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The Stranger

Author: Angel7777777

Date: 17 August 2013

Domination/submission, Fiction, First Time, Male / Female

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I wrote this story mostly for myself because it's one of my fantasies, but I thought I'd post it here anyway.

Who knows, you might enjoy it as much as I do.

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The minute he saw her, he knew he had to have her. He had already seen her quite a few times, and enjoyed watching her.

Every day she would come downtown on the train and wander around taking pictures of anything and everything that interested her. She was always alone, and she never seemed to be going anywhere specific.

The first thing that caught his attention, the first time he saw her, was the way she walked; she stood straight with her shoulders back, proudly showing off her body. But also hesitant, every few seconds she would glance downward as if unsure of herself.

It was like there were two different sides to her, fighting for control; she wanted to be confident but at the same time she was submissive.

She was beautiful; she had long, smooth, tan legs leading up to a small, sexy butt. Her stomach was flat and her hips curved to give her an hourglass figure.

She had firm and perky C cup breasts that bounced as she walked. And her face was perfect, a small nose, high cheekbones, full pink lips, and Jade green eyes rimmed with long lashes.

Her hair was long and wavy, light brown that shone with gold in the sunlight. She looked about nineteen or twenty.

She was usually wearing jean shorts that showed off her butt, a loose colorful top, and running shoes. Today she wore dark jean shorts, a green tank-top that matched her eyes, and had her camera bag slung over one shoulder.

He watched her stride down the busy downtown street, it was a weekday, and at noon there were quite a few business men and women on the street out for their lunch breaks.

She moved easily between the crowds, occasionally he would see a businessman walk past her and then stop to turn and stare.

He knew exactly what they were thinking, but she didn’t seem to notice them.

Eventually she stopped and sat down outside a small café. She ordered a small coffee and sat watching the crowds walk by.

He moved closer, watching her from afar.

A few minutes later, a boy who looked to be about twenty sat down in the chair across from her, looking cocky.

He was dressed in a tank top that showed off his multiple tattoos, he wore a baseball cap turned backwards and a pair of large sunglasses. He looked like the biggest asshole in the world.

At first it seemed as if she knew him, but as she glanced around uneasily, obviously trying to avoid making eye contact with him, it became apparent that she did not.

“Hey baby, you’re smokin’ hot. If you come back to my place we could have a good time.”

She looked stunned and slightly afraid.

“No thank you.” She murmured, staring into her coffee.

“Aw come on baby! I’ll fuck you good.”

He leaned across the table, looking her up and down.

“No.”

This time she said it more firmly, flushing bright red.

“What’s the matter? My dick ain’t good enough for you?” He looked angry.

Without another word she stood, placed a few dollars on the table for the coffee, and walked away.

The asshole got up and followed her at a distance.

Her stride became faster and she kept glancing behind her. Ducking out of the crowds and around a corner she bolted into an empty alleyway.

Thinking she’d lost him, she slowed down.

Suddenly two boys dressed similarly to the first turned into the alleyway ahead of her and began striding toward her.

She turned back and began to run just as the boy who had been following her turned the corner. Before she could react she was pinned against the wall with a hand covering her mouth.

Twisting her arms behind her back roughly, the three boys dragged her toward the darker, more secluded section of the alley.

“Aw fuck man, you were right, she’s hot.” The one holding her wrists said to the first boy as he groped her.

The other newcomer nodded excitedly, his eyes glazed over.

“Keep your voice down dipshit, or someone’ll hear!” The first boy- who seemed to be their leader- ordered.

“So who gets her first?” asked the second boy as he bound her wrists together tightly behind her back with rope.

As she suddenly realized what was about to happen to her, she began struggling frantically. Biting her captors hand, he flinched and uncovered her mouth.

She let out a scream, but before anyone could hear her, she was cut off by a hard punch to the stomach.

Winded and in pain she crumbled to the ground.

“Shut the fuck up bitch!” The first boy roared at her. Dragging her to her feet, he stuffed a piece of cloth in her mouth and tied it behind her head.

“She bit my fucking hand!” the second boy screamed in outrage.

“She bit my fucking hand! I’m fucking bleeding!”

Ignoring him, the leader pulled a small blade out of his pocket and pressed it against her throat.

“Now listen to me bitch, you’re going to do everything I say, and if you don’t, you’ll regret it.” He growled, pushing the cold blade harder against her neck.

“Got it?”

She trembled, frozen, staring up at him.

“Answer me bitch!” He screamed in her face.

She nodded, whimpering softly.

“You’re going to regret ever saying no to me bitch.”

He started tearing at her clothes, groping her breasts beneath her shirt roughly.

Slipping the knife back into his pocket and spinning her around, he pushed her against the wall and began grinding the bulge in his pants against her ass.

Leaning closer to her ear he whispered “I’m going to fuck you so hard, you won’t be able to walk when I’m done.”

He began undoing his zipper as she whimpered, when suddenly she heard two startled screams behind them.
The boy spun to see what was happening just as a fist hit him square in the face, knocking him to the ground.

She turned to see all three boys knocked to the ground, stunned and bleeding.

A large man stood over the leader, looking angry. He crouched down and, pulling the knife out of the boy’s pocket, he pressed it against his neck.

“If you ever touch another woman, I will find you, and I will kill you. Do you understand?”

The stranger’s voice was hard and cold. He was terrifying.

The boy just laid there, shocked, staring up into the man’s angry face.

“Answer me bitch.” The stranger commanded calmly as he pushed the cold blade harder against the boys neck.

Nodding furiously, the boy scrambled backward.

“The same goes for the two of you!” He spun and looked down at the two stunned and silent boys that had been watching, terrified.

Nodding and wide-eyed, the two boys stumbled backward, trying to get up. They took off clumsily down the alleyway while their leader stumbled after them.

The stranger strode confidently after them and, stopping abruptly, he whipped the blade in his hand straight at the leader.

It struck the boy squarely in the calf as he let out a startled scream of pain. The other two continued running.

Without turning, and too afraid to stop, the boy limped away as quickly as he possibly could around the corner.

Unmoving and breathing heavily, the stranger stood staring at where the boys had been, his fists clenched.

The girl didn’t move. She couldn’t see his face, and although he had just saved her, she was still terrified of what this man might do next. So she sat trembling against the wall, her knees drawn to her chest, watching him.

As if realizing that she was still there, the man spun on his heel and strode toward her. Kneeling in front of her, he leaned in to untie the cloth covering her mouth.

She flinched and scrambled away from him.

“Sit still.” He commanded.

She backed further into the corner as he walked toward her again. She looked absolutely terrified.

