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A Sister in Need.....

Author: Unknown user

Date: 23 August 2013

Anal, Fiction, Enema, Incest

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This work of fiction is mine and is not to be copied without my permission,

first time writing a story please keep comments positive or constructive, I don't condone incest which is why this is a work of fiction so please don't call me a sick pervert I have no control over what gets me horny and I can safely assume that neither do any of you.

Be warned this story contains incest, anal, watersports, and enemas if none of this is your bag or any of it for that matter press back now, you have been warned.


Now lets start with looks thats how all of these start right, Anyway I will start with me, Jack, first I am 16 years old, 6'2'' and about 180 Lbs a little on the muscular side with a alright sized dick at 7 and a half inches but I have a good girth to it, I like to keep it well trimmed down there cause I figure if I like it on a girl they probably fell the same way basically I am as average as one guy can get even in the looks department just plain average.

My sister Carrie on the other hand is a knockout by anyones standards, 19, 110 lbs when dripping wet, about 5'7'' I think, and a perfect set of 36C tits (yeah I checked her bra who wouldn't) and when I say perfect good lord do I mean perfect I accidentally walked in on her in the shower once and they were perfect, her ass is also a great assets to say the least(if you have ever seen here in tight jeans you would agree).

Now lets get to the damn story already,

It started on Christmas vacation me, my sister and my parents always go to our cabin for Christmas vacation for as long as I can remember, and it is a pain let me tell you, 4 hours in a car with my bitchy sister will make anyone in their right mind consider killing themselves or her,

The cabin is nice though once you get there, its very private, one road in and out and its surrounded by endless forest the newrest town is a 30 minute rive in good conditions and we had been lucky every year going there to never get snowed in…….well till this year at least.

So after the "lovely" 4 hour drive we get there and are unloading the car, and my dad was already peeving out on my mom and soon enough it was just me and miss happy unloading the car so I tried to start up a conversation with her, God knows why I knew how it would end.

"another year in this crappy place huh carrie." I said

"what the fuck climbed up your ass and died Jack, mom and dad go through a lot to make out here every year" Carrie "cheerfully" replied

"fuck you,I know you hate coming out here just as much as I do don't try to pretend that you are on some saintly level above me" I shot back

"whatever unload the car yourself asshole, I have to use the restroom anyway" she said and walked away

"you know why you have to stay in the bathroom, is because you are so full of shit you know right" I yelled at her back as she walked into the cabin.

side note she does spend a long time in the bathroom, but only because she suffers from constant constipation, no one knows why my mom and dad have taken her to a few doctors and they all said basically the same thing, "she is normal as far as we know, but if she has trouble going she will need to take stool softeners or in extreme cases she may need to receive an enema to loosen her up."

I finally finish unloading the car after 2-3 hours and not ten minutes later Cassie comes into the room and starts grabbing at the bags, at the time I figured she was going to start helping me put groceries away and seperate everyones stuff out to the correct rooms.

"thanks Cassie I am pretty beat after unloading the car, I am sorry about what I said I didn't mean it" I heartfully said in thanks.

"fuck off Jack I am just getting my stuff then you are on you own you little shit" she responded as she started ripping the bags apart

Boy was I wrong about that whole situation.

"Jesus Christ Cassie what the fuck leave the bags alone its going to take long enough to get everything put away" I yelled at her.

"where is it, where the fuck is it." Cassie said to I assume herself. "what the fuck did you do with the rest of the bags Jack"

"Those were all the bags in the fucking car Cassie if you don't believe me go check for your fucking self" I replied angrily "Whats missing I will fucking look for it when I put everything away"

"Don't bother you are a fucking idiot and wouldn't be able to find it anyway you asshole" She stormed away as she said the last statement

Anyway another couple of hours later after unloading everything my mom and dad finally emerged from their room freshly showered from their love making and my sister was already at my moms side, I assumed telling on me like the bitch she was, after a few minutes of hushed conversation my mom leans over to my dad and says

"honey we need to run to town Cassie forgot something"

"Alright looks like supper is up to you Jack." my dad says

"what the fuck I just spent all day unloading for miss prissy and now I have to fucking cook for her too, this is bullshit" I angrily replied

"fuck you Jack you should be happy to cook for me I am…….." Cassie never got to finish her statement as my dad started yelling…..

