DOM SIR part 3

Date: 30 January 2004

BDSM, Fiction, Domination/submission, Humiliation

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"Yes SIR," i said, and turned over and did as instructed.

He pulled the crotch of my panties aside and began fingering me really good. i was so horny that i was on the verge of cumming. Then he stopped.

i moaned in frustration as he moved his fingers around my hole, not entering, not fingering, just frustrating. Then he began his oral assault.

"No, please SIR, that is too intense when i have to pee!"

He wouldn't stop though, and i felt my bladder jostling as he attacked me orally, his tongue flicking maddeningly over my clit. He put 2 and then 3 fingers in my hole, pressing against my bladder with a constant pressure.

i didn't think i could cum when i had to pee so bad, but he would not stop. i was going insane with the sensation and felt my first orgasm build to an incredible height before i came, bucking and screaming.

"Oh stop, SIR, pleeeeease stop! It's too sensitive," i begged. But he would not stop. "Pleeeeease...." and soon i was on my way to another orgasm. He has started pushing then pulling back and pushing again against my bladder in a slow, steady rhythm, while he continued to eat me mercilessly.

"Oh god oh god oh GOD!!" i screamed, as i came again. "Pleeease stop, now, PLEASE SIR!" i begged, nearly screeching, but he would not stop. i did not think i could come again, and it did take a little while, but it built and overtook the need to pee on more time. i screamed in pure frustrated confusion as i came - feeling the release of the orgasm but the intense need to pee. It was overwhelming.

Finally he stopped. He moved back away from me and said, "What do you think?"

All i could say was, "Oh my god." I was pressing my legs together, trying to keep the pee from creeping out and he said, "Oh no, none of that."

He held my legs apart and i writhed a little, trying to keep my dignity, when finally it just came pouring out of me in buckets. All over my brand new underwear and the bed; the relief and the shame washing over me simultaneously as he watched me soil myself.

i opened my eyes and looked up at him and he said, "Very good."

i knew the game was over and asked if i could go wash up. He said, "Sure, but i want those."

"Oh yeah," i said, as i remembered that was part of the deal.

i gave him my soiled undies to keep and cleaned up and we went our separate ways.

THE END

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READER 500

11.02.2004 13:41

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I waited till I read the third part to comment. I think the story is very good though it ended abruptly. I find it interesting that there was no real sex in the end and I wonder will there be a part 4?

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READER 500

14.02.2004 01:48

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I agree with Lilly that the story ended too soon. When you hear that sort of criticism you must ask yourself if you've given the reader all the information they needed to understand the characters choices they make. Otherwise the actions the characters take at the end seem to come out of nowhere and appear to be more a way to end the story than actually being faithful to the characters you've created. Take some time and write a few different endings starting from, "What do you think?" Ask yourself all sorts of questions, does he have a wife? other slaves? is he impotent? The answers don't have to find their way into the story but the result of you asking these questions will show in your ability to continue the story to a more satisfying conclusion. Usually I charge for this advice

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READER 500

15.02.2004 16:29

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i am giving you my e-mail so if you need advice i will give it. and both of them are right. please make a part 4 i would like to read your work. and if you have new stories coming out send me stuff. oh and if any of you readers need advice i check my e-mail atleast five times a day.

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READER 500

21.04.2004 22:29

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ok, I read the first part, missed the second, but, got the last one, when writing Dom/sub 'material' if ur gona start capping the appropriate Dom character, do so thruout the whole story, other than that annoyance :) I found the story to be very good, proofreading, is a must, an more than once
but, as I said, all in all, very well done

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READER 500

26.05.2004 19:35

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I read all three of the parts and like lilly waited 2 answer but I have 2 say that was the weirdist thing I have ever read but weird in a good way keep it up man

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READER 500

10.08.2004 18:00

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This is a great story but too short. I guess tho that it is your story so ou can make i how ever you want.

Really wonderful tho. Keep up the great work.

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READER 500

09.10.2004 18:46

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I enjoyed the story, I too was surprised that their was no real Sex, As a Dom myself I thing that ewal sex would have been much more torturous. But, that is just my opinion, I have left my email address I too write short stories so if you would write me and let me know when you are going to post another story I would appreciate it.

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READER 500

21.05.2006 18:58

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I JUST READ ALL THREE PARTS. REALLY THIS IS ONLY A ONE PART STORY. I EXPECTED HIM TO FUCK HER HARD PERHAPS IN BOTH HOLES. I EXPECTED HIM MAKE HER SUCK HIS DICK. WHAT JUST ONE SPANKING? THE PAIN IN HER BREASTS SEEMS TO HAVE GONE AWAY. HE REALLY DIDN'T HUMILIATE HER ENOUGH. BUT REST ASSURED THIS WAS A GOOD STORY. I REALLY ENJOYED IT. KEEP GOING. 9/10

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