He stopped to look her over. Her shirt was torn and he could see a bruise already starting to form on her ribs.

Slowly he crouched in front of her again.

“It’s alright, I won’t hurt you.”

His features softened and his deep voice became calm and soothing.

He leaned toward her again to untie the gag, and she sat still for him. Helping her to her feet, he gently spun her around to untie her wrists.

“What’s your name?” he asked.

She turned, rubbing her newly freed wrists, and glanced uneasily up at him and then back down again.

“Lily,” she replied quietly.

“Your clothes are pretty torn up, and my apartment is just a block away. Come with me and I’ll give you something to wear.”

It sounded more like a command than a choice.

Lily glanced down at her half torn shirt. Realizing that this strange man could see quite a bit of her body, she blushed and covered herself with her arms.

He handed her the leather jacket he had been wearing and she covered herself with it.

She wasn’t sure what she should do; she didn’t quite trust this man, and she certainly didn’t want to go to his apartment.

But she also didn’t want to walk all the way home half naked, and she was afraid that the other boys might come back.

So, reluctantly, she nodded to the stranger and without another word, he led her to his apartment.

______________________________Chapter Two________________________________

As she followed him down the sidewalk, Lily looked the stranger over.

He was very handsome. He was about 6’1”, well muscled, and looked to be in his early thirties. His hair was dark brown and slightly messy, but in a sexy way. He had sharp features and a strong angular jaw covered in dark stubble.

His eyes were dark green and shone with intelligence. He strode forward with confidence, keeping one hand on the small of her back, almost possessively.

She was glad for her long legs or she may not have been able to keep up with him.

His apartment was only about ten minutes away from where they had been. The building they arrived at seemed fairly new and modern, it was elegant, with black marble floors and chandeliers in the lobby.

He steered her into the elevator, nodding to the man at the head desk as they passed by.

Much to Lily’s surprise, he pushed the button for the Penthouse on the 60th floor.

They rode the elevator in silence, occasionally he would glance down at her, looking her over.

His hand never left her back.

A few seconds later the elevator dinged and came to a halt. He entered a code into a small keypad under the elevator buttons. The small red light on the pad turned green and there was another ding as the doors opened up into a huge apartment.

He allowed her to get out first. She stepped out onto the soft white carpet and glanced around the room in awe. It was amazing.

The elevator doors closed behind them and without a word he wandered off down the short set of stairs in front of them and around the corner.

Unsure if she was supposed to follow him, she stood unmoving and surveyed the room; The floor at the bottom of the stairs was dark oak hardwood and polished, there was a small wooden table in the center of the foyer with a small bouquet of dark red roses in the middle.

The walls were light brown, and there were beautiful black and white photos of cities around the world spread out all along them.

She could see part of a large window in the room straight ahead, and part of a black leather couch.

Her curiosity got the better of her and she wandered into the next room.

Huge was too small a word for this apartment, this was a mansion.

The wall straight ahead of her was made completely of floor to ceiling windows, with a breath-taking view of the city.

To her left was a stone wall made up of different colored rocks, with a large gray stone fireplace at the bottom. In front of the fireplace was a black shag rug and a long black leather L shaped couch, with a small glass coffee table in front of it, and a matching chair on the opposite side.

The fireplace was lit and flickering gently.

To her right was a black grand piano and two smaller black leather chairs that matched the couch.

There was a banister behind the piano and a tall black iron spiral staircase that led down to an immaculate and beautiful modern kitchen.

The entire apartment was well furnished and very masculine.

Setting her camera bag down against the wall, she wandered over to the window and looked out onto the city; they were high above downtown, she could see most of the city from where she stood. The sun was just beginning to set and a soft orange glow lit up the surrounding skyscrapers.

“Beautiful isn’t it?”

He had come up behind her silently, and she jumped.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to startle you” his voice was deep and smooth.

Lily stared up at him, unable to move or speak.

“You can change into this.”

He handed her a large, clean, dark-green T-shirt, which she assumed was his.

“Thanks.” She murmured as she tentatively took it from him.

He just watched her, as if expecting her to change in front of him.

“Oh” he suddenly realized what she wanted.

“The bedroom is down that hallway and to the left, there’s a bathroom attached where you can change."

He looked slightly disappointed.

She nodded and wandered off down the hall. He watched her go.

Finding his bedroom, she wandered in and glanced around the room.

It was similar to the rest of the apartment; lots of black and brown, modern and comfortable with a few paintings on the walls.

Against the far wall was a huge king-size bed covered in soft looking dark brown sheets and pillows. The wall to her right was made up of one large window.

She wandered into the bathroom around the corner and closed the door; there was no lock.

Removing his leather jacket, she examined herself in the mirror; her green tank top was completely torn to shreds, and she could see a few bruises forming on her ribs.

One of the straps on her lacy black bra was broken and part of it was ripped, so she removed it completely. Her shorts were also torn and the zipper was broken, so she removed them too.

Luckily she was wearing her tight women’s boxer shorts, instead of her usual skimpy panties, so she didn’t feel too naked.

She pulled the too-big T-shirt over her head, bunched her torn clothes into a ball and threw them in the trash.

The shirt came down almost to her knees- like a short dress.

She wandered out of the bedroom and back into the room where she’d left him. He was sitting on the couch in front of the fire. He seemed to be lost in thought.

She cautiously wandered over to the fireplace and he looked up with a smile when he noticed her, looking her up and down appraisingly.

She suddenly felt much more naked.

“Would you like something to eat?” he asked suddenly, getting up from the couch and moving toward the spiral stairs.

“No thank you.” she was hungry, but she wanted out of this strange man’s apartment more.

“Nonsense, you must be starving.” He ignored her and wandered down the stairs.

He seemed to have a slight accent she hadn’t noticed before.

Unsure whether she should follow him or bolt out the door, she stayed in place.

Before she could make her decision, he came back up the stairs with a plate of cheese and fruit and placed it on the table by the fire.

He sat down in the chair by the window and beckoned her over.

“Come and eat something.” Once again, it was a command.

She slowly walked over and sat on the couch opposite him.

She surveyed the handsome stranger suspiciously and realized that she didn’t know his name.

“Who are you?” she blurted without thinking, a slow blush creeping over her face.

He looked up at her from selecting a grape, and a small smile appeared on his lips.

He was silent for a moment and then replied “My name is Nikolae.”

He was one of the sexiest men she’d ever seen, she felt her throat catch and her face get hot as he looked her over.

There was an air of importance to him, he was well groomed and sounded intelligent, his posture exuded confidence.

He was obviously very well-educated and successful, so why was he being so nice to her?

