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Amanda's Worst Nightmare

Author: The Cannibal

Date: 21 April 2005

Cruelty, Fiction, Rape, Spanking

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Her name was Amanda, and she was a good girl. She went to church every Sunday and did everything a good girl was supposed to do. She was the most beautiful girl in the world. She was part Japanese, part white, with tanned skin. Her skin was as smooth and soft as silk and her eyes looked dreamy. I am her neighbor. I will tell you all about my story.

I've had a crush on her ever since i moved in next to her. The first time I laid eyes on her she was wearing a pair of short soccer shorts and a tanktop. She smiled and said: "Hi, I'm Amanda. We live next door to you. If you want, you can come over anytime to play some games or whatever." I shook her hand.

"Hi," I said, "I'm Marshall." I wanted to grab her right there, and use her body. She had nice legs, a rather nice ass, but her tits were a bit small. That, however, just made her all the more cute to me. She told me she was a good Christian girl who was a virgin and had a boyfriend. Her voice sounded like music to my ears, so beautiful. This girl was perfect.

For nights and nights all I did was sit up at night masturbating to fantasies of Amanda. I would fantasize about raping her, torturing her, and making her beg for mercy. I loved it. My fantasies always involved some sick form of sex. Then one night I couldn't take it. I crept out of my window late at night and waited outside of hers. She had just finished taking a shower. I could see her because her lights were on. She had a towel wrapped around her and was blow drying her hair. I smiled.

The next night I did the same. I watched. For the next week that's what I did every night. I dared not do anytrhing else because her parents were always home. Then one night when i was waiting outside I heard some words. The window had been left open.

"Amanda dear," I heard her dad say.

"Yes?" she responded.

"Your mom and I will be going to Chicago for the next week on a business trip. Do you think you can handle it here all by yourself?" he asked.

"Sure," Amanda said, "When are you leaving?"

"Tomorrow," her dad replied. I smiled. Tomorrow! Tomorrow was the night! I smiled in a sick manner. I would have it my way with Amanda's cute ass tomorrow night for an entire week and no one was going to stop me.

Of course, before I began this mission, I needed a few supplies so the next day I went to the local Wal-Mart and bought everything i needed. I put all my materials into a big bag and waited outside of her window that night. That night she got in the shower as usual. I took a knife out of the bag and cut through the screen to the window. I snuck into the house. That was rather simple. I slowly opened the door to the bathroom. I could hear her singing in the shower. Her beautiful voice made my cock grow harder. It began throbbing.

I took the towel from where it was hanging and walked out of the bathroom. I tossed the towel away and waited by the bathroom door patiently. Soon the water stopped running.

"That's funny," I heard her sexy voice say, "I could've sworn I grabbed my towel before I went into the shower." I couldn't take it anymore. I pushed open the bathroom door and grabbed her, pulling her naked body close to me. She let out a scream. Her scream only turned me on more.

"I am your towel Amanda! I'll wrap you up baby!" I pulled her close to me and she struggled and screamed. I slapped her across the face and she fell to the ground. I picked her up and pulled her close to me. I turned her around so that her back was towards her and, using my right arm, hugged her close to me. My left arm put the knife to her throat. She instalty became silent.

"Hush baby," I said, "If I hear another peep outta you that I don't want to hear Amanda, I will kill you, understand?" She nodded. My right hand felt across her smooth flesh in her inner thigh. I saw her close her eyes and sob a little. I smiled and licked the side of her beautiful face.

"Good girl," I said, "I'm going to have some fun with you Amanda." My hand grabbed onto her vagina, caressing it and gribbing it.

"Marshall, please don't, I'm a virgin," she cried. Her eyes were still closed. I nibbled on her ear a little, then licked her cheek again. She was delicious! I smiled and reached into my bag of supplies again. This time I took out some rope. I pinned her arms behind her back and tied them there tightly so she wouldn't be able to block anything I was going to do to her beautiful body.

"Amanda, I've been dreaming about this forever," i whispered. I bent her over the kitchen sink so her ass was showing towards me. She moaned: "Marshall, please. I'm not a bad girl. I don't want you to do this to me. I'm begging you."

"Didn't I say I didn't wanna hear a peep from you unless I asked you?" I asked. She nodded. I took out a paddle from my bag. A look of shock spread across her face.

"Marshall, don't please! Don't!" she yelped. Spank! The paddle slapped the butt cheeks. Spank! Spank! Spank! Spank! She screamed in pain after each spank. Her nice ass cheeks jiggled a little after every hit, making me all the more horny. Spank! She cried out. Spank! Her smooth flesh wiggled a little. Spank! she cried: "Marshall, stop!"

I spanked her again. She cried out in pain. I saw tears running down her face. I smiled sadistically. I licked the tears from her beautiful face: "Do you want me to stop baby?" She sobbed and nodded. I could see she was having a hard time. She wanted to wipe the tears from her face but couldnt because I had tied her arms.

"Amanda," I whispered, "I don't care what you want." Spank! She cried out again.