"thats enough both of you we will be back in an hour we will just bring something back and you guys can warm up your own suppers"

Not even 30 minutes after they left the snow started falling and when I say falling I mean it was fucking coming down and even that might be putting it lightly. I then received an expected phone call from my parents telling me they were stuck in town and might not get back tonight and more than likely they would be stuck in town all week from what the forecast was telling them, they told me not to worry if the power went out they had the emergency generator stocked with gas before we came up and there was enough to last the storm.

So I begrudgingly climbed the stairs to my stairs to tell her the bad news I knocked on her door and received no answer so I opened the door and saw she wasn't there, I heard a noise from the bathroom so I figured she must be in there.

I knocked on the door and said….

"Cassie mom and dad just called they are stuck in town and can't get back tonight or at all this week from what the weather man is saying"

"GODDAMMIT JACK!, give me some fucking privacy for fucks sake, how did you know I was even in here" I heard yelled from behind the door along with some shuffling

"Jesus Cass I just wanted you to know mom and dad wouldn't be back and when I checked your room you weren't in there so I figured….."I never got to finish my statement as the door was flung open and Cassie was in my face

"You went in my fucking room, what the fuck is wrong with you you little fucking perv. Did you go through my stuff too?" she asked angrily

"no I just opened the door and……." I tried responding

"whatever get the fuck out of the way, in fact stay out of the way and don't talk to me till mom and dad get back and even then don't fucking talk to me" she cut me off then pushed her way past me and shut herself in her room.

So thats how things went for the first couple of days, we made sure that neither of us had to talk or see each other for more than a few seconds at a time and snow never let up night or day.

Finally on the third night as I was laying down in my room reading and eating a hot pocket I heard a light knocking at my door, I knew it was my sister after all who else could it be but after 3 days of not speaking I had softened up a little so I said….

"whats up Cassie is everything all right"

She slowly opened the door looked around the room and her eyes landed on me finally, I could tell she had been crying, I assumed cause she missed my mom and dad.

I jumped off the bed and said, " Whoa is everything ok, go ahead tell me whats wrong"

She sheepishly looked at her feet and said "I kind of have a problem and its kinda why I have been treating you like crap"

I moved closer and hugged her as she started crying again, "go ahead tell me whats wrong I am sure I can help"

"its not easy to say……" she said between sobs

"I can't help if you don't tell me whats wrong Cass" I responded

"Ok the reason mom and dad went to town for me was to get me stool softeners and an enema kit cause I am constipated" she responded and immediately burst into hysterical tears

I knew at this point she must be in a lot of pain cause that was three days ago and I hadn't heard her flush in the bathroom (it was right next door to my room)

"Ok well I am not sure how I can help here Cassie I mean I will look around and see if there is an enema kit or some stool softeners anywhere in the house." I replied while slowly stroking her hair

"Don't bother I have check everywhere and there isn't even a tube that would suffice for an enema." she replied

"well I really don't know what you want me to do here then." I said kinda looking around the room like an enema kit or some stool softeners would suddenly pop out of the wall or something

She began shifting around uncomfortably again and I could tell she had something she needed to say

"ok Cass tell me whats up I know you have something to say, tell me I promise I will try to help ok" I asked her softly

"well Jack you know my friend has the same problem as me and she said one time when her and her boyfriend were stuck somewhere in the same situation, well he helped her by……well you know" she said while looking down at her feet the tears finally coming to a close

"no I don't know Cass I have never had this problem before" I said questioningly

"he peed in her ass to help her out" she blurted out in a hurry

needless to say I was floored, my sister was asking me to give her a pee enema so she could relieve her pain

"Cass I don't know I mean I am your brother" I backstepped away and kinda held her at arms length trying to look in her eyes and see if she was being serious and not playing another joke on me.