He watched her silently, casually leaning back in his chair, arms spread out on the back. He was wearing a black button-up shirt, and dark jeans.

He slowly began running his finger across his bottom lip absently, staring at something.

She followed his gaze to between her legs and realized that she had been sitting with her legs spread, displaying her panties.

She quickly closed her knees and pulled the shirt over them, covering herself. She flushed an even brighter red.

He looked back up into her eyes, a crooked smile on his face.

There was something in his eyes as he looked at her, something that made her want to bolt for the door.

“Thank you for saving me.” She said suddenly, wanting to break the silence.

“I don’t know what would have happened to me if you hadn’t been there.” She said, embarrassed.

She shuddered as she had a sudden flashback of the day’s events.

He let out a small sigh and leaned forward, uncrossing his legs.

“You’re welcome.”

“Eat something” he said, gesturing to the fruit.

She glanced at the fruit wearily and then picked up a strawberry and took a small bite; it was the best strawberry she’d ever had. She reached for another.

He was back to watching her.

She was beautiful. He watched her pink lips wrap around the strawberry.

She probably tasted like strawberries, he thought. He wanted to taste her, ALL of her.

Noticing the look on his face, she fidgeted uncomfortably, glancing toward the elevator door.

“Why were you downtown alone?” he asked suddenly.

His question threw her off, she didn’t expect him to ask.

“Err… I like taking pictures” she nodded toward her camera bag.

“Sometimes I like to come downtown and take pictures of people.”

“You couldn’t come with someone? Friends? Boyfriend?” he questioned further.

“I just moved here and I live alone in a small apartment. My family lives’ in another city…. and I have no boyfriend.”

She looked down at her hands.

She had never been a very popular girl, she was the weird girl. Most of her time in High School was spent in the library reading.

Most guys wouldn’t even talk to her, she never understood why. Sometimes she saw them staring, but they would never say anything. She’d never even been on a date before, she had always just assumed that guys weren’t attracted to her. In fact, she had never even been kissed.

Eventually she had learned to live with it, although she often felt lonely… not to mention horny. She fantasized quite a bit, mostly about older men. Boys her age were too immature for her, she liked mature, intelligent, dominant men. Usually she fantasized about her teachers.

He couldn’t understand how such a beautiful girl didn’t have a boyfriend.

“So are you going to school here?”

“No… I just graduated a few months ago actually, with a Journalism degree.”

She didn’t want to answer any more of his personal questions.

“I moved here for a job, but I don’t start for another month.”

“A Journalist? Beauty and brains…” he looked surprised.

She blushed at the compliment; no one had ever called her beautiful before… or smart, for that matter.

“I’m not beautiful.” She murmured, flushing a deeper red.

He stared at her, eyebrows raised.

“You are very beautiful.” He seemed slightly bemused.

She stared at him with wide eyes. Why was this man, this handsome, sexy man- who could have any woman he wanted- interested in her?

She stood abruptly, stepping away from him.

“Thank you for everything you’ve done, I wish there was some way for me to repay you.”

At that, his eyes lit up and he stood gracefully.

“Perhaps there is a way…” his voice was calm and smooth again.

He moved toward her as she began to back away.

“I should probably leave before it gets dark…” her voice trailed off as he came closer.

Her back was against the wall now as he towered over her.

“Stay” he said softly, staring at her lips.

“I really can’t stay, really, you’ve been so kind, I don’t want to take up any more of your time…”

She began to ramble as he leaned closer.

He was only a few inches away as she started to panic.

She tried to move to the side and go around him so that she could bolt for the elevator, but he blocked her with his arms, his hands on the wall on either side of her head.

Before she could think of what to do next, his mouth was on hers. She tensed and her eyes went wide, his mouth was warm and firm as his tongue looked for a way past her lips. Before she could react, her body took over and her lips parted.

His tongue darted into her mouth, exploring, as his hands moved down to explore her body. She relaxed and her eyes closed as his one hand moved to cup her breast with an expert touch.

She did taste like strawberries.

Suddenly, as she realized what was happening, her eyes flew open and she brought up her knee to push him away, kicking him in the shin.

He released her, letting out a cry of pain and surprise as she bolted for the elevator door.

Grabbing her camera and running to the other room, she reached the elevator to find that there was another keypad similar to the one she had seen on the inside before. She punched random codes into the pad, desperately trying to get out.

Seconds later, Nikolae came striding into the room; he looked angry.

She glanced around the room, looking for another way out, as he made his way up the stairs.

“You can’t leave.” He said coolly.

Unable to find another way out, she darted around him and back down the stairs. He lunged to grab her but missed.

Now he was really mad. No woman had ever said no to him. He would have this girl whether she liked it or not.

Lily ran through the other room, down the iron staircase, and into the kitchen. She ran for a door on the far side of the kitchen, however, when she tried to open it, it was locked.

There was a small counter in the center of the kitchen and she dove behind it.

Calmly, Nikolae came down the stairs with the fluid grace of a panther; He knew there was nowhere left for her to run.

Sitting on the bottom step, he blocked her only way out.

“Lily, come out, you can’t hide.” His calm voice made her hesitate.

“I just want to make love to you. Come here.” Although it was an order and his voice was firm, he sounded calm and gentle.

She considered going to him, she felt strangely aroused. However, her fear got the better of her and she stayed in place. It wasn’t so much a fear of him as it was a fear of not having any experience. She had no idea how to have sex.

He waited for a few minutes, knowing she would have to come out eventually, but when she didn’t move or reply after a few minutes, he began to get angry again.

Standing, he stepped away from the stairs and stalked toward the counter.

“Lily, I’ll give you one more chance. Come to me now.” He was losing his calm and this time his voice had an edge to it.

Hearing him get closer, she stood up and faced him; he was on the opposite side of the square counter.

“Come here.” He commanded firmly.

She did not reply, she only glanced around him, looking for a way out.

He lunged to the side suddenly, reaching around to grab her, but she was too fast. She ran around the opposite side and toward the stairs.

Now he was really mad.

Forget making love, he thought, I’m going to fuck her until she screams my name.

His eyes were cold as he ran for her, she hadn’t expected him to be so fast and he caught her arm just as she reached the stairs.

Before she had a chance to fight back, he picked her up and threw her over his shoulder. She flailed and hit his back, but he didn’t care, and he was too strong for her to break free.

“Put me down!” she continued to struggle.

The shirt slid up over her back as he carried her up the stairs, giving him a nice view of her perfect ass. He smiled smugly, pleased with himself.

He carried her down the hall and into his room, tossing her onto his large bed. He pulled the door shut and locked it.

Taking the few seconds of freedom, Lily scrambled to the edge of the bed and searched for something she could use to defend herself.