"For a while I've been watching you, masterbating to fantasies of you, and now I get to live those fantasies," I snickered. Spank! Her ass looked so beautiful every time I spanked it and it wiggled around. Spank! Spank! Spank! Cries after cries she begged for me to stop. Finally, I gave it one last spank. Spank! I threw the paddle to the ground and smiled.

I turned her over and smiled. Her tits were small, but I bet they were still fun to play with. I grabbed one and twisted it as hard as I could. She yelped in pain and I twisted it more. I could feel my dick getting hard in my pants. Her screams made me horny.

"Baby, you are sexy!" I said. I let go of the nipple and slapped it. She screamed. I smiled. I was going to have a fun time. I knew I was. She was so helpless. She had no idea what I was going to do next and she was at my mercy. That's how I liked it.

I went down and began licking around her nipple. Her flesh was tasty. I really liked it. Then, I bit down on her nipple hard. She screamed yet again in pain, this time louder and more sexy than other time before. I could tell he was in massive pain. i twisted the tit with my teeth as she cried out: "No Marshall! Stop! Please! Ouch!". I yanked it and smiled. I let go of my grip with my teeth and she let out a sigh of relief.

"Marshall, why are you doing this to me?" she asked, tears streaming down her cheeks.

"Shut up!" I said, slapping her face harshly. I smiled at my artwork. I had chewed her breast so hard blood was trickling from it. I licked up some of the blood.

"Now you know what I am capable ofl doing," I said, "So I don't wanna hear anything except what I ask okay?" She nodded, still sobbing. I reached into my bag and grabbed a big kitchen knife with a sharp point. She gasped, but didn't say anything. I smiled.

"Amanda, do you trust me?" i asked. I pulled her up so her back was towards me and my crotch was pushed up against her ass. She felt so warm and inviting. I put the dull end of the knife to her throat and ran it across: "Remember, if you answer wrong, I'll hurt you. Do you trust me?"

"Yes," she gulped. She was still crying. I licked the tears from her cheek.

"More than your Daddy?" I asked with a smile. She nodded. I laugh: "More than Mommy?" She nodded. I smiled. I knew she was a nice Christian girl so I decided to test her: "More than God?" She hesitated.

"I ask you baby!" I said, turning the knife to the sharp side, "More than God?!" Her lips quivered. She didn't want to say it, but she didn't want to die. I loved this! She was scared. I was so turned on by this: "Answer me Amanda!" She sobbed: "Yes! More than God."

"Good girl," I said, she burst into tears and weeped. I smiled: "Now you're going to Hell Amanda, but at least I still love you." i slid the knife down so it was at her stomach. She quivered.

"If you trust me so much baby," I said, "close your eyes." She hesitated, and then closed them. Her lips were still quivering.

"Do you trust me enough?" I asked. She nodded. I smiled: "Do you think I'm going to stab you?" She shook her head. I laughed: "Wrong." Her eyes popped open right as the knife plunged into her belly. Blood squirted out. I made sure to stab her in a spot that wouldn't kill her, but put her in severe pain.

"Oh Amanda, does it hurt?" I asked. She screamed. I stabbed her again, and once again she cried out in pain, turning me on more. I felt the bulge forming my my jeans. I couldn't take it, I threw her sexy ass to the ground and pulled down my jeans.

"No!" she screamed, "I'm a virgin!"

"Not for long!" I laughed. I stuck my dick into ur nice tight pussy. I felt it literally rip as my fat dick sunk into it. It was so damn tight on my fat cock and it felt good.

"Marshall!" she cried, "Stop raping me! Stop it!" My dick forced into her faster, throbbing. I felt her pussy tighten around my penis. She screamed for help, but it was no use. Her pussy was so damn tight it was beginning to bleed from the destruction my dick was causing. I felt her pussy hole ripping.

"Damn!" I said, "You weren't kidding about being a virgin! You are tight!" I smiled. She cried, unable to stop me, she let me have my way with her sexy struggling body.

I finally was done with her pussy. I smiled as she sobbed about her loss of virginity. I nodded. I felt superior. I was superior! She was a tool for me! a sex tool!

"Turn over baby!" I said, turning her beautiful body over, "Your asshole is going to suffer a similar fate!" I smiled, plunging my dick into ur tight little asshole. It was even tighter than her fucking pussy was.

"Ouch! No! Ouch!" She screamed as she felt the trobbing dick puncure and rip open her backside. She screamed in pain again, but, once again, it was no use for her. Her wass was bleeding and there was nothing she could do but take the dick in her ass and struggle a bunch. Her struggling, of course, just turned me on more, and I began pumping harder and harder into her. She begged for me to stop. I finally gave it one last pump, and let her sexy ass go. I had finished my job.

"Okay Amanda," I said, "I am done with you. Don't tell anyone about this Amanda, or I will kill you, understand?" She nodded. I smiled: "Good girl." I stroked her hair back, and she sobbed in knowing that she had turned her back on God, been stabbed, and was robbed of her virginity. I knew how she felt, and I felt turned on from her pain.