She looked up at me and I knew instantly she wasn't kidding around. "please God Jack I am in so much pain, please please please please help me" she said desperately

I knew there was no way I could deny her, she was a bitch and tormented me but I couldn't let her continue in pain like this not to mention there could be serious medical side effects if she had to wait another 2-4 days for my mom and dad to get back.

"ok Cass I will help you but we can't tell anybody, not even mom and dad" I said much to her relief

"well obviously we aren't going to tell anybody do think this is something I am looking forward to tell anyone" she said playfully

It was nice to see her smile after this, so I grabbed her hand and we walked to the bathroom together

"so Cass how should we do this" I asked genuinly puzzled

"well the tub obviously this is probably going to be messy" she said laughing

so we moved over to the tub and climbed in together, she started taking off all her clothes when I stupidly said.

"whoa what are you doing, you don't need to be fully naked just take your pants off" I said hurriedly

"no fucking way I don't want to risk getting piss on these clothes this is my favorite shirt, you should take yours off too it will be hard to explain why you have piss on your clothes to mom and dad" she said as she was stripping off her final piece of clothing.

Well obviously I was hard, chances were I would need to be for this anyway, so I hesitantly started taking my clothes off. I got as far as my boxers before I stopped in embarrassment.

Cass was staring at me and noticed my embarrassment, "go on Jack its not like I haven't seen you hard before"

I was shocked I asked, "when did you see my hard on"

Cass kinda smiled and said,"well Jack you aren't exactly quiet when you are jerking off and I was curious so I kinda peeked at you once"

Once again I was shocked, but I knew she was right cause I could get quite loud when I got near climax, so I finally stripped off my boxers and revealed myself in all my glory to my sister

Cassie's eyes got huge and she said"What!?! this isn't going to work when I peeked you couldn't have been more than 5 inches how the hell are we going to get that thing in me"

"well I am guessing you were peeking at me when I was younger and obviously it grew some Cassie, don't worry I tried anal with my old girlfriend and I know its going to hurt at first but it will fit and you will be fine" I replied smiling inward, it was nice to know my dick was enough to scare her

She seemed to be battling with herself before she finally bent over and said,"be gentle its my first time alright."

I reached over behind the toilet and grabbed a bottle of ky gel I hid there for when I was well shaking hands with my little man.

I lubed up my dick and started inserting a finger in her ass when she stopped me and asked……

"what the fuck are you doing, this doesn't require you to finger my ass"

"Cass this will hurt like a motherfucker if I don't loosen you up a little" I replied

She bent over again and I started putting the first finger in again, I got the first one all the way in and was starting to work it back and fourth for a minute or so before I started inserting my second finger.

Cassie suddenly moaned,"oh my God thats good"

"are you getting horny from this Cass" I didn't really need to ask it was obvious she was getting turned on by how much her pussy was dripping

"just keep join alright I want to get this over with as fast as possible" She replied with a slightly flushed look on her face

So I started working my two fingers in her ass back and fourth while she continued to moan under her breath trying to hide her arousal, she was doing a pretty good job right up till I inserted my third finger then she really started to moan I started sawing my fingers in her ass until…

"OHHHHH FUCK YESSSSSSSS THAT IS FUCKING INCREDIBLE" she screamed out as she orgasmed for the first time that night, I also noticed her pussy had started releasing more fluids onto the floor of the bath and I took a little pleasure in knowing I had brought my up to now bitchy tight assed sister to orgasm by fingering her ass.

She was starting to come down from her orgasm when she asked in a kind of embarrassed voice, "I am so sorry Jack I just couldn't hold back, am I ready now?"