He was not amused. He strode toward her, a steely determined look on his face. He didn’t know what it was about her, but he wanted this girl more than any woman he had ever met.

He grabbed her and, in one swift movement, tossed her back onto the bed.

Although he didn’t want to admit it, he was enjoying this game. He was extremely aroused and could feel his cock twitch in anticipation.

Moving to the side of the bed, he grabbed her ankle as she tried to climb away, flipping her onto her back and pulling her toward him.

He held her wrists together above her head while he climbed on top of her to straddle her hips. She was pinned to the bed by his body.

Feeling something hard poking into her, she looked down to see a large bulge in his jeans.

She looked up at him with wide eyes, unable to speak. He leaned in to kiss her again, more roughly this time, and then sat back up to look at her.

The first thing he noticed was her small nipples grow hard under the shirt. He slid one hand under the shirt to play with one while he kissed her, as his other hand continued to hold her hands above her head.

She wriggled and then arched her back to meet his touch as a small moan escaped her mouth. He chuckled softly, knowing exactly what he was doing to her.

She opened her eyes and blushed, realizing what she had just done. Regaining control she started to wriggle away from him again.

He frowned and held her in place.

“Sit still” he growled and pressed down on her more firmly.

Removing his hand from her shirt he slid it down over her stomach and into her panties.

She gasped and her eyes widened as she felt his finger stroke her sex.

He smiled and leaned down to kiss her neck as his fingers slid back and forth along her pussy lips. She was VERY wet.

Knowing he’d made her so wet so easily just made him harder.

Suddenly he sat up, removing his hand from her panties and releasing her hands. In one swift movement he grasped her shirt and ripped it in half.

She gasped, startled by his action and embarrassed that half of her was now completely naked, her perky breasts exposed to him.

“Much better” he said with a smug look on his face.

He grinned at her and grabbed her wrists again, pinning her back down.

Leaning over her he began to kiss his way toward her chest.

She closed her eyes tightly and tried to resist the urge to give in and let him take her completely. She refused to give him the satisfaction.

He soon reached her perfect breasts where he proceeded to kiss and lick his way over them and suck one of her erect pink nipples into his mouth.

She moaned quietly, unable to stop herself as this stranger manipulated her with his expert touch.

Suddenly, he bit down gently on her nipple, making her yelp.

“That was for kicking me.” He murmured with a grin when she looked up at him in surprise.

He then went back down to give the other breast the same treatment, eliciting more moans from her.

He had begun to kiss his way down her stomach when, much to her dismay, he rolled off of her. He stood next to the bed, a frown on his face, and then swiftly pulled off his jeans.

Her eyes widened as he straightened to reveal a very, very, large bulge in his boxers.

He grinned when he realized what she was staring at.

The source of his discomfort now removed, he climbed back on top of her and pinned her arms to her side as she wriggled away from him.

He didn’t care that she was fighting him anymore; he just wanted to fuck her.

Moving his leg in between hers, he pried her legs apart with one knee, preventing her from closing them.

He placed his well-muscled arms on either side of her and kissed his way down her neck.

She began pushing at his chest with all of her strength, hitting him and trying to make him move off of her.

He didn’t budge.

Grasping both wrists in one large hand he held them above her head again and kissed her forcefully, his tongue exploring her mouth as she fought him.

Suddenly a sharp pain shot through his lip as she bit him.

“OW! FUCK! You little…”

He glared at her as she looked up at him in defiance.

She could taste his blood on her lips.

That was the last straw, he would break her, and she was going to like it.

Reaching down, he pulled her panties to the side and slid one long finger into her slowly.

She gasped and let out a loud moan.

He stopped kissing her suddenly, surprised by how wet and tight she was. He hadn’t fucked a woman this tight since he was a teenager. He could feel his cock twitch at the thought.

She gasped and her eyes flew open as he slid a second finger into her and began to finger-fuck her.

“Wait!” She began to squirm again.

He frowned and grasped her wrists again with one large hand, holding her still.

“And why would I do that?” he murmured distractedly, still focused on finger-fucking her.

She mumbled something and he almost missed it.

“What?” he looked up from his task to stare at her, eyebrows raised in surprise.

She flushed as she met his eyes.

I’m a virgin.” It was barely a whisper.

He removed his fingers from her and loosened his grip on her wrists.

She didn’t have a hymen, but he knew that she was telling the truth by how tight she was and by the way that she was blushing.

“Please let me go.” She whispered.

He had no intention of letting her go. If anything, this made him even more excited.

“If you don’t try to run again, I won’t hurt you.” was his reply.

He released her wrists and stood up. She watched him uneasily and propped herself up on her arms, but didn’t try to run.

“Are you still going to…” she trailed off as he began to remove first his shirt, then his boxers.

“Yes, I’m still going to fuck you.” He finished her sentence.

“But if you obey me, I will be gentle.”

Her eyes widened as he pulled down his boxers to reveal his thick, nine-inch cock.

He smiled and climbed back on top of her, pinning her down and kissing her passionately.

Sliding two fingers back into her as he kissed her, he began pumping them in and out again.

She moaned and lifted her hips as he inserted a third finger while rubbing her clit with his thumb.

Wedging her legs apart with one knee, he positioned his cock at her entrance and slid his fingers out of her.

Caught off guard, she started to struggle again, doing her best to push him off of her. But it was no use, he was too heavy.

“Wait, no…” before she could protest further he slipped his fingers into her mouth, forcing her to taste her own pussy juices, and then slowly began to push his length into her. She was incredibly wet and tight.

He moaned loudly as her tight, hot, cunt squeezed his cock.

Removing his now-clean fingers from her mouth, he leaned down and kissed her roughly, moving a hand down to rub her clit. She moaned and wrapped her legs around him, unable to fight him any longer.

This just egged him on and it took everything he had not to plunge into her and fuck her senseless. Slowly he pushed into her until he had almost completely filled her. He moaned loudly.

She was so tight that he had to wait until she had adjusted to him before he could even begin to fuck her in earnest.

Her mouth opened in a silent moan and she squeezed her eyes shut, as he began to fuck her faster.

She gasped, biting her lip to stop herself from making any sound.

“Scream for me.” He grunted.

She opened her eyes and looked up at him.

“Tell me what you want.” His voice was deep and sexy.

When she didn’t respond, he stopped moving.

“Tell me what you want me to do.” This time it was an order.

She wriggled in vain, trying to make him move. It was no use.

Her eyes pleaded with him, she was on the brink of orgasm and he knew it.

“Tell me what you want me to do to you.” He repeated.

He knew he was torturing her.