I got up and turned to walk away. Blood was on the floor from my perverted stabbing and she was still lying there, sobbing. I turned and looked at her. She was so sexy, lying there, sobbing and in pain. It was a shame to leave her there. My work had to be done. I licked my lips. I wasn't finished. I realized that I was pretty hungry, and I remember how tasty her flesh had been when I had licked her.

I went back and picked her body up, throwing her over my shoulder. She screamed: "No! What are you doing now?! You got what you wanted! What do you want from me! No!" I brought her to the dining room and threw her onto the table. Seizing some more riope, I tied her down to the table top. She was crying and screaming and kicking, but I tied her down.

"I want dinner!" I said. I took out the knife and shoved it into her pussy. She screamed in agony and pain. I began to eat her flesh. Biting off chunks of her and eating them. Delicious! Yummy! I was eating her alive and she was screaming. She was so tasty! I bit off pieces of her inner thigh and her breasts! Yum! I loved it. She was tasty, and she was all mine! She was my property, MINE! I chuckled at the thought of it. I owned her! I watched her struggle back and forth, scream as I bit into her flesh and tasted the soft delicious flesh! After I was full, she was still strapped down to the table, crying. I smiled.

"I'm going to sleep now Aamnda," I said. Tomorrow is going to be another full fun day of you and me!

---to be continued---


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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.05.2005 00:34
    you sick a-hole. that is soooo gross. why would you EVER be turned on by that?!?!

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    READER 500
    08.05.2005 15:03
    ur such a sick bastard

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    READER 500
    08.05.2005 19:02
    You're sick

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.05.2005 19:20
    ur a sick son of a bitch omg that is disgusting u bastard

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    READER 500
    10.05.2005 02:35
    you sick fucking basterd that was i hope you burn in hell you fucking ass hole cock bite. you make me sick you peice of trash, perversion in one thing but this is fucking obserde i hope someone dose this shit to you, you god damn sick mother fucking basterd

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    READER 500
    10.05.2005 02:40
    I'll be honest. I was turned on for a little bit, up until the feast began, I guess... or somewhere around the 2nd line.

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    READER 500
    10.05.2005 20:26
    What the hell is your major malfunction? did you get dropped on your head one 2 many times?

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    READER 500
    10.05.2005 21:31
    You are a sick bastard.... if i knew who you were i would hunt you down and kill you.... i hope you get arrested you sick fuck

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    READER 500
    14.05.2005 01:54
    i didnt read it...and im not going to after viewing these comments.

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    READER 500
    14.05.2005 18:38
    A raelly sick mind wrote this. You need to be locked up and the key destroyed.

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    READER 500
    18.05.2005 18:33
    Nice story, just didnt like the "feast".

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    READER 500
    30.05.2005 03:07
    I enjoyed it write more

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    READER 500
    31.05.2005 16:10
    what the fck is the piece of fucking crap?? u can go fuck ur self and go fuck ur mom! what the fuck ??u bastard..sone of a fuking bitch ...ur a bitch too u fricking bastard!

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    READER 500
    01.06.2005 18:50
    U r a sick fucking pervert. Do u get ur jollies off of raping and then eating people? Thats fucking horrible u sick mother fucker. Here we r trying to masterbate to sum shit like.."Im going to eat u alive Amanda!" Only person who wuld get horny to that is sumone in or eventually going to jail. fucking loser!

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    READER 500
    03.06.2005 02:48
    You mother-fucking ass-hole..i hope someone cuts up ur balls and pull out ur lungs while u watch and scream...

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    READER 500
    03.06.2005 19:36
    wtf ppl? the story says rape and cannibalism so if u didnt wanna read it then dont! dont come here and cirticize him when he warned u. idiots!

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    READER 500
    04.06.2005 09:04
    i dont care if it gives u a warnin this kind of shit shud be illeagal if u like this ur all sick fucks who should have there balls ripped of

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    READER 500
    04.06.2005 23:00
    Sisk story,,,whoever likes this stuff is in serious shit

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    READER 500
    06.06.2005 02:11
    This is honestly terrible, terrible writing... And, is also disgusting. No thanks.

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    READER 500
    14.06.2005 23:59
    that was dull n borin. n it was horribly writtin. i suggest better vocab n more comments from the characters. lol, i feel i a loser, but not as much of a loser as u!!! JEsus saves!!

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    READER 500
    18.06.2005 23:40
    that was horrible, totally retarded, the whole rape thing is not cool, and the cannibalism part was nasty... I am into biting, and rough sex but that was overkill... you should seriously stop writing crap like this

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    READER 500
    19.06.2005 01:07
    You are sick

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    READER 500
    19.06.2005 02:09
    u sick bitch queer bag my girlfriends name is amanda and if i ever found out that sum sick bitch like you did somthing like that to her id fucking find and personally shove a knife up yer ass

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    READER 500
    20.06.2005 03:17
    Quote, So "I dont care if it gives u a warnin this kind of shit shud be illeagal if u like this ur all sick fucks who should have there balls ripped of
    " You should be shot for your grammar, spelling and typing skill. =/

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    READER 500
    20.06.2005 21:06
    OMG I hate this shit it is so wrong a lil rough playisn't bad rape although it ain't my thing as long as u dont actually rape anyone its all good but this story said nothing bout cannibolism and that was groos DO NOT write anohter one

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    READER 500
    22.06.2005 03:49
    WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU????WHY WOULD YOU EVER WRITE THAT YOU SICK PERVERT??

