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Home on Leave

Author: HoneyGirl12

Date: 20 August 2013

Blowjob, True Story, Consensual Sex, Erotica

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Lucas stepped down off the bus as he shouldered his rucksack;
At 6' 2" he was tall and well built, his desert-tanned skin, various scars and short crew-cut hair made him immediatly intimidating to people he met, but he was gentle at heart and glad to be home after so long.
It'd been a long trip back to his home in the small town of Lakersville, Chicago
But as he reflected, it had been an even longer trip to get back to the States having spent the last four years taking cover in a filthy fox-hole in another dusty heap of sand called a country.

He walked through the old town for a while, checking out the old sights;
The school he'd grown up in, the small house his mother had raised him and 8 other kids in.
His final stop stirred up the last memories before he had shipped off to boot camp....

It had been four and a half years before, and he's been fresh out of high school, young, eager to make a name for himself.
He'd planned to go on a booze-up with some pals before they all shipped off,
but that was before he had met maria;
She still had two years to go in high school and he hadnt noticed her much before that night.
She was from a wealthier family and as such, traveled with the more elite crowd,
She was a heavy set girl, well developed even at that young age, and always wore the latest fashions her Daddy bought her.
But that night they had met at a small bar while he'd been waiting on his friends and had ended up spending the night under the bleachers back at school.
He'd never told her he was shipping off the next day.

Lucas wondered how her life had turned out, his mother had written to him about most of his old friends back home, but she didnt know about Maria and Lucas had never asked.
Shrugging he spotted one of the old bars he used to visit, it was beginning to rain so he quickly dashed across the road looking forward to a taste of home.

Inside he shook off the early drops of rain and looked about, the place was quiet enough;
Two men were playing cards in a corner and a girl was serving drinks to a much older man at the bar.
Lucas stepped over to warm himself by the fireplace, he was still in his combat pants and t-shirt and it was cold out.
As he stared down at the water droplets on his boots evaporating in the heat, he spotted a pair of cowgirl boots step up infront of them, glancing up he came face to face with the bar girl.
"Hey there, can I get you something?" she asked, smiling easy.
He couldnt help but take in her beauty, she was thin, but had a curvy ass and almost oversized looking tits, she was dressed in the pair of old cowgirl boots he'd noted earlier and a short denim skirt and blouse.
He nodded, "what evers good", she spun easily on her heels and walked back to the bar.
Ambling over, Lucas sat as far away from the already drunk older man and kept to himself.
The bar girl pored him a shot of something good and as he threw it back he noticed her looking him up and down.

"Can I help you girl?" he asked, startling her slightly;
She leaned her elbows on the counter and looked him in the eye,
"Lucas Malcolms" she said simply.
Lucas smiled, finishing his shot, he couldn't recall ever meeting this young woman; but if he played his cards right he thought he had a shot tonight.
"Who wants to know?" he replied.
"Maria Fieldings" she replied, blushing shyly;
"wait... What?" Lucas stared in amazement, Maria had been just a screw to him, some highs hook fun;
And now here she was, 4 years and what looked like one hell of a diet later.
Maria winked, "you can stop staring now"
"Whoa sorry" replied Lucas, taking the bottle off her to pore another shot, "I just didnt recognise you with your hair that way...."
She laughed at his obvious tease, "Don't give me that, your obviously getting hot under the collar now soldier"
He smirked, the alcohol taking affect, "Sure" agreed Lucas, "But I'm betting you're alot hotter someplace else"

That was it, they spent the night talking to each other at the bar, Maria asking about his time as a soldier and he asking after her family.
Lucas learned Maria's father had lost it all when recession took hold and her diet had come about more because of her struggling to pay for enough food to keep going.
She had dropped out of college and ended up working in the bar just to pay for her crummy 2 room apartment down the street.
"least you have a place to stay" joked Lucas.
"tonight, you can too" she replied with a smile.