Her already flushed cheeks turned brighter pink.

“I want you to fuck me.” She whispered, embarrassed.

“What was that?” He smiled smugly.

Fuck me!” She shouted in frustration.

“Be careful what you wish for.” He grinned a wolfish grin and began moving inside of her again.

Her mind now taken over by pleasure, she wrapped her legs tightly around his waist, digging her nails into his back.

He let out an almost animalistic growl and began to fuck her faster.

She felt so good around his cock; wet, warm and tight.

“Oh FUCK!” He yelled as he started to really pound her, no longer caring whether or not he might hurt her.

AHHH! OH GOD YES!” She was moaning uncontrollably now. She arched her back, allowing him to go deeper, as a mind-blowing orgasm consumed her.

“Fuck. You. Are. So. TIGHT.” He grunted in-between each thrust as he fucked her mercilessly.

He knew he wouldn’t last much longer. Her pussy was now massaging his cock with every thrust as yet another orgasm rocked through her, making her scream.

Uh, uh... YES!” She shouted.

“Say my name.” He commanded between grunts.

She moaned loudly and arched her back, pushing her breasts against his chest.

“Nikolae!” she moaned.

LOUDER!” He commanded, pounding her even harder, her moans spurring him on.

“Uh... OH, OHHHHhhhh! YES! FUCK ME NIKOLAE!” She moaned loudly, having another orgasm.

At that moment he knew she was his.

Hearing her shout his name, as she finally gave in, put him over the edge and he could feel his balls tighten.

“Oh FUCK! I’m cumming!

Her eyes shot open as she realized what was about to happen.

He could feel her try to get away from him so that he wouldn’t cum inside her, but he held her down.

“AHHHHHhhhhhhh! FUCK YES!” He shouted as he buried his entire length into her pussy and shot his huge load deep inside her.

The feeling of his hot cum filling her felt so good that she was pushed over the edge again, having one last mind-blowing orgasm.

He collapsed on-top of her, un-moving, letting his cock go soft inside her.

As he pulled out of her and rolled to the side she could feel their mixed juices flood out of her.

She panted, unable to move.

He rolled onto his side and pulled her against him, her back against his hard chest and his arm draped over her stomach.

Burrowing his nose into her hair, he inhaled her subtle scent of vanilla.

She wasn’t sure whether she wanted to run away and never see him again, or if she wanted to stay with him forever.

Before she could decide, she fell asleep in his arms.

To be continued…
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  • Suzieq
    17.08.2013 06:42
    Oh FUCK, write a book and it will top 50 Shades! Shit, I'm so wet! WRITE MORE ASAP!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 08:47
    More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more please

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  • marvintpa69
    17.08.2013 10:27
    Excellent, makes me nice n hard reading it.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 12:23
    WOW,, what a great start

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 12:49
    Good story make a part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 13:29
    Without a doubt this is the finest writing I have ever encountered. I have read well over one thousand stories in my lifetime ( as a Proof Reader) and this work, so far, is a perfect five star reading. I don't know who you are but please continue on. Thank you ! (countrycadillac)

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 15:15
    It's written by a man

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 19:25
    Make part 2
    It's awesome

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 20:12
    Part 2 needs to hurry up please!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 21:42
    I DO CONCUR WITH ALL THE OTHERS.WELL DONE.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 22:01
    This story is already on here I don't know your the author or you just copied someone else's work.

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  • anonymous+reader
    17.08.2013 22:29
    im eleven and ever since I was 9 I have been reading sex stories but other than home alone with alyssa 1,2,3,4,5,6,and 7 this is vvvvvveeeeerrrrryyyyy good;)

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2013 00:37
    Knock off 50 shades of Grey but its good

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2013 00:47
    Im 12 and I want fuck already. UGH... Im sooo fucking horny

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  • Angel7777777
    18.08.2013 01:25
    Thank you all for the amazing comments! I'm glad you liked it. I will be writing a part two soon.

    Also, to the person who said "This story is already on here I don't know your the author or you just copied someone else's work."

    Sorry, I had submitted it a few weeks ago, but it was before my account was validated, so the story was deleted. This is the second time I've posted it.

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  • papaprv
    18.08.2013 07:26
    Well done Angel. I'm looking forward to part 2

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2013 13:49
    Pls dnt make us wait too long for the part two,ur story is fuckin amazing...we'l be waiting

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  • anonymous+reader
    18.08.2013 19:45
    Just another rape story, by a man pretending to be a woman, and guess what he's a hero and she likes it. Sure.

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  • 6699
    18.08.2013 22:45
    Great story.
    But one sentance paragraphs are very difficult to follow--can you re-format future tales for longer paragraphs?

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  • anonymous+reader
    19.08.2013 06:32
    this story was so good,i want a russian guy 2 fuck me just like tat n make me cum write abt only these 2,also include cunny I just love 2 read abt pussy eating

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  • anonymous+reader
    27.08.2013 11:21
    Perfect I loved this story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.12.2013 07:15
    This has fifty shades of grey influence all over it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.01.2014 02:27
    Hi I'm 13 years old and I loves this story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.01.2014 06:10
    Loved it cant wait to hear more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.02.2014 23:08
    I love it just so freaky n sweet at the same time

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.02.2014 06:35
    Beautifully structured. A must-read.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.02.2014 10:59
    Masterfully done. The mysterious Nikolae is an enticing character. Although the pain and/or discomfort that goes along with female virgin sex was not acknowledged in this story, the story is very worth reading and 10/10 would recommend

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.02.2014 08:49
    ireally liked that great job

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2014 13:51
    Love love love this story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2014 03:11
    I want to be raped.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.03.2014 22:42
    Nice story man...... Want to rape a girl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.04.2014 15:02
    50 shades of grey

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.04.2014 05:13
    Oh PLZ rape me

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.04.2014 01:19
    it really depends though, happy to be sub but do any of you lads live in britian and happy to wait till im 16?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.04.2014 05:53
    Wow! Great story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.04.2014 14:02
    This was sexy! I loved it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.04.2014 02:01
    Have u read 50 shades ??? ;p

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.05.2014 18:20
    nice story very well told

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.05.2014 18:40
    'Twas shit

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  • Tankgirl
    07.05.2014 17:50
    What is wrong with you!? Writing this well and not having published a book yet! This story invokes so much awesomeness! You have done a superb job! Now publish this and publish it now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.05.2014 13:58
    Ouch...that me me really wet.i love the settings.pls how do I read the continuation.jux cnt wait any longer...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.05.2014 04:51
    I wish I could get raped... Even a gangbang type rape... Uggghhh! I wanna scream in pain then scream in overwhelming pleasure...