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    READER 500
    28.06.2005 00:02
    um...ok well everyone else didnt like it...but it was ok...

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    READER 500
    29.06.2005 23:09
    started out good then went down quickly that my dick pulled a turtle and probly is not coming out for a while

    PSYCHO!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    01.07.2005 06:36
    What the fuck?! The only people who would like that would have to be complete pyhcos!

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    READER 500
    01.07.2005 21:31
    God you sick bitch i need to fucking kill you

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    READER 500
    03.07.2005 05:09
    wow dude who ever's mind this sick story came out of needs to seriously seek help, thats absolutily disgusting, if anyone is turned on by this story you also should seek help... like maby a bulet to the head or somthing,,,, wow thats just fucked up!!!

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    READER 500
    08.07.2005 12:02
    Fiction, Rape, Teen Male/Teen Female, Cruelty, Virginity, Spanking

    ^^^ idiots

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    READER 500
    12.07.2005 06:59
    dude i didnt have a prodlem with story up to the part you stabed her and the eating thats just wrong dude

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    READER 500
    18.07.2005 18:02
    sick bastard

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    READER 500
    29.07.2005 00:31
    Ok to all the jesus freaks who hate this story if you all took the time to read it y the fuck didnt you read that it contains cannibalisum. Dude the story was great. fuck all the other people. wright more!!!

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    READER 500
    07.08.2005 09:54
    this shit was sick,but all the more better,i'd like to see more comming,u sick freak;-)

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    READER 500
    10.08.2005 19:09
    u know what the funny thing is? i actually made plans to do this to a girl tonite, hehehe. wish me luck!

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    READER 500
    18.08.2005 15:34
    dude that's fucked up

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    READER 500
    22.08.2005 16:56
    FREAKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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    READER 500
    05.09.2005 02:10
    Yeah lemme tell ya, the last time I ate a dude, he tasted like Gravy. The good kind that costs an extra $1.50, not the shitty generic brand. You ever had Lay's Potato chips with a human being son? Tastes damn good if ya ask me. So earlier today as I was fucking my VCR while two pit bulls chomped on my nipples, I was thinking, how do they fit those ships into those glass bottles?! I mean I just dont get it! Will someone please explain this to me? So I decided I'd rather just eat a slice of moldy cheese off of Poly Shore's ass instead. That Poly, he's an ass man through and through. He didnt cum enough for me though so I sliced off his left testicle and made it into a keychain. As he begged for mercy I was able to choke him to death with my goldfish buddy who I lovingly call Sal...ami!

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    READER 500
    13.09.2005 18:59
    some one should do this to you dum ass pervert

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    READER 500
    24.09.2005 14:01
    i wish u was mine bitch.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.10.2005 14:01
    Strange story interested in part 2

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.11.2005 03:16
    good but kinda sick next time dont stab and cut her

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    READER 500
    02.11.2005 03:39
    i wish i new who and where you are i could cure all thoes thoughts in your head relly can if you relly did this kind of sick shit

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    READER 500
    14.11.2005 17:59
    dude thats just sick not very good at all. why u wanna eat some one how would you feel if some dude had u on a table eatting you. u do know what goes around comes around u need to be put some where for help, how u think some one can get off like that being raped and eatten is 2 differnt things sicko

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    READER 500
    19.11.2005 13:41
    Dude you honestly need to be shot or something. That was the one of the sickest and worst sorry pieces of shit I have ever seen. You are a waste of space and someone seriously needs to end your life

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    READER 500
    01.12.2005 10:10
    fucking illiterater piece of shit u deserve to be killed.. slowly

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    READER 500
    15.12.2005 16:13
    dude, u need therapy

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    READER 500
    27.12.2005 17:09
    Can any one say serial killer in the making? You really need to think about stories like this as they may just lead you into doing thses things in real life. Stories like this make me believe that there really are still some sick fucks left in the world, lets just hope that you do not turn into one.

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    READER 500
    31.12.2005 21:47
    Dude.....~quivers~ you need help...and lots of it! usually I give my mailing address just because, but my god man/woman! that's just wrong...too creepy to trust you with a thred of hair let alone a mailing account.....sick FREAK!

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    READER 500
    15.01.2006 21:53
    :O Pretty sick

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    READER 500
    19.01.2006 19:25
    frickin sick man...on so many levels...dont post another story

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    READER 500
    23.01.2006 13:59
    what the fuck is fucking wrong with you you sick sick fuck? jesus fucking christ that was fucked up, and not in a good way, you're going to hell, even if hell doesn't exist, that was so fucking gross. that dude would get prison for life, and you the author are just fucked up and not good at all.