I felt kinda bad I really didn't need to saw my three fingers in and out of her ass till she came so I said, " its alright Cass it was my fault I got a little carried away too and I…well I was going to hold this over your head for awhile but don't worry lets just get this done and forget it happened ok"

She smiled at me and said " I can't blame you I have been a little bitchy to you over the years, but yeah lets get this over with now"

I pulled my fingers out of her ass and stood up slightly and got ready to insert my full length into her when it kind of hit me that I was about to put my dick in my older sisters ass and piss in her and I kind of hesitated.

as if Cass was reading my thought she said "Jack its alright, I really need your help please help me"

That was all the encouragement I needed and I slowly started to insert my dick into her ass, I noticed that a look of pain kept crossing her face and I stopped and asked…

"Cass are you alright I can stop, I mean I can try going now if its too much" I said genuinely concerned but she said..

"No Jack I don't want to have to do this again so please put the whole thing in"

I was about halfway in at this point and slowly started to insert the rest of my length into her, I finally got all the way into her after a few back and fourth pushes into her when I realized that I was way to turned on to even think about peeing at that point so I figured I had a problem and I need to take care of it, so I started working my dick back and fourth into her ass until at maybe my 5 stroke inwards Cassie wises up and asks….

"What the fuck are you doing Jack I am in real pain here and you are taking advantage of the situation and fucking my ass you know what I will tough it out till mom and dad get back" she said as she started to pull away from me

I stopped her by grabbing her hips and said "Cass its not what you think I just can't piss when I am this turned on, please I am worried for you too I don't think its good for you to hold it in much longer I just need to take care of my problem before I can take care of yours ok"

She just stayed still for a minute before saying" ok Jack I should have been thinking about you too this must be really hard for you to do when you are are….well you know…hard"

She started working her ass back and fourth on her own now so I took that as my cue and started to hump forward as she pushed back, we continued like that for about 10 minute when Cass had another orgasm…

"HOLY SHIT(no pun intended) FFFFFFUUUUUUUCCCCCCKKKKK MMMMMMMEEEEEE" she screamed out in pleasure I slowed my thrusts while she came down form her high.

"christ Jack are you close yet?" she asked after she had come down

"yeah Cass I am close just keep going" I replied as I picked up my humping motion

She was getting better or maybe it was involuntary but her ass muscles kept clenching and unclenching trying to get me off, and my God was it working cause after just five minutes more I finally peaked and started cumming buckets straight into her rectum just as she was having what must have been her most intense orgasm of the night.

As she was orgasming her ass muscles clenched down so hard all my thrusting motions were instantly stopped, I noticed what sounded like a hose or something and looked between us and noticed she was cumin so hard that she was squirting all over the floor of the bathtub.

I just couldn't resist so I reached under us and started rubbing her clot…..

"FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK" she screamed as she blacked out from all the pleasure and collapsed on to the floor of the tub.

I gently stroked her hair till I noticed she had lost control of her bladder and was peeing all over herself and me, I expected to be grossed out but I realized that it was kind of turning me on and that was making my dick hard again, so I made no effort to readjust out of her gentle and warm stream of urine running over both of our legs.

She gently stirred and asked'"did you already go is this your pee, oh my God are you hard again I don't think I could do that again?"

"No you lost control of your bladder when you blacked out don't worry I think I can go just don't move" I replied

So we sat there for long enough that the pee and squirt fluid from my sister had cooled enough to be considered cold when finally….

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhh" I exclaimed as my stream finally started up from my dick into her ass, I swear it must have been at least a gallon and it felt so good I swear it was nearly as pleasurable as cuming in my sisters ass

She must have felt the same way cause she was making similar noises as I was as I sufficiently filled her ass with my piss.

When I was done we just layer there awkwardly for awhile till we both fell asleep with my dick and piss still in her ass.

I was awakened by Cassie pulling off of my and grabbing me up and pushing me out the door…..

"trust me Jack you don't want to see this part" she said as she slam me the door and dashed for the toilet.

I heard an audible "Ahhhhh" as I walked away to go make us something for us both to eat

So after another couple of awkward days the snow finally let up and mom and dad were finall able to come back and basically round us up for the ride home.