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  • Desirelove1
    04.06.2014 17:32
    Loved it do more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.06.2014 06:56
    It was absolutely literotica worthy....That's HAWT in my book. However it was a tad bit funny.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.06.2014 07:42
    Lol major Fifty Shades of Grey rip off

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.06.2014 18:30
    Nice work- constructively, work on the consistency of the narration- in the beginning you're narrating from Nikolae's perspective and the.shift to Lil's is a bit too abrupt. A set POV could make this better, especially as its your own fantasy to such incredible detail.
    that said, I loved the story :D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.06.2014 19:26
    Frequent use of the word "wander"

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2014 08:05
    I orgasmed twice while reading this. So please continue . UGHH so fucking horny I need a big 9 inch Dick in Mhhe right now. UGHHH ,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2014 12:52
    Far too much wandering, to the extent I began wondering whether it was worth going on wandering through this verbose offering.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.07.2014 10:32
    AMAZING balance between story and sex. Thank you ! I'm a 24 yr old female

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.07.2014 07:29
    omfg I cummed this was amazing ;D

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2014 23:02
    This story makes me soooo wet. I must read more. So horny right now. Cumming now.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.07.2014 00:47
    From one writer to another I personally think this was one of the best Non-consensual pieces I have read you have kept the perfect balance between actual story and perverseness at its highest. If you want to read what I write granted it's not this lovely art that you write then Google Eroriath22 and I am on Fan fiction and Fiction press I might be young to be viewing this material but I don't think the people on this site cares as long as they make money the more people visit it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2014 03:05
    lol, all you sluts that wanna get raped, all you have to do is ask. unless you look like a shit infested toilet bowl, it's pretty much our ultimate fantasy to do that to any of you.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.07.2014 20:50
    this story makes me wanna get rape right now

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2014 05:59
    omg I just blew a hell of a load

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.07.2014 19:12
    oh fuck!!!! Tis makes me to cum again & again...iam shoting out. ,

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.07.2014 20:08
    Amazing!! I love Nikolae. So hot!!!! I also like the two points of view and that he wasn't really abusive. Just enough ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2014 06:53
    omfg!!! I keep cumming over and over!!!

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  • analoverpat
    23.07.2014 07:46
    great story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2014 19:56
    I came like a wrecking ball hope my monitor is water proof...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.07.2014 12:42
    To im je default nmnaea. Ali njihova prava snaga je u mogućnosti da unosiš gomilu (meta)podataka vezanih za sam post/tekst. Recimo, ako želiš da ruÄu008dno definišeš html meta-tagove keywords I description, I sl. Samo to sve zahteva I malo Äu008daÄu008dkanja po kodu, tj. podešavanje ponašanja tih custom polja, a, hvala bogu, WordPressov kod je Äu008dist kao suza I odliÄu008dan za rad

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  • Cheerongirl
    31.07.2014 09:52
    That was a great story!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2014 00:30
    I hate the fact that even though she said she was a virgin he still continued.... asshole

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.08.2014 16:07
    i need a guy to humiliate me, use my body make me cum, don't want any "hey how are shit", start straight away with the dirty, k1k me at rosiegrrl

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.08.2014 17:56
    Can you write a story about where she doesn't get rescued by the stranger, I really want to find out what they do to her!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.08.2014 00:22
    Shit this is so hot it makes my pussy feel so wet and horny

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2014 17:58
    I loved it but I hav reqd the story many times and am waiting for a part 3

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2014 06:09
    Porn out

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2014 18:06
    I love it how you put some humor into the story!! :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2014 14:11
    Hot damn. This is just what a hornygirl girl needs.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2014 01:22
    So real...nice one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.09.2014 01:36
    Fantastic! With a little editing and a few more details, you could really make a short story or novella out of this, self-publish it on Amazon as an erotic novel...people are buying that stuff up right now. Consider it :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2014 03:43
    I am not joking when I say this but this is about the twenty third time I hav read this book and I am waiting for part three ...i hav been waiting for quite a long time plz cud u get the story done.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.09.2014 10:51
    Fucking amazing!!! I love this story and would read everything you wrote.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2014 02:12
    One of the best stories that I have read. You are a very talented young lady.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.09.2014 15:57
    This is... absolutely amazing. There was an actual plot, not to mention amazing description. I'm wet, and more than eager to continue reading!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.10.2014 03:11
    Awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2014 09:14
    So very awesome.. I wrote a similar story a year or so ago but I have to say there was something about yours that got me very hot! It was perfect and happens to be a fantasy of mine as well! Bravo !!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.10.2014 19:15
    This is so amazing! It is exactly my kind of fantasy too! Not a boring moment either! I love that there's a nice build up and not too over the top!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.10.2014 02:14
    This is so amazing! It is exactly my kind of fantasy too! Not a boring moment either! I love that there's a nice build up and not too over the top!

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  • charles19588
    22.10.2014 03:49
    ASOME! great story,beutafaly delivered. Look forward to seeing more your work.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.10.2014 10:20
    Like a real adult fantasy book :) morrrrrre !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2014 21:14
    Nice. The story flowed well and get me interested the whole time. Keep writing, you did a great job of explaining the story with some good build up.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2014 21:29
    Great story! Well narrated and the building up to the climax was well done. So one of your fantasies is to try a 9inch cock?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.10.2014 20:08
    i love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.11.2014 02:57
    I would like to read more of your work. Let's get to the kink.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.11.2014 07:18
    I love it so much the story is so perfect and you got everything write.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.11.2014 19:06
    You were very off topic at times but the story flowed well and was always interesting. Bravo!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.11.2014 21:10
    Great story! U know, what's ur fantasy?!?