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    READER 500
    29.01.2006 02:50
    fucked up

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    READER 500
    30.01.2006 09:14
    That's a simple shit.

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    READER 500
    02.02.2006 14:34
    your fucken sick, how can she be stabbed in the stomach that many times and still be fucked and not mentioning anything about the pain of the knife? thats complete bullshit either way this isnt a SEXUAL fantasy this is a cry for a therepist

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    READER 500
    16.02.2006 08:28
    you are a fucking_______

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    READER 500
    16.02.2006 17:55
    you sick son of a bitch!! wow thats all i got to say man you sick shit!!

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    READER 500
    18.02.2006 08:50
    omfg you sick ass motherfucker! you should be locked away asshole!

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    READER 500
    21.02.2006 19:04
    OMG your a fucking sicko

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    READER 500
    26.02.2006 04:11
    ..Don't post anymore. Please.

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    READER 500
    07.03.2006 01:44
    What the fucking hell is wrong with you!? Please... don't post another story.....

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    READER 500
    13.03.2006 13:28
    U HAVE TO BE THE MOST FUCKEDUP PERSON I EVER KNOWN!!!!!!!! UR A FUCKING PIECE OF SHOT AND DONT EVEN DESERVE TO BE ALIVE!!!!UR GONNA BURN IN HELL FOR WHAT U DID EVEN IF ITS NOT A TRUE STORY BUT STYLL U NEED A FUCKING THEREPIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... ASSSSHOLEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    READER 500
    19.03.2006 09:56
    mate, i hope you got all that shit out of your system for ALL our sakes you sick cunt.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2006 12:39
    You are just a little boy with big imaginations. You don't know a thing about a real erotic experience and you can't write with any realistic emotion. You fall all over your words. Grow up.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.04.2006 08:15
    YOU FUCKIN SICK FUCKIN JEFFERY DOMMER WANNABES HOW ABOUT I KILL ONE OF YOU SICK FUCKS AND I TAKE A DUMP ON YOU FOR A COUPLE OF MONTHS THEN SICK FUCK THAT WROTE THIS AND ALL HIS FAGGOT BUDDIES CAN EAT HIS ROTTING CORPS FLYS ALL OVER THE PLACE. THEN I WILL KILL YOU AND SHOVE YOU DOWN IN THE SEWER WHERE SCUMP LIVE IT IS YUR NEW HOM GET USED TO IT YUR SOUL IS GOING TO HELLLLLLLL LOSERS YOU NO WHATS FOR DINNER BEEF IS WHATSS FOR DINNER. NOT FUCKING HUMAN BEING YOU WILL DIE LIKE JEFFERY DOMMER DID IN PRISON GETTING BANGED BY BUBBA AND THEN SHANKED

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  • READER
    READER 500
    14.04.2006 20:09
    go to hell you fuckin sick pervert!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.04.2006 14:04
    That was so sick I think Im gonna puke!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.04.2006 01:42
    i thought it was pretty good

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.05.2006 22:27
    I liked it , but I would have given Amanda so much more pain like I do to my subjects.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.05.2006 04:34
    eww.....r u a human....eating her flesh..... and why u must use a knife on her.....she was such a good girl... i felt very sorry on her... it is a VERY painful experience for her...u noe! InHuMaN!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.06.2006 09:35
    You sick fucker, if i ever wrote a story or even thought about writing a story like that i would hang myself

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.06.2006 16:54
    you bloody sick bastard listen to what you did to the poor girl!! i hope that somebody does to you what you did to her!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.06.2006 06:46
    not really my cup of tea but i wanted to see if there were actually stories with cannibalism... and it does say cannibalism right in the theme description so what's with all the bitching?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.07.2006 01:09
    Oh my fucking god! that poor girl! what the fuck were thinking!!! I hope you die and burn in hell! that is so fucking wrong that pisses me off!!!! you should be shot for that!!!! GRRR!!!! GROW UP DUDE!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.07.2006 01:59
    haha..good one..dont listen to these people..it was cool

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.07.2006 01:00
    FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT

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  • READER
    READER 500
    29.07.2006 05:04
    Good story, it may be a little sadistic but i enjoyed it.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.08.2006 22:08
    ok this author is FUCKED up only reason i read was to see if there was actually something with cannablism....u fucked up little bitch...burn in hell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.08.2006 00:08
    i could tell HE was in massive pain?! work on your grammar, bitch

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    READER 500
    12.08.2006 00:24
    man, so many things i could say about you right now...........where to start...........you are a fucking sick, devel ass licking, pervert that will for surely burn in hell. all of you otheers that like this shit, you will end up the same. i hope the girls you do that to have a knife so they stab you in the fucking shitting black organ you call a heart!!!!!!! fucking human eaters!

    a note to the writer of this story-
    please....for the sake of all good...do not write any more fucking pieces of shit like this!!!!!!!!!
    tell ya what, im going to track you down and kill you. so whenever things are quiet, make sure you look over your shoulder, i may just be there.......
    but, i wont have to do anything because im telling you this, you definatly wont be getting horny on this shit in hell!!!!