It was on the ride home were my thoughts finally caught up with me and I felt more than my fair share of guilt over what we had done, it was after my third time for mentally kicking myself that my older sister must have realized that I wasn't alright and she leaned over and whispered

"Jack you have nothing to be ashamed about I needed your help and you helped me thats all"

"But Cass what about the other stuff, you know when I fucked you in the ass" I whispered back

"Kinda hard to forget that part Jack" she replied

I silently laughed at that (I really don't think my mom and dad would have gotten the joke)

"Besides I can't have you all worried, after all the next time we do it I expect the same treatment"She said with a sly grin

It took me a second for the words to sink in"You mean you want to do that again?"

"Hell yeah, after all it was a lot more fun than when I usually get an enema"………….


THE END


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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2013 22:55
    I can't help but laugh at people who are so adamant about not condoning something but then turn around and derive entertainment and pleasure from it. That by its very action proves that you "condone" it even if you do not practice it personally. So all you self righteous hypocrites need to just accept who you are and stop lying.

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2013 23:39
    I think this was great I hope there is a part 2

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  • anonymous+reader
    23.08.2013 23:48
    You really need to proofread your work.

    You made lots od simple mistakes.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 09:45
    I am guessing these kids like to say fuck a lot?

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 10:06
    This made me LOL "4 hours in a car with my bitchy sister will make anyone in their right mind consider killing themselves"

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 12:43
    Read your work back to yourself numerous times before posting in order to catch your large amount of errors. If your grammatical skills aren't up to par then get someone to proof it for you.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 15:04
    First question you need to ask yourself, "Do I want to continue writing and submitting my work?" Second question, "Do I want to take the time necessary for me to excel at writing?" If you're answer is yes then you have some work to do. The other comments concerning proofreading are valid ones. My advice is to get a program that helps with spelling and grammar. There are many sites on the net that you can utilize to help with punctuation. You have quite a few "run on" sentences, that makes the story harder to read and comprehend. When you finish writing a story take a twenty minute break, then come back and read it out loud. That will really help you catch a lot of errors. For example, "I replied smiling inward" you should have used "inwardly." The descriptive language you used was pretty good. Cont...,

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 15:19
    Cont...from previous/. Think of the picture you want your reader to see when you describe a sex scene, then what would they be hearing, smelling, tasting if it applies. So thinking of the five senses when writing your sex scenes will cause a reader to feel they are in the story rather than just reading it. Like I said you are already doing pretty well at this but with minimal effort on your part you could be doing great! When describing smells, which is vital in a sex scene, avoid clichés like "Her pussy smelled like a ripe peach." We all know unless a girl has covered herself in perfume that is not the case. Anal scenes benefit from smell description as well, words like musky, sweaty etc. this will get you more positive votes as many people have smell fetishes I guarantee that's going to be a positive from them!! I would also caution you about penis size. A sixteen year old is highly unlikely to have seven and a half inches. Cont...

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 15:44
    Cont./ Additionally your protagonist referred to it as "alright." Realism is very important many people complain about huge penises unless its an integral part of the story. Personally I think you should address it in your introduction if its gonna be more than seven and a half. Now pat yourself on the back and be proud. You wrote a story, submitted it for critique(that takes balls) and it was pretty damn good for your first time!!! You have talent, a little spit and polish is whats going to get you where you want to be. Also address readers who take time to leave comments, even if that means telling someone to go to hell that is being an asshole. So thanks for sharing your work and I so hope you continue to write. I think you should stick to the fetish genre you have real flair for it. Try one with panty sniffing, hairy girls, anal and peeing. That's great practice for honing all aspects of description in sex scenes. Hope I've helped and you give my story idea some thought

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 15:49
    To the commenter below me a 16 most definitaly can have a 7 1/2 inch cock. Sure Its hardly common but is definitely possible. Take me for an example I just turned 15 and I'm dead on 7"

