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Dear Diary

Author: Ashlee

Date: 7 April 2005

BDSM, Diary, Group Sex, Dark Fantasy

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It starts on a Monday Morning.
"WAKE THE SHIT UP, YOU PEICE OF SHIT." her mother yelled, slapping her across the face. Tailor ignored it. Thinking her mother was laid. After school Tailor came home, layed on her bed and decided to start a diary.
_______________________________________________________________________________
April 6th, 2005 1st Entry Tailor

Last night, I had this really weird dream. I usualy do have nightmares, but this one... I could feel, it was so romantic. It was around the same theme as before. SEX!

I was laying on my bed, this guy named Angel layed beside me, all of a sudden there was an attack, I was taken, stripped. The Lord of the Rings evil dude, stood before me. My pussy was right at his face, ready to kill it. I yelled for help, no one answered. Sauron touched my clit and it started to burn like it never did before. I felt the pain, well I think I did. Anyway, I stoped screaming. He laughed, proud of himself.

To start with, I am fan of Lord of the Rings, I am actually writing the first book. I've already written 30 pages.
_______________________________________________________________________________ "WHAT ARE YOU DOING!" yelled my Mom. I quickly hid my diary, I didn't want of all people my mom to see my fantasies.
"Nothing." I quickly looked down and covered my face before she hit me, really hard.
"Your fucking boyfriend's on the fuckin phone bitch, get it before I fucking kill him." she spit at me and whipped me the phone.
"Angel?" I cried, my face hurt so much, I couldn't feel it.
"Tailor, what's wrong?" He asked
"My face, mom hit it again."
"Are we still doing that sex party?"
"Yes..." I TOTALLY FORGOT. "Shit" I thought to my self.
"Okay, well cya there."
"Bye!" I said. "What am I going to wear..." I've never had actual intercorse, but everything else I have with every boy in town. Not trying to brag, but... I have. Even some girls.
"Mom, I'm gone shopping." I yelled, running out the door.
"GOOD, GET OUT AND STAY OUT SLUT!
______________________________________________________________________________
~AT THE SEX PARTY~

I came in wearing a so-slutty outfit, I could of nearly died with all the stares I got, luckily they were good stares, like, "Holy Shit, I wanna fuck that girl untill she dies." look. It's a great feeling. I got to my boyfriend who grabbed me, took off my clothes and started licking my pussy.
_______________________________________________________________________________
I know that was such a short, and really boring story, but it's my first and I got bored with it too. Please give me so great ideas.

Thanks


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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.04.2005 12:48
    ok start with more details about her fantasy thendo something with the mom like rape her but keep it flowing

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2005 22:21
    Great story, good job. Just make it longer, and a bit more interesting. Ya, maybe add sum rape in it

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  • READER
    READER 500
    23.04.2005 16:22
    That was an okay story. Add some rape in it. Thatd be good! 10/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.05.2005 11:07
    Stiory was good but needs to be expanded,if it;s a true story just add some more details to make it interesting.Keep writting though you will develop a style .

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.09.2005 11:50
    it was okay.... a little boring, and REALLY short

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.09.2005 08:40
    whats the point of this story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.09.2005 09:06
    What ???

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.01.2006 08:45
    That's funny! Well, put some sex in it...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.01.2006 16:57
    i ttly agree with you. that sucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.04.2006 11:37
    Really short and no sex at all. I would not call two times eating pussy to be a good story. Supposed to be some fucking, some eating something more than just eating twice. What you got is good for the beginning of a story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2006 03:42
    Ok, you definately need to extend on her little "fantasy," and then maybe not let the mother cuss so much, because it makes it ridiculous to read every other word as a cuss word. Then, extend on the party. Go into extravagent detail. Make the boyfriend push her on the table or something. Make it public. Lots of people watching. Add some group sex and la dee da. Let the imagination flow. Then end with her going home to her mom drunk or whatever and she gets raped by her mom's boyfriend or something! Who knows!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.07.2006 10:35
    details, try using "later on..." or whatever instead of the choppy lines

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.07.2006 02:24
    ...no.....thats all ive got to say

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.08.2006 18:10
    add some real rape, not bad for a first time 8/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.11.2006 17:30
    The mom should have raped her too

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.02.2007 02:14
    where is the rest

    why is this here?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.04.2007 03:21
    more and lyk....more would do it..i hope....its and ok start..u need...wut every story's got (hopefully) a beginnin a middle and an end..u got a beginnin...no middle and no end

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.08.2007 04:16
    Some of the grammar is correct and the story has a natural "flow."

    The problem: too short, the rest is obvious.
    3/10

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    READER 500
    05.10.2007 04:32
    Come on everybody. What's with the compliments? This is awful with a capital "a". No wonder it's stuck in the less-read section of this site.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.10.2007 21:06
    y is there no 0/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.10.2007 02:58
    know why most people are complimenting it? it's because that they are as stupid as this story is. well no offense, but this story seriously needs to be completely re-written. you need more effort and seriousness in order to write better. 3/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.11.2007 13:26
    its not that baaaad.. you need to complete it tough and evolve it more..

    i enjoyed reading ittt !!! =)

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.02.2008 19:04
    I didn't even bother reading this... too short.

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  • anonymous
    21.07.2008 22:07
    the only good part was the last line..dont have the mom be that dramatic because the stories not spose to be about her

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.09.2008 17:31
    UMM WELL THIS KINDA SUCKED WHYS DA MOM ALWAYS CURSING AND STUFF SHES A REAL DRAMA QUEEN

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  • SweetxInsanity
    16.11.2008 01:02
    Wow. This is horrible. Maybe if you were to expand, or...I don't know...use proper grammar. Anything to make it better. Sorry dear, you write like an adolescent.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    23.09.2009 13:36
    im sorry but this had to be THE WORST story in the world.



    this was a waste of my time...


    your not talented. if you write AGAIN THE EARTH WILL DIE..... DON'T KILL THE EARTH BITCH.

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