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    READER 500
    13.08.2006 15:00
    shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit fucking shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shti shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit fucking shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit fuvking shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shti shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit fucking shit shit shit shit shit shit shit
    .......that about sums up this stor

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    READER 500
    16.08.2006 19:32
    lalala I found this story to turn me afterwards I was in shock at how you could write something so disgusting and turnful to me, Who the fuck are you you sadistic cocktaker, burn baby burn lalalala Korn are good but they have some bad songs too not the best and no do not continue with this story lalalalalala

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.08.2006 16:27
    that was totally sick, i was disgusted reading it, i didnt actually think there would be any cannibilsm in it but that was just wrong and sick! for the love of god dont write anything ever again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.08.2006 21:19
    Writing this should be illegal....... there is no place on earth for this kind of material or fucked up ideas........ i suggest those who enjoy it to get help------- what kind of upbringing leads to sick fucks that enjoy such evil............this is a really sad side of the internet, that such sick ideas can be shared, and viewed.... the world has come to an all time low and is behond all hope

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.09.2006 02:08
    You sick fucking freak!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    26.09.2006 15:50
    this is the most fucking perverted nasty ass pieve of shit story i have EVER read in my LIFE!!! you should be put in the electric chair then i will lynch you myself!! u are w orthless piece of shit! ROT IN HELL ASS HOLE

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.10.2006 18:32
    wow u are one sick sadistic freak and should burn in hell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.10.2006 20:37
    this has fucked up written all over it.
    phsyco

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.10.2006 01:42
    You un-holy motheringfucking piece of fucking shit. I dare you to tell me were you live, because I swear to god I find you and fucking kill you. Unlike everyone else, that is not a theat, it is a PROMISE

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.10.2006 11:38
    Can't write, can't spell, sick in the head. What else can one say about such a childish perverted author?
    Please do us all a favour and stop breathing.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.10.2006 19:08
    You should be nicer to the author. Afterall, you came reading his story.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.10.2006 03:48
    yall mutherfuckers need to shut the fuck up he didnt ask you to read the story and yall saying unholy and swear to god id kill you if i new wear you live and you were right it is a sick story but the internet is just a place to share ideas and do buisness and if you dont like it mabey you shouldnt have picked a story that had Cruelty on it so you must have been looking for a sick story for yourself anyway to whom wrote this story you can write a good storyline im not saying it was a good story but you can write i think you should try something without cannibilsm in it and you might do well you sick fucker i think you wrote this because it is a fantasy please keep it in your head

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.11.2006 01:44
    That's pretty fucked up man.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2006 23:16
    BEST STORY EVER!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.11.2006 23:59
    what the fuck is wrong with u man?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.11.2006 00:38
    i hope u rot in hell u nasty pig if i ever met u id ur head and shuv it up ur ass!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    19.11.2006 03:34
    Disgusting

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  • READER
    READER 500
    12.12.2006 16:06
    Bhahaha trhat RULES

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.01.2007 16:44
    remember you read this story no one forced you to read it no one put a gun to your head . you read it on your own choice live with that

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.01.2007 20:06
    fucking sicko. I hope u have a slow and painful death. Asshole

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.01.2007 23:09
    you are fucking sick get some help

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.01.2007 23:57
    that was fucked.......but i liked it.,..great job

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.01.2007 23:41
    Perfect loved it, anyone who said it sucked is gay

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.02.2007 17:32
    revolting

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  • READER
    READER 500
    15.02.2007 00:57
    ppl r dum they red it by choice good story

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2007 23:37
    this was a very weird story! it was sick but i chose to read it so ya

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.03.2007 23:51
    Umm retards....hence the word Fiction

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2007 11:42
    that shit is nasty you crazy freak i hope u burn in hell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.03.2007 13:31
    u can say "if u dont like it don't read it" but if you read it and like it u need help. most ppl see the description and are curious. so any of u fuck holes that try and defend this piece of shit story are just as sick as the prick that wrote it. no excuse can make it any less sick. by the way im 14 years old. i hope ur happy knowing kids my age can read this shit u wrote. NO GOOD PERSON could like this shit. not even a little. the net is for sharing ideas but sum things should never be typed on a computer

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.03.2007 11:20
    you peice of shit! get some help!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.03.2007 22:05
    i think that kid regrets reading this story. and thats how most people feel after reading it i bet he learned his lesson about adult websites. hes right though this story is sick.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    31.03.2007 23:06
    Everyone who liked this story needs to die and soon you probably will. You are a disgrase to humanity itself, a sick perversion of all that is good and in need of extermination. WOMAN ARE NOT PROPERTY! It does not take a rocket scientist to figure that out. You are sick whoever you are, sick. You do not need help you need to die and be done with it. There is no help for psycopaths. AND BY THE WAY...anyone here who would participate, or stand idily by while something like this occurs are worse than the perverts themselves. UTTER FAILURE,

