I have a great respect for, so revisiting the previous chapters will give me an opportunity to refresh my memory.

    I can't promise when the next chapter will be up but I will be working on it concurrently with the edits, etc. for the first 5 chapters.

    Thank you, everyone, for being so patient with me since I started writing this series. The overwhelmingly positive comments you have posted have really inspired me to get this story back on track.

    I'll post a comment when I've posted chapter 6 to the site.

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  • Catmandue53
    14.07.2017 07:21
    I am back! I never left actually, I just shifted back to reading from writing.

    Before I write the next chapter(s) I am going to go back over the first 5 stories for minor edits, spelling and grammar checking. Also, so I can remember what I wrote. Continuity is a thing that I have a great respect for, so revisiting the previous chapters will give me an opportunity to refresh my memory.

    I can't promise when the next chapter will be up but I will be working on it concurrently with the edits, etc. for the first 5 chapters.

    Thank you, everyone, for being so patient with me since I started writing this series. The overwhelmingly positive comments you have posted have really inspired me to get this story back on track.

    I'll post a comment when I've posted chapter 6 to the site.

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  • Catmandue53
    19.07.2017 17:47
    I am back! I never left actually, I just shifted back to reading from writing.

    Before I write the next chapter(s) I am going to go back over the first 5 stories for minor edits, spelling and grammar checking. Also, so I can remember what I wrote. Continuity is a thing that I have a great respect for, so revisiting the previous chapters will give me an opportunity to refresh my memory.

    I can't promise when the next chapter will be up but I will be working on it concurrently with the edits, etc. for the first 5 chapters.

    Thank you, everyone, for being so patient with me since I started writing this series. The overwhelmingly positive comments you have posted have really inspired me to get this story back on track.

    I'll post a comment when I've posted chapter 6 to the site.

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  • BobFilho
    17.04.2018 11:54
    So many sluts, so little time! Will he fuck them all, especially his mother and his sister?

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  • rojac29
    13.04.2021 23:17
    Terri the virgin took her own cherry prior so she can enjoy fully enjoy her first cock! Then in the same session, she climaxed during her cherry anal with no pain too! Where can you find such angel? Where else did she practice stopping your climax with her hand? After 3 fucks, your stamina grew exponentually. After she stopped your climax, you lasted past her orgasm, then fully enjoyed the anal before cumming. You are superman!

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