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.11.2014 21:11
    Amazing!!!!! I love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.11.2014 22:21
    Looking for a daddy or momma to take control of me I'll send you pictures too. I'm ready to do what ever pleases you please k ik me: love.nichole

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.12.2014 00:28
    Gosh that was amazing! It turned me on so much!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.12.2014 04:56
    Great story . . . now where is my camera . . . must go and get some of that

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.12.2014 04:03
    fuck yeah this made me cum.i loved this story and will get my camera and head to the city

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  • Unknown+user
    28.12.2014 14:48
    Classic. Rough and tough always.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.12.2014 01:03
    hot........ this story made me cum

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.01.2015 07:57
    I want get fucked like this. Very hard and mercilessly for a whole week.
    Please someone fuck me roughly. Treat me roughly. My boobs and butt should be punished hard. Take out all the juices from pussy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.01.2015 05:54
    Obviously you've read fifty shades of grey. Way to much borrowing from that story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.01.2015 07:03
    great one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.02.2015 05:05
    sooooooo fucking sexy I love being fucked rough its the best way

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.02.2015 05:08
    Hah omg I want to have someone inside me I want to be fucked im only ** and im still a virgin please deflower me somoneeeeee

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.02.2015 03:01
    Oh my I love to be treated like a whore

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.02.2015 18:00
    Meh. U call that rough? Boring typical sex story.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.02.2015 08:50
    It's a good story but I feel like you just tweaked a few details from fifty shades of grey

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.02.2015 15:50
    I dream better then this

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.03.2015 20:42
    Some of this is copied from 50 shades of grey like the ending.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.03.2015 20:43
    Its good but some bits are from 50 shades

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.03.2015 04:09
    This came out b4 50 shades idiots

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.03.2015 08:08
    Fifty shades came out in 2011 you Fuck tard! This is definitely a cheap rendition

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  • Saya_Sakai
    09.03.2015 06:26
    This story definitely got me wet and worked up. Excellent work!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.03.2015 03:24
    Great writing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2015 06:58
    VG story.... and a great description of what I did to my youngest sister. She was always mine. That day I found out that she's a squirter and she's the only one of my three sisters with a snapper pussy. They're all good fucks but my youngest sister is the best. She just loves having my cock in her pussy and the feeling of me fucking her and shooting my cum inside of her.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.03.2015 03:50
    This shit is hot!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.03.2015 11:39
    I do like your story you little sluty naughty milf.
    Want some real fun? Go to my profile page at xvideos. My profile is saintmanfucker. Waiting for you bitch.O:-)

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  • Rockerhtf349RD
    22.03.2015 21:38
    I'm so fucking horny now O.O

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2015 22:21
    I want this to happen to me

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.04.2015 02:59
    that was so fucking hot.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.04.2015 04:43
    so horny now. reminded me a bit like 50sog but more wild and animalistic good job

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  • Rockerhtf349RD
    12.04.2015 04:54
    I've read this 15 times and it still turns me on

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.04.2015 04:56
    i really like it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2015 09:04
    That was really intense and hot

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2015 09:04
    So horny nd wet mhmm

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.04.2015 09:06
    Loved it so much do another one

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.04.2015 21:36
    Hot on a nuclear level

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.04.2015 20:15
    you should have let theme raped and she should have bleeded

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2015 16:10
    am I the only person reed this story cause in my eyes this one huge load of SHIT! Kinky_Pinky

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.05.2015 21:55
    (Person below) are you talking to your self because this story is a masterpiece
    Get you and your shitty personality out of here, don't hate.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2015 11:39
    Its fairly well written, but... Is this a rape story? I dont think so. At best it deserves the reluctance tag. Im getting kinda tired of this " oh My God, hes raping me and I love it" thing.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.05.2015 04:30
    When are you going to post part 3. I've been checking the story for months now it would be great if you posted it, please.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.06.2015 08:19
    This is a really great story...not many people can take time to write out a well written story such as, but this one and part 2 are genuinely awesome. I have read many stories, but by far this one makes it on my top 5 list...Keep up the good work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.06.2015 18:33
    KINKY_PINKY you spelled read wrong so I am pretty sure you aren't very good at reading or spelling.
    If you don't have those tools then you couldn't have read it. It was probably a load of shit to you anyways because you saw your own brain.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 08:13
    GREAT storie

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.06.2015 19:39
    It made me wet. Thanks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.06.2015 11:25
    This is my favorite, it makes me cum every time. Please do a 3rd chapter

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.06.2015 21:06
    that was so awesome please do chapter 3 thanks

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.06.2015 21:09
    So sexy loved it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.07.2015 06:58
    absolutely pleasent work

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.07.2015 14:59
    I loved it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.07.2015 05:04
    50 shades of grey in a raping twist

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2015 03:12
    Horny girl in Los Angeles

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.07.2015 16:33
    Loved it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.07.2015 09:47
    Wish like hell somebody would force me to have sex I always wonder why it never happens I give off the green flag so much it's ridiculous, I'm gorgeous asf but nobody ever wants to be dominant it's annoying

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2015 09:00
    THIS IS MY FAVE STORY HERE SO FAR

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2015 04:59
    I loved this story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.08.2015 20:49
    Oh my gosh this what fuckin amazing!! I'm so wet I can't take it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.08.2015 09:39
    Amazing. I need a Nikolae in my life..ugh.

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  • elenor6
    15.08.2015 00:42
    it was deff a hot xxx story im wet!!!

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  • princessxporn
    18.08.2015 15:17
    Awesome!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.08.2015 06:00
    Awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    21.08.2015 10:11
    I liked it however the POV started with him first but when the assault happened suddenly changed to her. It was a little disorienting, I would make the change a bit more noticeable if possible. My only issue :)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.08.2015 18:07
    damn O.O I wish a older guy could fuck me like that... But no one wants to fuck a 13 year old girl...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.09.2015 01:15
    i will

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2015 03:24
    Just give me your info and I'll contact you ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2015 12:09
    I feel like i've read this story somewhere :p

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.09.2015 12:34
    I've read this story like 15 times and it still makes me horny

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.09.2015 07:15
    50 shades of grey

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  • Rockerhtf349RD
    04.09.2015 22:49
    PM me your info if you want to fuck a young horny girl.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.09.2015 16:04
    awesome story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2015 03:49
    Awesome story

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  • SageT99
    14.09.2015 06:19
    Keep going

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2015 07:43
    Awesome

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.09.2015 08:00
    So much better than 50 shades of shit.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.10.2015 21:30
    I read this before but I still love it please continue !!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.10.2015 19:22
    Wow..this was perfect

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.10.2015 10:58
    Ohh it was good but I thought he would eat her pussy first ;)

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.10.2015 01:51
    So.Fucking.Good.Bro

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.10.2015 04:46
    I love this story so much!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.10.2015 04:56
    Can't wait to the next! You are a sex Angel to my imagination!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.10.2015 10:32
    this is my fav story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.11.2015 05:22
    Holy fuck yes omg this is the best one of the season

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.11.2015 16:23
    Great story , good story line . well written. You should consider writing professionally !

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.11.2015 09:19
    That was a pretty well put together story. I'd so love me one of him omg.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.11.2015 03:44
    You could make a whole book out of this, very good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.11.2015 02:07
    That was awesome! It's good to see someone being nice and naughty all together!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.11.2015 05:58
    A very hot and sexy story! Love the scene when he threw her over his shoulder and carried her upstairs to the bedroom. The sex scene was sizzling!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.11.2015 08:01
    THIS WAS PIMP AF

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  • ForeverAFreak
    04.12.2015 01:48
    This is so hot!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.12.2015 06:11
    This made me laugh 10/10

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.12.2015 02:26
    From a fellow girl erotica fan - great job! I'd like it better if you had less spaces between sentences. But who cares? It was hot.