They walked to her place hand in hand, she was only 5' 5" so he took his time so she didnt get left behind.
As they walked into her apartment he grabbed her ass,
"so...." he began, before he could continue she had her lips pressed against his as he felt her tongue probing his mouth, he responded,
His tongue subdueing hers as his hands began to undress her.
As her skirt hit the floor she stepped out of it, dropping to her knees she unzipped his pants.
Lucas moaned as her lips tried to take all he had to offer, but he was a big man, she had to make do with the head.
He stroked her long blonde hair, pulling on the ponytail to force her head off his cock so he could kiss her.
They made It to her bedroom, she lay back on the bed while he pulled off his clothes,
She grinned, "keep the dog tags on soldier...."
She stripped to her cowgirl boots as he pushed get back on the bed, kissing her, his stubble brushing her neck as his stiff member began to slip between her legs....
She gasped, reaching down to help guide him in as she bit her lip.
He slid up into her, she fit like a glove.

They made love all night long, her being more dominant then he remembered at times,
Eventually she collapsed beside him, their passion spent and sweat covering their heaving bodies as he stroked her thigh.
Lucas grinned, it was good to be home.

RATE AND COMMENT
THE NEXT INSTALMENT WILL BE MORE EROTIC AS THIS WAS TO ESTABLISH CHARACTERS


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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2013 21:49
    This didn't really establish any character though. We get the beginning of what sounds like could be a beautiful romance and then suddenly he wants to fuck the local bar slut who just happens to the last girl from town he banged. Not only was this way to short, but most of what little we were given to read at the beginning was just basically tossed aside because now she is just another bar slut wanting to get fucked by anyone who happens by. Sadly I was actually hoping this was going to be a romantic story, but I should have known better on this website. I guess I should at least be happy there wasn't any raping or sadistic dominating in the story, or maybe you are saving that garbage for the next chapter also.

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  • anonymous+reader
    20.08.2013 21:51
    Omg I love the story XD keep going I want more :)

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  • HoneyGirl12
    20.08.2013 22:35
    Thank you all for your views and ratings, and especially the comments.
    They are all appreciated, and I want to apologise to both the annoyed commenter and anyone else offended by my story, you may notice I like to be descriptive of their interactions up to a point, but I prefer to use broad general terms such as 'they make love' to allow readers to fill in the undescribed section with their own fantasy.
    I hope that clears up some of the problem you had with it.
    The story will possibly continue, but it will not become much more graphic, the story is about finding someone you knew and recapturing a lost opportunity.
    She wasn't a 'bar slut' as you put it, rather a lonely girl with little going well for her who met the man she had missed for years.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2013 07:54
    Marines have seabags not rucksacks and are called soldiers.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2013 08:16
    Correction.Are not called soldiers.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2013 10:53
    Go ahead with your Readers Digest "G" Rated story!
    Making love? They are strangers FUCKING! Well maybe fucking. I don't know, there was not enough story to read. I have said more in Text messages then you have here.

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  • okieblueyes
    21.08.2013 11:20
    I enjoyed it , and I do hope you continue

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  • countrycadillac
    21.08.2013 14:23
    OMG !! So far this is the hottest short story I have read !!! Your discription's are first rate Plus ! Please don't even consider the low life bitching from those who don't have the gut's to put thier names with thier comments.. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac)

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  • XxNaughtyBabyGirlxX
    21.08.2013 16:25
    Okay, I Love This Story So Far, An Old Flame Rekindled, The Love Of A Soldier Is The Most Intense, I Know I Love My Soldier Love. Ignore The Haters, They Gonna Hate On Ppl.. :) Keep Writing Your Story Sweetie :)

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2013 20:25
    Not a true story. Marines for one do 7 month deployments always with a possible chance of extension so a year maybe 14 months no t four and a half years. Second they cannot wear parts of utility uniform out in public. Nice try pal.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2013 22:18
    Bullshit story I was a Marine and none of this shit fits.

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.08.2013 23:32
    not much of a story

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2013 01:11
    I enjoyed the story-story line but I was looking for sex. Maybe when he was looking at her at the bar, her nipples got hard, her pussy got moist her clit tingled...

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 00:22
    It was a start. Not great, but a start.

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2013 21:45
    The story was fine, but the comments out of hand. I have many friends that have or are doing 4 years in sand pits right now. They are in every branch and I have seen many fresh home without they jacket on hot days. Just try to read and enjoy.

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