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 15:52
    And to the writer great job I thoroughly enjoyed it and its not even my usual fetishes so excellent work however I do agree with the guy 2x below me on certnes aspects of the story. Still great job and keep on writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 15:53
    Yes, Yes, Yes! ! ! It can be done. My brother an I have done pee enamas for years now. Usually with his morning wood. He'll fuck my butt, then once it's in there all the way, he'll relax just a little and the pee will release. The tricky part now is for me to get his dick out of my butt without leakin' piss all over the bed. I manage and run to the bathroom and releave myself from my own morning pee but his too out of my butt. Long with a good morning bowl movement on my part. It's great to read this in someone's story. Fiction is more real than you might expect.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 20:40
    Hey guys this is the guy who wrote the story I want to thank you all for your comments, I have to admit that I thought everyone was going to hate the story but thankfully it seems people are liking it. I have read through the comments and I am seeing a lot of comments about grammatical errors and I have to be honest its been 7 years since I was in an english classroom and even then it wasn't great so if you guys wouldn't mind just putting a couple of them in the comments section I will work on them while I consider making a sequel to this story.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 20:44
    ThatGuy430 again, thought I should mention that I am having troubles logging in so if I make a sequel to this story it may be under a different name.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 22:36
    To the fifteen year old kid who says he has a seven inch cock, can you comprehend what you read? I didn't say it was impossible, I said it was " highly unlikely" as a physician I've seen a few penises. Let me tell you, it is very rare for someone to be that large at fifteen. The penis can grow into a mans mid twenties so I guess by then you'll probably be fourteen inches huh? Brag all you want when penises hit the seven inch range many women find them to be uncomfortable and some won't be able to manage it at all. Good luck with having anal or finding a woman who can deepthroat you. More than likely you're compensating for a two inch toothpick, good thing is you still have plenty of time to grow!!

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  • Anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 22:55
    While I enjoyed the story (and rated it positive), you really need to work on spelling and grammar. As for the supposed Dr who says a teenager can not have a 7 inch penis when hard, what a crock. Talk about having a small dick complex. I seriously doubt he is even a Dr.

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 22:55
    A good example of grammatical and run on sentence errors occur in the first paragraph. When you first begin to tell the story you've crammed that whole paragraph into one sentence. What follows in quotes would be a good place to end the first sentence "Now lets start with looks, that's how all of these start right?" Notice the placement of the comma, this helps the sentence flow better and be more understandable. You also say "with a alright sized dick" it should be "with an alright sized dick." The a or an thing may of just been a typo but if not that would be the proper way to write that. I can sympathize with you on this topic grammar is not my strong point either. You do however need to work on it if you want those proofreading comments to go away. Consider finding an editor here on the site, they can improve your work and help you exponentially. Don't get discouraged, and keep writing even if you are making mistakes, that's how you are going to get better!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    24.08.2013 23:10
    To the person who disbelieves my status as a physician, do you read beyond a third grade level? I reiterate, I did not say that it couldn't happen!! Additionally neither I, nor the person making the comment said anything about the penis being turgid. That means "hard" as you put it, I wanted to define that so you could understand. I'm sure your vocabulary is quite limited. Read comments before you respond, three times if thats what it takes for your reptilian brain to process them, lest you will look the ignoramus you are!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2013 07:19
    Honestly I agree with the guy about the big penises why do they have to be so big? Honestly I wod rather read abut a normal range size and why do you think a big one adds to the story? Not in my opinion it don't it too many stories with big dicks in them already. It gets old real quik and its mostly new writers that do that. What is wrong with a 5-6 incher that is the average size really a 7 in her dont help ur story in any way. Sorry I cant give u examples of ur grammar mistakes I am not a writer but I do know what I like in a story and huge priks arent it. Good luck with ur writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2013 08:51
    Honestly I agree with the guy about the big penises why do they have to be so big? Honestly I wod rather read abut a normal range size and why do you think a big one adds to the story? Not in my opinion it don't it too many stories with big dicks in them already. It gets old real quik and its mostly new writers that do that. What is wrong with a 5-6 incher that is the average size really a 7 in her dont help ur story in any way. Sorry I cant give u examples of ur grammar mistakes I am not a writer but I do know what I like in a story and huge priks arent it. Good luck with ur writing

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.08.2013 22:51
    Not a bad first. Spell check should be used once in a while

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  • anonymous+reader
    26.08.2013 23:10
    Chow like nasty strory these one. Make a dike hhard!!!!!