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.04.2007 11:33
    Hello, doctor's coming! You need LOTS of pills!!!
    You ARE REALLY SICK!!!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.04.2007 00:25
    I haven't read the story yet, but from the comments I'm seeing, it's going to be dreadfully amazing.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    24.04.2007 09:13
    ur SICK MAN VERY SICK

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.04.2007 17:25
    what fucking drugs are ya taking
    thats sick man

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.04.2007 21:30
    sadly i was turned on throughtout the whole story...but then i totally deflated when he started eating her...thats just kinda grossish

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.04.2007 06:15
    fuccccccccccccccccccccccccc...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    05.06.2007 22:20
    what the hell is wrong with u...i loved the story but when he started to eat her...u are just a fucking kid who has a problem

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  • READER
    READER 500
    06.06.2007 00:19
    IS THERE A DOCTOR IN THE HOUSE?

    Oh my fricking god, she's a goner.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.06.2007 21:54
    WTFFF YOU ATE HER!! WTF AHH SHES NOT LIKE CHICKEN OR SOMETHING

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  • READER
    READER 500
    30.06.2007 05:48
    People this is in the Canabolism section did you think he wouldnt eat her?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.07.2007 03:39
    wow man the first time i ever read canabolism and fuck thats raw shit u should see a doc about that shit man i lost my hard on after u fucking ate her dude im going to puke fuck man

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  • READER
    READER 500
    18.07.2007 02:05
    fuck this story is so nasty, i meen bein turned on by eastin sumfin, fucken feral, sick sick minded retard

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.07.2007 01:44
    just a hunch.. the next story's gonna be about fucking dead people i bet you.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.08.2007 21:55
    u fukkin shit retarded asshole dat was disgusting and sick

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.08.2007 16:15
    Who the hell stabs ppl to get turned on I stopped reading after that shit dont bother continuing that was nasty

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.08.2007 18:33
    I WAS NOT PREPARED FOR THIS STORY

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.08.2007 03:13
    wat the fuks rong with u

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2007 03:03
    WDF?!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.08.2007 11:22
    im a guy and i want u to do that to me mabe u can shove the knife up my tight asswhole instead then ill let u do it to my sexy little newborn baby

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.09.2007 02:03
    Relax folks, this is a "story." This is fiction, no matter how vile and disgusting, which free speech laws allow to be expressed. I find it fascinating how many readers "promise death" to this author, yet persist in holding themselves above him in judgment. Has our society sunk so low that we rush to murder people for writing stories? It's not a very good story anyway. Certainly not worth getting so riled over. A reader promised to hang himself if he dreamed of writing such a story. Hmm? He must have dreamed about it, or he would not have been compelled to read this one. Self incriminating, perhaps? I only hope that the rope holds!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.09.2007 12:40
    What the fuck is wrong with this guy? Who cares if its fiction. If he writes this shit to get off to it, hes a sick cunt no matter what!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.09.2007 21:45
    wtf goes threw yor mind wen u rite fuked up shit like this u sik fuk i bet yor still a virgin and u masturbate to dead bodies yor just a sik quere

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  • READER
    READER 500
    28.09.2007 17:35
    You are a mother fucker! Who thinks of that stuff? That is disgusting! STOP WRITING! 0/10

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  • READER
    READER 500
    02.10.2007 14:02
    seriously what the hell is your problem? you should be eaten alive, jerk. this is easily the sickest thing ive ever heard of.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    03.10.2007 23:28
    THIS IS FUCKING SHIT.. WHO THE FUCK CAN WRITE ABOUT MURDER..FUCK

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.10.2007 04:35
    you probably think its funny... but it shows a complete lack of experience and understanding of sex. People aren't supposed to be hurt like that. Grow up and realize what it's about... enjoyment you sick fuck!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    07.10.2007 18:51
    ok man... rofl wtff.. this is y i hate living in the us..

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.10.2007 21:53
    fucked, just fucked

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  • READER
    READER 500
    09.11.2007 21:53
    Geeze guys, dont get so pissy, just go read a different story, duh, althogh this one was pretty poorly written :(

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  • READER
    READER 500
    25.11.2007 01:56
    THIS IS sick u should die u evil bicth this not hot at all

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  • READER
    READER 500
    08.12.2007 22:32
    11 lines in was ok .... everything after is so dam fake .... What supplies at wallmart? Wouldnt those supplies link you to the murder or rape of the girl? Ant to put God into the story ...... How about Security System? Neighbors Hearing screams? Are you going to commit sucide after the weeks over or rot in jail? Why would she be a virgin, if shes hott? Why wouldnt you just get to know her 1st? Your the biggest retard ever!!!!! Dont write a story unless its good and remotely realistic..... 3 stars

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  • READER
    READER 500
    22.12.2007 17:05
    These are just fiction, and frankly, there are sickos out there like that. So in that sense, it is realistic, and you probably could get a ton of supplies from walmart, scary but true, And so what if she's hot? she could still be a virgin, some people just don't want to have sex. Anyways, yes, it's sick, but why'd you read it then?