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  • djb8247
    06.12.2015 18:38
    what a bloody turn around, from saviour to rapist, just not right. this could have been a good story..

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.12.2015 10:43
    I love this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    09.12.2015 03:10
    I bet she was realizing that she knew she was knocked up when he bust a fat ass nut in her. Get rekt

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.12.2015 18:41
    THIS WAS PIMP AF

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.12.2015 05:05
    THIS WAS PIMP AF

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.12.2015 08:37
    So great. Just amazing, thank you!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.01.2016 21:20
    nice if it was me i'll stay with him,make's me feel gud chow dat all

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.01.2016 16:35
    good story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2016 23:11
    He shoulda raped her :/

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.01.2016 23:11
    He shoulda raped her :/

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2016 06:42
    nice story

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.01.2016 06:24
    lmao not even a fucking boner

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.01.2016 04:06
    Amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Came 3 times before I reached the end.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.01.2016 05:14
    Great just great blow a big load at the end of it only bad part was my big sis saw me wanking

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.01.2016 06:54
    My bed and pussy are now soaked from cum. I wish this would happen to me.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.02.2016 02:49
    Now that was amazing

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.02.2016 03:39
    Awesome story!! Was heart pounding and horny!! Thank you...felt like that could have been me.Lol
    By

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.02.2016 12:44
    Excellent! Perfect rhythm, timing, verbosity! Cant come up with any critique, just give us more! Loved the story...great illustration of the difference in rape and dominance!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.02.2016 20:57
    Made me so wet. Loved it.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.02.2016 02:21
    Amazing
    And you didn't miss-spell one thing that I saw of.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.02.2016 18:11
    Someone please... me

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.02.2016 20:44
    fuck yeah

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.02.2016 05:15
    My pants are starting to split because I'm getting so erect. In other words, AWESOME

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2016 15:28
    Amazing! I saw this on Wattpad and I finally found the original(?) writing!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2016 05:54
    Barely got past chapter 2. This sucked ass. I dont mind reading a bit to get to the stuff but this is poorly written to the point if I read any further I may have an aneurysm.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.03.2016 20:25
    wow dat was great,am so messed up right nw.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    18.03.2016 08:24
    Love it, aww fuck im so wet and horny

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2016 21:04
    I wanna cum call me saddy and suck my huge cock

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.03.2016 19:16
    Fuck that got me so wet, love it!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.04.2016 13:34
    Got me horney!!!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    20.04.2016 22:39
    really made me wet asf I want that cock inside me 8-0

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2016 03:03
    uh, this made me so wet. l want someone to fuck me like that right now. who wants me to call them daddy right now, really horny right now fuck me daddy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.05.2016 20:04
    Fuck!!!! Never been this wet before!!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.06.2016 06:19
    very good

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.06.2016 19:39
    I love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    15.06.2016 15:03
    I loved your story I'm ducking horny as hell

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2016 14:30
    Nice! Don't usually appreciate women writers describing sexual fantasies but I did enjoy yours. Keep up the good work. Finally, be conscious of over used scene descriptors and sentence openings. Can't wait for the second installment.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2016 14:49
    "She turned to see all three boys knocked to the ground, stunned and bleeding.
    A large man stood over the leader, looking angry. He crouched down and, pulling the knife out of the boy’s pocket, he pressed it against his neck.
    “If you ever touch another woman, I will find you, and I will kill you. Do you understand?”

    This scene is too simple, too clean, and too easy for "NICK" It is unrealistic in the Superman vein of good guys. Nick thereby becomes too perfect. Interesting protaganists have flaws and uncertainties. Make the fight less one sided, with Nick getting hurt and the outcome less predictable. Makes the build up to the sex scene (my opinion) more intense. Nicely retraced fantasy.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.06.2016 15:04
    see 6-6-2016 for comments on part 2 as are here. Can't wait for part 3.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    26.07.2016 18:43
    my cock hasn't been this hard for a while now ...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    30.07.2016 14:39
    I've had pretty much this exact fantasy. Soooo hot!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2016 11:20
    Like your stories write me a story I'm all in like to watch and stroke next to my lady while she plays with herself in

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  • Anonymous+reader
    08.08.2016 11:21
    Love to watch my lover naughty milf cheatn bring naughty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.08.2016 12:30
    Ughhh this could be a book!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2016 02:15
    It can only get better when he takes her sweet Ass.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    07.09.2016 00:37
    This is soo good
    Want more

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.10.2016 00:54
    omg you have to write more!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    14.10.2016 04:20
    that was graet could be rougher tho

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.10.2016 00:22
    u should put this on wattpad and show those wannabe sex writers how its done!! ; )

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.10.2016 12:24
    Of course she would taste like strawberries immediately after eating strawberries.. Smdh...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.10.2016 12:26
    Also why does her douche bag attacker urge everyone to shut up so they won't get caught but then proceeds to scream in her face?? I just

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.10.2016 12:28
    Those two criticisms aside it was okay. I also wish it were rougher though. Boo to gentle first times.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.11.2016 07:29
    I wish someone would fuck me like that but I'm only 12.....:(

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  • Anonymous+reader
    25.11.2016 09:42
    Please add more! I loved this but rougher sounds better

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  • Anonymous+reader
    10.12.2016 19:42
    Just found this site and this is the first story I've read. Can't wait to read more!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    13.12.2016 17:22
    what a good story can you please do a third chapterthough becauseni have beenwaitingnfor ages and uou stillnhaveny postedi0

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  • Anonymous+reader
    03.01.2017 05:50
    I want somebody to fuck me like that.. Loved the story!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    02.02.2017 04:03
    First time on the site. Love your story. Very well written

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  • Anonymous+reader
    05.02.2017 21:54
    want to be fucked hard

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.02.2017 21:55
    This is the fuck I've always wanted to have/read, but no one could ever quite get it right. Thank you. Now I will suffer knowing that this probably won't get to happen for me :/ thank you :)

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  • Angel77777
    04.07.2017 16:22
    Hey everyone! I posted a part 3 JUST NOW, go read it! ;)

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  • Angel7777777
    15.07.2017 06:19
    That last comment is NOT from me. I have not written a part three!

    Well, almost... I'm halfway done part three. ;)
    But hey, if other people want to try to continue my story with their own fantasies- go for it! It's like a kinky choose your own adventure! :p
    Please don't pretend to be me though.

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