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  • anonymous+reader
    21.09.2013 09:34
    Honestly, I did not like the excessive use of slang, I don't people talk like that(only rapers do)
    Other than that I liked the story, I don't really mind the grammatical errors.
    I mean I can read a story without punctuation.
    Can't wait to see what you will think of next.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.05.2014 21:25
    Love it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    19.10.2014 15:19
    OK Ladies and Gentlemen! This what I've said all along, this is possible to do. My brother an I have been doing this for years now. I'll take his morning wood up the ass, he relaxes a little and releases his pee into my butt. Then once he's done, I jump up and run to the bathroom with both our pees. I get an enema out the deal. It's nice warm water that flushes me out nicely. I'm not sayin' we do this every morning, just once in a while when he's in a quirky mood. Go team! Cute story. My brother an I never had any arguments ever. I've loved him like crazy since I was big enough to crawl across the floor to be near him. He's the best of the best as far as companions are concerned. I just love him to pieces. Someday I'm going to leave all the mistakes I make while typing here, so you can better understand that he's fuckin' me right now as I'm typing this.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.03.2015 08:01
    I don't think you have to worry about anyone "stealing your story." It is infantile and predictable at best, and it is embarrassingly poorly written. If you are adept at anything at all, it is certainly not writing. Please post no more of your time-wasting "stories." It is those like you who offend those of us who have a command of the written word.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    11.03.2015 03:36
    "I don't think you have to worry about anyone "stealing your story." It is infantile and predictable at best, and it is embarrassingly poorly written. If you are adept at anything at all, it is certainly not writing. Please post no more of your time-wasting "stories." It is those like you who offend those of us who have a command of the written word."

    wow this was my first story if you don't like it don't read it, also I don't care if anyone steals it to be honest post wherever you want, and for you who has "command of the written word" perhaps you missed the statement to keep comments positive or constructive.

    But you know what say whatever you want I really don't care so I will leave you with this sir, every journey starts with a first step this was mine sure maybe it wasn't a good step but at least I summoned the courage to take the step, why don't you stop hiding behind an "anonymous reader" and share with us your first step.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.03.2015 04:45
    I have to agree, in fact I would beyond that, for a first story this is not that bad and judging by the ratings and previous comments it looks like other people thought it was a good first try also.So I have to say I feel that what you posted is downright criminal and I believe your comment should be removed the last thing we want is to have anyone stop posting stories as that would probably be the end of this site that we have come to love. So do us all a favor and refrain from telling any new and budding authors to not post stories, if you don't like the story don't read it and like the author of this story said maybe leave constructive criticism cause just insulting people rarely helps anything as a person with the command of the written word should know already.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    16.05.2015 05:20
    she needs a really big enema bag filled with soapey water up ass for really good enema cleaning. enemas are the best.

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  • MonsterOfSex
    16.10.2015 07:07
    very good story.... that being said there are some gamer mistakes other than that it was great looking forward to part 2

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  • Anonymous+reader
    04.01.2016 01:54
    Well that was...Juvenile. I get that it was your first story but come on man, you could've read it over before posting it. Carrie spontaneously becomes Cassie? You completely forgot punctuation for a good portion of it. You didn't really work out the mechanics of what was going on and never, I mean ever.... rub a girls clot! lmao

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  • Anonymous+reader
    12.02.2016 07:51
    its ok for some reason it sounds furmillur maby not, I recal the other story had sis cumming sooooo hard she shit/pissed/cum/farted/ spit/ hiccuped burpt/and sneezed all at the same time , yea thats how it went good f///g tale guv-naugh.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.01.2017 09:25
    I liked it.

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