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  • READER
    READER 500
    01.01.2008 15:40
    yay dead doll i loved it!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    04.01.2008 12:59
    wow ur fucking crazy thats nasty

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  • READER
    READER 500
    11.01.2008 03:06
    yum, come fuck me like that

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  • READER
    READER 500
    13.02.2008 21:24
    thanks fuck face now some guys gonna read this and get some ideas u asswipe, i hope u burn in hell

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  • READER
    READER 500
    21.02.2008 18:45
    i love guys taking control but this really is just a bit too much. Actually it was kind of sick...talk about turn off.

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  • READER
    READER 500
    20.03.2008 17:03
    omg i hope u dont do this stuff in real life and only wright about it !! its sick !!

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  • READER
    READER 500
    27.03.2008 21:49
    .00000000000000000000000000...

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  • READER
    READER 500
    17.04.2008 19:44
    umm eating her was a bit much. umm yes it is sick but if you see rape or something like that under tha title and you dont like rape dont read the story you get what you pay for sort of thing.

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    READER 500
    19.04.2008 23:25
    wow man

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  • grdad60
    11.05.2008 04:41
    shot him i would or run him over

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  • Anonymous+reader
    17.06.2008 18:38
    lmao @ this story. Ok first off why is everyone so pissy and bitching? It's a fucking made up story. The guy that wrote it obviously fucking gets off on sick shit like this. I myself didn't think it was scary nor sickning because it was fucking FAKE as hell. I mean come on the dialog was sooo bullshit. "Ouch! omg that hurts!" what the hell? I mean if I was getting my flesh eaten off of me the last thing I would say is "ouch" anyways. I didn't give a shit about the story one way or another. Haha

    Brittany.

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  • Melanie
    25.06.2008 21:37
    I mean I love guys being abusive and dominant but this is too much.
    Eating flesh?
    Ugh. Stabbing her?
    She wouldn't say Ouch.
    She would scream her lungs out.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    06.08.2008 04:58
    I know that this is made up but JEEZ!
    I would have at least said NO when he said more than God...and died with some pride and go to heaven,than say YES and go to hell and die because you trust a sick rapist...Stupid!
    This made me so angry grrr...

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.08.2008 11:12
    Well the story was going good untill you involved God...fake or not the story was turned out to be horrible...word of advise dont involve God again

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  • rockstar
    18.09.2008 02:20
    dumb ass that was mean 2 stick the knife in her pussy

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  • Anonymous+reader
    29.12.2008 11:57
    that was stupid. i hated it. sick and twisted. did he really have to eat her? gross

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  • Anonymous+reader
    28.02.2009 12:30
    I personally am not into stuff like this. But seriously, shut up! Its just a story, and if you don't like things like this, why did you read it? Assholes.

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  • Anonymous+reader
    01.03.2009 04:19
    you shithead, NEVER INVOLVE GOD and ur a sick mother fucker , real people get ideas from this shit and actually do it

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2009 21:27
    y o u are fucking nasty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    22.03.2009 23:41
    y o u are fucking nasty

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  • Anonymous+reader
    27.06.2009 07:37
    you sick mother fucker never ever bring god in to this!!!

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  • Severed+cock
    22.07.2009 17:07
    lol "DONT BRING GOD INTO THIS NOOOOOOOOO!"

    good story, sick ideas.

    now, i dont get off to this kind of stuff, but i enjoy it for entertainment. do you think cannibal corpse actually rips peoples flesh off and cum blood on their rotting, decrepit corpses? no! but they write and sing about that kind of stuff for entertainment. so chill the fuck out and move along.

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  • Readerr
    13.11.2009 14:31
    Eek! Gave me the chills. Don't get off on this, but that was pretty well written. Good job. :]

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  • Anonymous+reader
    31.03.2010 18:59
    U sicko ps gods not real

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  • marry1369
    13.06.2010 19:45
    OK what wrong with this picture?This sick twisted fuck said he was eating pieces of her labia and your worried about God being brought into it????Who's fucked up here??

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  • ello
    24.07.2010 19:02
    you8 could have at;least made it more real. "ouch?", wtf? if that was me, i would be screaming my lungs out! :/

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  • anonymous+reader
    03.01.2011 02:03
    O boo fucking woo if people don't like this kind of stuff Y read it...if it were me killin that chick I would've eaten her cold, wet, asshole. Lol too the people who think this is sick listen to a rapper named MC Bushpig I'll think he's the devil himself haha

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.03.2011 17:18
    Dude you really need some psychological help. Anyone that got turned on by this needs professional help so please go to the nearest doctor or something and for gods sake dont try any of this sick shit

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  • anonymous+reader
    22.08.2011 04:13
    ok if she was screaming so loud y did no one hear her and if u were tearing chunks out of her flesh there would be no tomorrow becuase she would die of blood loss

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  • anonymous+reader
    25.11.2013 19:02
    I did not know it would be this gruesome...scary shit

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